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Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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uth ja kamini kab tak soyegi, sapne mein koi le raha hai kya teri " kamre ki khidki se ati suraj ki roshni uske chehre par padh rahi thi lekin vo uthne ka naam nahi le rahi thi. " dekh supriya tu ab nahi uthi to main maan lungi ki tu kisi ladke ko de rahi hai sapne mein " usne uska kandha hilaya aur phir uski chatiyun ke nipple ko khinch diye.

Shayad hatkheli me lesbo bhi dekhne mile :D

mera kutiya hone ka pata nahi lekin kutiya hokar chudna jarur pasand karungi " megha ne apne dimag mein kuch waisa hi pose bana liya.

Ishhhh ye chhoti umr ki khwaishen :D

tera dimag kharab hai, aaj amavas hai, aaj nahi dhote baal "

Sirf sir ke baal nahi dhote ya badan ke kissi hisse ke bhi... Please clear karen :D

usi ne to aag laga rakhi hai, sala subah-subah hi puchta hai ki kaisi ho? ab isko kaise bataun ki raat ki gili hun aur abhi tak sukhi nahi hun "

Substitute kaam karega kya Megha.... Yahan dryer ki kami nahi hai....

main soch rahi thi ki aaj dutt ki class chodh deti hun aur tere liye canteen se kuch order kar deti hun, bata kya legi? " supriya gate khol kar andar ghusi to usne dekha megha apni chut sehlane mein lagi hui thi.

Ye girls hostel ke cum tharak hostel traning center mujhe jyada lag raha hai... Peon ki naukri ka jugad laga do hariya Kaka idhar to :D... Main sab ko safe traning deta rahunga :D
 

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Very nice update harshit bro.

I am the same writer who wrote Bhoot Bangla- Punarjanam ka raaz (the seducer) and Kaala Jaadu ( Abhay RAICHAND) on exbii/xossip.

I like your horror stories too much...
:welcome1: bro... Jankar khushi hui ki aap lekhni me mehnat karte hain aur ummid karunga ki apni lekhni ka jadoo yahan Xforum par bikherenge....

Baharhaal "Girls Hostel" par aaye hain aur update ke upar itni chhoti pratikriya... Ek din me 2 update nikale hain Harshit bhai ne...

Jo inhe jante hain wo yah mante hain ki ye update dene me nihayat hi kajus insan hai :D ... 2 update ko ek line me comment karna thodi si baimani hogi... :hug:
 

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Ek toh hostel.. Upar se girls wala :shag: usme bhi horror....(as per poster) Maja aayega bidu.. Pura update padhte waqt isi intejaar me tha ki kon marega.. Kaun marega.. Megha jab kuch der ke liye bina bole leti rahi toh laga pela gayi hai... Ya fir mujhe laga ki abhi supriya upar dekhegi toh pankhe se megha ki laash latki hui milegi :D par lagta hai megha khayi piyi laundiya hai, bahut door tak jayegi... Aakash ki uchayiyo ko chhueyegi...
Ashleel baate :sigh: par badhiya thi.. Maja hee aa gaya...



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choda gaya koyi lagta hai :roflol:
Hahaha... Abhi first chapter ke end mein ek twist hai jo apko pasnd ayega. :D Akash ki unchaiyun ka to nahi pata khud bahut uppar jayegi... Ladkiyu ke bich ki ashleel batein kaisi hoti hogi bhai... Meri mano ise jada gandi hoti hai dekhna aap abhi aage :D Thanks bhai :hug:

Wah phone ki ghanti bhi kya waqt dekhke baji hai :D

Tharki friend ki tharakpanti se pareshan bechari supriya :D

Btw friend megha kutiya hi nahi balki tharki kamini bhi hai.. chahe toh likh ke le lo :roflol:

vitamin B ki kami.. maybe protein ki bhi.. khan pan pe dhyaan rakhna chahiye..
anyway..
toh yeh supriya maybe is story ki lead heroine hai aur megha second lead mein :D
Par marna toh sabko hi hai end mein.. hai na harshit1890 saheb :D

had hai besharmi ki yaar.. yeh megha toh hawasi malini ko bhi piche chhod di.. :D
bechari supriya kya dekh liya :roflol: ab toh uske liye bhi bardast ke bahar hai :D


waise uski bhi kya galti joh aise megha chilla rahi hai . megha ko dhyan rakhni chaahiye in baaton pe.. :D
Btw lage ki dono kaafi close friends hai..
Waise kahani ki suruwat joh huyi hai lage ki thodi bahot thrill suspense bhi suru ho chuki hai readers ke liye..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab :applause: :applause:
Tharak pan to is jawani ka ek matr sach hai vo kaise nikal jaye :D Apko har kahani mein ek na ek kamini mil hi jatihai :roflol:
Lead koi bhi ho sakta hai kya malum, par koi to hai hi shayad koi bhi nahi.. :D Are khud ko relax karne mein kya besharami :D Hostel mein close friends bante bhi jaldi hai aur nikalte bhi jaldi hai... Thank you nainaji keep reading :hug: :bow:
 

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nice update ...supriya ko raat ko phone aaya par number nahi tha 🤔..uske baal bahut teji se jhad rahe hai 🤔..
kuch to raaz hoga in baato ka ..

megha to tharki hai aur sex ke aag me jal rahi hai 😁😁..lagta nahi hai abhi chudai ki hogi uski aakash ne ..
aur itna sex bhara hai ki darwaja bina lagaye hi ungali karne lagi 🤣🤣🤣.. aur bich me hi supriya aa gayi aur megha ka maja adhura reh gaya 😁😁..

aur ye shor kaisa hai ,lagta hai kuch kaand ho gaya yaa koi ladki ki maut 🤔🤔..
Han bahut se raaz hai bhai... Abhi to shuruwat hui hai abhi maze lo bas... Har college school mein aisi ladki hoti hai jo andar se behad kamini hoti hai... :D
nice update 🤣🤣🤣..to warden ko condom mila jaggu ke paas wo bhi chocolate flavour wala 🤣🤣..bechari jaggu us condom ko barabar check bhi nahi kar paayi ..
aur ye warden burchati hai jo sonu ko apni gaand deti hai par sonu ladka hai ya ladki abhi pata nahi 🤔🤔..shayad ladki hi ho ..

tanu aur komal to bahut giri hui ladkiya hai college ki jo nayi ladkiyo ki ragging leti hai aur ashleel sawaal puchhti hai ..

supriya ne jo tanu ke baare me kaha kahi wo sach na ho jaaye ...
Koi nahi hum use bina condom ke choclate khilwa denge aisi kya baat hai :cool: Ladka hai sonu :roflol: Ragging is a part of engineering :smoke: Thank you so much bhai :hug:
jab jagi tabhi savera :D
:D
Thanks :D
are harsu ji jaldi jaldi do tin bhoot,bhootni, pishas, chudail joh bhi mile bajar le aaiye is story pe.. aur kuch toh dar ka mahol bane

Great... Warden ho toh aisi :D

:wooow:
hey harshit1890 saheb in ladkiyon ko sadbuddhi de. :D

bichari jaggu kitni bholi aur masoom hai.. in hostel waliyo ke sang rahkar thodi muhfat ho gayi hai.. :D

baakiyo ka to pata nahi lekin haan in tharki ladki logis ki maharani maha tharki jarur hai yeh megha :D
Iski harkate dekh bablu kaka aur chorni meera bhi sharma jaaye :lol:

Kand..? Kya kisiko jaan se maar diya tha wahan pe?


Kitna khoon sawar hai is haaraman tanu ke dimag pe.. kitni gandi gandi gaaliya de rahi hai...:D
waise inki bhi kya dosh.. jab ek din Veena aur woh ladki bhi seniors banegi woh bhi wohin karegi jo abhi tanu kar rahi hai....
...
Khair.. ab intezaar hai toh bas horror thrill ki
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit sahab :applause: :applause:
Apko kahani meini kaise bhoot dikhenge... Abhi to kahani mein aap ladkiyun ke kamine pan ko janne uske baad hi to kuch hoga na :D Nah hoga koi kand jiske bare mein abhi koi nahi janta dekhne wali baat ye hai ki akhir itihas mein kya hai.Galyan to abhi ayihi nahi hai... Thoda ane do, thoda mauz masti hone do uske baad hi kuch hoga... :D Thanks naina ji :hug:
:D
Congratulations for new story bhai.

मुझे पता था कि कलाकार और साहित्यकार बहुत दिनों तक चुपचाप खामोश नहीं रहने वाले हैं ।
लग तो यही रहा है कि ये स्टोरी भी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाएगी ।
Thanks sanju bhai :D Are aap log picha hi nahi chhodte aur kuch na kuch aa jata hai :D Dekhte hain kab tak yun hi baithe rahenge idhar :D Ane ke liye dhanayawad :hug:
matlab yeh log character certificates bhi banati hai kya :wooow:
ye to mauz masti hai hostel ki :D
सिम्पल है नैन भाई !
तस्वीर देख कर ही लग रहा है कि ये हर्षित भाई स्टाइल जैसा ही स्टोरी है ।
गर्ल्स हॉस्टल.... लड़कियाें का कालेज.... कुछ सहेलियां तो कुछ एक दूसरे की दुश्मन.... कुछ उनके मेल फ्रेंड...और हास्टल के उपर काले बादल... मतलब सभी की मौत ( हर्षित भाई का स्टाइल ) ।
और लड़कियों की एक अनोखी सेक्सुअल लाइफ ।
बाकी तो हर्षित भाई ही कहेंगे । :D
Mauton se jada kahani ka koi bhi angle ho sakta hai tabhi is baar kahani Fantasy mein dali hai ise jada koi sahi prefix kahani ko justify nahi kar pata :D Han ladkyiyun ki lifeto hogi hi isme tokoi shaq nahi... :D Thanks bhai... :hug:
 
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गर्ल्स हॉस्टल -
एक लम्बे चौड़े एरिया में फैला हुआ कालेज... कालेज कैम्पस के अन्दर गर्ल्स हॉस्टल और उनसे थोड़ी दुरी पर ब्वायज हास्टल..... लड़कों को गर्ल्स हॉस्टल में प्रवेश वर्जित.... पर कालेज में को - एजुकेशन ।

शायद इस कहानी की प्रमुख भूमिका में सुप्रिया है और ये स्टोरी उसी के नजरिए से चलेगी । हास्टल में उसकी रूम मेट मेधा नाम की लड़की है जो कि उसकी फास्ट फ्रेंड भी लगती है ।

कहानी की शुरुआत रात के तीन बजकर तीन मिनट से शुरू होती है जब सुप्रिया के मोबाइल पर किसी का काॅल आया । लेकिन उसके मोबाइल उठाते ही काॅल कट गया । लेकिन उसके मोबाइल पर उस वक्त का कोई भी इनकमिंग कॉल नहीं था ।
( शायद यहां से सस्पेंस शुरू होता है )

दोनो लड़कियों की बातें उसी तरह से होती है जैसे अक्सर सहेलियों में होता है । जिस तरह से लड़के आपस में लड़कियों को लेकर बातें करते हैं उसी तरह लड़कियां भी आपस में लड़कों को लेकर बातें करती है । ये बिल्कुल नार्मल हैं ।

सुप्रिया के सर का बाल झड़ना.... शायद आगे चलकर स्टोरी का एक अहम हिस्सा बन जाए ।

गर्ल्स हॉस्टल है तो बहुत सारी लड़कियां भी होगी .... इनमें एक लड़की जोगेश्वरी चौटाला सिंह ( जग्गु )..... दोनों ही नाम अद्भुत है । जितना नाम इसका अद्भुत है उतना ही इसका स्वभाव । ( कंडोम... चाकलेट फ्लेवर वाली..... टेस्ट करने के लिए ब्रा में छुपा कर रखी है........ वैसे वार्डन शैलजा ने कंडोम ढुंढ कैसे लिया ? )

जब हास्टल की लड़कियां कहती है कि शैलजा का चक्कर किसी सोनु नाम के लड़के के साथ चल रहा है तो सच ही कह रही होंगी । ( लगता है इन दोनों का भी आगे महत्वपूर्ण रोल आने वाला है )

इसके अलावा कालेज की सीनियर स्टुडेंट - तन्नु , कोमल वगैरह को भी फ्रेशर स्टुडेंट के साथ रैगिंग करते हुए देखा गया । ये भी एक काॅमन बात है । लेकिन रैगिंग सिर्फ मुंह जबानी हो तो बढ़िया है , शारीरिक नहीं ।

शुरुआत तो काफी धुम धड़ाके के साथ शुरू हुआ है । और लड़कियों की बातें तो और भी ज्यादा धमाकेदार है । देखें आगे चलकर ये लड़कियां कितना धुम - धुम खेलती हैं । :D

आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट हर्षित भाई ।
 

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कंडोम... चाकलेट फ्लेवर वाली..... टेस्ट करने के लिए ब्रा में छुपा कर रखी है........ वैसे वार्डन शैलजा ने कंडोम ढुंढ कैसे लिया ? )
Warden nischit roop se gana sun rahi hogi.... "Choli ke pichhe kya hai, chunri ke niche".... Aur wahin se usse jigyasa jagi hogi... Ab jab jigyasa jagi to samne Jaggu mil gayi.... Check kar liye choli ke piche kya tha :D
 

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दोनो लड़कियों की बातें उसी तरह से होती है जैसे अक्सर सहेलियों में होता है ।
Itna anubhav kahan se bator liye 2 ladkiyon ke aslil baton ka :hinthint: Ya 2 bhabhiyon ki aapas ki baat ka anuman chenp diye Sanju bhai :D
 

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Bas 2 update
haivaan, darinde, kaatil bhoot yeh sab kab aayenge story pe... :hmm2:
waiting for next update...
Are aa jayenge, kya jaldi hai.. aa jayenge :D
:congrats: for new thread
Thanks bhai :hug:
Abhi apun ne padh dala dunno update ..... Lekin full comment aaram se karunga... Abhi thoda kaam finish kar lun fir aaram se likhta hun :yo: :yay: :yo:
Thanks bhai :hug: :D Aram aram se do writer bhi kaun sa fast hai :D
🥴🥴 apun sochela tha update-1 ki ending se ki koyi tapak gaya par yaha toh... Khada ho gaya... :shag:

Bhai ye girls hostel hee hai na 🤣🤣🤣😂😂mere ko jaana hai is hostel me :sex: bhale hee bhootiya kyun na ho... Turu lov :heart:

:wtf: ye kya hai bhai... Kab se is line me aa gaye :lotpot: sahi nickname hai btw... Vagina :shy:😜

First person pe based hai kya story.. Supriya ke angle se??:?:
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2 update back to back.. Hariya bhai full taiyari me hai. Itne mahine se taiyari hee kar rahe btw..
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College kiska hai.. Matlab padh kya rahe..? Wo shayad aage pata chale. Update full tharki purn.. Kahi koyi kami nahi... Ladkiya aisa karti hongi.. Aisi baat karti hongi..? Pata nahi par maja aaya padhkar.. Alag hee experience hai ye readers ke liye i think... Koyi love shove ka bhi prapanch hai kya😋😜? Anyway waiting for agla update....
:roflol: Jayega bhi bhai usme koi badi baat nahi hai.. hahahaha... bhai ab ladkiyan hi ladkiyan ho to vo kaisi hoti hai ye to janna hi hai na :D Are bhai mein soch raha hun ki ladkiyan kaisi ragging leti hai.. bas :p filal chapter 1 usi par hai, aage bhi rahega par kahani ki starting aisi hai ki abhi hi reveal karna pdh raha hai..
Are bhai tayaripuri kahan ho payi, bich mein to samay hi nahi mila. Par han kuch time tk to update ayengehi :D College ki padhai kya hai vo aag malum ho jayega par bahut common padi hai :roflol: Karti hai ... abhi to apko aur bhi padne ko milega vo sach mein khali samay mein yahi karti hai.. Thoda bahut pyarto ho jayega... :D Thanks bhai :hug:
:congrats: for Unexpected Dhaga ,je to bhutiyaaaa hostel lg rela hai ::runaway:
Bachke rhna hoga ise hostel se to hum to hariyali ki talash me aaye the kahi humhi lal na ho jye, andhere me nain11ster ji bhi nzar nhi aa rhe :scared2:
Paku bhai :ecs: sunelal shadi kar rahe ho :D Unexpected :roflol: bhutiya nahi hai :redface: Haryali hi milegi aao to sahi :D Thanks bhai :hug: aate rehna :D
Mai to comment par najar aa jaunga ... Ju read update ... Shakespeare sahab ki yaad aa jayegi... Jo kami udhar khali thi .. ladkiyon ki jabardast baat chit wo idhar pahleich update se jari hai :ecs:
Idhar baat cheet hai par bhai shakespear ka kya kehna uske mkable 1% bhi nahi hai ye to...
 

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Ek khatiya to meri book karwa lo ... Apan idhar se kahin nahi jane wala .... Pahle socha kuch to quote kar dun .... Lekin idhar pura update hi masala tha kya kya quote karta...

Haan baal jhadne aur phone ko ignore marta hun... Sath me wo Megha ka chhat par dekhna... Ye sab suspence to aap banakar 2-4 ko tapkaoge ya pagal banaoge ... Bus ek hi gujarish hai jis kisi ko bhi maarna usse pure sukh karwa'kar maarna ... :D

Are haan ek baat to rah hi gayi ... Ye update to Supriya ke naam se likhi thi, par mujhe Megha pasand aayi :D ... Mast ladki hai ... Waise lead nahi to side me bhi apne ko fit kar doge saheb to khushi hogi ... :D.. ladka ehsanmand rahega... :D
Bhai khat ki ya jarurat jab marzi aao jao aap roka thodi na hai apko :D Hahahaha.... Ignore kuch nahi karna masala to vo bhi hai...Chalo apki baat ko maan lete hain pure sukh se marwayenge bina kuch kahe bole.. :D Hahaha.. Megha mast nahi atrangi hai... usko jitna lapetenge vo utna khichegi... Apko fit kar dein :roflol: Baad mein pachtaoge.. :D Thanks bhai :hug:
Masala journey jari hai ... Lekin uss Jaggu ke karan nana us warden ke karan Megha ka chock ho gaye nali me ungli karke pani nikalne ka karkram atak gaya :( bura hua ... Iss warden ki to :chop:...

Kya hi kah dun lajavab update jari..... Maza aa gaya dono update padh'kar... Aakhir me story ki villan bhi najar aa gayi... Tanu ... :ecs: kahin koi chudail to na amawasya ki raat supriya par aayegi ... Jo tanu ko saaf kar de... Khair jo bhi ho... Apne to maze hai...

Kahani ke iss bhag me bhi ek chhota sa chhed dikha gaye... I mean chhotu sa raaj us college ke raste hai.. jisse aaram se aap bada karte rahna mujhe koi bhi raaj jaanne ki utni jyada utsukta nahi hai :D
Arewarden badi khadus hai, vo kisi ko na jine deti.. abhi to aap dekhte jao kam nahi hai vo bhi... Tanu villian ... maro fir use.. Villian koi nahi hai par ladkiyan apas mein jalti hai. :D Rasta hi hai sirf abhi asli rasta to ana baki hai, agle update mei apko malum ho jayega.. Kand to hota hi rehta hai.. :D Thanks naina bhai :hug:
Sapne me kahin wo mai to nahi tha :D ... Hariya Kaka mujhe ye sapna wala role bhi chalega :D
ho sakta hai yahi soch lo :shag:
Reality me 5-7 minute ka khela howe hai orignal aur foreplay ke sath puri raat... Je yahan fantasy likh rahe hariya Kaka to kahin kisi kide ne inhe kaat liya aur size shape aur hathiyar ki gunwatta ke sath khiladi ko maidan me utarenge to kah nahi sakta kitni der lekin tere to maze ho jayenge Megha :D

Epic :roflol:

Ye sala Sonu kaun hai jo pyase nal ke pipe ko ignore maarke sala kuwan ki pyas bujha raha...

I can help her... Mujhe koi aitraj nahi :D



:hehe: :roflol: :lotpot:
Bha fantasy isliye hain ki kyun kikahani ke kuch tatya aise hain ko fantasy mein le jati hai kahani ko .... Kya kare vo bechara kismat ka mara.. :D Aap to ab hamesha madad ke liye aage rahoge :D
Shayad hatkheli me lesbo bhi dekhne mile :D

Ishhhh ye chhoti umr ki khwaishen :D

Sirf sir ke baal nahi dhote ya badan ke kissi hisse ke bhi... Please clear karen :D

Substitute kaam karega kya Megha.... Yahan dryer ki kami nahi hai....

Ye girls hostel ke cum tharak hostel traning center mujhe jyada lag raha hai... Peon ki naukri ka jugad laga do hariya Kaka idhar to :D... Main sab ko safe traning deta rahunga :D
Bhai sar ke baal baki sab jagah hai to dho lo koi dikat nahi :D Bhai substitue bahut hai yahan bas dhire-dhire hi ayenge... Tharak sirf andar bahar to sab sharif hi hai... :D Han apka karata hun kuch judag fir dekhna... :D
 
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