Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

स्पिच लेस एंड नो वर्ड्स फाॅर दिस ब्यूटीफुल स्टोरी ।
मैने इतना बेहतरीन हाॅरर क्रियेट करके लिखते हुए आज तक किसी को नहीं देखा । कोई शब्द ही नहीं मिल पा रहा है कि आप की प्रशंसा में क्या लिखूं ।
और सिर्फ हाॅरर ही नहीं बल्कि सस्पेंस बनाने में भी आप का कोई जवाब नहीं है ।
अभी तक सब कुछ हमारे आंखों के सामने पेश है परन्तु फिर भी समझ में नहीं आ रहा कि आखिर हो क्या रहा है !
आप का बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद जो आपने इतनी बेहतरीन कहानी हमें पढ़ने के लिए प्रस्तुत की ।

इस अपडेट की समीक्षा नैना जी ने बहुत ही अच्छी तरह से किया है । जो सवाल थे , वो उन्होंने बता ही दिया है ।

चुड़ैलों की पांव के तलवे आगे की तरफ नहीं बल्कि पीछे की ओर होती है । इसका सबसे पहले जिक्र राज कुमार कोहली की " जानी दुश्मन " मूवी में हुआ था जिसके प्रमुख कलाकार संजीव कुमार , सुनील दत्त , जीतेन्द्र , शत्रुघ्न सिन्हा , विनोद मेहरा , रेखा , रीना रॉय आदि थे ।
इस मे एक सिन था जब विक्रम अपने नव विवाहित पत्नी के साथ ट्रेन के एक कम्पार्टमेन्ट में आता है और उसकी पत्नी बाथरूम चली जाती है अपने कपड़े चेंज करने के लिए तभी वहां अमरीश पूरी आता है और एक हाॅरर नोबेल पढ़ने लगता है । विक्रम और अमरीश पूरी के कन्वर्सेशन के दौरान इस बात की भी चर्चा होती है ।

इस अपडेट की बात करें तो खंडहर - आरोही वाला प्रसंग , इसके बाद आरोही - श्रुति वाला प्रसंग दोनों सुपर से भी ऊपर थे । पढ़ कर कभी रोमांच आया तो कभी डर का माहौल बना । श्रुति की बातें पढ़कर हंसी आई तो लावन्या पर गुस्सा आया ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग और जगमग जगमग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

romanchak update ...ye vandana naam kahi suna hua lag raha hai ...
par abhi kaun sach bata raha hai yahi pata nahi chal raha ..

kabhi time me gadbad ho jati hai ...
ab aruhi sachme us khandar ke ander gayi thi ya bahar hi behosh huyi thi ye bhi pata nahi ..

aur ye shruti ke saath bhi waisa hi darawana ho raha hai ..

 

[harshit1890]

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" freshers party ke liye kis chiz mein participate karegi? "

" kuch socha nahi "

" miss fresher tujhe hi banna hai, pehle hi bata rahi hun "

" tujhe usme kyun itna interest hai? "

" kyun ki main chahti hun.. "

" par kyun? "

" kyun kya.. tabhi to tu college ke ladkon mein famous hogi... "

" main sirf famous banu isliye aisa tu chahti hai? itna hi hai to tu khud hi ban jaio " aaurhi ne chidte hue kaha.

" mujhe jarurat nahi hai.. mera mamla to set hai.. ab seal wahin se unplugged hogi.. uske baad dekha jayega.. " mene jawab diya aur aaruhi ko class ke raste se modh kar wahan se dur le jane lagi.

" are.. kahan jaa rahi hai "

" class jakar kya karegi.. vaise bhi class premkumar mishra ki hai ... "

" ye kaun hai? "

" na dhayani ka asar hai ye.. wahi apne petu.. jo bina naam bataye us din dhol baja gaye the "

" to hum jaa kyun nahi rahe unki class mein? "

" kyun jayenge? kya karenge jakar... tujhe malum hai panch class ke andar vo adhi book khatam kar chuke hai.. do din pehle tu to gayab ho gayi thi aur usne test le liya.. kya bataun tujhe itna bada madharchod hai ... subh subh biwi ne di nahi di hogi.. jiski wajah se jo usne randapa machaya hai kya batau.. acha hai tu nahi thi.. warna tera haal anju jaisa hota "

" anju? kya hua uske sath "

" tu janti hai use? " main chaunki

" offcourse nahi.. par class mein hi hogi na.. "

" are han... ye to main bhool hi gayi thi.. usne kal anju ki lal kar di bhai... itne thapad pele na use... puri class sann reh gayi.. uske baad use staff room lekar gaya vo alag.. tabke baad vo college hi nahi ayi, patani salle ne aisa kya kiya uspar "

" ye to bahut galat baat hai.. hume college ke principal se shikayat karni chahie "

" exactly bachon ne yahi socha tha.. par na jane kaun ghar ka bhedi nikla aur us petu ko jakar bol aya... aur tu nahi janti fir kya hua "

" kya hua?... tu itna suspense mein kyun bata rahi hai "

" kya hua.. jis ladki ne plan banane ke liye sabse pehle apni chut mali thi.. uski chut us petu ne mal di.. puri class ke samne use aisa jaleel kiya na.. aisa jaleel kiya.. ki vo class mein to kya apne ghar mein ankh nahi utha payegi.. bina hath uthaye.. bina uske kapde khole... full tus.. rape kar dala uska... abhi tak uski chut beh rahi hogi.. vo bhi us din ke baad se college nahi ayi.. mujhe lagta hai petu adhe se jada class saaf kar dega is chakar mein "

" ye college sirf naam ka hi mashur hai.. pata nahi kya kya bhara hai idhar "

" bhara to bahut kuch hai.. college aur bache dono mein.. chal jaldi .. bhuk lag rahi hai.. raat bhar nahi soi hun use jada bhuk lagi hai "

" raat se yaad aya.. tu subah bata rahi thi ki tu soi nahi kyun? kya kar rahi thi "

" aashiqui.. tujhe bhi karni hai "

" tu hi kar.. mujhe jarurat nahi hai "

" han teri jarurat to kuch aur hi hai "

" matlab? "

" vo chhod... aab bas kuch khila de.. jaldi..... " hum dono canteen mein ghuse aur mene aaruhi ke sath khane ka order diya aur canteen ke bheetar ghusi.

" hey shruti... "

" hi kim "

" hey.. hey hey.. " sabhi ke sath is hey ka nach karte hue mein wahan par jaa baithi. Mere liye naya nahi tha par uske liye tha.. i mean aaruhi ke liye, jab meri nazar uski taraf gayi tab mujhe samajh aya ki shit ise to introduce karaya hi nahi. " aaruhi.. sorry.. i just missed... ye hai apna gang... "

" gang? " vo confused thi, totally

" han.. gang... baad mein batati hun pehle introduce ho lo, pratha nibha lo taki baad mein khinchai karne mein asani ho... this is kim, ye manpreet.. ye gaggan mechnicals aur ek sadsye abhi nahi aya hai.. he is busy ... and vo person hai vishal.. ye hai hamara gang... " sabhi ne aaurhi se hath milaya aur aaruhi ne bhi but confusion mein. " baith na.. khadi kyun hai.. baith baith.. ye apne hi hai.. inko tere bare mein sab pata hai bas tu hi nahi janti.. "

" par... " aaruhi ko is confusion se nikalna jaruri tha varna vo kahin aur hi chali jati.

" pichle kuch dino se jab tu class se hostel chali jati thi usi dauran meri mulakat inse hui.. kim MBA department ki hai.. manpreet MBBS aur gaggan ka to mene tujhe bata hi diya hai... main jab akeli thi to usi akele pan mein in sabse mulakat ho gayi ek-ek karke.. aur bas hamara gang ban gaya.. kyun ... " main aaruhi ko bata rahi thi par uski nazar ek ek kar ke sab par thi jaise sabhi ke chehre yaad kr rahi ho. Kim ek bindas ladki thi.. khubsurat thi.. stylish thi.. MBA walle aksar aise hote hai.. par uska batch use dosti nahi kar raha tha.. reason .. ek ki vo ... bolte hue haklati thi.. ab isme uski koi galti nahi thi... dusri tarah manpreet teth punjaban... sundarta ke bare mein bolna hi bekar tha.. lamba chehra, utne hi lambe baal, ek dum gathila badan tha. Vo kaise mili.. ek din main MBBS wing se guzar rahi thi tab ek ladka use ched raha tha shayad senior tha kisi branch ka.. usi ki wajah se hamari baat-cheet hui aur dosti ho gayi.. Bacha gaggan.. bhayanak danav jaisa.. badhi hui dadhi, gungrale baal.. hasht pusht vajan aur khane ka shauk.. ise gang mein shamil karne ka reason? any doubt.. ek hi tha.. vishal.. ye uska room partner tha.. aur apne launde ki jankari ke liye aage kaam aa sakta tha bas isi liye.. Vishal hamare sath kam hi join karta tha.. reason kabhi mene pucha nahi.. vaise bhi.. ane wale time mein vo gang nahi mujhe mere badan ko join karne wala tha.. mujhe bas usi se matlab tha...

" aaruhi tu chup kyun hai... ye sab bhi apne hi hai.. chill kar inke sath.. are bhaiyaa.. la rahe ho ya suicide karun tumhare canteen mein? " main chillai.

" yes...ba..be.. tum... hamare bich ek dum comfo...r.taa.ble ho.. " kim ne haklate hue apni dosti dikhai.

" sure " aaruhi ne kim ko jawab diya.

" aaruhi.. shruti ne bataya tumhari mom bhi doctor hai.. " manpreet boli.

" yes she is Neurosurgen "

" waoo.. so cool... mujhe bhi neurosurgen banna tha lekin mujhe lagta nahi ki main ek normal bhukar walle doctor se uppar ban paungi.. i hate doing operations "

" tu...je.e... operation se isliye nahi dar lagta.. balki isliye lagta hai ki kahin tu.. khoon dekh kar.. gir.. na...pa...de... " kim ne hanste hue kaha.

" bore.. purana joke hai ye.. i just don't want to open someone body.. "

" han tujhe to apni khulwani hogi na... " mene manpreet ko jawab diya to kim mere sath hansi par manpreet ne ankhein dikha di kyun ki sath mein gaggan bhi baitha tha jo apne khane mein vyast tha. Use dekh kar lag nah raha tha ki vo kuch sun raha hai lekin ladkon par bharosa karna utna bada paap tha jitna bada paap hum apni chut ko bhosda bana kar karte hain.

" aaruhi.. tum hamesha chup hi rehti ho " manpreet ne uski taraf dekh puchte hue baat badli.

" nahi.. bas.. vo abhi kya bolu.. ye soch rahi hun "

" isse.e.puchhoo.. ki freshers..s partty mein participation mein kya karegi.. " thuste hue mene pucha.

" are han.. kya karne wali ho tum... ma....main.. toh soch rahi hun singing karun... " kim ki baat par manpreet sabse pehle hansi.

" pehle tu apna naam ek bari mein le fir gaiyo " main bhi hansi aur aaruhi bhi.

" bitc.....h.... " itna bolne mein uski jeebh bahar nikal ayi jise dekh hum teeno hans pade.

" main to.. ek play mein participate kar rahi hun.. seniors ke sath "

" tumhare seniors itne ache hain? " aaurhi ne manpreet ki baat ek dum pakdi.

" acha to aaj ke time mein koi nahi.. par han.. unki maan lo to kuch hota nahi hai .. varna unki baat na mano to you don't know vo uska badla kaise lete hai "

" le.. dekha keh rahi hun.. lavanya ke pass chal.. warna baad mein royegi " mene aaurhi ko samjhaya.

" mene suna hai MBBS mein bahut jada gandi ragging li jati hai "

" suna kya hai... sach mein hoti hai.. main to hostel mein nahi rehti.. kabhi kabhi late ho jata hai to meri friend... rubina.. uske sath rukti hun to vo batati hai.. bata rahi thi ki ragging mein full beach wear pehnwa kar rampwalk karwate hain hostel ke andar seniors.... "

" lo batao... ye to khuli chhut hai.. marne ki.. " main tapak se boli.

" ladka thodi hota hai "

" kuch ko ladkon ki jarurat kahan hoti hai.. aaj kal naya aya hai trend mein.. " mene aaruhi ki taraf dekh kar ankh mari to vo mujhe gusse se ghurne lagi.

" lesbian... hmm abhi tak to koi nahi aisa kahani suni.. par acha bataya tune.. puchungi.. lekin sau baat ki ek baat ... seniors ki sun kar chalo.. aaj maar vo rahe hain kal bachayenge bhi wahi.. isliye main to adti hi nahi kabhi bhi kisi se bhi.. "

" to kya tumhari ragging nahi hui? "

" lagta hai tumhe ragging se jada pyar hai.. " manpreet muskurai.. " ragging ke bina.. kya zindagi... jab tak ragging ka taste na lo tab tak college pura nahi hota.. meri bhi hui ... koi bachta nahi hai college mein "

" par ye to allowed nahi hai "

" mohar lagti hai law banne ke liye.. par vo law sab par thodi apply hota hai.. same yahan aisa hi hai.. jab tak koi complain karne nahi jata tab tak kuch nahi hota bhale hi sabko pata ho... vaise bhi koi samne ata hi nahi.. agar kisi ne complain ki to ya to vo khud palat jatte hain ek-do din baad ya fir.. proof palat jata hai " manpreet itna hi boli ki uska phone baj utha. Phone par baat karte hi usne wahan se jane ke liye kaha.

" will meet you later.. bye ... bye aaruhi... " aaruhi ko alag se bye keh kar vo nikal gayi. Uske jatte hi gaggan jo tab se chup hi tha vo bhi end mein bye keh kar nikal liya.... Kim bhi panch minute aur baithi vo bhi chali gayi, uski class thi jise vo miss nahi karna chahti thi, uske favorite teacher ki class jo thi. " behenchod yahan par adhe se jada launde laundiya to apne hi teacher ko dena ya lena chahte hain.. bechare yahan ke launde.. vaise kim buri nahi hai.. vo agar bole na muh se.. to uski koi bhi lene ko tayar ho jayega.. kya kehti hai? " mene chia ki chuski lete hue kaha.

" tu fir kho gayi kahin ? " mene aaurhi ke khoye hue chehre ko dekhte hue kaha. Usne abhi tak kuch nahi khaya tha jab se vo aise hi baithi thi.

" tune mujhe in sabke bare mein kuch kyun nahi bataya? " aaruhi ne meri taraf dekhte hue pucha.

" kyun ki tujhse baat hi nahi hui.. isliye... "

" par kal to pura din sath the "

" the.. lekin "

" tujhe batana chahie tha ki tere ab mere alawa bhi friends hai "

" dekh aaruhi.. tu itna over-react mat kar.. main tujhe inse direct milwana chahti thi isliye nahi bataya vaise bhi 'Ghost' gang hamari bas yahin tak simit hai... no personal.. involve.. "

" Ghost gang? seriously.. ye naam rakha hai tune? "

" han.. ise badia naam kya ho sakta hai.. ghost gang... hume ek dusre ke bare mein bas utna hi pata hai jitna sabne ek dusre ko bataya hai bas.. "

" par tune mere bare mein to bataya na? vo bhi mere pith piche.. mujhse bina puche "

" tu fir over-react kar rahi hai "

" nahi.. tujhe meri personal information dene ke koi rights nahi hai.. " aaurhi gusse mein kis wajah se mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha par vo us wajah ki wajah se jabardasti ka gussa kar rahi thi.

" aaruhi sun.. apna ye randi rona band kar.. "

" dekh shruti mujhse ... "

" bhakk.. band kar.. itni der se keh rahi hun.. chup kar.. " mere jhatkate hi aaruhi chup ho gayi. Kai baar in badi ladkiyun ko isi tarah samjhana padta hai " mene teri mom ke bare mein bas itna bataya ki vo bhi doctor hai thats it.. vo bhi isliye kyun ki usne tere bare mein puchna shuru kar diya ki jab tu meri achi dost hai to kahan hai..etc etc... question ko badalne ke liye baat badal do.. mahol badal jata hai samjhi? "

" hmm... " aaruhi kuch nahi boli iske aage. Hum khane ke baad class ki taraf chal diye... Canteen mein hui baaton ka asar aaruhi par hua tha isliye usne freshers party mein naam dene ka faisla kar liya tha aur hum dono hi pahunch gaye lavanya ke pas.. Wo akele nahi thi balki uske dost aur bahut sare jane maujud the.. Infact usne to dhayan bhi nahi diya vo bas party ki tayari mein busy thi shayad.. humne apna naam likhwaya jisme mera to rampwalk jo ki sabka fix tha aur ek dance par.. wahin aaruhi ne rampwalk ke sath, ek story teller mein naam likhwaya.. mujhe nahi pata tha ki vo aisa kuch chutiap karna chahti hai varna main khud use mana karti. Kher usne aur mene naam likhwaya aur hum auditorium se bahar aa gaye. Main aaruhi se pichli raat hui ghatna ke bare mein baat karna chahti thi lekin mene aisa nahi kiya, pata nahi kyun.. par main chahti thi ki vo sapna bhool jaye jo usne dekha tha isliye main use aur vo sab batein bata kar kuch yaad nahi karana chahti thi. Hostel ke mess main chamchon se jada ladkiyun ke muh se nikalti galiyun ke bich hum apna khana kha rahe the.

" mujhe lagta hai tu sahi keh rahi thi "

" kya.. " mene kisi tarah nivala nigalte hue kaha.

" mujhe hostel se chale jana chahie.. mujhe nahi lagta main yahan fit hun "

" achanak se.. kaise soch liya "

" bas... mujhe ajeeb si ghutan mehsus hone lagi hai idhar.. "

" theek hai to kar le baat ghar par "

" tujhe koi farak nahi padega? " kuch pal ke baad aaruhi ne mujhe ye baat kahi thi. Farak? mujhe padna chahie tha ya nahi pata nahi lekin.. uske decision mein usi ki bhalai thi isliye mene na nahi kiya.

" tu itni purani khayalton ki aurat kyun hai? Saas aur bahu types.. bf gf chutiape types... tu hostel se jayegi.. meri life se thodi? aur vaise bhi tere ko yahan dikkat mein rok kar mujhe kya milega? "

" hmm... baat karti hun... soch rahi hun.. freshers party ke baad chali hi jaun... varna mom freshers party mein bhi tang karegi.. "

" aisa kar lio.. vaise bhi kam se kam 3-4 freshers party ke maze lootne hai hume to "

" 3-4? " aaruhi chuanki.

" han aur kya... vo manpreet hai na... " aaruhi sochne lagi " are apni MBBS wali, subh hi to mili thi "

" han aage bol "

" han to MBBS ki bhi hai to usne invite kiya hai ... kal... hai unki freshers .. hume wahan jana hai "

" kal? aur ek minute invite.. vo kaise kar sakti hai.. vo to khud fresher hai na ? "

" tujhe kisne kaha? vo 3rd year ki student hai... beta... hum aise kache kaam nahi karte, tu bas kal tayar rahio.. raat ko "

" raat ko lekin kaise? 7 baje se pehle ana hota hai hostel mein remember? ya fir warden ka dar nahi hai tujhe?"

" warden aur ye kahna dono kachra hai.. aur kachron ki jagah dustbin mein hoti hai.. tu uski chinta mat kar.. vo main set kar lungi.. kal sham ko 5 baje se party hai.. jada hua to apne MBBS ke wing ke hostel mein hi sone ke liye jagah dilwa degi manpreet "

" kaisi baat kar rahi hai? koi ladki nahi ayi iske baare mein pata chal gaya na warden ko to chidte kar degi tere aur mere "

" kuch nahi hoga.. teri fatti bahut hai.. itni abadi hai kuch nahi malum hoga... tu chal ab.. mujhe dikha kal kya pehnegi "

" tujhe kyun janna hai ? "

" izzat ka sawal hai meri... aur vaise bhi koi launda pasand aa gaya to wahin shugraat mana lio... aur han kapde aise pehnio jis utarne mein dikkat na ho.. bas uppar uthao aur dhaka-dhakkk "

" haramazdi kahin ki... " aaurhi ne meri pith par mukka mara aur hum dono apne kamre ki taraf badh gaye.

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ..shruti ke kuch dost bhi hai aur unse milwaya aruhi ko ..
par ye aruhi uske baare me batane par kuch jyada hi overreact kar rahi thi ,aur shruti ke daantne par chup ho gayi ..
aur ye fresher party me kahani bhi sunanewali hai aruhi ..

hostel se jaane ki baat kar rahi hai wo bhi fresher party ke baad ,par lagta nahi aisa hoga ..

 

[harshit1890]

Aha takla teacher ne bechari larki ki waat laga di kachra kr dia izat ka

Wawoooo miss Nandini k kia khene maal h maal

Dono ki conversation awesome dikhaya h

Itni Dearing dekh k larke ki hr cheez khul gayi same haal arauhi ka bhi tha

Thanks bhai

Wah bahi aj to double update

Ufffff ye Shruti bhi na is ko bhi keera h kia

Very nice very good shandar update

Thanks

nice update ..ye unknown teacher ne apne beti ka example mast diya ... par ye kuch jyada hi gaaliya deta hai .. ..
ladki ki koi bhi ijjat nahi kar raha ,,sidha uske maa ko hi character certificate de diya usne ..

aise teacher ko raste me pakadke achche se dhona chahiye ki dobara gaaliya naa bake aur ladkiyo ki ijjat kare ..

Kuch teacher aise hote hai.. jo apna gusa kisi aur par nikalte hai.. i mean college/skul akar

nice update ..yaha bhi shruti kisi mechanical class ke sunil par lattu hai ..
aur aaruhi ki maa bhi hostel me rehti thi apne waqt me ..
aur aaruhi ko hostel me naa rehne ki salaah bhi de di jaise supriya ka matter tha .

Thanks bhai sunil nahi vishal... abhi aage dekhte jao sab confusion dur kar denge tumhaar....

nice update .saari kahani repeat ho rahi hai aisa lagta hai ..aaruhi football player hai aur uski dost nimi marr chuki hai ..par kaise mari ye aaruhi ne bataya nahi shruti ko ..
warden aur peon wo bhi ladkiyo ko taadnewala ..

aur ye aaruhi itna naha rahi thi jaise usko hosh hi nahi tha ..paani bhar gaya poore room me aur jab shruti ne darwaja todne ke liye dhakka maara tab bhi usne ander se aawaj nahi di ..
aur ye iska bhi bathtoom se paani nahi nikalta jaise pehle tha matter ..

Thanks bhai repeat ho rahi hai.. chalo maan lete hai... pehle jaisa... hokar bhi nahi hai...

lagta hai ye insects lober professor apni beti ki khuli ango ko bhi aise hi dekhta hoga jaise class ki us lakdi ki ango ko notice kar raha tha.... I think ye professor apni beti ko bhi gandi gaaliya deta hoga jaise abhi class mein de raha hai...
I think ye professor 5th class fail student hai baad mein us jamane mein paise khilake professor bana hai...

Kuch gandi naali ke jaise soch wale students hote hai jo The great great great great nandu jaisi mahan lady ko bhi gandi nazar se dekhte hai.... actually inki parwarish kisi gandi jagah pe huyi hai isliye inki nazar bhi gandi..
aur ye shruti.... pagal hawas khor ladki... iski to jaise jali padi hai great nandu ko dekh.... Nandu ke pero ki dhool barabar nahi hogi wo aur uski soch to dekho... kamini kahi ki...

Next time agar kisi kirdaar ne bhi story character nandini ke baare mein kuch socha ya bola to uski aisi ki taisi kar deni hai


puri flashback baaki kuch ho na ho lekin in dono ki gandi gandi baatein bharpur hai... aur sath hi flashback khatam hote hote aaruhi, shruti ka hath shayad khinch ke ukhad feke...
wah us ladke kya mast dhamki deke bhag diya udhar se..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

I think ye professor khud se hi obsessed hai.. isliye apni biwi beti.. sabhi ko us tarah gariyata hai... Nandu... bahut dhandu.. karegi.. dekhte jao... jo dikhta hai vo bikta hi hai ye jaruri nahi hai Tayar rehna fir... aage baval hogaa... hath ka to pata nahi lekin kuch jarur hoga... ho hi jayega..... Thank you naina ji

class aur indono ki baaton mein hi ye update simat ke reh gayi pura update
Na koi katal na koi thrill ya suspense, na koi imagination pe adharit koi vision...

inse to achhi megha thi aur sath hi supriya bhi kam se kam dilchasp thi dono hi kirdaar...

Upor se ye shruti sari hade paar karke baat aaruhi ki mom pe le aayi... kitni gandi soch hai shruti ki.... kya yehi Sanskar mile ushe gharwalo se... kisi ki bhi mom ko lekar aisi gandi baatein kare... kuch to khayal rakhti ki aaruhi uski dost hai....
Khair.... itni giri huyi aur gandi soch to kisi dusman ko bhi na de.... ye to achha hua ki samne baith kar sunne wali aaruhi thi... koi aur hoti to shayad aaj shruti ki kya haalat karti ye to upor wala hi jaane...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit saheb

Har update mein thrill suspense aa gaya to kahani 10 update mein hi khatam ho jani hai.. thdi bahut laundiyu ki panchat bh to pado she was just kidding, ye aaruhi hili hui hai completely... puri tarah se.... Thanks nainaji

Thodi bahot situation mein changes hai megha aur supriya ki kahani se baaki naam alag alag jo bhi kirdaar aa rahe hai story mein... lekin baaki sab wohi ka wohi...
yahan pe kuch sawal aise bhi hai jaise
1) supriya aur megha ke room se aawaze aati thi....... par raat ko teen baje baad.. Lekin yahan to 3 baje se pehle hi kisi ke chalal kadmi ki awaze aa rahi hai wo itne log ki maujudgi mein.... aur sabse badi chounkane wali baat ye ki ye log us awaz ko nazar andaz kar flashback sunne mein busy ho gaye.... kyun?

3) bathroom mein aaruhi ki aawaz sun do pal ke liye dar gayi thi shruti.... ye bhi nayi ghatana add huyi kahani mein... aaruhi ki aawaz badalke baat kar rahi thi kuch pal ke liye.. matlab saaf hai aaruhi aane se pehle wo apni dusri personality mein jee rahi thi...

4)ek aur nayi baat samne aayi hai.. aaruhi us bhootiya hostel jaane ke piche shruti ka bhi hath hai... ek aham bhumika hai... aur ye baat usne swikar ki hai abhi abhi nandu aur baaki sab ke samne....
lekin kyun..

5) ek aur nayi baat jaan ne ko mili hai.. aaruhi ki gahri nind.... supriya ke waqt ye baat jikar nahi huyi thi... ab ye gahri nind hai ya phir kuch aur ye to aaruhi hi jaane

6) aaruhi badbada rahi thi ki school time mein koi thi jo bilkul matlabi thi... Koun thi wo...
Nimi?

Khair.... kadi se kadi tabhi mile jab ek kadi mile yahan to puri kahani hi idhar se udhar jump maar rahi hai sabhi kirdaaro ke sath...

anyway
....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harsit saheb

ABhi apko situation same lag rahi hai na? right main bhi yahi soch raha tha.. aur kahani bhi yahi dikhai jaa rahi hai.. ek point aap sab miss kar rahe ho.. mene starting mein hi bataya tha kher... koi nahi.. jaldi hi samne aa jayega...
1. Baarish ka mausam tha... veham samajh kar ...
2. Add nayi kuch nahi hui nainaji.. bas iske alawa kuch na bol sakte
3. Han ye sahi hai... shruti hi batayegi ab ye to
4., 5, 6 to jald aage aa jayenge... Thanks nainaji

यहां भी बाथरूम में प्रोब्लम ! यहां भी बाथरूम के नाले से पानी निकलने में प्रोब्लम ! क्या चक्कर है इस बाथरूम का ? सुप्रिया के लम्बे लम्बे बालों के झडने से नाला जाम हो जाता था पर यहां क्या प्रोब्लम है पानी निकासी में ?
आरोही बाथरूम में स्टैच्यू की तरह नंगी खड़ी हो कर नहा रही थी और श्रुति के पुकारने पर उसकी तंद्रा भंग हुई थी । क्यों ? वो क्या सोच रही थी ? वो अचेतन अवस्था में क्यों थी ?

आकाश के बदले विशाल की एंट्री हुई । बाकी सब कुछ वैसा ही चल रहा है जैसे सुप्रिया वाले कांड में चल रहा था । वार्डन और उसका ठोकु यहां भी वैसे ही जलवे बिखेर रहे हैं । बिल्कुल टु काॅपी ।

इंजीनियरिंग कॉलेज में सप्लाई और डिमांड की बातें देखकर तो मैं कंफ्यूज हो गया था । मुझे लगा यहां इकोनोमिक्स की भी पढ़ाई होने लग गई है क्या ?
ये भी सही लिखा आपने कि मैकेनिकल इंजीनियरिंग में लड़कियों की संख्या बहुत कम है । आजकल तो अधिकांशतः लड़कियां आई टी या कम्प्यूटर साइंस में ज्यादा जाती हैं । वैसे इंजीनियरिंग के कोर सब्जेक्ट में इलेक्ट्रॉनिक और मेकेनिकल ही सबसे अधिक इम्पोर्टेंट है । इसके बाद इलेक्ट्रिकल और सिविल का नम्बर आता है ।
बहुत सोच समझकर श्रुति ने मैकेनिकल इंजीनियरिंग के स्टूडेंट विशाल का चुनाव किया है । सच में काफी इंटेलिजेंट छोकरी है ।
श्रुति का कैरेक्टर बहुत ही जबरदस्त बिल्ड अप किया है हर्षित भाई आपने । इसके डायलॉग तो सच में लाजवाब है ।

सभी अपडेट्स बेहद ही शानदार थे । जगमग जगमग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

Baal aur pani.. problem.... sab ek hi baar hue hai.. ya kai baar.. kya malum... aaage pata chal jayega.... Sab kuch same hai... kyun ki kahani same hai.. :
Hahahaha... science wala banda kahin se bhi logic le ata hai uske liye economics behad asan hoti hai
mechinical vo sukha kuain hai bhai.. ki agar namak wala pani bhi mile to uspar sab tut pade... apni shruti to fir bhi rfesh water hai
Han intelligeny hi uski pehchan hai.. pagal ki... ... Thank you sanju bhai

 

[harshit1890]

Hum kuchh dino ke liye agyaat vash kya gaye... Yahan to sanntta pasra hai... Hariya kaka

Sanata hua tha kuch din ke liye par wapis aa gaye che

Bagal me aaram se baithao na... Je phaila'kar kahe bitha rahe...

Usko waisa hi baithna pasnd hai

Mujhe aisa kaahe laga raha hai ki ye sab mera padha hua hai... khaskar ye bencho wali line... par to main comment b maar chuka ... Doubt me hun kya karun dobaar maar dun Kay comment ... Khair .. aage dekhte hain

Han padha hua hai.. mujhe apka comment bhi yaad hai apko kahani yaad naa aa rahi.. koi na dubara padh lo

Kaisa ye bharm jaal hai... Kaisa ye Maya jaal hai... Jo nahi wo nahi hai lekin nahi hokar bhi hota hai jabki uske hone se bhi koi matlab nahi hota fir bhi Supriya ko aisa lagta hai ki wo hai... Ye to kamal ka concept hai harshit bhai...

Copying this idea ... Apan bhi ye bharm jaal kahin par dalega.... Thanks for this inspirational idea...

BTW jaise jaise kahani ke raaj gahra rahe maza utna hi aa raha

Hahaha... Abhi bharam jaal to dhire dhire hi hnona hai.... Thanks bhai

Hahaha ... Ye Megha bhi na... Kitni mast hai

apko nahi milegi

Kahne ko to bahut kuchh hai lekin abhi thoda dil me dukh sa ho raha hai... Tanu mar gayi aur ja rahi... .. next update dekhta hun

Tanu se pyar tha kya apko

Matlab sapne me bhi . Kaisi abhadr baten karti hai ye ladki

Mauz ladki hai vo

I think Supriya par kisi ne kiya hai jadoo tona ... Isliye haal ho chala hai aisa ... Koi Ojha ya tantrik ko bulana hoga ..

Waise Megha ka sujaho bhi acha hi tha... Supriya yadi chaska laga le ghapa ghap ka to dimag me bhaka bhak wale faltu khyal chale jayenge...

Hayyy megha sapne me bhi deti hai... Ek din mujhe bhi bhej dete hariya kaka sapne me hi kya bigad jata... Waise kya wakai gadeddar hai Supriya jaisa ki Megha ne ne bataya tha....

Baharhaal intese brain hallucination vs reality ka tana Bana kafi gahrata hai... Umda skill schai aur bharm ke bich ka un hairangej drishyon ke liye...

Simply superb !!!!

Han tantrik ki jarurat hai.. bas tantrik ayega nahi... Jo insan jada lalchata hai vo dur hi reh jata hai bhai isliye aapko megha mili nahi... Hallucination nahi milega is baat ki gurantee mein deta hun par han kuch hai wahi.. Thanks bhai

Wowwwwww !!!!!

Ab to khud me hi aisa lagna laga hai ki main hi nashe me hun.... What a superp writing... Story end ke baad hi kuchh mera dimag samiksha kar payega... Filhaal to puzzle continue hai aur khud me hi lagne laga hai ki ... Jo bharm hai wo sach hai aur jo sach hai wo matr bhramit karne kile liye dikhaya ja raha hai...

Jaise jaise kahani aage ja rahi hai, waise waise romanch bhi...

Hahaha... are gazab bhai... gazab vivad diya hai apne.. aap khud hi nashe mein ho Puzzle tut jayega bhai.. behad jald tut jayega... Thanks you so much bhai

Waise ye intese scene ke bich me jabardasti masala daalne ka matlab.... Wo bhi ek taang tooti table par chadh'kar kaun sa scene sadhne ki kosis kar rahe the saar....

The Hell Excitment & Finguring VS Total Balance kya

Jabrdsti kuch ahi hai bhai... jo apne end pada hai na vo ek saar tha... jo adhura tha.. ab jaab aage judega to apko samajh ayega... dekhte jao bas...

Kya hi kah dun pakiya bhau.... Apne hi aaj kal dahabaji karte hain ... Ek lekhika hain Mahi Maurya ji ... Unse bus 2 baar baat hui aur kahani me "Bang-Bang" romance ka mujhe nayak bana diya gaya... Idhar to sala apan kisi ke sapne me bhi nahi ... Aur to aur chepter end ke sath Megha, jiske liye itni arji dali thi.... Uss ka sada gala Parthiv sharir ke darsan bhi karva diye

Kya iss writer ko tanik bhi daya nahi aai
Kya insaniyat ka yahi swaroop hai.
Kya thodi si bhi humdardi nahi bachi hariya kaka me, apne ek sathi mitr ke liye
Kya jis vinash kaal swarthi kalyug ki baat hum sunte aa rahe the, uska swaroop hai ye

Puchhta hai nain ... Jawab de harsit

Only LOL

Ae pagal kitne photo chipkati hai... Pagle ka size xxxxl ho jata hai

Edit reason:- Mera autocorrect mujhe naina ke liye pagal nahi likhne de raha tha... Pagal ki jagah usne "pahal" kar diy isliye edit kar raha hun... Taki sahi message pahunche

Sanskaar naam ki chij hi nahi bachi hai... Matab do gadrayi sorry abhi college me hai... 2 kamsin hasin kaliyan, gulab ki pankhudi jaise uske samne ye launda kitne foul language istamal kar raha...

Engineering walon ke poore semester me ek subject compulsory kar dena chahiye.... Bhasha ki maryada aur uska prayog.... Ranchhod Das se lekar panchod das tak sab yahan abhadr baten karte hain

Sanskar bhi hostel mein rehkar ayenge to fir kya hi kehne... Abhi lagta hai takraye nahi ho aap engineer laundo se.. tab malum chalega.. vo apki is soch ko hi ban kar denge

Haaaaa gguuuuuu

Gaaaaa guuuuu

Kya harshit bhai... Ye short form bada badbudar feeling de raha

Je chutiye ka sahi Nik name likha hai... Haggu.. hag hi deta hai sala ye... Na dil par control hai na dimag par.... Pata na kaise ye Manpreet ki lega ... Ya Manpreet iski lekar chhodne ke irade se hai wo to waqt ki baat hai...

Lekin ye fattu sala...

Is launde ke irade bahut sakht hai.. par hoga kuch nahi isse...

Story character tanu gayi upor uske sath gayi upor company dene supriya aur megha bhi... ab upor jaane ki baari kirdaar shruti aur aaruhi ki
Btw harshit1890 sahab jald se jald next planning kijiye ki aisi scene create ho ki aaruhi aur shruti ka bhi patta saaf ho jaye story se hi

Next plan pura hai... bas chapna hai

Woaaahaaa !!!!

So another piece of superb art..... Kalpnasilta jiski tarif me kya hi kah dun.... Arohi ... Shruti ... Vishal... Gagan... And the beloved one Nandu...

Aur ek verbal charecter... "Manpreet"...

Dekhte hain aage aur kitne bhrm hai aur 8 saal pahle ki kya gutthi hai...

Outstanding

Thank you so much nain bhai

Shut up ... Arohi ke sath iss baar Hariya kaka taanka bhida rahe ... Jo megha ke sath na kar paye..

BTW abhi tanu ki maut ek aisi ladki ne dekhi hai jo 4 din se hostel me ja kar so rahi ... Arohi...

Might bhi 8 sal pahle uski maut hui ho... Aur wo kalpna me kahani bun rahi aur kahani ke taar jod rahi hai... It might be kahin kisi mod par Supriya aur Megha se mulakat ho... Don't be so pridict...

Writers sahab ne illusion aur reality ke bich ek complete loop diya hai jisme poorane sabhi mukhya patr ke sath 3 baten hui hi...

1) kisi ek ki maut aur kuchh logon ka pagal ho jana..

2) Ya fir kisi ki maut nahi sab ko writer sahab ne pagalpan ka hawa laga diya...

3) Sab mare hain ye aap ka illusion hai... San jinda hai wo aap ka illusion hai...

So dear ... Jis illusion ka illustration na ho wahsn bas aaram se padhte rahne ka

Kahani jud jayegi.. jab tak aap aage tak aoge... kahani judi hui milegi...
1,2,3,points : No comment on that...
Hahahahah Naina Dekh rahe ho... padte raho par sawal na pucho

 

[harshit1890]

Parchhayi jo dikhi wo vaham thi ya fir bhootni uska pata yahan par reality se rahne par hoga... Why ju bhoot ya parchhayi ho gaye

Thank you..

kya nainu saheb sach mein ro rahe the
Nainu sahab Tussi na ro.... abhi kayi kirdaar baaki hai, baat baaki hai

Hahaha..

Ye sab sajis hai hariya kaka ki.... Jaisa ki apna ek mitr kahte Mr. BERLIN kahte hain...

Ghode ko mil na rahi ghas aur gadhe kha rahe chavanprash ... Bus hariya kaka wahi karne par utaru hain

Na ghoda na chavanparash.. yahan sirf hogi ladkiyun ki bharmar...

Story harshit1890 sahab ki hai.... aur unki kahani matlab ek ek karke sabhi kirdaaro ka patta saaf ho jana hamesha hamesha ke liye... wo bhi khaufnaak tarike se...
Aap maano ya na maano... yahi harsu saheb ki siggi hai aur writing style bhi
Edited - oh haan, chahe illusion ho ya hallucinations ya 8 saal pehle ki baat ho ya present ki.... isse koi farak nahi padta writer sahab ko... kissa khatam to sabhi kirdaaro ka hona hi hona hai hain na harshit sahab

Hahahaha... Pata nahi kyun is baar aisa mauka kam lag raha hai.. baki dekhte hai.. kya hoga... kya hoga.. mautein hogi ya nahi.. unique maut ya trick shayad Treasure mein thi use achi kahin ayi nahi aaj tak..... Best murder thought i have wrote ais ameko lagta ha...

Dimag par parda hi dala hai.... Thik se padh leyo.... Ek to 15 min laha diye ek jawab dene me ... Pichhe se dnudh laye rona na rone wala post... Mera rona na hoga ki ju to poora gaanv ki terhvi manane par utaru ho... Read carefully..

Harshit saheb wrote... Nahi maregi wo ... Bahut shakt jaan hai... Dhyan do padhne me naina ... Kisi kisi ka hi number aayega but ju ko lagega ki sabka aa gaya...

Kyonki ju illusion me ho... Bharm jaal

Hahahaha... Bhai tum naina ji par bhari padh gaye lagta hai

Hateli writing style me storyline naam ki chij bhi hoti hai ki nahi... Jab harshit babu bol chuke... No physco thrill... No paranormal activities... Then why don't u accept and ready for a complete illusive web story... Jaisa ki mujhe feel ho raha hai... No prediction... Soch'kar aane wale chijon ka maza na kharab karna..

Waise bhi sab mat jayenge to ek ek karke sab ke shrad ka bhoj bhi khaunga aur tumhe bhi pick up kiye chalunga... Raste bhar u tease me dekha main sahi thi ... Aur main bewakoofon sa chhoti shakal banakar chidhta rahunga... Ander hi ander...

Happy na... Haan par marne do shrad ka bhoj khane chalenge

Pscyho thrill nahi hogi... Paranormal activities nahi hogi... Kahani abhi kya hogi.. Ye sochna hi bekr hai.. kyun ki main khud nahi janta... bas thoda bahut janta hu... Hahaha...

Khair...
Let's see what happens next

harshit1890 sahab

kya kehna hai

 

[harshit1890]

actually shruti ek jariya hai jiski wajah se hume wo ankahin baatein aur ghatanaye pata chale jo aaruhi ki life mein ghat chuki hai...wo gehre raaz jinke upor se parda hatne wale hai dhire dhire... chaahe school life ho ya hostel life mein... lavanya ne kuch to aisa kiya hai jiske chalte aaruhi had zyada khaufzyada ho jaati hai lavanya ke baare mein sunte hi.... aisi kya baat ho gayi jo darne ki ek wajah ban baithi lavanya, aaruhi ke liye...
well.. ek baat ye bhi sach hai ki Shruti absolutely, positively, 101% whore hai... aur is baat pe koi doubt nahi...
Khair......
Let's see what happens next
kya kand hota hai jab aaruhi naam likhne lavanya ke paas jayegi? Kya wo torture karne wali hai uske upor? Ya lesbian sex karne ke liye majboor karegi?
ya phir khud ki maze ke liye koi aisa kand kar de aaruhi sang ki aaruhi jindagi bhar bhool na paaye?
aur fresher party mein kya kand hone wala hai?
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab

Sahi kaha apne... shruti ek zariya hi hai bas.... jo apko kahani malum chal rahihai.... Hahahaha... She is still a virgin.. why she is a whore...
Nahi aisa kuch nahi hone denge ab hum... fikar nat.... Thanks nainaji

nice update .ye shruti ka dimag bahut tezz hai aisa lagta hai ..har baar yahi kehti hai ki me jo karna chahti thi wo ho raha hai ..
pehle aruhi ka darr dur karne ki baat ho ya khandar wali baat ..
baaki sab mast tha ,har baar koi na koi baat sex ko lekar kehti hai shruti ..
aur ye sab agar wo waha suna rahi hai to sabka kya reaction hoga ..

shruti ka puchhna ki niche ke baal bhi jhadte hai ya size puchhna maja aa gaya ..

par ye aruhi ke darr ki wajah kya hai jo khandar se judi hai aur chut masalne se ..

Tez dimag hai uska shuru se bhai.. bahut si chizen aap logon ne abhi tak notice nahi ki na is chakar mein VO obsessed hai na us chiz se islye.. insan ko jo nahi milta uske piche bhagti hai bas yahi reason hai... Vo apko aage samajh aa jayega... Thanks bhai

यदि कहानी को सिंपल नजरिए से सोचा जाए तो यही लगता है कि इस कहानी की नायिकाएं दोहरी व्यक्तित्व से ग्रसित हैं । एक - जिसमें नायिका सिम्पल , मासूम , थोड़ी डरी डरी सहमी सी और दुसरी - मानसिक रोग से त्रस्त , वहशी और हत्यारिन ।

नायिका का पहले दिन ही सिनियर द्वारा अश्लील और फुहड़ता भरा रैगिंग फिर बाद में नायिका का सिनियर से डरा डरा रहना , उससे नफरत करना । और अंत में उसकी हत्या कर देना । हत्या भी वैसी जैसी ख्वाहिशें पाले बैठी हो ।

इस कहानी के दुसरे अध्याय को अगर इस कहानी के प्रथम अध्याय की पुनरावृत्ति मान कर चलें तो लावन्या की हत्या होने वाली है और इसी के साथ साथ श्रुति की भी ।

पर ये समझ नहीं आता कि इन सबों से नायिका के बाल झड़ने से क्या तात्पर्य निकलने वाला है ?

जो गरजते हैं वो बरसते नहीं । श्रुति का कैरेक्टर भले ही बिंदास और चंचलता से भरा हुआ हो , पर वो वैसी नहीं है जैसा हम देख पढ़ रहे हैं । लड़कियां आपस में ऐसे ही बातें करती हैं । पर दुःख बहुत होगा जब इसकी भी हत्या हो जायेगी या हत्या की कोशिश की जायेगी ।
लेस्बियन - लड़कियों के लेस्बियन होने में लड़कियों को कितना आनंद आता है , पता नहीं , पर उन्हें लेस्बियन होते देख लड़कों को बहुत मजा आता होगा ।

बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

Bahut khub kaha hai... apne... isliye kehte hai na ladkiyun ko samjhna asan nahi namumkin hota hai tabhi unke behaviour ko koi nahi samajh sakta re...
Kahani ke bich mein jo ghatnaye hui hai vo abhi tak.. ek tarah se ... adhuri hai adhuri.. jab judegi to koi ayega jarur batane...
Main abhi jawab to nahi de sakta kyun ki vo kahani ka maza khatam kar dega.. bas itna kahenge... jo apne pada hai abhi tak.. usme jhol kiya gaya hai tabiyat se.. bahut jada..
Hahahaha.... Bhai ladkiyun ka nahi pata ladke bade mauz lete apne sahi kaha ye... Thanks bhai

romanchak update ..ye raat ko bina kapdo ke bed ke niche chupna aruhi ka .. aur upar se dari huyi bhi hai aur shruti ko aawaj deke bula rahi thi ,,ye pehla scene tha jo ekdam horror wali feeling de raha tha ..

aur jab aruhi ne apni kahani batana shuru kiya ki kaise lavanya usko khandar me leke gayi aur waha ka mahual jis tarah bataya wo bhi horror hi tha aur darawna bhi ..

lavanya ko aisa majak nahi karna chahiye tha aruhi se .. chhoti mothi ragging sahi hai par aise darawni jagah par leke jana agar kuch ulta sidha ho gaya to ..

aur us khandar se ek kahani bhi judi hai jo shruti ko pata chal gayi ki waha pe college ke director ki laash mili kisi call girl ke saath ,aur wo khandar jab todne jaate to kuch na kuch anhoni ho hi jaati ..

Chalo bhai horror wali feeling ayi apko.. ye sun kar tassali hui ki jo create kiya vo hua... Bhai mazak uske lye tha.. ab samne wala kis sadme mein hai vo kaise malum chalega.. par han galat to kiya hi ha... Thanks bhai

Raat ko kon sa bhoot aata h drane jis se aarohi bed ke niche bina kapdo ke chali gayi. Kher jokes apart intresting update now ab jab aarohi apne sath hui regging ka kissa bta rhi hai to kuch raz samne aa hi jayega. I hope lavanya ki bhi halat tannu jesi na ho jaye end me kher dekhte h writer ji kya twist lekar aate hai

Hahaha.... Yahi to saar hai kahani ka.. ki aisa kyun kar rah hai.. par han meaning jarur rahega har chiz ka... is sawal ka jawab aage mil gaya hoga apko... Thank you... twist pendiing hai.. bas kuch chiz chhod kar...

Ghatnaye to wohi ghat rahi hai bas thodi bahot pher badal hai...
Jaise aaruhi bistar ke niche hona... Raat ke Andhere mein uski aankhein kisi vampire ki aankho ki tarah chamakna...
us khandahar ke andar jaana.... ye sab supriya ke waqt nahi hua tha...
aur sabse badi baat us khandahar mein kuch hua tha kuch saal pehle supriya ke waqt tab ye baat samne nahi aayi thi ki akhir kya hua tha... lekin aaruhi ke time ye baat samne aa hi gayi ki wo khandahar kyun bhootiya kehte hai....
Baaki ke ghatanaye same hai...
Wohi jo supriya sath ghat rahi ghatanaye wohi ghatanaye aaruhi ke sath bhi bhi ghat rahi hai....
Khair.... guess karne se koi faida nahi... coz baat yahin pe uljhi hai ki akhir supriya aur megha sach mein thi ya just imagination hai aaruhi ki....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Kya pata torch ki roshni se shruti ko laga ho uski ankhon ko lekar? Kuch bhi ho sakta hai.. bhram jaal ka khel hai ye sab... khandar bhootiya hai ye abhi tak pusht kahan hua hai.. Ab kaise ghat rahi hai sawal to yahan aakar maujud hota hai na... Thanks nainaji

क्या बेहतरीन हाॅरर क्रियेट किया है हर्षित भाई आपने ! और क्या बेहतरीन अपडेट था ये ! अद्भुत ।
फिर से रात में वही एक बजने में पांच मिनट बाकी वाला लफड़ा ! बिस्तर के नीचे आरोही , नग्न अवस्था में । और बिस्तर के नीचे ही मेघा की हत्या हुई थी । पर वो नंगी क्यों थी ? सपना भी देखा होगा तो भी इससे उसके नंगे होने से क्या मतलब ? वो नंगी जरूर स्वयं ही होई होगी पर क्यों ?
सुप्रिया के वक्त तो पता नहीं चल पाया था कि फर्स्ट डे में उसके साथ तन्नु ने ऐसा क्या किया था जिससे वो डरी डरी और उससे नफरत करने लगी पर बाद में ये जरूर हुआ था कि वो वहां गई थी और उसे वहां से आकाश और मेघा वापस हास्टल ले कर आए थे । हां , पर वो खंडहर में प्रवेश नहीं की थी । बाकी सब कुछ वैसा ही हुआ था ।

आठ साल पहले उस खंडहर में कालेज के डायरेक्टर और एक काॅल गर्ल की हत्या कर दी गई थी । और शायद ये वही समय था जब सुप्रिया वाली वारदात हुई थी ।
क्या उन दोनों की हत्या सुप्रिया वाले कांड के बाद हुई थी ?
ये तो गजब के चक्रव्यूह में फंसा दिया है आपने हर्षित भाई ! इतना तो श्योर हूं कि ये कोई भुत प्रेत का मामला नहीं है पर इन दोनों घटनाओं में ऐसा कोई रिश्ता काॅमन भी तो नहीं है , घटनाओं की पुनरावृत्ति छोड़कर ।

देखते है आगे और कितना दिमाग के कल पुर्जे ढिले होने वाले हैं । दिमाग के चिथड़े-चिथड़े कर देने वाला अपडेट । बहुत बहुत बढ़िया । आउटस्टैंडिंग ।

Thank you so much bhai... Bhai... ab vo nangi kyun thi.. ye baat uske sath ghat chuki hai aur vo bhool gayi hai ya fir.. kuch aur hai... ye to ab aaruhi janti hai.. shruti ko nahi malum...
Nahi bhai aakash aur megha use tab nahi laye the.. pehle din to vo akele hi thi... aakash aur megha to use tab laye the jab vo us kamre mein fans gayi thi.. tab ki baat hai vo...
Chakarviyu mein to khud fansa hun aane wala soch kar.... aur bahut bura fansa hun mein to BHai bahut bahut shurkiya

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

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मेरे कहने का तात्पर्य वही था । सुप्रिया जब तन्नु के खुफिया कमरे से बाहर निकल कर उस खंडहर तक पहुंची थी और फिर वहां से आकाश और मेघा उसे वापस हास्टल तक ले आई थी ।

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Sahi kaha apne... shruti ek zariya hi hai bas.... jo apko kahani malum chal rahihai.... Hahahaha... She is still a virgin.. why she is a whore...
Nahi aisa kuch nahi hone denge ab hum... fikar nat.... Thanks nainaji

Tez dimag hai uska shuru se bhai.. bahut si chizen aap logon ne abhi tak notice nahi ki na is chakar mein VO obsessed hai na us chiz se islye.. insan ko jo nahi milta uske piche bhagti hai bas yahi reason hai... Vo apko aage samajh aa jayega... Thanks bhai

Bahut khub kaha hai... apne... isliye kehte hai na ladkiyun ko samjhna asan nahi namumkin hota hai tabhi unke behaviour ko koi nahi samajh sakta re...
Kahani ke bich mein jo ghatnaye hui hai vo abhi tak.. ek tarah se ... adhuri hai adhuri.. jab judegi to koi ayega jarur batane...
Main abhi jawab to nahi de sakta kyun ki vo kahani ka maza khatam kar dega.. bas itna kahenge... jo apne pada hai abhi tak.. usme jhol kiya gaya hai tabiyat se.. bahut jada..
Hahahaha.... Bhai ladkiyun ka nahi pata ladke bade mauz lete apne sahi kaha ye... Thanks bhai

Chalo bhai horror wali feeling ayi apko.. ye sun kar tassali hui ki jo create kiya vo hua... Bhai mazak uske lye tha.. ab samne wala kis sadme mein hai vo kaise malum chalega.. par han galat to kiya hi ha... Thanks bhai

Hahaha.... Yahi to saar hai kahani ka.. ki aisa kyun kar rah hai.. par han meaning jarur rahega har chiz ka... is sawal ka jawab aage mil gaya hoga apko... Thank you... twist pendiing hai.. bas kuch chiz chhod kar...

Kya pata torch ki roshni se shruti ko laga ho uski ankhon ko lekar? Kuch bhi ho sakta hai.. bhram jaal ka khel hai ye sab... khandar bhootiya hai ye abhi tak pusht kahan hua hai.. Ab kaise ghat rahi hai sawal to yahan aakar maujud hota hai na... Thanks nainaji

Thank you so much bhai... Bhai... ab vo nangi kyun thi.. ye baat uske sath ghat chuki hai aur vo bhool gayi hai ya fir.. kuch aur hai... ye to ab aaruhi janti hai.. shruti ko nahi malum...
Nahi bhai aakash aur megha use tab nahi laye the.. pehle din to vo akele hi thi... aakash aur megha to use tab laye the jab vo us kamre mein fans gayi thi.. tab ki baat hai vo...
Chakarviyu mein to khud fansa hun aane wala soch kar.... aur bahut bura fansa hun mein to BHai bahut bahut shurkiya

Waise bich me se koi sentence chun kar quote kaise kiya jata hai ?