Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Naina]

" muh band kar haraman... " shruti ne fauran uska muh band kiya

ye hawas ki pujaran shruti meko nakal karing.. iski to

 

[Naina]

ek baat samajh nahi aayi ki ek tharki shruti wahan library gayi hi kyun, matlab bas un kitabo ke liye.... kya hawas ki pujaran shruti bhi viswash karne lagi hai un books mein likhi gayi baaton par...
ki paranormal activities hote hai.....
aur yahan gaur talab baat ye bhi hai ki vishal isliye shruti ke sath aaya hai just because shruti aur uske bich hawasi rishta hai... Lekin rachna kis liye help kar rahi hai, aaruhi to uski dost bhi nahi hai, are dost to door ki baat, achhe se pehchaanti bhi nahi hai....
Waise jo gaaliya de rahi ek dusre ko aapach mein hi wo bhi vishal ke rehte huye bhi... dono hi kisi red light area ki chinnar se kam nahi lag rahi thi....
Btw shruti tharki debu ke pure khandaan ko hi ghasitne mein aur un sabko gaaliya aur criticize karne mein koi kami nahi chhodi lekin wo ye baat bhool kyun jaati hai ki us college ki no 1 bitch wohi hai, jiske liye hawas hi sab kuch hai
debu aur shruti mein fark bas itni hai ki debu hawasi aadmi hai aur shruti hawasi laalchi ladki....
Waise us chaukidaar un teeno ko hi dekh hi lete lekin juwa, sharab aur chicken ki lalach ke chalte wo udhar aise gayab hua jaise jaise gadhe ke sar se sing..... waise jaate shruti aur rachna ke pero pe toilet karke chala gaya
Achha ye hota ki unke upor hi toilet kar deta
dono hi pavitra ho jaate....
Waise itni mehnat aur jaddojahat ki baad agar pakde jaate sach mein bahot bura hota.... Khair chup rahne ki mehnat rang laayi aur ye teeno pahunche library ke store room aur waha se sidhe library..... lekin sochne wali baat hai ki kya ab bhi wo books wohi hai, jaha hone ki ye log anuman lagaye jaa rahe the.....
hmm... to rachna ko vishal se baat karta dekh jali padi hai shruti ki....
Khair....... Mujhe Kya matlab in teeno se... kare jo marzi apni
mujhe to matlab hai sirf ek hi kirdaar se... jo the great one hai..... jo sachme har story pe lead kirdaar ki bhumika nibhane ki yogya hai....
Aaruhi, o aaruhi, pyari aaruhi, bholi aaruhi, sabse Masoom aaruhi..... apne mann mein kitna kuch samete huyi hai isiko harshit1890 ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran ki hai. Jaise wo kirdaar jivant ho ...yeh kitni badi khoobi hai lekhak ki... ki wo readers ko kahani ke is aham paatr ke sath judne ko majbur kar de ,,,, jab bhi aaruhi ki is kahani ko read karu lage ki aaruhi kitni gahri peeda samete hai. par chehre pe us peeda ya dard ko kabhi aane na di... hamesha ek muskuharat ke sath jeene ki koshish ki.... par jis tarah atit ke panno itna kuch anhoni ghatanaye ghati uske sath , jo ek kabhi na bhoola na paane wali peeda de gayi hai aaruhi ko, jo aaj bhi uske dil mein peeda deti hai..jo aaj tak kisi ke saamne bayan nahi ki... yahan tak ke readers ke saamne bhi.. . us peeda aur dard ko shabdon mein bayan karna namumkin hai ,bas mehsoos kar sakti hun. Jaise ek udaas shaam ka ant ho.... dard ki barshat mein bhigi kuch bhooli bichhidi yaadein ho uski.....
atit ke panno mein aur sath hi lavanya jo ragging ke naam par uske sath ghinoni harkat ki thi, jaise aaruhi ki jindagi ko hi jhanjhor ke rakh diya ho... aur gaur karne wali baat ye bhi ki shruti ne bhi koi kasar nahi chhodi aaruhi ko pagal banane mein... yahan tak ki haaraman shruti ushe us bhutiya, nashakhor logo ka basera us mansion mein bhi le gayi thi.....uske baad to jaise aaruhi ki haalat bigadti hi chali gayi... Jise ehsaas kar dil mein gahrayi mein ek tees si utarti jaaye...
ek sabse aham baat ye bhi hai ki me bahot hi dharyashil aur sahanshil hai. ... Baat abhi tak khulke saamne nahi aayi par itna jaan hi gaye readers ki uske sath kuch aisa bura hua hai flashback mein jo soch se bhi pare hai bichari aaruhi

Sabse Pasandida kirdaar?
isme koi do ray nahi ki favorite kirdaar one & only bholi masoom aaruhi hi hai aur rahengi...... Kahani ek jariye kayi sikh de gayi hai par sabse badi sikh ye ki jindagi mein kisi par bhi aasani se viswash mat kariyo..... bhed ke aad bhediya banke kuch aise musibat bhi hote hai ki insaan ko hi tod ke rakh de.... Jaise aaruhi ke sath atit hua hoga, jaise aaruhi ke sath lavanya ne jo gandi harakat ki... aur ab jo shruti kar rahi har din, har pal aaruhi pe mentally atyachar....

Kahani ki khubi...
lekhak ne har ek kirdaar, har ek pehlu aur har ek mod ke baare soch ke kahani aur update ko Kalpanasheel aur varnantmak roop mein pesh ki hai, jishe padhte waqt sach mein aanand mile.... aur sabse badi khoobi... jo koi bhi is kahani ko padh le wo aasani se aankh kaan bandh karke kisi ko bhi viswash nahi karenge.... isse sabse bada faida yahin hoga ki log thagne se, viswashghat hone se bach jaayenge, dhokhebaz aur dagabaaz logo se bhi bache rahenge.....

Kya kahani ke positive character ahmiyat samjhte hai.. .?

Haan... of course... Kyunki maine aise kayi kahaniya padhi hai jaha kirdaar aapach mein hi bair rakhte hai... jo apne paas hai unki hi ahmiyat nahi samajhte... aur jab tak samajh paate hai weh itne door chale jaate hai ki wo chaah kar bhi unko pa nahi sakte.... Jaise is kahani ki lead kirdaar aaruhi.... wo sabhi ko ahmiyat deti bas ushe hi ahmiyat nahi milti, badle mein mile bas dhokha aur daga... Even shruti dhokha dene mein daga dene mein no 1 hai... aapach mein understanding, apanpan, dosti ki ahmiyat , pyar mein wafa nibhayi jaaye isko sirf aur sirf Aaruhi ki jariye darshane ki koshish ki lekhak ne....

Romance, action, revenge, action aur suspense/thrill ka level ..?

xp ho ya xf lekhak ne pehle kayi kahaniya likh chuke hai... unki lekhni dekh kisi bhi reader ke mann mein yahi khayal aaye ki is writing jagat mein wo kaafi experienced holder hai.....
ab kahani harshit1890 ki to ye baat bhi tay hai storyline best honi hi hai ... jish tarah se sathik taal mel ke sath likh rahe hai ye kahani...meri nazar mein to suspense/thrill ka level sach mein enjoyable aur bemisaal hai... .. harshit1890 sahab kaise story plot related itna kuch soch lete hai..... amazing yaar.. superb

Anubhav... Is Update ko padh ke....?
jis tarah har mod pe suspense aur thrill create ki hai writer sahab really bemisaal hai....... chaahe jab shruti aur vishal deewar kudke us paar gaye the woh lamha hi ho, chaahe jab chori chupe rachna ke paas pahunche dono wo waqt hi ho,chaahe torch ki roushni padi un teeno pe aur chaukidaar wohi khada tha,aur ye teeno khamoshi ke sath aise khade the jaise ek inch bhi hile to pakde jaayenge, wo samay hi ho ya chaahe wo pal ho jab chori chupke teeno library ke andar ghuse update ke ant mein..... in teen ki ye sabhi activities, wo jagah, wo waqt, wo pal, wo samay, wo lamha... kul milake in sabhi ko padhte waqt har baar ek ankahin thrill aur suspense ka ehsaas har pal.... writer sahab hamesha ki tarah is update mein bhi high level ki thrill aur suspense banaye rakhne mein poorn roop se kamyab rahe... Bole to... The way you describes and narrates the situations is damn damn too good and marvelous.

kya kirdaar aur kahani ne a aapko abhi tak kahani ke sath jude rehne ko majboor kiya...?

shat pratishat.... aur shayad aage bhi kayi baar read karu is kahani ko... readers ke yahi bolu ki ek baar aap jarur padhiye is kahani ko.... aap log jitni baar padhenge is kahani ko... utni aapke dil ke karib hoti jayegi ye kahani.... ek santusti mil jaaye update ko padh ke readers ko...@harshit1890 sahab is baat par bhi dhyan dete hai .....

Update dilchasp aur dilkash tha....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab
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edited - - oh haan us shruti ki to aisi ki taisi

 

[Naina]

Ma'am main to starting se hi is story ke sath rha hu pr as a silent reader hi rha tha...pr ab se continuously review diya krunga yaha bhi...aapka hukm sar aankho pr

 

[Naina]

Naina SANJU ( V. R. ) KEKIUS MAXIMUS

Revo posted
counter reply nahi aaya abhi tak revos pe

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

romanchak update ..to shruti vishal se milne gayi thi par maja karne nahi .. unko library me gagan ki batayi book dhundni hai shayad ..aur library me kuch log ikattha hote hai aisa bhi kuch kaha tha gagan ne ..
rachna bhi saath hai in dono ke ..
chupte chupte jhadiyo se jaate huye bahut mushkilo ka saamna karna pada teeno ko ,upar se watchmen ki peshab ki badbu bhi sunghni padi ..
debu ko gaaliya bakne lagi shruti aur burkatta ka matlab bhi bata diya ..
dono ladkiya bindhast hai ,gaaliya bhi de rahi hai aur gandi baate bhi kar rahi vishal ke saamne ..
watchmen se bachke aa gaye library me par kaha dhundna hai jo unko chahiye ye pata hi nahi ..
aur ye shruti ko thodi jalan bhi mehsus huyi rachna ko vishal se baate karte huye dekhkar ..
rachna ki kahani bhi majedar hai ,ki kaise wo apne sharir se khelna sikhi ..

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

ek baat samajh nahi aayi ki ek tharki shruti wahan library gayi hi kyun, matlab bas un kitabo ke liye.... kya hawas ki pujaran shruti bhi viswash karne lagi hai un books mein likhi gayi baaton par...
ki paranormal activities hote hai.....
aur yahan gaur talab baat ye bhi hai ki vishal isliye shruti ke sath aaya hai just because shruti aur uske bich hawasi rishta hai... Lekin rachna kis liye help kar rahi hai, aaruhi to uski dost bhi nahi hai, are dost to door ki baat, achhe se pehchaanti bhi nahi hai....
Waise jo gaaliya de rahi ek dusre ko aapach mein hi wo bhi vishal ke rehte huye bhi... dono hi kisi red light area ki chinnar se kam nahi lag rahi thi....
Btw shruti tharki debu ke pure khandaan ko hi ghasitne mein aur un sabko gaaliya aur criticize karne mein koi kami nahi chhodi lekin wo ye baat bhool kyun jaati hai ki us college ki no 1 bitch wohi hai, jiske liye hawas hi sab kuch hai
debu aur shruti mein fark bas itni hai ki debu hawasi aadmi hai aur shruti hawasi laalchi ladki....
Waise us chaukidaar un teeno ko hi dekh hi lete lekin juwa, sharab aur chicken ki lalach ke chalte wo udhar aise gayab hua jaise jaise gadhe ke sar se sing..... waise jaate shruti aur rachna ke pero pe toilet karke chala gaya
Achha ye hota ki unke upor hi toilet kar deta
dono hi pavitra ho jaate....
Waise itni mehnat aur jaddojahat ki baad agar pakde jaate sach mein bahot bura hota.... Khair chup rahne ki mehnat rang laayi aur ye teeno pahunche library ke store room aur waha se sidhe library..... lekin sochne wali baat hai ki kya ab bhi wo books wohi hai, jaha hone ki ye log anuman lagaye jaa rahe the.....
hmm... to rachna ko vishal se baat karta dekh jali padi hai shruti ki....
Khair....... Mujhe Kya matlab in teeno se... kare jo marzi apni
mujhe to matlab hai sirf ek hi kirdaar se... jo the great one hai..... jo sachme har story pe lead kirdaar ki bhumika nibhane ki yogya hai....
Aaruhi, o aaruhi, pyari aaruhi, bholi aaruhi, sabse Masoom aaruhi..... apne mann mein kitna kuch samete huyi hai isiko harshit1890 ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran ki hai. Jaise wo kirdaar jivant ho ...yeh kitni badi khoobi hai lekhak ki... ki wo readers ko kahani ke is aham paatr ke sath judne ko majbur kar de ,,,, jab bhi aaruhi ki is kahani ko read karu lage ki aaruhi kitni gahri peeda samete hai. par chehre pe us peeda ya dard ko kabhi aane na di... hamesha ek muskuharat ke sath jeene ki koshish ki.... par jis tarah atit ke panno itna kuch anhoni ghatanaye ghati uske sath , jo ek kabhi na bhoola na paane wali peeda de gayi hai aaruhi ko, jo aaj bhi uske dil mein peeda deti hai..jo aaj tak kisi ke saamne bayan nahi ki... yahan tak ke readers ke saamne bhi.. . us peeda aur dard ko shabdon mein bayan karna namumkin hai ,bas mehsoos kar sakti hun. Jaise ek udaas shaam ka ant ho.... dard ki barshat mein bhigi kuch bhooli bichhidi yaadein ho uski.....
atit ke panno mein aur sath hi lavanya jo ragging ke naam par uske sath ghinoni harkat ki thi, jaise aaruhi ki jindagi ko hi jhanjhor ke rakh diya ho... aur gaur karne wali baat ye bhi ki shruti ne bhi koi kasar nahi chhodi aaruhi ko pagal banane mein... yahan tak ki haaraman shruti ushe us bhutiya, nashakhor logo ka basera us mansion mein bhi le gayi thi.....uske baad to jaise aaruhi ki haalat bigadti hi chali gayi... Jise ehsaas kar dil mein gahrayi mein ek tees si utarti jaaye...
ek sabse aham baat ye bhi hai ki me bahot hi dharyashil aur sahanshil hai. ... Baat abhi tak khulke saamne nahi aayi par itna jaan hi gaye readers ki uske sath kuch aisa bura hua hai flashback mein jo soch se bhi pare hai bichari aaruhi

Sabse Pasandida kirdaar?
isme koi do ray nahi ki favorite kirdaar one & only bholi masoom aaruhi hi hai aur rahengi...... Kahani ek jariye kayi sikh de gayi hai par sabse badi sikh ye ki jindagi mein kisi par bhi aasani se viswash mat kariyo..... bhed ke aad bhediya banke kuch aise musibat bhi hote hai ki insaan ko hi tod ke rakh de.... Jaise aaruhi ke sath atit hua hoga, jaise aaruhi ke sath lavanya ne jo gandi harakat ki... aur ab jo shruti kar rahi har din, har pal aaruhi pe mentally atyachar....

Kahani ki khubi...
lekhak ne har ek kirdaar, har ek pehlu aur har ek mod ke baare soch ke kahani aur update ko Kalpanasheel aur varnantmak roop mein pesh ki hai, jishe padhte waqt sach mein aanand mile.... aur sabse badi khoobi... jo koi bhi is kahani ko padh le wo aasani se aankh kaan bandh karke kisi ko bhi viswash nahi karenge.... isse sabse bada faida yahin hoga ki log thagne se, viswashghat hone se bach jaayenge, dhokhebaz aur dagabaaz logo se bhi bache rahenge.....

Kya kahani ke positive character ahmiyat samjhte hai.. .?

Haan... of course... Kyunki maine aise kayi kahaniya padhi hai jaha kirdaar aapach mein hi bair rakhte hai... jo apne paas hai unki hi ahmiyat nahi samajhte... aur jab tak samajh paate hai weh itne door chale jaate hai ki wo chaah kar bhi unko pa nahi sakte.... Jaise is kahani ki lead kirdaar aaruhi.... wo sabhi ko ahmiyat deti bas ushe hi ahmiyat nahi milti, badle mein mile bas dhokha aur daga... Even shruti dhokha dene mein daga dene mein no 1 hai... aapach mein understanding, apanpan, dosti ki ahmiyat , pyar mein wafa nibhayi jaaye isko sirf aur sirf Aaruhi ki jariye darshane ki koshish ki lekhak ne....

Romance, action, revenge, action aur suspense/thrill ka level ..?

xp ho ya xf lekhak ne pehle kayi kahaniya likh chuke hai... unki lekhni dekh kisi bhi reader ke mann mein yahi khayal aaye ki is writing jagat mein wo kaafi experienced holder hai.....
ab kahani harshit1890 ki to ye baat bhi tay hai storyline best honi hi hai ... jish tarah se sathik taal mel ke sath likh rahe hai ye kahani...meri nazar mein to suspense/thrill ka level sach mein enjoyable aur bemisaal hai... .. harshit1890 sahab kaise story plot related itna kuch soch lete hai..... amazing yaar.. superb

Anubhav... Is Update ko padh ke....?
jis tarah har mod pe suspense aur thrill create ki hai writer sahab really bemisaal hai....... chaahe jab shruti aur vishal deewar kudke us paar gaye the woh lamha hi ho, chaahe jab chori chupe rachna ke paas pahunche dono wo waqt hi ho,chaahe torch ki roushni padi un teeno pe aur chaukidaar wohi khada tha,aur ye teeno khamoshi ke sath aise khade the jaise ek inch bhi hile to pakde jaayenge, wo samay hi ho ya chaahe wo pal ho jab chori chupke teeno library ke andar ghuse update ke ant mein..... in teen ki ye sabhi activities, wo jagah, wo waqt, wo pal, wo samay, wo lamha... kul milake in sabhi ko padhte waqt har baar ek ankahin thrill aur suspense ka ehsaas har pal.... writer sahab hamesha ki tarah is update mein bhi high level ki thrill aur suspense banaye rakhne mein poorn roop se kamyab rahe... Bole to... The way you describes and narrates the situations is damn damn too good and marvelous.

kya kirdaar aur kahani ne a aapko abhi tak kahani ke sath jude rehne ko majboor kiya...?

shat pratishat.... aur shayad aage bhi kayi baar read karu is kahani ko... readers ke yahi bolu ki ek baar aap jarur padhiye is kahani ko.... aap log jitni baar padhenge is kahani ko... utni aapke dil ke karib hoti jayegi ye kahani.... ek santusti mil jaaye update ko padh ke readers ko...@harshit1890 sahab is baat par bhi dhyan dete hai .....

Update dilchasp aur dilkash tha....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab
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edited - - oh haan us shruti ki to aisi ki taisi

इसे कहते हैं सच्ची दोस्ती । श्रुति ने एक बार से अच्छे दोस्त होने का फर्ज निभाया ।
वार्डन से बचते बचाते....देबू की उल जलूल हरकतों को बर्दाश्त करते.....अंधेरी रातों में इसलिए बाहर निकली कि उसे आरूहि की फिकर है । उसे आरूहि की बिमारी का पता लगाना है । और इसके लिए उसने विशाल से ही नहीं बल्कि लाइब्रेरियन की बहन रचना की मदद भी ली ।
बात बस यहीं खत्म नहीं हुई । चौकीदार के पेशाब के छिटें भी शरीर पर बर्दाश्त किए । भले ही शरीर के ऊपरी हिस्से में नहीं पड़ा हो पर पांवों में तो लगा ही ।
आरूहि कुछ बताती नहीं , उसकी पढ़ाई में कोई नुक़सान न हो इसलिए उसकी मां से भी बात कर नहीं सकती तब दूसरा ओपस्न बचा क्या उसके लिए ! टीचर को तो सारी हकीकत पहले ही वो बता चुकी है । उन्होंने भी तो कुछ नहीं किया ।

वो मुंहफट है । उसकी बातों में अश्लीलता भी है । लेकिन जो भी उसके दिल में है वही जुबान पर भी है । विशाल के अलावा और किसी लड़के को वो पसंद भी नहीं करती है । मिलनसार है इसीलिए उसका फ्रैंड सर्किल भी लम्बा चौड़ा है । डेयर की कोई कमी नहीं है । लावन्या से डरने वाली लड़कियां बहुत थी । आरूहि भी थी पर श्रुति नहीं थी । वो साहसी लड़की है ।

अब तो हमे यह देखना है कि श्रुति की मेहनत कितना रंग लाती है ।

Outstanding and Amazing Update harshit1890 bhai.
Jagmag Jagmag Update.

 

[Naina]

इसे कहते हैं सच्ची दोस्ती । श्रुति ने एक बार से अच्छे दोस्त होने का फर्ज निभाया ।
वार्डन से बचते बचाते....देबू की उल जलूल हरकतों को बर्दाश्त करते.....अंधेरी रातों में इसलिए बाहर निकली कि उसे आरूहि की फिकर है । उसे आरूहि की बिमारी का पता लगाना है । और इसके लिए उसने विशाल से ही नहीं बल्कि लाइब्रेरियन की बहन रचना की मदद भी ली ।
बात बस यहीं खत्म नहीं हुई । चौकीदार के पेशाब के छिटें भी शरीर पर बर्दाश्त किए । भले ही शरीर के ऊपरी हिस्से में नहीं पड़ा हो पर पांवों में तो लगा ही ।
आरूहि कुछ बताती नहीं , उसकी पढ़ाई में कोई नुक़सान न हो इसलिए उसकी मां से भी बात कर नहीं सकती तब दूसरा ओपस्न बचा क्या उसके लिए ! टीचर को तो सारी हकीकत पहले ही वो बता चुकी है । उन्होंने भी तो कुछ नहीं किया ।

वो मुंहफट है । उसकी बातों में अश्लीलता भी है । लेकिन जो भी उसके दिल में है वही जुबान पर भी है । विशाल के अलावा और किसी लड़के को वो पसंद भी नहीं करती है । मिलनसार है इसीलिए उसका फ्रैंड सर्किल भी लम्बा चौड़ा है । डेयर की कोई कमी नहीं है । लावन्या से डरने वाली लड़कियां बहुत थी । आरूहि भी थी पर श्रुति नहीं थी । वो साहसी लड़की है ।

अब तो हमे यह देखना है कि श्रुति की मेहनत कितना रंग लाती है ।

Outstanding and Amazing Update harshit1890 bhai.
Jagmag Jagmag Update.

ye harshit1890 sahab ke update se related revo tha ke mere revo ke khilaf virodhabhash

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

ye harshit1890 sahab ke update se related revo tha ke mere revo ke khilaf virodhabhash

Dono.

 

[Naina]

Dono.

lagta hai ju ko apni story ke kirdaaro ke prati koi fikar nahi ...

 

[harshit1890]

Update ~~ 45​

" meri abhi tak ye samajh nahi aya ki aisa kya hai un books mein jo tujhe chahie " rachna books ko utha kar use dekhte hue wapis waise hi rakh rahi thi. " abe oye.. kya kar rahi hai " book rakhte hi uski nazar shruti par gayi jo books ko shelf se utha kar dekhti aur waise hi rakh deti, rachna ke jaise arrange karke nahi rakh rahi thi.

" kya hua? "

" jaisi uthai thi vaise hi rakhni bhi hai.. remember follow the library rules "

" jo hukum librarian sahiba " shruti ne man mein panch che gali dete hue books ko usi tarah arrange kar diya. Takreeban adhe ghante book shelf se book hata hata kar pura history section chaan mara lekin shruti ko jo chahie tha vo nahi mila. " vishal, kuch mila? " vishal ko shruti ne history section se alag par use satta hua Geographic section ki tarf bhej diya tha.

" nah.. yahan to kuch nahi hai.. lekin kuch shelf bache hai.. main vo check karke batata hun.. i guess.. iske piche koi section hai kaun sa malum nahi "

" section ka karna bhi kya hai.. dekhte raho ... " shruti ne wahin se awaz dete hue kaha. " ye sala gaggan akhir books laya to laya kahan se tha.. behenchod.. mota.. har tarah se fansa kar dekh liya par behen ka lund mana nahi.. agar ye manpreet maan jati aur use bol deti na to pakka bata deta.. par vo behen ki takki apne hi ashiq ko dene mein lagi hai.. ek number ki kaminjaat ki prani hai "

" oohh behenchod... " achanak se rachna ki awaz sun shruti ko laga jaise use kuch mila ho.

" kahan hai ye.. rachna.. kahan hai tu.. " shruti ne awaz di.

" idhar aa.. Architect section mein.. " architect section history ke just opposite tha. Shruti wahan pahunchi to shelf ki aad mein rachna mobile torch se kuch dekh rahi thi.

" mil gaya tujhe.. " shruti chehkhte hue piche se aage ayi.

" betichod.. ye dekh.. mujhe to malum hi nahi tha ki yahan ye book bhi hai.. sala.. dekh dekh.. " shruti rachna ko aise ghur rahi thi mano abhi uska jism chid-fad degi.

" behen ki lodi tujhe mene apne kaam se bulaya hai tu apne hi kaam mein lagi hai? "

" are usi ko to dhundte hue ye kitab mili. sala architect section mein kamausutra kisne rakh di.. "

" are meri randi ... ye kamasutra ki kitab nahi hai.. asal mein hai arhictect ki kitab hi.. dhayan se dekh Konark temple hai.. "

" behenchod.. wahan aisi tasveer hai? "

" han unhone pillars par aise banwaya hai.. darshate the vo.. "

" sahi hai yaar.. dekh dekh sarre pose use karte the ye log to behenchod.. matlab hamare jamane se jada tharki to us jamane ke log the.. matlab ek mard kitni bhi aurton ke sath.. sala koi restriction hi nahi tha.. alag hi mauj thi mardo ki us samay... vo bhi open.. tujhe kya lagta hai blowjob bhi deti thi pehle ki aurtein? " rachna ka sawal sun shruti ne gusse mein apna sar peet liya.

" tujhe store room chhod deti to jada acha hota.. behenchod.. ek kaam ki nahi hai.. itni aag lagi hai to ladka khoj aur bhuja.. usko dio blowjob "

" aag to main hath se bhi bhuja leti hun.. sex chat ke liye to bahut mil jatte hai... you know.. aaj kal to facebook ka jamana aa gaya hai vaise bhi.. wahan bhatere mil jate hai.. bas ishara do... bhosdiwale aise bhare baithe rehte hain ki do se dahi minute ke andar hi gir jata hai salon ka.. "

" tu aise bol rahi hai jaise tasveer bhejte hai vo log "

" bhejte hai behenchod "

" kya baat kar rahi hai ? " shruti hairani mein boli.

" han ek lodu ne bheji thi.. apne lund se sperm ke tapakne ki photo.. maa kasam ... man kiya ki abhi us lund par laat mar dun.. khud to jhad gaya main thodi.. mood kharab kar diya tha salle ne "

" facebook ko jada ache se pehchana padega "

" han han pehchan pehchan.. launde laundiya ban kar bahut se ghumte hain usme.. " rachna ne kitab band karke rakh di aur kitab khojne lagi.

" laundo ko ye bhi shauk hai? "

" are atyant shauk hote hai laundon ke.. bas laundiya milni chahie.. vaise laundiyu ko kam mat samjha kar.. kuch to aisi mili hai jo ladkiyun ke sath hi lagne ko tayar rehti hai.. "

" lesbian chut malne ke alawa kya karegi.. "

" wahi bahut hota hai unko to.. mujhse ek takrai thi.. mene use aisa jhada ki account hi deactivate kar diya usne.. "

" tune bur faad di hogi uski "

" han behenchod.. yahan jawani badha rahe hain taki launde apni marangi se daba sake aur vo behenchod meri chut mein ungal ki planing kar rahi thi.. sahi chamkaya jab mene use kaha ki tere bare mein sabko bataungi to bhag nikli.. bur jhad gaye uski tabhi hehehe "

" badi madarjaaat aurat hai tu... teri tarah vo hostel ki jaggu bhi hai.. sali bada flaunt mar rahi thi aaj subah.. facebook par dekha to naam pata hai kya rakha hai usne.. "

" kya? "

" Jazz.. itna hi nahi sali ne profile par aisi aisi tasveer dali hui hai ki launde to salle pagal honge hi.. bhsodiwali shakal se chutiya dikhti hai par bahut chalu hai.. madarjat... "

" hostel mein reh kar har koi aisa hi ho jata hai.. chal udhar dhundte hai... aur agar ab nahi mili to behenchod yahan se jana padega "

" tu college ki padai kyun nahi karti "

" are yar.. kya karna hai itna badh kar.. open se college kar rahi hun.. ghar par bchon ko pada deti hun ... maa baap hai nahi.. paise ka jugad bana rehta hai.. "

" baat to teri bhi sahi hai.. bina paise ke zindagi mein koi dhol kahan bajta hai.. uff.. sala thak gayi main.. " books mein chaan bin karte hue takreeban ghanta beet chuka tha aur abhi tak hath kuch nahi laga tha.

" main to keh rahi hun yahan kuch nahi hai.. sirf chutiyap hai.. tu un kitabo se dhayan hata vaise bhi vo tere kis kaam ki "

" bahut kaam ki hai.. tum log koi samajh nahi raha hai.. aaruhi ko ... " shruti do kadam piche hui ki use apne peron ke niche kuch mehsus hua. Vo niche jhuki to ek kitab wahan padi thi.

" tujhe kaha tha na ki kitabon ko unki jagah chhod de.. tu.. " rachna use fatkarti use pehle shruti ne book ka cover uske samne kiya. " behenchod.. ye kaise chitr bane hai ispar "

" yahi vo book hai... par ye niche yahan kaise ? " shruti fauran book ko fold karke niche baith kar jhuki. Use laga books shelf ke niche rakhi gayi hogi isliye jhuk kar jab shelf ke niche dekha to wahan kuch nahi tha.

" niche kya dekh rahi hai.. shelf ke niche thodi book hogi.. " rachna ne use toka to shruti wapis khadi hui.

" mana mene ki book niche nahi hogi par is book ke niche per lage hain jo khisakte hue aa jayegi? "

" baat mein tere bhi dum hai... to fir ab kya? "

" mera shaq sahi tha aur us mote ki baat bhi "

" aisa kya kaha tha usne? "

" koi hai library mein... aur abhi bhi hai.. jo hamari batein sun raha hai.. " shruti ne itne ghambhirta se kaha ki ek pal rachna use ghurne lagi aur fir hasne lagi.

" hahaha.. behenchod.. tera dimag teri kamre ki partner ki tarah ho gaya hai.. tu bhi chutiya gayi hai uski tarah "

" dant kam faad varna teri chut faad dungi.. bhadvi salli.. hansti reh.. " shruti bol kar shelf ke us taraf ayi jis taraf se book fisal kar ayi thi.. wahan kuch nahi tha.. balki uske samne bhi shelf hi tha.. usne usko bhi paar kar liya.. jiske baad ek aur shelf... aur jab usko paar kiya to 'Dead end' yani ki deewar par book shelf laga hua tha bas..

" kuch to gadbad hai behenchod.... kya samajh nahi aa raha " book ko dekhte hue shruti khud se boli.

" nahi hai na kuch.. pehle hi kaha tha.. tu jada soch rahi hai.. bas ye baat alag hai ki aisa chutiap kaun padta hai bhala... " rachna ne shruti se book chin kar use khol kar padna chah.

" no luck shruti.. " vishal wahan aya jo pasine se lat pat ho chuka tha.

" book vishal.. "

" mil gayi.. " vishal ne kadam tez kiye aur rachna aur shruti ke piche aa khada hua. " tab tum kya soch rahi hun " vishal ne shruti ke chehre ko dekh pucha.

" jis tarah mili vo ajeeb baat hai.. " jiske baad shruti ne use jis tarah book mili vo samjhaya.. " iske alawa tumhe yaad hai na gaggan ne bataya tha ki seniors ka yahan bhi adda hai.. "

" han "

" to kya aisa nahi ho sakta ki koi senior yahan maujud ho aur hume sun raha ho? "

" senior? yahan vo bhi is waqt .. tumhe nahi lagta ki ye thoda jada hai "

" fakss... mene bhi wahi kaha ise.. aur uppar se kya bakwas book hai ye... behenchod ajeeb ajeeb se words likhe hai isme.. Moghraaz... hehehe.. LOL behenchod.. kaun chutiya hai ye likhne wala.. "

" tum dono apna muh band karo.. yakeen mano mera yahan koi hai.... warna khud ba khud ye book mere charno ke niche nahi aa jayegi "

" tumhare kehne ka matlab hai ki gaggan ko bhi aise hi mili hogi.. ? " vishal ka sawal adhura tha kyun ki pura puchne ki usme himmat nahi thi.

" iske kehne ka matlab vo idhar aya usne hath jodh kar kaha.. senior book book book... aur book prakat aisa haina? hehehe lol.. " rachna ki baat sun shruti ne uske hath se book chin uske chatiyun par de mari.

" chup kar jaa.. warna teri behen ko bata dungi.. ki tu behen ki lodi hai.. aur tujhse bach kar rahe "

" to ab kya karein? time dekh rahi hai 11 se uppar ho raha hai.. shruti dekh tere pas bas 10 minute hai.. bhsodiki.. tut jayega ye.. " rachna ki sansein jab atki jab shruti ne samne walle shelf ko khiskane lagi par vo khiski nahi lekin uski mehnat ko dekh vishal bhi kosish karne laga par vo tab bhi nahi hili.

" books hatani padegi.. tabhi hile shayad.. " vishal ne hanfte hue kaha.

" to khade kyun ho shuru ho jao.. " shruti ke kehte sath hi teeno us kaam mein lag gaye.

" das minute aur hain bas mere pas.. jaldi karo.... tu kya book ke andar padh rahi hai... ise tujhe milega kya kuch? " shelf par se sari books nikalne ke baad piche ki table par rakh rhe the, agle panch minute mein teeno ne books hata kar shelf khali kar di par kuch nahi mila.

" mehnat bekar... ab ise wapis lagao aur bhago... ise jada shruti hum nahi ruk sakte... " rachna ne is baar mazak se hat kar baat kahi. Baat uski sahi thi, bahut late ho chuka tha.. ise jada ab khojna bekar tha. Shruti janti thi ki vo yahan sirf kitabon ke chalte nahi ayi hai... balki us shaks se milne ayi hai jo in sabke piche hai.. use reh-reh kar lag raha tha ki library mein jab aaruhi aya karti thi to uski mulakat is shaks se hui jisne ho na ho in kitabon ka jikar kiya ho aaruhi se aur uske alawa pata lagana mushkil tha.. waise bhi ye section ek dum kone mein tha.. yahan kya kar raha hai koi har samay nazar banaye rakhna impossible tha. Sochte hue shruti sabhi ke sath books lagane lagi akhir ke do books usne pakdi hui thi jo bich ki jagah par lagani thi. Top se third shelf ek left corner aur right ka left corner yani shelf ko do bhagon mein bantta hua tha. Shruti ne pehle left side wale corner mein book rakhi aur fir right corner mein rakh kar jaise hi book ko piche khisaya. Ek awaz hui aur achanak se shruti ke kadam piche ho gaye kyun ki shelf do bhag mein bantte hue bich mein se khul gaya.