Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

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" supriya, supriya " gallon par hath se marte hue megha supriya ko hosh mein lane ki kosish kar rahi thi. " supriya, supriya " megha ne kosish jari rakhi jiski wajah se supriya hosh mein ane lagi. Ankh khulte hi usne jab megha ka chehra mehsus kiya to uth kar baith gayi. " megha.. vo ghar.. wahan koi tha... wahan koi tha.. " supriya hosh mein atte hi chillayi.

" relax supriya.. relax.. " megha use shant karne lagi.

" nahi supriya koi tha udhar jo mujhe hi dekh raha tha. Main wahan vapis pahunch gayi thi, mujhe us jagah nahi jana please mujhe hostel le chal "

" supriya relax, tu hostel mein hi hai "

" hostel mein? "

" han dekh tu apne kamre mein hi hai " megha ki baat sun supriya ne apne aap ko paya ki vo apne hostel ke kamre mein bistar par laiti hui hai.

" main yahan kaise? kab ayi? "

" main aur aakash laye tujhe. Pareshan ho gayi thi sham se khoj rahe the tujhe. Vo to aakash ne kaha ki ek baar hostel ke piche dekh le, itni baarish ho rahi thi, Ghabra gayi thi mein to "

" m...mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi aa raha " supriya dimag par zor dalte hue boli.

" kaise ayega yaad? mujhe dekhte hi tu chillate hue behosh ho gayi thi. Main aur aakash tujhe hostel tak laye vo to acha hai baarish ki vajah se warden apne kamre mein thi varna aakash ko dekh leti to uska murder kar deti aur mujhe nanga karke hostel mein tang deti hehe " megha hanste hue boli aur bistar se khadi ho gayi. Baarish ki wajah se vo pura bhig chuki thi isliye usne almira khol kar kapde nikal liye. " baithi kya hai kapde badal le thand lag jayegi to bimar padh jayegi aur teri doctor maa mujhe blame karegi "

" baithi kya soch rahi hai chal uth kapde badal " megha ne apna top utar jeans utarte hue boli. Usne apne kapde ek kone mein fenke aur apni penty mein ungli dal kar use adjust karne lagi jo tangon ke bich fans gayi thi. " supriya " megha ne awaz di to supriya hosh mein ayi. " kya soch rahi hai ? "

" wahan koi tha megha, us ghar mein "

" ghar? supriya vo khandar hai aur wahan koi nahi tha tu ab khadi ho "

" par light to wahin jal rahi thi "

" koi light nahi thi supriya udhar, tu meri bra ka huk khol, behnchod abhi tak to ladkon ne hath nahi lagaya aur ye bra ke hook atakne lage hain. Company ki lene par bhi ye haal hai, salle sab chutiya banane mein ek number hai " megha uski taraf pith kiye khadi thi aur supriya ki yadon mein abhi bhi vo khandar aur roshni thi. " tere se ache ladke hote hain unhe bolti to abhi tak khol kar na jane kya kar diya hota, supriya " megha ne gardan piche karte hue chillai. Supriya ka dhayan tuta aur usne megha ki bra ka hook khol diya.

" thank you megha " supriya piche se hi megha ke gale lag gayi. " agar aaj tu nahi ayi hoti to main shayad zinda na hoti " supriya ke samne hue hadse ki kuch jhalkiyan yaad ayi jiski wajah se uski ankhein nam ho gayi thi.

" supriya agar main launda hoti ya fir mujhe chikni chuton mein dilchaspi hoti to abhi tere ko pakad kar abhi tere mamme daba deti. Itne naram aur kadak nipple jo chub rahe hain tere meri peet mein. Hat ja sali kutiya ab kya jhadva kar manegi " megha ke kehte hi supriya use hath gayi aur apni gili ankhein pochne lagi " chal ab senty mat ho varna aaj ki is tufani raat mein humare bistar garam ho jayenge " megha ne apni bra ko ek jhatke mein utar supriya ki taraf fenk diya.

" chhi besharam " supriya ne bra ko apne uppar se hata kar wahin fenka aur na chahte hue bhi megha ki chatiyun ko dekha. Halki roshni mein uski khubsurat chatiyan gili hone ki wjah se jada chamak rahi thi.

" ladke to aise hi badnam hai aaj kal to ladkiyan bhi ankhon hi ankhon mein chod deti hai " megha ne maskari karte hue kaha aur apni penty mein ungli dali " ab to adhe chud hi chuke hain pura bhi chud lete hain, izat ka kya hai vo to tangon ke bich hi hoti hai " megha use niche khiskati use pehle supriya use dhakka dekar wahan se chal di.

" haramzadi hai tu ek number ki " supriya ne bina uski taraf palte apne kapde almirah se nikale aur towel nikal kar bathroom mein ghus gayi. Bathroom pahunch kar usne light on ki, bathroom mein lagi choti si tubelight ne 'jarr-jarr' karte hue kuch second liye aur vo jal uthi. Supriya aine ke samne hi khadi thi aur light jalte hi jab usne apni dasha dekhi to ek pal khud ko dekh dar gayi. Uske khubsurat se chehre par kichad ke dhabbe lage the, balon ka bhi kuch yahi haal tha aur kapde kichad mein dube hue the. Supriya ne top utarte hue hath uppar khincha to dard bhari 'aah' uske muh se nikal gayi. Usne apna top utarte hi apne kandhe ko dekha jahan dard utha tha to wahan dabate hue dard bhari 'aah' fir nikal gayi. Khidki se kudne par kandhe ke bal hi giri thi isliye dard wahan jada tha. Wahan dekhte hue supriya ne jeans utari aur aur fir bra penty bhi utar kar bathroom ke kone mein dal di. Badan par kichar kai hisson par lagi thi aur sar bhi gandha tha, nahane ke alawa koi aur dusra rasta nahi tha. Usne shower on kiya aur pani ke niche khadi ho gayi. Sharir ki mitti ke sath uske baal bhi jhad kar nali mein jane lage jisme pani bahut dhire-dhire jaa raha tha aur wahin ikhata ho raha tha. Supriya nahate hue is baat ko bhool chuki thi. Ankhein band karke uski parchaiyun mein vo khandar fir samne aa gaya jiske samne vo khadi thi. Uske mathe par bal padne laga, vo dhayan se us khandar ko dekh rahi thi, baarish zoron se gir rahi thi, roshni usi taraf se aa rahi thi Koi tha us khidki par ek sayan, ek chitr jo usi ko dekh raha tha. Supriya ki sansein tez thi pani uske panjo ko dubo chuka tha, vo sayan khidki par khada tha usi ko dekh raha tha, baarish ki awaz tez thi par uske shor mein kuch aur bhi tha. " awaz.. " supriya ke mathe ka bal aur gehra hua, use baarish mein kuch aur bhi sunai de raha tha vo awaz kuch keh rahi thi.

" supriya " achanak se supriya ki ankh khuli aur vo zor-zor se sans lene lagi " pani bahar aa raha hai nahana band kar, tujhe subah hi mana kiya tha mene " megha ke chillane par supriya ne fauran apne peron par mehsus kiya jahan takhne tak pani bhar gaya tha. Usne fauran shower band kiya aur pani se bahar nikal ayi. Supriya abhi bhi dari hui thi par hadse mein aisa hota hai lazmi hai, ye soch usne apna badan pochna shuru kiya aur baal pochte hue apne aap ko aine mein dekhne lagi. Kuch pal pehle jis chehre par kichad lagi thi ab uspar vapis khubsurti aa gayi thi. Uski bhuri ankhein, choti si patli naak aur gulabi honth, khubsurti uske chehre se lekar sharir ke niche tak thi. Vo apni ankhon ko dekhte hue chatiyun ko dekhne lagi, jo ek dum sidhi khadi thi, balon se girti pani ki bundon ne uske nipple kadak bana rakhe the jinhe dekhte hue use megha ki chatiyan yaad aa gayi aur fir ravina ki. Jise yaad karte hi uske chehre par shikan aa gayi. Usne towel wahin rakha aur night suit utha kar jaise hi uski nazar aine par gayi to vo cheekh padi. Karan do the, pehla use aine mein piche ek parchai dikhi aur dusri usi waqt light band ho gayi.

" iight gayi supriya, dar mat, main mombati dhundti hun " megha ne mobile ki torch jalai par itne mein supriya bathroom ka darwaja khol bahar nikal ayi aur bahar atte hi zor-zor se chillane lagi.

" kya hua supriya? kya hua tu chilla kyun rahi hai "

" andar koi hai, megha andar koi hai " supriya chadi hui sanson se boli.

" andar ? tere alawa kaun hoga? tune koi gufa banwa rakhi hai kya "

" megha mazak nahi kar, andar koi hai, mene parchai dekhi abhi " supriya ke bolte hi megha bhi ghabra gayi. Usne mobile torch bathroom ki taraf ki " kaun hai " megha chillai, supriya uske kareeb hi khadi thi. Awaz na ane par megha dhire-dhire bathroom ki taraf badhi. Usne pehle washbasin ki taraf dekha aur fir phone ghuma kar dusri taraf, jahan farsh par pani jama tha aur uski parchai piche deewar par padh rahi thi. Megha samajh gayi supriya ne kya dekha " koi nahi hai " vo supriya ke pas ayi " tune jo pani bhar liya hai uski parchai dekh li hogi. Khamkha chila kar hostel ikhata kar rahi hai aur vaise meri janeman tujhe pehli baar nanga dekh kar man dol raha hai mera " megha ne jab supriya ke nipple par ungli lagai tab supriya ko dhayan aya ki vo nangi hi bahar aa gayi thi. Vo kuch nahi boli aur megha ke hah se mobile khinch kar bathroom mein ghus gayi. " abe kamini mombati kaise dhunungi main? " megha bolti reh gayi par supriya ne uski baat ansuni kar di.

Bahar ka mausam bahut jada kharab tha, tez hawaon ke sath baarish ho rahi thi. Bizli dur dur tak nahi thi. Megha ek kone mein mombati laga kar hatti aur usne machis ki tilli palang ke niche fenk di. Usi samay bathroom ka darwaja khula aur supriya is bar kapde pehen kar bahar nikli. " phone dengi ab aap " megha ne apna phone manga. Supriya ko ab uske raat ke is andaz ko dekh adat ho gayi thi, niche pajama aur uppar bra, bas kai raat vo aise hi soya karti thi.

Supriya bina kuch bole palang par aa baithi aur megha apna phone check karne lagi. Aakash ka message aya hua tha " everything ok? " megha ne reply kiya.

" han all ok, supriya thodi dari hui hai "

" ohh, you take care of her "

" yeah i will "

" and "

" and? " megha intezar karne lagi. Aakash type kar raha tha, megha ne ek bar supriya ki taraf dekha jo abhi bhi soch mein dubi thi.

" that was fun, right? " aakash ka message dekh megha muskura di.

" yeah " megha ne sath mein chumne wala smily bhi add kiya fir delete karke message send kar diya " it was good "

" wanna spend some time more ? you want to? "

" sure why not "

" great " aakash abhi bhi type kar raha tha isliye megha ruk gayi " vaise tumhari friend wahan kya kar rahi thi? " aakash ka message dekh megha ko yaad aya ki ye baat supriya se use puchni chahie the. Megha ne phone lock kiya aur apne bistar par baithte hi boli " supriya "

" hmm "

" tu thi kahan? " megha ke sawal par supriya ne uski taraf dekha aur use dekhti rahi. Mombati ka ujala jada hota to chehre par chai pareshani dikh jati par andhere ne chupa rakha tha.

" main ... bas wahin thi "

" wahin kahan? " megha ek pal chup hui " us khandar ke pas? par wahan kya kar rahi thi " megha sawal par sawal kar rahi thi aur supriya se jawab nahi diya jaa raha tha. Vo use sach batati to dheron aur sawal ikhate ho jate uske man mein jiska jawab dena supriya ke liye mushkil ho jata.

" mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai megha. Mujhe nahi pata main wahan kab gayi aur kaise pahunchi shayad rasta bhatak gayi thi "

" agar rasta bhatak gayi thi to phone kar deti " megha ne jaise hi phone ka yaad dilaya to supriya ko yaad aya ki uska phone kahan hai.

" mera phone ? "

" han tera phone, phone kyun nahi kiya? " megha ne fir sawal kiya.

" tu itni puch tach kya kar rahi hai? Maa hai meri? apne ashiq se kar, jise sham ko karne gayi thi " supriya ne chidte hue jawab diya.

" chidti kyun hai? mat bata " megha ne bhi kuch aur puchna sahi nahi samjha " ladke jada ache hote hain kam se kam dusron ki laundiya bane par chidte nahi hai, balki uske naam ki muth mar kar so jate hain aur inhe dekho madad karne ke baad kya milta hai? Sahi kaha hai kisi ne, hum ladkiyan chutiya hi hoti hai " megha ne apna phone khola aur aakash ke message ka reply diya.

" you want to know? then ask her " megha ne aaksh ko mesaage kiya aur razai mein ghus gayi. Supriya janti thi ki usne megha se galat baat ki lekin vo sach nahi keh sakti thi. Vo bhi lait gayi par uski ankhon se nind gayab thi. Use chinta ab phone ki thi jo vo us kamre mein hi chhod ayi thi aur ab use is baat ka dar sata raha tha ki agar vo phone kisi aur ke hath laga to uska kya hoga?

Subah jab supriya uthi to megha nahi thi, use laga shayad bathroom mein hai lekin vo wahan bhi maujud nahi thi. Time dekhne par samajh aya ki vo late tak soti rahi aur aaj megha ne use nahi jagaya. Supriya samajh gayi ki megha use naraz hai, usne apne bistar ki taraf dekha jahan par roz ki tarah aaj bhi baal pade the. Usne palang jhada aur apne kapde lekar hostel ke common bathroom mein chali gayi. Wahan se naha kar vo kamre mein ayi aur tayar hokar kamre se bahar nikalne hi wali thi ki kamre ke samne usne jaggu ko khada paya jise dekh use tanu aur komal ke bich hui baat yaad aa gayi.

" tum yahan? megha nahi hai " supriya ko laga ki vo megha se milne ayi hai.

" megha se nahi balki main tumhe hi bulane ayi thi " jaggu ne apna chasma theek karte hue kaha.

" mujhe par kahan? "

" vo tumhe warden ne bulaya hai "

" warden ne kyun? " supriya chaunkte hue boli.

" kyun ka mujhe kaise pata, warden hi batayegi, usne mujhse kaha ki tum college jate hue use milte hue jana " jaggu itna keh kar wahan se jane lagi aur jate hue apne pajame ke uppar se apne nitamb khujate hue kamre mein ghus gayi. Supriya ko warden se pani ki complain karni thi jiske liye vo use milne wali thi lekin samne se bulane ka matlab use samajh nahi aa raha tha. Kya warden ko us kamre se mera phone mil gaya? Kahin us kamre ke liye to nahi bula rahi? Supriya man hi man chinta karne lagi aur fir kamre ko band karke vo warden se bina mile hostel se nikal gayi.

 

[harshit1890]

kya harshit saheb abhi tak koi story character mara kyun nahi
Bichari lesbo thatki ravina bhi flashback mein tapak gayi..

Marna jaruri nhi hai.... khahani mein ladkiyun ki life janna jaruri hai..

Achha is kirdaar tharki tanu ka kuch kijiye.. kyun na masoom supriya is tanu ko talwar se kaat ke bich se do hisso mein chid de

Popcorn khao jab kuch ayega na to malum bhi nahi chalega...

 

[Naina]

Marna jaruri nhi hai.... khahani mein ladkiyun ki life janna jaruri hai..

Popcorn khao jab kuch ayega na to malum bhi nahi chalega...

Ji Bahut Achhaa

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ..supriya ko megha aur aakash hostel me leke aaye ..
par kya megha sach keh rahi thi ki wo supriya ko hi dhundte huye waha gayi thi aakash ke saath yaa wo dono waha pe kuch doori par kuch karne ki soch rahe ho aur supriya ko dekha ho ..

megha ki baate ekdam majedar hoti hai ..jaise madarchod kehna ..

aur ye warden ne kyu bula liya aur phone kaha gira ye bhi pata nahi ...

jaggu ka scene bhi mast tha .pajame ke upar se nitamb khujana ..

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

supriya agar main launda hoti ya fir mujhe chikni chuton mein dilchaspi hoti to abhi tere ko pakad kar abhi tere mamme daba deti. Itne naram aur kadak nipple jo chub rahe hain tere meri peet mein. Hat ja sali kutiya ab kya jhadva kar manegi " megha ke kehte hi supriya use hath gayi aur apni gili ankhein pochne lagi " chal ab senty mat ho varna aaj ki is tufani raat mein humare bistar garam ho jayenge " megha ne apni bra ko ek jhatke mein utar supriya ki taraf fenk diya.

megha ki baate ekdam sexy lagti hai .. sexy baate ekdam perfect likhte hai aap ..

 

[Aakash.]

Hello Everyone
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[Naina]

Update ~~ 7​

" supriya, supriya " gallon par hath se marte hue megha supriya ko hosh mein lane ki kosish kar rahi thi. " supriya, supriya " megha ne kosish jari rakhi jiski wajah se supriya hosh mein ane lagi. Ankh khulte hi usne jab megha ka chehra mehsus kiya to uth kar baith gayi. " megha.. vo ghar.. wahan koi tha... wahan koi tha.. " supriya hosh mein atte hi chillayi.

" relax supriya.. relax.. " megha use shant karne lagi.

" nahi supriya koi tha udhar jo mujhe hi dekh raha tha. Main wahan vapis pahunch gayi thi, mujhe us jagah nahi jana please mujhe hostel le chal "

" supriya relax, tu hostel mein hi hai "

" hostel mein? "

" han dekh tu apne kamre mein hi hai " megha ki baat sun supriya ne apne aap ko paya ki vo apne hostel ke kamre mein bistar par laiti hui hai.

" main yahan kaise? kab ayi? "

" main aur aakash laye tujhe. Pareshan ho gayi thi sham se khoj rahe the tujhe. Vo to aakash ne kaha ki ek baar hostel ke piche dekh le, itni baarish ho rahi thi, Ghabra gayi thi mein to "

" m...mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi aa raha " supriya dimag par zor dalte hue boli.

" kaise ayega yaad? mujhe dekhte hi tu chillate hue behosh ho gayi thi. Main aur aakash tujhe hostel tak laye vo to acha hai baarish ki vajah se warden apne kamre mein thi varna aakash ko dekh leti to uska murder kar deti aur mujhe nanga karke hostel mein tang deti hehe " megha hanste hue boli aur bistar se khadi ho gayi. Baarish ki wajah se vo pura bhig chuki thi isliye usne almira khol kar kapde nikal liye. " baithi kya hai kapde badal le thand lag jayegi to bimar padh jayegi aur teri doctor maa mujhe blame karegi "

" baithi kya soch rahi hai chal uth kapde badal " megha ne apna top utar jeans utarte hue boli. Usne apne kapde ek kone mein fenke aur apni penty mein ungli dal kar use adjust karne lagi jo tangon ke bich fans gayi thi. " supriya " megha ne awaz di to supriya hosh mein ayi. " kya soch rahi hai ? "

" wahan koi tha megha, us ghar mein "

" ghar? supriya vo khandar hai aur wahan koi nahi tha tu ab khadi ho "

" par light to wahin jal rahi thi "

" koi light nahi thi supriya udhar, tu meri bra ka huk khol, behnchod abhi tak to ladkon ne hath nahi lagaya aur ye bra ke hook atakne lage hain. Company ki lene par bhi ye haal hai, salle sab chutiya banane mein ek number hai " megha uski taraf pith kiye khadi thi aur supriya ki yadon mein abhi bhi vo khandar aur roshni thi. " tere se ache ladke hote hain unhe bolti to abhi tak khol kar na jane kya kar diya hota, supriya " megha ne gardan piche karte hue chillai. Supriya ka dhayan tuta aur usne megha ki bra ka hook khol diya.

" thank you megha " supriya piche se hi megha ke gale lag gayi. " agar aaj tu nahi ayi hoti to main shayad zinda na hoti " supriya ke samne hue hadse ki kuch jhalkiyan yaad ayi jiski wajah se uski ankhein nam ho gayi thi.

" supriya agar main launda hoti ya fir mujhe chikni chuton mein dilchaspi hoti to abhi tere ko pakad kar abhi tere mamme daba deti. Itne naram aur kadak nipple jo chub rahe hain tere meri peet mein. Hat ja sali kutiya ab kya jhadva kar manegi " megha ke kehte hi supriya use hath gayi aur apni gili ankhein pochne lagi " chal ab senty mat ho varna aaj ki is tufani raat mein humare bistar garam ho jayenge " megha ne apni bra ko ek jhatke mein utar supriya ki taraf fenk diya.

" chhi besharam " supriya ne bra ko apne uppar se hata kar wahin fenka aur na chahte hue bhi megha ki chatiyun ko dekha. Halki roshni mein uski khubsurat chatiyan gili hone ki wjah se jada chamak rahi thi.

" ladke to aise hi badnam hai aaj kal to ladkiyan bhi ankhon hi ankhon mein chod deti hai " megha ne maskari karte hue kaha aur apni penty mein ungli dali " ab to adhe chud hi chuke hain pura bhi chud lete hain, izat ka kya hai vo to tangon ke bich hi hoti hai " megha use niche khiskati use pehle supriya use dhakka dekar wahan se chal di.

oh to ye megha thi jise dekh supriya dar gayi thi had se zyada.. ab bhootniyo jaisi shakal leke aise ghumegi to sabhi ka darna swavabik hai...

" haramzadi hai tu ek number ki " supriya ne bina uski taraf palte apne kapde almirah se nikale aur towel nikal kar bathroom mein ghus gayi. Bathroom pahunch kar usne light on ki, bathroom mein lagi choti si tubelight ne 'jarr-jarr' karte hue kuch second liye aur vo jal uthi. Supriya aine ke samne hi khadi thi aur light jalte hi jab usne apni dasha dekhi to ek pal khud ko dekh dar gayi. Uske khubsurat se chehre par kichad ke dhabbe lage the, balon ka bhi kuch yahi haal tha aur kapde kichad mein dube hue the. Supriya ne top utarte hue hath uppar khincha to dard bhari 'aah' uske muh se nikal gayi. Usne apna top utarte hi apne kandhe ko dekha jahan dard utha tha to wahan dabate hue dard bhari 'aah' fir nikal gayi. Khidki se kudne par kandhe ke bal hi giri thi isliye dard wahan jada tha. Wahan dekhte hue supriya ne jeans utari aur aur fir bra penty bhi utar kar bathroom ke kone mein dal di. Badan par kichar kai hisson par lagi thi aur sar bhi gandha tha, nahane ke alawa koi aur dusra rasta nahi tha. Usne shower on kiya aur pani ke niche khadi ho gayi. Sharir ki mitti ke sath uske baal bhi jhad kar nali mein jane lage jisme pani bahut dhire-dhire jaa raha tha aur wahin ikhata ho raha tha. Supriya nahate hue is baat ko bhool chuki thi. Ankhein band karke uski parchaiyun mein vo khandar fir samne aa gaya jiske samne vo khadi thi. Uske mathe par bal padne laga, vo dhayan se us khandar ko dekh rahi thi, baarish zoron se gir rahi thi, roshni usi taraf se aa rahi thi Koi tha us khidki par ek sayan, ek chitr jo usi ko dekh raha tha. Supriya ki sansein tez thi pani uske panjo ko dubo chuka tha, vo sayan khidki par khada tha usi ko dekh raha tha, baarish ki awaz tez thi par uske shor mein kuch aur bhi tha. " awaz.. " supriya ke mathe ka bal aur gehra hua, use baarish mein kuch aur bhi sunai de raha tha vo awaz kuch keh rahi thi.

" supriya " achanak se supriya ki ankh khuli aur vo zor-zor se sans lene lagi " pani bahar aa raha hai nahana band kar, tujhe subah hi mana kiya tha mene " megha ke chillane par supriya ne fauran apne peron par mehsus kiya jahan takhne tak pani bhar gaya tha. Usne fauran shower band kiya aur pani se bahar nikal ayi. Supriya abhi bhi dari hui thi par hadse mein aisa hota hai lazmi hai, ye soch usne apna badan pochna shuru kiya aur baal pochte hue apne aap ko aine mein dekhne lagi. Kuch pal pehle jis chehre par kichad lagi thi ab uspar vapis khubsurti aa gayi thi. Uski bhuri ankhein, choti si patli naak aur gulabi honth, khubsurti uske chehre se lekar sharir ke niche tak thi. Vo apni ankhon ko dekhte hue chatiyun ko dekhne lagi, jo ek dum sidhi khadi thi, balon se girti pani ki bundon ne uske nipple kadak bana rakhe the jinhe dekhte hue use megha ki chatiyan yaad aa gayi aur fir ravina ki. Jise yaad karte hi uske chehre par shikan aa gayi. Usne towel wahin rakha aur night suit utha kar jaise hi uski nazar aine par gayi to vo cheekh padi. Karan do the, pehla use aine mein piche ek parchai dikhi aur dusri usi waqt light band ho gayi.

" iight gayi supriya, dar mat, main mombati dhundti hun " megha ne mobile ki torch jalai par itne mein supriya bathroom ka darwaja khol bahar nikal ayi aur bahar atte hi zor-zor se chillane lagi.

" kya hua supriya? kya hua tu chilla kyun rahi hai "

" andar koi hai, megha andar koi hai " supriya chadi hui sanson se boli.

" andar ? tere alawa kaun hoga? tune koi gufa banwa rakhi hai kya "

" megha mazak nahi kar, andar koi hai, mene parchai dekhi abhi " supriya ke bolte hi megha bhi ghabra gayi. Usne mobile torch bathroom ki taraf ki " kaun hai " megha chillai, supriya uske kareeb hi khadi thi. Awaz na ane par megha dhire-dhire bathroom ki taraf badhi. Usne pehle washbasin ki taraf dekha aur fir phone ghuma kar dusri taraf, jahan farsh par pani jama tha aur uski parchai piche deewar par padh rahi thi. Megha samajh gayi supriya ne kya dekha " koi nahi hai " vo supriya ke pas ayi " tune jo pani bhar liya hai uski parchai dekh li hogi. Khamkha chila kar hostel ikhata kar rahi hai aur vaise meri janeman tujhe pehli baar nanga dekh kar man dol raha hai mera " megha ne jab supriya ke nipple par ungli lagai tab supriya ko dhayan aya ki vo nangi hi bahar aa gayi thi. Vo kuch nahi boli aur megha ke hah se mobile khinch kar bathroom mein ghus gayi. " abe kamini mombati kaise dhunungi main? " megha bolti reh gayi par supriya ne uski baat ansuni kar di.

Bahar ka mausam bahut jada kharab tha, tez hawaon ke sath baarish ho rahi thi. Bizli dur dur tak nahi thi. Megha ek kone mein mombati laga kar hatti aur usne machis ki tilli palang ke niche fenk di. Usi samay bathroom ka darwaja khula aur supriya is bar kapde pehen kar bahar nikli. " phone dengi ab aap " megha ne apna phone manga. Supriya ko ab uske raat ke is andaz ko dekh adat ho gayi thi, niche pajama aur uppar bra, bas kai raat vo aise hi soya karti thi.

Supriya bina kuch bole palang par aa baithi aur megha apna phone check karne lagi. Aakash ka message aya hua tha " everything ok? " megha ne reply kiya.

" han all ok, supriya thodi dari hui hai "

" ohh, you take care of her "

" yeah i will "

" and "

" and? " megha intezar karne lagi. Aakash type kar raha tha, megha ne ek bar supriya ki taraf dekha jo abhi bhi soch mein dubi thi.

" that was fun, right? " aakash ka message dekh megha muskura di.

" yeah " megha ne sath mein chumne wala smily bhi add kiya fir delete karke message send kar diya " it was good "

" wanna spend some time more ? you want to? "

" sure why not "

" great " aakash abhi bhi type kar raha tha isliye megha ruk gayi " vaise tumhari friend wahan kya kar rahi thi? " aakash ka message dekh megha ko yaad aya ki ye baat supriya se use puchni chahie the. Megha ne phone lock kiya aur apne bistar par baithte hi boli " supriya "

" hmm "

" tu thi kahan? " megha ke sawal par supriya ne uski taraf dekha aur use dekhti rahi. Mombati ka ujala jada hota to chehre par chai pareshani dikh jati par andhere ne chupa rakha tha.

" main ... bas wahin thi "

" wahin kahan? " megha ek pal chup hui " us khandar ke pas? par wahan kya kar rahi thi " megha sawal par sawal kar rahi thi aur supriya se jawab nahi diya jaa raha tha. Vo use sach batati to dheron aur sawal ikhate ho jate uske man mein jiska jawab dena supriya ke liye mushkil ho jata.

" mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai megha. Mujhe nahi pata main wahan kab gayi aur kaise pahunchi shayad rasta bhatak gayi thi "

" agar rasta bhatak gayi thi to phone kar deti " megha ne jaise hi phone ka yaad dilaya to supriya ko yaad aya ki uska phone kahan hai.

" mera phone ? "

" han tera phone, phone kyun nahi kiya? " megha ne fir sawal kiya.

" tu itni puch tach kya kar rahi hai? Maa hai meri? apne ashiq se kar, jise sham ko karne gayi thi " supriya ne chidte hue jawab diya.

" chidti kyun hai? mat bata " megha ne bhi kuch aur puchna sahi nahi samjha " ladke jada ache hote hain kam se kam dusron ki laundiya bane par chidte nahi hai, balki uske naam ki muth mar kar so jate hain aur inhe dekho madad karne ke baad kya milta hai? Sahi kaha hai kisi ne, hum ladkiyan chutiya hi hoti hai " megha ne apna phone khola aur aakash ke message ka reply diya.

" you want to know? then ask her " megha ne aaksh ko mesaage kiya aur razai mein ghus gayi. Supriya janti thi ki usne megha se galat baat ki lekin vo sach nahi keh sakti thi. Vo bhi lait gayi par uski ankhon se nind gayab thi. Use chinta ab phone ki thi jo vo us kamre mein hi chhod ayi thi aur ab use is baat ka dar sata raha tha ki agar vo phone kisi aur ke hath laga to uska kya hoga?

Subah jab supriya uthi to megha nahi thi, use laga shayad bathroom mein hai lekin vo wahan bhi maujud nahi thi. Time dekhne par samajh aya ki vo late tak soti rahi aur aaj megha ne use nahi jagaya. Supriya samajh gayi ki megha use naraz hai, usne apne bistar ki taraf dekha jahan par roz ki tarah aaj bhi baal pade the. Usne palang jhada aur apne kapde lekar hostel ke common bathroom mein chali gayi. Wahan se naha kar vo kamre mein ayi aur tayar hokar kamre se bahar nikalne hi wali thi ki kamre ke samne usne jaggu ko khada paya jise dekh use tanu aur komal ke bich hui baat yaad aa gayi.

" tum yahan? megha nahi hai " supriya ko laga ki vo megha se milne ayi hai.

" megha se nahi balki main tumhe hi bulane ayi thi " jaggu ne apna chasma theek karte hue kaha.

" mujhe par kahan? "

" vo tumhe warden ne bulaya hai "

" warden ne kyun? " supriya chaunkte hue boli.

" kyun ka mujhe kaise pata, warden hi batayegi, usne mujhse kaha ki tum college jate hue use milte hue jana " jaggu itna keh kar wahan se jane lagi aur jate hue apne pajame ke uppar se apne nitamb khujate hue kamre mein ghus gayi. Supriya ko warden se pani ki complain karni thi jiske liye vo use milne wali thi lekin samne se bulane ka matlab use samajh nahi aa raha tha. Kya warden ko us kamre se mera phone mil gaya? Kahin us kamre ke liye to nahi bula rahi? Supriya man hi man chinta karne lagi aur fir kamre ko band karke vo warden se bina mile hostel se nikal gayi.

iska matlab in dono tharkiyo ne ne milke kuch kya hai supriya ke sath jab wo behosh thi...
aur wo bathroom mein wo chaaya nahi balki hawasi tharki kutta kamina aakash tha... jo shayad chupke se spuriya ki video bana raha tha... aur megha usse mili huyi hai is kand mein...
Oh God..... kaise insaan hai yeh dono...itne gire huye ki kiske majbooriyo ka bhi is had bhi faida utha le.. aaahtuuu... chii chii yeh megha bhi itni kamini giri huyi nikalegi ye soch bhi pare hai....
jaake dono chullu bhar paani mein dub marna chahiye in dono ko

aainn.. ye warden kahe bula rahi hai ushe.. zara savdhaan rahe supriya... is hawasi warden par koi bhorasa nahi...jaane Kounsi kand kar de...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab..

 

[Naina]

Dawat mein bula lo sab aa jayenge yahan nahi ayenge

waise kaha hai ab aapke woh dawat mein aane wale log... nain saheb ko bada hansh hansh ke bata rahe the aap us waqt .. ab zara hume bhi bataiye...
aur yeh bhi bata dijiye ki koun koun nahi aa raha hai... zara hum bhi samjhe in isharo, isharo mein kiye gaye baaton ka arth

Oh ho imli ko kuch balu to aap bhi Aankhon Se hi look dene lage... akhir baat kya hai .. sab thik to hai na

 

[Strange Love]

Harshit bro... Is kahani Girls Hostel ka ending happy rakhna... Please. Mai bhi soch raha hu mai Bhoot Bangla Punarjanam ka raaz aakhir complete kar du...exbii par us time mujhe Kuchh logo ne demotivate Kar diya tha isliye kahani ko incomplete Chhod diya tha... Us samay mai amateur tha...pata nahi tha ki kisi ke negative bolne se Humko kahani rokni nahi chahiye...

Anyways coming back to story...megha aur supriya ka character mujhe bohot pasand aaya... Dheere Dheere kahani apne laye me aa rahi hai...agle update ka besabri se intezaar rahega..

 

[Rajizexy]

good story