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Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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poster se bhutiya lag rahi hai kahani ..side me do aadmi dikh rahe hai ..aur hostel ke upar baadal mandra rahe hai ..par dekhte hai kahani kaisi hai ..
fantasy me hai isliye kaha ..
Thankoo so much for detail analysis... Mere bhi vistrit vichar kuch aise hi the... Nahi likha kyonki aap cnp kar lete to :D
 

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Shadi me bade fufi ka role me hai kya madam jo jibh dikha rahi... Kahani padhne ke liye reader ko bulana hoga... He to ghor kalyug hai :D
Aur yeh sab sirf aur sirf us tharki imli ki wajah se ho raha hai :sip:
 

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girls-hostel

Reality is Just an "Illusion"
toh yeh hai girls hostel :D
waise kaafi khubsurat hai.. aur sath hi amazing bhi... :check:
Bas intezaar hai toh bhoot bhootni ki joh hevaniyat ka ek naya level dikhaye hum sabhi ko :D pet fad antriya nikal de kirdaaro ka :D
 
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aur haan is story me na malini, bablu kaka aur manju bhoot bhootni hone chahiye.. jaise kisi college group ke kaaran (directly ya indirectly) woh tino maare gaye.. ab yeh log gaon ghumne aaye toh woh tino bhoot bhootni inlogo se badla le woh bhi khaufnaak tarike se.. pet pad antriya nikal de.. Aisi bhayanak :D
aur haan chaahe toh isme us tharki vikrant ko savior bana sakte hai.. jiski band baja de malini, manju aur bablu kaka ke aatmaye :D
aur haan isme meera bhi as a bhootni bana dijiye.. par chorni type ki bhootni hona chahiye.....
khauf ka aisa mahol banaye ki ruh tak kaanp jaaye, reedh ki haddi tak kap kapi cha jaaye.. :approve:
 
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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "

Andhere mein ek matr roshni tab hui jab phone vibrate hua aur uski screen se roshni ane lagi. Vo kuch der tak vibrate hota raha jiske baad uski ankh khuli. Usne takiye ke pas pada phone uthaya aur adhi nind mein hi screen par dekhti hui sochne lagi ki uska phone kharab ho gaya hai. Phone lagatar vibrate ho raha tha aur screen bhi usi tarah khuli hui thi jaise kisi ka phone to aya hai par uspar koi number maujud nahi tha. Usne phone par answer swipe kiya aur utne mei hi vo cut ho gaya. Katte hi phone lock ho gaya jise usne unlock kiya aur call log dekhne lagi. Wahan par sabse akhri aya phone abhi ka hi tha, 3 baj kar 3 minute lekin number likha nahi aa raha tha. Usne ubasi bhari aur phone lock karke wapis so gayi. Paki nind mein thi isliye ankh band karte hi nind aa gayi.

" uth ja kamini kab tak soyegi, sapne mein koi le raha hai kya teri " kamre ki khidki se ati suraj ki roshni uske chehre par padh rahi thi lekin vo uthne ka naam nahi le rahi thi. " dekh supriya tu ab nahi uthi to main maan lungi ki tu kisi ladke ko de rahi hai sapne mein " usne uska kandha hilaya aur phir uski chatiyun ke nipple ko khinch diye.

" haramzadi " nind mein chillate hue usne uska hath jhatak diya.

" he he he check kar rahi thi ki chudte hue sapno mein tere khade hue ki nahi " vo apne bistar par aa laiti aur phone utha liya. Supriya apna sina sehlati hui khadi hui aur jamai lete hue uth baithi. " tu badi kutiya hai megha "

" mera kutiya hone ka pata nahi lekin kutiya hokar chudna jarur pasand karungi " megha ne apne dimag mein kuch waisa hi pose bana liya.

" tujhe iske alawa kuch sujta hi nahi hai kabhi " baal banate hue supriya boli. Usne dono palang ke bich mein rakhe stool par se apna rubber band uthaya aur use balon mein bandhne lagi. " 8:30 baj gaye hain " baal bante waqt usne ghadi mein time dekha " aaj phir class miss ho jayegi " vo bed se khadi ho gayi.

" class chhod ye jo tu jhadne lagi hai na iska kuch kar " megha ne uske uthte hi ishara kiya. Supriya ne bistar par dekha to vo bhi hairan reh gayi, balon ke guche- guche pade the jaise uske baal raat utare gaye ho. " par tu ek baat bata mujhe, tere sar par ye kaisi jadh hai jo itna jhadne ke baad bhi khile hue hai? sala mujhe kabhi kabhi samajh nahi ata ki tere mein kami hai ya mere mein. Itne baal tutne ke baad bhi itne khile hue hai "

" teri nazar ki wajah se hi tut rahe hain, sara time nazar lagati rehti hai haramzadi kahin ki " muskurate hue usne jawab diya aur palang jhadte hue usne almari kholi. Jo kamre ke ek kone mein rakhi ek matr almari thi. Usi mein dono ke kapde rakhe hue the, kuch jarurat ka saman aur kitabein jo almari ke uppar rakhi thi. Supriya ne apne kapde nikale ek bra aur penty ke baad pajami nikala aur towel kandhe par daal kar bathroom ke andar ghus gayi.

" megha sahi keh rahi hai bahut baal jhadne lage hain, pata nahi kya hai, sab kuch try kar liya. Maa se puchna padega vahi koi desi ilaz batayegi " brush karte waqt khud ko aine mein dekhte hue supriya soch mein dubi hui thi. Bina nahaye bhi vo behad sundar lagti thi, use apni ankhein badi pyari lagti thi aur vo har dum bas usi ke bare mein sochti rehti thi, halki brown-black eyes use apni ankhon ke multi-color hone par naaz tha jo uske sundar chehre par nikhar kar ata tha. Brush karke usne apne sare kapde utare aur shower on kar diya. Aaj sar dhone ka din nahi tha lekin itne baal-tute the ki usne pani se sar dhona behtar samjha. Pani jaise-jaise uske balon ko bhigo raha tha waise waise uske baal tute hue niche gir rahe the aur behte hue nali mein jaa rahe the. Kuch der vo waisi hi nahati rahi aur baal usi tarah tute rahe. Fir usne shower band kiya aur apne sharir par sabun ache se ragda aur fir naha dho kar bahar nikli.

Sar par towel bandh kar vo bra aur pajami pehen kar bahar ayi " jaa naha le, na jane tab se kya kar rahi hai phone par "

" nahati hun yaar kya jaldi hai "

" class nahi leni tujhe? "

" leni to hai par class nahi kuch aur "

" hehehe sali haramzadi " supriya ne almari se ek kurta nikala, light blue color ka aur use pehen liya. Towel sar se utara aur baal pochne lagi.

" aaj tune sar gila kar liya? " megha ne phone se nazar hata kar use dekhte hi toka.

" han bahut baal jhade kal raat to socha dho lun aaj "

" tera dimag kharab hai, aaj amavas hai, aaj nahi dhote baal "

" are wah tu manti hai in sab mein " supriya ne uska mazak banate hue kaha.

" nahi mein nahi manti lekin tu agar lawda dilwa de to maane lagun " megha ne andaz mein kaha aur fir dono hasne lagi.

" teri aag shant nahi hoti, akash se baat nahi bani kya abhi tak? " apne aap ko savarte hue supriya baat kar rahi thi.

" usi ne to aag laga rakhi hai, sala subah-subah hi puchta hai ki kaisi ho? ab isko kaise bataun ki raat ki gili hun aur abhi tak sukhi nahi hun "

" badi besharam haramzadi hai tu " supriya ne mathe par choti bindi lagai jisne uske mathe ko aur nikhaar diya.

" jab niche se awaz ati hai to besharmi piche se bahar nikal jati hai. "

" chal ab ye batein chhod, mess mein nashta nahi milega aur mr. dutt ki class chutti to vo alag lenge baad mein, jaldi khadi ho ja " supriya ne megha ki taraf dekha jo sidhi laiti hui chatt ki taraf dekh rahi thi bas. " kya hua ab kya deewar par chadh kar akash ko degi? " supriya ki baat ka usne koi jawab nahi diya to chehre par ayi hansi gayab ho gayi. " megha? " vo uske pass ayi. " megha " hilane par bhi usne koi jawab nahi diya bas chatt ki aaur dekhti rahi " kya dekh rahi hai ? " achanak se aye badlav ne supriya ko bhi dara diya. Usne bhi ek pal himmat karke chatt ki taraf dekha lekin wahan kuch nahi tha sivai ek pankhe ke jo band pada tha.

" soch rahi hun ki akash mujhe kitni der tak chhod sakta hai " megha ke bolte hi supriya ne ek chanta uske gaal par laga diya.

" ek number ki haramzadi hai tu, main jaa rahi hun class " supriya ne books li aur bahar nikalne lagi " kitni der mein ayegi? " usne ek baar fir pucha.

" tu chal bas ati hun main " megha ke jawab dete hi supriya bahar nikal gayi. Uske jatte hi megha ne phone uthaya aur akash ka message fir se dekha jahan usne likha tha. ' tumhara yovan aisa hai ki ras niklta rahe aur mei use pita rahun ' kal raat ko aur subah ki hui baton mein kuch isi tarah ki baat thi par akash ke is message ke baad megha likh nahi payi thi kyun ki uska yovan niche se gila hota hi jaa raha tha.

Megha ne apna hath pajame ke andar dala aur penty ke uppar se apne yovan se bhari jawan chut ko chu liya aur fir use sehlane lagi. ' aahh ' bhari siskiyun ne uske badan ki tadap ko badhaya aur hath ki speed badh gayi. Abhi vo penty ke uppar se hi use masal rahi thi.

" main soch rahi thi ki aaj dutt ki class chodh deti hun aur tere liye canteen se kuch order kar deti hun, bata kya legi? " supriya gate khol kar andar ghusi to usne dekha megha apni chut sehlane mein lagi hui thi.

" supriya " megha use dikhte hi chillai aur usne apna hath bahar khinch liya. Bas iske aage vo kuch keh pati use pehle hostel mein ek shor gunj utha. Dono kamre se nikli aur corridor se niche ki taraf daudi.
 

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Ek toh hostel.. Upar se girls wala :shag: usme bhi horror....(as per poster) Maja aayega bidu.. Pura update padhte waqt isi intejaar me tha ki kon marega.. Kaun marega.. Megha jab kuch der ke liye bina bole leti rahi toh laga pela gayi hai... Ya fir mujhe laga ki abhi supriya upar dekhegi toh pankhe se megha ki laash latki hui milegi :D par lagta hai megha khayi piyi laundiya hai, bahut door tak jayegi... Aakash ki uchayiyo ko chhueyegi...
Ashleel baate :sigh: par badhiya thi.. Maja hee aa gaya...


" mera kutiya hone ka pata nahi lekin kutiya hokar chudna jarur pasand karungi " megha ne apne dimag mein kuch waisa hi pose bana liya.
:wtfrol:
" supriya " megha use dikhte hi chillai aur usne apna hath bahar khinch liya. Bas iske aage vo kuch keh pati use pehle hostel mein ek shor gunj utha. Dono kamre se nikli aur corridor se niche ki taraf daudi.
choda gaya koyi lagta hai :roflol:
 

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "

Andhere mein ek matr roshni tab hui jab phone vibrate hua aur uski screen se roshni ane lagi. Vo kuch der tak vibrate hota raha jiske baad uski ankh khuli. Usne takiye ke pas pada phone uthaya aur adhi nind mein hi screen par dekhti hui sochne lagi ki uska phone kharab ho gaya hai. Phone lagatar vibrate ho raha tha aur screen bhi usi tarah khuli hui thi jaise kisi ka phone to aya hai par uspar koi number maujud nahi tha. Usne phone par answer swipe kiya aur utne mei hi vo cut ho gaya. Katte hi phone lock ho gaya jise usne unlock kiya aur call log dekhne lagi. Wahan par sabse akhri aya phone abhi ka hi tha, 3 baj kar 3 minute lekin number likha nahi aa raha tha. Usne ubasi bhari aur phone lock karke wapis so gayi. Paki nind mein thi isliye ankh band karte hi nind aa gayi.

Wah phone ki ghanti bhi kya waqt dekhke baji hai :D

" uth ja kamini kab tak soyegi, sapne mein koi le raha hai kya teri " kamre ki khidki se ati suraj ki roshni uske chehre par padh rahi thi lekin vo uthne ka naam nahi le rahi thi. " dekh supriya tu ab nahi uthi to main maan lungi ki tu kisi ladke ko de rahi hai sapne mein " usne uska kandha hilaya aur phir uski chatiyun ke nipple ko khinch diye.
Tharki friend ki tharakpanti se pareshan bechari supriya :D

" haramzadi " nind mein chillate hue usne uska hath jhatak diya.

" he he he check kar rahi thi ki chudte hue sapno mein tere khade hue ki nahi " vo apne bistar par aa laiti aur phone utha liya. Supriya apna sina sehlati hui khadi hui aur jamai lete hue uth baithi. " tu badi kutiya hai megha "

" mera kutiya hone ka pata nahi lekin kutiya hokar chudna jarur pasand karungi " megha ne apne dimag mein kuch waisa hi pose bana liya.

" tujhe iske alawa kuch sujta hi nahi hai kabhi " baal banate hue supriya boli. Usne dono palang ke bich mein rakhe stool par se apna rubber band uthaya aur use balon mein bandhne lagi. " 8:30 baj gaye hain " baal bante waqt usne ghadi mein time dekha " aaj phir class miss ho jayegi " vo bed se khadi ho gayi.

" class chhod ye jo tu jhadne lagi hai na iska kuch kar " megha ne uske uthte hi ishara kiya. Supriya ne bistar par dekha to vo bhi hairan reh gayi, balon ke guche- guche pade the jaise uske baal raat utare gaye ho. " par tu ek baat bata mujhe, tere sar par ye kaisi jadh hai jo itna jhadne ke baad bhi khile hue hai? sala mujhe kabhi kabhi samajh nahi ata ki tere mein kami hai ya mere mein. Itne baal tutne ke baad bhi itne khile hue hai "
Btw friend megha kutiya hi nahi balki tharki kamini bhi hai.. chahe toh likh ke le lo :roflol:

" teri nazar ki wajah se hi tut rahe hain, sara time nazar lagati rehti hai haramzadi kahin ki " muskurate hue usne jawab diya aur palang jhadte hue usne almari kholi. Jo kamre ke ek kone mein rakhi ek matr almari thi. Usi mein dono ke kapde rakhe hue the, kuch jarurat ka saman aur kitabein jo almari ke uppar rakhi thi. Supriya ne apne kapde nikale ek bra aur penty ke baad pajami nikala aur towel kandhe par daal kar bathroom ke andar ghus gayi.

" megha sahi keh rahi hai bahut baal jhadne lage hain, pata nahi kya hai, sab kuch try kar liya. Maa se puchna padega vahi koi desi ilaz batayegi " brush karte waqt khud ko aine mein dekhte hue supriya soch mein dubi hui thi. Bina nahaye bhi vo behad sundar lagti thi, use apni ankhein badi pyari lagti thi aur vo har dum bas usi ke bare mein sochti rehti thi, halki brown-black eyes use apni ankhon ke multi-color hone par naaz tha jo uske sundar chehre par nikhar kar ata tha. Brush karke usne apne sare kapde utare aur shower on kar diya. Aaj sar dhone ka din nahi tha lekin itne baal-tute the ki usne pani se sar dhona behtar samjha. Pani jaise-jaise uske balon ko bhigo raha tha waise waise uske baal tute hue niche gir rahe the aur behte hue nali mein jaa rahe the. Kuch der vo waisi hi nahati rahi aur baal usi tarah tute rahe. Fir usne shower band kiya aur apne sharir par sabun ache se ragda aur fir naha dho kar bahar nikli.
vitamin B ki kami.. maybe protein ki bhi.. khan pan pe dhyaan rakhna chahiye..
anyway..
toh yeh supriya maybe is story ki lead heroine hai aur megha second lead mein :D
Par marna toh sabko hi hai end mein.. hai na harshit1890 saheb :D

Sar par towel bandh kar vo bra aur pajami pehen kar bahar ayi " jaa naha le, na jane tab se kya kar rahi hai phone par "

" nahati hun yaar kya jaldi hai "

" class nahi leni tujhe? "

" leni to hai par class nahi kuch aur "

" hehehe sali haramzadi " supriya ne almari se ek kurta nikala, light blue color ka aur use pehen liya. Towel sar se utara aur baal pochne lagi.

" aaj tune sar gila kar liya? " megha ne phone se nazar hata kar use dekhte hi toka.

" han bahut baal jhade kal raat to socha dho lun aaj "

" tera dimag kharab hai, aaj amavas hai, aaj nahi dhote baal "

" are wah tu manti hai in sab mein " supriya ne uska mazak banate hue kaha.

" nahi mein nahi manti lekin tu agar lawda dilwa de to maane lagun " megha ne andaz mein kaha aur fir dono hasne lagi.

" teri aag shant nahi hoti, akash se baat nahi bani kya abhi tak? " apne aap ko savarte hue supriya baat kar rahi thi.

" usi ne to aag laga rakhi hai, sala subah-subah hi puchta hai ki kaisi ho? ab isko kaise bataun ki raat ki gili hun aur abhi tak sukhi nahi hun "

" badi besharam haramzadi hai tu " supriya ne mathe par choti bindi lagai jisne uske mathe ko aur nikhaar diya.

" jab niche se awaz ati hai to besharmi piche se bahar nikal jati hai. "

" chal ab ye batein chhod, mess mein nashta nahi milega aur mr. dutt ki class chutti to vo alag lenge baad mein, jaldi khadi ho ja " supriya ne megha ki taraf dekha jo sidhi laiti hui chatt ki taraf dekh rahi thi bas. " kya hua ab kya deewar par chadh kar akash ko degi? " supriya ki baat ka usne koi jawab nahi diya to chehre par ayi hansi gayab ho gayi. " megha? " vo uske pass ayi. " megha " hilane par bhi usne koi jawab nahi diya bas chatt ki aaur dekhti rahi " kya dekh rahi hai ? " achanak se aye badlav ne supriya ko bhi dara diya. Usne bhi ek pal himmat karke chatt ki taraf dekha lekin wahan kuch nahi tha sivai ek pankhe ke jo band pada tha.

" soch rahi hun ki akash mujhe kitni der tak chhod sakta hai " megha ke bolte hi supriya ne ek chanta uske gaal par laga diya.

" ek number ki haramzadi hai tu, main jaa rahi hun class " supriya ne books li aur bahar nikalne lagi " kitni der mein ayegi? " usne ek baar fir pucha.

" tu chal bas ati hun main " megha ke jawab dete hi supriya bahar nikal gayi. Uske jatte hi megha ne phone uthaya aur akash ka message fir se dekha jahan usne likha tha. ' tumhara yovan aisa hai ki ras niklta rahe aur mei use pita rahun ' kal raat ko aur subah ki hui baton mein kuch isi tarah ki baat thi par akash ke is message ke baad megha likh nahi payi thi kyun ki uska yovan niche se gila hota hi jaa raha tha.

Megha ne apna hath pajame ke andar dala aur penty ke uppar se apne yovan se bhari jawan chut ko chu liya aur fir use sehlane lagi. ' aahh ' bhari siskiyun ne uske badan ki tadap ko badhaya aur hath ki speed badh gayi. Abhi vo penty ke uppar se hi use masal rahi thi.

" main soch rahi thi ki aaj dutt ki class chodh deti hun aur tere liye canteen se kuch order kar deti hun, bata kya legi? " supriya gate khol kar andar ghusi to usne dekha megha apni chut sehlane mein lagi hui thi.
had hai besharmi ki yaar.. yeh megha toh hawasi malini ko bhi piche chhod di.. :D
bechari supriya kya dekh liya :roflol: ab toh uske liye bhi bardast ke bahar hai :D

" supriya " megha use dikhte hi chillai aur usne apna hath bahar khinch liya. Bas iske aage vo kuch keh pati use pehle hostel mein ek shor gunj utha. Dono kamre se nikli aur corridor se niche ki taraf daudi.
waise uski bhi kya galti joh aise megha chilla rahi hai . megha ko dhyan rakhni chaahiye in baaton pe.. :D
Btw lage ki dono kaafi close friends hai..
Waise kahani ki suruwat joh huyi hai lage ki thodi bahot thrill suspense bhi suru ho chuki hai readers ke liye..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab :applause: :applause:
 

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" tumne kya socha tha bra mein condom chupaogi warden ko malum nahi chalega, Shailja naam hai mera har chiz ki khabar rakhti hun "

" par warden condom rakhna koi jurm to nahi hai? " jis ladki ko warden ne pakda tha vo boli.

" Tu mujhe kanun samjhayegi, aaj condom kal launda layegi mere hostel mein. Tera ek hafte tak hostel se nikalna band "

" lekin college ? "

" college ki chinta tujhe is condom ko latte hue nahi hui "

" warden lekin "

" agli baar mujhe ye dikha aur sirf tere pas hi nahi kisi ke pas bhi to pure mahine kisi ko hostel se nikalne nahi dungi, chalo sab jao yahan se " warden chillate hue apne kamre ki taraf badh gayi.

" ek number ki madarchodni warden hai "

" iska pati ise chodta nahi hai kya? jo condom dekh kar itna bhadak gayi "

" aisi aurat ka pati hoga lagta hai, ek number ki randi hai sali, sahi kehte hain ise hostel wale, jaisi gand wesi rand " apas mein ladkiyan baat kar rahi aur jab tak supriya megha niche aye bheed chatt chuki thi.

" kya ho raha tha yahan ? " megha ne char ladkiyun ki taraf dekhte hue pucha jinme se ek vo bhi thi jiska condom warden le gayi thi.

" kuch nahi wahi warden iska condom le gayi aur ye bhi kaha ki agar koi condom laya to 1 mahine tak use hostel se bahar nikalne nahi degi "

" condom kyun? aur tu condom ka kya kar rahi thi jaggu ? " jaggu ka asli naam Jageshwari Chautala Singh tha. Isne jab sab ke samne apna intro diya tha to hostel ki ladkiyun ne iski gand hi maar li thi iske naam ko lekar isliye isne apna naam jaggu kar diya. Thi ye punjaban aur us wajah se behad sundar bhi lekin akal kam hone ki wajah se ek bhi ladka ise do din se jada baat nahi kar pata tha. Megha aur supriya ke batch ki hi thi isliye megha ise janti thi aur supriya bas utna hi jitna megha ne bataya tha.

" yar megha condom ka ad dekha kal chochlate flavor vala to socha kharid kar dekhti hun ki iska flavour hota kithe hai " jaggu ki baat sun supriya megha aur megha use ghurne lagi " par warden le gayi ab pata nahi vo kya karegi "

" koi baat nahi main tujhe lakar dungi, stawberry wala, tu chhod warden ko vaise bhi tujhe to pata hai na ki vo "

" burchatti hai aur sonu ko apni gand deti hai "

" correct " megha ne jaggu ke chehre par muskan laa di thi. Vo use thank you bol aur condom lane ka yaad dila kar wahan se chali gayi. Supriya ne uski taraf dekha mano keh rahi ho ki kya chal raha hai ye sab?

" padai ke alawa tujhe sab karna hai "

" tabhi to hostel aye hai meri jaan varna padai to ghar se bhi ho jati hai. Lekin jo karam kand hostel mein hote hain unka to maza hi alag hota hai "

" tune warden ki warning nahi suni? agar usne tujhe pakad liya to "

" condom hi hai vo aise jagah ghusaungi jahan koi nahi dhund payega "

" kahan? "

" jahan lawda ghusta hai meri jaan "

" haramzadi hai tu, main jaa rahi hun, tu aa rahi hai na? "

" han bas ati hun tu canteen mein kuch order karke rakhio " megha vapis apne room ki taraf chal di aur supriya college ki taraf. Girls hostel se nikalte hi ek lamba corridor tha jiske us paar boys hostel tha aur college ke andar jane ka rasta unka usi taraf se tha. Boys hostel ke kisi bhi ladke ko is taraf se college mein dakhil hone ki permission nahi thi jiski wajah kuch saal pehle hua ek kand tha jiske bare mein supriya ko abhi tak malum nahi hua tha. Par fir bhi kai baar ladke apni mehbubaon se milne ke liye hostel ki piche wali deewar fank liya karte the jisme madad unki mehbubyaein hi karti thi. Supriya ne hostel ko piche chhoda aur vo college ke premises mein pahunch gayi. College ke premisis ke bheetar pahunchte hi uski nazar entrance gate par padi jahan kuch ladkiyan khadi thi jinhe dekhte hi vo samajh gayi ki vo charon ladkiyan wahi hai jinse vo pehle din takrai thi. Supriya ko waise to der ho rahi thi lekin vo wahin khadi rahi aur us taraf dekhti rahi, phir unhi ki taraf chalte hue ek kone mein jaa khadi hui jahan se chehre saaf ho gaye aur unki awazein bhi. " Tanu " supriya uska chehra kaise bhool sakti thi, college ke final year mein thi aur pehle din yahi use takrai thi.

" naam kya bataya tha tune apna? "

" ji veena "

" vagina ye kaisa naam hua bhala? " tanu ne mazak udaya aur charon ek sath hasne lagi. Samne khadi do ladkiyun ne nazre jhuka rakhi thi, vo behad ghabra rahi thi.

" tere maa baap ko vagina se itna pyar tha ki unhone naam usi par rakh diya "

" ji vag..vagina nahi veena " veena ne ghabrate hue jawab diya.

" acha chal naam mein kya rakha hai, vagina tu ye bata tere chuchiyun ka size kya hai, dekhne mein to ache lag rahe hain "

" ji vo vo " veena ne apne sath khadi ladki ki taraf dekha jo nazar jhukaye khadi thi jise abhi tak ek bhi sawal nahi kiya gaya tha abhi tak sarre hamle usi par ho rahe the.

" tu uski fikar mat kar uska bhi number ayega, tu apna bata chal " samne se awaz sun veena ne ek pal rahat ki sans li.

" didi vo.. "

" didi? main teri didi lagti hun sali chutiya hai kya? tujhe malum nahi ki seniors ko kya bolte hain ? "

" sorry vo galti se nikal gaya "

" galti se mera nikal gaya na peshab to wahi pila dungi, chal bata jaldi apni chuchiyun ka size bata ? "

" 32 B " usne fatafat se jawab diya.

" are wah dekh rahi hai komal iski jawani, pakka kai laundo se dabwati aa rahi hogi, chut masalti hai apni? bata-bata sharma mat " koni marte hue vo veena se boli.

" ji nahi.. "

" jhuth bolti hai apne senior se jhuth bolti hai, komal ise shift ke baad apne kamre mein lekar aa, zara dekhe ye jhooth bol rahi hai ya nahi, abhi tu jaa vagina shift ke baad milio "

" main sach bol rahi hun " veena ke sine par pasina tha jo fisalta hua uske top mein se andar ghus raha tha.

" vo tu nahi main bataungi chal bhag " veena ghabrate hue jane lagi aur uske sath jo ladki thi vo bhi lekin Tanu ne use rok liya " tu kahan jaa rahi hai? tujhe bola hai abhi jane ko? "

" lagta hai lesbian hai dono ek dusre mein ungli karne ka man ho gaya hoga " komal bol kar hasne lagi.

" lesbian hai tu? " tanu ke puchne par vo sar na mein hilane lagi " jaise gardan hila rahi hai waise lawda hilaya hai kabhi? "

Supriya ise jada dekhti use pehle vo wahan se hatt gayi ye in logon ka aksar ka kaam tha, abhi ek mahina bhi nahi hua naya batch chalu hue aur ye roz khadi ho jati hai nayi ladkiyun ki marne mein. Badi hi jaleel hai ye tanu maa kasam mera bas chalta na to isko hostel ke gate ke aage nanga karke tangti aur ek danda iske niche se dal kar muh se nikal deti aur fir puchti kaisa laga vagina mein lawda? Main bhi kya soch rahi hun, ye sab megha ka asar hai.
 
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