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Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

harshit1890

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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Store room pahunch kar supriya ko sonu kahin dikhai nahi diya to usne awaz lagane ki sochi lekin use pehle andar se kuch girne ki awaz mein vo ruk gayi. Store room ka gate khula tha, light bhi jal rahi thi par wahan koi dikhai nahi de raha tha. Hostel bhi is samay khali hi tha kyun ki is waqt aksar bache college mein hi hote hain. Store room se kuch girne ki awaz sun supriya ko laga ki sonu andar hi hai to vo andar ghus gayi. Andar ghuste hi usne apni nazar racks par dali jaisi aksar library mein rakhi rehti hai jispar books rakhi rehti hai uspar saman pada tha. store room jada badha nahi tha isliye charon taraf saman rakhe hone ki wajah se bhara-bhara mehsus ho raha tha. Supriya nazron se store room mein sonu ko khojne lagi lekin wahan koi nahi dikha. Fir uski nazar ant mein bane gate par gayi, jispar kundi nahi thi use laga sonu wahin hoga isliye vo us taraf chal di. Bich mein rakhe saman ke uppar se langte hue vo us kamre ki taraf badhi. Usne darwaje par hath rakha aur usi samay store room ki lights band ho gayi. Andhera padte hi supriya sakpaka gayi aur usne hath piche khinch liya. " lights ko kya hua, sonu " usne awaz di aur darwaje ko dhakela lekin vo khula nahi. " ye khul kyun nahi raha? " supriya use kholne ki kosish mein 'sonu-sonu' chillati gayi lekin darwaja nahi khula. Eka-ek usne store room se bahar nikalne ki sochi aur jaise hi usne socha, store room ke kiwad band hone ki awaz uske kano mein padi aur andar ati thodi roshni ghup andhere mein badal gayi. Supriya ghabrate hue wahan se hatti aur saman se takrate hue girti hui sambhali aur fir bahar ki taraf bhagi jisme kafi saman usne niche gira diya. Akhir store room ke darwaje tak pahunch kar usne use khincha lekin vo bahar se band ho chuka tha. Supriya ne kiwad par zor-zor se marna shuru kiya " koi kholo, help.... help... " ek hi jhatke mein use pichli raat wale hadse ki yaad aa gayi. Bechaini ek baar fir badhne lagi thi agar do minute vo aise hi aur cheekhti chillati to shayad fir se panic attack ki shikar ban jati. Par aisa nahi hua agle hi pal bahar se darwaja khula aur samne sonu ko khada dekh usne chillana roka.

" tum, tum andar kya kar rahi thi " sonu ne supriya ke bikhre hue halat ko dekhte hue kaha.

" vo...vo... " supriya kuch bol nahi paa rahi thi. Sonu ne fauran store room ki light kholi aur andar ke bikhre hue halat ko dekha " ye kya kiya tumne? " sonu supriya ko jaan kar kandhe se dhakka dete hue andar ghusa. Supriya ka uski is harkat par dhayan nahi gaya. Vo bas sonu ke sath sath hi andar ki haalat ko dekhne lagi. Store room ka sara saman bikhra hua tha, zameen par padi boriyan khuli padi thi uska saman zameen par bikhra hua tha aur jo khula hua saman tha vo kharab pada tha jaise koi chiz uske uppar bikheri gayi ho. Sonu ne farash par pade khane ke khule hue saman ko uthaya to use ubkai aa gayi. Ek chipchipa sa padart uspar pada tha jisme se badbu aa rahi thi. " ye kya hai? kya kar diya tumne pure store room ka? " sonu ne use apne se dur fenkte hue kaha. Supriya khud hairan thi ki do minute pehle to kamre mein sab kuch theek tha, rack par sara saman pada tha to ab achanak se sab bikhr kar zameen par kaise aa gaya.

" bolti kyun nahi, kya kiya tumne? Warden ko pata chala to tum gayi "

" ma...maine.. kuch nahi kiya... mujhe nahi pata ye sab kaise hua "

" tumhe nahi pata to tum andar kya kar rahi thi "

" apko.. dhund rahi thi... vo mujhe laga aap andar hai to isliye andar ayi fir achanak se sab band ho gaya main bahut dar gayi thi, warden ko mera naam mat lena mujhe nahi pata kuch ki kaise hua ye sab " supriya ke jawab ke piche uski pareshani saaf jhalak rahi thi.

" tum mujhe kyun dhund rahi thi? " sonu ki nazar supriya par hi thi, uske top ke andar fansi uski chatiyun se uski nazar nahi hat rahi thi.

" vo bathroom mein pani nahi nikal raha nali mein isliye, mujhe laga aap andar hai kuch saman gira tha to andar ayi aur fir vo kiwad khula hua tha to socha aap udhar ho isliye wahi dekhne gayi thi jisme sari lights band ho gayia ru fir ye kiwad band ho gaya " supriya ne ishare se us kiwad ki taraf ungli kar di. Sonu ne ek pal us taraf dekha aur fir supriya ko ghurne laga.

" tum mujhe theek nahi lagti, sar par choth vot lagi thi kya? "

" matlab? " supriya confused hote hue boli.

" us kiwad par itna mota tala laga hai vo bhi salon se aur tum keh rahi ho vo khula hua tha? "

" tala? " supriya ko vishwas nahi hua isliye vo khud aage badhi aur bilkul sonu ke bagal mein khade hokar jhank kar us taraf dekhne lagi. Sonu se jaise hi supriya satti uska lund pent ke andar se akadne laga. Itne pas kabhi kabhi hi ladki ati thi uske aur vo bhi aisi jawan khubsurat ladki. Sonu ne tirchi nazar se supriya ki taraf dekha to jhukne ki wajah se uska top uppar tha jiski wajah se uski kamar aur sapat gora pet uski ankhon ke aage aa gaya itna hi nahi, jeans mein kasi uske ubhar nikal rahe the jispar vo hath lagane hi wala tha ki supriya wapis sidha ho gayi. " yahan par ab tala kaise? " usne sonu ki taraf dekhte hue kaha. Par sonu ne uski nahi sunu uski nazar chatiyun par thi jo is waqt top bigad jane ki wajah se chatiyun ke bich ban rahe cleavage ko ujagar kar rahe the. Ek hi pal laga supriya ko sonu ki nazron ko samjhne mein, vo fauran wahan se hati, Kapde theek karte hue vapis apni jagah jaa khadi hui.

" mera yakin maniye sonu ji mujhe kuch nahi pata yahan kya hua hai "

" par warden ko to batana padega na aur kamre ke andar to tum hi mili ho mere ko " sonu ne supriya ke samne pent ke uppar se apna lund adjust kiya. Supriya uski harkat ko saaf dekh paa rahi thi, ek pal to kara ki muh tod de uska lekin haalat uske paksh mein nahi the. Usne andekha karna hi sahi samjha.

" main to apko khojte hue ayi thi, warden ne hi kaha tha apse milne ko aur store room khula hua tha. Agar aap yahan nahi the to store room kaise khula hua tha? Kisne khol kar chhod diya "

" khola to mene hi tha vo to main.. " sonu bolte hue chup ho gaya. Agar mene iske bare mein bataya aur warden ko ye malum hua ki main store room khula chhod bathroom muth marne gaya tha to warden mera lund sil degi fir muth kya khada tak nahi kar paunga. Sonu ne man hi man socha aur supriya ko jane ka ishara kar diya. Supriya ek pal nahi samjhi par dusri bar jab sonu ne ishara kiya to vo samajh gayi aur wahan se nikal gayi. Use bas ab apne room mein jakar aram karne ki jarurat thi. Kal raat ke hadse ke baad kuch ajeeb hi ho raha hai, par na jane kaun tha vo jisne light off ki aur fir gate bhi? Par iske alawa vo saman kaise bhikhra vo bhi itni jaldi aur vo tala us samay to kiwad par nahi tha to wahan kaise aya? Supriya abhi sidiyan chadh kar jati ise pehle uska hath piche se kisi ne pakad liya.

" itni bhi jaldi kya hai, kuch ruk kar humse bhi baat kar lo " supriya ko andaza nahi tha ki awaz kiski hai par roke jane par jab vo mudi to apne samne khadi tanu ko dekh uski ankhein badi ho gayi. " kya hua aise kya ghur rahi hai? Sexy hun isliye? " tanu ne apni chatiyun ko uppar chadate hue kaha. " bolti kyun nahi? jaban par semen rakha hai kya? muh khol kar dikha to " tanu ne supriya ka muh pakad use kholne ki kosish ki jise supriya ko dard hone laga, uske muh se dard bhari 'ughh' nikli jise dekh tanu ne jabran uska muh aur dabaya fir chhod diya. Fir tanu uske kareeb ayi jiski wajah se supriya piche deewar se chipak gayi.

" tanka jhanki ka bahut shauk hai na tujhe.. main batati hun ki tanka-jhanki kaise ki jati hai, aaj raat ko mere kamre mein 1 baje chup chaap aa jana "

" main.. kyun.. " supriya ki ankhein bhari hui thi.

" kyun? " tanu ne hawa mein phone lehrate hue supriya ko dikhaya jisne sab samjha diya ki ye uske sath kya ho raha hai. Jis chiz ki supriya ko chinta thi vo ghatt chuki thi, supriya ka phone uske pas tha jise khojte hue vo warden ke pas gayi thi. " chup-chaap aa jaio warna " tanu ne supriya ka phone rakh apna phone nikala aur ek video chala di jisme supriya warden ke kamre mein jhank rahi thi aur jiske baad camera zoom hua aur room ke andar ka nazara bhi camere mein capture tha jisme warden ki nangi nitambh dikh rahe the. Supriya ki to ankhein khuli reh gayi, video pura hone se pehle hi tanu ne phone wapis rakh liya " ab soch ye video agar warden ke pas jayega to tera kya hoga? waise chinta mat kar main is video ko warden ko nahi bhejungi kyun ki uske pas ye video kahin se forward hokar ayegi, matlab to samajh hi gayi hogi ki video pure hostel mein felegi aur uske baad vo warden ke pas jayegi bas tab soch lio tere sath kya hoga " tanu supriya ke kareeb ayi " band kamre mein dar to nahi laga na? " kaan ke nazdeek akar usne supriya se kaha aur fir use alag ho gayi.

" tanu main nahi thi kamre mein, mera phone to canteen se hi gayab ho gaya tha kal, mujhe nahi pata ki phone tumhare pas kaise aya aur tum kis bare mein baat kar rahi ho " supriya ne ghabrate hue sahi lekin vo baat kahi jo megha ne use batai thi. Tanu uski baat sun kar ek pal shant khadi ho gayi, supriya ko laga ki megha ka idea kaam aa gaya lekin khud ki hui galti mein supriya ek aur galti kar baithi thi jiska use us waqt andaza nahi hua.

" maine to koi bhi kamre ki baat chedi hi nahi? " tanu ki baat sun supriya sakpaka gayi " aur agar tera phone kal dophar mein chori hua to sham ko tune apni saheli megha ko phone kaise kiya vo bhi ek baar nahi balki kai baar han? " supriya ke pas ab bolne ko kuch nahi tha, vo chup-chap tanu ke chehre ko dekhti rahi " 1 baje aaj raat, mere kamre mein " tanu ne wapis use yaad dilaya aur wahan se jane lagi. Supriya ko vishwas nahi ho raha tha ki uski ek bhool uspar itni bhari padne wali hai. " tanu mera phone " supriya ne kisi tarah muh se awaz nikali.

" raat ko ayegi tab le jaio aur han tera koi ashiq hai hai sala raat ko 3 baje phone karta hai, keh dio use aaj baat nahi kar payegi " tanu bol kar chali gayi aur man mein dar ke sath sainkdon sawal chhod gayi. Pehla sawal to yahi tha ki tanu akhir chahti kya hai jo raat ko bula rahi hai? Is baat ne hi supriya ko dara diya tha, dusri baat jo use samajh aa rahi thi vo ye ki tanu uspar bahut der se nazar rakhi hui thi aur shayad usi ne store room ki light aur darwaja band kiya tha? Par fir bhi vo saman kisne bekhera tha? Ye sawal supriya ke man mein abhi bhi tha. Lekin is sawal se jada dar to use aaj raat ka tha. " megha hi help kar sakti hai ab " supriya ne megha ko phone milane ke liye jeans mein hath dala aur tab use yaad aya ki phone tanu le gayi hai. Vo fauran mess ki taraf bhagi jahan par sab khana khate the aur tv dekhte the. Supriya wahan pahunchi aur wahan par rakhe phone mein usne sikka dala aur megha ko number milaya. " megha phone uthaaa " megha ne phone nahi uthaya. Usne dubara milaya aur fir ghanti bajti rahi lekin fir phone nahi utha. Supriya ne phone patka aur apne room ki taraf chal di ye soch kar ki do ghante baad to megha room par aa hi jane wali thi. Supriya bed par baithi soch mein dubi hui thi aur reh-reh kar bas ghadi mein dekhte hue megha ka intezar kar rahi thi. 3 se 4 aur 4 se 5 baj chuke the, college kab ka khatam ho gaya tha lekin megha abhi tak nahi ayi thi aur usi ka intezar karte hue supriya ki ankh lag gayi. Uski ankhein achanak se khuli aur usne apne aap ko baithe-baithe soya paya jiski wajah se uski gardan mein dard ho gaya tha.

" uth gayi maharani aap " megha ki awaz sunte hi supriya ki nind puri tarah se khul gayi.

" megha? tu kaha thi tujhe pata hai mein tera kab se intezar kar rahi thi, sham ho chuki hai "

" sham? sham nahi madam, raat ho chuki hai time dekho " megha ne ghadi ki taraf ishara kiya.

" 11 baj rahe hain? main... main tabse so rahi hun? " supriya ne khud se sawal kiya, use samay par yakeen nahi ho raha tha.

" mujhe nahi pata lekin jab ayi tu so rahi thi, tujhe uthane ki ksosish ki lekin tu uthi nahi, raat ke khane par bhi nahi uthi to tere liye khana yahin le ayi aur takreeban do ghante se jagane ki kosish kar rahi hun tujhe par tu uthne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi "

" par main itna kaise soyi? "

" vo to tujhe hi malum hoga, na jane kaise kaise sapne dekhti hogi jo uthne ka naam hi nahi leti, pakka deti hogi tu sapne mein "

" tu chup kar, tu mujhe ye bata ki tu 5 baje tak kyun nahi ayi tujhe malum hai mere sath kya hua "

" vo chhod, mumy ka phone aa raha tha teri, tune unhe mera number diya hai? "

" han.. mummy oohh shit unse to meri baat hi nahi hui, vo mujhe maar dalegi... "

" to phone kyun nahi karti tu "

" phone to tanu ke pas hai " supriya ne phone chinte hue kaha.

" tanu ke pas? kaise? kahani mein ye turn kab aya? " megha laiti-laiti ek dum se uchli par supriya ne jawab nahi diya kyun ki usne apni maa se baat karne ke liye number mila diya tha.

" helo mom "

" supriya where the hell are you? "

" vo mera phone kharab ho gaya mom isliye phone nahi kar payi "

" to atleast tumhe mujhe batana chahie na kisi ka phone lekar aur ye tum kaise number se "

" mom main theek hun, kal phone theek karwa kar apko call kar lungi, maine apko batane ke liye phone kiya tha bas " supriya ko isliye jaldi hui kyun ki megha use phone mang rahi thi aur fusfusa bhi rahi thi.

" aakash apni nude bhejne wala hai jaldi phone laa " megha ne supriya ka top khinchte hue kaha.

" ha mom ok bye, talk you later " supriya ne phone cut kiya aur megha ke uppar chillai " do minute nahi hai tere pas apni hawas ko rokne ke liye, itni aag hai to de kyun nahi deti boys hostel mein jakar " supriya ne phone megha ki taraf fenka jise megha ne sahi se catch kar liya.

" ab bata tanu ke pas tera phone kaise aya? " megha ne phone side rakhte hue kaha.

" tujhe to aakash ka nude ane wala tha na? " supriya ne use ghurte hue kaha kyun ki ek pal pehle vo uska top fadne wali thi phone ke liye.

" tu aakash ke nude par nazar daal rahi hai? "

" gand marwa apni " supriya boli.

" main pehle chut se shuruwat karungi " megha ne supriya ko jawab diya to supriya ne apna sar pakad liya " ab batayegi tanu ke pas tera phone kaise aya? "

" usne mujhe 1 baje apne room mein bulaya hai megha tu hi bata main kya karun? " supriya ne puri kahani megha ko batate hue use apne bachne ki tarkib mangi jiske baad kamre mein shanti cha gayi.
 

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Waiting waiting waiting waiting :banghead: :banghead:
Sorry for late update, bsy hun, par trying to post 3-4 updates in a week, waisa nahi ho pata to ek hi update badha dene ki kosish hai. Posted now :)
 

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Sorry for late update, bsy hun, par trying to post 3-4 updates in a week, waisa nahi ho pata to ek hi update badha dene ki kosish hai. Posted now :)
Koi baat nahi...
Btw thanks new update dene ke liye :approve:
 

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Store room pahunch kar supriya ko sonu kahin dikhai nahi diya to usne awaz lagane ki sochi lekin use pehle andar se kuch girne ki awaz mein vo ruk gayi. Store room ka gate khula tha, light bhi jal rahi thi par wahan koi dikhai nahi de raha tha. Hostel bhi is samay khali hi tha kyun ki is waqt aksar bache college mein hi hote hain. Store room se kuch girne ki awaz sun supriya ko laga ki sonu andar hi hai to vo andar ghus gayi. Andar ghuste hi usne apni nazar racks par dali jaisi aksar library mein rakhi rehti hai jispar books rakhi rehti hai uspar saman pada tha. store room jada badha nahi tha isliye charon taraf saman rakhe hone ki wajah se bhara-bhara mehsus ho raha tha. Supriya nazron se store room mein sonu ko khojne lagi lekin wahan koi nahi dikha. Fir uski nazar ant mein bane gate par gayi, jispar kundi nahi thi use laga sonu wahin hoga isliye vo us taraf chal di. Bich mein rakhe saman ke uppar se langte hue vo us kamre ki taraf badhi. Usne darwaje par hath rakha aur usi samay store room ki lights band ho gayi. Andhera padte hi supriya sakpaka gayi aur usne hath piche khinch liya. " lights ko kya hua, sonu " usne awaz di aur darwaje ko dhakela lekin vo khula nahi. " ye khul kyun nahi raha? " supriya use kholne ki kosish mein 'sonu-sonu' chillati gayi lekin darwaja nahi khula. Eka-ek usne store room se bahar nikalne ki sochi aur jaise hi usne socha, store room ke kiwad band hone ki awaz uske kano mein padi aur andar ati thodi roshni ghup andhere mein badal gayi. Supriya ghabrate hue wahan se hatti aur saman se takrate hue girti hui sambhali aur fir bahar ki taraf bhagi jisme kafi saman usne niche gira diya. Akhir store room ke darwaje tak pahunch kar usne use khincha lekin vo bahar se band ho chuka tha. Supriya ne kiwad par zor-zor se marna shuru kiya " koi kholo, help.... help... " ek hi jhatke mein use pichli raat wale hadse ki yaad aa gayi. Bechaini ek baar fir badhne lagi thi agar do minute vo aise hi aur cheekhti chillati to shayad fir se panic attack ki shikar ban jati. Par aisa nahi hua agle hi pal bahar se darwaja khula aur samne sonu ko khada dekh usne chillana roka.

" tum, tum andar kya kar rahi thi " sonu ne supriya ke bikhre hue halat ko dekhte hue kaha.

" vo...vo... " supriya kuch bol nahi paa rahi thi. Sonu ne fauran store room ki light kholi aur andar ke bikhre hue halat ko dekha " ye kya kiya tumne? " sonu supriya ko jaan kar kandhe se dhakka dete hue andar ghusa. Supriya ka uski is harkat par dhayan nahi gaya. Vo bas sonu ke sath sath hi andar ki haalat ko dekhne lagi. Store room ka sara saman bikhra hua tha, zameen par padi boriyan khuli padi thi uska saman zameen par bikhra hua tha aur jo khula hua saman tha vo kharab pada tha jaise koi chiz uske uppar bikheri gayi ho. Sonu ne farash par pade khane ke khule hue saman ko uthaya to use ubkai aa gayi. Ek chipchipa sa padart uspar pada tha jisme se badbu aa rahi thi. " ye kya hai? kya kar diya tumne pure store room ka? " sonu ne use apne se dur fenkte hue kaha. Supriya khud hairan thi ki do minute pehle to kamre mein sab kuch theek tha, rack par sara saman pada tha to ab achanak se sab bikhr kar zameen par kaise aa gaya.

" bolti kyun nahi, kya kiya tumne? Warden ko pata chala to tum gayi "

" ma...maine.. kuch nahi kiya... mujhe nahi pata ye sab kaise hua "

" tumhe nahi pata to tum andar kya kar rahi thi "

" apko.. dhund rahi thi... vo mujhe laga aap andar hai to isliye andar ayi fir achanak se sab band ho gaya main bahut dar gayi thi, warden ko mera naam mat lena mujhe nahi pata kuch ki kaise hua ye sab " supriya ke jawab ke piche uski pareshani saaf jhalak rahi thi.

" tum mujhe kyun dhund rahi thi? " sonu ki nazar supriya par hi thi, uske top ke andar fansi uski chatiyun se uski nazar nahi hat rahi thi.

" vo bathroom mein pani nahi nikal raha nali mein isliye, mujhe laga aap andar hai kuch saman gira tha to andar ayi aur fir vo kiwad khula hua tha to socha aap udhar ho isliye wahi dekhne gayi thi jisme sari lights band ho gayia ru fir ye kiwad band ho gaya " supriya ne ishare se us kiwad ki taraf ungli kar di. Sonu ne ek pal us taraf dekha aur fir supriya ko ghurne laga.

" tum mujhe theek nahi lagti, sar par choth vot lagi thi kya? "

" matlab? " supriya confused hote hue boli.

" us kiwad par itna mota tala laga hai vo bhi salon se aur tum keh rahi ho vo khula hua tha? "

" tala? " supriya ko vishwas nahi hua isliye vo khud aage badhi aur bilkul sonu ke bagal mein khade hokar jhank kar us taraf dekhne lagi. Sonu se jaise hi supriya satti uska lund pent ke andar se akadne laga. Itne pas kabhi kabhi hi ladki ati thi uske aur vo bhi aisi jawan khubsurat ladki. Sonu ne tirchi nazar se supriya ki taraf dekha to jhukne ki wajah se uska top uppar tha jiski wajah se uski kamar aur sapat gora pet uski ankhon ke aage aa gaya itna hi nahi, jeans mein kasi uske ubhar nikal rahe the jispar vo hath lagane hi wala tha ki supriya wapis sidha ho gayi. " yahan par ab tala kaise? " usne sonu ki taraf dekhte hue kaha. Par sonu ne uski nahi sunu uski nazar chatiyun par thi jo is waqt top bigad jane ki wajah se chatiyun ke bich ban rahe cleavage ko ujagar kar rahe the. Ek hi pal laga supriya ko sonu ki nazron ko samjhne mein, vo fauran wahan se hati, Kapde theek karte hue vapis apni jagah jaa khadi hui.

" mera yakin maniye sonu ji mujhe kuch nahi pata yahan kya hua hai "

" par warden ko to batana padega na aur kamre ke andar to tum hi mili ho mere ko " sonu ne supriya ke samne pent ke uppar se apna lund adjust kiya. Supriya uski harkat ko saaf dekh paa rahi thi, ek pal to kara ki muh tod de uska lekin haalat uske paksh mein nahi the. Usne andekha karna hi sahi samjha.

" main to apko khojte hue ayi thi, warden ne hi kaha tha apse milne ko aur store room khula hua tha. Agar aap yahan nahi the to store room kaise khula hua tha? Kisne khol kar chhod diya "

" khola to mene hi tha vo to main.. " sonu bolte hue chup ho gaya. Agar mene iske bare mein bataya aur warden ko ye malum hua ki main store room khula chhod bathroom muth marne gaya tha to warden mera lund sil degi fir muth kya khada tak nahi kar paunga. Sonu ne man hi man socha aur supriya ko jane ka ishara kar diya. Supriya ek pal nahi samjhi par dusri bar jab sonu ne ishara kiya to vo samajh gayi aur wahan se nikal gayi. Use bas ab apne room mein jakar aram karne ki jarurat thi. Kal raat ke hadse ke baad kuch ajeeb hi ho raha hai, par na jane kaun tha vo jisne light off ki aur fir gate bhi? Par iske alawa vo saman kaise bhikhra vo bhi itni jaldi aur vo tala us samay to kiwad par nahi tha to wahan kaise aya? Supriya abhi sidiyan chadh kar jati ise pehle uska hath piche se kisi ne pakad liya.
us hostel mein bahot kuch ho raha hai...
Kuch anchaahi aur andekhi ghatnaye..
khaskar supriya ke sath.... kuch aise bhi baatein hai jo abhi samne hai even hostel mein rehne wali shayad har ek ladki jaanti hai par dekh kar bhi andekha kar deti hai, ya phir khud unsab se dur rakhti hai.. jaise ki nashilw padarth jo shayad warden aur tanu & gang milke sevan bhi karte hai aur aur supply bhi karte hai...
par koi jaake report nahi karti... upor se ragging k khilaf bhi police mein koi jaake report nahi karti....
abhi jo hua us store room mein... iske piche jiska hath hai wo jarur hostel se hi connected hai....
ye hostel mein jarur kuch rahasya hai kuch raaz chipa hua hai, jiske chalte kuch na kuch anchaahi andekhi ghatnaye ghat rahi hai... shayad udhar kuch log milke hostel se ladkiyon ko bhi bech deti ho kahi aur jagah.. :eek:

I think.. sabse pehle jaggu, sonu aur warden ko ulta latka ke khub pitaayi karni chahiye... phir unlogo ke upor petrol daalke darana chahiye... shayad supriya ko sab kuch sach sach bol de :approve:
Hai na harshit1890 sahab :approve:
" itni bhi jaldi kya hai, kuch ruk kar humse bhi baat kar lo " supriya ko andaza nahi tha ki awaz kiski hai par roke jane par jab vo mudi to apne samne khadi tanu ko dekh uski ankhein badi ho gayi. " kya hua aise kya ghur rahi hai? Sexy hun isliye? " tanu ne apni chatiyun ko uppar chadate hue kaha. " bolti kyun nahi? jaban par semen rakha hai kya? muh khol kar dikha to " tanu ne supriya ka muh pakad use kholne ki kosish ki jise supriya ko dard hone laga, uske muh se dard bhari 'ughh' nikli jise dekh tanu ne jabran uska muh aur dabaya fir chhod diya. Fir tanu uske kareeb ayi jiski wajah se supriya piche deewar se chipak gayi.

" tanka jhanki ka bahut shauk hai na tujhe.. main batati hun ki tanka-jhanki kaise ki jati hai, aaj raat ko mere kamre mein 1 baje chup chaap aa jana "

" main.. kyun.. " supriya ki ankhein bhari hui thi.

" kyun? " tanu ne hawa mein phone lehrate hue supriya ko dikhaya jisne sab samjha diya ki ye uske sath kya ho raha hai. Jis chiz ki supriya ko chinta thi vo ghatt chuki thi, supriya ka phone uske pas tha jise khojte hue vo warden ke pas gayi thi. " chup-chaap aa jaio warna " tanu ne supriya ka phone rakh apna phone nikala aur ek video chala di jisme supriya warden ke kamre mein jhank rahi thi aur jiske baad camera zoom hua aur room ke andar ka nazara bhi camere mein capture tha jisme warden ki nangi nitambh dikh rahe the. Supriya ki to ankhein khuli reh gayi, video pura hone se pehle hi tanu ne phone wapis rakh liya " ab soch ye video agar warden ke pas jayega to tera kya hoga? waise chinta mat kar main is video ko warden ko nahi bhejungi kyun ki uske pas ye video kahin se forward hokar ayegi, matlab to samajh hi gayi hogi ki video pure hostel mein felegi aur uske baad vo warden ke pas jayegi bas tab soch lio tere sath kya hoga " tanu supriya ke kareeb ayi " band kamre mein dar to nahi laga na? " kaan ke nazdeek akar usne supriya se kaha aur fir use alag ho gayi.

" tanu main nahi thi kamre mein, mera phone to canteen se hi gayab ho gaya tha kal, mujhe nahi pata ki phone tumhare pas kaise aya aur tum kis bare mein baat kar rahi ho " supriya ne ghabrate hue sahi lekin vo baat kahi jo megha ne use batai thi. Tanu uski baat sun kar ek pal shant khadi ho gayi, supriya ko laga ki megha ka idea kaam aa gaya lekin khud ki hui galti mein supriya ek aur galti kar baithi thi jiska use us waqt andaza nahi hua.

" maine to koi bhi kamre ki baat chedi hi nahi? " tanu ki baat sun supriya sakpaka gayi " aur agar tera phone kal dophar mein chori hua to sham ko tune apni saheli megha ko phone kaise kiya vo bhi ek baar nahi balki kai baar han? " supriya ke pas ab bolne ko kuch nahi tha, vo chup-chap tanu ke chehre ko dekhti rahi " 1 baje aaj raat, mere kamre mein " tanu ne wapis use yaad dilaya aur wahan se jane lagi. Supriya ko vishwas nahi ho raha tha ki uski ek bhool uspar itni bhari padne wali hai. " tanu mera phone " supriya ne kisi tarah muh se awaz nikali.

" raat ko ayegi tab le jaio aur han tera koi ashiq hai hai sala raat ko 3 baje phone karta hai, keh dio use aaj baat nahi kar payegi " tanu bol kar chali gayi aur man mein dar ke sath sainkdon sawal chhod gayi. Pehla sawal to yahi tha ki tanu akhir chahti kya hai jo raat ko bula rahi hai? Is baat ne hi supriya ko dara diya tha, dusri baat jo use samajh aa rahi thi vo ye ki tanu uspar bahut der se nazar rakhi hui thi aur shayad usi ne store room ki light aur darwaja band kiya tha? Par fir bhi vo saman kisne bekhera tha? Ye sawal supriya ke man mein abhi bhi tha. Lekin is sawal se jada dar to use aaj raat ka tha. " megha hi help kar sakti hai ab " supriya ne megha ko phone milane ke liye jeans mein hath dala aur tab use yaad aya ki phone tanu le gayi hai. Vo fauran mess ki taraf bhagi jahan par sab khana khate the aur tv dekhte the. Supriya wahan pahunchi aur wahan par rakhe phone mein usne sikka dala aur megha ko number milaya. " megha phone uthaaa " megha ne phone nahi uthaya. Usne dubara milaya aur fir ghanti bajti rahi lekin fir phone nahi utha. Supriya ne phone patka aur apne room ki taraf chal di ye soch kar ki do ghante baad to megha room par aa hi jane wali thi. Supriya bed par baithi soch mein dubi hui thi aur reh-reh kar bas ghadi mein dekhte hue megha ka intezar kar rahi thi. 3 se 4 aur 4 se 5 baj chuke the, college kab ka khatam ho gaya tha lekin megha abhi tak nahi ayi thi aur usi ka intezar karte hue supriya ki ankh lag gayi. Uski ankhein achanak se khuli aur usne apne aap ko baithe-baithe soya paya jiski wajah se uski gardan mein dard ho gaya tha.

" uth gayi maharani aap " megha ki awaz sunte hi supriya ki nind puri tarah se khul gayi.

" megha? tu kaha thi tujhe pata hai mein tera kab se intezar kar rahi thi, sham ho chuki hai "

" sham? sham nahi madam, raat ho chuki hai time dekho " megha ne ghadi ki taraf ishara kiya.

" 11 baj rahe hain? main... main tabse so rahi hun? " supriya ne khud se sawal kiya, use samay par yakeen nahi ho raha tha.

" mujhe nahi pata lekin jab ayi tu so rahi thi, tujhe uthane ki ksosish ki lekin tu uthi nahi, raat ke khane par bhi nahi uthi to tere liye khana yahin le ayi aur takreeban do ghante se jagane ki kosish kar rahi hun tujhe par tu uthne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi "

" par main itna kaise soyi? "

" vo to tujhe hi malum hoga, na jane kaise kaise sapne dekhti hogi jo uthne ka naam hi nahi leti, pakka deti hogi tu sapne mein "

" tu chup kar, tu mujhe ye bata ki tu 5 baje tak kyun nahi ayi tujhe malum hai mere sath kya hua "

" vo chhod, mumy ka phone aa raha tha teri, tune unhe mera number diya hai? "

" han.. mummy oohh shit unse to meri baat hi nahi hui, vo mujhe maar dalegi... "

" to phone kyun nahi karti tu "

" phone to tanu ke pas hai " supriya ne phone chinte hue kaha.

" tanu ke pas? kaise? kahani mein ye turn kab aya? " megha laiti-laiti ek dum se uchli par supriya ne jawab nahi diya kyun ki usne apni maa se baat karne ke liye number mila diya tha.

" helo mom "

" supriya where the hell are you? "

" vo mera phone kharab ho gaya mom isliye phone nahi kar payi "

" to atleast tumhe mujhe batana chahie na kisi ka phone lekar aur ye tum kaise number se "

" mom main theek hun, kal phone theek karwa kar apko call kar lungi, maine apko batane ke liye phone kiya tha bas " supriya ko isliye jaldi hui kyun ki megha use phone mang rahi thi aur fusfusa bhi rahi thi.

" aakash apni nude bhejne wala hai jaldi phone laa " megha ne supriya ka top khinchte hue kaha.

" ha mom ok bye, talk you later " supriya ne phone cut kiya aur megha ke uppar chillai " do minute nahi hai tere pas apni hawas ko rokne ke liye, itni aag hai to de kyun nahi deti boys hostel mein jakar " supriya ne phone megha ki taraf fenka jise megha ne sahi se catch kar liya.

" ab bata tanu ke pas tera phone kaise aya? " megha ne phone side rakhte hue kaha.

" tujhe to aakash ka nude ane wala tha na? " supriya ne use ghurte hue kaha kyun ki ek pal pehle vo uska top fadne wali thi phone ke liye.

" tu aakash ke nude par nazar daal rahi hai? "

" gand marwa apni " supriya boli.

" main pehle chut se shuruwat karungi " megha ne supriya ko jawab diya to supriya ne apna sar pakad liya " ab batayegi tanu ke pas tera phone kaise aya? "

" usne mujhe 1 baje apne room mein bulaya hai megha tu hi bata main kya karun? " supriya ne puri kahani megha ko batate hue use apne bachne ki tarkib mangi jiske baad kamre mein shanti cha gayi.
tanu shayad hostel mein nashile padarth supply karti hai aur bahar hostel ki ladkiyon ko bechti hai aur ye shayad ek lesbian bhi hai...
So ab is negative story character ko jeene k koi hak nahi..

Ab supriya jab raat ke ek baje uske paas jaaye to sath mein koi dhardaar koi chij le jaaye... aur mauka dekhke tanu ke sine ya pith par waar karke ushe jaan se hi maar de supriya..
Hai na harshit1890 sahab :approve:

isse do faide honge sabhi ko ek tanu se chhuth kara mil jayegi hamesha ke liye sabhi ko aur dusri.. supriya famous ho jayegi as a naayika...
Hai na harshit1890 sahab :approve:
uske baad us 3 baje phone karne wale ko bhi dekh legi supriya...

Khair update kaafi dilchasp tha..
Let's see what happens next
Supriya kis kis ko jaan se maar daalti hai ya shikar khud banti hai ya tharki megha help karti hai uski..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit1890 sahab :applause: :applause:
 

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Update-6
Supriya ki toh kah ke le li :cmouth:
Main last update me bil hee raha tha ki jaldibse fantasy angle, khoon voon, horror aaye to maza aaye... Aur next update me hee wo aa gaya :vhappy:

Jaise hee Supriya us khandhar ki taraf badhi lagne laga tha ki galti kar di.. Aise akele nahi jaana tha. Aur us kamre me wo smell :hmm2: koyi jaanwar mara ya fir insaan ya fir kuch illegal items cooking...
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Mast theme hai bhai... Ladkiyo ki aisi bakchodi aisa ravaiya.. Bilkul unique hai, mere liye to hai hee atleast. Kabhi nahi socha ki ladkiya aisi bhi ho sakti hai... Jab se tanu ghusa waha aur ganja fukne lagi... Awesome :superb: ekdum gundi hai lawda... Chudne ke liye hamesha lalayit fir chahe ladka ho ya ladki....
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Par main kaan to uske baad hich hua.. Jab wo chali gayi aur tanu ko hosh aaya.. Uske baad jo scene describe kiy... Jo jo hua Supriya ke sath... Bas kahi se ekat hath touch nahi hua warna Supriya peshab kar deti kasam se :lol: wo bijali ki chamak me koyi baitha hua use laga.. Wo scene me awesome tha... Dar me aksar aisa hota hai, i guess... Jaise-taise karke bhag to nikli par.................. Wapas wahi aur jo last line likhi.. Wo ghoorne wala shaks kaun tha ya thi... Ab hogi female hee.. Male ka kya kaam kyunki kaand to ladkiya hee ki hai yaha... Anyway, that was one hell of the scene ..:scared: :sigh:

Fantabulous update hariya bhai... Abhi maza aayega story me aur wo almaari me kya chhipa rakhi hai tanu :p: bdsm ka samaan to nahi....
ragging ke dar ke piche kya kya karti hai iska bhi chitta hostel mein famous tha, uska boyfriend tha jiske sath vo wahin par sex karti thi jab tak vo is college mein raha. Vo use do saal senior tha aur jab tak vo college mein raha tanu ko usi kamre mein choda karta tha.
So sad... Bechari...
" chindi thi vo to, kachi ek dum, unke sath kuch maza nahi ata. Acha hua nahi ayi varna time hi kharab karti. Hostel mein hai ek do maal jinhe masla jaa sakta hai unko apne ade par lana padega ek din " tanu kursi ko aage piche karte hue boli.
Chillati alag jab tanu ungali karti to :hide1:
" aahhh-hhh jannat sali yahi hai. Chut mein lawda aur muh mein maal ise badh kar kuch nahi hai "
Kya baat hai.. Itne uchh vichar 😋😋😋😁😁
 

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nice update ..supriya ko darwaja khula dikha store room ka aur wo chali gayi ander ..
par light band hona ,,aur kisine bahar se darwaja band kiya ( ye shayad tannu ne kiya tha ) ..
par wo gandi badbu aur jab sonu ne dikhaya ki darwaje par tala laga hai to supriya hairan ho gayi ..
kuch to tha waha pe 🤔..

ab ye tannu ne raat ko 1 baje bulaya hai par kya karegi wo supriya ke saath 🤔..

megha to hawasi hi hai ,,pehle phone nahi uthaya aur supriya maa se baat kar rahi thi to bolti hai ki aakash ka nude aanewala hai 😁😁..

aur ye supriya itni derr kaise soti rahi 🤔 ki megha ke jagane par bhi nahi jagi ..
ab megha kuch plan bata paaye jisse tannu se bach sake ..
 

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Intezaar agle update ke liye harshit1890 saheb....
awesome siggy madadm :bow: :bow:
Asl kutiya bina chudaye rh bhi nhi sakti
vo bhi kara denge :roll:
ohoo bzy peuple.. :ecs:
Sarry ... Itminan wala waqt na mila
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Update 3...

To je baat thi pahle din ki ... Par ye kai ko aadha aadha itihaas bahar nikal rahe ... Aaj uss Jungle ke bhutiye virane tak dekh leyo... Baki baad me dikhaunga... Lota lekar to naa bhej diye the uss khandhar me jo aage pause laga diye :dazed:

Areeee reeee Megha bas kar de kahe supriya se chhed-chhad kar rahi... Main free hun na... Aithe aa ja....

Waise ye Megha aur uske maa ke bich ka chakkar dekhna rochak hoga... Baki update ke anth me wo ladke kai ko dekh kar bhag gaye iss baat par main na suspence me aane wala :beee:
Megha is booked koi aur khojo aap, jaggu chalegi kya :hmm:
Update... 4

Waise hi bata dete ki ranchhod das chhanchad ki bahini hai supriya hum maan lete ... Khud to engineering me kitne back lekar je sab sikhe honge wo to aap hi bata paye lekin mujh garib zoology wale ko update ke naam par jo engineering padha rahe ho wo galat baat hai.. :vangry: hum kada virodh karte hain ... :protest:

Waise sach me wo rasiya teacher hai kya.... Tanik ekadh ghatna .. nahi purn ghatna kisi purv ki ladki ke sath jo hua tha wo suna deo.. sala wo tharki budhau... Goli khakar khada karne wala lekar maze kar raha.. hum garib padh'kar hi maze maar le :D

Megha laindon ki kutai bhi karti thi :eek: chudail wali power na de dena...... Waise update 1-2 aur 3-4 me kuch to ghotala hai...

Kahan aakash ke massage par bah jati thi Megha .... Uske msg ka soch'kar... Class bunk karke hand practice par thi... Pan idhar canteen me to Akash itna anjaan tha ki soch se pare...

Subah 3 baje wala jaise rahasmayi sandesh supriya ke pass aata hai waise kahin aakas ke msg bhi Megha ke rahashymayi tarike se to nahi aata.. iss ghotale ka apan ko purn vivran chahiyen..

Baki apni epic Megha to canteen me hi lagta hai supriya ke sang kuchh kuchh na karne lag jaye... Koi to rok lo megha ko ...

Ye Harshit babu ke bus ki baat na laage hai... Megha ke liye mujhe hi aana hoga... Koi na darling I am cumming ... Sorry coming
Ab engineer aise hi thodi na ban jayenge bhai :p apke sabhi sawalon ka jawab kahani mein hi maujud hai jo aage mil jayega... Ap bhi na kar paoge kuch... bata raha hun pehle se hi :D
Thanks nain bhai :bow:
 

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Waqt waqt ki baat hai... ab waqt har samay achha ho aisa to nahi ho sakta na.. bas sayam aur dharya se kaam lena chaahiye aise samay par.. aur sath uchit aur sahi soch vichar ke sath aage badhna chahiye.. dekhiyega ye bura waqt bhi tal jayega.. :smile:
Let c :redface:
Haan, haan.. dekho dekho... dekhne ke liye to wo dono yeh sab kar raha hai :D
laga ki ju to masoom hogi kam se kam... par nahi.. ju bhi nikli taank jhank karne wali :mad:
Oh to yeh baat hai..
shayad harshit1890 sahab ab tak malini ko bhool nahi paye.. :D
isliye is kahani le aaye ushe bhi as a supriya banake.. ab unhe dar tha ki malini naam rakhne se unki ek reader naina phir se band na baja de malini ki :D
isliye is kirdaar ka naam rakha supriya :lol1:
Iski ye majal ki is nazar dekhe masoom supriya ko.... harshit sahab isko jaan se hi marwa dijiye :dwarf:
Kyun na tharki megha aur masoom supriya milke pehle us harami, kamina hawasi kutta dhokhebaz dagabaaz Sonu ki aankhein fod ke acid daal de .. phir uske pure sarir pe blade se inch by inch cut karke jakhm de. phir uske muh pipe daalke usme se petrol uske stomach mein pahuncha de .. phir gale tak petrol aate hi us Sonu ke muh mein aag laga de.. tab wo andar se bhi jalega aur bahar se bhi... :approve: :D

bhikhmangi warden.. jiske paas jeans kharidne tak paise nahi :lol:


nahi pehle tu bata warden tu koun.. kis gatar se paida huyi hai :mad:
Iski ye mazal ki is tarah ki sawal kare supriya se :dwarf:


hmm... to wo jo hota aa raha hai uske room mein 3.00 baad... wo baaki kayi logo ki pata hai.. par wo log samajhte hai ki yeh sab supriya aur megha ki karistani hai..
yeh badi hi ansujhi gahri raaz hai.. akhir koun hai jo is tarah se msg karta hai supriya ko 3 baje baad... aur us room mein aise Halla ya deewar pitta hai... lekin sochne wali baat ye hai ki jab yeh sab hota hai to megha ya supriya ko kyun nahi pata... after all dono to ushi room mein rahti hai.. kya nind hi itni gahri ho jaati hai ki insabhi ghatanao ko mehsus nahi kar paati..
gaur karne wali baat yeh bhi hai ki jaggu ko kaise pata.. kya raat ko wo ladkiyon ke room mein taank jhaank karta hai...
are harshu ji is tharki jaggu ka bhi patta saaf kar dijiye story se.. :dwarf:


. iski ye himmat. hawasi, tharki, kamini warden kahin ki..ek se khush nahi reh sakti .jaane kitne mard chahiye isko.. :akshay:
is warden aukat nahi ki supriya ke pero ki dhul ki bhi barabari kare.. aur is tarah se baat kari hai masoom supriya se..
harshit sahab is kirdaar warden ko bhi marwa dijiye.. iski aisi taisi kar dijiye :dwarf:

are dhett teri ki :doh:
kam se kam supriya to aisi boli na bole..
Bichari... sab us megha ki wajah se hua hai.. uski bhi aisi ki taisi :chop:

are yaar ye us kamine sonu ke paas kyun jaa rahi hai :(
Khud hi thik kyun nahi kar leti bathroom ki nali ko..
ye sonu jarur kuch na kuch tharki harkat karega..
aur agar ki na to iski to eent se eent baja deni hai hai revo se hi :chop:
Khair... kaafi unsuljhe sawal hai us room ko leke aakhir tin baje baad hi ye sab kyun hota hai..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock:
( Aur aap itne busy hone ke bawajud bhi update deke readers ka manoranjan kar rahe hai.. uske liye tahe dil se sukriya :bow:)
Aap to 10 hi update mein sabko marwa dena chahti hai par aisa kaise chalega naina ji :D Kahani is baar vo nahi hai jo aap soch rahe hain is baar kahani mein kuch alag hai, koi chudail koi bhoot nahi hai kahani mein, bas ek chiz aisi hai jo kahani ko reality se jodti hui fantasy par le jayegi... It is all about reality... i guess... or not... :D Thanks niana ji :hug:
Waise sukriya dil se.. kam se kam aap hero heroine ki yaaddast nahi mitate :approve:
Yaadasht kahe mitayenge :hmm:
nice update ...to ye baat sach hai ki warden sonu ko deti hai 🤣🤣 aur aaj supriya ne apni aankho se sach dekh liya ..
aur ye warden bhulakkad bhi hai 🤔..
jaggu ne complaint ki hai aisa kaha warden ne par uski baat sach hai ya nahi pata nahi 🤔🤔..

aur ye supriya ke room se aawaaje aati hai ajeeb ajeeb ,,,aur deewar pitne ki bhi aawaj 🤔..

chalo ek baat to sahi huyi ki mobile ka matter nahi hua ,,ab shayad supriya wo lene jaye par megha ko saath rakhkar jana chahiye warna dobara raat wahi gujarni na pade 🤣🤣..
Ab vo kya deti hai ye abhi tak suspense hai bhai :D ab ye to waqt hi batyega...keep reading bhai :hug: thanks :hug:
बढ़िया अपडेट है
thanks bhai :hug:
:shocked: ... Ye lakh take ki baat kahi isne... Mere aanshu aa gaye.. aisi nek ladkiyan kahan hai ab bachi iss sansar me...

Hariya kaka jaldi se mera takan bhida do iss atrangi ke sath... warna kahani khatm hone ke baad maine fasi par taang dena hai :angry:
kisko tangoge? khud ko na tagna ek reader kam ho jayega :D
O bawadi hath hi pakdi hai... Itne se lesbian ho jayegi :shocked:
uske piche uska attit hai na :roll:
harshit1890 sahab aap is kahani hero ka naam nischal rakhiye.. plz :D
vaise nischal kyun :hmm: aur agar kahani mein hero nahi hua to :hmm:
 
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