Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

Spoiler: INDEX

~~INDEX~~​

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

Update - 1​

Update - 2​

Update - 3​

Update - 4​

Update - 5​

Update - 6​

Update - 7​

Update - 8​

Update - 9​

Update - 10​

Update - 11​

Update - 12​

Update - 13​

Update - 14​

Update - 15​

Update - 16​

Update - 17​

Update - 18​

Update - 19​

Update - 20​

Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "​

Update - 21​

Update - 22​

Update - 23​

Update - 24​

Update - 25​

Update - 26​

Update - 27​

Update - 28​

Update - 29​

Update - 30​

Update - 31​

Update - 32​

Update - 33​

Update - 34​

Update - 35​

Update - 36​

Update - 37​

Update - 38​

Update - 39​

Update - 40​

Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia " ​

Update - 41​

Update - 42​

Update - 43​

Update - 44​

Update - 45​

Update - 46​

Update - 47​

Update - 48​

Update - 49​

Update - 50​

Update - 51​

Update - 52​

Update - 53​

Update - 54​

Update - 55​

Update - 56​

Update - 57​

Update - 58​

Update - 59​

Update - 60​

Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

Update - 61​

Update - 62​

Update - 63​

Update - 64​

Update - 65​

Update - 66​

Update - 67​

Update - 68​

Update - 69​

Update - 70​

Update - 71​

Update - 72​

Update - 73​

Update - 74​

Update - 75​

Update - 76​

Update - 77​

Update - 78​

Update - 79​

Update - 80​

Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

Update - 81​

Update - 82​

Update - 83​

Update - 84​

Update - 85​

Update - 86​

Update - 87​

Update - 88​

Update - 89​

Update - 90​

Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

Update - 91​

Update - 92​

Update - 93​

Update - 94​

Update - 95​

Update - 96​

Update - 97​

Update - 98​

Update - 99​

Update - 100​

Update - 101​

Update - 102​

Update - 103​

Update - 104​

Update - 105​

Update - 106​

Update - 107​

Update - 108​

Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

Update - 109 ​

Update - 110 ​

Update - 111 ​

Update - 112 ​

Update - 113 ​

Update - 114​

Spoiler: Special Comments On Story

Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

अब जो जो हो रहा है और जैसी जैसी चमत्कार आरूहि दिखा रही है , उससे ललाटो में सिकन न आए....सिर के बाल न झड़ने लगे‌ , तो फिर और क्या होगा !
अपने बेशुमार कीमती बालों का हर्जाना तो आपसे वसूलना ही है हर्षित भाई , भले ही मुझे सुप्रीम कोर्ट तक क्यों न जाना पड़े ।

एक तो डब्बा दिखाकर और फिर बे सिर पैर की बात करके कलयुगी मेघनाथ ने हमें बेवकूफ बनाया और जो आकी बाकी कसर हमें बेवकूफ़ बनने में रह गया था उसे आरूहि पुरा कर रही है ।
लेकिन वो लोग हमें बेवकूफ बना सकते हैं , द ग्रेट श्रुति को नहीं । अभी तक वो इन सब चीजों को हल्के में ले रही थी पर अब नहीं । अब वो, वो करेगी कि ये सभी होशियारपुर के रहने वाले होशियार लोग " वो - वो " करते रह जायेंगे ।

इस अपडेट में जो हमने देखा , वो क्या था ? आंखों का धोखा या कोई तिकड़मबाजी । अगर आंखों का धोखा था तो यह शर्तिया कोई जादू था । मैंने ग्रेट जादुगर गोगिया पाशा के बारे में पढ़ा है जिन्होंने न्यूयॉर्क एयरपोर्ट को ही गायब कर दिया था । महान जादुगर पी सी सरकार ( सिनियर ) के बारे में पढ़ा है । उनके सुपुत्र पी सी सरकार ( जुनियर ) का मैजिक देखा है । के लाल का जादू देखा है । बहुत सारे छोटे बड़े जादूगरों की हैरतअंगेज कारनामे देखा है । शरीर को कई टुकड़ों में काट कर उसे जोड़ते हुए देखा है । इंसान को जमीं से दस बीस फुट ऊपर लटका कर उसे हमारे बगल में ही बैठाते हुए देखा है । मतलब बहुत सारी अनहोनी चीजें करते हुए देखा है ।
आरूहि ने भी तो कुछ कुछ ऐसा ही किया । वो उस डिब्बे पर लिखे हुए कई अक्षरों के बीच तीन अक्षरें चुनती है फिर उन पर अपनी तीन उंगलियों को ऐसे रखती है कि वो ट्राइंगल के शेप में हो जाए, फिर उस ट्राइंगल से उन अक्षरों को बाहर निकाल कर डिब्बे के मुंह से होते हुए उसके गर्भ में पहुंचा देती है । और फिर चमत्कारिक रूप से डब्बे के गर्भ से एक चमचमाता हुआ अंडे की शकल वाला वस्तु बाहर निकल आता है ।

यह मैजिक नहीं है तो क्या है हर्षित भाई ! इससे तो यही लगता कि वह जादुई विद्या में भी निपुण है ।
और अगर यह मैजिक नहीं है तो फिर यह कोई ऐसी ट्रिक है जिसे हम समझ नहीं पा रहे हैं । कुछ फिजिक्स या कुछ केमिस्ट्री या कुछ हाथों की कारिस्तानी ।

इस कहानी में भुतिया हास्टल और मेंशन शुरू से ही कई घटनाओं का केंद्र बिंदु रहा है । एक बार फिर से आरूहि ने उन जगहों का जिक्र करके इस बात की पुष्टि कर दी । क्या कहानी थी उन जगहों की ? ऐसा क्या राज समेटे हुए है वो जगहें?

मैं तो कहता हूं कि लियोन भाई की शादी आरूहि से करवा दो आप । बहुत कृपा होगी । इस कन्या को सिर्फ और सिर्फ लियोन भाई ही ठीक कर सकते हैं या यह कहें कि समझ सकते हैं ।
वैसे लियोन भाई एक बार मेरी भी शादी करवा चुके हैं और वो भी एक नहीं बल्कि दो । एक तो नैना थी और दूसरी स्वाति । इसलिए हिसाब चुकता करने का समय आ गया है ।

खैर , अपडेट हमेशा की तरह मस्त मस्त था ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट ।

Aap aur apke sar ke baal.. bhai bacha kar rakho aage kaam ayega..

Itne jadu dekehe hai apne... HUmne to chote mote dekhe hath ki safai walle itne bade bade to nahi dekhe kabhi... Par beshak apko yakeen dilana chahunga ki ye koi jadu nahi tha balki ek hakikat thi.. AAp maan kar chalo kahani ke akhri phase ka sabse eham hissa yahi hai... Kahani aisa mixture hai jo aap hamesha kehte ho... Kya hai samajh nahi ata? Mujhe bhi nahi ata waise to

Jo bhi jagah dikhai gayi hai... vakai mein ... hakikat mein dikhane ke piche ki wajah hai... Bas judne ki der hai.. Mansion jud gaya ... ab jo bachi kuchi chizen hai vo bhi jod diya jayega...

Main tayar hun.. Aaruhi se baat kar aao aap log.. main nahi milta use..

Thanks sanju bhai keep reading

 

[harshit1890]

nice update ..to sabki najar me meghnath galat hai .waise shruti aur gagan ka sochna bhi sahi hai ki meghnath ne aaruhi ko apne vash me kiya hai . achanak aruhi ka waha aana ,usko kaise pata ki shruti kaha par hai .
rachna ke hone se gagan ko confident milta hai .

ab sabne soch liya hai ki wo mansion me jayenge meghnath ke saath aur uski jasusi bhi karenge .
aruhi ka nature jyada badla nahi hai ye jankar ki usko dawaiya di jaa rahi thi aur ab wo kisise baat bhi nahi kar rahi par meghnath se baat ki .

Shruti ki theory to alag level par hai jo ki apne aap mein ek dum sahi hai... Han wahi to sawal hai bhai kyun nahi badla.... Thanks leon bhai

romanchak update ..rachna ke upar gussa fut pada shruti ka kyunki usne kapde ka thaila wahi rakh diya tha ,par kuch jyada hi gaaliya bak di rachna ko .
kitchen se chaku churake le aaye hai apni raksha ke liye ..
aaruhi bhi aa gayi aur meghnath ke saath maujud hai par itne jaldi kaise pahuch gayi us jagah ..
mansion me itna darawna mahaul paida ho gaya hai ki sabki dhadkane tezz ho gayi hai .aaruhi ab bhi kisise baat nahi kar rahi siway meghnath ke .
ab to lagta hai ye box sachmuch kuch evil rahasya se bhara hua hai jiske open hote hi sabko andhere me apni chapat me le liya hai .
aise mahual me darr lagna aam baat hai .par shruti thoda himmat jutaye huye hai .

aur ab ye kaun aa gaya jisko khud pata nahi ki wo kaun hai ..
kya sab log sahi salamat bach payenge waha se .
ekdam dil dehla denewala scene paida ho gaya hai jisko padhkar maja aa gaya ..

Ab kuch to lana hi tha na apne aap ko bachane ke liye... Shruti matargasti karte hue aa rahi hogi ... isliye late ho gayi vo..
Thanks leon bhai.. Abhi to aage jaankar dil ki dhadkane... mathe mein confusion aur hamare liye gali bhari hogi... bas dekhte jao..

 

[Aakash.]

Girls Hostel​

By harshit1890 aka hariya kaka ​

​

Review on Chapter 1 ~ " Supriya " and Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "

Trying to give review after a long time if there is any mistake then ignore it. At first I didn't understand then later I understood that the story is going on in two different time frames. Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 are related to each other, when we understand both the chapters together everything makes sense, your method is a bit complicated but it is necessary to understand carefully and I liked your style.

Story started in a simple way it was interesting to know what girls talk about in private, especially for those who were in the boys' school from beginning to end, Not much difference. The fun of hostel is different those who have lived they know. You have created the atmosphere of the story very well, I liked it.

Main character Supriya or Aarohi both are weird but her innocent actions and loveliness touch my heart, Hariya kaka make my entry in the story I will fall in love with her. There is a tharki in all groups and Megha or Shruti is playing this role in this group. Some scenes were very scary like the night of the ruins and the scene of Shruti and Aarohi in the hostel was scary and I read the story at night so there is some problem. Along with all this, there is a confluence of comedy in the story that you have shown it very well, it seems that everything is happening before our eyes. maybe that's why I have not got bored till now and read 2 chapters in a single day.

The past and present are the same only the names and faces have changed, not much information was found in Supriya's time but everything is understandable in Aarohi, if it all happened with Aarohi the matter was different but when the incident happened that night also with Shruti So now I feel that everything is true. Jokes are good only to an extent otherwise the results are very wrong perhaps that's why Tanu and Lavanya died. There is a lot of suspense in the story, mind wanders.

Initially when Lavanya was taking ragging, Aarohi talked about periods and was scared, now understand what she wanted to say, river of blood flowing. In all this I am not able to connect Raveena's link with the story, how can she be Supriya's friend, she was already dead and everything became strange only after knowing in the ruins, one thing I also found strange Aarohi's parents have not come to college even once and there is hardly any talk on the phone, it seems that Aarohi is lying and Shruti also lied in front of everyone, the idea of the bathroom was hers and Raveena's death also happened there.

I still don't understand one thing, many times it happens or I have heard that person remembers about his past birth or is it reincarnation or whether Supriya's soul inside Shruti or Shruti is a psychic The patient who creates his own stories. After all, why is all this happening, why repeating itself

​

"uske chehre se jada baal to meri chut mein hai re pagal"

"bolti kyun nahi? jaban par semen rakha hai kya?"

"chut ki chutiya aurat"

" vo sirf tab tak jab tak susu karne ke liye ladka maa ka sahara leta hai aur ladki chaityun par pehli baar bra pehne ke liye maa ka.. uske baad school ki padai khatam.. uske baad sirf dunia dari sikhi jati hai "


"neki kar aur bhosde mein maal wali baat hai ye to"

"kyun ki ye professional hote hai.. salle sex bhi professional jaise hi karenge isliye.. "

to maa kasam mein teri chut stappeled kar dungi"
"

" tu behen ki lodi.. tera khandan behen ki lodi... sali kutiya.. khane par aisi tuti hui thi ki bina dekhe baith gayi aur ab mujhe gali de rahi hai.. aisi gand par laat marungi na ki thusne ke baad hugne ke liye baith bhi nahi payegi... mujhe gali deti hai... gandchatti.... "​

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story. I will try to get to the current update soon.​

 

[Aakash.]

Review on Chapter ~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia and "Chapter ~ 4 " A True Face "


In the first two chapters Aarohi was playing the lead role and in the latter two chapters it would not be wrong to say that Shruti is playing the lead role. Everyone is trying to solve this mystery together one side wants to help Aarohi and other side wants to know what is the reason behind the happenings in college but the more we try to solve it the more complicated it becomes.

Everything is normal in some updates but some updates like update number 60 are full of such visuals and intensity and thrill which I get completely engrossed while reading. Movie was mentioned in the story "The Exorcism of Emily Rose, I love watching horror stories and movies from the beginning and this movie was also very good, almost I have seen many movies of this genre till now.

Some questions are yet to be answered like in Chapter 3, Meghnath wanted to tell something about Aarohi but don't we know it yet, Aarohi lies in many things, why, there is a new one named soul in the story, We don't know much about him and Aarohi used to talk with him. Debu stole and there he worked for many years it never happened and his last meeting was with Aarohi, it seems a bit strange and that new guy who has come to work instead of Debu saw Aarohi in the bathroom because her hair is very long and she has an old relation with blood and after a day the same thing happened, I don't understand what was happening and why was this happening and it is not right to directly refute Gagan's words. On that day when Aarohi did not have mobile, who had called on Shruti's mobile and who was Shruti's place in the bathroom or Aarohi had put her mobile on speaker and kept it in the bathroom. Nothing is even known about the secret library, who is behind that wall?

There were two scenes in the story which I found very difficult to read, the first scene in which Ruby is forced by the father-son and the second scene in which forcibly done wrong with Manpreet, I do not want to tell whose fault it is or not but Whatever happened was very wrong, any such event in life has a very deep effect on the mind and people start praising what they see whether it is true or false it doesn't matter to them.

Everyone is thinking Aarohi is crazy but I don't think so and she is sweet Aarohi herself is such a mystery that till date no one has understood and my favorite character I love her changed behavior nowadays but I still think we are misunderstood, Is there a double role of Aarohi in this story I mean there are two Aarohi in the story and we don't even know There was also a scene in which Aarohi got angry what to say now seeing her angry, I love him even more but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

Shruti has taken full responsibility as a friend and cares only that matters, at present Shruti is feeling more upset than Aarohi or she has changed with time her desperation for director meeting proves this, this detective character is suiting her otherwise she just talks dirty throughout the day.

Sometimes it seems that there are so many secrets in the story but no one cares, the people in the meeting mean more than death about college prestige and money and maybe that's why they are denying the camera. People's are dying for so many years, something terribly wrong is going on there. Vandana's name came up in that meeting and I have already heard this name from Aarohi's mouth.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. ​

 

[Aakash.]

Chapter ~ 5 " The Antiquarian "

Update ~ 81 to Update ~~ 88


If my guess is correct then the story is in its final stages and I thought maybe this story will end by reaching my current update but it didn't happen I am so glad it is much more than that, That because of you I was able to read such a beautiful story.

Now coming to the story, I told from the beginning that what you see is not what you see and I used to consider Aarohi innocent from the beginning and still think that even if there is any mistake of her, I will call her innocent because she is very sweet and she is innocent, just seeing her makes me fall in love, Not a single character in the story has understood her except me, she is like a rose flower. Meghnath said that Aarohi does not have much time, I am very worried because of her it is not known when the journey of this story has passed. I am warning you that if anything happens to her...

Shruti and her friends are unable to understand what is the meaning of Aarohi's profile photo symbol, we will try to understand if at least share the photo with us in the update. Rachna said to Shruti, you have to go after four years that means let whatever is happening happen and you sit with your blindfold on, I didn't like her answer and I will break her head. Chutiya

Now coming to Meghnath, maybe this is the same boy who does black magic, Ruby said, Well through this the secret of the library came out for which I was curious, I understand why Meghnath is involved in this story, but I can't believe it, I still have to believe because there is no other option, his Egyptian box story was very interesting, Whatever is happening now is supernatural, so what will happen next cannot be predicted. harshit1890 Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank you...​

 

[Aakash.]

There is an addiction in your story which we have become used to and it is very difficult to get rid of it. your writing is commendable, Every single line, every single word touches the heart and makes you think, from the beginning your writing is such that every moment the mind is restless about what is going to happen next, you have written the story in such a way that serious scene has a combination of comedy as well as thrill and suspense such that for a moment the right mind wanders, While reading the story, I did not even feel for a moment that I am bored, I enjoyed reading it a lot, now just waiting.
I don't get it, it's such a good story but why are the readers here so few, Never mind, we'll recommend it to everyone.



​

 

[Aakash.]

Sun ye machalti raagini, Jaise teri adaa
Jazbaat ki ye mastiyaan, Teraa hi hai nasha...
​

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

जैसा कि पहले भी मैंने कहा यह कहानी आने वाले हर अपडेट के बाद उलझती ही जाती है। वही सब इन अपडेट्स में भी देखने को मिला ।‌‌ सबसे बड़ा कन्फ्यूजन तो कहानी का फैंटेसी में होना है जहां कुछ भी हो सकता है। भूत प्रेत... मैजिक.... थ्रीलर... सस्पेंस... सोशल एक्टिविटिज... कुछ भी हो सकता है। फैंटेसी शब्द ही बहुत ज्यादा कन्फ्यूज कर देती है।

इस अपडेट्स में जो हमने देखा वो भी कम हैरान करने वाला नहीं था। सातों लड़कों एवं लड़कियों को एक काली अदृश्य शक्ति ने अपने गिरफ्त में ले लिया और फिर करिश्माई ढंग से एक अद्भुत युवक सबके सामने उजागर हो गया। और यह सब उसी डिब्बे की वजह से हुआ। क्या है यह डब्बा? यह कैसी अनहोनी है ?

पहले तो लगा था कि आरूहि और मेघनाथ ने किसी कारणवश कोई षडयंत्र रच रखा है पर यहां तो वो दोनों भी भौंचक्के स्टैच्यू की तरह बूत बने अपनी आंखें फाड़े फाड़े देखे जा रहे थे।

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

मुझे तो यह जग्गू नाम की लड़की भी बहुत ज्यादा रहस्यमई लगती है । शायद उसका नाम जोगेश्वर है। भला अपनी लड़की का ऐसा नाम कौन मां बाप रखता है ?
इस कहानी में इस युवती का जिक्र बहुत बार हो चुका है और मुझे लगता है वो यूं ही नहीं हुआ होगा । इसी तरह किम, रचना , गगन जैसे सहायक किरदारों को भी अनेकों बार इम्पोर्टेंट जगहों पर देख चुके हैं। मुझे तो लगता है इनका भी जरूर कोई न कोई रहस्यमई एक्टिविटी इस पुरे घटना में हो सकता है। कहने का मतलब है इस कहानी के सभी पात्र संदेह के दायरे में है। सिर्फ श्रुति को छोड़कर।

आकाश भाई की टिप्पणी भी कभी कभी मुझे सच लगता है जैसे उन्होंने कहा कि कहीं आरूहि का डबल रोल तो नहीं ।

आप कहते हो कि जो भी इस कहानी में घटित हो रहा है वो सिर्फ चुतियापा है मगर मुझे ऐसा बिल्कुल ही नहीं लगता। क्योंकि मैंने आप की कई कहानियों को पढ़ा है और मुझे विश्वास भी है। बे सिर पैर की कहानी आप लिखते ही नहीं।
जो भी हो, ऐसा अद्भुत सस्पेंस मैंने तो कभी नहीं पढ़ा।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट अपडेट हर्षित भाई।

 

[Death Kiñg]

कहने का मतलब है इस कहानी के सभी पात्र संदेह के दायरे में है। सिर्फ श्रुति को छोड़कर

Aur yadi end mein pata chalta hai ki Shruti hi villain hai..

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Aur yadi end mein pata chalta hai ki Shruti hi villain hai..

Yadi aisa hua to sabse jyada khush Naina hogi... wo nafrat karti thi Shruti se.
Waise mujhe pura yakeen hai Naina ji jarur es kahani ko padh rahi hongi.