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Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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nice update ..ab ye library ki books gang bhi hai jo kisiko pata nahi ,aur gagan bata nahi raha ..
ye aaruhi class me aa gayi aur ekdam fit and fine hai ..
mishra to wakai ghatiya aadmi hai ,jo ladki ko keh rahe ki kahi pe bhi touch ho sakta hai ..
aur ye apne hi beti ko nahakar nikalte huye dekha aur peet diya mishra ne ..

lavanya ke baare me baat nahi ho payi dono ki par ye ladka jo samose kharidne aaya tha kamal ka hai ..
gaaliya mooh se aise nikalti hai ki kya kehna 🤣🤣..
raghav bahut josh me aaya tha ladhne par meghnath ne usko chappal ki power dikha di 🤣..


par ye us ladke ke phone par aaruhi mom ka call aa raha hai kya 🤔🤔🤔..
 

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comedy se bharpur update tha... to kuch ek naye kirdaaro ne bhi entry li story pe
1) gaggan ne batane se mana kiya ki kaise uska group raat ko library band hone ke baad waha andar jata hai...
wo alag baat hai lekin shruti ek alag hi nautanki suru kar di hai... wo khud ko hi psychologist ghosit karke ab aaruhi ka ilaz karne wali hai... duniya mein chutiyo ki koi kami nahi.. Unme se ek ye shruti hai
2) gaggan shruti ke bilkul Karib kada ho jaane se shruti ko gussa aaya... But why..
shruti ko to jishm ki aag bujhani ne hai, chaahe kisi se bhi bhi ho, vishal se ya gaggan se... to usko gussa kyun aaya

3) aaj aaruhi bilkul normal hai... aww.. kitni cute lag rahi hai.. ek dum masoom chhoti bachhi ki tarah

4) par aaruhi aise normal hona, khush hona dekhi nahi jaa rahi hai us haaraman shruti ko, uske kaleje mein aag si jal uthi hai.. isliye soch rahi hai aaruhi aise kaise normal ho sakti hai...

5)aaruhi ko koi bimari ya kuch bhi nahi hai.. wo bilkul Normal hai... actually pagal ye baaki ke kirdaar ho gaye hai... wo kehte hai na pagal hamesha dusro ko bhi pagal hi samajhte hai.. thik waise hi...

6) us professor mishra ne agar shruti ke sath bhari class mein kuch kar bhi liya to shruti ko koi problem nahi honi chahiye.. Coz wo thehri hawas ki pujaran... usse kya fark padta hai ki koun uske sath sex kar raha hai, ushe to hawas mitane se matlab hai na :D

7) canteen wala scene mein gazab ki comedy create huyi hai...
Meghnath :D... Samose na milne par gaaliya dene se leke raghav naam ke ladke se ladayi tak bilkul heavy comedy ke sath sath heavy dialogue baazi mein bhi koi kami nahi chhodi Meghnath ne...
Waise banda hai interesting.... lo shruti ko ek majnu bhi mil gaya meghnath ke roop mein..

8) aaruhi ki mom shruti ko kyun phone kar rahi thi... abhi to thodi der pehle aaruhi baat kar rahi thi phone pe apni mom se....
Naah, ab zyada mystery ke gehrayi tak nahi jau to hi behtar hai... waise aaj nahi to kal pata chal hi jaani hai asal baat kya hai...
Khair... Kaafi dilchasp update tha aur sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
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मेघनाथ को देखकर वालीवुड एक्टर विजय राज की याद आ गई । उसकी सारी हरकतें हूबहू विजय राज के एक्टिंग से मिलती जुलती लगा मुझे ।
अभिषेक बच्चन और भूमिका चावला अभिनित " रन " मूवी में आप विजय राज की एक्टिंग देख सकते हैं ।
कैंटीन में उसका समोसा मांगना और उसे दुकानदार से बातें करना.........मन को फ्रेस करने वाला था । बेहतरीन कामेडी का नमूना था ।
कहानी के अंदर ऐसी ऐसी घटनाओं को आना ही चाहिए ताकि थोड़ा बहुत टेंशन से दूर होकर मनोरंजन हो सकें ।

लेकिन क्या मेघनाथ और राघव के इस इवेंट से आरूहि के साथ कोई सम्बन्ध बनता है ?

एक बार आरूहि को मोबाइल पर कुछ मैसेज टाइप करते हुए देखा गया । जहां तक मुझे याद है वो श्रुति के सिवाय और किसी से ज्यादा हिली मिली नहीं है तो फिर वो किसे मैसेज कर रही है?
दूसरी बार उसने श्रुति से झुठ बोला कि उसके माॅम की काॅल आ रही है और यह बोलकर किसी से बातें करने परे खिसक गई । वो किस से बातें करने गई है ?
आरूहि के माॅम की काॅल श्रुति के मोबाइल पर आ रही है इसका मतलब आरूहि ने श्रुति से झुठ बोला कि माॅम की काॅल है ।


इस मिश्रा की तो सबसे पहले हत्या होनी चाहिए । ठरकी तो है ही इंसान भी घटिया है ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।
जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।
 
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Update ~~ 43


" helo aunty "

" helo shruti, sorry to disturb you, par kya main aaruhi se baat kar sakti hun.. uska phone kal se not reachable aa raha hai "

" not reachable par aunty.. vo to... " shruti bol kar ruk gayi " hanji aunty.. ho sakta hai kal baarish mein bhig gaye the hum to pani chala gaya phone mein isliye sim kabhi bich bich mein chhut raha hai, usne apko try kiya tha lekin apka bhi not reachable tha "

" ohh.. seriously? ok.. to abhi baat kara do "

" abhi aunty vo aa rahi hai atte hi baat krati hun "

" aa rahi hai? "

" ji.. aunty vo aaj kal aaruhi library mein padai karti hai to usko time ka pata nahi chalta aur bulana padta hai.. main canteen mein hun jaise hi vo ayegi.. batati hun.. "

" oh.. ok.. all good beta? "

" ha..ha...ji aunty all good " jitna uski zindagi mein kisi se nahi fatti baat karne mein utna aaruhi ki mom se use baat karne mein dar lag raha tha.

" ok shruti.. bye.. aaruhi ko bolna ki mujhe 5 o clock ko connect karegi.. "

" sure aunty.. main use keh dungi.. ok bye " shurti ne fauran phone cut kiya aur ek pal usne gehri sans chhodi. Uske dimag mein bas ek hi sawal chal raha tha ki agar aaruhi ki mom se aaruhi ki baat hi nahi hui to fir aaruhi mom ka phone aa raha hai bol kar kise baat karne chali gayi.

" gambhir baat hai.. kuch.. bahut gambhir.. " awaz ne shruti ka dhayan toda. meghnath samose ke sath ek batura bhi saaf kar chuka tha. " maaf karna bhook bahut jada lagi thi "

" koi baat nahi.. " shruti ne jada kuch nahi kaha aur wahan se jane lagi.

" rukiye.. " meghnath ne use roka aur dakar lete hue khada hua. Usne apne khane se sane hath do baar table par saaf kiye aur bache kuche apni gand par rakh kar pent se hi saaf kar liye. " wahan se to baithna hota hai isliye dikhta kisko hai.. " dant dikhate hue meghnath bola.

" kuch kaam hai.. to bolo.. varna mujhe thoda kaam hai "

" mujhe koi kaam nahi hai.. par apki saheli ke liye jarur mere pas kuch hai "

" saheli ke liye matlab? " shruti ne hairani mein kaha.

" saheli.. jo apke sath hi baithi thi idhar.. "

" han uska kya "

" unko... unko.. " meghnath shruti ke karib aya, shruti ke naak mein uske tel aur ajeeb si ek mehak naak mein chadh gayi jo itni jada ajeeb thi ki bardasht ke bahar ho gayi thi " unko lagta hai koi pareshani hai theek nahi hai vo... lo aa gayi... " meghnath ne itna kaha to shruti piche ghumi to aaruhi wapis aa rahi thi.

" kahan chal di? khana nahi hai kya? " aaruhi ne shruti ko dekhte hi kaha.

" han vo.. " aur jab usne samne dekha to meghnath wahan nahi tha. " aur ye sab tu akele kha gayi " aaruhi shruti se keh rahi thi par shruti apne hi khayalon mein khoyi hui thi ek to pehle hi aaruhi ki mom ke phone se pareshan thi uppar se vo meghnath jo uske liye bilkul bhi jaruri nahi tha lekin vo awaz vo batein.. jaise use shuru se hi jani pehchani lag rahi thi. Usne khub socha do minute tak vo sochti rahi aur tab use yaad aya... ki meghnath wahi ladka tha jo subah library ke bahar kisi ke piche chappal utha kar gali dete hue bhag raha tha aur abhi jo thodi der pehle vakya hua canteen mein uski kahani ko milaya jaye to.... to... subah jo ladka bhag raha tha vo raghav ke dost ka room partner tha... jo baad mein nahi aya.. hmmm... yani meghnath aur raghav ki bandi.. meenakshi un dono ke bich hua par kya?

" kya soch rahi hai.. " aaruhi ne shruti ko hila kar pucha.

" na..hi.. kuch nahi... " shruti ne itna kaha aur fir soch mein padh gayi. Meghnath ne aisa aaruhi ko lekar itni badi baat kaise keh di? use aaruhi ke bare mein kaise malum hai? is meghnath se to milna padega.. vishal ko bolti hun pata lagaye "

" bolegi kuch.. "

" bekar tha.. sab.. bahar chalte hai.. " shruti aaruhi ko pakad kar canteen aur fir college ke bahar hi le gayi.

" aaruhi "

" uhmm " roll khate hue aaruhi boli.

" mom se baat ho gayi ? " shruti ne puch kar uske chehre ko dekha.

" han.. kyun? " aaruhi ne jawab dekar khate hue nazron se shruti ko dekha. Shruti use dekhti rahi, mano ek pal ki bhi shikan use aaruhi ke chehre par nahi dikhi. Itne ache se vo use jhooth bol gayi thi.

" bas aise hi.. canteen ka jo mahol miss kar diya na tune "

" han.. vo meghnath wala... aisa naam kaun rakhta hai? ravan ke pariwar se sambhand rakhta hai kya hehehe "

" aaruhi, library mein tu kya karne jati thi? "

" matlab? " achanak se hue sawal par aaruhi khate hue ruk gayi. Shruti ko samajh aya ki vo straight forward sawal nahi kar sakti varna mamla bigad sakta hai.

" i mean, library mein itna jati hai.. top maregi kya "

" kahan yaar... padai ho hi kahan paa rahi hai.. " vo fir khane mein lag gayi. Iske aage shruti kuch puchti use pehle use jaggu dikhi. " dekh teri saheli aa gayi.. isni ne complain ki thi warden ko " aaruhi chidte hue boli.

" oye sun.. jaggu idhar aa... " shruti ne use apne pas bulaya.

" han shruti.. bol... kya hua.. " aaruhi ki taraf dekhte hue usne shruti ki taraf nazarein modi.

" aise muh kyun latka rakha hai.. kisi ladke ne mana kar diya kya "

" nahi yaar.. ladke ki baat nahi hai... vo to mere bahut se deewane hai.... message kar kar ke dukhi kar dete hain "

" acha ji.. " ankhein chadate hue shruti boli " itni fan following hai teri "

" han aur kya.. facebook par roz message atte hai... ek flaunt karne wali photo post ki thi.. uspar itne comment aye kya batau.. ladke to betab rehte hai mujhse baat karne mein " itrate hue jaggu boli.

" acha.. kya baat kar rahi hai.. suna to hai mene bhi.. ki aaj kal ye facebook bada chal raha hai.. profile banani padegi.. "

" han mujhe friend request bhejio.. mere is waqt 231 friends hai... "

" wah.. kya baat hai... vaise tune facebook par naam kya rakha hai? " shruti ne apni hansi rokte hue pucha.. " jaggu urf jogeshwar... " sabse pehle aaruhi hansi.. aur fir shruti... Un dono ko hansta dekh jaggu ka muh ban gaya. Vo janti thi ki apne naam ko lekar uski khub khili udti hai iski wajah se facebook par bhi usne naam kuch aur rakha hua tha.

" hanslo hanslo.. exam aa rahe hai... tab hasna.. " jaggu ne baat palat di.

" exam??????? " hasna band karte hue shruti ne hairani mein pucha.

" han.. exam.. first internal... next week se hai... "

" par kaise? abhi tak to freshers party bhi nahi hui "

" hogi bhi nahi.. lavanya ki death ke baad is year ki hamari party cancel ho gayi " jaggu ke bolte hi ek pal ke liye khamoshi cha gayi. " ab hanso.. " jaggu chidate hue jane lagi.

" abe oo sun... " shruti ne awaz di to vo palat gayi " warden ko koi aaj kal complain kar raha hai.. vaise to mujhe nahi pata tujhe kyun bata rahin hun lekin agar ye khabar us batane wale ke kano mein pahunche to ye bhi pahunch jani chahie ki agli baar warden ke pass koi complain gayi to uske naam ke greh-parwesh ki pooja karwa dungi... " shruti janti thi ki uska ishara kiski aaur hai aur jaggu bhi isliye uski baat sunte hi fauran wahan se bhag nikli. " salli shakal se jhalli lagti hai par hai ek number ki betichod... " shruti ne sochte hue aaruhi ki taraf dekha to vo kisi soch mein khoyi hui thi. Isi aaruhi ka shruti intezar kar rahi thi taki kuch batein nikalwa sake.

" aaruhi kya soch rahi hai? "

" lavanya "

" lavanya kya? "

" vo bilkul wesi mari jaise mene icha jatai thi ... kaise.. "

" tune dekha tha use marte hue? "

" main wahin thi... " aaruhi ke muh se nikalte hi shruti chaunk uthi aur usne apne aaju baju dekha, jahan koi bhi nahi tha.

" kya bol rahi hai "

" han.. mene dekha tha.. use marte hue.. "

" kaun tha wahan? kisne mara " shruti ne roll fenkte hue uski taraf ghumte hue pucha.

" nahi malum.. bas ek sayan tha.. main use nahi dekh sakti thi.. " aaruhi sochte hue boli.

" aaruhi tera veham hai ye.. tune aisa kuch nahi dekha "

" nahi.. maine dekha tha.. vo use us darwaje par taang raha tha "

" kaun aaruhi? " shruti ki jigasya badhti jaa rahi thi.

" pata nahi.. vo dikhai nahi deta... " aaruhi juth nahi keh rahi thi par uski baat ko sach manne ka dil nahi kar raha tha. Shruti bas yahi soch rahi thi. Use ab lagne laga tha ki aaruhi ke mansik sthti theek nahi hai aur manpreet ki baat use 100% sach lagne lagi thi.

" tu chinta mat kar.. sab theek ho jayega.. " shruti ne hath ke uppar apna hath rakha.

" vo kahin mujhe to kuch nahi karega na megha? "

" nahi.. " shruti ne jawab dene se pehle ek baar thoda waqt liya kyun ki aaruhi use fir se megha bula rahi thi.

" lavanya ko kyun mara kya ye malum chala abhi tak aur kisne? " vishal ne shruti se pucha. Dono sports room ke andar ek kone mein khade the. Aaruhi ko class mein bhej shruti ne vishal ko sports room par message karke bulaya tha.

" nahi.. par hostel ke debu se mene puch tach ki thi.. keh raha tha police ko koi surag nahi milaa.. cctv kharab hone ki wajah se warden ko to fatkar padi hai lekin use halh nahi mila. College ye baat daba rahi hai taki panic aur badnami na ho.. par kab tak bachayenge.. kisi ki zindagi gayi hai.. tum kya soch rahe ho kabse? " vishal ko sochta dekh shruti boli.

" aisa pehli baar nahi hua hai.. "

" matlab? "

" pehle bhi aisi ghatna ho chuki hai "

" fuck.. seriously "

" han.. sun raha hun tabse hostel mein.. jabse lavanya ka kaand hua hai.. isliye to college walle itne normal hai.. nandini miss ko nahi dekha "

" yani unhe bhi pata hai? "

" han.. ho sakta hai.. vo to rehti bhi college walle apartment mein hai.. "

" point.. lekin aise kaise ho sakta hai? ki itne bache mar rahe hain aur fir bhi kisi ko malum nahi chal raha hai... behenchod.. i mean.. ye college hai ya murder khana? "

" no idea.. lekin kai baar suni hui baton mein sach kam kahani jada hoti hai "

" valid baat hai.. har hostel ki hoti hai.. "

" lavanya ke doston se kuch mila? "

" nahi.. kuch nahi... unko kuch malum hi nahi hai.. jahan tak hai mujhe lag raha hai tumhari kahani kuch hadh tak theek hai vishal "

" vo kaise? "

" mamle ko itne dhayan se nahi dekha jaa raha.. police ne jada puch tach nahi ki.. abhi tak cctv ko theek nahi karaya gaya.. jaise fikar hi nahi kisi ko.. ya fir.. jaan buch kar nahi karaya jaa raha "

" jo bhi ho.. i don't want you to involve in anything.. ho sakta hai jisne bhi ye sab kiya vo abhi bhi maujud ho " vishal shruti ko karib karte hue bola.

" hmm... " usne itna hi kaha aur vishal ne uske honth apne honton mein daba liye aur dono kiss ke piche kho gaye, itna confidence ab vishal mein aa chuka tha, uska hath ek shruti ki chatiyun par tha aur vo unhe zor zor se daba raha tha jise shruti ke andar ki jawani aur pighalti jaa rahi thi, vo apna jor kiss mein laga rahi thi. Vishal ke hath uski chatiyun se hote hue dhire-dhire niche ane lagge aur uske pet tak aa gaye. Dono ki sansein tezz ho chali thi lekin na hi honth alag ho rahe the na hi dono apni jaban alag kar paa rahe the. Vishal ka hath uski jeans ke uppar se uski chut par atte use pehle shruti ne apna chehra ek dum se piche khincha.

" meghnath ke bare mein pata kiya? " shruti ne fauran pucha.

" han... electronics branch ka hai..4th semester, wing 2 ke sixth floor par rehta hai.. akela... roommate koi nahi tikta uske sath.. bada hi ajeeb insan hai.. koi bhi use baat karna pasand nahi karta lekin tumne uske bare mein kyun pata karwaya "

" mujhe lagta hai uska koi role hai kahani mein "

" uska? kahani mein? kaise? "

" vo mujhe bol kar gaya aaj canteen mein ki meri dost ko jarurt hai "

" kesi? "

" malum nahi.. lekin mujhe ye janna hai kesi harkat hai uski.. jise sab use dur rehte hai "

" tumhe ajeeb nahi laga vo "

" bilkul laga.. ajeeb nahi.. bahut ajeeb... gadbad to hai usme.. par jabse aaruhi ke bare mein bol kar gaya hai tabse aur gadbad lag rahi hai "

" use to dur rehne mein hi bhalai hai.. uske bare mein batein sahi nahi hai "

" kyun aisa kya kiya hai usne? "

" ek classmate se pucha tha mene.. kehta hai.. last bench par baith kar ajeeb ajeeb se chitr banata rehta hai... ek baar jab Sugandha mam ne use pakda to usne usi ke chehre ki tasveer bna rakhi thi dhadh kisi aur ka tha aur dusri taraf khud ko bana rakha tha aur.. "

" aur? "

" aur uske pichwade mein apni chapal daal raha tha.. " vishal ne hansi rokte hue bataya.

" LOL hehehehehe.. " shruti vishal ki bahon mein khil-khila kar hansne lagi. Shruti ki khubsurti mein kho kar vishal sab bhool gaya aur use ghurta raha... mahol fir jism ki rumaish mein tabdeel ho gaya. Dono ek dusre ke honton ko chumne lagge... vishal ka hath uske sine se hote hue niche aya.. kuch pal pet par ghumta raha aur fir niche khisakta hua uski jeans ke uppar aa gaya..aur uski chut ko sehlane laga.. shruti ke tangon ne wahin jawab de diya.. use kabhi bhi itni kamjori mehsus nahi ki thi.. khud ko ragadte hue aur ek ladke se ragadwane mein alag hi maza hota hai. Shruti ke muh se siski nikli jo vishal apne honton mein hi le gaya aur use chumne mein vyast ho gaya sath hi sath uski chut ko jeans ke uppar se sehlane laga.. bhale hi direct contact nahi thi lekin shruti ka jism machal raha tha. Vishal ne use kas kar nahi pakda hota to abhi piche shelf par hi gir gayi hoti vo. Usne vishal ke balon ko piche se kas kar pakad liya tha, bhale hi vo tut kar uske hathon mein hi kyun naa rahe the par jawani ke josh mein ye dard bhi sehan-shakti ban jata hai aur wahi vishal ke sath ho raha tha. Vishal ne chut sehlate hue shruti ki jeans ka button khol diya.... ek taraf bahut tezi se aage badh rahe the wahin shruti ka man bhi mana karne ko nahi ho raha tha jabki vo chahti thi ki mana ho jaye.. lekin ho nahi paa raha tha.. button khul chuka tha andar hath jane ki space ban chuki thi.. aur hath andar chala bhi gaya... vishal ka hath shruti ki penty ke uppar se uski chut par pada to shruti ke sharir mein rongte khade ho gaye.. usne vishal ki pith kas li jise vishal ka sina uske sine mein dab gaya... Dono chumte hue alag hue to shruti ne apna sar vishal ke kandhe par rakh diya aur lambi lambi ahein bharne lagi 'aaahhhh aahahhhhhhh aahhhhhhhhhh uhmm...aaaahhhhhhhhhhhh... ' uske muh se nikalti garam sansein vishal ki gardan par padh rahi thi jo vishal ko aur josh dila rahi thi, usne penty ke uppar se hi shruti ki chut ragadni chalu rakhi. Shruti ki pakad vishal ke galle par aise padh gayi thi ki ek pal to vishal ko bhi sans lene mein takleef hone lagi par vo ruka nhi. Vo shruti ke gardan par apne honth rakh uski chut sehlata chala gaya, 'aaaahhh visshhhhh aaaaaaaaaaah.... bass..a.ahhhhh aahhhhhh... ' shruti ki awaz pure sports room mein gunj rahi thi agar bahar koi khada hota to jarur uski awaz pehchan jata ki andar kya ho raha hai. Vishal bhi nahi ruka use malum tha ki waqt bahut karib hai aur shruti bhi janti thi ki vo ab jada nahi seh payegi.. uske sharir ki garmi hadh jada badh gayi hai.. ' aaahhh vishalal... i am.. cum...ing... aaaaahhahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... ' usne pehle vishal ko zoron se kasa aur apni kamar itni zor-zor se hilane lagi ki piche ka shelf hilne laga, uska pura sharir kanp utha aur uski chut ne apna ras bahar nikal fenka. Vishal ko jab uski gili penty mehsus hui tab samajh aya ki shruti ne apne charamsukh mein kitna ras bahaya hai. Jhadte sath hi shruti ko aisa laga jaise puri takat hi uske sharir se nikal di gayi ho. Vo vishal ke kandhe par sar rakh kar zor zor se ahaein bharne lagi. Vishal ne apna hath uski jeans se bahar nikala aur uski kamar ko pakadte hue apni aur kas kar jod liya.
 

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nice update ..to manpreet ne puri tarah se insult kar di thi gagan ki jab usne date ke liye puchha tha ..
gagan ne aruhi ko possesed bataya ,usne jo books laayi thi uski theory to samajh nahi aayi ki kaun vyatha hai aur kaun kalmaksh🤣🤣🤣..
manpreet ne bhi apni theory bata di aruhi ke baare me par lagta nahi dono me se ek ki bhi theory sahi hai ..
ab nandani miss bhi isme shamil ho gayi hai aur wo bhi aruhi ko theek karne ko lekar soch rahi hai ..
par ye sirf cover dekhke us kitab ko galat kehna jab wo teacher hai 🤔..
Sb natak hai bhi.. sab pagal bana rahe hain.. writer khud :p: cover aisa hai teacher badi narrow mind hoti hai college mein kuch kuch.. thanks bhai :hug:
matlab supriya koi hai hi nahi yaa abhi tak jo bhi hua wo aruhi ke saath hi hua ..bas wo apne aap ko supriya samajh rahi hai 🤔🤔..

par sab kirdaro ke naam change kar diye ho aruhi ne ,,to megha ka khoon ho gaya tha aur uski body shayad palang ke niche thi wo to hua hi nahi shruti ke saath 🤔🤔..
lavanya ( tanu ) marr gayi ..

kahi aisa to nahi ki lavanya ke ragging ke bahane aruhi ko koi drugs khila diya ho jiska side effect ho raha hai 🤣🤣..

par sabse badi baat ki khoon kisne kiya 🤔🤔..
Han bhai aisa hi hua hai... abhi vo scene na kisi ko pata nahi.. only aaruhi knows.. :D hahahaha side effect :D
kya kisiko pata hai supriya ke chapter me kiska kiska khoon hua tha ???.

aruhi ke chapter me to abhi pata chala ki lavanya ki maut ho chuki hai ..
khoon to bahut logon ka hua hai bas pata nahi hai kis kis ka hua hai :D
Uff.... ye chuje jaise kirdaar aur inke ki, ki, ki karte huye ki gayi baatein blah blah blah :blahblah:
ek wo gaggan... gaggi ko pata hi nahi ki writer already bata chuke hai ki kahani mein koi bhoot nahi... phir bhi apne hi theory diye jaa raha hai...
gaggi chutiye :roflol:
Ek wo chinnar kothe wali bai manpreet.. ye to aaruhi ko kya se kya bana diya :fainted:
imaginary ki bhi kuch hadein hoti hai..
Btw manpreet ke liye to sab kuch possible hai coz ek drugs lene wali se yahin ummid kar sakte hai sabhi..
Vishal.... ye to chatwa hai haaraman shruti ka chatwa...
aur shruti

aise fikar karti hai shruti aaruhi ki...
dost bimar hai uske paas rehne ki wajaye ye yahan uski bare ye gandi gandi baatein kar rahi... kya yahi hai dosti...
are nahi nahi
is haaraman shruti ki koi galti nahi actually galti iski parwarish ki hai..
agar ye aisi hai to iske maa baap kaise honge :yuck:
iske ka shruti ka khandaan kaisa hoga..
Chii aahhhthuu..
is shruti ki tulna mein wo malini to achhai ki murat lage...
Jaane kaise kaise characterless log bechari aaruhi ki life ko tabah barbad karne aa gaye hai...
Aur inka sath dene aayi nandini...
Nandini sukar mana, sukar mana ki tu meri ek favorite kirdaar ka naam use karing warna..
Khair.....
Aaruhi ke sath jo ho raha hai isme kuch aisi ghatanaye aur uski jindagi mein aaye log... jinki wajah aaruhi ki haalat aisi hai..
Uski wo school friend, aaruhi aur mini ke bich aisa kuch hua tha jiske chalte ek gehra sadma lag tha uske dilo dimag par ........
us sadme se ubhar chuki thi... par college ke first day mein jo lavanya ne ragging ke naam pe daraya... wo wapas ushi sadme mein lagbhag chali gayi thi...
rahi sahi kasar shruti ne puri kar di... ushe pehle phir se us khandahar mein le jaake aur cubicle mein jaan bujh ke bhej ke...
......
aaruhi aaj jis haalat mein iski wajah sirf aur sirf uski aise dhokhebaz, dagabaaz, harami, kamine, kutiya type ke friends hi hai...
nandini ko zyada smart banne ki jarurat nahi... sidhe sidhe phone karke bata deni chahiye aaruhi ki mom ko ki kya mazra hai... Doctor wo hai ye nandini shruti ya vishal nahi... aur manpreet mbbs student nahi balki kisi kothe ki shaan hai...
Haan inlogo mein agar koi sachhe mann se fikar jata raha tha aaruhi ke liye wo gaggi hi tha, chutiya hawasi hi sahi par dosto ke liye achha sochne wala...
inlogo ki tarah swarthi nahi....
Actually khoon khoule ab to is shruti, manpreet, nandini, vishal ko story pe dekh....
Khair.....
Harshit sahab ye aaruhi ke sath achha nahi kar rahe aap :roll:
ushe jald se jald thik kariye, aur ghar bhej dijiye... Haan chaahe to is manpreet vishal aur shruti ki wohi haalat kar sakte jo aaruhi ki karte aa rahe the..
Waise us book ke cover pe jo pic thi usme koi to raaz hai... jo shayad story se related ho...
Khair update kaafi dilchasp tha
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
jaise aaruhi ne ghumaya hai waise writer bhi ghuma sakte hai.. yakeen mat karna kuch bhi pehle hi bata rahe hain... :roll:
shruti se u jalan.. itni badiya dost hai vo.. kamal karte ho :sigh: u jealus peuple :sigh:
Vo ghar chali gayi to hum kahan jayenge :p: uska hona jaruri hai.. nahi hogi to bhi chalega.. par ghar nahi jaa sakti vo.. :D Thanks naina ji :hug:
akhir ye shruti, vishal, manpreet jinda hi kyun hai, kahi jake mar kyun nahi jaate :mad:
:D
Bdiya update bhai ji :love:

Lgta h is gaggan ki baat hi shi niklegi :sigh2:
Thanks bhai :hug: dekhte hai sahi kyahoga... :D
गगन ने जो कहा वो सच है । Possession तो है पर किसी आत्मा या चुड़ैल का नहीं बल्कि आरूहि के लाइफ में बिते हुए घटनाओं की है । उसके ऊपर किसी भी भुत प्रेत का साया नहीं है ।
वैसे श्रुति - विशाल की ही तरह मनप्रीत - गगन की जोड़ी भी बहुत खुबसूरत लग रही है । इन दोनों जोड़ों के शादी में नैना जी के साथ मैं भी जरूर आऊंगा । बधाई देने । :D
जैसी हालात आरूहि की है वैसे मैं उसके गार्डियन को खबर करना निहायत ही जरूरी था । नंदिनी मैडम उसके घर फोन करने वाली है और मुझे लगता है कि पुरी सच्चाई अब खुलकर सामने आ जायेगी ।

बहुत ही बेहतरीन और आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।
Bhoot pret ka saya nahi hai.. apne ek dum sahi kaha... bas farak kuch aur hai is baar... :D
Jodi banegi nahi.. par kuch ghatnaye aisi bannane ki khichdi ban rahi hai ki :sex: ho sakta hai :D
Sachai to ayegi.. pr adhi :gaylaugh: Thanks bhai :hug:
 

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nice update ..ab ye library ki books gang bhi hai jo kisiko pata nahi ,aur gagan bata nahi raha ..
ye aaruhi class me aa gayi aur ekdam fit and fine hai ..
mishra to wakai ghatiya aadmi hai ,jo ladki ko keh rahe ki kahi pe bhi touch ho sakta hai ..
aur ye apne hi beti ko nahakar nikalte huye dekha aur peet diya mishra ne ..

lavanya ke baare me baat nahi ho payi dono ki par ye ladka jo samose kharidne aaya tha kamal ka hai ..
gaaliya mooh se aise nikalti hai ki kya kehna 🤣🤣..
raghav bahut josh me aaya tha ladhne par meghnath ne usko chappal ki power dikha di 🤣..


par ye us ladke ke phone par aaruhi mom ka call aa raha hai kya 🤔🤔🤔..
gaggan hai vo.. kuch bhi bata sakta hai.. :laughing:
Mishra banda sahi hai... isko aage continue karunga.. maza aa raha hai ise likhne mein :D
Ladke ke phone par nahi shruti ke phone par aya tha.. thanks bhai :hug:
comedy se bharpur update tha... to kuch ek naye kirdaaro ne bhi entry li story pe
1) gaggan ne batane se mana kiya ki kaise uska group raat ko library band hone ke baad waha andar jata hai...
wo alag baat hai lekin shruti ek alag hi nautanki suru kar di hai... wo khud ko hi psychologist ghosit karke ab aaruhi ka ilaz karne wali hai... duniya mein chutiyo ki koi kami nahi.. Unme se ek ye shruti hai
2) gaggan shruti ke bilkul Karib kada ho jaane se shruti ko gussa aaya... But why..
shruti ko to jishm ki aag bujhani ne hai, chaahe kisi se bhi bhi ho, vishal se ya gaggan se... to usko gussa kyun aaya

3) aaj aaruhi bilkul normal hai... aww.. kitni cute lag rahi hai.. ek dum masoom chhoti bachhi ki tarah

4) par aaruhi aise normal hona, khush hona dekhi nahi jaa rahi hai us haaraman shruti ko, uske kaleje mein aag si jal uthi hai.. isliye soch rahi hai aaruhi aise kaise normal ho sakti hai...

5)aaruhi ko koi bimari ya kuch bhi nahi hai.. wo bilkul Normal hai... actually pagal ye baaki ke kirdaar ho gaye hai... wo kehte hai na pagal hamesha dusro ko bhi pagal hi samajhte hai.. thik waise hi...

6) us professor mishra ne agar shruti ke sath bhari class mein kuch kar bhi liya to shruti ko koi problem nahi honi chahiye.. Coz wo thehri hawas ki pujaran... usse kya fark padta hai ki koun uske sath sex kar raha hai, ushe to hawas mitane se matlab hai na :D

7) canteen wala scene mein gazab ki comedy create huyi hai...
Meghnath :D... Samose na milne par gaaliya dene se leke raghav naam ke ladke se ladayi tak bilkul heavy comedy ke sath sath heavy dialogue baazi mein bhi koi kami nahi chhodi Meghnath ne...
Waise banda hai interesting.... lo shruti ko ek majnu bhi mil gaya meghnath ke roop mein..

8) aaruhi ki mom shruti ko kyun phone kar rahi thi... abhi to thodi der pehle aaruhi baat kar rahi thi phone pe apni mom se....
Naah, ab zyada mystery ke gehrayi tak nahi jau to hi behtar hai... waise aaj nahi to kal pata chal hi jaani hai asal baat kya hai...
Khair... Kaafi dilchasp update tha aur sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
Thanks naina ji :hug: comedy pasand karne ke liye.. waise ye mera genre nahi hai.. ye to Yug Purush bhai ka hai.. par kosish kari hai kyun ki kahani ke liye jaruri tha :D
Baki kirdar to side character hai.. unko to hum ginte hi nahi.. :D Baki rahi baat shruti ki to kitna jalti ho aap... just like vikrant, malini, mira se jalti thi :gaylaugh: she is lobe :kiss:
Manju :roflbow: han malum chal jayega.. bas kaise ye aage ki kahani hai.. :D
मेघनाथ को देखकर वालीवुड एक्टर विजय राज की याद आ गई । उसकी सारी हरकतें हूबहू विजय राज के एक्टिंग से मिलती जुलती लगा मुझे ।
अभिषेक बच्चन और भूमिका चावला अभिनित " रन " मूवी में आप विजय राज की एक्टिंग देख सकते हैं ।
कैंटीन में उसका समोसा मांगना और उसे दुकानदार से बातें करना.........मन को फ्रेस करने वाला था । बेहतरीन कामेडी का नमूना था ।
कहानी के अंदर ऐसी ऐसी घटनाओं को आना ही चाहिए ताकि थोड़ा बहुत टेंशन से दूर होकर मनोरंजन हो सकें ।

लेकिन क्या मेघनाथ और राघव के इस इवेंट से आरूहि के साथ कोई सम्बन्ध बनता है ?

एक बार आरूहि को मोबाइल पर कुछ मैसेज टाइप करते हुए देखा गया । जहां तक मुझे याद है वो श्रुति के सिवाय और किसी से ज्यादा हिली मिली नहीं है तो फिर वो किसे मैसेज कर रही है?
दूसरी बार उसने श्रुति से झुठ बोला कि उसके माॅम की काॅल आ रही है और यह बोलकर किसी से बातें करने परे खिसक गई । वो किस से बातें करने गई है ?
आरूहि के माॅम की काॅल श्रुति के मोबाइल पर आ रही है इसका मतलब आरूहि ने श्रुति से झुठ बोला कि माॅम की काॅल है ।


इस मिश्रा की तो सबसे पहले हत्या होनी चाहिए । ठरकी तो है ही इंसान भी घटिया है ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।
जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।
Kawa biryani :D Mene puri movie nahi dekhi par vo scene jarur dekha hai movie ka :D Lekin bhai ye utna sidha nahi hai jitna dikh raha hai.. :D Kahani ke do pehlu dikhane ke liye iski entry jaruri thi.. vaise bhi jitne log judenge utne hi to khapenge.. :gaylaugh: Sambhand kya hai aage malum chalega... Mom wali mystery aageaa jani chahie... Rhi baat mishraji ki mein to kahunga ki ye pura college hi gadbad hai.. history is yet to come... every place has a history right? :D Thanks sanju bhai :hug:
 

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majedar update ..ye meghnath to bahut bekar type hai jo haath naa dhokar table pe aur kapde pe pochh raha hai 😡..
par usne aaruhi ke baare me kaha to usko kaise pata aaruhi ke baare me ,,aur jis tarah vishal ne shruti ko bataya uske baare me ,,,meghnath bhi aaruhi ki tarah ki dheela screw na ho 🤔..

aaruhi ki baat nahi huyi apni maa se par usne shruti ko baat ho gayi aisa kaha ..
kahi ye aaruhi supriya ki maa se to baat nahi kar rahi thi phone par 🤔🤔..

lavanya aur tanu 2 alag murder hai aisa vishal ki baato se pata chalta hai ..
aur kisika cctv pe dhyaan na dena yaa puchhtachh na karna theek se 🤔🤔.. koi powerful insan sabko control kar raha ho ..

shruti aur vishal to maja le rahe the room me 😁..
 

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" chut mein se dhuain nikla lawdi.. chut mein se... hahaha.. "

Oohh... Kya uchch vichar hai. Chut se peeke muh se bhi nikalwane ka :deal:

" le madharchod... le... salle... mera baap hai na tu... de apna lund... mita le apni garmi.. yahi chahie tha na tujhe.... " kalyani ne honth chhode aur fir chusne lagi aur fir alag hui, " le dabba meri chatiyun ko kute ke pille yahi dekhta hai sara din.. ankhein behenke lode teri niche hi hoti hai ab daba inhe.. " usne tanu ka hath pakad kar apni

Ye toh daru ke nashe me roleplay karne lagi bhai

" tum sab ki sab randiyan ho, tumhare maa baap ko dikhaun ye sab to tatte gurdon mein fans jayenge sabke... "

Taate gand se baahar nikal jayenge, yadi dekh liya toh
jada buchati bani to tere ashiq ko bata dungi ki tu ladkiyun ki chut mein ungli karti hai, tujhe lund mein interest nahi hai. Fir aashiq kya pure hostel ki ladkiyan tujhse apni bur wali chut chatwayegi.. jitni senior hai jo lund nahi le sakti vo teri jeebh ka istemal karegi.. tu hostel ki kothe wali ban jayegi... har raat alag-alag kamre mein tera sej sajega jahan tu burchatti banegi.. samjhi... chal piii "

:roflol::roflol: adbhud bhai :bow:

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Ye puri story ka kya theme hai... Sab kuch is ek update me tha.. Bakchodayi se lekar burchatayi tak... Illusion se lekar kill-usion tak....

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Tanu jaise Strong character ko pel diya :weep: ab kaun sexy sexy harkate karega... Chut se chut, doodh se doodh ragdega... Ekdum viran kr diya bhai ek second me girls hostel ko... Tanu :sex: waise Tanu jaise character ko starting me pel dena matlab story drugs se bhi jyada bawal hai bhai aur kahani chut se bhi jyada deep hai. Aisa apun ko lag rela hai :D Waise jab se Supriya ne ganja pee usi ke baad ka scene yaha nahi hai... Kyunki wo tab Raveena ke sath :sex: kar rahi thi apne imagination me... Jaha ek aur ladki Arohi aayi... Par ye party sach mehui yaa nahi... Kahna mushqil hai... Par kyunki khoon hua hai Tanu ka toh aise toh mari nahi hogi wo Tanu..... Matlab kaha se kya kaha jaaye.. Kuch samajh hee nahi aa raha.. Ek story bani hai dimag me wahi ordinary type... Par aage dekhte hai... Kaun pel gaya Tanu ko :( ab kaun hostel me nanga naach karega :verysad:
 

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Update 43 tak post kar diya :eek:
Bahut pichhu hai apun... Do peg maarke next update :reading:
 

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Update-16
Adbhut bhai... Tanu ke marne ke baad, ka jo scene tha.mfir chahe wo danda pichhe se daal kar aage se nikalne ka ho yaa supriya ke chillane ka... Current conscious me toh Supriya chillayegi hee.. Fir bhale usi ne maara ho.. Ganja,vanja fook kar..kuch kah nahi sakte :D par yadi aisa hai to uska mobile supriyabke room me nahi chhutna chahiye..kyunki tab to uska dimag aur active raha hoga.. Tab naa... Main faltu soch raha wo sab..yadi waisa hua rahta toh baaki ladkiya kuch to bolti..upar drugs,cigarette ka koyi namo -nishan nahi... Saala ye party hui bhi thi yaa nahi... Ab to aur confusiya gaya hoon...

Baaki megha turu friend hai.. Bhale hee ashleel hai, lekin mast sath de rahi hai... Tanu ke naa rahne par ab megha ke prati mera daba hua pyar jaag gaya hai... Mast laundiya hai, chalak bhi hai...waise chalak to Supriya bhi hai... Aur warden wala scene jaha usko yaad hee naa rahe ki supriya kyun aayi thi... Lawdi,mast tha wo :lol:

Sapna ka sach ho jaana... Noice 😍😍 ekdum se Supriya ke dimag ki aisi taisi ho gayi aur hamari bhi :redface:

Aur filhal inspector ki talwar supriya par nahi latak rahi, sab use sirf dara hua maan rahe hai... Par sach to kuch aur hee ho sakta hai... Kya pata.. :evilgrin:

Ravina aur supriya ka lesbo adventure shayad kuch clear kare :idea: ki vaastav me Supriya hai kya chij :p: lawda kisi pe bharosha nahi apun kl :cool:
 
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