Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[MAYA Pari]

Corona aur hamara late luck, waiting for Friday dear

 

[nain11ster]

Ye sab sajis hai hariya kaka ki.... Jaisa ki apna ek mitr kahte Mr. BERLIN kahte hain...

Ghode ko mil na rahi ghas aur gadhe kha rahe chavanprash ... Bus hariya kaka wahi karne par utaru hain

MAYA Pari ji mere iss post par aapke aankh me dil kahe utar aaya... Tanik bata dijiye to iss type wale post jyada kar dun main... Taki aapke aankon ka dil mujhe dekhne milta rahe

 

[nain11ster]

Corona aur hamara late luck, waiting for Friday dear

Koi nahi der se hi sahi aayi to

 

[harshit1890]

I am Back...

 

[nain11ster]

I am Back...

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[harshit1890]

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" mujhe abhi tak ek baat samajh nahi aa rahi ki pani jana ruka kaise ? " kamre mein andar atte hue vo boli. Main apna pet pakad kar palang par jaa baithi. Aisa khana kha kar pet ko jo santushti mil rahi thi bas kisi tarah pacha raha tha vo khana. Samajh nahi ata khane mein kaun si anmol chiz dalte hain jo pehle galle se nahi utarti aur fir pet mein nahi pachti.

" yahan khane ke baad samajh nahi aa raha main apne lattu ke sath kaise baat karungi tujhe abhi bhi pani ki padi hai.. petiyachod... "

" hain..? "

" bittiyaachodd... " mene aaruhi ki taraf chillate hue kaha.

" bhadak kyun rahi hai... main to bas isliye puch rahi thi ki achanak se kaise.. "

" achanak se kuch nahi hota itna jhadegi to yahi hoga " pet se dhayan hatate hue mene phone uthaya. Vishal ka message aya hua tha. " what are you doing? "

" jung ladh kar ayi abhi abhi " mene reply kiya jisko usne turant seen kiya. Yahi to chahie tha mujhe, jhat se mere message dekhne wala.

" matlab? kya hua "

" mess ka khana " mene message send kiya aur dusra likhne lagi " pet ke liye to jung ladne ke barabar hi hai na "

" hahaha.. right.. boys mess is the same. We generally skip " uska message padh rahi thi ki aaurhi ki awaz par dhayan gaya.

" tune abhi tak sahi se jawab nahi diya " aaurhi ki taraf dekha to vo apna top utar kar khadi thi. Purple color ki bra mein uska gora chita sharir, meri nazar uski chatiyun par thi.

" size kya hai tera " mene pucha.

" size? " usne almari se apna night suit wala dheela top nikala aur meri taraf dekhne lagi. Agle pal use samajh aya ki main kiski baat kar rahi hun to usne apna top pehen liya " teri nazar badi gand hai "

" size hi to puch rahi hun... aur main ek ladki hun, ek ladki ka to dekh sakti hun "

" kisne kaha " usne apni jeans utarni shuru ki aur ab meri ankhein fir uski masal jhangein aur side shape ke ubaron par atakne lagi jise vo bhanp gayi aur usne turant mujhe nazar hatane ko kaha lekin mene nahi hatai to chadar mere chehre par fenk di. Mene use turant hata dia, meri besharmi se pareshan hokar usne dant piss liye aur fir mere samne hi jeans badli. Vaise to hu ladkiyan matching hi pehnti hai bra aur penty, par aaruhi ki undi black thi.

" purple black ka combo... han.. " pajama dalte hue jab vo mere bagal wale bistar par baithi to mene use cheda.

" bitch... "

" try me.. "

" what? "

" how bitch can lick "

" eww.... "

" us din subah to bada chadh rahi thi mere sharir par "

" tu vo chhod, aur ye bata ki jhadne wali kya baat ka kya bol rahi thi mujhe "

" tere baal... kitne jhadte hai.. nahate time bhi jhadte the jab bhi main sham ko ati thi to tere baal hi pade hote the usi se andaza lagaya, baal hi fans gaye honge.. par ek baat bata baal sirf uppar ke the ya niche ke bhi "

" tu khud nali main hath daal kar pata laga le. Khali bakwas karwa lo bas sara time "

" hehehehehe main to bakwas karti hun par to tu kand karti hai "

" maine kaun se kaand kiye hai? "

" so-so kar kand hi to karti hai tu sapno mein "

" main koi sapne nahi dekhti "

" acha beta, to itna kyun soti hai ye bata? "

" thak jati hun.. isliye... aur kyun sote hain log "

" are tujhe kya malum.. sone ke liye log tadapte hai... hum to khud sona chahte hain bas koi sath so jaye " mujhe vishal ki yaad ayi uska message aya hua tha. " all well? "

" yes.. "

" cool "

" what are you doing? " uska message aya.

" tere dant kyun fatt rahe hai " aaurhi ne mujhse pucha.

" ladkon ka soch kar "

" matlab? "

" ye ladke ladkiyun ke aage piche hone ke liye, unki lene ke liye kitna decent bante hain. Jahan lund jhadna chahie wahan angrezi jhadte hai LOL "

" tujhe ladkon ke alawa kuch aur nahi sujta kya? "

" ladke ki to dunia hai pagal... vo na ho to hume kya sukh "

" sab sukh hai.. "

" tum girls school mein padhi ho tumhe kya malum kaise ek ladka apni nazar se hi ladki ko uppar se lekar niche tak chod deta hai.. ye kala hai unke pas.. ladkiyun ke pas kya hai.. sirf ek hi kala hai "

" acha vo kya? "

" aaahhhh-uhhhh ohhh yesss baby.. fuckkkk me.... aaaahhhhhhh.. " mene usi andaz mein bataya jaise mere andar vishal ne de diya ho. Meri shakal dekh aaruhi hans padi. Bas yahi to chahie tha, uski hansi ke liye to mene mahol badla tha. Mene apna phone dekha to vishal ne apni photo bheji hui thi. Apne room partner ke sath uske kuch ek aad dost bhi the. Par meri nazar usi par thi, banda sahi tha, body thodi bahut bana rakhi thi ek alag look tha uska. Ek shaped beard aur usi ndaz mein hair cutting, baki sab to salle chikne chut jaise the. Usko dekh kar hi mere sharir ke andar bas dhaka-dhak ki akansha jaggi hui thi. Mene smily bhej diya ankh mein dil, jisko mujhe nahi bhejna tha baad mein realize hua.

" thanks " uska fauran message aya.

" for daru " mene uske armano par danda de diya. Usne confuse wala smily bheja aur itne mein aaurhi ki baton par dhayan chala gaya.

" aaj tune mujhe bacha liya uske liye thanks "

" chal pagli yahan par hum family picture thodi banane aye hai "

" to fir kyun aye ? "

" family badhane aye hai "

" teri suin wahin atkti hai "

" heheheheh ahaa suin to leni hoti hai kyun ki "

" tu aur teri batein.. mujhe kabhi kabhi samajh nahi ata ki tu itni bechain hai to tune kabhi kara kyun nahi "

" maa ki wajah se.. meri maa principal thi college ki.. ek number ki chaukidar thi ... har samay chipki rehti.. phone tak nahi tha school mein.. koi ladke se baat karo to unko pehle pata ho jata tha. Isliye mene ek chiz thani.. padai karo aur sab kuch sikho fir jaise hi mauka mile pel do.. jo bhi sikha ho apply kar do.. like in physics.. apply and get desired result.. Isliye 12vi mein mehnat ki aur ghar se dur ka college dhunda aur tab nazar mein apna college aya aur aa gayi nagpur .. ab yahan mein apne methods apply karungi.. aur meri physics mein ab sirf physical hoga.. no theory.. tu bata.. teri mom keh rahi thi unhone tujhe mana kiya aisa kyun? " mene jawab dete hue ant mein use sawal kar dala.

" mom nahi chahti thi ki mein hostel mein jaun "

" wahi to kyun? " mujhe logon ki kahani janne mein bada interest tha aur vaise bhi apne bed partner ka itihas to janna hi chahie. Mene phone side mein rakha aur aaruhi ko dhayan se sunne lagi.

" Ab unke bahut reasons the.. pehla ki main akele kaise rahungi? dusra vo khud hostel mein rahi hai to unke mutabik hostel mein rehna bada hi mushkil hai, na to khana acha hota aur na hi rehne ka tarika, hygine and all.. doctor hai na.. isliye unko uski jada chinta rehti hai. Uske alawa unka ye manna tha ki hostel mein ladkiyan bigad jati hai.. "

" bigadna as in sense matlab.. thukai.. "

" tere dimag mein thukai hi ati hai sirf, thukai hi karni hai to kahin aur ja yahan kyun mar rahi hai.. mera matlab tha cocktails... drugs and all.. fir ladko ke chakar to rehte hi hai "

" han matlab thukai included tha na.. wahi kahun ki wo kaise reh gaya.. meri maa ko to sabse jada chinta isi baat ki thi ki main khuli sand ho jaungi lekin koi aur chara nahi tha, mere number itne ache aye aur yahan admission lena kaun nahi chahta, Nagpur ka sabse best college tha ye.. isliye majburan unhone ane diya "

" mujhe to vo ane nahi dena chahti thi isliye to unhone aisa kaha tha mujhse... main bhi maan baithi thi lekin meri padosi.. Kalpana didi.. unki baat cheet ke baad samajh aya ki hostel ki life mein azadi hai jiski mujhe jarurat thi.. school mein mili nahi.. papa army mein hai isliye ek rule follow karna padta tha hamesha se.. isliye jab kalpana didi ne bataya to samajh aya ki mom ne sirf mujhse vo sab jaan kar kaha tha. Sirf padai hi ek rasta tha jiske baad mujhe yahan admission mila aur unhe mujhe akela chhodna hi pada par vo abhi tak pg/flat karti rahi taki hostel mein na rahun lekin mera man nahi hai kahin aur jane ka.. "

" teri kahani bhi yahan ane ki kuch kuch mere jaisi hi hai, padai important role tha aur abhi bhi rakhna hai warna wapis bula lengi "

" hammm "

" samajh rahi hai main kya keh rahi hun? " aaruhi kahin khoi hui thi. " aaurhi... aaruhi.. " kuch do-char awaz lagane par vo soch se bahar ayi.

" han "

" meri baat ka matlab hai ki tujhe uske liye class ana padega.. pichle ek hafte se jada ho gaya tune class nahi li jada "

" hamm "

" ye kya bhuji hui aurton ki tarah chut latka rakhi hai.. jawan kali hai tu vo bhi khuli hui nahi hai.. dono sath mein khulenge.. .. "

" ye ladki ... isko itna nahi samajh ata ki ladkon ko sirf dene ki kyun lagi rehti hai... vo ladke hote hain ladke.. unhe bas ek baar dhila karna hota hai uske baad khel khatam.. ab dubara khada karne ke liye dusri ladki chahie, tu itna kyun nahi samjhti " aaruhi ne pura pressure dekar mujhe samjhaya.

" wah.. kya gyan diya hai.. dil jeet liya mera.. le sina chusegi mera.. " mene ghutno ke bal baithte hue apna sina aage ki taraf karte hue baith gayi.

" haramazadi hai tu ek number ki.. " usne meri taraf apna takiya fenka jisko mene single handedly catch kiya aur use piche deewar se laga kar baith gayi.

" tum girls school mein padne walo ko kya yahi sikhaya jata hai ki ladkon se nafrat karo? hain..? kahin tumhe allegdely ladkiyun ke sath to sambhand banane ke liye diya jata... ko bistar par lait kar same wahi chiz karti hai par bechari andar kuch nahi le pati LOL " mujhe kehte hue khud se hi hansi aa rahi thi lekin main kisi tarah use rok kar apni baat kehna cha rahi thi " Tumhare school mein lesbian koi subject to nahi hota tha.. haa...haa bata bata " aaurhi kuch nahi boli... " kahin tu lesbian to nahi.. isliye tujhe lawdo se itni chid hai.. i mean laundon se... bata bata " mene aaurhi se sawal kiya to usne apni nazar mujh se hata li. Mujhe use chedne mein maza aa raha tha isliye mene usko chedna zari rakha " mujhe to tujh par doubt hai.. "

" acha vo kaise ? " aaruhi mobile use karte hue boli.

" teri usi saheli ki wajah se.... kya naam tha.. vimi... nahi nahi.. nimi.. han.. nimi.. uske sath tera tanka tha " mene jaise hi kaha aaruhi ne apni nazre uppar uthai aur mujhe aise dekha jaise mene koi galti kar di ho.

" mujhe us baat ke bare mein koi baat nahi karni.. please .... "

" acha chal theek hai.. ab tu apni gf ki baat share nahi karna chahti vo teri marzi... par kabhi mauka lage to bataio jarur ki tum dono ke bich physical activity kya hoti hai.. warna porn mein to vo log toys ka use karte hai... aur tu manegi nahi.. bilkul lawde jaisa toy hota hai... aur use ek dusre ke chaka-chak andar bahar.. andar bahar.. aur han uske alawa vo vibrator bhi hota hai, matlab sala jhunjha jata hoga.. behenchod, garmi badha di is baat ne to.... vishal se sab karana padega... hamare desh mein to ye chiz milegi hi nahi to tu apni gf ke sath kaise ..... palang todti hai.. oooo sorry tum log to palang todhi nahi sakti.. ek dusre ke uppar kudne ke liye kuch hoga kahan LOL " mane hanste hue aaruhi ko chedne ki puri kosish ki par usne kuch react hi nahi diya. Abhi mujhe nind nahi aa rahi thi aur aaruhi ki boriyat dekh mene phone uthaya aur vishal ke message aya 'what are you doing?' jo usne pehle bhi kiya tha.

" need vibration, bada dhila sa feel ho raha hai " mene message kiya jo turant seen hua aur vo kuch pal likhta aur fir hata deta. Mujhe man hi man uski confusion dekh acha lag raha tha. Akhir mein usne sirf chota sa reply diya.

" ? " reply dekh samajh aya ye dhilla hai ek dum. Mene phone se nazar hatai aur aaruhi ki taraf dekha jo sone ki tayari kar rahi thi.

" badi jaldi hai sapne dekhne ki.... aaj hi raat sab kar dalegi kya... "

" tune hi kaha tha class leni hai varna vapis jana padega uske liye time se sona padega.. "

" han class to leni hai... vaise tu janti hai ki freshers party hone wali hai.. "

" acha to fir? "

" to fir kya.. announcement ke liye ayi thi kal class mein Lavanya aur uski sakhiyan "

" lavanya " aaruhi sote hue ruk kar meri taraf dekhne lagi aur ek pal ke liye dekhti rahi. Main bhi uske chehre ke hav bhav padne ki kosish karne lagi. " tu participate kis chiz ke liye karegi, naam likhwana hoga lavanya ke pas jakar " mene jab aage kaha to vo aise bhauklai jo vo shuru din se hi baukhla rahi thi.

" nahi... mujhe koi shauk nahi hai freshers party mein... naam nahi likhwana " vo sone lagi.

" likhwana padega... lavanya ne har ladki ke liye bola hai.. mandate hai " mere itna kehte hi vo uth baithi aur meri taraf ghurte hue dekhne laga.

" sach? "

" han... bol kar to aise hi gayi hai.. likhwa denge.. naam hi to hai.. aur tu to itni khubsurat hai ki Miss Fresher to tu hi banegi... " aaruhi kuch nahi boli, vo kisi baat se dari hui thi. " aaruhi tu itna kyun sochti hai maza ayega... sab hume dekhnge.. naam hoga.. famous ho jayegi tu.. hume kuch karna thodi hai... bas lavanya ke pas jakar naam likhwana hai aur kuch din uske pas jana padega.. ramp walk ke liye prepare karegi.. aur jo bhi iske alawa program honge.. jaise hi interview round.. etc etc....jo bhi chutiapa hota hai us din uske liye hume preparation karni hai "

" uske pas jana padega... nahi... mujhe uske pas nahi jana... shruti... main.. ghar chali jaungi.. nahi lungi class " vo kafi dari hui thi.

" tu to aaruhi bache jaisa karti hai.. itna kyun darti hai tu use.. vo koi chudail thodi hai.. ragging hi to kari thi ... vo to har kisi ki hoti hai.. jab ho tab tak yaad rakho aur baad mein susu ki dhar mein baha do, chill kuch nahi hoga "

" ragging nahi thi vo shruti.. ragging nahi thi.. vo.. vo... us khandar mein jo mere sath hua vo ragging nahi tha " bingo... aaruhi ke muh se jo niklwana chah rahi thi main usme kamyab ho gayi thi. Main to tabse use ye chahti thi lekin mauka nahi lag paa raha tha. Aaruhi lavanya se kyun darti hai aur us din lavanya ne kyun kaha tha 'chut ragdti hai' kya rishta tha dono ke bich jo mujhe nahi pata tha. Mujhe, mujhe kaise nahi pata tha jisne sab kuch jaan rakha tha....

" khandar.. kaisa khandar .... " mene jaise hi aaruhi se pucha to vo ek dum se shant ho gayi. Dar ek hi pal mein gayab ho gaya, usne mujhse kuch nahi kaha aur fir bistar par laitte hi so gayi.

" behenchod... mazak ho gaya ye to... sari mehnat par isne raiyta kar diya... " mene ek pal phone dekha, " ? " ke baad ek message aur tha " didn't get you " uska message dekh chid gayi main. " ab samajh aya ki ye mechinical walle sirf hath se hi kyun ragadte reh jate hain kyun ki inka dimag wahin khada hota hai aur baithta hai... useless.. lawdee... " mene gusse mein apni ankhein band ki aur malum hi nahi chala kab nind aa gayi.

 

[Naina]

actually shruti ek jariya hai jiski wajah se hume wo ankahin baatein aur ghatanaye pata chale jo aaruhi ki life mein ghat chuki hai...wo gehre raaz jinke upor se parda hatne wale hai dhire dhire... chaahe school life ho ya hostel life mein... lavanya ne kuch to aisa kiya hai jiske chalte aaruhi had zyada khaufzyada ho jaati hai lavanya ke baare mein sunte hi.... aisi kya baat ho gayi jo darne ki ek wajah ban baithi lavanya, aaruhi ke liye...
well.. ek baat ye bhi sach hai ki Shruti absolutely, positively, 101% whore hai... aur is baat pe koi doubt nahi...
Khair......
Let's see what happens next
kya kand hota hai jab aaruhi naam likhne lavanya ke paas jayegi? Kya wo torture karne wali hai uske upor? Ya lesbian sex karne ke liye majboor karegi?
ya phir khud ki maze ke liye koi aisa kand kar de aaruhi sang ki aaruhi jindagi bhar bhool na paaye?
aur fresher party mein kya kand hone wala hai?
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab

 

[MAYA Pari]

Ab ye khandahar ki mystery batane me bhi harshit bhai 2-3 episode le lenge

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update .ye shruti ka dimag bahut tezz hai aisa lagta hai ..har baar yahi kehti hai ki me jo karna chahti thi wo ho raha hai ..
pehle aruhi ka darr dur karne ki baat ho ya khandar wali baat ..
baaki sab mast tha ,har baar koi na koi baat sex ko lekar kehti hai shruti ..
aur ye sab agar wo waha suna rahi hai to sabka kya reaction hoga ..

shruti ka puchhna ki niche ke baal bhi jhadte hai ya size puchhna maja aa gaya ..

par ye aruhi ke darr ki wajah kya hai jo khandar se judi hai aur chut masalne se ..

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

यदि कहानी को सिंपल नजरिए से सोचा जाए तो यही लगता है कि इस कहानी की नायिकाएं दोहरी व्यक्तित्व से ग्रसित हैं । एक - जिसमें नायिका सिम्पल , मासूम , थोड़ी डरी डरी सहमी सी और दुसरी - मानसिक रोग से त्रस्त , वहशी और हत्यारिन ।

नायिका का पहले दिन ही सिनियर द्वारा अश्लील और फुहड़ता भरा रैगिंग फिर बाद में नायिका का सिनियर से डरा डरा रहना , उससे नफरत करना । और अंत में उसकी हत्या कर देना । हत्या भी वैसी जैसी ख्वाहिशें पाले बैठी हो ।

इस कहानी के दुसरे अध्याय को अगर इस कहानी के प्रथम अध्याय की पुनरावृत्ति मान कर चलें तो लावन्या की हत्या होने वाली है और इसी के साथ साथ श्रुति की भी ।

पर ये समझ नहीं आता कि इन सबों से नायिका के बाल झड़ने से क्या तात्पर्य निकलने वाला है ?

जो गरजते हैं वो बरसते नहीं । श्रुति का कैरेक्टर भले ही बिंदास और चंचलता से भरा हुआ हो , पर वो वैसी नहीं है जैसा हम देख पढ़ रहे हैं । लड़कियां आपस में ऐसे ही बातें करती हैं । पर दुःख बहुत होगा जब इसकी भी हत्या हो जायेगी या हत्या की कोशिश की जायेगी ।
लेस्बियन - लड़कियों के लेस्बियन होने में लड़कियों को कितना आनंद आता है , पता नहीं , पर उन्हें लेस्बियन होते देख लड़कों को बहुत मजा आता होगा ।

बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।