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Fantasy " Girls Hostel " { Completed }

harshit1890

" End Is Near "
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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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" idhar aa aage... " lavanya ne hath se ishara kiya. Mene sabhi ladkiyun ki taraf na dekh lavanya ke bolne par aage baddi. Ab jo hona tha vo hona hi tha par jaise hi main do kadam aage ayi usne rok dia. " tu nahi, tere bagal wali.. " dhatt teri ye to aaruhi ko bula rahi hai. Ab ye mera hath raat bhar khinchegi aur royegi ki meri vajah se fansi hai. Mene ruk kar aaruhi ki taraf dekha vo ghabrai si meri hi taraf dekh rahi thi.

" boyfriend ki permission mang rahi hai kya jo uski taraf dekh rahi hai? " lavanya ke bolne par aaruhi ko mene hi samne dekhne ka ishara kiya aur fir usne vaisa hi kiya. Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki vo itna khauf main ragging ki wajah se hai ya fir iske piche koi dusri wajah chupi hai. Aaruhi do kadam aage badi aur mene lavanya ke chehre par raunak dekhi.

" tu to wahi maal hai jise hostel jana tha... hostel mil gaya tha na .... " lavanya muskura di. Aaruhi ki nazrein niche jhuki thi aur kal raat se lekar abhi tak gaur karne wali baat thi ki jab bhi vo jada ghabrai hui hoti hai to nazre jhuka kar apne kapdon ko kas kar pakad leti hai ab vo aisa kyun karti hai samajh nahi aya lekin bahut hi wierd tha uska aisa karna. Pata nahi girls school wali ladkiyun ke funde hi alag hote hai...

" yaad hai ya bhool gayi bata.. bata... abe piche kya dekh rahi hai.. " lavanya jab use puch rahi thi to vo piche mud kar meri taraf dekhne lagi thi. Ye ladki mujhe bhi marwayegi, abhi focus usi par tha wahin rehne dene ka tha bar-bar meri taraf dekh kar mujhe kyun gher rahi hai? Mene ishare se aage dekhne ke liye kaha aur uske chehre ke piche chupe dar ko dekhne ki kosish tak nahi ki. Aaruhi ne mere naakarne par lavanya ki taraf nazar kar li. Lavanya aage akar ukhdu hokar baith gayi, uske aur aaruhi ke bich ab bas kuch hi fasla tha isliye lavanya uske dar ko saaf dekh paa rahi thi. " lagta hai abhi tak vo raat yaad hai.. kyun... " lavanya ke kehte hi aaruhi aise vichar mein kho gayi jaise vo lavanya ki baat ko soch rahi ho. Ab mujhe nahi samajh aya ki kya hua tha us raat? jo ki ab janna aur jaruri ho gaya tha..

Aaruhi kuch nahi boli " dekh iski shakal dekh us din to chup-chup kar apni chut masal rahi thi aaj aise darne ka natak karti hai " lavanya ne aaruhi ke gaal khinche jaise kisi bache ki khinchte hain lekin pyar se nahi balki halke tez hath se.

" ye to apne hi hostel ki hai .. 407 wali.. " madhu boli.

" tere liye hogi.. mere liye to ye Aaruhi the scared pussy hai... " lavanya muskura di. Aaruhi ki nazrein jhuki hui thi aur main ye soch samajhne ki kosish mein thi ki chal kya raha hai?

" scared pussy? " saloni ne apne bag se cream nikalte hue pucha.

" tune kabhi dar kar apni chut masli hai? " lavanya ne uski taraf dekha.

" dar kar? " vo sochne lagi " dar kar to kai baar.. tujhe to mere bhai ka pata hi hai.. sala sautela hai par hai to bhai.. hamesha jhank tank karta rehta hai... behen ka lawda ek dum fit baithta hai uspar "

" tujhse mene tera randi rona pucha tha? " lavanya ne use ajeeb nazron se uski taraf dekha.

" main to sirf apna dar bata rahi thi " saloni ne hath aur gardan par cream lagai " oo vanya zara pith par laga de " apne piche khadi vanya ki taraf cream fenkte hue kaha jiske baad mujhe samajh aya ki jo ladki hume teacher ban kar yahan layi thi uska naam vanya tha.

" main tere tharki sautele cum bhai wale dar ki baat nahi kar rahi, main to us dar ki baat kar rahi hun jo andhere mein lagta hai.. awaz to ati hai lekin koi dikhai nahi deta us andhere mein aur fir.. achanak se do per dikhai dete hai... " lavanya ne aaruhi ki taraf dekh kar kaha to aaruhi ke chehre par dar aur jada badh gaya. Lavanya keh to mazak mein rahi thi lekin aaruhi ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise ye mazak na ho.

" tu us dar ki baat kar rahi hai jo us bhootiya hostel mein lagta hai logon ko " saloni ka top uppar tha aur vanya se apni pith par cream lagwa rahi thi.

" hostel nahi... wo bangla.. " lavanya iske aage kuch kehti use pehle phone baj pada. Usne piche ki pocket se phone nikala jo aaj kal ke trend mein tha phone smart ke sath bade ho gaye the aur style dikhane ke tarike bhi badal gaye the. " han bol.. han.. abhi? isi waqt? tujhse ek kaam nahi hota bhatrichod.. han theek hai.. is baar tera katega paisa.. chal rakh " lavanya ne phone cut krke wapis piche wali pocket mein dala aur apni jagah se khadi ho gayi. " suhagraat ke sez par sajne nahi jaa rahi hai tu, college ke baad chudne jaa rahi hai aur agar chudna ho na to saman lapet le.. principal aa raha hai 2 minute mein "
lavanya ke bolte hi saloni ne vanya ko roka aur top niche kiya aur failaya saman batorne lagi.

" aur tum sab.. apne apne padhai ke karyale mein chup chaap pravesh kar le aur kisi ko bhi apna gyaan na bantte kyun ki jisne bhi aisa karne ki kosish ki vo bhale hi hostel wali ho ya bahar wali aisi gaand todi jayegi ki bistar par garam hone ke baad kabhi thandi nahi ho paogi.. " madhu ki baat sun kar man to kiya hasne ka kyun ki vo bikul bhi lavanya ke tone se match nahi kar rahi thi par kisi tarah mene apne aap ko roka. Madhu to bol kar nikli aur us gate se jiske bahar vo peon baitha tha jo bahar se band pada tha. Madhu ne wahan do baar hath mara aur bahar se khulne ki awaz ayi. Andar ghuste hi malum tha ki vo mila hua hai lekin abhi samajh aya ki phone bhi usi ka tha.

" itne short notice mein bataoge to kaise chalegaa.. bhatyacharyaaaji... " madhu ne khinchte hue kaha to vo apne dant dikhane laga. Mujhe ye sab dekhne mein takleef ho rahi thi kyun ki meri nazre tedi thi aur meri nazar aaruhi ki taraf nahi thi jabki uski taraf honi chahie thi. Main us peon ke expression ko dekhna mein itna tedi hui ki mera balance bigda vo to acha hua bagal se ek ladki nikal kar bahar ki taraf jaa rahi thi mera sharir par uspar gira aur use bach gayi aur tab dhayan aaruhi par gaya.

" ek mukalat dubara banti hai... sehgalji.. jaldi milenge.. " lavanya ne aaruhi ki kamar ko kas kar pakda hua tha. Aaruhi ko dard ho raha hoga ye main dekh paa rahi thi aur is baar mujhe bilkul acha nahi laga. Abhi tak jo hua tha uske bare mein mujhe malum nahi tha lekin lavanya ne ye acha nahi kiya tha. Uske baad vo charon to chale gaye aur hume dusre gate se bahar jane ko keh diya. Sari ladkiyan usi se jane ko ho li par aaruhi wahi khadi lavanya ko jatte dekhti rahi aur jaise hi vo gayi usne gehri sans chhodi.

" ye acha nahi kiya usne " maine aaurhi ke pas ate hi kaha.

" tujhe mene pehle hi kaha tha vpar aaj teri wajah se fanse hai hum.. " aaruhi iske baad bina bole wahan se nikal gayi. Mene use rokne ki kosish ki par vo nahi ruki aur na hi usne meri awaz ka koi response diya. Maine kuch bolna sahi nahi samjha, pehle din ki shuruwat itni hassen tarike se hone wali thi koi nahi janta tha.

Aaruhi theek mere samne hi baithi thi, aage wali bench par aur main piche ek ladki ke sath. Vo bhi baithi thi par koi launda tha jiski shakal se dikh raha tha vo kitna khush hai ki pehle din koi ladki baithi hai uske sath. Shakal se itna bada chomu lag raha tha ki aaruhi ko kahun ki dhayan se dekh ek baar taki vo seat exchange kar le lekin usne mere ishare sune hi nahi aur cheekh kar kehti ki ladke tu chomu hai to vo bura maan jata vaise bhi hum dono late aye the jis wajah se class mein jagah aur bachi bhi nahi thi. Halka shor tha abhi class mein shayad kuch anjan log dost ban kar apas mein baat cheet karne lage the aur kuch bhole bane baithe the hamari tarah bhale hi andar se kitne hi bade rakshas-roopi muthbaaz ho, dusri taraf vo chup rehne wali ladkiyan jo kitni hi badi rijhate hue chutiya banane wali ho. Par abhi sab ache the, ek dusre ke chehre par.. bahar se mukhda kala ho ya gora, rang to baad mein hi bikhare jane the inhone. Abhi main soch rahi thi ki class mein kaun hai jise main baat cheet karke dekh sakti hun ki yahi launda acha hai ya ye laundiya chugal baaz nahi hai utne mein class shant ho gayi. Nazar ghumai to samne ek sahab andar aye. Pet matke jaisa gol aur bahar ki taraf nikla hua, chehre par safed dadhi ke sath safed baal jo gunghrale aur behad kam the. Ankhon par chasma lagaye hath mein register liye, pent aur shirt pehne andar dakhil hui aur samne rakhe podiyum par apna register rakh usme dekhne lage. Chasma itna mota tha mano utar gaya to kuch dikhne wala na ho unhe. Mujhe laga ab sabka introduction hoga kyun ki aaj ka din pehla tha aur hum sab ka parichay abhi hona baki tha aur college ka pehla din to aisa hi beeta hai .. aur mujhe ye bhi janna tha ki kaun ki meri class mein baithe kis-kis ka kya naam hai. Meri soch ke according yahi sab hona chahie tha aur meri hi nahi baki sab ki bhi yahi soch hoti hai aur hua bhi introduction se shuruwat lekin hamare namo se nahi balki board par likhe topic se.

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Ary harshit bahi itne Dino bad mille ho :music:
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" idhar aa aage... " lavanya ne hath se ishara kiya. Mene sabhi ladkiyun ki taraf na dekh lavanya ke bolne par aage baddi. Ab jo hona tha vo hona hi tha par jaise hi main do kadam aage ayi usne rok dia. " tu nahi, tere bagal wali.. " dhatt teri ye to aaruhi ko bula rahi hai. Ab ye mera hath raat bhar khinchegi aur royegi ki meri vajah se fansi hai. Mene ruk kar aaruhi ki taraf dekha vo ghabrai si meri hi taraf dekh rahi thi.

" boyfriend ki permission mang rahi hai kya jo uski taraf dekh rahi hai? " lavanya ke bolne par aaruhi ko mene hi samne dekhne ka ishara kiya aur fir usne vaisa hi kiya. Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki vo itna khauf main ragging ki wajah se hai ya fir iske piche koi dusri wajah chupi hai. Aaruhi do kadam aage badi aur mene lavanya ke chehre par raunak dekhi.

" tu to wahi maal hai jise hostel jana tha... hostel mil gaya tha na .... " lavanya muskura di. Aaruhi ki nazrein niche jhuki thi aur kal raat se lekar abhi tak gaur karne wali baat thi ki jab bhi vo jada ghabrai hui hoti hai to nazre jhuka kar apne kapdon ko kas kar pakad leti hai ab vo aisa kyun karti hai samajh nahi aya lekin bahut hi wierd tha uska aisa karna. Pata nahi girls school wali ladkiyun ke funde hi alag hote hai...

" yaad hai ya bhool gayi bata.. bata... abe piche kya dekh rahi hai.. " lavanya jab use puch rahi thi to vo piche mud kar meri taraf dekhne lagi thi. Ye ladki mujhe bhi marwayegi, abhi focus usi par tha wahin rehne dene ka tha bar-bar meri taraf dekh kar mujhe kyun gher rahi hai? Mene ishare se aage dekhne ke liye kaha aur uske chehre ke piche chupe dar ko dekhne ki kosish tak nahi ki. Aaruhi ne mere naakarne par lavanya ki taraf nazar kar li. Lavanya aage akar ukhdu hokar baith gayi, uske aur aaruhi ke bich ab bas kuch hi fasla tha isliye lavanya uske dar ko saaf dekh paa rahi thi. " lagta hai abhi tak vo raat yaad hai.. kyun... " lavanya ke kehte hi aaruhi aise vichar mein kho gayi jaise vo lavanya ki baat ko soch rahi ho. Ab mujhe nahi samajh aya ki kya hua tha us raat? jo ki ab janna aur jaruri ho gaya tha..

Aaruhi kuch nahi boli " dekh iski shakal dekh us din to chup-chup kar apni chut masal rahi thi aaj aise darne ka natak karti hai " lavanya ne aaruhi ke gaal khinche jaise kisi bache ki khinchte hain lekin pyar se nahi balki halke tez hath se.

" ye to apne hi hostel ki hai .. 407 wali.. " madhu boli.

" tere liye hogi.. mere liye to ye Aaruhi the scared pussy hai... " lavanya muskura di. Aaruhi ki nazrein jhuki hui thi aur main ye soch samajhne ki kosish mein thi ki chal kya raha hai?

" scared pussy? " saloni ne apne bag se cream nikalte hue pucha.

" tune kabhi dar kar apni chut masli hai? " lavanya ne uski taraf dekha.

" dar kar? " vo sochne lagi " dar kar to kai baar.. tujhe to mere bhai ka pata hi hai.. sala sautela hai par hai to bhai.. hamesha jhank tank karta rehta hai... behen ka lawda ek dum fit baithta hai uspar "

" tujhse mene tera randi rona pucha tha? " lavanya ne use ajeeb nazron se uski taraf dekha.

" main to sirf apna dar bata rahi thi " saloni ne hath aur gardan par cream lagai " oo vanya zara pith par laga de " apne piche khadi vanya ki taraf cream fenkte hue kaha jiske baad mujhe samajh aya ki jo ladki hume teacher ban kar yahan layi thi uska naam vanya tha.

" main tere tharki sautele cum bhai wale dar ki baat nahi kar rahi, main to us dar ki baat kar rahi hun jo andhere mein lagta hai.. awaz to ati hai lekin koi dikhai nahi deta us andhere mein aur fir.. achanak se do per dikhai dete hai... " lavanya ne aaruhi ki taraf dekh kar kaha to aaruhi ke chehre par dar aur jada badh gaya. Lavanya keh to mazak mein rahi thi lekin aaruhi ko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise ye mazak na ho.

" tu us dar ki baat kar rahi hai jo us bhootiya hostel mein lagta hai logon ko " saloni ka top uppar tha aur vanya se apni pith par cream lagwa rahi thi.

" hostel nahi... wo bangla.. " lavanya iske aage kuch kehti use pehle phone baj pada. Usne piche ki pocket se phone nikala jo aaj kal ke trend mein tha phone smart ke sath bade ho gaye the aur style dikhane ke tarike bhi badal gaye the. " han bol.. han.. abhi? isi waqt? tujhse ek kaam nahi hota bhatrichod.. han theek hai.. is baar tera katega paisa.. chal rakh " lavanya ne phone cut krke wapis piche wali pocket mein dala aur apni jagah se khadi ho gayi. " suhagraat ke sez par sajne nahi jaa rahi hai tu, college ke baad chudne jaa rahi hai aur agar chudna ho na to saman lapet le.. principal aa raha hai 2 minute mein "
lavanya ke bolte hi saloni ne vanya ko roka aur top niche kiya aur failaya saman batorne lagi.

" aur tum sab.. apne apne padhai ke karyale mein chup chaap pravesh kar le aur kisi ko bhi apna gyaan na bantte kyun ki jisne bhi aisa karne ki kosish ki vo bhale hi hostel wali ho ya bahar wali aisi gaand todi jayegi ki bistar par garam hone ke baad kabhi thandi nahi ho paogi.. " madhu ki baat sun kar man to kiya hasne ka kyun ki vo bikul bhi lavanya ke tone se match nahi kar rahi thi par kisi tarah mene apne aap ko roka. Madhu to bol kar nikli aur us gate se jiske bahar vo peon baitha tha jo bahar se band pada tha. Madhu ne wahan do baar hath mara aur bahar se khulne ki awaz ayi. Andar ghuste hi malum tha ki vo mila hua hai lekin abhi samajh aya ki phone bhi usi ka tha.

" itne short notice mein bataoge to kaise chalegaa.. bhatyacharyaaaji... " madhu ne khinchte hue kaha to vo apne dant dikhane laga. Mujhe ye sab dekhne mein takleef ho rahi thi kyun ki meri nazre tedi thi aur meri nazar aaruhi ki taraf nahi thi jabki uski taraf honi chahie thi. Main us peon ke expression ko dekhna mein itna tedi hui ki mera balance bigda vo to acha hua bagal se ek ladki nikal kar bahar ki taraf jaa rahi thi mera sharir par uspar gira aur use bach gayi aur tab dhayan aaruhi par gaya.

" ek mukalat dubara banti hai... sehgalji.. jaldi milenge.. " lavanya ne aaruhi ki kamar ko kas kar pakda hua tha. Aaruhi ko dard ho raha hoga ye main dekh paa rahi thi aur is baar mujhe bilkul acha nahi laga. Abhi tak jo hua tha uske bare mein mujhe malum nahi tha lekin lavanya ne ye acha nahi kiya tha. Uske baad vo charon to chale gaye aur hume dusre gate se bahar jane ko keh diya. Sari ladkiyan usi se jane ko ho li par aaruhi wahi khadi lavanya ko jatte dekhti rahi aur jaise hi vo gayi usne gehri sans chhodi.

" ye acha nahi kiya usne " maine aaurhi ke pas ate hi kaha.

" tujhe mene pehle hi kaha tha vpar aaj teri wajah se fanse hai hum.. " aaruhi iske baad bina bole wahan se nikal gayi. Mene use rokne ki kosish ki par vo nahi ruki aur na hi usne meri awaz ka koi response diya. Maine kuch bolna sahi nahi samjha, pehle din ki shuruwat itni hassen tarike se hone wali thi koi nahi janta tha.

Aaruhi theek mere samne hi baithi thi, aage wali bench par aur main piche ek ladki ke sath. Vo bhi baithi thi par koi launda tha jiski shakal se dikh raha tha vo kitna khush hai ki pehle din koi ladki baithi hai uske sath. Shakal se itna bada chomu lag raha tha ki aaruhi ko kahun ki dhayan se dekh ek baar taki vo seat exchange kar le lekin usne mere ishare sune hi nahi aur cheekh kar kehti ki ladke tu chomu hai to vo bura maan jata vaise bhi hum dono late aye the jis wajah se class mein jagah aur bachi bhi nahi thi. Halka shor tha abhi class mein shayad kuch anjan log dost ban kar apas mein baat cheet karne lage the aur kuch bhole bane baithe the hamari tarah bhale hi andar se kitne hi bade rakshas-roopi muthbaaz ho, dusri taraf vo chup rehne wali ladkiyan jo kitni hi badi rijhate hue chutiya banane wali ho. Par abhi sab ache the, ek dusre ke chehre par.. bahar se mukhda kala ho ya gora, rang to baad mein hi bikhare jane the inhone. Abhi main soch rahi thi ki class mein kaun hai jise main baat cheet karke dekh sakti hun ki yahi launda acha hai ya ye laundiya chugal baaz nahi hai utne mein class shant ho gayi. Nazar ghumai to samne ek sahab andar aye. Pet matke jaisa gol aur bahar ki taraf nikla hua, chehre par safed dadhi ke sath safed baal jo gunghrale aur behad kam the. Ankhon par chasma lagaye hath mein register liye, pent aur shirt pehne andar dakhil hui aur samne rakhe podiyum par apna register rakh usme dekhne lage. Chasma itna mota tha mano utar gaya to kuch dikhne wala na ho unhe. Mujhe laga ab sabka introduction hoga kyun ki aaj ka din pehla tha aur hum sab ka parichay abhi hona baki tha aur college ka pehla din to aisa hi beeta hai .. aur mujhe ye bhi janna tha ki kaun ki meri class mein baithe kis-kis ka kya naam hai. Meri soch ke according yahi sab hona chahie tha aur meri hi nahi baki sab ki bhi yahi soch hoti hai aur hua bhi introduction se shuruwat lekin hamare namo se nahi balki board par likhe topic se.

" What is C ? "
ye shruti flashback suna rahi hai ki history... jo khatam hone ka naam hi le rahi hai :banghead:
aur sab kuch bata rahi hai Nandini, vishal aur gaggan ko ki kya kya ho raha hai.. kitni besharam ladki hai :sigh:


So harshit sahab meri baat nahi maanne wale... lavanya ko mann marzi karne ke liye khula chhut de kar hi maanenge aap.. Fine... :devil:
So......

Lavanya.... tharki soch rakhne wali lavanya badsurat hone ke baad bhi ek professor thodi bahot kabbadi kya khel li uske sang.. us kamini ne to har junior par kohraam machane lagi...par junior ladkiyon pe kyun sitam dhaye, junior ladko pe kyun nahi... DARR hai ki kahi ladko ke dwara akele rehte waqt uski rape na ho jaye ya phir lesbo hai lavanya.... Haan to kya baat kar rahi thi wo....
Haan "darr"
to darr kise kahte hai..... Agar kirdaar lavanya ko bina mask gloves aur ppe kit pehne ushe covid infected wale logo ke bich ek room mein chhod diya jaye tab jo dar dilo dimag mein cha jaye pure sarir jo thar thar kaape ushe kehte hai asli darr :D
Kabhi us darr ka bhi samna kar leni chahiye is tharki lavanya ko :D
Phir baat kare darr ko lekar... ;)
ya phir us bhootiya hostel mein 100 raatein akele bita ke dikhaye...phir baat kare darr ki :D

Khair uske friends jo insaan kehlane kr layak nahi hai .. shayad ishiliye baatein bhi unki aisi hi hai.. :akshay:
Flashback ye honi chahiye ki jab lavanya aaruhi ki Kamar jor se daba rahi thi to aaruhi darr aur ghabrahat ke maare apni do ungli us lavanya ki aankhon mein ghusa ke uski aankhein fod di... lavanya dard aur khauf se tadap rahi thi jameen pe lait ke :D.... khoon ki dhara aankho se beh kar farsh par gire :D aur phir tab jaake aaruhi us haaraman lavanya se puche ki kyun itna DARR aaj ke liye kaafi hai na :D

So matlab us raat pehli mulaqat mein is haaraman lavanya ne aaruhi ke sath wohi ghatiya mazak ki ragging ke naam par jo aaruhi ki imagery world mein tanu ne supriya ke sath ki thi ...
Ya to supriya ek sach hai aur jo jo ghatna uske sath ghati thi wohi ghatnaye phir se itihash ki tarah repeat ho rahi hai aaruhi ke sath...
Ya phir haaraman lavanya ke torture ke chalte apni ek imaginary world bana li hai aaruhi ne.... jisme ya to khud ko supriya maanne lagti hai ya phir ek Kalpanik kirdaar ko mann mastishka mein bana leti hai jiske sath wohi ho raha hai jo aaruhi ke sath hua...
is hisab se to aaruhi future dekh sakti hai... matlab abhi lavanya ki hatya huyi nahi... jaise tanu ki huyi thi khaufnaak tarike se... matlab ab lavanya ki hatya hone wali hai :D

Khair...... aaruhi bilkul thik kar rahi shruti se duri banake.... usiki wajah se wo fanshi... :sigh:
(nothing personal, just a simple review ;))

Khair..... update kaafi dilchasp tha
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills harshit sahab :applause: :applause:
 
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Har update ke sath sawal hi sawal uth khade hote jaa rahe hai par jawab ek bhi nahi.....

Supriya aur 2nd lead megha se suru huyi kahani
abhi running aaruhi aur shruti ko lead mein leke
Supriya - link - ??
Tanu - link - ??
Megha - link -??
unki friends - link ya connection -??
Vishal, gaggan, nandini, Lavanya & friends, aaruhi & shruti - link - ek hi college se

?? are yaar in dono supriya aur megha ne to dimag ki aisi ki taisi kar di hai :banghead:
 
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आप को तो पता ही है थोड़ा समय खराब चल रहा है ।
और हर्षित भाई भी इस बात को समझते ही होंगे ।
रेभो तो हर अपडेट पर नहीं दे सकता पर कोशिश करूंगा कि जितना संभव हो दे सकूं ।
 

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Mujhe aaj pata chala ki bachiya engineering college ki kshatra hai... Pahle bataya tha kya, mujhe yaad nahi raha.:hmm: khair ab Ab to aur maja aayega... Kaha supriya ne idea pucha tha aur idea dene ke bahane megha ne pure engg. Ladko ki gand maar li.. Waise satya bhi hai ye.. Kayi bechare chut ki tallash me chutiya bane ghoomte rahte hai...
Jab se supriya ko megha ne bathroom waala advice diya, tabhich apun samajh gaya ki indirectly khayi me bhej rahi hai megha ko.. Idhar aakash ke sath hawas mitayegi udhar supriya ki fat ke chauraha hoga... Waise Sonu ko pyar se apna pichhwada dikhakar room wale bathroom ki chabhi liya jaa sakta tha :innocent:

" puri baat sun " megha ne supriya ko bich mein roka " tu bathroom mein baith ja. Yani ki tera pet kharab ho chuka hai, waise bhi mess ka khana kha kar koi na koi ladki to bathroom mein baithi hui payi jati hai aur sach bata rahi hun aaj ka khana bilkul usi type ka tha ki kisi ke bhi pet ki maa chud jaye.
Ye lawda bachane ka tarika hai ki pilwane ka 🙄 lagta hai Megha ka concept clear nahi hai... Story theme ko lekar :p: bathroom me akele.. Wo bhi raat me... :ohno:
badhi aur jaise hi usne bathroom ka darwaja khola, hall mein band tv chalu ho gaya aur usme ab news ki jagah supriya dikhne lagi jo abhi-abhi bathroom mein ghusi thi.
🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
 

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:wtf: saara kriya karam kar diya supriya ka.. Gand to fadi hee supriya ki.. Par gand ka material bhi chhidkawa diya uske upar... Ulti par pair rakhwa kar girwaya so alag... Hardcore ypdate bhai.... Gand maarni hai to ache se maarni hai... Chaahe main character hee kyun naa ho... :cool:
Ghadi ka 1 bajne se 5 minute pahle rukna.. Glass ka crack hona, cubicles ka apne aap band hona... Ekdum maja aa gaya ye sab padhkar... Par yahi maja saja bhi ban gaya agle pal jab pura kiya dhara washbasin ke nal aur pot ke futne se baahar nikalne laga to 💩💩💩 Poop team ko investigation ke liye bulaya jaaye aur bariki se jaanch honi chahiye :detective:
Jaisi hee supriya bathroom se nikli aur ghadi wapas chalna chalu hua tabhich apun samajh gaya ki ye sab wakyi me hua hee nahi aur yadi hua bhi to vaastvikta se iska ab koyi lena dena nahi... Jiske baad jab supriya kaamini aur komal bolte to KK se takrayi to confirm ho gaya warna wo dono supriya ko gali dene ke bajay wahi pe hag deti.. Muh se :D par wo nahi hagi aur supriya ko tanu ke paas le gayi... Sab kuch mann me hua??? Aisi kaun si ghatna ho gayi supriya ke sath...? Koyi bimari...ya fir flashback me supriya ki chudai...?? Ya fir koyi bhootni...??

Waise Supriya cute hai.. Ekdum Malini ke mafiq... 😍😍:p:
" aja janeman aja... bilkul sahi samay par ayi hai, manna padega tujhe... aja.. baith.. chal apni chutad utha " tanu ne laat mar kar bagal mein padi ladki se kaha
Epic... Bc :lotpot: alag hee lvl ke characters aur dialogues hai bhai.. Fir chahe wo tanu ka ho ya fir warden ka... Sonu bhi badhiya hai... 🤣
 

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Kya story chhap rele ho bhai... Raha nahi jaata lesbian sex padhne ke lalach me 'p:


Update-13
" tanu ne apni laat se supriya ke ubharo ko masalte hue kaha.
Kya scene hai.. Bc rakshasi hai tanu :bow:
" pine do na didi, ghar par gharwale to pine nahi dete hukkah, khud bhale hi apni partiyun mein charas ganja peete rahenge par salle hume nahi dete " uski awaz mein vidroh saaf jhalak raha tha.

" sali marau tu toh badi khundas mein hai ghar walon se? "
Ye kya story chhap rahe ho yar...:wtfrol: ekdum alag hee lvl ka...
Ye to sali cigarette fuk kar ludhak gayi... Kuch kiya hee nahi Supriya ko... Sirf doodh dabaya.. Mai to sex sochne laga tha :shy:
Waise Supriya satkeli hai aur drugs ki smell ka gahra asar hota hai uspe.... Iska background history janna padega :detective: ki pahle se chudi hui hai ya abhiye se.... Shandar maaldar update... Especially jab wo jr batch wali laundiya apne mahtari baap ko gariyati hai kyunki use wo hukka peene nahi dete 🤣🤣 mere laayak college hai ye 😈😈👿
 
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