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Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

harshit1890

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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जब से सुप्रिया हास्टल आई है तब से उसके साथ अजीब अजीब तरह की घटनाएं घटित हो रही है । पहले ही दिन तन्नु से मुलाकात फिर उसका झाड़ियों के पीछे खंडहर नुमा हवेली में पहुंच जाना । कुछ दिनों बाद तन्नु के सिक्रेट कमरे में हुआ उसके साथ हादशा फिर वहां से उसी खंडहर तक फिर से पहुंच जाना । वहां पर उसे किसी की मौजूदगी का आभास होना । और फिर ड्रामेटिक तरीके से मेधा और आकाश का वहां पहुंच कर उसे बेहोशी के हालात में होस्टल तक लाना ।

और अब स्टोर रूम की घटनाएं ..... सुप्रिया का सोनु को तलाश करते हुए स्टोर रूम पहुंचना... कमरे में किसी का न पाया जाना... स्टोर रूम के दुसरे सिरे पर दरवाजे में ताले का न पाया जाना और फिर कुछ देर बाद वहां ताले का लगा होना.... कमरे का लाइट अपने आप बंद हो जाना...मेन दरवाजे का बंद होना और एक बार फिर से कमरे में फंस जाना...सोनु का बाहर से दरवाजा खोलना.... स्टोर रूम के अंदर सामानों का दो मिनट के भीतर ही बिखरा पड़ा होना... कोई चिपचिपा सा बदबूदार पदार्थ का होना ।

कोई तो है जो सुप्रिया के पीछे पड़ा हुआ है । लेकिन क्यों ? क्या इन सबों के पीछे उसका अतीत है ?

इसके बाद मेधा का कैरेक्टर.... जानते बुझते हुए भी उसने सुप्रिया से ऐसा क्यों कहा कि उसे उसके मोबाइल के बारे में पता नहीं है कि वो तन्नु के सिक्रेट कमरे में छुट गया है ।
सुप्रिया ने तो उसे वहां की सारी घटनाएं सुनाई थी ।
उसका कभी भी सुप्रिया का फोन पिक अप नहीं करना भी उसके कैरेक्टर को संदिग्ध बनाता है ।

सुप्रिया और मेधा जिस हास्टल में रहती हैं वो शायद चार तल्लों का बना हुआ है । सबसे उपरी तल्ले पर उन दोनों का कमरा है और पहले तल्ले पर मेस , हाॅल और काॅमन बाथरूम बना हुआ है ।
और मुझे लगता है कि हास्टल से बाहर जाने के लिए कोई दूसरा भी खुफिया रास्ता है जो शायद स्टोर रूम के अंदर होना चाहिए ।

वो जब टी वी बंद करके बाथरूम जाती है तो दुबारा फिर से टी वी चालु हो जाती है और इस बार उसमें से उस बाथरूम की लाइव पिक्चरें आनी लगती है जिसमें सुप्रिया गई थी ।
( शायद ये सोनु की हरकतें होंगी मगर क्या उसे गर्ल्स हॉस्टल में रात में रहने की इजाजत है ? या हास्टल में रहने वाली किसी लड़की की करतुत है या हो सकता है कि ब्लैकमेलिंग का चक्कर हो )

बहुत ही बेहतरीन सस्पेंस क्रिएट किया है हर्षित भाई आपने । और लड़कियों में होने वाली कन्वर्सेशन के बारे में कहना ही क्या !
Outstanding update .... Outstanding story. harshit1890 bhai.
Atit bhi ho sakta hai aur khud bhi wajah ho sakti hai ya kuch aur hi khel hai iska... Ye to abhi kahani mein tay hi nahi hua hai :D Nahi bhai vo megha ne idea diya tha supriya ko aisa kehne ke liye taki uspar shaq na jaye ki wahi room mein gayi thi. Sonu hai ya fir kya raiyta hai ye to ab aage hi samajh ayega bhai.... Connection vo badhana hai aur... aage ayega :D
Thanks bhai :hug: :bow:
update-8
Warden to apni gundi nikli😋 drugs... Kaha main tanu ko ganjedi maan raha tha ye to uske bhi ek level upar hai aur warden in sabki head hai... Sahi hai waise, kab tak tanu aur warden ka character gali-galauch aur dabangayi me rahta.. Ye angle maza aayega aur kaand bhi badhiya honge.....
Is cillege ki sb ladkiya, aurat lesob hai... 😁 kahi supriya ko akele dekh warden ka mann naa dop jaaye... Aur yadi tanu hui toh wo tobde hee degi dan dana ke...👌
Megha's Assumptions...🥴 ee to sochti bhi hai mujhe to laga tha ki pure chuddakkad hai :D upar se test ki tension...
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Aur te kya :wtf: Sunayana mam bina padhaye test le rahi hai.. Aisa same concept humri ishtory me bhi baad me aaya Gupta ji ke through...🤣 matlab is prajati ke teachers bahut hai apne desh me jo bina padhaye test lete hai aur sawal karne pe yaa to complain ya fir mashak dete hai sawal karne waale ko😁 par yaha to sunaina mam apne jisme se maarti hai....
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Noice Update bhayaa.......
Warden tabhi to set ho gayi tanu se dono hi ek jaisi hai :laugh: Vo aisi hai.. Pagal laundiya..... Hn bhai mein wahan padh raha tha... wahan suniyana hai yahan sunaina hai bas :D Bhari padi hai aisi adhaypakayein... :D Thanks gyani bhai :bow:
 
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Vo bhale hi megha ko kehti thi ki use in sab lafdon mein nahi padna lekin apne sath hue pehle din ke hadse ke baad vo chahti thi ki tanu sabke samne use maffi mange.
Haan lekin mafi kis baat ki maange Tanu wo kand adhura hai... Aadhe kand ke baad hi scene canteen me chala aaya tha...

Waise Supriya jo pahle din aayi thi... Wo issi devil gate ke ander aayi thi kya... Kya ye wahi khandhar ke ander wala kamra hai :?:
 

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Update ~~ 6

Kamre ki halat bhar-bhara chuki thi, isliye uska istemal ab nahi kiya jata tha. Is kamre ki charcha hostel mein tanu ke sath kafi charchit mein thi aur har hostel mein rehne wala fresher iski kahani se vakif tha. Tanu jab bhi kisi ladki ko wahan bulati thi to uski bahut buri tarah se ragging li jati thi ye baat har koi janta tha lekin aaj tak koi bhi hostel ki ladki us kamre mein nahi gayi thi isliye kisi ko malum nahi tha ki vo wahan un ladkiyun ke sath kya karti hai. Itna hi nahi tanu aur uska group wahan ragging ke dar ke piche kya kya karti hai iska bhi chitta hostel mein famous tha, uska boyfriend tha jiske sath vo wahin par sex karti thi jab tak vo is college mein raha. Vo use do saal senior tha aur jab tak vo college mein raha tanu ko usi kamre mein choda karta tha. Uske jate-jate vo tanu apni hi tarah ke har shauk sikha gaya tha daru, drugs aur dahamekdar sex. Ladka ho ya ladki tanu ko hambistar hone ke liye gender ki jarurat nahi thi. Vo apni room partner komal ke sath last year farewell ke dauran college ke ek kamre mein hi nange paye gaye the. Har teacher ke liye tanu badnam ladki thi par hostel mein uski bahut izat thi kyun ki hostel ki sabhi samsyaon ka hal uske pas hota tha. Koi bhi ladki uske pas samsya lekar jati to use madad jarur milti badle mein jo bhi dena padta ho vo sirf us ladki aur tanu ke bich hi rehta tha. Inhi sab ki wajah se tanu popular hai aur megha mujhe aisa bane ke liye keh rahi hai. Ab kya main iski tarah ban jaun aur khuleaam besharami bikhar dun? Mere ghar par shaq bhi hua na to meri maa wapis bula legi ya hostel se nikalwa degi. Supriya khud se baat karte hue us kamre tak ja pahunchi jiska naam tanu ne Devil's Gate rakha hua tha. Supriya ne dur se hi lal paint se is naam ko padhte hue dekha aur fir dabbe paun aage se jane ki jagah piche ki taraf aa gayi. Kamra itna badha nahi tha par han jo kaam usko karne the uske liye kafi badha tha. Din ke samay bhi wahan as pas koi nahi tha. Supriya ne ek dafa wahan bani jalidar khidki se andar jhanka to use koi nahi dikha. " koi nahi hai " usne apne panje niche kiye aur deewar ke sahare khadi ho gayi " lagta hai koi nahi ayega, vo ladkiyan to kab ki college ke bich se hi nikal gayi hogi. Main bhi pagal hun jo unke chakar mein yahan aa gayi " kuch der supriya wahin khadi rahi.

Sochte hue usne ek baar dubara kamre ke charaon taraf jakar dekha ki koi is taraf to nahi aa raha aur fir kamre ke darwaje par aa khadi hui. Use laga to yahi tha ki darwaje par tala hoga lekin umeed se pare darwaje par koi tala nahi tha shayad yahan kaun ayega ye soch kar ise band nahi rakhte the par? Supriya ne jada na sochte hue kunda hataya aur andar ghus gayi taki koi use bahar wahan khada na dekh le. Andar ghuste hi ek ajeeb si gandh uski naak mein chadh gayi. Supriya ne kiwad ko dhala aur andar dekhne lagi. Ek purani table aur do jali wali kursi jaisi school staff room mein hua karti thi jisme se safed dhagge bich-bich mein se khul hui thi. Supriya thoda aage aur kamre ke bhitar ghus ayi. Bhitar wahi jalidar ekmatr khidki thi jise andar roshni aa rahi thi uske alawa roshni ka koi dusra sotr wahan dikh nahi raha tha, hoga bhi to supriya ne use dekhna sahi nahi samjha. Vo bhitar ayi table ke piche ek almari padi thi aur uske piche kitabon aur filon ka dher pada tha jispar mitti jami hui thi. Supriya ne ek nazar un kitabon par dali aur fir almari ka kunda pakad kar use piche ki taraf khincha par vo nahi khuli. Kamra khula tha par almari band thi ho na ho sara saman tanu iske andar rakhti hogi tabhi lock kar rakha hai. Supriya ko jigasya thi ki andar kaun sa saman tanu ne chupa rakha hai taki vo uspar kabza karke usko sabak sikha sakhe. Vo bhale hi megha ko kehti thi ki use in sab lafdon mein nahi padna lekin apne sath hue pehle din ke hadse ke baad vo chahti thi ki tanu sabke samne use maffi mange. " popular hone ke liye badan nahi dimag dikhana padta hai " supriya ne almari ka kunda fir khincha lekin vo band thi isliye puri tarah se nahi khul rahi thi. Purani hone ki wajah se lock dhilla to ho raha tha khinchne par lekin khul nahi raha tha. Supriya janti thi thoda aur zor lagane par vo lock tut jayega isliye usne apna zor lagaye rakha par lock tutta use pehle kisi ki awaz uske kano mein padi jo najdeek ati jaa rahi thi. Supriya ne fauran almari chhodi aur bahar ki taraf ayi lekin jis kiwad ko khol kar vo andar ayi thi use bahar jana ab mumkin hota hua nazar nahi aa raha tha. Kiwad ko wesa hi chhod supriya wapis bhitar ayi, uski sans achanak se tez ho chali thi. Kuch samay pehle jahan vo tanu se mafi mangwane ke bare mein soch rahi thi wahin ab use bachne ka rasta khojne mein jutt gayi thi. Tanu andar ati use pehle usne almira ke piche pade kitabo/filon ke dher ko hataya aur almari ke piche kone mein baith gayi aur dher ko apne aage kar liya taki uski taraf nazar na ja sake. Kiwad khula aur tanu ke sath komal aur kaamini andar dakhil hui, andar ghus kar unhone andar se kiwad par kundi laga li. Supriya sab kuch awaz ke hissab se andaza laga rahi thi ki almari ke us taraf kya ho raha hai.

" is smell ka kuch karna hoga kisi din koi aa gaya to hum pakde jaa sakte hain "

" yahan aaj tak koi aya hai jo ab ayega tu jada gand mat uchala kar chal ja maal nikal " tanu ne komal ko jawab diya aur table par per rakh kar baith gayi. Komal ne uske kahe anusar tanu se chabi li aur almari khol kar usme se apna saman bahar nikal liya. " aaj thoda kadak banaio, sala dimag mein chadne ke baad kuch ghanto mein utar jaye use ab maza nahi ata. Kam se kam raat bhar rahe to lagta hai kalyug suhana " tanu ne muskurate hue kaha to komal bhi muskurate hue goliyun ko lakdi ke chote tukde se pichka kar uska powder banane lagi.

" vo dono ladkiyan jo subah pakdi thi, bich mein hi rafu chakar ho gayi " kaamini ek taraf cigrate ke andar ka masala bahar nikalte hue boli.

" chindi thi vo to, kachi ek dum, unke sath kuch maza nahi ata. Acha hua nahi ayi varna time hi kharab karti. Hostel mein hai ek do maal jinhe masla jaa sakta hai unko apne ade par lana padega ek din " tanu kursi ko aage piche karte hue boli.

" freshers mein ek item ayi hai, Jaggu, usko adde par lana banta hai. Condom ko bra mein chupa kar laa rahi thi sali kaisi kaisi chutiya ladki hoti hai aur uppar se warden ne pakad liya vo alag to kehti ki ad mein dekha tha choclate flavour isliye lekar ayi " kaamini hanste hue boli.

" acha to ab agli baar usko hi la kar condom chakhate hain vo bhi chochlate flavour " tanu bhi hans di.

" bahut din se vaise bhi li nahi hai kisi ki ache se aur barso ho gaye is kamre mein kuch kiye hue tanu " komal ne powder bana liya tha aur us powder mein cigrate ka masala mila kar use ache se milane mein jutt gayi thi.

" is kamre mein kuch bhi karne ka haq sirf mera hai " tanu ne komal ka chehra pakda aur apne karib karte hue boli. Komal janti thi ki tanu ke liye is kamre ka kya matlab hai. Vo sorry bolti use pehle tanu ne uske honth chumme aur hatte waqt uspar dant gada diye " maal bana " Komal ne honth par aye khoon ko jeebh se chatta aur maal ko ache se mix karke kaamini ko ishara kar diya. Kaamini ne us masale ko utha kar cigrate mein bharna shuru kiya aur use ache se bhar kar cigrate tanu ki taraf badha di. Tanu ne muh mein cigrate ghusai aur komal ne lighter se usko jala dia. Tanu ne ek lamba kasht bhari aur uske ehsas ko apne sharir ke andar tak ghusaya aur cigrate hata kar ek lambi funk chhodi jiska dhuain kamre mein felh gaya. Agar waqt rehte supriya apni naak ko top se nahi chupati to khans padti.

" aahhh-hhh jannat sali yahi hai. Chut mein lawda aur muh mein maal ise badh kar kuch nahi hai " tanu ki ankhein nashe mein adhi band ho chuki thi. Usne vapis cigrate muh se lagayi aur is baar bhi utna hi lamba kasht khincha jiske baad jaise uske sharir se jaan hi chali gayi ho. Vo kursi par hi felh gayi, dhuain dhire-dhire uske muh se nikal raha tha aur ab usme ise jada takat nahi thi. Komal ne uske hath se cigratte li aur ek kasht lagate hue usne kaamini ko badha di, dono ek hi kasht mein dunia se dur ho gayi. Kamre mein us banaye gaye maal ki mehak aur dhuain se supriya ka dum ghutne laga tha. Usko ajeeb sa mehsus hone laga jaise usko chakar aa jayenge. Kuch ek pal tak to vo baithi rahi apne aap ko hosh mein rakhne ki kosish karti rahi lekin kuch hi der mein uske sharir ne jawab de diya aur vo behosh ho gayi.

Vo kitni der tak behosh mein thi ye use nahi malum lekin jab uski ankh khuli to khidki se ati roshni thodi kam ho chuki thi. Din dhal raha tha aur kisi bhi waqt andhera ho sakta tha. Supriya ki ankh jaise hi khuli usne uthna cha par achanak use sab yaad aa gaya ki thodi der pehle kya hua tha. Vo kuch der waise hi baithi rahi andaza lagane lagi ki tanu abhi bhi hai ya chali gayi. Ek-aad minute tak jab use kisi ke bhi na hone ki anubhuti hui to vo behad aram se bina koi shor kiye apni jagah se uthi aur almira se usne jhank kar us taraf dekha jahan ab koi nahi tha. Wahan kisi ko na pakar vo fauran udhar se bahar ayi aur zor-zor se sans lene lagi. Kamre mein abhi bhi uski smell maujud thi. Supriya ab kamre se bahar nikalna chahti thi jiske liye usne kiwad khincha lekin vo nahi khula. " ye khul kyun nahi raha " supriya ne use piche ki taraf khinchna jari rakha lekin vo khulne ka naam nahi le raha tha. Usne khinchna chhoda aur khinchi hui sans lete hue sochne lagi " kahin bahar se kunda to nahi laga diya unhone " aisa sochte hi supriya ko aisa laga mano use jail mein kaid kar diya ho aur vo bahar nahi nikal paa rahi ho. Aisa sochte hi uski sans ukhadne lagi, use claustrophobia tha isliye jab bhi vo band kamre mein ya fir usko aisa lagta tha ki vo ek jagah kaid hai to anxiety attack ane mein der nahi lagti thi. Anxiety ke attack ki wajah se vo wahin baith gayi lekin vo apne dimag se is chiz ko nahi nikal paa rahi thi ki vo is kamre mein band hai. Sans lene mein dikkat badhti jaa rahi thi aur usko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare ki tabhi use apna phone yaad aya jo uske pas nahi tha. Vo apni jagah se khadi hui aur vapis almira ke piche pade dher mein khojne lagi jise khojte waqt usne wahan kagaz felha diye. Kuch der ki mashakat ke baad use phone mil gaya. Usne phone unlock kiya aur megha ka number nikal kar use dial kiya. Number par ring jati rahi lekin megha ne nahi uthaya. Supriya ne wapis kosish ki lekin is baar bhi wahi hua. Usne bina waqt gawaye tisri baar kosish ki aur kuch ring jane ke baad megha ne phone uthaya.

" helo megha.. main yahan fans gayi hun tu jaldi aaja, megha sun rahi hai na tu " supriya phone par chilla rahi thi.

" su..pr..iya.... awa...z.. nah...iii ....a rhi... " samne se kat-kat ke ati awaz par supriya samajh gayi ki megha ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai. Usne phone cut kiya aur message bheja, par net nahi chal raha tha isliye message nahi gaya. Supriya ne normal message kiya par vo bhi sending mein atak gaya. " network chale gaye " supriya ne network bar ki taraf dekhte hua kaha. Phone wala idea fail hota dekh uska dil aur zoron se dhadak utha. Use kuch aur sochne ki jarurat thi warna vo is anexity se bahar nahi nikalti aur behsohi ke baad uske sath kya hota use malum nahi tha. Usne kamre ke kiwad ko kholne ke bare mein socha par tabhi use vo khidki dikhi jiske pas pahunch kar usne jor-jor se cheekhne ki kosish ki " help... help... main yahan andar fans gayi hun, please koi madad karo " supriya chilla rahi thi lekin aas pas sirf jhadiyan thi aur wahan koi bhi shaks maujud nahi tha. Supriya ne chillana band nahi kiya aur kuch der vo yun hi chillati rahi, ise hua ye ki uski anxiety to kam hui lekin bahar vo abhi bhi nikal nahi payi thi. Chillane ke wajah se uska galla sukh chuka tha aur vo pyasi wahan baithi kisi ke ane ka intezar kar rahi thi ki koi aye aur is darwaje ki kundi ko khol de. Mobile phone kisi kaam ka nahi tha pehle network aur ab battery dead ho chuki thi. Bahar se ati ek matr roshni bhi ab khatam ho gayi thi aur din ke ujale ko raat ke andhkar ne gher liya tha. Andhere mein baithi ek kone mein dubak kar supriya baithi gehri soch mein dubi hui thi. Kab tak vo yun hi aise baithi rehti ye baat uske jehan mein chal rahi thi. Kathor ban baithi supriya ke ansu chaak aye aur vo subakte hue rone lagi. Use apni maa ki baat manni chahie thi aur agar aisa kiya hota to aaj aisa na hota. Vo man hi man maffi mangte hue roti rahe aur thak haar kar uski ankh lag gayi.

Raat ka andhkar aur asman mein chaye badal. Mausam badla aur tezz hawa chalne lagi, jiske sath hi zor dal bizli kadki aur uske shor se supriya ki ankh khul gayi. Uski nazar kiwad par thi jo zor-zor se baj raha tha mano koi bahar se use maar raha ho. Andhere mein baithi supriya ye mehsus karte hi dar gayi, dar ne use ghabrane par majbur kar diya, vo dabi hui awaz mein boli " kaun hai? " par jawab nahi aya aur kiwad bajta raha. Supriya apni jagah se khadi hui aur kiwad ki taraf badhi, use andar se dar lag raha tha par fir bhi jigasya purvak jab vo kiwad tak pahunchi tab kiwad ne hilna band kar diya vo shor khatam ho gaya. " koi hai bahar " supriya ne awaz lagai aur andar se kundi laga kar kaan kiwad par rakha. Vo bahar bhi jana chahti thi lekin use dar bhi utna hi lag raha tha isliye usne kundi laga di thi. Par jab bahar se koi awaz nahi ayi to vo kiwad se piche aa gayi. Ek baar fir zor-dar bizli kadki aur supriya dar ke mare kanp uthi. Bizli ki roshni jab kamre mein padi to use laga jaise koi samne wali kursi par baitha hai jiski wajah se vo bahut jada ghabra gayi thi. Bahar baarish shuru ho gayi thi aur uska shor andar tak ane laga tha. Halki thand badh gayi thi aur supriya ko mehsus hone lagi thi. Ek patle top aur jeans mein thand dab nahi paa rahi thi. Raat bhar aise rehne par bimar padne ka khatra tha lekin is andhere mein yahan koi nahi ayega aur vo bhi is mausam mein to bilkul bhi nahi. Supriya ne sochte hue apni nazar khidki ki taraf dali jahan dekhne par mehsus ho raha tha ki bahar baarish gir rahi hai. Eka-ek waha dekhte hue use khayal aya jo kafi pehle aa jana chahie tha. Vo fauran khidki tak ayi jo uski height se thodi uppar thi. Usne apna hath uppar kiya aur jali ko piche ki taraf dhakelne ki kosish ki taki vo tut jaye. Supriya ne apni puri takat jhonki jise vo jali hili lekin lakdi ki chakukat mein dabi hone ki wajah se bahar nahi nikli. Supriya ko samajh aa gaya ki ye rasta hai jise bahar jaya jaa sakta hai aur ye vichar ate hi sust pade sharir mein takat aa gayi aur dimag chalne laga. Use koi chic chahie thi jise vo us jali ko tod sake, usne wahan par andhere mein andaze se khojne ki kosish ki lekin kuch nahi mila. Tab uska dhayan wahan rakhe table par gaya vo ek aisi thos chiz thi jiski vo madad le sakti thi. Usne table ko ek jagah se pakda aur use zor se dhakka marte hue deewar par de mara. Purani table hone ki wajah se table ke payein hil gaye. Bas aisa ek-do bar aur, kaam ban jayega, sochte sath supriya ne waisa hi kiya aur kaam ban gaya. Table ka ek payan tut gaya jise usne fauran uthaya aur kursi par rakh diya. Fir khidki ke pas pade kagzat ek taraf fenk kar wahan jagah banai. Vapis aage akar usne kursi uthai aur us khidki ke niche rakh di jiske baad usne kursi par chadh khidki ki taraf dekha aur us lakdi ke tukde se us jali par marne lagi. Kuch hi mehnat karni padi jiske baad vo jali chaukhat se bahar aa gayi aur piche ki taraf gir gayi. Baarish tez padne lagi thi lekin supriya ka usko koi hosh nahi tha. Usne lakdi ka tukda fenka aur kursi par panje ke sahare khade hote hue khidki ki sateh par apne hath rakh kandhe ke uppar jor dalte hue sharir uthane lagi aur dhire-dhire khidki ke us paar bahar nikalne lagi. Dhire-dhire uske paun ne kursi ko chhodna shuru kiya aur vo hawa mein jhul gayi jiski wajah se uski ek per ki chappal andar hi gir gayi aur uski tangein hawa mein sidhi ho gayi. Supriya ka aage ka badan bahar nikal chuka tha aur khidki ki chaukhat uske pet mein chubne lagi thi. Usne thodi kosish aur ki jiske baad vo bahar aa gayi aur niche zameen par aa giri. " aahh-hhh " kandhe ke bal girne ki wajah se vo dard mein chilla padi aur ek pal wahin baithi rahi. Tez girti baarish mein vo puri tarah bhig chuki thi aur gili mitti mein girne ke baad sar se lekar paun tak vo khichad mein san chuki thi. Kamre se bahar aa jane ki khushi mein vo bhool gayi thi ki vo andhere mein ek sunsan jagah par baithi hai, achanak se asman mein bizli kadki jiski awaz se uski ruh kanp uthi aur use yaad aya ki vo galat jagah hai. Vo uthi aur bina kuch soche usi taraf bhagi aur bhagte hue vo jhadiyun mein ghus gayi. Use bas hostel pahunchna tha lekin andhere mein rasta samajh nahi aa raha tha jiske liye usne apni nazre ek baar ko uppar utha kar dekhi jahan use choti roshni dikhi jise dekh uske man ki chinta kam ho gayi.

Girls hostel bas kuch hi duri par tha vo yahi sochte hue bhag rahi thi, rasta kam ho raha tha aur roshni paas aa rahi thi. Supriya ke andar utsahah tha vo ek aad baar bich mein khichad par fisal jane ke baad giri aur use dard bhi hua lekin himmat use hostel jakar hi todni thi vo ye soch baithi thi. Usne ek nazar uppar utha kar dekha to roshni nazdeek thi yani hostel najdeek hi tha. Jhadiyan khatam hone wali thi aur agle hi kadam rakhte hi jhadiyan khatam ho gayi aur usi ke sath supriya ke chehre par chai muskan bhi khatam ho gayi kyun ki jis roshni ko dekh vo daudi thi vo hostel ki nahi balki us khandar ghar ki thi jise usne pehle din ke ujale mein dekha tha. Par abhi jo dekh rahi thi vo uske liye dil dehla dene wala tha. Us khandar ghar mein bani khidki ke piche roshni jal rahi thi jaise wahan koi maujud ho aur uski taraf hi dekh raha ho.

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" nahi.. main yahan dubara nahi aa sakti " supriya palti aur ek cheekh uske muh se nikal gayi.
:sing: Allah bachaye meri jaan ki, Razia gundon mein phas gayi

Kya najara tha... Aur kya fansaya hai.... Waise jald hi dekhna hoga ki ye supriya kahan ja rahi hai.... I can't hold my nevers ....

Milta hun aapse agla update padh'kar
 

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koi light nahi thi supriya udhar, tu meri bra ka huk khol, behnchod abhi tak to ladkon ne hath nahi lagaya aur ye bra ke hook atakne lage hain. Company ki lene par bhi ye haal hai, salle sab chutiya banane mein ek number hai " megha uski taraf pith kiye khadi thi aur supriya ki yadon mein abhi bhi vo khandar aur roshni thi. " tere se ache ladke hote hain unhe bolti to abhi tak khol kar na jane kya kar diya hota, supriya " megha ne gardan piche karte hue chillai. Supriya ka dhayan tuta aur usne megha ki bra ka hook khol diya.

Company ka naam batao Harshit bhai aur sath me size bhi bata dena kitna size mangi thi Megha ne... Apun case karta hai..

Waise har update ke baad Megha se pyar badhta ja raha hai... Dosti bhi nibhayi aur situation ko halka bhi kiya upar se koi sentu dialogue nahi.... "Tu meri dost hai... Tere liye ye karungi wo karungi"... Main aise dialogue ko galat nahi bol raha ... Lekin uske badle jo emotion usne iss mahol me diye hain :applause: ..

Khubsurat presentation kar rahe hain Harshit bahi aap apne atrangi ki... Jo hai to kafi samjhdar lekin samjhdari dikhana nahi chahti
 

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Dusri baat ye ki jo phone aate the subah ke 3 baje ... Rahashymayi call uska bhi jawab chahiye...

Iske alawa jo engineering ka gyan ka atyachar mujh jaise majloom par pel diya tha ek update me uss tharki teacher ke class me... Aur uss se ek update pahle wo ladke kise dekh'kar bhage the... Je bhi clear karna hoga...

Aap mere je sawal pahle page par kisi reserv post me dal dijiyega... Yadi abhi jawab dene ka mann na ya aage sab update me clear hoba hai to
 
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" supriya, supriya " gallon par hath se marte hue megha supriya ko hosh mein lane ki kosish kar rahi thi. " supriya, supriya " megha ne kosish jari rakhi jiski wajah se supriya hosh mein ane lagi. Ankh khulte hi usne jab megha ka chehra mehsus kiya to uth kar baith gayi. " megha.. vo ghar.. wahan koi tha... wahan koi tha.. " supriya hosh mein atte hi chillayi.

" relax supriya.. relax.. " megha use shant karne lagi.

" nahi supriya koi tha udhar jo mujhe hi dekh raha tha. Main wahan vapis pahunch gayi thi, mujhe us jagah nahi jana please mujhe hostel le chal "

" supriya relax, tu hostel mein hi hai "

" hostel mein? "

" han dekh tu apne kamre mein hi hai " megha ki baat sun supriya ne apne aap ko paya ki vo apne hostel ke kamre mein bistar par laiti hui hai.

" main yahan kaise? kab ayi? "

" main aur aakash laye tujhe. Pareshan ho gayi thi sham se khoj rahe the tujhe. Vo to aakash ne kaha ki ek baar hostel ke piche dekh le, itni baarish ho rahi thi, Ghabra gayi thi mein to "

" m...mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi aa raha " supriya dimag par zor dalte hue boli.

" kaise ayega yaad? mujhe dekhte hi tu chillate hue behosh ho gayi thi. Main aur aakash tujhe hostel tak laye vo to acha hai baarish ki vajah se warden apne kamre mein thi varna aakash ko dekh leti to uska murder kar deti aur mujhe nanga karke hostel mein tang deti hehe " megha hanste hue boli aur bistar se khadi ho gayi. Baarish ki wajah se vo pura bhig chuki thi isliye usne almira khol kar kapde nikal liye. " baithi kya hai kapde badal le thand lag jayegi to bimar padh jayegi aur teri doctor maa mujhe blame karegi "

" baithi kya soch rahi hai chal uth kapde badal " megha ne apna top utar jeans utarte hue boli. Usne apne kapde ek kone mein fenke aur apni penty mein ungli dal kar use adjust karne lagi jo tangon ke bich fans gayi thi. " supriya " megha ne awaz di to supriya hosh mein ayi. " kya soch rahi hai ? "

" wahan koi tha megha, us ghar mein "

" ghar? supriya vo khandar hai aur wahan koi nahi tha tu ab khadi ho "

" par light to wahin jal rahi thi "

" koi light nahi thi supriya udhar, tu meri bra ka huk khol, behnchod abhi tak to ladkon ne hath nahi lagaya aur ye bra ke hook atakne lage hain. Company ki lene par bhi ye haal hai, salle sab chutiya banane mein ek number hai " megha uski taraf pith kiye khadi thi aur supriya ki yadon mein abhi bhi vo khandar aur roshni thi. " tere se ache ladke hote hain unhe bolti to abhi tak khol kar na jane kya kar diya hota, supriya " megha ne gardan piche karte hue chillai. Supriya ka dhayan tuta aur usne megha ki bra ka hook khol diya.

" thank you megha " supriya piche se hi megha ke gale lag gayi. " agar aaj tu nahi ayi hoti to main shayad zinda na hoti " supriya ke samne hue hadse ki kuch jhalkiyan yaad ayi jiski wajah se uski ankhein nam ho gayi thi.

" supriya agar main launda hoti ya fir mujhe chikni chuton mein dilchaspi hoti to abhi tere ko pakad kar abhi tere mamme daba deti. Itne naram aur kadak nipple jo chub rahe hain tere meri peet mein. Hat ja sali kutiya ab kya jhadva kar manegi " megha ke kehte hi supriya use hath gayi aur apni gili ankhein pochne lagi " chal ab senty mat ho varna aaj ki is tufani raat mein humare bistar garam ho jayenge " megha ne apni bra ko ek jhatke mein utar supriya ki taraf fenk diya.

" chhi besharam " supriya ne bra ko apne uppar se hata kar wahin fenka aur na chahte hue bhi megha ki chatiyun ko dekha. Halki roshni mein uski khubsurat chatiyan gili hone ki wjah se jada chamak rahi thi.

" ladke to aise hi badnam hai aaj kal to ladkiyan bhi ankhon hi ankhon mein chod deti hai " megha ne maskari karte hue kaha aur apni penty mein ungli dali " ab to adhe chud hi chuke hain pura bhi chud lete hain, izat ka kya hai vo to tangon ke bich hi hoti hai " megha use niche khiskati use pehle supriya use dhakka dekar wahan se chal di.

" haramzadi hai tu ek number ki " supriya ne bina uski taraf palte apne kapde almirah se nikale aur towel nikal kar bathroom mein ghus gayi. Bathroom pahunch kar usne light on ki, bathroom mein lagi choti si tubelight ne 'jarr-jarr' karte hue kuch second liye aur vo jal uthi. Supriya aine ke samne hi khadi thi aur light jalte hi jab usne apni dasha dekhi to ek pal khud ko dekh dar gayi. Uske khubsurat se chehre par kichad ke dhabbe lage the, balon ka bhi kuch yahi haal tha aur kapde kichad mein dube hue the. Supriya ne top utarte hue hath uppar khincha to dard bhari 'aah' uske muh se nikal gayi. Usne apna top utarte hi apne kandhe ko dekha jahan dard utha tha to wahan dabate hue dard bhari 'aah' fir nikal gayi. Khidki se kudne par kandhe ke bal hi giri thi isliye dard wahan jada tha. Wahan dekhte hue supriya ne jeans utari aur aur fir bra penty bhi utar kar bathroom ke kone mein dal di. Badan par kichar kai hisson par lagi thi aur sar bhi gandha tha, nahane ke alawa koi aur dusra rasta nahi tha. Usne shower on kiya aur pani ke niche khadi ho gayi. Sharir ki mitti ke sath uske baal bhi jhad kar nali mein jane lage jisme pani bahut dhire-dhire jaa raha tha aur wahin ikhata ho raha tha. Supriya nahate hue is baat ko bhool chuki thi. Ankhein band karke uski parchaiyun mein vo khandar fir samne aa gaya jiske samne vo khadi thi. Uske mathe par bal padne laga, vo dhayan se us khandar ko dekh rahi thi, baarish zoron se gir rahi thi, roshni usi taraf se aa rahi thi Koi tha us khidki par ek sayan, ek chitr jo usi ko dekh raha tha. Supriya ki sansein tez thi pani uske panjo ko dubo chuka tha, vo sayan khidki par khada tha usi ko dekh raha tha, baarish ki awaz tez thi par uske shor mein kuch aur bhi tha. " awaz.. " supriya ke mathe ka bal aur gehra hua, use baarish mein kuch aur bhi sunai de raha tha vo awaz kuch keh rahi thi.

" supriya " achanak se supriya ki ankh khuli aur vo zor-zor se sans lene lagi " pani bahar aa raha hai nahana band kar, tujhe subah hi mana kiya tha mene " megha ke chillane par supriya ne fauran apne peron par mehsus kiya jahan takhne tak pani bhar gaya tha. Usne fauran shower band kiya aur pani se bahar nikal ayi. Supriya abhi bhi dari hui thi par hadse mein aisa hota hai lazmi hai, ye soch usne apna badan pochna shuru kiya aur baal pochte hue apne aap ko aine mein dekhne lagi. Kuch pal pehle jis chehre par kichad lagi thi ab uspar vapis khubsurti aa gayi thi. Uski bhuri ankhein, choti si patli naak aur gulabi honth, khubsurti uske chehre se lekar sharir ke niche tak thi. Vo apni ankhon ko dekhte hue chatiyun ko dekhne lagi, jo ek dum sidhi khadi thi, balon se girti pani ki bundon ne uske nipple kadak bana rakhe the jinhe dekhte hue use megha ki chatiyan yaad aa gayi aur fir ravina ki. Jise yaad karte hi uske chehre par shikan aa gayi. Usne towel wahin rakha aur night suit utha kar jaise hi uski nazar aine par gayi to vo cheekh padi. Karan do the, pehla use aine mein piche ek parchai dikhi aur dusri usi waqt light band ho gayi.

" iight gayi supriya, dar mat, main mombati dhundti hun " megha ne mobile ki torch jalai par itne mein supriya bathroom ka darwaja khol bahar nikal ayi aur bahar atte hi zor-zor se chillane lagi.

" kya hua supriya? kya hua tu chilla kyun rahi hai "

" andar koi hai, megha andar koi hai " supriya chadi hui sanson se boli.

" andar ? tere alawa kaun hoga? tune koi gufa banwa rakhi hai kya "

" megha mazak nahi kar, andar koi hai, mene parchai dekhi abhi " supriya ke bolte hi megha bhi ghabra gayi. Usne mobile torch bathroom ki taraf ki " kaun hai " megha chillai, supriya uske kareeb hi khadi thi. Awaz na ane par megha dhire-dhire bathroom ki taraf badhi. Usne pehle washbasin ki taraf dekha aur fir phone ghuma kar dusri taraf, jahan farsh par pani jama tha aur uski parchai piche deewar par padh rahi thi. Megha samajh gayi supriya ne kya dekha " koi nahi hai " vo supriya ke pas ayi " tune jo pani bhar liya hai uski parchai dekh li hogi. Khamkha chila kar hostel ikhata kar rahi hai aur vaise meri janeman tujhe pehli baar nanga dekh kar man dol raha hai mera " megha ne jab supriya ke nipple par ungli lagai tab supriya ko dhayan aya ki vo nangi hi bahar aa gayi thi. Vo kuch nahi boli aur megha ke hah se mobile khinch kar bathroom mein ghus gayi. " abe kamini mombati kaise dhunungi main? " megha bolti reh gayi par supriya ne uski baat ansuni kar di.

Bahar ka mausam bahut jada kharab tha, tez hawaon ke sath baarish ho rahi thi. Bizli dur dur tak nahi thi. Megha ek kone mein mombati laga kar hatti aur usne machis ki tilli palang ke niche fenk di. Usi samay bathroom ka darwaja khula aur supriya is bar kapde pehen kar bahar nikli. " phone dengi ab aap " megha ne apna phone manga. Supriya ko ab uske raat ke is andaz ko dekh adat ho gayi thi, niche pajama aur uppar bra, bas kai raat vo aise hi soya karti thi.

Supriya bina kuch bole palang par aa baithi aur megha apna phone check karne lagi. Aakash ka message aya hua tha " everything ok? " megha ne reply kiya.

" han all ok, supriya thodi dari hui hai "

" ohh, you take care of her "

" yeah i will "

" and "

" and? " megha intezar karne lagi. Aakash type kar raha tha, megha ne ek bar supriya ki taraf dekha jo abhi bhi soch mein dubi thi.

" that was fun, right? " aakash ka message dekh megha muskura di.

" yeah " megha ne sath mein chumne wala smily bhi add kiya fir delete karke message send kar diya " it was good "

" wanna spend some time more ? you want to? "

" sure why not "

" great " aakash abhi bhi type kar raha tha isliye megha ruk gayi " vaise tumhari friend wahan kya kar rahi thi? " aakash ka message dekh megha ko yaad aya ki ye baat supriya se use puchni chahie the. Megha ne phone lock kiya aur apne bistar par baithte hi boli " supriya "

" hmm "

" tu thi kahan? " megha ke sawal par supriya ne uski taraf dekha aur use dekhti rahi. Mombati ka ujala jada hota to chehre par chai pareshani dikh jati par andhere ne chupa rakha tha.

" main ... bas wahin thi "

" wahin kahan? " megha ek pal chup hui " us khandar ke pas? par wahan kya kar rahi thi " megha sawal par sawal kar rahi thi aur supriya se jawab nahi diya jaa raha tha. Vo use sach batati to dheron aur sawal ikhate ho jate uske man mein jiska jawab dena supriya ke liye mushkil ho jata.

" mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai megha. Mujhe nahi pata main wahan kab gayi aur kaise pahunchi shayad rasta bhatak gayi thi "

" agar rasta bhatak gayi thi to phone kar deti " megha ne jaise hi phone ka yaad dilaya to supriya ko yaad aya ki uska phone kahan hai.

" mera phone ? "

" han tera phone, phone kyun nahi kiya? " megha ne fir sawal kiya.

" tu itni puch tach kya kar rahi hai? Maa hai meri? apne ashiq se kar, jise sham ko karne gayi thi " supriya ne chidte hue jawab diya.

" chidti kyun hai? mat bata " megha ne bhi kuch aur puchna sahi nahi samjha " ladke jada ache hote hain kam se kam dusron ki laundiya bane par chidte nahi hai, balki uske naam ki muth mar kar so jate hain aur inhe dekho madad karne ke baad kya milta hai? Sahi kaha hai kisi ne, hum ladkiyan chutiya hi hoti hai " megha ne apna phone khola aur aakash ke message ka reply diya.

" you want to know? then ask her " megha ne aaksh ko mesaage kiya aur razai mein ghus gayi. Supriya janti thi ki usne megha se galat baat ki lekin vo sach nahi keh sakti thi. Vo bhi lait gayi par uski ankhon se nind gayab thi. Use chinta ab phone ki thi jo vo us kamre mein hi chhod ayi thi aur ab use is baat ka dar sata raha tha ki agar vo phone kisi aur ke hath laga to uska kya hoga?

Subah jab supriya uthi to megha nahi thi, use laga shayad bathroom mein hai lekin vo wahan bhi maujud nahi thi. Time dekhne par samajh aya ki vo late tak soti rahi aur aaj megha ne use nahi jagaya. Supriya samajh gayi ki megha use naraz hai, usne apne bistar ki taraf dekha jahan par roz ki tarah aaj bhi baal pade the. Usne palang jhada aur apne kapde lekar hostel ke common bathroom mein chali gayi. Wahan se naha kar vo kamre mein ayi aur tayar hokar kamre se bahar nikalne hi wali thi ki kamre ke samne usne jaggu ko khada paya jise dekh use tanu aur komal ke bich hui baat yaad aa gayi.

" tum yahan? megha nahi hai " supriya ko laga ki vo megha se milne ayi hai.

" megha se nahi balki main tumhe hi bulane ayi thi " jaggu ne apna chasma theek karte hue kaha.

" mujhe par kahan? "

" vo tumhe warden ne bulaya hai "

" warden ne kyun? " supriya chaunkte hue boli.

" kyun ka mujhe kaise pata, warden hi batayegi, usne mujhse kaha ki tum college jate hue use milte hue jana " jaggu itna keh kar wahan se jane lagi aur jate hue apne pajame ke uppar se apne nitamb khujate hue kamre mein ghus gayi. Supriya ko warden se pani ki complain karni thi jiske liye vo use milne wali thi lekin samne se bulane ka matlab use samajh nahi aa raha tha. Kya warden ko us kamre se mera phone mil gaya? Kahin us kamre ke liye to nahi bula rahi? Supriya man hi man chinta karne lagi aur fir kamre ko band karke vo warden se bina mile hostel se nikal gayi.
Confusion hi confusion hai solution ka pata nahi...... Kahani ka romanch badna shuru ho gaya hai.... Nang dharang aur atrang balaon ki adaa ke sath ye suspence ka romanch... Maza aa bhi giyo.... Bahut se sawal chhodte ja rahe hain ... Har update me lekin kuch aur sawal jod hi dete hain... ..

Ab to jabtak uss khandhar aur parchhayi ka raaj na khulta hai tab tak lagta hai har upadte ek gahra suspence chhodne wala hai... Upar se ju ke itne late update... Lagta hain khun jala'kar anemic rogi banane wale ho
 

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vaise nischal kyun :hmm: aur agar kahani mein hero nahi hua to :hmm:
ek kahani pe bichare bhole nischal ke sath bahot anyaay hua hai :sad:
ab jaise bhi karke bas aap nischal ko as a hero lijiye kahani mein plz :tantrum: :tantrum: :tantrum:
Innocent Nischal and masoom supriya jodi superhit :peep:
 
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are harsu saheb waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting :tantrum: :tantrum: :tantrum:
 
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