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Romance Ek Bhool 2 (Completed)

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Akki ❸❸❸ said:
Bdiya update champ bhai :love:

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Fir se years later, ab to mujhe characters ki age calculation karne me bhi mushkil aa rhi h :cry:


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Shuru me tagda jhatka de diya champ bhai sumit ki maut ka bta ke :D

Aur ye kirti ka hriday parivartan kara hi diya champ bhai

Ab khi kirti ye to nhi khegi ki, usne sumit se duri isliye bnayi taki vo doctor bn sake acha :(
Ya fir vichitra prani ne sut diya h isko :D

Eagerly waiting for next update :elephant:
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Thanks Akki bhai for your support and review...Kirti ka hriday pariwartan ka vajah bhi kuch updates mein pata chal jaayega...Keep supporting bhai.
 
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Very nice update diya hai bhai.
Par ye ab kya ho gaya, yaha Kirti kaha se aa gai aur megha ka kya hua.
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Thanks Mbindas bhai for your support and review...Milega bhai milega...Aapke sawaal ka jawaab jarur milega...Lekin thoda intejaar karna padega :D...Keep supporting.
 
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Welcome Mahi bhai on the story :hug: Aapko story mein dekh aur aapke saare comments padh kar bahut accha laga...Sorry itna late reply karne ke liye...Kaagi aage pahunch chuke hai aap to story ke baare mein bahut kuch andaaja ho bhi gaya hoga...Aur Ek Bhool ke liye review ka bhi aapja bahut bahut dhanyabaad...Keep supporting bhai.
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भाई मत कहिए सर जी।।
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UPDATE 82​



Sumit abb dhire dhire Kirti ke paas pahunch gaya.

Sumit:- Dr. Sumit here...General Surgeon.

Itna keh kar Sumit apna haath aage badhata hai lekin agle hi pal dusra haath bhi aage badha kar dono haath Kirti ke saamne jod deta hai.

Sumit:- And future Neurosurgeon.

Abb sabhi doctors aur students ka najar Sumit par hi tha.

Kirti:- Ye kya kar rahe ho tum?

Sabhi ko apni taraf dekhta hua dekh Kirti ko thoda awkward lag raha tha.

Sumit:- Ek doctor ki haisiyat se apne patient ko greet kar raha hun...Wo kya hai na MBBS ke 1st year se hi padhta aaya hun ki sabse pehle patient ko greet karna chahiye.

Aur aap pehli baar Dr. Sumit ke paas aayi hai...Greeting to banta hi hai.

Kirti:- Nahi mai patient nahi hun...Aur naa hi mujhe kuch hua hai.

Sumit:- To fir?

Kirti:- Tumse jaruri kaam tha.

Sumit:- To fir appointment lena chahiye tha.

Thoda serious aawaj mein Sumit ne kaha...Kirti bhi kuch bol nahi paayi.

Sumit:- Are majaak kar raha tha...Tumhe appointment ki kya jarurat...Chalo.

Kirti:- Kaha?

Sumit:- Tumne hi to kaha hai Dr. Sumit se tumhe koi kaam nahi...Sirf Sumit se hai.

Mujhe Doctor se sirf Sumit banne ke liye iss room se baahar nikalna hoga.

Sunil...Sambhal lena aaj ka OPD...Kuch jyada hi important meeting hai.

Sunil:- Dikh raha hai. :D

Fir Sumit OPD room se nikal jaata hai aur Kirti bhi Sumit ke saath chalti rehti hai.

Kirti:- Aaj bhi tum bilkul nahi badle.

Sumit:- Badlaaw to bahut aaya hai...Lekin shayad tumhe kuch dikha nahi.

Kirti:- Abb dhire dhire dekhungi...Jaldbaazi kya hai?

Kirti ne bahut pyaar se kaha...Jawaab mein Sumit sirf muskuraya.

Kirti:- Hum kaha jaa rahe hai?

Sumit:- Canteen...Baat karne ka sabse mast jagah.

Canteen mein pahunchne ke baad.

Sumit:- Bahut din baad tum se mulakaat hua hai...Socha nahi tha tum fir kabhi milogi.

Kirti:- Socha to maine bhi nahi tha...Lekin kismat ko kuch aur hi manjur tha.

Sumit:- Kismat...Yahi to mera sabse accha dost hai...Der se hi sahi har mushibat se mujhe bahar nikaal hai...Aaj hi dekh lo...Kitna khush hu mai.

Kirti bhi khush thi ki Sumit usse naraaj nahi hai aur bahut acche se baatein bhi kar raha hai...Abb usse lag raha tha ki jald hi usse apni dil ki baatein bata deni chahiye.

Kirti:- Tum mujhse naraaj to nahi ho na?

Sumit:- Haan pehle tha...Lekin abb inn baaton se upar utth chuka hun...Kabhi kabhi maaf kar dene mein hi bhalayi hai...Sab kuch bhula kar aage badhna hi samajhdaari hai.

Kirti:- Sahi keh rahe ho...Mai hi bewkoof thi jo tumhe samajh nahi paayi thi.

Sumit:- Wo to tum abhi bhi samajh nahi paayi ho.

Kirti:- Kya?

Sumit:- Kya tum sach mein mujhe samajhti ho? Kabhi hum dono ne itna vakt saath mein bhi to nahi gujara.

Kirti:- Bas itna samajhti hun ki tum samajh se baahar ho.

Ye sunte hi Sumit bhi hasne laga.

Kirti:- Wo kya kehte thhe tum khud ko...Unimaginable and Unpredictable...Sahi hi hai....Aur haan yaad aaya Sumit SFS.

Sumit:- Ye tumhe kaha se pata chala?

Kirti:- Megha se...Bahut pehle usne bataya tha.

Sumit:- Ohh god...Tum ladkiyan bhi samajh se baahar ho...Kab kisse kya baat karti ho kuch pata hi nahi chalta.

Kirti:- Megha se yaad aaya...Kaisi hai wo? Bahut saalo se koi baat bhi nahi hui usse.

Megha ki baat sunte hi Sumit thoda soch mein pad gaya.

Sumit:- Bahut khush hai wo.

Kirti:- Chalo sahi hai...Bahut acchi hai wo...Deserve bhi karti hai khush rehna.

Sumit:- Sabse jyada.

Sumit:- Accha ye bataao...Uncle Aunty kaise hai abhi?

Kirti:- Bahut acche hai dono...Mummy ka Diabetes aur Blood Pressure dono hi maintained hai.

Kirti ko Sumit ka ye sawal bahut pasand aaya.

Kirti:- Dono tumhare baare mein puchte rehte hai.

Ye sunte hi Sumit ne bahut mushkil se apna hansi roka.

Kirti:- Pehle ki baat aur thi...Abb aur hai.

Sumit ne iss baat par koi jawaab nahi diya.

Kirti:- Baaton hi baaton mein puchna hi bhul gayi...Rashmi kaisi hai?

Sumit:- Wo to hamesha ki tarah acchi hai.

Kirti:- Sumit...Sach mein itne din baad mile hai hum lekin fir bhi batein aisi kar rahe hai jaise kabhi alag hue hi nahi hai.

Sumit:- Baatein karna...Ye go mera favourite hobbies mai se ek hai...Kab subah se shaam ho jaata hai aur raat se subah...Kuch pata hi nahi chalta.

Kirti:- Chalo...Kahi baahar chalte hai...Puraani yaadein bhi taaja ho jaayega.

Sumit:- Ghar mein mujhe kuch kaam hai...Tum bhi chalo...Sabse milna bhi ho jaayega.

Kirti:- Nahi abhi nahi.

Sumit:- Kyu? Kya pareshanu hai?

Kirti:- Abhi comfortable feel nahi kar rahi hun...Sab naraaj honge.

Sumit:- Nahi koi naraaj nahi hai...Waise bhi kayi saal beet gaye hai uss baat ko le kar...Waise bhi mai to saath hi hun.

Kirti kuch der sochti hai fir jaise hi usse lagta hai ki aaj nahi to kal jaana hi hai.

Kirti:- Accha thik hai...Chalo

Tabhi MBBS ke kuch students aate hai aur.

Student:- Sir, ye kya? Agar Mam ne dekh liya to bura maan jaayengi.

Sumit:- Do din time de chuka hun...Abhi bhi Acute Appendicitis acche se padha nahi hai tune...Agli baar bhi nahi oadha to mai bura maan jaaunga.

Itna sunte hi wo student chup ho jata hai.

Sumit:- Aur kisi ko bhi koi homework chahiye?

Student:- Sir sidha hi bol dete yaha se jaane ke liye.

Sumit:- Samajhdar logo ko ishara hi kaafi hota hai...Waise bhi tum log mere hi student ho...Samjhadaari to nas nas mein hai.

Ye sunte hi wo students hanste hue waha se chale jaate hai...Unke jaane ke baad.

Kirti:- Kis Mam ki baare mein baat kar rahe thhe ye?

Sumit:- Meri Wife.

Ye jawaab Kirti ke liye kisi sadme se kam nahi tha.

Kirti:- Tumhari shaadi??????

Hairaani mein Kirti se bola hi nahi jaa raha tha.

Sumit:- Pure 33 saal ka ho chuka hun...Abb nahi karunga to kab? Waise bhi pichle mahine hi hua tha shaadi...Dhumdhaam se.

Excitement mein Sumit bola...Lekin Kirti ka chehra dekhte hi.

Sumut:- Kya hua?

Kirti:- Kuch nahi.

Bahut mushkil se wo boli...Sumit bhi abb samajh gaya.

Kirti:- Megha?

Sumit:- Tumhare jaane ke baad meri life mein Sanjana aayi.

Sumit isse aage bolta tabhi uske mobile mein phone aaya.

Sumit:- Haan darling...Aa raha hun.

Sumit:- Aur suno...Apne haath ka accha sa lunch banaao...Ek special guest hai saath mein.

Love you a lot.

Sumit ki aawaj mein pyaar hi pyaar tha...Bilkul waisa jaise kuch saal pehle Sumit ka Kirti ke liye tha.

Lekin aaj vakt badal chuka tha aur saath hi haalaath...Jo Sumit uske liye paagal hua firta tha aaj wohi Sumit uska dil tod chuka tha.

Abb aur dard usse bardast nahi ho raha tha....Ek baar fir dil ka dard aankhon se aansu ke roop mein beh raha tha.

Kirti:- Sumit...You are really unimaginable and unpredictable.

Itna keh kar Kirti ne aankhein jhuka li.

Sumit ko bhi Kirti ka rona accha nahi lag raha tha...Bhale hi wo Kirti se naraaj tha lekin apni khushi mein wo Kirti se naraajgi aur shikayat bhi bhul gaya tha.

Lekin aaj Kirti mili bhi to iss haalaath mein...Naa hi wo piche mud sakta tha aur naa hi mudna chaahta tha.

Kirti ke liye agat kuch kar sakta tha to sirf dua...Dua uski khushi ki bina khud ke...Isse jyada kuch nahi.
 
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UPDATE 82​



Sumit abb dhire dhire Kirti ke paas pahunch gaya.

Sumit:- Dr. Sumit here...General Surgeon.

Itna keh kar Sumit apna haath aage badhata hai lekin agle hi pal dusra haath bhi aage badha kar dono haath Kirti ke saamne jod deta hai.

Sumit:- And future Neurosurgeon.

Abb sabhi doctors aur students ka najar Sumit par hi tha.

Kirti:- Ye kya kar rahe ho tum?

Sabhi ko apni taraf dekhta hua dekh Kirti ko thoda awkward lag raha tha.

Sumit:- Ek doctor ki haisiyat se apne patient ko greet kar raha hun...Wo kya hai na MBBS ke 1st year se hi padhta aaya hun ki sabse pehle patient ko greet karna chahiye.

Aur aap pehli baar Dr. Sumit ke paas aayi hai...Greeting to banta hi hai.

Kirti:- Nahi mai patient nahi hun...Aur naa hi mujhe kuch hua hai.

Sumit:- To fir?

Kirti:- Tumse jaruri kaam tha.

Sumit:- To fir appointment lena chahiye tha.

Thoda serious aawaj mein Sumit ne kaha...Kirti bhi kuch bol nahi paayi.

Sumit:- Are majaak kar raha tha...Tumhe appointment ki kya jarurat...Chalo.

Kirti:- Kaha?

Sumit:- Tumne hi to kaha hai Dr. Sumit se tumhe koi kaam nahi...Sirf Sumit se hai.

Mujhe Doctor se sirf Sumit banne ke liye iss room se baahar nikalna hoga.

Sunil...Sambhal lena aaj ka OPD...Kuch jyada hi important meeting hai.

Sunil:- Dikh raha hai. :D

Fir Sumit OPD room se nikal jaata hai aur Kirti bhi Sumit ke saath chalti rehti hai.

Kirti:- Aaj bhi tum bilkul nahi badle.

Sumit:- Badlaaw to bahut aaya hai...Lekin shayad tumhe kuch dikha nahi.

Kirti:- Abb dhire dhire dekhungi...Jaldbaazi kya hai?

Kirti ne bahut pyaar se kaha...Jawaab mein Sumit sirf muskuraya.

Kirti:- Hum kaha jaa rahe hai?

Sumit:- Canteen...Baat karne ka sabse mast jagah.

Canteen mein pahunchne ke baad.

Sumit:- Bahut din baad tum se mulakaat hua hai...Socha nahi tha tum fir kabhi milogi.

Kirti:- Socha to maine bhi nahi tha...Lekin kismat ko kuch aur hi manjur tha.

Sumit:- Kismat...Yahi to mera sabse accha dost hai...Der se hi sahi har mushibat se mujhe bahar nikaal hai...Aaj hi dekh lo...Kitna khush hu mai.

Kirti bhi khush thi ki Sumit usse naraaj nahi hai aur bahut acche se baatein bhi kar raha hai...Abb usse lag raha tha ki jald hi usse apni dil ki baatein bata deni chahiye.

Kirti:- Tum mujhse naraaj to nahi ho na?

Sumit:- Haan pehle tha...Lekin abb inn baaton se upar utth chuka hun...Kabhi kabhi maaf kar dene mein hi bhalayi hai...Sab kuch bhula kar aage badhna hi samajhdaari hai.

Kirti:- Sahi keh rahe ho...Mai hi bewkoof thi jo tumhe samajh nahi paayi thi.

Sumit:- Wo to tum abhi bhi samajh nahi paayi ho.

Kirti:- Kya?

Sumit:- Kya tum sach mein mujhe samajhti ho? Kabhi hum dono ne itna vakt saath mein bhi to nahi gujara.

Kirti:- Bas itna samajhti hun ki tum samajh se baahar ho.

Ye sunte hi Sumit bhi hasne laga.

Kirti:- Wo kya kehte thhe tum khud ko...Unimaginable and Unpredictable...Sahi hi hai....Aur haan yaad aaya Sumit SFS.

Sumit:- Ye tumhe kaha se pata chala?

Kirti:- Megha se...Bahut pehle usne bataya tha.

Sumit:- Ohh god...Tum ladkiyan bhi samajh se baahar ho...Kab kisse kya baat karti ho kuch pata hi nahi chalta.

Kirti:- Megha se yaad aaya...Kaisi hai wo? Bahut saalo se koi baat bhi nahi hui usse.

Megha ki baat sunte hi Sumit thoda soch mein pad gaya.

Sumit:- Bahut khush hai wo.

Kirti:- Chalo sahi hai...Bahut acchi hai wo...Deserve bhi karti hai khush rehna.

Sumit:- Sabse jyada.

Sumit:- Accha ye bataao...Uncle Aunty kaise hai abhi?

Kirti:- Bahut acche hai dono...Mummy ka Diabetes aur Blood Pressure dono hi maintained hai.

Kirti ko Sumit ka ye sawal bahut pasand aaya.

Kirti:- Dono tumhare baare mein puchte rehte hai.

Ye sunte hi Sumit ne bahut mushkil se apna hansi roka.

Kirti:- Pehle ki baat aur thi...Abb aur hai.

Sumit ne iss baat par koi jawaab nahi diya.

Kirti:- Baaton hi baaton mein puchna hi bhul gayi...Rashmi kaisi hai?

Sumit:- Wo to hamesha ki tarah acchi hai.

Kirti:- Sumit...Sach mein itne din baad mile hai hum lekin fir bhi batein aisi kar rahe hai jaise kabhi alag hue hi nahi hai.

Sumit:- Baatein karna...Ye go mera favourite hobbies mai se ek hai...Kab subah se shaam ho jaata hai aur raat se subah...Kuch pata hi nahi chalta.

Kirti:- Chalo...Kahi baahar chalte hai...Puraani yaadein bhi taaja ho jaayega.

Sumit:- Ghar mein mujhe kuch kaam hai...Tum bhi chalo...Sabse milna bhi ho jaayega.

Kirti:- Nahi abhi nahi.

Sumit:- Kyu? Kya pareshanu hai?

Kirti:- Abhi comfortable feel nahi kar rahi hun...Sab naraaj honge.

Sumit:- Nahi koi naraaj nahi hai...Waise bhi kayi saal beet gaye hai uss baat ko le kar...Waise bhi mai to saath hi hun.

Kirti kuch der sochti hai fir jaise hi usse lagta hai ki aaj nahi to kal jaana hi hai.

Kirti:- Accha thik hai...Chalo

Tabhi MBBS ke kuch students aate hai aur.

Student:- Sir, ye kya? Agar Mam ne dekh liya to bura maan jaayengi.

Sumit:- Do din time de chuka hun...Abhi bhi Acute Appendicitis acche se padha nahi hai tune...Agli baar bhi nahi oadha to mai bura maan jaaunga.

Itna sunte hi wo student chup ho jata hai.

Sumit:- Aur kisi ko bhi koi homework chahiye?

Student:- Sir sidha hi bol dete yaha se jaane ke liye.

Sumit:- Samajhdar logo ko ishara hi kaafi hota hai...Waise bhi tum log mere hi student ho...Samjhadaari to nas nas mein hai.

Ye sunte hi wo students hanste hue waha se chale jaate hai...Unke jaane ke baad.

Kirti:- Kis Mam ki baare mein baat kar rahe thhe ye?

Sumit:- Meri Wife.

Ye jawaab Kirti ke liye kisi sadme se kam nahi tha.

Kirti:- Tumhari shaadi??????

Hairaani mein Kirti se bola hi nahi jaa raha tha.

Sumit:- Pure 33 saal ka ho chuka hun...Abb nahi karunga to kab? Waise bhi pichle mahine hi hua tha shaadi...Dhumdhaam se.

Excitement mein Sumit bola...Lekin Kirti ka chehra dekhte hi.

Sumut:- Kya hua?

Kirti:- Kuch nahi.

Bahut mushkil se wo boli...Sumit bhi abb samajh gaya.

Kirti:- Megha?

Sumit:- Tumhare jaane ke baad meri life mein Sanjana aayi.

Sumit isse aage bolta tabhi uske mobile mein phone aaya.

Sumit:- Haan darling...Aa raha hun.

Sumit:- Aur suno...Apne haath ka accha sa lunch banaao...Ek special guest hai saath mein.

Love you a lot.

Sumit ki aawaj mein pyaar hi pyaar tha...Bilkul waisa jaise kuch saal pehle Sumit ka Kirti ke liye tha.

Lekin aaj vakt badal chuka tha aur saath hi haalaath...Jo Sumit uske liye paagal hua firta tha aaj wohi Sumit uska dil tod chuka tha.

Abb aur dard usse bardast nahi ho raha tha....Ek baar fir dil ka dard aankhon se aansu ke roop mein beh raha tha.

Kirti:- Sumit...You are really unimaginable and unpredictable.

Itna keh kar Kirti ne aankhein jhuka li.

Sumit ko bhi Kirti ka rona accha nahi lag raha tha...Bhale hi wo Kirti se naraaj tha lekin apni khushi mein wo Kirti se naraajgi aur shikayat bhi bhul gaya tha.

Lekin aaj Kirti mili bhi to iss haalaath mein...Naa hi wo piche mud sakta tha aur naa hi mudna chaahta tha.

Kirti ke liye agat kuch kar sakta tha to sirf dua...Dua uski khushi ki bina khud ke...Isse jyada kuch nahi.
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