Romance Ek Bhool 2 (Completed)

[Champ_AK_81]

Is ghonchu ko koi mentosh khilao re baba .. ab tak aam zindgi ji raha hai


Jaroor iski gf pahle use thappad mar kar gayi hogi .. and ghadi dekh kar kya 2 ghante ka target pura kar raha tha

Bechare ka naya naya pyaar hai...Hota hai shuruwaat mein.

Kacha chaba ke dakar tak na lena meri sherni .. acha mauka hai is tour ka..



Baton se to nafrat nahi lag rahi hai writer sahab bus narajgi wali feeling aati hai... Nafrat ka to najariya hi alag hota hai

Naraajgi wali nafrat hai bhai. Nafrat bhi dikhega aur naarajgi bhi.

Ye line maine note kar liya hai... Je kabhi Kirti ko chhod kar Megha ke sath chipka na sumit .. to writer sahab ye wala post utha marunga...

Update jaldi jaldi dene ka .. warna story dimag se wash ho jati hai... Waise mast update tha padhkar acha laga

Abb aapne note kar liya to Sumit bilkul bhi Megha se chipakne ki koshish nahi karega...Agar Megha koshish kare to baat alag hai .

Thanks Nain bhai for your support and review...Keep supporting.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Waiting for update champ. Bhai ?

Posting.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Waiting bhai

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[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 41​

Utro...Naashta ka time ho gaya.

Car ek hotel ke saamne ruka tha...Sumit ke alawa sabhi utar chuke thhe...Lekin Sumit jo apne hi duniya mein khoya hua tha usko isse koi fark nahi pada.

Suna nahi tumne?

Ek baar fir gusse se Kirti ne pucha.

Aawaj thoda tej tha to Sumit ka dhyan bhi toot gaya.

Sumit:- Haan bolo.

Mushkuraate hue Sumit ne pucha.

Kirti:- Naashta karna hai yaa nahi?

Chhidhte hue Kirti ne ek baar fir pucha.

Sumit:- Tumhare saath hun...Issi ehsaas se pet bhar gaya.

Kirti:- Bakwaas band karo...Aage gaadi nahi rukegi...Fir baad mein mat kehna ki bhookh laga hai.

Sumit:- Gaadi mein tum bhi to ho...Jab jab bhookh lagega tab tab tumhe dekh lunga...Bhookh mit jaayega.

Sumit ki aawaj mein pyaar hi pyaar tha...Ye sun Kirti aur bhi chhidh gayi.

Kirti:- Tumse baatein karna hi bekaar hai.

Kirti waha se chali gayi...Megha aur Vivek ke saath.

Sumit car ke window se pyar se Kirti ko jaate hue dekhne laga.

Sumit:- Na jaane kitni raatein tumhari yaadon mein bhukha bitaya hai...Aaj kyu naa tumhare saath hone ki khushi mein bhukha rahu.

Kuch aise hi khayalon ke saath Sumit apne pyaar ki duniya mein fir se kho gaya.

Achanak hi ek khayal ke saath Sumit ka dhyan tuta.

Wo jald apne jagah se utth kar car ke back seat par baith gaya...Aur intejaar karne laga Kirti ki waapas aane ka...Aur ek romantic trip ka.

Hotel se waapas aane ke baad jaise hi Kirti ne car ka gate khola Sumit ko dekh fir se aag baboola ho gayi.

Gusse mein kuch bol bhi nahi paa rahi thi...Megha ko kuch ishaara kar wo front seat mein baith gayi.

Megha fir Sumit ke paas baith gayi...Baithte vakt wo bhi Sumit ko ek najar gusse se dekhti hai.

Sumit:- Are yaar...Tumhare saath to class mein kayi baar baith chuka hun? Abb to Kirti ko mauka do?

Lekin Megha kuch jawaab nahi deti.

Sumit:- Koi baat nahi...Kirti to mere paas jindagi bhar rahegi...Mere humsafar ban kar...Kuch pal hi sahi tum bhi baith jaao...Shayad koi yaadgaar lamha ban jaaye.

Sumit ne hanste hue kaha...Lekin ye baat kaafi tha dono ka gussa aur bhadkaane ka...Lekin dono hi chup rahi...Shayad iss vacation ka mood abhi se kharaab nahi karna chaahti thi.


Car kuch dur aage gaya hi tha ki.

Sumit:- Ae Vichitra Praani...Ye vichitra praani thoda lamba shabd ho gaya...VP short form...Haan ye thik rahega.

Haan to Mr. VP...Ye kya bail gaadi chala raha hai? Cycle wala feeling aa raha hai

Vivek:- Ek to subah se drive kar raha hun...Upar se itni dur ka destination rakha hai...Wo to shukr mana ki abhi bhi chala paa raha hun itne thakaan ke baawjud.

Sumit:- Thoda glucose vagera piyaa kar...Taakat milega...Wo bhi instant wala.

Vivek:- Ye jo tu itna bhaunk raha hai...Khud hi kyu drive nahi karta?

Sumit:- Mai to kar lunga drive...Lekin Formula race ki speed racer aur baahar baithe darshak ko hi majaa aata hai.

Megha:- Nahi...Koi jarurat nahi hai iska.

Sumit ke baat khatm hote hi Megha bol uthi.

Sumit bhi Megha ke saath uss raat ka bike wala safar yaad karke muskuraya.


Sumit:- Are yaar...Kitna boring trip chal raha hai...Thoda music ho jaaye.

Chalo Kirti...Tumse shuruwaat karte hai.

Lekin Kirti ne koi response nahi diya.

Sumit:- Accha thik hai...Mai hi shuruwaat karta hun.

Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee

Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri​

Sumit ne pure feel ke saath sur milaa kar gaana suru hi kiya tha ki Kirti ki harkat ne maano uska dil ek baar fir se tod diya.

Jaha Sumit Kirti ko apne dil ki baat gaano ke jariye se bataana chaahta tha wohi Kirti uski gaana ko avoid karne ke liye earphone mobile mein connect kar ke apne kaano mein laga leti hai.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Kya itna hi izzat reh gaya hai mera?

Sumit ne apna gaana band kar diya aur khidki se baahar dekhne laga.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Nahi aaj wo naraaj hai...Aaj mai manaunga to hi kal wo bhi mujhe manayegi jab mai naraaj hounga...Pyar mein ruthna manaana to chalta rehta hai.

Ye sochte hi Sumit ke hontho par fir se muskaan chhaa gaya.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Jaanta hun tumhari naraajgi...Abhi to tumhe aur irritate karna hai...Tumhare andar ka gussa aur naarajgi ko jad se mitaana hai...Waapas se tumhe apna banana hai.

Ye sochte hue Sumit ka aatma vishwash fir se badh gaya...Aur fir wo fir se Kirti ko pyaar bhari najro se nihaarne laga.

Yeh sab Megha ke saamne hi ho raha tha...Chaah kar bhi wo Sumit ko avoid nahi kar paa rahi thi.


Fir aise hi ye trip bhi khatm ho gaya...Shaam mein wo sabhi apne destination pahunch gaye.

Yeh ek pahadi ilaaka tha...Kuch bade bade pahaad, kuch bade aur hare ped se behti thandi hawaayein...Aur aasman mein neela baadal...Dhalte shaam mein wo itna hi jaan paaye iss ilaaka ke baare mein.

Sabhi ko intejaar tha to kal ka...Wo bhi besabri se.

Fir sabhi hotel ke andar gaye aur Sumit counter se 2 chaabhi le kar aata hai...Ek Kirti ko de kar.

Sumit:- Socha tha hum 3 hi honge tour mein...Issi liye 2 room book karwaya tha...Ek mein mai aur Kirti aur dusre mein Megha.

Sumit ne muskuraate hue kaha...Kirti to chup thi...Lekin uski aankhein bahut kuch keh rahi thi.

Sumit:- Ohh sorry...Ek mein mai akela aur dusre mein tum dono.

Fir sabhi apne apne room ki taraf jaane lage...Vivek ko Sumit ke saath room share karna accha to nahi lag raha tha lekin wo fir bhi chup chaap chalta raha.

Room mein pahunch kar apna luggage rakhne ke baad Sumit room se nikal kar bahar chala gaya.


Ashish:- What a pleasant surprise? Phone wo bhi tune kiya aaj?

Sumit:- Haan...Aaj bahut hi jyada khush hun...To socha tujhe phone kar lun...Waise bhi tu sirf khushi ke vakt ke hi to dost hai.

Ashish:- Kuch jyada nahi bol raha hai?

Sumit:- Abhi bola hi kaha hun...Bolne to de.

Ashish:- Haan haan...Tera khushi teri baaton se hi jalak raha hai? Lagta hai Megha pat gayi hai.

Sumit ka reaction pehle hi soch Ashish hasne lagta hai.

Sumit:- Fir chutiyapa?

Ashish:- Accha accha bataa...Kirti ke saath kitna aage badha baat?

Sumit:- Aaj usko itne vakt ke baad dekha yaar wo bhi itne der ke liye...Bahut pyaar aa raha hai yaar uss par...Aatma vishwash bhi badh gaya hai ki iss baar usse apna bana kar hi rahunga.

Excitement mein Sumit ne kaha.

Ashish:- Sirf dekha...Aur itna khush ho raha hai.

Sumit:- Abe pessimistic jantaaon ke sardaar Yeh to shuruaat hai...Bahut accha suruwaat...Dekhte jaa iss shuruwaat ko mai kitna aage tak le kar jaata hun.

Ashish:- Bharosha hai yaar tujh par...Bhulna mat...Free ki party pending hai.

Sumit:- Abb kiya tune samajhdaari wali baat.

Ashish:- Waise Sumit...Ek confusion hai...Tere ghar walon ko bhi pata hoga iss 4 week ke vacation ke baare mein...Fir tu kaise iss vacation par jaa paaya?

Sumit:- Study.

Ashish:- Malab?

Study:- Ye parents ke liye expectation hai to bacchon ke liye hathiyaar.

Ashish:- Abe saaf saaf bata.

Sumit:- Papa ko phonr mein kaha ki Biochemistry ki Live Class lene jaa raha hun...Pehle to unhe shak hua ki mai itna padhaaku kaise ban gaya hun...Lekin fir wo maan gaye...Bahut khush thhe...Maa ko bhi samjhaa diya.

Aur saath hi 20,000 Rs bhi daal diya unhone mere account mein...Aur baaki ke kuch paise seniors aur doston se...Vacation ka kharcha paani nikal jaayega.


Ashish:- Galat nahi kar raha hai tu?

Sumit:- (Serious ho kar) Galat to kar raha hun lekin majburi hai...Ek aakhiri koshish hi to hai...Uske baad khud ke saath saath Kirti aur ghar walon ke liye bhi jimmedaar ban jaaunga.

Ashish:- Koi baat nahi...Tu tour ko enjoy kar...Aur haan bhulna mat free ki party khaaye bahut din ho gaye mujhe?

Ashish ne Sumit ko serious hota dekh baat ko sambhaal liya.

Sumit:- Tour se aate hi mil jaayega tujhe party.



Dusri taraf

Kirti:- Mujhe bhi abb lagta hai tune sahi kiya...Kuch jyada hi udd raha hai? Aise pankh kaatungi uss Sumit ka iss tour mein ki wo fir se kabhi udd nahi paayega.

Megha kuch nahi boli...Wo abhi bhi apne soch mein gumm thi.

Kirti:- Kya soch rahi hai?

Megha:- Yahi ki kitna galat hai Sumit...Nafrat ho gaya hai usse abb to.

Kirti:- 2 saalo se jaanti hun...Kitna bada dhokhebaaz hai wo ye mujhse accha koi nahi jaanta...Tu dur hi reh usse.

Usse aise sabak sikhaaungi ki wo tujhe bhi kabhi pareshaan nahi karega.

Nafrat bhari aawaj mein Kirti ne kaha.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Friends Update 41 is posted...Please read and give your valuable feedbacks.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

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Update 41



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Index Updated.

 

[Mbindas]

Galatfahmi insan ko kis had tak ek dusre se dur kar saki hai ye isme pata chal raha h. Sumit kya soch or kar raha hai or uska kya matlab mikala ja raha h.
Mind-blowing update bhai

 

[nain11ster]

Bechare ka naya naya pyaar hai...Hota hai shuruwaat mein.



Naraajgi wali nafrat hai bhai. Nafrat bhi dikhega aur naarajgi bhi.


Abb aapne note kar liya to Sumit bilkul bhi Megha se chipakne ki koshish nahi karega...Agar Megha koshish kare to baat alag hai .

Thanks Nain bhai for your support and review...Keep supporting.

Naya pyar hai . . Ohk .. aap ki arji par chhod raha hun ..

Aap kahte hain to man leta hun narajgi wali nafrat hai .. ye writer log bechari chhoti si ladki ke ander kitni sara ninja technique ek sath dal dete hain ... Batao .. kirti bechari ya to nafrat dikha leti ya narajgi .... Kanjus writer naya charecters ko nahi layenge balki tarah tarah ki feeling ek hi charecters se dikhwa rahe hai

I love the way Megha react and responce aap ki lekhni is waqt Megha par focus hai .. so vartman ko dekh kar future aakne ki kosis kar raha hun ... Isliye chetawni di hai

 

[nain11ster]

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Naya pyar hai . . Ohk .. aap ki arji par chhod raha hun ..

Aap kahte hain to man leta hun narajgi wali nafrat hai .. ye writer log bechari chhoti si ladki ke ander kitni sara ninja technique ek sath dal dete hain ... Batao .. kirti bechari ya to nafrat dikha leti ya narajgi .... Kanjus writer naya charecters ko nahi layenge balki tarah tarah ki feeling ek hi charecters se dikhwa rahe hai

I love the way Megha react and responce aap ki lekhni is waqt Megha par focus hai .. so vartman ko dekh kar future aakne ki kosis kar raha hun ... Isliye chetawni di hai

Pyaar puraana hai fir bhi naya hai ...Matlab kuch saalo ka pyar jab jaa kar safal hua hai...Starting ke updates mein hai ye part

Characters ke maamle mein to kanjus hi hun ...Aayenge iss story mein aur bhi characters lekin baad mein.

Nafrat wali naarajgi iss liye kyu ki nafrat bhi hai aur kuch daba hua expectations bhi....Aur shikayat bhi.

Sumit ka focus bhale hi Kirti par ho...But mera focus as a writer pendulum ki tarah Megha aur Kirti dono par hai...Kabhi Megha to kabhi Kirti.