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Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

harshit1890

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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Update ~~ 75


" tujhe chasma kab se lag gaya ? " shruti jisko badi mushkil se lab mein entry mili thi late hone ki wajah se usne aaruhi ke bagal mein baithte hi pucha jo computer mein code karne mein busy thi. Lab mein sabko apna kaam diya hua tha. Nandini do row ke bich mein bane corridor mein ghumti hui hath mein file ko padte hue ghum rahi thi.

" Ab tujhe ye bhi bataun ki roz subah kaun si kachi pehnu ha? " aaruhi ne bina uski taraf dekhe kaha.

" Vo bhi batayegi.. to main puri class ke ladkon mein faila dungi fir soch lio hehehe.. " shruti ne apna system on karte hue kaha. Aaruhi ne apna kaam roka aur ek pal ke liye use ghura.

" Kamini kahin ki.. " aaruhi fir apne kaam mein lag gayi.

" Ha.. kuch ladkon ka bhala ho jata.. waise sun.. mujhe tujhse kuch jaruri baat karni hai.. " shruti ne fusfuate hue aaruhi ke thoda najdeek jakar kaha.

" Baat karne ke liye mene tumhe entry nahi di.. " Aaruhi jawab deti use pehle piche se nandini ne shruti ko toka jiske tokte hi shruti sidhe baith gayi.

" Sorry miss.. vo aaruhi ki code samajhne ke liye hi use puch rahi thi "

" Sab janti hun tum kya puch rahi thi aur kya nahi... Result batayega tumhe hi kitni jarurat hai ab.. " Shruti man hi man soch rahi thi ki Nandini ka lecture khatam ho aur vo jaruri baat kar sake. " Jo aaj ka assignment diya hai vo mujhe complete chahie shruti and aaruhi u don't help her "

" yes miss.. " muskurate hue aaruhi boli jise dekh shruti aur jal-bhun gayi.

" Miss.. " tabhi ek ladke ki awaz ayi aur nandini uski taraf chal di aur shruti ne sans mein sans li.

" Badi hans rahi thi kamini.. " shruti turant boli.

" Dekh fir tujhe dant padegi.. ched mat.. " aaruhi apni hansi rokte hue bol rahi thi kyun ki shruti uski baju pakad kar uspar gul-guli karne lagi thi. " mat kar warna miss ko kahungi.. ruk nahi maan rahi na.. " aaruhi apne dayein aur nandini ko awaz lagane ki liye ghumi to paya ki Nandini usi ladke ke system par kuch dekh rahi thi jisne kuch help lene ke liye use bulaya tha. Aaruhi ki nazar us ladke par jami hui thi jiski nazar nandini ki sudol sarre ke andar dakhi chutadon par thi jo kabhi ek andar ki taraf jati to dusri bahar ki taraf nikalti aisa isliye ho raha tha kyun ki nandini sidhe nahi khadi reh paa rahi thi kabhi per ka ek ghutna modti to kabhi dusra jiski wajah se piche se uski chutadein khel-pradarshan kar rahi thi. Uske sath usne pehni selevless blouse jiski wajah se uska kandha us ladke se matr do inch ki duri par hi raha hoga. Us ladke ki shakal par tha ki vo kaise nandini ki khusbu mein utra hua hai. Uski nazar kabhi blouse ke andar jhank kar uske chatiyun ko dekhne ke liye tadapti aur jab wahan kamyabi nahi milti to uski sudon chutdon ko dekhne lagti.

" Aisi nazron se dekh raha hai mano abhi Miss ko lekar pel de " aaruhi ne us ladki ki mansha ko samjhte hue bola.

" Yani murder.. oouuu.. " shruti jo uske bagal se apna chehra nikal us taraf dekh rahi thi tapak se boli.

" Hat.. chutiya aurat... Pel matlab ... ladke ki laar dekh kaise nikal rahi hai.. vo to abhi.. khuli ankhon se hi Miss ko chodd... " aaruhi bas itna hi boli aur usne shruti ki taraf dekha jo use fatti ankhon se dekh rahi thi. Aaruhi ne fauran apni nazar uspar se hata kar computer screen par kiya ki tabhi 'chaataaakkkkk' jabardast zor pure lab mein gunj utha. Aaruhi aur shruti ki nazar to us taraf ghumi hi balki sabhi bache apni seat se uth kar us taraf dekhne lage. Awaz wahin usi ladke ki taraf se ayi thi jahan par nandini khadi thi. Kisi ko ye to nai pata chala ki thapad kyun pada par ladke ka hath gal par dekh ye sabko yakeen tha ki pada isi ko hai.

" After lab... meet me in my office... " Nandini gusse mein bolti hui wahan se apni jagah par jaa baithi. Uske gaal gusse se fulhe hue the. Shruti ne man hi man us ladke ki tarrif kari kyun ki vo yahi chahti thi ki nandini yahan wahan na tehle warna vo baat nahi kar payegi ab bhale hi isme us ladke ka suspend hona tay tha lekin kya farak padta hai hone do. Shruti sochte hue sidhe hokar baith gayi.

" Lagta hai ladke se raha nahi gaya.. " shruti apni hansi ko hath se chupate hue boli.

" Mene pehle hi kaha tha.. us ladke ki ankhon mein se hi jhalak raha tha... "

" Par aisa usne kya kiya hoga? Tere chakar mein miss ho gaya... mujhse.. "

" Hath laga diya hoga pakka.. "

" Par daring dekh rahi hai ladke ki "

" Ise daring nahi tharak kehte hai.... aur agar ye baat badi to ladka to gaya ... "

" ladkon ki to jaat yahi hoti hai.. inko sirf ek hi chiz chahie hoti hai tu vo chhod.... "

" aaj badi ladkon ki burai kar rahi hai kya baat hai? " eyebrows ko uppar utha kar sawal karti hui aaruhi ne shruti ki taraf dekha.

" Burai nahi sachai.. isliye seriously nahi leti main inhe.. ab tu sun rahi hai jaruri baat.. kab se bol rahi hun "

" to bol na.. mene kaun si teri chuchiyan pakad li hai.. " aaruhi ki boli shruti ko hairan kar rahi thi.

" Tujhe mera ek kaam karna hai "

" Main vo nahi karungi jo tu cha rahi hai "

" tujhe kaise pata main kya chahti hun? " hairani mein vo boli.

" ulta sidha kaam hi bolegi isliye kaha main kuch nahi karne wali.. pata nahi kahin fir se bra penty mein keh de chlane ko "

Shruti ne ek gehri sans chhodi " Tu sun na.. jaisa tu soch rahi hai waisa kuch nahi karna.. tujhe bas itna karna hai ki .. sham ko jab counting hogi hostel mein to tujhe meri absence sambhalni hai, itna chota sa hi kaam hai.. "

" Ek minute.. matlab tu keh rahi hai ki tu hostel mein nahi hogi aur tu chahti hai ki main ye keh dun ki tu hai? "

" Right.. samjhdar.. meri baton ko dubara dohrane ke liye shukriya... dumb.. "

" Tu pagal hai? Ye kitna risky ho sakta hai.. tu kya chahti hai tere sath main bhi ghar chali jaun? Yahi chahti hai na tu? "

" itna over-react kyun kar rahi hai.. tujhe bas thodi der ke liye hi sambhalna hai.. uske baad to main aa hi jaungi na... "

" Par kaise? "

" Vo main aa jaungi.. tu uski fikar mat kar.. "

" vo nahi soch rahi main.. vo tu jaan kaise ayegi "

" dost ho to tere jaise.. farak hi nahi padta .. "

" main kaise sambhalungi vo bol rahi hun? "

" tere pas jawani hai.. tu kya kya nahi sambhal sakti ye bata "

" ab kya us counting wale ke sath bistar par lait jaun is chakar mein.. "

" Fir to roz jaa paungi mein bahar... wahh.. nice idea.. i don't have any problem " Shruti ki baat sun aaruhi ne shruti ki chuntti kaat di.

" Uii maa... behenchod....gand par kaun chuntii katta hai.. sali kamini kutiya.. " shruti ne apni chutdon ko malte hue kaha.

" sorry.. vo kamar ki jagah hath fisal gaya "

" salii kutia.. mera fisal jayega kisi din ... ayii maa.. dard kar dia.. " ruanse gale se vo boli.

" Tujhe waise jana kidhar hai raat ko? " aaruhi ne shaq ki nighaon se use pucha.

" Tujhe pata to hai.. kahan jaungi main... " shruti ne turant muskurata chehra samne kar dia.

" Tharak.. Tharak.... ek din teri tharak tujhpar bhari padegi.. jaise us ladke par padi hai.. "

" Tharak hi to jeevan hai... kabhi na kabhi to har koi hota hai.. agar nahi hue hote to tu main paida nahi hue hote na... samjhi... " shruti ne apne kandhe se aaruhi ke kandhe ko marte hue kaha.

" Chhiii aurat hai tu.. dekhungi.. ho paya to theek.. warna keh dungi tu bahar hai... "

" Han chal theek hai kosish kar lio... " shruti janti thi ki aaruhi jaise marzi gussa dikhaye par vo uspar koi musibat nahi ane degi. Isliye use befikri thi.. ab jane ka intezam ho gaya tha. Ane ka kuch socha nahi tha isliye ab vo shant ho gayi thi. Lab se nikalte hi Nandini us ladke ko apne sath le gayi.

" Mausam dekh kaise palat gaya.. din mein itni garmi thi ki pasine se bura haal ho gaya tha ... " shruti ne bahar ka mausam dekhte hue kaha.

" Aisa kya kaam kar rahi thi dhoop mein? "

" dd..dhoop kab bola... mene to garmi kaha hai.. ab dekh kaise thandi hawa chal rahi hai.. aaah maza hi aa jayega " shruti ne chehra aaruhi ki taraf se hata kar samne dekhte hue kaha.

" Ab chalein.. class ke liye.. "

" han chal.. mene kaun sa roka hai.. "

Din ki dhoop ko badlon ne gher liya tha, garam hawa ko andhi ne apni chapet mein le liya tha. Badal itne ghane aur kalle ho chale the ki sham ko hi raat jaisa anubhav hone laga tha. Mitti ke sath packet paper sab ud kar idhar-udhar jaa rahe the. Ped ki tehniyan tut kar gir jane ko ho rahi thi. Ankhon mein ghusti mitti, jism se chipakte kapde aur tufan mein fanse hone ka ek alag ehsas. College mein pehra de rahe security guards ko bhi dikkat ho rahi thi. Classes khali ho chuki thi aur naye rule ke mutabik class khali hone ke baad police dwara check ki jane lagi thi. Kuch bache ground mein the to kuch library mein aur kuch college ke bahar dera jamaye hue the jinpar college walon ki taraf se koi pratibhand nahi tha. Par college notice ke anusar sabhi ko ye suchna de di gayi thi ki andhera hone se pehle sabhi bache apne ghar ya fir hostel ke andar pahunch jaye. Shruti janti thi ki checking pure floor par har jagah hogi isliye chupna behad hi mushkil hone wala tha. Isliye usne tarkeeb bana rakhi thi aur mausam ki wajah se uska kaam asan ho raha tha.Vo ground floor ke washroom mein ghusi hui thi jiski checking abhi college ki mahila staff ne hi ki thi aur bahar khade police walon ko itlah kar diya tha ki andar koi nahi hai. Shruti pehle se janti thi kyun ki kuch dino se aisa ho raha tha, recent mauton ne to aur chokasi badha di thi isliye vo washroom check hone se pehle dusre floor par thi jahan ke police wale ne use jane ko kaha tha. Vo janti thi ki niche ki checking ho chuki hogi kyun ki aam tor par ground floor wale washroom mein students ka jana allowed nahi tha. Usko college ki faculty hi use karti thi.

Shruti andar washroom mein ke ek cabin se nikal kar bahar ayi aur washroom ka darwaja halka khol kar bahar ki taraf dekha. Do police wale wahin samne khade tuffan ko jhelte hue apas mein baat-chit kar rahe the. Uske pas samay kam tha kyun ki kisi bhi waqt washroom mein tala lagane wala peon ata hi hoga. Jo bari-bari se uppar walle floor se tala lagate hue ata hai aur sabse last mein ye washroom band hota hai wajah thi Faculty jo kai baar der tak kaam kiya karti thi. Mausam wakai kharab ho raha tha tez hawa ke sath bizli kadakne lagi thi. Shruti wahan khadi un dono ki batein sunne lagi taki use ye andaza ho jaye ki vo dono kab yahan se jayenge ya jayenge bhi ya nahi. Kyun ki agar vo nahi jane wale the to uske pas dusra plan bhi maujud tha lekin vo thoda risky tha ... Par jab ek ke baad ek minute beeta gaya to shruti ke dimag mein uska risky plan hi ghumne laga jise ab usko apnana padh sakta tha. Jisme use washroom ke uppar bani khidki mein se nikalna tha.. aur niche kudna tha jisme use chot lag sakti thi kyun ki deewar takreeban sath-ath feet ki thi. Uske baad use piche ki taraf se sabhi security walon se bachte hue samne ki taraf ana tha jahan chupne ki koi jagah bhi nahi thi. Dekhe jane par pakde jana tay tha aur agar vo wahan se bach kar kisi tarah aage aa gayi to hi college ke andar jakar vo director area mein jaa sakti thi. Par isme risk bahut jada tha.. Bahut jada kyun ki raat ki pehredari bahut jada hone wali thi.

" lagta hai baarish ab kisi bhi pal ati hogi..chalte hain... raincoat lakar pehen lete hai. raat bhar duty deni hai.. kapde gille ho gye to dikat ho jayegi " bahar ki awaz sun shruti hosh mein ayi.

" lekin abhi yahan sab par talla kahan laga hai... sahab ne kaha na jab tak sare talle check na ho jaye jana nahi hai "

" sahab to bistar par gand tikaye hukum dete hai fir biwi ko pelte hai aur do ghunt laga kar so jate hai.. hamara kya hai.. na chut na daru.. kismat ek dum jhantu.. "

" Hahaha... baat mein dum hai.. "

" to chal fir.. warna gille ho gaye to bimari ki chhutti bhi nahi milegi... "

" han chal " un dono ne ek dafa piche dekha jahan shruti ne fauran kiwad se hatt gayi aur fir vo dono wahan se chale gaye. Dono ke jatte hi shruti ne kiwad se sar bahar nikal kar dayein aur bayein dekha aur fir tezi se basement ki taraf daudi. Basement main badte hue vo bas yahi abhas karne ki kosish mein thi ki koi yahan maujud na ho. Chances kam the kyun ki dusri taraf channel wala gate tha jo band ho jaya karta tha sirf ek yahi rasta tha jisme koi gate nahi laga tha abhi tak kyun ki niche sports room tha aur aksar bache practice ke chalte saman lene aur rakhne ke liye sham tak aa jate the. Shruti sports room ke bahar khadi uska tala khol rahi thi jiski chabi usne class khatam hone ke baad vishal se le li thi aur uske alawa dono ke bich koi baat cheet nahi hui thi. Usne aaruhi ko us waqt akhri baar fir samjhaya tha aur hostel bhej diya tha.

Shruti ne tala khola, vo andar ayi aur andar atte hi usne kiwad ko andar se band kar liya. Andar ek dum ghup andhera tha, bahar ki tez hawa ke chalte kamre mein shor sirf un khidkiyun ka tha jo samne ki taraf lagi hui thi. Shruti ne light na jalane ka faisla kiya aur phone ki torch jala kar ek kone mein jaa baithi. Baithe sath hi usne chain ki sans li. Bathte sath hi use andhera chubne sa laga. Josh mein plan to bana liya lekin samay kaise katte ye usne socha hi nahi tha. Vo abhi samay katne ke bare mein sochti use pehle uska phone baj utha.

" shit.. phone silent karna bhool gayi... " usne fauran phone cut kiya aur turant phone ko silent kar diya itne mein dubara phone aane laga " ye ladki ek din ruk nahi sakti.. aisi kya aag lagi hai iski chut mein " usne Rachna ka phone fir kata aur whtsapp khol kar usne message dala " Can't talk right now. Will call you later " Usne sirf apna message dala aur uske kiye hue kai message par nazar nahi dali aur whtsapp band karte hue net bhi band kar diya. Socha to usne kuch aur tha samay katne ke liye lekin use malum tha ki agar phone ka net chalu raha to koi na koi ata rahega aur abhi vo kisi se baat karne ke mood mein nahi thi. Use raat ki jaldi thi. Use peon se milne ki jaldi thi. Use reh-reh kar ek romanch aa raha tha.

Sham ka samay tha subah se bhaga daud ke chalte thakan ho chuki thi. Kuch karne ko bhi nahi tha isliye baithe-baithe shruti ki ankh lag gayi. ' chaaannnnnnnnnnnn-tannnnnnnnnn' awaz sunte hi shruti ki ankh khuli. Ankhein ek dum fatti hui thi, dil itna zor se dhadak raha tha ki use 'dhadd-dhadd' karte hue sunai de raha tha. Sans itni zor se chal rahi thi ki mano ki abhi vo ukhad jayegi. Dar ne puri tarah se kabza kar liya tha. Jab vo dar se bahar nikli tab use 'sayeeinnn-sayeinnn' karti tez hawa sunai padi. Usne awaz ki disha mein apni nazar modi aur mobile ki torch jalai lekin us roshni mein jada kuch nahi dikha jitni duri tak dekh sakti thi. Par hawa udhar se hi aa rahi thi. Vo apni jagah se khadi hui aur us taraf aage badi, ek-do-teen-char-panch-che jitne kadam aage badhte utni utejna uske man mein uchal padti. Agla kadam rakha aur paya ki uske per mein kuch aya hai jo 'tudddd' karke tut gaya. Use samajhte der nahi lagi ki ye kanch hai jo tuta hai. Usne ek lambi shanti bhari sans chhodi. Jis wajah se uski nind tuti thi vo tez hawaon ke karran tuta hua kanch tha.

Shruti wapis apni jagah par ayi aur baith gayi. Baithe sath yaad aya ki torch band kar de, is thandi hawa mein nind achi aa rahi hai to aur so jaye thodi der. Usne phone uthaya aur torch band karne ke liye jaise hi badi uski nazar time par gayi " 8 baj gaye.. abhi to soi thi.. Ye behenchod nind bhi... baithe baithe gand maar deti hai... ' shruti fauran apni jagah se khadi hui aur bahut dhime se usne kiwad khol kar uspar tala lagaya aur dabe panv wahan se nikal gayi.
 

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romanchak update ..aaruhi to din ba din bold hoti jaa rahi hai ,shruti ne bahar rehne ke liye aaruhi se madad maangi jo usne kar hi di par pehle maja bhi liya shruti ka gandi baate karke 🤣.

akeli hi hai aaj shruti aur apne romanchak safar par hai ,vishal ne bhi aaj saath nahi diya uska siway chabiya dene ke .
kya akeli us peon se files haasil kar payegi shruti 🤔🤔..

us ladke ki najro ko aaruhi ne taad liya tha jo nandini ke jism ko dekh raha tha lalach bhari najro se 🤣🤣. par aisa kya kar diya us ladke ne ki thappad khani padi nandini se ,kahi touch to nahi kar diya nandni ko jawani ke josh me 😁😁.
 

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" tujhe chasma kab se lag gaya ? " shruti jisko badi mushkil se lab mein entry mili thi late hone ki wajah se usne aaruhi ke bagal mein baithte hi pucha jo computer mein code karne mein busy thi. Lab mein sabko apna kaam diya hua tha. Nandini do row ke bich mein bane corridor mein ghumti hui hath mein file ko padte hue ghum rahi thi.

" Ab tujhe ye bhi bataun ki roz subah kaun si kachi pehnu ha? " aaruhi ne bina uski taraf dekhe kaha.

" Vo bhi batayegi.. to main puri class ke ladkon mein faila dungi fir soch lio hehehe.. " shruti ne apna system on karte hue kaha. Aaruhi ne apna kaam roka aur ek pal ke liye use ghura.

" Kamini kahin ki.. " aaruhi fir apne kaam mein lag gayi.

" Ha.. kuch ladkon ka bhala ho jata.. waise sun.. mujhe tujhse kuch jaruri baat karni hai.. " shruti ne fusfuate hue aaruhi ke thoda najdeek jakar kaha.

" Baat karne ke liye mene tumhe entry nahi di.. " Aaruhi jawab deti use pehle piche se nandini ne shruti ko toka jiske tokte hi shruti sidhe baith gayi.

" Sorry miss.. vo aaruhi ki code samajhne ke liye hi use puch rahi thi "

" Sab janti hun tum kya puch rahi thi aur kya nahi... Result batayega tumhe hi kitni jarurat hai ab.. " Shruti man hi man soch rahi thi ki Nandini ka lecture khatam ho aur vo jaruri baat kar sake. " Jo aaj ka assignment diya hai vo mujhe complete chahie shruti and aaruhi u don't help her "

" yes miss.. " muskurate hue aaruhi boli jise dekh shruti aur jal-bhun gayi.

" Miss.. " tabhi ek ladke ki awaz ayi aur nandini uski taraf chal di aur shruti ne sans mein sans li.

" Badi hans rahi thi kamini.. " shruti turant boli.

" Dekh fir tujhe dant padegi.. ched mat.. " aaruhi apni hansi rokte hue bol rahi thi kyun ki shruti uski baju pakad kar uspar gul-guli karne lagi thi. " mat kar warna miss ko kahungi.. ruk nahi maan rahi na.. " aaruhi apne dayein aur nandini ko awaz lagane ki liye ghumi to paya ki Nandini usi ladke ke system par kuch dekh rahi thi jisne kuch help lene ke liye use bulaya tha. Aaruhi ki nazar us ladke par jami hui thi jiski nazar nandini ki sudol sarre ke andar dakhi chutadon par thi jo kabhi ek andar ki taraf jati to dusri bahar ki taraf nikalti aisa isliye ho raha tha kyun ki nandini sidhe nahi khadi reh paa rahi thi kabhi per ka ek ghutna modti to kabhi dusra jiski wajah se piche se uski chutadein khel-pradarshan kar rahi thi. Uske sath usne pehni selevless blouse jiski wajah se uska kandha us ladke se matr do inch ki duri par hi raha hoga. Us ladke ki shakal par tha ki vo kaise nandini ki khusbu mein utra hua hai. Uski nazar kabhi blouse ke andar jhank kar uske chatiyun ko dekhne ke liye tadapti aur jab wahan kamyabi nahi milti to uski sudon chutdon ko dekhne lagti.

" Aisi nazron se dekh raha hai mano abhi Miss ko lekar pel de " aaruhi ne us ladki ki mansha ko samjhte hue bola.

" Yani murder.. oouuu.. " shruti jo uske bagal se apna chehra nikal us taraf dekh rahi thi tapak se boli.

" Hat.. chutiya aurat... Pel matlab ... ladke ki laar dekh kaise nikal rahi hai.. vo to abhi.. khuli ankhon se hi Miss ko chodd... " aaruhi bas itna hi boli aur usne shruti ki taraf dekha jo use fatti ankhon se dekh rahi thi. Aaruhi ne fauran apni nazar uspar se hata kar computer screen par kiya ki tabhi 'chaataaakkkkk' jabardast zor pure lab mein gunj utha. Aaruhi aur shruti ki nazar to us taraf ghumi hi balki sabhi bache apni seat se uth kar us taraf dekhne lage. Awaz wahin usi ladke ki taraf se ayi thi jahan par nandini khadi thi. Kisi ko ye to nai pata chala ki thapad kyun pada par ladke ka hath gal par dekh ye sabko yakeen tha ki pada isi ko hai.

" After lab... meet me in my office... " Nandini gusse mein bolti hui wahan se apni jagah par jaa baithi. Uske gaal gusse se fulhe hue the. Shruti ne man hi man us ladke ki tarrif kari kyun ki vo yahi chahti thi ki nandini yahan wahan na tehle warna vo baat nahi kar payegi ab bhale hi isme us ladke ka suspend hona tay tha lekin kya farak padta hai hone do. Shruti sochte hue sidhe hokar baith gayi.

" Lagta hai ladke se raha nahi gaya.. " shruti apni hansi ko hath se chupate hue boli.

" Mene pehle hi kaha tha.. us ladke ki ankhon mein se hi jhalak raha tha... "

" Par aisa usne kya kiya hoga? Tere chakar mein miss ho gaya... mujhse.. "

" Hath laga diya hoga pakka.. "

" Par daring dekh rahi hai ladke ki "

" Ise daring nahi tharak kehte hai.... aur agar ye baat badi to ladka to gaya ... "

" ladkon ki to jaat yahi hoti hai.. inko sirf ek hi chiz chahie hoti hai tu vo chhod.... "

" aaj badi ladkon ki burai kar rahi hai kya baat hai? " eyebrows ko uppar utha kar sawal karti hui aaruhi ne shruti ki taraf dekha.

" Burai nahi sachai.. isliye seriously nahi leti main inhe.. ab tu sun rahi hai jaruri baat.. kab se bol rahi hun "

" to bol na.. mene kaun si teri chuchiyan pakad li hai.. " aaruhi ki boli shruti ko hairan kar rahi thi.

" Tujhe mera ek kaam karna hai "

" Main vo nahi karungi jo tu cha rahi hai "

" tujhe kaise pata main kya chahti hun? " hairani mein vo boli.

" ulta sidha kaam hi bolegi isliye kaha main kuch nahi karne wali.. pata nahi kahin fir se bra penty mein keh de chlane ko "

Shruti ne ek gehri sans chhodi " Tu sun na.. jaisa tu soch rahi hai waisa kuch nahi karna.. tujhe bas itna karna hai ki .. sham ko jab counting hogi hostel mein to tujhe meri absence sambhalni hai, itna chota sa hi kaam hai.. "

" Ek minute.. matlab tu keh rahi hai ki tu hostel mein nahi hogi aur tu chahti hai ki main ye keh dun ki tu hai? "

" Right.. samjhdar.. meri baton ko dubara dohrane ke liye shukriya... dumb.. "

" Tu pagal hai? Ye kitna risky ho sakta hai.. tu kya chahti hai tere sath main bhi ghar chali jaun? Yahi chahti hai na tu? "

" itna over-react kyun kar rahi hai.. tujhe bas thodi der ke liye hi sambhalna hai.. uske baad to main aa hi jaungi na... "

" Par kaise? "

" Vo main aa jaungi.. tu uski fikar mat kar.. "

" vo nahi soch rahi main.. vo tu jaan kaise ayegi "

" dost ho to tere jaise.. farak hi nahi padta .. "

" main kaise sambhalungi vo bol rahi hun? "

" tere pas jawani hai.. tu kya kya nahi sambhal sakti ye bata "

" ab kya us counting wale ke sath bistar par lait jaun is chakar mein.. "

" Fir to roz jaa paungi mein bahar... wahh.. nice idea.. i don't have any problem " Shruti ki baat sun aaruhi ne shruti ki chuntti kaat di.

" Uii maa... behenchod....gand par kaun chuntii katta hai.. sali kamini kutiya.. " shruti ne apni chutdon ko malte hue kaha.

" sorry.. vo kamar ki jagah hath fisal gaya "

" salii kutia.. mera fisal jayega kisi din ... ayii maa.. dard kar dia.. " ruanse gale se vo boli.

" Tujhe waise jana kidhar hai raat ko? " aaruhi ne shaq ki nighaon se use pucha.

" Tujhe pata to hai.. kahan jaungi main... " shruti ne turant muskurata chehra samne kar dia.

" Tharak.. Tharak.... ek din teri tharak tujhpar bhari padegi.. jaise us ladke par padi hai.. "

" Tharak hi to jeevan hai... kabhi na kabhi to har koi hota hai.. agar nahi hue hote to tu main paida nahi hue hote na... samjhi... " shruti ne apne kandhe se aaruhi ke kandhe ko marte hue kaha.

" Chhiii aurat hai tu.. dekhungi.. ho paya to theek.. warna keh dungi tu bahar hai... "

" Han chal theek hai kosish kar lio... " shruti janti thi ki aaruhi jaise marzi gussa dikhaye par vo uspar koi musibat nahi ane degi. Isliye use befikri thi.. ab jane ka intezam ho gaya tha. Ane ka kuch socha nahi tha isliye ab vo shant ho gayi thi. Lab se nikalte hi Nandini us ladke ko apne sath le gayi.

" Mausam dekh kaise palat gaya.. din mein itni garmi thi ki pasine se bura haal ho gaya tha ... " shruti ne bahar ka mausam dekhte hue kaha.

" Aisa kya kaam kar rahi thi dhoop mein? "

" dd..dhoop kab bola... mene to garmi kaha hai.. ab dekh kaise thandi hawa chal rahi hai.. aaah maza hi aa jayega " shruti ne chehra aaruhi ki taraf se hata kar samne dekhte hue kaha.

" Ab chalein.. class ke liye.. "

" han chal.. mene kaun sa roka hai.. "

Din ki dhoop ko badlon ne gher liya tha, garam hawa ko andhi ne apni chapet mein le liya tha. Badal itne ghane aur kalle ho chale the ki sham ko hi raat jaisa anubhav hone laga tha. Mitti ke sath packet paper sab ud kar idhar-udhar jaa rahe the. Ped ki tehniyan tut kar gir jane ko ho rahi thi. Ankhon mein ghusti mitti, jism se chipakte kapde aur tufan mein fanse hone ka ek alag ehsas. College mein pehra de rahe security guards ko bhi dikkat ho rahi thi. Classes khali ho chuki thi aur naye rule ke mutabik class khali hone ke baad police dwara check ki jane lagi thi. Kuch bache ground mein the to kuch library mein aur kuch college ke bahar dera jamaye hue the jinpar college walon ki taraf se koi pratibhand nahi tha. Par college notice ke anusar sabhi ko ye suchna de di gayi thi ki andhera hone se pehle sabhi bache apne ghar ya fir hostel ke andar pahunch jaye. Shruti janti thi ki checking pure floor par har jagah hogi isliye chupna behad hi mushkil hone wala tha. Isliye usne tarkeeb bana rakhi thi aur mausam ki wajah se uska kaam asan ho raha tha.Vo ground floor ke washroom mein ghusi hui thi jiski checking abhi college ki mahila staff ne hi ki thi aur bahar khade police walon ko itlah kar diya tha ki andar koi nahi hai. Shruti pehle se janti thi kyun ki kuch dino se aisa ho raha tha, recent mauton ne to aur chokasi badha di thi isliye vo washroom check hone se pehle dusre floor par thi jahan ke police wale ne use jane ko kaha tha. Vo janti thi ki niche ki checking ho chuki hogi kyun ki aam tor par ground floor wale washroom mein students ka jana allowed nahi tha. Usko college ki faculty hi use karti thi.

Shruti andar washroom mein ke ek cabin se nikal kar bahar ayi aur washroom ka darwaja halka khol kar bahar ki taraf dekha. Do police wale wahin samne khade tuffan ko jhelte hue apas mein baat-chit kar rahe the. Uske pas samay kam tha kyun ki kisi bhi waqt washroom mein tala lagane wala peon ata hi hoga. Jo bari-bari se uppar walle floor se tala lagate hue ata hai aur sabse last mein ye washroom band hota hai wajah thi Faculty jo kai baar der tak kaam kiya karti thi. Mausam wakai kharab ho raha tha tez hawa ke sath bizli kadakne lagi thi. Shruti wahan khadi un dono ki batein sunne lagi taki use ye andaza ho jaye ki vo dono kab yahan se jayenge ya jayenge bhi ya nahi. Kyun ki agar vo nahi jane wale the to uske pas dusra plan bhi maujud tha lekin vo thoda risky tha ... Par jab ek ke baad ek minute beeta gaya to shruti ke dimag mein uska risky plan hi ghumne laga jise ab usko apnana padh sakta tha. Jisme use washroom ke uppar bani khidki mein se nikalna tha.. aur niche kudna tha jisme use chot lag sakti thi kyun ki deewar takreeban sath-ath feet ki thi. Uske baad use piche ki taraf se sabhi security walon se bachte hue samne ki taraf ana tha jahan chupne ki koi jagah bhi nahi thi. Dekhe jane par pakde jana tay tha aur agar vo wahan se bach kar kisi tarah aage aa gayi to hi college ke andar jakar vo director area mein jaa sakti thi. Par isme risk bahut jada tha.. Bahut jada kyun ki raat ki pehredari bahut jada hone wali thi.

" lagta hai baarish ab kisi bhi pal ati hogi..chalte hain... raincoat lakar pehen lete hai. raat bhar duty deni hai.. kapde gille ho gye to dikat ho jayegi " bahar ki awaz sun shruti hosh mein ayi.

" lekin abhi yahan sab par talla kahan laga hai... sahab ne kaha na jab tak sare talle check na ho jaye jana nahi hai "

" sahab to bistar par gand tikaye hukum dete hai fir biwi ko pelte hai aur do ghunt laga kar so jate hai.. hamara kya hai.. na chut na daru.. kismat ek dum jhantu.. "

" Hahaha... baat mein dum hai.. "

" to chal fir.. warna gille ho gaye to bimari ki chhutti bhi nahi milegi... "

" han chal " un dono ne ek dafa piche dekha jahan shruti ne fauran kiwad se hatt gayi aur fir vo dono wahan se chale gaye. Dono ke jatte hi shruti ne kiwad se sar bahar nikal kar dayein aur bayein dekha aur fir tezi se basement ki taraf daudi. Basement main badte hue vo bas yahi abhas karne ki kosish mein thi ki koi yahan maujud na ho. Chances kam the kyun ki dusri taraf channel wala gate tha jo band ho jaya karta tha sirf ek yahi rasta tha jisme koi gate nahi laga tha abhi tak kyun ki niche sports room tha aur aksar bache practice ke chalte saman lene aur rakhne ke liye sham tak aa jate the. Shruti sports room ke bahar khadi uska tala khol rahi thi jiski chabi usne class khatam hone ke baad vishal se le li thi aur uske alawa dono ke bich koi baat cheet nahi hui thi. Usne aaruhi ko us waqt akhri baar fir samjhaya tha aur hostel bhej diya tha.

Shruti ne tala khola, vo andar ayi aur andar atte hi usne kiwad ko andar se band kar liya. Andar ek dum ghup andhera tha, bahar ki tez hawa ke chalte kamre mein shor sirf un khidkiyun ka tha jo samne ki taraf lagi hui thi. Shruti ne light na jalane ka faisla kiya aur phone ki torch jala kar ek kone mein jaa baithi. Baithe sath hi usne chain ki sans li. Bathte sath hi use andhera chubne sa laga. Josh mein plan to bana liya lekin samay kaise katte ye usne socha hi nahi tha. Vo abhi samay katne ke bare mein sochti use pehle uska phone baj utha.

" shit.. phone silent karna bhool gayi... " usne fauran phone cut kiya aur turant phone ko silent kar diya itne mein dubara phone aane laga " ye ladki ek din ruk nahi sakti.. aisi kya aag lagi hai iski chut mein " usne Rachna ka phone fir kata aur whtsapp khol kar usne message dala " Can't talk right now. Will call you later " Usne sirf apna message dala aur uske kiye hue kai message par nazar nahi dali aur whtsapp band karte hue net bhi band kar diya. Socha to usne kuch aur tha samay katne ke liye lekin use malum tha ki agar phone ka net chalu raha to koi na koi ata rahega aur abhi vo kisi se baat karne ke mood mein nahi thi. Use raat ki jaldi thi. Use peon se milne ki jaldi thi. Use reh-reh kar ek romanch aa raha tha.

Sham ka samay tha subah se bhaga daud ke chalte thakan ho chuki thi. Kuch karne ko bhi nahi tha isliye baithe-baithe shruti ki ankh lag gayi. ' chaaannnnnnnnnnnn-tannnnnnnnnn' awaz sunte hi shruti ki ankh khuli. Ankhein ek dum fatti hui thi, dil itna zor se dhadak raha tha ki use 'dhadd-dhadd' karte hue sunai de raha tha. Sans itni zor se chal rahi thi ki mano ki abhi vo ukhad jayegi. Dar ne puri tarah se kabza kar liya tha. Jab vo dar se bahar nikli tab use 'sayeeinnn-sayeinnn' karti tez hawa sunai padi. Usne awaz ki disha mein apni nazar modi aur mobile ki torch jalai lekin us roshni mein jada kuch nahi dikha jitni duri tak dekh sakti thi. Par hawa udhar se hi aa rahi thi. Vo apni jagah se khadi hui aur us taraf aage badi, ek-do-teen-char-panch-che jitne kadam aage badhte utni utejna uske man mein uchal padti. Agla kadam rakha aur paya ki uske per mein kuch aya hai jo 'tudddd' karke tut gaya. Use samajhte der nahi lagi ki ye kanch hai jo tuta hai. Usne ek lambi shanti bhari sans chhodi. Jis wajah se uski nind tuti thi vo tez hawaon ke karran tuta hua kanch tha.

Shruti wapis apni jagah par ayi aur baith gayi. Baithe sath yaad aya ki torch band kar de, is thandi hawa mein nind achi aa rahi hai to aur so jaye thodi der. Usne phone uthaya aur torch band karne ke liye jaise hi badi uski nazar time par gayi " 8 baj gaye.. abhi to soi thi.. Ye behenchod nind bhi... baithe baithe gand maar deti hai... ' shruti fauran apni jagah se khadi hui aur bahut dhime se usne kiwad khol kar uspar tala lagaya aur dabe panv wahan se nikal gayi.
Aaruhi ka behaviour abhi bhi ajeeb hi hai... Uski baaton aur harkaton mein tharak saaf jhalak rahi hai aur ye Aaruhi jo is update mein thi ye wo Aaruhi bilkul nahi hai jise us Band pade Girls Hostel se Shruti/Vishal/Gagan ne rescue kiya tha... Kahaan wo Shruti ki boyfriend aur sex related baaton par use achha khaasa suna diya karti thi aur kahaan ab uski khud ki baatein, Shruti se bhi ek kadam aage badh chali hain... Agar hypnosis/zac ko Aaruhi ke Catatonic Schizophrenia ki wajah maan bhi liya jaaye, fir bhi uski personality mein is sudden badlaav ko justify karna mushkil hai... Khair, mujhe to ab bhi yahi lagta hai ke Kalpana (Nimisha) aur Ravina, inhi dono ladkiyon se judi hai wo wajah jiske chalte wo masoom Aaruhi tharki ban chuki hai :rofl:...

Idhar Nandini ko taadne ke chakkar mein ek launda apne daant tudwa baitha... Is baar par bhi Aaruhi ka reaction aur uske reaction oar Shruti ka reaction, dekhne laayak tha... Par ye raaz ab bhi raaz hi hai ke aakhir us launde ne aisa kya kiya jiske chalte suspend hone ki naubat aan padi hai... Janta jaan na chahti hai Harshit bhai :D...

Police ki chauksi bhi badhayi jaa chuki hai aur aise mein Shruti ka Mansion tak pahunchne behad mushkil hona hi tha... At least, Aaruhi uski fake attendance lagwane mein to madad kar hi degi... Par kya pata wo khud bhi waapis us Girls Hostel mein naa chali jaaye :hspin... Shruti pehle washroom aur fir Sports Room mein chhupi thi... Well, uska luck achha tha ke wo hawaldar wahaan se chale gaye anyatha jis tarah ke risk ki vyakhya wahaan ki gayi thi...

Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ke Shruti Mansion tak pahunch paayegi ya nahi? Agar haan, to kya wo Peon wahaan aayega, ya fir usne kisi ke aage apna munh khol diya hoga? Vishal surprisingly Shruti ki help ko aayega ya nahi? Rachna kyon baar – baar Shruti ko call kar rahi hai, Maybe wo bhi kisi musibat mein fans chuki ho? Let's see ke aage kya hota hai...

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Umeed ke anusar bahar mausam kaffi kharab tha, tez hawaon ke sath 'kaadd-kadddd' zor-dar bizli chamak rahi thi. Baarish shuru ho chuki thi jiski raftar tezz nhi thi lekin achi baras rahi thi. Us shanti mein uska shor gunj raha tha. Shruti ki nazar kisi ke na hone ka abhas karte hue use aage badha rahi thi. Chalte hue vo apne charon taraf dekh rahi thi kahin se kisi bhi tarah ka koi bhi risk nahi lena cha rahi thi. Rasta jada lamba nahi tha, sidiyun se uppar, thoda sa corridor aur pahunch gayi vo director area mein. Wahan pahunch kar vo ek pal ke liye ek deewar ke sahare khadi ho gayi jab wahan use kisi ke bhi na hone ka abhas hua to wahan se vo water cooler walle raste ki taraf chal padi. Us galyare tak pahunchne mein vo hanf gayi thi, pakde jane ka dar thakan se jada bada hota hai. Galyare tak ka rasta jada dur nahi tha lekin is ratri ke andhere mein har waqt kisi ki ankhein apne par gaddi ho aisa abhas raste ko lamba kara deta hai wahi shruti mehsus kar rahi thi. Jaise hi vo galyare mein pahunchi usne lambi sans bhari kyun ki ab vo janti thi ki yahan se uska pakde jana mumkin nahi tha. Vo galiyare ke andar ghusi aur jaise hi galyara muda usne phone ki torch jala di. Use laga tha vo peon wahin khada na mil jaye lekin wahan koi nahi tha. Vo fauran water-cooler ke pas ayi aur jaise vishal ne aaj subah use aage ki taraf dhakela tha use waise dhakelne lagi lekin ek hath mein pakde phone ki wajah se aisa ho nahi paa raha tha. Usne phone ko water cooler par rakha aur fir khincha tab bhi vo nahi khula.

" Ye to band hai.. sala madharchod abhi tak aya nahi kya.. gabad ho jayegi shruti.. Agar ye nah fansa to.. Kya karun wapis jaun kya? Nahi nahi.. kya soch rahi hai.. ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki use mauka nahi mila ho aur waise bhi abhi kaun sa 9 baje hai.. abhi to time hai.. par tab tak main yahan kya karun? Aur wo isi raste se ayega... ye bhi jaruri thodi hai.. " Sawalon ke mutbhed mein fansi shruti soch rahi thi ki vo kya kare. " Wait karti hun.. " usne intezar karne ka faisla kiya " Nahi.. vo nahi hoga mujhse... " par khud se hi haar maan gayi " jada mushkil nahi hoga ise kholna.. us din usne is walle tap par hi to kuch kiya tha.. karke dekhti hun.. " usne fauran tap daba dia jise pani nikalne laga. Uske mathe par bal aa gaya, usne dubara dabaya par natiza wahi nikla, mathe ka bal aur gehra gaya. Usne is baar tap ke aage hisse ko ghuma kar dabaya, natiza fir wahi. " aise nahi khulega.. kuch aur hoga.... khufia raste ki chiz bhi khufia hogi... jise pani ki tanki mein bhala koi kyun chuhega... " shruti ne phone uthaya aur water-cooler ko dekhne lagi. Pehle uske uppar dekha jo steel ki plain plate thi jispar kuch nahi tha, fir tap ke niche waste water ki jo nali thi uske niche ke hisse mein dekha wahan bhi kuch nahi tha. Dono side dekhi wahan bhi kuch nahi tha. Charon taraf sirf steel plate aur kuch nahi.

" Ye kya rehasye hai... Soch shruti.. kuch to soch.. Badi budhiman hai tu.. sab kuch tu rach rahi hai aur raste ke gate ki chabi nahi khoj paa rahi.. soch... " shruti ki nazar bar-bar tap par jati aur uske niche waste water wale area mein jispar steel plate late thi aur uppar se nali ka ched tha jispar jali lagi thi. " Pani niklega to jayega bhi... rasta hai to darwaja khulega bhi.. Pani kahan jata hai... nali mein.. yani ek chhor se nikal kar dusre chhor mein.... Aur rasta.. bhi kuch-kuch aisa hi hota hai.... " usne nali ke uppar hath kar tap chalaya. Pani nikla aur wahin uske hath ke aas-pass jama ho gaya aur dhire-dhire nali mein chala gaya. Usne fauran hath hata liya, use laga tha mano koi jadu hoga.

" Kya bakwas soch rahi hun main... " shruti honth dant mein dabate hue sochne lagi. " Is water-cooler mein sabse jada jaruri kya hai? Pani.. Uski tanki .. cool karne wala system... tap.. nali... bas ... to kya pani ki tanki mein kuch hoga? nahi ... usko istemal karna muskhil hoga.. jisne bhi banaya hoga uske piche ki mansha to yahi hogi ki darwaja smartly khule mehnat karke nahi. Bas dimag ki jarurt hai.. " shruti soch-vichar mein khoyi hui thi. " Jaruri to har chiz hai isme par kaun si aisi chiz hai jo samne hai par koi use chuhega nahi... " Shruti ne sochte hue water-waste mein lagi nali ki jali ko uppar se khincha jo bahar aa gayi. Ab nali ka ched dikhai de raha tha, jali isliye lagi thi taki kachra na sake. Usne tap dabaya to pani nikal kar ched ke andar ghuste hue gayab ho gaya. Vo jo soch rahi thi use karte hue use ghin si aa rahi thi lekin majburi ko dekhte hue usne us ched mein do ungli daal di aur andar tatlone lagi. Use reh-reh kar ubkai aa rahi thi, na jane kitne baar thuka gaya hoga, jutha dala gaya hoga. Ye sab sochte hue jab use laga ki yahan kuch nahi hoga aur hath bahar nikalna hi sahi hoga tabhi uska ek hath kisi chiz par pada kya thi nahi samajh sakti thi. Par jab usne ungli se use aage piche kiya to vo khisak gaya. Ye patte hi usne fauran ek baar us chiz ko aage khiskaya aur dusre hath se tap dabaya, pani nikala aur nali se hote hue andar chala gaya. Usne us chiz ko ek dafa aur aage dhaka diya jiske baad usne tap dabaya par is baar pani nikla. Shruti ke mathe ka bal achanak se gayab ho gaya aur eyebrows chaudi ho gayi.

" Ata mazi kutriyaa.. " shruti ne nali se hath hataya aur jali wapis laga di. Usne tap ko wapis dabaya, use laga ab khul jayega lekin aisa hua nahi. " Abhi bhi kuch bacha hai? iski maa ki.. " usne dor se tap par hatheli maari jiski wajah se uske hatheli mein dard uth gaya " behenchod... " aur vo apna hath sehlani lagi. " Maa ki chu.... " vo itna hi boli ki use laga jaise usne abhi kuch miss kiya hai. Usne fauran apne dard ko bhulaya aur water-cooler ke kone ko pakad kar aage ki taraf khincha. " khul gaya.. bina maar ke koi nahi sunta is dunia mein.. harami dunia hai " shruti ne fauran apna phone uthaya aur ghus gayi andar. Andar ghusne ke baad usne water cooler ko band kar diya. Torch ki light jalaye rakhi aur aage badh chali. Andhere mein jane ka dum nahi tha usme vo bhi akele. Vo man ko yahi tassali de rahi thi ki koi dekhega hai nahi use to torch kyun band rakhna. Uski nazar bar-bar gufa ki deewaron par padh rahi thi jiski deewar koi sabut nahi thi balki ukhdi-tuti kahin kahin nokili bani hui thi. Vo aage to badh rahi thi lekin is samay use dar tha kide makaudon ka jo uske per ya hath par nahi gir jaye aur vo bichon bich isliye chal rahi thi ki kahin kisi deewar par koi rengti hui chiz uske hath ko na chuu le. Pehle vo dhimi chaal chal rahi thi lekin jaise jaise hawa ka pressure kam hone laga vo tez chalne lagi. Bahar mausam jitna marzi suhana tha lekin andar bhisad humas aur garmi thi. Uska top garden aur sine ke nikalte pasine se tar ho chuka tha. Us din to roshni ke andaze se samajh aa gaya tha ki rasta kitna bacha hai lekin is samay aisa kuch nahi tha. Vo chalti jaa rahi thi aur use bas yahi lag raha tha ki rasta khatam hi nahi hoga. Pasine ko hath se pochte hue bich-bich mein hanfte hue ghutne par hath rakh kar khada hona ab uske liye ye har chand minute ki baat ho gayi thi.

" bas aur nahi.. gi....gir jaungii... aahhhh... uffff.... hawa de do koi... " vo sans ki guhar laga rahi thi. Bas kisi tarah pahunch jane ki umeed thi. Kuch duri ke baad use laga jaise vo aage ki tarf gir jayegi. Ankhein halki halki band hone lagi. Samne ka rasta dhundla hota gaya aur jab sharir girne ko hua to bachav mein hath aage ki taraf gaya jiske jatte hi jab hath samne pada to dimag ne jaise ek sanket de diya aur uski ankhein puri khul gayi.

" sidiyan...aahh... " sharir mein chusti aa gayi. Usne phone adha pocket mein dala taki phone ki roshni ati rahe aur vo sidiyan chadne lagi. Sidiyan chadte hi jab vo uppar pahunchi to usne paya ki uppar ka hissa band tha. Usne hath ki takat jitni thi sari laga di 'eeehhhhhhhhh aarghhh' par vo khula hi nahi. Shruti ki sans double fulh gayi. " Behenchod isliye ladka chahie tha.. " hanfte hue usne sidiyan pakad li is baat ke dar se ki kahin chakar kha kar niche hi na gir jaye. " Nahi shruti.. girna nahi hai.. hath per ki haddi tut kar yahan apni akhri sans tak tadpegi aur fir teri langdi atma is guffa ke chakar lagayegi aur uspar movie banegi Langdi Chudail 'takk-takk' ke background music ke sath.. girna nahi hai koi lock hoga ispar dekhna padega.. " shruti ne phone nikala aur uppar ki taraf roshni dali. Kafi dhayan se dekhne ke baad use lock dikha.

" To ye kunda fansa hai.. " usne ek hath se phone pakde pakde hi us kunde ki taraf dusra hath badha diya is umeed ki vo uski pahunch mein hai lekin aisa bilkul nahi tha jiski wajah se uska balance biga aur uske per sidiyun se fisal gaye." aaaaa...ucccchhhh.... " per fisalte hi vo sidi se ludki lekin usne turant hath se sidiyan pakad li aur agar vo aisa sahi waqt par na karti to uski hadiyan tutni tay thi. Usne ek pal ke liye khud ko sambhala aur phone ko muh mein daba kar roshni wala hissa uppar ki taraf daal dia. Fir peron ko sidiyun par sanp ki tarah lapeta aur aage ki taraf jhuki, ise girne ka dar kam ho gaya tha. Jhukte hi vo us liver ki tarah pahunch gayi jise use khinchna tha. Usne puri takat laga kar use piche ki taraf khincha. Vo kafi jada bhari aur lamba tha jise khinchne mein shruti ki jaan nikal gayi. Mathe se tapkata pasina jo uske phone ke camera par gir raha tha vo is baat ka jeeta jagta sabut tha. Usne liver piche khinch kar kunde se bahar kiya aur fir pura zor laga kar us hisse ko uppar ki taraf dhakela jo halka khula aur band ho gaya. " beehheenchhdddd... " mobile muh mein fanse hone ki wajah se uski awaz dabi hui nikli. Thoda aur takat vo jabde mein lagati to phone tut kar uske muh mein ghus gaya hota. Takat lagi to upar ka hissa is baar khula aur khulta gaya jiske khulte hi hawa ke sath tezz baarish ki bundein uske muh par padne lagi lekin vo ruki nahi aur akhir usne us hisse ko khol kar dusri taraf zameen par gira diya aur mobile muh se nikal kar zor-zor se sans lene lagi. Usko apni takat par garav hona chahie tha lekin uske muh se pehla vakaye gali ke roop mein nikla " vishal... betichod "

Shruti bahar ayi aur usne us hisse ko wapis band karne ke liye uthaya jo kafi bhari tha lekin usne aisa kiya warna pani bhar jata andar is baarish mein. Usne use giraya aur uppar se kunda jo same andar ke jaisa tha use laga diya jiske lagte hi andar wala kunda khud ba khud lag gaya. Itni takat lagane ke baad uske sharir mein thakan apne charam seema par thi. Usne apne charon taraf dekha jahan sirf jhadiyan thi, jhadiyun ke uppar tezz baarish ki bundon ki awaz padh rahi thi. Ek pal khade rehne ke baad usne apna top piche se uthaya aur jo stall wahan chupa rakha tha use apne chehre par bandh liya jaise us din bandha tha. Sirf ankhein hi chehre par dikhai de rahi thi aur agar bhagwan ne banwat mein bahar nikla hua sina nahi diya hota to koi nahi bata pata ki samne ladka khada hai ya ladki. Stall pehnne ke sath hi vo wahan se aage badh gayi aur mansion ke pas jahan pahunchi.

Mansion andhkar mein duba hua tha, itni tez baarish ke bavajud aisa lag raha tha ki kitni shanti ho us mansion mein. Vo ek pal uppar khidki ki taraf dekhti rahi mano kuch dekhna chahti ho aur fir uski taraf badh chali. Mansion ke najdeek pahunchne ke baad vo ek kona pakad kar wahan baith gayi. Baarish sidhi thi isliye uspar ab nahi padh rahi thi. Uski nazar samne thi aur dur se use is taraf koi dekh nahi sakta tha. Baithte sath hi usne phone nikala, time dekha 8:45 ho chuke the. Usne fauran 'Aaruhi' ko phone laga diya, jispar ring jati rahi, jati rahi aur phone cut ho gaya. " Ye phone kyun nahi utha rahi? Kahin isko fir se to koi daura nahi pada? " shruti ne khud se hi kaha. Usne dubara milaya aur is baar bhi ring jati rahi lekin phone nahi utha. " behenchod agar aaj isne koi hungama kiya to paka ye meri kahani bigadegi "

" tu phone kyun nahi utha rahi thi " shruti ne aaruhi ka phone uthati hi use pucha. Takreeban panch minute baad aaruhi ka phone aya tha aur tab tak shruti ne bahut si kahaniyan bana di thi aaruhi ko lekar jisme ek kahani ye bhi thi ki aaruhi ne kahin warden ka gala daba diya ho.

" naha rahi thi "

" itni baarish mein bhi garmi lag rahi hai tujhe "

" baarish mein naha rahi thi to change karne ke liye washroom gayi hui thi "

" tere shauk bhi ajeeb hai teri tarah "

" tere shauk kaun sa ajeeb nahi hai... "

" vo sab chhod, ye bata counting hui "

" nahi abhi tak to koi nahi aya "

" acha.. waise teri awaz itni alag kaise lag rahi hai "

" Kyun ki mene muh mein liya tha isliye heheheh "

" hain? " shruti hairani mein bol padi. Usne phone speaker par rakha hua tha isliye awaz clear aa rahi thi.

" Kya hain? tujhe sab kuch ajeeb lagta hai mera.. "

" Lagega hi.. tu bas ye bata ki.. " shruti itna hi boli ki aaruhi ne rok dia.

" Koi aya .. ruk kuch bolio nahi.. " aaruhi ne itna kaha aur chup ho gayi. Ek pal shruti yun hi baithi rahi, use awaz aa rahi thi ki kamre ka darwaja khula hai aur aaruhi samne wale se baat kar rahi hai. Use awaz sun samajh aa gaya ki samne wala Bihari hai jo hostel mein ladkiyun ki counting karne nikla hai.

" dusri madam kidhar hai " vo apni awaz mein bola jispar aaruhi ki koi awaz nahi ayi.

" bol aaruhi.. marwayegi.. kuch socha nahi tune.. " shruti bol padi aur tab use dhayan aya ki phone ka mic mute nahi tha jise usne fauran mute kiya. " aaruhi nahi mujhe lagta hai khud ki gand main khud hi tudwaungi.. "

" Vo bathroom mein hai " aaruhi turant boli jise shruti ne saaf suna.

" Ye pakka marwayegi mujhe.. " shruti ne apna sar pit liya.

" bathroom mein hai.. lekin bathroom ka to lock hi nahi laga hua " bihari ne aaruhi ko jawab diya.

" pakka mari ab main.. is ladki se ek kaam nahi hota.. " shruti man hi man aaruhi ko galiya dene lagi.

" To kya ? hum ladkiyan bathroom khol kar nahi use kar sakti? " aaruhi ne jawab dia.

" acha... " bihari bol kar ek bar chup hua " to main rukta hun.. jab aa jayegi tab jaunga " bihari ki baat sun shruti ko laga ki ab khel khatam.

" acha khade raho.. " iske baad aaruhi ke chalne ki awaz ayi. Aur takreeban ek minute yun hi beet gaya. " Main keh rahi hun use tym lagega " aaruhi fir boli.

" Ye ladki kar kya rahi hai.. behenchod.. " shruti badbadai.

" Itna time to kisi ko nahi lagta aur na hi andar se koi shor aa raha hai.. kahin aap humse kuch chupa to nahi rahi "

" main kya chupaungi.. aur tumhe kya pata kitna time lagta hai kitna nahi... "

" main awaz laga kar puch leta hun.. oo madam.. " bhihari ne awaz di.

" bhag shruti.. ab tu yahan se bhag.. aur bag utha kar bhag ja bas.. " shruti apni jagah se khadi hui ki aage ki baat chit ne uske kadam rok diye.

" madam andar ho? " bihari ke baad aaruhi ki phone par awaz ayi.

" Bata de time lagega tujhe " iske baad shruti ne jo awaz suni use sun vo haki baki reh gayi.

" Kaun hai.. jo do min ruk nahi sakta.. change kar rahi hun main.. pata nahi kya hai.. "

" sun liya? kaha tha na? " ye awaz aaruhi ki thi jisne abhi abhi bihari ko ye baat kahi thi.

" ok " bihari itna bola aur kuch second baad gate band hone ki awaz ayi.

" Kaam kar diya mene tera.. helo shruti.. " phone par aaruhi uska naam pukar rahi thi lekin shruti apne alag hi hosh mein thi. Use abhi bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bathroom mein is samay kaun si ladki thi jisne jawab diya tha?

" Main baad mein baat karti hun.. " shruti ne phone cut kar diya kyun ki samne jo khada tha uska use kabse intezar tha.
 
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romanchak update ..shruti ka romanch bhara safar water cooler se lekar darwaje ko kholne tak dil ki dhadkane badha denewala tha 🤩🤩 .par aakhirkar pahuch hi gayi shruti jaha pahuchna tha .

bihari ko ullu kaise banaya aaruhi ne ye bhi sochnewali baat hai aur dusri ladki ka aawaj sunke shocked ho gayi shruti .kaun thi wo ladki jisne madad ki aaruhi ki 🤔🤔. ya aaruhi ne hi dusre aawaj me baat ki .
ab peon bhi aa gaya hai par kya wo files leke aa gaya hai dekhte hai .
 
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