Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

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Megha ne kamre ka darwaja khola to samne constable khada dikha " vo madam ko hamare sir ne bulaya hai " contable ki nazar piche khadi supriya par thi. Megha ne bhi uski taraf dekha aur vo khamosh khadi dono ko dekhti rahi. " chaliye madam, jada time nahi hai, laukar.. " constable ke dubara bolne par supriya ko majburan jana pada. Vo kamre se bahar nikli aur usne megha ki taraf dekhte hue ishare se kaha ki vo bhi chale tab megha ko samajh aya ki use bhi jana chahie lekin constable ne use rok diya aur supriya ko lekar hi wahan se nikla. Niche tak pahunchte hue supriya ke man mein dhero sawal panap rahe the ki kyun dubara use bulaya jaa raha hai? kya uske khilaf kuch mila hai? kya ab koi aur sawal jawab puche jayenge? Isi udedh-bhun mein supriya niche aa khadi hui. Inspector ke sath warden bhi khadi thi, warden ki shakal aaj kuch alag hi dikh rahi thi. College tak baat pahunch chuki thi isliye wahan par college ke kuch log maujud the, jaise college ke principal, J.K. Tomar aur kuch staff teachers.

" sir apne jin madam ke liye kaha tha vo aa gayi hai " constable ne inspector se kaha to inspector supriya ki taraf dekhne lagi jo sidiyun ke pass hi khadi thi. Inspector supriya ke karib aya to sath mein warden bhi chal di.

" supriya "

" ji... " uska dil ghabra raha tha, vo nakki kar chuki thi ki kuch bola gaya to sach bol degi.

" ye lejieye.. " lekin inspector dwara badaye gaye phone ko dekh uske khayal hi badal gaye. Supriya ne phone inspector se le liya " aur han.. ek baat hum apse jatte hue kehna chahenge, agar kal raat ke bare mein aap ko kuch aur batana ho to aap hume bata sakti hai. Aaj kal ya parso jab bhi yaad aye kyun ki aapse aur tanu ke kuch doston se hi is katal ke bare mein hume kuch malum chal sakta hai " inspector itna bol kar wahan se chal diya aur piche piche warden bhi. Supriya ek pal wahin khadi rahi jiski wajah se usne kuch batein aur sun li.

" sir tanu ki doston ne kya bataya? kya unse kuch nahi pata chala " warden inspector se puchne mein lagi thi.

" abhi tak to kuch nahi malum hai, sabhi ladkiyun ka ye kehna hai ki vo apne-apne kamre mein thi. Kal koi bhi tanu se mila nahi lekin Shailja ji, cctv ki footage kuch aur hi bata rahi hai, sabhi ladkiyan apne kamre se nikal kar tanu ke kamre mein gayi thi lekin .. "

" lekin kya..? "

" lekin apke cctv mein kuch kharabi hone ki wajah se hamare pas 5 minute ki koi bhi recording maujud nahi hai. Yani 12:55 se lekar 1 baje tak ki aur uske baad recording ke mutabik room se koi bahar nikla hi nahi. Matlab jab subah chaukidar kya naam hai uskaa.. han chillu.. utha aur usne dekh kar shor machaya tab sari ladkiyan apne kamre se hi nikli jisme tanu ki dost bhi shamil thi. Ab in sabko dekh aur samajhne ke baad to yahi dikh raha hai ki vo sabhi tanu ke kamre mein gayi to thi lekin 12:55 aur 1 ke bich wapis apne room mein chali gayi par mujhe ye abhi samajh nahi aa raha hai ki un sabhi ne aisa kyun kaha ki kal raat unki mulakat tanu se nahi hui.. isliye baki ki puch tach hum post-martam ki report ke baad hi karenge... vaise.. " inspector bolte hue palta to uski nazar supriya par padi jo wahan khadi batein sun rahi thi. Inspector ko apni taraf dekh vo fauran mudh kar sidiyan chadne lagi. Uppar pehli manzil par atte hi usne gheri sans li aur uppar se hi niche ki taraf dekha fir uppar chadne se pehle bathroom ki taraf dekha jise dekhte hi use 'Ravina' ke suicide wali kahani yaad aa gayi jo abhi abhi megha ne batai thi. Usne fauran wahan se jane ka faisla kiya aur uppar chadte hue usne phone unlock kiya. Do din baad uska phone use mila tha, uske phone unlock karte hi sabse pehle whtsapp khola jahan par uski mom ke kai message the. Unhone use read kiya aur reply mein likha dia ' phone mil gaya hai don't worry ' uske baad use megha ki taraf se bhi messaga aya hua tha jisme usne koi video bheji thi. Usne video kholi to usme title aa raha tha ' Father fucks stepdaughter ' supriya ne turant use band kar diya. " ye ladki kitni haramkhor hai..isne bhej bhi diya.. chiii... " supriya ne gallery kholi aur wahan se video ko delete kar diya. Delete karte sath usne kuch aur chizen bhi delete ki aur fir delete karte hue uski nazar ek photo par gayi. Usne phone par click karke use enlarge kiya. Photo mein vo aur megha thi. Megha ne uske baal uppar ki taraf utha rakhe the aur supriya ne ajeeb si shakal bana kar selfie li thi. Megha use chudail bol rahi thi kyun ki uske baal bahut lambe the. Aur ye in dono ki pehli hostel ki raat thi.

" to tumne nagpur ke girl school mein padai kari hai, i mean kaise? bina latakane wale laundon ke kaise padh li tum? " chips chabate hue megha boli.

" latkane wale launde? ye kaun hote hain ? " supriya hanste hue almira mein apne kapde adjust karte hue boli.

" are yaar.. tum girls school ki ladkiyan bhi na.. ladkon ka kya latkta hai? " megha ne hath felate hue kaha. Supriya ne uski taraf dekha aur soch mein padh gayi. " sach mein samajh nahi aya tumhe? "

" nahi.. " supriya ne apni eyebrow uppar uthate hue kaha.

" are... ye ladki ki galti nahi hai girls school mein to sirf gadde hi dekhe honge.. "

" gadde ? kya bol rahi ho tum meg.... " supriya bich mein hi ruk gayi kyun ki megha ne phone mein latakte lund ki photo nikal kar supriya ki taraf phone ghuma diya tha. Supriya ki ankhein itni badi hui jitni usne aaj tak nahi ki thi. Usne fauran apni nazar chupa li.

" ab samjhi latakte launde ka matlab.. aage se mat puchio warna ye image ka wallpaper tere phone mein laga dungi " megha ki baat supriya kuch nahi boli " waise subah se jab se main dekh rahi hun tu is almari mein kapde adjust kare jaa rahi hai. Aisa kya kar rahi hai.. "

" vo kya hai na.. pehle mene sarre kapde ghusane ki kosish ki lekin itni jagah nahi hai kyun ki tumhare bhi kapde hain isme fir kuch nikal liye aur kuch rakh diye " bar-bar supriya apne baalon ko piche karte hue bol rhi thi. " uske baad mene socha jo roz walle pehnne hai use aage rakhun baki piche to bas wahi kar rahi hun "

" school mein padane ke alawa yahi sab sikhate the ya kuch aur bhi? " megha ne ajeeb si ankhein karte hue pucha.

" nahi bahut kuch... sports mein kushti, kabadi, in sab mein school bahut aage tha. Iske alawa home remedies ki education bhi di jati thi aur "

" home remedies.. isme kya sikhate the.. ki akele ghar par ho to daru kaise piye baap ki bottle se.. aur fir usme pani mila de.. ya fir laundon ko apne ghar mein khidki se tapwa kar ek hi bistar par rangarang karaya-karam kare vo... " megha ne eyebrows uchkate hue pucha.

" chhii nahi... " supriya ne baki bacha saman sahi kiya aur drawer mein apni fancy bangles aur hairbands daal kar use band karke almari band kar di, fir drawer khol kar usme se kangi nikal kar aine ke samne khadi hokar apne saare baal ek taraf kakre aage kar diye taki unpar kanghi kar sake.

" vaise to bahut si batein hain karne ko par main un sabhi baton ko avoid karke sabse main baat puchungi "

" mera koi bf nahi hai aur na hi mera kisi ladke ke sath koi chakar raha hai " supriya ne muskurate hue pehle hi bol dia.

" par mera to ye sawal hi nahi tha "

" acha? mujhe laga tum yahi puchogi " kanghi karte hue vo megha se baat kar rahi thi jisme use acha lag raha tha kyun ki ghar se nikalte waqt aur hostel ke kamre mein ghuste waqt usne bas yahi manga tha ki vo har atyachar seh legi bas room-partner achi honi chahie aur use man hi man lag raha tha ki megha wahi ladki hai jaisi use chahie thi apne room-partner ke roop mein.

" are nahi... launde logon ko bf banana yani apni sardardi ko khud nimantaran dene jaisa hai. Mera mamla is chiz mein hatt kar hai.. laundon ko sirf ek chiz chahie jo hamari tangon ke bich hota hai aur hum laundiyu ko bhi wahi chahie jo unki tangon ke bich hota hai bas unme aur hume farak ye hai ki vo latka kar bolte ghumte hain aur hum chipa kar na-nukur karti hui firti hai. Par andar se man humara bhi utna hi hota hai.. isliye ... laundo ko bas ek hi roop mein dekho... lo aur lene do.... "

" aisa keh kar tum janti ho ki apni hi izat ki dhajiya uda rahi ho " kanghi balon mein fansi to dard ki choti karhat supriya ke chehre par aa gayi.

" isi dard ko dekh kar launde log mar mitte hain aur ladkiyan sochti hai ki unhe tangon ke bich ana hai... galti hum jananiyu ki hi hoti hai "

" jananiya wah.. he he he.. acha vo kaise? "

" ab tum khud dekho.. jo launde thode se apne baal stylish kar le.. halke mehnge kapde pehen kar look ek dum hero mafik de de.. ladkiyan wahan ghusti chali jayegi... aur us launde se baat karne ke liye itni pagal ho jayegi ki agar ladka tangon ke bich mein ane ko kahe to khushi khushi aa jayegi.. isi bich agar us launde ke pass gaddi ho to sone par suhagga ho jata hai.. ladka roz gadi mein pelega aur ladki pilwayegi... Ab thode din ye rishta pelam pilai ka chalega aur fir ladka hui jayega bore... use chahie nayi taza.. ek dum fresh maal... " megha ne ishare karte hue ada e bataya to supriya bhi hans padi " ab use purane maal ki lene mein maza nahi.. vo dhire-dhire ladki ko avoid karega aur ladki idhar ansu tapkayegi.. fir jhagda hoga.. ladka bhav nahi dega to ladki.. marne ki dhamki degi.. fir.. khoon se bhare hathon ki photo bhejegi.. aur aaj kal trend mein aa rahe whtsapp par vo block ho jayegi.. khel khatam.. na phone uthega na message.. fir wahi ladki ko shaq hone lagega ki ladka ditch kar raha hai aur ek din.. vo ladki range hathon us ladke ko pakad legi usi gaddi mein jis gaddi mein vo uski leta tha.. bas aaj vo kisi aur ki le raha hai.. aur vo ladki bhi koi aur nahi balki usi ki sabse achi saheli rahegi... dono mein jungli billiyun ki tarah maar-peet hogi.. baal khinch jayenge.. ladka apni jeans band karke apni gaddi lekar fur ho jayega aur vo ladkiyan ... do din baad ek sath royegi... hath kaat kar khoon se apne sache pyar ki duhai lagayengi.. lekin badle mein kya milega... block.. block.. aur kewal block... " lachar bante hue megha ne bilkul usi tarah acting ki jaise uske shabad the. Megha ko dekh supriya pet pakad kar zor-zor se hasne lagi.

" manna padega.. tumhe.. tum bahut acha bol leti ho.. lekin asal mein aisa nahi hota.. "

" tum girl school mein padne wali ladkiyan tum kya jano.. wahan to koi latkata hi nahi hai na.. "

" nahi mera matlab hai ki aaj kal ke zamane mein koi bhi ye khoon wala drama nahi karta "

" kaise keh diya tumne ye ... kaise... tumhe lagta hai abhi tak live example nahi diya kisi ne ... do din ho gaye tumhe aye hue... mana main do din se nahi thi lekin do din main to history nikal li jati hai aur tumhe itni badi baat nahi batai gayi.. kaisi ladki ho tum.. ladki ke naam par kalank ho.. tumse achi tumhari maa rahi hogi... girls school mein reh kar bhi tum ye nahi sikh payi.. "

" bhashan acha dia par kya nahi sikh payi main, ye batane ka kasht karegi aap "

" hum ladkiyan to khoj-khabri hoti hai.. jahan jati hai wahan ki sari baat nikalwa leti hai.. "

" acha aur aisi kaun si baat mene nahi niklwai ? " supriya ko ab megha ka andaz pasand ane laga tha aur vo uski tarah baat karne lagi thi.

" are baba... hostel ki baat hai.. takreeban 8 saal hue honge.. ya kam ya jada itna detail mein nahi malum lekin.. bilkul meri kahani ki tarah .... ek ladki thi jiska naam tha 'Ravina' usne hostel ke common bathroom ke cubicle mein baith kar apne hath ki nass katt li thi aur raat bhar vo usi cuboad par baithi mar gayi. Subah jab ek ladki ne bathroom mein ghus kar dekha to farsh par sirf khoon hi khoon maujud tha.. " megha ke batane par supriya ka chehra aisa ho gaya mano dard use ho raha ho.

" par usne aisa kyun kiya hoga " supriya chintit hote hue boli.

" kyun kiya hoga ... ye batane ke liye mene tujhe itni badi kahani batai.. wahi wajah hogi.. par main baat ab shuru hoti hai.. "

" kya? "

" yahi.. ki 'Ravina' aaj bhi... is hostel mein usi cubicle mein maujud hai.. isliye aaj tak koi bhi us cubicle mein nahi jata... kyun ki aisa suna hai jab bhi koi us cubicle mein gaya use 'Ravina' ki awaz sunai deti, vo use pukarti... awaz lagati ... aur isi chakar mein kai baar ladkiyan us cubicle mein behosh payi gayi... ye baat dhire-dhire hostel mein aise felhi ki ladkiyun ne wahan jana band kar diya aur us bathroom mein tala laga diya gaya. Lekin jab se hostel ki nayi warden shailja ayi usne sabko muthi mein kar liya. Bathroom ka tala bhi khula aur sab normal bhi hua. Suni-sunai kahani par shailja ko bharosa nahi tha lekin kahani itni mashur thi ki har senior apne juinor ko bata jata isliye wahan koi nahi jata par kai bhule-bhatke hote the tum jaise jinhe hostel mein reh kar bhi khabar nahi hoti thi aur vo wahan jakar apna karyakaram kara baithti thi... haal hi mein.. "

" bas bas bas.. mujhe ab dar lag raha hai.. mujhe in bhooton ki kahani ke naam se hi dar lagta hai aur ab to pata chala hai ki hostel mein hi bhoot hai to na jane main kaise rahungi... " supriya ne baal jhatak kar piche kiye aur soch vichar karne lagi.

" baat to sahi hai.. main bhi soch rahi hun ki main kaise rahun is hostel ke bhoot ke sath " megha ki baat sun supriya uski taraf badhi.

" wahi to.. main bhi soch rahi hun tumhare batane ke baad ki mom sahi hai.. pg/flat le leti hun... main to kehti hun ki tum bhi chalo mere sath "

" baap re.... yani wahan bhi bhoot " megha darti hui palang par piche hui.

" wahan par bhoot matlab kaise? " supriya ko samajh nahi aya.

" kaise kya.. tum bhi to chudail ho.. "

" main chudail... " supriya hairat mein aa gayi.

" aur nahi to kya.. itne lambe baalon wali ko chudail nahi kahun to aur kya kahungi... " megha bol kar hans di jise dekh supriya ek pal gusse se dekhti rahi fir vo khud bhi hasne lagi. Jiske baad dono ne kamre mein thodi masti ki. Megha ne uske baal utha utha kar ajeebo gareeb shakal banate hue selfi li, kuch tasveer aisi thi ki supriya jaan kar chudail bani baal aage karke aur megha ke uppar chadh kar uska galla daba rahi hai aur megha ki jeebh bahar hai.

Photo dekhte hue megha ke sath bitai pehli raat ko yaad karte hue apne kamre tak pahunch gayi thi. " megha sahi keh rahi thi, main bhool hi gayi thi " usne kamre ka kiwad khola to paya megha kamre ke barmade mein khadi hai. Supriya bina kuch bole barmade mein pahunchi aur jahan megha dekh rahi thi usne bhi niche usi taraf nazar modhi. Samay din ka tha par mausam mein dhoop ki jagah badal ghire hue the aur halki halki baarish thi. Police aur baki karamchariyun ne raincoat pehna hua tha. Ambulane ek jagah khadi thi aur sath hi kuch ladkiyan niche aur baki jitni bhi hostel ki ladkiyan thi sabhi apne apne barmade mein khade the jaise tanu ko akhri vidai dene ke liye aye ho. Ye pal aur waqt ka gehra prabhav supriya par pada, mahol itna dense aur intense tha ki supriya ko mehsus hua ki tanu jo ladki hostel aur college mein har jagah dikhti thi ab uska naam is dunia mein gumsum ho jayega. Inspector principal se kuch baat kar raha tha jiske baad vo apni jeep mein baitha aur jeep wahan se rwana ho gayi usi ke piche ambulance bhi. Supriya ne apni nazar bayein aur ki jis taraf vo gate tha jahan par tanu latki hui thi aur wahin dekhti rahi. Logon ki bheed dhire-dhire chatti chali gayi par supriya ki nazar wahin par jami hui thi.

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ..inspector ne phone de diya supriya ko .
aur gallery me photo dekhkar usko hostel ke first day ki yaad aa gayi .
megha ne kitne bariki se samjhaya ravina ke maut ke baare me ..

5 minute ki recording gayab hai jab shayad tanu ki dost uske kamre se nikli thi .

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

2 cheeje yaad hai ek jab supriya bathroom me jaa rahi thi to tv. achanak chalu band ho gaya .

aur ab 5 min . ki recording nahi mili ..

kya koi sab plan karke kar raha hai ... jaise recording mita di gayi ho ya us waqt ke baad camera kharab kar diya ho ..

 

[SJ017]

kapde utarne se erotic nahi bant bhai... kahani ... ... par ayega jarur...

theek hain boss lekin agar Supriya spanked hoti Tannu ke haato to kitna mazaa aata

 

[harshit1890]

nice update ..inspector ne phone de diya supriya ko .
aur gallery me photo dekhkar usko hostel ke first day ki yaad aa gayi .
megha ne kitne bariki se samjhaya ravina ke maut ke baare me ..

5 minute ki recording gayab hai jab shayad tanu ki dost uske kamre se nikli thi .

2 cheeje yaad hai ek jab supriya bathroom me jaa rahi thi to tv. achanak chalu band ho gaya .

aur ab 5 min . ki recording nahi mili ..

kya koi sab plan karke kar raha hai ... jaise recording mita di gayi ho ya us waqt ke baad camera kharab kar diya ho ..

Sab planned hai, kaise hai kya hai.. ye to ane wala waqt hi batayega bhai.... Keep reading...

theek hain boss lekin agar Supriya spanked hoti Tannu ke haato to kitna mazaa aata

Spanking ke alawa kuch aur kara denge....

 

[Naina]

deeply...
hmm...zara dekhu to sahi... aaj kis kirdaar ki aisi ki taisi ki jaye

 

[Naina]

matlab bilkul gai jaisi thi supriya... is haaraman megha ki wajah se wo aisi gandi gandi baatein bolne lagi... (lekin kisika kya pata, hathi ke daant dikhane ke alag aur chabane ke alag)
us cubicle mein bare mein pehle se hi pata tha sabhi ko even megha ko bhi... phir kyun supriya ko wahan chupne ko bol rahi jor jabardasti

bharosa nahi tha lekin kahani itni mashur thi ki har senior apne juinor ko bata jata isliye wahan koi nahi jata par kai bhule-bhatke hote the tum jaise jinhe hostel mein reh kar bhi khabar nahi hoti thi aur vo wahan jakar apna karyakaram kara baithti thi... haal hi mein.. "

baat ko puri hone na di usne par yeh bhi ek sach hai ki haalhi mein kuch na kuch kand hua tha us bathroom aur cubicle mein... kisi ladki ke sath..
Sawal ye hai ki kiske sath..
agar kand hua to shailja urf warden ne phir bhi us bathroom ko kisi ke dwara closed kyun nahi kiya.... khula kyun rehne diya... sochne wali baat hai...

Actually suspense kya hai.. ye tabhi pata chale jab postmortem report aa jaaye...
aur cctv footage ke baare mein clearly pata chale...
Kyunki baat yahin atki hai wo log tanu ke room ke andar gaye ki nahi... ya bahar se hi laut aaye...
yahan pe sabse hairan kar dene wali baat ye hai ki jis baat ko hostel ki kisi bhi ladki ne na bhooli ki us cubicle mein kya hua tha wahi supriya bhool gayi mahaz kuch dino mein hi... shaq to ab bhi barkarar hai uspe...

police wale ab bhi thodi bahot doubt kar rahe hai tanu ke friends pe aur sath hi supriya pe bhi... ab doubt karne wali baat hi hai... kyuni ek yahin log to us raat room se bahar the... upor se cctv footage unclear...
Cctv footage se ek aur baat pe gaur ki jaaye ki jab supriya bathroom jaa rahi thi to cctv pe wohi dikh rahi thi?
kya koi us waqt cctv ke sath ched khani kar raha tha ya thi...?
TV on hona? kya same person ne on karke rakha tha TV ko?
abhi supriya itni gaur se kya dekh rahi hai us jagah ko jaha kuch der pehle tanu latki huyi thi?

Khair... Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

sabse aham baat 3 baje baad koun phone karta hai supriya ko....
aur usse bhi aham wo ladke kyun bhage the ush din.... kya supriya ke piche koi aa gaya tha...
aur gaur karne wali baat yeh hai ki us store room ke saman ko kisne idhar udhar karke fek diya tha wo bhi itne kam samay mein... kya supriya ne... baad mein jaanke bhi anjan ban rahi thi.. storeroom mein jo Darwaza hai uske pichhe ki raaz kya hai?
maana ki megha kaafi frank hai... thodi bahot tharki bhi par aisa lage ki wo jaan bujh kar supriya ke mind mein aisi gandi baatein daal rahi hai...dost hai isliye nahi balki lage ki jaise kisi plan ki tahat ye sab kar rahi ho... .

 

[harshit1890]

Update ~~ 19​

Tanu ka final year tha aur is akhri saal ko pura karne ke baad vo is college ki dunia se jane wali thi lekin iski jagah vo apni hi dunia se alag ho gayi thi. Seniors mein kafi famous thi isliye jis tarah us raat hostel mein shok shabha hui usi tarah agle din college mein bhi seniors ne usi tarah ground mein tanu ke liye shok shaba rakhi. Teachers ki vo favorite nahi thi lekin jo hadsa hua tha vo sabhi ke dilon dimag mein baith gaya tha. Hostel kehlane ke liye college premisis se alag tha lekin ata to college ke antargat hi tha isliye uski premisis mein ek student ka katal hona bahut badi baat thi. Dehshat to college ke mahol mein bhi thi, jise malum thi vo gumsum sa tha aur jise nahi malum tha vo puchne mein laga hua tha. Us din se lekar agle kuch din tak hostel ki ladkiyan alag-alag jagah group ke sath dikhi jise zahir tha har koi janna chahta tha ki akhir hua kya? Kaise maut hui? aur kisne ki? Isi dauran police ko postmartam ki report malum hui aur usne tanu ki maut ko aur pechida bana diya, maut ka samay 12:30 se 1 baje ke bich ka tha aur yahi wo samay tha jiske antarkal sab kuch ghata tha. Puch tach zari thi lekin koi surag ya kadi abhi tak nahi mili thi. Hostel ke us hisse ko band kar diya gaya tha aur uske piche bane apartment ke logon se puch-tach ki jaa rahi thi. Apartment behad purane bane hue the isliye wahan koi cctv laga nahi tha. Pehle to college ne khabar bahar na jaye uski kosish ki lekin itni bheed ke bich batein chupti nahi aur jab akhbar mein chapi to unhone sabhi hostel mein rehne walli ladkiyun ke parents ko batane ka faisla kiya aur ye zimma warden ko diya gaya. Usi ke sath police ke do constable hostel ke bahar laga diye jo wahan par chaubis ghante pehredari karne wale the. Kuch hi dino mein college aur hostel ke mahol ko badal diya gaya. Kuch ke dimag par is chiz ka behad gehra prababhav pada jisme se 'Komal' pehli ladki thi jise kisi ne bhi us din ke baad nahi dekha tha. Jaise jaise suchna parents tak gayi unme se kuch ne apne bachon ko hostel se wapis bula liya aur kuch ko le jane ki kosish jari thi aur us list mein supriya bhi thi jiski mom ko pata chalte hi unhone use wapis ane ko kaha vo bhi bina der kiye. Supriya ki is baat ko lekar uski mom se kai baar behas hui lekin vo nahi maan rahi thi. Supriya par sabhi baton ka asar padne laga tha.

Mausam barsat ka tha aur baarish bhi bakuhbhi padh rahi thi. Baarish ke sath chalti tez hawa mausam ko tuffan mein tabdeel kar chuka tha. Hostel ke corridor mein pani jama hone laga tha aur ilake ki bizli gul ho chuki thi. Andhere aur baarish ke shor mein ek ghasitne ki awaz corridor mein felhne lagi. Tanu ka sharir bhare pani mein asani se fisalta hua aage badh raha tha. Uski sansein chal rahi thi lekin use hosh nahi tha. Uske sharir ko hostel ke piche gate ki taraf laya gaya aur fir use behad asani se utha kar gate par ke sahare khada karke uske hathon ko badhna shuru kiya. Hath bandhne ke baad uski tangon ko dur karte hue alag kiya aur unhe bhi bandh diya gaya. Behoshi ki halat mein tanu ka chehra latak gaya tha aur ab use pakadne ki jarurat nahi thi. Kuch pal uska sharir baarish mein yun hi bheegta raha aur fir dhire-dhire tanu ke sharir mein harkat hui aur use hosh ane laga. Hosh mein atte hi usne apni nazar uthai aur theek usi waqt ek danda uske piche ke ched ke andar ghusa diya gaya. Chehre par aseem matra ke dard ko vo jhelte hue cheekhti use pehle us dande par aur takat lagai gayi jiske baad vo danda uske sharir ke andar ki angon ko todta hua sidhe uske muh se bahar nikla jiske sath maas ke kuch chidte bhi tanu ne apne muh se ugal dale aur khoon ke chitte charon taraf felh gayi. Tanu ka sharir dard mein chapata raha aur usi ke sath uske naak, kaan aur ankh se khoon behne laga jiske baad muh se khoon ke kuch chintee aur uchal kar bahar aye aur uska sharir chatpatana band ho gaya. Tanu ka muh asman ki taraf khula hua tha aur usme se uske khoon se sana danda bahar nikal raha tha. Vo tanu se thoda piche ki taraf hui aur ukhdu hokar baithe hue usne zameen se pani ko muthi mein bhar apna chehra saaf kiya jispar khoon lag gaya tha aur usi waqt asman mein bizli kadki jisse pani ki parchai mein supriya apna chehra dekh hadbada gayi aur achanak se uski ankh khuli. Uski sansein is waqt kafi tezz chal rahi thi, nazar uppar ki taraf uthi hui thi. Chadti sanson ke sath uska pura sharir pasine mein duba hua tha. Na jane vo bina cheekhe kaise uthi thi varna itna bhayanak drishye dekhne ke baad use abhi tak yahi mehsus ho raha tha ki vo sab sach hai lekin agar sach hota to wo baarish mein bhig rahi thi na ki apne kamre ke palang par so rahi thi aur bagal mein megha bhi soi padi thi. Supriya ko pichle teen dino se ajeebo-gareeb sapne aa rahe the jisme vo alag-alag tarh ki chizon ko dekh rahi thi, pehli raat ka sapna ki vo apna sar zor-zor se deewar par maar rahi hai. Iske alawa store room ke sabhi saman ko idhar se udhar patak rahi hai. Jab ye sab usne megha ko bataya to usne use samjhaya ki vo sab uske dimag ki upajh hai jo pichle dino se uske sath ho raha hai, vo kisi ke bhi man ke vicharon ko badal sakta hai uppar se mom ki batein wapis ane ki ... sab uske man ke vichar hai.. Usne abhi bhi yahi socha aur palang se uth baithi. Bahar se abhi bhi baarish ki awaz aa rahi thi aur khidki band thi jiski wajah se vo pasine mein tar-batar thi kyun ki bina light ke pankha band tha aur kamre mein umas thi. Megha chain se so rahi thi aur use is garmi ka koi farak hi nahi padh raha tha. Supriya ne pani ki bottle uthai aur pani pine lagi. Adhi bottle khatam karne ke baad usne khidki ki taraf dekha aur fir uski kundi utha kar uska ek hissa khol diya. Khidki ke khulte hi thandi hawa mein usne chain ki sans li aur usi hawa ke sath kuch pani ki bundein uske chehre par aa padi. Bahar koi roshni nahi thi aur vatavaran ek dum tufani bana hua tha. Tez hawaon ke sath baarish bhi uska sath de rahi thi. Supriya ne khidki ka ek bhag khula chhod apne palang par aa baithi. Pichle dino se vo sirf tanu ki baat hi soch rahi thi aur usi wajah se aaj ka sapna aya tha, vo bar bar apne man ko yahi tassali de rahi thi. Nind ab uski ankhon mein nahi thi isliye usne socha ki megha ko uthaya jaye aur usne wahi kosish ki..

" megha.. uth na... megha... uth.. uth... megha... "

" aakash sone de... abhi nahi... thak gayi hun mein de-dekar kitni lega... thoda to aram se.. " megha ne kasmasate hue kaha to supriya ne uska kandha hilana band kar dia.

" ye ladki sapne se lekar hakikat mein bas yahi sochti hai. Pata nahi kyun mujhe pasand hai " supriya ne use jagana chhoda aur apne palang par aa baithi. Kuch der vo khidki se bahar dekhti rahi lekin wahan se bhi boriyat hui to vo khade hokar kamre mein tehalne lagi par anjam kya hua tehalte waqt bhi use sirf tanu ki batein aur khud ki majudgi nazar aa rahi thi. Usne mobile mein time dekha to takreeban teen bajne wale the " itni der mein sirf adha ghanta hi beeta hai.. dubara sone ki kosish karti hun.. " supriya wapis palang par ayi aur ankhein band karke karwat lete hue usne sone ki kosish ki. Kareeb das minute vo aise hi laiti rahi aur tabhi mobile ki roshni ne kamre ke andhere ko apni chamak se toda aur usi ke sath vo vibrate hone laga. Junki supriya ko abhi nind lagi nahi thi usne turant apna phone uthaya. " fir aisi hi call... " number na ata dekh usne fir hairani jatai aur agle hi pal phone uthaya. Phone uthane par is bar usne kuch nahi bola aur samne wale ka intezar karne lagi lekin koi awaz nahi ayi aur phone cut gaya.

" ajeeb baat hai.. " supriya ne call log khola aur jo akhri call ayi thi jispar koi number nahi tha usne us number ko wahin se swipe karke dial kiya lekin usi waqt phone ki screen par flash hua " Error " usne do-teen bar aisi kosish ki lekin har baar wahi hua. " kya musibat hai.. kaise ho raha hai ye.. " supriya abhi pareshan thi ki achanak shor ko sun uske hath se phone chatak gaya. Vo ghabra kar uth baithi par agle hi pal use jab samajh aya tab vo shant hui. Jo khidki ka hissa usne khola tha vo achanak se band ho gayi thi aur hawa ki wajah se abhi bhi dhire-dhire khul band ho rahi thi. Supriya apni jagah se uthi aur usne khidki ko dubara khol kar uska stopper laga diya taki vo band na ho sake. " na jane kab tak barast rahegi.. mujhe is mausam se ghabrahat hone lagi hai " supriya jaise hi wapis mudh kar palang par baithne ko hui tabhi 'tadaakk' shor sun vo ghabra gayi. Vo fauran ghumi to ek baar fir usne dekha ki khidki hawa ki wajah se band ho gayi thi aur abh band hone ke baad halki si khul-band ho rahi thi. " stopper kharab ho gaya hai kya... aur is maharani ko dekho isko koi asar hi nahi hai.. " supriya ne megha ki taraf dekha jo chain se so rahi thi aur fir khidki ki taraf badhi aur jaise hi vo us tarf badhi, bizli ki kadakti roshni mein khidki ke piche khade sayein ko dekh uske kadam ruk gaye.




Bizli ki roshni mein jo usne dekha uske baad vo ek pal wahin sthir khadi rahi lekin agle hi pal andhera ho gaya. Ek pal ke liye mano vatavaran mein bhi shanti cha gayi, supriya jaise kisi chiz ka intezar kar rahi thi. Khidki bina shor kiye usi tarah band khul rahi thi. Agle hi pal ek baar bizli fir kadki lekin bina shor ke aur uski roshni mein khidki ke piche fir khade sayein ko dekh supriya ke rongte khade ho gaye jo usi ko ghur raha tha.




Do baar ek hi tarah ka dhoka nahi ho sakta tha, khidki ke piche koi khada tha. Supriya ghabra gayi aur ghabrate hue vo cheekh padi.

" meghaaa.aa.a.a..... " cheekh itni tezz thi ki megha ki nind khul gayi aur vo achanak se uth baithi. Supriya ko yun cheekhta dekh vo bhi ghabra gayi.

" kya hua supriya kyun cheekh rahi hai... " usne light jalane ki kosish ki lekin light nahi thi aur andhere mein supriya ko yun cheekhta vo bhi aise jab uske baal teetar bheetar ho rahe the megha ko laga koi chudail uske samne cheekh rahi ho. Usne fauran apna mobile khola aur uski torch jalai. " supriya..supriya.. kyun cheekh rahi hai " megha khadi hui aur uske sharir ko apni taraf modte hue bolne lagi.

" khidki par.. koi hai.. bahar... koi hai.. koi hai... " supriya ke kehte hi megha ne phone ki roshni khidki par mari lekin sirf khidki hi dikhi. Usne supriya ko chhoda aur khidki ko ek jhatke mein khol kar piche ho gayi lekin torch ki roshni mein use wahan koi nahi dikha bas baarish ki girti bundein hi dikhai de rahi thi.

" koi bhi to nahi hai "

" nahi hai.. tujhe nahi dikh rahi par parchai hai.. "

" acha to tujhe dikh rahi hai bata dekh kar.. "

" main nahi dekh rahi "

" dekh to sahi, koi hoga to dikhega na... " megha ne jabran uska muh khidki ki taraf modh diya aur jab use wakai wahan ab koi nahi dikha tab uski tez chalti sansein dhire hui.

" par... abhi to .. wahan tha vo sayan... "

" koi nahi hai aur na koi hoga.. tu bevajah dar rahi hai.. ek to mausam uppar se tera dimag... itna sab hua hai ped ki parchai ko sayan bana diya tune.. aur teri baat maan bhi lun to chauthe floor par itni raat ko kaun chadh kar ayega.. tu bas dari hui hai.. aaj fir koi sapne dekha? "

" hmm " supriya ne han mein sar hilaya.

" han to bas.. ye usi ka natiza hai.. chal so jaa... kuch nahi hai "

" nahi.. main nahi so paungi... " supriya ne veeran pade apne palang ko dekhte hue kaha.

" to tu mere sath so ja.. aja... " megha ne supriya ka hath pakda aur apne palang par baitha diya aur khud bhi baith gayi. " sala itna mast sapna dekh rahi thi achanak aisa laga jaise sapne mein meri maa ne mujhe dekh liya ho... itna dara diya tha tune.. "

" oye kya hua? " megha ne chutki bajate hue supriya se pucha jo apni soch mein khoi hui thi.

" han.. acha.. "

" kya bol rahi hai? "

" kuch nahi.. mujhe bas.. "

" tu chinta mat kar andar ki taraf so jaa.. koi ayega bhi to sabse pehle mere ko pakdega.. tujhe nahi.. tu mat dar.. aja.. chal... " megha ne supriya ko khincha aur akhir kosish ke baad use deewar ki taraf sula diya aur khud uske piche so gayi. Single bed par do jane hone ke baad space kam tha isliye megha ne apna hath paun supriya par rakh diya. " wah maza aa raha hai.. badi gaddedar hai tu.. jo bhi ladka chadega tere uppar uske to vyare nyare ho jayenge... " megha ki baat par supriya ne koi pratikriya nahi ki aur na hi use megha ka apne sharir ke itna pas ane par koi apati thi. Uski to nind hi ud chuki thi aur vo puri raat yun hi laiti rahi bina palke jhapkaye mano vo sayan abhi bhi us khidki ke piche ho aur bas uska hi intezar kar raha ho.

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

matlab bilkul gai jaisi thi supriya... is haaraman megha ki wajah se wo aisi gandi gandi baatein bolne lagi... (lekin kisika kya pata, hathi ke daant dikhane ke alag aur chabane ke alag)
us cubicle mein bare mein pehle se hi pata tha sabhi ko even megha ko bhi... phir kyun supriya ko wahan chupne ko bol rahi jor jabardasti

baat ko puri hone na di usne par yeh bhi ek sach hai ki haalhi mein kuch na kuch kand hua tha us bathroom aur cubicle mein... kisi ladki ke sath..
Sawal ye hai ki kiske sath..
agar kand hua to shailja urf warden ne phir bhi us bathroom ko kisi ke dwara closed kyun nahi kiya.... khula kyun rehne diya... sochne wali baat hai...

Actually suspense kya hai.. ye tabhi pata chale jab postmortem report aa jaaye...
aur cctv footage ke baare mein clearly pata chale...
Kyunki baat yahin atki hai wo log tanu ke room ke andar gaye ki nahi... ya bahar se hi laut aaye...
yahan pe sabse hairan kar dene wali baat ye hai ki jis baat ko hostel ki kisi bhi ladki ne na bhooli ki us cubicle mein kya hua tha wahi supriya bhool gayi mahaz kuch dino mein hi... shaq to ab bhi barkarar hai uspe...

police wale ab bhi thodi bahot doubt kar rahe hai tanu ke friends pe aur sath hi supriya pe bhi... ab doubt karne wali baat hi hai... kyuni ek yahin log to us raat room se bahar the... upor se cctv footage unclear...
Cctv footage se ek aur baat pe gaur ki jaaye ki jab supriya bathroom jaa rahi thi to cctv pe wohi dikh rahi thi?
kya koi us waqt cctv ke sath ched khani kar raha tha ya thi...?
TV on hona? kya same person ne on karke rakha tha TV ko?
abhi supriya itni gaur se kya dekh rahi hai us jagah ko jaha kuch der pehle tanu latki huyi thi?

Khair... Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

इन्स्पेक्टर के अनुसार तन्नु के कमरे के बाहर का सी सी टी वी पांच मिनट के लिए खराब पड़ा था । रात के बारह बजकर पचपन मिनट से लेकर एक बजे तक ।
और ये वही समय था जब तन्नु की सहेलियां सुप्रिया को पकड़कर तन्नु के कमरे में ले जाती है । क्योंकि सुप्रिया ने कमरे में प्रवेश करते ही वहां दिवाल पर लटक रही घड़ी में टाइम देखा था ।
लेकिन ये नहीं समझ में आ रहा है कि जब पांच मिनट के लिए ही सी सी टी वी बंद था तब उसके बाद बल्कि बहुत बाद तन्नु की सहेलियों को उस कमरे से निकल कर अपने कमरे में जाते हुए क्यों नहीं रिकार्ड हुआ ?

वो अपने रूम से पौने बारह बजे के आसपास निकली और फर्स्ट फ्लोर पर बने बाथरूम में प्रवेश की । फर्स्ट फ्लोर पर दिवाल पर लटका हुए घड़ी उस वक्त एक बज बजने में कुछ मिनट बाकी दिखा रहा था ।
इससे साफ जाहिर होता है कि किसी ने वहां पर घड़ी के टाइमिंग के साथ छेड़छाड़ किया था ।
वो बाथरूम में करीब एक घंटे तक रही और वो भी इसलिए कि वहां मतलब बाथरूम में उसके साथ कोई साजिश की गई थी । बाथरूम का वो कक्ष , किसी की फुसफुसाहट भरी आवाज में उसे पुकारना , वाश बेसिन में गंदगी का भरना , भुकंप के झटके , जमीन पर पानी का भरना...... बहुत कुछ हुआ था और ये सब साजिश के तहत किया गया था ताकि वो वहां कम से कम एक बजे के आसपास तक उसी बाथरूम में फंसी रहे ।

और उसके साथ जो कुछ बाथरूम में हुआ था वो किसी के द्वारा हाॅल में बने टी वी पर लाइव देखा जा रहा था ।

इस पुरी स्टोरी में टाइम बहुत बड़ा फैक्टर लग रहा है । सुप्रिया के बाल का क्या राज हो सकता है , अभी तक स्पष्ट नहीं आया है ।
लेकिन ये श्योर है कि कोई सुप्रिया के पीछे पड़ा हुआ है ।