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Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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Usko jad se ukhad fekne ka... Jaldi aao Pakiya bhau... Apan idhar akela hai aur hariya kaka ne bahut dich kiya hai...

Pahle bola mere ku, update 11 ke baad batane to Megha ke liye role fix kar dunga... Update 11 ke baad 111 martaba bol chuka... Lekin fir bhi jabardasti...

Matlab wo aakash kah raha phone par shakal dikhane to to hariya kaka usse cleavase tak dikha raha .. :banghead: nainsafi ho gayi mere saath idharv

harshit1890 harshu unkil je kya ho rela hai ,Ghodo ko nhi mil ghas or ye Aakash jaise kha rhe chyawanprash yha logo ko maal log ke darshan durlabh ho gye or ju ine Aakash jaiso ko cleavage tk dikhwa rhe aisi nainsaafi bardasht nhi ki jyegi :protest:
 

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Update ~~ 21

" ye is bhootiya hostel mein kya kar rahi hai? "

" abhi vo yahan kar rahi hai use jada jaruri hai ki ise hosh mein laya jaye.. pani.. kaun laya tha apne sath "

" mere pas hai.. ye lo " usne bottle aage pakdai. Bottle khol kar fauran kuch pani hateli mein liya aur chehre par chidakne laga.

" yar ye to uth hi nahi rahi hai.. mujhe dar lag raha hai.. yahan khade rehna bhi ek ek pal... " usne torch ko piche ki taraf ghumaya aur deewar par jami hui kai aur sadan ko dekhne laga. Dar ke mare uska halak sukh raha tha.

" to kya hum ise yahin chhod kar chale jaye? " jab pani se bhi nahi kuch hua to vo niche baithi aur usne sar utha kar gaal thap-thapana shuru kar diya. " aaruhi... uth... aaruhi... " do teen baar aisa karne par uski ankhein halki-halki khulne lagi aur dhire-dhire uski ankhein khul gayi par chehre ke uppar direct padh rahi torch ki roshni mein uski ankhein chaundiya gayi.

" vishal torch to hata "

" oo sorry.. " vishal ne torch ko side kar diya. Roshni hatte hi usne apna chehra hath ke piche se aage kiya aur pehle uski taraf dekha jo uske sath baithi thi aur fir samne.

" aaurhi... tu theek hai... " awaz par usne koi pratikriya nahi ki. Vo bas yahi soch aur samajhne ki kosish kar rahi thi ki vo kahan hai aur kya ho raha hai. " aaruhi... " usne fir awaz di uske sath is baar vishal bhi bola.

" aaurhi.. are you ok? aaruhi.. "

" bol bhi de yaar aaruhi... varna ye dono mujhe bhi yahin khada rakhenge " vishal ke sath khade ladke ne jab kahi to usi pal ek kida uske per par chadh gaya aur vo chilla utha jiske chillate sath hi uski torch gir kar band ho gayi. " bhoot... bhoot.... bhoot.... bhoot.... " vishal use samjhane laga. Use rokne ki kosish karne laga aur akhir vo kamyab bhi ho gaya.

" kuch nahi hai.. koi bhoot nahi hai gaggan.. tu kyun dara raha hai sabko "

" bhoot? main .. kahan hun... " aaurhi fauran bechaini se bolte hue uth baithi.

" aaruhi.. tu.. is waqt girls hostel mein hai.. "

" girls hostel... to? kahin aur hona chahie tha mujhe.. " aaruhi ne hairani bhari nazron se teeno ko dekha aur tabhi uski nazar ludki hui torch par gayi jo dono ladkon ke tangon ke pass padi thi.

" aaurhi.. " vishal ne awaz di to usne ungli se ishara kiya, ishare ki taraf jab teeno ne nazar dali to vo torch wahan se khud ba khud fisalti hui kamre se bahar jane lagi aur kamre ki dehaliz par jaa ruki. Koi kuch kehta use pehle vo torch jal uthi.

" bhoooottttttttttt..... " gaggan sabse pehle chillaya aur akele hi kamre se bahar bhaga.

" gaggan... gaggan... " shruti ke sath vishal bhi chillaya.

" ma..in usko dekhta hun.. tu aaruhi ko lekar jaldi aa... " panic mein vishal ne kaha aur vo nikla. Shruti ne hami bharte hue aaruhi ko khada kiya jo beusdh thi. Uski taraf se koi bhi pratikriya nahi ho rahi thi. Shruti gagan ko awaz lagate hue aaruhi ko pakdte hue bahar nikli jisme usne pehle us jalti hui torch ko laat mari aur use corridor ke dusre chor ke andhere mein bhej diya wahan pahunchte hi vo torch fir bhuj gayi ye dekh shruti ke andar bhi dar ka ehsas ubhar pada. Use khud ab yahan se jaldi nikalna tha, usne aaruhi ki baju pakdi aur dono chal diye.

" ohh god... ye gaggan .. aaruhi to theek hai.. " shruti ke jawab par aaurhi fir kuch nahi boli. " vishal... " shruti ne awaz di to pure hostel mein uski awaz gunj uthi. Peron se chalte hue vo awaz shruti ko chubh rahi thi. Bar-bar use lag raha tha ki uske piche koi hai, bhale hi vo nidar thi aur ban rahi thi lekin ab uske man mein bhi dar tha.

" shruti niche... gaggan mere sath hai... " vishal ne awaz di to shruti ne chain ki sans li. Shruti aram-aram se hi sahi bich bich mein kabhi aaruhi ko kuch kehti ya vishal se baat kar leti. Aisa karte hue vo akhirkar niche aa hi gayi.

" kya hua tum dono pareshan kyun ho? " niche pahunchte hi shruti ne vishal ki thakawat aur gaggan ke dar ko dekhte hue pucha.

" gate nahi khul raha isliye pareshan hai hum " gaggan ne darwaje ko khinchte hue kaha. " ab hum bahar kaise jayenge... kholo koi hai help.. " gaggan chillaya.

" tu shant ho ja.. shanti se sochne de.. " shruti fauran boli.

" shanti.. kya shanti.. kya shanti se sochun... mana kiya tha mene tum dono ko ki idhar nahi atte.. nahi atte par tum dono ne nahi suni... bola tha na ki ye bhootiya hostel hai yahan par ana mana hai.. ab lo bhugto.... mere baap ko agar pata chala ki main padai ki jagah aise bhootiya ilake mein engineering karte hue mara gaya to vo meri atma ko pakad kar gand todenege... chhodega nahi vo... atmaon ka jallad hai vo.. jallad... " fulti sanson se gaggan ne apni baat khatam ki aur fir puri takat se darwaje ko khinch kar kholne ki kosish karne laga.

" tu thak gaya hai.. mujhe kosish karne de " vishal ne gaggan se kaha to usne darwaja chhod diya lekin apne dil ki baat kehne se piche nahi hatta.

" han khol le... agar khul jaye to.. ye khulega nahi... ye sirf apni mazri se khulta hai.. aur tab khula tha jab hume andar ane diya tha.. ab nahi khulega ye.. mene kaha tha yahan nahi ana " usne fir wahi baat dauhrate hue baat puri ki.

" to aaruhi kaise milti hume? tujhe pata hai na ki.. " shruti bolte hue chup ho gayi. Koi baat vo aaruhi ke samne nahi kehna chahti thi jo bilkul shant khadi thi aur ek hi taraf dekh rahi thi. " ek hi baat dubara mat bol.. tu nahi ata kyun aya fir tu? bahaduri tujhe bhi to dikhani thi.. Manpreet ko.. tabhi aya hai na tu.. "

" manpreet ko bich mein mat le.. shur.... " gaggan bhadakne ki kosish karte hue bola.

" tu chup rahega gaggu.. chup reh.. purana darwaja hai.. fans gaya hoga.. khul jayega.. ruk... main kosish kar raha hun na... " vishal ne fir puri takat lagai lekin nahi khula. Hostel ke andhkar mein sirf ek matr torch ki roshne ke bich in teeno ki awaz pure hostel mein gunj rahi thi. Itni khamoshi thi is jagah ki har harkat ki awaz us jagah mein basti hui mehsus ho sakti thi.

" darwaja purana nahi hai.. hamari zindagi purani hone wali hai... ye darwaja nahi khulega vishal... hum fans gaye hain is hostel mein.. jo bhi jata hai kabhi vapis nahi ata.. tujhe to.. " gaggan bolte hue chup hua, vishal darwaja khinchne se ruka aur shruti jo gaggan ko kuch kehne ke liye muh kholne wali thi vo ruki. Teeno ek hi waqt par jis andaz mein the waise hi khade ho gaye aur jo awaz unhone abhi suni thi use sunne ki kosish karne lage. 'thakk-thakkk' thokar jaisi awaz teeno ko sunai di. Awaz ke ane par gaggan ne uski taraf dekha, ab roshni ka jariya vo torch vishal ne uske hath mein thamai thi to usne hi us taraf roshni dali theek shruti aur aaruhi ke piche. Vishal ne bhi usi taraf dekha aur shruti bhi ghum kar usi taraf dekhne lagi. Roshni sidiyun par thi.. kuch nahi tha wahan.. na hi ab vo awaz thi.. Sabhi ko laga ki vo sirf ek gaaltfemi thi jo is jagah ke vajah se hui lekin jaise hi gagga ne torch wahan se hatane ki sochi usi waqt nazar wahin ruk gayi.

Torch fisalti hui sidiyun tak ayi aur fir 'thakk-thakk' ek-ek paidi girti hui niche ane lagi " bhooottttttttttttttt....aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh... " gaggan ke hath se torch chhut gayi aur vo fir gir kar band ho gayi. Uske band hote hi andhere puri tarah se felh gaya aur is baar dar ke mare shruti bhi chilla uthi. Vishal ka bhi dum nikla aur usne gate ko puri takat se khincha jiske sath hi vo gate khul gaya. Gate khulta dekh gaggan sabse pehle bhaga aur shruti aaruhi ko lekar, vishal ne dono ko bahar kiya aur khud bahar akar hostel ka darwaja yun hi lehrata hua chhod nikal gaya. Kisi ne bhi palat kar nahi dekha aur vo darwaja apne aap dhire-dhire band hota chala gaya.

" bhago... bhago... bhoot pada hai hamare piche.. bhoot... haye.. main marunga... bhoot maar dega ... manpreet main teri bina liye mar jaunga... " gaggan hanfta hua bhag raha tha.

" gaggu ruk.. jaa... koi bhoot nahi hai.. hum bahar nikal chuke hai... " vishal piche se chillaya par gaggan tab tak nahi ruka jab tak vo bhagte hue ek darwaje ke aage nahi jaa ruka.

" ohh shit... vishal.. ye gaggan kya kar raha hai.... isne miss. nandini ke apartment ke samne jakar ruka hai... agar unhe pata chal gaya to gaye sab ke sab.. "

" ab rokne ka koi fayda nahi ... vo dekh.. " vishal ne shruti ko samne ki taraf dekhne ko kaha to gaggan ne jo dhol peeta tha uska shor miss nandini ke kano tak pahunch chuka tha. Miss nandni ko gaggan ek side karke khud andar ghus gaya aur vo vishal, shruti aur aaruhi ko apni taraf ata hua dekhne lagi.

" tum charon is waqt itne tuffan mein kya kar rahe ho.. " sabhi ko towel dete hue miss nandini ne kaha. Gaggan ke bade gungrale gol chatte jaise baal bhigne ki wajah se uski ankhon mein ghus rahe the. Usne baal pochne shuru kiye aur kapkapi mein bhagwan ko yaad karne laga.

" vo actually miss... " vishal ko samajh nahi aya ki kya bole.

" tum log kahin chup kar koi party to nahi kar rahe the? Drugs? "

" nahi nahi miss.. vo hum ye sab nahi kar rahe the.. vo to hum bas yun hi bahar gaye the... " shruti aaurhi ka sar pochne mein lagi hui thi.

" sach bolo.. varna tumhare parents ko bataun "

" aaruhi girls hostel mein chali gayi thi isliye... " gaggan ne turant bol diya. Uske chehre par baap ka kauf ter raha tha.

" girls hostel? " nandini ko samajh nahi aya ki girls hostel mein aaruhi ne jakar kya galti ki " kya tum dono ladke wahan pakde gaye ho? " nandini ne fir vishal aur gaggan ki taraf dekha.

" main... nahi nahi.. " gaggan ko apne uppar ilzam mehsus hota dekh vo bol pada. " miss aaurhi apne girls hostel mein nahi balki vo walle girls hostel mein gayi thi... " ajeeb se ishare karte hue vo bola.

" wo walle.. " nandini ne naak sikodi use gaggan ke expression kuch theek nahi lag rahe the. Nandini soch mein dubi par agle hi pal use jawab mil gaya.. " aaurhi girls hostel mein gayi thi? " ab nandini ke chehre par ghabrahat hadh se jada thi. Koi kuch kehta use pehle aaurhi ko zor-zor se hichkiya ane lagi.

" aaruhi.. are you ok ? " shruti ne uska chehra upar uthane ki kosish ki lekin vo hichkiya lete hue baithe-baithe niche farsh par gir kar behosh ho gayi. Sabhi ghabra gaye vishal aur nandini uske kareeb aye aur use uthane ki kosish karne lagi.

" ohh shit..t..... isme us girls hostel ka bhoot aa gaya hai .... ab ye nahi bachegi... ab vo hume bhi nahi chhodegi... "

" gaggan please shut up.. " shruti fauran boli. Jiske baad vishal ki madad se shruti ne aaruhi ko uthaya aur andar kamre mein le gaye. Vishal bahar nikal aya aur andar shruti aur nandini ne aaurhi ke gile kapde utar kar use dusre kapde pehna diye aur thodi der baad bahar aa gaye. Ek pal shanti chai rahi, jo nandini ne suna tha vo use abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha tha.

" don't tell me ki tum koi kahani bana rahe ho varna ye tum sab par bahut bhari padega " nandini ke jawab mein gaggan kuch bolna chahta tha lekin shruti ne use rok diya.

" nahi miss.. hum koi kahani nahi bana rahe hain... balki jo gaggan ne kaha vo sach tha.. aaruhi ko abhi hum usi girls hostel se lekar aye hain jo pichle 8 salon se band hai.. jahan koi nahi jata.. jiske bare mein campus ke andar kaha jata hai ki wo girls hostel ek bhootiya ghar hai.. jiske bare mein hostel ke pas tarah tarah ki kahaniyan hai.. aaruhi hume usi girls hostel mein mili hai.. "

" ohh god.. par aaurhi wahan pahunchi kaise? pahunchi chhodo vo wahan gayi hi kyun? "

" hume bhi nahi pata miss.. ye jawab to bas aaruhi hi de sakti hai.. " vishal ne nandini ke sawal ka jawab dete hue kaha.

" par tumhe kaise malum hua ki aaruhi wahan hai " nandini ne kuch sochne ke baad sawal kiya.

" shruti ne humse kaha ki aaruhi girls hostel ki taraf gayi hai.. bas usi se.. " jawab fir vishal ne diya.

" aur tum logon ko vo girls hostel mein mili "

" room ke andar miss... " gaggan bola " vo jagah bahut bhayanak hai... .bahut jada miss... andhere mein har pal aisa lag raha tha koi mujhe dekh raha hai.. chuu raha hai... vo khauf .... " gaggan ki kap-kapi abhi bhi chhut rahi thi.

" shruti " nandini ne uski taraf nazar modi " tum aaruhi ki room partner ho na? "

" ji.. mis.. ss.. "

" tumne jab aaruhi ko jatte hue dekha to use roka kyun nahi? aur apne doston ko batane hi kyun ayi? " nandini ke sawal par shruti kuch nahi boli. Visha aur gaggan ki nazar bhi usi par thi.

" kosish ki thi.. miss... "

" nahi.. mujhe tumhari is baat mein sach nazar nahi aa raha hai. Itni raat ko tumne aaruhi ko girls hostel jatte hue dekha lekin tumne use roka nahi.. tumne apne doston ko bataya aur unhe lekar gayi.. aisa kyun? tum jakar use rokti samjhati to vo nahi jati.. aur bhala wahan kyun koi jayega... college ne sabhi ko inform kar rakha hai ki wahan jana mana hai.. to fir.. "

" college ne un bachon ko mana kiya hai miss jo yahan aye hain.... unhe to mana nahi kiya na jo yahan ab nahi hai.. " shruti ne nandini ko bich mein rokte hue kaha.

" matlab? "

" vo aaruhi nahi thi miss.. aur vo pehli baar nahi tha jab aaurhi girls hostel mein gayi thi... vo pichle kai dino se wahan jaa rahi hai aur har raat ko wahin soti aa rahi hai.. " shruti ki baat sunte hi sabhi ke chehron ka rang ud gaya.

 

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" idhar baith wahan kya dekh rahi hai, deewaron se jugad karwati hai kya apna? " tanu ne khinch kar use apne pass baitha liya par supriya apni soch se bahar nahi nikli thi. Use abhi bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ki jo hua vo sach tha ya jo ho raha hai vo sach hai ya vo khud ek aisi sithti mein fansi hai jise vo samajh nahi paa rahi hai. " legi " tanu ki awaz par supriya ne uski taraf to dekha lekin apni khoi hui soch ke chalte vo kuch samajh nahi payi. " pipe de rahi hun lund nahi jo aisi seduction bhari nighaon se dekh rahi hai " tanu ne uska mazak banaya lekin supriya tab bhi kuch nahi boli " abe is gand ko tum logon ne bahar kuch kar to nahi diya? " tanu ne kaamini ki taraf dekha.

" jabse mili hai aisi hi hai ye, natak kar rahi hai sali, ise thoda chaka de tanu sari asliyat ugal degi "

" shakal se hi ek number ki haraman lagti hai, sahi keh rahi hai kaamini ise chakha hi do " komal wahin bagal mein baithi chote se stool par apna powder bana rahi thi.

" abhi nahi, abhi thoda hissab chuka lein uske baad chakha bhi denge, vaise bhi use chakhne ke baad to banda sab khud hi ugal deta hai. Ye gand kaun si alag hogi " tanu ne apni laat se supriya ke ubharo ko masalte hue kaha. Tanu ko pajame se uske ubhar kafi hadh tak mehsus ho rahe the. Usne pipe dubara muh mein lekar sans khinchi aur fir dhuain hawa mein chhoda aur ankhein band karke gardan jhukate hue muskura di. Nasha dimag mein puri tarah se mehsus kar uske badan mein rom rom khada ho raha tha. Usne pipe ko aage ki taraf badha diya aur dusri ladki ne bhi wahi kiya jo tanu ne kiya tha.

" supriya... " tanu ne jis andaz mein kaha bhale hi vo nashe ki halat mein tha lekin supriya ko aisa laga jaise ye wahi awaz thi jo usne bathroom mein suni thi jiski wajah se vo apni soch se bahar aa nikli jiske baad use samajh aya ki vo tanu ke samne baithi hai.

" tanu .. " ghabrate hue usne apne charon taraf dekha to wahan kaamini, komal aur do ladkiyan maujud thi jo unke batch ki nahi balki ek batch niche junior thi. Supriya unka chehra dekh kar ye to pehchan gayi lekin use naam nahi malum the. Na hi vo dono hostel mein rehti thi shayad tanu ne unhe roka hoga. Supriya sabhi ko ghurte hue jab komal ko dekhne lagi to usne vo bhi dekha jo vo kar rahi thi jise dekh use kamre wala din yaad aa gaya jahan par bhi wo yahi kar rahi thi. Achanak se uski naak mein ek gandh gayi aur vo khasne lagi " ughhhh... " usne apni naak sikodte hue chehre ke aage se dhuan hataya jise dekh baki ladkiyan hasne lagi. Supriya ne nazar dayein aur modi to paya ki vo dusre batch ki ladki pipe se khinch kar dhuain uske muh par dubara chhodne wali thi.

" aee udhar chhod chal " vo dubara supriya ke muh par dhuain chhodti use pehle tanu ne use tok diya jispar vo kuch nahi bol payi aur muh dusri taraf fer liya. " chinta mat kar, aram se baith main hun yahan tujhe koi kuch nahi bolega.. "

" direct karega... " komal ke bolte hi sab hans pade sath mein tanu bhi jise dekh supriya aur dar gayi.

" tanu mene kuch nahi dekha, mujhe kuch malum nahi, main galti se wahan chali gayi thi. Fir aap log band kar gaye to koi tarika nahi bacha tha isliye bahar nikalne ke liye wahan mujhse galti hui. Main sach keh rahi hun mujhe kuch nahi pata ki aap wahan kya karti ho, mujhe to kuch yaad bhi nahi hai dhang se. Vo mera phone .... " supriya ek sans mein bol rahi thi ki bich mein tanu ne rok dia.

" phone se yaad aya, tera phone.... ruk kahan gaya... " tanu phone khojne lagi " yee raha.. mere pichwade ke niche pada tha tabhi sochun lund to rakhti nahi palang par fir chub kya raha hai " tanu ne phone ko supriya ke samne lehrate hue kaha.

" tanu please mera phone de do, main kuch nahi bolungi, infact main to bhool chuki hun " supriya ko laga sach kehna hi best option hai.

" kitna bolti hai tu, tere maa baap ne tujhe kuch sanskar nahi diye? Ki sahi samay par jarurat se jada bolna sehat ke liye hanikarak hota hai aisa kuch nahi sikhaya tujhe? " tanu ne uski taraf sandeh bhari nighaon se dekha.

" ma...main kuch samjhi nahi " supriya ko lagne laga tha ki vo bahut bura fans gayi aur kahin uske sach bolne wala option uspar bhari padh raha hai.

" isko maal chada de tanu, ye mujhe thodi khiski hui lagti hai " kaamini ne cgirate ka kasht lagaya aur dhuain hawa mein chhodte hue apne top ke uppar se bra ko aage khinch kar adjust karte hue kaha.

" tu mujhe mat bata kab kya karna hai? samjhi.. warna teri bra ke char tukde karke teri chut bhar dungi aur tu ungli nahi kar payegi samjhi? " tanu ne kaamini ko jhada par kaamini ke chehre ke bhav bilkul nahi badle vo usi tarah supriya ko ghurti rahi aur cigratte ka kasht lagati gayi.

" unpar dhayan mat de darling, bas meri taraf dekh. Jo bhi hoga vo hamare bich hoga " tanu ke bolne par supriya ko samajh nahi aya vo kya samjhe, Kya ye sab natak hai mujhe jaal mein fansa kar mere sath kuch karne ka? ya fir sach hai... lekin tanu se is baat ki umeed to nahi kar sakti... Supriya man hi man soch mein dubi thi. " tu sochti bahut hai aur jabki abhi to mene koi sawal nahi kiya, bata kya dikat pareshani hai tujhe? dekh agar tu khud se batayegi to acha rahega, warna tujhe mera tarika to malum hi hoga ya fir nahi malum? " tanu ne cigratte muh mein fansa kar use jalaya aur machis ko hath se hilate hue use bhuja diya. Do bade bade kasht bharte hue muh se dhuain chhoda aur supriya ki taraf dekhne lagi.

" tanu vo.. "

" oo marau, sina jal jayega tab se funk rahi hai, bottle kab thandi hogi? " tanu ne juinor batch wali ladki se kaha.

" barf mein rakhi hai tanu didi thodi der mein ho jayegi "

" tum chutiya aurtein ho, beer bhi thandi nahi layi jati. Ab ye funkna band kar aur lekar aa, gand masti nahi khatam ho rahi teri "

" pine do na didi, ghar par gharwale to pine nahi dete hukkah, khud bhale hi apni partiyun mein charas ganja peete rahenge par salle hume nahi dete " uski awaz mein vidroh saaf jhalak raha tha.

" sali marau tu toh badi khundas mein hai ghar walon se? "

" mera bas chale to un dono ko bahar kar dun, sari azadi chinn rakhi hai, mera baap sala partiyun mein dusri aurton par line deta hai kabhi kabhi to shaq hota hai ki uske sath aur kuch bhi deta hoga dusri taraf meri maa ko farak hi nahi padta, vo dusri aurton ke sath show off aur pine mein magan ho jati hai. Itna hi nahi salle jabardasti mujhe le jate hain, main wahan jakar kya karun marau apni? " usne pipe se ek kasht aur bhara aur dhuain hawa mein chhodne lagi, uski ankhein nashe mein dub chuki thi.

" maa aur baap salle dono aise hi hote hain apni asihayun ko badhate hain aur bachon ki azadi mein vhighan dalte hain, ab bacha kare to kya kare, tu aram se pii bebak hokar pii yahan tujhe koi nahi rokega" tanu ne cigratte ka kasht lagaya aur fir cigratte ki ash ko wahin table par jhadte hue dhuain chhodne lagi.

" wahi to tanu didi, sala hamari azadi azadi nahi hai. behenchod maa se jada to baap par gussa ata hai vo gandu mujhe kehta hai ladki ho tum maryada mein rehna hai samajh mein matlab vo kare to sina faad kar hum karein to badnami? matlab main kya karun maraun apni? "

" baad mein mara lio tu abhi jaa beer lekar aa kabse thandi hone ke liye rakhi hai abhi tak to uski gand mein barf jam gayi hogi, jaa " tanu ne latada to vo apni jagah se khadi hui aur khade hote sath apna nasha bara-bar karte hue gayi. " sali charsi hai ye to, komal iska naam marau se charsi rakhein kya? " tanu ne cigratte funki aur supriya ke ubharon par tangon se sehlate hue boli " piyegi? " tanu ke jawab mein supriya ne nah mein sar hila dia " tere bhi maa baap azadi chinte hain? to bata ? "

" nahi.. aisa kuch nahi hai.. " supriya ghabrate hue jawab de rahi thi.

" tum jaisi ladkiyun ki tangein nahi khulti jab tak muh bhi aise hi rehta hai, la marau jaldi laa behenchod bina beer ke galla sukh gaya hai " tanu ne use beer ki can li jo ki marau ne khol kar di thi.

" aaahh beer pee kar maza aa gaya varna to laga tha kya karun marau apni? " usne sip li aur baithte hue boli. Tanu ne cigraate ka kasht mara aur fir use bhuja kar wahin chhod dia aur beer pine lagi.

" komal maal laa.. " beer ka ghunt bharne ke baad usne komal ko ishara kiya to cigrate mein apna bhara maal tanu ke muh mein fansa diya aur machis se jala dia. Tanu ne do kasht mare aur cigrate nikal kar
komal ko de di. Ek pal usne dhuain muh mein rakha aur jaise hi chhoda supriya ko khansi uth gayi, ye wahi smell thi jo us din us kamre mein thi. Supriya ko ajeeb si bechaini hone lagi.

" madharchod ye dunia kitni sundar hai.... koi is bhosde ko khol de to sirf jannat hai " nashe ki dunia mein khone ke bavajus usne beer ki kane ko muh se lagaya aur ek hi sans mein adhi kane khatam kar di.

" nasha karo to aisa karo... " kaamini ne bhi usi bharre maal ka sutha khincha aur dhuain chhodte hi beer muh se laga di.

" komal didi jaldi funk kar mujhe bhi do "

" nahi dungi to kya karegi? " komal ne use cheda.

" to kya karun marau apni " uski baat sun komal hansi di aur usne bhi waisa hi kiya jaise tanu aur kaamini ne kiya tha. Komal ke baad un dono ladkiyun ne bhi huba-hu wahi kiya aur panchon ladkiyan nashe mein dhut apni-apni jagah par ankhein band karke jis pose mein baithi thi unki gardan ek taraf ko gir gayi jaise sharir mein jaan hi nahi bachi ho. Supriya ye sab baithe bas dekh rahi thi, vo wahan kyun thi kya kar rahi thi abhi tak use samajh nahi aa raha tha. Tanu ne use kyun bulaya tha ye bhi use samajh nahi aa raha tha, sirf vo gandh hi tha jo us cigratte se aa raha tha jo abhi bhi jali hui table par padi thi.
Nashedi ... Gaanja phoonk kar jab behosh hi hona tha tab iss bechari Supriya ko kaahe bulayi... Lagta hai aage ke update me pata chalega...

Waise apan ko ek baat khatak rahi hai... Kya 3rd ya 4th year walon ke sah par first year wale 2nd year walon ki lenge...

Ek baat aur khatak gayi ye Supriya hai kaun se year me abhi pichhle yani 12th update me to bechari apni dhalti jawani dekh'kar ro rahi thi sath me ye bhi kah rahi thi ki hostel aaye matr mahina din hua hai... fir uski juniors kaise hui komal and jo bhi baki ki 3 aur ladki thi..

Saar ji jarra mera ye confusion dur karo... Aur apne ko je bhi jawab chahiye ki how dare these juniors jo apne senior koi harka rahi hai... Supriya gange lekar aa ja... In juniors ko aukaad dikha de..
 

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pine do na didi, ghar par gharwale to pine nahi dete hukkah, khud bhale hi apni partiyun mein charas ganja peete rahenge par salle hume nahi dete " uski awaz mein vidroh saaf jhalak raha tha.

" sali marau tu toh badi khundas mein hai ghar walon se? "

" mera bas chale to un dono ko bahar kar dun, sari azadi chinn rakhi hai, mera baap sala partiyun mein dusri aurton par line deta hai kabhi kabhi to shaq hota hai ki uske sath aur kuch bhi deta hoga dusri taraf meri maa ko farak hi nahi padta, vo dusri aurton ke sath show off aur pine mein magan ho jati hai. Itna hi nahi salle jabardasti mujhe le jate hain, main wahan jakar kya karun marau apni? " usne pipe se ek kasht aur bhara aur dhuain hawa mein chhodne lagi, uski ankhein nashe mein dub chuki thi.

" maa aur baap salle dono aise hi hote hain apni asihayun ko badhate hain aur bachon ki azadi mein vhighan dalte hain, ab bacha kare to kya kare, tu aram se pii bebak hokar pii yahan tujhe koi nahi rokega" tanu ne cigratte ka kasht lagaya aur fir cigratte ki ash ko wahin table par jhadte hue dhuain chhodne lagi.

" wahi to tanu didi, sala hamari azadi azadi nahi hai. behenchod maa se jada to baap par gussa ata hai vo gandu mujhe kehta hai ladki ho tum maryada mein rehna hai samajh mein matlab vo kare to sina faad kar hum karein to badnami? matlab main kya karun maraun apni? "
Kaun se grah ki ye ladkiyan hain... Kahan se aate hain ye log :?:
 

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Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Update ~~ 21

" ye is bhootiya hostel mein kya kar rahi hai? "

" abhi vo yahan kar rahi hai use jada jaruri hai ki ise hosh mein laya jaye.. pani.. kaun laya tha apne sath "

" mere pas hai.. ye lo " usne bottle aage pakdai. Bottle khol kar fauran kuch pani hateli mein liya aur chehre par chidakne laga.

" yar ye to uth hi nahi rahi hai.. mujhe dar lag raha hai.. yahan khade rehna bhi ek ek pal... " usne torch ko piche ki taraf ghumaya aur deewar par jami hui kai aur sadan ko dekhne laga. Dar ke mare uska halak sukh raha tha.

" to kya hum ise yahin chhod kar chale jaye? " jab pani se bhi nahi kuch hua to vo niche baithi aur usne sar utha kar gaal thap-thapana shuru kar diya. " aaruhi... uth... aaruhi... " do teen baar aisa karne par uski ankhein halki-halki khulne lagi aur dhire-dhire uski ankhein khul gayi par chehre ke uppar direct padh rahi torch ki roshni mein uski ankhein chaundiya gayi.

" vishal torch to hata "

" oo sorry.. " vishal ne torch ko side kar diya. Roshni hatte hi usne apna chehra hath ke piche se aage kiya aur pehle uski taraf dekha jo uske sath baithi thi aur fir samne.

" aaurhi... tu theek hai... " awaz par usne koi pratikriya nahi ki. Vo bas yahi soch aur samajhne ki kosish kar rahi thi ki vo kahan hai aur kya ho raha hai. " aaruhi... " usne fir awaz di uske sath is baar vishal bhi bola.

" aaurhi.. are you ok? aaruhi.. "

" bol bhi de yaar aaruhi... varna ye dono mujhe bhi yahin khada rakhenge " vishal ke sath khade ladke ne jab kahi to usi pal ek kida uske per par chadh gaya aur vo chilla utha jiske chillate sath hi uski torch gir kar band ho gayi. " bhoot... bhoot.... bhoot.... bhoot.... " vishal use samjhane laga. Use rokne ki kosish karne laga aur akhir vo kamyab bhi ho gaya.

" kuch nahi hai.. koi bhoot nahi hai gaggan.. tu kyun dara raha hai sabko "

" bhoot? main .. kahan hun... " aaurhi fauran bechaini se bolte hue uth baithi.

" aaruhi.. tu.. is waqt girls hostel mein hai.. "

" girls hostel... to? kahin aur hona chahie tha mujhe.. " aaruhi ne hairani bhari nazron se teeno ko dekha aur tabhi uski nazar ludki hui torch par gayi jo dono ladkon ke tangon ke pass padi thi.

" aaurhi.. " vishal ne awaz di to usne ungli se ishara kiya, ishare ki taraf jab teeno ne nazar dali to vo torch wahan se khud ba khud fisalti hui kamre se bahar jane lagi aur kamre ki dehaliz par jaa ruki. Koi kuch kehta use pehle vo torch jal uthi.

" bhoooottttttttttt..... " gaggan sabse pehle chillaya aur akele hi kamre se bahar bhaga.

" gaggan... gaggan... " shruti ke sath vishal bhi chillaya.
matlab puri scene hi change ho gayi hai... matlab ab tak jis girls hostel ke bare mein hum padhte aa rahe the wo mahaz ush hostel ka atit tha... kabhi us hostel mein bhi ladkiyan rehkar college mein study continue karte the, kabhi us hostel mein bhi sahal pahal hoti thi.. lekin abhi bas ek jarjar purani building ki tarah waha khadi hai...
lekin yahin pe ek sawal aaye ki jo hum padh rahe the kya wo aaruhi ke visions us hostel ke atit ko leke...
Btw ye chaar ladke ladki hai koun... aur kaha se aa gaye story pe :mad:
in chaaro ki bhi aisi ki taisi kar deni hai aage chalke meko :chop:
aur yeh gaggan... pagal kahi ka.. itna jor se koi chillata hai kya? aur bhaag to aise raha hai jaise kisine iske pichhware mein fatake lagake jala diya ho :mad:
Darpok kahi ka :chop:

" ma..in usko dekhta hun.. tu aaruhi ko lekar jaldi aa... " panic mein vishal ne kaha aur vo nikla. Shruti ne hami bharte hue aaruhi ko khada kiya jo beusdh thi. Uski taraf se koi bhi pratikriya nahi ho rahi thi. Shruti gagan ko awaz lagate hue aaruhi ko pakdte hue bahar nikli jisme usne pehle us jalti hui torch ko laat mari aur use corridor ke dusre chor ke andhere mein bhej diya wahan pahunchte hi vo torch fir bhuj gayi ye dekh shruti ke andar bhi dar ka ehsas ubhar pada. Use khud ab yahan se jaldi nikalna tha, usne aaruhi ki baju pakdi aur dono chal diye.

" ohh god... ye gaggan .. aaruhi to theek hai.. " shruti ke jawab par aaurhi fir kuch nahi boli. " vishal... " shruti ne awaz di to pure hostel mein uski awaz gunj uthi. Peron se chalte hue vo awaz shruti ko chubh rahi thi. Bar-bar use lag raha tha ki uske piche koi hai, bhale hi vo nidar thi aur ban rahi thi lekin ab uske man mein bhi dar tha.

" shruti niche... gaggan mere sath hai... " vishal ne awaz di to shruti ne chain ki sans li. Shruti aram-aram se hi sahi bich bich mein kabhi aaruhi ko kuch kehti ya vishal se baat kar leti. Aisa karte hue vo akhirkar niche aa hi gayi.

" kya hua tum dono pareshan kyun ho? " niche pahunchte hi shruti ne vishal ki thakawat aur gaggan ke dar ko dekhte hue pucha.

" gate nahi khul raha isliye pareshan hai hum " gaggan ne darwaje ko khinchte hue kaha. " ab hum bahar kaise jayenge... kholo koi hai help.. " gaggan chillaya.

" tu shant ho ja.. shanti se sochne de.. " shruti fauran boli.

" shanti.. kya shanti.. kya shanti se sochun... mana kiya tha mene tum dono ko ki idhar nahi atte.. nahi atte par tum dono ne nahi suni... bola tha na ki ye bhootiya hostel hai yahan par ana mana hai.. ab lo bhugto.... mere baap ko agar pata chala ki main padai ki jagah aise bhootiya ilake mein engineering karte hue mara gaya to vo meri atma ko pakad kar gand todenege... chhodega nahi vo... atmaon ka jallad hai vo.. jallad... " fulti sanson se gaggan ne apni baat khatam ki aur fir puri takat se darwaje ko khinch kar kholne ki kosish karne laga.

" tu thak gaya hai.. mujhe kosish karne de " vishal ne gaggan se kaha to usne darwaja chhod diya lekin apne dil ki baat kehne se piche nahi hatta.

" han khol le... agar khul jaye to.. ye khulega nahi... ye sirf apni mazri se khulta hai.. aur tab khula tha jab hume andar ane diya tha.. ab nahi khulega ye.. mene kaha tha yahan nahi ana " usne fir wahi baat dauhrate hue baat puri ki.

" to aaruhi kaise milti hume? tujhe pata hai na ki.. " shruti bolte hue chup ho gayi. Koi baat vo aaruhi ke samne nahi kehna chahti thi jo bilkul shant khadi thi aur ek hi taraf dekh rahi thi. " ek hi baat dubara mat bol.. tu nahi ata kyun aya fir tu? bahaduri tujhe bhi to dikhani thi.. Manpreet ko.. tabhi aya hai na tu.. "

" manpreet ko bich mein mat le.. shur.... " gaggan bhadakne ki kosish karte hue bola.

" tu chup rahega gaggu.. chup reh.. purana darwaja hai.. fans gaya hoga.. khul jayega.. ruk... main kosish kar raha hun na... " vishal ne fir puri takat lagai lekin nahi khula. Hostel ke andhkar mein sirf ek matr torch ki roshne ke bich in teeno ki awaz pure hostel mein gunj rahi thi. Itni khamoshi thi is jagah ki har harkat ki awaz us jagah mein basti hui mehsus ho sakti thi.

" darwaja purana nahi hai.. hamari zindagi purani hone wali hai... ye darwaja nahi khulega vishal... hum fans gaye hain is hostel mein.. jo bhi jata hai kabhi vapis nahi ata.. tujhe to.. " gaggan bolte hue chup hua, vishal darwaja khinchne se ruka aur shruti jo gaggan ko kuch kehne ke liye muh kholne wali thi vo ruki. Teeno ek hi waqt par jis andaz mein the waise hi khade ho gaye aur jo awaz unhone abhi suni thi use sunne ki kosish karne lage. 'thakk-thakkk' thokar jaisi awaz teeno ko sunai di. Awaz ke ane par gaggan ne uski taraf dekha, ab roshni ka jariya vo torch vishal ne uske hath mein thamai thi to usne hi us taraf roshni dali theek shruti aur aaruhi ke piche. Vishal ne bhi usi taraf dekha aur shruti bhi ghum kar usi taraf dekhne lagi. Roshni sidiyun par thi.. kuch nahi tha wahan.. na hi ab vo awaz thi.. Sabhi ko laga ki vo sirf ek gaaltfemi thi jo is jagah ke vajah se hui lekin jaise hi gagga ne torch wahan se hatane ki sochi usi waqt nazar wahin ruk gayi.

Torch fisalti hui sidiyun tak ayi aur fir 'thakk-thakk' ek-ek paidi girti hui niche ane lagi " bhooottttttttttttttt....aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh... " gaggan ke hath se torch chhut gayi aur vo fir gir kar band ho gayi. Uske band hote hi andhere puri tarah se felh gaya aur is baar dar ke mare shruti bhi chilla uthi. Vishal ka bhi dum nikla aur usne gate ko puri takat se khincha jiske sath hi vo gate khul gaya. Gate khulta dekh gaggan sabse pehle bhaga aur shruti aaruhi ko lekar, vishal ne dono ko bahar kiya aur khud bahar akar hostel ka darwaja yun hi lehrata hua chhod nikal gaya. Kisi ne bhi palat kar nahi dekha aur vo darwaja apne aap dhire-dhire band hota chala gaya.
are yaar baaki suspense ek taraf aur is haramkhor gaggan ka gala fad ke chillana ek taraf... kasam se agar koi bhoot ya bhootni waha hote bhi to iski chillane ki awaz sun ke hi bhaag jate..

aur wo torch...
Uska bhi kya kehna.. bin pende ka lota ban ke kabhi idhar ludke to kabhi udhar aur gana gaye - Main aisa kyun hoon
Main jaisa hoon,
Main vaisa kyon hoon
Karna hai kya mujhko,
Ye maine kab hai jana
Lagta hai gaoonga,
Zindagi bhar bas ye gaana
Kabhi on ho jau to kabhi off
Kabhi idhar ludku to kabhi udhar
Hoga jaane mera ab kya..
Koi to bataye mujhe...
Gadbad hai ye sab kya...
Koi samjhaye mujhe....... 🔦 :lollypop:

lo jee ek nayi kirdaar.... ab ye maanpreet koun hai :mad:
Lage ki gaggan ki gf hai... Khair uski bhi aisi ki taisi :chop:
aur ye jung khaya hua Darwaza... aaain apne ap kaise band ho raha unlogo ke nikal jaane ke baad...
Totally golmaal hai...
:lol1: log samjhe udhar bhootni hai par baad mein pata chale udhar to koi cycle chorni chudail hai :lol:
" bhago... bhago... bhoot pada hai hamare piche.. bhoot... haye.. main marunga... bhoot maar dega ... manpreet main teri bina liye mar jaunga... " gaggan hanfta hua bhag raha tha.


" gaggu ruk.. jaa... koi bhoot nahi hai.. hum bahar nikal chuke hai... " vishal piche se chillaya par gaggan tab tak nahi ruka jab tak vo bhagte hue ek darwaje ke aage nahi jaa ruka.

" ohh shit... vishal.. ye gaggan kya kar raha hai.... isne miss. nandini ke apartment ke samne jakar ruka hai... agar unhe pata chal gaya to gaye sab ke sab.. "

" ab rokne ka koi fayda nahi ... vo dekh.. " vishal ne shruti ko samne ki taraf dekhne ko kaha to gaggan ne jo dhol peeta tha uska shor miss nandini ke kano tak pahunch chuka tha. Miss nandni ko gaggan ek side karke khud andar ghus gaya aur vo vishal, shruti aur aaruhi ko apni taraf ata hua dekhne lagi.

" tum charon is waqt itne tuffan mein kya kar rahe ho.. " sabhi ko towel dete hue miss nandini ne kaha. Gaggan ke bade gungrale gol chatte jaise baal bhigne ki wajah se uski ankhon mein ghus rahe the. Usne baal pochne shuru kiye aur kapkapi mein bhagwan ko yaad karne laga.

" vo actually miss... " vishal ko samajh nahi aya ki kya bole.

" tum log kahin chup kar koi party to nahi kar rahe the? Drugs? "

" nahi nahi miss.. vo hum ye sab nahi kar rahe the.. vo to hum bas yun hi bahar gaye the... " shruti aaurhi ka sar pochne mein lagi hui thi.

" sach bolo.. varna tumhare parents ko bataun "

" aaruhi girls hostel mein chali gayi thi isliye... " gaggan ne turant bol diya. Uske chehre par baap ka kauf ter raha tha.

" girls hostel? " nandini ko samajh nahi aya ki girls hostel mein aaruhi ne jakar kya galti ki " kya tum dono ladke wahan pakde gaye ho? " nandini ne fir vishal aur gaggan ki taraf dekha.

" main... nahi nahi.. " gaggan ko apne uppar ilzam mehsus hota dekh vo bol pada. " miss aaurhi apne girls hostel mein nahi balki vo walle girls hostel mein gayi thi... " ajeeb se ishare karte hue vo bola.

" wo walle.. " nandini ne naak sikodi use gaggan ke expression kuch theek nahi lag rahe the. Nandini soch mein dubi par agle hi pal use jawab mil gaya.. " aaurhi girls hostel mein gayi thi? " ab nandini ke chehre par ghabrahat hadh se jada thi. Koi kuch kehta use pehle aaurhi ko zor-zor se hichkiya ane lagi.

" aaruhi.. are you ok ? " shruti ne uska chehra upar uthane ki kosish ki lekin vo hichkiya lete hue baithe-baithe niche farsh par gir kar behosh ho gayi. Sabhi ghabra gaye vishal aur nandini uske kareeb aye aur use uthane ki kosish karne lagi.

" ohh shit..t..... isme us girls hostel ka bhoot aa gaya hai .... ab ye nahi bachegi... ab vo hume bhi nahi chhodegi... "

" gaggan please shut up.. " shruti fauran boli. Jiske baad vishal ki madad se shruti ne aaruhi ko uthaya aur andar kamre mein le gaye. Vishal bahar nikal aya aur andar shruti aur nandini ne aaurhi ke gile kapde utar kar use dusre kapde pehna diye aur thodi der baad bahar aa gaye. Ek pal shanti chai rahi, jo nandini ne suna tha vo use abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha tha.

" don't tell me ki tum koi kahani bana rahe ho varna ye tum sab par bahut bhari padega " nandini ke jawab mein gaggan kuch bolna chahta tha lekin shruti ne use rok diya.

" nahi miss.. hum koi kahani nahi bana rahe hain... balki jo gaggan ne kaha vo sach tha.. aaruhi ko abhi hum usi girls hostel se lekar aye hain jo pichle 8 salon se band hai.. jahan koi nahi jata.. jiske bare mein campus ke andar kaha jata hai ki wo girls hostel ek bhootiya ghar hai.. jiske bare mein hostel ke pas tarah tarah ki kahaniyan hai.. aaruhi hume usi girls hostel mein mili hai.. "

" ohh god.. par aaurhi wahan pahunchi kaise? pahunchi chhodo vo wahan gayi hi kyun? "

" hume bhi nahi pata miss.. ye jawab to bas aaruhi hi de sakti hai.. " vishal ne nandini ke sawal ka jawab dete hue kaha.

" par tumhe kaise malum hua ki aaruhi wahan hai " nandini ne kuch sochne ke baad sawal kiya.

" shruti ne humse kaha ki aaruhi girls hostel ki taraf gayi hai.. bas usi se.. " jawab fir vishal ne diya.

" aur tum logon ko vo girls hostel mein mili "

" room ke andar miss... " gaggan bola " vo jagah bahut bhayanak hai... .bahut jada miss... andhere mein har pal aisa lag raha tha koi mujhe dekh raha hai.. chuu raha hai... vo khauf .... " gaggan ki kap-kapi abhi bhi chhut rahi thi.

" shruti " nandini ne uski taraf nazar modi " tum aaruhi ki room partner ho na? "

" ji.. mis.. ss.. "

" tumne jab aaruhi ko jatte hue dekha to use roka kyun nahi? aur apne doston ko batane hi kyun ayi? " nandini ke sawal par shruti kuch nahi boli. Visha aur gaggan ki nazar bhi usi par thi.

" kosish ki thi.. miss... "

" nahi.. mujhe tumhari is baat mein sach nazar nahi aa raha hai. Itni raat ko tumne aaruhi ko girls hostel jatte hue dekha lekin tumne use roka nahi.. tumne apne doston ko bataya aur unhe lekar gayi.. aisa kyun? tum jakar use rokti samjhati to vo nahi jati.. aur bhala wahan kyun koi jayega... college ne sabhi ko inform kar rakha hai ki wahan jana mana hai.. to fir.. "

" college ne un bachon ko mana kiya hai miss jo yahan aye hain.... unhe to mana nahi kiya na jo yahan ab nahi hai.. " shruti ne nandini ko bich mein rokte hue kaha.

" matlab? "

" vo aaruhi nahi thi miss.. aur vo pehli baar nahi tha jab aaurhi girls hostel mein gayi thi... vo pichle kai dino se wahan jaa rahi hai aur har raat ko wahin soti aa rahi hai.. " shruti ki baat sunte hi sabhi ke chehron ka rang ud gaya.

Are is story pe my all time favorite Nandini bhi hai :happy: :vhappy:
nandini hai to Nischal bhi aa jayega story pe as hero... hai na harshit1890 sahab :vhappy:

Khair.....
1) yeh log paas hi kisi hostel mein rahkar padh rahe hai....
2) sabhi students ko sakhth manahi hai paas ke bhootiya hostel mein jaane ki..
3) phir bhi aarohi gayi udhar.. wo sirf aaj hi nahi balki bahot pehle se jaa rahi hai wo raat beetane ke liye.... big question yahi hai ki akhir kyun..... roommate hote huye bhi srtuti ne ushe Roka kyun nahi....
4)
" to aaruhi kaise milti hume? tujhe pata hai na ki.. " shruti bolte hue chup ho gayi.
kya pata hai? Bolte bolte kyun chup ho gayi shruti :huh:

Aur akhiri mein sabse bada sawal
" college ne un bachon ko mana kiya hai miss jo yahan aye hain.... unhe to mana nahi kiya na jo yahan ab nahi hai.. " shruti ne nandini ko bich mein rokte hue kaha.
" matlab? "
" vo aaruhi nahi thi miss.
Koun yahan nahi hai? aaruhi nahi thi se matlab.... :huh:
To kya Supriya, megha ya tanu mein se koi thi :huh:
. aur vo pehli baar nahi tha jab aaurhi girls hostel mein gayi thi... vo pichle kai dino se wahan jaa rahi hai aur har raat ko wahin soti aa rahi hai.. " shruti ki baat sunte hi sabhi ke chehron ka rang ud gaya
Ya to gehra Nata hai us girls hostel se...
Ya phir jo bhi ho raha tha us hostel mein sab mahaz ek illinois hai aaruhi ki...
.......
Oh ho oh ho... dekho to writer sahab ko akhir chaal chal hi diya supriya ko bachane ke liye :lol: par harshit sahab us nibbi supriya ko bachane ke chakkar mein supriya ko hi atit bana diya :lol1:
Ab mari huyi kirdaar ko aur kya roast karna :D
Khair....
par Abhi bhi bahot saare sawal hai..
Let's see what happens next
Btw update sachme super se upar tha bole to
20210404-162440
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock:
 
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