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Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

harshit1890

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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Main kaam ke silsile me u.p. ke ek gaun aaya hu aur yaha na to net chalta hai aur na hi thik se network pakdta hai. Friday ko Kolkata pahuch kar hi padh sakta hu. Esi chakkar me contest me bhi kisi story par review nahi de paya.
 

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Main kaam ke silsile me u.p. ke ek gaun aaya hu aur yaha na to net chalta hai aur na hi thik se network pakdta hai. Friday ko Kolkata pahuch kar hi padh sakta hu. Esi chakkar me contest me bhi kisi story par review nahi de paya.
Ju kolkatta se ho :D
 
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" tumne kya socha tha bra mein condom chupaogi warden ko malum nahi chalega, Shailja naam hai mera har chiz ki khabar rakhti hun "

" par warden condom rakhna koi jurm to nahi hai? " jis ladki ko warden ne pakda tha vo boli.

" Tu mujhe kanun samjhayegi, aaj condom kal launda layegi mere hostel mein. Tera ek hafte tak hostel se nikalna band "

" lekin college ? "

" college ki chinta tujhe is condom ko latte hue nahi hui "

" warden lekin "

" agli baar mujhe ye dikha aur sirf tere pas hi nahi kisi ke pas bhi to pure mahine kisi ko hostel se nikalne nahi dungi, chalo sab jao yahan se " warden chillate hue apne kamre ki taraf badh gayi.

" ek number ki madarchodni warden hai "

" iska pati ise chodta nahi hai kya? jo condom dekh kar itna bhadak gayi "

" aisi aurat ka pati hoga lagta hai, ek number ki randi hai sali, sahi kehte hain ise hostel wale, jaisi gand wesi rand " apas mein ladkiyan baat kar rahi aur jab tak supriya megha niche aye bheed chatt chuki thi.

" kya ho raha tha yahan ? " megha ne char ladkiyun ki taraf dekhte hue pucha jinme se ek vo bhi thi jiska condom warden le gayi thi.

" kuch nahi wahi warden iska condom le gayi aur ye bhi kaha ki agar koi condom laya to 1 mahine tak use hostel se bahar nikalne nahi degi "

" condom kyun? aur tu condom ka kya kar rahi thi jaggu ? " jaggu ka asli naam Jageshwari Chautala Singh tha. Isne jab sab ke samne apna intro diya tha to hostel ki ladkiyun ne iski gand hi maar li thi iske naam ko lekar isliye isne apna naam jaggu kar diya. Thi ye punjaban aur us wajah se behad sundar bhi lekin akal kam hone ki wajah se ek bhi ladka ise do din se jada baat nahi kar pata tha. Megha aur supriya ke batch ki hi thi isliye megha ise janti thi aur supriya bas utna hi jitna megha ne bataya tha.

" yar megha condom ka ad dekha kal chochlate flavor vala to socha kharid kar dekhti hun ki iska flavour hota kithe hai " jaggu ki baat sun supriya megha aur megha use ghurne lagi " par warden le gayi ab pata nahi vo kya karegi "

" koi baat nahi main tujhe lakar dungi, stawberry wala, tu chhod warden ko vaise bhi tujhe to pata hai na ki vo "

" burchatti hai aur sonu ko apni gand deti hai "

" correct " megha ne jaggu ke chehre par muskan laa di thi. Vo use thank you bol aur condom lane ka yaad dila kar wahan se chali gayi. Supriya ne uski taraf dekha mano keh rahi ho ki kya chal raha hai ye sab?

" padai ke alawa tujhe sab karna hai "

" tabhi to hostel aye hai meri jaan varna padai to ghar se bhi ho jati hai. Lekin jo karam kand hostel mein hote hain unka to maza hi alag hota hai "

" tune warden ki warning nahi suni? agar usne tujhe pakad liya to "

" condom hi hai vo aise jagah ghusaungi jahan koi nahi dhund payega "

" kahan? "

" jahan lawda ghusta hai meri jaan "

" haramzadi hai tu, main jaa rahi hun, tu aa rahi hai na? "

" han bas ati hun tu canteen mein kuch order karke rakhio " megha vapis apne room ki taraf chal di aur supriya college ki taraf. Girls hostel se nikalte hi ek lamba corridor tha jiske us paar boys hostel tha aur college ke andar jane ka rasta unka usi taraf se tha. Boys hostel ke kisi bhi ladke ko is taraf se college mein dakhil hone ki permission nahi thi jiski wajah kuch saal pehle hua ek kand tha jiske bare mein supriya ko abhi tak malum nahi hua tha. Par fir bhi kai baar ladke apni mehbubaon se milne ke liye hostel ki piche wali deewar fank liya karte the jisme madad unki mehbubyaein hi karti thi. Supriya ne hostel ko piche chhoda aur vo college ke premises mein pahunch gayi. College ke premisis ke bheetar pahunchte hi uski nazar entrance gate par padi jahan kuch ladkiyan khadi thi jinhe dekhte hi vo samajh gayi ki vo charon ladkiyan wahi hai jinse vo pehle din takrai thi. Supriya ko waise to der ho rahi thi lekin vo wahin khadi rahi aur us taraf dekhti rahi, phir unhi ki taraf chalte hue ek kone mein jaa khadi hui jahan se chehre saaf ho gaye aur unki awazein bhi. " Tanu " supriya uska chehra kaise bhool sakti thi, college ke final year mein thi aur pehle din yahi use takrai thi.

" naam kya bataya tha tune apna? "

" ji veena "

" vagina ye kaisa naam hua bhala? " tanu ne mazak udaya aur charon ek sath hasne lagi. Samne khadi do ladkiyun ne nazre jhuka rakhi thi, vo behad ghabra rahi thi.

" tere maa baap ko vagina se itna pyar tha ki unhone naam usi par rakh diya "

" ji vag..vagina nahi veena " veena ne ghabrate hue jawab diya.

" acha chal naam mein kya rakha hai, vagina tu ye bata tere chuchiyun ka size kya hai, dekhne mein to ache lag rahe hain "

" ji vo vo " veena ne apne sath khadi ladki ki taraf dekha jo nazar jhukaye khadi thi jise abhi tak ek bhi sawal nahi kiya gaya tha abhi tak sarre hamle usi par ho rahe the.

" tu uski fikar mat kar uska bhi number ayega, tu apna bata chal " samne se awaz sun veena ne ek pal rahat ki sans li.

" didi vo.. "

" didi? main teri didi lagti hun sali chutiya hai kya? tujhe malum nahi ki seniors ko kya bolte hain ? "

" sorry vo galti se nikal gaya "

" galti se mera nikal gaya na peshab to wahi pila dungi, chal bata jaldi apni chuchiyun ka size bata ? "

" 32 B " usne fatafat se jawab diya.

" are wah dekh rahi hai komal iski jawani, pakka kai laundo se dabwati aa rahi hogi, chut masalti hai apni? bata-bata sharma mat " koni marte hue vo veena se boli.

" ji nahi.. "

" jhuth bolti hai apne senior se jhuth bolti hai, komal ise shift ke baad apne kamre mein lekar aa, zara dekhe ye jhooth bol rahi hai ya nahi, abhi tu jaa vagina shift ke baad milio "

" main sach bol rahi hun " veena ke sine par pasina tha jo fisalta hua uske top mein se andar ghus raha tha.

" vo tu nahi main bataungi chal bhag " veena ghabrate hue jane lagi aur uske sath jo ladki thi vo bhi lekin Tanu ne use rok liya " tu kahan jaa rahi hai? tujhe bola hai abhi jane ko? "

" lagta hai lesbian hai dono ek dusre mein ungli karne ka man ho gaya hoga " komal bol kar hasne lagi.

" lesbian hai tu? " tanu ke puchne par vo sar na mein hilane lagi " jaise gardan hila rahi hai waise lawda hilaya hai kabhi? "

Supriya ise jada dekhti use pehle vo wahan se hatt gayi ye in logon ka aksar ka kaam tha, abhi ek mahina bhi nahi hua naya batch chalu hue aur ye roz khadi ho jati hai nayi ladkiyun ki marne mein. Badi hi jaleel hai ye tanu maa kasam mera bas chalta na to isko hostel ke gate ke aage nanga karke tangti aur ek danda iske niche se dal kar muh se nikal deti aur fir puchti kaisa laga vagina mein lawda? Main bhi kya soch rahi hun, ye sab megha ka asar hai.
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" Kahan reh gayi ye ladki " shruti college ke piche wale gate par khadi rachna ka intezar kar rahi thi. Aaruhi ko usne pehle hi bhej diya tha jabki vo bar-bar keh rahi thi ki uske sar mein dard hai man nahi hai jane ka lekin aaruhi ko vo hostel nahi chhodna chahti thi isliye usne use bahane laga kar bheja ki aaj padai nahi hogi bas jakar proxy laga de taki baad mein dikkat na ho. Apne liye usne bahana lagaya ki use loose motion lag gaye hain to vo thoda late hi ayegi. Rachna ka intezar karte hue vo bar-bar college ke andar dekh rahi thi. 9 baj chuke the lekin college mein utni chehal pehal nahi thi jitni honi chahie thi.

" jaldi aa.. " shruti ne wahin se rachna ko awaz di jo bahut dhime-dhime aa rahi thi " tere peron mein chhot lagi hai ? " rachna ke atte hi shruti ne pucha.

" nahi to " bhuji awaz mein vo boli.

" to fir itne aram se kyun aa rahi thi, kab se wait kar rahi hun tera, aaruhi mujhe khojte hue idhar ayi to use malum chal jayega "

" kya malum chal jayega "

" yahi ki mera phone tuta hai aur uske baad vo sawal par sawal karegi tu ye le.. jaldi se.. ise theek kara ke de " shruti ne apna phone rachna ke hath mein thamaya " paise hai ya dun? "

" abhi hai.. baad mein dio.. " vo abhi bhi ghabrahat mein bol rahi thi.

" tu theek hai ? " shruti ne pucha.

" haa...aa.. mujhe kya hua " uska chehra puri tarah se utra hua tha.

" tujhe koi bhi dekhega to yahi manega ki tu jhooth bol rahi hai... tu meri baat dhayan se sun kal jo hua vo sirf hume pata hai aur kisi ko nahi.. samjhi...waise bhi police yahi manti hai ki suraj ne suicide kiya hai yani ki isme koi bhi shamil nai hai tu bas apna ye dara hua chehra ghar par kahin dafna de.."

" vo ghar par.. " rachna bich mein boli to shruti ne use fauran chup kara dia.

" shirt le lenge.. bas tu ye bata jahan tune rakhi hai wahan teri didi to nahi ati na? "

" nahi.. shayad.. "

" shayad ya nahi? "

" nahi.. "

" to bas befikar reh.. main vishal se mil kar us shirt ka bhi namonishan mita denge.. tu bas shant reh.. kisi ke samne kuch bhi mat bak dio.. samjhi? "

" han... "

" theek hai ja fir.. aur dophar ko 2 baje milio "

" han... shruti.. " shruti wahan se jati use pehle rachna ne roka.

" han bol "

" aaruhi ko kya hua tha ? vo aise nangi chat par kyun khadi thi? " rachna ka sawal sun shruti ek pal use ghurti rahi aur fir college ke andar atte waqt bhi uske dimag mein wahi chalta raha ki aaruhi nangi chat par kya kar rahi thi. Itna hi nahi balki bathroom mein us shower par lage khoon se kya sambhand tha? Aur fir usi raat suraj ki maut, ye sab ek coincidence ya fir. Shruti abhi soch mein thi ki use apne kandhe par kuch mehsus hote hi vo soch se shocked avastha mein bahar ayi aur vo usi disha ki taraf mudh gayi.

" kab se awaz de raha tha, kaun si soch mein thi ? " vishal ne shruti ke chehre ke ude rang ko dekhte hue kaha.

" vishal.. tum.. theek ho...main tumse hi milna chahti thi isliye tumhari class ki taraf jaa rahi thi " shruti ne usi lehaze mein apni baat rakhi.

" class mein jane ka koi fayda nahi hota, aaj classes cancel kar di hai "

" tum theek ho " shruti ne fir pucha.

" han.. main theek hun "

" kal raat ke bare mein.. kisi ko pata to nahi chala " shruti ne is dafa awaz dhimi rakhi.

" kahin aur chal kar baat karein " vishal ki baat sahi thi isliye dono library ki taraf badh chale. Aaj library khali thi, exams ke baad aksar aisa hi hota tha aur garmi se bachne ki ek matr sahi jagah wahi thi. Dono ek kone mein baithe the bina matlab ki kitab ko khole, jo bhi baat karni thi dhire se hi krni thi varna is khali sanate mein vo jada gunjne wali thi.

" library ki jagah kahin aur baat karte.. yahan awaz gunjegi " shruti ne vishal ko dabi awaz mein kaha.

" nahi jaa sakte " vishal ki nazar book par thi mano wo padh raha ho.

" kyun? " shruti ne ascharya se pucha warna uske dimag mein sports room hi aa raha tha ki vishal wahan kyun nahi le gaya use.

" hum nazar mein aa jayenge isliye "

" matlab? " shruti shocked thi " suraj ne to suicide kiya hai na? "

" tumhe kisne kaha? " vishal ne shruti ki taraf dekha.

" kal tumhara hi warden bol raha tha "

" hmm " vishal chup hua.

" suicide hi hai ya kuch aur ? " shruti ne pucha.

" police case ko to usi taraf kar rahi hai kyun ki uske alawa koi sabut nahi hai lekin uske parents nahi maan rahe. Vo keh rahe hain ki unke bache ke pas koi aisi wajah thi hi nahi.. Aur ab jab postmartam mein pata chal jayega ki suraj ne pii rakhi thi to suicide walla angle hat kar accident par aa jayega ya fir ... "

" fir? "

" fir murder par "

" murder.. " shruti thodi unchi awaz mein boli aur use galti realize hui " murder kaise.. "

" parents dabav daal sakte hain, police us angle se dekhegi aur usi tarah puch tach bhi karegi "

" jaise gaggan se ki? "

" tumhe kaise pata? " vishal yahi soch raha tha ki is ladki ko batein pata kaise chal jati hai. " puch taach hui thi.. akhri phone suraj ne gaggan ko hi kiya tha.. par "

" par? "

" par uski jagah mene uthaya tha "

" shit.. yani tumse bhi puch tach hui? "

" han.. mujhse aur gaggan dono se ek sath "

" kya bole tum? " vishal ka latka chehra dekh shruti ghabra rahi thi.

" jo sach tha wahi " vishal ki baat sunte hi shruti ko samajh nahi aya ki vo kaise react kare. Chikh-chillaye ya vishal ko thapad hi thapad mare ya fir bhag jaye yahan se.

" vishal tumne.. sab bata dia.. " dant piste hue shruti boli " tum " shruti bas itna hi keh payi.

" jaruri tha shruti.. do minute meri baat suno. Police ka sidha sawal tha humse ki hum kahan the kal raat? Sawal behad simple tha lekin jawab utna hi teda tha. Ek hi pal tha mere pas sochne ka aur equation yahi keh rahi thi ki mujhe kya kehna hai isliye mene sach kaha " vishal ek pal chup hua " Suraj ka last year tha, vo aksar hostel mein ladkon ke sath party karta tha jisme sharab hoti hi thi. Kal raat bhi wahi hua, main gaggan ke alawa teen ladke aur the Kamal, Niresh aur Jagat, teeno hamare hi hostel ke the aur hum pancho suraj ke sath party kar rahe the. Suraj humse 3 saal senior tha aur use mana karna yani seniors se panga isliye hum wahan gaye wahan humne pii aur raat ko 12 bajne se pehle hum wapis apne kamre mein pahunch gaye. Jab shor hua tab hum log niche aye jahan par bheed lagi hui thi aur usi bheed mein humne dekha ki samne suraj ki laash padi hai. Ye sach police ne suna, gaggan ne suna aur yahi hamara sach tha " vishal ne batane ke baad ek sans chhodi. Shruti use aise ghur rahi thi mano yahi sach hai jo usne abhi suna.

" tumhara matlab ladkiyun ka jikar nai hua? mera jikar nahi hua, tum gayab the uska jikar nahi hua ? " shruti ne ek sath kayi sawal kiye.

" Nahi.. Hostel ka rule hai jo bhi ho jaye agar koi ladki unke sath party kar rahi hai to unke bare mein kisi ko nahi pata chalne wala tha. Waise bhi police is baat par dhayan hi nahi degi kyun ki koi bhi girls hostel ka warden ye prove hi nahi hone dega ki unke hostel se ladkiyan nikli hai, tum janti ho unki naukri ke sath kya hoga aur aise mande walle halat mein koi nahi chahta kisi ki naukri jaye. Dusri taraf rahi baat tumhari to tumhare bare mein to gaggan tak ko yaad nahi ki tum kal wahan ayi thi aur mili bhi thi use kal raat. Isliye tumhare bare mein jikar nahi hua, aaruhi ke bare mein jikar nahi hua aur hamara sach bhi police ke samne aa gaya. Police ko postmartam ke baad pukhta ho jayega ki mene jo bataya sahi bataya ab agar unka shaq hum par gaya bhi to koi proof nahi hoga unke pas ki humara uske suicide mein koi hath hai. Uppar se warden ne ye tak keh diya ki koi bhi student hostel ke bahar tha hi nahi sab ke sab hostel mein the. Suraj ke parents bhale hi kehte rahe ki ye murder hai par police ke pas kuch hai hi nahi use proof karne ke liye vo ise suicidal ya accidental maan kar file band kar degi. Isliye mene jhooth nahi kaha warna humne kuch nahi kiya to bhi fanste " vishal ki baat shruti ko ek dum samajh aa gayi. Ek pal pehle use marne ka dil badal kar chumne ka ban gaya. " acha hua gaggan ki jagah mene suraj se baat ki aur police ne gaggan ke sath mujhe bula liya warna gaggan kya bakta pata nahi. Use mene bas han han mein jawab dene ko kaha tha usne wahi kiya. Bada ghabraya hua hai... " vishal ke per hil rahe the jo tension mein aksar shaks dwara hilaye jatte hai.

" ghabrane se yaad aya, aaruhi kaisi hai? Main in sab mein puchna bhool hi gaya tha " vishal ne shruti ki taraf dekhte hue pucha.

" bas wahi jo har baar hota hai, hum use doctor ke pass le gaye the wahan unhone bataya ki aaruhi ko ek bimari hai " shruti ne sab bataya sivai dr alok aur nandini ke rishte ko chhod kar.

" Catatonic Schizophrenia, Pehle kabhi nahi suna iske bare mein.. "

" mene bhi .. mujhe to samajh hi nahi ayi thi pehle.. "

" par doctor ki batai hui bimari se aur aaruhi ki harkton se lagta to yahi hai ki use yahi bimari hogi.. tumne sahi kiya jo use dikha diya kam se kam ab use to tension mukt ho. Waise tumne socha ki aaruhi us raat wahan pahunchi kaise? " vishal ne sawal par apni baat khatam kari.

" Main bhi yahi soch rahi thi vishal par bahut sochne ke baad to yahi samajh aa raha hai ki Aaruhi ne sab kuch pehle se hi decide kar liya tha "

" matlab? "

" mujhe lagta hai ki aaruhi ki jo double personality wala role tabhi se nibhane lagi thi jab usne mujhse normal hone ki acting ki"

" abhi bhi kuch samajh nahi aya "

" Aaruhi ne jab bathroom jane ke liye kaha vo tabhi mere sath khel rahi thi. Kal raat kuch is tarah hua hoga. Aaruhi mera intezar kar rahi thi vo janti thi ki mere piche se jayegi to use main khoj lungi isliye vo mera intezar karti rahi aur jaise hi main ayi usne mauka dekh kar bathroom mein jane ke liye kaha. Use malum tha ki sham ko bathroom mein koi hadsa hua hai par usne aise dikhaya jaise use nahi malum, vo janti thi ki main use nahi bataungi aur agar mene use common bathroom jane ke liye roka to vo sawal puchegi jiski wajah main nahi bata paungi isliye vo wahan gayi. Bathroom jatte waqt hi usne apne phone ka password bhi badal liya hoga aur wahan usne wo sab kiya jo uske dimag ne kaha ya fir doctor ke mutabik koi use keh raha hai karne ko vo usne kiya aur isi bich main use khoj mein nikli. Vo janti thi ki main bathroom use khojne aungi to vo kahin jakar chipp gayi aur jab tak main use khojti usne kapde ki rassi kamre mein akar balcony mein bandhi aur wahan se utar kar chali gayi " shruti ne kal raat ki dasha ko aisa bataya jaise sach mein ghatit hui ho.

" aur vo rassi usne kab banai? "

" shayad sham ko hui bathroom wali ghatna se trigger hone ke baad hi banai ho, mere room mein ane se pehle .. "

" Yani ki aaruhi ki bimari kafi badh gayi hai. Ek baat mujhe samajh nahi ayi jo Doctor ne kahi aur tumne abhi dubara dauhrai, koi use aisa keh raha hai karne ko ? "

" Han.. ye baat mujhe bhi samajh nahi aa rahi ki kaun hai vo aur kyun kar raha hai aisa "

" tumhe lagta hai vo aaruhi ko janta hai? "

" ho sakta hai.. between mujhe tumhe do chizon ke liye thank you kehna hai "

" do chizon ke liye? "

" ek jo tumne abhi batai aur dusri us din aaruhi ko sahi waqt par pakdne ke liye.. Agar ek pal aur deri karte to shayad aaruhi zinda nahi hoti "

" Thank you ki jarurat nahi hai shruti.. Situation theek nahi hai. Hum log kuch din ke liye aisi kisi jagah nahi jaa sakte jahan par hamare uppar shaq jaye. Bahut si nazar is waqt college par hai. Suna to ye bhi hai ki aaj sabhi heads ki ek baithak hui hai jisme police wale bhi shamil the. Sakhti badne wali hai.. " vishal ke kehne par shruti ko samajh aya ki vishal ne library kyun chuni.

" tum theek keh rahe ho .. " shruti ek pal ke liye shant hui aur fir boli " meeting mein kya baat hui hume malum chal sakta hai ? "

Aaruhi class khatam karke bahar nikli to use shruti takra gayi. Jaisa shruti ne kaha tha aaj kuch nahi hua koi class nahi thi aur usi baat par aaruhi ne fir wahi baat dauhrai ki lavanya ke time par kyun kuch nahi hua? Shruti aur vo dono hostel ki taraf bade par shruti ne use kuch acha khane ka bol kar aaruhi ko hostel bhej diya aur khud dhabbe ki taraf badh chali. Abhi samay tha takreeban ek ghanta lekin aaruhi ko shaq nahi hona chahie tha. Sadak ke najdeek atte hi usne apne dayein taraf dekha fir bayein jahan par police ki jeep khadi thi aur do police walle apas mein baat cheet kar rahe the, jaise hi unki nazar shruti par padi usne aisa behave kiya jaise vo rasta cross karne ke liye traffic dekh rahi hai. Usne kisi tarah rasta cross kiya aur police walon ki taraf samne wali road par chal padi. Use andar se ajeeb sa bhi lag raha tha aur dusri taraf uska dimag keh raha tha ki yahi sahi hai. Vishal ne sahi kaha tha chauksi badh gayi hai. Bheeshad dhup thi, humas ne shruti ke badan ko pasine se gilla kar diya tha. Vo usi dhabbe par aa baithi jahan vo rachna se pehle bhi mil chuki thi.

Ek taraf ko baith kar usne wahan chal raha pankha apni taraf kiya aur ek thanda order kiya. Meeting mein aaj sabhi bade log maujud rahe honge. Zahir hai kuch hi dino mein ye dusra hadsa hai. Pehle ek murder jiski mystery abhi tak suljhi nahi hai aur dusra ye accident cum suicide. College ka naam kharab hone mein kasar nahi chhod raha tha. Uppar se sabhi parents ka dar, aise mein naye admission milna ab mushkil ho jane wala tha. Par aisi kya baat hui hogi andar, kya faisla liya gaya hoga.. Miss nandini bhi shamil hu hongi tabhi to vo gayi thi. Mujhe andar hui baton ko har haal mein janna hai. Pehli maut nahi dekhi hai in logon ne .. kuch to aisi baat jarur hui hogi jo pichle koi raaz ko bataye, koi to surag mile us purane hostel ke bare mein, akhir vo sach mein bhootiya hai ya uske piche koi bahut gehra raaz chupa hai. Garmi mein sukhe galle ko thande cold drink se tar karti hui shruti gehri soch mein dubi hui thi.

" kab se baithi hai " rachna samne baithte hue boli.

" ek ghanta hua "

" itni jaldi kyun? "

" kaam hua? " shruti ne rachna ke sawal ko ansuna kiya.

" han.. ye le "

" aise khane ke dabbe mein phone layi hai " shruti ne khane wale dabbe ko dekhte hue kaha.

" han..tune hi kaha tha ki shaq nahi hona chahie "

" samjhdar ho gayi hai tu " shruti ne dhakkan hata kar dekha aur wapis band kar dia.

" to? vishal se baat hui? " rachna ke chehre par dar kayam tha. Shruti ne uske baad use sari baat batai aur hathon hath khane ka order de diya. " uff.. what a relief " rachna ne gehri sans chhodi aur aram se kursi par baith gayi " kal raat ke baad ab chain ki sans mili hai warna bar bar yahi lag raha tha ki main wahan gayi hi kyun? "

" kyun gayi thi tu? " shruti ne fauran sawal kiya.

" matlab? "

" matlab tu wahan kya kar rahi thi? " rachna janti thi ki shruti use ye sawal karegi. Agar kal rata hadsa nahi hua hota to itna vo intezar hi nahi karti.

" batati hun.. Fb par mujhe ek ladka mila.. us ladke se kuch dino se baat cheet hoti rahi. Suspecious type ban raha tha to laga pehle koi mazak kar raha hai par baton ke sath interest badhta gaya aur fir usne bataya ki vo isi college ka ladka hai aur isi hostel mein rehta hai. Lekin na usne apna naam sahi bata rakha tha aur na hi koi photo thi. Doubt tha aur dar bhi ki jise baat kar rahi hun vo sahi hai ya nahi. Fir ek din usne kaha ki vo apna naam aur photo tak dikha dega par uske liye uski ek baat manni hogi "

" hostel ki party mein ana hoga? " shruti ko jaise samajh aa gaya tha.

" han.. "

" aur tu aa gayi...ek anjan se milne "

" anjan kahan tha, college ka hi tha. Hostel mein rehta tha to koi dar nahi laga isliye.... waise bhi usne mujhe apna naam aur photo dikha di thi "

" vishal " shruti ne fauran kaha kyun ki vo chahti thi ki rachna ka reaction kya hoga.

" nahi.. " par rachna ne vipreet jawab dia

" to? " shruti ne hairani mein pucha.

" gaggan.. "

" what the behenchod.. gaggan.. " shruti ko jaise is baat ki umeed hi nahi thi.

" han... main usi se baat kar rahi thi itne dino se aur usi ke kehne par ayi "

" bibiji apka arder.. " dhabbe walle ne apni bhasha mein kaha aur usi pal shruti bhi chaunkte hue reaction de rahi thi to dono ke takrane par vo box shruti ke pas se gir gaya jisme phone tha. " maaf karna bibiji " dhabbe wala turant bola.

" lagta hai fir gaya betichod.. " shruti ne dhabbe walle ko kiya ignore aur fauran jhuk kar dabba uthaya tabhi uski nazar samne padi. Vo sidhi hui aur usne dhayan se dekha " manpreet itni jaldi mein kyun jaa rahi hai " usko dekhte hue yaad aya ki use phone check karna hai. Usne fauran dabba uthaya aur phone dekha, sahi salamat tha.

" ye bhi wahin thi " rachna ke kehte hi shruti ne nazar rachna ki taraf ki aur use dekhne lagi mano keh rahi ho kya. " Manpreet.. udhar hi thi "

" kidhar? "

" phone wale ke pass.. shayad iske phone mein bhi koi dikkat thi "

" acha.. sabke phone ek sath dikkat de gaye.. " shruti ne khane ke paise pakdaye aur apni jagah se khadi hoti use pehle rachna ne use rok liya.

" aaruhi ka kya karna hai kuch socha hai tune? " rachna ke sawal par ek pal shruti chup rahi.

" jo SIM tune diya hai use istemal karne ka ab samay aa gaya hai.. Ab to ya aar ya paar.. " shruti bolte hue apni jagah se khadi ho gayi.
romanchak update ..vishal ne sab sach bataya police ko jisse shruti shock ho gayi par sahi hi kiya vishal ne ..
gagan se baate karti thi rachna aur usike kehne pe us party me gayi thi .
shruti ne jitna vishal ko bataya ki kaise aaruhi bathroom se bahar gayi hogi aisa lagta hai jaise usne apne aankho se dekha tha sab .kamal ka dimaag chalati hai shruti ..
 

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Gaggan aur rachna, rachna aur gaggan, nahi-nahi nahi... Ye combination kaise? Mana rachna noor ki apsara nahi thi par gaggan se? Yakeen nahi hota, kahin mujhe juth bolne ke liye to gaggan ka naam to nahi le liya? Kya pata lafda vishal se hi chal raha ho. Ho sakta hai ab iski confirmation to mujhe gaggan se hi leni padegi par kya pata vo bhi mila hua ho vishal se? Sala aaj kisi ki shakal se to bharosa hota hi nahi varna Miss Nandini ki shakal se koi bata sakta hai ki vo Dr. Alok se hum sabki maujudgi mein uske farmhouse par sex kar rahi thi. Agar vishal ne mere se pehle rachna ki li to usko to main aisa sabak sikhaungi ki hamesha yaad rakhega. Shruti hostel pahunchte hue soch mein dubi hui thi. Kamre ki taraf badhi to paya ki kamre ki kundi theek ho chuki thi. Sala debu ke naam se to warden ki fatne lagi hai. Use apne uppar fakr tha. Usne kiwad khola aur andar dekhte hi uske kadam wahin ruk gaye. Samne aaruhi baithi thi bistar par ukhdu hokar, baal aage ki taraf uske chehre ko chupa rahe the isi ke sath vo bistar par halke-halke aage-piche ho rahi thi.

" Ye kya nayi bakchodi hai... " shruti ka dil zoron se dhadak utha. Uske dimag mein kai baatein ek sath chal padi. Pehli kya koi atma aaruhi ke andar ghus gayi hai, bhoot ki kahaniyun mein kuch aisa hi suna hai usne hamesha se. Usne fauran apni soch badli aur use laga ki Dr alok ki di gayi dawaiyun ka koi side effect hai aur fauran use phone karke unhe batana chahie. Iske baad vo kuch sochti use pehle uske kadam kamre ke andar bade aur ek ajeeb si mehak uski naak mein ghusi. Usne naak sikod-sikod kar ache se us mehak ko sungha. Ajeeb si gandh thi vo, jaise jaise " nashe ki badbu hai " usne apni ankhon se idhar udhar dekha, kahin kuch pada hai ya jal raha hai. Bahut khoja par use wahan khade rehkar kuch nahi dikha. Vo ek pal aage ki taraf ayi, vaise to use aaruhi ke najdeek ane mein hi ghabrahat ho rahi thi lekin vo fir bhi aage badhi, har baar kuch naya le ati hai ye ladki. Man hi man bolte hi vo aage badhi aur uski naak mein vo mehak bhi badne lagi. Mehak aaruhi ke bistar ke niche se hi aa rahi thi isliye usne khane ko apne bistar par rakha aur bed ke niche jhanka jahan jhankte hi use khansi uth gayi " ukhun. " khanste hue usne sar uppar kiya aur fir nazre niche ki, koi chiz jal rahi thi aur mehak usi mein se aa rahi thi. Usne bina muh niche kiye us chiz ko dhayan se bahar nikala aur apni naak se dur karke dekhne lagi.

" Ye bala kya hai... " bidi type bana hua tha jiska ek hissa jal raha tha aur jalte hue jo dhuain usme se nikal raha tha vo mehak usi mein se aa rahi thi. Shruti ne use zameen par fainka aur fauran khidki khol kar wapis kamre ke bahar taraf ate hue pankha chalaya taki dhuain bahar jaa sake. Tabhi use yaad aya ki kamre ka darwaja khula hai agar kisi ne use aise dekh liya to gadbad ho jayegi. Usne kiwad lagaya aur aaruhi ki taraf mudi, vo abhi bhi usi tarah hil rahi thi. Bhoot hi ghusa hai pakka, no doubt. Ya fir dual personality wali bimari. Ya fir wahi hai jo ise aisa karne ko keh raha hai han yahi hoga Dr Alok ne kaha tha is bimari mein insan wahi karta hai jo use kaha jata hai karne ko. Dr. Alok ko dikhana padega aaruhi ka ye avtar. Shruti ne phone nikala aur ek ke baad ek do-teen photo alag-alag angle se khinch li, isi ke sath usne kuch second ki video bhi record kar li. Abhi uske samne do guthi thi ek aaruhi ka is kadar baithte hue hilna aur dusra us chiz ka jalna jise ajeeb mehak aa rahi thi.

" bhuja dun? " vo bad-badati hui aage badhi aur usne apne per se us jal rahi bidi type role ko per se daba kar bhuja diya. Vo aaruhi ke theek bagal mein thi, itni pas ki agar aaruhi ne kisi chudail ki tarah apna hath aage karke use pakda to vo bhag nahi payegi. Vo abhi bhi yun hi hil rahi thi, aage piche, aage piche. Sach mein agar ye sab raat ko hua hota to pakka chikh nikal jati. Aaj se puri rajai odh kar soungi, ye jo marzi kare ispar nazar dalungi hi nahi varna meri to gaand faad degi ye ladki. Kaisi chutiya kismat hai, chut dene ayi thi aur offer mein gand bhi deni padh rahi hai.

" aaruhi.. aaruhi.. " fusfusate hue usne sidhe khade reh kar hi aaruhi ko awaz di lekin kya faiyda tha vo repsonse hi nahi kar rahi thi " rehne de.. mat laga ise awaz, pade rehne de aise, hamesha ki tarah vapis normal ho jayegi... Ye dr alok ne dawai di hai ya fir pagal ko badhava dene ki goli, ulta asar kar rahi hai sali.. aaruhi sun rahi hai.. main hun.. teri dost.. " vo fir fus-fusai par is baar bhi koi jawab nahi. Usne apne galle se thuk niche utara aur thoda jhuk kar aaruhi ke aur najdeek jakar usne awaz di " aaruhi... aaarruuuhiiiiiii " awaz lagane ke baad itni khamoshi cha gayi ki use apne dil ki dhadkan sunai de rahi thi itna hi nahi uske sath use kuch 'humming' sunai de rahi thi, ek pal laga bagal walle kamre se ganne ki awaz aa rahi hai jo deewaron ki wajah se dab chuki hai lekin jab usne dhayan se suna to vo aaruhi se hi aa rahi thi. Use kuch ajeeb sa laga lekin janne ki ichukta uske andar badh gayi ki aaruhi kaisi 'humming' kar rahi hai. Usne apne kaan uske aur najdeek kar diye, mano honton ke pas hi le jana chahti ho.
Aaruhi abhi bhi waise hi hil rahi thi aur uske hilne ki wajah se uske baal ab shruti ke kano ko chu rahe the, Shruti ki nazar khidki ki taraf thi aur kaan aaruhi ki taraf. Vo dhayan laga kar aaruhi se nikalti 'humming' ko sunna chahti thi lekin vo abhi samajh pati use pehle aaruhi piche ki taraf gir gayi. Bistar par aaruhi ke girne ki awaz ate hi shruti ghabra kar sidhi khadi ho gayi. Uske hath per ek pal ke liye kamp uthe. Usne aaruhi ki taraf dekha jo ankhein band karke aram se laiti hui thi. Uske bikhre hue baal jab chehre se hatte to shruti ne uske chehre par nazar dali. Chehre par kisi bhi tarah ka koi badlav nahi tha, han honth jarur uske sukhe hue lag rahe the baki chehre ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha mano kuch hua hi na ho. Ek pal shruti waise hi khadi sochti rahi, ajeeb ghatnao mein ye ghatna bhi shamil thi. Usne apne per bidi type walle roll se per hataya aur use uthaya jo ab bhuj chuka tha.

" ye akhir jal kya raha tha " usne behad najdeek se use sungha, mehak thi par pehle jaisi nahi. Vo apni jagah par baithi aur table par us bidi ke roll ko kholne lagi. Bidi khulte hi usne dekha ek podwer ke sath kuch mila hua tha safed-brown mote danne jaise the. Shruti ne ek bar use dekha, tambaku jaisa lag raha hai par tambaku jaisi smell to nahi thi. Shruti ne sochte hue ungli ki tip par halka sa use lagaya aur jaban par rakh diya.

" chiii.. yuk... kitna ganda taste hai iska... " usne fauran hath jhada aur pani pii liya. " chii abhi tak swad nahi jaa raha iska.. urrrrrrrr.... " usne apne muh aise hilaya mano jaise kitna ajeeb sa ho gaya uske andar. Usne aur pani piya, gat-gat karti hui vo adhi se jada bottle pani pii gayi tab jakar use halka sa chain mila. " kya ajeeb chiz hai thi, kya hai ye? aur kahan se ayi jo aaruhi ke bed ke niche jal rahi thi? " Shruti ka dimag chalne laga. Kya koi uske piche se kamre mein aya tha? Lock han.. lock sahi tha kamre ka to ho sakta hai vo bihari aya ho yahan par uski bidi room mein, vo bhi aaruhi ke bed ke niche kaise? Kya aaruhi yahan thi? Ya jab vo aya hoga to aaruhi ko usne aise hi dekha hoga jiski wajah se uske hath se ye bidi gir gayi hogi aur bed ke niche chali gayi hogi. Yani usne aaruhi ko is halat mein dekh liya? Shruti ko is baat ki puri sambhavna dikhai de rahi thi. Par use ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bihari aisi chiz hostel mein din ke ujale mein pii kaise raha tha. Koi dekh kar warden ko bata deta to uske to kya hota? Kya use baat ka dar nahi tha? Ya fir vo kuch aur chakkar hai. Ise sambhal kar rakhti hun, puchti hun ki akhir ye chiz hai kya, tambaku to nahi lag rahi yani koi aur chiz hai jiska milna asan nahi. Shruti ne fauran us roll ko wapis waisa hi kiya jaise vo tha aur use bed ke kinare mein fansa diya aur uske uppar se chaddar dal di.

Ye sab karte hi use yaad aya ki use bhook lag rahi hai, usne khana khola aur thoda chhod kar baki ka kha gayi. Bathroom mein jakar usne hath dhoya aur wahan dekha ki kapde dhulne ke liye pade the. Pani sahi se aa raha tha aur sahi se nali mein jaa bhi raha tha. Vo bathroom se jaise hi bahar nikli vo fir chaunk gayi. Aaruhi ek taraf ko bed par baithi kisi janwar ki tarah khane mein lagi thi. Hath muh pura sabzi se sana tha aur itna bada-bada ghassa kha rahi thi mano janwar ho.

" aaruhi..? " shruti ne awaz di.

" uhmm... " aaruhi ne uski taraf nazre ki aur fir khane lagi.

" kaise kha rahi hai? " shruti hichakte hue boli.

" bhook lagi hai... " itna bol vo khati gayi aur usne sarre dabbe saaf kar diye. Shruti tab tak wahin khadi rahi, uske samajh se bahar jaa raha tha. Khate hi aaruhi bistar par padh gayi aur lambi lambi ahein bharne lagi.

" tu theek hai? " shruti uski awaz sunte hue boli.

" mujhe kya hua? " usne apna sar uppar ki taraf uthaya jiske sath uski pith bhi thodi uthi. Uske honth ke charaon taraf sabzi lagi hui thi aur usi tarah uski hateli se lekar uske forearm tak sab gande the.

" hath muh to dho le.. aise hi laiti rahegi ... " shruti ke kehte hi aaruhi ek pal use ghurti rahi aur fir apni jagah se khadi hui. Aaruhi jaise jaise shruti ke najdeek aa rahi thi, uska dil zoron se dhadak raha tha. Vo shruti ke najdeek ayi, itni najdeek ki do inch ki duri par dono ke honth apas mein mil jate. Usne shruti ko ek-tuk ghura aur fir bathroom ke andar ghus gayi. Bathroom ka darwaja band hote hi shruti ne gehri sans khinchi par tabhi bathroom ka darwaja khula aur aaruhi ne apna sar bahar nikal kar ek lambi muskan de di jiski wajah se uske khane se sane dant shruti ko dikhne lage. Vo kuch bolti use pehle aaruhi ne fauran darwaja band kar diya.

" Kya bhayanak ladki hai ye.. " usne apne sine par hath rakha aur bistar ki taraf ayi. Use apna dhayan batana tha warna aaruhi ki muskan uski ankhon ke samne se jaa hi nahi rahi thi. Usne phone uthaya aur vishal ko message karne lagi aur usi dauran uska last scene dikha jo kal raat ka tha jise dekh use yaad aya ki uska phone to kharab hai. Par vo kya kare, jise uska dhayan hatte. Vo abhi aisa soch hi rahi thi ki bathroom ka darwaja khula aur aaruhi bahar ayi angdai lete hue.

" aaahh--- maza aa gaya.. kya khana tha.. kahan se layi thi.. bade dino baad itna acha khaya " aaruhi ne apne baal piche kiye aur bistar par aa baithi

" tu theek hai? " shruti ke muh se nikal gaya.

" hamesha yahi puchti rehti hai.. mujhe kya hua hai? "

" nahi vo aise hi puch rahi thi kyun ki tu kabhi tarif nahi karti na "

" han.. han.. main to bahut jalim hun tere liye .. ayi badii.. " aaruhi ne fauran tans khasa aur apna phone lekar lait gayi. Shruti ek pal use aise hi dekhti rahi aur vo bhi lait gayi. Laitte sath hi usne FB login kiya jispar ek hi user ke bahut sarre message aye hue the. Usne chat box khola aur message read karne lagi. Shruti dwara bheja gaya last message jisme usne kache ke ubhar wali photo bheji thi uske tehat hi reply aye hue the.

' This is a real photo? , itna mota? , really? , bolo?, batao na, kab bataoge?, jhootha to nahi hai na ye? Kab bataoge?, waiting to know this? ' Ye sabhi message alag-alag time ke kiye gaye the. Message padte hi shruti ke chehre par lambi muskan ter ayi. Usne message ka reply dena shuru kiya.

" Do you like it? " usne ye message likh kar wait kiya. " Do you wanna have this? " message dalne ke baad use laga ki bahut jaldi vo yahan tak pahunch gayi. Use thoda wait nahi karna chahie tha? Vo abhi soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi usne dekha ki vo online aa gayi hai aur shayad vo uske dwara bheje gaye message ko read karne wali hai. Uska dil zoron se dhadakne laga jab usne typing dekha aur uske baad message aya.

" Abhi to main tumhe theek se janti tak nahi, never saw your face.. Tumhare uppar shaq hota hai mujhe, kahin tum fake to nahi? " shruti ne jaise hi message pada use samajh aya ki usne jald bazi kar di hai.

" Fake hota to tumhare bare mein itna sab malum hota? "

" Kya pata, show me your photo tab mujhe yakeen hoga ki tum hamare hi college ke ho? tumne apni profile tak hide kar rakhi hai "

" Chehre ka kya karogi? Mene tumhe sabse behtarin chiz dikhai hai.. Mujhe malum hai ki ye dekhne ke baad tumhari chut mein ek dum se kulbulahat hui hogi isliye tumhari bechaini badh rahi hai aur tum mujhe dekhna chahti ho " shruti ne message send kar dia. Samne se typinig likha hua aya par fir screen se hatt gaya. Shruti muskura di usne fauran message kiya " Tumhare andar ki aag isi se theek ho sakti hai, jannat ka ehsas milega... socho abhi kache ke andar hai jab uske bahar dekhogi to kya haal hoga tumhara " shruti ne send kiya aur fir kuch soch kar aur likhne lagi " soch kar hi gili ho gayi ho na ? to ab ye socho ki dekh kar kitna hogi? " itna message karke usne ek pal nahi lagaya aur facebook logout kar diya.
majedar update ..shruti ko shak hua ki kahi vishal se to nahi fansi rachna aur vishal usse pehle rachna ki le lega 🤣🤣..
kaun sahi kaun galat iske chakkar me padi hai shruti aur kamre me jaate hi jhatka lag gaya usko .aaruhi ka aisa aage pichhe hona jaise uske ander aatma aa gayi ho aur shruti ke aawaj dene par bhi koi response nahi karna 🤔 aur kya koi aaruhi ko nasha kara raha hai jo wo bidi waha pe thi .
achanak so gayi aur dobara uthke thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
shruti to wakai daringbaaz hai jo itna hone ke baad bhi darr nahi rahi .
kahi aisa to nahi dr alok ne jo dawai di hai usme bhi koi drugs type ho ..

shruti to mast maje se chatting kar rahi thi us ladki se horny wali baate 😁..
 
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अब तो आरूहि पर दया आने लगी है मुझे । एक गुड़िया सी खुबसूरत लड़की की क्या हालत बन गई है ! कभी खुद को घायल कर लेती है तो कभी पागलों जैसी हरकतें करने लगती है । कभी नंग धडंग होकर हास्टल से बाहर चली जाती है जो कोई भी लड़की नहीं कर सकती तो कभी उंचाई से छलांग लगा देती है ।

इस अपडेट में उसकी दशा बिल्कुल एक विक्षिप्त लड़की की तरह लगा मुझे । ऐसा लगा जैसे उस पर किसी भूत प्रेत का साया पड़ गया हो । उसके भोजन करने का तरीका और उसके बाद उसकी प्रतिक्रिया से वो एक अबोध बालक जैसा लगी । या कह सकते हैं एक पागल लड़की जैसी लगी ।

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

श्रुति भरपूर कोशिश कर रही है । ऐसे हालात में वो जो कुछ कर रही है उतना तो किसी किसी के फेमिली वाले नहीं करते ।
विशाल की तस्वीरें... शायद वो जग्गू को भेजी होगी । लेकिन क्यों ? इससे आरूहि का क्या भला होने वाला है ?

बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट हर्षित भाई । दोनों अपडेट्स आउटस्टैंडिंग थे । अद्भुत लेखनी और गजब का नरेशन ।

सुपर्ब एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट एंड
जगमग जगमग ।
 

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romanchak update ..vishal ne sab sach bataya police ko jisse shruti shock ho gayi par sahi hi kiya vishal ne ..
gagan se baate karti thi rachna aur usike kehne pe us party me gayi thi .
shruti ne jitna vishal ko bataya ki kaise aaruhi bathroom se bahar gayi hogi aisa lagta hai jaise usne apne aankho se dekha tha sab .kamal ka dimaag chalati hai shruti ..
Thanks bhai :hug: A smart move.. Sab salle harami hai :D
majedar update ..shruti ko shak hua ki kahi vishal se to nahi fansi rachna aur vishal usse pehle rachna ki le lega 🤣🤣..
kaun sahi kaun galat iske chakkar me padi hai shruti aur kamre me jaate hi jhatka lag gaya usko .aaruhi ka aisa aage pichhe hona jaise uske ander aatma aa gayi ho aur shruti ke aawaj dene par bhi koi response nahi karna 🤔 aur kya koi aaruhi ko nasha kara raha hai jo wo bidi waha pe thi .
achanak so gayi aur dobara uthke thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
shruti to wakai daringbaaz hai jo itna hone ke baad bhi darr nahi rahi .
kahi aisa to nahi dr alok ne jo dawai di hai usme bhi koi drugs type ho ..

shruti to mast maje se chatting kar rahi thi us ladki se horny wali baate 😁..
Bhai apko bhi shruti jaisi ladki mile ye umeed karta hu :D Thanks bhai.. :bow:
 
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अब तो आरूहि पर दया आने लगी है मुझे । एक गुड़िया सी खुबसूरत लड़की की क्या हालत बन गई है ! कभी खुद को घायल कर लेती है तो कभी पागलों जैसी हरकतें करने लगती है । कभी नंग धडंग होकर हास्टल से बाहर चली जाती है जो कोई भी लड़की नहीं कर सकती तो कभी उंचाई से छलांग लगा देती है ।

इस अपडेट में उसकी दशा बिल्कुल एक विक्षिप्त लड़की की तरह लगा मुझे । ऐसा लगा जैसे उस पर किसी भूत प्रेत का साया पड़ गया हो । उसके भोजन करने का तरीका और उसके बाद उसकी प्रतिक्रिया से वो एक अबोध बालक जैसा लगी । या कह सकते हैं एक पागल लड़की जैसी लगी ।

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

श्रुति भरपूर कोशिश कर रही है । ऐसे हालात में वो जो कुछ कर रही है उतना तो किसी किसी के फेमिली वाले नहीं करते ।
विशाल की तस्वीरें... शायद वो जग्गू को भेजी होगी । लेकिन क्यों ? इससे आरूहि का क्या भला होने वाला है ?

बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट हर्षित भाई । दोनों अपडेट्स आउटस्टैंडिंग थे । अद्भुत लेखनी और गजब का नरेशन ।

सुपर्ब एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट एंड
जगमग जगमग ।
I wanted this jo apne likha Aaruhi par daya.. but bhai kahani ka to ab badalegi.. samay kam mil raha hai.. Lekin a buildup ban raha hai. Han bhai aaruhi uppar terrace se kudi nahi thi. Mene is update mein aur clearly likh dia tha taki confusion na rahe. Still, there is no actual ghost in this story :D Kya pata bhai vo khud jehnum hi ho :D

Multiple story chal rahi hai.. let it join... sb kuch clear ho jayega. Abhi bahut se kirdar add hue hai kuch kahaniya hai unki, milne do clear hota jayega.

Thank you so much sanju bhai :hug:
 
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