Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

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" tu kal tanu se nahi mili aur na hi tune kal raat tanu ko dekha hai " megha supriya ko bata rahi thi lekin supriya ki taarf se jawab na ane par usne piche dekha " supriya tu sun rahi hai na mene kya kaha? "

" h.a...n... " supriya ni nazre jhuki hui thi. Megha uska hath pakad kar use le jaa rahi thi. " tujhse koi puche to sirf nah kehna hai iske alawa tujhe kuch nahi malum " megha ne fir kaha " surpiya " palat kar usne supriya ki taraf dekha. " han... " supriya ne itna hi jawab diya. Dono sidiyan utarte hue niche ayi aur hostel ke bahar jane lagi. Bahar nikalte hi baarish ki halki bundein supriya ko apne uppar mehsus hui. Hawa mein thodi sardi thi aur asman mein kalle badan chaye hue the. Megha hostel se piche jane wali corridor ki taraf jane lagi. Supriya ni nazar abhi bhi jhuki hui thi vo sirf itna samajh rahi thi ki megha use kahin le ja rahi hai, kahan ye puchna uski soch mein hi nahi aya tha. Uske dimag mein bas ek hi baat hi ' tanu ka kal raat khoon ho gaya hai '

" supriya.. supriya.. " megha ne supriya ka kandha hila kar use hosh mein kiya aur supriya ne nazar utha kar uski taraf dekha. " bas chup rahio.. " supriya ko megha ne ek baar aur samjhaya aur uske aage se hath gayi. Supriya jahan khadi thi uske aage hostel ki sari ladkiyan khadi thi itna hi nahi wahan police ke kuch log maujud the aur unhone ek jagah se aage jane ka rasta band kar diya tha. Supriya ne nazar sabhi ladkiyun se hata kar police ko dekhte hue jab samne dekha to uske chehre ka fika pan hairani mein tabdeel ho gaya. Uski palkon ne jhapkna band kar diya. Samne kuch duri par jahan hostel ki jagah khatam hoti thi wahin par ek lohe ka gate laga hua tha jispar hamesha hi tala laga rehta tha kyun ki uske dusri taraf Lal Apartments the.

Jis gate par hamesha tala hota hai aaj wahan uske sath kuch aur bhi tha. Tanu ... jo us gate par tangi hui thi, uski ankh aur kaan se khoon nikal kar jam chuka tha lekin khaufnak baat uska wahan tanga hua nahi tha balki vo wajah thi jise uski maut hui thi. Tanu ka muh khula tha aur ek danda uske muh se bahar nikal raha tha. Supriya ki nazar tanu par aise jam gayi thi jaise vo ye drishye pehle dekh chuki hai. Ye sirf uska bhram tha kyun ki aisa usne dekha nahi tha balki usne aisa socha tha ' mera bas chalta na to isko hostel ke gate ke aage nanga karke tangti aur ek danda iske niche se dal kar muh se nikal deti ' vo bar-bar apni baat ko dhaurani lagi aur dhuarte hue usne fir tanu ko dekha aur ghabarahat ke mare uski sans ukhad jati kyun ki jaisa usne kaha tha tanu ki maut bilkul usi tarah hui thi. Dande ko uske niche se daal kar hi muh se nikala gaya tha.

" nahi.. nahi.. aisa nahi ho sakta... " supriya ki badbadane ki awaz kisi ne to nahi suni par megha ne sun li. Megha ko laga ki vo ghabra gayi hai aur kal ki raat ke bare mein na bol de ki koi sun le isliye vo chup karane ke liye uske karib ayi " supriya " megha ne bas itna hi kaha ki supriya use dekhte hue hi chillai.

" aisa nahi ho sakta... mene sirf socha tha tanu ke bare mein lekin vo aise hi jayegi .... aisa kaise ho sakta haiiiii " supriya itni zor se cheekhi ki jo do hawaldar tanu ke sharir ko gate se utarne ki kosish kar rahe the vo bhi ghabra kar piche hat gayi. Sabhi ladkiyun ki nazar to supriya par gayi hi lekin warden ke sath khade inspector ki nazar bhi supriya ki aaur khinchi chali ayi. " aisa kaise ho sakta hai tanu aise kaise mar sakti hai... aisa kaise ho sakta hai.... shit... " supriya ne apna sar pakad kar zor-zor se cheekhne ke baad sabki nigahein uski taraf akarshit kar di thi.

" mana kiya tha mene tujhe kuch bhi bolne se lekin tune meri ek nahi suni " megha corridor mein idhar udhar ghumte hue boli " bola tha mene ki kuch mat bolio bas chup rahio... lekin tu na jane kya-kya bak gayi wahan, bhavnao mein behene se jada hai apna ras baha leti... usme main bhi support karti tujhe lekin tere muh ko chain hi nahi hai.. kya jarurat thi kuch bhi bolne ki.. " megha ruki aur supriya ki taraf dekhte hue boli " ab kyun chup hai.. ab kyun nahi bol rahi ... " megha ka gussa badhta jaa raha tha. " bolegi ya dun ek raipta tere ko.. gussa dila rahi hai bevajah... kya bol rahi thi tu.. kya bol rahi thi.. vo.. " megha yaad karne ki kosish karne lagi " han... mene sirf socha tha lekin vo waise hi mar gayi... matlab seriously? tune un panchayat aurton ko bhi maat de di jinke pet ke andar bache ke sath baat bhi nahi pachti.. aur vo bhi chhodo tujhe kuch bhi bolne ki kya jarurat thi, tujhe mene kal ke liye mana kiya tha ye tu naya kab bana kar le ayi... " megha ne uske karib akar dhime se kaha lekin supriya tab bhi kuch nahi boli. Megha ek pal wahi khadi use ghurti rahi fir piche hat gayi. Use kuch samajh nahi aa raha, pichle do ghante se use warden ke room ke bahar baitha rakha tha aur andar police aur warden maujud the. Police pure hostel mein chakar lagate hue kai baar warden ke kamre ke andar-bahar kar chuke the. Sabhi ladkiyun ko mess mein rehne ka sakht adesh tha sirf ek ko chhod kar vo thi Supriya. Megha ko isliye rakha tha taki supriya par nazar bani rahi kyun ki Warden ke mutabik vo dari hui hai aur uski tabiyat kharab hai varna to police walle akela hi baithaye rakhte aur akele mein vo kya kar leti ye to megha ko bhi malum nahi tha. Vo soch rahi thi ki ab kya hone wala hai. Supriya kuch bata nahi rahi hai aur abhi tak kisi ne bhi andar se supriya ko bulaya nahi? Na jane kya baat chal rahi hogi. Megha ke dimag mein yahi chal raha tha.

" mene sach mein aisa socha tha megha... " supriya ki awaz sun megha apni soch se bahar ayi aur uski taraf dekhne lagi " mujhe tanu par bahut gussa aya tha. Vo meri hi tarah un ladkiyun ki bhi ragging le rahi thi isliye mene gusse mein bas muh se kaha ki.. " supriya ek pal chup hui " mera bas chalta to isko hostel ke gate par latka kar danda uski.... " supriya itna hi keh payi ki warden ke kamre ka darwaja khula.

" apko andar bulaya hai " constable ne kaha to supriya ko chup hokar apni jagah se khada hona pada. " kuch mat bolio " megha ne dabe lehaz mein surpiya ko samjhaya. Supriya ne ek pal use dekha aur fir warden ke kamre mein dakhil ho gayi. Andar ghuste hi constable ne darawaje ko band karke uspar kundi laga di. Supriya ne jaise hi andar kadam rakha uski ghabrahat bhagte ghode jitni tez ho chali thi. Kamre mein baithi warden aur inspector ke sath do constable wahan maujud the jisme se ek mahila constable thi. Inspector aur warden usi ko ek tak dekhe jaa rahe the jiski wajah se vo aur bhi jada ghabra rahi thi.

" supriya idhka akar baitho " warden ne apni samne rakhi kursi ki taraf baithne ka ishara kiya. Supriya sehmi hui wahan kursi par jaa baithi. Uske liye bahut mushkil ho raha tha ek taraf tanu ka latkta sharir aur dusri taraf use puche jane sawal jawab, vo dono hi chizon ko alag nahi kar paa rahi thi jis wajah se uska dimag confusion ke bhanvar mein fans chuka tha.

" supriya " , " supriya " warden ne dusri dafa thodi unchi awaz lagai to supriya hosh mein ayi.

" ji.. "

" inspector sahab kuch sawal puchna chahte hain to tumhe jo bhi malum ho use sach sach bata dena " warden ki baat par supriya ne hami bhar di aur bagal mein baithe inspector ki taraf apni nazar modh li.

" supriya, supriya khandelwal, Nagpur rehti ho. Mumy Urvashi Khandelwal jo Neurosurgen hai, papa Kapil Khandelwal jo Army mein hai, information correct hai? " inspector ne file pade hue kaha.

" ji.. "

" hmm to supriya main jo sawal karunga uska apko bilkul sach aur sahi jawab dena hai. Main nahi chahta ki aap kisi bhi tarah ka koi stress lein kyun ki stress lene ki jarurat gunah karne wale ko hoti hai, right? "

" yes sir.. " supriya ne sab kuch chhoda aur bas ek hi chiz yaad rakhi jo megha ne kahi thi, 'kuch nahi batana'

" Tanu ko kab se janti ho "

" college ke first day se sir "

" hmm, kaise? "

" vo mera college ka first day tha aur mene unse hostel ka rasta pucha tha usi samay se "

" yani vo aur apa dono dost the basharte vo apki senior thi right? "

" nahi sir, dost nahi the.. "

" to fir? "

" first day ko unhone meri ragging kari thi.. bas usi wajah se janti hun " ragging sunte hi inspector ek pal chup raha aur fir warden ko ghurne laga. Warden ek pal ke liye sakpaka gayi " supriya are you sure tanu ne tumhari ragging kari thi? " wardan turant boli.

" yes mam.. " supriya ne nazar nahi uthai.

" lekin tumne uske liye mujhse complain kyun nahi ki? "

" vo.. vo... " supriya ko samajh nahi aya ki vo kaise bataye ki agar usne bataya hota to tanu use us jagah par band kar deti jaise us din kiya tha aur ye bhi kaha tha ki kisi ko bataya to din ki jagah raat ko band karegi.

" batao kyun nahi ki complain " warden thodi unchi awaz mein bol padi. Usko laga ki kahin baat uspar na aa jaye isliye usne strict banna sahi samjha.

" Miss Shailja " inspector ke bolne par warden chup ho gayi. " dekho supriya, agar tumhare sath kuch aisa hua tha to tumhe college ko inform karna chahie tha. Par jo hua main uspar na sawal karte hue ab tumse fir wahi sawal karunga jiska jawab tumhe sambhal kar dena hai, Kya tum tanu ko janti thi? " Inspector ne jab dubara wahi sawal kiya to supriya kuch soch mein padh gayi. Jawab to dena tha lekin kya vo use soch samajh kar dena tha.

" nahi.. "

" hmm.. to kya tum mujhe ye bata sakti ho ki tumhara phone uske kamre mein kaise gaya? " inspector ne evidence wale pack ko supriya ki taraf utha kar dikhaya jise dekh supriya ki ankhein hairani mein badi ho gayi. Usne ye mobile tanu ke pas se liya tha use ye yaad tha lekin uske baad use kuch yaad nahi tha ki vo use kamre mein chhod kar ayi thi ya fir megha sahi keh rahi thi ki vo kabhi tanu ke kamre mein gayi nahi aur usi bathroom mein raat bhar rahi thi aur jo bhi use ab yaad aa raha hai vo sirf uska ek sapna tha hakikat nahi. Vo hakikat aur sapne ke bich mein fans rahi thi..

" supriya.. " inspector ke awaz lagane par use hosh aya.

" malum nahi sir, mera din se phone kahin gum ho gaya tha. Ho sakta hai tanu ko mila ho aur unhone apne pass rakh liya ho "

" to apne kisi ko bataya nahi ki aapka phone ghum hai? "

" bataya tha sir, meri room-mate ko.. aur meri mom ko bhi malum tha.. kyun ki mene sham ko mom se baat ki thi room-mate ke phone se "

" theek hai.. maan lete hain.. " inspector ne evidence wala pouch whain rakh dia " to supriya apki aur tanu ki akhri mulakat kab hui thi? " inspector ke is sawal ne supriya ko bechaini se bhar diya. Vo apne per ke anguthe se apni ungliyan nochne lagi.

" kal.. "

" kab? " inspector ke puchte hi vo fir soch mein padh gayi. Raat ki baat jaise ek dum tazi uske dimag mein ghum rahi thi, drugs, nasha.. sharab.. yahi sab.... par ek chiz jo use sata rahi thi vo sochne ke baad usne apna jawab diya.

" din mein.. jab main warden ko complain karke vapis room ki taraf jaa rahi thi tab " supriya ke jawab dete hi inspector ne nazar warden ki taraf ghuma di jaise warden se is baat par puchti lena chahte ho. Warden thodi soch mein dub gayi, yaad na rehne ki adat use kahin dubo na de vo wahi soch rahi thi par dimag mein zor dalte hi use yaad aa gaya.

" yes sir.. supriya kal ayi thi koi problem thi.. uski wajah se "

" kya main problem jaan sakta hun ? "

" vo room ke bathroom mein pani ki dikkat thi sir... " jawab supriya ne diya to warden ne chain ki sans li kyun ki use ye baat yaad nahi ayi thi ki vo kyun ayi thi. Vaise bhi kal sham ke program ke chakar mein use kuch yaad hi nahi tha.

" hmm.. yani tumhari uske baad koi mulakat nahi hui " supriya ne inspector ke kehne par nah mein sar hila diya " to fir tumne thodi der pehle bahar aisa kyun kaha ki tumne aisa nahi socha tha.. mujhe aur yaknin warden sahab ko bhi samajh nahi aya hoga... " inspector ne wo baat pakdi jiski wajah se vo wahan baithi thi.

" vo.. vo.. sir.. jis din se tanu ne meri ragging kari hai.. mujhe darwane sapne ate hai... to bas kal raat bhi ek sapna dekha tha.. aur fir subah vo tanu ko us halat mein dekh dar gayi thi.. kyun ki sapne mein .. mein.. main unki ragging le rahi thi isliye.. keh diya ki mene aisa nahi socha tha... " supriya ne nazar uppar uthai " i am sorry sir.. lekin vo sirf sapna tha ... mam main bahut dar gayi thi.. bahut jada " supriya ki ankhon se ansu nikalne lage. Usko achanak se jazbati aur rota dekh inspector ne pani ki bottle khol kar uski taraf bottle badha di.

" supriya relax.. humne tumhe yahan pareshan karne ke liye nahi bulaya hai.. hume laga ki tum hamari madad kar sakti ho tanu ke khoon ko lekar isliye bulaya tha. Par ab mujhe nahi lagta ki mujhe tumhari jarurat hai, isliye tum jaa sakti ho.. " inspector se pani lekar do ghunt pikar usne bottle wahin rakh di.

" madam mein jaun " supriya ne warden se pucha aur warden ne inspector ki taraf dekha aur ishara patte hi warden ne supriya ko jane ke liye keh diya.

" thank you mam, sir... " supriya ne apne ansu saaf kiye aur wahan se chal di. Uski sans abhi bhi bahut tez chal rahi thi ki abhi use rok kar koi sawal kar liya jayega par aisa nahi hua aur jatte-jatte wahan hui thodi bahut baat-cheet ko sun liya.

" to apko kya lagta hai sir, tanu ko kisne mara hoga "

" keh nahi sakte abhi.. ek team uske room ki talashi le rahi hai unhe abhi tak kuch mila nahi hai aur dusri team college se mili information ke mutabik un ladkiyun se puch-tach kar rahi hai jo uske close thi. Kuch milega to hum apko jaldi hi batayenge "

" lekin sir koi itni behrami se aisa bhi kar sakta hai, mera matlab hai kya sach mein kisi ne tanu ke piche se danda daal kar muh se nikala hai..... " warden ke is akhri sawal par inspector ne kya jawab diya supriya sun nahi payi kyun ki vo jab tak bahar nikal chuki thi. Bahar nikalte hi megha ne uska hath pakda aur chup-chap use wahan se le jane lagi jab tak vo dono sabse dur nahi ho gayi.

" kya hua... kya pucha... tune kuch bataya to nahi.. kal raat wali baat to nahi batai na? " megha ne chutte hi apni jigasya dikhai.

" unhe tanu ke kamre se kuch nahi mila " supriya ne jawab kuch aur hi diya.

" kya matlab? "

" kal raat megha.. kal raat unke kamre mein maujud drugs... sharab nasheli chizen kuch nahi mili.. "

" tu abhi tak us baat mein atki hai. Mene kaha na tu bathroom mein thi tu.. " supriya ne megha ko bich mein rokte hue apni baat kahi.

" main bathroom gayi thi megha vo sach hai.. lekin tujhe agar yakeen nahi hai ki main sach keh rahi hun to third year wali kalyani mess mein nahi milegi... " supriya ne itne confdence se kaha ki megha ne iske baad kuch nahi kaha. Usne supriya ka hath pakda aur dono mess ki taraf badh gayi. Mess mein pehle se hi sari hostel ki ladkiyan jama thi aaj kisi ko bhi college jane ki anumati nahi thi aur na hi college se hostel mein ani ki anumati thi. Mess mein ek shor tha jo supriya ke atte hi band ho gaya. Sabhi ladkiyan usi ko dekhne lagi jaise use kuch kehna chahti ho lekin koi kuch nahi bola. Sabhi ko dekhte hue megha ke sath vo ek kone mein jaa baithi aur ek baar fir mess mein ladkiyun ke khus-fusane ka shor gunjne laga.

 

[Naina]

ye buri baat harshit1890 sahab
ghatana ho jaane ke baad jo ho raha hai wo dikha rahe hai... are jab khooni khoon kar raha tha uski khaufnaak aur mast details to dijiye

 

[Naina]

Update ~~ 16​

" tu kal tanu se nahi mili aur na hi tune kal raat tanu ko dekha hai " megha supriya ko bata rahi thi lekin supriya ki taarf se jawab na ane par usne piche dekha " supriya tu sun rahi hai na mene kya kaha? "

" h.a...n... " supriya ni nazre jhuki hui thi. Megha uska hath pakad kar use le jaa rahi thi. " tujhse koi puche to sirf nah kehna hai iske alawa tujhe kuch nahi malum " megha ne fir kaha " surpiya " palat kar usne supriya ki taraf dekha. " han... " supriya ne itna hi jawab diya. Dono sidiyan utarte hue niche ayi aur hostel ke bahar jane lagi. Bahar nikalte hi baarish ki halki bundein supriya ko apne uppar mehsus hui. Hawa mein thodi sardi thi aur asman mein kalle badan chaye hue the. Megha hostel se piche jane wali corridor ki taraf jane lagi. Supriya ni nazar abhi bhi jhuki hui thi vo sirf itna samajh rahi thi ki megha use kahin le ja rahi hai, kahan ye puchna uski soch mein hi nahi aya tha. Uske dimag mein bas ek hi baat hi ' tanu ka kal raat khoon ho gaya hai '

" supriya.. supriya.. " megha ne supriya ka kandha hila kar use hosh mein kiya aur supriya ne nazar utha kar uski taraf dekha. " bas chup rahio.. " supriya ko megha ne ek baar aur samjhaya aur uske aage se hath gayi. Supriya jahan khadi thi uske aage hostel ki sari ladkiyan khadi thi itna hi nahi wahan police ke kuch log maujud the aur unhone ek jagah se aage jane ka rasta band kar diya tha. Supriya ne nazar sabhi ladkiyun se hata kar police ko dekhte hue jab samne dekha to uske chehre ka fika pan hairani mein tabdeel ho gaya. Uski palkon ne jhapkna band kar diya. Samne kuch duri par jahan hostel ki jagah khatam hoti thi wahin par ek lohe ka gate laga hua tha jispar hamesha hi tala laga rehta tha kyun ki uske dusri taraf Lal Apartments the.

ek baat yahan Clearly pata chale ki ye jo kirdaar megha hai... kaafi sujh bujh wali aur baaton ko gahrayi se samajhne walo mein se ek hai... hazir jawabi tatha kis mauke par ya kis waqt par kya action leni chahiye ye baat ye bhali bhaanti jaanti hai....
abhi jis tarah se apni dost ko sambhaal rahi hai... aur jis tarah se samjha rahi hai.. isise pata chale iske intelligency ka... sachme bahot hi samajhdaari kaam liya hai...

Jis gate par hamesha tala hota hai aaj wahan uske sath kuch aur bhi tha. Tanu ... jo us gate par tangi hui thi, uski ankh aur kaan se khoon nikal kar jam chuka tha lekin khaufnak baat uska wahan tanga hua nahi tha balki vo wajah thi jise uski maut hui thi. Tanu ka muh khula tha aur ek danda uske muh se bahar nikal raha tha. Supriya ki nazar tanu par aise jam gayi thi jaise vo ye drishye pehle dekh chuki hai. Ye sirf uska bhram tha kyun ki aisa usne dekha nahi tha balki usne aisa socha tha ' mera bas chalta na to isko hostel ke gate ke aage nanga karke tangti aur ek danda iske niche se dal kar muh se nikal deti ' vo bar-bar apni baat ko dhaurani lagi aur dhuarte hue usne fir tanu ko dekha aur ghabarahat ke mare uski sans ukhad jati kyun ki jaisa usne kaha tha tanu ki maut bilkul usi tarah hui thi. Dande ko uske niche se daal kar hi muh se nikala gaya tha.

aha chalo kam se kam ek kirdaar ki to maut huyi
matlab maut ka silsila yahi se suru
Khair is tanu ki maut aur bhi khaufnaak tarike se dikha sakte the aap harshit sahab
Jaise haunted series mein dikhate the....
well iski lash dekh supriya ki sitti pitti gul ho gayi Khair...

" nahi.. nahi.. aisa nahi ho sakta... " supriya ki badbadane ki awaz kisi ne to nahi suni par megha ne sun li. Megha ko laga ki vo ghabra gayi hai aur kal ki raat ke bare mein na bol de ki koi sun le isliye vo chup karane ke liye uske karib ayi " supriya " megha ne bas itna hi kaha ki supriya use dekhte hue hi chillai.

" aisa nahi ho sakta... mene sirf socha tha tanu ke bare mein lekin vo aise hi jayegi .... aisa kaise ho sakta haiiiii " supriya itni zor se cheekhi ki jo do hawaldar tanu ke sharir ko gate se utarne ki kosish kar rahe the vo bhi ghabra kar piche hat gayi. Sabhi ladkiyun ki nazar to supriya par gayi hi lekin warden ke sath khade inspector ki nazar bhi supriya ki aaur khinchi chali ayi. " aisa kaise ho sakta hai tanu aise kaise mar sakti hai... aisa kaise ho sakta hai.... shit... " supriya ne apna sar pakad kar zor-zor se cheekhne ke baad sabki nigahein uski taraf akarshit kar di thi.

Le.. pagal... khud ke pero pe kulhadi maar li
ye sachme bewakuf hai ya sach mein pagal

" mana kiya tha mene tujhe kuch bhi bolne se lekin tune meri ek nahi suni " megha corridor mein idhar udhar ghumte hue boli " bola tha mene ki kuch mat bolio bas chup rahio... lekin tu na jane kya-kya bak gayi wahan, bhavnao mein behene se jada hai apna ras baha leti... usme main bhi support karti tujhe lekin tere muh ko chain hi nahi hai.. kya jarurat thi kuch bhi bolne ki.. " megha ruki aur supriya ki taraf dekhte hue boli " ab kyun chup hai.. ab kyun nahi bol rahi ... " megha ka gussa badhta jaa raha tha. " bolegi ya dun ek raipta tere ko.. gussa dila rahi hai bevajah... kya bol rahi thi tu.. kya bol rahi thi.. vo.. " megha yaad karne ki kosish karne lagi " han... mene sirf socha tha lekin vo waise hi mar gayi... matlab seriously? tune un panchayat aurton ko bhi maat de di jinke pet ke andar bache ke sath baat bhi nahi pachti.. aur vo bhi chhodo tujhe kuch bhi bolne ki kya jarurat thi, tujhe mene kal ke liye mana kiya tha ye tu naya kab bana kar le ayi... " megha ne uske karib akar dhime se kaha lekin supriya tab bhi kuch nahi boli. Megha ek pal wahi khadi use ghurti rahi fir piche hat gayi. Use kuch samajh nahi aa raha, pichle do ghante se use warden ke room ke bahar baitha rakha tha aur andar police aur warden maujud the. Police pure hostel mein chakar lagate hue kai baar warden ke kamre ke andar-bahar kar chuke the. Sabhi ladkiyun ko mess mein rehne ka sakht adesh tha sirf ek ko chhod kar vo thi Supriya. Megha ko isliye rakha tha taki supriya par nazar bani rahi kyun ki Warden ke mutabik vo dari hui hai aur uski tabiyat kharab hai varna to police walle akela hi baithaye rakhte aur akele mein vo kya kar leti ye to megha ko bhi malum nahi tha. Vo soch rahi thi ki ab kya hone wala hai. Supriya kuch bata nahi rahi hai aur abhi tak kisi ne bhi andar se supriya ko bulaya nahi? Na jane kya baat chal rahi hogi. Megha ke dimag mein yahi chal raha tha.

" mene sach mein aisa socha tha megha... " supriya ki awaz sun megha apni soch se bahar ayi aur uski taraf dekhne lagi " mujhe tanu par bahut gussa aya tha. Vo meri hi tarah un ladkiyun ki bhi ragging le rahi thi isliye mene gusse mein bas muh se kaha ki.. " supriya ek pal chup hui " mera bas chalta to isko hostel ke gate par latka kar danda uski.... " supriya itna hi keh payi ki warden ke kamre ka darwaja khula.

ye bewakuf khud to maregi sath hi megha ko le dubegi
Pagal kahi ki are dimagi bimari hai Bhram hua... ab dekho jaane kya kya bake jaa rahi hai...
Itna samjha rahi hai ek hi baat ko ki chup rahiyo par nahi ishe to sachhai ki murat banni hai....

" apko andar bulaya hai " constable ne kaha to supriya ko chup hokar apni jagah se khada hona pada. " kuch mat bolio " megha ne dabe lehaz mein surpiya ko samjhaya. Supriya ne ek pal use dekha aur fir warden ke kamre mein dakhil ho gayi. Andar ghuste hi constable ne darawaje ko band karke uspar kundi laga di. Supriya ne jaise hi andar kadam rakha uski ghabrahat bhagte ghode jitni tez ho chali thi. Kamre mein baithi warden aur inspector ke sath do constable wahan maujud the jisme se ek mahila constable thi. Inspector aur warden usi ko ek tak dekhe jaa rahe the jiski wajah se vo aur bhi jada ghabra rahi thi.

" supriya idhka akar baitho " warden ne apni samne rakhi kursi ki taraf baithne ka ishara kiya. Supriya sehmi hui wahan kursi par jaa baithi. Uske liye bahut mushkil ho raha tha ek taraf tanu ka latkta sharir aur dusri taraf use puche jane sawal jawab, vo dono hi chizon ko alag nahi kar paa rahi thi jis wajah se uska dimag confusion ke bhanvar mein fans chuka tha.

" supriya " , " supriya " warden ne dusri dafa thodi unchi awaz lagai to supriya hosh mein ayi.

" ji.. "

" inspector sahab kuch sawal puchna chahte hain to tumhe jo bhi malum ho use sach sach bata dena " warden ki baat par supriya ne hami bhar di aur bagal mein baithe inspector ki taraf apni nazar modh li.

" supriya, supriya khandelwal, Madhya Pradesh, Nagpur rehti ho. Mumy Urvashi Khandelwal jo Neurosurgen hai, papa Kapil Khandelwal jo Army mein hai, information correct hai? " inspector ne file pade hue kaha.

" ji.. "

" hmm to supriya main jo sawal karunga uska apko bilkul sach aur sahi jawab dena hai. Main nahi chahta ki aap kisi bhi tarah ka koi stress lein kyun ki stress lene ki jarurat gunah karne wale ko hoti hai, right? "

" yes sir.. " supriya ne sab kuch chhoda aur bas ek hi chiz yaad rakhi jo megha ne kahi thi, 'kuch nahi batana'

" Tanu ko kab se janti ho "

" college ke first day se sir "

" hmm, kaise? "

" vo mera college ka first day tha aur mene unse hostel ka rasta pucha tha usi samay se "

" yani vo aur apa dono dost the basharte vo apki senior thi right? "

" nahi sir, dost nahi the.. "

" to fir? "

" first day ko unhone meri ragging kari thi.. bas usi wajah se janti hun " ragging sunte hi inspector ek pal chup raha aur fir warden ko ghurne laga. Warden ek pal ke liye sakpaka gayi " supriya are you sure tanu ne tumhari ragging kari thi? " wardan turant boli.

" yes mam.. " supriya ne nazar nahi uthai.

" lekin tumne uske liye mujhse complain kyun nahi ki? "

" vo.. vo... " supriya ko samajh nahi aya ki vo kaise bataye ki agar usne bataya hota to tanu use us jagah par band kar deti jaise us din kiya tha aur ye bhi kaha tha ki kisi ko bataya to din ki jagah raat ko band karegi.

" batao kyun nahi ki complain " warden thodi unchi awaz mein bol padi. Usko laga ki kahin baat uspar na aa jaye isliye usne strict banna sahi samjha.

" Miss Shailja " inspector ke bolne par warden chup ho gayi. " dekho supriya, agar tumhare sath kuch aisa hua tha to tumhe college ko inform karna chahie tha. Par jo hua main uspar na sawal karte hue ab tumse fir wahi sawal karunga jiska jawab tumhe sambhal kar dena hai, Kya tum tanu ko janti thi? " Inspector ne jab dubara wahi sawal kiya to supriya kuch soch mein padh gayi. Jawab to dena tha lekin kya vo use soch samajh kar dena tha.

" nahi.. "

" hmm.. to kya tum mujhe ye bata sakti ho ki tumhara phone uske kamre mein kaise gaya? " inspector ne evidence wale pack ko supriya ki taraf utha kar dikhaya jise dekh supriya ki ankhein hairani mein badi ho gayi. Usne ye mobile tanu ke pas se liya tha use ye yaad tha lekin uske baad use kuch yaad nahi tha ki vo use kamre mein chhod kar ayi thi ya fir megha sahi keh rahi thi ki vo kabhi tanu ke kamre mein gayi nahi aur usi bathroom mein raat bhar rahi thi aur jo bhi use ab yaad aa raha hai vo sirf uska ek sapna tha hakikat nahi. Vo hakikat aur sapne ke bich mein fans rahi thi..

" supriya.. " inspector ke awaz lagane par use hosh aya.

" malum nahi sir, mera din se phone kahin gum ho gaya tha. Ho sakta hai tanu ko mila ho aur unhone apne pass rakh liya ho "

" to apne kisi ko bataya nahi ki aapka phone ghum hai? "

" bataya tha sir, meri room-mate ko.. aur meri mom ko bhi malum tha.. kyun ki mene sham ko mom se baat ki thi room-mate ke phone se "

" theek hai.. maan lete hain.. " inspector ne evidence wala pouch whain rakh dia " to supriya apki aur tanu ki akhri mulakat kab hui thi? " inspector ke is sawal ne supriya ko bechaini se bhar diya. Vo apne per ke anguthe se apni ungliyan nochne lagi.

" kal.. "

" kab? " inspector ke puchte hi vo fir soch mein padh gayi. Raat ki baat jaise ek dum tazi uske dimag mein ghum rahi thi, drugs, nasha.. sharab.. yahi sab.... par ek chiz jo use sata rahi thi vo sochne ke baad usne apna jawab diya.

" din mein.. jab main warden ko complain karke vapis room ki taraf jaa rahi thi tab " supriya ke jawab dete hi inspector ne nazar warden ki taraf ghuma di jaise warden se is baat par puchti lena chahte ho. Warden thodi soch mein dub gayi, yaad na rehne ki adat use kahin dubo na de vo wahi soch rahi thi par dimag mein zor dalte hi use yaad aa gaya.

" yes sir.. supriya kal ayi thi koi problem thi.. uski wajah se "

" kya main problem jaan sakta hun ? "

" vo room ke bathroom mein pani ki dikkat thi sir... " jawab supriya ne diya to warden ne chain ki sans li kyun ki use ye baat yaad nahi ayi thi ki vo kyun ayi thi. Vaise bhi kal sham ke program ke chakar mein use kuch yaad hi nahi tha.

" hmm.. yani tumhari uske baad koi mulakat nahi hui " supriya ne inspector ke kehne par nah mein sar hila diya " to fir tumne thodi der pehle bahar aisa kyun kaha ki tumne aisa nahi socha tha.. mujhe aur yaknin warden sahab ko bhi samajh nahi aya hoga... " inspector ne wo baat pakdi jiski wajah se vo wahan baithi thi.

" vo.. vo.. sir.. jis din se tanu ne meri ragging kari hai.. mujhe darwane sapne ate hai... to bas kal raat bhi ek sapna dekha tha.. aur fir subah vo tanu ko us halat mein dekh dar gayi thi.. kyun ki sapne mein .. mein.. main unki ragging le rahi thi isliye.. keh diya ki mene aisa nahi socha tha... " supriya ne nazar uppar uthai " i am sorry sir.. lekin vo sirf sapna tha ... mam main bahut dar gayi thi.. bahut jada " supriya ki ankhon se ansu nikalne lage. Usko achanak se jazbati aur rota dekh inspector ne pani ki bottle khol kar uski taraf bottle badha di.

" supriya relax.. humne tumhe yahan pareshan karne ke liye nahi bulaya hai.. hume laga ki tum hamari madad kar sakti ho tanu ke khoon ko lekar isliye bulaya tha. Par ab mujhe nahi lagta ki mujhe tumhari jarurat hai, isliye tum jaa sakti ho.. " inspector se pani lekar do ghunt pikar usne bottle wahin rakh di.

" madam mein jaun " supriya ne warden se pucha aur warden ne inspector ki taraf dekha aur ishara patte hi warden ne supriya ko jane ke liye keh diya.

" thank you mam, sir... " supriya ne apne ansu saaf kiye aur wahan se chal di. Uski sans abhi bhi bahut tez chal rahi thi ki abhi use rok kar koi sawal kar liya jayega par aisa nahi hua aur jatte-jatte wahan hui thodi bahut baat-cheet ko sun liya.

" to apko kya lagta hai sir, tanu ko kisne mara hoga "

" keh nahi sakte abhi.. ek team uske room ki talashi le rahi hai unhe abhi tak kuch mila nahi hai aur dusri team college se mili information ke mutabik un ladkiyun se puch-tach kar rahi hai jo uske close thi. Kuch milega to hum apko jaldi hi batayenge "

" lekin sir koi itni behrami se aisa bhi kar sakta hai, mera matlab hai kya sach mein kisi ne tanu ke piche se danda daal kar muh se nikala hai..... " warden ke is akhri sawal par inspector ne kya jawab diya supriya sun nahi payi kyun ki vo jab tak bahar nikal chuki thi. Bahar nikalte hi megha ne uska hath pakda aur chup-chap use wahan se le jane lagi jab tak vo dono sabse dur nahi ho gayi.

" kya hua... kya pucha... tune kuch bataya to nahi.. kal raat wali baat to nahi batai na? " megha ne chutte hi apni jigasya dikhai.

" unhe tanu ke kamre se kuch nahi mila " supriya ne jawab kuch aur hi diya.

" kya matlab? "

" kal raat megha.. kal raat unke kamre mein maujud drugs... sharab nasheli chizen kuch nahi mili.. "

" tu abhi tak us baat mein atki hai. Mene kaha na tu bathroom mein thi tu.. " supriya ne megha ko bich mein rokte hue apni baat kahi.

" main bathroom gayi thi megha vo sach hai.. lekin tujhe agar yakeen nahi hai ki main sach keh rahi hun to third year wali kalyani mess mein nahi milegi... " supriya ne itne confdence se kaha ki megha ne iske baad kuch nahi kaha. Usne supriya ka hath pakda aur dono mess ki taraf badh gayi. Mess mein pehle se hi sari hostel ki ladkiyan jama thi aaj kisi ko bhi college jane ki anumati nahi thi aur na hi college se hostel mein ani ki anumati thi. Mess mein ek shor tha jo supriya ke atte hi band ho gaya. Sabhi ladkiyan usi ko dekhne lagi jaise use kuch kehna chahti ho lekin koi kuch nahi bola. Sabhi ko dekhte hue megha ke sath vo ek kone mein jaa baithi aur ek baar fir mess mein ladkiyun ke khus-fusane ka shor gunjne laga.

hmm..
saare Sawal jawab aur muddo ko gaur karte huye yahi natiza nikle ki....
1) kaatil hai, koi psycho killer jo ye sab khel, khel raha hai.jo jo supriya ke sath hua ab tak etc. .. aur khoon bhi kar raha hai...
Ya phir
2) lead character supriya hi kaatil hai
. ek masoom lekin cold minded killer
ya phir psycho killer jo dimag se badi tez lekin dikhati sabko aise ki usse zyada masoom aur koi nahi..

yahan pe ek aur baat us hostel mein pehle bhi shayad kuch anhoni ghatana ghati thi... well... shayad waqt ke sath pata chale...
Khair... jo bhi ho.. jaisa bhi ho.. par sach ye bhi hai ki agar aaj megha na hoti uske sath.. to kuch na kuch gadbar jarur karti supriya interrogation ke dauran

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[SJ017]

Yeh sab to theek hain lekin kisi ne abhi tak Supriya ke kapde nahin utaare...thodi erotic bhi daalo yaar

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

romanchak update ..supriya tanu ke room me gayi hi nahi ..

aur jaisa supriya ne socha waise hi maut mili tanu ko ..

par ye nashe ke saaman kaha chale gaye tanu ke room se ..

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

tanu ke maut se me bhi bahut dukhi hu ..

par aisa lagta hai koi supriya ko protect kar raha hai aur usne jo kaha usko poora kar raha hai ..

supriya waha gayi hi nahi par usko shayad aage ka dikh gaya ho aur uske baad tanu ka murder ho gaya ..

jaise supriya ne kuch socha aur wo kisine sach kar diya ..

 

[Naina]

Pahle mera "Masoom" ka tag chori kiya.. main chup...

harshit1890 sahab zara bataiye inhe ki kisne kiska tag chori ki....

Baad me mere comment karne ka pura satyle copy maar liya... Main chup...

harshit1890 saheb is baat pe bhi gaur kijiye... aur insaaf kariye ki kisne kiski style copy ki hai...
harshit1890 sahab aaj faisla ho hi jaye...

Abhi sach baat bol raha to ershya ho gayi... Mujhe to lagta hai jo main sun raha hun tanu ka marna... Wo mujhe kisi ki ershya lag rahi aur sajis ke tahat writer ko 2000 pm thok kar usse raste se hatwa diya gaya hai... Isse alsli ershya kahte hain ...

Mastermind mister Harshit to kisi begunaah charecter ya bichare mar chuke soyi aatma ko tadapta hua bata'kar pura ilzam daal dene wale hain aur idhar asli sajiskarta nahi sajiskarti bach jayegi.... ... Bechari Tanu ko suhaagan hone ka sukh bhi nahib na hone diya... iss writer aur ershyalu ladki ne milkar game baja diya uska

hawww ... dekh lijiye ye ju pe kya kya iljam lagaying... ki ju ne jaan bujh kar tanu ka patta saaf kar diya story se hi

Kaisi hai ye anhoni ki har aankhein huyi nam....

 

[Naina]

tanu ke maut se me bhi bahut dukhi hu ..

Chal jhutha
ju sabse zyada khush ho rahe hoge ki chalo bala tali

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Update ~~ 16​

" tu kal tanu se nahi mili aur na hi tune kal raat tanu ko dekha hai " megha supriya ko bata rahi thi lekin supriya ki taarf se jawab na ane par usne piche dekha " supriya tu sun rahi hai na mene kya kaha? "

" h.a...n... " supriya ni nazre jhuki hui thi. Megha uska hath pakad kar use le jaa rahi thi. " tujhse koi puche to sirf nah kehna hai iske alawa tujhe kuch nahi malum " megha ne fir kaha " surpiya " palat kar usne supriya ki taraf dekha. " han... " supriya ne itna hi jawab diya. Dono sidiyan utarte hue niche ayi aur hostel ke bahar jane lagi. Bahar nikalte hi baarish ki halki bundein supriya ko apne uppar mehsus hui. Hawa mein thodi sardi thi aur asman mein kalle badan chaye hue the. Megha hostel se piche jane wali corridor ki taraf jane lagi. Supriya ni nazar abhi bhi jhuki hui thi vo sirf itna samajh rahi thi ki megha use kahin le ja rahi hai, kahan ye puchna uski soch mein hi nahi aya tha. Uske dimag mein bas ek hi baat hi ' tanu ka kal raat khoon ho gaya hai '

" supriya.. supriya.. " megha ne supriya ka kandha hila kar use hosh mein kiya aur supriya ne nazar utha kar uski taraf dekha. " bas chup rahio.. " supriya ko megha ne ek baar aur samjhaya aur uske aage se hath gayi. Supriya jahan khadi thi uske aage hostel ki sari ladkiyan khadi thi itna hi nahi wahan police ke kuch log maujud the aur unhone ek jagah se aage jane ka rasta band kar diya tha. Supriya ne nazar sabhi ladkiyun se hata kar police ko dekhte hue jab samne dekha to uske chehre ka fika pan hairani mein tabdeel ho gaya. Uski palkon ne jhapkna band kar diya. Samne kuch duri par jahan hostel ki jagah khatam hoti thi wahin par ek lohe ka gate laga hua tha jispar hamesha hi tala laga rehta tha kyun ki uske dusri taraf Lal Apartments the.

Jis gate par hamesha tala hota hai aaj wahan uske sath kuch aur bhi tha. Tanu ... jo us gate par tangi hui thi, uski ankh aur kaan se khoon nikal kar jam chuka tha lekin khaufnak baat uska wahan tanga hua nahi tha balki vo wajah thi jise uski maut hui thi. Tanu ka muh khula tha aur ek danda uske muh se bahar nikal raha tha. Supriya ki nazar tanu par aise jam gayi thi jaise vo ye drishye pehle dekh chuki hai. Ye sirf uska bhram tha kyun ki aisa usne dekha nahi tha balki usne aisa socha tha ' mera bas chalta na to isko hostel ke gate ke aage nanga karke tangti aur ek danda iske niche se dal kar muh se nikal deti ' vo bar-bar apni baat ko dhaurani lagi aur dhuarte hue usne fir tanu ko dekha aur ghabarahat ke mare uski sans ukhad jati kyun ki jaisa usne kaha tha tanu ki maut bilkul usi tarah hui thi. Dande ko uske niche se daal kar hi muh se nikala gaya tha.

" nahi.. nahi.. aisa nahi ho sakta... " supriya ki badbadane ki awaz kisi ne to nahi suni par megha ne sun li. Megha ko laga ki vo ghabra gayi hai aur kal ki raat ke bare mein na bol de ki koi sun le isliye vo chup karane ke liye uske karib ayi " supriya " megha ne bas itna hi kaha ki supriya use dekhte hue hi chillai.

" aisa nahi ho sakta... mene sirf socha tha tanu ke bare mein lekin vo aise hi jayegi .... aisa kaise ho sakta haiiiii " supriya itni zor se cheekhi ki jo do hawaldar tanu ke sharir ko gate se utarne ki kosish kar rahe the vo bhi ghabra kar piche hat gayi. Sabhi ladkiyun ki nazar to supriya par gayi hi lekin warden ke sath khade inspector ki nazar bhi supriya ki aaur khinchi chali ayi. " aisa kaise ho sakta hai tanu aise kaise mar sakti hai... aisa kaise ho sakta hai.... shit... " supriya ne apna sar pakad kar zor-zor se cheekhne ke baad sabki nigahein uski taraf akarshit kar di thi.

" mana kiya tha mene tujhe kuch bhi bolne se lekin tune meri ek nahi suni " megha corridor mein idhar udhar ghumte hue boli " bola tha mene ki kuch mat bolio bas chup rahio... lekin tu na jane kya-kya bak gayi wahan, bhavnao mein behene se jada hai apna ras baha leti... usme main bhi support karti tujhe lekin tere muh ko chain hi nahi hai.. kya jarurat thi kuch bhi bolne ki.. " megha ruki aur supriya ki taraf dekhte hue boli " ab kyun chup hai.. ab kyun nahi bol rahi ... " megha ka gussa badhta jaa raha tha. " bolegi ya dun ek raipta tere ko.. gussa dila rahi hai bevajah... kya bol rahi thi tu.. kya bol rahi thi.. vo.. " megha yaad karne ki kosish karne lagi " han... mene sirf socha tha lekin vo waise hi mar gayi... matlab seriously? tune un panchayat aurton ko bhi maat de di jinke pet ke andar bache ke sath baat bhi nahi pachti.. aur vo bhi chhodo tujhe kuch bhi bolne ki kya jarurat thi, tujhe mene kal ke liye mana kiya tha ye tu naya kab bana kar le ayi... " megha ne uske karib akar dhime se kaha lekin supriya tab bhi kuch nahi boli. Megha ek pal wahi khadi use ghurti rahi fir piche hat gayi. Use kuch samajh nahi aa raha, pichle do ghante se use warden ke room ke bahar baitha rakha tha aur andar police aur warden maujud the. Police pure hostel mein chakar lagate hue kai baar warden ke kamre ke andar-bahar kar chuke the. Sabhi ladkiyun ko mess mein rehne ka sakht adesh tha sirf ek ko chhod kar vo thi Supriya. Megha ko isliye rakha tha taki supriya par nazar bani rahi kyun ki Warden ke mutabik vo dari hui hai aur uski tabiyat kharab hai varna to police walle akela hi baithaye rakhte aur akele mein vo kya kar leti ye to megha ko bhi malum nahi tha. Vo soch rahi thi ki ab kya hone wala hai. Supriya kuch bata nahi rahi hai aur abhi tak kisi ne bhi andar se supriya ko bulaya nahi? Na jane kya baat chal rahi hogi. Megha ke dimag mein yahi chal raha tha.

" mene sach mein aisa socha tha megha... " supriya ki awaz sun megha apni soch se bahar ayi aur uski taraf dekhne lagi " mujhe tanu par bahut gussa aya tha. Vo meri hi tarah un ladkiyun ki bhi ragging le rahi thi isliye mene gusse mein bas muh se kaha ki.. " supriya ek pal chup hui " mera bas chalta to isko hostel ke gate par latka kar danda uski.... " supriya itna hi keh payi ki warden ke kamre ka darwaja khula.

" apko andar bulaya hai " constable ne kaha to supriya ko chup hokar apni jagah se khada hona pada. " kuch mat bolio " megha ne dabe lehaz mein surpiya ko samjhaya. Supriya ne ek pal use dekha aur fir warden ke kamre mein dakhil ho gayi. Andar ghuste hi constable ne darawaje ko band karke uspar kundi laga di. Supriya ne jaise hi andar kadam rakha uski ghabrahat bhagte ghode jitni tez ho chali thi. Kamre mein baithi warden aur inspector ke sath do constable wahan maujud the jisme se ek mahila constable thi. Inspector aur warden usi ko ek tak dekhe jaa rahe the jiski wajah se vo aur bhi jada ghabra rahi thi.

" supriya idhka akar baitho " warden ne apni samne rakhi kursi ki taraf baithne ka ishara kiya. Supriya sehmi hui wahan kursi par jaa baithi. Uske liye bahut mushkil ho raha tha ek taraf tanu ka latkta sharir aur dusri taraf use puche jane sawal jawab, vo dono hi chizon ko alag nahi kar paa rahi thi jis wajah se uska dimag confusion ke bhanvar mein fans chuka tha.

" supriya " , " supriya " warden ne dusri dafa thodi unchi awaz lagai to supriya hosh mein ayi.

" ji.. "

" inspector sahab kuch sawal puchna chahte hain to tumhe jo bhi malum ho use sach sach bata dena " warden ki baat par supriya ne hami bhar di aur bagal mein baithe inspector ki taraf apni nazar modh li.

" supriya, supriya khandelwal, Madhya Pradesh, Nagpur rehti ho. Mumy Urvashi Khandelwal jo Neurosurgen hai, papa Kapil Khandelwal jo Army mein hai, information correct hai? " inspector ne file pade hue kaha.

" ji.. "

" hmm to supriya main jo sawal karunga uska apko bilkul sach aur sahi jawab dena hai. Main nahi chahta ki aap kisi bhi tarah ka koi stress lein kyun ki stress lene ki jarurat gunah karne wale ko hoti hai, right? "

" yes sir.. " supriya ne sab kuch chhoda aur bas ek hi chiz yaad rakhi jo megha ne kahi thi, 'kuch nahi batana'

" Tanu ko kab se janti ho "

" college ke first day se sir "

" hmm, kaise? "

" vo mera college ka first day tha aur mene unse hostel ka rasta pucha tha usi samay se "

" yani vo aur apa dono dost the basharte vo apki senior thi right? "

" nahi sir, dost nahi the.. "

" to fir? "

" first day ko unhone meri ragging kari thi.. bas usi wajah se janti hun " ragging sunte hi inspector ek pal chup raha aur fir warden ko ghurne laga. Warden ek pal ke liye sakpaka gayi " supriya are you sure tanu ne tumhari ragging kari thi? " wardan turant boli.

" yes mam.. " supriya ne nazar nahi uthai.

" lekin tumne uske liye mujhse complain kyun nahi ki? "

" vo.. vo... " supriya ko samajh nahi aya ki vo kaise bataye ki agar usne bataya hota to tanu use us jagah par band kar deti jaise us din kiya tha aur ye bhi kaha tha ki kisi ko bataya to din ki jagah raat ko band karegi.

" batao kyun nahi ki complain " warden thodi unchi awaz mein bol padi. Usko laga ki kahin baat uspar na aa jaye isliye usne strict banna sahi samjha.

" Miss Shailja " inspector ke bolne par warden chup ho gayi. " dekho supriya, agar tumhare sath kuch aisa hua tha to tumhe college ko inform karna chahie tha. Par jo hua main uspar na sawal karte hue ab tumse fir wahi sawal karunga jiska jawab tumhe sambhal kar dena hai, Kya tum tanu ko janti thi? " Inspector ne jab dubara wahi sawal kiya to supriya kuch soch mein padh gayi. Jawab to dena tha lekin kya vo use soch samajh kar dena tha.

" nahi.. "

" hmm.. to kya tum mujhe ye bata sakti ho ki tumhara phone uske kamre mein kaise gaya? " inspector ne evidence wale pack ko supriya ki taraf utha kar dikhaya jise dekh supriya ki ankhein hairani mein badi ho gayi. Usne ye mobile tanu ke pas se liya tha use ye yaad tha lekin uske baad use kuch yaad nahi tha ki vo use kamre mein chhod kar ayi thi ya fir megha sahi keh rahi thi ki vo kabhi tanu ke kamre mein gayi nahi aur usi bathroom mein raat bhar rahi thi aur jo bhi use ab yaad aa raha hai vo sirf uska ek sapna tha hakikat nahi. Vo hakikat aur sapne ke bich mein fans rahi thi..

" supriya.. " inspector ke awaz lagane par use hosh aya.

" malum nahi sir, mera din se phone kahin gum ho gaya tha. Ho sakta hai tanu ko mila ho aur unhone apne pass rakh liya ho "

" to apne kisi ko bataya nahi ki aapka phone ghum hai? "

" bataya tha sir, meri room-mate ko.. aur meri mom ko bhi malum tha.. kyun ki mene sham ko mom se baat ki thi room-mate ke phone se "

" theek hai.. maan lete hain.. " inspector ne evidence wala pouch whain rakh dia " to supriya apki aur tanu ki akhri mulakat kab hui thi? " inspector ke is sawal ne supriya ko bechaini se bhar diya. Vo apne per ke anguthe se apni ungliyan nochne lagi.

" kal.. "

" kab? " inspector ke puchte hi vo fir soch mein padh gayi. Raat ki baat jaise ek dum tazi uske dimag mein ghum rahi thi, drugs, nasha.. sharab.. yahi sab.... par ek chiz jo use sata rahi thi vo sochne ke baad usne apna jawab diya.

" din mein.. jab main warden ko complain karke vapis room ki taraf jaa rahi thi tab " supriya ke jawab dete hi inspector ne nazar warden ki taraf ghuma di jaise warden se is baat par puchti lena chahte ho. Warden thodi soch mein dub gayi, yaad na rehne ki adat use kahin dubo na de vo wahi soch rahi thi par dimag mein zor dalte hi use yaad aa gaya.

" yes sir.. supriya kal ayi thi koi problem thi.. uski wajah se "

" kya main problem jaan sakta hun ? "

" vo room ke bathroom mein pani ki dikkat thi sir... " jawab supriya ne diya to warden ne chain ki sans li kyun ki use ye baat yaad nahi ayi thi ki vo kyun ayi thi. Vaise bhi kal sham ke program ke chakar mein use kuch yaad hi nahi tha.

" hmm.. yani tumhari uske baad koi mulakat nahi hui " supriya ne inspector ke kehne par nah mein sar hila diya " to fir tumne thodi der pehle bahar aisa kyun kaha ki tumne aisa nahi socha tha.. mujhe aur yaknin warden sahab ko bhi samajh nahi aya hoga... " inspector ne wo baat pakdi jiski wajah se vo wahan baithi thi.

" vo.. vo.. sir.. jis din se tanu ne meri ragging kari hai.. mujhe darwane sapne ate hai... to bas kal raat bhi ek sapna dekha tha.. aur fir subah vo tanu ko us halat mein dekh dar gayi thi.. kyun ki sapne mein .. mein.. main unki ragging le rahi thi isliye.. keh diya ki mene aisa nahi socha tha... " supriya ne nazar uppar uthai " i am sorry sir.. lekin vo sirf sapna tha ... mam main bahut dar gayi thi.. bahut jada " supriya ki ankhon se ansu nikalne lage. Usko achanak se jazbati aur rota dekh inspector ne pani ki bottle khol kar uski taraf bottle badha di.

" supriya relax.. humne tumhe yahan pareshan karne ke liye nahi bulaya hai.. hume laga ki tum hamari madad kar sakti ho tanu ke khoon ko lekar isliye bulaya tha. Par ab mujhe nahi lagta ki mujhe tumhari jarurat hai, isliye tum jaa sakti ho.. " inspector se pani lekar do ghunt pikar usne bottle wahin rakh di.

" madam mein jaun " supriya ne warden se pucha aur warden ne inspector ki taraf dekha aur ishara patte hi warden ne supriya ko jane ke liye keh diya.

" thank you mam, sir... " supriya ne apne ansu saaf kiye aur wahan se chal di. Uski sans abhi bhi bahut tez chal rahi thi ki abhi use rok kar koi sawal kar liya jayega par aisa nahi hua aur jatte-jatte wahan hui thodi bahut baat-cheet ko sun liya.

" to apko kya lagta hai sir, tanu ko kisne mara hoga "

" keh nahi sakte abhi.. ek team uske room ki talashi le rahi hai unhe abhi tak kuch mila nahi hai aur dusri team college se mili information ke mutabik un ladkiyun se puch-tach kar rahi hai jo uske close thi. Kuch milega to hum apko jaldi hi batayenge "

" lekin sir koi itni behrami se aisa bhi kar sakta hai, mera matlab hai kya sach mein kisi ne tanu ke piche se danda daal kar muh se nikala hai..... " warden ke is akhri sawal par inspector ne kya jawab diya supriya sun nahi payi kyun ki vo jab tak bahar nikal chuki thi. Bahar nikalte hi megha ne uska hath pakda aur chup-chap use wahan se le jane lagi jab tak vo dono sabse dur nahi ho gayi.

" kya hua... kya pucha... tune kuch bataya to nahi.. kal raat wali baat to nahi batai na? " megha ne chutte hi apni jigasya dikhai.

" unhe tanu ke kamre se kuch nahi mila " supriya ne jawab kuch aur hi diya.

" kya matlab? "

" kal raat megha.. kal raat unke kamre mein maujud drugs... sharab nasheli chizen kuch nahi mili.. "

" tu abhi tak us baat mein atki hai. Mene kaha na tu bathroom mein thi tu.. " supriya ne megha ko bich mein rokte hue apni baat kahi.

" main bathroom gayi thi megha vo sach hai.. lekin tujhe agar yakeen nahi hai ki main sach keh rahi hun to third year wali kalyani mess mein nahi milegi... " supriya ne itne confdence se kaha ki megha ne iske baad kuch nahi kaha. Usne supriya ka hath pakda aur dono mess ki taraf badh gayi. Mess mein pehle se hi sari hostel ki ladkiyan jama thi aaj kisi ko bhi college jane ki anumati nahi thi aur na hi college se hostel mein ani ki anumati thi. Mess mein ek shor tha jo supriya ke atte hi band ho gaya. Sabhi ladkiyan usi ko dekhne lagi jaise use kuch kehna chahti ho lekin koi kuch nahi bola. Sabhi ko dekhte hue megha ke sath vo ek kone mein jaa baithi aur ek baar fir mess mein ladkiyun ke khus-fusane ka shor gunjne laga.

सुप्रिया खंडेलवाल मध्यप्रदेश की है या महाराष्ट्र की ? नागपुर तो महाराष्ट्र में है न !
सुप्रिया के साथ तन्नु ने शायद बड़ी ही बेरहमी से रैगिंग की थी । पर एक्चुअल में किस तरह का रैगिंग हुआ था , पता नहीं । पर हुआ तो बेरहमी से ही तभी तो उसकी मौत के लिए बड़ी खतरनाक खतरनाक चीजें सोचती थी ।

खैर जो भी हो पर क़ातिल ने बड़ी ही दरिंदगी दिखाई है तन्नु को मारने में । ऐसी दरिंदगी कोई साइको ही दिखा सकता है । और वो कोई मर्द ही होगा क्योंकि जिस तरह से तन्नु को मारा गया है वह किसी लड़की के वश का नहीं है ।

लेकिन मुझे अभी भी मेधा का कैरेक्टर संदेहास्पद लगता है । वो वैसी नहीं है जैसा कि दिखाई दे रहा है ।

बेहतरीन अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

 

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