Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

पहला भाग बीच की घटनाओं के उपर था जबकि दूसरा कहानी का प्रथम चरण था । कुछ घटनाएं सच में घटित हुई थी पर कुछ आरूहि की तो कुछ श्रुति की इमेजिनेशन थी ।

लावन्या उर्फ तन्नु की हत्या सच में हुई थी पर क्यों ? जिस तरीके से उसकी हत्या हुई थी वो किसी भी लड़की के वश का नहीं था । और यदि किसी लड़की ने ही किया है तो जरूर उसे बेहोशी की हालत में किया होगा ।

आरूहि मुझे शुरू से ही मिस्टीरियस किरदार लगी। आरूहि लेस्बियन है या उसके साथ लेस्बियन रिश्ते बनाने की जबरन कोशिश की गई है। उसकी पहली पार्टनर उसके बचपन की फ्रैंड रविना थी । दुसरे पर शक लावन्या उर्फ तन्नु पर जाता है । उसके पहले विजिट के दौरान लावन्या ने उसका शारीरिक शोषण किया था ऐसा प्रतीत होता है । हो सकता है रविना ने भी कुछ दबाव दिया होगा उसके साथ लेस्बियन रिश्ते बनाने के लिए ।
और दोनों लड़कियां मर चुकी है । कहीं इन दोनों की हत्या आरूहि ने तो नहीं की ?

तीसरी लड़की श्रुति है जिसके साथ लेस्बियन सम्बन्ध होने की आशा दिखाई पड़ रही है । और पहले भाग के अनुसार मेधा के कतल की कोशिश भी हो चुकी है । इसका मतलब इस बार मरने की बारी श्रुति की है । क्या श्रुति का भी वही अंजाम होगा जो रविना और लावन्या का हुआ था ?
कुछ तो है आरूहि और लेस्बियन के बीच में ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड सेंसेशनल अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

 

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Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
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Library jo ki abhi hi khuli thi aur uske ek hisse mein safai chal rahi thi wahin kone mein baithe charon kafi vichar mein khoye hue the. " to fir ab kahan hai vo? " manpreet ne khamoshi todte hue pucha.

" so rahi hai "

" fir se? "

" she is not well.. tezz bukhar tha to dawai dekar sula diya use " shruti ne jawab dia.

" it's not normal... itna sona jitna ki tumne bataya abhi.. "

" tabhi tumhe bulaya hai .. fever ki to dawai de di.. lekin aaruhi ke sath jo ho raha hai.. ya vo kar rahi hai.. uske piche kya ho sakta hai "

" well.. mujhe lagta hai ki .. " manpreet itna hi bol payi.

" she is possesed ... " gaggan bich mein bol pada. Uski nazar manpreet par jami hui thi.. subah subah medical coat na pehnne ki wajah se jo top manpreet ne pehna tha uska cleavage dikh raha tha aur gaggan ki nazar uske sine se hote hue cleavage par hi tiki thi par kisi ne is taraf dhayan nahi diya balki sabhi ka dhayan uski baton par chala gaya tha.

" gaggan, ye mazak ka time nahi hai.. tu " vishal bola par bich mein rok diya gaya.

" tum sab abhi bhi itne bevakuf kaise ho sakte ho.. she is possesed, tumne kabhi filmon mein nahi dekha? jada nind ana.. bukhar ana.. ajeeb behave karna.. ye sab possesion ki starting hoti hai "

" filmo mein to vo ajeebo garib tarah ki acting bhi karwate hai.. billi khilwa dete hai.. tu samjhdari ki baat nahi kar raha " vishal ne use jawab diya.

" vo to sab chutiapa hota hai.. tum logon ko possession ka matlab hi nahi pata yani ki.. Emily rose dekhi hai ? " gaggan ne bari-bari sabhi ki taraf nazar daudai.

" fuck .. ye fir movies par aa gaya.. " kuch pal ki shanti ke baad manpreet boli " tum kabhi real zindagi mein lautoge ya fir fantasies mein khoye rahoge? such a dumb talk yaar.. be practical.. smart phone ka time aa gaya hai aur tum abhi bhi keypad mobile ki batein karte ho... ignore him.. please.. " manpreet ne gaggan ki khilli udate hue kaha aur ek pal sabhi chup. Shruti janti thi ki gaggan manpreet ki lena chahta hai vo bhi dil se.. vishal bhi janta tha aur agar wahi same ladki us ladke ki is kadar bezati kar de jiski vo lena chahta ho to sabse jada wahin kalpan paida hoti hai. Gaggan ke sath bhi aisa hi hua, vo apni jagah se utha aur chala gaya.

" abe ruk ja... kahan jaa raha hai " vishal ne rokne ki kosish ki lekin vo nahi ruka.

" jane de.. vaise bhi kaam ki baat nahi kar raha tha.. emily rose.. chutiya hai yar ye.. kaise dost bana rakha hai tune "

" room partner hai mera.. aur room partner dost se uppar hote hai.. tum nahi samjhogi.. tumhara koi hai nahi na.. " vishal ne indirectly par direct pathar mara kyun ki use malum tha manpreet ke sath koi nai tikta already do student room khali kara chuke hai.. jisme se ek ladki ne to hostel hi chhod diya, ab college se jude apartment mein kisi flat mein rehti hai rent par. Manpreet chidi lekin kuch bol pati use pehle shruti ne baat hi badal di.

" sahi kaha tune.. gaggan ke logics alag hai yaar.. main khud nahi manti ye sab.. mujhe lag raha hai ki vo yahan ke enviornment mein adjust nahi ho paa rahi hai.. "

" mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi lag raha hai.. even aisa lag raha hai jaise koi baat hai.. tune bataya tha ki usko raat mein koi preshan karta hai phone karke? " manpreet ne shruti ki baat ka response kiya.

" han.. mujhe usne kuch aisa hi bataya ki pata nahi kaun hai jo use raat ko phone karta hai... "

" to tujhe kya lagta hai ? "

" mujhe yahi lagta hai ki ladki hai apni aaurhi.. uppar se sunday hot sexy bhi.. " bolte hue shruti ne vishal ki taraf dekha, uske expression janne ki kosish kar rahi thi shayad fir nazre fira kar boli " kisi ne bhi number le liya hoga.. koi teacher bhi ho sakta hai.. yahan to ek se ek tharki teacher bhare hue hai "

" teacher se yaad aya.. tujhe malum hai.. freshers walle din.. Dr. bhalla hai na.. apne professor... vo staff room mein ... Malika mam ke desk par unki photo utha kar swayam ko handjob de rahe the.. " manpreet ne hansi roki aur fir boli " abe muth mar rahe the.. " bol kar vo hasne lagi.

" tune dekha? "

" nahi nahi.. khabar faili hai aisi.. us din ki to bahut news hai.. sab professor aise talli ho gaye the.. aur uppar se hostel ka warden bhi.. ladkiyun ne apne apne boyfirend bula kar unhe di hai.. main hi chutiya tum logon ke sath us mansion... aaanhhhh.... " manpreet bolte hue ek dum se ghabaraht mein cheekh di. Shruti aur vishal bhi chaunke, wajah thi gaggan ka yun kitab ko table par patakna ek sath 5-6 kitab table par bikhar gayi. Awaz itni tez thi ki safai karamchari bhi us taraf se chillaya " aram se... vidhya hai vo... tum aaj kal ke bachon ko kadar hi nahi hai.. "

" sorry.. " gaggan piche mud kar bola aur fir manpreet ko dekhte hue " sorry " aur wapis apni jagah par aa baitha. Manpreet abhi tak use gusse bhari nazron se dekh rahi thi. Jitna hate vo use karti thi shayad hi kisi ladke se pure college mein karti hogi. Wajah hai iske piche bhi.. ek din .. jab manpreet aur kim ke jhagde se pehle ki baat hai.. gaggan us din full confidence mein gaya tha manpreet ko bolne ki vo uske liye apna lund fenk de itna jada pyar karta hai. Manpreet us waqt apne friends ke sath corridor mein khadi thi jab gaggan ne use date ke liye pucha, manpreet ne na hi sirf use mana kiya pure corridor mein uski izat ki dhajiyan udate hue bezati ki vo alag aur usne ye tak keh diya tha ki ' main kisi chutiye ko apna boy friend bana lungi par tere jaise ke sath date par jane se pehle main sukhi mar jana pasand karungi... ' gaggan ne us baat ko bahut seriously liya lekin tehri desi mechinal launda, jo ek baar dil mein aa gaya uski to har bezati bhi itr ki khusbhu jaisi lagne lagti hai isliye usne uske baad bhi haar nahi pehni aur apne aap ko tassali dene laga ' chutiya jada din nahi hota.. jiske pass sacha lund hota hai .. wahi ladki ke dil par raaz karta hai.. '

" books? tu books lene gaya tha aur ye kaisi adh-nangi chitr wali books hai.. " shruti ne book ka cover dekhte hue kaha.

" ye cover isliye adh-nanga hai kyun ki iski batein utni hi khuli hui hai.. tumhe isme milega ki possession actually mein hota kya hai.. not vo jo tum movies se compare kar rahe ho " gaggan ne ek book apni taraf li aur uske panne palate hue bola.

" no common yar... gaggan.. please just stop... shruti ise yahan se jane ko keh de warna main jau? jab mera kaam nahi to main yahan uske liye kya kar rahi hun "

" pehli baat vo uske uske na kar.. she has a name aaruhi... "

" i mean.. aaruhi hi.. ab vo supriya hai ya aaruhi.. abhi tak ye clear nahi hai na.. vaise dusri baat kya hai? "

" dusri baat.. ek baar ise bhi mauka de bolne ka.. "

" han yar.. let him say... hum medical ke khilaf nahi hai.. par kya pata ise kuch idea mil jaye " jab vishal ne bhi sath dia to manpreet kuch nahi bol payi. Gaggan ko jo page kholna tha.. use khol kar usne samne rakh diya... language hindi ke sath kisi aur bhasha mein bhi likhi thi.. iske sath ek chitr bana tha jo bahut vichatr tha.. samajh nahi aa raha tha vo kaun hai..

" picture to samajh hi nahi aa rahi hai "

" han.. nahi ayegi.. kyun ki yahi demon hota hai.. which has no actual. structure.. just presence " gaggan bola.

" to tu kehna chahta hai ki ye aaruhi ke andar hai? " manpreet ko bas hansi aane wali thi.

" no.. lekin ye deamon yahi karte hai.. vo apke sharir se jude nahi rehte lekin still apko dhire dhire kha jate hai.. aur aaruhi ko wahi symptoms hai... padho isme... dekho.. " gaggan ne ungli rakh kar wahan se padna shuru kiya jahan par usne ungli rakhi thi sabhi ki nazrein us taraf mudh gayi.

" ek vyatha yani ki person.. kisi bhi karanwash.. reason... kisi prakar se kali ratri ke samay.. prajati kalmaksh ke antargat pravesh karta hai.. yani... black night ko koi bhi insan kisi bhi reason se demon Kalmaksh ke jaisi prajati ke " itna keh kar gaggan apni ek hath ki ungliyu ko dusre hath ki ungliyu se milane laga, sabh uske is action ko dekh rahe the.. jiska matlab ladki se lekar ladke tak jante hai.. par yahan gaggan ka vo matlab nahi tha.. vo kuch aur kehna cha raha tha lekin use der lag rahi thi " ye tu kya kar raha hai " shruti ne ajeeb nighaon se dekha. " tu kya kehna chahta hai tujhe pata hai na tera dimag to nahi kharab ho gaya " jab gaggan kuch bol nahi paa raha tha aur action kiye jaa raha tha tab shruti ne fir use jhatkara, shruti aur baki teeno yahi samajh rahe the ki gaggan ye keh raha hai ki aaruhi demon ke sath sex kar rahi thi.. ya fir deamon uske sath sex kar raha tha...

" touch mein ata hai.. mera matlab tha touch.. yani ki dono usi samay ek jagah hote hai.. tab vyatha usko apna leta hai kyun ki uska soul bahut mulayam.. yani ki bahut hi kamjor hota hai.. uske pas ek sharir mein reh kar koi shakti nahi hoti jiske baad.. us vyatha ka aur is sachi dunia ka fasla badh jata hai.. :athah: vo vyatha apni dunia se alag koi aur hi dunia mein chali jati hai.. aur dhire-dhire vo Kalmaksh ki prajati use apni dunia mein le jati hai aur sharir aur atma dono ka is sachi duniya se astitv mit jata hai.. yani ki.. aaruhi.. apni hi dunia mein hai aur ek din uske sath chali jayegi.. " gaggan ke batane par sab use ghurne lage. " aur han.. ye sirf is book mein hi nahi.. balki .. in sab mein yahi likha hai khud kholo aur dekho... bas likhne ka andaz alag hai.. main galat nahi keh raha hun.. aaruhi is possessed... and she is been eaten alive from inside.. dhire-dhire vo use kha jayega.. aur shruti tu ek din uthegi.. tujhe aaruhi wahan milegi hi nahi.. uska koi astitv hi nahi bacha hoga.. vo aise gayab ho jayegi jaise kabhi thi hi nahi... " gaggan ke chehre par aise expression the mano vo us din mein ho jab aaruhi ke sath aisa hua ho. Ek pal ke liye sirf karamcharyun ke kaam karne ke alawa wahan khamoshi bani rahi.

" you are such a dumb ass... gaggan.. you know that? " manpreet ne khamoshi todi, is baar to vishal aur shruti bhi kuch nahi bole, kyun ki unhe bhi gaggan ab dumb hi lag raha tha. " tu ye jo book lekar aya hai.. ye to writer hai kya naam hai iska.. Ved Sharma.. kul mila kar is book ki sirf 4 copies chapi thi.. vo bhi us writer ne khud apni pocket money se chapwai.. aur sun.. vo writer itna bada mahan chutiya tha bilkul teri tarah ki usne ek aur part likha lekin.. uski sirf ek hi copy chapai... dekho pado.. tum sab.. wikipedia par likha hai.. aur author dekho.. kaun hai... " manpreet ne phone shruti aur vishal ki taraf ghumaya.

" Ved sharma.. " vishal ne pada.

" han.. khud ne hi wikipedia par apne hi book ke bare mein likha.. kaun hai ye ved sharma? koi janta hai ise? ghanta.. koi chutiya hi raha hoga.. " manpreet ne ek pal mein gaggan ke theory ki uske muh par hug di... jiske baad bhi gaggan haar nahi mana.

" to baki sab book? unme kyun hai aisa? "

" dumb hai tu.. tabhi kaha tha dumb... ye sab books ko copy karke likha gaya hai.. in author ka to koi astitv nahi hai pure internet par.. "

" internet par nahi hai to kya astitv nahi hai ye kya baat hui? internet se pehle dunia apni chizen kitabo mein rakhti thi ho sakta hai.. "

" shruti tune kaha tha ise sunne aur sunna hai? "

" meri baat complete to hone do "

" gaggan ek minute.. dekh tune bol liya humne sun liya.. par filal hume aaruhi ki madad karni hai.. please wait.. han manpreet tu hi guide kar hum kya karein "

" dekh shruti .. hum last time jis baat par the main usi par kahungi.. baat mujhe kuch aur lag rahi hai "

" jaise? " shruti soch rahi thi ki thodi der pehle baat kya ho rahi thi.

" mujhe lagta hai aaruhi ke piche koi psycho ladka pagal hai " manpreet ke bolte hi shruti ne socha aur sochne par usne do baat ko jodte hue ek kiya.

" tu kehna cha rahi hai ki aaruhi ke piche koi ladka pada hai.. jo use raat ko call kar raha hai "

" exactly.. aur vo ladka college se nahi balki uski past life se hai.. tu mujhe ye bata uska behaviour ladkon ke prati kaisa raha hai? "

" bilkul behhuda... sometimes lagta hai use ladke pasand hi nahi hai.. ladkon ke bare mein uska bilkul negative avtar dikhai deta hai "

" bingo.. main bhi wahi samjha rahi hun.. aaruhi ka past acha nahi tha.. boyfriend ko lekar.. maybe.. torchure karta ho.. ya fir.. sex slave bana rakha ho... ya fir blackmail karta ho... ladke alag-alag type ke hote hain aur aisa karte hai apni hawas mitane ke liye "

" excuse me? tum har ladke ke bare mein aisa sochti ho? " vishal bich mein bola.

" vishal.. let her... vo tumhe nahi bol rahi hai.. na main tumhe aisa manti hun.. chup raho " shruti ne pehli baar girlfriend jaisi pratikriya karte hue vishal ki tarif aur use jhatkane ka kaam kiya jisme vishal khush bhi hua aur confuse bhi. " par tu kaise keh sakti hai ki uspar koi physical assualt i mean.. aisa hua hoga.. r u sure? " shruti ne pucha.

" to uska jawab teri hi kahani mein hai jaise tune abhi bataya tha ki ek raat ko aaruhi bina kapdon ke tere palang ke niche thi right? "

" hmm " shruti jaise manpreet ki baaton ko samajh rahi thi..

" han to main yahi keh rahi hun ki aaruhi usi trauma ke sath yahan ayi jiske baad uska us mansion mein jana... lavanya ka ragging karna.. teri.. Ravina aur us bathroom ke cubicle ki kahani batana.. aur fir us kamre mein fasna.. aur akhir mein us girls hostel ke bare mein janna.. sab kuch.. uske mind ko affect kar gaya.. and that is where she is started troubling.. jaise jaise halat bade uska mind bigada.. that means.. she does not having any physical problem and she is going through with some very serious mental condition "

" she is right.. " awaz kisi aur ki thi.. isliye jo manpreet ki batein sun kar jo soch mein dube the vo is awaz se bahar aa nikle.

" miss aap idhar? " shruti apni jagah se khadi hui baki sab bhi use follow kar gaye.

" hmm.. aaruhi ke bare mein jo tum logon ne bataya.. usko sunne ke baad kuch na karna is not right.. waise bhi college ki teacher ko kuch malum ho aur vo kisi ko na bataye.. aisi bachkani soch aaj kal ke youngster mein hai.. hum mein nahi... "

" apne aaruhi ki mom ko bata diya? " shruti ne nandini ki baat bich mein katte hue kahi.

" nahi.. abhi nahi... mujhe laga ki tum logon ne itne confidence se mujhe puri baat kahi to main tum logon ka vo trust nahi tod sakti thi isliye.. mil kar hi koi decision lene ka faisla kiya.. "

" thank you miss... " shruti kuch aur kehna chahti thi par vo ruk gayi. Nandini ko laga ki vo kuch bolegi lekin usne jab nahi kaha to apni baat rakhi.

" i think, tumhari friend sahi keh rahi hai " uska ishara manpreet par tha " aaruhi ko koi mentally problem hai.. aur ab hume ye dekhna hai ki use kaise solve karein.. waise aaruhi hai kahan? "

" use fever tha miss.. isliye vo room mein hi so rahi hai "

" anything serious? "

" nahi miss.. baarish mei bhigi thi.. isliye shayad "

" ok.. shruti you will inform me about her.. and.. "

" miss.. vo uske parents ko batana hai? " nandini ki baat usne fir katti " kyun ki aaruhi hamesha kehti hai ki uski mom use le jayegi aur vo yahan se jana nahi chahti " shruti ki baat sun nandini ek pal khamosh khadi rahi.

" look shruti.. parents ko har chiz malum honi chahie.. bhale hi vo koi bhi baat ho.. bhale hi kaisa bhi rough past raha ho.. parents should know.. let me handle that situation.. main kaise uske parents ko batati hun.. thats on me.. aur rahi baat uske mental challenge ki to i know.. something.. i have in my mind.. filal tum log jao.. lectures ka time ho raha hai... " nandini ke liye ek bada challenge tha vo na to aaruhi ko kuch hone de sakti thi kyun ki vo janti thi ki ab is kahani mein in bachon ke sath vo bhi shamil hai.. ab har action ka wahi reaction hone wala tha jiska energy ya to positive hogi ya negative.. aur negative energy hamesha nuksan deti hai.. physics ki bhasha mein.. Sabhi uski baat sun kar jaa hi rahe the ki nandini jo wahin khadi soch rahi thi uski nazar table par padi books par gayi.. jisme usne bhi adhe-vastr wale chitr dekhe.

" ye books kaun laya? " usne wahi se pucha.

" gaggan miss.. " manpreet ne jawab diya aur vo library se bahar. Apna naam sun gaggan tezi se bahar nikal gaya. " ye aaj kal ke bache bhi na.. aisi books library mein kya kar rahi hai? mujhe complain dalni padegi librarian ko .... " nandini ne book ke cover par ek aur bar nazar dali.. vo adh-nangan vastar wale chitar ke piche jo bhi kehne ka maksad tha vo use bhi samajh nahi aya. Usne ek dafa books se dhayan hataya aur phone par number dial kar diya.

 

[Naina]

On the way....

aise heavy suspense wale mod aur moment pe update mat roka kijiye yaar baad mein yahin khayal aaye baar baar ki iske aage kya kand hone wala hai
waise abhi kayi baatein clear ho chuki hai...
aur lavanya bhi gayi upor

 

[harshit1890]

aise heavy suspense wale mod aur moment pe update mat roka kijiye yaar baad mein yahin khayal aaye baar baar ki iske aage kya kand hone wala hai
waise abhi kayi baatein clear ho chuki hai...
aur lavanya bhi gayi upor

Kai baar agla suspense ane ke liye aisa karna padta hai.. kaand ho jayenge.. is chapter ke baad 2 chapter aur baki hai kahani ke.. let c ... apko kya kya clear karta hai

 

[Naina]

Kai baar agla suspense ane ke liye aisa karna padta hai.. kaand ho jayenge.. is chapter ke baad 2 chapter aur baki hai kahani ke.. let c ... apko kya kya clear karta hai

baat clear ho ya na ho lekin shruti, vishal, manpreet, warden, devu ka kissa khatam ho jana chahiye, are upor jaake kam se kam lavanya ko company hi de denge ye logis

 

[Naina]

 

[harshit1890]

romanchak update ..aaruhi ke saath supriya jaisa sab ho raha hai ..
lavanya ki bhi maut ho gayi aur aruhi khudko jimmedar maan rahi hai ..

theek 5.30 ke aaspaas aruhi hostel laut aati thi isliye aaj bhi usi time par jag gayi ..

aruhi aur supriya ke connection ne pura confuse kar daala hai ..

jaha koi nahi jata us bathroom ne pairo ke nishan shruti ke the ( aur shayad iska jikr supriya ke time pe hua tha ) ..

shruti ne bahut si baate nahi batayi jaise jab aruhi ka phone aaya to wo vishal ke saath us jhadi type jagah pe thi ,aur shruti ne bataya ki wo class me thi ..
aruhi apne aap hi us bathroom me gayi thi par aruhi ke mutabik wo shruti ya megha ke kehne par waha gayi thi ..
tannu ke jaise hi lavanya ka khoon ho gaya hai ,,aur ye baat ab pata chali ki lavanya ki bhi maut ho gayi hai ..

lavanya 1st rank thi us racket ki jisme drugs ya hukka type nasha karne ke liye haweli ka istemaal karte the ..

Nahi bhai galat... aap abhi bhi supriya ko as a variable samajh rhe hai.. jabki aaruhi hi wo variable hai.. bas yahan thoda chakma kha gaye readers.. kahani dwara It was aaruhi.. mene quote isliye kare aur spasht likha agar apne para mein dhayan diya ho ki.. shruti ne kaha.. aaruhi ne sabke naam badal diye.. let the kahani aage ane do.. tab paat chalega.. thanks bhai

ju us Kala jadu karne wali shruti ke lober ho gaye hai...
pehla hint shruti haaraman dhokhebaz dagabaaz aur akhiri hint bhi wohi hai...
shruti ke sath sath lavanya ka bhi kissa khatam hua to udhar sari problems hi door ho jaani hai
aaruhi ko us lavanya ne hi kuch khila pila ke pagal kiya hai... aur akhiri sach bhi yahi hai....
Is shruti lavanya ki to

lober hi sahi.. mazaa ata hai

Olle olle dekho toh chaalak shruti ki chaalaki bhari baatein
aha khud ki tharakpan ko chupane ke liye ulta aaruhi ka naam de diya... ki ye bathroom ka idea aaruhi ke dimag mein apne aap aaya ... itni jhuth aur upor jhuthi iski kahani .. achha aage hum bhi toh sune ki uske baad kya hua joh yeh apni jhuthi dukhda liye baithi hai
Actually asli kahani yeh hai ki isko ye phone pe sex chat kar rahi thi aur aaruhi ki wajah se disturb ho rahi thi.... usne khud kahi ki achha hua aaruhi chali jayegi to bala tal jayegi... yani aaruhi jaake kahi mar bhi jaaye to ushe koi parwah nahi

joh bhi mamla ho par sau baat ki ek baat tharki shruti hawasi aur jhuthi hai aur is kahani ki akhiri sach bhi yahi hai.. acha yahin hoga ki aaruhi ghar chali jaaye isse door... . nahi toh aaj nahi kal aaruhi pakka pagal ho jayegi...
Khair kahani kuch alag hi mod le rahi hai...
...
to shruti ne ek kahani jo flashback mein hua wo batayi
are aao re gaon walo, bachhe budhe mard aurat sabhi... dekho tharki shruti bai kahani sunane wali hai
Maybe khud ko saaf suthri dikhane ki koshish karne wali hai... hmm.. toh lavanya ka kissa khatam... is baar koi tanu manu sonu alag se paida nahi hone wali is baar full & final kissa khatam
ju continue Miss hawasi shruti......
to kahani is tarah ki hai ki aaruhi jiske dimag mein chemical locha hua just because college ke pehle din lavanya ne uske sath bahot hi khatarnak mazak kiya ragging ke naam par....
Phir Ye dimagi bimari din prati din is kadar badhi ki aaruhi raat ko kuch ajib si harkatein karne lagi like bistar ke niche nude so jana, kabhi kabhi muh azib si awazein nikalna, kabhi us khandahar Numa mention mein koi Saya dekh lena... etc etc....
baat to tab badhi jab phir se aaruhi lavanya ke hathhe chhadi.... Aur baat aur bigdi jab shruti ke idea ke mutabik aaruhi jaake us cubicle mein jaa chupi jaha uske sath kuch aisi ghatana ghati ki iske baad puri scene hi badal gayi.... yun ki saare kand ushi raat hua tha... aaruhi ki cubicle se leke purani girls hostel tak jaane tak ki ghatana phir shruti uska picha karna aur lavanya ki hatya....
Yaha pe kuch baatein clear ho jaaye....
1) idea shruti ne di cubicle mein chupne ke liye, na ki apne ap aaya idea shruti ko.... sabse aham baat shruti jaanti thi us cubicle ke baare mein.... lekin aaruhi nahi... lekin fir bhi ushe bhej diya just because ushe vishal sang sex chat karni thi.. aaruhi mare ya jiye usse usko kuch farak nahi padta kyunki uske rehne se disturb ho rahi thi
2) bathroom mein jate waqt cctv pe kaid huyi footage aaruhi ki.... wo gayab.... TV kisne on kiya tha...?
3) agar aaruhi ne jo dekha wo sab Bhram tha to lavanya kab bahar aayi... kyunki murder bahar huyi thi..

Khair.......
shruti uske piche pahunchi ushi purani girls hostel... waha kayi ghatanaye ghati par sabse zyada important main door apne ap kaise band huye shruti ke andar ghuste hi...
wohi aaruhi jo kiya udhar, maan leti hu ki disorder ke chalte kar rahi thi to corridor ke akhiri kone mein wo jo awazein aayi thi, phir shruti jo us room mein jane ke baad wo jo irritating wali awaz aayi pal bhar ke liye uske piche se, wo kya tha...
Deewar pe shayad aaruhi ne khuredi ho..
Well...... Baaki ka mamla saaf hai....
aaruhi ki is haalat ki jimmewar koun koun hai...

1) lavanya.... usne ek ladki ko is kadar daraya ragging ke naam par ki wo ladki mansik taur pe bimar par gayi...

2) kayi mamlo mein shruti ka bhi hath hai, aaruhi ki bimari ko badhaba dene mein..... kayi baar jarurat ke waqt kabhi sath kadi nahi rahi wo aaruhi sang... wo to baad mein jab ye baat dimag mein aati ki aaruhi ko agar kuch hua to wo fashegi isliye madad karne jaati hai... Lekin kand hone ke baad.. ye sabse badi galti thi shruti ki aur isse bhi zyada badi galti us khandahar mein bina aaruhi ko puche ushe le gayi thi... jaha se kahani ki suruwat huyi.. jisse aaruhi bhag rahi thi, usi jagah lake aaruhi ko mentally breakdown kiya shruti ne.... aur yahi se aaruhi ki bimari ko hawa lagi... uske baad kya hua sabhi jaante hai..
uske kayi baar aise anchahi ghatanaye ghati aaruhi sang par har baar shruti ne jaan bujh kar uske paas deri se aayi ghatanaye ghat jane ke baad... cubicle se leke purani girls hostel tak... har baar deri se gayi jab ghatana ghat chuki thi... ek mature ladki hai shruti, agar aaruhi se directly puche ki mentally koi problem hai kya to aaruhi badak sakti thi... to shruti
uske ghar phone karke ye baatein kyun nahi batayi..... jarur shruti ke mann khot hai...

Well...........
Lavanya ke murder se pehle jo ghatanaye ghati store room se leke cubicle tak aur us purani girls hostel mein wo corridor ke kone wale room ki awazein ye sab jhuth hai ki bas ek Bhram...

Lavanya ki maut ke baad ye jo baar baar jaa rahi thi purani hostel aur last time usne jo dekha megha Kati phati body sapne mein.... kya megha yani ki shruti ki aisi hi maut honi hai... Kyunki usne jo socha wo ho Chuka hai... jaise lavanya urf tanu ki maut...

waise writer sahab ke soch aur kalpna ko manna padega ki jis tarike se apne Kalpana jariye aise shabdo ka roop deke kahani mein darshaya hai... sach mein saraahaneeya aur prashansaniya hai..

kahani mein ek athyadhik scary aur creepy mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt ek kap kapi si cha jaye dilo dimag pe....
aur jo scenes create ki hai update ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

katai shruti se chidti ho khusbsurat ladki se sab jalte hai... itni bholi bhali hai apni shruti
1,2,3 = Aisa aaruhi ne bataya ki tv chala.. cctv.... sab kuch tha hi nahi... more will be clear in upcoming scene...
JO bhi ghatna hu uske piche meko kisi bhoot ka hi hath lagta hai baki let c.. akhir kya hota hai.. ye to ane wala waqt batayega.. Ye ladki bechari us ladki ke piche hi padi hai.. itni help kar rhi hai jabki vo... Ab yahi dekhna baki hai ki asal mein jo aaruhi ne dekha vo abhi tak kisi ko nahi malum... ye sirf aaruhi ke pass hi hai.. aur iske alawa to abhi bahut kuch aisa hai jo aaruhi ke pass hi hai

waise writer sahab ke soch aur kalpna ko manna padega ki jis tarike se apne Kalpana jariye aise shabdo ka roop deke kahani mein darshaya hai... sach mein saraahaneeya aur prashansaniya hai..

kahani mein ek athyadhik scary aur creepy mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt ek kap kapi si cha jaye dilo dimag pe....
aur jo scenes create ki hai update ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..

Waooo..... speechless ki thank u kaise kahun.. marvellous.. naninaji.. mazak masti ke bich apne hamari tarif kar di.. dil se shukriya Baki ye sab padne wale ke uppar hai.. meko to aaj tak kami hi nazar ayi hai.. Thanks nainaji

Kuch baatein, ghatanaye, raaz aur sawal abhi baaki hai... wo evening time mein sameekshaye karing uspe

Bhut bdiya update bhai ji

Thanks bhai.. vo humne theek kar lia.. thanks batane ke liye

Bdiya update bhai ji

Thanks bhaiiji

Bdiya update bhai ji

Thanks bhai

Bdiya update bhai ji

Wese confusion dur karne wala update kha tha ye
Aur ye kuch quote kese the is update ne megha-supriya ke, jab shruti baat bta rhi thi

Thanks bhaiji Bhai wahi to main tha.. shruti use vo bata rahi thi jo actual aur non-actual mein ghum raha tha.. aaruhi hi supriya thi... aurshruti ko usne megha bana rakha tha.. quote isliye kiya taki batein connect kar pao.. confuse na ho.. ye chapter kahani ka first bhag tha aur first chapter second bhag...

पहला भाग बीच की घटनाओं के उपर था जबकि दूसरा कहानी का प्रथम चरण था । कुछ घटनाएं सच में घटित हुई थी पर कुछ आरूहि की तो कुछ श्रुति की इमेजिनेशन थी ।

लावन्या उर्फ तन्नु की हत्या सच में हुई थी पर क्यों ? जिस तरीके से उसकी हत्या हुई थी वो किसी भी लड़की के वश का नहीं था । और यदि किसी लड़की ने ही किया है तो जरूर उसे बेहोशी की हालत में किया होगा ।

आरूहि मुझे शुरू से ही मिस्टीरियस किरदार लगी। आरूहि लेस्बियन है या उसके साथ लेस्बियन रिश्ते बनाने की जबरन कोशिश की गई है। उसकी पहली पार्टनर उसके बचपन की फ्रैंड रविना थी । दुसरे पर शक लावन्या उर्फ तन्नु पर जाता है । उसके पहले विजिट के दौरान लावन्या ने उसका शारीरिक शोषण किया था ऐसा प्रतीत होता है । हो सकता है रविना ने भी कुछ दबाव दिया होगा उसके साथ लेस्बियन रिश्ते बनाने के लिए ।
और दोनों लड़कियां मर चुकी है । कहीं इन दोनों की हत्या आरूहि ने तो नहीं की ?

तीसरी लड़की श्रुति है जिसके साथ लेस्बियन सम्बन्ध होने की आशा दिखाई पड़ रही है । और पहले भाग के अनुसार मेधा के कतल की कोशिश भी हो चुकी है । इसका मतलब इस बार मरने की बारी श्रुति की है । क्या श्रुति का भी वही अंजाम होगा जो रविना और लावन्या का हुआ था ?
कुछ तो है आरूहि और लेस्बियन के बीच में ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड सेंसेशनल अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

Apne sahi samjha... ki kaun sa bhaag kahan se juda.. is baar kahani bich se shuru kar di... har baar shuru se shuru hoti hai.. is baar socha.. kuch aisa kar dein Abhi Aaruhi the mysterious character ki sachai ab samajh ayegi... uska hi number hai is baar... Aap khuch hadh tak phechan gaye ho ... Thanks sanju bhai

 

[harshit1890]

baat clear ho ya na ho lekin shruti, vishal, manpreet, warden, devu ka kissa khatam ho jana chahiye, are upor jaake kam se kam lavanya ko company hi de denge ye logis

apko ise bada shock dene walle hai is baar hum... fikar nat...