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Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

harshit1890

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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Update ~~ 33


" this is shit.. shruti.. tujhe hansi aa rahi hai.. hume miss nandini ko batana chahie tha, tu kya dant fade jaa rahi hai.. kal ko vo ladka hume bhi dekh kar wahi karega.. "

" chill yar aaruhi.. tu itni jaldi serious kyun ho jati hai... kuch chizon ka positive bhi to dekha kar "

" isme kya positive "

" positive ye ki ab vo ladka apne hath ka istemal nahi karega to kisi ladki par jhapptega to kya vo sahi hoga.. "

" tu kabhi kisi ko shiksha mat dio.. tere se dur rehna hi bhalai hai.. galat kamo mein sath deti hai "

" main wo dekhti hun jo practical hai... ab tu mujhe khud bata.. us ladke ne miss ko dekh kar apni sexual energy release kari to usme kaisa galat? Chemistery mein padte hai na hum.. ek gas dusre ke andar pelo aur pataka bajta hai.. simple yahan bhi wahi science hai.. human mind dusre sharir ko dekh kar metabolism release karta hai jiska connection laundo ke nunu se aur hamari chunnu se juda hota hai.. hum bina ragde bhi beh jatte hain aur ladkon ko hathon ka use karna padta hai.. simple.. "

" chi... kitni gandi batein karti hai tu... sahi mein... "

" hehehehe... tujhe science ka gyan de rahi thi "

" meri maa mat ban aur na chod gyan.. i mean de gyan.. sala tere sath reh kar aise shabad muh par ane lage hai... "

" hahahaha.. LOL yahi to hamara asar hai janeman " mene apni bahein uske kandhe mein dalne ki kosish ki jise usne fauran jhatak diya.

" dur reh.. ek to vaise bhi garmi ho rahi hai... tu mujhe ye bata.. ki tere sath kya hua fir.. teri mom ne kya kiya tere sath? " aaruhi ne baat badalte hue pucha.

" kuch nahi... "

" kuch nahi.. matlab unhe pata hi nahi chala? "

" nahi... kyun ki shart kabhi puri hi nahi hui "

" yani tu piche hatt gayi... tune shart mani hi nahi... " aaruhi aise chaunki hui thi jaise mene uski chatiyan daba di ho.

" nahi.. kyun ki na main first ayi aur na hi vo... "

" aisa kaise ho sakta hai tune to kaha tha.. ki vo hi first ati thi... "

" kya pehnegi aaj tu.. " kamre mein pahunchte sath mene apna school ka kissa kiya band kyun ki ab main use ye batane jati ki vo first isliye nahi ayi kyun ki akhri exam se pehle vo school ki sidiyun se gir gayi thi aur maine uska girna nazarandaz kar diya agar sahi samay par main bacha leti to shayad vo exam dene ke halat mein hoti lekin us samay jeet aur shart ke ehsas mein itni jada khoi thi ki mene madad karni nahi samjhi lekin baad mein samajh aya ki mene jo kiya vo sahi nahi tha. Jis wajah se main apne akhri exam mein dhayan nahi de payi aur bazi koi aur le gaya. Us din samajh aya ki haalat jaise bhi ho samne wala dost ho ya dushman ya koi anjana, agar meri shamta hai madad karne ki to main karungi..

" tu pakka chahti hai hum jaye? " aaruhi ne mujhse sawal fir pucha jo kal se kaffi bar puch chuki thi.

" faltu sawal band kare aur kapde decide kare.. "

" koi bhi top aur jeans nikal le.. "

" tu kya kisi bhajan mein jaa rahi hai? " mene almari kholte hue use kaha.

" to kya chahti hai main kya pehnu "

" koi sexy si dress dalenge "

" sexy si? main kya yahan modelling ke liye ayi thi... main sirf top aur jeans dalungi.. " usne mujhe almari se side kar dia.

" yar aaruhi this is not fair.. hume to hak hota hai sexy ban kar.. apne sharir ko dikhane ka.. tabhi to tadapte hai ladke "

" tu tadpa.. mujhe jarurat nahi hai... " aaruhi ne ek top aur jeans nikala " dekh badia hai na.. " uske top par disco likha hua tha. Vo nahi manne wali thi isliye ab vo simple pehne aur main chamku aisa nahi ho sakta tha isliye mene bhi usi ki tarah ek top aur jeans nikal li. Vaise to abhi do ghante the lekin hum agar abhi se tayar na hote to time se kaise tayar hote.

" tera top tight nahi hai? " mujhe tayar hota dekh aaruhi ne kaha, jo tayar hokar baithi phone par lagi hui thi. Baat uski sahi thi, lekin mene jaan kar thoda tight top pehna tha, jab tak nazar chatiyun par nahi giregi tab tak kaam kaise banega... aaj doctoron ko samajh ayega.. engineer ladkiyan kya hoti hai..

" chal.. i am ready "

" ek aur baar soch le.. warden khoon kar degi.. tujhe malum hai vo kaisi hai "

" tu uski chinta na kar.. chal tu.. "

" koi dekh lega... is samay to har koi bahar mara rehta hai.. koi na koi bak dega warden ko " aaruhi ne fir daraya.

" tu chal na.. " mene aaruhi ka hath khincha aur hum dono kamre se bahar nikal liye. Sham ka samay tha isliye har floor par chehal pehal rehti thi. Ladkiyan corridor mein khadi gappe marti ya fir apne apne laundo ke sath phone par lene dene ki batein karti. Hum jab dono jane lagi to kuch nighaein hum par hi bani hui thi. Man hi man soch rahi thi ki is waqt hum kahan ja rahi hai lekin unpar dhayan na dete hue hum sidhe hostel se bahar nikal gaye. Malum tha koi chuglikhor warden ko bata hi dega.. lekin aaj to nahi batane wala tha kyun ki warden thi hi nahi..

" tujhe kaise pata tha ki aaj warden nahi hai ? "

" malum chal jata hai.. tu uski tension chhod.. kal agar koi warden ko batayega bhi to kya kar legi vo? " mene debu se pehle hi sari jankari nikalwa li thi isliye to mujhe koi dar nahi tha par ye baat aaruhi ko bata nahi sakti thi varna vo 36 sawal karti aur ye sochti ki mera aur debu ke bich kuch chal raha hai.

" par aaj raat kya karenge hum? "

" uski tension kyun leti hai... bahut jagah hai hamare pas.. rehne ke liye manpreet se baat kar rakhi hai mene " mene aaruhi ko bataya aur akhir hum dono college ke ground ke pas aye jahan par gana bajane ka shor gunj raha tha.

" lagta hai party rapchik hone wali hai... " mene aaruhi se kaha aur hum dono udhar pahunch gaye. Entrance par ek launda aur ek laundi khade the jinhone humse pass manga, mene phone par dikha diya sath mein ICard bhi... Dono ne andar jane ki entry di aur hum akhir MBBS ki freshers party mein aa gaye. Vaise to kai party ki thi school mein thi, farewell bhi.. par MBBS ki party kaise hoti hai ye dekhne ki badi icha thi, jis tarah inki ragging hatt kar hoti hai utni hi parti bhi.. Puri zindagi ki boriyat ye party mein puri kar lete the. Bheed kafi thi, bhar bhar ke bache the wahan par.. aur kya bataun ek se ek.. ladke chamak rahe the.

" tune koi MBBS se kyun nahi chhunna? " aaruhi ne mujhse fauran pucha kyun ki vo janti thi ki meri nazar laundon par hi thi.

" kyun ki ye professional hote hai.. salle sex bhi professional jaise hi karenge isliye.. "

" tu aur teri soch... vaise teri dost kahan hai "

" vo teri bhi dost hai... hogi.. idhar hi aja.. aage chalte hain " hum dono bheed ke karib aye aur baki sabhi ke sath ek taraf khade ho gaye. Stage par anchoring karti ladki ne red mehrun color ki sarre pehni thi ball boy cut se thode lambe the.. sundar thi ladki.. par jab usne bolna shuru kiya to samajh aya yahan to sab khulla hai bhai.. Bhale hi wahan par medical ka pura staff kyun na baitha ho.

" shruti... " anchor ki baton mein main aur aaruhi dono aise khoye ki manpreet awaz lagati rahi aur takreeban uske 4 se 5 baar awaz lagane ke baad humne uski taraf dekha. Vo thodi dur thi humse aur ishare se hume apne pass bula rahi thi. " chal "

" kahan " aaruhi bas puchi utne mein mene uska hath pakad kar use waan se le jana behtar samjha. Bheed se nikal kar hum dono harpret ke pass pahunche to ek baar use dekh kar main bhi wahh kar padi. Deep cut wala single piece pehna tha, ek dum chamchamata hua..

" tu to katai jalwe bikhar rahi hai aaj "

" han seriously, dress badi achi lag rahi hai " mere piche piche aaruhi ne bhi tarif ki

" thank you.. ladiezz.. senior hai.. to juniors ko pata chalna chahie na "

" han unhe pata chal raha hoga.. kitno ka to andar hi gir gaya hoga " mene manpreet ko cheda.

" girne de.. hum to wahi chahte hai.. heheheh " hum dono hans pade lekin aaruhi ne hamara sath nahi diya. " chalo aao.. yahan kya khade ho.. asli maza to piche hai.. "

" piche kithe.. ? "

" are stage ke piche chalo chalo.. " uske baad manpreet hume piche le gayi. Stage ke piche ek jagah par tent ke parde se dhak kar andar alag hi mahol banaya hua tha. Betichod ise kehte hai MBBS ki freshers.. vo jagah jada badi nahi thi lekin aram se wahan 15 jane honge hume mila kar 18 ho gaye honge.. aur bhi 5-10 fit ho sakte the.. ek taraf hawa ke sath pani fenkne wala pankha laga tha uske oppiste daru, smoking, hukka sab chal raha tha. Hukke ke bare mein mene suna tha lekin kabhi try nahi kiya tha na, aaj pehli baar dekh rahi thi. Ladke ho ya ladki wahan kisi bhi tarah ka bhed-bhav nahi tha.

" ye dekh... kaise sabke samne kissing kar rahe hain " aaruhi ne kaan ke pas dhire se kaha to mene bhi dekha ek kone mein lage hue the. Ladka uske honton ko khane mein utavla tha.. dusri taraf ladki ka hath ladke ke jeans ke uppar uske lund par ghum raha tha.

" kya nazara hai behenchod... " mere to tan badan mein jhur-jhuri ho gayi. Aaruhi ne piche se meri pith par mukka dhar diya. " pagal hai kya sali.. "

" haramzadi hai tu.. " aaruhi ne fir mere kan mein kaha.

" guys tum log khade kyun hai.. baitho... drink lo.. smoke? " manpreet ne pucha to humne mana kar diya " drink ? "

" abhi nahi.. thodi der mein " mene jawab diya to vo khud hukka lene lagi.

" tu drink karti hai? " aaruhi ne mujhse pucha.

" nahi "

" to tune mana kyun nahi kiya ?"

" apna standard badha.. direct mana kar dungi to puchegi bhi nahi kuch.. style se mana karna padta hai.. tu bas apni chonch band kario thobde wali "

" chonch wahi hoti hai "

" hum ladkiyun ke niche bhi hoti hai.. LOL " mene aaruhi ko jawab diya to vo bhi bina hanse nahi reh payi. Mahol kafi nashila tha hum wahin baith gaye thodi der mein kim aa gayi aur aaruhi uske sath baat cheet mein busy ho gayi aur main apne sath baithi ladki ke sath. Aye to freshers party ke liye the lekin party se to in logon ko koi matlab hi nahi tha. Inki party thi to ye sab.. bich mein jab manpreet ne mujhe hukka offer kiya to mujhse raha nahi gaya, aaruhi mujhe aise dekh rahi thi jaise meri maa ho par mene use full ignore kiya aur hukka try kiya, ek kassh khincha.. maa chud gayi.. behenchod.. bitiyachod.. khans khans kar mene khub gali di aur wahan baithi janta hans di. Manpreet ne turant whiski ka ek ghunt muh mein daal diya usne aur sone par suhaga kaam kiya lekin mene is baar koi harkat nahi ki varna badi hi gandi bezati hoti aur mein is bezati ko seh nahi pati. Chatiyan chamkate hue izat chamak jati .. Mene whisky to jaise taise sambhali ... kisi tarah.. varna pura galla andar se chud gaya tha.. itni jalan mene sirf tabhi suni thi jab kori chut mein lund jata hai tab hoti hai.. par galle mein bhi hoti hai vo bhi daru se ye pehli baar experience kar rahi thi...

Mene ek baar aaruhi ki taarf dekha vo meri halat dekh hans rahi thi, use bada maza aaya tha.. par main bhi haar manne walle mein se nahi thi, thoda time laga lekin manpreet ke thode instruction aur meri man ki icha ke chalte mene hukka pina sikh hi liya.. ab koi hanse behennnchoddd... mene kashh kincha aur uska dhuain aaruhi ki taraf chhoda. Maza hi aa gaya.. LOL lagatar 4-5 baar kash lagate hue mera ghuma sar aur aisa laga behenchod puri dunia gol-gol ghum rahi ho.... flavour hukka bhi chadta hai.. haye.. maza hi aa gaya.. Main wapis aaruhi ke pass ja baithi..

" kar liya nasha... "

" ye nasha nahi hai pagli.. gazab chiz hai.. chal tujhe bhi sikhati hun.. "

" nahi.. mujhe nahi karni.. i am good like this.. " aaruhi ne saaf mana kiya aur mene bhi uspar se dhayan hata dia. " yaar manpreet tujhe vishal ko bhi bulana chahie tha.. vo hota to abhi mera bhi kuch ho jata "

" hehehe.. sali kamini...aisa tha to pehle batati, main teri jawani ka bhi intezam kar deti "

" to kuch kar na "

" abhi to nahi kar sakti.. par mere pas ek idea hai.. "

" kya? " mene fauran pucha. Vaise to main vishal ko khud ke ishare par nachana chahti thi par na jane kyun sali ye sharir ki aag mujhse iska ulta hi karwa rahi thi.

" kya baat kar rahi thi manpreet se kone mein jakar " manpreet ke sath baat karte hi mein wapis aaruhi ke pas ayi to usne sawal pucha.

" teri nazar mujhpar hi hai... kahin meri izat par to koi archan nahi ane wali na.. teri mujhe harkatein waise bhi theek nahi lagti " mene apna sina chupate hue kaha.

" ho gaya tera? overacting ? "

" tu baat hi aisi karti hai... kabhi kabhi tujse maa wali feeling ati hai "

" puchun bhi nahi? "

" puch na janeman.. puch na... aur puch "

" haramazadi.. jahan yahan se.. " mujhe aaruhi ko chedne mein bada maza ata tha. Vaise bhi jo insan jada sochta hai use chedne ka maza alag hota hai kyun ki vo har jagah kuch na kuch dhundta hai aur uspar kahani bunata hai. Aaruhi ki yahi adat ko sudharna tha aur vo jald hi sudharne wala tha. Mene aaruhi ki taraf dekhte hue shaitaini muskan pass ki aur vo mujhe ghurti rahi jaise meri shaitani ko pakadne ki kosish kar rahi ho.

Andhera ho chuka tha, party ki samapti ho chuki thi par nach gana chal raha tha, miss fresher banne wali fresher ka patta pehen kar mini skirt aur top mein thumke laga rahi thi iske alawa uske aaju baju laar tapkate hue launde ghus-ghus kar nach rahe the. Iske alawa wahan baithe vo launde jo nach nahi sakte vo taad-taad kar ladkiyun ko ankhon se chod rahe the. Maze to us launde ke the jiske sath vo miss fresher nach rahi thi, ek dum chipak chipak kar..

" inko dekh kar lagta hai ki freshers party mein na hi kuch karun to acha " aaruhi ne ashleel nach main apni tipdiyan di.

" sab chalta hai "

" kuch nahi chalta..in sab ne pii rakhi hai.. aur isi baat ka fayda uthta hai... "

" ye sab mojh hoti hai.. tu girls school mein padi hai na tujhe tabhi kuch samajh nahi ata.. ladkiyun ko thodi bahut ched chad mein maza ata hai... jab tak hume pasand ho hum objection nahi karte aur tujhe kaun kehta hai nachne ko.. mat nachio.. "

" hmm "

Aaruhi jaisi pehli ladki dekhi thi mene jise har chiz se koi na koi dikat thi lekin mujhe use koi dikat nahi thi. Jaise taise hum sabne party ko akhri mein enjoy kiya, nachna gana hamara bhi hua aur tajub ki baat humne aaruhi ko bhi nacha diya aur maa kasam.. kya nachti hai ladki... kya thumke lagaye usne.. bhale hi use ladkon se uncomfortable hota hai lekin jaise hi use khula maidan mila usne to bajji hi maar dali. Main, manpreet, kim aur manpreet ke sabhi dost uska dance dekh bahuchakka the.. iske aalwa jo launde jaa rahe the vo specially uska nach dekhne ke liye ruk gaye... Pata nahi tha ki usme ye bhi talent tha.

" tune to aaj pure mbbs ki maa mein surakh kar diya.. tera log video bana kar le gaye video.. kya nachi hai tu.. " khana khate hue mene aaruhi se kaha to khana uske galle mein atak gaya.

" tune bataya kyun nahi ki koi video bana raha tha "

" isme kya batana.. unko bhi malum hona chahie na.. ki kisse pala pada hai.. Engineering students se... maa chod dete hai hum sabki.. "

" tu pagal hai.. "

" vo chhod.. par kya nachi hai tu.. agar ladka hoti to wahin pakad kar tere ko khopche mein le jakar tera rape kar diya hota "

" rape ki kya jarurat ? main razi hoti tab bhi "

" ohoo... ladki alag hi mode par chali gayi... kim ne tujhe kuch de diya kya "

" chal .... thodi bahut mauj kar lete hain... girls school walle bhi "

" uhmm..... ab tu mere type ki lag rahi hai "

" khana kha le chup chap aur ye soch.. ab hum kahan jayenge "

" fikar na kar uski baat ho chuki hai... " party khatam thi... hum khana kha kar ek jagah baithe the aur aaruhi ko to katai nind aa rahi thi, ani bhi thi, kareeb do ghante se baithe the. manpreet jugad mein lagi thi takreeban 1 baje ke aas pass usne humse chalne ko kaha. Hum hostel college se bahar aye ki wahan par khadi gaddi mein manpreet ne baithne ko kaha. Na mene koi prashan kiya aur na hi aaruhi ne jo pehle se hi nind mein dubi thi. Uske dimag mein ye nahi tha ki mene manpreet ke sath kya jugad set kiya hai. Gaadi mein baithne ke baad aaruhi ankhein band karke baith gayi.

" Main jo bhi kar rahi thi uske dil se uske dar ko hatane ke liye kar rahi thi, use batana chahti thi ki vo galat hai bas... par mujhe kya pata tha ki aisa kuch ho jayega.. " shruti bolte hue chup hui. Apni galti jo use mehsus ho rahi thi use batane mein dikkat ho rahi thi.

" aisa kya kiya tha tumne us raat uske sath? " nandini ne sawal kiya.

" miss.. us raat hum... main... " shruti thodi nervous ho rahi hti " main use wahin le gayi jahan se uski dar ki shuruwat hui thi.. usi mansion khandar mein jahan us raat lavanya ne uske sath mazak kiya tha aur uska asar uske dimag par pada tha. Main sirf uske us dar ko use alag karna chahti thi lekin mujhe nahi pata tha ki main uska dar nahi balki use hi badal rahi hun " shruti ne ek baar fir apni baat batani shuru ki.

" tu pagal hai.. shruti... are you mad... fuck you... shruti.. fuck you... " aaurhi ke chillane ki awaz gunj rahi thi. Hum dono is waqt gaddi ke pass khade the, aaruhi jab so kar uthi to usne apne aap ko andhere mein akele gaddi ke andar paya. Jab vo uthi to ghabra gayi aur turant gaddi se bahar nikli, bahar nikalte hi jab usne mansion ko dekha to uska dar uske zehan mein daud pada. Vo chillati use pehle main wahan aa gayi.

" shant ho ja.. kyun chilla rahi hai.. dhang se susu bhi nahi karne de rahi " mene usko dekhte hi kaha.

" fuck you... tu puch mat... ki main kyun chilla rahi hun.... tu mujhe ye kahan le ayi hai.... tujhe.. malum hai.. na... ye jagah.. ye jagah... " aaruhi ki nazar mujhse hat kar khandar par jaa rahi thi.

" han ye jagah.. "

" to tujhe pata hai na main is jagah se kitna ghabrati hun, tu mujhe yahan kyun layi hai "

" isi ghabrahat ki wajah se "

" tu kya chutiya ho gayi hai.. bol? chutiya ho gayi hai? " use is tarah ke gusse mein pehli baar dekh kar main achambit thi.

" tu gali bhi deti hai ....hehehehe LOL " meri hansi nikal gayi uske galli dene par.

" mazak ka time hai ye.. mazak ka time hai... mujhe nahi pata tu mujhe abhi ke abhi.. abhi... ke abhi yahan se le jayegi... chal... tu yahan se mujhe wapis chhod kar aa..hostel.. " aaruhi bachon ki tarah zid karti hui gaddi ke pas ayi.

" par mujhe thodi gaddi chalani ati hai "

" tujhe sirf sharir ki bhook mitane ati hai... behen ki lodi kahin ki... " vo fir chillai, uski awaz pure ilake mein gunj rahi thi.

" galiyan to sahi deti hai.. itne din se kahan chupa rakhi thi "

" dekh shruti .. main bata rahi hun.. " aaruhi ko tabhi bich mein rukna pada kyun ki hum dono ke alawa tisri awaz ayi.

" tum dono bahar ladoge ... ya andar aaoge.. program chalu hone wala hai.. andar aao... bahar is not safe... jungli janwar aa jate hain salle " awaz ki disha mein jab aaruhi ne dekha to vo us ladke ko pehchanti use pehle vo andar ghus gaya.

" ye kaun tha? " aaruhi ne fauran pucha.

" jiski gaddi hai vo.. ab agar tujhe wapis jana hai to use baat karni padegi aur vo bahar ayega nahi.. isliye tujhe andar chalna padega... " mene uske kareeb jakar uska hath pakda to usne hath jhatak diya.

" tu dur reh mujhse.. bas.. " vo behad gusse mein thi. Mujhe aisa laga vo bekar ka gussa kar rahi hai lekin asal mein vo uska gussa nahi balki dar tha jo frustation ke roop mein bahar aa raha tha. Vo samajh nahi paa rahi thi kya kare aur main bas ye chahti thi ki ye ladki andar chale. Uski nazar mansion par ek jagah par jami hui thi, khdki thi shayad udhar.. main bhi wahan dekhne lagi lekin mujhe koi nahi dikha.

" koi hai wahan? " mene use chedne ke lihaz se pucha par vo gusse mein thi.. bahut jada usne mera hath fir khinch diya. " ayi maa behen chodd di hath ki mere.. "

" main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi iske liye.. "

" karegi.. jab tujhe sach pata chalega uske baad to tu... mere per bhi chuhegi.. "

" mujhe ab tujhse koi baat nahi karni.. " aaruhi ne mujhse kaha aur andar ki taraf badhi " main us ladke se request karke yahan se jaa rahi hun.. aur tera mera jo bhi tha sab khatm.. " aaurhi gusse mein bol kar wahan se nikli aur main apna kandha pakadte hue mansion ki taraf badhi " itni kutiya ladki mene zindagi mein nahi dekhi.. hath ukhad kar hi manegi ye... behenchod kahi ki... " mene uski dhamki ko ignore kiya aur mansion mein ke andar aa gayi.
 
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Haan ye kar lo pehle :roflol:
lol :lol: :roflol:
yaar matlab puri story mein baaki suspense par parda hate ya na hate, par haan ye aaruhi, shruti ka hath jarur ukhad fekegi wo bhi definitely :lol1:
aur suruwati daud se isi koshish mein to hai wo ki kab mauka mile aur udhar uske hath ukhad fenke :lol:
:lol: Han mere ko yahi lagta hai.. hath jayega iska... :D
ye kya harshit sahab yun baar baar normal update... bas sex related hi baatein ya ghatnaye hoti rahi rahi ya to shruti ki taraf se ya college ke students ke taraf se . bich bich aaruhi mana karti rahi par shruti to shruti hai usko to bas yahin baatein karni hai, dikhani hai... chaahe present mein ho ya uske school time ki ho...
kam se kam lavanya ka patta saaf kar dete aap :D
Well waise sabse important baat ye ki aaruhi ko sach mein room change kar leni chahiye..
Khair......

1) baat wohi pe atki huyi hai ki akhir shruti ne sawalon ka jawab paane ke liye kis tarah se istemaal kiya aaruhi ko..?

2) baad mein aaruhi us khandahar se kaise hostel aayi?

3) kyun aaruhi baar baar us bhootiya hostel mein jaake so jaati thi ya behosh ho jaati thi... kya iske piche shruti ka hath hai...

4) mbbs ke fresher party mein kya kand hone wala hai..?

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab :yourock: :yourock:
Kahani buildup... warna Game of thrones ke 8ve season ki tarah ho jayega.. fir maza kharab ... ek-ada aur jhel lijeye... aage jo ane wala hai.. uske liye thodi tayari karni padti hai.. :D
Character buildup hoga.. to hi apko lagega ki justify hai... Sawal ye jaruri hai ki akhir kaahni ke kaun se phase mein ho aap? socho socho.. :D Thanks naina ji :hug:
ये अपडेट जितना सिंपल दिखाई दे रहा है , वैसा लगता नहीं है कि है । पुरे अपडेट में आरोही और श्रुति को क्लास रूम में और लैब में बातें करते हुए दिखाया गया है । हमेशा की तरह श्रुति अपने अंदाज में आरोही को जब तब छेड़ती रहती है तो आरोही उसके बातों से परेशान और शर्म सा महसूस करती रहती है । चाहे नंदिनी मैम का आइंस्टाइन वाला चैप्टर और टाइम ट्रैवल वाला हो या श्रुति के स्कूल के दिनों का किस्सा हो ।
एक और चीज कि आरोही पर श्रुति के संगत का असर कुछ कुछ होने लगा है । वो भी कभी कभार श्रुति जैसी भाषा का प्रयोग करने लगी है ।
क्या इन की बातो से आरोही पर कुछ मानसिक असर पड़ने वाला है ? या यह इन दोनों की सामान्य बातचीत ही है ?

वैसे हर्षित भाई ! लड़कियों के आपस की बातों को दिखाने में आपका जबाव नहीं । बहुत ही जबरदस्त और आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट ।
Are bhai bhai samajh gaye... buildup ko... aage sabko clear hoga ki buildup kyun jaruri tha.. abhi to bahut si chizen ayegi.. kuch hi update mein.. Bhai kosish kar raha hun ki ladkiyun ke bich ki batein reality se jodta hua likhun.. mene apni life mein bada observe kiya hai ladkiyun ko baat karta hua... badi antique hti hai isme no doubt :lol: Thanks bhai :hug:
Ye Shruti to sexcologist hai yaar ..iss update me to bas erotic bate hi thi dekhate hai aage kya hota hai
:roflol: :lol: best comment.... for shruti... :D
Excellent fantastic bemissal lajawab damdaar update
Thanks bhai :hug:
nice update ..sangat ka asar ho raha hai aruhi par aur wo bhi gande words bolna sikh rahi hai 🤣..
vishal ko milne gaye to waha koi nahi tha ,,aur ye miss nandani ne class alag jagah rakhi thi ,,ye shruti kitni baate karti hai aur uski baato me sabse bada topic sex se related hi hota hai 🤣🤣..

aruhi ko sunne me interest nahi tha shruti ka 11th ka kissa par baadme bahut excite ho gayi 🤣..

kahi ye koi time travel se related to nahi hai 🤔🤔🤔.. apne aur apne dosto ki maut ki jaanch karne yaa phir bachane ka koi matter 🤔🤔..

aur ye ladka kitna tharki hai 🤣. miss ki cleavage dekhke lund sehla raha tha .
Sahi kaha bhai.. sangat ka asar... bahut badi chiz hai.. sangat.... :D Batuni hai.. shuru se hai... bina bate kiye kya hi maza hai zindagi mein.. use bahut chahat hai bhai.. dekho kaise puri hogi uski ye chahat.... :D Ladkiyun ka aisa hi hota hai pehle na nukur karegi fir baad mein sabse jada chul rhegi.. janne ki.. :D Hahaahaha.. TIme travel... :D no comment... :D

Thanks bhai :hug: keep reading... :cheers:
 

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" dekh badia hai na.. " uske top par disco likha hua tha.
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha :lol: :roflol:
matlab disco likha hai isliye badhiya hai party ke liye nahi.. :wtfrol:
Yaar ye aaruhi aur supriya sach bahot bholi hai bilkul DARK WOLFKING ki tarah :lol:
... :D
 
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" koi sexy si dress dalenge "

" sexy si? main kya yahan modelling ke liye ayi thi... main sirf top aur jeans dalungi.. " usne mujhe almari se side kar dia.

" yar aaruhi this is not fair.. hume to hak hota hai sexy ban kar.. apne sharir ko dikhane ka.. tabhi to tadapte hai ladke "
are sexy dress bhi pehene ki kya jarurat... shruti nangi hi kyun nahi chali jaati us party mein :lol:
kisiko thodi na bura lagega... :laughing:
is shruti ka naam aate hi ab to ghin si aane lagi hai :yuck:
 
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isme kya batana.. unko bhi malum hona chahie na.. ki kisse pala pada hai.. Engineering students se... maa chod dete hai hum sabki.. "
Matlab Shruti engineering student hai.. isliye shruti baaki students ki mom ke saath sex karti hai.... :D
par kaise :D
 
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mene use full ignore kiya aur hukka try kiya, ek kassh khincha.. maa chud gayi.
matlab yahan shruti ne hukka pi aur udhar uske ghar mein shruti ki mom ke sath sex karke chala gaya...
to wo sex karne wala gair mard koun tha.. . ye bhi sochne wali baat hai :D
Kya shruti ke dad ko pata nahi ki shruti ki mom yani ki uski biwi ke sath kisine sex karke chala gaya.. :D
. behenchod.. bitiyachod..
Oh to matlab waha party mein jitne bhi students hai sab ke sab insects lover hai :roflol:
par harshit1890 sahab aap ko to insects lober se shakth nafrat hai to ye insects lober wale kirdaar ju ki story pe kya kar raha hai :D
 
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Main jo bhi kar rahi thi uske dil se uske dar ko hatane ke liye kar rahi thi, use batana chahti thi ki vo galat hai bas... par mujhe kya pata tha ki aisa kuch ho jayega.. " shruti bolte hue chup hui. Apni galti jo use mehsus ho rahi thi use batane mein dikkat ho rahi thi.

" aisa kya kiya tha tumne us raat uske sath? " nandini ne sawal kiya.

" miss.. us raat hum... main... " shruti thodi nervous ho rahi hti " main use wahin le gayi jahan se uski dar ki shuruwat hui thi.. usi mansion khandar mein jahan us raat lavanya ne uske sath mazak kiya tha aur uska asar uske dimag par pada tha. Main sirf uske us dar ko use alag karna chahti thi lekin mujhe nahi pata tha ki main uska dar nahi balki use hi badal rahi hun " shruti ne ek baar fir apni baat batani shuru ki.
to aate hai hum sameeksha par..
(harshit1890 sahab sorry par par main majboor hu ye revo dene ke liye :D)

jo kirdaar shruti baat baat par dusre kirdaar ki mom ke saath sex karti hai... jo kirdaar shruti hukka pine se uski mom kisi gair mard ke sath soti hai.. wo gair mard shruti ki mom ke sath sex karke chala jata hai, aur shruti ke dad ko pata bhi nahi chalta... jo kirdaar shruti jiski nazar mein baaki ke kirdaar insects lover hai... jo kirdaar shruti sirf isiliye engineering college mein admission li hai taaki apne jishm ki aag ko saant kar sake kisike sath sex karke chinnal ki tarah... wo haaraman kirdaar shruti chali psychologist aur Psychiatrist banke aaruhi ka ilaz karne...
kya bitch shruti ko itni bhi samajh nahi ki uski chinnal soch bas sex se suru hoti hai aur sex mein khatam.. jo kiske sath bhi so jaye hawas ko mitane... Wo shruti kaise thik kar sakti hai kisko kaise bhaga sakti hai kisike dar ko...
Wo ek absolutely positively 101% chinnal hai na ki koi doctor... to kahe over smart banne gayi udhar.... kyun leke gayi us khandahar mein phir se us masoom ko... kya jarurat thi ushe... kya aaruhi ne request ki ya uske gharwalo ne ki aaruhi ko thik kar do...
agar by chance iska ulta effects ho jaye aaruhi ki upor to uska jimmewar koun hoga...
shruti ne ek tarah se crime ki hai... ek aparadh jiske liye ushe kanoonan saza milni chahiye...
Jaise usne school life mein ki thi...

Khair...... shruti ek criminal minded girl hai... afsos y ki aaruhi jaisi ladki anjane mein uski changul mein jaa fanshi...
Ab to lage ki us khandahar ke wajah kuch ho na ho... lekin is shruti ki wajah se jarur aaruhi kisi badi musibat mein fanshegi.. jisse nikalana lagbhag na namumkin hai..
isliye bade bujurg keh gaye kisi anjaani cheej ho ya insaan itni jaldi vishvas pe nahi lena chahiye... kya pata iske chalte kya khamiyaza bhugatna pare... jo soch se bhi pare ho...
Jaise aaj aaruhi bhugat rahi hai khamiyaza us criminal minded kirdaar shruti se dosti karke..

Khair.... mujhe kya... tulsi is sanshar mein bhaanti bhaanti ke log matlab story character..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock:
(sirf Brilliant update with awesome writing skill aapke liye harshu ji..:D. baaki upor jo baatein hai wo sirf kirdaar shruti ke liye.. :D hope ki itna kuch padhne ke baad shruti next time kuch karne se pehle sau martawa sochegi ki karu ke na karu :D)
 

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" this is shit.. shruti.. tujhe hansi aa rahi hai.. hume miss nandini ko batana chahie tha, tu kya dant fade jaa rahi hai.. kal ko vo ladka hume bhi dekh kar wahi karega.. "

" chill yar aaruhi.. tu itni jaldi serious kyun ho jati hai... kuch chizon ka positive bhi to dekha kar "

" isme kya positive "

" positive ye ki ab vo ladka apne hath ka istemal nahi karega to kisi ladki par jhapptega to kya vo sahi hoga.. "

" tu kabhi kisi ko shiksha mat dio.. tere se dur rehna hi bhalai hai.. galat kamo mein sath deti hai "

" main wo dekhti hun jo practical hai... ab tu mujhe khud bata.. us ladke ne miss ko dekh kar apni sexual energy release kari to usme kaisa galat? Chemistery mein padte hai na hum.. ek gas dusre ke andar pelo aur pataka bajta hai.. simple yahan bhi wahi science hai.. human mind dusre sharir ko dekh kar metabolism release karta hai jiska connection laundo ke nunu se aur hamari chunnu se juda hota hai.. hum bina ragde bhi beh jatte hain aur ladkon ko hathon ka use karna padta hai.. simple.. "

" chi... kitni gandi batein karti hai tu... sahi mein... "

" hehehehe... tujhe science ka gyan de rahi thi "

" meri maa mat ban aur na chod gyan.. i mean de gyan.. sala tere sath reh kar aise shabad muh par ane lage hai... "

" hahahaha.. LOL yahi to hamara asar hai janeman " mene apni bahein uske kandhe mein dalne ki kosish ki jise usne fauran jhatak diya.

" dur reh.. ek to vaise bhi garmi ho rahi hai... tu mujhe ye bata.. ki tere sath kya hua fir.. teri mom ne kya kiya tere sath? " aaruhi ne baat badalte hue pucha.

" kuch nahi... "

" kuch nahi.. matlab unhe pata hi nahi chala? "

" nahi... kyun ki shart kabhi puri hi nahi hui "

" yani tu piche hatt gayi... tune shart mani hi nahi... " aaruhi aise chaunki hui thi jaise mene uski chatiyan daba di ho.

" nahi.. kyun ki na main first ayi aur na hi vo... "

" aisa kaise ho sakta hai tune to kaha tha.. ki vo hi first ati thi... "

" kya pehnegi aaj tu.. " kamre mein pahunchte sath mene apna school ka kissa kiya band kyun ki ab main use ye batane jati ki vo first isliye nahi ayi kyun ki akhri exam se pehle vo school ki sidiyun se gir gayi thi aur maine uska girna nazarandaz kar diya agar sahi samay par main bacha leti to shayad vo exam dene ke halat mein hoti lekin us samay jeet aur shart ke ehsas mein itni jada khoi thi ki mene madad karni nahi samjhi lekin baad mein samajh aya ki mene jo kiya vo sahi nahi tha. Jis wajah se main apne akhri exam mein dhayan nahi de payi aur bazi koi aur le gaya. Us din samajh aya ki haalat jaise bhi ho samne wala dost ho ya dushman ya koi anjana, agar meri shamta hai madad karne ki to main karungi..

" tu pakka chahti hai hum jaye? " aaruhi ne mujhse sawal fir pucha jo kal se kaffi bar puch chuki thi.

" faltu sawal band kare aur kapde decide kare.. "

" koi bhi top aur jeans nikal le.. "

" tu kya kisi bhajan mein jaa rahi hai? " mene almari kholte hue use kaha.

" to kya chahti hai main kya pehnu "

" koi sexy si dress dalenge "

" sexy si? main kya yahan modelling ke liye ayi thi... main sirf top aur jeans dalungi.. " usne mujhe almari se side kar dia.

" yar aaruhi this is not fair.. hume to hak hota hai sexy ban kar.. apne sharir ko dikhane ka.. tabhi to tadapte hai ladke "

" tu tadpa.. mujhe jarurat nahi hai... " aaruhi ne ek top aur jeans nikala " dekh badia hai na.. " uske top par disco likha hua tha. Vo nahi manne wali thi isliye ab vo simple pehne aur main chamku aisa nahi ho sakta tha isliye mene bhi usi ki tarah ek top aur jeans nikal li. Vaise to abhi do ghante the lekin hum agar abhi se tayar na hote to time se kaise tayar hote.

" tera top tight nahi hai? " mujhe tayar hota dekh aaruhi ne kaha, jo tayar hokar baithi phone par lagi hui thi. Baat uski sahi thi, lekin mene jaan kar thoda tight top pehna tha, jab tak nazar chatiyun par nahi giregi tab tak kaam kaise banega... aaj doctoron ko samajh ayega.. engineer ladkiyan kya hoti hai..

" chal.. i am ready "

" ek aur baar soch le.. warden khoon kar degi.. tujhe malum hai vo kaisi hai "

" tu uski chinta na kar.. chal tu.. "

" koi dekh lega... is samay to har koi bahar mara rehta hai.. koi na koi bak dega warden ko " aaruhi ne fir daraya.

" tu chal na.. " mene aaruhi ka hath khincha aur hum dono kamre se bahar nikal liye. Sham ka samay tha isliye har floor par chehal pehal rehti thi. Ladkiyan corridor mein khadi gappe marti ya fir apne apne laundo ke sath phone par lene dene ki batein karti. Hum jab dono jane lagi to kuch nighaein hum par hi bani hui thi. Man hi man soch rahi thi ki is waqt hum kahan ja rahi hai lekin unpar dhayan na dete hue hum sidhe hostel se bahar nikal gaye. Malum tha koi chuglikhor warden ko bata hi dega.. lekin aaj to nahi batane wala tha kyun ki warden thi hi nahi..

" tujhe kaise pata tha ki aaj warden nahi hai ? "

" malum chal jata hai.. tu uski tension chhod.. kal agar koi warden ko batayega bhi to kya kar legi vo? " mene debu se pehle hi sari jankari nikalwa li thi isliye to mujhe koi dar nahi tha par ye baat aaruhi ko bata nahi sakti thi varna vo 36 sawal karti aur ye sochti ki mera aur debu ke bich kuch chal raha hai.

" par aaj raat kya karenge hum? "

" uski tension kyun leti hai... bahut jagah hai hamare pas.. rehne ke liye harpreet se baat kar rakhi hai mene " mene aaruhi ko bataya aur akhir hum dono college ke ground ke pas aye jahan par gana bajane ka shor gunj raha tha.

" lagta hai party rapchik hone wali hai... " mene aaruhi se kaha aur hum dono udhar pahunch gaye. Entrance par ek launda aur ek laundi khade the jinhone humse pass manga, mene phone par dikha diya sath mein ICard bhi... Dono ne andar jane ki entry di aur hum akhir MBBS ki freshers party mein aa gaye. Vaise to kai party ki thi school mein thi, farewell bhi.. par MBBS ki party kaise hoti hai ye dekhne ki badi icha thi, jis tarah inki ragging hatt kar hoti hai utni hi parti bhi.. Puri zindagi ki boriyat ye party mein puri kar lete the. Bheed kafi thi, bhar bhar ke bache the wahan par.. aur kya bataun ek se ek.. ladke chamak rahe the.

" tune koi MBBS se kyun nahi chhunna? " aaruhi ne mujhse fauran pucha kyun ki vo janti thi ki meri nazar laundon par hi thi.

" kyun ki ye professional hote hai.. salle sex bhi professional jaise hi karenge isliye.. "

" tu aur teri soch... vaise teri dost kahan hai "

" vo teri bhi dost hai... hogi.. idhar hi aja.. aage chalte hain " hum dono bheed ke karib aye aur baki sabhi ke sath ek taraf khade ho gaye. Stage par anchoring karti ladki ne red mehrun color ki sarre pehni thi ball boy cut se thode lambe the.. sundar thi ladki.. par jab usne bolna shuru kiya to samajh aya yahan to sab khulla hai bhai.. Bhale hi wahan par medical ka pura staff kyun na baitha ho.

" shruti... " anchor ki baton mein main aur aaruhi dono aise khoye ki harpreet awaz lagati rahi aur takreeban uske 4 se 5 baar awaz lagane ke baad humne uski taraf dekha. Vo thodi dur thi humse aur ishare se hume apne pass bula rahi thi. " chal "

" kahan " aaruhi bas puchi utne mein mene uska hath pakad kar use waan se le jana behtar samjha. Bheed se nikal kar hum dono harpret ke pass pahunche to ek baar use dekh kar main bhi wahh kar padi. Deep cut wala single piece pehna tha, ek dum chamchamata hua..

" tu to katai jalwe bikhar rahi hai aaj "

" han seriously, dress badi achi lag rahi hai " mere piche piche aaruhi ne bhi tarif ki

" thank you.. ladiezz.. senior hai.. to juniors ko pata chalna chahie na "

" han unhe pata chal raha hoga.. kitno ka to andar hi gir gaya hoga " mene harpreet ko cheda.

" girne de.. hum to wahi chahte hai.. heheheh " hum dono hans pade lekin aaruhi ne hamara sath nahi diya. " chalo aao.. yahan kya khade ho.. asli maza to piche hai.. "

" piche kithe.. ? "

" are stage ke piche chalo chalo.. " uske baad harpreet hume piche le gayi. Stage ke piche ek jagah par tent ke parde se dhak kar andar alag hi mahol banaya hua tha. Betichod ise kehte hai MBBS ki freshers.. vo jagah jada badi nahi thi lekin aram se wahan 15 jane honge hume mila kar 18 ho gaye honge.. aur bhi 5-10 fit ho sakte the.. ek taraf hawa ke sath pani fenkne wala pankha laga tha uske oppiste daru, smoking, hukka sab chal raha tha. Hukke ke bare mein mene suna tha lekin kabhi try nahi kiya tha na, aaj pehli baar dekh rahi thi. Ladke ho ya ladki wahan kisi bhi tarah ka bhed-bhav nahi tha.

" ye dekh... kaise sabke samne kissing kar rahe hain " aaruhi ne kaan ke pas dhire se kaha to mene bhi dekha ek kone mein lage hue the. Ladka uske honton ko khane mein utavla tha.. dusri taraf ladki ka hath ladke ke jeans ke uppar uske lund par ghum raha tha.

" kya nazara hai behenchod... " mere to tan badan mein jhur-jhuri ho gayi. Aaruhi ne piche se meri pith par mukka dhar diya. " pagal hai kya sali.. "

" haramzadi hai tu.. " aaruhi ne fir mere kan mein kaha.

" guys tum log khade kyun hai.. baitho... drink lo.. smoke? " harpreet ne pucha to humne mana kar diya " drink ? "

" abhi nahi.. thodi der mein " mene jawab diya to vo khud hukka lene lagi.

" tu drink karti hai? " aaruhi ne mujhse pucha.

" nahi "

" to tune mana kyun nahi kiya ?"

" apna standard badha.. direct mana kar dungi to puchegi bhi nahi kuch.. style se mana karna padta hai.. tu bas apni chonch band kario thobde wali "

" chonch wahi hoti hai "

" hum ladkiyun ke niche bhi hoti hai.. LOL " mene aaruhi ko jawab diya to vo bhi bina hanse nahi reh payi. Mahol kafi nashila tha hum wahin baith gaye thodi der mein kim aa gayi aur aaruhi uske sath baat cheet mein busy ho gayi aur main apne sath baithi ladki ke sath. Aye to freshers party ke liye the lekin party se to in logon ko koi matlab hi nahi tha. Inki party thi to ye sab.. bich mein jab harpreet ne mujhe hukka offer kiya to mujhse raha nahi gaya, aaruhi mujhe aise dekh rahi thi jaise meri maa ho par mene use full ignore kiya aur hukka try kiya, ek kassh khincha.. maa chud gayi.. behenchod.. bitiyachod.. khans khans kar mene khub gali di aur wahan baithi janta hans di. Harpreet ne turant whiski ka ek ghunt muh mein daal diya usne aur sone par suhaga kaam kiya lekin mene is baar koi harkat nahi ki varna badi hi gandi bezati hoti aur mein is bezati ko seh nahi pati. Chatiyan chamkate hue izat chamak jati .. Mene whisky to jaise taise sambhali ... kisi tarah.. varna pura galla andar se chud gaya tha.. itni jalan mene sirf tabhi suni thi jab kori chut mein lund jata hai tab hoti hai.. par galle mein bhi hoti hai vo bhi daru se ye pehli baar experience kar rahi thi...

Mene ek baar aaruhi ki taarf dekha vo meri halat dekh hans rahi thi, use bada maza aaya tha.. par main bhi haar manne walle mein se nahi thi, thoda time laga lekin harpreet ke thode instruction aur meri man ki icha ke chalte mene hukka pina sikh hi liya.. ab koi hanse behennnchoddd... mene kashh kincha aur uska dhuain aaruhi ki taraf chhoda. Maza hi aa gaya.. LOL lagatar 4-5 baar kash lagate hue mera ghuma sar aur aisa laga behenchod puri dunia gol-gol ghum rahi ho.... flavour hukka bhi chadta hai.. haye.. maza hi aa gaya.. Main wapis aaruhi ke pass ja baithi..

" kar liya nasha... "

" ye nasha nahi hai pagli.. gazab chiz hai.. chal tujhe bhi sikhati hun.. "

" nahi.. mujhe nahi karni.. i am good like this.. " aaruhi ne saaf mana kiya aur mene bhi uspar se dhayan hata dia. " yaar harpreet tujhe vishal ko bhi bulana chahie tha.. vo hota to abhi mera bhi kuch ho jata "

" hehehe.. sali kamini...aisa tha to pehle batati, main teri jawani ka bhi intezam kar deti "

" to kuch kar na "

" abhi to nahi kar sakti.. par mere pas ek idea hai.. "

" kya? " mene fauran pucha. Vaise to main vishal ko khud ke ishare par nachana chahti thi par na jane kyun sali ye sharir ki aag mujhse iska ulta hi karwa rahi thi.

" kya baat kar rahi thi harpreet se kone mein jakar " harpreet ke sath baat karte hi mein wapis aaruhi ke pas ayi to usne sawal pucha.

" teri nazar mujhpar hi hai... kahin meri izat par to koi archan nahi ane wali na.. teri mujhe harkatein waise bhi theek nahi lagti " mene apna sina chupate hue kaha.

" ho gaya tera? overacting ? "

" tu baat hi aisi karti hai... kabhi kabhi tujse maa wali feeling ati hai "

" puchun bhi nahi? "

" puch na janeman.. puch na... aur puch "

" haramazadi.. jahan yahan se.. " mujhe aaruhi ko chedne mein bada maza ata tha. Vaise bhi jo insan jada sochta hai use chedne ka maza alag hota hai kyun ki vo har jagah kuch na kuch dhundta hai aur uspar kahani bunata hai. Aaruhi ki yahi adat ko sudharna tha aur vo jald hi sudharne wala tha. Mene aaruhi ki taraf dekhte hue shaitaini muskan pass ki aur vo mujhe ghurti rahi jaise meri shaitani ko pakadne ki kosish kar rahi ho.

Andhera ho chuka tha, party ki samapti ho chuki thi par nach gana chal raha tha, miss fresher banne wali fresher ka patta pehen kar mini skirt aur top mein thumke laga rahi thi iske alawa uske aaju baju laar tapkate hue launde ghus-ghus kar nach rahe the. Iske alawa wahan baithe vo launde jo nach nahi sakte vo taad-taad kar ladkiyun ko ankhon se chod rahe the. Maze to us launde ke the jiske sath vo miss fresher nach rahi thi, ek dum chipak chipak kar..

" inko dekh kar lagta hai ki freshers party mein na hi kuch karun to acha " aaruhi ne ashleel nach main apni tipdiyan di.

" sab chalta hai "

" kuch nahi chalta..in sab ne pii rakhi hai.. aur isi baat ka fayda uthta hai... "

" ye sab mojh hoti hai.. tu girls school mein padi hai na tujhe tabhi kuch samajh nahi ata.. ladkiyun ko thodi bahut ched chad mein maza ata hai... jab tak hume pasand ho hum objection nahi karte aur tujhe kaun kehta hai nachne ko.. mat nachio.. "

" hmm "

Aaruhi jaisi pehli ladki dekhi thi mene jise har chiz se koi na koi dikat thi lekin mujhe use koi dikat nahi thi. Jaise taise hum sabne party ko akhri mein enjoy kiya, nachna gana hamara bhi hua aur tajub ki baat humne aaruhi ko bhi nacha diya aur maa kasam.. kya nachti hai ladki... kya thumke lagaye usne.. bhale hi use ladkon se uncomfortable hota hai lekin jaise hi use khula maidan mila usne to bajji hi maar dali. Main, harpreet, kim aur harpreet ke sabhi dost uska dance dekh bahuchakka the.. iske aalwa jo launde jaa rahe the vo specially uska nach dekhne ke liye ruk gaye... Pata nahi tha ki usme ye bhi talent tha.

" tune to aaj pure mbbs ki maa mein surakh kar diya.. tera log video bana kar le gaye video.. kya nachi hai tu.. " khana khate hue mene aaruhi se kaha to khana uske galle mein atak gaya.

" tune bataya kyun nahi ki koi video bana raha tha "

" isme kya batana.. unko bhi malum hona chahie na.. ki kisse pala pada hai.. Engineering students se... maa chod dete hai hum sabki.. "

" tu pagal hai.. "

" vo chhod.. par kya nachi hai tu.. agar ladka hoti to wahin pakad kar tere ko khopche mein le jakar tera rape kar diya hota "

" rape ki kya jarurat ? main razi hoti tab bhi "

" ohoo... ladki alag hi mode par chali gayi... kim ne tujhe kuch de diya kya "

" chal .... thodi bahut mauj kar lete hain... girls school walle bhi "

" uhmm..... ab tu mere type ki lag rahi hai "

" khana kha le chup chap aur ye soch.. ab hum kahan jayenge "

" fikar na kar uski baat ho chuki hai... " party khatam thi... hum khana kha kar ek jagah baithe the aur aaruhi ko to katai nind aa rahi thi, ani bhi thi, kareeb do ghante se baithe the. Harpreet jugad mein lagi thi takreeban 1 baje ke aas pass usne humse chalne ko kaha. Hum hostel college se bahar aye ki wahan par khadi gaddi mein harpreet ne baithne ko kaha. Na mene koi prashan kiya aur na hi aaruhi ne jo pehle se hi nind mein dubi thi. Uske dimag mein ye nahi tha ki mene harpreet ke sath kya jugad set kiya hai. Gaadi mein baithne ke baad aaruhi ankhein band karke baith gayi.

" Main jo bhi kar rahi thi uske dil se uske dar ko hatane ke liye kar rahi thi, use batana chahti thi ki vo galat hai bas... par mujhe kya pata tha ki aisa kuch ho jayega.. " shruti bolte hue chup hui. Apni galti jo use mehsus ho rahi thi use batane mein dikkat ho rahi thi.

" aisa kya kiya tha tumne us raat uske sath? " nandini ne sawal kiya.

" miss.. us raat hum... main... " shruti thodi nervous ho rahi hti " main use wahin le gayi jahan se uski dar ki shuruwat hui thi.. usi mansion khandar mein jahan us raat lavanya ne uske sath mazak kiya tha aur uska asar uske dimag par pada tha. Main sirf uske us dar ko use alag karna chahti thi lekin mujhe nahi pata tha ki main uska dar nahi balki use hi badal rahi hun " shruti ne ek baar fir apni baat batani shuru ki.

" tu pagal hai.. shruti... are you mad... fuck you... shruti.. fuck you... " aaurhi ke chillane ki awaz gunj rahi thi. Hum dono is waqt gaddi ke pass khade the, aaruhi jab so kar uthi to usne apne aap ko andhere mein akele gaddi ke andar paya. Jab vo uthi to ghabra gayi aur turant gaddi se bahar nikli, bahar nikalte hi jab usne mansion ko dekha to uska dar uske zehan mein daud pada. Vo chillati use pehle main wahan aa gayi.

" shant ho ja.. kyun chilla rahi hai.. dhang se susu bhi nahi karne de rahi " mene usko dekhte hi kaha.

" fuck you... tu puch mat... ki main kyun chilla rahi hun.... tu mujhe ye kahan le ayi hai.... tujhe.. malum hai.. na... ye jagah.. ye jagah... " aaruhi ki nazar mujhse hat kar khandar par jaa rahi thi.

" han ye jagah.. "

" to tujhe pata hai na main is jagah se kitna ghabrati hun, tu mujhe yahan kyun layi hai "

" isi ghabrahat ki wajah se "

" tu kya chutiya ho gayi hai.. bol? chutiya ho gayi hai? " use is tarah ke gusse mein pehli baar dekh kar main achambit thi.

" tu gali bhi deti hai ....hehehehe LOL " meri hansi nikal gayi uske galli dene par.

" mazak ka time hai ye.. mazak ka time hai... mujhe nahi pata tu mujhe abhi ke abhi.. abhi... ke abhi yahan se le jayegi... chal... tu yahan se mujhe wapis chhod kar aa..hostel.. " aaruhi bachon ki tarah zid karti hui gaddi ke pas ayi.

" par mujhe thodi gaddi chalani ati hai "

" tujhe sirf sharir ki bhook mitane ati hai... behen ki lodi kahin ki... " vo fir chillai, uski awaz pure ilake mein gunj rahi thi.

" galiyan to sahi deti hai.. itne din se kahan chupa rakhi thi "

" dekh shruti .. main bata rahi hun.. " aaruhi ko tabhi bich mein rukna pada kyun ki hum dono ke alawa tisri awaz ayi.

" tum dono bahar ladoge ... ya andar aaoge.. program chalu hone wala hai.. andar aao... bahar is not safe... jungli janwar aa jate hain salle " awaz ki disha mein jab aaruhi ne dekha to vo us ladke ko pehchanti use pehle vo andar ghus gaya.

" ye kaun tha? " aaruhi ne fauran pucha.

" jiski gaddi hai vo.. ab agar tujhe wapis jana hai to use baat karni padegi aur vo bahar ayega nahi.. isliye tujhe andar chalna padega... " mene uske kareeb jakar uska hath pakda to usne hath jhatak diya.

" tu dur reh mujhse.. bas.. " vo behad gusse mein thi. Mujhe aisa laga vo bekar ka gussa kar rahi hai lekin asal mein vo uska gussa nahi balki dar tha jo frustation ke roop mein bahar aa raha tha. Vo samajh nahi paa rahi thi kya kare aur main bas ye chahti thi ki ye ladki andar chale. Uski nazar mansion par ek jagah par jami hui thi, khdki thi shayad udhar.. main bhi wahan dekhne lagi lekin mujhe koi nahi dikha.

" koi hai wahan? " mene use chedne ke lihaz se pucha par vo gusse mein thi.. bahut jada usne mera hath fir khinch diya. " ayi maa behen chodd di hath ki mere.. "

" main tujhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi iske liye.. "

" karegi.. jab tujhe sach pata chalega uske baad to tu... mere per bhi chuhegi.. "

" mujhe ab tujhse koi baat nahi karni.. " aaruhi ne mujhse kaha aur andar ki taraf badhi " main us ladke se request karke yahan se jaa rahi hun.. aur tera mera jo bhi tha sab khatm.. " aaurhi gusse mein bol kar wahan se nikli aur main apna kandha pakadte hue mansion ki taraf badhi " itni kutiya ladki mene zindagi mein nahi dekhi.. hath ukhad kar hi manegi ye... behenchod kahi ki... " mene uski dhamki ko ignore kiya aur mansion mein ke andar aa gayi.
Zabardast awesome interesting update
 

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Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha :lol: :roflol:
matlab disco likha hai isliye badhiya hai party ke liye nahi.. :wtfrol:
Yaar ye aaruhi aur supriya sach bahot bholi hai bilkul DARK WOLFKING ki tarah :lol:
... :D
Hhaaa ye baat shi khi es par sabse masoom or apne kam se kam rakhne vale reader hai hamare DARK WOLFKING bhai usi ke tarah uske review unke review me thehrav hota hai bate sidhi simpal leon bhai ka bas ek kam hota hai review diya or vha se furr hona piche chahe kuch bhi

Apna kam banta bhad me jaye jaanta :rock1:

Or sabse uslje hue hue review hote hai Naina ji dimag ki hi gum jata hai jo itne khatarnak suspenco ka khulasa karti hai hai jo story me moujud hi na ho bechara writer hi sochne lag jata hai ki sala ye suspence to mere suspence se bhi jyada bhari hai par naina ji ka nishana kabhi shi jagah nhi lagta :yippi::hspin hhaaa
 

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majedar update ..to aruhi soch rahi thi ki miss ko bata dena chahiye us ladke hi harkat ke baare me 🤣..
freshers party me shruti ne bahut enjoy bhi kiya ,pehle hukka phir whisky 😁..
aruhi ne apne dance se sabko hairan kar diya waha pe 🤩..

aur ye shruti ka jugaad galat sabit ho gaya aisa lagta hai ,,wo aruhi ka darr dur karne ke liye usi khandar me leke gayi usko .

aur ye frustration mast nikala aruhi ne badi badi galiya dekar 🤣..
 
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