Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

majedar update ..kam khana kha rahi hai aruhi tab bhi uska jism gadra raha hai aur ye baat usne apne aap ko aayne me dekhkar kahi shruti se ,par shruti to mobile me hi ghusi huyi thi ..
aruhi aise baat karti hai jaise sex ya uske related baato se usko ghinn aati hai par shruti ka paijama khinchna galat nahi lagta ..
blowjob ka video ek dost ne dikhaya tha to dekhkar ghinn aa gayi thi aruhi ko ..

ek baar so gayi to alarm clock ke girane se bhi nahi uthi aruhi ..

shruti kiske paas jaa rahi hai raat ko chupke se ,aur debu ke mutabik roj hi bahar jaati hai wo ..
debu ne pakad liya par shruti puri taiyari ke saath rehti hai ,zat se bra nikalkar rishwat ki taur par de di debu ko ..
ab debu us bra ke saath apne maje me doob jayega ..
wakai bahut tharki hai debu ..

 

[Jaguaar]

mashish Jaguaar & Kingfisher sahab is story ko padhiyega jarur.. tajurbe se bol rahi hu.. best thrilling and fantasy stories mein se ek hai..

Time milte hi jarur padhunga

 

[Naina]

sukriya ki koi baat nahi hai achhi story hogi tabhi to aapne hamse kha hai friday se story read karenge ham mam ok

Bas itna yaad rakhiye ye meri baat ki agar ye story read ki to baaki stories pe jaane ko jee hi nahi karega... har update ke end ek aisa suspense ki agle update ke intezaar karna muskil ho jaaye, jaise lage ki saare update aaj hi post kar de writer sahab... aur rahi baat thrill ki... ab xp ho ya xf ... Thriller story ke king ek hi hai aur wo hai one & only harshit1890 sahab,, chaahe to Yug Purush aka SGP 2009 saheb ya nain11ster ya phir Indian Princess se puch sakte hai.. harshit1890 saheb haunted series aur haweli series aur Tmkoc (origin) series ke liye famous the..
yahan xf pe haunted final part (Completed) .. Haweli-the-night-is-dark-completed... , treasure-the-invisible-hunt-completed post kar chuke hai..

 

[Naina]

Time milte hi jarur padhunga

ishi week se suru ho jaane chahiye ju ke revos is story pe..

 

[Naina]

Rudrathakur ab tak aapne is story ko read nahi ki
Waiting for ur awesome revos

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

पुरा का पुरा अपडेट द ग्रेट एंड द वनली वन श्रुति पर आधारित रहा । और ऐसा होना भी चाहिए था । आखिर नायिका है इस स्टोरी की । इसके अलावा नैना जी की सबसे पसंदीदा किरदार भी है ।

इस अपडेट से एक, दो बातों का खुलासा हुआ । श्रुति कुछ ज्यादा ही क्लोज हो गई है जग्गो से । इसके पहले भी कुछेक बार उस लड़की से श्रुति को बातें करते हुए देखा गया था । पता नहीं दोनों के बीच क्या खिचड़ी पक रही है !

आरूहि से और हास्टल के वार्डन से छुपकर वो भी रात के अंधेरे में कहां जा रही थी । कहीं विशाल से मिलने तो नहीं ?
देबु के शब्दों में वो इससे पहले भी कई बार चुपके चुपके गई थी । इसमें यदि कोई सस्पेंस नहीं है तो इसका मतलब वो अपने ब्वॉयफ्रेंड से मिलने जाती रही है ।

देबु के बारे में हम सभी को पता है कि वो ठरकी है लेकिन यह भी सच है कि हास्टल में रह रही लड़कियों के लिए वो खतरा भी नहीं है । डायरेक्ट लड़की से ब्रा लेना और उस लड़की को भी पता होना कि ब्रा का इस्तेमाल किस लिए होने वाला है , अचंभित करने वाला था ।
श्रुति तो सही मायने में इक्कीसवीं सदी की लड़की है बल्कि इक्कीसवीं ही नहीं इसके बाद के सदी की लड़की भी प्रतीत हो रही है ।

बहुत ही फनी और मुस्कराहट लाने वाला अपडेट था यह । आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।

 

[harshit1890]

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" jaldi.. jaldi... " dur se shruti ko dekhte hi vishal ne jaldi ane ka ishara kiya. Shruti ne use jawab diya aur phone par message type karte hue kadam tez kar diye. Vishal college boundary ke kone mein khada tha. " 1 ghante se khada hun " vishal ne shruti ke atte hi bola.

" ok " shruti ka fika response dekh vo thoda chidchidaya.

" late kaise hua "

" hostel se nikalna possible hai vo bhi bach kar? uppar se aaruhi aa so hi nahi rahi thi "

" to ab kya lagta hai tumhe vo aaj raat fir jayegi "

" aaj uska jana mushkil hai "

" vo kaise? "

" kyun ki mein kamre ko bahar se kundi maar kar ayi hun.. ab chalein ya sari batein yahin karoge? " shruti ke kehte hi vishal ko bhi dhayan aya ki dono abhi sadak kinare khade hain aur agar kisi ne unhe wahan dekh liya to gadbad ho jayegi.

" theek hai.. common chaddo " vishal ne apne dono hathon ko jod kar sahare ke liye shruti ke samne kiya " ek per rakh kar boundary wall pakdo aur fir uspar chadh jao.. aram se " vishal ke kahe anusar shruti ne apna per uske hathon par rakha aur ise jada kuch karti use pehle jhuk kar vishal ke honton ko chum liya.

" sunsan raat ki sunsan sadak.. isi mauke ki talash thi.. par dekho kya karna pad raha hai.. " shruti bol kar chadi aur vishal muskuraye bina nahi reh saka. Usne boundary wall pakdi aur uppar chadne lagi. Vishal ne jhat se niche se uski kamar ko tham kar uppar ki taraf puch kiya aur shruti uppar chadh gayi. Boundary wall par chadte sath hi vo vahan baith gayi aur piche ghum kar vishal ki taraf dekhne lagi.

" tum kaise chadhoge.. "

" don't worry.. tum dhayan se kudna "

" ok " itna bol kar shruti kud gayi aur uske kudte sath hi vishal thoda piche hua aur bahgte hue apne paun deewar par rakh kar boundary wall pakad li aur chalang lagate hue vo is paar aa gaya " lagta hai deewar kudne ka bada experience raha hai.. aaj tak kitne ghar loote hai? "

" kya tum bhi... chalo.. guard ne dekh liya to problem ho jayegi.. " vishal ne shruti ki baat ko talte hue uska hath pakda aur apne dono taraf dekhte hue aage badne laga par tabhi shruti ka phone baj utha, itni shanti mein uske phone ki ring gunji lekin agle hi pal shruti ne use silent kar diya. Par itni shanti mein itni awaz kafi thi kisi ko bhi ye batane ki koi is taraf hai.

" ye behen ki lodi... ise mana kiya tha mene... " shruti ne phone uthaya " kya hai.. teri gand mein khujli kyun hai.. bola tha na phone mat kario, message par 2 minute pehle bataya tha na ki aa rahi hun "

" to silent kaun tera baap karega madarjaat "

" nahi tere baap ko mene servant bana rakha hai sala ek kaam theek se nahi karta "

" bakwas mat chod bhosdiwali.. ye bata kahan hai.. pichle ek ghante se intezar kar rahi hun.. chutadein tut gayi hai.. "

" kyun marwati hai itni "

" tujhse sikhi hai... "

" aa rahi hun do min de.. " shruti ne phone cut kiya aur pehle use silent kiya " tum bhi silent kr do warna koi phone kar dega "

" maine pehle se ye kar rakha tha " vishal ko dhayan hi nahi tha vo kisko jawab de raha hai, uska dhayan to bas itna tha ki andhere mein koi idhar na aa jaye. Shruti use ghurti rahi aur jab vishal ko ehsas nahi hua ki usne ek ladki ko tanna mara hai to shruti ne uska hath mein nakhun gaad diya

" aahh.. " vishal achanak se uski taraf ghuma.

" sorry galti se lag gaya.. ab chalo.. udhar rachna intezar kar rahi hai "

" hmm let's go " vishal aur shruti premisis mein enter ho chuke the ab bas bachte hue kisi tarah plan ke mutabik library ke back side mein milne ka tha. Lavanya ki maut ke baad college ke premisis mein jahan pehle ek budau gaurd rehta tha jo sitti bajate hue pure premisis mein chakar lagata tha ab wahan teen ho gaye the jo alag alag hisse mein ghumte the. Ab ye kitne din chalne wala tha uska koi andaza nahi tha lekin unse bachne ke liye rasta khojna jaruri tha. Ground se sattte hue boundary ki taraf shayad hi koi bar-bar aye chakar lagane aye, chawkidar bhi hoshyar hote hain, ek baar dekh liya uske baad kya hai aram se baitho channa daru pio koi puchne wala nahi. Vaise bhi siiti ki awaz dur se hi aa rahi thi aur na hi unki taraf abhi tak koi roshni aa rahi thi. Dabe panv takreeban 7-8 minute ke andar dono library ke piche pahunch gaye jahan rachna ek pathar ke uppar baithi hui mobile use kar rahi thi.

" ye akele ayi hai? " dur se use dekhte hue vishal bola.

" tum use dekh sakte ho to use yani koi bhi dekh sakta hai..is behen ki lodi ko kab akal ayegi.. aur ise dekho itna khoyi hui hai ki humare ane ka malum bhi nahi hua " shruti ne apna hath vishal se hataya aur vo vishal se tezz chal kar wahan pehle pahunch gayi. Library ke piche ek choti si jagah bani hui thi jahan aksar lovers apna adda bana kar rakhe hue the, par dhire-dhire wahan par sutte baji aur drugs ki kahani bhi college ke adhikariyun ko malum chalne lagi thi. Bas is jagah par pahunchne ke liye library ki deewar ki taraf badhi hui jhadiyun ko paar karke piche jana padta tha isliye is taraf koi ata hi nahi tha.

" isko dekho randi ki bachi temple run khel rahi hai.. " phone chinnte hue shruti boli.

" fuckk... gandu... kitni aage tak pahunch gayi thi main... "

" tu yahan game khelne ayi hai? tujhe pata hai koi bhi agar library se piche ata to tujhe dekh leta... tere ko chup kar rehne ko bola tha na "

" chupi hi hui thi.. par tu behenchod pata nahi kahan chud rahi thi.. kitni der intezar karti to timepass kar liya "

" acha chal theek hai.. ab chalein "

" han to chal na.. main kaun sa tujhe nanga karke bandha hua hai.. " shruti ke hath se phone lete hue rachna ne apne baal jhatke " ohh hi vishal... kaise ho tum... " itrate hue vo use boli. Shruti uski harkaton ko dekhne lagi " kabhi humse bhi mulakat kar liya karo.. " rachna ne hath milate hue vishal se kaha aur shruti ki nazar rachna se jada vishal par tiki thi. Vaise use rachna par pura bhaorsa tha, vo janti thi ki vo sirf use jalane ke liye kar rahi hai lekin use andar hi andar vishal ke sath chipakna use acha nahi lag raha tha. Rachna uski na to school mate thi aur na hi college ki pehle din ki saheli, ye vo ladki thi jise uski mulakat college ke bahar roll wale ke dhabbe par hui thi. Mulakat us dauran hui jab aaruhi ya to college ati nahi thi ya fir library chali jati thi. Dono ke bich baat cheet phone par hi hui aur mulakat jadatar college se bahar hi.

" tu kya yun hi sochti rahegi, chalna nahi hai... jada time aur nahi reh sakti bahar... behen ko pata chal gaya ki main itni der raat yahan ayi hun to chain se bandh degi.. mutne ke bhi lalle padh jayenge " rachna ne shruti ko soch mein patte hue kaha.

" itni bakchodiyan kar li lekin gaand nahi uthai gayi tumse bhi " shruti bol kar chal di aur uske sath hi rachna bhi. Vishal dono ke piche tha. Wahan se nikal kar bahar ane ke liye jhadiyun se hokar guzarna tha jo kabhi gardan to kabhi bajun mein chub rahi thi.

" tune bataya nahi ki tujhe der kaise hui? "

" kya kya batau.. ek tarah hostel ka maha tharki vo burkatta aur uppar se aaruhi "

" aaj tu pehle bata hi de tu use burkatta kyun kehti hai? " rachna ne bich mein rok use pucha.

" vo haram ka jana hai ... paida karne wali bhi maha tharkan rahi hogi..shart laga le ek maa baap ka beta nahi hai vo "

" to kya teen char maa ke andar se nikla hai heheheh

" andar se to nahi pata par andar bahut gaye honge iski maa ke.. tabhi aisi madarjat aulad paida hui hai "

" ab tu batayegi ? "

" burkatta isliye hai vo kyun ki warden apni jhatein katwati hai use.. "

" kya.... seriously.. hahaha..hahaha.... behenchod... haha "

" muh band kar haraman... " shruti ne fauran uska muh band kiya " bhosdiki.. teri jhantein nahi kaat raha jo itna uchal rahi hai "

" yar baat hi aisi thi.. ki hansi nahi ruki " rachna ne muh se hath hatate hue kaha tabhi shruti ne rachna ka hath pakda aur ruk gaye. Piche mud kar usne vishal ko rukne ka ishara kiya to vo bhi ruk gaya. Kisi ke kadmo ki ahat isi taraf aa rahi thi. Kadmo ki ahat ke baad sitti ki bhi awaz ayi aur torch ki roshni bhi. Torch ki roshni patte hi teeno jhadiyun ke andar hi jhuk kar baith gaye.

" behenchod .. pakde gaye na "

" sshh chup... " shruti ne rachna ko chup kiya aur us atte kadmo ki ahat ko mehsus karne lage. Vo nazdeek aur nazdeek ati jaa rahi thi. Jungli jhadiyan sharir mein chub kar khujli kar rahi thi aur rachna wahi kar rahi thi. Shruti use bar bar sthir rehne ko tok rahi thi ki tabhi jhadiyun mein torch ki roshni padi aur shruti ko laga ki vo ab gayi.. kyun ki vo janti thi ki agar is halat mein vo pakdi gayi to bahut bada baval machega.

" oye.. kya kar raha hai wahan " awaz sunte hi shruti ghabra gayi.

" shit.. lagta hai vishal ko dekh liya usne.. shit.. " shruti ne man mein kaha.

" kyun kya hua.. " awaz dusri thi.. jise sun shruti ka dhayan apni soch se hata.

" wahan jhadiyun mein kya khoj raha hai "

" awaz ayi thi idhar se to socha dekh aaun "

" abe chhod use.. aa... patte khelte hain.. udhar kaun jayega itni raat... daru ka intezam hai .. aur murga bhi mangwa liya hai.. aja aja.. "

" han ruk ata hun.. " itna bol kar us chaukidarne torch ko niche fenka jiske fenkte hi roshni rachna aur shruti par padi jise unki ankhein chaundia gayi " zara sala dhaar to maar lun.. " zip khol kar usne mutna shuru kiya aur mut ki dhar se uska dher jama hote hue behta hua shruti aur rachna ke pas ane laga. Rachna to ulti karne ki halat mein hui aur vo muh se ugal bhi deti par shruti ne uska muh aur naak band kar diya aur use gusse bhari nighaon se ghurne lagi, agle 10 second dono ke liye bade hi kamjor the.. ek chuk aur kaam tamam. Dono ki chaplein chaukidar ke khoon se san chuki thi ek pal aur agar usne mutna band nahi kiya hota to rachna wahan se khadi ho jati.. uske kapde zameen mein pade mut ko chunne ki kagar par pahunch chuke the. Chawkidar ne zip uppar khinchi aur zameen se torch uthane ke liye jhuka aur fir jhuka reh gaya. Shruti ki nazar uski harkat par hi jami hui thi, kahin itni tez roshni mein usne kuch dekh to nahi liya. Abhi har chiz is prashan par akar tiki hui thi ki agle hi pal vo torch lekar sidha khada ho gaya.

" behenchod andhere mein har chamakne wali chiz sona lagti hai.. aaj ke patton mein main hi jeetunga.. bhsodiwallon ko dikhaunga kaun kiska baap hai.. " sitti bajate hue vo chawkidar wapis jis raste aya tha us taraf hi nikal gaya. Uske jane ke do pal baad tak teeno aise hi baithe rahe aur fir dhire-dhire shruti aur rachna apni jagah se kahde hue. Shruti ne jhadiyun se bahar nikal kar us taraf dekha to torch ko lehrate hue chawkidar ab dur nikal chuka tha.

" aja bahar aa ja.. " usne ishare aur fususahat karke bahar bulaya.

" kya aa jao.. behenchod.. mut kar gaya hai.. chi.. yukk.. "

" aya bhi teri hi wajah se tha.. aur hans .. lodi kahin ki "

" lad baad mein lena.. abhi chalo.. " vishal ki baat sahi samajh teeno library ki taraf badhe. Library ke front door par tala tha lekin wahan se jane ka in logon ka koi irada nahi tha. Rachna unhe dusri taraf le gayi, corridor se library ka gate aur usi corridor ke ant mein ek rasta jo library ke store room ki tarf jata tha. Teeno wahan pahunche... " are you sure ye karna hai? "

" tu darwaja khol... " shruti ne rachna ko kaha.

" jaisi teri marzi milega kuch nahi andar... " rachna ne store ka tala khola aur teeno andar aa gaye. Store room ke andar ghuste hi rachna ne store room ki light jalane lagi.

" tu kya chahti hai sab aa jaye aur ye jaan le ki tune store room khol kar hume andar kiya hai? " shruti ne fauran use toka.

" oo sorry.. bhool hi gayi thi ki hum to yahan kaand karne aye hain.. "

" phone ki torch jalao.. kundi hi to kholni hogi yahan bas? " shruti ke kehne par vishal ne bhi usi ki tarah phone par torch jalai.

" han idhar hi hai.. aao.. dhire se ana.. saman bhikhra hua hai ouu.. abhi girte girte bachi.. " rachna takra kar girti use pehle usne balance bana liya. Tight legings jaisi pajami mein uski tight chutadein roshni mein ubhar ban kar prakat ho rahi thi. Dekhne mein rachna shruti ke jaisi hi thi, rang halka sanwla tha lekin personality damdar thi.. lambe baal the.. choti ankhein aur patla dubla akaar lekin chatiyan aur chutad dono acheubhar ke sath bahar nikle hue the. Naak mein usne nosering dali hui thi jo uspar jachti thi. Bataya tha usne koi boyfriend kabhi uska raha nahi.. ek baar ek ladke ke sath baat shuru hui thi lekin ek hafte baad pata chala ki wahi ladka uske apartment ke dusre flat ki ladki par bhi line maar raha tha uske baad use koi takraya nahi... porn dekhne ka bahut shauk tha use aur yahin se vo shruti se dosti ke circle mein ayi thi. Porn dekhte hue khud ke sharir ko santushti dena ye usne apni behen se sikha tha, basharte vo porn nahi dekh rahi thi balki apne boy friend ke sath call par ashleel baat karte hue apne pajame ke andar hath dal kar apni chut masal rahi thi jise usne dekh liya tha. Rachna ko wahin se apne sharir se khelne ki adat lag gayi aur sangh-sathiyun ne porn ka chaska laga kar use pura khiladi bana diya tha. Bas ek kami reh gayi thi aur vo thi ek ladke ki jaisa use chahie tha.. bhale hi kisi tarah ka commitment nahi chahie tha par ladka use aisa chahie tha ki sirf uske sath hi rahe jab tak rahe aur vo use din raat dene ko bhi tayar thi.. yahi reason tha ki use vishal pasand tha aur vo shruti ko chedti thi.

" mera andar ana jaruri hai kya? " kundi kholne se pehle rachna ne pucha.

" jaldi khol... " shruti ke kehte sath hi rachna ne kundi kholi aur kholte sath hi usne apna hath jhada. " madad karo be.. ya gand mein dum nahi hai " itna sunte hi vishal ne rachna ki madad ki aur vo darwaja jo jaam tha khulne laga. Shor gunja aur shruti ko wahi chub raha tha ki is shor ko koi sun na le.

" pura khol kar kahan jaoge ruk jao.. itne mein nikal jayenge chalo.. " shruti ne jab dekha ki andar jane ka rasta ban gaya hai to vo adjust karti hui darwaje ke us paar nikal ayi, piche piche dono bhi aa khade hue.

" to fir.. kahan se shuru karna hai ? " rachna ne kapde jhadte hue pucha.

" mujhse kya puch rahi hai tu bata.. tu dekh baal karti hai library ki.. tujhe pata hona chahie na ? "

" pehli baat main dekh bhaal nahi karti.. remember didi karti hai kyun ki papa karte the.. main sirf unka sath de deti hun kabhi kabar aur dusri baat mujhe pata hota to main tujhe direct wahin nahi le gayi hoti? main to tujhse keh rahi hun aisi koi jagah nahi hai "

" fir wahi chutiap.. dekh aur sun... gaggan ne saaf kaha tha ki seniors ka yahan bhi koi locha hai.. aur waisi books yahan rakhega to kaun rakhega? "

" to itni badi library mein kahan khojenge? "

" dekh science section mein jane ki jarurat nahi hai hum us din wahin baithe the, gaggan us din books ko "

" History section ke pas se laya tha " vishal ne shruti ki baat complete ki.

" theek hai to fir udhar se hi shuruwat karte hain.. follow me.. " rachna keh kar chal padi.

" kahan se khoja hai tumne ise.. alag hi piece hai " vishal ne hanste hue kaha.

" tum us piece ko dekhna band karo.. warna ye piece ka piece nahi milega " shruti ki baat ko samjhne ke liye ek pal liya par jab tak samajh ata tab tak shruti wahan se nikal chuki thi.

 

[harshit1890]

Naina SANJU ( V. R. ) KEKIUS MAXIMUS

 

[Naina]

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[Rudrathakur]

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