Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

श्रुति का कालेज कैंपस से मेंशन तक पहुंचने का जो वर्णन किया है आपने हर्षित भाई , वो सच में , कमाल का था ।
वैसे तो किसी भी लड़की के लिए ऐसा करना आसान नहीं होता , पर श्रुति ने गजब की हिम्मत दिखाई । सोचने वाली बात यह है कि श्रुति यह सब अपने लिए नहीं बल्कि अपनी सखी के लिए कर रही है । उसे स्वस्थ करने के लिए कर रही है । उसकी बिमारी की वजह जानने के लिए कर रही है ।
कौन करता है यह सब आज के इस मतलबपरस्त संसार में ! श्रुति की जितनी प्रशंसा की जाए कम है ।

जितनी मुश्किलात का सामना करके वो मेंशन तक पहुंची और वितृष्णा से भर कर विशाल को कोसी , वो बिल्कुल ही रियल लगा । कुछ काम मर्द के वश का ही होता है और अगर विशाल उसके साथ मौजूद होता तो इतनी ज्यादा परेशानियां नहीं होती । विशाल को श्रुति का साथ देना चाहिए था । विशाल ने गलत किया ।

आरूहि के व्यवहार में परिवर्तन इंकलाबी है । गंदे लफ्जों से परहेज करने वाली लड़की अचानक बोल्ड शब्दों का प्रयोग करने लगी है । इस अपडेट के लास्ट सीन में उसने मिमिक्री तक कर डाली । ये तो बहुत बड़ी पहेली बनती जा रही है ।

बहुत ही लाजवाब अपडेट्स था हर्षित भाई । हमेशा की तरह जगमग जगमग ।

 

[Big lund]

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" tumne kya socha tha bra mein condom chupaogi warden ko malum nahi chalega, Shailja naam hai mera har chiz ki khabar rakhti hun "

" par warden condom rakhna koi jurm to nahi hai? " jis ladki ko warden ne pakda tha vo boli.

" Tu mujhe kanun samjhayegi, aaj condom kal launda layegi mere hostel mein. Tera ek hafte tak hostel se nikalna band "

" lekin college ? "

" college ki chinta tujhe is condom ko latte hue nahi hui "

" warden lekin "

" agli baar mujhe ye dikha aur sirf tere pas hi nahi kisi ke pas bhi to pure mahine kisi ko hostel se nikalne nahi dungi, chalo sab jao yahan se " warden chillate hue apne kamre ki taraf badh gayi.

" ek number ki madarchodni warden hai "

" iska pati ise chodta nahi hai kya? jo condom dekh kar itna bhadak gayi "

" aisi aurat ka pati hoga lagta hai, ek number ki randi hai sali, sahi kehte hain ise hostel wale, jaisi gand wesi rand " apas mein ladkiyan baat kar rahi aur jab tak supriya megha niche aye bheed chatt chuki thi.

" kya ho raha tha yahan ? " megha ne char ladkiyun ki taraf dekhte hue pucha jinme se ek vo bhi thi jiska condom warden le gayi thi.

" kuch nahi wahi warden iska condom le gayi aur ye bhi kaha ki agar koi condom laya to 1 mahine tak use hostel se bahar nikalne nahi degi "

" condom kyun? aur tu condom ka kya kar rahi thi jaggu ? " jaggu ka asli naam Jageshwari Chautala Singh tha. Isne jab sab ke samne apna intro diya tha to hostel ki ladkiyun ne iski gand hi maar li thi iske naam ko lekar isliye isne apna naam jaggu kar diya. Thi ye punjaban aur us wajah se behad sundar bhi lekin akal kam hone ki wajah se ek bhi ladka ise do din se jada baat nahi kar pata tha. Megha aur supriya ke batch ki hi thi isliye megha ise janti thi aur supriya bas utna hi jitna megha ne bataya tha.

" yar megha condom ka ad dekha kal chochlate flavor vala to socha kharid kar dekhti hun ki iska flavour hota kithe hai " jaggu ki baat sun supriya megha aur megha use ghurne lagi " par warden le gayi ab pata nahi vo kya karegi "

" koi baat nahi main tujhe lakar dungi, stawberry wala, tu chhod warden ko vaise bhi tujhe to pata hai na ki vo "

" burchatti hai aur sonu ko apni gand deti hai "

" correct " megha ne jaggu ke chehre par muskan laa di thi. Vo use thank you bol aur condom lane ka yaad dila kar wahan se chali gayi. Supriya ne uski taraf dekha mano keh rahi ho ki kya chal raha hai ye sab?

" padai ke alawa tujhe sab karna hai "

" tabhi to hostel aye hai meri jaan varna padai to ghar se bhi ho jati hai. Lekin jo karam kand hostel mein hote hain unka to maza hi alag hota hai "

" tune warden ki warning nahi suni? agar usne tujhe pakad liya to "

" condom hi hai vo aise jagah ghusaungi jahan koi nahi dhund payega "

" kahan? "

" jahan lawda ghusta hai meri jaan "

" haramzadi hai tu, main jaa rahi hun, tu aa rahi hai na? "

" han bas ati hun tu canteen mein kuch order karke rakhio " megha vapis apne room ki taraf chal di aur supriya college ki taraf. Girls hostel se nikalte hi ek lamba corridor tha jiske us paar boys hostel tha aur college ke andar jane ka rasta unka usi taraf se tha. Boys hostel ke kisi bhi ladke ko is taraf se college mein dakhil hone ki permission nahi thi jiski wajah kuch saal pehle hua ek kand tha jiske bare mein supriya ko abhi tak malum nahi hua tha. Par fir bhi kai baar ladke apni mehbubaon se milne ke liye hostel ki piche wali deewar fank liya karte the jisme madad unki mehbubyaein hi karti thi. Supriya ne hostel ko piche chhoda aur vo college ke premises mein pahunch gayi. College ke premisis ke bheetar pahunchte hi uski nazar entrance gate par padi jahan kuch ladkiyan khadi thi jinhe dekhte hi vo samajh gayi ki vo charon ladkiyan wahi hai jinse vo pehle din takrai thi. Supriya ko waise to der ho rahi thi lekin vo wahin khadi rahi aur us taraf dekhti rahi, phir unhi ki taraf chalte hue ek kone mein jaa khadi hui jahan se chehre saaf ho gaye aur unki awazein bhi. " Tanu " supriya uska chehra kaise bhool sakti thi, college ke final year mein thi aur pehle din yahi use takrai thi.

" naam kya bataya tha tune apna? "

" ji veena "

" vagina ye kaisa naam hua bhala? " tanu ne mazak udaya aur charon ek sath hasne lagi. Samne khadi do ladkiyun ne nazre jhuka rakhi thi, vo behad ghabra rahi thi.

" tere maa baap ko vagina se itna pyar tha ki unhone naam usi par rakh diya "

" ji vag..vagina nahi veena " veena ne ghabrate hue jawab diya.

" acha chal naam mein kya rakha hai, vagina tu ye bata tere chuchiyun ka size kya hai, dekhne mein to ache lag rahe hain "

" ji vo vo " veena ne apne sath khadi ladki ki taraf dekha jo nazar jhukaye khadi thi jise abhi tak ek bhi sawal nahi kiya gaya tha abhi tak sarre hamle usi par ho rahe the.

" tu uski fikar mat kar uska bhi number ayega, tu apna bata chal " samne se awaz sun veena ne ek pal rahat ki sans li.

" didi vo.. "

" didi? main teri didi lagti hun sali chutiya hai kya? tujhe malum nahi ki seniors ko kya bolte hain ? "

" sorry vo galti se nikal gaya "

" galti se mera nikal gaya na peshab to wahi pila dungi, chal bata jaldi apni chuchiyun ka size bata ? "

" 32 B " usne fatafat se jawab diya.

" are wah dekh rahi hai komal iski jawani, pakka kai laundo se dabwati aa rahi hogi, chut masalti hai apni? bata-bata sharma mat " koni marte hue vo veena se boli.

" ji nahi.. "

" jhuth bolti hai apne senior se jhuth bolti hai, komal ise shift ke baad apne kamre mein lekar aa, zara dekhe ye jhooth bol rahi hai ya nahi, abhi tu jaa vagina shift ke baad milio "

" main sach bol rahi hun " veena ke sine par pasina tha jo fisalta hua uske top mein se andar ghus raha tha.

" vo tu nahi main bataungi chal bhag " veena ghabrate hue jane lagi aur uske sath jo ladki thi vo bhi lekin Tanu ne use rok liya " tu kahan jaa rahi hai? tujhe bola hai abhi jane ko? "

" lagta hai lesbian hai dono ek dusre mein ungli karne ka man ho gaya hoga " komal bol kar hasne lagi.

" lesbian hai tu? " tanu ke puchne par vo sar na mein hilane lagi " jaise gardan hila rahi hai waise lawda hilaya hai kabhi? "

Supriya ise jada dekhti use pehle vo wahan se hatt gayi ye in logon ka aksar ka kaam tha, abhi ek mahina bhi nahi hua naya batch chalu hue aur ye roz khadi ho jati hai nayi ladkiyun ki marne mein. Badi hi jaleel hai ye tanu maa kasam mera bas chalta na to isko hostel ke gate ke aage nanga karke tangti aur ek danda iske niche se dal kar muh se nikal deti aur fir puchti kaisa laga vagina mein lawda? Main bhi kya soch rahi hun, ye sab megha ka asar hai.

 

[GuptAbhishek]

Waiting for next update harshit bhai

 

[Satru]

Waiting for update

 

[prakash2piyush]

Agla update kb tak aane ki ummid ki jaaye bhai

 

[Ajahhshhs]

Kahani padhni shuru hi Kari hai . Hope ke achi kahani hogi

 

[harshit1890]

Update 72-74...

So, Shruti aur Vishal surakshit roop se us tunnel ya kahun ke khufiya raaste se baahar nikal gaye... Halanki, wahaan Peon ke aa jaane se kuchh pareshaani ho sakti thi but jis tarah se Shruti ne uska popat banaya wo uski samajhdari aur presence of mind ka ek example tha... Kahin naa kahin mujhe lag raha hai ke shayad Shruti is saari mystery ko suljha hi legi... Kyonki ab tak usne har step sahi tareeke se liya hai aur kaafi kuchh wo jaan bhi chuki hai...

Jaisa ke pehle hi saamne aa chuka tha ke Kalpana naam ka kirdaar kewal Aaruhi ki kalpana hi hai, aur ab is baat par Urvashi ki mohar bhi lag gayi... Jo Aaruhi ab tak karti aayi hai, wahi usne kiya aur Nimisha ka naam badal kar Kalpana kar diya... Beech ke ek Update mein Nimi naam ki ladki ka zikr kiya tha Aaruhi ne Shruti se... I think ke Ravina.. jiske baare mein Aaruhi ne kahani batayi thi, wo uski pehli kiss... Kahin na kahin mujhe lagta hai ke uska naam bhi Aaruhi ne badal kar hi bataya hai, kyonki Urvashi ko uske baare mein bhi koyi jaankari nahi thi...

Agar aisa hota hai to Aaruhi ke sabke naam badal ne ke pichhe ek theory lagayi jaa sakti hai... Shayad jin jin logon ke naam usne badle hain, wo random nahi hain... Har naam ke pichhe ek kahani hai... I think ke Ravina (Aaruhi's friend), uska naam Ravina nahi hoga but wo cubicle mein marne waali ladki ka naam bhi Ravina tha, isiliye Aaruhi apni friend ko bhi usi naam se imagine karne lagi... Shayad band pade us girls hostel mein kisi zamane mein Megha aur Supriya naam ki ladkiyan bhi sachmein padhti hon ...

Secondly, Aaruhi ke behaviour mein changes aayen hain... Uski tone aur harkaten kuchh kuchh seductive lag rahi hain... Kamre mein bhi ek aadh dafa usne Shruti se aise hi kuchh baat ki thi... I think jab wo us se Vishal aur uske intimate moments ke baare mein poochh rahi thi ... Aur ab “Bujha Dena” jise sunkar Shruti bhi hadbada gayi thi... Kaafi strong possibility hai ke Aaruhi ka jhukaav lesbian activities ki taraf ho raha hai... Aur mujhe lagta hai ke iske pichhe Ravina aur Nimi urf Kalpana hi reason hain...

Is beech Rachna ne bhi kayi dafa Shruti ko call kiya hai... Wo pehle bhi dari huyi thi aur ab lagta hai ke uske dar ki wajah se problems khadi ho sakti hain... Shruti ko jald hi us Gagan ki Shirt ka intezaam karna hoga... Khair, ek baar firse Shruti ne apni buddhi ka poora istemaal karte huye un files tak apne haath pahuncha hi liye hain...

Mansion mein us peon ka video bana na kaam aaya, aur ab uske zariye wo use blackmail kar un files ko hasil karna chahti hai... But ye sab aasan nahi hone waala, pehle to us peon ke liye bhi saari files ka jugad karna kathin aur fir Vishal ne bhi apne haath is matter se kheench liye hain... Dekhte hain Shruti aage kya karegi...

Is beech ek aur mystery saamne aa chuki hai... Vidhu se milne jaati thi Aaruhi, aur is baare mein usne Shruti se kabhi baat nahi ki... Usi Mansion aur especially “zac” waale matter ki information collect karne ke liye wo Vidhu se milti thi... But I don't think ke use zyada kuchh pata chala hoga, uske saath jo ho raha hai uska Rahasya usi kitaab mein hai jo ab tak Shruti padh nahi paayi hai... Khair, Vidhu ko Aaruhi par crush hai ye baat bhi saamne aayi, aur ye cheez us bechaare ko kahin maut ke munh mein naa pahuncha de...

Btw. Shruti aur Vishal ka Sports Room ka scene bhi kaafi badhiya likha aapne... Par lagta hai ke ab Vishal ko us aanand ki praapti mushkil se hi hogi, aakhir Shruti ka saath dene se jo mana kar diya hai usne...

Let's see ke wo files Shruti haasil kar paati hai ya nahi aur Aaruhi ka agla shikaar kaun hoga, I think agla number Vidhu ka ho sakta hai...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Apke andaze ko salam Lekin sach to kahani mein hi chupa hai.. Shruti alag kisam ki ladki hai.. Use kya chahie uski mansha ko pehle din se hi kahani mein batati ayi hai Baki to aap samjhdar ho.. Kahani crack kar loge.. Thank you bhai :hug

 

[harshit1890]

Megha is like me

To kab contact kar rahi ho mujhe

Behtreen

 

[harshit1890]

romanchak update ..aaruhi to din ba din bold hoti jaa rahi hai ,shruti ne bahar rehne ke liye aaruhi se madad maangi jo usne kar hi di par pehle maja bhi liya shruti ka gandi baate karke .

akeli hi hai aaj shruti aur apne romanchak safar par hai ,vishal ne bhi aaj saath nahi diya uska siway chabiya dene ke .
kya akeli us peon se files haasil kar payegi shruti ..

us ladke ki najro ko aaruhi ne taad liya tha jo nandini ke jism ko dekh raha tha lalach bhari najro se . par aisa kya kar diya us ladke ne ki thappad khani padi nandini se ,kahi touch to nahi kar diya nandni ko jawani ke josh me .

Kya hi kiya hoga bhai.. Tharak kai baar galti karwa deti hai jiska ehsas to pichkari nikal jane ke baad hi hota hai Thanks bhai

Aaruhi ka behaviour abhi bhi ajeeb hi hai... Uski baaton aur harkaton mein tharak saaf jhalak rahi hai aur ye Aaruhi jo is update mein thi ye wo Aaruhi bilkul nahi hai jise us Band pade Girls Hostel se Shruti/Vishal/Gagan ne rescue kiya tha... Kahaan wo Shruti ki boyfriend aur sex related baaton par use achha khaasa suna diya karti thi aur kahaan ab uski khud ki baatein, Shruti se bhi ek kadam aage badh chali hain... Agar hypnosis/zac ko Aaruhi ke Catatonic Schizophrenia ki wajah maan bhi liya jaaye, fir bhi uski personality mein is sudden badlaav ko justify karna mushkil hai... Khair, mujhe to ab bhi yahi lagta hai ke Kalpana (Nimisha) aur Ravina, inhi dono ladkiyon se judi hai wo wajah jiske chalte wo masoom Aaruhi tharki ban chuki hai ...

Idhar Nandini ko taadne ke chakkar mein ek launda apne daant tudwa baitha... Is baar par bhi Aaruhi ka reaction aur uske reaction oar Shruti ka reaction, dekhne laayak tha... Par ye raaz ab bhi raaz hi hai ke aakhir us launde ne aisa kya kiya jiske chalte suspend hone ki naubat aan padi hai... Janta jaan na chahti hai Harshit bhai ...

Police ki chauksi bhi badhayi jaa chuki hai aur aise mein Shruti ka Mansion tak pahunchne behad mushkil hona hi tha... At least, Aaruhi uski fake attendance lagwane mein to madad kar hi degi... Par kya pata wo khud bhi waapis us Girls Hostel mein naa chali jaaye ... Shruti pehle washroom aur fir Sports Room mein chhupi thi... Well, uska luck achha tha ke wo hawaldar wahaan se chale gaye anyatha jis tarah ke risk ki vyakhya wahaan ki gayi thi...

Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ke Shruti Mansion tak pahunch paayegi ya nahi? Agar haan, to kya wo Peon wahaan aayega, ya fir usne kisi ke aage apna munh khol diya hoga? Vishal surprisingly Shruti ki help ko aayega ya nahi? Rachna kyon baar – baar Shruti ko call kar rahi hai, Maybe wo bhi kisi musibat mein fans chuki ho? Let's see ke aage kya hota hai...

Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Hot maal nandini jaisi teacher se thapad kyun khaya hoga khud socho aap.. kya kiya hoga.. Bhai lamba samay laga diya ye scene dene mein lekin ab jald hi padne ko milega ki aage kya hua aur hoga.. Kahani jo main kehta aaya hun bahut romanchak mode par hai jisme samay lag raha hai hopefully vo next 4 update mein aapke samne hoga... Update mein samay isi liye lag raha hai bas.. Keep reading.. Thanks bhai

aisa hostel kahin chalta ho to hamen bhi adress de do Ham bhi pahunch jaenge yaar kasam se maja hi a jaega jindagi mein ,

Contact story writer vo apko atta/pata even aisi jagah se rubaro kara denge

बहुत ही ज्यादा हिम्मती और साहसी है श्रुति तो।
इतना बड़ा कदम अकेले के दम पर विश्वास ही नही होता।

अगले अपडेट के इंतेजार में।

Han bhai bahut himmati aur hot hai.. apko mil jaye to kya karoge uske sath... anyways...

 

[harshit1890]

romanchak update ..shruti ka romanch bhara safar water cooler se lekar darwaje ko kholne tak dil ki dhadkane badha denewala tha .par aakhirkar pahuch hi gayi shruti jaha pahuchna tha .

bihari ko ullu kaise banaya aaruhi ne ye bhi sochnewali baat hai aur dusri ladki ka aawaj sunke shocked ho gayi shruti .kaun thi wo ladki jisne madad ki aaruhi ki . ya aaruhi ne hi dusre aawaj me baat ki .
ab peon bhi aa gaya hai par kya wo files leke aa gaya hai dekhte hai .

Mystery... Hai bhai.. Aur yakeen mano yahi kahani ki theme hai.. isliye ise end tak yaad rakhna Thanks bhai

Aaruhi Clones bhi bana ne lagi hai ab?Wo bhi voice simulator ke saath?

Abhi bata dunga to aap kahani ki theme crack kar doge

श्रुति का कालेज कैंपस से मेंशन तक पहुंचने का जो वर्णन किया है आपने हर्षित भाई , वो सच में , कमाल का था ।
वैसे तो किसी भी लड़की के लिए ऐसा करना आसान नहीं होता , पर श्रुति ने गजब की हिम्मत दिखाई । सोचने वाली बात यह है कि श्रुति यह सब अपने लिए नहीं बल्कि अपनी सखी के लिए कर रही है । उसे स्वस्थ करने के लिए कर रही है । उसकी बिमारी की वजह जानने के लिए कर रही है ।
कौन करता है यह सब आज के इस मतलबपरस्त संसार में ! श्रुति की जितनी प्रशंसा की जाए कम है ।

जितनी मुश्किलात का सामना करके वो मेंशन तक पहुंची और वितृष्णा से भर कर विशाल को कोसी , वो बिल्कुल ही रियल लगा । कुछ काम मर्द के वश का ही होता है और अगर विशाल उसके साथ मौजूद होता तो इतनी ज्यादा परेशानियां नहीं होती । विशाल को श्रुति का साथ देना चाहिए था । विशाल ने गलत किया ।

आरूहि के व्यवहार में परिवर्तन इंकलाबी है । गंदे लफ्जों से परहेज करने वाली लड़की अचानक बोल्ड शब्दों का प्रयोग करने लगी है । इस अपडेट के लास्ट सीन में उसने मिमिक्री तक कर डाली । ये तो बहुत बड़ी पहेली बनती जा रही है ।

बहुत ही लाजवाब अपडेट्स था हर्षित भाई । हमेशा की तरह जगमग जगमग ।

Never judge anyone just with seeing his or her Baki to apki shradha hai.. shruti is darling Mimrici bhai.. vo to room mein thi aur awaz bathroom se ayi thi jise to bihari ne bhi suna tha... Thanks bhai

Waiting for next update harshit bhai

Waiting for update

Agla update kb tak aane ki ummid ki jaaye bhai

Kahani padhni shuru hi Kari hai . Hope ke achi kahani hogi

Jald hi....