Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Asif khan]

Ary bhau itna bhau q Kha rahe
Update maro na plz

Itne din se update na aya ju ko

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice update ..lavanya ne piku ko sabak sikhane ka socha par usko period aaye the isliye respect ke saath jaane diya ,,par waat to lag hi gayi piku ki ..

 

[Naina]

nice update ..lavanya ne piku ko sabak sikhane ka socha par usko period aaye the isliye respect ke saath jaane diya ,,par waat to lag hi gayi piku ki ..

ju ko badi hanshi aa rahi hai...
lavanya ki party se ho kya

 

[Asif khan]

ju ko badi hanshi aa rahi hai...
lavanya ki party se ho kya

Na afun aruhi ki party se h

 

[harshit1890]

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" idhar aa aage... " lavanya ne hath se ishara kiya. Mene sabhi ladkiyun ki taraf na dekh lavanya ke bolne par aage baddi. Ab jo hona tha vo hona hi tha par jaise hi main do kadam aage ayi usne rok dia. " tu nahi, tere bagal wali.. " dhatt teri ye to aaruhi ko bula rahi hai. Ab ye mera hath raat bhar khinchegi aur royegi ki meri vajah se fansi hai. Mene ruk kar aaruhi ki taraf dekha vo ghabrai si meri hi taraf dekh rahi thi.

" boyfriend ki permission mang rahi hai kya jo uski taraf dekh rahi hai? " lavanya ke bolne par aaruhi ko mene hi samne dekhne ka ishara kiya aur fir usne vaisa hi kiya. Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki vo itna khauf main ragging ki wajah se hai ya fir iske piche koi dusri wajah chupi hai. Aaruhi do kadam aage badi aur mene lavanya ke chehre par raunak dekhi.

" tu to wahi maal hai jise hostel jana tha... hostel mil gaya tha na .... " lavanya muskura di. Aaruhi ki nazrein niche jhuki thi aur kal raat se lekar abhi tak gaur karne wali baat thi ki jab bhi vo jada ghabrai hui hoti hai to nazre jhuka kar apne kapdon ko kas kar pakad leti hai ab vo aisa kyun karti hai samajh nahi aya lekin bahut hi wierd tha uska aisa karna. Pata nahi girls school wali ladkiyun ke funde hi alag hote hai...

" yaad hai ya bhool gayi bata.. bata... abe piche kya dekh rahi hai.. " lavanya jab use puch rahi thi to vo piche mud kar meri taraf dekhne lagi thi. Ye ladki mujhe bhi marwayegi, abhi focus usi par tha wahin rehne dene ka tha bar-bar meri taraf dekh kar mujhe kyun gher rahi hai? Mene ishare se aage dekhne ke liye kaha aur uske chehre ke piche chupe dar ko dekhne ki kosish tak nahi ki. Aaruhi ne mere naakarne par lavanya ki taraf nazar kar li. Lavanya aage akar ukhdu hokar baith gayi, uske aur aaruhi ke bich ab bas kuch hi fasla tha isliye lavanya uske dar ko saaf dekh paa rahi thi. " lagta hai abhi tak vo raat yaad hai.. kyun... " lavanya ke kehte hi aaruhi aise vichar mein kho gayi jaise vo lavanya ki baat ko soch rahi ho. Ab mujhe nahi samajh aya ki kya hua tha us raat? jo ki ab janna aur jaruri ho gaya tha..

Aaruhi kuch nahi boli " dekh iski shakal dekh us din to chup-chup kar apni chut masal rahi thi aaj aise darne ka natak karti hai " lavanya ne aaruhi ke gaal khinche jaise kisi bache ki khinchte hain lekin pyar se nahi balki halke tez hath se.

" ye to apne hi hostel ki hai .. 407 wali.. " madhu boli.

" tere liye hogi.. mere liye to ye Aaruhi the scared pussy hai... " lavanya muskura di. Aaruhi ki nazrein jhuki hui thi aur main ye soch samajhne ki kosish mein thi ki chal kya raha hai?

" scared pussy? " saloni ne apne bag se cream nikalte hue pucha.

" tune kabhi dar kar apni chut masli hai? " lavanya ne uski taraf dekha.

" dar kar? " vo sochne lagi " dar kar to kai baar.. tujhe to mere bhai ka pata hi hai.. sala sautela hai par hai to bhai.. hamesha jhank tank karta rehta hai... behen ka lawda ek dum fit baithta hai uspar "

" tujhse mene tera randi rona pucha tha? " lavanya ne use ajeeb nazron se uski taraf dekha.

" main to sirf apna dar bata rahi thi " saloni ne hath aur gardan par cream lagai " oo vanya zara pith par laga de " apne piche khadi vanya ki taraf cream fenkte hue kaha jiske baad mujhe samajh aya ki jo ladki hume teacher ban kar yahan layi thi uska naam vanya tha.

" main tere tharki sautele cum bhai wale dar ki baat nahi kar rahi, main to us dar ki baat kar rahi hun jo andhere mein lagta hai.. awaz to ati hai lekin koi dikhai nahi deta us andhere mein aur fir.. achanak se do per dikhai dete hai... " lavanya ne aaruhi ki taraf dekh kar kaha to aaruhi ke chehre par dar aur jada badh gaya. Lavanya keh to mazak mein rahi thi lekin aaruhi ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise ye mazak na ho.

" tu us dar ki baat kar rahi hai jo us bhootiya hostel mein lagta hai logon ko " saloni ka top uppar tha aur vanya se apni pith par cream lagwa rahi thi.

" hostel nahi... wo bangla.. " lavanya iske aage kuch kehti use pehle phone baj pada. Usne piche ki pocket se phone nikala jo aaj kal ke trend mein tha phone smart ke sath bade ho gaye the aur style dikhane ke tarike bhi badal gaye the. " han bol.. han.. abhi? isi waqt? tujhse ek kaam nahi hota bhatrichod.. han theek hai.. is baar tera katega paisa.. chal rakh " lavanya ne phone cut krke wapis piche wali pocket mein dala aur apni jagah se khadi ho gayi. " suhagraat ke sez par sajne nahi jaa rahi hai tu, college ke baad chudne jaa rahi hai aur agar chudna ho na to saman lapet le.. principal aa raha hai 2 minute mein "
lavanya ke bolte hi saloni ne vanya ko roka aur top niche kiya aur failaya saman batorne lagi.

" aur tum sab.. apne apne padhai ke karyale mein chup chaap pravesh kar le aur kisi ko bhi apna gyaan na bantte kyun ki jisne bhi aisa karne ki kosish ki vo bhale hi hostel wali ho ya bahar wali aisi gaand todi jayegi ki bistar par garam hone ke baad kabhi thandi nahi ho paogi.. " madhu ki baat sun kar man to kiya hasne ka kyun ki vo bikul bhi lavanya ke tone se match nahi kar rahi thi par kisi tarah mene apne aap ko roka. Madhu to bol kar nikli aur us gate se jiske bahar vo peon baitha tha jo bahar se band pada tha. Madhu ne wahan do baar hath mara aur bahar se khulne ki awaz ayi. Andar ghuste hi malum tha ki vo mila hua hai lekin abhi samajh aya ki phone bhi usi ka tha.

" itne short notice mein bataoge to kaise chalegaa.. bhatyacharyaaaji... " madhu ne khinchte hue kaha to vo apne dant dikhane laga. Mujhe ye sab dekhne mein takleef ho rahi thi kyun ki meri nazre tedi thi aur meri nazar aaruhi ki taraf nahi thi jabki uski taraf honi chahie thi. Main us peon ke expression ko dekhna mein itna tedi hui ki mera balance bigda vo to acha hua bagal se ek ladki nikal kar bahar ki taraf jaa rahi thi mera sharir par uspar gira aur use bach gayi aur tab dhayan aaruhi par gaya.

" ek mukalat dubara banti hai... sehgalji.. jaldi milenge.. " lavanya ne aaruhi ki kamar ko kas kar pakda hua tha. Aaruhi ko dard ho raha hoga ye main dekh paa rahi thi aur is baar mujhe bilkul acha nahi laga. Abhi tak jo hua tha uske bare mein mujhe malum nahi tha lekin lavanya ne ye acha nahi kiya tha. Uske baad vo charon to chale gaye aur hume dusre gate se bahar jane ko keh diya. Sari ladkiyan usi se jane ko ho li par aaruhi wahi khadi lavanya ko jatte dekhti rahi aur jaise hi vo gayi usne gehri sans chhodi.

" ye acha nahi kiya usne " maine aaurhi ke pas ate hi kaha.

" tujhe mene pehle hi kaha tha vpar aaj teri wajah se fanse hai hum.. " aaruhi iske baad bina bole wahan se nikal gayi. Mene use rokne ki kosish ki par vo nahi ruki aur na hi usne meri awaz ka koi response diya. Maine kuch bolna sahi nahi samjha, pehle din ki shuruwat itni hassen tarike se hone wali thi koi nahi janta tha.

Aaruhi theek mere samne hi baithi thi, aage wali bench par aur main piche ek ladki ke sath. Vo bhi baithi thi par koi launda tha jiski shakal se dikh raha tha vo kitna khush hai ki pehle din koi ladki baithi hai uske sath. Shakal se itna bada chomu lag raha tha ki aaruhi ko kahun ki dhayan se dekh ek baar taki vo seat exchange kar le lekin usne mere ishare sune hi nahi aur cheekh kar kehti ki ladke tu chomu hai to vo bura maan jata vaise bhi hum dono late aye the jis wajah se class mein jagah aur bachi bhi nahi thi. Halka shor tha abhi class mein shayad kuch anjan log dost ban kar apas mein baat cheet karne lage the aur kuch bhole bane baithe the hamari tarah bhale hi andar se kitne hi bade rakshas-roopi muthbaaz ho, dusri taraf vo chup rehne wali ladkiyan jo kitni hi badi rijhate hue chutiya banane wali ho. Par abhi sab ache the, ek dusre ke chehre par.. bahar se mukhda kala ho ya gora, rang to baad mein hi bikhare jane the inhone. Abhi main soch rahi thi ki class mein kaun hai jise main baat cheet karke dekh sakti hun ki yahi launda acha hai ya ye laundiya chugal baaz nahi hai utne mein class shant ho gayi. Nazar ghumai to samne ek sahab andar aye. Pet matke jaisa gol aur bahar ki taraf nikla hua, chehre par safed dadhi ke sath safed baal jo gunghrale aur behad kam the. Ankhon par chasma lagaye hath mein register liye, pent aur shirt pehne andar dakhil hui aur samne rakhe podiyum par apna register rakh usme dekhne lage. Chasma itna mota tha mano utar gaya to kuch dikhne wala na ho unhe. Mujhe laga ab sabka introduction hoga kyun ki aaj ka din pehla tha aur hum sab ka parichay abhi hona baki tha aur college ka pehla din to aisa hi beeta hai .. aur mujhe ye bhi janna tha ki kaun ki meri class mein baithe kis-kis ka kya naam hai. Meri soch ke according yahi sab hona chahie tha aur meri hi nahi baki sab ki bhi yahi soch hoti hai aur hua bhi introduction se shuruwat lekin hamare namo se nahi balki board par likhe topic se.

" What is C ? "

 

[Bhavana694]

This update is like driving a car in circle round and round and round with nowhere to reach

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice update ..ye aruhi kuch jyada hi darr rahi thi , par ye lavanya ne aisa kyu kaha ki chup chup kar chut masal rahi thi .. kya in dono ki mulakat pehle bhi ho chuki hai .

aur ye teacher ne aate hi padhana shuru kar diya ..

 

[Naina]

Asif khan SANJU ( V. R. )

 

[Naina]

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[Asif khan]

Asif khan SANJU ( V. R. )

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