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UPDATE - 113
Jab Parth aur Neelam ki aakritiyon mein Golden power gaya.....dono ke dono hi chamakne lag gaye the.....aur wo bhi bahut jyada......logo ko aankhen band karni pad gayi thi thodi der mein......
Sabhi ko nahi.....
Pujari ji iss roshani ko jaante the.....unki aankhon mein itni kshamta thi ki wo isko dekh sakke.....Prateek ka bhi aisa hi tha....aur Madhu ke baare mein kya kahna wo to khud hi Golden power ki source thi......
Dadi (Aankhen kholne ki koshish karte hue) - Rukk jaao abhi.....abhi mat jaao.....
Band aankhon se bhi aansu bahe jaa rahe the....
Unko aisa laga sayad Neelam aur Parth jaa rahe hai iss wajah se ye te roshani hui hai......Baaki sab ko bhi aisa hi lag raha tha.....ab unhone hi bataya tha unke jaane ka waqt ho chala hai.....aur ab kuch waisa hua....to sabko laga ki wo jaa hi rahe honge......
Ab roj roj to aatmayein aati nahi waha pe.....to unhone aisa soch liya......aur Dadi hi kya.....lagbhag sabhi ka yahi haal tha......
Ek to unn dono se milne ki koi ummid hi nahi thi sabhi ke pass aur wo aaj waha pe aa gaye the....aur ab jaane bhi wale the wo bhi itni jaldi......
Neelam aur Parth ko iss waqt kuch alag hi lag raha tha.....wo pahle se energy ke form mein the.....aur ab ye energy aur milne se wo aur jyada energetic ho gaye the....
Prateek Madhu ki taraf dekh raha tha bas......uske dimmag mein bas yahi baat chal rahi thi ki agar kahi uski sochi baatein sach ho gayi to naa jaane kya hoga.....Agar yaha pe Madhu sambhal nahi paayegi to bahut muskil hone wali thi......agar aisa nahi hua to naa sirf Madhu ko pareshani hogi balki waha pe jo koi bhi hai sabhi ko......
Golden energy creative energy hai par cancer jaisi bimari bhi kharab cells ke bahut matra mein creation hone ke karan hi hoti hai....Prateek iss baat ko jaanta tha agar Golden power kisi tarah yaha pe bahar aane lag gaya aur Madhu ne kaabu nahi kiya to wo energy yaha pe khade sabhi ko itni takat de dega ki saare ke saare uss takat ki matra se mar jaayenge.....bas yahi nahi wo badhti hi jaayegi aur kaha rukegi iska anuman lagana muskil hoga......
Wahi dusri taraf Madhu......wo bas ye soch rahi thi ki chalo kuch Prateek ke Maa Papa abhi waha pe aur rahne wale hai.....usne ye sab socha hi nahi ki usne ye kaise kiya.....yaa kya kiya usne.....aisa kuch bhi nahi....wo bas khush si thi.....ki usne kuch accha kiya hai.......muskura rahi thi wo.....
Prateek usko hi dekh raha tha.....usko muskurate hue dekh wo kuch samajh hi nahi paaya.....usne kya kya soch rakha tha.......
Overthinking bahut buri chizz hoti hai
log naa jaane kya kya soch ke baith jaate hai......(log to itne chutiye hote hai kya bataye sawal puchne se katrate hai kahi jawab dene wala uss sawal ko hi galat naa bata de....)
Khair iss dauran Neelam aur Parth ke aakritiyon se nikalne wali roshani thodi kam hui thi par wo thi abhi bhi....ab log apni aakhen khol paa rahe the......
Jab sabhi ne baari baari se ye dekha ki wo dono abhi bhi wahi pe hai to sab bahut khush hue....ummid nahi thi naa iss baat ki.....
Sab wapas se unki taraf badh gaye......jaise pakadna chahte ho.....Ye pata nahi kya tha.....koi sazza yaa phir kuch aur......wo sab Neelam aur Parth ke samne the.....par chu nahi sakte the.....ek pal ko unko laga ki sayad ab wo waha se chale jaayenge.....par dusre pal wo waha se gaye nahi kuch der ke liye aur wahi pe rahne wale the.....
Ummid ye kisi sazza se kam nahi hoti.....bahut dukh deti hai ye ummid.....Khair iss waqt Madhu jo bas muskura rahi thi usko Pujari ji ne picche apne pass bula liya.....chunne ke baad wo khud se picche to gayi thi par abhi bhi pass mein hi thi Parth aur Neelam ke...
Pujari ji usko apne pass bula lete hai....
Prateek iss waqt tak usko hi dekh raha tha to usne ye bhi dekha....aur ye dekhte hi usko bahut gussa aaya.....Pujari ji ne abhi jo kiya tha uska natiza bahut bura ho sakta tha.....
Par abhi Prateek kuch kar nahi sakta tha siway chup chap khade rahne ke......
Dadi - Prateek......Prateek kya kar rahe ho.....hum kab se tumhe bula rahe hai....
Prateek - Haa Dadi....wo main bas.....
Dadi - Yaha aao....(Prateek ka haath pakad ke) Neelam tumne to kah diya ki humne koi aisa kaam nahi kiya tha jiski wajah se humme tum dono se maafi maangi pade.....par tum bhi jaanti ho.....agar uss waaqt humne shant dimmag se socha hota to.....sayad aaj hum sab saath hote.....aur Prateek ko itne waqt tak......apne pariwar se durr nahi rahna padta....
Neelam - Ye sab to kismat ki baat hai.....agar hum yaha pe hote aap sab ke saath to sayad kuch aur bhi bura ho jaata....aapko inn sab ke baare mein nahi sochna chahiye.....
Paarth - Haa Maa aap kyun baar baar ye sab soch ke khud ko taklif deti ho.....kuch chizzen humne khud bhi chunni thi....(Chacha ki oor dekhte hue) Maa aapko yaad hai jab Bhaiya ne mujhse dost banane ke baare mein baatein kahi thi....aur main unki baaton ka mazak udda raha tha....
Dadi - Haa yaad hai....uss din tum dono ke bich kaha sunni bhi ho gayi thi issi wajah se.....aur maine tinno ko sazza di thi....
Paarth -
haa galti hum dono karte the aur sazza Poonam ko bhi di jaati thi....(shant hoker) Maa uss waqt hi der ho gayi thi.....
Waha Parth Dadi se baatein kar raha tha to dusri taraf Daksh Neelam se....
Daksh - Neelam tu chinta mat karna....Main Prateek ke sath rahunga.....uska dhyaan rakhunga....
Neelam - ye bhi koi kahne ki baat hai Bhaiya.....Mujhe to pata hi hai aap aisa hi karoge.....agar nahi kiya to...to aap jaante hai na main aapse naraz ho jaaungi....
Iss baat ko kahte hue uske aakhon mein bhi aashu wapas aa gaye the saath hi Daksh ke bhi....
Daksh se raha nahi gaya aur ek baar phir se apna haath aage badhaya usne apni bahen ke aashu pochne ke liye......aur jab aisa hua.....to dono hi hairaan ho gaye.....
Iss baar pata nahi kaise.....par jab Daksh ne Neelam ki aakriti ko chunne ki koshish kari to usko kuch kuch mehsoos hua tha.....aur aisa hi kuch khud Neelam ko bhi laga tha.....
Daksh (aankhen badi karte hue) - Neelam.....kya...tujhe bhi....
Neelam - Haa....haa bhaiya maine apka haath mehsoos kiya....kya aapne bhi....
Daksh - Haa....Neelam haa....rukko.....Prateek....Prateek yaha aao....
Prateek jo iss waqt dadi ke sath wo us taraf mudta usse pahle hi Neelam khud uske pass pahuch chukki thi.....wo kuch samajh paata usse pahle hi Neelam ne apna haath uski taraf badha diya tha......wo picche jaana chahta tha par der ho chukkki thi......
Neelam ne usko chu liya tha.....
Prateek ne sabse pahle apne ander maujood dark power ko ekdum se apne dil ke pass ikatha kar liya......Dark power pure sarir mein hota hai uske.....par isme der ho gayi thi.....
Neelam ki aakriti jo abhi chamak rahi thi wo dhire dhire wapas se dhimmi padti jaa rahi thi....
Parth - ye kya ho raha hai.....tum aisi kyun.....
Madhu jo ye sab dekh rahi thi.....usne jaise hi dekha ki Neelam wapas se dhundhli hoti jaa rahi hai.....wo apni jagah se aage badh gayi.....aur theek Prateek ke pass jaake khadi ho gayi....aur apna haath unki taraf badhaya....
Madhu - Hello....Main Madhu hu....apke bete ki dost......
Madhu ka haath lagna tha Golden power wapas se jaane lag gaya Neelam ki taraf......
Abhi Neelam ko kaisa mehsoos ho raha tha ye baat sirf Neelam hi samajh paa rahi thi aur saath mein Prateek......haa chunne ki wajah se thoda bahut Madhu ko bhi samajh aa raha tha......
Jab Madhu ne Neelam ko chua to uske dimmag mein tasveerein banne lag gayi.....andhera jo ujale ko khaye jaa raha tha....par uss andhere ke bich se hi ek roshni badhne lagi jo uss andhere ko khati jaa rahi thi....aur uss roshani ke biche mein se phir se ek andera.....aur aise hi bahut se andhere aur bahut se ujale.....sab dikh rahi thi Madhu ko......
Neelam ki aakriti jaise kisi bulb ki tarah ho chali thi.....abhi chamak rahi hai aur uske turant baad dhundhli......Uske mann mein bhi ek tasveer ban rahi thi......aur ye ajeeb thi.....ek taraf ujala hi ujala aur dusre taraf besummar andhera....itna ki kuch kaha hi nahi jaa sakta....aur wo unn dono ke hi sarhad pe khadi thi....kabhi iss taraf to kabhi uss taraf......
Ek baar to usne apna haath Prateek se alag kiya.....to usko wo sab dikhana band ho gaya ab wo bas ujale mein thi.....par usko ye ujala pasand nahi aaya aur wo haath jo Prateek se durr jaa raha tha wo wapas uske pas jaa pahucha.....
Prateek ke baare mein kya kaha jaaye......usko emotions jyada pasand nahi the.....pahle bilkul nahi aur ab thodi bahut aa rahi thi.....lekin abhi jo usne dekha....wo khud ko sambhal nahi paa raha tha.....Neelam uss jaal mein wapas aa gayi......uss dard ko usne apna liya....bas Prateek yaani apne bete ko chune ke liye.....
Prateek ne apne hazaron saal ke jeevan mein ye kabhi nahi dekha tha....haa jab yaha Earth pe tha to aisi chizen dekhi thi usne par kabhi mehsoos nahi kari thi.....aaj wo mehsoos kar raha tha......
Uske aankhon se aanshu girne lag gaye.....
Neelam - Parth Main apne bete ko chu sakti hu usko mehsoos kar sakti hu.....
Parth - Par ye.....tum iss tarah se....
Neelam - Kisi chizz ko apnanane ke liye kisi dusre chizz ko chodna padta hai bas wahi kar rahi hu.....(Madhu ki oor dekhte hue) Tum Mere Prateek ki dost ho....
Madhu ko khud wo sab mehsoos ho raha tha....usko to ye sunai bhi nahi diya tha....wo to bas Neelam ke chahre ko dekh rahi thi.....usko jab Neelam ke honth chalte hue dikhai diye tab usne puccha...
Madhu - haa.....kya hua.....
Neelam - Kuch nahi....Main bas puch rahi thi tum iski dost ho....
Madhu ne Prateek ki oor dekha bhi nahi bas haa mein sar hilla diya......wo iss waqt bahut kuch mehsoos kar rahi thi.....aur usne bahut saare ummid laga liye the......jaise jab wo apni maa se milegi to kya wo bhi issi tarah usko pyar karegi....aur bhi naa jaane kya kya....
uske aankhon se bhi aanshu gir jaate hai.....
Neelam apna haath aage karti hai aur uske aanshuyon ko pochne ke koshish karti hai....
Parth bhi waha aa jaata hai aur wo bhi Prateek ko chunne wala hota hai.....ye dekhte hi Madhu ne apna haath uske pass mein bhi laga diya hota hai.....ab wo sab Parth bhi mehsoos kar raha tha.....
Parth ne thodi der mein hi usko chod diya par baatein hoti rahi......
yaha pe ye sab chalta raha......
Dusri taraf Lucifer tha.....ab gussa dab gaya tha shant nahi hua tha.....kisi murde ki tarah apni gaddi pe baitha hua tha wo.....
Jab kabhi Raja udass yaa nirash hota hai.....to koi aur aa jaata hai uski jagah lene ko......kuch aisa yaha pe hone wala tha.....par abhi usme thoda waqt hai.....
Demos pe bas sanata tha......charo taraf hi sannata tha.....
Par yaha se jyada dur nahi Fumos pe.....waha bahut halchal thi.....
Dhruv khud ko Slayer ke sarir mein rakhne ke liye sangharsh kar raha tha......
Abhi tak usko ye pata nahi chala tha aakhir ye ho kya raha hai.....
Dhruv ne jinn aatmaon ko Slayer ke ander bandhi banane ke liye kaid kiya tha.....unhi aatmaon se takat khinch raha tha Justin......aur khud ko usse jyada takatwar banane ki koshish kar raha tha......Par ye ho nahi paa raha tha......
Lekin wo haar nahi maan raha tha bas laga hua tha.....
Dhruv thakta jaa raha tha....usko ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aakhir ye kyun ho raha hai.....koshish bahut kari usne ye janne ke liye par jaan hi nahi paa raha tha.....koi andaja h nahi tha....uske hisab se usne Slayer ke sarir ko khula chod diya tha.....aur sab nikal aye the......
Usne iss baare mein socha tha ki sayad jinn aatmaon ko usne Dark world se uthaya unme se koi ek hoga.....par isko dimmag se nikal diya usne turant hi.....aisa ho hi nahi sakta tha....agar aisa hota to usko unse ladne mein waqt lagta....aise hi khatam nahi kar deta unn sab ko.....
Usne kya kisi ne bhi nahi socha hoga ki khule pinare ke ander se koi parinda bahar hi naa aaye.....Justin wahi parinda tha yaha pe.....
Dhruv ne iss baare mein sandesh bhejne ke baare mein socha Prateek ko.....par wo kar nahi paaya.....isse pahle to wo dono judde hue the....matlab jab kabhi bhi dono mein se kisi ka mann hua dusre se baat kar leta tha......normally....haa agar koi khass wajah ho tab ye mumkin nahi ho paata tha.....
Khair wo Prateek ko koi sandesha nahi de paaya.....aur bas wahi pe rah gaya......aisa nahi usne koshish nahi kari...
EK baar do baar teen baar usne koshish kari....par kuch bhi nahi hua.....aur phir wo kamzor pad gaya......
ye mauka tha.....Justin ke liye......iss waqt usne Slayer ki body pe kaabu karna shuru kar diya.....aur usne bhi yahi koshish kari.....
Kisi tarah apne pita Lucifer tak apni baat pahuchane ke baare mein.....
Par yaha bhi wahi baat ho rahi thi.....wo kahi bhi jaata kuch bhi try karta kaam nahi ho raha tha......usne ek baar pedon ko todne ki koshish kari.....jiske baad usne khud ko jamin pe girra pada paaya.....
Wo bhi koshish karta gaya par kaam nahi bana uska bhi....
Ye sab kuch waha upar se wo immortal baitha dekh raha tha aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha.....
Ye Immortal bhi ajeeb tha isne dark power ko dekha tha uss planet pe....par isko usse jyada jaruri ye sab laga.....aur inn sab mein iss tarah se uljha hai ki usne wapas jaake kuch batane ke baare mein bhi nahi socha abhi tak.....
Dark power ki baat aayi hai to wapas chalte hai Earth pe.....
Yaha pe ab haal aisa tha ki thodi der aur thodi der aur ki kahani chal rahi thi.......
Koi nahi chahta tha wo dono waha se wapas jaaye......aur Madhu wo sabhi se sahmet thi......bas ek Pujari ji aur DB hi the waha pe......jinko sab dikhai de raha tha......
Golden power ka asar unn dono pe uss waqt tak hi rahne wali thi jab tak Madhu chahe....aur yaha pe Madhu ko khud hi pata nahi uske pass aisi koi shakti bhi hai......wo to ye sab kisi aur wajah se ho raha hai aisa soch rahi thi......
DB jaanta tha wo gujar chukke hai....aur gujre hue pallo ko bandh ke rakhne se khusi milti hai par usse jyada dukh bhi.....
DB ne iss baat ka jikar Pujari ji se kiya.....Pujari ji bhi uski baat se sahmet the......
Pujari ji ne Madhu ko apne oor aane ka ishara kiya......Madhu ne unko dekha usko laga ki agar usne unn dono ko chod diya to unko waha se jaana pad jaayega.....par iss baat ko Neelam ne bhi dekh liya tha.......wo Madhu ko hi dekhe jaa rahi thi.....
Neelam - Madhu beta wo log bhi dost hai kya.....
DB wahi pe tha aur Madhu ko waha jaana bhi tha to....
Madhu - Saare nahi unme se ek Pujari ji hai....ek baaki ke dono dost hai....
Neelam - Parth chalo unse bhi milte hai.....
Waise to Parth ko waha jaane ki koi ichaa nahi thi par Neelam ke kahne pe wo chala gaya....
Jab wo waha aaye to pahle to intro hua uske baad Parth Leader se aur Neelam DB se baat karne lag gayi.....
Madhu - Kya hua Pujari ji.....
Pujari ji - Madhu inke jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai.....
Madhu - Par abhi kaise.....abhi to ye aaye hai.....
Pujari ji - Madhu inka yaha jyada der tak rukna accha nahi hai.....ye apne aage ke safar mein pahle se hi bahut picche chuttein hue hai ab agar aur der hui to aur picche ho jaayenge....
Neelam - Madhu Pujari ji sahi kah rahe hai.....Mujhe bhi lagta hai ab humme yaha se jaana chahiye....
Neelam bas yun hi baatein kar rahi thi DB se par uska pura dhyaan to yaha tha Madhu aur Pujari ji pe......jab usne unki baat sunni to usko bhi wo baat sahi lagi....
Madhu - Par aap abhi bhi yaha rah sakti ho....
Neelam - Kab tak beta....kab tak tum hamare saath aise rahogi....
Madhu - Agar aap chale gaye to Prateek ka kya hoga....aur baaki sab ka.....dekho sab kitna pyaar karte hai aapse....
Neelam - Hum dono to kab ke jaa chukke hai beta....ye to yaha pe bas Prateek aur tumhare wajah se aa paaye hai....aur rukke hue hai....waha dekho unn sab ko......hum jitni der yaha pe rukenge naa hamare jaane ke baad utna hi dukh hoga unn sab ko.....hame ab jaana hi hoga....
Madhu - Main kya aapse kuch puch sakti hu.....
Neelam - Isme sochna kya hai.....jarur puccho tumne humme waqt diya hai aur sath mein apne bete ko ek baar chunne ka mauka bhi....puccho kya puchna hai....
Madhu - Kya sabke Maa Papa aap logo ke tarah hi pyaar karte hai apne baccho se.....
Neelam - Nahi beta.....sabke aise nahi karte isse bhi jyada karte hai.....Maa baap ke pyaar ko dusro ke maa baap ke pyar se compare karna bahut muskil hai.....bahut jyada.....Mujhe pata hai tumhe mere ander kya chal raha hai sab pata chal chukka hai.....hai naa.....ek raaz ki baat batao Mujhe bhi pata chal gaya hai tumhare ander ke baaton ka.....to chinta mat karo....jab tum apne Maa papa ke pass jaaogi aur unko pata chalega ki unki itni pyaari itni acchi beti hai to wo tumhe bahut pyaar karenge....samjhi...
Parth - Haa sahi kaha.....(Pujari ji se) Humme ek aakhiri baar unn sab ko alvida kahne ka mauka dijiye....
Pujari ji - Aap kaisi baat kar rahe hai ye sab mere haath mein nahi...(Parth ka ishara samajhte hue) haa ha....jarur Madhu.....ab inko padke rahne ka koi matlab nahi hai....inko chod do...ye khud se kuch der mein yaha se chale jayenge...
Madhu ne Parth ko to chod diya par Neelam ko chodne se pahle uske gale lagi thi wo.....sab dekh rahe the usko....
Parth waha pe gaya aur usne sabhi ko bataya ki ab unke jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai....wo aur der tak nahi ruk sakte....
Wapas se sabki aakhen bhar aayi Neelam ne Madhu ko sabhi ki oor dekhate hue kaha dekho ye wapas se uddas ho gaye.....par inke ander ek ummid hai abhi bhi ki sayad hum thodi der aur rukk jayenge....wapas se....
Ye jhuthi ummid jab tak nahi tutegi badhti hi jaayegi aur bahut dukh degi inhe.....
Madhu ne uski baat sunni aur haa mein gardan hilayi.....
Next update mein dekhte hai Nikita ka case.....yaha pe kya hota hai aur saath hi Strange world ki baatein kaise DB wo karta hai jo usne karne ka socha tha
Jab Parth aur Neelam ki aakritiyon mein Golden power gaya.....dono ke dono hi chamakne lag gaye the.....aur wo bhi bahut jyada......logo ko aankhen band karni pad gayi thi thodi der mein......
Sabhi ko nahi.....
Pujari ji iss roshani ko jaante the.....unki aankhon mein itni kshamta thi ki wo isko dekh sakke.....Prateek ka bhi aisa hi tha....aur Madhu ke baare mein kya kahna wo to khud hi Golden power ki source thi......
Dadi (Aankhen kholne ki koshish karte hue) - Rukk jaao abhi.....abhi mat jaao.....
Band aankhon se bhi aansu bahe jaa rahe the....
Unko aisa laga sayad Neelam aur Parth jaa rahe hai iss wajah se ye te roshani hui hai......Baaki sab ko bhi aisa hi lag raha tha.....ab unhone hi bataya tha unke jaane ka waqt ho chala hai.....aur ab kuch waisa hua....to sabko laga ki wo jaa hi rahe honge......
Ab roj roj to aatmayein aati nahi waha pe.....to unhone aisa soch liya......aur Dadi hi kya.....lagbhag sabhi ka yahi haal tha......
Ek to unn dono se milne ki koi ummid hi nahi thi sabhi ke pass aur wo aaj waha pe aa gaye the....aur ab jaane bhi wale the wo bhi itni jaldi......
Neelam aur Parth ko iss waqt kuch alag hi lag raha tha.....wo pahle se energy ke form mein the.....aur ab ye energy aur milne se wo aur jyada energetic ho gaye the....
Prateek Madhu ki taraf dekh raha tha bas......uske dimmag mein bas yahi baat chal rahi thi ki agar kahi uski sochi baatein sach ho gayi to naa jaane kya hoga.....Agar yaha pe Madhu sambhal nahi paayegi to bahut muskil hone wali thi......agar aisa nahi hua to naa sirf Madhu ko pareshani hogi balki waha pe jo koi bhi hai sabhi ko......
Golden energy creative energy hai par cancer jaisi bimari bhi kharab cells ke bahut matra mein creation hone ke karan hi hoti hai....Prateek iss baat ko jaanta tha agar Golden power kisi tarah yaha pe bahar aane lag gaya aur Madhu ne kaabu nahi kiya to wo energy yaha pe khade sabhi ko itni takat de dega ki saare ke saare uss takat ki matra se mar jaayenge.....bas yahi nahi wo badhti hi jaayegi aur kaha rukegi iska anuman lagana muskil hoga......
Wahi dusri taraf Madhu......wo bas ye soch rahi thi ki chalo kuch Prateek ke Maa Papa abhi waha pe aur rahne wale hai.....usne ye sab socha hi nahi ki usne ye kaise kiya.....yaa kya kiya usne.....aisa kuch bhi nahi....wo bas khush si thi.....ki usne kuch accha kiya hai.......muskura rahi thi wo.....
Prateek usko hi dekh raha tha.....usko muskurate hue dekh wo kuch samajh hi nahi paaya.....usne kya kya soch rakha tha.......
Overthinking bahut buri chizz hoti hai
log naa jaane kya kya soch ke baith jaate hai......(log to itne chutiye hote hai kya bataye sawal puchne se katrate hai kahi jawab dene wala uss sawal ko hi galat naa bata de....)Khair iss dauran Neelam aur Parth ke aakritiyon se nikalne wali roshani thodi kam hui thi par wo thi abhi bhi....ab log apni aakhen khol paa rahe the......
Jab sabhi ne baari baari se ye dekha ki wo dono abhi bhi wahi pe hai to sab bahut khush hue....ummid nahi thi naa iss baat ki.....
Sab wapas se unki taraf badh gaye......jaise pakadna chahte ho.....Ye pata nahi kya tha.....koi sazza yaa phir kuch aur......wo sab Neelam aur Parth ke samne the.....par chu nahi sakte the.....ek pal ko unko laga ki sayad ab wo waha se chale jaayenge.....par dusre pal wo waha se gaye nahi kuch der ke liye aur wahi pe rahne wale the.....
Ummid ye kisi sazza se kam nahi hoti.....bahut dukh deti hai ye ummid.....Khair iss waqt Madhu jo bas muskura rahi thi usko Pujari ji ne picche apne pass bula liya.....chunne ke baad wo khud se picche to gayi thi par abhi bhi pass mein hi thi Parth aur Neelam ke...
Pujari ji usko apne pass bula lete hai....
Prateek iss waqt tak usko hi dekh raha tha to usne ye bhi dekha....aur ye dekhte hi usko bahut gussa aaya.....Pujari ji ne abhi jo kiya tha uska natiza bahut bura ho sakta tha.....
Par abhi Prateek kuch kar nahi sakta tha siway chup chap khade rahne ke......
Dadi - Prateek......Prateek kya kar rahe ho.....hum kab se tumhe bula rahe hai....
Prateek - Haa Dadi....wo main bas.....
Dadi - Yaha aao....(Prateek ka haath pakad ke) Neelam tumne to kah diya ki humne koi aisa kaam nahi kiya tha jiski wajah se humme tum dono se maafi maangi pade.....par tum bhi jaanti ho.....agar uss waaqt humne shant dimmag se socha hota to.....sayad aaj hum sab saath hote.....aur Prateek ko itne waqt tak......apne pariwar se durr nahi rahna padta....
Neelam - Ye sab to kismat ki baat hai.....agar hum yaha pe hote aap sab ke saath to sayad kuch aur bhi bura ho jaata....aapko inn sab ke baare mein nahi sochna chahiye.....
Paarth - Haa Maa aap kyun baar baar ye sab soch ke khud ko taklif deti ho.....kuch chizzen humne khud bhi chunni thi....(Chacha ki oor dekhte hue) Maa aapko yaad hai jab Bhaiya ne mujhse dost banane ke baare mein baatein kahi thi....aur main unki baaton ka mazak udda raha tha....
Dadi - Haa yaad hai....uss din tum dono ke bich kaha sunni bhi ho gayi thi issi wajah se.....aur maine tinno ko sazza di thi....
Paarth -
haa galti hum dono karte the aur sazza Poonam ko bhi di jaati thi....(shant hoker) Maa uss waqt hi der ho gayi thi.....Waha Parth Dadi se baatein kar raha tha to dusri taraf Daksh Neelam se....
Daksh - Neelam tu chinta mat karna....Main Prateek ke sath rahunga.....uska dhyaan rakhunga....
Neelam - ye bhi koi kahne ki baat hai Bhaiya.....Mujhe to pata hi hai aap aisa hi karoge.....agar nahi kiya to...to aap jaante hai na main aapse naraz ho jaaungi....
Iss baat ko kahte hue uske aakhon mein bhi aashu wapas aa gaye the saath hi Daksh ke bhi....
Daksh se raha nahi gaya aur ek baar phir se apna haath aage badhaya usne apni bahen ke aashu pochne ke liye......aur jab aisa hua.....to dono hi hairaan ho gaye.....
Iss baar pata nahi kaise.....par jab Daksh ne Neelam ki aakriti ko chunne ki koshish kari to usko kuch kuch mehsoos hua tha.....aur aisa hi kuch khud Neelam ko bhi laga tha.....
Daksh (aankhen badi karte hue) - Neelam.....kya...tujhe bhi....
Neelam - Haa....haa bhaiya maine apka haath mehsoos kiya....kya aapne bhi....
Daksh - Haa....Neelam haa....rukko.....Prateek....Prateek yaha aao....
Prateek jo iss waqt dadi ke sath wo us taraf mudta usse pahle hi Neelam khud uske pass pahuch chukki thi.....wo kuch samajh paata usse pahle hi Neelam ne apna haath uski taraf badha diya tha......wo picche jaana chahta tha par der ho chukkki thi......
Neelam ne usko chu liya tha.....
Prateek ne sabse pahle apne ander maujood dark power ko ekdum se apne dil ke pass ikatha kar liya......Dark power pure sarir mein hota hai uske.....par isme der ho gayi thi.....
Neelam ki aakriti jo abhi chamak rahi thi wo dhire dhire wapas se dhimmi padti jaa rahi thi....
Parth - ye kya ho raha hai.....tum aisi kyun.....
Madhu jo ye sab dekh rahi thi.....usne jaise hi dekha ki Neelam wapas se dhundhli hoti jaa rahi hai.....wo apni jagah se aage badh gayi.....aur theek Prateek ke pass jaake khadi ho gayi....aur apna haath unki taraf badhaya....
Madhu - Hello....Main Madhu hu....apke bete ki dost......
Madhu ka haath lagna tha Golden power wapas se jaane lag gaya Neelam ki taraf......
Abhi Neelam ko kaisa mehsoos ho raha tha ye baat sirf Neelam hi samajh paa rahi thi aur saath mein Prateek......haa chunne ki wajah se thoda bahut Madhu ko bhi samajh aa raha tha......
Jab Madhu ne Neelam ko chua to uske dimmag mein tasveerein banne lag gayi.....andhera jo ujale ko khaye jaa raha tha....par uss andhere ke bich se hi ek roshni badhne lagi jo uss andhere ko khati jaa rahi thi....aur uss roshani ke biche mein se phir se ek andera.....aur aise hi bahut se andhere aur bahut se ujale.....sab dikh rahi thi Madhu ko......
Neelam ki aakriti jaise kisi bulb ki tarah ho chali thi.....abhi chamak rahi hai aur uske turant baad dhundhli......Uske mann mein bhi ek tasveer ban rahi thi......aur ye ajeeb thi.....ek taraf ujala hi ujala aur dusre taraf besummar andhera....itna ki kuch kaha hi nahi jaa sakta....aur wo unn dono ke hi sarhad pe khadi thi....kabhi iss taraf to kabhi uss taraf......
Ek baar to usne apna haath Prateek se alag kiya.....to usko wo sab dikhana band ho gaya ab wo bas ujale mein thi.....par usko ye ujala pasand nahi aaya aur wo haath jo Prateek se durr jaa raha tha wo wapas uske pas jaa pahucha.....
Prateek ke baare mein kya kaha jaaye......usko emotions jyada pasand nahi the.....pahle bilkul nahi aur ab thodi bahut aa rahi thi.....lekin abhi jo usne dekha....wo khud ko sambhal nahi paa raha tha.....Neelam uss jaal mein wapas aa gayi......uss dard ko usne apna liya....bas Prateek yaani apne bete ko chune ke liye.....
Prateek ne apne hazaron saal ke jeevan mein ye kabhi nahi dekha tha....haa jab yaha Earth pe tha to aisi chizen dekhi thi usne par kabhi mehsoos nahi kari thi.....aaj wo mehsoos kar raha tha......
Uske aankhon se aanshu girne lag gaye.....
Neelam - Parth Main apne bete ko chu sakti hu usko mehsoos kar sakti hu.....
Parth - Par ye.....tum iss tarah se....
Neelam - Kisi chizz ko apnanane ke liye kisi dusre chizz ko chodna padta hai bas wahi kar rahi hu.....(Madhu ki oor dekhte hue) Tum Mere Prateek ki dost ho....
Madhu ko khud wo sab mehsoos ho raha tha....usko to ye sunai bhi nahi diya tha....wo to bas Neelam ke chahre ko dekh rahi thi.....usko jab Neelam ke honth chalte hue dikhai diye tab usne puccha...
Madhu - haa.....kya hua.....
Neelam - Kuch nahi....Main bas puch rahi thi tum iski dost ho....
Madhu ne Prateek ki oor dekha bhi nahi bas haa mein sar hilla diya......wo iss waqt bahut kuch mehsoos kar rahi thi.....aur usne bahut saare ummid laga liye the......jaise jab wo apni maa se milegi to kya wo bhi issi tarah usko pyar karegi....aur bhi naa jaane kya kya....
uske aankhon se bhi aanshu gir jaate hai.....
Neelam apna haath aage karti hai aur uske aanshuyon ko pochne ke koshish karti hai....
Parth bhi waha aa jaata hai aur wo bhi Prateek ko chunne wala hota hai.....ye dekhte hi Madhu ne apna haath uske pass mein bhi laga diya hota hai.....ab wo sab Parth bhi mehsoos kar raha tha.....
Parth ne thodi der mein hi usko chod diya par baatein hoti rahi......
yaha pe ye sab chalta raha......
Dusri taraf Lucifer tha.....ab gussa dab gaya tha shant nahi hua tha.....kisi murde ki tarah apni gaddi pe baitha hua tha wo.....
Jab kabhi Raja udass yaa nirash hota hai.....to koi aur aa jaata hai uski jagah lene ko......kuch aisa yaha pe hone wala tha.....par abhi usme thoda waqt hai.....
Demos pe bas sanata tha......charo taraf hi sannata tha.....
Par yaha se jyada dur nahi Fumos pe.....waha bahut halchal thi.....
Dhruv khud ko Slayer ke sarir mein rakhne ke liye sangharsh kar raha tha......
Abhi tak usko ye pata nahi chala tha aakhir ye ho kya raha hai.....
Dhruv ne jinn aatmaon ko Slayer ke ander bandhi banane ke liye kaid kiya tha.....unhi aatmaon se takat khinch raha tha Justin......aur khud ko usse jyada takatwar banane ki koshish kar raha tha......Par ye ho nahi paa raha tha......
Lekin wo haar nahi maan raha tha bas laga hua tha.....
Dhruv thakta jaa raha tha....usko ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aakhir ye kyun ho raha hai.....koshish bahut kari usne ye janne ke liye par jaan hi nahi paa raha tha.....koi andaja h nahi tha....uske hisab se usne Slayer ke sarir ko khula chod diya tha.....aur sab nikal aye the......
Usne iss baare mein socha tha ki sayad jinn aatmaon ko usne Dark world se uthaya unme se koi ek hoga.....par isko dimmag se nikal diya usne turant hi.....aisa ho hi nahi sakta tha....agar aisa hota to usko unse ladne mein waqt lagta....aise hi khatam nahi kar deta unn sab ko.....
Usne kya kisi ne bhi nahi socha hoga ki khule pinare ke ander se koi parinda bahar hi naa aaye.....Justin wahi parinda tha yaha pe.....
Dhruv ne iss baare mein sandesh bhejne ke baare mein socha Prateek ko.....par wo kar nahi paaya.....isse pahle to wo dono judde hue the....matlab jab kabhi bhi dono mein se kisi ka mann hua dusre se baat kar leta tha......normally....haa agar koi khass wajah ho tab ye mumkin nahi ho paata tha.....
Khair wo Prateek ko koi sandesha nahi de paaya.....aur bas wahi pe rah gaya......aisa nahi usne koshish nahi kari...
EK baar do baar teen baar usne koshish kari....par kuch bhi nahi hua.....aur phir wo kamzor pad gaya......
ye mauka tha.....Justin ke liye......iss waqt usne Slayer ki body pe kaabu karna shuru kar diya.....aur usne bhi yahi koshish kari.....
Kisi tarah apne pita Lucifer tak apni baat pahuchane ke baare mein.....
Par yaha bhi wahi baat ho rahi thi.....wo kahi bhi jaata kuch bhi try karta kaam nahi ho raha tha......usne ek baar pedon ko todne ki koshish kari.....jiske baad usne khud ko jamin pe girra pada paaya.....
Wo bhi koshish karta gaya par kaam nahi bana uska bhi....
Ye sab kuch waha upar se wo immortal baitha dekh raha tha aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha.....
Ye Immortal bhi ajeeb tha isne dark power ko dekha tha uss planet pe....par isko usse jyada jaruri ye sab laga.....aur inn sab mein iss tarah se uljha hai ki usne wapas jaake kuch batane ke baare mein bhi nahi socha abhi tak.....
Dark power ki baat aayi hai to wapas chalte hai Earth pe.....
Yaha pe ab haal aisa tha ki thodi der aur thodi der aur ki kahani chal rahi thi.......
Koi nahi chahta tha wo dono waha se wapas jaaye......aur Madhu wo sabhi se sahmet thi......bas ek Pujari ji aur DB hi the waha pe......jinko sab dikhai de raha tha......
Golden power ka asar unn dono pe uss waqt tak hi rahne wali thi jab tak Madhu chahe....aur yaha pe Madhu ko khud hi pata nahi uske pass aisi koi shakti bhi hai......wo to ye sab kisi aur wajah se ho raha hai aisa soch rahi thi......
DB jaanta tha wo gujar chukke hai....aur gujre hue pallo ko bandh ke rakhne se khusi milti hai par usse jyada dukh bhi.....
DB ne iss baat ka jikar Pujari ji se kiya.....Pujari ji bhi uski baat se sahmet the......
Pujari ji ne Madhu ko apne oor aane ka ishara kiya......Madhu ne unko dekha usko laga ki agar usne unn dono ko chod diya to unko waha se jaana pad jaayega.....par iss baat ko Neelam ne bhi dekh liya tha.......wo Madhu ko hi dekhe jaa rahi thi.....
Neelam - Madhu beta wo log bhi dost hai kya.....
DB wahi pe tha aur Madhu ko waha jaana bhi tha to....
Madhu - Saare nahi unme se ek Pujari ji hai....ek baaki ke dono dost hai....
Neelam - Parth chalo unse bhi milte hai.....
Waise to Parth ko waha jaane ki koi ichaa nahi thi par Neelam ke kahne pe wo chala gaya....
Jab wo waha aaye to pahle to intro hua uske baad Parth Leader se aur Neelam DB se baat karne lag gayi.....
Madhu - Kya hua Pujari ji.....
Pujari ji - Madhu inke jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai.....
Madhu - Par abhi kaise.....abhi to ye aaye hai.....
Pujari ji - Madhu inka yaha jyada der tak rukna accha nahi hai.....ye apne aage ke safar mein pahle se hi bahut picche chuttein hue hai ab agar aur der hui to aur picche ho jaayenge....
Neelam - Madhu Pujari ji sahi kah rahe hai.....Mujhe bhi lagta hai ab humme yaha se jaana chahiye....
Neelam bas yun hi baatein kar rahi thi DB se par uska pura dhyaan to yaha tha Madhu aur Pujari ji pe......jab usne unki baat sunni to usko bhi wo baat sahi lagi....
Madhu - Par aap abhi bhi yaha rah sakti ho....
Neelam - Kab tak beta....kab tak tum hamare saath aise rahogi....
Madhu - Agar aap chale gaye to Prateek ka kya hoga....aur baaki sab ka.....dekho sab kitna pyaar karte hai aapse....
Neelam - Hum dono to kab ke jaa chukke hai beta....ye to yaha pe bas Prateek aur tumhare wajah se aa paaye hai....aur rukke hue hai....waha dekho unn sab ko......hum jitni der yaha pe rukenge naa hamare jaane ke baad utna hi dukh hoga unn sab ko.....hame ab jaana hi hoga....
Madhu - Main kya aapse kuch puch sakti hu.....
Neelam - Isme sochna kya hai.....jarur puccho tumne humme waqt diya hai aur sath mein apne bete ko ek baar chunne ka mauka bhi....puccho kya puchna hai....
Madhu - Kya sabke Maa Papa aap logo ke tarah hi pyaar karte hai apne baccho se.....
Neelam - Nahi beta.....sabke aise nahi karte isse bhi jyada karte hai.....Maa baap ke pyaar ko dusro ke maa baap ke pyar se compare karna bahut muskil hai.....bahut jyada.....Mujhe pata hai tumhe mere ander kya chal raha hai sab pata chal chukka hai.....hai naa.....ek raaz ki baat batao Mujhe bhi pata chal gaya hai tumhare ander ke baaton ka.....to chinta mat karo....jab tum apne Maa papa ke pass jaaogi aur unko pata chalega ki unki itni pyaari itni acchi beti hai to wo tumhe bahut pyaar karenge....samjhi...
Parth - Haa sahi kaha.....(Pujari ji se) Humme ek aakhiri baar unn sab ko alvida kahne ka mauka dijiye....
Pujari ji - Aap kaisi baat kar rahe hai ye sab mere haath mein nahi...(Parth ka ishara samajhte hue) haa ha....jarur Madhu.....ab inko padke rahne ka koi matlab nahi hai....inko chod do...ye khud se kuch der mein yaha se chale jayenge...
Madhu ne Parth ko to chod diya par Neelam ko chodne se pahle uske gale lagi thi wo.....sab dekh rahe the usko....
Parth waha pe gaya aur usne sabhi ko bataya ki ab unke jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai....wo aur der tak nahi ruk sakte....
Wapas se sabki aakhen bhar aayi Neelam ne Madhu ko sabhi ki oor dekhate hue kaha dekho ye wapas se uddas ho gaye.....par inke ander ek ummid hai abhi bhi ki sayad hum thodi der aur rukk jayenge....wapas se....
Ye jhuthi ummid jab tak nahi tutegi badhti hi jaayegi aur bahut dukh degi inhe.....
Madhu ne uski baat sunni aur haa mein gardan hilayi.....
Next update mein dekhte hai Nikita ka case.....yaha pe kya hota hai aur saath hi Strange world ki baatein kaise DB wo karta hai jo usne karne ka socha tha
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Jab Parth aur Neelam ki aakritiyon mein Golden power gaya.....dono ke dono hi chamakne lag gaye the.....aur wo bhi bahut jyada......logo ko aankhen band karni pad gayi thi thodi der mein......
Sabhi ko nahi.....
Pujari ji iss roshani ko jaante the.....unki aankhon mein itni kshamta thi ki wo isko dekh sakke.....Prateek ka bhi aisa hi tha....aur Madhu ke baare mein kya kahna wo to khud hi Golden power ki source thi......
Dadi (Aankhen kholne ki koshish karte hue) - Rukk jaao abhi.....abhi mat jaao.....
Band aankhon se bhi aansu bahe jaa rahe the....
Unko aisa laga sayad Neelam aur Parth jaa rahe hai iss wajah se ye te roshani hui hai......Baaki sab ko bhi aisa hi lag raha tha.....ab unhone hi bataya tha unke jaane ka waqt ho chala hai.....aur ab kuch waisa hua....to sabko laga ki wo jaa hi rahe honge......
Ab roj roj to aatmayein aati nahi waha pe.....to unhone aisa soch liya......aur Dadi hi kya.....lagbhag sabhi ka yahi haal tha......
Ek to unn dono se milne ki koi ummid hi nahi thi sabhi ke pass aur wo aaj waha pe aa gaye the....aur ab jaane bhi wale the wo bhi itni jaldi......
Neelam aur Parth ko iss waqt kuch alag hi lag raha tha.....wo pahle se energy ke form mein the.....aur ab ye energy aur milne se wo aur jyada energetic ho gaye the....
Prateek Madhu ki taraf dekh raha tha bas......uske dimmag mein bas yahi baat chal rahi thi ki agar kahi uski sochi baatein sach ho gayi to naa jaane kya hoga.....Agar yaha pe Madhu sambhal nahi paayegi to bahut muskil hone wali thi......agar aisa nahi hua to naa sirf Madhu ko pareshani hogi balki waha pe jo koi bhi hai sabhi ko......
Golden energy creative energy hai par cancer jaisi bimari bhi kharab cells ke bahut matra mein creation hone ke karan hi hoti hai....Prateek iss baat ko jaanta tha agar Golden power kisi tarah yaha pe bahar aane lag gaya aur Madhu ne kaabu nahi kiya to wo energy yaha pe khade sabhi ko itni takat de dega ki saare ke saare uss takat ki matra se mar jaayenge.....bas yahi nahi wo badhti hi jaayegi aur kaha rukegi iska anuman lagana muskil hoga......
Wahi dusri taraf Madhu......wo bas ye soch rahi thi ki chalo kuch Prateek ke Maa Papa abhi waha pe aur rahne wale hai.....usne ye sab socha hi nahi ki usne ye kaise kiya.....yaa kya kiya usne.....aisa kuch bhi nahi....wo bas khush si thi.....ki usne kuch accha kiya hai.......muskura rahi thi wo.....
Prateek usko hi dekh raha tha.....usko muskurate hue dekh wo kuch samajh hi nahi paaya.....usne kya kya soch rakha tha.......
Overthinking bahut buri chizz hoti hai
Khair iss dauran Neelam aur Parth ke aakritiyon se nikalne wali roshani thodi kam hui thi par wo thi abhi bhi....ab log apni aakhen khol paa rahe the......
Jab sabhi ne baari baari se ye dekha ki wo dono abhi bhi wahi pe hai to sab bahut khush hue....ummid nahi thi naa iss baat ki.....
Sab wapas se unki taraf badh gaye......jaise pakadna chahte ho.....Ye pata nahi kya tha.....koi sazza yaa phir kuch aur......wo sab Neelam aur Parth ke samne the.....par chu nahi sakte the.....ek pal ko unko laga ki sayad ab wo waha se chale jaayenge.....par dusre pal wo waha se gaye nahi kuch der ke liye aur wahi pe rahne wale the.....
Ummid ye kisi sazza se kam nahi hoti.....bahut dukh deti hai ye ummid.....Khair iss waqt Madhu jo bas muskura rahi thi usko Pujari ji ne picche apne pass bula liya.....chunne ke baad wo khud se picche to gayi thi par abhi bhi pass mein hi thi Parth aur Neelam ke...
Pujari ji usko apne pass bula lete hai....
Prateek iss waqt tak usko hi dekh raha tha to usne ye bhi dekha....aur ye dekhte hi usko bahut gussa aaya.....Pujari ji ne abhi jo kiya tha uska natiza bahut bura ho sakta tha.....
Par abhi Prateek kuch kar nahi sakta tha siway chup chap khade rahne ke......
Dadi - Prateek......Prateek kya kar rahe ho.....hum kab se tumhe bula rahe hai....
Prateek - Haa Dadi....wo main bas.....
Dadi - Yaha aao....(Prateek ka haath pakad ke) Neelam tumne to kah diya ki humne koi aisa kaam nahi kiya tha jiski wajah se humme tum dono se maafi maangi pade.....par tum bhi jaanti ho.....agar uss waaqt humne shant dimmag se socha hota to.....sayad aaj hum sab saath hote.....aur Prateek ko itne waqt tak......apne pariwar se durr nahi rahna padta....
Neelam - Ye sab to kismat ki baat hai.....agar hum yaha pe hote aap sab ke saath to sayad kuch aur bhi bura ho jaata....aapko inn sab ke baare mein nahi sochna chahiye.....
Paarth - Haa Maa aap kyun baar baar ye sab soch ke khud ko taklif deti ho.....kuch chizzen humne khud bhi chunni thi....(Chacha ki oor dekhte hue) Maa aapko yaad hai jab Bhaiya ne mujhse dost banane ke baare mein baatein kahi thi....aur main unki baaton ka mazak udda raha tha....
Dadi - Haa yaad hai....uss din tum dono ke bich kaha sunni bhi ho gayi thi issi wajah se.....aur maine tinno ko sazza di thi....
Paarth -
Waha Parth Dadi se baatein kar raha tha to dusri taraf Daksh Neelam se....
Daksh - Neelam tu chinta mat karna....Main Prateek ke sath rahunga.....uska dhyaan rakhunga....
Neelam - ye bhi koi kahne ki baat hai Bhaiya.....Mujhe to pata hi hai aap aisa hi karoge.....agar nahi kiya to...to aap jaante hai na main aapse naraz ho jaaungi....
Iss baat ko kahte hue uske aakhon mein bhi aashu wapas aa gaye the saath hi Daksh ke bhi....
Daksh se raha nahi gaya aur ek baar phir se apna haath aage badhaya usne apni bahen ke aashu pochne ke liye......aur jab aisa hua.....to dono hi hairaan ho gaye.....
Iss baar pata nahi kaise.....par jab Daksh ne Neelam ki aakriti ko chunne ki koshish kari to usko kuch kuch mehsoos hua tha.....aur aisa hi kuch khud Neelam ko bhi laga tha.....
Daksh (aankhen badi karte hue) - Neelam.....kya...tujhe bhi....
Neelam - Haa....haa bhaiya maine apka haath mehsoos kiya....kya aapne bhi....
Daksh - Haa....Neelam haa....rukko.....Prateek....Prateek yaha aao....
Prateek jo iss waqt dadi ke sath wo us taraf mudta usse pahle hi Neelam khud uske pass pahuch chukki thi.....wo kuch samajh paata usse pahle hi Neelam ne apna haath uski taraf badha diya tha......wo picche jaana chahta tha par der ho chukkki thi......
Neelam ne usko chu liya tha.....
Prateek ne sabse pahle apne ander maujood dark power ko ekdum se apne dil ke pass ikatha kar liya......Dark power pure sarir mein hota hai uske.....par isme der ho gayi thi.....
Neelam ki aakriti jo abhi chamak rahi thi wo dhire dhire wapas se dhimmi padti jaa rahi thi....
Parth - ye kya ho raha hai.....tum aisi kyun.....
Madhu jo ye sab dekh rahi thi.....usne jaise hi dekha ki Neelam wapas se dhundhli hoti jaa rahi hai.....wo apni jagah se aage badh gayi.....aur theek Prateek ke pass jaake khadi ho gayi....aur apna haath unki taraf badhaya....
Madhu - Hello....Main Madhu hu....apke bete ki dost......
Madhu ka haath lagna tha Golden power wapas se jaane lag gaya Neelam ki taraf......
Abhi Neelam ko kaisa mehsoos ho raha tha ye baat sirf Neelam hi samajh paa rahi thi aur saath mein Prateek......haa chunne ki wajah se thoda bahut Madhu ko bhi samajh aa raha tha......
Jab Madhu ne Neelam ko chua to uske dimmag mein tasveerein banne lag gayi.....andhera jo ujale ko khaye jaa raha tha....par uss andhere ke bich se hi ek roshni badhne lagi jo uss andhere ko khati jaa rahi thi....aur uss roshani ke biche mein se phir se ek andera.....aur aise hi bahut se andhere aur bahut se ujale.....sab dikh rahi thi Madhu ko......
Neelam ki aakriti jaise kisi bulb ki tarah ho chali thi.....abhi chamak rahi hai aur uske turant baad dhundhli......Uske mann mein bhi ek tasveer ban rahi thi......aur ye ajeeb thi.....ek taraf ujala hi ujala aur dusre taraf besummar andhera....itna ki kuch kaha hi nahi jaa sakta....aur wo unn dono ke hi sarhad pe khadi thi....kabhi iss taraf to kabhi uss taraf......
Ek baar to usne apna haath Prateek se alag kiya.....to usko wo sab dikhana band ho gaya ab wo bas ujale mein thi.....par usko ye ujala pasand nahi aaya aur wo haath jo Prateek se durr jaa raha tha wo wapas uske pas jaa pahucha.....
Prateek ke baare mein kya kaha jaaye......usko emotions jyada pasand nahi the.....pahle bilkul nahi aur ab thodi bahut aa rahi thi.....lekin abhi jo usne dekha....wo khud ko sambhal nahi paa raha tha.....Neelam uss jaal mein wapas aa gayi......uss dard ko usne apna liya....bas Prateek yaani apne bete ko chune ke liye.....
Prateek ne apne hazaron saal ke jeevan mein ye kabhi nahi dekha tha....haa jab yaha Earth pe tha to aisi chizen dekhi thi usne par kabhi mehsoos nahi kari thi.....aaj wo mehsoos kar raha tha......
Uske aankhon se aanshu girne lag gaye.....
Neelam - Parth Main apne bete ko chu sakti hu usko mehsoos kar sakti hu.....
Parth - Par ye.....tum iss tarah se....
Neelam - Kisi chizz ko apnanane ke liye kisi dusre chizz ko chodna padta hai bas wahi kar rahi hu.....(Madhu ki oor dekhte hue) Tum Mere Prateek ki dost ho....
Madhu ko khud wo sab mehsoos ho raha tha....usko to ye sunai bhi nahi diya tha....wo to bas Neelam ke chahre ko dekh rahi thi.....usko jab Neelam ke honth chalte hue dikhai diye tab usne puccha...
Madhu - haa.....kya hua.....
Neelam - Kuch nahi....Main bas puch rahi thi tum iski dost ho....
Madhu ne Prateek ki oor dekha bhi nahi bas haa mein sar hilla diya......wo iss waqt bahut kuch mehsoos kar rahi thi.....aur usne bahut saare ummid laga liye the......jaise jab wo apni maa se milegi to kya wo bhi issi tarah usko pyar karegi....aur bhi naa jaane kya kya....
uske aankhon se bhi aanshu gir jaate hai.....
Neelam apna haath aage karti hai aur uske aanshuyon ko pochne ke koshish karti hai....
Parth bhi waha aa jaata hai aur wo bhi Prateek ko chunne wala hota hai.....ye dekhte hi Madhu ne apna haath uske pass mein bhi laga diya hota hai.....ab wo sab Parth bhi mehsoos kar raha tha.....
Parth ne thodi der mein hi usko chod diya par baatein hoti rahi......
yaha pe ye sab chalta raha......
Dusri taraf Lucifer tha.....ab gussa dab gaya tha shant nahi hua tha.....kisi murde ki tarah apni gaddi pe baitha hua tha wo.....
Jab kabhi Raja udass yaa nirash hota hai.....to koi aur aa jaata hai uski jagah lene ko......kuch aisa yaha pe hone wala tha.....par abhi usme thoda waqt hai.....
Demos pe bas sanata tha......charo taraf hi sannata tha.....
Par yaha se jyada dur nahi Fumos pe.....waha bahut halchal thi.....
Dhruv khud ko Slayer ke sarir mein rakhne ke liye sangharsh kar raha tha......
Abhi tak usko ye pata nahi chala tha aakhir ye ho kya raha hai.....
Dhruv ne jinn aatmaon ko Slayer ke ander bandhi banane ke liye kaid kiya tha.....unhi aatmaon se takat khinch raha tha Justin......aur khud ko usse jyada takatwar banane ki koshish kar raha tha......Par ye ho nahi paa raha tha......
Lekin wo haar nahi maan raha tha bas laga hua tha.....
Dhruv thakta jaa raha tha....usko ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aakhir ye kyun ho raha hai.....koshish bahut kari usne ye janne ke liye par jaan hi nahi paa raha tha.....koi andaja h nahi tha....uske hisab se usne Slayer ke sarir ko khula chod diya tha.....aur sab nikal aye the......
Usne iss baare mein socha tha ki sayad jinn aatmaon ko usne Dark world se uthaya unme se koi ek hoga.....par isko dimmag se nikal diya usne turant hi.....aisa ho hi nahi sakta tha....agar aisa hota to usko unse ladne mein waqt lagta....aise hi khatam nahi kar deta unn sab ko.....
Usne kya kisi ne bhi nahi socha hoga ki khule pinare ke ander se koi parinda bahar hi naa aaye.....Justin wahi parinda tha yaha pe.....
Dhruv ne iss baare mein sandesh bhejne ke baare mein socha Prateek ko.....par wo kar nahi paaya.....isse pahle to wo dono judde hue the....matlab jab kabhi bhi dono mein se kisi ka mann hua dusre se baat kar leta tha......normally....haa agar koi khass wajah ho tab ye mumkin nahi ho paata tha.....
Khair wo Prateek ko koi sandesha nahi de paaya.....aur bas wahi pe rah gaya......aisa nahi usne koshish nahi kari...
EK baar do baar teen baar usne koshish kari....par kuch bhi nahi hua.....aur phir wo kamzor pad gaya......
ye mauka tha.....Justin ke liye......iss waqt usne Slayer ki body pe kaabu karna shuru kar diya.....aur usne bhi yahi koshish kari.....
Kisi tarah apne pita Lucifer tak apni baat pahuchane ke baare mein.....
Par yaha bhi wahi baat ho rahi thi.....wo kahi bhi jaata kuch bhi try karta kaam nahi ho raha tha......usne ek baar pedon ko todne ki koshish kari.....jiske baad usne khud ko jamin pe girra pada paaya.....
Wo bhi koshish karta gaya par kaam nahi bana uska bhi....
Ye sab kuch waha upar se wo immortal baitha dekh raha tha aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha.....
Ye Immortal bhi ajeeb tha isne dark power ko dekha tha uss planet pe....par isko usse jyada jaruri ye sab laga.....aur inn sab mein iss tarah se uljha hai ki usne wapas jaake kuch batane ke baare mein bhi nahi socha abhi tak.....
Dark power ki baat aayi hai to wapas chalte hai Earth pe.....
Yaha pe ab haal aisa tha ki thodi der aur thodi der aur ki kahani chal rahi thi.......
Koi nahi chahta tha wo dono waha se wapas jaaye......aur Madhu wo sabhi se sahmet thi......bas ek Pujari ji aur DB hi the waha pe......jinko sab dikhai de raha tha......
Golden power ka asar unn dono pe uss waqt tak hi rahne wali thi jab tak Madhu chahe....aur yaha pe Madhu ko khud hi pata nahi uske pass aisi koi shakti bhi hai......wo to ye sab kisi aur wajah se ho raha hai aisa soch rahi thi......
DB jaanta tha wo gujar chukke hai....aur gujre hue pallo ko bandh ke rakhne se khusi milti hai par usse jyada dukh bhi.....
DB ne iss baat ka jikar Pujari ji se kiya.....Pujari ji bhi uski baat se sahmet the......
Pujari ji ne Madhu ko apne oor aane ka ishara kiya......Madhu ne unko dekha usko laga ki agar usne unn dono ko chod diya to unko waha se jaana pad jaayega.....par iss baat ko Neelam ne bhi dekh liya tha.......wo Madhu ko hi dekhe jaa rahi thi.....
Neelam - Madhu beta wo log bhi dost hai kya.....
DB wahi pe tha aur Madhu ko waha jaana bhi tha to....
Madhu - Saare nahi unme se ek Pujari ji hai....ek baaki ke dono dost hai....
Neelam - Parth chalo unse bhi milte hai.....
Waise to Parth ko waha jaane ki koi ichaa nahi thi par Neelam ke kahne pe wo chala gaya....
Jab wo waha aaye to pahle to intro hua uske baad Parth Leader se aur Neelam DB se baat karne lag gayi.....
Madhu - Kya hua Pujari ji.....
Pujari ji - Madhu inke jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai.....
Madhu - Par abhi kaise.....abhi to ye aaye hai.....
Pujari ji - Madhu inka yaha jyada der tak rukna accha nahi hai.....ye apne aage ke safar mein pahle se hi bahut picche chuttein hue hai ab agar aur der hui to aur picche ho jaayenge....
Neelam - Madhu Pujari ji sahi kah rahe hai.....Mujhe bhi lagta hai ab humme yaha se jaana chahiye....
Neelam bas yun hi baatein kar rahi thi DB se par uska pura dhyaan to yaha tha Madhu aur Pujari ji pe......jab usne unki baat sunni to usko bhi wo baat sahi lagi....
Madhu - Par aap abhi bhi yaha rah sakti ho....
Neelam - Kab tak beta....kab tak tum hamare saath aise rahogi....
Madhu - Agar aap chale gaye to Prateek ka kya hoga....aur baaki sab ka.....dekho sab kitna pyaar karte hai aapse....
Neelam - Hum dono to kab ke jaa chukke hai beta....ye to yaha pe bas Prateek aur tumhare wajah se aa paaye hai....aur rukke hue hai....waha dekho unn sab ko......hum jitni der yaha pe rukenge naa hamare jaane ke baad utna hi dukh hoga unn sab ko.....hame ab jaana hi hoga....
Madhu - Main kya aapse kuch puch sakti hu.....
Neelam - Isme sochna kya hai.....jarur puccho tumne humme waqt diya hai aur sath mein apne bete ko ek baar chunne ka mauka bhi....puccho kya puchna hai....
Madhu - Kya sabke Maa Papa aap logo ke tarah hi pyaar karte hai apne baccho se.....
Neelam - Nahi beta.....sabke aise nahi karte isse bhi jyada karte hai.....Maa baap ke pyaar ko dusro ke maa baap ke pyar se compare karna bahut muskil hai.....bahut jyada.....Mujhe pata hai tumhe mere ander kya chal raha hai sab pata chal chukka hai.....hai naa.....ek raaz ki baat batao Mujhe bhi pata chal gaya hai tumhare ander ke baaton ka.....to chinta mat karo....jab tum apne Maa papa ke pass jaaogi aur unko pata chalega ki unki itni pyaari itni acchi beti hai to wo tumhe bahut pyaar karenge....samjhi...
Parth - Haa sahi kaha.....(Pujari ji se) Humme ek aakhiri baar unn sab ko alvida kahne ka mauka dijiye....
Pujari ji - Aap kaisi baat kar rahe hai ye sab mere haath mein nahi...(Parth ka ishara samajhte hue) haa ha....jarur Madhu.....ab inko padke rahne ka koi matlab nahi hai....inko chod do...ye khud se kuch der mein yaha se chale jayenge...
Madhu ne Parth ko to chod diya par Neelam ko chodne se pahle uske gale lagi thi wo.....sab dekh rahe the usko....
Parth waha pe gaya aur usne sabhi ko bataya ki ab unke jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai....wo aur der tak nahi ruk sakte....
Wapas se sabki aakhen bhar aayi Neelam ne Madhu ko sabhi ki oor dekhate hue kaha dekho ye wapas se uddas ho gaye.....par inke ander ek ummid hai abhi bhi ki sayad hum thodi der aur rukk jayenge....wapas se....
Ye jhuthi ummid jab tak nahi tutegi badhti hi jaayegi aur bahut dukh degi inhe.....
Madhu ne uski baat sunni aur haa mein gardan hilayi.....
Next update mein dekhte hai Nikita ka case.....yaha pe kya hota hai aur saath hi Strange world ki baatein kaise DB wo karta hai jo usne karne ka socha tha
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Jab Parth aur Neelam ki aakritiyon mein Golden power gaya.....dono ke dono hi chamakne lag gaye the.....aur wo bhi bahut jyada......logo ko aankhen band karni pad gayi thi thodi der mein......
Sabhi ko nahi.....
Pujari ji iss roshani ko jaante the.....unki aankhon mein itni kshamta thi ki wo isko dekh sakke.....Prateek ka bhi aisa hi tha....aur Madhu ke baare mein kya kahna wo to khud hi Golden power ki source thi......
Dadi (Aankhen kholne ki koshish karte hue) - Rukk jaao abhi.....abhi mat jaao.....
Band aankhon se bhi aansu bahe jaa rahe the....
Unko aisa laga sayad Neelam aur Parth jaa rahe hai iss wajah se ye te roshani hui hai......Baaki sab ko bhi aisa hi lag raha tha.....ab unhone hi bataya tha unke jaane ka waqt ho chala hai.....aur ab kuch waisa hua....to sabko laga ki wo jaa hi rahe honge......
Ab roj roj to aatmayein aati nahi waha pe.....to unhone aisa soch liya......aur Dadi hi kya.....lagbhag sabhi ka yahi haal tha......
Ek to unn dono se milne ki koi ummid hi nahi thi sabhi ke pass aur wo aaj waha pe aa gaye the....aur ab jaane bhi wale the wo bhi itni jaldi......
Neelam aur Parth ko iss waqt kuch alag hi lag raha tha.....wo pahle se energy ke form mein the.....aur ab ye energy aur milne se wo aur jyada energetic ho gaye the....
Prateek Madhu ki taraf dekh raha tha bas......uske dimmag mein bas yahi baat chal rahi thi ki agar kahi uski sochi baatein sach ho gayi to naa jaane kya hoga.....Agar yaha pe Madhu sambhal nahi paayegi to bahut muskil hone wali thi......agar aisa nahi hua to naa sirf Madhu ko pareshani hogi balki waha pe jo koi bhi hai sabhi ko......
Golden energy creative energy hai par cancer jaisi bimari bhi kharab cells ke bahut matra mein creation hone ke karan hi hoti hai....Prateek iss baat ko jaanta tha agar Golden power kisi tarah yaha pe bahar aane lag gaya aur Madhu ne kaabu nahi kiya to wo energy yaha pe khade sabhi ko itni takat de dega ki saare ke saare uss takat ki matra se mar jaayenge.....bas yahi nahi wo badhti hi jaayegi aur kaha rukegi iska anuman lagana muskil hoga......
Wahi dusri taraf Madhu......wo bas ye soch rahi thi ki chalo kuch Prateek ke Maa Papa abhi waha pe aur rahne wale hai.....usne ye sab socha hi nahi ki usne ye kaise kiya.....yaa kya kiya usne.....aisa kuch bhi nahi....wo bas khush si thi.....ki usne kuch accha kiya hai.......muskura rahi thi wo.....
Prateek usko hi dekh raha tha.....usko muskurate hue dekh wo kuch samajh hi nahi paaya.....usne kya kya soch rakha tha.......
Overthinking bahut buri chizz hoti hai
Khair iss dauran Neelam aur Parth ke aakritiyon se nikalne wali roshani thodi kam hui thi par wo thi abhi bhi....ab log apni aakhen khol paa rahe the......
Jab sabhi ne baari baari se ye dekha ki wo dono abhi bhi wahi pe hai to sab bahut khush hue....ummid nahi thi naa iss baat ki.....
Sab wapas se unki taraf badh gaye......jaise pakadna chahte ho.....Ye pata nahi kya tha.....koi sazza yaa phir kuch aur......wo sab Neelam aur Parth ke samne the.....par chu nahi sakte the.....ek pal ko unko laga ki sayad ab wo waha se chale jaayenge.....par dusre pal wo waha se gaye nahi kuch der ke liye aur wahi pe rahne wale the.....
Ummid ye kisi sazza se kam nahi hoti.....bahut dukh deti hai ye ummid.....Khair iss waqt Madhu jo bas muskura rahi thi usko Pujari ji ne picche apne pass bula liya.....chunne ke baad wo khud se picche to gayi thi par abhi bhi pass mein hi thi Parth aur Neelam ke...
Pujari ji usko apne pass bula lete hai....
Prateek iss waqt tak usko hi dekh raha tha to usne ye bhi dekha....aur ye dekhte hi usko bahut gussa aaya.....Pujari ji ne abhi jo kiya tha uska natiza bahut bura ho sakta tha.....
Par abhi Prateek kuch kar nahi sakta tha siway chup chap khade rahne ke......
Dadi - Prateek......Prateek kya kar rahe ho.....hum kab se tumhe bula rahe hai....
Prateek - Haa Dadi....wo main bas.....
Dadi - Yaha aao....(Prateek ka haath pakad ke) Neelam tumne to kah diya ki humne koi aisa kaam nahi kiya tha jiski wajah se humme tum dono se maafi maangi pade.....par tum bhi jaanti ho.....agar uss waaqt humne shant dimmag se socha hota to.....sayad aaj hum sab saath hote.....aur Prateek ko itne waqt tak......apne pariwar se durr nahi rahna padta....
Neelam - Ye sab to kismat ki baat hai.....agar hum yaha pe hote aap sab ke saath to sayad kuch aur bhi bura ho jaata....aapko inn sab ke baare mein nahi sochna chahiye.....
Paarth - Haa Maa aap kyun baar baar ye sab soch ke khud ko taklif deti ho.....kuch chizzen humne khud bhi chunni thi....(Chacha ki oor dekhte hue) Maa aapko yaad hai jab Bhaiya ne mujhse dost banane ke baare mein baatein kahi thi....aur main unki baaton ka mazak udda raha tha....
Dadi - Haa yaad hai....uss din tum dono ke bich kaha sunni bhi ho gayi thi issi wajah se.....aur maine tinno ko sazza di thi....
Paarth -
Waha Parth Dadi se baatein kar raha tha to dusri taraf Daksh Neelam se....
Daksh - Neelam tu chinta mat karna....Main Prateek ke sath rahunga.....uska dhyaan rakhunga....
Neelam - ye bhi koi kahne ki baat hai Bhaiya.....Mujhe to pata hi hai aap aisa hi karoge.....agar nahi kiya to...to aap jaante hai na main aapse naraz ho jaaungi....
Iss baat ko kahte hue uske aakhon mein bhi aashu wapas aa gaye the saath hi Daksh ke bhi....
Daksh se raha nahi gaya aur ek baar phir se apna haath aage badhaya usne apni bahen ke aashu pochne ke liye......aur jab aisa hua.....to dono hi hairaan ho gaye.....
Iss baar pata nahi kaise.....par jab Daksh ne Neelam ki aakriti ko chunne ki koshish kari to usko kuch kuch mehsoos hua tha.....aur aisa hi kuch khud Neelam ko bhi laga tha.....
Daksh (aankhen badi karte hue) - Neelam.....kya...tujhe bhi....
Neelam - Haa....haa bhaiya maine apka haath mehsoos kiya....kya aapne bhi....
Daksh - Haa....Neelam haa....rukko.....Prateek....Prateek yaha aao....
Prateek jo iss waqt dadi ke sath wo us taraf mudta usse pahle hi Neelam khud uske pass pahuch chukki thi.....wo kuch samajh paata usse pahle hi Neelam ne apna haath uski taraf badha diya tha......wo picche jaana chahta tha par der ho chukkki thi......
Neelam ne usko chu liya tha.....
Prateek ne sabse pahle apne ander maujood dark power ko ekdum se apne dil ke pass ikatha kar liya......Dark power pure sarir mein hota hai uske.....par isme der ho gayi thi.....
Neelam ki aakriti jo abhi chamak rahi thi wo dhire dhire wapas se dhimmi padti jaa rahi thi....
Parth - ye kya ho raha hai.....tum aisi kyun.....
Madhu jo ye sab dekh rahi thi.....usne jaise hi dekha ki Neelam wapas se dhundhli hoti jaa rahi hai.....wo apni jagah se aage badh gayi.....aur theek Prateek ke pass jaake khadi ho gayi....aur apna haath unki taraf badhaya....
Madhu - Hello....Main Madhu hu....apke bete ki dost......
Madhu ka haath lagna tha Golden power wapas se jaane lag gaya Neelam ki taraf......
Abhi Neelam ko kaisa mehsoos ho raha tha ye baat sirf Neelam hi samajh paa rahi thi aur saath mein Prateek......haa chunne ki wajah se thoda bahut Madhu ko bhi samajh aa raha tha......
Jab Madhu ne Neelam ko chua to uske dimmag mein tasveerein banne lag gayi.....andhera jo ujale ko khaye jaa raha tha....par uss andhere ke bich se hi ek roshni badhne lagi jo uss andhere ko khati jaa rahi thi....aur uss roshani ke biche mein se phir se ek andera.....aur aise hi bahut se andhere aur bahut se ujale.....sab dikh rahi thi Madhu ko......
Neelam ki aakriti jaise kisi bulb ki tarah ho chali thi.....abhi chamak rahi hai aur uske turant baad dhundhli......Uske mann mein bhi ek tasveer ban rahi thi......aur ye ajeeb thi.....ek taraf ujala hi ujala aur dusre taraf besummar andhera....itna ki kuch kaha hi nahi jaa sakta....aur wo unn dono ke hi sarhad pe khadi thi....kabhi iss taraf to kabhi uss taraf......
Ek baar to usne apna haath Prateek se alag kiya.....to usko wo sab dikhana band ho gaya ab wo bas ujale mein thi.....par usko ye ujala pasand nahi aaya aur wo haath jo Prateek se durr jaa raha tha wo wapas uske pas jaa pahucha.....
Prateek ke baare mein kya kaha jaaye......usko emotions jyada pasand nahi the.....pahle bilkul nahi aur ab thodi bahut aa rahi thi.....lekin abhi jo usne dekha....wo khud ko sambhal nahi paa raha tha.....Neelam uss jaal mein wapas aa gayi......uss dard ko usne apna liya....bas Prateek yaani apne bete ko chune ke liye.....
Prateek ne apne hazaron saal ke jeevan mein ye kabhi nahi dekha tha....haa jab yaha Earth pe tha to aisi chizen dekhi thi usne par kabhi mehsoos nahi kari thi.....aaj wo mehsoos kar raha tha......
Uske aankhon se aanshu girne lag gaye.....
Neelam - Parth Main apne bete ko chu sakti hu usko mehsoos kar sakti hu.....
Parth - Par ye.....tum iss tarah se....
Neelam - Kisi chizz ko apnanane ke liye kisi dusre chizz ko chodna padta hai bas wahi kar rahi hu.....(Madhu ki oor dekhte hue) Tum Mere Prateek ki dost ho....
Madhu ko khud wo sab mehsoos ho raha tha....usko to ye sunai bhi nahi diya tha....wo to bas Neelam ke chahre ko dekh rahi thi.....usko jab Neelam ke honth chalte hue dikhai diye tab usne puccha...
Madhu - haa.....kya hua.....
Neelam - Kuch nahi....Main bas puch rahi thi tum iski dost ho....
Madhu ne Prateek ki oor dekha bhi nahi bas haa mein sar hilla diya......wo iss waqt bahut kuch mehsoos kar rahi thi.....aur usne bahut saare ummid laga liye the......jaise jab wo apni maa se milegi to kya wo bhi issi tarah usko pyar karegi....aur bhi naa jaane kya kya....
uske aankhon se bhi aanshu gir jaate hai.....
Neelam apna haath aage karti hai aur uske aanshuyon ko pochne ke koshish karti hai....
Parth bhi waha aa jaata hai aur wo bhi Prateek ko chunne wala hota hai.....ye dekhte hi Madhu ne apna haath uske pass mein bhi laga diya hota hai.....ab wo sab Parth bhi mehsoos kar raha tha.....
Parth ne thodi der mein hi usko chod diya par baatein hoti rahi......
yaha pe ye sab chalta raha......
Dusri taraf Lucifer tha.....ab gussa dab gaya tha shant nahi hua tha.....kisi murde ki tarah apni gaddi pe baitha hua tha wo.....
Jab kabhi Raja udass yaa nirash hota hai.....to koi aur aa jaata hai uski jagah lene ko......kuch aisa yaha pe hone wala tha.....par abhi usme thoda waqt hai.....
Demos pe bas sanata tha......charo taraf hi sannata tha.....
Par yaha se jyada dur nahi Fumos pe.....waha bahut halchal thi.....
Dhruv khud ko Slayer ke sarir mein rakhne ke liye sangharsh kar raha tha......
Abhi tak usko ye pata nahi chala tha aakhir ye ho kya raha hai.....
Dhruv ne jinn aatmaon ko Slayer ke ander bandhi banane ke liye kaid kiya tha.....unhi aatmaon se takat khinch raha tha Justin......aur khud ko usse jyada takatwar banane ki koshish kar raha tha......Par ye ho nahi paa raha tha......
Lekin wo haar nahi maan raha tha bas laga hua tha.....
Dhruv thakta jaa raha tha....usko ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aakhir ye kyun ho raha hai.....koshish bahut kari usne ye janne ke liye par jaan hi nahi paa raha tha.....koi andaja h nahi tha....uske hisab se usne Slayer ke sarir ko khula chod diya tha.....aur sab nikal aye the......
Usne iss baare mein socha tha ki sayad jinn aatmaon ko usne Dark world se uthaya unme se koi ek hoga.....par isko dimmag se nikal diya usne turant hi.....aisa ho hi nahi sakta tha....agar aisa hota to usko unse ladne mein waqt lagta....aise hi khatam nahi kar deta unn sab ko.....
Usne kya kisi ne bhi nahi socha hoga ki khule pinare ke ander se koi parinda bahar hi naa aaye.....Justin wahi parinda tha yaha pe.....
Dhruv ne iss baare mein sandesh bhejne ke baare mein socha Prateek ko.....par wo kar nahi paaya.....isse pahle to wo dono judde hue the....matlab jab kabhi bhi dono mein se kisi ka mann hua dusre se baat kar leta tha......normally....haa agar koi khass wajah ho tab ye mumkin nahi ho paata tha.....
Khair wo Prateek ko koi sandesha nahi de paaya.....aur bas wahi pe rah gaya......aisa nahi usne koshish nahi kari...
EK baar do baar teen baar usne koshish kari....par kuch bhi nahi hua.....aur phir wo kamzor pad gaya......
ye mauka tha.....Justin ke liye......iss waqt usne Slayer ki body pe kaabu karna shuru kar diya.....aur usne bhi yahi koshish kari.....
Kisi tarah apne pita Lucifer tak apni baat pahuchane ke baare mein.....
Par yaha bhi wahi baat ho rahi thi.....wo kahi bhi jaata kuch bhi try karta kaam nahi ho raha tha......usne ek baar pedon ko todne ki koshish kari.....jiske baad usne khud ko jamin pe girra pada paaya.....
Wo bhi koshish karta gaya par kaam nahi bana uska bhi....
Ye sab kuch waha upar se wo immortal baitha dekh raha tha aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha.....
Ye Immortal bhi ajeeb tha isne dark power ko dekha tha uss planet pe....par isko usse jyada jaruri ye sab laga.....aur inn sab mein iss tarah se uljha hai ki usne wapas jaake kuch batane ke baare mein bhi nahi socha abhi tak.....
Dark power ki baat aayi hai to wapas chalte hai Earth pe.....
Yaha pe ab haal aisa tha ki thodi der aur thodi der aur ki kahani chal rahi thi.......
Koi nahi chahta tha wo dono waha se wapas jaaye......aur Madhu wo sabhi se sahmet thi......bas ek Pujari ji aur DB hi the waha pe......jinko sab dikhai de raha tha......
Golden power ka asar unn dono pe uss waqt tak hi rahne wali thi jab tak Madhu chahe....aur yaha pe Madhu ko khud hi pata nahi uske pass aisi koi shakti bhi hai......wo to ye sab kisi aur wajah se ho raha hai aisa soch rahi thi......
DB jaanta tha wo gujar chukke hai....aur gujre hue pallo ko bandh ke rakhne se khusi milti hai par usse jyada dukh bhi.....
DB ne iss baat ka jikar Pujari ji se kiya.....Pujari ji bhi uski baat se sahmet the......
Pujari ji ne Madhu ko apne oor aane ka ishara kiya......Madhu ne unko dekha usko laga ki agar usne unn dono ko chod diya to unko waha se jaana pad jaayega.....par iss baat ko Neelam ne bhi dekh liya tha.......wo Madhu ko hi dekhe jaa rahi thi.....
Neelam - Madhu beta wo log bhi dost hai kya.....
DB wahi pe tha aur Madhu ko waha jaana bhi tha to....
Madhu - Saare nahi unme se ek Pujari ji hai....ek baaki ke dono dost hai....
Neelam - Parth chalo unse bhi milte hai.....
Waise to Parth ko waha jaane ki koi ichaa nahi thi par Neelam ke kahne pe wo chala gaya....
Jab wo waha aaye to pahle to intro hua uske baad Parth Leader se aur Neelam DB se baat karne lag gayi.....
Madhu - Kya hua Pujari ji.....
Pujari ji - Madhu inke jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai.....
Madhu - Par abhi kaise.....abhi to ye aaye hai.....
Pujari ji - Madhu inka yaha jyada der tak rukna accha nahi hai.....ye apne aage ke safar mein pahle se hi bahut picche chuttein hue hai ab agar aur der hui to aur picche ho jaayenge....
Neelam - Madhu Pujari ji sahi kah rahe hai.....Mujhe bhi lagta hai ab humme yaha se jaana chahiye....
Neelam bas yun hi baatein kar rahi thi DB se par uska pura dhyaan to yaha tha Madhu aur Pujari ji pe......jab usne unki baat sunni to usko bhi wo baat sahi lagi....
Madhu - Par aap abhi bhi yaha rah sakti ho....
Neelam - Kab tak beta....kab tak tum hamare saath aise rahogi....
Madhu - Agar aap chale gaye to Prateek ka kya hoga....aur baaki sab ka.....dekho sab kitna pyaar karte hai aapse....
Neelam - Hum dono to kab ke jaa chukke hai beta....ye to yaha pe bas Prateek aur tumhare wajah se aa paaye hai....aur rukke hue hai....waha dekho unn sab ko......hum jitni der yaha pe rukenge naa hamare jaane ke baad utna hi dukh hoga unn sab ko.....hame ab jaana hi hoga....
Madhu - Main kya aapse kuch puch sakti hu.....
Neelam - Isme sochna kya hai.....jarur puccho tumne humme waqt diya hai aur sath mein apne bete ko ek baar chunne ka mauka bhi....puccho kya puchna hai....
Madhu - Kya sabke Maa Papa aap logo ke tarah hi pyaar karte hai apne baccho se.....
Neelam - Nahi beta.....sabke aise nahi karte isse bhi jyada karte hai.....Maa baap ke pyaar ko dusro ke maa baap ke pyar se compare karna bahut muskil hai.....bahut jyada.....Mujhe pata hai tumhe mere ander kya chal raha hai sab pata chal chukka hai.....hai naa.....ek raaz ki baat batao Mujhe bhi pata chal gaya hai tumhare ander ke baaton ka.....to chinta mat karo....jab tum apne Maa papa ke pass jaaogi aur unko pata chalega ki unki itni pyaari itni acchi beti hai to wo tumhe bahut pyaar karenge....samjhi...
Parth - Haa sahi kaha.....(Pujari ji se) Humme ek aakhiri baar unn sab ko alvida kahne ka mauka dijiye....
Pujari ji - Aap kaisi baat kar rahe hai ye sab mere haath mein nahi...(Parth ka ishara samajhte hue) haa ha....jarur Madhu.....ab inko padke rahne ka koi matlab nahi hai....inko chod do...ye khud se kuch der mein yaha se chale jayenge...
Madhu ne Parth ko to chod diya par Neelam ko chodne se pahle uske gale lagi thi wo.....sab dekh rahe the usko....
Parth waha pe gaya aur usne sabhi ko bataya ki ab unke jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai....wo aur der tak nahi ruk sakte....
Wapas se sabki aakhen bhar aayi Neelam ne Madhu ko sabhi ki oor dekhate hue kaha dekho ye wapas se uddas ho gaye.....par inke ander ek ummid hai abhi bhi ki sayad hum thodi der aur rukk jayenge....wapas se....
Ye jhuthi ummid jab tak nahi tutegi badhti hi jaayegi aur bahut dukh degi inhe.....
Madhu ne uski baat sunni aur haa mein gardan hilayi.....
Next update mein dekhte hai Nikita ka case.....yaha pe kya hota hai aur saath hi Strange world ki baatein kaise DB wo karta hai jo usne karne ka socha tha