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Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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Update-4
Maine ye padh liya tha shayad.. ya fir nahi :hmm2: padha -padha bhi lag raha par aakhir ke scene bilkul yaad nahi :hmm:
Ya fir shuruat kiya raha hounga aur bich me chhut gaya raha hoga kisi karanvash :D
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Megha aur Supriya ki baate matlab kaano me mishri ghol deti hai... pura mann mithas se bhar jaata hai... inme se koyi ekat bhoot voot to nahi.. :wtfrol: waise dono baraba mil rahi hai logo se.. aur chut chudan bhi kar rahi hai toh mera sawal yahi khariz ho jaata hai...

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Jis tarah ye dono aapas me baat karti hai, inki convo..... full chudakkad Megha ke character ke sath nyay hai ye.... sirf aur sirf..chut aur lund kis baat karti hai Megha.. i wish ki isko barabar mil jaaye jaldi ..waise mammi se naraz kyun hui :hinthint2: ungali karte hue pakad liya tha kya :D
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Behtareen update.... character build up de rahe ho in dono ko itna to khoob bakchodi karne wali hai ye dono shayad... lund-e-lund lengi... Supriya ,seems good... uska character dekhne me maza aayega.. baaki to burchatti warden aur uska helper sonu hee hai...

Itna bhayankar gyaan... :eek:

Kya baat hai ... ati uttam... jungle me hee sher ghuste hai


Life Goal :approve
:roflol: ab ye to megha hi jane baki kya hi malum akhir kya sach hai... bhai mere ko koi experience nahi hai aisi kahani likhne mein to malum nahi kya ho raha hai :D Thanks bhai :hug:
Hariya kaka why ju so sust :peep:
zindagi hi sust hai sala :redface:
Matr hath pakadne se lesbian ... Ghor kalyug hai ye to :(
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Kuch bhi bolkar hansna bolte hai... Jhalli Megha
nice :D
:eek: :eek: :eek:.... Hum laundan mar gaye rahe kya writer babu :vangry: :bat: ... Huhhh... Kahani hi likhat rahe ho na ..... Usme to ek chumma ka jugad karwa dete...

Je supriya to pahle se puri kheli kudi hai (lesbian hi sahi.. jitne raaj khule hain) aur tabhi usse Megha ka hath thamna lesbo act Laaga
Bhai laundon ka to hamesha hota hai yahan ladkiyun ki chupi hui zindagi ke bare mein pata chalna chahie na... :D
Supriya Megha... Megha supriya ... Aur ant me ye Aakash... Chali bhai sab apne apne kaam par gaye... Hum aage ke panne palat lete hain ...

Dekhte hain aage kya raaj khulta hai... Iss pure update ka aakarshan waise Raveena hi thi... Ek scene ke liye hi aayi par kafi strong upsthiti jahir kar gayi
Ravina is important not for u but for supriya :D aage dekhte hain kya hota hai bhai... thanks bhai :hug:
Iss girls hostel me maine kaam ke liye apply kiya tha uska kya hua Harshit bhai :?:
abhi application warden ke pas hai :roll:
Update-5
Everyone wether a male or a female enjoys lesbian sex as a story. Supriya aur Megha ke bech lesbo sex ki jhalak toh mil hee chuki thi.. Matlab mujhe laga ki aisa ho sakta hai dono ke beech aur idhar naa chahte hue bhi Megha ke hath pakadne par supi darling ne ye baate hamare bheje me thok di... Waise Megha ko yadi Supriya bolegi toh Megha turant taiyar ho jayegi.. Dildo lekar... 😁😁
Par main maza flashback me tha.. Jab Ravina ka jikra hua.. Shuru me toh laga ki kuch past hoga dono ka.. Ekat ur aise hee jordar scene dekhne ko milenge.. Par fir do line baad hee Ravin nar gayi..:sadcry:.
Khel-Vel to khel leti hai supriya... Kushti karti thi pahle.. Coding wala bhi knowledge hai aur ab toh Aakash ko foootball ka bhi gyaan de de rahi hai... Ye laundi kuch thik nahi lag rahi... Khair apne ko kya... Megha shayad chud ke aaye Aakash se.. Ya fir chus kr.. Fantasy angle jald leke aane ka bhai

:lol
Bhai fantasy bas ane hi wali hai, ek do din aur...maybe.. use thoda din aur lagega lekin aa jayegi tab tak... rahi baat lesbian ki to mera focus lesbian se jada filal us par hai jo ek ladki actually mein fantasy rakh kar dunia se chupati hai. Bas wahi kosish hai dekhte hain kitna hadh tak reality de pata hun aur kitna fantasy.. thanks gyani bhai :hug:
 

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" ek hi tarkib thi " megha ne kuch sochte hue kaha.

" kya? " supriya uske nikat ate hue boli.

" yahi ki tu apne ghar chali jati aur agle din agar tanu tujhse puchti to keh deti ki maa baap le gaye "

" main kya ab jaun 11 baje? " supriya megha ke uppar chikhte hue boli.

" tabhi to mene kaha ki ek tarkib thi par tu so gayi usme main kya kar sakti hun "

" sone se pehle mene tujhe kitne phone milaye tab tune utha liya hota to shayad mujhe is musibat se nikalne ka rasta mil jata " supriya ka man kiya ki megha ke uppar chadh kar use mare.

" han yaad aya phone to aya tha par us waqt mein busy thi " megha phone par message type karne lagi " it was not fun, it was great.. " chumne wala smily bhejte hue usne aakash ko message send kar dia.

" busy? tu hamesha busy rehti hai? aaj kis kam mein thi "

" apne pehle chumban mein darling... ab tu hi bata chumban chhodti ya phone uthati vo bhi hostel ke mess wala " megha palang par pasarte hue boli aur vapis phone par aakash ke aye love wale emoji ka response likhni lagi. Supriya ko samajh nahi aya ki vo is ladki ko kya bole, kyun ki galti uski bhi nahi thi, usne koi theka thodi le rakha hai mera, jo har samay meri madad kare, uski bhi life hai. Sochte hue supriya bistar par baith gayi. Megha aakash ke sath rehti hui bhool gayi thi ki supriya pareshan hai. Dono ke bich ab batein kuch open ho chuki thi " i missed your lips.. " aakash ke message par megha muskurai aur itne mein dusra message aya " can i see them now.... :drool: " aakash ka message padh megha ek pal sochti rahi fir usne reply dia.

" naughty "

" please.... " aakash ne turant reply dia.

" okay... " megha ne sochte hue reply diya aur fir camera on karke pout banate hue honton ko modh liya par use kuch acha nahi laga. Usne apne bal ek taraf kiye, top ko thoda niche khiskaya aur focus hontoon se lekar apni cleavage tak rakha taki honton ke piche aakash ko thoda aur maza diya jaye. Ye sochte hue usne fir se pout banaya aur photo khinchne lagi aur usi mein uski nazar supriya par gayi jiske bare mein vo bhool gayi thi. Megha ne fauran phone wahin fenka aur uth baithi " idea bhale hi tab use nahi hua to ab kar le, abhi chali ja "

" tujhe idea nahi dena to mazak mat kar, itni raat ko kike maa baap dusre seher se atte hain? " supriya ne chidte hue jawab diya. Use gussa is baat par aa raha tha ki megha uski madad karne ki vajaye apne chumban aur chudne ke khawab mein busy hai. Ek minute pehle use koi shikayat nahi thi lekin ab jab koi rasta nazar nahi aa raha tha to gussa badhta jaa raha tha, ek jalan ki bhawana andar panap rahi thi.

" chidti kyun hai ruk kuch aur sochte hain " megha sochne lagi par supriya ne uski baat ko andekha kar diya. Waqt bitta jaa raha tha aur supriya ke pas samay kam hota jaa raha tha. " idea " megha ne sochte hue kaha. " tu sun rahi hai? " supriya ne jab koi response nahi diya to megha ne use hilate hue pucha.

" han sun rahi hun " rukhe man se usne jawab diya kyun ki vo janti thi ki idea kisi kaam ka nahi hoga.

" tu bathroom chali ja "

" kya bakwas "

" puri baat sun " megha ne supriya ko bich mein roka " tu bathroom mein baith ja. Yani ki tera pet kharab ho chuka hai, waise bhi mess ka khana kha kar koi na koi ladki to bathroom mein baithi hui payi jati hai aur sach bata rahi hun aaj ka khana bilkul usi type ka tha ki kisi ke bhi pet ki maa chud jaye. Ab tu soch agar tu tanu ke pas nahi jayegi to vo apni kisi dali ko tere pas bhejegi aur jab main use kahungi ki tera pet kharab hai mess ke khane ki wajah se to vo kuch nahi kar payegi kyun ki tanu bhi is baat ko janti hai ki aksar aisa hota hai. Vo khud bahar se pizza mangwa kar khati hai sala warden ki setting ka kamal hi yahi hai. Ise tere ko ek din aur mil jayega aur tu aaj ke liye bach jayegi fir kal ka kal dekhnge. Vaise bhi hum engineer ladkiyan hai jugad kya sirf laundon ke pas hota hai? galat jugad ladkon se jada hum ladkiyun ke pas hota hai, school mein jab hum laundon ke sath bunk mar kar jate the to ghar akar maa baap ko bahane se chutiya banane wale hum ladkiyan hi hoti hai varna launde to maha gandu hote han pehli baar cigrate kab kahan aur kiske sath pii ye tak nahi chupa pate aur apni gand tudwa lete hain. Pehle unhe maa thokti hai fir unka bapu thokta hai aur baad mein teacheron se tudwate hai, all in all laudein thuk jate hain par ladkiyan.. nahi.. vo hamesha bach jati hai aur use kehte hain jugad, ye salle engineer launde jugad-jugad karte firte hain unme se 99.9% launde muth marte hain aur tu khud soch jin laundon ke pas ladkiyun ki chut ka jugad nahi ho pata vo kya hi jugad karenge? hain-na... sahi boli na main? " megha akhir chup hui aur supriya se jawab magne lagi.

" baat to tune sahi mess ka khana aisa hi hota hai. Aaj ke liye baat tal sakti hai " supriya apni jagah se khadi hui.

" ye lo inhe itni achi baat kahi aur ye mess ke khane... are ye kya kar rahi hai " megha ne jaise hi supriya ko khana khate hue dekha to bol uthi. Supriya megha ke dwara layi gayi mess ke thali ko khane lag gayi thi. Aur khate time bich-bich use ubkai ane lagi thi. " tu sach mein kha gayi " megha fatti hui ankhon se dekhne lagi.

" hmm... " badi mushkil se nigalte hue usne kaha aur fir khasne lagi " kya milate hain ye.. ugghhhh " ulti jaise ubkai lete hue supriya boli.

" aeee bhag yahan se... bathroom mein jaa.. sala tum logon ko idea dena bekar hai, serious hi ho gayi ye to pagal ki bachi " megha use thoda piche ho gayi.

" main jati hun bathroom mein chali jaungi, kamre mein koi aye bulane to use keh dio ki meri kya halat hai " pani pete sath hi supriya ne apni baat kahi aur almari se kapde nikal kapde badalne lagi. Usne apni jeans aur tshirt utari aur aaj megha ke samne hi bra penty mein khadi ho gayi.

" oye hoye teri jawani.... kash mein ladka hoti... sala ladke tere uppar yun hi nahi marte " megha ki nazar supriya ki masal jhangein, uske sapat pet aur uppar kasi hui chaityun par jami hui thi.

" ladkon ki to fitrat hi har chiz latka kar ghumne ki hai chahe vo laar ho ya fir unka... " supriya ne pajama dala aur raat mein jis t-shirt ko pehen kar soti thi vo dali aur fir andar hath dal kar bra ki clip khol kar use andar se bahar nikalte hue wahin fenk diya.

" 12:30 baj rahe hain, main bathroom mein abhi ghus jaun ya jab vo aye tab.. "

" abhi chali ja, vaise bhi tujhe 5-10 minute to pahunchne mein lag jayenge "

" 5-10 minute matlab? "

" common bathroom mein jane mein tere ko itna hi time lagega, teri bhari chutdaon se chala kahan jata hai " megha ne vapis phone use karna shuru kar diya tha. Aakash ke kayi message the waiting.. waiting walle... Megha man hi man soch rahi thi ki ladkon ko tadpane ka maza kitna sukun deh hota hai. Vaise bhi ladke jitna tadapte hain utni shidadat se palang par tadap dur karte hain..

" hansegi ya bolegi bhi? common bathroom kyun? " supriya ne megha ko man hi man muskurate hue kaha.

" tune hi to complain ki thi sonu ko, to vo aya tha sham ko usne kaha ki bathroom ki naliyun mein kuch dikkat aa gayi hai isliye istemal nahi kar sakte "

" par use kya matlab mujhe kaun sa kuch karna hai mujhe to sirf baithna hai " supriya ne bathroom ka darwaja kholne ki kosish ki par vo khula nahi " ye khul kyun nahi raha "

" kyun ki tu puri baat nahi sunti, vo bathroom mein tala maar gaya, sala mera toothbrush bhi andar se nahi nikalne diya, tere pas extra hai?" megha ne message type karna band karte hue boli.

" tujhe toothbrush ki padi hai, main itni raat ko common bathroom kaise jaun "

" apni matkati chutadon se aur kaise "

" megha " supriya ne gusse bhari nazron se dekha.

" dekh supriya iske alawa tere pas koi aur option nahi hai aur agar tujhe ye idea nahi use karna to mat kar direct tanu ke pas chali ja par ye randi-rona band kar de " megha ne supriya se is bar spasht bhasha mein kaha to supriya ko bhi samajh aa gaya ki isme vo kuch nahi kar sakti ab jo bhi decision lena tha use khud lena tha. Use common bathroom jane mein koi dikat nahi thi sivai ek ke ki vo dusri manzil par bana tha aur wahan tak is andhere mein jana vo bhi akele uske liye vo mushkil sabit ho raha tha.

" tu chalegi mere sath bathroom tak.. " supriya ne kamre ke kiwad ki taraf se mudte hue megha ki taraf dekha.

" be brave supriya.. vaise bhi main tere sath jaungi to yahan kaun hoga? Tanu ko shaq ho jayega na? " megha ne phone par message ke sath baat karte hue supriya ko jawab diya. Aakash megha ke bole gaye message ka jawab likh raha tha.

" himmat hai to akar dikhao room par " megha ne ye message bheja tha jispar aakash ka message aya.

" challenge? "

" kuch chahie to challenge hi samjh lo " megha ne reply kiya. Supriya dur se sirf megha ko dekh paa rahi thi uske chehre ke bhav ko nahi. Supriya duvidha mein fansi thi aur fir nirnaye lete hue usne kiwad ki kundi kholi.

" jaa rahi hun main "

" vijay karke lautna ... " megha ki baat sun kar supriya ne koi jawab nahi diya aur kamre se bahar nikal gayi. Corridor mein ghup andhera tha, ek bhi light nahi jal rahi thi. Supriya ne ek pal socha ki vo wapis kamre ke bheetar ghus jaye lekin aisa sochne ke bavajud uske per aage ki taraf badh gaye. Kuch kadam aage badhne ke baad use apni galti mehsus ho rahi thi ki use akele nahi jana chahie tha par vo vapis mudti use pehle use ek awaz piche se sunai di jise sun vo samajh gayi ki megha ne kamre ka darwaja andar se band kar liya hai. Supriya ek pal ke liye ruki aur fir aage badh chali. Corridor khatam hote sath hi sidiyan bani hui thi jiski railing ko pakad vo sidiyan utarne lagi. Maujuda halat mein halke shor se supriya chilla deti isliye vo man hi man bhagwan ka naam le rahi thi. Uski ankhein har waqt kisi na kisi ko andhere mein taalash rahi thi aisa uske sath kyun ho raha tha use ye samajh nahi aa raha tha. Tisri manzil par atte hi usne sidiyun se corridor ke dono taraf dekha, jahan par bhi shanti maujud thi. Kamre ke andar jo marzi ho raha ho uska asar bahar tak bilkul nahi tha. Supriya ne ek kadam aage badaya aur badlon ke garajne par uska sharir thithur gaya. Bizli ki roshni sishe se jab andar padi to supriya ke dare hue chehre ka sakshi ban gayi. Usne ek pal uppar dekha, kuch sidiyan uppar chadne par uska kamra tha aur kuch sidiyan niche utarne par bathroom faisla use ek pal mein karna tha. Jo usne kiya aur bina waqt gawaye tez kadmo se niche ki taraf chal padi. Usne is baar kahin aur nahi dekha aur sidiyan utar kar dusri manzil par aa gayi jahan par common bathroom bana hua tha.

Raat gehrati jaa rahi thi aur hostel mein sabhi apne kamre mein dubak kar so chuke the. Hostel ka chaukidar chillu gate par tala laga kar kursi par baithe nangi tassveron wali magzine dekhte-dekhte so chuka tha. Bahar ka mausam dhire-dhire badal raha tha. Mausam vhbiag ke mutabik agle hafte tak baarish ki sambhana hai jiski wajah se sadkon par pani aur jaam lagne ki puri umeed hai. Prashasan har baar ki tarah dava kar rahi hai is baar unhone pani jama na hone ke liye pure intezam kiye hain lekin ye baat kis hadh tak sabit hogi vo to ane walle dino mein pata chal jayega. Supriya jab mess ki taraf badh rahi thi tab use hall se ati roshni dikhai di, andhere mein vo choti roshni bhi kai jada nazar aa rahi thi. Jab vo uske samne se gujari to uski nazar chalte tv par gayi, usne ek dafa mess ke andar dekha to wahan koi bhi maujud nahi tha. Usne chal rahe tv ko band karne ki sochi aur hall ke andar ghus gayi. Hall mein sirf wahi roshni maujud thi jo tv se aa rahi hi. Tv ek dum ant mein laga hua tha aur dono taraf table aur use judi hu seat lagi hui thi jahan par baith kar khaya jata tha. Supriya hall ke ant tak pahunchi aur usne bina aur waqt liye switch off kar diya jiske sath tv band hua aur hall mein ghup andhera ho gaya.

" shit... ye to maine socha hi nahi " supriya andhera dekhte hi boli aur fauran mudh kar tezi se hall se bahar chal di. Hall se bahar nikalte hi vo bathroom ki taraf badhi aur jaise hi usne bathroom ka darwaja khola, hall mein band tv chalu ho gaya aur usme ab news ki jagah supriya dikhne lagi jo abhi-abhi bathroom mein ghusi thi.
 

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Koi baat nahi...
Btw thanks new update dene ke liye :approve:
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us hostel mein bahot kuch ho raha hai...
Kuch anchaahi aur andekhi ghatnaye..
khaskar supriya ke sath.... kuch aise bhi baatein hai jo abhi samne hai even hostel mein rehne wali shayad har ek ladki jaanti hai par dekh kar bhi andekha kar deti hai, ya phir khud unsab se dur rakhti hai.. jaise ki nashilw padarth jo shayad warden aur tanu & gang milke sevan bhi karte hai aur aur supply bhi karte hai...
par koi jaake report nahi karti... upor se ragging k khilaf bhi police mein koi jaake report nahi karti....
abhi jo hua us store room mein... iske piche jiska hath hai wo jarur hostel se hi connected hai....
ye hostel mein jarur kuch rahasya hai kuch raaz chipa hua hai, jiske chalte kuch na kuch anchaahi andekhi ghatnaye ghat rahi hai... shayad udhar kuch log milke hostel se ladkiyon ko bhi bech deti ho kahi aur jagah.. :eek:

I think.. sabse pehle jaggu, sonu aur warden ko ulta latka ke khub pitaayi karni chahiye... phir unlogo ke upor petrol daalke darana chahiye... shayad supriya ko sab kuch sach sach bol de :approve:
Hai na harshit1890 sahab :approve:

tanu shayad hostel mein nashile padarth supply karti hai aur bahar hostel ki ladkiyon ko bechti hai aur ye shayad ek lesbian bhi hai...
So ab is negative story character ko jeene k koi hak nahi..

Ab supriya jab raat ke ek baje uske paas jaaye to sath mein koi dhardaar koi chij le jaaye... aur mauka dekhke tanu ke sine ya pith par waar karke ushe jaan se hi maar de supriya..
Hai na harshit1890 sahab :approve:

isse do faide honge sabhi ko ek tanu se chhuth kara mil jayegi hamesha ke liye sabhi ko aur dusri.. supriya famous ho jayegi as a naayika...
Hai na harshit1890 sahab :approve:
uske baad us 3 baje phone karne wale ko bhi dekh legi supriya...

Khair update kaafi dilchasp tha..
Let's see what happens next
Supriya kis kis ko jaan se maar daalti hai ya shikar khud banti hai ya tharki megha help karti hai uski..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit1890 sahab :applause: :applause:
Aap ko tabhich shanti milegi jab koi tapkega :roflol: baki dekhte hain madam kahani ka tadka kahan se kahan tak le jati hai... mujhe abhi doubt hai ki unke sath kuch aisa hoga kuch hi dino mein malum ho jayega.... :D Thanks nainaji :hug:
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Supriya ki toh kah ke le li :cmouth:
Main last update me bil hee raha tha ki jaldibse fantasy angle, khoon voon, horror aaye to maza aaye... Aur next update me hee wo aa gaya :vhappy:

Jaise hee Supriya us khandhar ki taraf badhi lagne laga tha ki galti kar di.. Aise akele nahi jaana tha. Aur us kamre me wo smell :hmm2: koyi jaanwar mara ya fir insaan ya fir kuch illegal items cooking...
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Mast theme hai bhai... Ladkiyo ki aisi bakchodi aisa ravaiya.. Bilkul unique hai, mere liye to hai hee atleast. Kabhi nahi socha ki ladkiya aisi bhi ho sakti hai... Jab se tanu ghusa waha aur ganja fukne lagi... Awesome :superb: ekdum gundi hai lawda... Chudne ke liye hamesha lalayit fir chahe ladka ho ya ladki....
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Par main kaan to uske baad hich hua.. Jab wo chali gayi aur tanu ko hosh aaya.. Uske baad jo scene describe kiy... Jo jo hua Supriya ke sath... Bas kahi se ekat hath touch nahi hua warna Supriya peshab kar deti kasam se :lol: wo bijali ki chamak me koyi baitha hua use laga.. Wo scene me awesome tha... Dar me aksar aisa hota hai, i guess... Jaise-taise karke bhag to nikli par.................. Wapas wahi aur jo last line likhi.. Wo ghoorne wala shaks kaun tha ya thi... Ab hogi female hee.. Male ka kya kaam kyunki kaand to ladkiya hee ki hai yaha... Anyway, that was one hell of the scene ..:scared: :sigh:

Fantabulous update hariya bhai... Abhi maza aayega story me aur wo almaari me kya chhipa rakhi hai tanu :p: bdsm ka samaan to nahi....

So sad... Bechari...

Chillati alag jab tanu ungali karti to :hide1:

Kya baat hai.. Itne uchh vichar 😋😋😋😁😁
:roflol: saman jo chupa rakha hai wo wahi saman tha jise vo funk rahe the ek aad aur hai vo aage bata dunga.. is kahani men kuch nahi chupega... :D Bhai mein horror nahi kahunga kahani ko par horror ka ek touch dene ki try jarur karunga taki kahani mein vo thrill bana rahe jo actually mein dena chahta hun. Bhai ladkiyan ise bhi bade kaand karti hai aap dekho thodi jahalk aage dunga filal to abhi hum kahani ke mid ko pehle padh rahe hain shuruwat baad mein ayegi :D Thanks gyani bhai :hug; keep reading... :bow:
nice update ..supriya ko darwaja khula dikha store room ka aur wo chali gayi ander ..
par light band hona ,,aur kisine bahar se darwaja band kiya ( ye shayad tannu ne kiya tha ) ..
par wo gandi badbu aur jab sonu ne dikhaya ki darwaje par tala laga hai to supriya hairan ho gayi ..
kuch to tha waha pe 🤔..

ab ye tannu ne raat ko 1 baje bulaya hai par kya karegi wo supriya ke saath 🤔..

megha to hawasi hi hai ,,pehle phone nahi uthaya aur supriya maa se baat kar rahi thi to bolti hai ki aakash ka nude aanewala hai 😁😁..

aur ye supriya itni derr kaise soti rahi 🤔 ki megha ke jagane par bhi nahi jagi ..
ab megha kuch plan bata paaye jisse tannu se bach sake ..
han bhai apki baat sahi hai apne sarre sawal puch dale isme jo mein nahi kahani batayegi ki kya chal raha hai... :D Supriya ko sone ki bimari hai bhai :D Thnks bhai :hug:
Amazing story brother...want more erotic talk between these girls of girls hostel...
Thanks bhai :hug: erotic talks to ati hi rahegi... :D Keep reading :bow:
 

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Mujhe sidha sidha bata deo Megha ke sath mujhe zor rahe ki nahi ... Aur bus agle update me hi ...
APki icha itni hi hai to update 12-13 update ke baad aap kahoge to jodh dunga pehle wahan tak padh lena
I want Megha at my side ... Aur mujhe student mat bana dena ... College ka bahri charecters deo... Suppose coffee shops chain owner type .. multi milinoir wala .. kahani me bhi garib rah jaun aise din mat dikhana
bhai ameeri humne nahi dekhi to apko ameer kaise bana sakte hain :roll:
 

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APki icha itni hi hai to update 12-13 update ke baad aap kahoge to jodh dunga pehle wahan tak padh lena


bhai ameeri humne nahi dekhi to apko ameer kaise bana sakte hain :roll:
Ameeri maine bhi kahan dekhi hai... Isliye to gujarish kar raha hun .... Aur abhi 11th aaya hai... Maine 6 tak padh liya hai ... Aaj 9-10 tak complete kar lunga... Waise daras kai ko rahe ho... Side role hi to mang raha hun ... Me and Megha :D ...
 

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nice update ..megha ne bathroom jaane ka idea diya aur supriya itne andhere me bhi chali gayi 🤣🤣..
musibat me akkal kaam nahi karti aisa hi hua supriya ke saath 😁..
tanu ke paas jaati to pata chaltq ki wo kya chahti hai par ye andhere me bathroom gayi aur jo tv ka ujala tha usko bhi band kar diya aur ye bhi nahi socha ki aise hi kisne tb chalu rakha hai 🤔🤔.

aur ab dobara tv chalu hua aur usme supriya dikh rahi hai 🤔..
koi supriya ko target kar raha hai aisa lagta hai 🤔..

aur megha apna kaam bana rahi thi shayad ,,supriya ko bhejke aakash ko room par aane ka challenge de diya 😁😁..
 

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Yaadasht kahe mitayenge :hmm:
hai ek favorite writer sahab yahan xf pe waise aap unhe xp se hi jante hai.. unhone hero heroine ki yaadein mita jo kiya undono ke sath uff kya hi kahu... :D
 
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