Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[Naina]

Tharak pan to is jawani ka ek matr sach hai vo kaise nikal jaye Apko har kahani mein ek na ek kamini mil hi jatihai
Lead koi bhi ho sakta hai kya malum, par koi to hai hi shayad koi bhi nahi.. Are khud ko relax karne mein kya besharami Hostel mein close friends bante bhi jaldi hai aur nikalte bhi jaldi hai... Thank you nainaji keep reading

meera no 1 pe hai... aur upor se chorni bhi thi ... waise yeh tharki megha bhi uski level ki hi hai, lekin idhar haaraman to tanu hai.. maybe bhoot sabse pehle ushe hi maar de

 

[kamdev99008]

Baat kuch kare poster dekhkar feeling ki to ...

Ek sham mastani kale Sayon me giraft hui jaye... Dark theme.... Bole to sex violece aur brutality ... Naina SANJU ( V. R. ) Nevil singh DARK WOLFKING kamdev99008

Aap sab ke mai vistrit vichar janna chahunga ki poster dekhkar aap kya feel kar rahe

Koi chudail nahi dikh rahi.... Kaisa girls hostel hai.....

 

[nain11ster]

Koi chudail nahi dikh rahi.... Kaisa girls hostel hai.....

Kahani ka aanand uthaeye Kamdev babu... Yahan to padh'kar gaanv ke kishriyon ki hullarbaji se jyada shahar ki kisoriyon ke chhichhodibaji puri milegi.... Aapko har koi chudail hi najar aayegi jo Harshit bhai shabdon ke jariye dikha rahe...

Waiting for your prtikriya... Update padh'kar aapne kya feel kiya... Jaldi se padkar revooo de ek ...

 

[nain11ster]

Sorry Harshit bhai ... Kal raat apan mood me tha aur hosh ki gunjaesh na thi to padh na paya... Aaj raat ko itminan se padhunga ...

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

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[Vikram Bhosle]

SuperB

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

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" bhaiya do chai do samose aur ek kachodi dena " canteen pahunchte hi supriya ne order diya aur ek kona pakad kar wahan jaa baithi. Subah ki classes thi isliye canteen mein jada bheed nahi thi. Supriya ne baithte sath hi apna phone unlock kiya aur fir lock karke soch mein padh gayi. Abhi dekhi gayi ragging ko yaad karte hue use apna pehla din yaad aa gaya. Kaise usne 12th class mein ache percentage liye the ache nahi balki ek dum satik number jise uska is college mein admission ho sake. College ke sapne school se kuch alag hote hain, school to usne girls school mein reh kar kiya tha isliye uski life padai se kabhi aage badh nahi payi thi par college jane ki excitment ne use romanch se bhar diya tha. College life ki sabse anokhi baat thi hostel life jo usne kai baar suni thi apne pados mein rehne wali Kalpana se isliye uska bhi man tha ki vo hostel hi rahe. Mummy papa ko manane mein dikat hui kyun ki vo use PG ya flat mein rehne ki zid karte rahe akhir vo bhi jante the ki hostel mein zindagi kaisi hoti hai, uski mummy bhi hostel mein reh chuki thi lekin supriya apni baat par adi rahi aur akhir padai ke khatir maa baap maan gaye.

Aaj uska pehla din tha jab vo apna ghar chhod kar dusre seher mein ayi thi. Taxi se usne apna saman utara aur paise dekar college ki taraf badhi. Bahar ek gaurd khada tha jisne use pucha to usne apna admission form dikha diya aur vo premisis mein dakhil ho gayi. Engineering karna to aksar ladkon ka sapna hota hai lekin uska sapna tha ki vo engineer bane aur sath hi mein vo janti thi ki usme ladke bahut hote hain.

Vo premisis mein ghusi to use samajh nahi aya jana kahan hai aur na hi koi wahan maujud tha, pura premisis khali tha. " shayad galti kar di do din pehle akar yahan to koi nahi hai " supriya idhar udhar dekh rahi thi tabhi uski nazar ek taraf gayi jahan ek ladki abhi abhi deewar kud kar aa rahi thi. Supriya ne apna saman wahin chhoda aur ise pehle vo ladki wahan se jati vo uske pass pahunchi aur use rok liya " excuse me " supriya ke bolte hi vo ladki ruk gayi. " kya aap mujhe bata sakti hai girls hostel kidhar hai? "

" first year? "

" yes "

" oh wao, fresh bakra "

" main samjhi nahi? "

" i mean fresh batch "

" ji yes "

" which branch? "

" CS IT " supriya muskurai.

" padne wali ladkiyan wahin kyun jati hai "

" aap kis branch mein hai? "

" main senior hun tumhari "

" ohh.. mam "

" mam? " vo hansi " tanu " usne apna hath aage badaya

" supriya " usne tanu se hath mila liya.

" chal aja tujhe dikhati hun hostel " tanu ke kehte hi supriya apna saman lekar ayi aur uske sath chal padi. " kitna saman layi hai? "

" ab 4 sal yahan rehna hai to sara saman le ayi "

" chadiyan jada layi hai? " tanu ke sawal par vo kuch nahi boli. Waise bhi vo ghabra rahi thi kyun ki uski mulakat ek senior se hui thi aur usne suna tha ki senior badi gandi ragging lete hain aur hostel mein to use bhi jada gandi lekin tanu use aise nahi lagi kyun ki vo uski madad kar rahi thi.

" aap bhi hostel mein rehte ho? "

" rehta kaun hai apna hi hostel hai " tanu chalte hue ek taraf ko mudi to supriya bhi mud gayi.

" aur kitni dur hai? " corridor kab ka khatam ho chuka tha aur college ka premisis se bhi bahar nikal chuke the us chote gate se jise tanu ne khola tha jise dekh hi supriya ne sawal kiya tha jiska tanu ne koi jawab nahi diya. Supriya ko kuch ajeeb laga lekin vo kuch boli nahi lekin chalte hue use bahut der ho gayi thi aur itna samajh aa gaya tha ki college se hostel kabhi itna dur to nahi hota.

" ye jhadiyan? "

" iske piche hi hai hostel, tum aao to sahi "

" par jhadiyun ke piche kaise ho sakta hai hostel? "

" tumhara pehla din hai jada hoshiyari karni hai to khud hi khoj lena " tanu jhadiyun ki jagah wapis jane lagi.

" nahi main to bas, aisi jagah par hostel hota hai " supriya ko samajh nahi aya ki kya kare, use apni mummy ki baat sahi lagne lagi thi aur PG/Flat le lena chahie tha.

" garmiyun ki chhutiyun mein kaun katega ye jhadiyan badh hi jayegi na, tu chal rahi hai ya main jaun? "

" han chal rahi hun " supriya ko samajh nahi aya ki vo kya kare isliye aage badhne ke liye han kar di. Dono jhadiyun mein ghus kar use paar karne lage. Supriya bas jhadiyun se bahar niklna chahti thi. Uska dhayan jhadiyun mein jada tha aur tanu par kam.

" vaise aap kab se yahan hai? aap nahi gayi apne ghar garmiyun ki chhutiyun mein ? " supriya ne sawal kiya par koi jawab nahi aya. Jhadiyan jo uske hath par chub rahi thi usne wahan khujaya aur jab apni nazar uthai to samne koi nahi tha. " ye kahan gayi ? " supriya ghabrai aur usne apne dono taraf dekha jahan sirf jhadiyan thi aur ek khamoshi. " tanu didi " supriya ne is baar awaz unchi ki lekin jawab nahi aya. Uski sansein tez ho gayi, chehre par dar aur ghabrahat milne laga " tanu didi "

" yahan " is baar samne se awaz ayi to supriya ke man ko halki shanti hui aur vo awaz ki disha ko follow karti hui akhir jhadiyun se bahar aa nikli. Jhadiyun se nikal kar use laga tha ki ab uski musibat khatam ho jayegi lekin samne dekhte hi uske kadam wahin ruk gaye. Din ka samay nahi hota to vo cheekh hi padti. Samne ek veeran khandar jaisa ghar tha jiske angan mein badi-badi jhadiyan ugi hui thi aur vo ghar itna darwana dikh raha tha ki supriya ke rongte khade ho gaye. Usne apna bag chhod diya ya chhut gaya use nahi malum chala kyun ki dar ne uske sharir par pura kabza kar liya tha. Supriya ne kisi tarah us khandar ghar se apni nazre hatai aur pehle bayein aur dekha aur fir dayein aur. Do kache raste the aur kuch nahi koi nahi tha vahan. Supriya us khandar ghar ke samne akele khadi thi, dekhne mein to lag raha tha ki vo bhootiya ghar hai par usne kisi tarah apne dimag ko shant kiya aur ye samjhaya ki aisa kuch nahi hota aur agar bhoot hota bhi hai to vo din mein nahi dikhta. Supriya khud ko samjha to rahi thi lekin samjha na saki, uska sharir pasine mein dub chuka tha. Nazre samne hi thi ek khidki ki taraf jaise koi use wahan se dekh raha ho aur vo use. Vo itni sthir khadi thi ki choti si harkat par ab vo uchal padti aur usi dauran ek awaz hui jise sun uski cheekh nikal gayi.

" madam apka order " canteen walle ne chai aur samose ke sath kachori rakh di thi. Supriya ne chai ka cup uthaya, mobile mein time dekha " ye ladki dusra lecture bhi niklwayegi " usne megha ko phone lagate hue chai ki ek chuski li. Phone baj raha tha lekin megha utha nahi rahi thi kyun ki vo is samay bathroom mein thi aur nahane mein dubi hui thi. Usne dhayan hi nahi diya tha ki bathroom ki nali mein pani nahi jaa raha hai aur pani wahin bharta jaa raha hai.

Supriya phone rakhne wali thi ki use yaad aya usne pehle phone kisi chiz ko dekhne ke liye uthaya tha. Usne call log kholi aur kal raat aye phone ko dekhne lagi. Call 3 baj kar 3 minute par aya tha lekin number abhi bhi nahi dikh raha tha jabki vo use restart bhi kar chuki thi. Uske baad usne us number ki call details dekhi. Ek nahi balki kai baar aise hi hua tha aur time bhi bilkul same tha. " ajeeb baat hai aisa kaise ho sakta hai " vo soch rahi thi ki ek baar provider se baat karke dekhi jaye par usi samay uska phone bajne laga. " mom " flash ho raha tha jise dekh usne phone uthaya.

" supriya beta good morning "

" good morning mom "

" class mein to nahi ho ? "

" no mom, nashta kar rahi thi bataiye "

" par ye to tumhari class ka time hai na to is waqt nashta ? " mom hamesha yahi karti hai pehle puchegi ki class mein ho fir puchegi ki kyun nahi ho, supriya ne socha aur fir jawab diya.

" vo aaj hostel mein pani ka kuch problem tha isliye "

" mene kaha tha tumhe pg/flat le lo hostel ke piche mat pado "

" mom aap fir shuru ho gayi "

" panch saal hostel mein rahi hun isliye kehti hun wahan kuch na kuch laga rehta hai "

" apne call kyun kiya tha "

" kyun mei call nahi kar sakti "

" mere samose thande ho rahe hain "

" ek mahine mein ladki badal gayi samose ke liye maa ko bol rahi hai jao "

" hehehe bolo kya kaam hai "

" han mene tujhe batane ko phone kiya tha "

" kya "

" apni kalpana hai na uski shadi ho rahi hai "

" kya baat kar rahi ho, kab ? " supriya ne samosa turant rakh diya.

" date to abhi tay nahi hui lekin abhi uski mom mili thi vo bata rahi thi "

" acha, unhone mujhe to bataya nahi "

" reh gaya hoga, tujhe kuch chahie to bhijwa dun? "

" online ka jamana hai mom, sab mil jata hai "

" badi ho gayi hai meri beti "

" pehle se hi thi "

" acha aur ek baat bata periods ke waqt kuch dikat to nahi hui na? "

" mom " supriya ne aise kaha jaise use achamba hua ki achanak ye sawal kahan se aya.

" mom hun teri puch nahi sakti? bata ? "

" abhi ek hi mahina to hua hai aye hue "

" to date to ayi hogi "

" abhi nahi ayi, ane wali hogi, ek-aad din mein " supriya ne jhooth kaha kyun ki uski date waise to nikal chuki thi aur abhi tak usko periods nahi hue the lekin agar vo apni mom ko batati to khma-kha vo bakheda kar deti. " aap kahan ye sab lekar baith gayi? clinic nahi jana kya? " supriya ne itna kaha ki megha atte hue dikh gayi.

" apni mom se baat hi nahi karni is ladki ko to "

" karni hai par main class mein nahi jaun batao? ab bye " supriya ne phone cut kar diya.

" kispar bhadak rahi hai itna " megha baithte hi boli.

" maa par aur tu vo chhod ye bata ki tu kitni der lagati hai. Next lecture bhi shuru ho gaya hoga "

" mujhe teri wajah se der hui hai "

" meri wajah se? "

" han teri wajah se, apne jhad degi bathroom nali mein to teri wajah se hi der hogi na " megha ne samosa uthaya aur fir chai ka ghunt bhara " behen ki takki bilkul thandi chai hai "

" itni der se ayegi to yahi hoga, tu ye bata meri wajah se kaise? "

" bhaiya ek chai dena to aur ise wapis apne andar dal lo, i mean bighone mein kisi ko kya pata mene pi hai aur vaise bhi pata chala to uske maze aa jayenge " megha ne kaha to wahan baithe kuch bache kabhi megha ko to kabhi us canteen wale ko shaq ki nazar se dekhne lage.

" tu bata rahi hai ya nahi " supriya ne uska hath pakad kar halke se table par de mara.

" awwoo... behen ki teri.. maar kyun rahi hai. Baal fans gaye the tere nali mein, pani bhar gaya tha badi mushkil se ayi hun "

" oo shit, pehle yaad dilati maa se puch leti "

" to ab puch le " megha apna hath sehlate hue boli.

" nahi varna fir vo shuru ho jayegi "

" kash hamari maa bhi humse aise hi chep hoti to do pal baat kar lete aur ek isko dekho, aisa mila hai to kadar nahi " megha itarte hue boli.

" to tu rakh le meri maa, bolti hun use goad le legi tujhe " supriya ne hanste hue kaha par megha ka dhayan kahin aur tha. Abhi abhi canteen mein kuch ladke ek sath andar aye the jinme se ek akash tha.

" ab ye haramzadi usi ko tadti rahegi " supriya ne apna samosa khatam kar liya tha. Megha akash ki taraf dekh rahi thi par abhi tak usne nahi dekha tha, vo apne doston ke sath canteen wale se order kar raha tha. Megha uthne ko hui lekin supriya ne hath pakad kar baitha liya " baithi reh chup chap aur muh band kar aur idhar dekh meri taraf " supriya ne uska muh apni taraf kar liya.

" tu dost hai ya chudail, ladke ko line to dene de "

" use dene de "

" tum girls school mein padne walon ko kya malum ki ladko ko aaj kal ladkiyun ki kami nahi unse do pal koi ladki baat kar le vo uski muth maar kar so jaya karte hain aur akash to vaise bhi ek dum maal hai "

" girls school mein padne ke baad attitude ata hai tum nahi samjhoge " supriya ne garv se kaha.

" tu apne attitude ki batti bana " megha complete karti use pehle uske kano mein awaz padi.

" hey megha "

" hi akash " megha ne us taraf dekha aur apni jagah se khadi ho gayi.

" tum lecture nahi le rahi kya "

" tum bhi to nahi le rahe " megha ka bas chalta to abhi lipat kar apna badan uske badan se chipka leti aur apni chut mein uska lund le leti par kisi tarah usne apni bhavnaon ko control kiya aur shant khadi rahi. Itne mein canteen wala aya aur chai ka cup rakh kar chala gaya. " join us, we both will actually like it " megha se raha nahi gaya to usne puch liya.

" nahi vo hum sab ground jaa rahe hain match practice ke liye yahan to bas kuch thanda pine aye the. Meet you later "

" ok " megha ne bhuje man se kaha aur akash ek pal use dekhta hua supriya par nazar dalta hua apne doston ke sath chala gaya. Megha wapis apni jagah par baith gayi. " kaise jungliyun ki tarah kha rahi hai? salon se bhukhi hai kya? " megha ne supriya ko ek sath dono samose hath mein liye dekha jiska adha hissa uske muh mein tha.

" bhook lag rahi thi yaar achanak se itni ki man kiya tujhe bhi kha jaun " samose khate hi supriya boli.

" tu khud khane wali chiz hai tu kya khayegi kisi ko "

" tere ko to iske alawa kuch nahi dikhta, ek tanu hai jise dusri ladkiyun ki tang khinchne mein maza ata hai aur ek tu jo meri tang khinchti rehti hai. Tere sath reh-reh kar main bhi tere jaisi banti jaa rahi hun, kamini " supriya muskurate hue boli.

" kyun ab kya kiya usne? " megha ne muh mein kachori thus rakhi thi.

" abhi dekha mene, kuch ladkiyun ki ragging kar rahi thi. Ek baat bata ye college walle bolte kyun nahi hai kuch? aur kab tak ye naye bache atte rahenge? "

" hostel ke mamle mein college ka koi role nahi hota. Hostel warden ke under mein hai aur warden tanu ko kuch kehti nahi "

" par aisa kyun? "

" deti hogi vo "

" tanu us moti wardan ko apni? " supriya chaunkte hue boli.

" paise ki baat kar rahi hun " megha hasne lagi " tu to ek number ki kamini banti jaa rahi hai " megha ke chedne par supriya jhep gayi.

" main jaa rahi hun class, tujhe ana ho to aa jaio kutiya " supriya uth kar canteen se nikal gayi. Megha uska naam lekar chilla rahi thi fir uski awaz supriya ke kano se gayab ho gayi kyun ki vo class ke liye aage badh chuki thi. Usne ground floor ki sidiyan pakdi aur apna chehra niche karke vo first floor par ayi. Uski class corridor ke ant mein thi. Sar niche karke jane ki wajah thi bich mein padti seniors ki class jo har dum naye bachon ki aad lagaye baithe rehte the. Do minute ka rasta supriya ke liye musibat tha aur use ab lag raha tha ki use megha ka intezar karna chahie tha. Vo apni class ki taraf badhti use pehle uska rasta kisi ne rok liya.

" fresher? " awaz sunte hi supriya ne ankhein mich li.

" dhatt teri ki, ab to gayi " vo apna chehra nahi utha rahi thi aur samne khade pairon ko hi ghure jaa rahi thi.

" ise niche dekhne ka shauk lagta hai bhai "

" lagta hai naap rahi hai kiska kitna hai "

" rangeen lagti ho tum " teen awaz mein se ek awaz ne use pucha. Supriya ka dil dhadak raha tha. Vo kya kare bas yahi sochne mein lagi hui thi par jab kuch nahi mila to usne apna chehra uppar uthaya. Dar ke mare vo kuch boli nahi lekin vo teno ladke usi pal wahan aise khisake jaise unhone din mein bhoot dekh liya ho kuch usi andaz mein unke chehre ki hawayain udi hui thi. Supriya hairan pareshan bhi thi lekin khush bhi utni hi thi.

" sali kamini akele akele chhod gayi mere ko ye jante hue ki yahan par seniors pakad lete hain " hanfte hue megha supriya ke pas ayi to uske chehre ki udi rangat ko dekhte hue boli " tujhe kya hua? "

सुप्रिया अपने माता-पिता के मर्जी के खिलाफ हास्टल रहने आई । उसकी मां नहीं चाहती थी कि वो हास्टल में रहकर पढ़ाई करे क्योंकि वो खुद हास्टल में रहकर पढ़ चुकी है । उसे पता है कि लड़कियां हास्टल में रहकर बिगड़ जाती है ।
तभी तो उसने उसके पीरियड के बारे में पूछा । कहीं लड़की पेट से तो नहीं हो गई ! मांओं को अपनी लड़कियों के पीरियड डेट का पुरा पता होता है । उसका अपनी बेटी के बारे में फिक्र करना वाजिब है । ( कहीं उसकी मां ने अपने समय में कोई गुल तो नहीं खिलाया था )

सुप्रिया हास्टल प्रवास के पहले दिन ही तन्नु से मिली और उसने उसे कालेज कैम्पस के बाहर स्थित खंडहर और झाड़ियों का दर्शन भी करवा दिया । पता नहीं उस दिन उन दोनों के बीच क्या हुआ पर ये खंडहर और झाड़ियां आगे चलकर बहुत कुछ दिखाएंगी ।

सुप्रिया को कालेज में अपने क्लास जाते वक्त कुछ लफंगे स्टुडेंट का सामना करना पड़ा लेकिन वो लड़के किसी को देखकर भयभीत हो गए । ( शायद आकाश को देखकर या कालेज के किसी दबंग स्टुडेंट को देखकर )

सुप्रिया के होमटाउन और उसकी पड़ोसी कल्पना - ये भी हास्टल में रहकर पढ़ चुकी है और मोहतरमा की शादी भी फिक्स हो गई है । ( जरूर ये भी आगे चलकर अपने जलवे बिखेरेगी )

बहुत ही बेहतरीन स्टोरी लग रही है हर्षित भाई ! अभी तो पृष्ठभूमि तैयार हो रही है मगर आगे चलकर हास्टल में बहुत कुछ खलबली मचने वाली है ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

 

[harshit1890]

Update ~~ 4​

" tujhe hua kya hai jab se class mein ayi hai shant hai? " megha ne supriya se pucha jo class mein gumsum si baithi thi. Kya chal raha hai use koi matlab hi nahi tha. Megha ne do teen baar pucha par vo kuch nahi boli. Ek ke baad ek class guzar gayi aur supriya bina kuch bole yun hi baithi rahi. Megha bich-bich mein use dekh leti baki ka samay vo class mein ho rahi padai mein ya fir kuch duri mein baithe ladkon se baat karne lagti jisme se ek ladka supriya se baat karna chahta tha par supriya is hosh mein nahi thi ki vo baat kar sake.

" supriya? supriya? " supriya hosh mein ayi to paya ki class mein sabhi usi ki tarah dekh rahe the aur samne khada teacher bhi usi ki taraf dekh raha tha. " are you ok? "

" yes sir " supriya ne kaha aur fir megha ki taraf dekha.

" ok then tell me what we were discussing about? " guptaji ke sawal par supriya ne megha ko dabi awaz mein gali di aur apni jagah se khadi hui. Aaj to mari, guptaji baad mein apne room mein bulayenge aur agar sab sahi kehte hain to main gayi kaam se. Supriya man hi man soch vichar mein dubi thi " we are waiting supriya " usne guptaji ko dekha, sar par baal ka namo nishan nahi tha par muche rakhi hui thi. Pet halka bahar nikla hua tha par fir bhi khud ko stud se kam nahi samjhte the. Biwi inse isliye dukhi rehti thi kyun ki inhe har chiz mein punish karne ki adadt thi jiski wajah se biwi inhe apni deti nahi thi jiska badla ye college ki ladkiyun se lete the. Bachon ki suni sunai batein is samay supriya ke man mein chal rahi thi jabki ye waqt jawab dene ka tha.

" sir, we were discussing about this program " supriya ne board par program likha dekha to usne wahi keh diya.

" ok so? could you please let me know how this program works and what should be the possible output of this " guptaji ko bolte hue rukna pada kyun ki sawal se pehle jawab aa chuka tha.

" there are 2 posibilities if we run this program, first it will provide the syntax error as on line 4 the variable declared as integer and the function which is overloading the variable should be of float value because the output will not support the integer type. Secondly, if we do correct the syantax than the program will compile without any error and provide us the output and the output should be 1.091, no it should be 1.09187 exact " supriya ke bolne ke baad class ke bache hi nahi balki guptaji bhi aise dekh rahe the jaise murgi ki hadi muh se chinn li gayi ho. Supriya hairan thi ki sab usko aise kyun dekh rahe hain usne megha ki taraf dekha jo ankh muh sab khol kar use hi dekh rahi thi.

" jis tarah tune aaj jawab dekar gupta ki ujdi hui basti mein pichkari mari hai na agar mein launda hoti to tere ched pel diye hote mene " megha class se nikalte hi boli. " tu fir kho gayi? kya hua hai? "

" mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki mene answer diya kaise? "

" tu abhi bhi answer mein khoi hai main ye soch rahi hun ki tune kaise us sapat khire se apni murgi bacha li varna to aaj tujhe vo staff room mein bula kar na jane kya karta tere sath "

" tujhe lagta hai vo aisa karega? ye sab seniors ki banai hui kahani hogi "

" ab vo to pata karne ke liye ek din jana padega is khire ke kamre mein "

" tu pagal hai megha? "

" tu vo chhod, malik tera number mang raha tha de dun? "

" malik kaun? "

" are wahi gora chita ek dum clean shaved "

" chilla hua kehte hain use " supriya ke kehte hi dono hans padi.

" to kya bolti hai de dun use "

" apni de di par mera number nahi "

" uske chehre se jada baal to meri chut mein hai re pagal, chal aja canteen chalte hain kya pata akash wahan mil jaye "

" phone par puch le use kahan hai "

" phone ki yaad na dila janeman, vo phone se gila kar deta hai tu chal jada sawal na kar " megha supriya ko khinch kar wapis canteen le gayi. Ek mahina hua tha first year ka aur abhi tak jada dost bane nahi the. Ragging ke dar se har kisi se baat karne mein bhi dar lagta tha kyun ki kai baar suni hui afayein ye ayi thi ki seniors freshers ki aad mein baja dalte hain. Matlab ye ki vo ek fresher bakra dhundnte hain jo naye fresher se mil kar unse baat-cheet ke bahane seniors tak le jata hai. Ab vo fresher dusron ke sath aisa isliye karte hain taki khud ki bacha lein lekin udi hui afwaon mein to ye bhi samne aya hai ki vo bach nahi pate aur unhe fresher khandan ko dhoka dene ke jurm mein freshar ke naam par kalank ghosit karke unhe do guni saza di jati hai isliye supriya jada tar megha ke sath hi rehti aur vo uske sath. Megha ki bhi kahani hai first day ragging ki jo jab usne supriya ko batai thi to supriya itna dar gayi thi ki agar kuch aisa uske sath hota to vo kabhi hostel rehne aa hi nahi pati.

Megha ke papa nahi the uski maa ne hi goverment office mein kaam karke use pala posa aur is kabil banane ki kosish kari taki uska bhi naam ho lekin megha hamesha se hi shararti rahi thi. School mein ladkon ko peetna aur kai ladko ke sath uske affair reh chuke the bas ek chiz ki khubi thi usme aur vo tha uska dimag jo sahi samay par lag jaya karta tha jiski wajah se vo aaj mere sath is college mein thi. Engineer banne ka usko koi shauk nahi tha lekin maa chahti thi aur vo sirf mauz chahti thi uska manna ye tha ki college mein sirf ek hi chiz honi chahie aur vo ye ki jo karo aisa karo ki agle 40 saal tak use yaad karke gilapan rahe. School ki hawas college mein utar deta chahti thi. Shayad is baat ka kisi ko vishwas na ho lekin aaj tak usne sex nahi kiya tha sirf padh aur dekh kar uski ye icha thi ki usko bhi koi aise hi apne sharir ke niche daba dale. Arman bahut the bas pure karne ki tadap baki reh gayi thi. Megha mujhse pehle hi college aa gayi thi. Garmiyun ki chuttiyun mein uski kisi baat par apni maa se kha suni hui aur vo ghar chhod hostel chali ayi. Ye baat usne kabhi nahi batai ki aisa kya hua tha jo vo itna ladh kar aa gayi thi, kyun ki use janne ke baad ye koi nahi keh sakta ki ye ladki ladkon ko maar sakti hai aur jhagad bhi sakti hai. Jis waqt megha ayi thi us waqt college mein koi nahi tha mostly bache ghar jaa chuke the. Uski pehli mulakat hostel ke peon jo warnden ka helper tha sonu use hui thi. Us waqt hostel mein koi nahi tha aur sonu ki harampanti ko janne mein megha ko jada der bhi nahi lagi. 50 ka note bahut tha sonu ke sath tisri mazil tak jate hue apna saman use dekar sawal karne ke liye.

" tu fir kahin kho gayi? " megha ne supriya ko soch se bahar laa diya.

" abhi sochna shuru hi kiya tha ki tune tok diya "

" aisa kya soch rahi thi "

" wahi jo tune bataya tha jab tera first day tha hostel mein " supriya ne megha ko yaad dilaya.

" tu bhi na baton ko bhar kar baith jati hai. Bharna hai to kuch bhar " megha chai ki chuski lete hue boli.

" jaise ki? " supriya ne chai ka cup uthaya.

" apna sina bhar meri jaan, ise hi dekh kar ladke apni laar tapkate hain. Tujhe pata hai " megha supriya ke karib ayi " ladke sabse pehle ladkiyun ki chatiyan dekhte hain agar vo pasand aa gayi to bas fir ladki jaisi marzi ho, do minute ke andar din ka ujala ho ya raat ki ratri use apne bistar par le jate hain aur thokne lagte hain " megha ki baat sun supriya ka chehra sharam se lal hota jaa raha tha. Vo bade dhayan se megha ki batein sun rahi thi. " ab log sochte hain ki unka lund hamari chataiyan dekh kar khada hua hai par aisa nahi hota khada isliye hota hai kyun ki vo un chatiyun ko hathon se daba rahe hote hain jiski wajah se jeans ke andar akdan paida hoti hai aur becharon ko adjust karne mein behad dikat he he he he " megha hans padi. Supriya ki sansein bhari ho gayi thi. Megha har baar raat ko kuch aisa suna kar uske sharir mein khalbali machati thi lekin aaj din mein sabke samne aisa kar rahi thi.

" megha bas, tu bahut besharam hai "

" besharam kya hai isme? Ladke bhi aisi hi batein karte hain ki us ladki ki chatiyan dekh uske nitambh dekh, chodte waqt khub dabwayegi to hum kya unke ek hi chiz ko lekar baat nahi kar sakte. Vaise bhi unke pas lund ke alawa hota kya hai? Hamare pas to bahut kuch hota hai meri jaan, bas theek se dikhana ana chahie. Ye tanu, komal, Priya aur uski ek saheli hai na kya naam hai us chudail ka.. Han Kamini i mean Kaamini vo yahi karti hai. Jaan kar dikhati hai aur jab koi kareeb ata hai to uski bezati maar deti hai isliye itni popular hai hostel mein. Ab tu khud soch ki isme kitna faiyda hai popular ban kar wo hostel ki warden tak ko apne niche rakhti hai aur vo kutiya warden jab bulati hai chatne chali ati hai bhale hi uska bhosda jitna marzi baas maar raha ho "

" bhosda? kaise kaise word use karti hai tu ? "

" tu bhosde par mat ja bhosde ki quality par jaa "

" jaise vo baas marti hai? "

" maa kasam tu meri dost na hoti to mein tujhe bhar-bhar kar galiyan deti. Mere kehne ka matlab hai ki hume bhi popular banne ke liye dikhana padega "

" bhosda? "

" teri picture bhosde par kyun atki hai "

" tu baat hi aisi kar rahi hai. Popular hone ke liye mein apna badan dikhana shuru kar dun " supriya chidte hue boli.

" kaun sa main tujhe nangi class attend karne ke liye keh rahi hun main tujhe ye samjha rahi hun ki thoda inpar dhayan de " megha ne supriya ki chatiyun ko uthate hue kaha. Supriya uski harkat dekh sharam se pighal gayi. Canteen mein itni bheed thi koi bhi dekh le to kya sochega? Supriya ne fauran uska hath piche kiya.

" haramzadi hai kya " supriya ko chidte dekh megha hasne lagi. " aaj ke baad chuha na to tu jarur popular ho jayegi " supriya gusse mein thi par megha hanse jaa rahi thi.

" vo kaise " apni hansi ko thoda control karte hue boli.

" vo aise ki jab mein teri sutai karte hue hostel tak le jaungi na tab tu pitne ke liye popular ho jayegi aur mein peetne ki wajah se "

" he he he hehe hehe.. " megha fir hasne lagi " yar tu to girls school mein padi hai wahan to ye sab hota hoga "

" hota hoga par main aisi nahi hun aaj ke baad chhuhio mat " supriya gusse mein khadi hui.

" baith ja meri rani " megha ne hath pakad kar niche baitha diya " sorry hath laga diya he hehe heheh ehehe " megha fir hasne lagi.

" bahut jada haramzadi hai tu, tere sath reh-reh kar main bhi waisi banti jaa rahi hun. Kamra change karne ki request dalni padegi "

" mujhse piccha nahi chhutega tera madam aur rahi baat mere gyan ki to use apna lo yahan bahut kaam ane wala hai. Vaise bhi tu itni sundar hai main launda hoti to tujhe patak patak kar chodti "

" chhi... ab tu sach mein pitegi "

" main to keh rahi hun lesbian try karte hain " megha ka itna bolna tha aur supriya uth kar canteen se khisak li " are kahan jaa rahi hai mere wale se to milwa de " megha chai ka bacha akhri ghunt bharte hue boli aur supriya ke piche nikal gayi.

 

[harshit1890]

Feb me...

nice start

thanks

ek minute,supriya bina check kiye khayegi kya... Kahin samose aur kachodi mein potassium nitrate milaya hua to nahi

are is tanu ko koi aur kaam nahi hai kya..
present ho ya flashback sabki ragging liye phir rahi hai.. is tanu ki to aisi ki taisi.. harshit1890 sab se pehle bhoot aake is tanu ko hi maarna chahiye aur wo bhi bahot khaufnaak tarike se...
aur yeh koun namakul, dhokhebaz, dagabaaz tharki hai jo raat ko 3 baje phone kar kar ke nind kharab karta phir raha hai... aur baat bhi nahi karta.. ya miss call deta hai.. Maybe phone karne wala kanjush makkhisush aur tharki bhi hai.. kahi tharki vikrant to nahi..
aur yeh supriya apni maa se is tarike se baat karne ki himmat.. tanu ke baad bhoot is supriya ki bhi aisi ki taisi kar de..


kitna khoon sawar hai dimag mein, kaisi gandi gandi gaaliya de rahi hai yeh megha ... hmm.. supriya ke baad bhoot is tharki, hawas ki pujaran megha ko pakad ke iski bhi aise ki kaise kar de....

Yeh bachhe kahan se aa gaye udhar

wo ladke kisko dekh bhaage... bhoot ko dekh ki megha ko dekh...
kya megha dikhne mein chudail jaisi hai
Kahi bhoot pret khooni pishas ne entry to nahi maar liya story mein..matlab ab se suru hone wala hai khooni khel ka silsila
Khair.... koi bhi kirdaar mare.. bas thrill, suspense aur brutality jaari rahe
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit1890 saheb

college ki canteen hai na ki hospital ka khana
College seniors sirf ragging ke naam par mashur hote hain tabhi election ke tame vote milta hai Missed call de rele hai... Are pade likhe log hai bachon ke attitude mein isi tarah ka attitude hota hai... Galiyan kahan hai ye to normal baat cheet hai par apas mein sabke samne nahi... Canteen mein bache tohotehi hai Kya malum ye sawal ka jawab aa hi jayega aage jakar... Aajayenge vo bhi par bhoot nahi hai is baar koi bhi Thanks naina ji

phir se bachhon ki baat...shayad is supriya ke liye sabhi juniors bachhe hi hai.. to woh Kounsi senior hai...

Khud ko bacha hi kehna cha rahi hai

 

[harshit1890]

meera no 1 pe hai... aur upor se chorni bhi thi ... waise yeh tharki megha bhi uski level ki hi hai, lekin idhar haaraman to tanu hai.. maybe bhoot sabse pehle ushe hi maar de

Koi chudail nahi dikh rahi.... Kaisa girls hostel hai.....

hakikat mein aurtein jab tak tandav karti hai to chudail se kam na lagti

Kahani ka aanand uthaeye Kamdev babu... Yahan to padh'kar gaanv ke kishriyon ki hullarbaji se jyada shahar ki kisoriyon ke chhichhodibaji puri milegi.... Aapko har koi chudail hi najar aayegi jo Harshit bhai shabdon ke jariye dikha rahe...

Waiting for your prtikriya... Update padh'kar aapne kya feel kiya... Jaldi se padkar revooo de ek ...

Ha hamari nazron se dekhne parnazar ayegi bilkul ayegi

Sorry Harshit bhai ... Kal raat apan mood me tha aur hosh ki gunjaesh na thi to padh na paya... Aaj raat ko itminan se padhunga ...

Han bhai samajhh skta hun

SuperB

thanks

सुप्रिया अपने माता-पिता के मर्जी के खिलाफ हास्टल रहने आई । उसकी मां नहीं चाहती थी कि वो हास्टल में रहकर पढ़ाई करे क्योंकि वो खुद हास्टल में रहकर पढ़ चुकी है । उसे पता है कि लड़कियां हास्टल में रहकर बिगड़ जाती है ।
तभी तो उसने उसके पीरियड के बारे में पूछा । कहीं लड़की पेट से तो नहीं हो गई ! मांओं को अपनी लड़कियों के पीरियड डेट का पुरा पता होता है । उसका अपनी बेटी के बारे में फिक्र करना वाजिब है । ( कहीं उसकी मां ने अपने समय में कोई गुल तो नहीं खिलाया था )

सुप्रिया हास्टल प्रवास के पहले दिन ही तन्नु से मिली और उसने उसे कालेज कैम्पस के बाहर स्थित खंडहर और झाड़ियों का दर्शन भी करवा दिया । पता नहीं उस दिन उन दोनों के बीच क्या हुआ पर ये खंडहर और झाड़ियां आगे चलकर बहुत कुछ दिखाएंगी ।

सुप्रिया को कालेज में अपने क्लास जाते वक्त कुछ लफंगे स्टुडेंट का सामना करना पड़ा लेकिन वो लड़के किसी को देखकर भयभीत हो गए । ( शायद आकाश को देखकर या कालेज के किसी दबंग स्टुडेंट को देखकर )

सुप्रिया के होमटाउन और उसकी पड़ोसी कल्पना - ये भी हास्टल में रहकर पढ़ चुकी है और मोहतरमा की शादी भी फिक्स हो गई है । ( जरूर ये भी आगे चलकर अपने जलवे बिखेरेगी )

बहुत ही बेहतरीन स्टोरी लग रही है हर्षित भाई ! अभी तो पृष्ठभूमि तैयार हो रही है मगर आगे चलकर हास्टल में बहुत कुछ खलबली मचने वाली है ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।

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