Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

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Darwaja khulte hi warden jis kursi table ka istemal karti wo samne hi padti hai jahan is waqt warden table par pith ke sahara lekar khadi thi. Kyun khadi thi ye supriya samjhne ki kosish karne lagi aur uski batein sun kar situation ko samjhne ki kosish karne lagi.

" dhire kar.....aahhh gudgudi karta hai salle " warden hanste hue thode thike andaz mein boli jise sun supriya ko samajh aa gaya ki koi hai aage jo uske sharir ki aad mein dikhai nahi de raha hai. " agar zara sa bhi laga na to salle tere lund ke supade par razor chalwa dungi fir janta hai na log kya kahenge tujhe? "

" chinta kya karti ho madam, apun apka ye kaam pehli baar thodi kar raha hai? Har baar bolti ho par kaam bigadta thodi hai "

" Ye awaz to sonu ki hai, yani sonu aur wardenke bare mein jo sab ladkiyan bolti hai vo sahi hai? " supriya budbudai aur fir sunne mein leen ho gayi.

" kaam par dhayan de, jada bol mat. Kharab nahi dikhna chahie, aaj raat waise bhi khas hai " warden ki fir hansi nikli aur fir muh se ek siski bhi " jada harampanti mat kar, apni maa ke bhadve mein bhi karta hai kya? " warden fir tilmilai. " aur kitna time lega? " supriya sab kuch bade dhayan se dekh rahi thi bina is dar ke ki koi piche se akar use warden ke kamre mein jhankte hua dekh pakad sakta hai.

" ho gaya apka kaam " sonu ne itna hi kaha aur warden table ki aad se aage ho gayi jise hua ye ki supriya ne uski nangi nitambh dekh li jo ki pure hostel mein famous thi. Ye dekhte hi supriya ne maan lia ki warden sonu ko apni deti hai jo hostel mein kehte the bhale hi aaj usne vo nahi dekha tha lekin uska chota roop dekh liya tha, warden sonu se apni chut chatwa rahi thi? Dekhne ke baad sochte hi supriya ko ubkai si aa gayi aur tabhi usne darwaja band kar diya kyun ki agar vo aisa nahi karti to sonu use dekh leta. Supriya warden ke kamre se thodi dur ho gayi aur vo sonu ke bahar ane ka intezar karne lagi. Jaise hi use mehsus hua ki darwaja khul raha hai to vo warden ke kamre ki taraf badhi taki sonu ko yahi lage ki vo abhi ayi hai. Sonu ne ek pal supriya ko ghura par supriya ne uski taraf dhayan nahi diya aur aage badh gayi. Sonu ne supriya ke piche se uske nitambo ko ache se dekha kyun ki chaityun ko dekhne ka time supriya ne nahi diya tha aur fir muthi khol usme rakhe baal funk se udane laga aur theek usi waqt supriya piche ghum gayi jisne aisa hote hue dekh liya. Sonu bina ghabraye muskurata hua vahan se nikal gaya aur supriya uski harkat ko sochte hue warden ke gate ko khol kar andar ghus gayi.

" warden apne bulaya tha " supriya ne andar ghuste hi us table ke samne khade hote hue kaha jiski us taraf kuch der pehle warden ko usne apni chut chatwate hue dekha tha. Supriya sawal karke chup khadi ho gayi kyun ki uske liye behad ajeeb halat the. Samne warden baithi hui apne pet ke uppar jeans ka button band karne ki kosish kar rahi thi jo bahut jada fans raha tha. Button aur us button ke ched ke bich mein warden ki bade nitambh jaisi tond adh rahi thi. Warden ne akhri sans andar khinch kar jaise taise use laga diya.

" sala jeans chote size ki banai hai lagta hai, heh " warden surpriya ki taraf dekhte hue muskurai " tu kaun? " fir muskan band karte hue boli.

" apne bulaya tha mujhe " supriya ghabrai hui pehle se hi thi bas kisi tarah chipa rahi thi taki megha ki batai baat ko ache se keh sake.

" bulaya hoga par tu hai kaun? " warden ka andaz har baar ki tarah tikha hi tha.

" supriya mam, apne vo jaggu ko "

" acha to tu supriya hai, tere bare mein hi complain ayi thi, par ayi kya thi " vo table par kuch khojne lagi aur tabhi use yaad aya " tujhe to mene subah bulaya tha abhi kya kar rahi hai? subah kyun nahi ayi? "

" vo..vo. " supriya ghabrai " vo mam subah class ke liye der ho gayi thi isliye aur main ayi thi par aap kamre mein nahi the to ruki nahi aur chali gayi "

" main kamre mein nahi thi? to kahan thi? " warden ne supriya se sawal kiya " tujhe thodi bata kar jaungi ki kahan gayi thi " warden ne supriya ko jhatkate hue kaha. Supriya janti thi ki warden ki ek kamjori hai uski yadasht, vo aksar chizen bhool jati hai jiska usne faiyda uthaya tha. Megha hi thi jisne use sab samjha kar bheja tha agar vo na hoti to warden ke samne khadi bhi nahi ho pati.

" han teri complain ayi hai mere pas " parche par dekhte hue warden boli.

" complain? " supriya ka dil zoron se dhadakne laga.

" han " warden ne parche ko moda aur dustbin mein fenk diya " koi lafda hai kya tera tere sath reh rahi ladki se ? " warden ne jaise hi apni baat kahi supriya ke mathe par bal chadh gaya.

" megha se? "

" main kya sabhi ke naam likh kar baithi hun? jo bhi ho vo tera use lafda hai? "

" nahi ye apko kisne kaha? "

" to fir kaiko kamre mein halla-bol rakha hai. Kal raat ko tumhare kamre se cheekhne ki awaz aa rahi thi. Der raat dono ek dusre ke sath kya karti ho? Ladkiyun mein interest hai kya tujhe? " warden ne apni eyebrows uthate hue pucha. Supriya ki nazar uske chehre par zam chuki thi. Pehle mehsus nahi hua lekin ab hone laga tha, uski shakal behad darawani thi. Brown color ki skin, moti aur badhi ankhein jiske andar hamesha peela-pan chappa rehta hai aur usi ke hissab se mote honth jiske bheetar se nikalti kadak awaz. Insaniyat ke naam par sharap thi aur sabhi ki zindagiyun mein abhishap ban kar ayi thi. Supriya khud ek pal ke liye dar gayi.

" nahi..nahi.. nahi.. "

" kya nahi? "

" koi lafda i mean koi dikkat nahi hai, chillane ki awaz to isliye ayi hogi kyun ki kal raat ko light chali gayi thi aur main bathroom mein thi isliye bas.. "

" sirf kal raat ki nahi balki shikayat ye ayi hai ki har raat takreeban 3-3:30 ke bich ajeeb-ajeeb awazein ati hai tumhare kamre se, kya gabad ghotala machaya hai tumne mere hostel mein? " warden ki kadak awaz sun supriya dar ke mare seham gayi.

" koi launda waunda to nahi bulati tum dono? ho sakta hai vo sala chillu bhi nakara hai, kaam se nikalwane ki kitni kosish kar chuki hun par vo sala namard pata nahi kaun si gonth pila deta hai director ko jo use nikalta hi nahi. Chillu ko chhod aur sach bata koi launda to nahi ata raat ko ? "

" nahi.. mam.. aisa kuch nahi hai "

" teri baat par vishwas karun ya fir teri complain par, sonu ko bolti hun tere kamre mein checking karega, tu shakal se ghaplebaaz lag rahi hai "

" hum nahi jante mam vo jo koi bhi hai jisne apko complain ki hai usne aisa kaha aur agar mam hum kuch aisa karenge jise shor hoga to hum pakde jane ke dar se shor karenge kyun? "

" hmm " supriya ki baat sun warden kursi par piche ki taraf pasar gayi " to tum deewaron par zor-zor se nhi marti? "

" deewaron par? " supriya hairan thi ki koi kaise itna sab unke bare mein bol raha hai. Kaun hai jo unki shikayat warden se kar raha hai? Kaun ho sakta hai dusham? Tanya? supriya ko naam to aya par wajah nahi kyun ki tanya kabhi bhi hostel ki ladkiyun ke sath aisa nahi karti jahan tak uske bare mein suna hai.

" teri baat sun kar tere par yakeen karne ka man hai par sala jhant samajh nahi aa raha ki teri complain lekar vo jaggu ayi to ayi kyun "

" jaggu? " supriya ko dhakka laga.

" chal tu abhi ja, par vapis se teri complain ayi tab teri khabar alag tarah se lungi "

" par mam jaggu ne apse aisa kyun kaha vo aap nahi puchegi use ? " supriya ke jawab mein warden ne hath dikha diya aur baj raha phone utha kar phone par baat karne lagi. Aise muskurate hue jaise ashiq se naujavan, kachi kaliyan baat karti hai. Supriya bas ye soch rahi thi ki jaggu ne aisa kyun kiya jabki megha to uski bahut achi dost hai. Matlab bahut achi nahi par hai to dost uski. " aee ab kya yahan par mera mujra dekhegi? jati kyun nahi " warden ne phone ko hath se dhakhte hue supriya se kaha.

" mam vo.. vo mujhe bhi ek complain karni hai "

" tum ladkiyun ne mere jeevan ko shrap bana diya hai " warden ne supriya se kaha aur fir phone par kuch keh kar phone mute kiya " han bol jaldi "

" vo mam, mere... i mean hamare kamre ke bathroom mein kuch problem hai, pani andar nahi jaa raha aur bahar nikalta rehta hai "

" to tu kya chahti hai mein teri nali mein hath dalun aur tere itne bade bade kesh jo tere sar ke sath niche bhi honge " warden ne nazre supriya ki chut ki taraf ki " aur tere khoon se do akshar prem ki chaap wale pad nikalun aur nali saaf karun? " warden ke tikhe andaz ko dekh supriya sakpaka gayi. Uske muh se kuch nikalne ko nahi ho raha tha. " ye sab kaam sonu se bola kar mujhse nahi ab jaa " warden ke kehte hi supriya ek pal ke liye bhi nahi ruku aur fauran kamre se bahar nikal ayi. Bahar ate hi usne chain ki sans khinchi. Ek baat to tay thi ki na to warden ko kamre wale kand ki koi bhanak thi aur na hi mobile use mila tha, megha ki baat bilkul galat thi ye sach tha par jo dusri baat use khatak rahi thi vo ye ki jaggu ne aisi shikayat kyun ki?

" us chasmish pagal ki bachi ki to achi gand todni padegi " supriya ne khud se kaha aur khud par hi kheez gayi " megha ne meri bhasha badal di hai, kahin mummy ke samne nikal gaya to vo na jane mujh mein se kya kya nikalegi. Sonu se milkar use complain karun. Supriya store room ki taraf badhi jahan aksar sonu milta tha. Sonu hi tha jo hostel ki jarurat mand chizon ka khayal rakhta tha aur abhi jo dekha use dekh kar to sach samajh aya ki sonu sirf hostel ka nhi balki warden ki bhi jarurton ka khayal rakhta hai. Supriya khud se baat karte hue store room jaa pahunchi.

 

[Naina]

thoda waqt kharab chal raha hai ... bas isliye man kharab sa hai.. par fir socha kab tak kharab rakhe badlega to hai nahi...

Waqt waqt ki baat hai... ab waqt har samay achha ho aisa to nahi ho sakta na.. bas sayam aur dharya se kaam lena chaahiye aise samay par.. aur sath uchit aur sahi soch vichar ke sath aage badhna chahiye.. dekhiyega ye bura waqt bhi tal jayega..

 

[Naina]

Kal

 

[Naina]

Update ~~ 9​

Darwaja khulte hi warden jis kursi table ka istemal karti wo samne hi padti hai jahan is waqt warden table par pith ke sahara lekar khadi thi. Kyun khadi thi ye supriya samjhne ki kosish karne lagi aur uski batein sun kar situation ko samjhne ki kosish karne lagi.

" dhire kar.....aahhh gudgudi karta hai salle " warden hanste hue thode thike andaz mein boli jise sun supriya ko samajh aa gaya ki koi hai aage jo uske sharir ki aad mein dikhai nahi de raha hai. " agar zara sa bhi laga na to salle tere lund ke supade par razor chalwa dungi fir janta hai na log kya kahenge tujhe? "

" chinta kya karti ho madam, apun apka ye kaam pehli baar thodi kar raha hai? Har baar bolti ho par kaam bigadta thodi hai "

" Ye awaz to sonu ki hai, yani sonu aur wardenke bare mein jo sab ladkiyan bolti hai vo sahi hai? " supriya budbudai aur fir sunne mein leen ho gayi.

" kaam par dhayan de, jada bol mat. Kharab nahi dikhna chahie, aaj raat waise bhi khas hai " warden ki fir hansi nikli aur fir muh se ek siski bhi " jada harampanti mat kar, apni maa ke bhadve mein bhi karta hai kya? " warden fir tilmilai. " aur kitna time lega? " supriya sab kuch bade dhayan se dekh rahi thi bina is dar ke ki koi piche se akar use warden ke kamre mein jhankte hua dekh pakad sakta hai.

Haan, haan.. dekho dekho... dekhne ke liye to wo dono yeh sab kar raha hai
laga ki ju to masoom hogi kam se kam... par nahi.. ju bhi nikli taank jhank karne wali
Oh to yeh baat hai..
shayad harshit1890 sahab ab tak malini ko bhool nahi paye..
isliye is kahani le aaye ushe bhi as a supriya banake.. ab unhe dar tha ki malini naam rakhne se unki ek reader naina phir se band na baja de malini ki
isliye is kirdaar ka naam rakha supriya

" ho gaya apka kaam " sonu ne itna hi kaha aur warden table ki aad se aage ho gayi jise hua ye ki supriya ne uski nangi nitambh dekh li jo ki pure hostel mein famous thi. Ye dekhte hi supriya ne maan lia ki warden sonu ko apni deti hai jo hostel mein kehte the bhale hi aaj usne vo nahi dekha tha lekin uska chota roop dekh liya tha, warden sonu se apni chut chatwa rahi thi? Dekhne ke baad sochte hi supriya ko ubkai si aa gayi aur tabhi usne darwaja band kar diya kyun ki agar vo aisa nahi karti to sonu use dekh leta. Supriya warden ke kamre se thodi dur ho gayi aur vo sonu ke bahar ane ka intezar karne lagi. Jaise hi use mehsus hua ki darwaja khul raha hai to vo warden ke kamre ki taraf badhi taki sonu ko yahi lage ki vo abhi ayi hai. Sonu ne ek pal supriya ko ghura par supriya ne uski taraf dhayan nahi diya aur aage badh gayi. Sonu ne supriya ke piche se uske nitambo ko ache se dekha kyun ki chaityun ko dekhne ka time supriya ne nahi diya tha aur fir muthi khol usme rakhe baal funk se udane laga aur theek usi waqt supriya piche ghum gayi jisne aisa hote hue dekh liya. Sonu bina ghabraye muskurata hua vahan se nikal gaya aur supriya uski harkat ko sochte hue warden ke gate ko khol kar andar ghus gayi.

Iski ye majal ki is nazar dekhe masoom supriya ko.... harshit sahab isko jaan se hi marwa dijiye
Kyun na tharki megha aur masoom supriya milke pehle us harami, kamina hawasi kutta dhokhebaz dagabaaz Sonu ki aankhein fod ke acid daal de .. phir uske pure sarir pe blade se inch by inch cut karke jakhm de. phir uske muh pipe daalke usme se petrol uske stomach mein pahuncha de .. phir gale tak petrol aate hi us Sonu ke muh mein aag laga de.. tab wo andar se bhi jalega aur bahar se bhi...

" warden apne bulaya tha " supriya ne andar ghuste hi us table ke samne khade hote hue kaha jiski us taraf kuch der pehle warden ko usne apni chut chatwate hue dekha tha. Supriya sawal karke chup khadi ho gayi kyun ki uske liye behad ajeeb halat the. Samne warden baithi hui apne pet ke uppar jeans ka button band karne ki kosish kar rahi thi jo bahut jada fans raha tha. Button aur us button ke ched ke bich mein warden ki bade nitambh jaisi tond adh rahi thi. Warden ne akhri sans andar khinch kar jaise taise use laga diya.

bhikhmangi warden.. jiske paas jeans kharidne tak paise nahi

" sala jeans chote size ki banai hai lagta hai, heh " warden surpriya ki taraf dekhte hue muskurai " tu kaun? " fir muskan band karte hue boli.

nahi pehle tu bata warden tu koun.. kis gatar se paida huyi hai
Iski ye mazal ki is tarah ki sawal kare supriya se

" apne bulaya tha mujhe " supriya ghabrai hui pehle se hi thi bas kisi tarah chipa rahi thi taki megha ki batai baat ko ache se keh sake.

" bulaya hoga par tu hai kaun? " warden ka andaz har baar ki tarah tikha hi tha.

" supriya mam, apne vo jaggu ko "

" acha to tu supriya hai, tere bare mein hi complain ayi thi, par ayi kya thi " vo table par kuch khojne lagi aur tabhi use yaad aya " tujhe to mene subah bulaya tha abhi kya kar rahi hai? subah kyun nahi ayi? "

" vo..vo. " supriya ghabrai " vo mam subah class ke liye der ho gayi thi isliye aur main ayi thi par aap kamre mein nahi the to ruki nahi aur chali gayi "

" main kamre mein nahi thi? to kahan thi? " warden ne supriya se sawal kiya " tujhe thodi bata kar jaungi ki kahan gayi thi " warden ne supriya ko jhatkate hue kaha. Supriya janti thi ki warden ki ek kamjori hai uski yadasht, vo aksar chizen bhool jati hai jiska usne faiyda uthaya tha. Megha hi thi jisne use sab samjha kar bheja tha agar vo na hoti to warden ke samne khadi bhi nahi ho pati.

" han teri complain ayi hai mere pas " parche par dekhte hue warden boli.

" complain? " supriya ka dil zoron se dhadakne laga.

" han " warden ne parche ko moda aur dustbin mein fenk diya " koi lafda hai kya tera tere sath reh rahi ladki se ? " warden ne jaise hi apni baat kahi supriya ke mathe par bal chadh gaya.

" megha se? "

" main kya sabhi ke naam likh kar baithi hun? jo bhi ho vo tera use lafda hai? "

" nahi ye apko kisne kaha? "

" to fir kaiko kamre mein halla-bol rakha hai. Kal raat ko tumhare kamre se cheekhne ki awaz aa rahi thi. Der raat dono ek dusre ke sath kya karti ho? Ladkiyun mein interest hai kya tujhe? " warden ne apni eyebrows uthate hue pucha. Supriya ki nazar uske chehre par zam chuki thi. Pehle mehsus nahi hua lekin ab hone laga tha, uski shakal behad darawani thi. Brown color ki skin, moti aur badhi ankhein jiske andar hamesha peela-pan chappa rehta hai aur usi ke hissab se mote honth jiske bheetar se nikalti kadak awaz. Insaniyat ke naam par sharap thi aur sabhi ki zindagiyun mein abhishap ban kar ayi thi. Supriya khud ek pal ke liye dar gayi.

" nahi..nahi.. nahi.. "

" kya nahi? "

" koi lafda i mean koi dikkat nahi hai, chillane ki awaz to isliye ayi hogi kyun ki kal raat ko light chali gayi thi aur main bathroom mein thi isliye bas.. "

" sirf kal raat ki nahi balki shikayat ye ayi hai ki har raat takreeban 3-3:30 ke bich ajeeb-ajeeb awazein ati hai tumhare kamre se, kya gabad ghotala machaya hai tumne mere hostel mein? " warden ki kadak awaz sun supriya dar ke mare seham gayi.

" koi launda waunda to nahi bulati tum dono? ho sakta hai vo sala chillu bhi nakara hai, kaam se nikalwane ki kitni kosish kar chuki hun par vo sala namard pata nahi kaun si gonth pila deta hai director ko jo use nikalta hi nahi. Chillu ko chhod aur sach bata koi launda to nahi ata raat ko ? "

" nahi.. mam.. aisa kuch nahi hai "

" teri baat par vishwas karun ya fir teri complain par, sonu ko bolti hun tere kamre mein checking karega, tu shakal se ghaplebaaz lag rahi hai "

" hum nahi jante mam vo jo koi bhi hai jisne apko complain ki hai usne aisa kaha aur agar mam hum kuch aisa karenge jise shor hoga to hum pakde jane ke dar se shor karenge kyun? "

" hmm " supriya ki baat sun warden kursi par piche ki taraf pasar gayi " to tum deewaron par zor-zor se nhi marti? "

" deewaron par? " supriya hairan thi ki koi kaise itna sab unke bare mein bol raha hai. Kaun hai jo unki shikayat warden se kar raha hai? Kaun ho sakta hai dusham? Tanya? supriya ko naam to aya par wajah nahi kyun ki tanya kabhi bhi hostel ki ladkiyun ke sath aisa nahi karti jahan tak uske bare mein suna hai.

" teri baat sun kar tere par yakeen karne ka man hai par sala jhant samajh nahi aa raha ki teri complain lekar vo jaggu ayi to ayi kyun "

" jaggu? " supriya ko dhakka laga.

" chal tu abhi ja, par vapis se teri complain ayi tab teri khabar alag tarah se lungi "

" par mam jaggu ne apse aisa kyun kaha vo aap nahi puchegi use ? " supriya ke jawab mein warden ne hath dikha diya aur baj raha phone utha kar phone par baat karne lagi. Aise muskurate hue jaise ashiq se naujavan, kachi kaliyan baat karti hai. Supriya bas ye soch rahi thi ki jaggu ne aisa kyun kiya jabki megha to uski bahut achi dost hai. Matlab bahut achi nahi par hai to dost uski. " aee ab kya yahan par mera mujra dekhegi? jati kyun nahi " warden ne phone ko hath se dhakhte hue supriya se kaha.

hmm... to wo jo hota aa raha hai uske room mein 3.00 baad... wo baaki kayi logo ki pata hai.. par wo log samajhte hai ki yeh sab supriya aur megha ki karistani hai..
yeh badi hi ansujhi gahri raaz hai.. akhir koun hai jo is tarah se msg karta hai supriya ko 3 baje baad... aur us room mein aise Halla ya deewar pitta hai... lekin sochne wali baat ye hai ki jab yeh sab hota hai to megha ya supriya ko kyun nahi pata... after all dono to ushi room mein rahti hai.. kya nind hi itni gahri ho jaati hai ki insabhi ghatanao ko mehsus nahi kar paati..
gaur karne wali baat yeh bhi hai ki jaggu ko kaise pata.. kya raat ko wo ladkiyon ke room mein taank jhaank karta hai...
are harshu ji is tharki jaggu ka bhi patta saaf kar dijiye story se..

" mam vo.. vo mujhe bhi ek complain karni hai "

" tum ladkiyun ne mere jeevan ko shrap bana diya hai " warden ne supriya se kaha aur fir phone par kuch keh kar phone mute kiya " han bol jaldi "

" vo mam, mere... i mean hamare kamre ke bathroom mein kuch problem hai, pani andar nahi jaa raha aur bahar nikalta rehta hai "

" to tu kya chahti hai mein teri nali mein hath dalun aur tere itne bade bade kesh jo tere sar ke sath niche bhi honge " warden ne nazre supriya ki chut ki taraf ki " aur tere khoon se do akshar prem ki chaap wale pad nikalun aur nali saaf karun? " warden ke tikhe andaz ko dekh supriya sakpaka gayi. Uske muh se kuch nikalne ko nahi ho raha tha. " ye sab kaam sonu se bola kar mujhse nahi ab jaa "

. iski ye himmat. hawasi, tharki, kamini warden kahin ki..ek se khush nahi reh sakti .jaane kitne mard chahiye isko..
is warden aukat nahi ki supriya ke pero ki dhul ki bhi barabari kare.. aur is tarah se baat kari hai masoom supriya se..
harshit sahab is kirdaar warden ko bhi marwa dijiye.. iski aisi taisi kar dijiye

warden ke kehte hi supriya ek pal ke liye bhi nahi ruku aur fauran kamre se bahar nikal ayi. Bahar ate hi usne chain ki sans khinchi. Ek baat to tay thi ki na to warden ko kamre wale kand ki koi bhanak thi aur na hi mobile use mila tha, megha ki baat bilkul galat thi ye sach tha par jo dusri baat use khatak rahi thi vo ye ki jaggu ne aisi shikayat kyun ki?

" us chasmish pagal ki bachi ki to achi gand todni padegi "

are dhett teri ki
kam se kam supriya to aisi boli na bole..
Bichari... sab us megha ki wajah se hua hai.. uski bhi aisi ki taisi

supriya ne khud se kaha aur khud par hi kheez gayi " megha ne meri bhasha badal di hai, kahin mummy ke samne nikal gaya to vo na jane mujh mein se kya kya nikalegi. Sonu se milkar use complain karun. Supriya store room ki taraf badhi jahan aksar sonu milta tha. Sonu hi tha jo hostel ki jarurat mand chizon ka khayal rakhta tha aur abhi jo dekha use dekh kar to sach samajh aya ki sonu sirf hostel ka nhi balki warden ki bhi jarurton ka khayal rakhta hai. Supriya khud se baat karte hue store room jaa pahunchi.

are yaar ye us kamine sonu ke paas kyun jaa rahi hai
Khud hi thik kyun nahi kar leti bathroom ki nali ko..
ye sonu jarur kuch na kuch tharki harkat karega..
aur agar ki na to iski to eent se eent baja deni hai hai revo se hi
Khair... kaafi unsuljhe sawal hai us room ko leke aakhir tin baje baad hi ye sab kyun hota hai..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab
( Aur aap itne busy hone ke bawajud bhi update deke readers ka manoranjan kar rahe hai.. uske liye tahe dil se sukriya )

 

[Naina]

Waise sukriya dil se.. kam se kam aap hero heroine ki yaaddast nahi mitate

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ...to ye baat sach hai ki warden sonu ko deti hai aur aaj supriya ne apni aankho se sach dekh liya ..
aur ye warden bhulakkad bhi hai ..
jaggu ne complaint ki hai aisa kaha warden ne par uski baat sach hai ya nahi pata nahi ..

aur ye supriya ke room se aawaaje aati hai ajeeb ajeeb ,,,aur deewar pitne ki bhi aawaj ..

chalo ek baat to sahi huyi ki mobile ka matter nahi hua ,,ab shayad supriya wo lene jaye par megha ko saath rakhkar jana chahiye warna dobara raat wahi gujarni na pade ..

 

[Jitender kumar]

बढ़िया अपडेट है

 

[nain11ster]

ohoo supriya tu bhi ek dum typical girl school mein padne wali ladki ki tarah baat kar rahi hai. Tum logon ne ladkon ko lekar galat soch bana rakhi hai kyun ki zindagi bhar tum ladkiyun ne apas mein hi gutur-guu kari hai, gyan chahie to humse puch " megha ne supriya ka hath pakadte hue kaha.

... Ye lakh take ki baat kahi isne... Mere aanshu aa gaye.. aisi nek ladkiyan kahan hai ab bachi iss sansar me...

Hariya kaka jaldi se mera takan bhida do iss atrangi ke sath... warna kahani khatm hone ke baad maine fasi par taang dena hai

 

[nain11ster]

" han han sara gyan to tere andar hi hai aur ye hath chhod, lesbian nahi hun mein "

O bawadi hath hi pakdi hai... Itne se lesbian ho jayegi

 

[Naina]

harshit1890 sahab aap is kahani hero ka naam nischal rakhiye.. plz