Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

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" tera baap teri chinta to karta hai, par mera baap to meri hi lene ki taak mein rehta hai. Jab mauka mile use kamre mein ghus ata hai, kabhi-kabhi to naha kar bahar ati hun to bathroom ke bahar hi khada rehta hai. Meri bra aur penty ko pakad kar kahega ' kalyani tumhari choice to bahut achi hai, mujhe bhi batao taki mein tumhari mom ke liye bhi khaird sakun' " kalyani kamre ki panchvi ladki jo nasha karne ke baad gardan latkaye bol rahi thi. Supriya ko samajh nahi aya ki vo khud se baat kar rahi hai ya fir use suna rahi hai. Isi duvidha ke chalte usne kuch nahi pucha aur chup hi rehna behtar samjha. " ab to apne hi ghar mein lagta hai ki mera hi baap meri tangon ke bich apna budhape ka ashyana banayega kyun ki meri chutiya maa use samajh hi nahi ata. Na jane kya hua hai use jabse is betichod se shadi kari hai tabse uski har baat manti hai aur meri ek bhi nahi. Pata nahi vo admi meri chutiya maa ko kya deta hai, kai baar to lagta hai tangon ke bich dene ki jagah vo uske dimag mein koi dawai bhar raha hai. Darti hun ghar jane se, us admi se isliye kho jana chahti hun is nashe mein jahan koi dar hai na hi vo admi sala sirf khali hai idhar koi nahi hai.. " kalyani fir chup hui. Supriya ko maa baap ke bare mein aisi gali galoz sun kar ajeeb sa mehsus ho raha tha. Usne na to kabhi aisa kuch suna tha nahi ki uski aisi koi saheli parvirish hui thi. Jo vo bata rahi thi uske liye dukh to hua lekin uska apni maa ko gali dena vo bilkul acha nahi laga.

" apko apni maa ko gali nahi dena chahie " use raha nahi gaya aur muh se nikal gaya. Kalyani bilkul uske samne thi, gardan dayein aur jhuki hui thi supriya ki baat sunte hi usne apni nazre uski taraf uthai jo uske balon ke piche chup to rahi thi lekin fir bhi supriya ko dikhai de rahi thi. Supriya ko tabhi apni galti ka ehsas hua aur usne nazar ghuma li. Vo wahan kyun baithi hai kya kar rahi hai ye abhi tak uske liye ek sawal bana hua tha. Sabhi nashe ki halat mein is kadar pade the ki unme jaise sharir hilane ki takat na ho. Supriya ko ye to amajh aa gaya ki ye sab usi ki wajah se hua jo komal ne us din banaya tha aur aaj bhi bana rahi thi. Na jane kaisi gandi lat hai inhe ye sab lene ki, kahin kisi ko kuch ho gaya to? Supriya ko bas isi baat ka dar tha aur vo wahan se jana chahti thi. Mujhe yahan se chale jana chahie ise acha chance nahi mil sakta, ye log itne nashe mein rahenge ki inhe yaad bhi nahi rahega ki main yahan inke sath ayi thi, Par use pehle mujhe mera phone chahie aur vo tanu ke pas hi hai, kahan rakha hai usne. Supriya nazar tanu ke uppar dalne lagi jo palang par felhi padi thi. Ankhein khuli hui thi lekin jaise is dunia mein nahi balki kisi aur dunia mein padi ho. Supriya ne usne palang ke bache hue hisse par dekha lekin use uska phone nahi mila. " kahan gaya phone abhi to yahin par rakh kar dikha rahi thi, iske niche to nahi dab gaya, shit.. ab kya karun " supriya soch vichar karti rahi, ant mein faisla yahi liya ki tanu ke nashe ka fayda utha kar uske niche se phone nikal kar yahan se jaldi se jaldi chali jaye. Soch to usne liya tha lekin uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki vo aisa kare, ek dar dimagi taur par tanu ka uske bhetar basa hua tha jise vo chah kar bhi nahi nikal paa rahi thi. " kya dar dur karne ke liye mai bhi? " supriya ki nazar beer ki taraf thi. " nahi nahi kya soch rahi hun main bhi.. do minute lagenge tanu ko thoda uthaungi aur nikal lungi.. han ye sahi hai.. " supriya ne faisla kiya aur apni jagah se uthte hue tanu ke uppar ayi ye dekhne ke liye ki tanu ko vakai kuch nahi malum ya vo khuli ankhon se dekh sab rahi hai par kuch bol nahi rahi. Supriya tanu ke theek uppar thi bas sharir ke bich mein thoda fasla bana hua tha. Supriya ne tanu ka chehra dekha, man hi man uski khubsurti ki tarif kiye bina na reh payi. Chehre se judge karne par to kabhi nahi keh sakta ki ye ladki aisi hai. Fir wahi baat hui chehre se kisi ke sach ke bare mein kabhi malum nahi chal sakta. Kaamini ki ukhadti sanson ke shor ko sun supriya soch se bahar ayi. Usne ek baar kaamini ki taraf dekha jo zor-zor se sans le rahi thi jise dekh supriya ko laga ki jaise use sans nahi aa rahi aur vo marne wali ho. Vo kaamini mein itna kho gayi ki usne dhayan nahi diya aur kab kalyani jo usme samne hi thi aage ki taarf jhuk kar niche giri jiske sath do kaam hue, uska sar palang ke kone se takraya aur hath supriya ke ubharo par jiske chalte supriya ka balance bigad gaya aur vo tanu ke uppar hi jaa giri. Giri bhi aise ki uska sar usme baja aur sath hi honth uske honton se ja jude. Honton ka chumban matr kuch hi second ka tha lekin usne supriya ke sharir mein ek ajeeb si sansnahat la di jaise hazron kile ek sath chub rahi ho. Sar lagte hi tanu vapis apni dunia mein aa gayi aur jaise hi usne supriya ko apne uppar dekha to usko bahon mein kas liya.

" dekho to aag iske jism mein, mere uppar chade jaa rahi hai " tanu ki is harkat par supriya sakpaka gayi.

" nahi tanu.. vo main.. galti se.. giri... " khud ko chhudane ki kosish krne lagi lekin tanu use nahi chhod rahi thi.

" ek baat bataun darling, jitna hilegi utni gili hogi meri... " tanu ke shabd sunte hi supriya ne hilna band kar diya. Use samajh aa gaya tha ki tanu kya bolna cha rahi hai. Uski chatiyan vaise hi uski chatiyun se mil chuki thi aur hilne par apas mein ragad kha rahi thi.

" vo main galti se ..... vo kaamini ko kuch ho raha hai... " supriya ne jaise hi baat boli tanu ne fauran kaamini ki taraf dekha aur uski pakad supriya se dhilli ho gayi jiska faiyda uthate hue supriya uske uppar se hatt gayi. Kaamini abhi bhi usi tarah sans le rahi thi aur tanu use ghure jaa rahi thi.

" iske muh par koi peshab kar do tab jagegi ye... " uske sharir mein takat nahi thi isliye vo khadi nahi hui aur yun hi laiti rahi. Supriye ne kuch nahi kiya vo kabhi kaamini ko dekhti to kabhi kalyani ko jo farsh par padi thi aur use hosh hi nahi tha. Supriya ne socha ki phone baad mein le legi abhi yahan se jana behtar hai par aisa vo soch hi payi ki tabhi tanu ek dum se khadi ho gayi aur bistar se utar kar kaamini ki taraf badhi. Supriya ko laga ki tanu uske sath wahi karegi jo usne abhi kaha lekin aisa kuch nahi hua. Supriya ki nazar usi par jami thi isliye jab usne tanu ko kaamini ke uppar jhukte hue dekha to us taraf se usne yahi dekha ki tanu kaamini ke honton ko chum rahi hai. Kuch pal tak tanu nahi hatti to supriya ko laga ki ab vo uske sath bhi aise hi karegi, " nahi nahi.. " supriya man ki jagah zor se bol uthi par shukar tha sabke nashe mein hone ka jo kisi ne nahi suna. Usne chain ki sans li aur tanu ko dekha jo kaamini ko chhod chuki thi aur ab vo bhi sans aram se le rahi thi. Kiss karne se theek ho jatte hain. Supriya ne man mein socha.

" isko har bar sans deni padti hai sali chinnal tere andar tere se jada meri sansein hongi, bhadvi salli... suhagraat par bhi bistar mein apni jagah mujhe laitne dio tere pati ko bhi saans de dungi.. jaisi tu vaise tera bhadva ... kya naam hai uska... aeee kutiyaa.. uth... " tanu ne kaamini ko ek chamat rasida jiske padte hi vo achanak se uth baithi aur fir laat se usne komal ki chatiyun par mara jo deewar ke sahare baithi thi. Ek-do baar marne par use bhi hosh aa gaya. Tanu khud ladhkhda rahi thi lekin usne bari-bari sabko jagaya. Akhri mein bachi kalyan jo karwat ke bal zameen par padi thi, use dekh kar tanu ek pal use waise hi dekhti rahi fir ukhdu hokar baith gayi. " is marau ko bahut jada marwane ka shauk hai, aaj iski maar hi lete hain " tanu ne kalyani ka pajama khinch kar niche kar diya " kaisi patli si kachi pehni hai isne lagta hai iske baap ne lakar di hogi ise aur fir sala vo ise imagine karke budhape ka muth marta hoga... sala hone wala betichodd... L ... O .... L " muh ko gol banate hue tanu boli aur hans padi.

" aee marau jawab de... bata tera baap laya kya " tanu spanking karte hue puch rahi thi aur bich-bich mein hans rahi thi. Baki teeno bhi ye dekh khush the, supriya ko unke chehre dekh yahi laga sirf wahi thi jo wahan dari sehmi thi. " batati kyun nahi... bata naa... " tanu ne spank kar-karke uske gori chutad ko lal kar diya tha.

" ye sali tabhi uthegi jab iske andar iske baap ka lawda jayega... " sonam ne cigratte sulgate hue kaha.

" gori aur badi mulayam hai iski to " tanu ne spanking band karke uski chutdon ko sehlane lagi. " uth marau uth.. bata kaise itni chikni ki tune.. kya lagati hai tu.. " tanu ne uski thong wali penty jo uske chutdon ke bich mein fansi thi use niche khinch diya aur uske uppar chadh gayi. " lekar hi manegi kya tu... hahahahha.. " hanste hue tanu boli fir use kuch jaise yaad aya aur vo achanak se khadi hui.

" chalo randiyun apne apne kapde utar kar fenko aur mujhe dikhao ki tumhari gand marau se jada chikni hai ya nahi... jo jeeta use inam milega aur jo hara use punishment... khadi ho be kya naam hai tera "

" payal "

" to kya pehen kar bajaun? suna nahi uth behen ki loddi... uth aur utar apna pajama aur dikha apni chutdon ko " tanu ke kehte hi payal khadi hui aur usne bina koi sawal kiye pajama niche gira diya. " tum dono ko kya alag se bolun... khadi ho be... girao apna pajama.. " tanu ne kaamini aur komal ki taraf dekh kar kaha. " aaj sabhi ladkiyun ko nanga kiya jayega... " tanu ke elan karte hi supriya ka halak sukh gaya. Use samajh hi nahi aya ki ye kya ho raha hai aur kya chha rahe hain ye log. Tanu ki baat sun kaamini aur komal payal ke bagal mein aa khade hue aur dono ne apna pajama niche kar diya. Kaamini ne komal ke muh se cigratte nikali aur khud muh mein thuste hue dhuain udane lagi. Itni der mein tanu ne kamre mein music chala diya aur kamre mein ganne ka shor gunj utha.

" maine honton se lagai to... hungama ho gaya... " ganne ke sath gatti hui tanu teeno ki taraf palti jinhone pajama utar diya tha " is marau ko tera baap uthayega.. uthaao bee isee " payal ne tanu ki baat sun use uthaya aur vo nasheli halat mein sar malte hue khadi hui use abhi tak nahi pata tha vo niche se nangi hai. Vo bhi sabhi ke sath aa khadi hui. " nanga hone ke liye kaha tha tum sab ko betichodon... nanga nachenge aaj... " bachi hui beer ki kane se beer niptate hue tanu boli aur sabne wahi kiya, pajame ke sath top utar teeno bra aur penty mein aa khadi hui. Payal ne kalyani ki madad ki aur uska top utar diya. Vo abhi bhi hosh mein nahi thi, uski penty tanu ne khinchi thi vo abhi bhi adhi tangon mein fansi hui thi. Supriya ne aisa kabhi kuch socha tak nahi tha jo vo aaj dekh rahi thi.

" char randiyan mere samne khadi hai, charon ki chikni gand mere samne hai.. kaun dega apni gand.. tanu ko bolo.. kaun... tu degi kamini ... " tanu ne uske naam ki jagah gali di aur uski chutadon par baja dala, fir ek ek karke charon ke bajaya.

" tera ho gaya to maal funkne de... " komal palati

" maal funk, chut funk.. ya apne mamme mere muh mein daal de.. tu kya sach mein meri randi hai jo puchti hai? Kabhi to khud bhi kuch kar liya kar... ya lawda chusne ke liye bhi mujhe bulayegi aur puchegi ki chusun ya nahi... " tanu ne komal ki gardan mein bahein dali aur uske honton ko chum liya aur chumte hue dono ek pal ke liye usme kho gayi. Tanu ke hath komal ki pith se fisalte hue uski chutadon tak aa gaye aur vo unhe dabane lagi. Udhar ganna baj raha tha, " kundi mat khadkao raja... sidha andar aao raja.... " chumma chatti samne chal rahi thi lekin sansein supriya ki tezz thi. Usne ankhein band ki aur use raveena aur uske bich hue chumban ki jhalak dikhai de gayi jise dekhte hi usne apni ankhein kholi aur tabhi uski nazar apne phone par gayi jo udhar palang par hi padi thi. Uske ankhon mein chamak aa uthi, ek pal ko usne tanu ki taraf dekha jo apne chumban mein vyast thi aur agle hi pal usne phone utha kar apni chutdon ke niche chupa liya.

 

[harshit1890]

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" aaahh.. maza aa gaya sala... tu bhi tanch maal hai.. ajay ko kab diya tha akhri baar "

" kal hi di thi salle ko apne doston se pelwana tha mujhe, lund par aisa katta ki abhi tak dard mein bilbila raha hoga madaharchod randi hi samajh liya hai mujhe " komal ne kaamini se cigratte chini aur bachi hui khinch kar use wahin kone mein fenk kar dhuain chhodne lagi.

" ye salle tatton ko bas ek baar chut mil jaye fir sochte hain us chut se vo kuch bhi kara le "

" tabhi mujhe ladkon se nafrat hai... ajay to majburi hai warna to... "

" aisi batein karke mahol ki maa mat chod varna mein tujhe chod dungi.. abhi to party hogi... behen ki lodiyun daruu laaoa darruu... aur is marau ko koi jagao " tanu ne kalyani ki chutadon par chapet lagate hue boli.

" iska muh baraf ke andar daal de abhi uchakegi ye... " komal ne payal ko idea diya aur payal use le gayi. Kaamini maal banane mein lagi thi aur tanu nachne mein. Nashe mein kisi ka dhayan hi nahi tha ki wahan unke alawa supriya bhi baithi hai aur unki harkat dekh rahi hai. Dusri taraf supriya bahar bhagna chahti thi lekin tanu, komal dono wahin gate ke samne nachne mein vyast thi. Dono kabhi ek dusre ke sharir ko bahon mein bhar kar dance karte to tanu kabhi uski chatiyun ko dabati hui horn bajati aur kabhi uski chutadon par thapad laga deti. Komal bich bich mein beer pii rahi thi aur fir kuch der baad payal kalyani ko lekar aa gayi jo use galiyan de rahi thi shayad payal ne wahi kiya tha jaisa use komal ne kaha tha.

" marau gand to matka kar dikha zara... " tanu ne uski gand par chapet lagate hue kaha aur payal ne beer uske muh mein thus di taki vo bak-bak band kar de.

" nangi hona hai to khul kar hoo.. fir dikhaungi matka kar " kalyani ko na jane kaun sa josh chada char ghunt beer ke bharne ke baad aur usne apni penty utari aur fir bra utar kar fenk di jo sidhe supriya ke samne giri aur is tarah marau yani kalyani nangi nachne lagi. Tangein khol kabhi apne mame dabati kabhi chutadon par hath rakh kar kamar idhar udhar ghumati. Baki ladkiyan hooting karti hui uske is nach ka anand utha rahi thi aur tanu bich bich mein sitti baja deti. Kaamini ne apna maal banaya aur sabse pehle tanu ki taraf badhaya. Tanu ne ek kasht liya aur kalyani ki taraf badhaya. Kalyani ne jhat se use pakda aur ek sath do-do kasht khinch gayi.

" chut mein se dhuain nikla lawdi.. chut mein se... hahaha.. " tanu uspar hanste hue cheekhi lekin kalyani ko farak na padh raha tha. Use is nashe ke aage sab bekar lag raha tha. Uske baad payal, komal aur fir kaamini ne ek ek kasht liya aur sabne usi ke uppar beer pii li. Ab nasha ek baar fir chadh gaya tha aur is tafri mein vo apna asli asar chhod raha tha. Achanak se nachte hue na jane kalyani ko kya hua vo tanu ki taraf lapki aur uske honton ko chumne lagi. Sabhi uski harkat par hooting karne lagee...aur vo aise paglon ki tarah tanu ke honth chusne lagi jaise vo uski sans hi rok legi.

" le madharchod... le... salle... mera baap hai na tu... de apna lund... mita le apni garmi.. yahi chahie tha na tujhe.... " kalyani ne honth chhode aur fir chusne lagi aur fir alag hui, " le dabba meri chatiyun ko kute ke pille yahi dekhta hai sara din.. ankhein behenke lode teri niche hi hoti hai ab daba inhe.. " usne tanu ka hath pakad kar apni chatiyun par rakh diya aur khud hi dabane lagi.

" is bitiyachod ko koi hatao ye mere ko kha rahi hai....hahaha... sali mein tera baap nahi hun... " tanu hanste hue boli.

" le lode.. lund de apna.. daal is chut mein... de naa.. kya hua bhosdiwalle... meri maa mein daal diya hai kya.. deta kyun nahi... " kalyani tanu ke pajame ke uppar se uski chut ko pakad kar bolne lagi.

" main tera baap nahi hun.. maaf kar.. maaf kar.. hahahahaha... " tanu pet pakad kar hans rahi thi. Payal ne use tanu se dur kiya aur kamar se pakad liya jiske baad dono ke bich hi chumma chatti shuru ho gayi. Jaise payal isi ka intezar kar rahi thi, dono ke honth jude hue the. Payal uski chatiyun ko dabate hue apna hath chut par le gayi aur use sehlane lagi.

" tu bahut sahi pakad kar layi hai is baar " tanu ne ishare se maal wala cigratte manga uski nazar abhi bhi dono par hi thi. Komal ne use cigratte apne kasht ke baad pakda di. Aur fir kaamini ne komal ko apni taraf ghuma kar apna muh uski chut ke uppar rakh diya aur uski penty ke uppar se hi use chumne lagi. " ise lund chusne ka shauk hai isliye mera lund samajh kar chusne mein lagi hai... " komal ne kaamini ke baal uske chehre se hatate hue kaha.

" tum sab ki sab randiyan ho, tumhare maa baap ko dikhaun ye sab to tatte gurdon mein fans jayenge sabke... " tanu ne hanste hue ek kasht khincha aur khinchte hue vo ruk gayi, jaise use kuch yaad aya. Vo turant piche mudi aur usne dhuain chhoda. Supriya kab se dekh rahi thi, sirf dekh rahi thi shant atma ban kar dekh rahi thi taki abhas tak na ho lekin shayad ab ho chala tha.

" fuck... ab gayi.. " usne man mein socha aur apne sharir ko aise kas liya mano uthegi nahi. Tanu uske pas ayi aur samne aa khadi hui. Suspriya ki ankhein uske chehre se takra rahi thi, Maal jal raha tha, supriya ko laga ki tanu abhi khinch kar use nanga karegi lekin aisa nahi hua, usne maal se bhari cigratte supriya ki taraf badhai. Supriya hairan pareshan kabhi us cigrate ko dekht kabhi tanu ko.

" lee.. " ishare se tanu ne kaha lekin supriya ne nah mein sar hila diya. Use laga vo maan jayegi lekin aisa nahi hua, tanu jhuki aur us cigrate ko uske muh mein thus diya. " mene kaha le to le.. jada buchati bani to tere ashiq ko bata dungi ki tu ladkiyun ki chut mein ungli karti hai, tujhe lund mein interest nahi hai. Fir aashiq kya pure hostel ki ladkiyan tujhse apni bur wali chut chatwayegi.. jitni senior hai jo lund nahi le sakti vo teri jeebh ka istemal karegi.. tu hostel ki kothe wali ban jayegi... har raat alag-alag kamre mein tera sej sajega jahan tu burchatti banegi.. samjhi... chal piii " tanu ne supriya ke baal khinchte hue kaha. Jo ladki kuch pal pehle hans rahi thi uske chehre par aseem gussa tha. Supriya dar ki wajah se mimiya kar hi reh gayi.

" piti hai ya fir meri chut se hi udghatan karegi... " tanu ke baal khinchne par supriya ko dard utha uppar se uski dhamki jo vo sach kar sakti thi us dar ki wajah se usne na chahte hue bhi kasht khincha aur halka sa khinchne par hi use khansi aa gayi lekin na to tanu ne cigratte hatai aur na khud hatti. Supriya ki ankhon se pani nikal aya aur usne fir kosish ki is baar jada ki aur kasht lete hi vo zor zor se khasne lagi jiske baad tanu ko hatna pada aur cigratte wahin gir kar palang ke niche chali gayi.

" madharchodd.. " tanu jhuk kar palang ke niche se cigratte khojne lagi. Par jo tanu chahti thi vo ho chuka tha, supriya ke dimag tak us nashe ka asar pahunch chuka tha. Khanste khanste uska sar ghumne laga aur sab kuch gol-gol ghumta hua dikhai dene laga. Usne apna sar pakda aur jab uthne ki kosish ki to whin dham se baith gayi. Samne ka nazara ghumta hua aur jitne bhi insan khade the vo sab use do-do dikhai de rahe the. Speaker se ati madhur awaz ek bhari awaz mein tabdeel ho gayi jaise koi uske sar ke andar dhol peet raha ho. Ek pal ke baad sari images badal gayi, speaker se atti ganne ki awaz band ho gayi, samne nangi khadi ladkiyan hath gayi, kamre ke andhera hath gaya. Image badal kar ayi jahan vo raveena ke sath kiss kar rahi thi itna hi nahi balki uske sath bistar par nangi laiti uski bahon mein lipti hui madhoshi ke alam mein khoi hui. Agle hi pal image badal gayi, bistar par sirf vo thi aur ankhein band kiye laite hue apne hath se apni chut masal rahi thi jaise pehli baar masal rahi ho, dhire-dhire bich bich mein tez sansein hoti aur hath khinch leti. Iske baad sab kuch badal gaya, palang, maa baap ke sath hanse wala manjar jo ek pal ke liye aya tha vo kho gaya aur sab kuch andhkar mein badal gaya, itna andhera ki use khud ke hath per tak nahi dikhai de rahe the. Vo kahan thi ye use malum nahi tha aur jor-jor se apne maa baap ko awaz laga rahi thi. Itni shanti thi us jagah ki uske rone ke sath tez chalti sans bhi jo bich-bich mein ukhad rahi thi, usi bich ek awaz ayi... " Aaruhi... " awaz ke baad kuch sunai nahi diya aur supriya ki ankhein khuli thi aur vo chatt ki taraf dekh rahi thi, sab kuch shant ho chuka tha.

" supriya... supriya.... supriyaa... uth.. supriyaa..... " gaal par pandrah bees thap-thapahat padne ke baad supriya ki ankh khuli, jisme abhi bhi dhundla pan tha. Supriya aise uth rahi thi mano gehri nind se bich mein jaga diya ho. Usne apni ankhon ko aur khola fir band kiya ki galon par padh rahi thap-thapahat ki wajah se fir khul gayi aur dhundla pan dhire-dhire hatne laga.

" megha.. " samne khadi megha ko dekhte hue vo boli aur fir ankhein saaf karne lagi. " tu yahan kaise.. kab " ubasi lete hue supriya boli.

" yahan sab kaise chhod tu bata tu yahan kya kar rahi hai tujhe mene.. "

" vo ... tera sara plan chopat ho gaya.. kal raat ko tanu ne mujhe dhund hi liya aur main uske kamre mein jaa pahunchi.. "

" kamre mein? tu kal raat uske kamre mein thi? " megha ne uska chehra uppar ki taraf uthaya jo nind ki wajah se jhukta jaa raha tha. " bolti kyun nahi.. kya kar rahi thi tanu ke kamre mein " is baar megha chikhi.

" thi thi kya kar rahi hai wahin to hun, tu subah subah kya bol rahi hai " is baar choti hi sahi puri tarah se ankh kholte hue supriya boli.

" tanu ke kamre mein? tu kya pagal ho gayi hai.. tu is waqt wahan hai jahan mene tujhe bheja tha kal raat par puri raat yahin pade rehne ke liye nahi.. "

" kya pagalon wali baat kar rahi hai main.. " supriya bas itna hi boli kyun ki uski nazar jab bagal ke pot par gayi aur khud ko usne deewar ke sahare baithe paya to uski sari nind tut gayi. Vo ek dum se khadi hui jisme use dikat hui par megha ki madad se vo khadi ho gayi.

" main yahan ..... " bathroom ke usi cucible mein khud ko pakar supriya hairani mein megha ki taraf dekhne lagi " main yahan kaise ayi megha.. main to tanu ke room mein thi kal raat ko "

" tu ye kya bol rahi hai supriya.. "

" main sach keh rahi hun, mere sath kal kuch ajeeb hua, yaad nahi aa raha kya hua tha lekin kuch ajeeb hua tha tabhi main tanu ke kamre mein jaa pahunchi thi ... par mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki main yahan kaise ayi wapis.. "

" tu tanu ke room mein kaise jaa sakti hai, tujhe to yahan ana tha "

" han han ana tha lekin uske baad main tanu ke room mein hi thi "

" ssshhhhhhh muh band kar " megha ne supriya ka muh band kar diya aur tabhi piche se do ladkiyan apas mein baat karte hue bathroom se nikli jisme se ek abhi-abhi ayi thi dusri ke pas aur dono bahut jaldi mein wahan se nikal gaye the.

" muh band kar.. kal tu tanu ke kamre mein nahi thi samjhi " megha ne uske muh se hath hataya.

" tu pagal ho gayi hai kya.. main jab wahin thi to "

" kal raat tanu ka khoon ho gaya hai supriya.. " megha ke bolte hi supriya apna sentence complete kiye bina use ghurne lagi.

 

[A-Star]

Behad hi umda kahani hai

 

[Naina]

jo ho raha tha tanu ke room mein... maybe ant mein nasha fukne ke baad jab supriya behosh ho gayi to ushe tanu aur gang milke bathroom chhod aayi... lekin bathroom hi kyun??
lekin subhah jo megha bol rahi thi... dimag hi block ho jaaye aisi baat thi... tanu ki maut.... ahaha... akhir Kar harshit saheb ne apni sabse favorite reader ke dil ki baat sun hi li..
chalo 10 - 20 nahi ek kirdaar to maari gayi
Ab yaha pe ek sawaal uthe ki
kya wo log jaante the ki supriya pehle bathroom mein chupi thi phir baad mein unlogo se mili... isliye bathroom chhod aayi... aur is ghatana ko is tarah se dikhana chaahti jaise supriya ko koi mansik rog hai...ki kal ko agar supriya bole bhi ki wo bhi tanu ke room mein un sabhi ke sath thi to baat ko taal diya jaaye... btw is baat par shaq 30% hai..( harshu ji dua kijiye ki yeh baat sach na ho...warna tanu to gayi.. ab iski gang ki koi Khair nahi .. ju know na uske baad kaise revos aane wale hai )
ya phir...
matlab lagbhag lagbhag araman wali bimari is supriya ko bhi hai
next araman to nahi lekin mansik rog liye ek aur jarur aa gayi hai girls hostel.. . btw syndromes mein similarities to wohi hai aisa lage.. baaki waqt ke sath pata chale maybe...
hmm.... sukar hai Arman ne apni study completed ki... lekin ye supriya hostel join karte hi hallucinations illusion ke chalte na jaane kya kuch apne hi dimag mein imagination kiye jaa rahi hai
I think kuch to hua hoga iski past mein... jiske chalte na ghatne wali ghatanao ko bhi apne subconscious mind mein is kadar bun lete hai ki lage jo ho raha hai wo sach hai.. ek tarah se uske DARR ko uske mann mein hi ek jeeta jaagta roop deta hai subconscious mind...
I think... Kisi achhe psychologist ya phir kisi achhe psychiatrist ko dikhana chahiye, taaki pata to chale ki akhir mazra kya hai..
hmm..... lagta hai kisi ki help leni hogi... kisi psychologist ki
Chutiyadr sahab zara idhar padhariye aur dekhiye is supriya ko akhir kya hua hai... zara bataiye...
taaki is story ke saare suspense se parda hat sake

Mujhe do tin kirdaaro pe shaq hai... tanu ki hatya ya to uski friends ne ki hai, ya phir us kirdaar ne jo abhi parde ke piche chupke ye khel, khel raha hai, ya phir khud supriya ne
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshu ji

 

[Naina]

Bahut bahut dhanyawad....

Baat wahan se chupi hai ya actually mein kahin aur se ye to ane wla waqt hi batayega... Wahi to kahani ka pehla post hai...

dua kijiye lead heroine mahaz mansik rogi ho.... Agar aisa nahi hai.. wo bilkul thik hai.. aur uske sath ye game khel raha hai koi ya sabhi milke to is kahani ke sabhi kirdaar to giyo
sabhi kirdaar next time kisi story pe aane se pehle sau baar soche ki kahi reader naina to wahan nahi
lekin pata nahi kyun but feeling sad

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

समझ में नहीं आ रहा है कि चक्कर क्या है ! एक नहीं बल्कि बहुत चीजें ऐसी हुई जो कल्पना शक्ति के बाहर है ।
( और सबसे बढ़कर कन्फ्यूजन फैंटेसी में लिखना है )
क्या सुप्रिया पागल है ? क्या उसकी मनोदशा ठीक नहीं है ? क्या वो अपने किसी पास्ट को याद कर अचेतन अवस्था में चली जाती है ? या उसके साथ बहुत ही बड़ा षड्यंत्र किया जा रहा है !

तन्नु , कामिनी , कोमल , कल्याणी और सोनम......... कौन है ये लड़कियां ?
मुझे लगता है कि ये सभी लड़कियां अपने फेमिली से कहीं न कहीं ओफेनडेड है.... शायद इन्होंने वो भोगा है जो नहीं भोगना चाहिए था....सारी लड़कियां अपने गार्डियन से दुखी होकर हास्टल में आई है... शायद ।
गांजा पीती है....बियर पीती है.... और फिर अपने गमों को उस नशे में भुलाने की कोशिश करती है ।
मुझे नहीं लगता है कि वो अफीम , हीरोइन , मारिजुएना , ब्राउन शुगर , एल एस डी , कोकीन जैसे मंहगी ड्रग्स इस्तेमाल करती होती । होने को तो कुछ भी हो सकता है पर इन लड़कियों के साथ होना मुझे नहीं लगता है ।

लेकिन एक बात तो तय है कि सुप्रिया या उसके गार्डियन के किए गए जाने अंजाने में कुछ ऐसे कर्म है जो सुप्रिया के साथ ये सब घट रहा है ।

कल्याणी का कैरेक्टर बहुत ही बढ़िया तरीके से डेवलप किया गया है.... उसका तकिया कलाम से लेकर उसके बातों तक ।
भांति-भांति के लोग पाए जाते हैं,.... कल्याणी का बाप भी उन्हीं लोगों में शामिल हैं । ऐसे में वो घर में न रहकर अपनी पुरी लाइफ बाहर ही बिताए तो अच्छी बात है न ! उसने रहने के लिए हास्टल चुना तो मैं यही कहूंगा कि उसने बहुत ही अच्छा किया ।

लेकिन नशेड़ी प्रवृत्ति होना...... मात्र कुछेक क्षण के लिए टेंशन से मुक्त होना .... लेकिन बाद में सिर्फ और सिर्फ अफसोस करना ही होता है ।

बेहतरीन अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

 

[Naina]

harshit1890 sahab

 

[harshit1890]

harshit1890 sahab

ka hua

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

Update ~~ 14​

" tera baap teri chinta to karta hai, par mera baap to meri hi lene ki taak mein rehta hai. Jab mauka mile use kamre mein ghus ata hai, kabhi-kabhi to naha kar bahar ati hun to bathroom ke bahar hi khada rehta hai. Meri bra aur penty ko pakad kar kahega ' kalyani tumhari choice to bahut achi hai, mujhe bhi batao taki mein tumhari mom ke liye bhi khaird sakun' " kalyani kamre ki panchvi ladki jo nasha karne ke baad gardan latkaye bol rahi thi. Supriya ko samajh nahi aya ki vo khud se baat kar rahi hai ya fir use suna rahi hai. Isi duvidha ke chalte usne kuch nahi pucha aur chup hi rehna behtar samjha. " ab to apne hi ghar mein lagta hai ki mera hi baap meri tangon ke bich apna budhape ka ashyana banayega kyun ki meri chutiya maa use samajh hi nahi ata. Na jane kya hua hai use jabse is betichod se shadi kari hai tabse uski har baat manti hai aur meri ek bhi nahi. Pata nahi vo admi meri chutiya maa ko kya deta hai, kai baar to lagta hai tangon ke bich dene ki jagah vo uske dimag mein koi dawai bhar raha hai. Darti hun ghar jane se, us admi se isliye kho jana chahti hun is nashe mein jahan koi dar hai na hi vo admi sala sirf khali hai idhar koi nahi hai.. " kalyani fir chup hui. Supriya ko maa baap ke bare mein aisi gali galoz sun kar ajeeb sa mehsus ho raha tha. Usne na to kabhi aisa kuch suna tha nahi ki uski aisi koi saheli parvirish hui thi. Jo vo bata rahi thi uske liye dukh to hua lekin uska apni maa ko gali dena vo bilkul acha nahi laga.

" apko apni maa ko gali nahi dena chahie " use raha nahi gaya aur muh se nikal gaya. Kalyani bilkul uske samne thi, gardan dayein aur jhuki hui thi supriya ki baat sunte hi usne apni nazre uski taraf uthai jo uske balon ke piche chup to rahi thi lekin fir bhi supriya ko dikhai de rahi thi. Supriya ko tabhi apni galti ka ehsas hua aur usne nazar ghuma li. Vo wahan kyun baithi hai kya kar rahi hai ye abhi tak uske liye ek sawal bana hua tha. Sabhi nashe ki halat mein is kadar pade the ki unme jaise sharir hilane ki takat na ho. Supriya ko ye to amajh aa gaya ki ye sab usi ki wajah se hua jo komal ne us din banaya tha aur aaj bhi bana rahi thi. Na jane kaisi gandi lat hai inhe ye sab lene ki, kahin kisi ko kuch ho gaya to? Supriya ko bas isi baat ka dar tha aur vo wahan se jana chahti thi. Mujhe yahan se chale jana chahie ise acha chance nahi mil sakta, ye log itne nashe mein rahenge ki inhe yaad bhi nahi rahega ki main yahan inke sath ayi thi, Par use pehle mujhe mera phone chahie aur vo tanu ke pas hi hai, kahan rakha hai usne. Supriya nazar tanu ke uppar dalne lagi jo palang par felhi padi thi. Ankhein khuli hui thi lekin jaise is dunia mein nahi balki kisi aur dunia mein padi ho. Supriya ne usne palang ke bache hue hisse par dekha lekin use uska phone nahi mila. " kahan gaya phone abhi to yahin par rakh kar dikha rahi thi, iske niche to nahi dab gaya, shit.. ab kya karun " supriya soch vichar karti rahi, ant mein faisla yahi liya ki tanu ke nashe ka fayda utha kar uske niche se phone nikal kar yahan se jaldi se jaldi chali jaye. Soch to usne liya tha lekin uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki vo aisa kare, ek dar dimagi taur par tanu ka uske bhetar basa hua tha jise vo chah kar bhi nahi nikal paa rahi thi. " kya dar dur karne ke liye mai bhi? " supriya ki nazar beer ki taraf thi. " nahi nahi kya soch rahi hun main bhi.. do minute lagenge tanu ko thoda uthaungi aur nikal lungi.. han ye sahi hai.. " supriya ne faisla kiya aur apni jagah se uthte hue tanu ke uppar ayi ye dekhne ke liye ki tanu ko vakai kuch nahi malum ya vo khuli ankhon se dekh sab rahi hai par kuch bol nahi rahi. Supriya tanu ke theek uppar thi bas sharir ke bich mein thoda fasla bana hua tha. Supriya ne tanu ka chehra dekha, man hi man uski khubsurti ki tarif kiye bina na reh payi. Chehre se judge karne par to kabhi nahi keh sakta ki ye ladki aisi hai. Fir wahi baat hui chehre se kisi ke sach ke bare mein kabhi malum nahi chal sakta. Kaamini ki ukhadti sanson ke shor ko sun supriya soch se bahar ayi. Usne ek baar kaamini ki taraf dekha jo zor-zor se sans le rahi thi jise dekh supriya ko laga ki jaise use sans nahi aa rahi aur vo marne wali ho. Vo kaamini mein itna kho gayi ki usne dhayan nahi diya aur kab kalyani jo usme samne hi thi aage ki taarf jhuk kar niche giri jiske sath do kaam hue, uska sar palang ke kone se takraya aur hath supriya ke ubharo par jiske chalte supriya ka balance bigad gaya aur vo tanu ke uppar hi jaa giri. Giri bhi aise ki uska sar usme baja aur sath hi honth uske honton se ja jude. Honton ka chumban matr kuch hi second ka tha lekin usne supriya ke sharir mein ek ajeeb si sansnahat la di jaise hazron kile ek sath chub rahi ho. Sar lagte hi tanu vapis apni dunia mein aa gayi aur jaise hi usne supriya ko apne uppar dekha to usko bahon mein kas liya.

" dekho to aag iske jism mein, mere uppar chade jaa rahi hai " tanu ki is harkat par supriya sakpaka gayi.

" nahi tanu.. vo main.. galti se.. giri... " khud ko chhudane ki kosish krne lagi lekin tanu use nahi chhod rahi thi.

" ek baat bataun darling, jitna hilegi utni gili hogi meri... " tanu ke shabd sunte hi supriya ne hilna band kar diya. Use samajh aa gaya tha ki tanu kya bolna cha rahi hai. Uski chatiyan vaise hi uski chatiyun se mil chuki thi aur hilne par apas mein ragad kha rahi thi.

" vo main galti se ..... vo kaamini ko kuch ho raha hai... " supriya ne jaise hi baat boli tanu ne fauran kaamini ki taraf dekha aur uski pakad supriya se dhilli ho gayi jiska faiyda uthate hue supriya uske uppar se hatt gayi. Kaamini abhi bhi usi tarah sans le rahi thi aur tanu use ghure jaa rahi thi.

" iske muh par koi peshab kar do tab jagegi ye... " uske sharir mein takat nahi thi isliye vo khadi nahi hui aur yun hi laiti rahi. Supriye ne kuch nahi kiya vo kabhi kaamini ko dekhti to kabhi kalyani ko jo farsh par padi thi aur use hosh hi nahi tha. Supriya ne socha ki phone baad mein le legi abhi yahan se jana behtar hai par aisa vo soch hi payi ki tabhi tanu ek dum se khadi ho gayi aur bistar se utar kar kaamini ki taraf badhi. Supriya ko laga ki tanu uske sath wahi karegi jo usne abhi kaha lekin aisa kuch nahi hua. Supriya ki nazar usi par jami thi isliye jab usne tanu ko kaamini ke uppar jhukte hue dekha to us taraf se usne yahi dekha ki tanu kaamini ke honton ko chum rahi hai. Kuch pal tak tanu nahi hatti to supriya ko laga ki ab vo uske sath bhi aise hi karegi, " nahi nahi.. " supriya man ki jagah zor se bol uthi par shukar tha sabke nashe mein hone ka jo kisi ne nahi suna. Usne chain ki sans li aur tanu ko dekha jo kaamini ko chhod chuki thi aur ab vo bhi sans aram se le rahi thi. Kiss karne se theek ho jatte hain. Supriya ne man mein socha.

" isko har bar sans deni padti hai sali chinnal tere andar tere se jada meri sansein hongi, bhadvi salli... suhagraat par bhi bistar mein apni jagah mujhe laitne dio tere pati ko bhi saans de dungi.. jaisi tu vaise tera bhadva ... kya naam hai uska... aeee kutiyaa.. uth... " tanu ne kaamini ko ek chamat rasida jiske padte hi vo achanak se uth baithi aur fir laat se usne komal ki chatiyun par mara jo deewar ke sahare baithi thi. Ek-do baar marne par use bhi hosh aa gaya. Tanu khud ladhkhda rahi thi lekin usne bari-bari sabko jagaya. Akhri mein bachi kalyan jo karwat ke bal zameen par padi thi, use dekh kar tanu ek pal use waise hi dekhti rahi fir ukhdu hokar baith gayi. " is marau ko bahut jada marwane ka shauk hai, aaj iski maar hi lete hain " tanu ne kalyani ka pajama khinch kar niche kar diya " kaisi patli si kachi pehni hai isne lagta hai iske baap ne lakar di hogi ise aur fir sala vo ise imagine karke budhape ka muth marta hoga... sala hone wala betichodd... L ... O .... L " muh ko gol banate hue tanu boli aur hans padi.

" aee marau jawab de... bata tera baap laya kya " tanu spanking karte hue puch rahi thi aur bich-bich mein hans rahi thi. Baki teeno bhi ye dekh khush the, supriya ko unke chehre dekh yahi laga sirf wahi thi jo wahan dari sehmi thi. " batati kyun nahi... bata naa... " tanu ne spank kar-karke uske gori chutad ko lal kar diya tha.

" ye sali tabhi uthegi jab iske andar iske baap ka lawda jayega... " sonam ne cigratte sulgate hue kaha.

" gori aur badi mulayam hai iski to " tanu ne spanking band karke uski chutdon ko sehlane lagi. " uth marau uth.. bata kaise itni chikni ki tune.. kya lagati hai tu.. " tanu ne uski thong wali penty jo uske chutdon ke bich mein fansi thi use niche khinch diya aur uske uppar chadh gayi. " lekar hi manegi kya tu... hahahahha.. " hanste hue tanu boli fir use kuch jaise yaad aya aur vo achanak se khadi hui.

" chalo randiyun apne apne kapde utar kar fenko aur mujhe dikhao ki tumhari gand marau se jada chikni hai ya nahi... jo jeeta use inam milega aur jo hara use punishment... khadi ho be kya naam hai tera "

" payal "

" to kya pehen kar bajaun? suna nahi uth behen ki loddi... uth aur utar apna pajama aur dikha apni chutdon ko " tanu ke kehte hi payal khadi hui aur usne bina koi sawal kiye pajama niche gira diya. " tum dono ko kya alag se bolun... khadi ho be... girao apna pajama.. " tanu ne kaamini aur komal ki taraf dekh kar kaha. " aaj sabhi ladkiyun ko nanga kiya jayega... " tanu ke elan karte hi supriya ka halak sukh gaya. Use samajh hi nahi aya ki ye kya ho raha hai aur kya chha rahe hain ye log. Tanu ki baat sun kaamini aur komal payal ke bagal mein aa khade hue aur dono ne apna pajama niche kar diya. Kaamini ne komal ke muh se cigratte nikali aur khud muh mein thuste hue dhuain udane lagi. Itni der mein tanu ne kamre mein music chala diya aur kamre mein ganne ka shor gunj utha.

" maine honton se lagai to... hungama ho gaya... " ganne ke sath gatti hui tanu teeno ki taraf palti jinhone pajama utar diya tha " is marau ko tera baap uthayega.. uthaao bee isee " payal ne tanu ki baat sun use uthaya aur vo nasheli halat mein sar malte hue khadi hui use abhi tak nahi pata tha vo niche se nangi hai. Vo bhi sabhi ke sath aa khadi hui. " nanga hone ke liye kaha tha tum sab ko betichodon... nanga nachenge aaj... " bachi hui beer ki kane se beer niptate hue tanu boli aur sabne wahi kiya, pajame ke sath top utar teeno bra aur penty mein aa khadi hui. Payal ne kalyani ki madad ki aur uska top utar diya. Vo abhi bhi hosh mein nahi thi, uski penty tanu ne khinchi thi vo abhi bhi adhi tangon mein fansi hui thi. Supriya ne aisa kabhi kuch socha tak nahi tha jo vo aaj dekh rahi thi.

" char randiyan mere samne khadi hai, charon ki chikni gand mere samne hai.. kaun dega apni gand.. tanu ko bolo.. kaun... tu degi kamini ... " tanu ne uske naam ki jagah gali di aur uski chutadon par baja dala, fir ek ek karke charon ke bajaya.

" tera ho gaya to maal funkne de... " komal palati

" maal funk, chut funk.. ya apne mamme mere muh mein daal de.. tu kya sach mein meri randi hai jo puchti hai? Kabhi to khud bhi kuch kar liya kar... ya lawda chusne ke liye bhi mujhe bulayegi aur puchegi ki chusun ya nahi... " tanu ne komal ki gardan mein bahein dali aur uske honton ko chum liya aur chumte hue dono ek pal ke liye usme kho gayi. Tanu ke hath komal ki pith se fisalte hue uski chutadon tak aa gaye aur vo unhe dabane lagi. Udhar ganna baj raha tha, " kundi mat khadkao raja... sidha andar aao raja.... " chumma chatti samne chal rahi thi lekin sansein supriya ki tezz thi. Usne ankhein band ki aur use raveena aur uske bich hue chumban ki jhalak dikhai de gayi jise dekhte hi usne apni ankhein kholi aur tabhi uski nazar apne phone par gayi jo udhar palang par hi padi thi. Uske ankhon mein chamak aa uthi, ek pal ko usne tanu ki taraf dekha jo apne chumban mein vyast thi aur agle hi pal usne phone utha kar apni chutdon ke niche chupa liya.

nice update ..sab nashe me tull ..kalyani ki kahani bhi majedar hai uska baap to bahut tharki lagta hai aur maa chutiya ..
phone lene ke chakkar me tanu se kiss ho gayi .
tanu to nashe me bhi kiss ka maja le rahi hai komal ke saath ..
ab phone dikh gaya to uthake chudto ke bich hi rakh diya supriya ne ..

 

[Naina]

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