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Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

harshit1890

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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Update ~~ 47

" madarchod phone kyun nahi mil raha.. " shruti debu ko bar-bar phone mila rahi thi. Vishal aur rachna apne-apne raste nikal chuke the. Shruti hostel ki taraf kitab ko liye aa rahi thi aur vo kai baar debu ka number mila chuki thi lekin uska number mil kar nahi de raha tha. " lagta hai ab gayi main.. agar gate nahi khula aur uske khulne se pehle mujhe bahar dekh liya gaya to pakka gayi, ye behen ka takka muth marte marte so gaya hoga... isko to kal dekhungi... bahut inam inam kar raha tha .... ab iska inam iske gand se nikalungi.... oooo behenchod... ye kahan se aa gaya... " shruti hostel ki taraf pahunchti use pehle use chillu dikh gaya jiski wajah se use deewar ka sahara lekar chipna pada. " lode jayenge ab andar.. aur bano lene ke shaukeen... vo behenki lodi jalad warden khol degi... is bhasad ko pehle wahan se hatana hoga.. fir mila kar dekhti hun... " shruti ne fir debu ko phone milaya aur ek baar fir wahi message aya, not reachable.. " ye sala bhaorse ke layak hi nahi hai... ispar bhrosa hi nahi karna chahie tha.. bhosdiwala... uppar se ye chillu.. sala itne din se to is time dikha nahi aaj aa gaya gand marwane... " shruti ne gardan aage karke us taraf dekha to chillu wahin kursi par baitha hua tha. Ek baar ko agar darwaja khula hota to shruti nikal jati lekin band darwaje ke andar vo jaye to jaye kaise. Khub socha lekin shruti ka dimag bilkul band ho chuka tha, jo bhi abhi hua tha uske baad to bilkul band ho chuka tha. Book pakde pakde uska hath bhi thakne laga tha, tabhi shruti ne ek tarkib lagai aur sitti mari.. use jada tez to nahi bazi lekin shanti mein awaz gunj uthi aur chillu ke kano mein ja padi lekin usne koi harkat na di, usne dubara siti mari aur is baar chillu uth baitha. Vo uth khada hua aur idhar udhar dekhne laga, piche dekhta use pehle shruti chip gayi. Kuch pal baad usne fir gardan nikal kar dekha to chillu kursi par baitha hua tha. Shruti ne ek baar fir sitti bajai...

" kaun hai..? " is baar chillu thoda aage gaya aur fir wapis aya, usko wapis ata dekh shruti fir chip gayi aur jab do pal baad usne fir us taraf dekha to chillu wahan tha hi nahi. " Behenchod kahan gaya ye? " shruti sochti use pehle chillu samne aya jise dekhte hi shruti ke dil ko thodi tassali hui kyun ki vo hostel ke andar se nikla tha to kya uska gate khula hua hai? Ho sakta hai ya nahi bhi.. kyun ki gate ke bahar chota sa covered chabutra bhi to hai jahan vo aksar baarish ke waqt baitha hai. Lekin vo gaya tab hi tha jab mene siti marri to kya vo dekhne ke liye gaya tha? Ho sakta hai.. try karun... ek baar last try pura dum laga... kar... Shruti deewar ki aad mein chupi aur usne thodi unchi awaz mein siti bajane ki kosish ki aur vo baj gayi. Shor is baar jada hua, area khule hone ki wajah se ye samajh pana mushkil tha ki awaz kahan se aa rahi hai aur shanti hone ki wajah se vo gunj uthi.

" kaun hai madarchod.. samne aa gaya to gand mar dunga.. " chillu ne kaha dhire se tha par sunai de gaya, ek pal ko shruti apne par le gayi aur uska man kiya gand marne se pehle iska lund kaat dun par baad mein samajh aya ki vo use nahi keh raha hai. Usne halki si gardan bahar nikali aur dekha to chillu danda lekar us taraf aage badh chala tha yani ki round marne.. aur umeed thi ki vo is taraf bhi ayega par use pehle use hostel ke andar jana hai aur yahi sahi samay tha par behad aram se.. bina koi awaz kiye.. usne apne pairon se chapal nikali aur dabbe panv dhire-dhire aage badi, vo bas is umeed mein thi ki chillu piche na dekhe bas.. piche na dekhe... dabe panv vo aage badi aur uski nazar pillu se nahi hati. Bas kuch kadam aur vo hostel ke chabutre wali jagah ja khadi hui, iske baad usne samay nahi bitaya aur darwaje par dhakka mara, vo khula hua tha ... " bachh.. gayi.. behench..... " vo gate band karke uppar ki taraf daudi. Usne aaj se pehle hostel ki sidiyan itni tezi se nahi chadi thi bhale hi vo kuch dino se ana jana kar rahi thi par jaldi pahunchni ki ek hi vajah thi, pakdi book jo kafi bhari thi.. Shruti apni manzila walle coridor mein ayi, uske chehre par sukun bhari rahat ki sans thi varna pakde jane uski sabse badi keel thi. Shruti apne kamre ke pas pahunchi to tez kadmo se thi lekin wahan ate-ate uske per dhime ho chuke the. Kamre ka darwaja khula hua tha, jise vo dekh kar pehle hi chaunk uthi aur jab usne dekha ki kunda tak tuta hua hai to uske dimag mein sainkdo sawal umad uthe. Vo tezzi se andar ayi aur andar ate hi usne light switch on kiya kyun ki vo maan baithi thi ki aaruhi andar nahi hai par jaise hi light khuli to usne paya ki aaruhi wahin laiti hui so rahi hai, vo bhi gehri nind mein. Shruti aage badhi aur kareeb se aaruhi ke bistar par use jhuk kar uske chehre ko dekha. Na jane kyun aisa karne mein use ghabrahat hui par jab usne uske chehre par chai khubsurti ko dekha to uska hi man dol gaya.

" ye to bade aram se so rahi hai... to fir ye kisne kiya.. " usne mud kar darwaje ki taraf dekha. Book ko palang ke uppar aur chapal ko wahin palang ke niche chhod vo kamre ki dehleez par ayi aur tute kunde ko ujale mein dekhte hue boli. Kunda sirf tuta nahi tha aisa lag raha tha kisi ne takat laag kar toda ho, ek hisse se tut kar latak raha tha. " warden ko bataungi to vo alag khun piyegi... ye apne paison se hi theek karana padega... aur pata lagana hoga kis haramzadi ka kaam hai ye... " usne kiwad band karte hue khud se kaha aur fir ek dum se ruki aur bahar jhakne lagi. " ho na ho ye jaggu ka kaam hai, subah ki baat ka badla liya hoga isne.. tu ruk beti.. tere ko bada jazz banne ka shauk hai na.. tere jazz ki sari gas bahar nikalti hun... facebook to chhod.. mobile chunne se pehle sochegi... bade lund chahie na tujhe.. ab tujhe itne lund milenge.. itne lund milenge... ki thak jayegi dete dete.. galat jagah bhid gayi tu... " shruti ne darwaja band kiya lekin kundi lagane se pehle usne fir darwaja khola aur jaggu ke kamre ki taraf dekhte hue unchi awaz mein boli " kuttiya... " aur kundi lagakar, light switch off karke bistar par aa gayi. Bistar par ate hi uski nazar book par padi aur book se judi sari kahani uske dmag mein ghum gayi. Ek dafa usne book ke cover par chitr dekhe jisme alag alag tarah ke janwar ya insan jaise ya fir kuch aur hi prakar ki prajati ke chehre bane hue the aur uske bich mein likha hua tha lamba sa. ' Pramaksh ' Ek pal to kiya abhi dekh le lekin din bhar ki thakan aur raat ki is baddi thakan ke chalte usne abhi kuch bhi dekhna sahi nahi samjha aur book ko ek taraf kar vo so gayi.

" shruti.. shruti... shruti.... " awaz sunai dene par halki ankhein khuli jiske aage dhundla pan chaya hua tha " shruti.. uthna nahi hai kya.... "

" uhnnn... kaun chutiya hai be... jo adhi raat ko jaga raha hai " hathon se angdai lete hue apna sharir todte hue shruti palang par hi sharir todne lagi jiski wajah se uska top uppar ho gaya aur uska nanga pet dikhne laga. Aaruhi ne ye sunte hi turant apna kaam chhoda aur uske pet par chapat laga di. " ayyi... kaun meri jawani se ched chaad kar hai.. mene uski... maa... "

" aage boli na to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga ayi samajh "

" ohh aaruhi ye tu hai... par tu itni raat ko kyun chilla rahi hai.. so ja na yaar... sala kal waise bhi raat ko vishal ke sath late ho gaya tha... " shruti ne takiye ko apne se joda aur nind ki agosh mein khote hue usne jawab diya. Ankhein to tabse khuli hi nahi thi.

" ek to ye ladki.. sari raat vishal.. sara din vishal... bilkul pagal ho gayi hai uske piche... " aaruhi apne baal bandhte hue boli ki tabhi uski nazar shruti ke bistar par uske sar ke piche gayi. Jo book shruti ne kal takiye ke niche rakh kar chupa di thi abhi takiya khinchne ki wajah se samne aa gayi. " ye book itni moti aur vo bhi is ladki ke pas.. " aaruhi shruti ke uppar se jhukte hue book ki taraf ayi " ankhon par vishwas nahi hota... book hi hai ya kuch aur ? " aaruhi ne uthane ki kosish ki par usne itni majbuti se nahi pakda tha isliye book uthi hi nahi aur hath se fisal kar thodi khul gayi " book to bhari hai.. " usne dubara ache se pakad bana kar uthane ka socha par tab tak shruti ke kano se book shabd bheje mein ghus gaya tha jise uski nind fauran khul gayi aur vo ek dum se uth baithi par use malum nahi tha ki aaruhi uske uppar se lataki hui hai isliye uthe hi uska chehra aaurhi ki chatiyun mein ghus gaya. Aaruhi bhi achanak se ghabra gayi aur book chhod kar piche ho gayi. Dono ek pal ke liye cheekh padi jaisa aksar ladkiyun ka cheekhne ka tay hota hai usi tarah.

" kya kar rahi thi pagal hai kya.. dara diya " aaruhi turant boli.

" dara diya... mene? ohoo.. dekho to karamjali kalmuhi ko "

" excuse me? " aaruhi ne ankhein chadai.

" kya excuse? kya excuse? tu mere sone ka excuse khoj kar mere sharir par hamla kar rahi thi, batao sala... ye koi tarika hai.. ab kya hum khubsurat ladkiyan girls hostel ke apne kamre mein hi safe nahi hai, meri nind nahi khulti to aaj to tune meri izat chus li hoti "

" choos li hoti? seriously... "

" ab ladki ladki ke andar de to nahi skti.. to choosne ke alawa koi option nahi bacha... LOL " shruti ne baton hi baton mein baat ko hi mod diya.

" ew..ww. chiii.. yar shruti.. subah subah... " aaruhi acting karte hue wahan se chali gayi jiske jatte hi shruti ne gehri sans khinchi aur book jo teetar -bitar hui thi use sahi karke takiya rakh diya uspar, vo bas is baat ka shukar mana rahi thi ki usne kitab ulti rakhi thi sidhi nahi warna na jane kya ho jata.. " tujhe uthna nahi hai kya.. time dekh... nandini miss ki class hai... aur aaj to assignment ki submission hai.. remember.. chal jaldi kar... " tayar hote hi aaruhi ne kapd sametne chalu kiye taki bhigo kar jaye aur din mein akar dho dale.

" han.. yar... ye college aur uske assignment... 4 saal yahi chalna hai ab.. kaun itna dimag lagaye... " shruti ne phone uthaya, message do jano ke pade the, ek rachna aur dusra vishal. Shruti ne pehle vishal ka message khola aur message likh kar send kiya ' 12 baje sports room ' send karke usne rachna ka message box khola jisme pehle usne apna message pada jispar likha tha ki jo bhi hua raat ko uske bare mein kisi ko nahi malum chalna chahie.. kisi ko matlab kisi ko nahi.. chuton ka promise... jispar rachna ne ek smily fenkte hue ok likha hua tha. Shruti use kuch message likhne wali thi ki ek ganda kapda uske muh ke uppar akar pada tab vo hosh mein ayi.

" kya kar rahi hai.. pehle meri izat khud loot rahi thi ab apne kapdo ko mujh par fenk kar apne sharir ki khubsu se mujhe deewana banana chahti hai? waise idea acha hai ye.. " shruti ne phone chhodte hi kaha.

" tera dimag bachpan se hi kahrab tha? maa ne teri tere ko khuli chhut di hoti to itni self obsessed nahi hoti.. tu acha sa mahurat dekh aur de daal apni "

" tujhe bhi bulaungi.. live show dekhio " ek pal aaruhi use dekhti rahi fir hanse bina na reh payi

" haramazadi... kal bhi phone mein thi aaj bhi.. sun hi nahi rahi hai tabse kuch puch rahi hun "

" kya puch rahi hai " shruti vo kapda dekhne lagi jo aaurhi ne fenka tha, shayad ye kal wala top tha uska.. " yahan se itna chip-chipa kaise hai... "

" main tujhse kuch puch rahi hun tu mujhse hi puch rahi hai "

" par tu puch kya rahi hai? " shruti ne top se dhayan hata kar aaruhi ki taraf dekha.

" meri bra kidhar hai.. yahin to dali thi mene ... "

" teri bra mujhe kaise pata hogi.. main thodi... " shruti itna bol kar ruk gayi aur tabhi use yaad aya ki jo bra usne debu ko kal raat di thi vo aaruhi ki to thi.

" kya main ? bata jaldi "

" main thodi na bra bechti hun side business mein.. "

" tu bechti to nahi lekin tu bra mein soti bhi nahi.. top uppar kar.. dikha.. "

" haye ree... sachi jalim hai dunia.. sexual harrasment vo bhi ladka ka ladki se.. "

" jada overacting mat kar "

" tune mujhe chor kaha aur ab sexual harrasment kar rahi hai... lekin main vo bhi seh lungi kyun ki main teri sachhii dost hun.. dekh tu.. dekh hi le.. " shruti bed par khadi hui aur usne top ek jhatke mein utar fenka. Black nahi par purple color ki bra jarur dali hui thi shruti ne. Aaruhi ek pal use ghurti rahi, sapat pet ke uppar do ubhar.. ek tak aaruhi uske sine ko ghurti rahi, sans lene ki wajah se uske uppar niche hone tak ko dekhti rahi. " ab kya ankhon se hi chhod degi ... tu to ladkon se bhi tez nikli " aaruhi ka uspar aise nazre banaye rakhna kuch ajeeb laga isliye vo boli.

" hat.. haramzadi... fir meri kahan hai.. yar.. mujhe kapde dhone mein dalne hai late ho raha ha vaise bhi " aauhi keh kar apne kapde sametne lagi.

" mil jayega... ek bra hi to hai.. main fresh hokar ayi fir sath chalenge... "

" ruk main kapde bhigo dun.. " aaruhi kapde lekar bathroom mein ghusi to shruti ko mauka mil gaya, usne book uthai aur almirah mein rakhe bag ke andar dal di. Jiske baad usne gehri sans khinchi aur aaruhi ke bahar ane ka intezar karne lagi. Aaruhi ke bahar ate hi vo fresh hone chali gayi, fresh hote hi dono tayar hokar college ke liye kamre se bahar nikal gaye.

" ab ye kaise hua? " bahar nikalte hi jab kunda marne gaye to aaruhi ne kunde ki halat dekhte hue kaha.

" lambi kahani hai.. baat mein bataungi.. ab kisi tarah jugad se fansa deti hun " shruti ne kisi tarah use is tarah kar diya ki kisi ko malum na ho ki kunda tuta hua hai.

" warden khub sunayegi.. "

" mauka hi nahi denge.. tu chal ab late nahi ho raha hai " shruti ne aaruhi ka hath pakda aur use khinchte hue le jane lagi.

" waise aaj tu bag kaise le chal rahi hai.. tera roop alag hi dikh raha hai kal raat se "

" exam aa rahe hai.. aur tujhe yaad nahi ki humne decide kiya tha ki padai mein koi kasar nahi chhodenge.. "

" han kaha to tha... " aaruhi ko kuch kuch aisa yaad aa raha tha. Dono sidiyan utar rahi thi, hostel mein chehel pehal is samay kafi jada thi, koi bahar khade hokar bra aur pajama pehne dant manj raha tha koi phone par laag hua tha to kuch in dono ki tarah college ke liye nikal raha tha.

" debu kidhar hai.. " shruti ne wahan saaf safai karne wale vyakti se pucha.

" humko nahi malum madam.. subah se nahi dikha "

" pata nahi kahan mar gaya harami " shruti ne ek pal intezar kiya aur idhar udhar dekhne lagi.

" shruti chal " is baar aaruhi ne hath khincha to chalna hi pada kyun ki debu use kahin nahi dikh raha tha. Dono college ki taraf badh gaye, raste mein dono idhar-udhar ki batein karte hue class ki taraf badh rahe the, jisme kuch is tarah ki batein thi ki aaruhi ne shruti se kaha ki vishal ne raat mein aisa kya kiya jo tujhe late hua, ek pal ko shruti chaunki lekin jab aaruhi ne kaha ki tu sapne mein vishal ke alawa kuch aur nahi dekhti to samajh aya ki aaruhi ko kuch nahi malum. Iske alawa shruti ne aaruhi ke mom ke bare mein pucha jispar aaruhi ne jada kuch khas jawab nahi diya aur bas itna hi kaha ki vo theek hai aur abhi bhi hostel change karne ko keh rahi hai jispar aaruhi ne bataya ki uska bilkul dil nahi hai hostel se jane ka. Aaruhi ka sad face dekh usne baat badli aur baat kalpana ki taraf modh di ki kab hai uski shadi jispar aaruhi ne jawab diya ki date fix nahi hui. Dono baat karte hue floor chadte hue apni class ki taraf badh rahe the, time se 10 minute uppar ho chuka tha lekin class ke bahar corridor mein khade bachon ko dekh unhe yakeen nahi hua ki vo late hue hai.

" nandini miss nahi ayi? "

" pehle to kabhi nahi hua, chal acha hai aram se baithenge.. " shruti aur aaruhi hath pakde pakde class mein ghuse to do char ladke ladkiyan unhe dekh baat banane lage jinhe shruti ne sidhe sidhe nazar-andaz kar diya. Dono piche jaa baithe jahan aksar baithte the.. " time par aa gaye..miss atte hi hogi " aaruhi ne baithte sath hi apne baal khole aur unhe piche kar ke hathon se ikhata karne lagi.

" tere baal bistar par bhi nahi sambhalte aur tere hathon mein bhi.. itne baal jhadte hai aaruhi tere.. apni mom se pucha ki nahi tune? " shruti ne apne kandhe par chadaya bag abhi utar kar niche rakha hi tha. Aaruhi se vo is baat ka jawab bas le hi rahi thi.

" han yaar karungi bhool jati hun " rubber lagate hue aaruhi ne jawab dia

" 1 mahina hone ko aya tune abhi tak.. " shruti itna kehti ki uske naam ki awaz par usne classroom ke darwaje ki taraf dekha. Peon khada tha.

" shruti "

" ji main hun.. " dubara awaz lagne par shruti boli

" aap chaliye.. apse koi milne aya hai.... "

" mujhse? "

" han.. chaliye.. jaldi time nahi hai mere pas.. " peon bol kar bahar nikal gaya.

" mujhse milne kaun ayega? " shruti ne aaruhi ki taraf confusion mein dekha.

" jakar dekh le... "

" kamal hai.. behenchod.. kaun suprise dene aa gaya.. tu ek kaam kar mera assignment de dio.. " shruti ne ek pal socha fir man badal liya " nahi jane de.. main de dungi.. kuch boelgi to keh dungi bulawa aya tha, tu bas mujhe text kar dio agar vo aye to "

" hmm ok.. aur tu bhi bata dio kaun aya hai tujhe surprise dene "

" pata nahi.. kaun hai.. mujhe to "

" are madam pura din nahi hai chaliye.. " peon ne ek aur awaz mari to shruti ne bag kandhe par tanga " chal main jati hun.. dekh kar aun.. kaun hai mujhe chedne wala.. koi launda hua to dekh lungi.. handsome hua to baat karke aungi... "

" hehehe.. haramzadi.. " aaruhi ne hanste hue kaha aur shruti uske samne se ojhal ho gayi, uske jatte hi aaruhi ke chehre ki hansi gambhirta mein tabdeel ho gayi. Usne apna phone nikala aur usne ek contact khol jise usne 'Soul' ke naam se save kiya hua tha. Us chat box ko kholne ke baad usne ek message send kiya 'I want to meet you' aur ye koi pehla message nahi tha, balki yahi message usne kai baar likha hua tha.
 

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Sau baat ki ek baat is shruti ke dimag mein bas hawas hai, hawas ke atirikt aur kuch nahi.....iski besharami aur tharakpan ki hadein paar kar deni wali baatein padh yahi lage ki isko sirf kaise karke apni hawas ki aag ko mitani hai, chaahe saamne wala koi bhi ho uske samne hi let jaayegi :D
Bichari aaruhi... Ek simple sa sawal puch rahi thi usse... badle mein itna kuch ghatiya aur behaya baatein ushe sunne ko milegi, ye to soch bhi nahi sakti thi aaruhi :sad:
are, are, are.... :D... lo ji is tharki shruti ke kaarnamo mein ek aur kaarnama jud gaya..... :D
ek hawasi mard aur tharki aurat se paida hone wali shruti isiliye itni hawas khor hai.... :D
Haan yaar galti iski nahi balki iske hawasi maa baap ki hai..... kaise kaise aadatein daal di shruti ki hormones aur DNA mein....... :lol:
Khair...... ye itni raat ko akeli kaha nikli... us bhootiya hostel jaane ke liye ya visal se milne.... lage ki phir se shayad tharak chadhi isliye shruti par...
le us tharki debu ke hatho pakdi gayi... par itni convince kahe kahe karing.... waise bhi wo jaa hi rahi thi visal se milne us bhootiya hostel mein apni tharak mitane.... are debu se hi mita leti apni hawas ki aag.... Kya fark padta hai shruti ko ki saamne wala koun hai bas hawas mit ti rahni chaahiye :lol:
Khair.... btw ek baat samajh mein nahi aa rahi ki aaruhi ab bhi uske sath ek hi room mein kyun hai? :mad:
are dusri kisi achhi ladki ke room kyun nahi chali jaati as a roommate.... :approve:
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Btw sach mein har mod aur pehlu ke sath kahani aur bhi interesting hoti jaa rahi hai...
aapki dwara likhe gaye har shabd hawaon mein bhi ek nasha bikhed de... ki padhte waqt thoda sa ye nasha yun readers pe bhi chaa jaaye ....Haan.. ishi wajah se to har update padhne mein aaye readers ko maza...Aap jis tarah likhte hai har mod aur pehlu ko dhyan mein rakhte huye, readers ko baithe bithaye kirdaaro ke bhaavnao ko gehrayi se mehsoos aur ehsaas karne ke liye majbur kar de .. ... Update ka har ek shadb jaise pehli barish ki bunde ki tarah hai..... padhte waqt lage ki kirdaar jaise ankhon ke samne bhumika nibha rahe ho.... Sach mein jis tarah se realistic roop mein bhumika nibha rahe hai kirdaar, readers ko majboor kar de unke sath judne ke liye... yahin to aapki lekhni ka jaadu hai.... :bow:
Well waise aapki yahin toh khoobi hain ki har ek mudde ko darshate hai aap.. I mean to say.. sirf thrill ya suspense tak hi lake update ko pesh nahi karte balki Har us fantasy aur dar ko bhi include karte hain jisse kahani flow lajawab bani rahti hai .. aur update ke ant mein jis tarah se kabhi thrill & suspense ko, to kabhi kuch emotions ko , to kabhi khushnuma ehsaas, to kabhi fantasy se judi kuch baato ko jaise final touch dete hai woh sach bemisaal hai...
Yahan Kayi fantasy based stories read ki hai sab ek se badhkar ek hai... lekin ye kahani unsab se hatakar hai... Agar kayi saal baad bhi koi reader aake aapki ye kahani padhe yehi kahenge ki "wah kahani ho to aisi" .... aapki ye kahani jo ek bahot hi arthpurn sikh de jaaye aur aise bhi mod hai sakth se sakth reader ko bhi kabhi bhavuk ho jaaye... to kabhi dar ka ek aalam cha jaaye.... to kabhi mann ko romanchit kar jaaye......
sukriya aapko... is sandaar kahani ko likhke us kahani ke ye amazing update humare samne pesh karne ke liye.. aur jis udasya se aapne is kahani likh rahe hai usme aap sarthak hote jaa rahe hai....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apne manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye..

naye post kiye gaye Update sach mein bahot hi dilchasp aur dilkash tha..
Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit1890 sahab :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock:
Itni tarif kar di by god... :ohno: nainaji...ye thodi jada tarif nahi kar di apne:shy: matlab kahani se jada to hamari tarikf ho gayi idhar.. :D Par bhaut bahut dhanyawad.. itna badku review aur trif dene ke liye... jitna to abhi tak hum deserve bhi nahi karte :gaylaugh:
Shruti ke dimag mein hawas nahihai.. actually mein ye ek internal sochhai... jo ladkiyan dikhati nahi.. bas vo khule vichar ki hai aur kuch nahi :D
Aaruhi sidhi nahi hai chichi... :D badi teddi kheer hai vo bhi :D Kahani ko thoda interesting banane ke chakar mein jitni chhoti likhne ki kosish kar raha hun kahani utni lambi banti jaa rahi hai LOL :D
Vaise thanks naina ji.. for such a review. flash jaisi speed hoti to puri kahani likh kar chaap rela hota apun idhar :D :hug:
majedar update ..kam khana kha rahi hai aruhi tab bhi uska jism gadra raha hai aur ye baat usne apne aap ko aayne me dekhkar kahi shruti se ,par shruti to mobile me hi ghusi huyi thi ..
aruhi aise baat karti hai jaise sex ya uske related baato se usko ghinn aati hai par shruti ka paijama khinchna galat nahi lagta 🤣🤣..
blowjob ka video ek dost ne dikhaya tha to dekhkar ghinn aa gayi thi aruhi ko 😁😁..

ek baar so gayi to alarm clock ke girane se bhi nahi uthi aruhi ..

shruti kiske paas jaa rahi hai raat ko chupke se ,aur debu ke mutabik roj hi bahar jaati hai wo ..
debu ne pakad liya par shruti puri taiyari ke saath rehti hai ,zat se bra nikalkar rishwat ki taur par de di debu ko 😁..
ab debu us bra ke saath apne maje me doob jayega 🤣🤣..
wakai bahut tharki hai debu ..
Wahi to baat hai.. khana pina itna bakwas fir bhi bahrta hua jism.. maal banti jaa rahi hai aaruhi apni :drool: Han ye sab sharartein to hostel ki aam baat hai.. chalti rehti hai... :D Tez ladki hai na ye.. :D Thanks bhai keep reading :hug:
Bas itna yaad rakhiye ye meri baat ki agar ye story read ki to baaki stories pe jaane ko jee hi nahi karega... har update ke end ek aisa suspense ki agle update ke intezaar karna muskil ho jaaye, jaise lage ki saare update aaj hi post kar de writer sahab... aur rahi baat thrill ki... ab xp ho ya xf ... Thriller story ke king ek hi hai aur wo hai one & only harshit1890 sahab,, chaahe to Yug Purush aka SGP 2009 saheb ya nain11ster ya phir Indian Princess se puch sakte hai.. harshit1890 saheb haunted series aur haweli series aur Tmkoc (origin) series ke liye famous the..
yahan xf pe haunted final part (Completed) .. Haweli-the-night-is-dark-completed... , treasure-the-invisible-hunt-completed post kar chuke hai..
:adore: :adore: bas karo itni tarif bhavnao mein beh jaunga mein :weep:
पुरा का पुरा अपडेट द ग्रेट एंड द वनली वन श्रुति पर आधारित रहा । और ऐसा होना भी चाहिए था । आखिर नायिका है इस स्टोरी की । इसके अलावा नैना जी की सबसे पसंदीदा किरदार भी है ।

इस अपडेट से एक, दो बातों का खुलासा हुआ । श्रुति कुछ ज्यादा ही क्लोज हो गई है जग्गो से । इसके पहले भी कुछेक बार उस लड़की से श्रुति को बातें करते हुए देखा गया था । पता नहीं दोनों के बीच क्या खिचड़ी पक रही है !

आरूहि से और हास्टल के वार्डन से छुपकर वो भी रात के अंधेरे में कहां जा रही थी । कहीं विशाल से मिलने तो नहीं ?
देबु के शब्दों में वो इससे पहले भी कई बार चुपके चुपके गई थी । इसमें यदि कोई सस्पेंस नहीं है तो इसका मतलब वो अपने ब्वॉयफ्रेंड से मिलने जाती रही है ।

देबु के बारे में हम सभी को पता है कि वो ठरकी है लेकिन यह भी सच है कि हास्टल में रह रही लड़कियों के लिए वो खतरा भी नहीं है । डायरेक्ट लड़की से ब्रा लेना और उस लड़की को भी पता होना कि ब्रा का इस्तेमाल किस लिए होने वाला है , अचंभित करने वाला था ।
श्रुति तो सही मायने में इक्कीसवीं सदी की लड़की है बल्कि इक्कीसवीं ही नहीं इसके बाद के सदी की लड़की भी प्रतीत हो रही है ।

बहुत ही फनी और मुस्कराहट लाने वाला अपडेट था यह । आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।
Nainaji ki pasindida nahi hai naina ji is feeling jealous... :lol: Close nahi hui hai bhai.. alag hi raiyte hote hain ladkiyun ke dimag mein... jaa rahi thi na aaruhi ke piche piche hostel tak bas wahi baat ka jikar hua hai idhar.. .. Bas bhai aise hi hanste muskurate rahiye.. aur kya chahie hume... Thanks sanju bhai :hug: keep reading :bow:
Ma'am main to starting se hi is story ke sath rha hu pr as a silent reader hi rha tha...pr ab se continuously review diya krunga yaha bhi...😁😁😁👍aapka hukm sar aankho pr😁😁:roflbow::peace::respekt:
Han apka malum hai apne ko.. uare the silent reader of this story... :D Nainaji se kaun nahi darta :roflbow:
 

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ye hawas ki pujaran shruti meko nakal karing.. iski to :chop:
jealous peuple :roll:
ek baat samajh nahi aayi ki ek tharki shruti wahan library gayi hi kyun, matlab bas un kitabo ke liye.... kya hawas ki pujaran shruti bhi viswash karne lagi hai un books mein likhi gayi baaton par...
ki paranormal activities hote hai.....
aur yahan gaur talab baat ye bhi hai ki vishal isliye shruti ke sath aaya hai just because shruti aur uske bich hawasi rishta hai... Lekin rachna kis liye help kar rahi hai, aaruhi to uski dost bhi nahi hai, are dost to door ki baat, achhe se pehchaanti bhi nahi hai....
Waise jo gaaliya de rahi ek dusre ko aapach mein hi wo bhi vishal ke rehte huye bhi... dono hi kisi red light area ki chinnar se kam nahi lag rahi thi....
Btw shruti tharki debu ke pure khandaan ko hi ghasitne mein aur un sabko gaaliya aur criticize karne mein koi kami nahi chhodi lekin wo ye baat bhool kyun jaati hai ki us college ki no 1 bitch wohi hai, jiske liye hawas hi sab kuch hai :D
debu aur shruti mein fark bas itni hai ki debu hawasi aadmi hai aur shruti hawasi laalchi ladki....
Waise us chaukidaar un teeno ko hi dekh hi lete lekin juwa, sharab aur chicken ki lalach ke chalte wo udhar aise gayab hua jaise jaise gadhe ke sar se sing..... waise jaate shruti aur rachna ke pero pe toilet karke chala gaya :laugh:
Achha ye hota ki unke upor hi toilet kar deta :laughing:
dono hi pavitra ho jaate.... :roflol:
Waise itni mehnat aur jaddojahat ki baad agar pakde jaate sach mein bahot bura hota.... Khair chup rahne ki mehnat rang laayi aur ye teeno pahunche library ke store room aur waha se sidhe library..... lekin sochne wali baat hai ki kya ab bhi wo books wohi hai, jaha hone ki ye log anuman lagaye jaa rahe the.....
hmm... to rachna ko vishal se baat karta dekh jali padi hai shruti ki.... :D
Khair....... Mujhe Kya matlab in teeno se... kare jo marzi apni :p:
mujhe to matlab hai sirf ek hi kirdaar se... jo the great one hai..... jo sachme har story pe lead kirdaar ki bhumika nibhane ki yogya hai.... :bow:
Aaruhi, o aaruhi, pyari aaruhi, bholi aaruhi, sabse Masoom aaruhi..... apne mann mein kitna kuch samete huyi hai isiko harshit1890 ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran ki hai. :D Jaise wo kirdaar jivant ho ...yeh kitni badi khoobi hai lekhak ki... ki wo readers ko kahani ke is aham paatr ke sath judne ko majbur kar de ,,,, jab bhi aaruhi ki is kahani ko read karu lage ki aaruhi kitni gahri peeda samete hai. :cry: par chehre pe us peeda ya dard ko kabhi aane na di... hamesha ek muskuharat ke sath jeene ki koshish ki.... par jis tarah atit ke panno itna kuch anhoni ghatanaye ghati uske sath , jo ek kabhi na bhoola na paane wali peeda de gayi hai aaruhi ko, jo aaj bhi uske dil mein peeda deti hai..jo aaj tak kisi ke saamne bayan nahi ki... yahan tak ke readers ke saamne bhi.. . us peeda aur dard ko shabdon mein bayan karna namumkin hai ,bas mehsoos kar sakti hun. :sad: Jaise ek udaas shaam ka ant ho.... dard ki barshat mein bhigi kuch bhooli bichhidi yaadein ho uski.....
atit ke panno mein aur sath hi lavanya jo ragging ke naam par uske sath ghinoni harkat ki thi, jaise aaruhi ki jindagi ko hi jhanjhor ke rakh diya ho... :( aur gaur karne wali baat ye bhi ki shruti ne bhi koi kasar nahi chhodi aaruhi ko pagal banane mein... :sigh: yahan tak ki haaraman shruti ushe us bhutiya, nashakhor logo ka basera us mansion mein bhi le gayi thi....:sigh:.uske baad to jaise aaruhi ki haalat bigadti hi chali gayi... Jise ehsaas kar dil mein gahrayi mein ek tees si utarti jaaye... :(
ek sabse aham baat ye bhi hai ki me bahot hi dharyashil aur sahanshil hai. ... Baat abhi tak khulke saamne nahi aayi par itna jaan hi gaye readers ki uske sath kuch aisa bura hua hai flashback mein jo soch se bhi pare hai bichari aaruhi :verysad:

Sabse Pasandida kirdaar?
isme koi do ray nahi ki favorite kirdaar one & only bholi masoom aaruhi hi hai aur rahengi...... Kahani ek jariye kayi sikh de gayi hai par sabse badi sikh ye ki jindagi mein kisi par bhi aasani se viswash mat kariyo..... bhed ke aad bhediya banke kuch aise musibat bhi hote hai ki insaan ko hi tod ke rakh de.... Jaise aaruhi ke sath atit hua hoga, jaise aaruhi ke sath lavanya ne jo gandi harakat ki... aur ab jo shruti kar rahi har din, har pal aaruhi pe mentally atyachar....

Kahani ki khubi...
lekhak ne har ek kirdaar, har ek pehlu aur har ek mod ke baare soch ke kahani aur update ko Kalpanasheel aur varnantmak roop mein pesh ki hai, jishe padhte waqt sach mein aanand mile.... aur sabse badi khoobi... jo koi bhi is kahani ko padh le wo aasani se aankh kaan bandh karke kisi ko bhi viswash nahi karenge.... isse sabse bada faida yahin hoga ki log thagne se, viswashghat hone se bach jaayenge, dhokhebaz aur dagabaaz logo se bhi bache rahenge.....

Kya kahani ke positive character ahmiyat samjhte hai.. .?

Haan... of course... Kyunki maine aise kayi kahaniya padhi hai jaha kirdaar aapach mein hi bair rakhte hai... jo apne paas hai unki hi ahmiyat nahi samajhte... aur jab tak samajh paate hai weh itne door chale jaate hai ki wo chaah kar bhi unko pa nahi sakte.... Jaise is kahani ki lead kirdaar aaruhi.... wo sabhi ko ahmiyat deti bas ushe hi ahmiyat nahi milti, badle mein mile bas dhokha aur daga... Even shruti dhokha dene mein daga dene mein no 1 hai... aapach mein understanding, apanpan, dosti ki ahmiyat , pyar mein wafa nibhayi jaaye isko sirf aur sirf Aaruhi ki jariye darshane ki koshish ki lekhak ne....

Romance, action, revenge, action aur suspense/thrill ka level ..?

xp ho ya xf lekhak ne pehle kayi kahaniya likh chuke hai... unki lekhni dekh kisi bhi reader ke mann mein yahi khayal aaye ki is writing jagat mein wo kaafi experienced holder hai.....
ab kahani harshit1890 ki to ye baat bhi tay hai storyline best honi hi hai ... jish tarah se sathik taal mel ke sath likh rahe hai ye kahani...meri nazar mein to suspense/thrill ka level sach mein enjoyable aur bemisaal hai... .. harshit1890 sahab kaise story plot related itna kuch soch lete hai..... amazing yaar.. superb :superb:

Anubhav... Is Update ko padh ke....?
jis tarah har mod pe suspense aur thrill create ki hai writer sahab really bemisaal hai....... chaahe jab shruti aur vishal deewar kudke us paar gaye the woh lamha hi ho, chaahe jab chori chupe rachna ke paas pahunche dono wo waqt hi ho,chaahe torch ki roushni padi un teeno pe aur chaukidaar wohi khada tha,aur ye teeno khamoshi ke sath aise khade the jaise ek inch bhi hile to pakde jaayenge, wo samay hi ho ya chaahe wo pal ho jab chori chupke teeno library ke andar ghuse update ke ant mein..... in teen ki ye sabhi activities, wo jagah, wo waqt, wo pal, wo samay, wo lamha... kul milake in sabhi ko padhte waqt har baar ek ankahin thrill aur suspense ka ehsaas har pal.... writer sahab hamesha ki tarah is update mein bhi high level ki thrill aur suspense banaye rakhne mein poorn roop se kamyab rahe... Bole to... The way you describes and narrates the situations is damn damn too good and marvelous. :adore: :adore: :adore: :adore:

kya kirdaar aur kahani ne a aapko abhi tak kahani ke sath jude rehne ko majboor kiya...?

shat pratishat.... aur shayad aage bhi kayi baar read karu is kahani ko... readers ke yahi bolu ki ek baar aap jarur padhiye is kahani ko.... aap log jitni baar padhenge is kahani ko... utni aapke dil ke karib hoti jayegi ye kahani.... ek santusti mil jaaye update ko padh ke readers ko...@harshit1890 sahab is baat par bhi dhyan dete hai .....

Update dilchasp aur dilkash tha....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab :applause: :applause:
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Maa kasam aisa laga ek baari ko apne update chapa hai... itna badku revieew kaise likh lete ho :adore: :adore: iska counter dene mein hi pasine nikal jaye :sweat: Apke library walle sawal ka jawab to agle update mein apko mil hi gaya hoga.. baat rahi dono ki dosti ki to kuch kirdar jaruri nahi mil kar dosti hi kare.. rachna aur shruti mein dosti hai.. vaise bhi shruti dost banane mein number one hai.. jo jada bolta hai aksar logon ke jhund mein rehta hai aur ye ladki to samjhdari se sabse baat karti hai.. she is a prfct candidate,.. a college girl candidate...
Mera manna wahi hai jab tak kahani mein sabhi shaq ke gehre mein na ho tab tak kahani ka asli maza hi kahan ata hai.. khair abhi to cards bichane ki kosish kar raha hun jab judenge tab malum hoga ki akhir ye mazra kya hai.. double face game mein kahani ko play karne ka try rahega let c kitna success rahunga...
Apne kahani ke bare mein aur hamare lekhan ki itni khubi se tariff ki hai uske liye hum abhar prakat krte hain sach mein... thanks for being such a reader.. and also a part of this my story college... Thank you :adore: :adore: :hug:
romanchak update ..to shruti vishal se milne gayi thi par maja karne nahi 😁.. unko library me gagan ki batayi book dhundni hai shayad ..aur library me kuch log ikattha hote hai aisa bhi kuch kaha tha gagan ne 🤔..
rachna bhi saath hai in dono ke ..
chupte chupte jhadiyo se jaate huye bahut mushkilo ka saamna karna pada teeno ko ,upar se watchmen ki peshab ki badbu bhi sunghni padi 🤣🤣..
debu ko gaaliya bakne lagi shruti aur burkatta ka matlab bhi bata diya 🤣🤣..
dono ladkiya bindhast hai ,gaaliya bhi de rahi hai aur gandi baate bhi kar rahi vishal ke saamne 😁..
watchmen se bachke aa gaye library me par kaha dhundna hai jo unko chahiye ye pata hi nahi 🤔..
aur ye shruti ko thodi jalan bhi mehsus huyi rachna ko vishal se baate karte huye dekhkar 😁..
rachna ki kahani bhi majedar hai ,ki kaise wo apne sharir se khelna sikhi 😍..
Vishal kaun sa nahi deta hoga.. acha banne ka natak kar raha hoga, ladki jo impress karni hai launde ko :roll: baki to bhai.. yahi karti hai ladkiyan akele mein.. chupi rustam hadh se jada hoti hai bhai... sabhi kiradaron ki apni hi kahani dene ki try ki gayi hai... apko pasand ayi uske liye dhanywad :hug: keep reading..
इसे कहते हैं सच्ची दोस्ती । श्रुति ने एक बार से अच्छे दोस्त होने का फर्ज निभाया ।
वार्डन से बचते बचाते....देबू की उल जलूल हरकतों को बर्दाश्त करते.....अंधेरी रातों में इसलिए बाहर निकली कि उसे आरूहि की फिकर है । उसे आरूहि की बिमारी का पता लगाना है । और इसके लिए उसने विशाल से ही नहीं बल्कि लाइब्रेरियन की बहन रचना की मदद भी ली ।
बात बस यहीं खत्म नहीं हुई । चौकीदार के पेशाब के छिटें भी शरीर पर बर्दाश्त किए । भले ही शरीर के ऊपरी हिस्से में नहीं पड़ा हो पर पांवों में तो लगा ही ।
आरूहि कुछ बताती नहीं , उसकी पढ़ाई में कोई नुक़सान न हो इसलिए उसकी मां से भी बात कर नहीं सकती तब दूसरा ओपस्न बचा क्या उसके लिए ! टीचर को तो सारी हकीकत पहले ही वो बता चुकी है । उन्होंने भी तो कुछ नहीं किया ।

वो मुंहफट है । उसकी बातों में अश्लीलता भी है । लेकिन जो भी उसके दिल में है वही जुबान पर भी है । विशाल के अलावा और किसी लड़के को वो पसंद भी नहीं करती है । मिलनसार है इसीलिए उसका फ्रैंड सर्किल भी लम्बा चौड़ा है । डेयर की कोई कमी नहीं है । लावन्या से डरने वाली लड़कियां बहुत थी । आरूहि भी थी पर श्रुति नहीं थी । वो साहसी लड़की है ।

अब तो हमे यह देखना है कि श्रुति की मेहनत कितना रंग लाती है । :D

Outstanding and Amazing Update harshit1890 bhai.
Jagmag Jagmag Update.
Vo hai hi sachi dost, koi manta nahi bas use... bhai.. apne shruti ko itna acha describe kiya hai jitna to main nahi kar paya.. Naina jii dekhoo.. dekhoo... bhai samajhte hain ladki ko :D
Rahi baat ashleelta ki vo to hum hindustaniyu ka janam sidh adhikar hai... jab tak vo nahi banenge... lalu reh jayenge... aur laluon ki to koi jagah hi nahi hai na bhai :D Thanks sanju bhai keep reading :bow: :adore: :hug:
 

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majedar aur romanchak update ..rachna ko jo book mili usko wo kamasutra ki book samajh rahi thi 🤣..
shruti aur rachna me bahut gaaliyo ka aadan pradan ho raha tha 🤣..
rachna ko facebook ka kaafi experience hai ,ladko se baate bhi karti hai jisme kuch ladke apne lund ka photo bhi bhejte hai usko 😁..

shruti ko sochna sahi hai ki library me koi to hai ,warna wo book achanak usko pairo ke paas kaise aati ..
aur ab usko gagan ki baate bhi yaad aa gayi jisme gagan ke bataya tha ki senior ka adda hai waha pe ..
shruti ne dimaag lagaya aur wo gupt adde ko dhundne ke liye shelf se saare book ko hatane lagi par kuch nahi mila ..
aur jab sab book ko rakh diya to aakhri ka rakhte waqt shelf 2 bhago me batt gaya .
aisa kya hai us shelf ke pichhe 🤔🤔🤔..
library bhi kisi rahasyamay jagah jaisi hai aisa lagta hai ..
Tution padati hai vaise.. aaj kal ke padane walle... :sigh: yahi sab sikhayenge bachon ko :D Rehasymaye... hone ke alawa alag hi chutiap se bhari padi hai vo... Thanks bhai keep reding :hug:
Book shelf me hidden darwaja h kya jo us book ko jo shruti ne abhi rkhi aur thoda push hone se wo book shelf 2 bhaago me bant gyi...lgta h ya koi secret room ya kuchh aur h...jo unhe shelf hatane se to nhi mila pr abhi jo ittefaq se shruti ne kiya usse unke aascharya ki koi seema nhi rhi hogi...bahut raaz dafan h aur sayd un raazo se parda yahi se uthna shuru hoga...chliye dekhte h kya hota h aaage kya sach me wohi batein h jo gagan ne shruti aur baki logo ko btai ya aaruhi mentally disturb ho chuki h aur iss sabke pichhe koi shaks h jo ye sb krke kuchh hasil krna chahta h...so waiting for next update brother👏👏👏
Har pehlu se har chiz ko dekhni hogi .. isliey shruti apna dimag laga rahi hai.. skul time kuch galti uske dimag mein is tarah basi ki vo chahti nahi ki aage aisa kabhi kuch ho isliye ye kar rahi hai... Thanks bhai... keep reading... :hug:
Jis kaam ke liye aayi thi haaraman shruti waha library mein, us kaam ko anjaam to nahi de pa rahi hai, ulta rachna sang kaha wo fb, phir wo purane jamane ke sambhog pakriya ke baare mein baatein karne lag gayi.... rachna aur shruti jis tarah ke shadbo ka istemaal kar rahi thi conversation ke waqt.... Lage ki jaise ye dono koi red light area ki chinnar hai.... is mamle mein kam se tharki kirdaar Kajal bhi bhasha ko leke maryada rakhti hai... Lekin ye dono hai ki chii chii :yuck:
well.. well.. well... chalo finally books mil hi gayi... lekin jis tarah se mili hai, us baat par shaq karne lagi shruti.. ushe laga ki un teeno ke atirikt bhi koi aur bhi hai waha library ke andar , shruti shaq ki sui us insaan pe hai jiski wajah se paranormal activities wali book aaruhi ne read ki hogi.... aur shruti ke hisaab se wohi insaan abhi is waqt Library ke kisi room mein chupa baitha hai....
Waise shaq karna wajib bhi hai.... kyunki books jis tarah se mili hai sach mein sochne wali baat hai, aur sabse aham baat wo book shelf bhi ek khas jagah par ajnaane mein book rakhte hi do hissho mein bat kar khul gaya...
Khair....... update akhir mein kuch baatein uljhi huyi thi.....shruti ke hisab se waha library seniors ka hona, phir ye book shelf ka apne ap khul jaana....shruti ka yun library aana raat ko.... lekin ye sab baatein, situation, scenes kahe create ho rahe hai story pe....
kya isse aaruhi thik ho jayegi.... Nahi...
Kya isse aaruhi ke sath kya hua tha flashback mein ye baat saamne aayegi... nahi....
to ye shruti, rachna, vishal aur library ko leke ye episode kahe add hai story mein...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
Lagta hai apne college ke samay aisi nok jhok nahi ki.. ki to hogi.. maan nahi sakte hum :D Wahi chal raha hai idhar.. dont be jealous :poke: :D
Aaruhi ke liye karna badi baat hai.. use vo theek nahi hogi lekin han.. ek chiz jo ho sakti hai vo use samne lane ki kosish kar rahi hai ya fir ek aur point hai... jise main abhi reveal nahi kar sakta but han.. aage jarur karunga... Thanks nainaji :hug: keep reading :bow:
 

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Are ye to raavan putra Meghnath nikla bhaya.....uska takiya kalam behinchod..sayd kuchh electrical problem aayi hogi jb usne shruti ko bahar nikalne ke liye shelf open ki aur wo khudse bnd ho gyi usi ki jhallahat me uske muh se gaali nikli...waise sayd shruti ne abhi ispr dhyaan nhi diya pr sayd wo jald hi meghnath tk pahuch jaaye agr wo is baat ko pakad le aage kbhi ya abhi bhi....khair shruti ko book to mil gyi h ab wo iska kya krti h koi help milti h ya nhi use isse wo to waqt hi btayega pr shruti ka bnd kamre me bnd insaan se sach ugalwane ke sare tarike fail ho gye....aur akhir me use haar maan kr waps hi aana pda...
Wahin aaruhi ko fir se megha dikhi ya wo uska baham tha pr jis trha se wo debu ke samne bina kpdo ke khadi hui h usse itna to jahir hota h ki wo apne hosh me nhi h ...sayd debu ki bhi akhiri raat ho jaaye ye..aur debu bhi kisi gate pr tanga mil jaaye. Aane wala waqt kya kaand krata h uska intzaar rhega brother.. Nice update
:lol: :roflbow: are bhai bhai... pahunchegi ya nahi ye to abhi se bata nahi sakte.. par han.. kirdar jarur juda hai... Han ye to hai shruti ne kosish puri ki par vo safal nahi ho payi.. Thanks bhai keep reading :hug:
matlab saaf hai aaruhi darwaje tak pahunchti usse pehle hi room mein dhakil hone wala insaan darwaja ko band kar diya tha.. yaani wo jo parchayi andar aayi thi wo abhi room mein hi thi.. koun hai wo?

Shayad aaruhi abhi normal nahi hai, wo abhi khud ki imagination world mein jee rahi hai.. isliye shayad har raat ki tarah bechari phir se nikal gayi us bhootiya girls hostel ki aurr, lekin us tharki debu daal ki bori pe gir ke aaruhi ko apni aurr akarshit kiya.. aur aaruhi chal padi uski aurr... par kyun... ek samnya si kuch girne ki aawaz ke liye kyun itni dilchaspi jaagi uske mann mein?

is aawaz ke piche jo koi bhi hai, usko sabhi students ki jaankari hai, yahan tak ki private aur privacy bhi pata hai..
Koun ho sakta hai wo......jisne aaruhi ko un books ko padhne ke liye kaha..
kya ye library wali aawaz ke malik aur us bhutiya mansion mein koi connection hai.. jaha students nasha karte hain..

aaruhi ye kya kar rahi hai us haramkhor debu ke saamne :eek:
Kahi aisa to nahi lavanya ke baad aaj debu ki baari hai marne ki.. matlab aaj debu ka aaj akhir raat hai,
Achha hi hai... debu jaisa haramkhor kamina kirdaar khaufnaak tarike mar hi jaaye to hi behtar hai..

Khair.... sawal kayi hai uth khade huye hai
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
Ab kyun gayi kaise gayi aur kya hua tha ye aaruhi hi bata sakti hai sirf.. usi ke pass jawab hai.. Han bilkul... pata chal jayega.. vaise bhi vo suspense nahi hai jada... Hahaha kaha tha ki aaruhi ko kam nahi samjhne ka... :D Thanks naina ji :hug: Keep reading... :D
romanchak update ..shruti ne kaha tha ki wo darwaja bahar se band karke aayi hai to phir kisne khola tha dobara jab aruhi jaag gayi thi ,,
aur wo kaun tha jo ander aane ki soch raha tha ..
aruhi ab bhi megha par hi atak ke bahar ja rahi thi ..
aur ye debu ke saath sahi hua jo girke uske lund ko chot lag gayi 🤣🤣🤣..
par ye aruhi uske saamne top kyu utar rahi hai ,debu ke to dard me bhi maje ho rahe hai 😁..

shruti ander fans gayi aur baaki dono bahar hi reh gaye ..
aur ye aawaj keh rahi hai ki kitabo ka secret world me swagat hai ..
par us aawaj ne jo kitab shruti ko chahiye thi wo itne jaldi me kaise de di ye samajh nahi aaya ..shruti ne us aawaj ke malik ko dhundne ke liye apne dimaag ka sahi se istemal kiya tha par dhund nahi paayi ..
aur ye bahar nikalte huye bahinchod kehna aisa laga kisi ke mooh se suna hai us style me gaali dena ..
kahi ye wahi to nahi jo samose kha gaya tha shruti ke ..


aur jo us aawaj ne kaha ki wo ek jagah par rukta nahi ye bhi ajeeb laga ..
Kam harami rakam nahi hai vo dard mein maze le raha hai sala :D Sahi hai naa... :D Ajeeb nahi tha vo rukne wali baat se ghuma raha tha jaise shruti use ghumane ki kosish mein thi.. mazak thodi na hai bhai... :D Thanks bhai keep reading :hug:
लाइब्रेरी के अन्दर एक खूफिया तहखाना ।
ऐसा क्या है इन किताबों में जिसके लिए एक गुप्त ठिकाना बना दिया गया है । किताबें तो हर जगह एवेलेवल है चाहे जिस तरह की भी किताब हो ।

सिक्रेट वर्ल्ड आफ बुक्स -
शायद कालेज में पढ़ने वाले स्टूडेंट्स के लिए जो एडल्ट और गंदी बुक्स पढ़ना चाहते हों । जिन्हें चुपके से वो किताबें मुहैया कराया जा सके । या वो बुक्स जो आसानी से उपलब्ध न हो ।लेकिन फिर भी जैसा खूफिया जगह उपलब्ध करवाया गया है वो काफी आश्चर्यजनक है । कालेज के प्रबंधक को इस जगह के बारे में अवश्य पता होना चाहिए ।

श्रुति ने बड़ी ही हिम्मत दिखाई जब वो उस खूफिया कमरे में फंस गई थी । आवाजें कहां से आ रही थी यह भी पता लगाने की कोशिश की । मुझे लगता है कोई बाहर से उस कमरे पर किसी खुफिया कैमरे से नजर रख रहा था और बातें कर रहा था । पर था कौन वो ?

श्रुति और रचना कामकला को प्रदर्शित करती जिस पुस्तक की बात कर रही थी वो मुझे लगता है कोणार्क की नहीं खजूराहो की होगी ।

( पुरा का पुरा सीन काफी रोमांच लिए हुआ था । आउटस्टैंडिंग दृश्य था और जहां जैसा कन्वर्सेशन होना चाहिए था परफेक्ट वैसा ही था । चाहे श्रुति और रचना की बातें हो चाहे खूफिया कमरे में श्रुति और उस अज्ञात व्यक्ति की । )

आरूहि एक बार फिर से श्रुति को मेघा नाम से पुकारी । इससे उसके मानसिक असंतुलन की पुष्टि फिर से होती है । देबू के शयनकक्ष ( स्टोर रूम ) में उसका अपना ऊपरी वस्त्र उतार कर अपने उरोजों को नंगा करना उसे मानसिक रूप से बीमार होने का दावा करता है ।

आरूहि की कुछ कुछ हरकतें मुझे नीलकमल मूवी की याद दिला देता है । राज कुमार , मनोज कुमार , वहिदा रहमान और बलराज साहनी जैसे सुपरस्टारों से सुशोभित इस मूवी में वहिदा रहमान की भूमिका बिल्कुल आरूहि से मेल खाती है । वैसे वो हाॅरर मूवी थी।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड सेंसेशनल अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।
जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।
Kufia jagah nahi hai.. kisi ka chutiap hai ye.. aur samajh jao kiska hai.. :D Camera to tha hi nahi tabhi to shruti ki harkton ko dekh nahi sakta tha.. ye to shruti ne pata hi kar li thi .. use sirf ek speaker hi dikhai diya tha. .. Are wah.. aaruhi horror story se milta hua character.. chudail bana dun kya bhai ise :D Thanks sanju bha :hug: for such a dearing response... keep reading :bow:
Pehle revos pe reply chaahiye abhi ke abhi :bat:

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jealous peuple :roll:

Maa kasam aisa laga ek baari ko apne update chapa hai... itna badku revieew kaise likh lete ho :adore: :adore: iska counter dene mein hi pasine nikal jaye :sweat: Apke library walle sawal ka jawab to agle update mein apko mil hi gaya hoga.. baat rahi dono ki dosti ki to kuch kirdar jaruri nahi mil kar dosti hi kare.. rachna aur shruti mein dosti hai.. vaise bhi shruti dost banane mein number one hai.. jo jada bolta hai aksar logon ke jhund mein rehta hai aur ye ladki to samjhdari se sabse baat karti hai.. she is a prfct candidate,.. a college girl candidate...
Mera manna wahi hai jab tak kahani mein sabhi shaq ke gehre mein na ho tab tak kahani ka asli maza hi kahan ata hai.. khair abhi to cards bichane ki kosish kar raha hun jab judenge tab malum hoga ki akhir ye mazra kya hai.. double face game mein kahani ko play karne ka try rahega let c kitna success rahunga...
Apne kahani ke bare mein aur hamare lekhan ki itni khubi se tariff ki hai uske liye hum abhar prakat krte hain sach mein... thanks for being such a reader.. and also a part of this my story college... Thank you :adore: :adore: :hug:

Vishal kaun sa nahi deta hoga.. acha banne ka natak kar raha hoga, ladki jo impress karni hai launde ko :roll: baki to bhai.. yahi karti hai ladkiyan akele mein.. chupi rustam hadh se jada hoti hai bhai... sabhi kiradaron ki apni hi kahani dene ki try ki gayi hai... apko pasand ayi uske liye dhanywad :hug: keep reading..

Vo hai hi sachi dost, koi manta nahi bas use... bhai.. apne shruti ko itna acha describe kiya hai jitna to main nahi kar paya.. Naina jii dekhoo.. dekhoo... bhai samajhte hain ladki ko :D
Rahi baat ashleelta ki vo to hum hindustaniyu ka janam sidh adhikar hai... jab tak vo nahi banenge... lalu reh jayenge... aur laluon ki to koi jagah hi nahi hai na bhai :D Thanks sanju bhai keep reading :bow: :adore: :hug:
wo kya hai na aaj kal SANJU ( V. R. ) saheb sushma aur vyom ke story jab se padhi hai tab se unke favorite ho gaye tharki type ke kirdaar :D
 

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Itni tarif kar di by god... :ohno: nainaji...ye thodi jada tarif nahi kar di apne:shy: matlab kahani se jada to hamari tarikf ho gayi idhar.. :D Par bhaut bahut dhanyawad.. itna badku review aur trif dene ke liye... jitna to abhi tak hum deserve bhi nahi karte :gaylaugh:
Shruti ke dimag mein hawas nahihai.. actually mein ye ek internal sochhai... jo ladkiyan dikhati nahi.. bas vo khule vichar ki hai aur kuch nahi :D
Aaruhi sidhi nahi hai chichi... :D badi teddi kheer hai vo bhi :D Kahani ko thoda interesting banane ke chakar mein jitni chhoti likhne ki kosish kar raha hun kahani utni lambi banti jaa rahi hai LOL :D
Vaise thanks naina ji.. for such a review. flash jaisi speed hoti to puri kahani likh kar chaap rela hota apun idhar :D :hug:

Wahi to baat hai.. khana pina itna bakwas fir bhi bahrta hua jism.. maal banti jaa rahi hai aaruhi apni :drool: Han ye sab sharartein to hostel ki aam baat hai.. chalti rehti hai... :D Tez ladki hai na ye.. :D Thanks bhai keep reading :hug:

:adore: :adore: bas karo itni tarif bhavnao mein beh jaunga mein :weep:

Nainaji ki pasindida nahi hai naina ji is feeling jealous... :lol: Close nahi hui hai bhai.. alag hi raiyte hote hain ladkiyun ke dimag mein... jaa rahi thi na aaruhi ke piche piche hostel tak bas wahi baat ka jikar hua hai idhar.. .. Bas bhai aise hi hanste muskurate rahiye.. aur kya chahie hume... Thanks sanju bhai :hug: keep reading :bow:

Han apka malum hai apne ko.. uare the silent reader of this story... :D Nainaji se kaun nahi darta :roflbow:
baat itni si hai ki agar hawasi shruti aur uske karname dekh le to malini aur vikrant bhi sharma jaaye.. :roflol: dono yahi soche ki kitni asleel hai ye shruti.... asleelata ki saari hadein hi paar kar di :D
 

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" madarchod phone kyun nahi mil raha.. " shruti debu ko bar-bar phone mila rahi thi. Vishal aur rachna apne-apne raste nikal chuke the. Shruti hostel ki taraf kitab ko liye aa rahi thi aur vo kai baar debu ka number mila chuki thi lekin uska number mil kar nahi de raha tha. " lagta hai ab gayi main.. agar gate nahi khula aur uske khulne se pehle mujhe bahar dekh liya gaya to pakka gayi, ye behen ka takka muth marte marte so gaya hoga... isko to kal dekhungi... bahut inam inam kar raha tha .... ab iska inam iske gand se nikalungi...
galti insaan se hoti hai, ab isme us phone ki kya galti jo us phone ko hi insects lober bana di usne :laugh:
debu to hai hi gaali khane layak par uske sath sath uske phone ko bhi insects tharki bana di is shruti ne to :D
Are koi samjhao yaar is shruti ko ki phone ki bahan nahi hoti hai :roflol:
. oooo behenchod... ye kahan se aa gaya... " shruti hostel ki taraf pahunchti use pehle use chillu dikh gaya jiski wajah se use deewar ka sahara lekar chipna pada. " lode jayenge ab andar.. aur bano lene ke shaukeen... vo behenki lodi jalad warden khol degi... is bhasad ko pehle wahan se hatana hoga.. fir mila kar dekhti hun... " shruti ne fir debu ko phone milaya aur ek baar fir wahi message aya, not reachable.. " ye sala bhaorse ke layak hi nahi hai... ispar bhrosa hi nahi karna chahie tha.. bhosdiwala... uppar se ye chillu.. sala itne din se to is time dikha nahi aaj aa gaya gand marwane... " shruti ne gardan aage karke us taraf dekha to chillu wahin kursi par baitha hua tha.
lo ab is bechare chillu ko bhi insects lober bana diya isne to.. are ab kya wo chaukidaari karna bhi chhod de kya taaki shruti raat raat bhar aise bekhauf ghumti phire idhar udhar :D
are hostels ke kuch niyam hote hai.. par shruti ko jaise rules & regulation ki dhajjiya udani hai..
Ek baar ko agar darwaja khula hota to shruti nikal jati lekin band darwaje ke andar vo jaye to jaye kaise. Khub socha lekin shruti ka dimag bilkul band ho chuka tha, jo bhi abhi hua tha uske baad to bilkul band ho chuka tha. Book pakde pakde uska hath bhi thakne laga tha, tabhi shruti ne ek tarkib lagai aur sitti mari.. use jada tez to nahi bazi lekin shanti mein awaz gunj uthi aur chillu ke kano mein ja padi lekin usne koi harkat na di, usne dubara siti mari aur is baar chillu uth baitha. Vo uth khada hua aur idhar udhar dekhne laga, piche dekhta use pehle shruti chip gayi. Kuch pal baad usne fir gardan nikal kar dekha to chillu kursi par baitha hua tha. Shruti ne ek baar fir sitti bajai...
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha :lol: :lotpot:
Oh God,..... itni heavy comedy :roflol: epic :roflol:
shruti yun sitti bajana aur chillu sitti ki awaz sun gardan ko mendak ki tarah idhar udhar karke dekhna... just imagine us situation ko :lol: pata nahi kyun hanshi ruk hi nahi rahi hai yaar :lotpot:
" kaun hai..? " is baar chillu thoda aage gaya aur fir wapis aya, usko wapis ata dekh shruti fir chip gayi aur jab do pal baad usne fir us taraf dekha to chillu wahan tha hi nahi. " Behenchod kahan gaya ye? " shruti sochti use pehle chillu samne aya jise dekhte hi shruti ke dil ko thodi tassali hui kyun ki vo hostel ke andar se nikla tha to kya uska gate khula hua hai? Ho sakta hai ya nahi bhi.. kyun ki gate ke bahar chota sa covered chabutra bhi to hai jahan vo aksar baarish ke waqt baitha hai. Lekin vo gaya tab hi tha jab mene siti marri to kya vo dekhne ke liye gaya tha? Ho sakta hai.. try karun... ek baar last try pura dum laga... kar... Shruti deewar ki aad mein chupi aur usne thodi unchi awaz mein siti bajane ki kosish ki aur vo baj gayi. Shor is baar jada hua, area khule hone ki wajah se ye samajh pana mushkil tha ki awaz kahan se aa rahi hai aur shanti hone ki wajah se vo gunj uthi.

" kaun hai madarchod.. samne aa gaya to gand mar dunga.. " chillu ne kaha dhire se tha par sunai de gaya, ek pal ko shruti apne par le gayi aur uska man kiya gand marne se pehle iska lund kaat dun par baad mein samajh aya ki vo use nahi keh raha hai.
batao to.. ek to bechara chillu raat raat bhar chaukidaari kare, upor aise koi sitti baja baja ke pareshan karega to muh se gaali niklegi hi na :D
Thodi na mithe bol niklenge :D
waise jo baat kahi chillu ne aur jis tarah gaali ko apne upor le li shruti ne.... :laughing:
waise chillu aur shruti ki jodi buri na hai... are superhit hai... superhit... :roflol:
waise andhari raat, hostel ke andar jaane ke liye shruti yun chupke sitti bajana , jishe sun chillu ka yun pareshan hona.. upor se ek dusre ko mann hi mann, to kabhi dhime aawaz gaali dena ...
Kuch ajibo garib hi mahol paida kare..
lekin sath hi had se zyada comedy create huyi hai is situation mein... :D
Usne halki si gardan bahar nikali aur dekha to chillu danda lekar us taraf aage badh chala tha yani ki round marne.. aur umeed thi ki vo is taraf bhi ayega par use pehle use hostel ke andar jana hai aur yahi sahi samay tha par behad aram se.. bina koi awaz kiye.. usne apne pairon se chapal nikali aur dabbe panv dhire-dhire aage badi, vo bas is umeed mein thi ki chillu piche na dekhe bas.. piche na dekhe... dabe panv vo aage badi aur uski nazar pillu se nahi hati. Bas kuch kadam aur vo hostel ke chabutre wali jagah ja khadi hui, iske baad usne samay nahi bitaya aur darwaje par dhakka mara, vo khula hua tha ... " bachh.. gayi.. behench..... " vo gate band karke uppar ki taraf daudi. Usne aaj se pehle hostel ki sidiyan itni tezi se nahi chadi thi bhale hi vo kuch dino se ana jana kar rahi thi par jaldi pahunchni ki ek hi vajah thi, pakdi book jo kafi bhari thi.. Shruti apni manzila walle coridor mein ayi, uske chehre par sukun bhari rahat ki sans thi varna pakde jane uski sabse badi keel thi. Shruti apne kamre ke pas pahunchi to tez kadmo se thi lekin wahan ate-ate uske per dhime ho chuke the. Kamre ka darwaja khula hua tha, jise vo dekh kar pehle hi chaunk uthi aur jab usne dekha ki kunda tak tuta hua hai to uske dimag mein sainkdo sawal umad uthe. Vo tezzi se andar ayi aur andar ate hi usne light switch on kiya kyun ki vo maan baithi thi ki aaruhi andar nahi hai par jaise hi light khuli to usne paya ki aaruhi wahin laiti hui so rahi hai, vo bhi gehri nind mein. Shruti aage badhi aur kareeb se aaruhi ke bistar par use jhuk kar uske chehre ko dekha. Na jane kyun aisa karne mein use ghabrahat hui par jab usne uske chehre par chai khubsurti ko dekha to uska hi man dol gaya.

" ye to bade aram se so rahi hai... to fir ye kisne kiya.. " usne mud kar darwaje ki taraf dekha. Book ko palang ke uppar aur chapal ko wahin palang ke niche chhod vo kamre ki dehleez par ayi aur tute kunde ko ujale mein dekhte hue boli. Kunda sirf tuta nahi tha aisa lag raha tha kisi ne takat laag kar toda ho, ek hisse se tut kar latak raha tha. " warden ko bataungi to vo alag khun piyegi... ye apne paison se hi theek karana padega... aur pata lagana hoga kis haramzadi ka kaam hai ye... " usne kiwad band karte hue khud se kaha aur fir ek dum se ruki aur bahar jhakne lagi.
to thodi bahot trick aur mehnat chalte tharki shruti hostel ke andar aa hi gayi.. Lekin jis tarah se bhagi apne room ki aurr lage ki uske pichwade mein kisine fatake lagake jala di ho...
room aate hi hairan, kyunki aaruhi gahri nind mein aur darwaje ka kunda tuta hua...
Oh to ye baat hai..... actually room mein koi aaya hi na ho, hallucination ho chalte bas aaruhi ko laga ki koi aaya hai aur ushe ab bahar jaana hai.... wo bahar to nikal gayi thi.. us waqt hostel bhi bilkul shaant aur waha bilkul khamoshi chayi huyi rahti hai lekin debu ki aawaz ne aaruhi ko us aurr jaane ke liye majboor kiya... ho na ho aaruhi ne debu ko maut ke ghat utar di ho, phir wapas aake room so gayi gahri nind mein jaise kuch hua hi na ho....
Shayad koi hai jo hypnotise karke aaruhi se ye sab karwa raha ho...
" ho na ho ye jaggu ka kaam hai, subah ki baat ka badla liya hoga isne.. tu ruk beti.. tere ko bada jazz banne ka shauk hai na.. tere jazz ki sari gas bahar nikalti hun... facebook to chhod.. mobile chunne se pehle sochegi... bade lund chahie na tujhe.. ab tujhe itne lund milenge.. itne lund milenge... ki thak jayegi dete dete.. galat jagah bhid gayi tu... " shruti ne darwaja band kiya lekin kundi lagane se pehle usne fir darwaja khola aur jaggu ke kamre ki taraf dekhte hue unchi awaz mein boli " kuttiya... " aur kundi lagakar, light switch off karke bistar par aa gayi. Bistar par ate hi uski nazar book par padi aur book se judi sari kahani uske dmag mein ghum gayi. Ek dafa usne book ke cover par chitr dekhe jisme alag alag tarah ke janwar ya insan jaise ya fir kuch aur hi prakar ki prajati ke chehre bane hue the aur uske bich mein likha hua tha lamba sa. ' Pramaksh ' Ek pal to kiya abhi dekh le lekin din bhar ki thakan aur raat ki is baddi thakan ke chalte usne abhi kuch bhi dekhna sahi nahi samjha aur book ko ek taraf kar vo so gayi.
lol... ab us bichari jaggu ko bhi bina kisi galti ke gaaliya dene lagi...
Kya bol rahi jaggu ko "kuttiya" ....
par shruti kyun bhool jaati hai ki ek kuttiya ko do roti khila do to wo bhi wafadari nibhaye... lekin shruti ek kuttiya se bhi gayi gujari hai.. :roflol: . astin mein chupi nageen hai shruti... jaane kab dash le...
behtar hoga ki us shruti ko hostel se bahar nikal feke :D
wait a minute.... kamre ki light switch off karne baad kamre bas andhakar hi andhakar >>>>ye baat kayi baar jikar huyi hai story pe to phir andhere mein us books ke shadbon kaise padh liya usne :lol: night mode actived glasses laga li kya aankho mein shruti ne :lol:
Haan hai shruti dayan hi.. ushe kya fark pare ki raat hai ke din... ushe to sab kuch dikhe :akshay:
" shruti.. shruti... shruti.... " away sunai dene par halki ankhein khuli jiske aage dhundla pan chaya hua tha " shruti.. uthna nahi hai kya.... "

" uhnnn... kaun chutiya hai be... jo adhi raat ko jaga raha hai " hathon se angdai lete hue apna sharir todte hue shruti palang par hi sharir todne lagi jiski wajah se uska top uppar ho gaya aur uska nanga pet dikhne laga. Aaruhi ne ye sunte hi turant apna kaam chhoda aur uske pet par chapat laga di. " ayyi... kaun meri jawani se ched chaad kar hai.. mene uski... maa... "

" aage boli na to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga ayi samajh "

" ohh aaruhi ye tu hai... par tu itni raat ko kyun chilla rahi hai.. so ja na yaar... sala kal waise bhi raat ko vishal ke sath late ho gaya tha... " shruti ne takiye ko apne se joda aur nind ki agosh mein khote hue usne jawab diya. Ankhein to tabse khuli hi nahi thi.

" ek to ye ladki.. sari raat vishal.. sara din vishal... bilkul pagal ho gayi hai uske piche... " aaruhi apne baal bandhte hue boli ki tabhi uski nazar shruti ke bistar par uske sar ke piche gayi. Jo book shruti ne kal takiye ke niche rakh kar chupa di thi abhi takiya khinchne ki wajah se samne aa gayi. " ye book itni moti aur vo bhi is ladki ke pas.. " aaruhi shruti ke uppar se jhukte hue book ki taraf ayi " ankhon par vishwas nahi hota... book hi hai ya kuch aur ? " aaruhi ne uthane ki kosish ki par usne itni majbuti se nahi pakda tha isliye book uthi hi nahi aur hath se fisal kar thodi khul gayi " book to bhari hai.. " usne dubara ache se pakad bana kar uthane ka socha par tab tak shruti ke kano se book shabd bheje mein ghus gaya tha jise uski nind fauran khul gayi aur vo ek dum se uth baithi par use malum nahi tha ki aaruhi uske uppar se lataki hui hai isliye uthe hi uska chehra aaurhi ki chatiyun mein ghus gaya. Aaruhi bhi achanak se ghabra gayi aur book chhod kar piche ho gayi. Dono ek pal ke liye cheekh padi jaisa aksar ladkiyun ka cheekhne ka tay hota hai usi tarah.

" kya kar rahi thi pagal hai kya.. dara diya " aaruhi turant boli.

" dara diya... mene? ohoo.. dekho to karamjali kalmuhi ko "

" excuse me? " aaruhi ne ankhein chadai.

" kya excuse? kya excuse? tu mere sone ka excuse khoj kar mere sharir par hamla kar rahi thi, batao sala... ye koi tarika hai.. ab kya hum khubsurat ladkiyan girls hostel ke apne kamre mein hi safe nahi hai, meri nind nahi khulti to aaj to tune meri izat chus li hoti "

" choos li hoti? seriously... "

" ab ladki ladki ke andar de to nahi skti.. to choosne ke alawa koi option nahi bacha... LOL " shruti ne baton hi baton mein baat ko hi mod diya.

" ew..ww. chiii.. yar shruti.. subah subah... " aaruhi acting karte hue wahan se chali gayi jiske jatte hi shruti ne gehri sans khinchi aur book jo teetar -bitar hui thi use sahi karke takiya rakh diya uspar, vo bas is baat ka shukar mana rahi thi ki usne kitab ulti rakhi thi sidhi nahi warna na jane kya ho jata.. " tujhe uthna nahi hai kya.. time dekh... nandini miss ki class hai... aur aaj to assignment ki submission hai.. remember.. chal jaldi kar... " tayar hote hi aaruhi ne kapd sametne chalu kiye taki bhigo kar jaye aur din mein akar dho dale.

" han.. yar... ye college aur uske assignment... 4 saal yahi chalna hai ab.. kaun itna dimag lagaye... " shruti ne phone uthaya, message do jano ke pade the, ek rachna aur dusra vishal. Shruti ne pehle vishal ka message khola aur message likh kar send kiya ' 12 baje sports room ' send karke usne rachna ka message box khola jisme pehle usne apna message pada jispar likha tha ki jo bhi hua raat ko uske bare mein kisi ko nahi malum chalna chahie.. kisi ko matlab kisi ko nahi.. chuton ka promise... jispar rachna ne ek smily fenkte hue ok likha hua tha. Shruti use kuch message likhne wali thi ki ek ganda kapda uske muh ke uppar akar pada tab vo hosh mein ayi.

" kya kar rahi hai.. pehle meri izat khud loot rahi thi ab apne kapdo ko mujh par fenk kar apne sharir ki khubsu se mujhe deewana banana chahti hai? waise idea acha hai ye.. " shruti ne phone chhodte hi kaha.

" tera dimag bachpan se hi kahrab tha? maa ne teri tere ko khuli chhut di hoti to itni self obsessed nahi hoti.. tu acha sa mahurat dekh aur de daal apni "

" tujhe bhi bulaungi.. live show dekhio " ek pal aaruhi use dekhti rahi fir hanse bina na reh payi

" haramazadi... kal bhi phone mein thi aaj bhi.. sun hi nahi rahi hai tabse kuch puch rahi hun "

" kya puch rahi hai " shruti vo kapda dekhne lagi jo aaurhi ne fenka tha, shayad ye kal wala top tha uska.. " yahan se itna chip-chipa kaise hai... "

" main tujhse kuch puch rahi hun tu mujhse hi puch rahi hai "

" par tu puch kya rahi hai? " shruti ne top se dhayan hata kar aaruhi ki taraf dekha.

" meri bra kidhar hai.. yahin to dali thi mene ... "

" teri bra mujhe kaise pata hogi.. main thodi... " shruti itna bol kar ruk gayi aur tabhi use yaad aya ki jo bra usne debu ko kal raat di thi vo aaruhi ki to thi.

" kya main ? bata jaldi "

" main thodi na bra bechti hun side business mein.. "

" tu bechti to nahi lekin tu bra mein soti bhi nahi.. top uppar kar.. dikha.. "

" haye ree... sachi jalim hai dunia.. sexual harrasment vo bhi ladka ka ladki se.. "

" jada overacting mat kar "

" tune mujhe chor kaha aur ab sexual harrasment kar rahi hai... lekin main vo bhi seh lungi kyun ki main teri sachhii dost hun.. dekh tu.. dekh hi le.. " shruti bed par khadi hui aur usne top ek jhatke mein utar fenka. Black nahi par purple color ki bra jarur dali hui thi shruti ne. Aaruhi ek pal use ghurti rahi, sapat pet ke uppar do ubhar.. ek tak aaruhi uske sine ko ghurti rahi, sans lene ki wajah se uske uppar niche hone tak ko dekhti rahi. " ab kya ankhon se hi chhod degi ... tu to ladkon se bhi tez nikli " aaruhi ka uspar aise nazre banaye rakhna kuch ajeeb laga isliye vo boli.

" hat.. haramzadi... fir meri kahan hai.. yar.. mujhe kapde dhone mein dalne hai late ho raha ha vaise bhi " aauhi keh kar apne kapde sametne lagi.

" mil jayega... ek bra hi to hai.. main fresh hokar ayi fir sath chalenge... "

" ruk main kapde bhigo dun.. " aaruhi kapde lekar bathroom mein ghusi to shruti ko mauka mil gaya, usne book uthai aur almirah mein rakhe bag ke andar dal di. Jiske baad usne gehri sans khinchi aur aaruhi ke bahar ane ka intezar karne lagi. Aaruhi ke bahar ate hi vo fresh hone chali gayi, fresh hote hi dono tayar hokar college ke liye kamre se bahar nikal gaye.

" ab ye kaise hua? " bahar nikalte hi jab kunda marne gaye to aaruhi ne kunde ki halat dekhte hue kaha.

" lambi kahani hai.. baat mein bataungi.. ab kisi tarah jugad se fansa deti hun " shruti ne kisi tarah use is tarah kar diya ki kisi ko malum na ho ki kunda tuta hua hai.

" warden khub sunayegi.. "

" mauka hi nahi denge.. tu chal ab late nahi ho raha hai " shruti ne aaruhi ka hath pakda aur use khinchte hue le jane lagi.

" waise aaj tu bag kaise le chal rahi hai.. tera roop alag hi dikh raha hai kal raat se "

" exam aa rahe hai.. aur tujhe yaad nahi ki humne decide kiya tha ki padai mein koi kasar nahi chhodenge.. "

" han kaha to tha... " aaruhi ko kuch kuch aisa yaad aa raha tha. Dono sidiyan utar rahi thi, hostel mein chehel pehal is samay kafi jada thi, koi bahar khade hokar bra aur pajama pehne dant manj raha tha koi phone par laag hua tha to kuch in dono ki tarah college ke liye nikal raha tha.

" debu kidhar hai.. " shruti ne wahan saaf safai karne wale vyakti se pucha.

" humko nahi malum madam.. subah se nahi dikha "

" pata nahi kahan mar gaya harami " shruti ne ek pal intezar kiya aur idhar udhar dekhne lagi.

" shruti chal " is baar aaruhi ne hath khincha to chalna hi pada kyun ki debu use kahin nahi dikh raha tha. Dono college ki taraf badh gaye, raste mein dono idhar-udhar ki batein karte hue class ki taraf badh rahe the, jisme kuch is tarah ki batein thi ki aaruhi ne shruti se kaha ki vishal ne raat mein aisa kya kiya jo tujhe late hua, ek pal ko shruti chaunki lekin jab aaruhi ne kaha ki tu sapne mein vishal ke alawa kuch aur nahi dekhti to samajh aya ki aaruhi ko kuch nahi malum. Iske alawa shruti ne aaruhi ke mom ke bare mein pucha jispar aaruhi ne jada kuch khas jawab nahi diya aur bas itna hi kaha ki vo theek hai aur abhi bhi hostel change karne ko keh rahi hai jispar aaruhi ne bataya ki uska bilkul dil nahi hai hostel se jane ka. Aaruhi ka sad face dekh usne baat badli aur baat kalpana ki taraf modh di ki kab hai uski shadi jispar aaruhi ne jawab diya ki date fix nahi hui. Dono baat karte hue floor chadte hue apni class ki taraf badh rahe the, time se 10 minute uppar ho chuka tha lekin class ke bahar corridor mein khade bachon ko dekh unhe yakeen nahi hua ki vo late hue hai.

" nandini miss nahi ayi? "

" pehle to kabhi nahi hua, chal acha hai aram se baithenge.. " shruti aur aaruhi hath pakde pakde class mein ghuse to do char ladke ladkiyan unhe dekh baat banane lage jinhe shruti ne sidhe sidhe nazar-andaz kar diya. Dono piche jaa baithe jahan aksar baithte the.. " time par aa gaye..miss atte hi hogi " aaruhi ne baithte sath hi apne baal khole aur unhe piche kar ke hathon se ikhata karne lagi.
lo... subhah subhah dono suru ho gayi...
top chip chipa hone ki wajah us pe lage debu ka sperm hai.. matlab saaf hai pehle aaruhi ne apne husn ke jaadu se mohit ki ho... phir mauka dekh khaufnaak maut de di ho debu ko.... :D
aur ye nandini madam abhi tak class na aane ki wajah shayad is baat ko pukhta kare ki kuch to badi ghatana ghati hai kal raat :D
Well.... waise aaruhi lesbo nahi lekin shruti pur jor koshish karti hai ki shruti ki tarah wo bhi lesbo ban jaaye...
Haaraman shruti sach kamini aur swarthi nikli yaar.... aaruhi ki private undergarment ko khud ki swarth ke liye us debu ko de di... chii chii... Shruti.... tharki tu, hawasi tu, gatar ki soch rakhne wali tu, kamini dhokhebaz dagabaaz tu, lesbo tu, haaraman tu... ab to swarth sidh karne ke ye harkatein bhi karne lagi tu shruti....
ish shruti ko to jaake kahi chhullu bhar paani mein dub ke mar jaana chahiye... ahhhthuuu :dubmar:
" tere baal bistar par bhi nahi sambhalte aur tere hathon mein bhi.. itne baal jhadte hai aaruhi tere.. apni mom se pucha ki nahi tune? " shruti ne apne kandhe par chadaya bag abhi utar kar niche rakha hi tha. Aaruhi se vo is baat ka jawab bas le hi rahi thi.

" han yaar karungi bhool jati hun " rubber lagate hue aaruhi ne jawab dia

" 1 mahina hone ko aya tune abhi tak.. " shruti itna kehti ki uske naam ki awaz par usne classroom ke darwaje ki taraf dekha. Peon khada tha.

" shruti "

" ji main hun.. " dubara awaz lagne par shruti boli

" aap chaliye.. apse koi milne aya hai.... "

" mujhse? "

" han.. chaliye.. jaldi time nahi hai mere pas.. " peon bol kar bahar nikal gaya.

" mujhse milne kaun ayega? " shruti ne aaruhi ki taraf confusion mein dekha.

" jakar dekh le... "

" kamal hai.. behenchod.. kaun suprise dene aa gaya.. tu ek kaam kar mera assignment de dio.. " shruti ne ek pal socha fir man badal liya " nahi jane de.. main de dungi.. kuch boelgi to keh dungi bulawa aya tha, tu bas mujhe text kar dio agar vo aye to "

" hmm ok.. aur tu bhi bata dio kaun aya hai tujhe surprise dene "

" pata nahi.. kaun hai.. mujhe to "

" are madam pura din nahi hai chaliye.. " peon ne ek aur awaz mari to shruti ne bag kandhe par tanga " chal main jati hun.. dekh kar aun.. kaun hai mujhe chedne wala.. koi launda hua to dekh lungi.. handsome hua to baat karke aungi... "

" hehehe.. haramzadi.. " aaruhi ne hanste hue kaha aur shruti uske samne se ojhal ho gayi, uske jatte hi aaruhi ke chehre ki hansi gambhirta mein tabdeel ho gayi. Usne apna phone nikala aur usne ek contact khol jise usne 'Soul' ke naam se save kiya hua tha. Us chat box ko kholne ke baad usne ek message send kiya 'I want to meet you' aur ye koi pehla message nahi tha, balki yahi message usne kai baar likha hua tha.
lo.. ab kya koi milne bhi nahi aa sakta kya usse college mein..bichara wo visitor... usko bhi uski bahan ka sex partner bana di yaar :doh:
agar shruti ki mom usse milne aayi hai tooooo :lol: :lotpot:
matlab shruti dwara di gayi wo gaali.. :roflol:
baaki SANJU ( V. R. ) saheb samajhdaar hai, samajh jayenge :roflol:

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Khair..... update mein koi saare mod aur pehlu aaye... btw update dilchasp aur dilkash tha..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 
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