Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Jaguaar]

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" canteen mein sab samne aisi batein karti hai ki teri wajah se sab mere bare mein bhi galat sochenge. Ladke hamesha usi nighaon se dekhenge ki ye ladki aise baat karti hai ye to asani se de degi " supriya abhi tak bhadki hui thi.

" ohoo supriya tu bhi ek dum typical girl school mein padne wali ladki ki tarah baat kar rahi hai. Tum logon ne ladkon ko lekar galat soch bana rakhi hai kyun ki zindagi bhar tum ladkiyun ne apas mein hi gutur-guu kari hai, gyan chahie to humse puch " megha ne supriya ka hath pakadte hue kaha.

" han han sara gyan to tere andar hi hai aur ye hath chhod, lesbian nahi hun mein "

" Tu vo chhod aur ye samajh agar koi ladka tera tan yaad karke apna lawda malta hai to isme teri jeet hai aur uski haar puch kaise? "

" puch na kaise? " supriya par zor dalte hue megha boli. Usne uska hath abhi tak nahi chhoda tha jise supriya ne chhudane ki kosish bhi nahi ki thi.

" kaise " supriya jhallai aur ek jagah ruk hi gayi ya use megha ne rok liya tha ye use yaad nahi tha.

" hath se mal kar maar to apne hi bacha rahe hain na to ho gaya na nuksan heheh ehehehe "

" wahiyad, totally wahiyad. Chhod mein jaa rahi hun " supriya jane lagi par megha ne uska hath nahi chhoda.

" kahan jaa rahi hai apne valle ko to tadne de " megha ki nazar ka picha karte hue usne dekha to paya vo use ground ke pas le ayi thi jahan par akash apni team ke sath practice kar raha tha.

" kamini hai tu bhi puri mujhe yahan le ayi pata hi nahi chala "

" haye re supriya, ab to isko apni deni hi padegi bechara itni mehnat jo kar raha hai " megha ki betuki ki excitement dekh supriya man hi man use gali dene lagi. " bhag akash bhag... " megha chillai jiski awaz akash tak pahunch gayi aur usne uski taraf dekh smile pass kar di.

" kab tak khadi rahegi ? " supriya chidte hue boli.

" ruk na do minute khatam hone wala hoga "

" tujhe kaise pata? tujhe soccer ka bhi gyan hai ? "

" mujhe sirf bistar ka gyan hai vahi sikha hai par dekh karlag raha hai khatam hone wala hai, do minute ruk aur cheer karna meri tarah " megha boli " go akash go make a goal "

" mujhe room change karana hi padega " supriya majburi mein wahan khadi rahi aur dekhte dekhte use soccer mein interest ane laga. School time jo sports hote the usme use ek sport mein badha interest tha aur vo thi kushti. Uska school sports ko lekar khaskar ki kushti ko lekar kafi famous tha aur supriya bhi team ek khas member hua karti thi. Shuruwati dino mein use is sport mein koi dilchaspi nahi thi lekin uski ek saheli 'Ravina' usko pasand tha aur uski wajah se usne bhi team mein shamil hone ke liye practice shuru ki thi aur fir pata hi nahi chala kab use is khel se pyar ho gaya. Kushti khelne mein jitna stamina chahie tha utni hi takat ki jarurat thi isliye vo ravina ke sath school khatam hone ke baad practice kiya karti thi. Ravina uski bahut close firends ho gayi thi, itni close ho gayi thi ki uski maa ke alawa sirf ravina hi thi jisne uske badan ko bina kisi kapde ke dekha tha. Vo kissa aaj bhi yaad tha supriya ko jise yaad karke vo abhi bhi sharma jati thi. Supriya, ravina ke sath practice ke baad changing room mein baithi ravina ke bathroom se bahar ane ka intezar kar rahi thi taki vo andar jakar change kar sake lekin agle hi pal jab bathroom ka darwaja khula aur usne ravina ko bahar atte dekha to hairani mein vo palke bhi nahi jhapka saki.

" aise kya dekh rahi hai? Kabhi khud ko aine mein nahi dekha kya? " ravina ne muskurate hue apne badan par pani ki bundein towel se saaf karte hue kaha. Usne kewal penty pehen rakhi thi aur uppar se nivastra avasta mein hi bahar nikal ayi thi. Supriya ne apni chatiyun ke alawa pehli baar kisi ladki ki chatiyun ko dekh rahi thi vo bhi apni sabse achi saheli ki. " tu baithi sochti rahegi ya kapde utar kar badli karegi, tujhe bataya tha na mujhe jaldi jana hai, supriya? " ravina ne awaz lagai tab supriya hosh mein ayi.

" kya soch rahi hai kabse? " ravina ne fir pucha.

" nahi kuch nahi " supriya bol kar bathroom mein jane lagi to ravina ne uska hath pakad kar piche moda to uska balance bigad gaya aur vo uske badan se chipak gayi. Dono ke sharir ke bich mein jada duri nahi thi, agar supriya ne kapde nahi pehen rakhe hote to uski chatiyan ravina ki chatiyun se mel kar gayi hoti. Honth itne kareeb the ki ravina aram se supriya ke honton ko chum sakti thi. Supriya ke dil ki dhadkan itni tez ho gayi thi ki use samajh hi nahi aaya ki ye kya ho raha hai. Usne sirf suna tha ki ladki-ladki bhi apas mein sharirk sambhand banati hai lekin kaise, usne kabhi ye janne ki ichukta zahir nahi ki thi. Uske liye 'sex' sirf ladka ladki ke bich hi ho sakta tha. Par girls school mein padne ke baad usne aksar aisi batein suni thi ki us class ki ladki ka rishta kisi dusri class ki ladki ke bich hai, itna tak suna tha ki kisi ne do ladkiyun ko apas mein kiss karte dekha hai. Ye sab ek ghap-chap jaisi batein thi jo ladkiyun ke bich hoti thi aur vo usi mein maze le liya karte the. Par aaj itne kareeb vo bhi ek ladki ke jiske badan par kapda tak nahi hai, ye abhas karte hue hi supriya ko apne niche kuch mehsus hua jaise kisi ne koyle ki thal uski tangon ke bich mein rakh di ho aur uski garmi uppar tak chadh rahi ho.

" ravinaa.. " supriya bas itna hi boli ki ravina ne apne honth uske honton par rakh diya aur supriya aage kuch bol na saki. Apne honton par pehli dafa honton ka sparsh pakar vo itna kho gayi ki usne dhayan hi nahi diya ki uska pehla chumban koi uske sapno ka rajkumar ya uska pati nahi balki uski saheli le rahi hai. Agar us samay ravina ke kandhe se towel nahi fisalta aur supriya madhoshi se bahar nahi ati to vo khud bhi nahi janti ki us din aur kya ho jata. Us din ke baad supriya ne ravina ke sath kabhi extra practice nahi ki, dono ke bich baat-cheet kam ho gayi thi. Ravina ne kosish ki par supriya us din se bahar nahi nikal payi thi aur jab nikalne ki kosish ki to ravina ke sath hue hadse ne use sadme mein la khada kiya. Ravina ki maut ka asar supriya par kafi mahino tak raha jiske baad usne sirf team hi nahi balki kushti ke khel ko hi chhod diya tha.

" hi " akash ne megha ke baad supriya ko bhi helo kaha tab usne bhi jawab mein hi kaha. Akash pasine se bhiga hua tha aur uske pasine ki bundon ko dekh megha ne supriya ka hath kas kar pakad rakha tha jiske dard ko mehsus kar hi uski soch tuti thi.

" lagta hai practice kafi achi rahi " supriya ne akash se pucha.

" han next week game hai to practice ki jarurat hai. Next week tak we are on track i guess "

" you need to play forward. You will do well " supriya ki baat sun akash use ghurne laga.

" you know soccer? " akash ne hairani mein pucha.

" maybe " supriya ke chehre par confusion thi jise dekh akash bhi confuse tha " megha chal hostel " supriya ne use khinchte hue kaha.

" megha i thought we are going to someplace " megha ko le jatta dekh akash turant bol utha. Megha to jaise isi chiz ka intezar tha, usne fauran supriya ka hath chhod diya.

" yes absoultely " megha utsahit hote hue boli. Usne supriya ko ek pal mein bedhakal kar diya. " supriya tu akele chali jayegi? " supriya ne megha ka sath chhoda aur vo hostel ki taraf badh gayi. Abhi hostel ke raste tak vo ayi hi thi ki use yaad aya ki subah tanu ne class ke baad un dono ladkiyun ko bulaya tha. Har koi janta tha ki tanu ka ada college ke piche ek purana store room bana hua tha jiska istemal salon se nahi hua tha. Kamre ka rasta ek taraf se girls hostel ki taraf jata tha. Wahi rasta pakad supriya us kamre ki taraf badh chali.

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Supriya Megha ki harqato aur baato se itni irritate hogyi ke woh kamra change karne ka sochne lagi hai

Supriya ka pehla kiss uski close friend Ravina ke saath thaa. Par iss kiss ke baad se hi Supriya Ravina se alag rehne lagi par baad mein Ravina ki maut hogyi jisse supriya ko gehra dhakka laga.

Idher Megha ko finally Akash ke saath akele kahi jaane ka mauka mila. Dekhte hai yeh kya gull khilate hai.

 

[Jaguaar]

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Kamre ki halat bhar-bhara chuki thi, isliye uska istemal ab nahi kiya jata tha. Is kamre ki charcha hostel mein tanu ke sath kafi charchit mein thi aur har hostel mein rehne wala fresher iski kahani se vakif tha. Tanu jab bhi kisi ladki ko wahan bulati thi to uski bahut buri tarah se ragging li jati thi ye baat har koi janta tha lekin aaj tak koi bhi hostel ki ladki us kamre mein nahi gayi thi isliye kisi ko malum nahi tha ki vo wahan un ladkiyun ke sath kya karti hai. Itna hi nahi tanu aur uska group wahan ragging ke dar ke piche kya kya karti hai iska bhi chitta hostel mein famous tha, uska boyfriend tha jiske sath vo wahin par sex karti thi jab tak vo is college mein raha. Vo use do saal senior tha aur jab tak vo college mein raha tanu ko usi kamre mein choda karta tha. Uske jate-jate vo tanu apni hi tarah ke har shauk sikha gaya tha daru, drugs aur dahamekdar sex. Ladka ho ya ladki tanu ko hambistar hone ke liye gender ki jarurat nahi thi. Vo apni room partner komal ke sath last year farewell ke dauran college ke ek kamre mein hi nange paye gaye the. Har teacher ke liye tanu badnam ladki thi par hostel mein uski bahut izat thi kyun ki hostel ki sabhi samsyaon ka hal uske pas hota tha. Koi bhi ladki uske pas samsya lekar jati to use madad jarur milti badle mein jo bhi dena padta ho vo sirf us ladki aur tanu ke bich hi rehta tha. Inhi sab ki wajah se tanu popular hai aur megha mujhe aisa bane ke liye keh rahi hai. Ab kya main iski tarah ban jaun aur khuleaam besharami bikhar dun? Mere ghar par shaq bhi hua na to meri maa wapis bula legi ya hostel se nikalwa degi. Supriya khud se baat karte hue us kamre tak ja pahunchi jiska naam tanu ne Devil's Gate rakha hua tha. Supriya ne dur se hi lal paint se is naam ko padhte hue dekha aur fir dabbe paun aage se jane ki jagah piche ki taraf aa gayi. Kamra itna badha nahi tha par han jo kaam usko karne the uske liye kafi badha tha. Din ke samay bhi wahan as pas koi nahi tha. Supriya ne ek dafa wahan bani jalidar khidki se andar jhanka to use koi nahi dikha. " koi nahi hai " usne apne panje niche kiye aur deewar ke sahare khadi ho gayi " lagta hai koi nahi ayega, vo ladkiyan to kab ki college ke bich se hi nikal gayi hogi. Main bhi pagal hun jo unke chakar mein yahan aa gayi " kuch der supriya wahin khadi rahi.

Sochte hue usne ek baar dubara kamre ke charaon taraf jakar dekha ki koi is taraf to nahi aa raha aur fir kamre ke darwaje par aa khadi hui. Use laga to yahi tha ki darwaje par tala hoga lekin umeed se pare darwaje par koi tala nahi tha shayad yahan kaun ayega ye soch kar ise band nahi rakhte the par? Supriya ne jada na sochte hue kunda hataya aur andar ghus gayi taki koi use bahar wahan khada na dekh le. Andar ghuste hi ek ajeeb si gandh uski naak mein chadh gayi. Supriya ne kiwad ko dhala aur andar dekhne lagi. Ek purani table aur do jali wali kursi jaisi school staff room mein hua karti thi jisme se safed dhagge bich-bich mein se khul hui thi. Supriya thoda aage aur kamre ke bhitar ghus ayi. Bhitar wahi jalidar ekmatr khidki thi jise andar roshni aa rahi thi uske alawa roshni ka koi dusra sotr wahan dikh nahi raha tha, hoga bhi to supriya ne use dekhna sahi nahi samjha. Vo bhitar ayi table ke piche ek almari padi thi aur uske piche kitabon aur filon ka dher pada tha jispar mitti jami hui thi. Supriya ne ek nazar un kitabon par dali aur fir almari ka kunda pakad kar use piche ki taraf khincha par vo nahi khuli. Kamra khula tha par almari band thi ho na ho sara saman tanu iske andar rakhti hogi tabhi lock kar rakha hai. Supriya ko jigasya thi ki andar kaun sa saman tanu ne chupa rakha hai taki vo uspar kabza karke usko sabak sikha sakhe. Vo bhale hi megha ko kehti thi ki use in sab lafdon mein nahi padna lekin apne sath hue pehle din ke hadse ke baad vo chahti thi ki tanu sabke samne use maffi mange. " popular hone ke liye badan nahi dimag dikhana padta hai " supriya ne almari ka kunda fir khincha lekin vo band thi isliye puri tarah se nahi khul rahi thi. Purani hone ki wajah se lock dhilla to ho raha tha khinchne par lekin khul nahi raha tha. Supriya janti thi thoda aur zor lagane par vo lock tut jayega isliye usne apna zor lagaye rakha par lock tutta use pehle kisi ki awaz uske kano mein padi jo najdeek ati jaa rahi thi. Supriya ne fauran almari chhodi aur bahar ki taraf ayi lekin jis kiwad ko khol kar vo andar ayi thi use bahar jana ab mumkin hota hua nazar nahi aa raha tha. Kiwad ko wesa hi chhod supriya wapis bhitar ayi, uski sans achanak se tez ho chali thi. Kuch samay pehle jahan vo tanu se mafi mangwane ke bare mein soch rahi thi wahin ab use bachne ka rasta khojne mein jutt gayi thi. Tanu andar ati use pehle usne almira ke piche pade kitabo/filon ke dher ko hataya aur almari ke piche kone mein baith gayi aur dher ko apne aage kar liya taki uski taraf nazar na ja sake. Kiwad khula aur tanu ke sath komal aur kaamini andar dakhil hui, andar ghus kar unhone andar se kiwad par kundi laga li. Supriya sab kuch awaz ke hissab se andaza laga rahi thi ki almari ke us taraf kya ho raha hai.

" is smell ka kuch karna hoga kisi din koi aa gaya to hum pakde jaa sakte hain "

" yahan aaj tak koi aya hai jo ab ayega tu jada gand mat uchala kar chal ja maal nikal " tanu ne komal ko jawab diya aur table par per rakh kar baith gayi. Komal ne uske kahe anusar tanu se chabi li aur almari khol kar usme se apna saman bahar nikal liya. " aaj thoda kadak banaio, sala dimag mein chadne ke baad kuch ghanto mein utar jaye use ab maza nahi ata. Kam se kam raat bhar rahe to lagta hai kalyug suhana " tanu ne muskurate hue kaha to komal bhi muskurate hue goliyun ko lakdi ke chote tukde se pichka kar uska powder banane lagi.

" vo dono ladkiyan jo subah pakdi thi, bich mein hi rafu chakar ho gayi " kaamini ek taraf cigrate ke andar ka masala bahar nikalte hue boli.

" chindi thi vo to, kachi ek dum, unke sath kuch maza nahi ata. Acha hua nahi ayi varna time hi kharab karti. Hostel mein hai ek do maal jinhe masla jaa sakta hai unko apne ade par lana padega ek din " tanu kursi ko aage piche karte hue boli.

" freshers mein ek item ayi hai, Jaggu, usko adde par lana banta hai. Condom ko bra mein chupa kar laa rahi thi sali kaisi kaisi chutiya ladki hoti hai aur uppar se warden ne pakad liya vo alag to kehti ki ad mein dekha tha choclate flavour isliye lekar ayi " kaamini hanste hue boli.

" acha to ab agli baar usko hi la kar condom chakhate hain vo bhi chochlate flavour " tanu bhi hans di.

" bahut din se vaise bhi li nahi hai kisi ki ache se aur barso ho gaye is kamre mein kuch kiye hue tanu " komal ne powder bana liya tha aur us powder mein cigrate ka masala mila kar use ache se milane mein jutt gayi thi.

" is kamre mein kuch bhi karne ka haq sirf mera hai " tanu ne komal ka chehra pakda aur apne karib karte hue boli. Komal janti thi ki tanu ke liye is kamre ka kya matlab hai. Vo sorry bolti use pehle tanu ne uske honth chumme aur hatte waqt uspar dant gada diye " maal bana " Komal ne honth par aye khoon ko jeebh se chatta aur maal ko ache se mix karke kaamini ko ishara kar diya. Kaamini ne us masale ko utha kar cigrate mein bharna shuru kiya aur use ache se bhar kar cigrate tanu ki taraf badha di. Tanu ne muh mein cigrate ghusai aur komal ne lighter se usko jala dia. Tanu ne ek lamba kasht bhari aur uske ehsas ko apne sharir ke andar tak ghusaya aur cigrate hata kar ek lambi funk chhodi jiska dhuain kamre mein felh gaya. Agar waqt rehte supriya apni naak ko top se nahi chupati to khans padti.

" aahhh-hhh jannat sali yahi hai. Chut mein lawda aur muh mein maal ise badh kar kuch nahi hai " tanu ki ankhein nashe mein adhi band ho chuki thi. Usne vapis cigrate muh se lagayi aur is baar bhi utna hi lamba kasht khincha jiske baad jaise uske sharir se jaan hi chali gayi ho. Vo kursi par hi felh gayi, dhuain dhire-dhire uske muh se nikal raha tha aur ab usme ise jada takat nahi thi. Komal ne uske hath se cigratte li aur ek kasht lagate hue usne kaamini ko badha di, dono ek hi kasht mein dunia se dur ho gayi. Kamre mein us banaye gaye maal ki mehak aur dhuain se supriya ka dum ghutne laga tha. Usko ajeeb sa mehsus hone laga jaise usko chakar aa jayenge. Kuch ek pal tak to vo baithi rahi apne aap ko hosh mein rakhne ki kosish karti rahi lekin kuch hi der mein uske sharir ne jawab de diya aur vo behosh ho gayi.

Vo kitni der tak behosh mein thi ye use nahi malum lekin jab uski ankh khuli to khidki se ati roshni thodi kam ho chuki thi. Din dhal raha tha aur kisi bhi waqt andhera ho sakta tha. Supriya ki ankh jaise hi khuli usne uthna cha par achanak use sab yaad aa gaya ki thodi der pehle kya hua tha. Vo kuch der waise hi baithi rahi andaza lagane lagi ki tanu abhi bhi hai ya chali gayi. Ek-aad minute tak jab use kisi ke bhi na hone ki anubhuti hui to vo behad aram se bina koi shor kiye apni jagah se uthi aur almira se usne jhank kar us taraf dekha jahan ab koi nahi tha. Wahan kisi ko na pakar vo fauran udhar se bahar ayi aur zor-zor se sans lene lagi. Kamre mein abhi bhi uski smell maujud thi. Supriya ab kamre se bahar nikalna chahti thi jiske liye usne kiwad khincha lekin vo nahi khula. " ye khul kyun nahi raha " supriya ne use piche ki taraf khinchna jari rakha lekin vo khulne ka naam nahi le raha tha. Usne khinchna chhoda aur khinchi hui sans lete hue sochne lagi " kahin bahar se kunda to nahi laga diya unhone " aisa sochte hi supriya ko aisa laga mano use jail mein kaid kar diya ho aur vo bahar nahi nikal paa rahi ho. Aisa sochte hi uski sans ukhadne lagi, use claustrophobia tha isliye jab bhi vo band kamre mein ya fir usko aisa lagta tha ki vo ek jagah kaid hai to anxiety attack ane mein der nahi lagti thi. Anxiety ke attack ki wajah se vo wahin baith gayi lekin vo apne dimag se is chiz ko nahi nikal paa rahi thi ki vo is kamre mein band hai. Sans lene mein dikkat badhti jaa rahi thi aur usko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare ki tabhi use apna phone yaad aya jo uske pas nahi tha. Vo apni jagah se khadi hui aur vapis almira ke piche pade dher mein khojne lagi jise khojte waqt usne wahan kagaz felha diye. Kuch der ki mashakat ke baad use phone mil gaya. Usne phone unlock kiya aur megha ka number nikal kar use dial kiya. Number par ring jati rahi lekin megha ne nahi uthaya. Supriya ne wapis kosish ki lekin is baar bhi wahi hua. Usne bina waqt gawaye tisri baar kosish ki aur kuch ring jane ke baad megha ne phone uthaya.

" helo megha.. main yahan fans gayi hun tu jaldi aaja, megha sun rahi hai na tu " supriya phone par chilla rahi thi.

" su..pr..iya.... awa...z.. nah...iii ....a rhi... " samne se kat-kat ke ati awaz par supriya samajh gayi ki megha ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai. Usne phone cut kiya aur message bheja, par net nahi chal raha tha isliye message nahi gaya. Supriya ne normal message kiya par vo bhi sending mein atak gaya. " network chale gaye " supriya ne network bar ki taraf dekhte hua kaha. Phone wala idea fail hota dekh uska dil aur zoron se dhadak utha. Use kuch aur sochne ki jarurat thi warna vo is anexity se bahar nahi nikalti aur behsohi ke baad uske sath kya hota use malum nahi tha. Usne kamre ke kiwad ko kholne ke bare mein socha par tabhi use vo khidki dikhi jiske pas pahunch kar usne jor-jor se cheekhne ki kosish ki " help... help... main yahan andar fans gayi hun, please koi madad karo " supriya chilla rahi thi lekin aas pas sirf jhadiyan thi aur wahan koi bhi shaks maujud nahi tha. Supriya ne chillana band nahi kiya aur kuch der vo yun hi chillati rahi, ise hua ye ki uski anxiety to kam hui lekin bahar vo abhi bhi nikal nahi payi thi. Chillane ke wajah se uska galla sukh chuka tha aur vo pyasi wahan baithi kisi ke ane ka intezar kar rahi thi ki koi aye aur is darwaje ki kundi ko khol de. Mobile phone kisi kaam ka nahi tha pehle network aur ab battery dead ho chuki thi. Bahar se ati ek matr roshni bhi ab khatam ho gayi thi aur din ke ujale ko raat ke andhkar ne gher liya tha. Andhere mein baithi ek kone mein dubak kar supriya baithi gehri soch mein dubi hui thi. Kab tak vo yun hi aise baithi rehti ye baat uske jehan mein chal rahi thi. Kathor ban baithi supriya ke ansu chaak aye aur vo subakte hue rone lagi. Use apni maa ki baat manni chahie thi aur agar aisa kiya hota to aaj aisa na hota. Vo man hi man maffi mangte hue roti rahe aur thak haar kar uski ankh lag gayi.

Raat ka andhkar aur asman mein chaye badal. Mausam badla aur tezz hawa chalne lagi, jiske sath hi zor dal bizli kadki aur uske shor se supriya ki ankh khul gayi. Uski nazar kiwad par thi jo zor-zor se baj raha tha mano koi bahar se use maar raha ho. Andhere mein baithi supriya ye mehsus karte hi dar gayi, dar ne use ghabrane par majbur kar diya, vo dabi hui awaz mein boli " kaun hai? " par jawab nahi aya aur kiwad bajta raha. Supriya apni jagah se khadi hui aur kiwad ki taraf badhi, use andar se dar lag raha tha par fir bhi jigasya purvak jab vo kiwad tak pahunchi tab kiwad ne hilna band kar diya vo shor khatam ho gaya. " koi hai bahar " supriya ne awaz lagai aur andar se kundi laga kar kaan kiwad par rakha. Vo bahar bhi jana chahti thi lekin use dar bhi utna hi lag raha tha isliye usne kundi laga di thi. Par jab bahar se koi awaz nahi ayi to vo kiwad se piche aa gayi. Ek baar fir zor-dar bizli kadki aur supriya dar ke mare kanp uthi. Bizli ki roshni jab kamre mein padi to use laga jaise koi samne wali kursi par baitha hai jiski wajah se vo bahut jada ghabra gayi thi. Bahar baarish shuru ho gayi thi aur uska shor andar tak ane laga tha. Halki thand badh gayi thi aur supriya ko mehsus hone lagi thi. Ek patle top aur jeans mein thand dab nahi paa rahi thi. Raat bhar aise rehne par bimar padne ka khatra tha lekin is andhere mein yahan koi nahi ayega aur vo bhi is mausam mein to bilkul bhi nahi. Supriya ne sochte hue apni nazar khidki ki taraf dali jahan dekhne par mehsus ho raha tha ki bahar baarish gir rahi hai. Eka-ek waha dekhte hue use khayal aya jo kafi pehle aa jana chahie tha. Vo fauran khidki tak ayi jo uski height se thodi uppar thi. Usne apna hath uppar kiya aur jali ko piche ki taraf dhakelne ki kosish ki taki vo tut jaye. Supriya ne apni puri takat jhonki jise vo jali hili lekin lakdi ki chakukat mein dabi hone ki wajah se bahar nahi nikli. Supriya ko samajh aa gaya ki ye rasta hai jise bahar jaya jaa sakta hai aur ye vichar ate hi sust pade sharir mein takat aa gayi aur dimag chalne laga. Use koi chic chahie thi jise vo us jali ko tod sake, usne wahan par andhere mein andaze se khojne ki kosish ki lekin kuch nahi mila. Tab uska dhayan wahan rakhe table par gaya vo ek aisi thos chiz thi jiski vo madad le sakti thi. Usne table ko ek jagah se pakda aur use zor se dhakka marte hue deewar par de mara. Purani table hone ki wajah se table ke payein hil gaye. Bas aisa ek-do bar aur, kaam ban jayega, sochte sath supriya ne waisa hi kiya aur kaam ban gaya. Table ka ek payan tut gaya jise usne fauran uthaya aur kursi par rakh diya. Fir khidki ke pas pade kagzat ek taraf fenk kar wahan jagah banai. Vapis aage akar usne kursi uthai aur us khidki ke niche rakh di jiske baad usne kursi par chadh khidki ki taraf dekha aur us lakdi ke tukde se us jali par marne lagi. Kuch hi mehnat karni padi jiske baad vo jali chaukhat se bahar aa gayi aur piche ki taraf gir gayi. Baarish tez padne lagi thi lekin supriya ka usko koi hosh nahi tha. Usne lakdi ka tukda fenka aur kursi par panje ke sahare khade hote hue khidki ki sateh par apne hath rakh kandhe ke uppar jor dalte hue sharir uthane lagi aur dhire-dhire khidki ke us paar bahar nikalne lagi. Dhire-dhire uske paun ne kursi ko chhodna shuru kiya aur vo hawa mein jhul gayi jiski wajah se uski ek per ki chappal andar hi gir gayi aur uski tangein hawa mein sidhi ho gayi. Supriya ka aage ka badan bahar nikal chuka tha aur khidki ki chaukhat uske pet mein chubne lagi thi. Usne thodi kosish aur ki jiske baad vo bahar aa gayi aur niche zameen par aa giri. " aahh-hhh " kandhe ke bal girne ki wajah se vo dard mein chilla padi aur ek pal wahin baithi rahi. Tez girti baarish mein vo puri tarah bhig chuki thi aur gili mitti mein girne ke baad sar se lekar paun tak vo khichad mein san chuki thi. Kamre se bahar aa jane ki khushi mein vo bhool gayi thi ki vo andhere mein ek sunsan jagah par baithi hai, achanak se asman mein bizli kadki jiski awaz se uski ruh kanp uthi aur use yaad aya ki vo galat jagah hai. Vo uthi aur bina kuch soche usi taraf bhagi aur bhagte hue vo jhadiyun mein ghus gayi. Use bas hostel pahunchna tha lekin andhere mein rasta samajh nahi aa raha tha jiske liye usne apni nazre ek baar ko uppar utha kar dekhi jahan use choti roshni dikhi jise dekh uske man ki chinta kam ho gayi.

Girls hostel bas kuch hi duri par tha vo yahi sochte hue bhag rahi thi, rasta kam ho raha tha aur roshni paas aa rahi thi. Supriya ke andar utsahah tha vo ek aad baar bich mein khichad par fisal jane ke baad giri aur use dard bhi hua lekin himmat use hostel jakar hi todni thi vo ye soch baithi thi. Usne ek nazar uppar utha kar dekha to roshni nazdeek thi yani hostel najdeek hi tha. Jhadiyan khatam hone wali thi aur agle hi kadam rakhte hi jhadiyan khatam ho gayi aur usi ke sath supriya ke chehre par chai muskan bhi khatam ho gayi kyun ki jis roshni ko dekh vo daudi thi vo hostel ki nahi balki us khandar ghar ki thi jise usne pehle din ke ujale mein dekha tha. Par abhi jo dekh rahi thi vo uske liye dil dehla dene wala tha. Us khandar ghar mein bani khidki ke piche roshni jal rahi thi jaise wahan koi maujud ho aur uski taraf hi dekh raha ho.



" nahi.. main yahan dubara nahi aa sakti " supriya palti aur ek cheekh uske muh se nikal gayi.

Awesome Updatee

Bahot hi thrilling update thaa maza aagaya. Hoshiyaari ke chakar mein supriya achha fhasi hai.
Woh uss kamre se toh nikal gayi par apni ek chapal wahi bhul aayi hai.

Tanu Kamini aur Komal teeno drug addict hai. Aur uss kamre mein drugs leti hai. Dekhte hai yeh teeno supriya ko pakad paate hai yaa nhi.

Aur supriya jisko hostel samaj rahi thi woh toh khandar nikla. Dekhte hai ab supriya ka kya hota hai.

 

[harshit1890]

Update ~~ 48​

Shruti kal ki raat sochte hue jab peon ke piche chal rahi thi tab use bar-bar ek hi chiz khatak rahi thi. Kal raat jis tarah usne kitab library mein dali aur jis tarah usne aapne aap ko chupaye rakha aur yahan tak ki meri har chiz ko bhi note kiya, meri hi kya.. hum sabhi par nazar dale rakha bina kisi camera ke use to yahi samajh ata hi ki use pehle se malum tha ki hum ane wale hai? nahi nahi.. use kaise pata ho sakta hai.. use pata hamare wahan pahunchne ke baad hi hua par kaise? iske alawa jis andaz mein usne book di vo bhi us galyare se agar uspar gaur karun to ho na ho wahan koi dusra darwaja tha jise vo andar aya hoga, kya aisa ho sakta hai.. Shruti sochte hue ye sochti gayi ki kal raat uske us secret room ke secret shelf se bahar nikalte hi kya hua hoga...

Jaise hi shruti library ke andar ayi usi samay us galyare ke dusri chhor par jo use deewar samajh aa rahi thi uska lock khula aur vo deewar darwaje ki tarah khul gayi jiske baad do per bahar aye aur usne kitab ko tezzi se bahar ki taraf fenka jo fisalti hui shelf ke band hone se pehle hi bahar aa nikli. Book ke fenkte sath hi vo wapis usi darwaje ke piche gaya aur usne darwaja band kar diya jiske band hote sath hi vo darwaja deewar ki tarah hi dikhne laga. " han.. aisa hi hua hoga.. " man mein sochte hue baat uske muh se nikal ayi aur peon ke piche ja takrai.

" kya madam.. " peon piche ghumte hi bola.

" aap ruk kyun gaye ... "

" jahan jana hai wahan aa gaye to rukna pdega na.. " peon ke kehte hi shruti ne darwaje ki taraf dekha aur fir uske uppar. " management room, yahan kyun laye ho aap? "

" Yahin bulawa aya to yahin ana padega na, jaiye ab andar "

" acha.. " shruti kuch asmanjas mein thi kyun ki use ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki use milne ke liye management room mein kaun aya. Fir agle hi pal sochte hue usne darwaja khola aur andar ghus gayi. Andar ghus kar usne samne dekha ki ek taraf to Nandini baithi hui thi aur uske samne chair par bhi koi baitha hua tha. Kaun ye piche se nahi dikhai de raha tha. Vo kuch kehti use pehle darwaja khulne par hi nandini ne use andar atte hue dekh liya tha.

" shruti come " nandini ki awaz mein gambhirta tha, jiske muh se naam sunte hi uske samne baitha shaks bhi uski aur piche ki taraf muda. Shruti ko ek pal samajh nahi aya ki vo kaun hai jo use continous ghur raha hai aur vo bhi use ghur rahi hai kyun ki use aisa lag raha tha jaise usne is shaks ko kahin dekha hai. " shruti... come... " nandini ke dubara bolne par shruti sochte hue uske pass aa khadi hui. Pass anne par chehra aur clear dikha to samajh aya ki jo shaks use dekh raha hai vo behad chinta mein hai.

" hello shruti.. "

" hello....aaunty...y....... " bolte hue shruti ki achanak se ankhein badi ho gayi kyun ki jo chiz vo yaad karne ki kosish kar rahi thi vo use yaad aa gayi thi. Shruti ne fauran nandini ki taraf dekha aur man hi man use kosne lagi, yun achanak se usne kaise samna kara diya tha aaruhi ki mom ka use.. Shruti ko kabhi bhi kisi chiz ka dar nahi rehta tha lekin jahan sawal Maa kaa jata tha uska fobia ubhar ata tha bhale hi vo uski maa ho ya kisi aur ki ya uski room partner ki.

" sit shruti... " nandini uske chehre ki ghabrahat ko samajh rahi thi.

" par.. miss... mene.. .kyun.. matlab... apne sab bata dia " shruti ko samajh nahi aaa raha tha ki kya bolna hai, uska dimag total fail ho chuka tha.

" shruti.. ghabrao mat.. baitho.. " is baar aaruhi ki maa urvashi ne use baithne ke liye kaha. Shruti ki ghabrahat uske mathe se nikalta pasina bata raha tha jo wahan chal rahe AC ko bhi maat de raha tha. Shruti chup chap bag utar kar wahin baith gayi. Na hi uski nazar uppar uth rahi thi aur na hi aaruhi ki maa ki taraf ghum rahi thi. Uski nazar table ke kone se chipki hui thi. Use zara sa bhi andaza nahi tha ki aisa kuch hoga? Nandini miss ne kaha tha ki vo kuch bhi karne se pehle batayagi.. lekin yahan to unhone bahut bada wala kaat diya.. ab ye baat mere ghar bhi jayegi... shit meri maa to bina soche na jane kya kar dalegi mere sath, bahut bura fasungi ... Samjdhari dikhane wali ladki is waqt dimagi uljhano mein ulajhti jaa rahi thi.

" shruti ye aaruhi ki mom hai.. i know ki tum pehchan gayi ho.. " nandini ke bolne par shruti ne koi harkat nahi di " mene inhe aaruhi ke bare mein sab bata diya hai " ye sunte hi shruti ne fauran apni nazar uthai aur jo usne kaha usme awaz hi nahi nikli. Usne apna matha pakad liya kyun ki vo bahut jada confuse thi.. use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki nandini ne aisa kyun kiya aur ek baar bhi bataya kyun nahi.

" dekho beta.. tumhe kisi bhi chiz mein ghabrane ki jarurat nahi hai.. tum relax raho.. jo bhi Miss nandini ne bataya usme mujhe nahi lagta ki tumhari koi galti hai.. infact main to khush hun ki meri beti ke sath koi tha... agar vo akeli hoti to na jane uska kya hota... " urvashi ne uske kandhe par hath rakh kar jaise hi ye baat kahi, na jane kaise shruti ko apne man ka bhoj halka hote hue nazar aya. Usne pehli dafa nazre utha kar urvashi ki taraf dekha jiske chehre par ghambhirta to thi par vo use uske uppar nahi utar rahi thi.

" aunty.. vo main.. aapko... sorry... juth kehne ke liye ... us din phone par ki sab theek hai " shruti ko malum tha ki ab koi faiyda nahi hai chupane se.

" no i know.. tumne juth kyun kaha... i can understand " urvashi ne behad shant lehaze mein ye baat kahi.

" but isne sahi nahi kiya Mrs. Khandelwal.. maine ise usi din ye baat kahi thi ki tumhe aaruhi ki mom se baat karni chahie thi na ki har baat chupani chahie thi.. inhone chupa kar sahi nahi kiya " nandini ne dono ke bich bol kar shruti ke uppar naam dala.

" lekin miss.. mene apko kai baar kaha.. ki jab bhi main aaruhi ko hostel se jane ke liye kehti to uska bhevaiour bahut hi jada alag ho jata.. mujhe dar tha ki kahin agar mene bataya to vo koi aisa kaam na kar le jo nahi karna chahie.. bas isliye.. nahi bata rahi thi.. i thought ki vo adjust nahi ho paa rahi hai.. simple " shruti ne apne bachav mein ek hi sans mein baat keh di.

" simple? you think its simple? tumhari room partner.. itne dino se... roz raat ko akele pata nahi yahan wahan nikal jati hai.. you think its simple? vo tum sab ke naam badal kar ek alag kahani bana deti hai and you are saying its simple? khud socho agar usko kuch bhi ho jata to who will be responsilbe? its you.. shruti.. You know ki abhi abhi college mein itna bda hadsa hua hai.. a girl lost her life.. aur fir bhi tumne ye baat chuapi..? " nandini ne shruti par aisa shikanja kasa ki uske pass koi jawab hi nahi tha dene ke liye. Use nandini se jada urvashi se umed thi ki vo bacha legi.

" miss par.. maine jo kiya vo yahi soch kar kiya.. mujhe nahi pata tha ki aaruhi... "

" no shruti.. its not that simple..maine tum logon ki kahani suni.. aur bina aaruhi se baat kiye uski mom se baat kyun ki malum hai? " nandini ne ek pal ke liye pause liya " taki main unse confront kar sakun aur ye puch sakun ki aisa kya hua hai aaruhi ke sath jo college atte hi vo is tarah behave kar rahi hai, and you know what she told me? " shruti ko laga ki nandini ne koi baat batai hogi taki uske past se related chizen judegi aur uski is samsya ka halh nikal jayega. Shruti intezar karne lagi par nandini na jane kyun use reality show ki tarah har chiz mein pause lekar batati hui ek anchor ki tarah lag rahi thi.

" nothing.. tumhe bharosa nahi to puch lo inse " nandini keh kar kursi par piche hui. Shruti hairan thi.. aur ab use jada double confused.. Agar manpreet ki mane to jarur koi past ki baat hai to aaruhi ko khatak rahi hai isliye na vo jana chahti aur yahan ane ke baad uski ye halat hai par agar nandini sahi keh rahi hai to kya aaurhi ka koi past tha hi nahi?

" aunty aap sure hain? " shruti ne na jane kaise par ye sawal puch liya.

" tumhe lagta hai aaruhi ke past mein kuch hua hai jiske baad uski ye harkatein hai? " urvashi ne jawab dene ki jagah sawal kiya.

" han.. i mean no.. aunty.. but might be.. aisa ho.. i am not sure.. aksar bache nahi batate apne mom dad ko.. kuch secret batein.. " shruti ne ghuma fira kar apni baat kahi.

" usne tumse koi apni secret baat batai? "

" nai aunty.. vo apne bare mein kabhi nahi batati.. tabhi mene apse kaha.. "

" nahi shruti.. i told you.. ki aisa koi past nahi hai.. aaruhi ka.. she studied in a girls school from 5th class .. usne kabhi kisi tarah ki koi zid nahi ki.. na hi usne kabhi koi aisi acitivity ki jo main yahan college akar sun rahi hun.. i don't know.. ya fir main abhi tak ye samajh nahi paa rahi hun ki actually mein aap dono meri hi aaruhi ki baat kar rahe ho.. kyun ki abhi tak ye sab believe karna its not possible to me " urvashi ke chehre par ghambhirta is baar kai jada thi.

" initially... Mrs khandelwal.. manne ko tayar nahi thi ki main jo unhe bata rahin hun vo sahi hai... tabhi tumhe bulaya " nandini ne bich mein bola jis samay ek pal ke liye kamre mein shanti bani hui thi.

" aap bataiye Miss Nandini, as a mother main kaise maan lun ki meri beti.. raat ko ek bhutya hostel mein jati hai.. vo ek alag kahani bana leti hai... logon ko dusre naam se bulati hai.. even khud ko kisi aur naam se bulati hai? Mera acha khasa bacha... aise kaise ho jayega kuch hi hafton mein... to ye chiz main kaise maan leti? Par jaise hi mene shruti ko dekha.. uske chehre ke dar aur ghabrahat ne mujhe ye samjha diya ki jo bhi apne kaha hai vo sab sahi hai.. my daughter is not fine.. and that is why I decided to take her away.... decide to mene tab hi kar liya tha jab apke college se khabar ayi thi ki one girl has found dead in college ... but aaruhi ke dad ne mujhe samjhaya ki anhoni to kahin bhi ho sakti hai.. but this is not anhoni.. this is way more than that.. i need to take her away... " urvashi ne jaise faisla le liya tha. Nandini use smajhane lagi par vo nahi maan rahi thi, shruti apni hi soch mein kho chuki thi, use dono ki baton se koi matlab hi nahi tha. Vo apni soch se bahar ayi aur bahar atte hi vo sirf itna sa boli.

" no.. " shruti ki baat sunte hi nandini aur urvashi dono uski taraf dekhne lagi. " agar aap sahi keh rahi hai.. aur aaurhi ka koi past nahi hai.. to aap use yahan se nahi le ja sakti aunty.. "

" tum chahti ho use main yahan is jagah is halat mein akela chhod dun? "

" agar aap use yahan se le gayi to akela chhod degi.. aap samajh nahi rahe hain main kya kehna cha rahi hun "

" shruti.. i know.. tum uski room partner ho.. i know tumne kosish kari ki aaruhi theek ho jaye isliye tumne mujhe nahi bataya.. par main use yahan nahi chhod sakti.. she needs.. "

" she needs something else aunty.. jo na aap janti hai aur na hi main... vo sirf aur sirf aaruhi janti hai.. aur mera yakeen maniye agar aaruhi ko aap yahan se le gayi.. to aap apni beti ko kabhi mil nahi payengi " shruti apni jagah se khadi ho chuki thi, vo ek pal ke liye chup hui " main isliye nahi keh rahi ki aap logon ko lage ki mene apko na bata kar koi bhool ki hai to use cover up kar rahi hun, balki main apko isliye keh rahi hun kyun ki main aaruhi ke sath reh chuki hun.. uske andar vo dekh chuki hun jo aapne nahi dekha hai... "

" tum kehna kya chahti ho? " urvashi uski baaton ka matlab samjhne ki kosish kar rahi thi.

" aaruhi.... " shruti keh nahi paa rahi thi jo use kehna tha.. " aaruhi is not aaruhi... aunty... use kuch bahut badi aur gehri chiz judi hai.. jiska hum sabko matlab samajh hi nahi aa raha hai... mujhe to ye tak lag raha hai ki aap aaruhi ke sath thi jarur lekin aaruhi ke sath thi hi nahi.. " shruti ka andaz pehle se badal gaya tha, vo ab ghabra nahi rahi thi.

" shruti stop.. tum bahar jao.. " nandini ne use bich mein roka kyun ki baat ab modh badal rahi thi.

" no no.. miss.. i want to talk to her.. shruti.. you mean ki aaruhi is in some kind of possesion? " urvashi ke kehte hi nandini ne gehri sans chodte hue apne sar par hath rakh liya kyun ki wo yahi baat nahi chahti thi ki aisa kuch ho jise baat uske hath se nikal kar upper level ke management tak jaa pahunche, jahan par kisi aur ka to pata nahi par uske sath bahut kuch ho sakta tha kyun ki ye baat college ki prestige aur banai hui image ke aage aa sakta tha.

" yes... "

" stop it shruti... its enough now " nandini ne ek baar aur kosish ki.

" you are saying... aaruhi is possesed ? " is baar urvashi ki sansein tez thi kyun ki use gussa bhi aa raha tha aur dar bhi lag raha tha.

" kind of aunty.. i don't know.. but possesion ka matlab bhoot pret nahi hota.. a past can possesed her... maybe someone in her life posssed her... ap bataiye.. kuch to hua hoga uske past mein.. jo vo yahan atte hi aisi ho gayi? " shruti ne fir past par jor dala.

" i told you... there is no past... meri beti.. pehle se is tarah nahi thi.... " urvashi thodi unchi awaz mein boli aur ek pal santa cha gaya. " sorry... i didn't mean to shout... but tumhe nahi lagta ki uske sath jo pehle din hua vo ek mental bully tha? " urvashi ne chillane ki jagah ab dimag se sahi sawal kiya.

" bilkul lagta hai aunty... but koi event sirf ek baar ghatne se.. uska asar nahi chhodti.. that event has to be repeated again and again... aaruhi is not aaruhi aunty.... aap kyun nahi samajh rahe ho meri baat ko, i want to help her.. isliye keh rahi hun.. please tell me.. is anything happened? " shruti ne fir jor diya, vo baat ko bar bar wahi ghuma rahi thi.

" i said no.. " urvashi apni jagah se khadi hui, usne apni sanson par kabu kiya " main keh rahi hun ki uske past mein kuch nahi tha, she didn't have any affair in her life.. she is very sincere.. tum log uske past se jod kar kyun pagal banane mein lage ho.. she needs help... vo use yahan se jakar hi milegi.. "

" aunty.. apki sari baat main maan kar kahungi ki sach hai.. lekin use yahan se lekar mat jaiye.. she won't take it.. i see this in her eyes.. please... " shruti urvashi ke karib ayi aur uska hath pakad kar request karne lagi.

" shruti.. its enough.. i guess hum sab ko calm down hona chahie.. in sab baton ke alawa.. hume us chiz ka solution khojna chahie.. and Mrs. Khandelwal.. shruti is right.. yahan se le jana hi aaruhi ke liye solution nahi hai.. aur na hi baat ye hai ki aaruhi ko problem past se thi ya present se.. ya college ke bully se.. baat yahan ye hai ki agar aaruhi ko koi problem hai to we needs to find out... aur uska ek tarika mene already khoj liya hai.. " nandini ne baaton ko bich mein kaat kar apni baat kahi, dono ki baat ko galat bhi nahi bataya aur jaise sara rukh apni taraf modh liya.

" solution? " urvashi ne turant kaha.

" Yes Mrs. Khandewal, i have a known person, he is a great Psychiatrist " nandini ko urvashi use rokti use pehle vo boli " let me complete Mrs. Khandelwal.. psychiatrist se matlab ye nahi ki aaruhi pagal hai, he is a great therapist also.. maine use already baat ki hai and he said aaruhi har tarah ke bachon ki taraf normal hai.. if she has something which we can't understand.. he will.. aur aap to khud ek neurosurgen hai.. you know what's best for a child? am i right? jo baat hum aaruhi se nahi pata kar paa rahe, he will.. and that leads to a solution.. use na hi aaruhi ko yahan se jana padega aur apko uski samsya kabhi pata chal jayega.. " nandini ek pal ke liye shant hui " Please sit aap baithiye... " nandini ne jor diya to urvashi baith gayi. Vo maan rahi thi ki nandini ne jo kaha usme bhi ek sach hai. Shruti whaan khadi hui baton ko observe karne lagi, vo kuch baat bata sakti thi aur batane bhi wali thi lekin vo chup rahi.. vo un books ke bare mein batana chahti thi lekin usne irada chhod diya, jo baat vo smjhana cha rahi thi use kisi ne nahi samjha aise mein books ke bare mein bata kar vo khud ko hi khatghare mein nahi khada karna cha rahi thi.

" apko pata hi hai ki is age mein bache bahut si batein nahi batate.. maybe some things.. aaruhi didn't even shared with you... shruti... shruti.. " nandini shruti ko awaz dene lagi to shruti hosh mein ayi.

" yes miss "

" tum bahar jao.. i have to talk to Mrs. Khandelwal.. jarurat hogi to main tumhe dubara bula lungi... " shruti ne ispar koi na-nukur nahi ki, ek dafa uski urvashi se nazre mili jisme chinta saaf jhalak rahi thi aur fir vo bina kuch bole wahan se jane lagi, usne room ka darwaja khola aur fir ruk kar piche mudte hue boli.

" aunty, aapko aaruhi ne kabhi apni friend raveena ke bare mein bataya hai? " shruti ke sawal karne par urvashi uski taraf ghumi aur ek pal use dekhte hue sochne lagi.

" raveena.... " urvashi sochne lagi " no i don't recall her, anything about her? " urvashi ne turant sawal kiya.

" no aunty.. aise hi.. main apka bahar wait karungi.. " shruti itna keh kar room se bahar nikal gayi aur bahar nikalte hi usne phone nikal kar milaya " sab gadbad ho gayi yaar.. nandini miss ne aaruhi ki mom ko bula lia... adhe ghante mein ground ke piche mil.. "

 

[harshit1890]

Naina DARK WOLFKING SANJU ( V. R. ) Rudrathakur

 

[Jaguaar]

1st chapter mein aapne thrill aur horror ka mast tadka lagaya hai. Padhke maza aagaya hai.

Saare scenes Supriya ke dimaag ki upaz thi yaa koi aatma ka kaam.

Jab se Supriya uss kamre aur haweli ke gate se wapas aayi hai tab se hi uske saath woh sab horaha hai.

Yaha hui tanu ki maut raat ke uss nashe aur hawas ke khel ke baad. Par kaise hua yeh kisi ko nhi pata. Supriya uss room se bathroom mein kaise aayi.

Sapne mein usne dekha usne hi Supriya ko maara. Phir woh khidki pe parchai.

Dusre din usi kamre mein jaana aur Tanu ne jo jo harqat ki thi woh karna apni jeans ko kholke apni chut ko masalna aur tanu Ravina ko imagine karke jhadnaa. Aur tanu ki maut hui yeh achhi baat hai bolna.

Phir hostel mein aake wohi bhootiya khel. Aur abki baar toh Megha ki laash dekhne ko mili. Dekhte hai yeh sach hai yaa jhooth

 

[harshit1890]

wo kya hai na aaj kal SANJU ( V. R. ) saheb sushma aur vyom ke story jab se padhi hai tab se unke favorite ho gaye tharki type ke kirdaar

tharki kirdar kahan par hai

baat itni si hai ki agar hawasi shruti aur uske karname dekh le to malini aur vikrant bhi sharma jaaye.. dono yahi soche ki kitni asleel hai ye shruti.... asleelata ki saari hadein hi paar kar di

Vikrant

galti insaan se hoti hai, ab isme us phone ki kya galti jo us phone ko hi insects lober bana di usne
debu to hai hi gaali khane layak par uske sath sath uske phone ko bhi insects tharki bana di is shruti ne to
Are koi samjhao yaar is shruti ko ki phone ki bahan nahi hoti hai

lo ab is bechare chillu ko bhi insects lober bana diya isne to.. are ab kya wo chaukidaari karna bhi chhod de kya taaki shruti raat raat bhar aise bekhauf ghumti phire idhar udhar
are hostels ke kuch niyam hote hai.. par shruti ko jaise rules & regulation ki dhajjiya udani hai..

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
Oh God,..... itni heavy comedy epic
shruti yun sitti bajana aur chillu sitti ki awaz sun gardan ko mendak ki tarah idhar udhar karke dekhna... just imagine us situation ko pata nahi kyun hanshi ruk hi nahi rahi hai yaar

batao to.. ek to bechara chillu raat raat bhar chaukidaari kare, upor aise koi sitti baja baja ke pareshan karega to muh se gaali niklegi hi na
Thodi na mithe bol niklenge
waise jo baat kahi chillu ne aur jis tarah gaali ko apne upor le li shruti ne....
waise chillu aur shruti ki jodi buri na hai... are superhit hai... superhit...
waise andhari raat, hostel ke andar jaane ke liye shruti yun chupke sitti bajana , jishe sun chillu ka yun pareshan hona.. upor se ek dusre ko mann hi mann, to kabhi dhime aawaz gaali dena ...
Kuch ajibo garib hi mahol paida kare..
lekin sath hi had se zyada comedy create huyi hai is situation mein...

to thodi bahot trick aur mehnat chalte tharki shruti hostel ke andar aa hi gayi.. Lekin jis tarah se bhagi apne room ki aurr lage ki uske pichwade mein kisine fatake lagake jala di ho...
room aate hi hairan, kyunki aaruhi gahri nind mein aur darwaje ka kunda tuta hua...
Oh to ye baat hai..... actually room mein koi aaya hi na ho, hallucination ho chalte bas aaruhi ko laga ki koi aaya hai aur ushe ab bahar jaana hai.... wo bahar to nikal gayi thi.. us waqt hostel bhi bilkul shaant aur waha bilkul khamoshi chayi huyi rahti hai lekin debu ki aawaz ne aaruhi ko us aurr jaane ke liye majboor kiya... ho na ho aaruhi ne debu ko maut ke ghat utar di ho, phir wapas aake room so gayi gahri nind mein jaise kuch hua hi na ho....
Shayad koi hai jo hypnotise karke aaruhi se ye sab karwa raha ho...

lol... ab us bichari jaggu ko bhi bina kisi galti ke gaaliya dene lagi...
Kya bol rahi jaggu ko "kuttiya" ....
par shruti kyun bhool jaati hai ki ek kuttiya ko do roti khila do to wo bhi wafadari nibhaye... lekin shruti ek kuttiya se bhi gayi gujari hai.. . astin mein chupi nageen hai shruti... jaane kab dash le...
behtar hoga ki us shruti ko hostel se bahar nikal feke
wait a minute.... kamre ki light switch off karne baad kamre bas andhakar hi andhakar >>>>ye baat kayi baar jikar huyi hai story pe to phir andhere mein us books ke shadbon kaise padh liya usne night mode actived glasses laga li kya aankho mein shruti ne
Haan hai shruti dayan hi.. ushe kya fark pare ki raat hai ke din... ushe to sab kuch dikhe

lo... subhah subhah dono suru ho gayi...
top chip chipa hone ki wajah us pe lage debu ka sperm hai.. matlab saaf hai pehle aaruhi ne apne husn ke jaadu se mohit ki ho... phir mauka dekh khaufnaak maut de di ho debu ko....
aur ye nandini madam abhi tak class na aane ki wajah shayad is baat ko pukhta kare ki kuch to badi ghatana ghati hai kal raat
Well.... waise aaruhi lesbo nahi lekin shruti pur jor koshish karti hai ki shruti ki tarah wo bhi lesbo ban jaaye...
Haaraman shruti sach kamini aur swarthi nikli yaar.... aaruhi ki private undergarment ko khud ki swarth ke liye us debu ko de di... chii chii... Shruti.... tharki tu, hawasi tu, gatar ki soch rakhne wali tu, kamini dhokhebaz dagabaaz tu, lesbo tu, haaraman tu... ab to swarth sidh karne ke ye harkatein bhi karne lagi tu shruti....
ish shruti ko to jaake kahi chhullu bhar paani mein dub ke mar jaana chahiye... ahhhthuuu

lo.. ab kya koi milne bhi nahi aa sakta kya usse college mein..bichara wo visitor... usko bhi uski bahan ka sex partner bana di yaar
agar shruti ki mom usse milne aayi hai tooooo
matlab shruti dwara di gayi wo gaali..
baaki SANJU ( V. R. ) saheb samajhdaar hai, samajh jayenge

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Khair..... update mein koi saare mod aur pehlu aaye... btw update dilchasp aur dilkash tha..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Pehle to dil khol kar review dene ke liye tahe dil se abhar.. mein sochun ab khatam hoga review.... ab hoga ab hoga.... par baad mein scrool karke dekha to chakar hi aa gaye padhne mein mujhe panch minute lage to likhne mein kitna laga hoga.. is jazbee ke lye

Ab atte hi apke review par... to chillu galli de to situation shruti de to insect lober...u racissist narrssist reader Shruti is lobe comedy ka to malum nahi par vo scene shruti ke challenges ke liye jarur tha...
Main jantahun sabne yahi socha hai.. k aaruhi gayi aur khoon karke so gay i hogi... serial killer mafik.... to bilkul sahi socha Some people jealous with the butiful girls.. ab shruti se itna kya hi jalna...

Khair thanks nainaji

To debu raat bhr se gayab h aur raat me uska phone bhi out of reach tha...kahin..Naina ma'am ki khwahish puri to nhi ho gyi...debu tapak to nhi gya daalo ki boriyo me pda pda lgta h raat aaruhi aur debu ke beech koi kaand hua h bhayankar wala...wahi Nandita madam bhi aaj gayab h class lene nhi aayi kahin Naina ma'am ne unka bhi naam hit list me to nhi likhwa diya...ya sayd koi aur reason ho...unke na aane ka..
Wahin aaj subha aaruhi shruti ki laayi book ko dekh leti pr achanak shruti ke uth jaane se wo dekh nhi paayi na jyada gaur kiya usne...sayd...
Ab ye kon milne aaya h shruti se kahin meghnath to nhi ...kbhi aaya ho milne aakhir canteen me mulaqat to ho hi chuki h uski aur baat cheet bhi bdhiya hi rhi..usne kuchh hint diye the shruti ko us din jaane se pahle..wo kya reveal honge ye dekhna h bss.
Wahi debu kab tk mil pata h...kya wo sahi salamt milega ya pieces me...wo to ab waqt hi btayega aise hi nandita madam bhi...wahi us book me aisa kya h jo bahut help kr skta h shruti ki...dekhte h tb tk ke liye intzaar rhega..brother
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Raat mein kaand hua hi na ho ye bhi ho sakta hai? gayab hone ka reason.. apko agle updatemein mil jayega... hint diye the ya galti se leak hue ye to ab aage hi malum hoga bhai.. Pieces mein... Thank you so muchbhai

आरूहि पिछली रात जब हास्टल से बाहर जा रही थी तब भी उसने मेन गेट की कुंडी तोड़ दी थी और फिर देबू के कमरे में चली गई थी । और उसके खुद के रूम की भी कुंडी टुटी हुई है ।
शरीर से काफी ताकतवर लगती है आरूहि ।

लाइब्रेरी में भी सबसे ज्यादा वक्त वही बिताती है । रात के अंधेरे में कभी कभी भूतहा हास्टल पहुंच जाती है । सोने में कुम्भकरन को फेल किए हुए है । कभी खुद को सुप्रिया कहती है तो कभी श्रुति को मेघा नाम से सम्बोधित करती है । मेघनाथ को भी वो अजीब कैरेक्टर वाली लड़की लगती है । सर के बाल बेहिसाब झड़ते हैं । बाथरूम वाली घटनाएं जो चमत्कार से कम नहीं था वो सब श्रुति को सुनाती है । अपनी मां से बातें करने का बहाना बना कर किसी और से बातें करती है ।
और इस अपडेट में भी किसी " Soul " नाम के व्यक्ति को मैसेज भेज रही है ।

इतनी सारी खूबियों की मालकिन है आरूहि ।

पिछले अध्याय के अन्त में हमने मेघा / श्रुति पर जानलेवा हमला वाला अपडेट पढ़ा था । और यह हमला आरूहि के सिवाय और कौन कर सकता है ! लगता है श्रुति आरूहि की फिकर करते करते उसकी असलियत से वाकिफ हो चुकी है इसीलिए उस पर हमला हुआ हो ।

डबल किरदार की भूमिका निभा रही है आरूहि । पता नहीं देबू के साथ क्या किया उसने ! कभी कालेज को मिस नहीं करने वाली नंदिनी मैडम भी इस बार अनुपस्थित रही । इसमें भी जरूर कोई घोल है । देखते हैं नेक्स्ट अपडेट में इन सबों पर क्या अपडेट आता है !

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।
जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।

Aaruhi is the main villian... apke is review se mein mohar laga deta hun... rahi baat jo apne ek ek point chunne ki kala hai vo mein Haweli se dekhta aya hun isme apka koi jawab hi nahi lagta hai padhte hue jaise aap puri kahani ka adhaye uska swaroop bana kar chaap rele ho Thanks bhai

romanchak update ..debu ka phone nahi lag raha tha aur upar se chillu bhi aa gaya hostel ke darwaje par ,jiski wajah se shruti ko dimaag lagake ander jana pada .. seeti bajake dhyan bhatkane ka idea kaam kar gaya aur shruti ander chali gayi par kundi ko tuta dekh yahi samajh liya ki ye jaggu ka kaam hai .

subah aaruhi kitab ko dekh leti par shruti ne sab sambhal liya apni baato se .
aur ye top pe chipchipa mila shruti ko jo aaruhi ne uspar fenka tha ,,kahi ye debu ka virya to nahi tha ..

debu ka kahi pata nahi hai ,kya aaruhi ne usko tapka dala .

aaruhi hostel se nahi jana chahti kyunki uska koi maksad jarur hoga .padhai ki baat alag hai aur hostel me rehna alag .

aur ab ye shruti ko kaun milne aa gaya jiske liye usko class me peon bulane aa gaya ,kahi kisi kaand ke baare me pata to nahi chal gaya kisiko .

aur aaruhi serous hokar kisi soul naam ke vyakti se urgent milna chahti hai ,aur aisa lagta hai aaruhi us kitaab ko lekar hi milna chahti ho ,shayad usne pehchan li ho wo kitab ..

aur ye itne dino se maa ki jagah soul se hi baate karti thi aaruhi aisa lagta hai ..

Thanks bhai apne shruti ki bhavnaye sahi samjhi uska shaq jaggu par hi hai.. aur hoga bhi kyun nahi... chip-chipa kun hai.. aur debu kahan gaya ye apne aap mein ek paheli hai jo ab ane walle waqt ke sath khulegi.. Agle update mein malum chal jayega ki kaun aya... aur aaruhi jaisi hai waisi hai nahi.. keep reading bhai

Superb Updateee

Toh Supriya aur Megha do dost hai. Jisme Megha ko sirf chudai hi dikhti hai har jagah. Iski aag itni jyaada badh gayi ke isko aur kuch nhi sujhta.

Wahi Supriya bhi usse iss tarah ka mazaak karti rehti hai.

Megha ka shayad crush hai akash jiske saath woh apni aag shant karna chahti hai. Dekhte hai woh shant kar paati hai yaa nhi.

Aur yeh shorr kis chiz ka hua.

Welcome and thanks bhai

Mast Updatee

Ab hostel life hai warden toh kamini hogi hi par yaha toh raand nikli jo kisi sonu se apni gaand marwati hai. Sirf gaand hi kyo. Chut kyo nhi.

Aur Seniors inka kya hi kehna. Ladko mein toh ek se badh ke ek mahatma hote hai. Aisa koi kaand nhi jo unhone naa kiya ho. Aur ladki. Inke toh andar se red light area ki randiyon ki aatma ghuss jaati hai. Pehle saal mein sharmati hai aur dusre saal tak kisi ki personal randi banke ghumti hai. Aur yehi haal shayad Tanu aur Komal ka hai. Aur upar se yeh toh final year students hai har tarah ke kaand kiye hue honge.

Dekhte hai aage kya kya hota hai.

han bina warden ke kamin ke hostel chalega bhi kahan.. kamin hona bhi jaruri hai na... Hahahaha... They expose herself in hostel only Thanks bhai

Superb Updatee

Yeh Megha toh jaise Akash ke lund ke liye pagal hi hogyi hai.

Aur yeh seniors ne aisa kya dekhliya jiske wajah se woh bhaag gayee

Han bhai... ab chahie use... Thanks

Awesome Updatee

Yeh Megha ki jaisi harqate hai kahi woh kisi din sach mein Supriya ki izaat naa lutlee

Nahi aisa nahi hoga..

Superb Updatee

Supriya Megha ki harqato aur baato se itni irritate hogyi ke woh kamra change karne ka sochne lagi hai

Supriya ka pehla kiss uski close friend Ravina ke saath thaa. Par iss kiss ke baad se hi Supriya Ravina se alag rehne lagi par baad mein Ravina ki maut hogyi jisse supriya ko gehra dhakka laga.

Idher Megha ko finally Akash ke saath akele kahi jaane ka mauka mila. Dekhte hai yeh kya gull khilate hai.

Ab ye to supriya hi janti hai.. iske alawa jo vo bata rahi hai usme kya sach hai kya nahi... ye to kaun hi bataye.. Thanks bhai

Awesome Updatee

Bahot hi thrilling update thaa maza aagaya. Hoshiyaari ke chakar mein supriya achha fhasi hai.
Woh uss kamre se toh nikal gayi par apni ek chapal wahi bhul aayi hai.

Tanu Kamini aur Komal teeno drug addict hai. Aur uss kamre mein drugs leti hai. Dekhte hai yeh teeno supriya ko pakad paate hai yaa nhi.

Aur supriya jisko hostel samaj rahi thi woh toh khandar nikla. Dekhte hai ab supriya ka kya hota hai.

Ab yahin se to kahani shuru thi.. uska fasna bhi jaruri tha.. varna kaam kaise banta... Thanks bhai

1st chapter mein aapne thrill aur horror ka mast tadka lagaya hai. Padhke maza aagaya hai.

Saare scenes Supriya ke dimaag ki upaz thi yaa koi aatma ka kaam.

Jab se Supriya uss kamre aur haweli ke gate se wapas aayi hai tab se hi uske saath woh sab horaha hai.

Yaha hui tanu ki maut raat ke uss nashe aur hawas ke khel ke baad. Par kaise hua yeh kisi ko nhi pata. Supriya uss room se bathroom mein kaise aayi.

Sapne mein usne dekha usne hi Supriya ko maara. Phir woh khidki pe parchai.

Dusre din usi kamre mein jaana aur Tanu ne jo jo harqat ki thi woh karna apni jeans ko kholke apni chut ko masalna aur tanu Ravina ko imagine karke jhadnaa. Aur tanu ki maut hui yeh achhi baat hai bolna.

Phir hostel mein aake wohi bhootiya khel. Aur abki baar toh Megha ki laash dekhne ko mili. Dekhte hai yeh sach hai yaa jhooth

Bahut bahut dhanyawad bhai dimagi bhram the ya atma/bhoot pret ye to ab ane wala waqt hi batayega apko... akhir chal kya raha hai inke piche.. Apke sabhi sawal kahani mein ghatit ek part hai jo apko aage hi malum chalenge... AB dekhna ye hai.. ki kaise aur kya maya hai... Thanks for reading bhai

 

[Naina]

sabse pehle.... itni nafrat hai mujhe is shruti se ki sukar kijiye ye mahaz ek kahani patr hai... Warna

Update ~~ 48​

Shruti kal ki raat sochte hue jab peon ke piche chal rahi thi tab use bar-bar ek hi chiz khatak rahi thi. Kal raat jis tarah usne kitab library mein dali aur jis tarah usne aapne aap ko chupaye rakha aur yahan tak ki meri har chiz ko bhi note kiya, meri hi kya.. hum sabhi par nazar dale rakha bina kisi camera ke use to yahi samajh ata hi ki use pehle se malum tha ki hum ane wale hai? nahi nahi.. use kaise pata ho sakta hai.. use pata hamare wahan pahunchne ke baad hi hua par kaise? iske alawa jis andaz mein usne book di vo bhi us galyare se agar uspar gaur karun to ho na ho wahan koi dusra darwaja tha jise vo andar aya hoga, kya aisa ho sakta hai.. Shruti sochte hue ye sochti gayi ki kal raat uske us secret room ke secret shelf se bahar nikalte hi kya hua hoga...

Jaise hi shruti library ke andar ayi usi samay us galyare ke dusri chhor par jo use deewar samajh aa rahi thi uska lock khula aur vo deewar darwaje ki tarah khul gayi jiske baad do per bahar aye aur usne kitab ko tezzi se bahar ki taraf fenka jo fisalti hui shelf ke band hone se pehle hi bahar aa nikli. Book ke fenkte sath hi vo wapis usi darwaje ke piche gaya aur usne darwaja band kar diya jiske band hote sath hi vo darwaja deewar ki tarah hi dikhne laga. " han.. aisa hi hua hoga.. " man mein sochte hue baat uske muh se nikal ayi aur peon ke piche ja takrai.

" kya madam.. " peon piche ghumte hi bola.

" aap ruk kyun gaye ... "

" jahan jana hai wahan aa gaye to rukna pdega na.. " peon ke kehte hi shruti ne darwaje ki taraf dekha aur fir uske uppar. " management room, yahan kyun laye ho aap? "

Uff..... itni bhi hawas thik na hai din dahare sabke samne us bechare peon ke upor chadh jaao... bichara wo peon bhi uski aankho mein dekh soch raha hoga ki... chii chii kitni hawas bhari is shruti ki aankho mein...
are haaraman shruti... kam se kam kisiko to bhai ya baap jaise nazar se dekho...

" Yahin bulawa aya to yahin ana padega na, jaiye ab andar "

" acha.. " shruti kuch asmanjas mein thi kyun ki use ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki use milne ke liye management room mein kaun aya. Fir agle hi pal sochte hue usne darwaja khola aur andar ghus gayi. Andar ghus kar usne samne dekha ki ek taraf to Nandini baithi hui thi aur uske samne chair par bhi koi baitha hua tha. Kaun ye piche se nahi dikhai de raha tha. Vo kuch kehti use pehle darwaja khulne par hi nandini ne use andar atte hue dekh liya tha.

" shruti come " nandini ki awaz mein gambhirta tha, jiske muh se naam sunte hi uske samne baitha shaks bhi uski aur piche ki taraf muda. Shruti ko ek pal samajh nahi aya ki vo kaun hai jo use continous ghur raha hai aur vo bhi use ghur rahi hai kyun ki use aisa lag raha tha jaise usne is shaks ko kahin dekha hai. " shruti... come... " nandini ke dubara bolne par shruti sochte hue uske pass aa khadi hui. Pass anne par chehra aur clear dikha to samajh aya ki jo shaks use dekh raha hai vo behad chinta mein hai.

Omg.... matlab ye shruti class mein aaruhi ke samne aaruhi ki mom ko hi gaali de rahi thi.....
dekha... is shruti ki soch kaisi hai... Chii chii... ek taraf aaruhi ki dost banne ki koshish karti aur dusri taraf uski hi maa ko gaali deti hai...
.... aur dekho dekho kaise dar rahi hai urvashi ji se.... ushe pata hai ab wo fanshi, isliye itna dar ke ke pareshan bhi ho rahi hai...
Coz hum readers jaante hai ki shruti usse sundar khubsurat cool aur smart ladkiyon futi aankh dekh nahi sakti... isliye planning karke unki aaruhi jaisi haalat kar deti hai.... taaki saamne wali pagal bhi ho jaaye aur shruti pe koi ilzaam bhi na aaye...
ab jab shruti jaankaari ke bina hi aaruhi ki mom uske saamne aa gayi hai to wo dar gayi ki kahi uski kamini harkaton ka pata na chal jaaye unko..

" hello shruti.. "

" hello....aaunty...y....... " bolte hue shruti ki achanak se ankhein badi ho gayi kyun ki jo chiz vo yaad karne ki kosish kar rahi thi vo use yaad aa gayi thi. Shruti ne fauran nandini ki taraf dekha aur man hi man use kosne lagi, yun achanak se usne kaise samna kara diya tha aaruhi ki mom ka use.. Shruti ko kabhi bhi kisi chiz ka dar nahi rehta tha lekin jahan sawal Maa kaa jata tha uska fobia ubhar ata tha bhale hi vo uski maa ho ya kisi aur ki ya uski room partner ki.

" sit shruti... " nandini uske chehre ki ghabrahat ko samajh rahi thi.

" par.. miss... mene.. .kyun.. matlab... apne sab bata dia " shruti ko samajh nahi aaa raha tha ki kya bolna hai, uska dimag total fail ho chuka tha.

" shruti.. ghabrao mat.. baitho.. " is baar aaruhi ki maa urvashi ne use baithne ke liye kaha. Shruti ki ghabrahat uske mathe se nikalta pasina bata raha tha jo wahan chal rahe AC ko bhi maat de raha tha. Shruti chup chap bag utar kar wahin baith gayi. Na hi uski nazar uppar uth rahi thi aur na hi aaruhi ki maa ki taraf ghum rahi thi. Uski nazar table ke kone se chipki hui thi. Use zara sa bhi andaza nahi tha ki aisa kuch hoga? Nandini miss ne kaha tha ki vo kuch bhi karne se pehle batayagi.. lekin yahan to unhone bahut bada wala kaat diya.. ab ye baat mere ghar bhi jayegi... shit meri maa to bina soche na jane kya kar dalegi mere sath, bahut bura fasungi ... Samjdhari dikhane wali ladki is waqt dimagi uljhano mein ulajhti jaa rahi thi.

" shruti ye aaruhi ki mom hai.. i know ki tum pehchan gayi ho.. " nandini ke bolne par shruti ne koi harkat nahi di " mene inhe aaruhi ke bare mein sab bata diya hai " ye sunte hi shruti ne fauran apni nazar uthai aur jo usne kaha usme awaz hi nahi nikli. Usne apna matha pakad liya kyun ki vo bahut jada confuse thi.. use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki nandini ne aisa kyun kiya aur ek baar bhi bataya kyun nahi.

" dekho beta.. tumhe kisi bhi chiz mein ghabrane ki jarurat nahi hai.. tum relax raho.. jo bhi Miss nandini ne bataya usme mujhe nahi lagta ki tumhari koi galti hai.. infact main to khush hun ki meri beti ke sath koi tha... agar vo akeli hoti to na jane uska kya hota... " urvashi ne uske kandhe par hath rakh kar jaise hi ye baat kahi, na jane kaise shruti ko apne man ka bhoj halka hote hue nazar aya. Usne pehli dafa nazre utha kar urvashi ki taraf dekha jiske chehre par ghambhirta to thi par vo use uske uppar nahi utar rahi thi.

" aunty.. vo main.. aapko... sorry... juth kehne ke liye ... us din phone par ki sab theek hai " shruti ko malum tha ki ab koi faiyda nahi hai chupane se.

" no i know.. tumne juth kyun kaha... i can understand " urvashi ne behad shant lehaze mein ye baat kahi.

" but isne sahi nahi kiya Mrs. Khandelwal.. maine ise usi din ye baat kahi thi ki tumhe aaruhi ki mom se baat karni chahie thi na ki har baat chupani chahie thi.. inhone chupa kar sahi nahi kiya " nandini ne dono ke bich bol kar shruti ke uppar naam dala.

" lekin miss.. mene apko kai baar kaha.. ki jab bhi main aaruhi ko hostel se jane ke liye kehti to uska bhevaiour bahut hi jada alag ho jata.. mujhe dar tha ki kahin agar mene bataya to vo koi aisa kaam na kar le jo nahi karna chahie.. bas isliye.. nahi bata rahi thi.. i thought ki vo adjust nahi ho paa rahi hai.. simple " shruti ne apne bachav mein ek hi sans mein baat keh di.

" simple? you think its simple? tumhari room partner.. itne dino se... roz raat ko akele pata nahi yahan wahan nikal jati hai.. you think its simple? vo tum sab ke naam badal kar ek alag kahani bana deti hai and you are saying its simple? khud socho agar usko kuch bhi ho jata to who will be responsilbe? its you.. shruti.. You know ki abhi abhi college mein itna bda hadsa hua hai.. a girl lost her life.. aur fir bhi tumne ye baat chuapi..? " nandini ne shruti par aisa shikanja kasa ki uske pass koi jawab hi nahi tha dene ke liye. Use nandini se jada urvashi se umed thi ki vo bacha legi.

" miss par.. maine jo kiya vo yahi soch kar kiya.. mujhe nahi pata tha ki aaruhi... "

" no shruti.. its not that simple..maine tum logon ki kahani suni.. aur bina aaruhi se baat kiye uski mom se baat kyun ki malum hai? " nandini ne ek pal ke liye pause liya " taki main unse confront kar sakun aur ye puch sakun ki aisa kya hua hai aaruhi ke sath jo college atte hi vo is tarah behave kar rahi hai, and you know what she told me? " shruti ko laga ki nandini ne koi baat batai hogi taki uske past se related chizen judegi aur uski is samsya ka halh nikal jayega. Shruti intezar karne lagi par nandini na jane kyun use reality show ki tarah har chiz mein pause lekar batati hui ek anchor ki tarah lag rahi thi.

" nothing.. tumhe bharosa nahi to puch lo inse " nandini keh kar kursi par piche hui. Shruti hairan thi.. aur ab use jada double confused.. Agar manpreet ki mane to jarur koi past ki baat hai to aaruhi ko khatak rahi hai isliye na vo jana chahti aur yahan ane ke baad uski ye halat hai par agar nandini sahi keh rahi hai to kya aaurhi ka koi past tha hi nahi?

" aunty aap sure hain? " shruti ne na jane kaise par ye sawal puch liya.

" tumhe lagta hai aaruhi ke past mein kuch hua hai jiske baad uski ye harkatein hai? " urvashi ne jawab dene ki jagah sawal kiya.

" han.. i mean no.. aunty.. but might be.. aisa ho.. i am not sure.. aksar bache nahi batate apne mom dad ko.. kuch secret batein.. " shruti ne ghuma fira kar apni baat kahi.

" usne tumse koi apni secret baat batai? "

" nai aunty.. vo apne bare mein kabhi nahi batati.. tabhi mene apse kaha.. "

" nahi shruti.. i told you.. ki aisa koi past nahi hai.. aaruhi ka.. she studied in a girls school from 5th class .. usne kabhi kisi tarah ki koi zid nahi ki.. na hi usne kabhi koi aisi acitivity ki jo main yahan college akar sun rahi hun.. i don't know.. ya fir main abhi tak ye samajh nahi paa rahi hun ki actually mein aap dono meri hi aaruhi ki baat kar rahe ho.. kyun ki abhi tak ye sab believe karna its not possible to me " urvashi ke chehre par ghambhirta is baar kai jada thi.

" initially... Mrs khandelwal.. manne ko tayar nahi thi ki main jo unhe bata rahin hun vo sahi hai... tabhi tumhe bulaya " nandini ne bich mein bola jis samay ek pal ke liye kamre mein shanti bani hui thi.

" aap bataiye Miss Nandini, as a mother main kaise maan lun ki meri beti.. raat ko ek bhutya hostel mein jati hai.. vo ek alag kahani bana leti hai... logon ko dusre naam se bulati hai.. even khud ko kisi aur naam se bulati hai? Mera acha khasa bacha... aise kaise ho jayega kuch hi hafton mein... to ye chiz main kaise maan leti? Par jaise hi mene shruti ko dekha.. uske chehre ke dar aur ghabrahat ne mujhe ye samjha diya ki jo bhi apne kaha hai vo sab sahi hai.. my daughter is not fine.. and that is why I decided to take her away.... decide to mene tab hi kar liya tha jab apke college se khabar ayi thi ki one girl has found dead in college ... but aaruhi ke dad ne mujhe samjhaya ki anhoni to kahin bhi ho sakti hai.. but this is not anhoni.. this is way more than that.. i need to take her away... " urvashi ne jaise faisla le liya tha. Nandini use smajhane lagi par vo nahi maan rahi thi, shruti apni hi soch mein kho chuki thi, use dono ki baton se koi matlab hi nahi tha. Vo apni soch se bahar ayi aur bahar atte hi vo sirf itna sa boli.

" no.. " shruti ki baat sunte hi nandini aur urvashi dono uski taraf dekhne lagi. " agar aap sahi keh rahi hai.. aur aaurhi ka koi past nahi hai.. to aap use yahan se nahi le ja sakti aunty.. "

" tum chahti ho use main yahan is jagah is halat mein akela chhod dun? "

" agar aap use yahan se le gayi to akela chhod degi.. aap samajh nahi rahe hain main kya kehna cha rahi hun "

" shruti.. i know.. tum uski room partner ho.. i know tumne kosish kari ki aaruhi theek ho jaye isliye tumne mujhe nahi bataya.. par main use yahan nahi chhod sakti.. she needs.. "

" she needs something else aunty.. jo na aap janti hai aur na hi main... vo sirf aur sirf aaruhi janti hai.. aur mera yakeen maniye agar aaruhi ko aap yahan se le gayi.. to aap apni beti ko kabhi mil nahi payengi " shruti apni jagah se khadi ho chuki thi, vo ek pal ke liye chup hui " main isliye nahi keh rahi ki aap logon ko lage ki mene apko na bata kar koi bhool ki hai to use cover up kar rahi hun, balki main apko isliye keh rahi hun kyun ki main aaruhi ke sath reh chuki hun.. uske andar vo dekh chuki hun jo aapne nahi dekha hai... "

" tum kehna kya chahti ho? " urvashi uski baaton ka matlab samjhne ki kosish kar rahi thi.

" aaruhi.... " shruti keh nahi paa rahi thi jo use kehna tha.. " aaruhi is not aaruhi... aunty... use kuch bahut badi aur gehri chiz judi hai.. jiska hum sabko matlab samajh hi nahi aa raha hai... mujhe to ye tak lag raha hai ki aap aaruhi ke sath thi jarur lekin aaruhi ke sath thi hi nahi.. " shruti ka andaz pehle se badal gaya tha, vo ab ghabra nahi rahi thi.

" shruti stop.. tum bahar jao.. " nandini ne use bich mein roka kyun ki baat ab modh badal rahi thi.

" no no.. miss.. i want to talk to her.. shruti.. you mean ki aaruhi is in some kind of possesion? " urvashi ke kehte hi nandini ne gehri sans chodte hue apne sar par hath rakh liya kyun ki wo yahi baat nahi chahti thi ki aisa kuch ho jise baat uske hath se nikal kar upper level ke management tak jaa pahunche, jahan par kisi aur ka to pata nahi par uske sath bahut kuch ho sakta tha kyun ki ye baat college ki prestige aur banai hui image ke aage aa sakta tha.

" yes... "

" stop it shruti... its enough now " nandini ne ek baar aur kosish ki.

" you are saying... aaruhi is possesed ? " is baar urvashi ki sansein tez thi kyun ki use gussa bhi aa raha tha aur dar bhi lag raha tha.

" kind of aunty.. i don't know.. but possesion ka matlab bhoot pret nahi hota.. a past can possesed her... maybe someone in her life posssed her... ap bataiye.. kuch to hua hoga uske past mein.. jo vo yahan atte hi aisi ho gayi? " shruti ne fir past par jor dala.

" i told you... there is no past... meri beti.. pehle se is tarah nahi thi.... " urvashi thodi unchi awaz mein boli aur ek pal santa cha gaya. " sorry... i didn't mean to shout... but tumhe nahi lagta ki uske sath jo pehle din hua vo ek mental bully tha? " urvashi ne chillane ki jagah ab dimag se sahi sawal kiya.

" bilkul lagta hai aunty... but koi event sirf ek baar ghatne se.. uska asar nahi chhodti.. that event has to be repeated again and again... aaruhi is not aaruhi aunty.... aap kyun nahi samajh rahe ho meri baat ko, i want to help her.. isliye keh rahi hun.. please tell me.. is anything happened? " shruti ne fir jor diya, vo baat ko bar bar wahi ghuma rahi thi.

" i said no.. " urvashi apni jagah se khadi hui, usne apni sanson par kabu kiya " main keh rahi hun ki uske past mein kuch nahi tha, she didn't have any affair in her life.. she is very sincere.. tum log uske past se jod kar kyun pagal banane mein lage ho.. she needs help... vo use yahan se jakar hi milegi.. "

" aunty.. apki sari baat main maan kar kahungi ki sach hai.. lekin use yahan se lekar mat jaiye.. she won't take it.. i see this in her eyes.. please... " shruti urvashi ke karib ayi aur uska hath pakad kar request karne lagi.

" shruti.. its enough.. i guess hum sab ko calm down hona chahie.. in sab baton ke alawa.. hume us chiz ka solution khojna chahie.. and Mrs. Khandelwal.. shruti is right.. yahan se le jana hi aaruhi ke liye solution nahi hai.. aur na hi baat ye hai ki aaruhi ko problem past se thi ya present se.. ya college ke bully se.. baat yahan ye hai ki agar aaruhi ko koi problem hai to we needs to find out... aur uska ek tarika mene already khoj liya hai.. " nandini ne baaton ko bich mein kaat kar apni baat kahi, dono ki baat ko galat bhi nahi bataya aur jaise sara rukh apni taraf modh liya.

" solution? " urvashi ne turant kaha.

" Yes Mrs. Khandewal, i have a known person, he is a great Psychiatrist " nandini ko urvashi use rokti use pehle vo boli " let me complete Mrs. Khandelwal.. psychiatrist se matlab ye nahi ki aaruhi pagal hai, he is a great therapist also.. maine use already baat ki hai and he said aaruhi har tarah ke bachon ki taraf normal hai.. if she has something which we can't understand.. he will.. aur aap to khud ek neurosurgen hai.. you know what's best for a child? am i right? jo baat hum aaruhi se nahi pata kar paa rahe, he will.. and that leads to a solution.. use na hi aaruhi ko yahan se jana padega aur apko uski samsya kabhi pata chal jayega.. " nandini ek pal ke liye shant hui " Please sit aap baithiye... " nandini ne jor diya to urvashi baith gayi. Vo maan rahi thi ki nandini ne jo kaha usme bhi ek sach hai. Shruti whaan khadi hui baton ko observe karne lagi, vo kuch baat bata sakti thi aur batane bhi wali thi lekin vo chup rahi.. vo un books ke bare mein batana chahti thi lekin usne irada chhod diya, jo baat vo smjhana cha rahi thi use kisi ne nahi samjha aise mein books ke bare mein bata kar vo khud ko hi khatghare mein nahi khada karna cha rahi thi.

" apko pata hi hai ki is age mein bache bahut si batein nahi batate.. maybe some things.. aaruhi didn't even shared with you... shruti... shruti.. " nandini shruti ko awaz dene lagi to shruti hosh mein ayi.

" yes miss "

" tum bahar jao.. i have to talk to Mrs. Khandelwal.. jarurat hogi to main tumhe dubara bula lungi... " shruti ne ispar koi na-nukur nahi ki, ek dafa uski urvashi se nazre mili jisme chinta saaf jhalak rahi thi aur fir vo bina kuch bole wahan se jane lagi, usne room ka darwaja khola aur fir ruk kar piche mudte hue boli.

" aunty, aapko aaruhi ne kabhi apni friend raveena ke bare mein bataya hai? " shruti ke sawal karne par urvashi uski taraf ghumi aur ek pal use dekhte hue sochne lagi.

" raveena.... " urvashi sochne lagi " no i don't recall her, anything about her? " urvashi ne turant sawal kiya.

" no aunty.. aise hi.. main apka bahar wait karungi.. " shruti itna keh kar room se bahar nikal gayi aur bahar nikalte hi usne phone nikal kar milaya " sab gadbad ho gayi yaar.. nandini miss ne aaruhi ki mom ko bula lia... adhe ghante mein ground ke piche mil.. "

1) aaruhi ki mom yani Mrs urvashi ji ki baatein sun kar yahi lage ki unhe aaruhi ke paas se related kuch bahot hi jaruri baatein pata nahi...

2) shruti ko aaruhi ki past life se judi kuch baatein pata to hai par sabhi baatein ab bhi unclear hi hai uske liye... isliye wo aaruhi ki bimari ki jad tak pahunch nahi pa rahi hai, lekin ye baat bhi wo bhali bhaanti jaanti hai ki agar abhi aaruhi ke ilaj ke waqt agar ushe ghar le gayi uski mom to shayad sach mein original aaruhi kahi kho jayegi... Lekin lekin lekin
Sach ye hai ki aaruhi abhi puri tarah pagal nahi huyi hai... isliye wo haaraman shruti ushe nahi jaane de rahi hai... jab tak aaruhi puri pagal nahi ho jaati ta tak jaane bhi nahi degi aaruhi ko uske ghar..
wo no smoking movie ki tarah..

3) chalo ye achha hua jo nandini ne ek achhe psychiatrist se baat li hai aaruhi ki case ko leke.. ab shayad aaruhi us hawas ki pujaran shruti ki changul se bas jaaye..

4) is haaraman shruti ne ek aur chaal chali nandini ki baatein sun.. yaar aaruhi ki mom khud ek neurosurgeon hai.. ushe hi sikha rahi hai aaruhi pe bhoot preto ka saya hai
Sach mein yaar.... nandini bhi soch rahi hogi ki wo chunotiyo se nahi balki shruti jaisi chutiyo se pareshan hai

Khair....
ab dekho.. ye ek alag hi tamasha... aaruhi ki mom ko ground mein akeli aane ko keh rahi hai... are haaraman tharki shruti kam se kam uski mom ko to baks deti...
joh bhi ho, kuch bhi ho, jaise bhi ho bas ek baat yaad rakhni chahiye ki kul milake kamini shruti hi culprit thi, hai aur rahegi... aur yahin param satya hai baaki sab mithya writer sahab chahe jitna bhi koshish kar le ushe bholi achhi sabit karne ki par sach ko badal nahi sakte aur sach yahin hai ki shruti hawas ki pujarin hai..
ek bholi bhaali aaruhi ko pagal banane ki koshish kar rahi hai ... woh kabhi khush nahi reh payegi... uski wajah se aaj aaruhi ki mom pareshan hai apni beti ki haalat ko dekh ke.. .. uski hay to lagni hi, lagni hai us shruti ko ... yahin par nahi ruki shruti.. usiki is crime ke chakkar mein lavanya bhi maari gayi...
Shruti janti thi ki uska kaam nikalane ke chakkar mein log marenge phir woh na ruki...
ab kya hi kahu shruti jaisi agar ek bhi ek ladki samaaj mein rahi toh puri samaaj ko ganda kar de... sorry I mean to say sabko maha tharki bana degi... phir sabko pagal banake bali chadha degi apne matlab ke liye
ab dekho bichari aaruhi ki mom ke sath bhi kuch bura karne wali hai ye tharki shruti .. are koi to bachao aaruhi ki mom ko
Bichari bholi bhali aaruhi
are uske sath itna kya shruti ne wo kam nahi tha kya jo ab aaruhi ki mom ke sath bhi

us tharki shruti ko jine ka koi Hak nahi... ant mein is story character haaraman shruti ki maut ho jaani chahiye... aur writer sahab aapko yeh karna hi hoga by hook or by crook...

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shaanadar update shaanadar lekhni shaanadar shabdon ka chayan....har shabd ek alag kahani bayaan kar raha tha mujhe update padhte waqt.. aisa lage jaise likhe gaye har shabd jeevit ho uthe aur mujhe ye update mein ghatit drishya dikha rahe hai....ek kahani ke pramukh kirdaar wo hote hai joh khud se pehle dusro ke bade mein soche . aur writer sahab ki kahaniyo ke lead characters sach mein ek nayak ya nayika ki soch rakhte hai.. Jaise Urvashi ..
Aaruhi ke sapno ke duniya se andhkaar ko door karne wali roushni hai uski mom , jinka daaman pakad kar wo badi huyi .. unke aanchal ne jab usko thand lagi toh grami pradan ki aur jab wo khud se ya kisi baat se gussa ho jaati toh unke aanchal ne ushe sheetalta pradan ki.... Unki prerna se bhari wo baatein....
thokor khake girte sabhi hai kabhi na kabhi hai par gir ke kaise khada hoke muskilon ka saamna karna chahiye ye baat aaruhi ko sikhane wali mom hi to hai...
chaahe kahani ho ya vastavik jivan mein maa se anmol aur koi nahi...
Urvashi ji ne jis tarah aaruhi ko sambhaala har waqt, har bure ho ya achhe doud mein unko ek salam... unki mehnat, tyaag aur balidaan
aur aaj bhi beti ki ye khabar sun daudi chali aayi.. kam shabdon mein kaise is mahattvapoorn baat ko jish tarah pesh ki hai.. is mamle mein ye update sarvashresth hai...

.. ye update mann ko tarotaaja hone ka ahasaas deta hai aur sath hi kayi sikh bhi de gaye.. (Urvashi ji ke jariye)
ek reader ke liye sab se badi khushi ki baat yahin hoti hai ki aise update padhne ko mile .. bahut bahut dhanyavaad aapko jo itna achha sundar aur dilchasp baaton se bharpur update ko ham sab pathakon ke madhya rakhe... mein is update ko 5 mein se 5 ank deti hoon..(urvashi ji aur miss nandini ki best positive performances ke liye)
The writer has done commendable job in building the heart touching and maintaining it upto the last drop of the Update .. The narration and the dialogues were perfect fit for the atmosphere of the story.
Also.. harshit1890 sahab has done remarkable job in building the character of Urvashi . Mere favorite characters ki list ek aur kirdaar add ho Chuki hai aur wo koi aur nahi balki ye lead kirdaar Urvashi ji hai... meri nazar mein hamesha ye kirdaar Urvashi ji ek sammanit kirdaar ke roop mein rahegi.. ..

The end of the update delivers a big social message . A big for that....
ki shruti jaisi dost ho to dusman ki jarurat hi nahi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills


edited - ab bhi kuch kami hai revo mein.. kuch aur baatein shayad add karni hai... Khair wo baad mein..
Waiting for next update

 

[Naina]

Aaruhi is the main villian...

pata nahi kuch writers kyun jaan bujh ke mujhse panga le lete hai,, bina consequences ki fikar kiye hi....... Aur baad mein natiza ye ki unki favorite kirdaar badnaam ho jaate sirf story thread pe hi nahi balki pure ss pe
Jaise,,
jaise ki malini, bablu kaka...wo Kamina vikrant ...
Agar writer sahab ka yahi galat ravaya raha meri favorite aaruhi ke liye.. Shayad ab next shikar shruti ho jaaye.. is baar ye kirdaar badnaam ho .. sirf ss pe hi nahi balki the lounge tak

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ..shruti ne khudse socha ki library me kya aur kaise hua hoga ,par usne ye nahi socha ki exact book kaise di us shaks ne ,na naam bataya aaruhi ka naa hi kitaab ka ..

aaruhi ki maa aayi hai aur nandini ne usko sabkuch bata diya hai .
pehle to nandini ne saara iljaam shruti pe hi daal diya ..

koi past nahi hai aaruhi ka aisa kehna hai uski maa ka ..par kya wo sach keh rahi hai ya kuch chhipa rahi hai ..

nandini chahti hai ki aaruhi ko psychiatrist se milna chahiye jisse uski samasya kya hai pata chal jaaye ..

raveena ke baare me kuch yaad nahi urvashi ko par aaruhi aise batati hai jaise abhi bhi baate hoti rehti ho uski raveena se ..
waise ghar leke jaane se rokna sahi nahi tha shruti ka ,,ghar jayegi aaruhi to waha kaise behave karti hai ye bhi pata chal jata uske parents ko ..

kahi aisa to nahi aaruhi kisi planning ka hissa ho aur kuch pata lagane ke liye saara natak kar rahi ho ..
ye soul kaun hai jisse wo baate karti hai ..

aur wo secret kamra library ka ,,lagta hai bahut alag alag raaz chhipe hai hostel me ..

drugs lenewale students ka alag group hai ,,ek library me kitabo ka group ,,

aur aaruhi ka matter ,,
aur ek murder kyu hua ye bhi alag kahani ..

last me bhale sab jude huye ho par abhi ke liye to alag hi hai .

 

[Naina]

To debu raat bhr se gayab h aur raat me uska phone bhi out of reach tha...kahin..Naina ma'am ki khwahish puri to nhi ho gyi...debu tapak to nhi gya daalo ki boriyo me pda pda lgta h raat aaruhi aur debu ke beech koi kaand hua h bhayankar wala...wahi Nandita madam bhi aaj gayab h class lene nhi aayi kahin Naina ma'am ne unka bhi naam hit list me to nhi likhwa diya...ya sayd koi aur reason ho...unke na aane ka..
Wahin aaj subha aaruhi shruti ki laayi book ko dekh leti pr achanak shruti ke uth jaane se wo dekh nhi paayi na jyada gaur kiya usne...sayd...
Ab ye kon milne aaya h shruti se kahin meghnath to nhi ...kbhi aaya ho milne aakhir canteen me mulaqat to ho hi chuki h uski aur baat cheet bhi bdhiya hi rhi..usne kuchh hint diye the shruti ko us din jaane se pahle..wo kya reveal honge ye dekhna h bss.
Wahi debu kab tk mil pata h...kya wo sahi salamt milega ya pieces me...wo to ab waqt hi btayega aise hi nandita madam bhi...wahi us book me aisa kya h jo bahut help kr skta h shruti ki...dekhte h tb tk ke liye intzaar rhega..brother
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