Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[harshit1890]

behatareen update ..sabke sab ab jasoosi me mahir ho gaye hai .har ek cheej ko jodkar apne manjil ko haasil karne me lage huye hai .
ved ji ne jo bhi research ki hai wo sab padh daali aur 3 kitabe bhi mili jo kaafi wajandar hai .
kitabo ko padh to nahi paaye kyunki usme alag hi language hai par 12 parchiya mili jisme map hai kisi khoi huyi cheej ka jisko ved sharma dhund raha hai .
kaal ke baare me bahut saari research kar rakhi hai par uska praman nahi hai ki vedji kisiko samjha sake .
jisne anjane me kaal ka nirman kiya wo bhi usko destroy nahi kar paya .
ab ye amazon bazil me kaunsi cheej hai ,kya book of hoax .
kya ab ye charo milke waha jayenge .
jitni mehnat le rahe hai sab wo wakai shocking hi hai .
ved sharma kya amazon brazil chala gaya hai kuch dhundne ,kyunki usne hi to map banake rakha hai un kitabo me .

Kya krein bhaya... bananan padta hai na jasus warna fir kahani aage kaise badegi...
Kaal paal kuch na hai sab bakchodi kar gaya ved...
Amazon jo shayad Death Kiñg bhai ne kaha tha ki aisa title kyun... ab lagta hai unka doubt khatam ho gaya hoga

Thanks bhai keep reading

 

[Aakash.]

Aap uske ath kabadi khelne gye to lapata ho jaoge... sahi tarah ki demands karo.. aise hi mat karo.. kahin kuch ho jayega apko Ek divine kam ho jayega XF se
Bhai ye story fantasy hai.. shuru se keh raha hun.. aap log kahe confuse ho rahe ho Han hai fantasy lekin reality touch ke sath
Curse to sab kuch hai.. even.... Thanks bhai keep reading ​

Hume koi matlab nahi kahani se abhi hum ganbru jawan hai aroahi ke saath setting karwao
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[harshit1890]

We have heard such things many times, sometimes from friends, sometimes from family, sometimes it seems that these stories are just entertainment or sometimes it seems that it is true, we did not see it with our own eyes so it's hard to decide anything, Ved Sharma has narrated a similar story to Meghnath, Who knows what is truth and what is lie.

The view of the village is scary as if everything has been destroyed also Meghnath gives the reason but sometimes what is seen is not. Well I thought Ved Sharma would tell us something that would ease our problems to some extent but he is not present now let's see what Shruti's team can do.

Whatever was in Ved Sharma's room, I already said that from one dimension to another or on both the dimensions at the same time and if you get entangled in that, the whole will be repeated and what Vishal Said that is also a possibility and don't know why looking at Aarohi it looks like she is involved, I said this when I gave my first detail review and you still didn't answer it.

Hariya Kaka in full mood back to back updates ​

Myth is something we can't debate on.. Sach maan lo to sahi varna sab bhram... ab yahi chiz kahani mein dikhani hai mujhe.. ki is bharam aur sach ke bich ka faisla akhir hota kaise hai.. Main kahani ke end ko reveal nahi karunga lekin itna jarur kahunga... it will be a brain storming end.. agar samay par likh paya to aap sab ko confuse aur pagal karke jaunga

Agar ved shrma wahan maujud hi hota to maza kaise ata bhai.... kuch to hume maza bhi to dene do

Aaruhi ke lover ho aap apko kaise jawab de dun mein... aur aap log aabhi tak bilkul sahi ho.. sab par shaq karoge kyun ki meri kahani padne ke baad aksar log ab kisi ko nahi chhodte

Thanks bhai keep reading

 

[harshit1890]

You are absolutely right time travel and paradox and time all three are related to each other but all three are different, I don't have deep knowledge about this but I am saying based on watching some movies and videos. Now coming to the aspect of Demons, they have their own realm and many times he comes to our realm, just like maybe Shreyas also came in our time with the help of that box, Well keeping those things aside which world is Ved Sharma talking about, there are many worlds in this infinite universe but what he wrote seemed like he was trying to focus our attention on one place but on what?

A power that has no form it can be of any form and that power is unconsciously created which only man can destroy, which means I understood much or understood nothing. Had Ved Sharma been present would not have been such a problem.

The story is becoming very intense and exciting, we are moving forward adding one thing to another, now it seems that after reading that book will understand what this mystery is but their incomplete knowledge should not make any mistake from them, let's see what happens.

It was a excellent update different pleasure to read this update, your writing is unmatched, unthinkable, Hats off! ​

I don't have also knowledge of time travel, commerce student hai apan fir bhi i read many things.. so actually main ye nahi kahunga ki i will be 100% right.. but whatever i will right in upcming scenrio which is actually a theme of this story will be close to the facts.. meri fanatasy ko alag kar do usme se to ..... Apne ek dum sahi chiz pakdi hai he was trying to focus on one thing.. which will be revealed soon...

Wahi to khel hai bhai.. abhi bata nahi sakta bas... warna is reply mein kahani khatam ho jayegi

Ab ane walle update ko likhne ke liye bahut samay chahie kyun ki ek bhi chiz miss ho gayi to ho gaya kaam kharab Thanks bhai... thanks for reading..

 

[harshit1890]

Girls Hostel mein hua haadsa, Mansion mein huye haadse, Vandana Girls School ki kahani, Us factory mein huyi durghatana, Dharmshala ka haadsa aur ab Bhandara mein huyi ghatna.. Is kahani mein anekon jagah dekhne ko mila hai ki kayi logon ki mrityu ek hi jagah par huyi hai... Ye kewal ek coincidence hai athva nahi, ye to aage pata chal hi jaayega, par ek baat saaf ahi ki in sabhi haadson ka Aaruhi se kisi na kisi tareeke se juda hona, ittefaq nahi hai... Bhandara mein saalon pehle jo hua, wo shayad aaj tak koyi samajh hi nahi paaya... Itne logon ki ek saath huyi mrityu, hairaan karne waali hai...

Ho sakta hai ki paani mein kuchh aisa raha ho jiske kaaran unki jaan chali gayi parantu sarkar dwara un 14 logon ko wahaan jaanch ke liye bhejne ke baad bhi kuchh khaas kaaran pata nahi chala paaya!? Paani mein aisi koyi cheez jo jaanlewa ho, apne aap to aayegi nahi, aur aisa kaisa vikrit buddhi ka insaan tha wo jisne poore gaaon ki aabadi ki jaan lene ka soch liya? Kya Ved Sharma jaan gaye the in sabhi mauton ke kaaran ko, ya abhi tak wo bhi asal wajah se anjaan hain? Kya Ved Sharma ki theory ke us “Kaal” ka hi connection tha in mauton se, basharte wo “Kaal” ek theory maatra na hokar, asliyat raha ho!

Ved Sharma un chuninda logon mein se ek hai jinhe sarkar dwara Bhandara mein huyi asamanya mauton ki tehkikat ke liye bheja gaya hai... Par lagta hai ki Ved Bhandara tak hi seemit nahi, uski jaanch ka dayra bohot vistrit hai... Naa kewal Brazil (Amazon) tak balki time travel aur dimensions tak ka concept wo laga chuka hai... Saaf pata chal raha hai ki Ved Sharma bohot samay se isi research athva jaanch mein laga hua tha, jiska nateeja kuchh na nikal saka... Kaaran, wo “Book Of Hoax” jiska naam wo nahi jaanta tha, parantu uske bina bhi jo kuchh Ved ne un panno mein, un kitaabon mein likha, wo uski kabiliyat aur samajh ko darshata hai...

Mere khayal se sabse pehle Shruti ko wo kitaab padhni chahiye jo Meghnath ne hi Library mein us tak pahunchayi thi... Chunki, Meghnath pehle bhi keh chuka hai ki Aaruhi ki haalat ka seedha sambandh hai us kitaab se, to Shruti ko pehle hi us book ko padh lena chahiye tha... Dekhte hain ab wo padhegi ya nahi, aur kya wo kitaab apni jagah par hogi bhi, ya Aaruhi use gaayab kar chuki hai..? Itni sab ghatnaon ke baad ek aur baat samajh aa gayi hai ki Meghnath bhi kuchh na kuchh chhupa raha hai, maana ki wo apne dost ki death ki jaanch karne ke liye bohot samay se in sab baaton ko khangal raha hai, par fir bhi mere hisaab se jitna wo jaanta hai, wo bohot zyada hai... Us source ka naam abhi tak usne nahin bataya hai jiske zariye wo Bhandara aur Ved Sharma tak pahunch gaya...

Bhandara mein jo kuchh hua yadi use Ved Sharma ki “Kaal” naamak theory se joda jaaye, to baaki mass – killings ka bhi sambandh is se fit baithta dikhayi padta hai... Kaal kaun hai? Asal mein hai bhi ya nahi? Koyi praani hai ya kewal ek shakti strot? Ya kewal Ved Sharma ke mann ka bhram/uski soch ki utpatti? Kaal ki duniya jo creator arthat bhagwan ki “galti” se ya anjaane mein ban gayi, ek aisi duniya hai jise ab bhagwaan bhi samaapt nahin kar sakte! Aasan nahi hai is theory ko digest karna, parantu Ved Sharma, jisne apni saari studies aur rachnao ko Vedon aur Purano se derive kiya hai, uski baat ka koyi na koyi goodh rahasya athva mantavya to hoga hi... Saaf shabdon mein, kuchh aisa bhi hai is sabmein jo abhi tak chhupa hai, ya shayad Brazil (Amazon) ki kahani khangalne par hi saamne aayega...

Jo kuchh bhi Ved ke us adbhut kamre mein hua us se kuchh badi baatein saamne aayi hain...

> Book Of Hoax! Ved Sharma ki lekhni ke un panno ke anusaar, Kaal ki duniya ko aur Kaal ko khatam karna ka zariya Book Of Hoax hai. Par kya sachmein aisa hai?
> Book Of Hoax kya hai? Kya wo Amazon mein hi rakhi gayi hai? Agar haan, to kisne rakhi? Ved Sharma ko writings ki maane to “Bhagwaan” ne us kitaab ko banaya taaki insaan uske zariye Kaal ko jaan sake aur khatam kar sake.
> Wo Map! Ved ke paas wo Map kahaan se aaya. Un chhote – chhote tukdon par gadhe gaye wo letters, jinka ek kram Hoax tha, aisi adbhut cheez ki rachna kisne ki?
> Hoax ke alawa jo baaki letters the – S,L,P,B,G,M,T,L... Inka kya matlab tha? Kya ye letters maatra ek chhalawa hain, ya fir inki apni koyi kahani hai? Kya kisi aur hi mystery ko darshate hain ye letters?
> Wo teeno books jinpar taala laga hua tha, unmei kya likha hai? Kya wo kewal wo source hain jinse Ved ne apni theory banayi ya kuchh aur bhi hai un kitaabon mein? Taala lagaya gaya tha unpar, us nakshe ke kaaran ya kitaabon mein likhi baaton ke kaaran?
> Grandfather Paradox, Time Travel aur Relativity, jaise posters ka kamre mein maujood hona seedhe taur par multi – dimensional kahani ki aur ishara karta hai, yaani ki Kaal shayad kisi aur hi dimension ki hakikat bhi ho sakta hai...

Btw. Shreyas saahab ne jab kahani mein darshan diye the, tab usne concept bataya tha us ghatna ka jo Aaruhi ke saath Mansion mein ghati! Uske mutabik Aaruhi ka Present,Past aur Future overlap ho gaya tha aur Aaruhi ne apne hi ateet/bhavishya ko Mansion ke baahar dekh liya tha... Time Travel aur Relativity ke ye posters usi kahani se jude dikhayi padte hain. Sahi maayno mein Ved Sharma ki theory bohot kuchh mel khaati hai un baaton se jo Shreyas tukdon mein batakar gaya tha... Baharhal, aapne ek reply mein bataya tha ki Shreyas Haunted ke emd mein Devil ki duniya mein kaid hokar reh gaya tha (abhi bhi nahi padha maine baaki dono parts ko )... Ye Kaal aur us Devil ki duniya ka bhi koyi sambandh hai kya?

Khair, Bhandara ki ye trip vyarth nahi gayi in logon ki, ye to pakka hai... Par jo kuchh jaana inhone uska use kar paayenge ya nahi? Amazon ka rahasya kya hai ye kaise jaanenge ye log? I don't think ab Brazil gaman kar lenge ye sab, possible hi nahi lagta, par kya wahaan jaane ki zarurat bhi hai? Amazon athva Brazil mein hi hai Book Of Hoax ya us jungle ke zariye kahin aur hi sanket kar gaya wo naksha? Ved Sharma kahaan hai abhi? Ye bhi ek bada sawaal hai... Sabhi 14 log gaayab the, kya kisi khoj athva investigation ke liye gaye huye the, ya fir tapak gaye wo sabhi? Ab dekhna ye hai ki is saari jaankari ko kaise istemal mein laayegi ye detectives ki tukdi!

Idhar Aaruhi football bhi khelti dikhayi di wo bhi ek dum professional tareeke se... Pehle bhi ek baar laga tha ki wo football khelti thi, jab shayad wo Aakash/Vishal ko dekh rahi thi football khelte huye... Shruti se baat bhi huyi thi uski us samay is baare mein, shayad!? Parantu Gagan ko apne saath kaahe lekar gayi hai Aaruhi? Itihaas gawah hai ki jab – jab koyi purush Aaruhi ke nazdeek raha hai uska ticket kata hai, kahani se bhi aur sansaar se bhi... Kahin agla number Gagan ka hi to nahi, achha hi hoga, Manpreet ko bhi oopar jaakar dekh lega fir!

Sabhi updates bohot hi khubsurat the bhai! Samajh to ghanta kuchh nahi aaya par fir bhi maza aaya padhkar ... Jab tak kadiyan judengi nahi tab tak kuchh samajh aana waise hi mushkil hai... But I think is Bhandara yaatra se shuruaat ho gayi hai sabhi sawaalon ke jawaab milne ki... Btw. jitni detailings maujood thi in updates mein, us se pata chalta hai ki kitni bareeki se likha hai aapne... Waise bhi jis tarah ye kahani badh rahi hai, saaf pata chal raha hai ki kitna dimaag lagaya hoga lekhak ne is plot par!

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Itne bade bade review ka apun kaise reply kare bhai... kamal hi pura chaap dete ho aap

BHai aaruhi se juda nahi hai.. balki aaruhi ki wajah se hijuda hai.. i guess dono ka matlab ek hi hai

Agar kisi ne dhayan diya ho shayad nahi diya ved sharma ne itni batein kahin lekin ek baar bhi kahin ye un logon ko mila hi nahi ki un logon ne abhi tak wahan research kya kiya? Koi to note hona chahie tha.. kch bhi nahi kiya ka abhi tak...

Ved sharma bhale hi sarkari duty kar raha ho par vo banda apni alag hi dunia chala raha tha...Isliye usne itna sab khoja hua hai.. ab aap kaho to ved sharma ki koi individual story lekar aye kya

Apki book wali baat ko humne sun liya aur use latest update mein utar diya hai.. jo book padi nahi gayi thi vo khol li gayi hai Aur hum nahi batayenge us baat ko ki kaun tha vo jisne ved se mulakat karawai

Bhai main khud nahi maan rha even ved ki batein to kahani khud neglect kar degi.. wahi baat hai na jitna samajh aya vo bataya aur myth ban gaya.. mostly chizen hamare around isi tarah to ghum rahi hai na? kisi ki understanding ko sahi bata kar pidi dar pidi chala rakha hai jo hume aaj sahi nahi lagti to bhi argument nahi kar sakte. Ved ki knowledge bhi usi hisse ka shikar hai.. actual fact to baad mein hi pata chalega....

Bhai ved ki batein yakeenan us book of hoax se judi hai jo vo khoj nahi saka aur koi nahi khoj pata agar shreyas wala kaand na hua hota to. Secondly, aisi books or dhrovar bahut payi gayi hai dharti par to kisi na kisi ne to rakhi hi hogi Aur rahi baat un letters ki to koi bhi map itni asani se apna rasta nahi deta ... baki bache words ka koi kaam nahi isliye ved nahi khoj saka abbhi tak... Vo books kya kaam ayegi ye to ab aage hi pata chalega... Kaal ko maro goli.. abhi jo apne grandfather pakda hai .... bas use hi soch lo kahani kya banne wali hai i think you can guess

Shreyas ne jo bataya tha kahani ka saar wahi se shuru ho gaya tha ki ye chiz actually mein vo hai nahi jo lag rahi hai... par sab aaruhi ke dimagi bimari ko sach maan baithe hai isliye koi seriously nahi liya aur lega bhi nahi is umar mein Aur rahi baat apke jawab ki to Shreyas aur haunted ka end kahani ki theme ko ujagar to karta hai par use iska koi rishta nahi sivai ek kisse ke jo main abhi bata nahi sakta par use likhne ke tym quote jarur kar dunga.. jinhone haunted padi hogi vo samajh jayenge...

Aapko lagta hai bina brazil jaye hi kahani ko sulta denge.. nahi bhai nahi... aap kya chahte nahi thoda adventure kahani mein aa jaye Thoda to banta hai... aur yakeen mano maza ayega kosish aisi karunga likhne ki aap log sach mein visulaize kar pao us chiz ko... baki dekhte hai..

Han bhai bilkul hui thi.. pehle supriya/megha ke roop mein aur baad mein aaruhi/shruti ke roop mein... football ka kissa to purana hai Hahaha aap bolo to tapka de gagan ko bhi

Bhai samajh to aa jayega in the end ... uski gurantee mein blkul nahi leta Baki aap ko pasand aya hume bahut acha laga... tahe dil se shukriya

 

[harshit1890]

आरोही का गगन को बुलाना उस वक्त भी मुझे अखड़ा था। ताज्जुब की बात है अपने बेस्ट फ्रैंड को एक बार भी जाने के लिए कहा नही और गगन को लेकर प्रैक्टिस करने चली गई।

भंडारा जाते समय बस मे जो कुछ हुआ वैसा होता ही रहता है और न भी हो तो कुछ लोग मौका बना भी लेते है। रचना की शाम तो सच मे रंगीन हो गई। श्रुति का भी दिन बन ही जाता अगर विशाल भाई उसके पीछे खड़े रहता।
जबरदस्त इरोटिका लिखा आपने बस मे चल रही घटनाओं को।

भुत प्रेत से होते हुए कहानी ने Time travel..Paradox...Black hole..Time...Speed..Galaxy etc के दरवाजे पर दस्तक दे दिया। साइंस का यह ऐसा सब्जेक्ट है जिसके बारे मे एक्सपर्ट की अलग अलग थ्योरी है। काफी कम्प्लिकेटेड सब्जेक्ट है यह।
जहां एक तरफ बस का सीन दर्शा कर रीडर्स के सेक्सुअल फीलिंग्स को प्रभावित किया आपने वहीं साइंस सब्जेक्ट और कमरे मे हो रही गतिविधियों को दर्शा कर हमारे रोंगटे खड़े कर दिए।
एक रचना ही थी जिसकी वजह से उस वक्त भी हास्य का माहौल बना हुआ था। बहुत ही जबरदस्त लिखा आपने हर्षित भाई।
एक एक घटनाचक्र को क्या ही बारीकी से प्रस्तुत किया आपने। एक बार फिर से निशब्द कर दिया।

विशाल की वजह से ही वेद शर्मा साहब की पहेली सुलझ पाई थी। चाबी उसने ढूंढा..बुक्स का लाॅक उसने ढूंढा...किताब के अंदर रखी हुई पर्चियों को उसने ढूंढा..पर्चियों के रहस्य का अर्थ वो समझा...H.O.A.X. और The Amazon Brazil जैसी छुपी हुई शब्दों को भी वही खोज निकाला।
अब पता नही यह उसके टैलेंट की वजह से हुआ या कोई इसमे भी राज छुपा हुआ है।

मुझे लगता है भंडारा का काम समाप्त हो गया होगा। भंडारा से याद आया , वहां की कहानी भी काफी विचित्र और खौफनाक से भरा हुआ है। क्या उस गांव का किस्सा भी इस कहानी से जुड़ा हुआ है ?
खैर , इन्हे तत्काल ही वहा से निकलना चाहिए। आखिरी बस चली गई तो पुरी रात उन्हे डर के साये मे रहना होगा।......और इस बार विशाल को श्रुति के साथ ही बस के अंदर खड़ा रखिएगा। रचना जैसी चरम सुख की प्राप्ति शायद उसे भी प्राप्त हो जाए ! बल्कि हो सके तो विशाल को श्रुति और रचना के बीच सैंडविच बना दीजिएगा !

सभी अपडेट बहुत बहुत अच्छे थे हर्षित भाई।
Outstanding & Amazing & brilliant &
जगमग जगमग।

Vo aaruhi hai... kuch bhi kar sakti hai
Dhanaywad bhai.. waise erotica likhna ab mere baski rahi nahi badi mushkil se pelta hun.. bina ye soche ki kaisa lage...
Chinta mat karo main janta hun ki aapko to thrill pasand hai sci-fi se... aur hum puri kosish karenge us suspense ko barkarar rakhe
Bhai bahut shukriya dil se.. last ke char update mein mene jo bhi likha kosish yahi kari ki jaise jaise kirdar hai uske hissab se kahani unhe justify karti rahi bas...

Bhai intelligent hai launda akhir.. engineer hai... aisa shaq nahi karo uspar

Hahaha... nahi samay e nikal kar pahuncha denge fikar nahi karo aap.. ab aisa kuch nahi hoga...

Thanks sanju bhai keep reading...

 

[harshit1890]

romanchak update ..ved ke ghar se nikalkar bus tak jaane ka safar aise lag raha tha jaise koi horror movie ka scene ho ,kya gajab likha tha waha pe writer ne ..

to meghnath ke mutabik aaruhi ke paas jyada time nahi hai .uska aakhri charan hai .
supriya kaha khudko aaruhi ne jisse chaunk gayi shruti Par meghnath ne saare sawalo ka jawab de diya ki kaise aaruhi ka aakhri charan hai .
ab amazon me jakar kya pata lagana hai dekhte hai .

Han bhai bas yahi kosish kar raha tha.. ki thoda horror pasnd aa jaye to... acha laga ki apko pasnd aya...
Ab bas wahan adventure hi milega ab sabko, thanks bhai.. keep reading

 

[harshit1890]

Shruti and her friends have exactly the same thinking as I said in my previous review but it may not be so. Meghnath has spoken this many times, Aarohi has less time or she is going to die or this is the last step explain it to him otherwise it will become his last time.

The face of the village is also strange, they are not doing any wrong inadvertently because the way you have described, it seems that something is about to happen or there is no story behind this village, just for our entertainment this scene has been created.

The story is so complicated that what is happening is not understood, we are trying to understand today's update but in the last update or say what is happening from the beginning of the story till now, I understand something I didn't come, Supriya and Aarohi, college secrets, secret meeting, Aarohi used to talk in mobile, now village has also been added to it and also death of loved ones, almost everything is not clear, we are just getting confused.

It may also happen that Kaal is Aarohi, there is only one character in this story which I frankly like and the writer is preparing to kill her. It is not right to trust Meghnath he came in the middle of the story and changed the form of the story maybe he is using all these to complete his work because no one has proof of his words except him Shruti is right, it is not right to trust.

It would have been nice if I had met Ved Sharma once before going to the vast jungle of Amazon. ​

Aapki aaruhi ko tapka de.. kya kehte ho...
Entertain to ho gaye na... bas wahi chahie aur kya chahie
Confuse mat ho bhai.. sab clear kar denge... aisa koi samasya wali baat nahi hai...

Wahi to karna tha.. kuch log shakal se chutiye hte hai par kaam alag hote haii inke

Nahi milwayenge ved se Thanks bhai

 

[harshit1890]

Hume koi matlab nahi kahani se abhi hum ganbru jawan hai aroahi ke saath setting karwao
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Theek hai sath mein patta katwa denge

 

[Aakash.]

Aapki aaruhi ko tapka de.. kya kehte ho..

Wo din humara aakhri honga is thread me hum hai Bas yaha uski wajah se ​