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Parth ne sabko bata diya tha ki ab unke pass jyada waqt nahi baccha hai.....ab unko waha se jaana hoga.....Sabne ye baat sunni aur udaas ho gaye......

Ye sab jaante the ki wo kab ke jaa chukke the iske baad bhi wo iss ummid mein the ki wo issi roop mein yaha unke pass unke saath rah sakke......jo mumkin hi nahi tha......

Neelam - Dekho.....ye sab kaise uddas ho gaye.....tumhe ab meri baat samajh aa rahi hai.....

Madhu ne haa kaha unse......

Neelam usko wahi chod ke baaki sabhi ke pass aa gayi......waha pe Parth sabhi ko wapas se samjha raha tha ki wo waha se kab ke jaa chukke hai iss roop mein waha sabhi ke saath rahna mumkin hi nahi hai....

Neelam - Maine abhi tak apne bete ka room nehi dekha hai.....Prateek kya hum dekh sakte hai tumhara room....

Prateek ne jab ye sunna to wo kuch nahi bola...wo samajh hi nahi paaya ki kya bole......

Itne mein P.Bua ne kaha.....

P.Bua - ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai......Chalo iske kamre mein.....

Wo to chali bhi jaati room mein agar unko samajh nahi aaya hota ki room ki baat yaha pe kyun hui hai......thoda bura laga unko par wo bhi samajhdaar thi....

Wo jaanti thi kuch baatein hongi jo Neelam aur Parth bas Prateek se karna chahenge....kuch private baatein.....

Unhone picche mud ke Prateek ki taraf dekha.....

P.Bua - Prateek jaao apne Maa Papa ko apna room dikhao.....

Prateek ne kuch nahi kaha.....bas haa mein sar hilaya....wo bhi samajh chukka tha iss baat ko.....aur phir wo chal pada apne room ki taraf.......

Yaha wo tinno room mein gaye hi the ki Leader ne sabhi ko kaha......

Leader - Main aap sab ke saamne ek baat kahna chahta hu.....

Leader ko yaha pe acche se koi nahi jaanta tha.....bas itna hi pata tha ki Pankaj isko jaanta hai aur uske baad baaki sab se thodi bahut pahchan hai bas......

Jab Leader ne kaha usko kuch kahna hai to sab uski taraf dekhne lag gaye.......

DB ne dhirre se kaha bhi......

DB - Abhi sahi waqt nahi hai.......rukk jaao abhi.....

Leader ne iska jawab dhirre se diya.....

Leader - Abhi nahi to aur kab......ab to main unn sab chizzon se bhi aazad hu.....

DB usko samjhana chahta tha par ab teer kaman se nikal chukka tha....

Leader aage aaya....aur sabhi ki oor dekha.....sayad check kar raha tha ki sabhi ka dhyaan uski taraf hai bhi yaa nahi.....

Sab uski oor hi dekh rahe the.....ye dekhne ke baad Leader Nikita ki taraf dekhne lag gaya.....aur thoda aage badha.....

Wo kab se iss pal ka intezzar kar raha tha.....uske aankhon mein aanshu bhi aa chukke the....

Wahi Nikita ko ye baat samajh nahi aa rahi thi.....wo ye bilkul bhi samajh nahi paa rahi thi aakhir kya wajah hai ki ye aadmi uski taraf aa raha hai.....

Thodi pareshan thodi hairran si thi Nikita abhi.....par usko kya pata tha ye sab thodi hi der mein kya hone wala hai......

Leader - Nikita......Main....Main......Nikita....tumhara.....Main.....Tumhara Pita hu Nikita......

Ye Leader kuch aisa bolne wala hai iss baat ka pata nahi tha waha pe kisi ko.....par usne to bol diya tha.....

Sab ke sab hairaan the......

Aaj pata nahi ye sab aur kya kya dekhne wale the....abhi tak inhone Neelam aur Parth ko dekha tha aur ab ye Nikita ka Pita hai Leader ye dekh rahe the......

Sab ke sab hairaan the....bas Nikita ko chod ke......wo to jaise thodi der pahle thi waise hi abhi bhi thi......thoda bhi badlaaw nahi tha uske chahre pe.....

Leader - Nikita.....Beta main tumhara papa hu......

Ab bhi uske chahre pe koi bhi expression nahi badla tha......Leader ko ye baat samajh hi nahi aayi.....wo uske pass jaane wala tha ki tabhi Chachi apni jagah se hilli aur jaake Nikita ke saamne khadi ho gayi uske taraf muh karke.....

Chachi - nikal jao mere ghar se......niklo.....

Chachi to kuch kar hi deti uss leader ke saath......wo to DB ne unka dhyaan bata diya......

DB ne Leader ko pakda aur usko ghar se bahar leke jaane lag gaya.....

Leader kamzor tha pahle se par itna bhi nahi ki wo kisi bacche ki tarah DB ke saath chala jaayega......lekin iss waqt DB ke paas bhi wo hare rang ka heera tha jo usne Fumos se liya tha....aur wo usko kaafi taqat de raha tha....jiski wajah se wo aaram se Leader ko apne saath leke jaa paa raha tha.....par Leader wo kuch kar nah paa raha tha par bol paa raha tha.....

Wo wahi se chilla raha tha Nikita ko bulla raha tha.....

Leader - Nikita....Main tumhara Pita hu.....sach mein.....Meri baat sunno.....tum sab mujhe meri beti se durr nahi kar sakte......

Yaha Leader ghar ke darwaje se bahar gaya aur waha Nikita ke aankhon se aanshu bahar aane lag gaye.....

Ek aadmi itne waqt se uske aas pass tha.....usne kabhi usko iss baat ka ahsaas nahi hone diya....ki wo uska pita hai.....aur aaj pata nahi usko kya hua ki usne ye baat sabke saamne kahi.....wo kis chizz ke intezar mein tha.....

Bahut se sawal the sabhi ke mann mein aur unn sab se jyada sawal Nikita ke mann mein the.....

Jab ye hua to Daksh Pankaj ki taraf ghoor raha tha.....Pankaj hi tha wo jisne usko milaya tha uss Leader se....

Par pankaj bhi bechara kya kare......use bhi iske baare mein pata nahi chala tha....baat hi nahi iss baare mein jab Leader ko confirm hua ki Nikita uski beti hai....

Iss dauraan Rupal gusse mein darwaje ki taraf jaa rahi thi.....jiska pata Chachi ko lag gaya.....

Chachi - Rupal yaha aao.....aur Nikita ko room mein leke chalo......

Rupal - Par maa....

Chachi - Sunna nahi tumne maine kya kaha......chalo ander.....

Rupal didi kya hi kar leti.....chup chap pahle Chachi ke pass gayi phir waha se Nikita ko leke unke saath kamre ki oor badh gayi.....K.Bua bhi unke saath ander chali gayi....

Bahar jo bacche the wo bas ek dusre ko dekh rahe the......

Prateek ko apne room mein gaye waqt ho gaya tha.....Dadi se raha nahi nahi gaya wo ek aakhiri baar dono se aur milna chahti thi to unhone P.bua se kaha....par P.bua ne thoda rukne ko kaha

Wahi room mein aane ke baad Prateek side mein jaake khada ho gaya tha......

Neelam - Accha kamra hai ye to.....

Parth - Ye room hamare liye hi tha....

Neelam - Prateek tum bhi jaante ho humare pass waqt kam hai....hum yaha tumse bas ek baat karne aaye hai....humme nahi pata tum kis tarah Slayer ke pass jaa pahuche aur kis tarah usse bachke humme yaha leke aaye ho....par ek baat yaad rakhna.....wo hamesa wapas aata hai....

Parth - Haa beta hum iss baare mein hi baat karna chahte the.....uss Slayer ko kabhi bhi khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta......uska janm nahi hua tha usko banaya gaya tha....

Prateek - Main jaanta hu par aapko ab iski phikar karne ki jarurat nahi hai.....wo ab kabhi bhi wapas nahi aa sakta.....

Neelam - beta tum samajh nahi rahe wo har baar wapas aata hai......aur usko khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta.....tumhe humse ek wada karna hoga.....

Prateek ko apne prati unn dono ka itna sneh dekh bahut alag sa mehsus ho raha tha....wo bhavuk hota jaa raha tha.....

Prateek - kaisa wada....

Neelam - Tum kabhi khud se uske pass nahi jaaoge......wada karo ye.....

Prateek ne socha isme kya hai wo ye wada kar sakta hai.....par usne ye bhi socha tha ki wo ye wada jarur nibhayega.....chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.....

Prateek - theek hai.....Maa Papa main aap dono se wada karta hu.....

Dono ne ye sunna to wo khus ho gaye......

Pata nahi bahar kya ho raha tha kuch aawajein aayi Prateek ne darwaje ki taraf dekha....aur jab palat ke wapas Neelam aur Parth ki ooor dekha to wo dono dhundhle hone lag gaye the....

Prateek - aapke pass ab jyada waqt nahi hai.....humme bahar chalna chahiye wo sab aapko aakhiri baar dekhna chah rahe honge.....

Parth - Wo dekh chuke hai Prateek.....ab aur dekha to dukh hi milna hai bas.....

Neelam - sahi kaha......Tum apna dhyan rakhna beta....aur agar kabhi koi ghar ka kuch kah de to bura na manna.....baat sayad hi galat niikle par unka maksad tumhari bhalai hi hogi hamesha.....

Aisi hi kuch aur baatein karte gaye wo aur dhire dhire unki aakritiyan dhundhli hoti jaa rahi thi....aur waise waise hi Prateek ki aankhen nam hoti jaa rahi thi.....

Wo aaj iss baat ko bhi samajh raha tha ki Maa Baap ke hone ka kya matlab hota hai......wo khud to dukhon ki dhup mein jalte rahte hai par apne baccho ko sukh ke chaw mein rakhte hai....

Unke jaane ke baad Prateek apne bed pe baith gaya.....

Abhi kuch hi waqt to hua tha.....ki uske darwaje pe dastak hui......Jab darwaja khula to samne Madhu aur Pankaj the....dono hi thode pareshan se lag rahe the.....par apni pareshani chupane ki koshish kar rahe the...

Prateek ne darwaja khola aur side mein khada ho gaya......wo dono bhi ander aa gaye.....

Madhu - Kya wo dono chale gaye......

Prateek - Haaa wo challe gaye....

Pankaj - Hum hai tumhare saath.....

Prateek - Haa pata hai.....chalo bahar sabko bata aate hai ki Maa papa jaa chukke hai......wo waha intezar kar rahe honge.....

Pankaj - Haa.....

Pankaj ne haa to kaha par bahar jaane ke liye utha nahi wo baitha hi raha.....

Prateek - Kya baat hai....kuch hua hai kya....pareshan lag rahe ho.....

Pankaj ne Madhu ki taraf dekha....aur ishare mein usko batane ke liye kaha....par Madhu ne apni badi badi aakhen aur badi karke usko dikhai.....

Pankaj - wo bahar....Leader ne....wo Nikita se....kaha ki wo uska.....Leader uska Pita hai......

Prateek - Ooh.....haa to....

Prateek ka reaction dekh ke dono hi hairaan the.....unko aisa laga jaise ye iss baat ko pahle se jaanta ho.....unko lag raha tha Nikita iski dost hai to isko gussa aayega....wagera wagera par ye to.....

Pankaj - ye kya hai.....kya tumhe iss baare mein pahle se pata tha.....

Prateek - Haa....

Wo aage kuch bolta usse pahle hi Madhu ne gusse mein usse kaha......

Madhu - tumhe pata tha......tumhe ye pata tha to tumne bataya kyun nahi.......Nikita to dost hai tumhari......kyun nahi bataya usko.....

Uska gussa dekh ke Prateek ne uski puri baat naa batane ka socha....aur kaha....

Prateek - arre sunno to mujhe pura to karne do....Main jaanta hu ye baat par kuch waqt pahle hi pata chali jab yaha aa raha tha tabhi.....

Madhu - Mujhe sab kuch batao.....

Prateek - abhi ye jaruri hai kya....Mujhe dekhna hai bahar kya chal raha hai.....

Pankaj ne pahle to usko jo kuch hua sab short mein bataya aur uske baad bahar chal diye wo sab.....

Bahar aate hi Dadi ne usse puccha.....

Dadi - wo dono kaha hai......

Prateek - Dadi Maa Papa jaa chukke hai.....

Dadi ne jab ye sunna to wo rone lagi....wo thoda aur waqt bitana chahti thi....par Dada ji ne unko sambhal liya.....

Prateek kuch bolta usse pahle Daksh ne kaha.....

Daksh - Mujhe lagta hai ab humme bhi chalna chahiye.....

Ye bol ke unhone Pankaj ki taraf ghoorte hue dekha......

Wo janaa chahte the jo kuch hua Nikita ka wo sab kya tha...Leader ka sach janna chahte the wo...aur Leader se to Pankaj ke karan milla tha wo to usse hi puch sakta tha,....

Madhu - Kya Main bhi aaj aa sakti hu waha.....

Daksh ne ek baar wapas ghoora Pankaj ko.....aur phir bola....

Daksh - Isme bhi koi puchne ki baat hai......Wo tumhara bhi ghar hai....tum waha aa sakti ho jab mann kare.....

:sigh: update isse lamba tha.....par galti se file delete ho gayi.....Raat mein next update aayega usme DB ka Strange world jaana aur waha kya hoga wo sab dikhaya jaayega.....saath mein yaha ghar pe aur kya hota hai wo bhi.....
 

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UPDATE - 114

Parth ne sabko bata diya tha ki ab unke pass jyada waqt nahi baccha hai.....ab unko waha se jaana hoga.....Sabne ye baat sunni aur udaas ho gaye......

Ye sab jaante the ki wo kab ke jaa chukke the iske baad bhi wo iss ummid mein the ki wo issi roop mein yaha unke pass unke saath rah sakke......jo mumkin hi nahi tha......

Neelam - Dekho.....ye sab kaise uddas ho gaye.....tumhe ab meri baat samajh aa rahi hai.....

Madhu ne haa kaha unse......

Neelam usko wahi chod ke baaki sabhi ke pass aa gayi......waha pe Parth sabhi ko wapas se samjha raha tha ki wo waha se kab ke jaa chukke hai iss roop mein waha sabhi ke saath rahna mumkin hi nahi hai....

Neelam - Maine abhi tak apne bete ka room nehi dekha hai.....Prateek kya hum dekh sakte hai tumhara room....

Prateek ne jab ye sunna to wo kuch nahi bola...wo samajh hi nahi paaya ki kya bole......

Itne mein P.Bua ne kaha.....

P.Bua - ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai......Chalo iske kamre mein.....

Wo to chali bhi jaati room mein agar unko samajh nahi aaya hota ki room ki baat yaha pe kyun hui hai......thoda bura laga unko par wo bhi samajhdaar thi....

Wo jaanti thi kuch baatein hongi jo Neelam aur Parth bas Prateek se karna chahenge....kuch private baatein.....

Unhone picche mud ke Prateek ki taraf dekha.....

P.Bua - Prateek jaao apne Maa Papa ko apna room dikhao.....

Prateek ne kuch nahi kaha.....bas haa mein sar hilaya....wo bhi samajh chukka tha iss baat ko.....aur phir wo chal pada apne room ki taraf.......

Yaha wo tinno room mein gaye hi the ki Leader ne sabhi ko kaha......

Leader - Main aap sab ke saamne ek baat kahna chahta hu.....

Leader ko yaha pe acche se koi nahi jaanta tha.....bas itna hi pata tha ki Pankaj isko jaanta hai aur uske baad baaki sab se thodi bahut pahchan hai bas......

Jab Leader ne kaha usko kuch kahna hai to sab uski taraf dekhne lag gaye.......

DB ne dhirre se kaha bhi......

DB - Abhi sahi waqt nahi hai.......rukk jaao abhi.....

Leader ne iska jawab dhirre se diya.....

Leader - Abhi nahi to aur kab......ab to main unn sab chizzon se bhi aazad hu.....

DB usko samjhana chahta tha par ab teer kaman se nikal chukka tha....

Leader aage aaya....aur sabhi ki oor dekha.....sayad check kar raha tha ki sabhi ka dhyaan uski taraf hai bhi yaa nahi.....

Sab uski oor hi dekh rahe the.....ye dekhne ke baad Leader Nikita ki taraf dekhne lag gaya.....aur thoda aage badha.....

Wo kab se iss pal ka intezzar kar raha tha.....uske aankhon mein aanshu bhi aa chukke the....

Wahi Nikita ko ye baat samajh nahi aa rahi thi.....wo ye bilkul bhi samajh nahi paa rahi thi aakhir kya wajah hai ki ye aadmi uski taraf aa raha hai.....

Thodi pareshan thodi hairran si thi Nikita abhi.....par usko kya pata tha ye sab thodi hi der mein kya hone wala hai......

Leader - Nikita......Main....Main......Nikita....tumhara.....Main.....Tumhara Pita hu Nikita......

Ye Leader kuch aisa bolne wala hai iss baat ka pata nahi tha waha pe kisi ko.....par usne to bol diya tha.....

Sab ke sab hairaan the......

Aaj pata nahi ye sab aur kya kya dekhne wale the....abhi tak inhone Neelam aur Parth ko dekha tha aur ab ye Nikita ka Pita hai Leader ye dekh rahe the......

Sab ke sab hairaan the....bas Nikita ko chod ke......wo to jaise thodi der pahle thi waise hi abhi bhi thi......thoda bhi badlaaw nahi tha uske chahre pe.....

Leader - Nikita.....Beta main tumhara papa hu......

Ab bhi uske chahre pe koi bhi expression nahi badla tha......Leader ko ye baat samajh hi nahi aayi.....wo uske pass jaane wala tha ki tabhi Chachi apni jagah se hilli aur jaake Nikita ke saamne khadi ho gayi uske taraf muh karke.....

Chachi - nikal jao mere ghar se......niklo.....

Chachi to kuch kar hi deti uss leader ke saath......wo to DB ne unka dhyaan bata diya......

DB ne Leader ko pakda aur usko ghar se bahar leke jaane lag gaya.....

Leader kamzor tha pahle se par itna bhi nahi ki wo kisi bacche ki tarah DB ke saath chala jaayega......lekin iss waqt DB ke paas bhi wo hare rang ka heera tha jo usne Fumos se liya tha....aur wo usko kaafi taqat de raha tha....jiski wajah se wo aaram se Leader ko apne saath leke jaa paa raha tha.....par Leader wo kuch kar nah paa raha tha par bol paa raha tha.....

Wo wahi se chilla raha tha Nikita ko bulla raha tha.....

Leader - Nikita....Main tumhara Pita hu.....sach mein.....Meri baat sunno.....tum sab mujhe meri beti se durr nahi kar sakte......

Yaha Leader ghar ke darwaje se bahar gaya aur waha Nikita ke aankhon se aanshu bahar aane lag gaye.....

Ek aadmi itne waqt se uske aas pass tha.....usne kabhi usko iss baat ka ahsaas nahi hone diya....ki wo uska pita hai.....aur aaj pata nahi usko kya hua ki usne ye baat sabke saamne kahi.....wo kis chizz ke intezar mein tha.....

Bahut se sawal the sabhi ke mann mein aur unn sab se jyada sawal Nikita ke mann mein the.....

Jab ye hua to Daksh Pankaj ki taraf ghoor raha tha.....Pankaj hi tha wo jisne usko milaya tha uss Leader se....

Par pankaj bhi bechara kya kare......use bhi iske baare mein pata nahi chala tha....baat hi nahi iss baare mein jab Leader ko confirm hua ki Nikita uski beti hai....

Iss dauraan Rupal gusse mein darwaje ki taraf jaa rahi thi.....jiska pata Chachi ko lag gaya.....

Chachi - Rupal yaha aao.....aur Nikita ko room mein leke chalo......

Rupal - Par maa....

Chachi - Sunna nahi tumne maine kya kaha......chalo ander.....

Rupal didi kya hi kar leti.....chup chap pahle Chachi ke pass gayi phir waha se Nikita ko leke unke saath kamre ki oor badh gayi.....K.Bua bhi unke saath ander chali gayi....

Bahar jo bacche the wo bas ek dusre ko dekh rahe the......

Prateek ko apne room mein gaye waqt ho gaya tha.....Dadi se raha nahi nahi gaya wo ek aakhiri baar dono se aur milna chahti thi to unhone P.bua se kaha....par P.bua ne thoda rukne ko kaha

Wahi room mein aane ke baad Prateek side mein jaake khada ho gaya tha......

Neelam - Accha kamra hai ye to.....

Parth - Ye room hamare liye hi tha....

Neelam - Prateek tum bhi jaante ho humare pass waqt kam hai....hum yaha tumse bas ek baat karne aaye hai....humme nahi pata tum kis tarah Slayer ke pass jaa pahuche aur kis tarah usse bachke humme yaha leke aaye ho....par ek baat yaad rakhna.....wo hamesa wapas aata hai....

Parth - Haa beta hum iss baare mein hi baat karna chahte the.....uss Slayer ko kabhi bhi khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta......uska janm nahi hua tha usko banaya gaya tha....

Prateek - Main jaanta hu par aapko ab iski phikar karne ki jarurat nahi hai.....wo ab kabhi bhi wapas nahi aa sakta.....

Neelam - beta tum samajh nahi rahe wo har baar wapas aata hai......aur usko khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta.....tumhe humse ek wada karna hoga.....

Prateek ko apne prati unn dono ka itna sneh dekh bahut alag sa mehsus ho raha tha....wo bhavuk hota jaa raha tha.....

Prateek - kaisa wada....

Neelam - Tum kabhi khud se uske pass nahi jaaoge......wada karo ye.....

Prateek ne socha isme kya hai wo ye wada kar sakta hai.....par usne ye bhi socha tha ki wo ye wada jarur nibhayega.....chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.....

Prateek - theek hai.....Maa Papa main aap dono se wada karta hu.....

Dono ne ye sunna to wo khus ho gaye......

Pata nahi bahar kya ho raha tha kuch aawajein aayi Prateek ne darwaje ki taraf dekha....aur jab palat ke wapas Neelam aur Parth ki ooor dekha to wo dono dhundhle hone lag gaye the....

Prateek - aapke pass ab jyada waqt nahi hai.....humme bahar chalna chahiye wo sab aapko aakhiri baar dekhna chah rahe honge.....

Parth - Wo dekh chuke hai Prateek.....ab aur dekha to dukh hi milna hai bas.....

Neelam - sahi kaha......Tum apna dhyan rakhna beta....aur agar kabhi koi ghar ka kuch kah de to bura na manna.....baat sayad hi galat niikle par unka maksad tumhari bhalai hi hogi hamesha.....

Aisi hi kuch aur baatein karte gaye wo aur dhire dhire unki aakritiyan dhundhli hoti jaa rahi thi....aur waise waise hi Prateek ki aankhen nam hoti jaa rahi thi.....

Wo aaj iss baat ko bhi samajh raha tha ki Maa Baap ke hone ka kya matlab hota hai......wo khud to dukhon ki dhup mein jalte rahte hai par apne baccho ko sukh ke chaw mein rakhte hai....

Unke jaane ke baad Prateek apne bed pe baith gaya.....

Abhi kuch hi waqt to hua tha.....ki uske darwaje pe dastak hui......Jab darwaja khula to samne Madhu aur Pankaj the....dono hi thode pareshan se lag rahe the.....par apni pareshani chupane ki koshish kar rahe the...

Prateek ne darwaja khola aur side mein khada ho gaya......wo dono bhi ander aa gaye.....

Madhu - Kya wo dono chale gaye......

Prateek - Haaa wo challe gaye....

Pankaj - Hum hai tumhare saath.....

Prateek - Haa pata hai.....chalo bahar sabko bata aate hai ki Maa papa jaa chukke hai......wo waha intezar kar rahe honge.....

Pankaj - Haa.....

Pankaj ne haa to kaha par bahar jaane ke liye utha nahi wo baitha hi raha.....

Prateek - Kya baat hai....kuch hua hai kya....pareshan lag rahe ho.....

Pankaj ne Madhu ki taraf dekha....aur ishare mein usko batane ke liye kaha....par Madhu ne apni badi badi aakhen aur badi karke usko dikhai.....

Pankaj - wo bahar....Leader ne....wo Nikita se....kaha ki wo uska.....Leader uska Pita hai......

Prateek - Ooh.....haa to....

Prateek ka reaction dekh ke dono hi hairaan the.....unko aisa laga jaise ye iss baat ko pahle se jaanta ho.....unko lag raha tha Nikita iski dost hai to isko gussa aayega....wagera wagera par ye to.....

Pankaj - ye kya hai.....kya tumhe iss baare mein pahle se pata tha.....

Prateek - Haa....

Wo aage kuch bolta usse pahle hi Madhu ne gusse mein usse kaha......

Madhu - tumhe pata tha......tumhe ye pata tha to tumne bataya kyun nahi.......Nikita to dost hai tumhari......kyun nahi bataya usko.....

Uska gussa dekh ke Prateek ne uski puri baat naa batane ka socha....aur kaha....

Prateek - arre sunno to mujhe pura to karne do....Main jaanta hu ye baat par kuch waqt pahle hi pata chali jab yaha aa raha tha tabhi.....

Madhu - Mujhe sab kuch batao.....

Prateek - abhi ye jaruri hai kya....Mujhe dekhna hai bahar kya chal raha hai.....

Pankaj ne pahle to usko jo kuch hua sab short mein bataya aur uske baad bahar chal diye wo sab.....

Bahar aate hi Dadi ne usse puccha.....

Dadi - wo dono kaha hai......

Prateek - Dadi Maa Papa jaa chukke hai.....

Dadi ne jab ye sunna to wo rone lagi....wo thoda aur waqt bitana chahti thi....par Dada ji ne unko sambhal liya.....

Prateek kuch bolta usse pahle Daksh ne kaha.....

Daksh - Mujhe lagta hai ab humme bhi chalna chahiye.....

Ye bol ke unhone Pankaj ki taraf ghoorte hue dekha......

Wo janaa chahte the jo kuch hua Nikita ka wo sab kya tha...Leader ka sach janna chahte the wo...aur Leader se to Pankaj ke karan milla tha wo to usse hi puch sakta tha,....

Madhu - Kya Main bhi aaj aa sakti hu waha.....

Daksh ne ek baar wapas ghoora Pankaj ko.....aur phir bola....

Daksh - Isme bhi koi puchne ki baat hai......Wo tumhara bhi ghar hai....tum waha aa sakti ho jab mann kare.....

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Parth ne sabko bata diya tha ki ab unke pass jyada waqt nahi baccha hai.....ab unko waha se jaana hoga.....Sabne ye baat sunni aur udaas ho gaye......

Ye sab jaante the ki wo kab ke jaa chukke the iske baad bhi wo iss ummid mein the ki wo issi roop mein yaha unke pass unke saath rah sakke......jo mumkin hi nahi tha......

Neelam - Dekho.....ye sab kaise uddas ho gaye.....tumhe ab meri baat samajh aa rahi hai.....

Madhu ne haa kaha unse......

Neelam usko wahi chod ke baaki sabhi ke pass aa gayi......waha pe Parth sabhi ko wapas se samjha raha tha ki wo waha se kab ke jaa chukke hai iss roop mein waha sabhi ke saath rahna mumkin hi nahi hai....

Neelam - Maine abhi tak apne bete ka room nehi dekha hai.....Prateek kya hum dekh sakte hai tumhara room....

Prateek ne jab ye sunna to wo kuch nahi bola...wo samajh hi nahi paaya ki kya bole......

Itne mein P.Bua ne kaha.....

P.Bua - ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai......Chalo iske kamre mein.....

Wo to chali bhi jaati room mein agar unko samajh nahi aaya hota ki room ki baat yaha pe kyun hui hai......thoda bura laga unko par wo bhi samajhdaar thi....

Wo jaanti thi kuch baatein hongi jo Neelam aur Parth bas Prateek se karna chahenge....kuch private baatein.....

Unhone picche mud ke Prateek ki taraf dekha.....

P.Bua - Prateek jaao apne Maa Papa ko apna room dikhao.....

Prateek ne kuch nahi kaha.....bas haa mein sar hilaya....wo bhi samajh chukka tha iss baat ko.....aur phir wo chal pada apne room ki taraf.......

Yaha wo tinno room mein gaye hi the ki Leader ne sabhi ko kaha......

Leader - Main aap sab ke saamne ek baat kahna chahta hu.....

Leader ko yaha pe acche se koi nahi jaanta tha.....bas itna hi pata tha ki Pankaj isko jaanta hai aur uske baad baaki sab se thodi bahut pahchan hai bas......

Jab Leader ne kaha usko kuch kahna hai to sab uski taraf dekhne lag gaye.......

DB ne dhirre se kaha bhi......

DB - Abhi sahi waqt nahi hai.......rukk jaao abhi.....

Leader ne iska jawab dhirre se diya.....

Leader - Abhi nahi to aur kab......ab to main unn sab chizzon se bhi aazad hu.....

DB usko samjhana chahta tha par ab teer kaman se nikal chukka tha....

Leader aage aaya....aur sabhi ki oor dekha.....sayad check kar raha tha ki sabhi ka dhyaan uski taraf hai bhi yaa nahi.....

Sab uski oor hi dekh rahe the.....ye dekhne ke baad Leader Nikita ki taraf dekhne lag gaya.....aur thoda aage badha.....

Wo kab se iss pal ka intezzar kar raha tha.....uske aankhon mein aanshu bhi aa chukke the....

Wahi Nikita ko ye baat samajh nahi aa rahi thi.....wo ye bilkul bhi samajh nahi paa rahi thi aakhir kya wajah hai ki ye aadmi uski taraf aa raha hai.....

Thodi pareshan thodi hairran si thi Nikita abhi.....par usko kya pata tha ye sab thodi hi der mein kya hone wala hai......

Leader - Nikita......Main....Main......Nikita....tumhara.....Main.....Tumhara Pita hu Nikita......

Ye Leader kuch aisa bolne wala hai iss baat ka pata nahi tha waha pe kisi ko.....par usne to bol diya tha.....

Sab ke sab hairaan the......

Aaj pata nahi ye sab aur kya kya dekhne wale the....abhi tak inhone Neelam aur Parth ko dekha tha aur ab ye Nikita ka Pita hai Leader ye dekh rahe the......

Sab ke sab hairaan the....bas Nikita ko chod ke......wo to jaise thodi der pahle thi waise hi abhi bhi thi......thoda bhi badlaaw nahi tha uske chahre pe.....

Leader - Nikita.....Beta main tumhara papa hu......

Ab bhi uske chahre pe koi bhi expression nahi badla tha......Leader ko ye baat samajh hi nahi aayi.....wo uske pass jaane wala tha ki tabhi Chachi apni jagah se hilli aur jaake Nikita ke saamne khadi ho gayi uske taraf muh karke.....

Chachi - nikal jao mere ghar se......niklo.....

Chachi to kuch kar hi deti uss leader ke saath......wo to DB ne unka dhyaan bata diya......

DB ne Leader ko pakda aur usko ghar se bahar leke jaane lag gaya.....

Leader kamzor tha pahle se par itna bhi nahi ki wo kisi bacche ki tarah DB ke saath chala jaayega......lekin iss waqt DB ke paas bhi wo hare rang ka heera tha jo usne Fumos se liya tha....aur wo usko kaafi taqat de raha tha....jiski wajah se wo aaram se Leader ko apne saath leke jaa paa raha tha.....par Leader wo kuch kar nah paa raha tha par bol paa raha tha.....

Wo wahi se chilla raha tha Nikita ko bulla raha tha.....

Leader - Nikita....Main tumhara Pita hu.....sach mein.....Meri baat sunno.....tum sab mujhe meri beti se durr nahi kar sakte......

Yaha Leader ghar ke darwaje se bahar gaya aur waha Nikita ke aankhon se aanshu bahar aane lag gaye.....

Ek aadmi itne waqt se uske aas pass tha.....usne kabhi usko iss baat ka ahsaas nahi hone diya....ki wo uska pita hai.....aur aaj pata nahi usko kya hua ki usne ye baat sabke saamne kahi.....wo kis chizz ke intezar mein tha.....

Bahut se sawal the sabhi ke mann mein aur unn sab se jyada sawal Nikita ke mann mein the.....

Jab ye hua to Daksh Pankaj ki taraf ghoor raha tha.....Pankaj hi tha wo jisne usko milaya tha uss Leader se....

Par pankaj bhi bechara kya kare......use bhi iske baare mein pata nahi chala tha....baat hi nahi iss baare mein jab Leader ko confirm hua ki Nikita uski beti hai....

Iss dauraan Rupal gusse mein darwaje ki taraf jaa rahi thi.....jiska pata Chachi ko lag gaya.....

Chachi - Rupal yaha aao.....aur Nikita ko room mein leke chalo......

Rupal - Par maa....

Chachi - Sunna nahi tumne maine kya kaha......chalo ander.....

Rupal didi kya hi kar leti.....chup chap pahle Chachi ke pass gayi phir waha se Nikita ko leke unke saath kamre ki oor badh gayi.....K.Bua bhi unke saath ander chali gayi....

Bahar jo bacche the wo bas ek dusre ko dekh rahe the......

Prateek ko apne room mein gaye waqt ho gaya tha.....Dadi se raha nahi nahi gaya wo ek aakhiri baar dono se aur milna chahti thi to unhone P.bua se kaha....par P.bua ne thoda rukne ko kaha

Wahi room mein aane ke baad Prateek side mein jaake khada ho gaya tha......

Neelam - Accha kamra hai ye to.....

Parth - Ye room hamare liye hi tha....

Neelam - Prateek tum bhi jaante ho humare pass waqt kam hai....hum yaha tumse bas ek baat karne aaye hai....humme nahi pata tum kis tarah Slayer ke pass jaa pahuche aur kis tarah usse bachke humme yaha leke aaye ho....par ek baat yaad rakhna.....wo hamesa wapas aata hai....

Parth - Haa beta hum iss baare mein hi baat karna chahte the.....uss Slayer ko kabhi bhi khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta......uska janm nahi hua tha usko banaya gaya tha....

Prateek - Main jaanta hu par aapko ab iski phikar karne ki jarurat nahi hai.....wo ab kabhi bhi wapas nahi aa sakta.....

Neelam - beta tum samajh nahi rahe wo har baar wapas aata hai......aur usko khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta.....tumhe humse ek wada karna hoga.....

Prateek ko apne prati unn dono ka itna sneh dekh bahut alag sa mehsus ho raha tha....wo bhavuk hota jaa raha tha.....

Prateek - kaisa wada....

Neelam - Tum kabhi khud se uske pass nahi jaaoge......wada karo ye.....

Prateek ne socha isme kya hai wo ye wada kar sakta hai.....par usne ye bhi socha tha ki wo ye wada jarur nibhayega.....chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.....

Prateek - theek hai.....Maa Papa main aap dono se wada karta hu.....

Dono ne ye sunna to wo khus ho gaye......

Pata nahi bahar kya ho raha tha kuch aawajein aayi Prateek ne darwaje ki taraf dekha....aur jab palat ke wapas Neelam aur Parth ki ooor dekha to wo dono dhundhle hone lag gaye the....

Prateek - aapke pass ab jyada waqt nahi hai.....humme bahar chalna chahiye wo sab aapko aakhiri baar dekhna chah rahe honge.....

Parth - Wo dekh chuke hai Prateek.....ab aur dekha to dukh hi milna hai bas.....

Neelam - sahi kaha......Tum apna dhyan rakhna beta....aur agar kabhi koi ghar ka kuch kah de to bura na manna.....baat sayad hi galat niikle par unka maksad tumhari bhalai hi hogi hamesha.....

Aisi hi kuch aur baatein karte gaye wo aur dhire dhire unki aakritiyan dhundhli hoti jaa rahi thi....aur waise waise hi Prateek ki aankhen nam hoti jaa rahi thi.....

Wo aaj iss baat ko bhi samajh raha tha ki Maa Baap ke hone ka kya matlab hota hai......wo khud to dukhon ki dhup mein jalte rahte hai par apne baccho ko sukh ke chaw mein rakhte hai....

Unke jaane ke baad Prateek apne bed pe baith gaya.....

Abhi kuch hi waqt to hua tha.....ki uske darwaje pe dastak hui......Jab darwaja khula to samne Madhu aur Pankaj the....dono hi thode pareshan se lag rahe the.....par apni pareshani chupane ki koshish kar rahe the...

Prateek ne darwaja khola aur side mein khada ho gaya......wo dono bhi ander aa gaye.....

Madhu - Kya wo dono chale gaye......

Prateek - Haaa wo challe gaye....

Pankaj - Hum hai tumhare saath.....

Prateek - Haa pata hai.....chalo bahar sabko bata aate hai ki Maa papa jaa chukke hai......wo waha intezar kar rahe honge.....

Pankaj - Haa.....

Pankaj ne haa to kaha par bahar jaane ke liye utha nahi wo baitha hi raha.....

Prateek - Kya baat hai....kuch hua hai kya....pareshan lag rahe ho.....

Pankaj ne Madhu ki taraf dekha....aur ishare mein usko batane ke liye kaha....par Madhu ne apni badi badi aakhen aur badi karke usko dikhai.....

Pankaj - wo bahar....Leader ne....wo Nikita se....kaha ki wo uska.....Leader uska Pita hai......

Prateek - Ooh.....haa to....

Prateek ka reaction dekh ke dono hi hairaan the.....unko aisa laga jaise ye iss baat ko pahle se jaanta ho.....unko lag raha tha Nikita iski dost hai to isko gussa aayega....wagera wagera par ye to.....

Pankaj - ye kya hai.....kya tumhe iss baare mein pahle se pata tha.....

Prateek - Haa....

Wo aage kuch bolta usse pahle hi Madhu ne gusse mein usse kaha......

Madhu - tumhe pata tha......tumhe ye pata tha to tumne bataya kyun nahi.......Nikita to dost hai tumhari......kyun nahi bataya usko.....

Uska gussa dekh ke Prateek ne uski puri baat naa batane ka socha....aur kaha....

Prateek - arre sunno to mujhe pura to karne do....Main jaanta hu ye baat par kuch waqt pahle hi pata chali jab yaha aa raha tha tabhi.....

Madhu - Mujhe sab kuch batao.....

Prateek - abhi ye jaruri hai kya....Mujhe dekhna hai bahar kya chal raha hai.....

Pankaj ne pahle to usko jo kuch hua sab short mein bataya aur uske baad bahar chal diye wo sab.....

Bahar aate hi Dadi ne usse puccha.....

Dadi - wo dono kaha hai......

Prateek - Dadi Maa Papa jaa chukke hai.....

Dadi ne jab ye sunna to wo rone lagi....wo thoda aur waqt bitana chahti thi....par Dada ji ne unko sambhal liya.....

Prateek kuch bolta usse pahle Daksh ne kaha.....

Daksh - Mujhe lagta hai ab humme bhi chalna chahiye.....

Ye bol ke unhone Pankaj ki taraf ghoorte hue dekha......

Wo janaa chahte the jo kuch hua Nikita ka wo sab kya tha...Leader ka sach janna chahte the wo...aur Leader se to Pankaj ke karan milla tha wo to usse hi puch sakta tha,....

Madhu - Kya Main bhi aaj aa sakti hu waha.....

Daksh ne ek baar wapas ghoora Pankaj ko.....aur phir bola....

Daksh - Isme bhi koi puchne ki baat hai......Wo tumhara bhi ghar hai....tum waha aa sakti ho jab mann kare.....

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Parth ne sabko bata diya tha ki ab unke pass jyada waqt nahi baccha hai.....ab unko waha se jaana hoga.....Sabne ye baat sunni aur udaas ho gaye......

Ye sab jaante the ki wo kab ke jaa chukke the iske baad bhi wo iss ummid mein the ki wo issi roop mein yaha unke pass unke saath rah sakke......jo mumkin hi nahi tha......

Neelam - Dekho.....ye sab kaise uddas ho gaye.....tumhe ab meri baat samajh aa rahi hai.....

Madhu ne haa kaha unse......

Neelam usko wahi chod ke baaki sabhi ke pass aa gayi......waha pe Parth sabhi ko wapas se samjha raha tha ki wo waha se kab ke jaa chukke hai iss roop mein waha sabhi ke saath rahna mumkin hi nahi hai....

Neelam - Maine abhi tak apne bete ka room nehi dekha hai.....Prateek kya hum dekh sakte hai tumhara room....

Prateek ne jab ye sunna to wo kuch nahi bola...wo samajh hi nahi paaya ki kya bole......

Itne mein P.Bua ne kaha.....

P.Bua - ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai......Chalo iske kamre mein.....

Wo to chali bhi jaati room mein agar unko samajh nahi aaya hota ki room ki baat yaha pe kyun hui hai......thoda bura laga unko par wo bhi samajhdaar thi....

Wo jaanti thi kuch baatein hongi jo Neelam aur Parth bas Prateek se karna chahenge....kuch private baatein.....

Unhone picche mud ke Prateek ki taraf dekha.....

P.Bua - Prateek jaao apne Maa Papa ko apna room dikhao.....

Prateek ne kuch nahi kaha.....bas haa mein sar hilaya....wo bhi samajh chukka tha iss baat ko.....aur phir wo chal pada apne room ki taraf.......

Yaha wo tinno room mein gaye hi the ki Leader ne sabhi ko kaha......

Leader - Main aap sab ke saamne ek baat kahna chahta hu.....

Leader ko yaha pe acche se koi nahi jaanta tha.....bas itna hi pata tha ki Pankaj isko jaanta hai aur uske baad baaki sab se thodi bahut pahchan hai bas......

Jab Leader ne kaha usko kuch kahna hai to sab uski taraf dekhne lag gaye.......

DB ne dhirre se kaha bhi......

DB - Abhi sahi waqt nahi hai.......rukk jaao abhi.....

Leader ne iska jawab dhirre se diya.....

Leader - Abhi nahi to aur kab......ab to main unn sab chizzon se bhi aazad hu.....

DB usko samjhana chahta tha par ab teer kaman se nikal chukka tha....

Leader aage aaya....aur sabhi ki oor dekha.....sayad check kar raha tha ki sabhi ka dhyaan uski taraf hai bhi yaa nahi.....

Sab uski oor hi dekh rahe the.....ye dekhne ke baad Leader Nikita ki taraf dekhne lag gaya.....aur thoda aage badha.....

Wo kab se iss pal ka intezzar kar raha tha.....uske aankhon mein aanshu bhi aa chukke the....

Wahi Nikita ko ye baat samajh nahi aa rahi thi.....wo ye bilkul bhi samajh nahi paa rahi thi aakhir kya wajah hai ki ye aadmi uski taraf aa raha hai.....

Thodi pareshan thodi hairran si thi Nikita abhi.....par usko kya pata tha ye sab thodi hi der mein kya hone wala hai......

Leader - Nikita......Main....Main......Nikita....tumhara.....Main.....Tumhara Pita hu Nikita......

Ye Leader kuch aisa bolne wala hai iss baat ka pata nahi tha waha pe kisi ko.....par usne to bol diya tha.....

Sab ke sab hairaan the......

Aaj pata nahi ye sab aur kya kya dekhne wale the....abhi tak inhone Neelam aur Parth ko dekha tha aur ab ye Nikita ka Pita hai Leader ye dekh rahe the......

Sab ke sab hairaan the....bas Nikita ko chod ke......wo to jaise thodi der pahle thi waise hi abhi bhi thi......thoda bhi badlaaw nahi tha uske chahre pe.....

Leader - Nikita.....Beta main tumhara papa hu......

Ab bhi uske chahre pe koi bhi expression nahi badla tha......Leader ko ye baat samajh hi nahi aayi.....wo uske pass jaane wala tha ki tabhi Chachi apni jagah se hilli aur jaake Nikita ke saamne khadi ho gayi uske taraf muh karke.....

Chachi - nikal jao mere ghar se......niklo.....

Chachi to kuch kar hi deti uss leader ke saath......wo to DB ne unka dhyaan bata diya......

DB ne Leader ko pakda aur usko ghar se bahar leke jaane lag gaya.....

Leader kamzor tha pahle se par itna bhi nahi ki wo kisi bacche ki tarah DB ke saath chala jaayega......lekin iss waqt DB ke paas bhi wo hare rang ka heera tha jo usne Fumos se liya tha....aur wo usko kaafi taqat de raha tha....jiski wajah se wo aaram se Leader ko apne saath leke jaa paa raha tha.....par Leader wo kuch kar nah paa raha tha par bol paa raha tha.....

Wo wahi se chilla raha tha Nikita ko bulla raha tha.....

Leader - Nikita....Main tumhara Pita hu.....sach mein.....Meri baat sunno.....tum sab mujhe meri beti se durr nahi kar sakte......

Yaha Leader ghar ke darwaje se bahar gaya aur waha Nikita ke aankhon se aanshu bahar aane lag gaye.....

Ek aadmi itne waqt se uske aas pass tha.....usne kabhi usko iss baat ka ahsaas nahi hone diya....ki wo uska pita hai.....aur aaj pata nahi usko kya hua ki usne ye baat sabke saamne kahi.....wo kis chizz ke intezar mein tha.....

Bahut se sawal the sabhi ke mann mein aur unn sab se jyada sawal Nikita ke mann mein the.....

Jab ye hua to Daksh Pankaj ki taraf ghoor raha tha.....Pankaj hi tha wo jisne usko milaya tha uss Leader se....

Par pankaj bhi bechara kya kare......use bhi iske baare mein pata nahi chala tha....baat hi nahi iss baare mein jab Leader ko confirm hua ki Nikita uski beti hai....

Iss dauraan Rupal gusse mein darwaje ki taraf jaa rahi thi.....jiska pata Chachi ko lag gaya.....

Chachi - Rupal yaha aao.....aur Nikita ko room mein leke chalo......

Rupal - Par maa....

Chachi - Sunna nahi tumne maine kya kaha......chalo ander.....

Rupal didi kya hi kar leti.....chup chap pahle Chachi ke pass gayi phir waha se Nikita ko leke unke saath kamre ki oor badh gayi.....K.Bua bhi unke saath ander chali gayi....

Bahar jo bacche the wo bas ek dusre ko dekh rahe the......

Prateek ko apne room mein gaye waqt ho gaya tha.....Dadi se raha nahi nahi gaya wo ek aakhiri baar dono se aur milna chahti thi to unhone P.bua se kaha....par P.bua ne thoda rukne ko kaha

Wahi room mein aane ke baad Prateek side mein jaake khada ho gaya tha......

Neelam - Accha kamra hai ye to.....

Parth - Ye room hamare liye hi tha....

Neelam - Prateek tum bhi jaante ho humare pass waqt kam hai....hum yaha tumse bas ek baat karne aaye hai....humme nahi pata tum kis tarah Slayer ke pass jaa pahuche aur kis tarah usse bachke humme yaha leke aaye ho....par ek baat yaad rakhna.....wo hamesa wapas aata hai....

Parth - Haa beta hum iss baare mein hi baat karna chahte the.....uss Slayer ko kabhi bhi khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta......uska janm nahi hua tha usko banaya gaya tha....

Prateek - Main jaanta hu par aapko ab iski phikar karne ki jarurat nahi hai.....wo ab kabhi bhi wapas nahi aa sakta.....

Neelam - beta tum samajh nahi rahe wo har baar wapas aata hai......aur usko khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta.....tumhe humse ek wada karna hoga.....

Prateek ko apne prati unn dono ka itna sneh dekh bahut alag sa mehsus ho raha tha....wo bhavuk hota jaa raha tha.....

Prateek - kaisa wada....

Neelam - Tum kabhi khud se uske pass nahi jaaoge......wada karo ye.....

Prateek ne socha isme kya hai wo ye wada kar sakta hai.....par usne ye bhi socha tha ki wo ye wada jarur nibhayega.....chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.....

Prateek - theek hai.....Maa Papa main aap dono se wada karta hu.....

Dono ne ye sunna to wo khus ho gaye......

Pata nahi bahar kya ho raha tha kuch aawajein aayi Prateek ne darwaje ki taraf dekha....aur jab palat ke wapas Neelam aur Parth ki ooor dekha to wo dono dhundhle hone lag gaye the....

Prateek - aapke pass ab jyada waqt nahi hai.....humme bahar chalna chahiye wo sab aapko aakhiri baar dekhna chah rahe honge.....

Parth - Wo dekh chuke hai Prateek.....ab aur dekha to dukh hi milna hai bas.....

Neelam - sahi kaha......Tum apna dhyan rakhna beta....aur agar kabhi koi ghar ka kuch kah de to bura na manna.....baat sayad hi galat niikle par unka maksad tumhari bhalai hi hogi hamesha.....

Aisi hi kuch aur baatein karte gaye wo aur dhire dhire unki aakritiyan dhundhli hoti jaa rahi thi....aur waise waise hi Prateek ki aankhen nam hoti jaa rahi thi.....

Wo aaj iss baat ko bhi samajh raha tha ki Maa Baap ke hone ka kya matlab hota hai......wo khud to dukhon ki dhup mein jalte rahte hai par apne baccho ko sukh ke chaw mein rakhte hai....

Unke jaane ke baad Prateek apne bed pe baith gaya.....

Abhi kuch hi waqt to hua tha.....ki uske darwaje pe dastak hui......Jab darwaja khula to samne Madhu aur Pankaj the....dono hi thode pareshan se lag rahe the.....par apni pareshani chupane ki koshish kar rahe the...

Prateek ne darwaja khola aur side mein khada ho gaya......wo dono bhi ander aa gaye.....

Madhu - Kya wo dono chale gaye......

Prateek - Haaa wo challe gaye....

Pankaj - Hum hai tumhare saath.....

Prateek - Haa pata hai.....chalo bahar sabko bata aate hai ki Maa papa jaa chukke hai......wo waha intezar kar rahe honge.....

Pankaj - Haa.....

Pankaj ne haa to kaha par bahar jaane ke liye utha nahi wo baitha hi raha.....

Prateek - Kya baat hai....kuch hua hai kya....pareshan lag rahe ho.....

Pankaj ne Madhu ki taraf dekha....aur ishare mein usko batane ke liye kaha....par Madhu ne apni badi badi aakhen aur badi karke usko dikhai.....

Pankaj - wo bahar....Leader ne....wo Nikita se....kaha ki wo uska.....Leader uska Pita hai......

Prateek - Ooh.....haa to....

Prateek ka reaction dekh ke dono hi hairaan the.....unko aisa laga jaise ye iss baat ko pahle se jaanta ho.....unko lag raha tha Nikita iski dost hai to isko gussa aayega....wagera wagera par ye to.....

Pankaj - ye kya hai.....kya tumhe iss baare mein pahle se pata tha.....

Prateek - Haa....

Wo aage kuch bolta usse pahle hi Madhu ne gusse mein usse kaha......

Madhu - tumhe pata tha......tumhe ye pata tha to tumne bataya kyun nahi.......Nikita to dost hai tumhari......kyun nahi bataya usko.....

Uska gussa dekh ke Prateek ne uski puri baat naa batane ka socha....aur kaha....

Prateek - arre sunno to mujhe pura to karne do....Main jaanta hu ye baat par kuch waqt pahle hi pata chali jab yaha aa raha tha tabhi.....

Madhu - Mujhe sab kuch batao.....

Prateek - abhi ye jaruri hai kya....Mujhe dekhna hai bahar kya chal raha hai.....

Pankaj ne pahle to usko jo kuch hua sab short mein bataya aur uske baad bahar chal diye wo sab.....

Bahar aate hi Dadi ne usse puccha.....

Dadi - wo dono kaha hai......

Prateek - Dadi Maa Papa jaa chukke hai.....

Dadi ne jab ye sunna to wo rone lagi....wo thoda aur waqt bitana chahti thi....par Dada ji ne unko sambhal liya.....

Prateek kuch bolta usse pahle Daksh ne kaha.....

Daksh - Mujhe lagta hai ab humme bhi chalna chahiye.....

Ye bol ke unhone Pankaj ki taraf ghoorte hue dekha......

Wo janaa chahte the jo kuch hua Nikita ka wo sab kya tha...Leader ka sach janna chahte the wo...aur Leader se to Pankaj ke karan milla tha wo to usse hi puch sakta tha,....

Madhu - Kya Main bhi aaj aa sakti hu waha.....

Daksh ne ek baar wapas ghoora Pankaj ko.....aur phir bola....

Daksh - Isme bhi koi puchne ki baat hai......Wo tumhara bhi ghar hai....tum waha aa sakti ho jab mann kare.....

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Parth ne sabko bata diya tha ki ab unke pass jyada waqt nahi baccha hai.....ab unko waha se jaana hoga.....Sabne ye baat sunni aur udaas ho gaye......

Ye sab jaante the ki wo kab ke jaa chukke the iske baad bhi wo iss ummid mein the ki wo issi roop mein yaha unke pass unke saath rah sakke......jo mumkin hi nahi tha......

Neelam - Dekho.....ye sab kaise uddas ho gaye.....tumhe ab meri baat samajh aa rahi hai.....

Madhu ne haa kaha unse......

Neelam usko wahi chod ke baaki sabhi ke pass aa gayi......waha pe Parth sabhi ko wapas se samjha raha tha ki wo waha se kab ke jaa chukke hai iss roop mein waha sabhi ke saath rahna mumkin hi nahi hai....

Neelam - Maine abhi tak apne bete ka room nehi dekha hai.....Prateek kya hum dekh sakte hai tumhara room....

Prateek ne jab ye sunna to wo kuch nahi bola...wo samajh hi nahi paaya ki kya bole......

Itne mein P.Bua ne kaha.....

P.Bua - ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai......Chalo iske kamre mein.....

Wo to chali bhi jaati room mein agar unko samajh nahi aaya hota ki room ki baat yaha pe kyun hui hai......thoda bura laga unko par wo bhi samajhdaar thi....

Wo jaanti thi kuch baatein hongi jo Neelam aur Parth bas Prateek se karna chahenge....kuch private baatein.....

Unhone picche mud ke Prateek ki taraf dekha.....

P.Bua - Prateek jaao apne Maa Papa ko apna room dikhao.....

Prateek ne kuch nahi kaha.....bas haa mein sar hilaya....wo bhi samajh chukka tha iss baat ko.....aur phir wo chal pada apne room ki taraf.......

Yaha wo tinno room mein gaye hi the ki Leader ne sabhi ko kaha......

Leader - Main aap sab ke saamne ek baat kahna chahta hu.....

Leader ko yaha pe acche se koi nahi jaanta tha.....bas itna hi pata tha ki Pankaj isko jaanta hai aur uske baad baaki sab se thodi bahut pahchan hai bas......

Jab Leader ne kaha usko kuch kahna hai to sab uski taraf dekhne lag gaye.......

DB ne dhirre se kaha bhi......

DB - Abhi sahi waqt nahi hai.......rukk jaao abhi.....

Leader ne iska jawab dhirre se diya.....

Leader - Abhi nahi to aur kab......ab to main unn sab chizzon se bhi aazad hu.....

DB usko samjhana chahta tha par ab teer kaman se nikal chukka tha....

Leader aage aaya....aur sabhi ki oor dekha.....sayad check kar raha tha ki sabhi ka dhyaan uski taraf hai bhi yaa nahi.....

Sab uski oor hi dekh rahe the.....ye dekhne ke baad Leader Nikita ki taraf dekhne lag gaya.....aur thoda aage badha.....

Wo kab se iss pal ka intezzar kar raha tha.....uske aankhon mein aanshu bhi aa chukke the....

Wahi Nikita ko ye baat samajh nahi aa rahi thi.....wo ye bilkul bhi samajh nahi paa rahi thi aakhir kya wajah hai ki ye aadmi uski taraf aa raha hai.....

Thodi pareshan thodi hairran si thi Nikita abhi.....par usko kya pata tha ye sab thodi hi der mein kya hone wala hai......

Leader - Nikita......Main....Main......Nikita....tumhara.....Main.....Tumhara Pita hu Nikita......

Ye Leader kuch aisa bolne wala hai iss baat ka pata nahi tha waha pe kisi ko.....par usne to bol diya tha.....

Sab ke sab hairaan the......

Aaj pata nahi ye sab aur kya kya dekhne wale the....abhi tak inhone Neelam aur Parth ko dekha tha aur ab ye Nikita ka Pita hai Leader ye dekh rahe the......

Sab ke sab hairaan the....bas Nikita ko chod ke......wo to jaise thodi der pahle thi waise hi abhi bhi thi......thoda bhi badlaaw nahi tha uske chahre pe.....

Leader - Nikita.....Beta main tumhara papa hu......

Ab bhi uske chahre pe koi bhi expression nahi badla tha......Leader ko ye baat samajh hi nahi aayi.....wo uske pass jaane wala tha ki tabhi Chachi apni jagah se hilli aur jaake Nikita ke saamne khadi ho gayi uske taraf muh karke.....

Chachi - nikal jao mere ghar se......niklo.....

Chachi to kuch kar hi deti uss leader ke saath......wo to DB ne unka dhyaan bata diya......

DB ne Leader ko pakda aur usko ghar se bahar leke jaane lag gaya.....

Leader kamzor tha pahle se par itna bhi nahi ki wo kisi bacche ki tarah DB ke saath chala jaayega......lekin iss waqt DB ke paas bhi wo hare rang ka heera tha jo usne Fumos se liya tha....aur wo usko kaafi taqat de raha tha....jiski wajah se wo aaram se Leader ko apne saath leke jaa paa raha tha.....par Leader wo kuch kar nah paa raha tha par bol paa raha tha.....

Wo wahi se chilla raha tha Nikita ko bulla raha tha.....

Leader - Nikita....Main tumhara Pita hu.....sach mein.....Meri baat sunno.....tum sab mujhe meri beti se durr nahi kar sakte......

Yaha Leader ghar ke darwaje se bahar gaya aur waha Nikita ke aankhon se aanshu bahar aane lag gaye.....

Ek aadmi itne waqt se uske aas pass tha.....usne kabhi usko iss baat ka ahsaas nahi hone diya....ki wo uska pita hai.....aur aaj pata nahi usko kya hua ki usne ye baat sabke saamne kahi.....wo kis chizz ke intezar mein tha.....

Bahut se sawal the sabhi ke mann mein aur unn sab se jyada sawal Nikita ke mann mein the.....

Jab ye hua to Daksh Pankaj ki taraf ghoor raha tha.....Pankaj hi tha wo jisne usko milaya tha uss Leader se....

Par pankaj bhi bechara kya kare......use bhi iske baare mein pata nahi chala tha....baat hi nahi iss baare mein jab Leader ko confirm hua ki Nikita uski beti hai....

Iss dauraan Rupal gusse mein darwaje ki taraf jaa rahi thi.....jiska pata Chachi ko lag gaya.....

Chachi - Rupal yaha aao.....aur Nikita ko room mein leke chalo......

Rupal - Par maa....

Chachi - Sunna nahi tumne maine kya kaha......chalo ander.....

Rupal didi kya hi kar leti.....chup chap pahle Chachi ke pass gayi phir waha se Nikita ko leke unke saath kamre ki oor badh gayi.....K.Bua bhi unke saath ander chali gayi....

Bahar jo bacche the wo bas ek dusre ko dekh rahe the......

Prateek ko apne room mein gaye waqt ho gaya tha.....Dadi se raha nahi nahi gaya wo ek aakhiri baar dono se aur milna chahti thi to unhone P.bua se kaha....par P.bua ne thoda rukne ko kaha

Wahi room mein aane ke baad Prateek side mein jaake khada ho gaya tha......

Neelam - Accha kamra hai ye to.....

Parth - Ye room hamare liye hi tha....

Neelam - Prateek tum bhi jaante ho humare pass waqt kam hai....hum yaha tumse bas ek baat karne aaye hai....humme nahi pata tum kis tarah Slayer ke pass jaa pahuche aur kis tarah usse bachke humme yaha leke aaye ho....par ek baat yaad rakhna.....wo hamesa wapas aata hai....

Parth - Haa beta hum iss baare mein hi baat karna chahte the.....uss Slayer ko kabhi bhi khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta......uska janm nahi hua tha usko banaya gaya tha....

Prateek - Main jaanta hu par aapko ab iski phikar karne ki jarurat nahi hai.....wo ab kabhi bhi wapas nahi aa sakta.....

Neelam - beta tum samajh nahi rahe wo har baar wapas aata hai......aur usko khatam nahi kiya jaa sakta.....tumhe humse ek wada karna hoga.....

Prateek ko apne prati unn dono ka itna sneh dekh bahut alag sa mehsus ho raha tha....wo bhavuk hota jaa raha tha.....

Prateek - kaisa wada....

Neelam - Tum kabhi khud se uske pass nahi jaaoge......wada karo ye.....

Prateek ne socha isme kya hai wo ye wada kar sakta hai.....par usne ye bhi socha tha ki wo ye wada jarur nibhayega.....chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.....

Prateek - theek hai.....Maa Papa main aap dono se wada karta hu.....

Dono ne ye sunna to wo khus ho gaye......

Pata nahi bahar kya ho raha tha kuch aawajein aayi Prateek ne darwaje ki taraf dekha....aur jab palat ke wapas Neelam aur Parth ki ooor dekha to wo dono dhundhle hone lag gaye the....

Prateek - aapke pass ab jyada waqt nahi hai.....humme bahar chalna chahiye wo sab aapko aakhiri baar dekhna chah rahe honge.....

Parth - Wo dekh chuke hai Prateek.....ab aur dekha to dukh hi milna hai bas.....

Neelam - sahi kaha......Tum apna dhyan rakhna beta....aur agar kabhi koi ghar ka kuch kah de to bura na manna.....baat sayad hi galat niikle par unka maksad tumhari bhalai hi hogi hamesha.....

Aisi hi kuch aur baatein karte gaye wo aur dhire dhire unki aakritiyan dhundhli hoti jaa rahi thi....aur waise waise hi Prateek ki aankhen nam hoti jaa rahi thi.....

Wo aaj iss baat ko bhi samajh raha tha ki Maa Baap ke hone ka kya matlab hota hai......wo khud to dukhon ki dhup mein jalte rahte hai par apne baccho ko sukh ke chaw mein rakhte hai....

Unke jaane ke baad Prateek apne bed pe baith gaya.....

Abhi kuch hi waqt to hua tha.....ki uske darwaje pe dastak hui......Jab darwaja khula to samne Madhu aur Pankaj the....dono hi thode pareshan se lag rahe the.....par apni pareshani chupane ki koshish kar rahe the...

Prateek ne darwaja khola aur side mein khada ho gaya......wo dono bhi ander aa gaye.....

Madhu - Kya wo dono chale gaye......

Prateek - Haaa wo challe gaye....

Pankaj - Hum hai tumhare saath.....

Prateek - Haa pata hai.....chalo bahar sabko bata aate hai ki Maa papa jaa chukke hai......wo waha intezar kar rahe honge.....

Pankaj - Haa.....

Pankaj ne haa to kaha par bahar jaane ke liye utha nahi wo baitha hi raha.....

Prateek - Kya baat hai....kuch hua hai kya....pareshan lag rahe ho.....

Pankaj ne Madhu ki taraf dekha....aur ishare mein usko batane ke liye kaha....par Madhu ne apni badi badi aakhen aur badi karke usko dikhai.....

Pankaj - wo bahar....Leader ne....wo Nikita se....kaha ki wo uska.....Leader uska Pita hai......

Prateek - Ooh.....haa to....

Prateek ka reaction dekh ke dono hi hairaan the.....unko aisa laga jaise ye iss baat ko pahle se jaanta ho.....unko lag raha tha Nikita iski dost hai to isko gussa aayega....wagera wagera par ye to.....

Pankaj - ye kya hai.....kya tumhe iss baare mein pahle se pata tha.....

Prateek - Haa....

Wo aage kuch bolta usse pahle hi Madhu ne gusse mein usse kaha......

Madhu - tumhe pata tha......tumhe ye pata tha to tumne bataya kyun nahi.......Nikita to dost hai tumhari......kyun nahi bataya usko.....

Uska gussa dekh ke Prateek ne uski puri baat naa batane ka socha....aur kaha....

Prateek - arre sunno to mujhe pura to karne do....Main jaanta hu ye baat par kuch waqt pahle hi pata chali jab yaha aa raha tha tabhi.....

Madhu - Mujhe sab kuch batao.....

Prateek - abhi ye jaruri hai kya....Mujhe dekhna hai bahar kya chal raha hai.....

Pankaj ne pahle to usko jo kuch hua sab short mein bataya aur uske baad bahar chal diye wo sab.....

Bahar aate hi Dadi ne usse puccha.....

Dadi - wo dono kaha hai......

Prateek - Dadi Maa Papa jaa chukke hai.....

Dadi ne jab ye sunna to wo rone lagi....wo thoda aur waqt bitana chahti thi....par Dada ji ne unko sambhal liya.....

Prateek kuch bolta usse pahle Daksh ne kaha.....

Daksh - Mujhe lagta hai ab humme bhi chalna chahiye.....

Ye bol ke unhone Pankaj ki taraf ghoorte hue dekha......

Wo janaa chahte the jo kuch hua Nikita ka wo sab kya tha...Leader ka sach janna chahte the wo...aur Leader se to Pankaj ke karan milla tha wo to usse hi puch sakta tha,....

Madhu - Kya Main bhi aaj aa sakti hu waha.....

Daksh ne ek baar wapas ghoora Pankaj ko.....aur phir bola....

Daksh - Isme bhi koi puchne ki baat hai......Wo tumhara bhi ghar hai....tum waha aa sakti ho jab mann kare.....

:sigh: update isse lamba tha.....par galti se file delete ho gayi.....Raat mein next update aayega usme DB ka Strange world jaana aur waha kya hoga wo sab dikhaya jaayega.....saath mein yaha ghar pe aur kya hota hai wo bhi.....
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