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Kaam jaari hai par kal tak hi aayega...abhi USC ka kaam chalu hai....
aap sab bhi likho kahaniya :goteam:
 

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UPDATE - 48

Ab tak

DB mere ghar mein tha....usko jitna kuch janna chahiye tha utna pata chal chukka tha....wahi Main Nikita aur Rupal Didi ko leke Jwala ke kabile mein aaya tha...taaki Rupal didi ki kulhadi wali samasya khatam ho jaaye aur saath hi Nikita ki nayi powers mil jaaye....jiske baad naa sirf wo Polar bears ki madad kar sakegi...balki Elf country mein jo baccho ke saath ho raha tha uske liye bhi wo kuch kar sakti thi....par kabhi bhi...jaisa socho waisa hota hi nahi hai....Rupal didi ki samasya to khatam ho gayi thi par...jo powers Nikita ko milni chahiye thi....wo usko naa milke....Rupal didi ko mil gayi....aur aisa iss liye hua kyunki wo powers Nikita ke kabil hi nahi thi....agar Nikita ko wo powers milti to wo powers hi khatam ho jaati....

Ab aage...

Abhi bhi powers transfer ho rahi thi....aur main....main samajh nahi paa raha tha karna kya hai....upar se ye Dhruv ye alag hi laga hua tha...ye mujhse puch raha tha ki Nikita kyun special hai...aisa kya hai usme...ab mujhe kya pata hoga...uske baare mein dekha to tha usne bhi....hum dono ne dekha tha...ek bacchi thi....jisko leke koi bhag rahi thi...Maa hi hogi uski aur fir wo usko Earth pe bhej deti hai jaha ek aurat uska khayal rakhti hai par wo aurat bhi jyada samay tak jee nahi paati usko maar diya jaata hai.....aur fir usko maarne wala hi bacchi ko Prof. Suraj ke giroh mein leke chala jaata hai jaha wo badi hoti hai....inn sab mein mujhe special wali baat samajh nahi aati kuch....haa ab agar kuch aur bhi ho jo humme dikha hi nahi tab baat alag hai....

Main - Dhruv dekho ab ye khatam hone wala hai.....ab kya hoga...

DHruv - Aisa bahut waqt baad ho raha hai jab chizzen samajh nahi aa rahi mere.....ye sab aisa hona hi nahi chahiye tha.....par ye aisa hua hai.....aur iske picche ka karan meri samajh mein to nahi aa raha hai....

Main - Ek hi baat ko 2 tarah se bol rahe ho tum...sahi to h naa...

Dhruv - Haa sayad.....par ab jo bhi hua hai...isme hum kuch nahi kar sakte...tum dekho dhyaan se......powers aise suit kar rahi hai...yaa to ye powers isme uss waqt bhi thi...yaa wo sahi waqt nahi tha ki ye powers isko diya jaata...haa aakhir tab ye khooni ghudsawaron ki rani thi...ye hi mumkin hai....par Nikita ke baare mein kya....uska abhi tak kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai...

Main - Ek baat batao ye khooni ghudsawaron ki rani hai kya.....baar baar bolte rahte ho aisa.....kon the ye log....aur Didi ko unki Rani kyun batate ho tum....

Dhruv - Main abhi khud sab samajhne ki koshish kar raha hu....par sayad agar mein tumhe ye baatein samjhaun to main khud bhi samajh jaun...samjhe kuch...

Main - Haa samajh gaya...mujhe kuch nahi samajhna samjhe....ab bas ye samjhao ki mujhe aage karna kya hai....kya inn powers se Didi outof control hone wali hai jaise uss kulhadi ki wajah se hui thi....

Dhruv - Nahi aisa nahi hoga.....tum sayad dekh nahi paa rahe par ye power inhi ke liye banni thi...isse inko kuch nahi hone wala....aur rahi baat kulhadi ki...to agar wo asal wali kulhadi hoti to kuch bhi nahi hota...ye to bas Demos ke khass metal se banni hui kulhadi thi iss wajah se thodi saitani thi ye.......

Main - to hum aisa maan ke chale ki sab sahi hoga...

Dhruv - Aur koi rasta hi nahi hai hum bas yahi maan sakte hai...

Main usse baatein kar raha tha aur utni der mein ye power transfer ka kaam pura ho gaya....aur issi ke saath Rupal didi ke baad jo abhi tak kaale the....wo thode thode brown se hone lag gaye....aur wo wahi pe gir gayi...behosh ho gayi...

Maine unko uthaya aur waha pe khade vaidyon ko unhe check karne ke liye bola....main uss rani se puchna chahta tha ki aisa kaise hua...par jab uski oor dekha to waha pe bas ek ajeeb sa dhancha pada hua tha hadiyon ka....Wo apne powers dene ke saath hi sayad mar chuki th.....

Main - Dhruv ab kya....wo to mar gayi aur uski powers kaise use karni hai ye kaise pata chalega.....Didi kaise unn jeevon ko Polar bears wale jagah se jaane ko kahegi...kya wo baat maanenge...

Dhruv - Inn sab ke baare mein to mujhe bhi pata nahi hai...humme inn jeevon ke baare mein pata karna hoga....aur sath hi inn powers ke use karne ke tarike ke baare mein bhi....aur sirf itna hi nahi humme Nikita ke baare mein bhi janna hoga....main samajhna chahta hu ki aakhir wo kyun special hai...

Vaidya(Jwala) - Ye hosh mein aane wali hai...

Usne aisa bola hi tha ki Didi hosh mein aa gayi.....aur aate hi yaha waha dekhne lagi.....

Main - aap thik ho naa....

Didi - nahi.....main theek nahi hu.....mujhe abhi ghar jaana hai....

Main - Haa ye sahi hoga....waise bhi ab yaha koi kaam nahi baccha hai....Nikita chalo hum chalte hai.....

Main itna bol ke uski oor mudda....par wo waha thi hi nahi....matlab abhi tak wo wahi thi......main usko dekh raha tha aur ek pal baad jaise hi main Didi se baat kar raha tha.....wo gayab ho gayi...

Main - Ye kaha gayi...Jwala kaha gayi wo.....

Jwala - Arre abhi to yahi thi.....

Main - Dhruv kaha gayi wo....

Dhruv - pata nahi.....

Didi - Mujhe ghar jaana hai abhi.....mujhe ghar jaana hai....

Main - Jwala main jaa raha hu...portal kholo....aur Black owl se bolo Nikita ko dhunde....aur jab wo mille usko wapas se ghar bhejne....

Jwala - haa thik hai....

Usne fir portal khola aur hum usse hoke ghar aa gaye.....main waha pe rukna chahta tha...mujhe bhi dhundhna tha usko....par Didi ko abhi sayad waha rakhna sahi nahi hota....upar se nayi shaktiyan thi....kuch bhi ho sakta hai...

Didi ko ghar pe hum sidha unke room mein leke aaye the.....aur waha aate hi wo fir se behosh ho gayi pata nahi kaise.....Maine unko bed pe lita diya...

Main - Dhruv ye didi baar baar aise kab tak chalta rahega...tumne to kaha tha sab sahi hoga....

Dhruv - Ye sayad aakhiri baar tha....inki body adjust kar rahi hai uss power ko.....to ye sab normal hai....

Main - Aur Nikita ka kya wo kaha gayi....humme usko dhundhna hoga....

Dhruv - Haa main bhi yahi soch raha hu....dhundhna hoga usko par wo gayi kaha itni jaldi aur kya usko pata tha ki wo special hai...matlab aise gayab ho jaana wo bhi itni jaldi...

Main - Mujhe nahi pata usko kya pata tha kya nahi....mujhe bas usko dhundhna hai Old Owl ke log usko dhundhne mein lage ue hai par humme bhi kuch karna chahiye....

Wahi dusri taraf.....Elf world mein Elf king jo abhi apne singhasan pe baithe hue the....aur kisi pe chilla rahe the....

ElfKing - Maine kaha tha ki uska pata lagao yaha laane nahi kaha tha...tumhare pass dimmag nahi hai kya....

Wo - Par mujhe laga sayad aapko isko sazza deni hai.....to main pakad laaya isko.....aur mujhe laga ki aap khush honge....

Elf King - Maine aisa kuch kaha tha kya tumse....maine bas kaha ki pata karo ye jo bhi hai wo kis halat mein hai aur kaisi hai.....aur tum kamakal isko yaha le aaye.....isko iske sahi jagah pe pahuchao....aur haa dhyaan rahe isko yaad bhi nahi rahna chahiye ki ye yaha laayi gayi thi....isne kuch dekha to nahi hai naa yaha pe....

Wo - Nahi isne kuch nahi dekha hai aur naa kisi ne isko.....main to bas aapko dikhana chahta tha iska chahra...

Elf king - Nahi dekhna mujhe...ab bas isko leke jao jaha se isko laaye the aur dhaayan rahe isko kuch bhi yaad nahi rahna chahiye....

WO - Thik hai jaisa aap kahe....

Wo waha se chala jaata hai aur fir waha pe ek elf aata hai aur Counrty mein ho rahi sabhi ghatnaon ko batata hai....

Elf - Maharaj Praja ki halat kuch thik nahi hai....bacche marte jaa rahe hai.....aur ab to unki bodies bhi gayab hoti jaa rahi hai...

Elf King - Kya.....bodies gayab ho rahi hai matlab kya hai...ek to iss mahamari ka pata nahi chala raha hai upar se ab bodies chori kar raha hai koi....

Elf - Maharaj vaidya lage hue hai pata karne mein ki ye kon si mahamari aa gayi hai....aur humne sainikon ko bhi bol diya hai ye bodies ki chori ka pata kare....

Elf King - Pata nahi kyun ye sab ho raha hai....Yuvraj kaha hai....unse kaho ki humme abhi kahi nikalna hai to wo inn sab ka dhyaan rakhe...

Elf - Ji maharaj...

Elf king apni jagah se uthe aur pahle apne kamre mein gaye....uske baad waha se acchanak se gayab ho gaye....

Planet - Fumos

Yaha pe wo log laye jaa chuke the Elf world se.....yaha ke leader ne apna wada pura kiya tha ab baari kisi aur ki thi....aur wo bas intezar mein the ki kab wo aaye aur usko sab kuch bataye....aur uska intezar jyada lamba nahi chala.....

Leader- Elf king....aapko aane ki jarurat nahi thi....aap kisi aur ko bhi bhej sakte the.....

Elf king - Nahi main inn sab ke baare mein aur kisi ko nahi batana chahta tha....mujhe pata chal gaya hai uske baare mein.....par ye samajh nahi aaya ki wo rahti kaha hai....

Leader- Kya matlab hai aapka.....wo theek to hai naa....

Elf king - Haa wo theek thi.....par mere log ye nahi pata kar paaye ki uska thikana kaha hai.....sayad koi magic hoga....(isko agar ye bata diya ki mere lo usko mere pass leke aa sakte hai to main musibat mrein pad sakta hu...isko utna hi batanna chahiye jine se kaam chale)

Leader ye baat sunke bahut dukhi hua....

Leader - Ye sab meri hi wajah se hua tha.....kaas wo sab maine naa kiya hota to aaj main bhi apne pariwar ke saath ek acchi jindgi bitta raha hota...iss jagah se dur....inn sab se dur...apne pariwar ke saath....

Elf king - Main samajh sakta hu tumpe kya beet rahi hogi....par tum chinta mat karo main uska dhyaan rakhunga....

Leader - Haa bas uska dhyaan acche se rakhna....aur main tumhare kaidiyon ko yaha bhejte rahne ki manjuri deta rahunga....

Elf king fir waha se gayab ho gaya......

(Elf king waha kabhi gaye hi nahi the......waha pe bas unka ek pratibimbh gaya tha jiske through wo baatein kar rahe the usse.....)

Wapas chalte hai.....

Old Owl aur baki sab ko Nikita ko dhundhne ka bol ke jab Jwala wapas se waha aata hai Vaidya se milne to wo jo saamne dekhta hai wo samajh nahi paata aisa kaise ho gaya....

Usne dekha ki Nikita waha pe wapas aa gayi thi par wo behosh padi hui thi.....

Usne jaldi se Vaidyon ko Kaha Nikita ko dekhne ke liye.....aur khud portal khol ke Prateek ko waha leke aa gaya....

Main - Kaha milli ye aur ye behosh kyun hai....

Jwala - Ye yahi pe thi....aur behosh thi...pata nahi kai....

Wo bol hi raha tha ki waha pe ek sainik aa gaya.....

Sainik - Maharaj yaha pe koi aaya tha...

Main - kya matlab hai koi aaya tha...

Jwala - acche se batao....

Sainik - Maharaj koi jeev tha....wo yaha pe aaya tha abhi.....aur ek baar nahi 2 baar....

Jwala - kya...koi jeev yaha pe aa gaya aur tumlog kya kar rahe the....

Sainik - Maharaj Polar bears aur baakiyon ke aane ke karan humne bahari security ko thoda kam kar diya hai aur andruni security pe dhyaan de rahe hai....sayad issi ka fayda utha ke koi yaha aa gaya tha.....par wo bas aaya aur chala gaya...

Jwala - Jo bhi tha...uska pata lagao aur agar wo khatarnak hai to khatam karo usko.....

Main - Itna gussa kyun ho rahe ho....

Jwala - Ye jagah sabke liye nahi hai....tumko nahi pata yaha sirf tum aur wo log hi aa sakte hai jinko tum laana chaho....aur koi nahi....iss jagah ke baare mein....aur yaha ke logo ke baare mein kisi ko bhi pata nahi hona chahiye...ye bahut khatarnak hai.....

Main - thik hai jo karna hai karo.....ek minute par wo jeev kaha se aaya tha jisne itna kuch kiya....

Jwala - unhi wajahon se to iss jagah ko hum kisi ke nazron mein nahi aane dena chahte...

Hum baat kar rahe the aur Nikita ko hosh aa jaata hai....

Nikita - Main kaha hu.....

Main - Kahi nahi chalo ghar chalte hai.....baatein karni hai kuch....

Maine Jwala ki or dekha usne portal khola aur hum chal diye waha se...

Sawal bahut se the mere maan mein par Nikita ki halat kharab thi,...aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi ne isko behoshi ka dawa de diya ho...

Khair ye raat badi ajeeb thi....aur bas kat hi gayi....lekin agle kuch din mujhse mere dost chinne wale the ye baat mujhe pata nahi thi....

Next day...

Subah sab jaage aur sabhi nicche aaye....Rupal didi ke baal ab pahle jaise kaale hi the....sab normal sa hi lag raha tha....DB bhi room se bahar aaya....Chachi ne khana lagaya tha.....hum khaa hi rahe the ki Dada Dadi wapas aa gaye.....

Wo bhi fresh hoke khane ke liye baith gaye....aur fir se darwaja knock hua.....

Iss baar darwaja kholne pe wo insan tha waha jo kal aaya tha......

Wo - Accha hai sabhi yahi mil gaye.....mujhe madad chahiye thi iss pariwar se....

Dada ji - Tum....tum yaha kaise....

Wo - Bas kuch kaam aa gaya tha.....aana pada yaha...tum batao kaise ho....

Dadaji - Abhi tak sab sahi tha ab aage ka pata nahi....

Wo - hahahaa...sab sahi hoga par mujhe tumse baat karni hai...tum sab se....

Dadaji - Haa batao.....

Wo - Pahle mein tumhe wo sab bata du jo tumhe janna chahiye.....jo sayad abhi tak bataya nahi gaya hai tumhe...

Usne dadaji ko kal ki saari baatein batayi DB ke baare mein bataya uska uske ghar se bahar nikale jaane ke baare mein bataya aur bhi baaki sab.....

Dada Dadi ye sab sunn rahe the aur unko DB ke liye bura lag raha tha aur saath hi Uske logo ke liye bhi.....DB ne bhi jab sunna ki uske logo ki halat itni kharab ho gayi hai to wo bahut dukhi hua.....

Dadi ji - Ye sab to bahut bura hua....ab batao hum kaise madad kare.....

Wo - Maine inke school mein apna ek prof bheja hai wo waha pe inka dhyaan rakhega....par mujhe nahi lagta ki usse kaam chalega....maine jitna socha tha ye sab usse kahi jaldi ho raha hai.....Mujhe abhi uski jarurat hai....

Dadaji - Kiski baat kar rahe ho tum....saaf saaf bolo....

Wo - Mujhe cloning ki jarurat hai....Main chahta hu DB bas mere saath hi rahe...aur yahi accha hoga....aur tum log iska ek clone banao aur usko School mein leke jaao....waha pe mera wo aadmi dhyaan rakhega ki kisi ko pata naa chale ki wo clone hai DB nahi.....

Main - Par aapne to kaha tha.....

Wo - Bache main jaanta hu maine kya kaha tha...par jaise halat waha pe bante jaa rahe hai usko dekhte hue ye karna jaruri hai.....Maine kal hi baat ki thi Leemo se.....usne bataya log udas hai unke bache marte jaa rahe hai....mere kahne pe wo ab unn baccho ki bodies ko preserve kar raha hai jinko bachane ki ummid hai.....aur main nahi chahta ki wo sab bhi....Mujhe isk training jaldi se shuru karni hai.....aur kam se kam utna kabil to banana hai ki ye uss mahamari ko rok paaye....fir dhire dhire iski training chalti rahegi....aur ye wapas aa jaayega....

Main kuch bolta usse pahle DB bola.....

DB - Main taiyar hu....

AB main kya bolta ye uske logo ke liye jaruri tha....main jitna madad kar sakta tha wo main karne ke liye taiyar tha....

Dada ji - Haa thik hai hum taiyaar hai....

Chachi - Papa mujhe lagta hai Prateek ko bhi.....

Dadi - Main bhi iss baare mein soch rahi thi...ye yaha aaya hai log isko dekh rahe hai....par kisi ko bhi iske baare mein pura sach nahi pata hai.....aur naa hi pata chale to abhi ke liye accha hoga....hum isko bhi dekh lenge....main aur tumhare Papa iske liye kuch leke bhi aaye hai.....Poonam jao dono ko taiyaar karke aao.....

Dadaji -(insan se) ab aapko thodi der ke liye jaana hoga...aap samajh rahe hai naa...

Wo - Main bahar hu....

Nikita - Kya hone wala hai...

Kavita madam - Kuch nahi tum ek kaam karo room mein jao aur wahi raho main bhi aa rahi hu....

Jo ghar ke log the wo sabhi ab wahi dinning table ke pass the....Mujhe aur DB ko Bua leke gayi room mein aur humme taiyaar kiya....pata nahi kya kar rahi thi....koi paani tha jisko humpe chidka jaa raha tha aur fir kuch mantra badbada rahi thi wo.....

Unn sab ke baad wo humme bahar leke aayi jaha pe ek bada sa ghera bana hua tha....aur uski linings pe mere ghar wale khade the....

Dadaji - DB pahle tum....

DB ko dhere ke bich mein khada kiya gaya aur wo log kuch mantra padne lage aur uske paad waha pe thodi si roshni hui aur usse DB ki ek parchayi ban gayi....aur wo parchayi fir khadi hui....aur uska roop badalne lag gaya....aur wo DB ki tarah ban gaya.....Main ye dekh ke hairaan tha.....

Dadaji - Prateek ab tum...

Aur fir main waha jaaake khada hua...

Dhruv - Bekar mein ye sab kar rahe hai ye....waise bhi mere rahte tumhe koi nahi pahchan paayega par chalo karne dete hai...

Main waha khada hua aur wo sab wapas se wahi mantra wantra padhne lage......aur unke aisa karne se mere charo oor kuch aa gaya aur bas.....aur kuch nahi hua....

Dadaji - kaam ho gaya hai....ab bulao usko bahar se....DB beta...kabhi bhi kisi chiz ki jarurat ho to humme kahna hum hamesa honge madad ke liye samjhe.....

DB - Ji dadaji

WO insan ander aaya aur wo DB ko leke chala gaya ab waha pe hum log hi rah gaye the aur wo DB ka clone....

Tabhi upar se Kavita madam aur NIkita aayi...

Kavita madam - Aap logo ko kuch dikhana hai...

Bua - kya hua....tum pareshan lag rahi ho....

Kavita madam - pata nahi par.....ye dekho....

Kavita madam ne Nikita ka haath aage karte hue humme dikhaya....mujhe to ghanta kuch samajh nahi aaya par sayad baaki sab samajh gaye the....koi nishan bana hua tha uske haath p...ajeeb sa....

Dadi - Beta tum Elf world mein kab gayi...aur ye nishan kyun hai tumhare haath pe....

Bua - Maa hum gaye the ye nahi gayi thi aur wo sab sahi tarike se tha....aur ye nishan hona hi nahi chahiye tha.....aur ye dekho ye to naya lag raha hai.....(Madam ke saath jaane wali baat nahi batani chahiye aur waise bhi uss time to ye nishan tha hi nahi)

Dadaji - Naya ho yaa purana baat wo nahi hai par ye yaha hai kyun....Nikita beta tumko pata hai ye nishan kyun lagaya jaata hai...

Nikita - Nahi aur maine to abhi dekha isko.....pata nahi kaise aa gaya....

Dadaji - tumko nazarband kiya hua hai ELf world ke logo ne....par kyun....

Main - Nazar band...

Nikita - Nazarband...

Dada ji - Kuch to gadbad hai aise hi kisi ko nazarband nahi kiya jaa sakta hai....(Chacha ji se) Bulao usko...humme ye baatein upar tak batani hogi....kuch to chal raha hai ELf world mein.....

Chacha ji - Ji papa main abhi bulata hu....

Thodi hi dr mein wahi Mota aadmi hamare ghar mein wapas aa gaya....

Dadaji ko dekh ke wo thoda ghabra raha tha....par Dadaji ne aaram se puccha...

Dadaji - Ye Nishan iss bacchi ke haath pe kyun hai.....

Usne uss Nishan ko acche se dekha....aur wo bhi apna sar khujane laga....isko to maine nahi bheja tha...

Wo - Pata nahi kaise ho gaya ye.....sayad kuch galti hui hai...main waha pe iss baat ko uthata hu....aur tab tak ke liye ye nishan main mita deta hu....

Dadaji - Nishan hum bhi mitta sakte the...aur tum ye jaante ho par iske baad bahut kuch ho jaata....mujhe iss bare mein saari jankaari chahiye samjhe...

WO - Ji samajh gaya...

WO waha se nikal jaata hai Nishan hata ke....par sawal to abhi bhi tha nishan aaye kyun...

Dhruv - Pata hai mujhe lagta hai humme school wapas chalna chahiye kuch baatein bhi ho jaayegi kuch logo se....jinki wajah se ye sab shuru hua tha...

Main - Pankaj....haa mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai....main ab usse baat karna chahta hu.....kyun usne aisa kiya aur kiske kahne pe kiya...

AAj ke liye itna hi next update mei dekjhte hai Pankaj se baat kaise hoti hai....aur DB ka insanon ke bich rahne ka pahla din bhi...
 

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nice update ..rani ki power rupal me aate hi rani marr gayi .par un jaanwar ya logo ko polar bear kabile se nikalne ka kisine socha hi nahi ..

nikita ko elf king ke aadmi ne kidnap kiya tha isliye wo nishan uske haath pe aaya ..

shayad nikita ka fumos ke leader se koi rishta hai ..
par ye nikita ko najarband kyu kiya hai 🤔🤔..
aur nikita ke baare me dhruv ko bhi koi jaankari nahi hai ..
 
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