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UPDATE - 4

Ab tak

Dinning haal ke kaand ke baad abhi log apne apne rooms mein chale gaye jaha pe....Slayer aur Parth dono ko pata chjalta hai ki dono hi roommates hai ye jaan Slayter ko kuch fark nahi padta par Parth bada khush ho jaata haiu...

Raat hui thi dono so jaate hai....

Ab aage

Subah ka waqt sab jaldi se uthte hai taiyaar hote hai aur dinning hall mnein wapas ikkatha hote hai waha pe breakfast ke liye....par isme Slayer aur Parth dono late ho jaate hai to jaisa ki yaha ka niyam hai unko khana unke room mein mill jaata hai par ek warning ke saath jo ki pahli aur aakhri warning thi....

Warning ek chitthi mein aayi thi...Parth jo ki jaanta tha ab kya hoga kyunki wo apne basics ke liye yahi padha tha issi school mein to wo yaha ke rules se acchi tarah parichit hai par...Slayer nahi...

To Slayer ko bhi sabhi chijo se parichit karne ka jimma apne sar lete hue...usne Slayer se bola letter kholne ko...Slayer ek ek look di phir wo badh gaya uss letter ki oor...jaise hi usne letter khola ek kaagaz bahar khuud aaya aur ek chahre ki tareah ban gaya...

"aap dono aaj ke breakfast ke liye late ha....iss school ke niyam ke anushar aapko aaj khana diya jaa raha hai kyunki pahli baar tha ye par uske saath warning bhi mil rahi hai....ab agar aage bhi aisa hua to khane ke jagah bas warning hi di jayegi..."

Itna bol wo kagaz khud se chuithde chithde ho gaya wahi Slayer usko dekhta rahga ye pahli baar jo tha....


Parth ne tabhi uske kande pe haath rakha aur bola ab aise hi dekhte rahe to aise bahut se letters aayenge humare pass...ab jaldi se chalo khana khao aur nayi class mein chalo....main naya jaadu seekhne ko bahut hi jyada utsahit hu...

Slayer chup chap jake khana khane laga..

Parth - yaar tum bolte nahi kya kal se sayad hi tum ek baar bhi kuch bole ho....arre bola karo bolna bahut accha hota hai isse hum apne ander ki bhawnao ko bahar nikal sakte hai...

Aise hi bakar bakar karte hue wo khata raha par Slayer usko kuch matlab hi nahi tha inn sabse....

Dono ne khana khaya aur fir dono chal diye Castle M ki oor jaha magic class thi aaj dono ki....

Par raste mein hi unhe kuch logo ne apni oor bulaya...POarth unko dekh dar gaya tha....par Slayer binna kisis bhaw ke aage badhta raha....jo unn logo ko pasand nahi aaya....unme se ek banda dono ke saamne aaya...

Ladka- Sunayi nahi deta kya Half blood humne buloya matlab aane ka...

Ye ek group tha seniors ka jisme bas Pure blood wale yhi the....

Slayer fir bhi kuch nahi bola bas usko dekhta raha wahi Parth usse bola hi nahi gaya kuch...

Usne dono ko apne picche aane ko kaha dono jaane lage...sorry Parth jaane laga Slayer hilla bhi nahi tha par Parth ne usko pakda tab wo bhi jaane laga uske saath....Wo ladka unko apne group ke pass le gaya jaha pe karib 7 log the wo...Saato ke saath unn donmo ke charo oor aise khade ho gaye jisse aas pass kisis ko pata bhi naa chale ki waha pe koi aur bhi hai..aur unn dono ko apne saath chalne ko kaha....

Slayer ka haath pakad ke Parth usko bhi apne saath le gaya...

Wo log unn dono ko Castle M ke taikhane ki taraf le gaye....ye bahut hi khatarnak jagah thi...yaha pe bahut hi ajeeb ajeeb ghatnaye hua karti thi....Iss school ke bhi kuch raaz the jo bahar kisi ko patanahi the....aur unn raaz ki baaton mein iss jagah ka jikr hamesha kiya jaata tha....

Jab ye dono waha gaye to dekha ki ek ladki hai sayad inhi ki class ki hogi....haa kyunki inhi ke umar ki lag rahi thi...usko waha pe bandh rakha tha....

unn saatho mein se ek ne bola...

Ladka- EK Minor do half blood wo bhi dono ke dono hi warewolf hai...isse accha aur kya hoga....ab hum apne kaam mein jarur kamiyab honge....

Parth ko samajh mein nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha hai par uskli fatti padi thi...same halat uss ladki ki bhi par Slayer usko kuch farkl nahi pad raha tha....

Wo baaki ke saato unn logo ne apne haatho mein kuch mombattiyan li aur fir unko jala ke unn timnno ke chakar katne lage....ye saatho Demos world ki ekl bahut hio prachilit jaadu ka upyog kar rahe the....isme hota ye hai ki jinke saath bhi ye kiya jaaye unki aatmayein aapke vash mein ho jaati hai aap unse kuch bhi karwa sakte ho....ab inn saato ko pata nahi kya kaam tha jo ye sab kar rahe the....Jab ye shuru hua to pahle wo ladki uski aankhe ulti ho gayi m,atlab undertaker ki tarah wo karna hai naa jab aankhon ka black hissa chip jaata hai....Haa bilkul waise hi...aur jab ye hua naa to uske sharir se kuch nikla aur wo chiz uss jagah ghumne lagi...wahi uss ladki ka saar bhi ajeeb tarike se ghumne laga waha pe....Todi der baad Paarth ke saath ye hona shuru hua....uske shjarir se bhi kuch waisa hi nikla fir uski bnhi aankhen ulti hui aur fir wahi ajeeb tarike se saar kaa hilna...

Abhi tak sab kuch unn saato ke hisab se chal raha tha par....Slayer ke saath aisa nahi ho raha tha...uske saath kuch bahut hi alag hua....ye alag unn saato ke liye bahut hi khatarnak tha...jaisa ki aap sab jaante haoi Slayer ko banane mein Sofia ne naa jaane kitne hi insano ko maar diya tha...ginti tak nahi pata hai kisi ko upar se wo roshni jo usko jinda karte waqt usme samma rahi thio wo unn logo ke aatma ko takat deke ek aatma banane ke liye the...ek aisi aatma jisko kaabu karna lagbhag naamumkin hi tha...

Ek baat clear karna hoga yaha pe warna confusion ho sakti hai...jaisa ki kaha tha ki school mein aisa jaadu hai jisse waha pe agar koi hanikarak jaadu ka use kiya jaaye to wo jaadu karne walke ko hi waha se teleport kar dete hai...par kahte hai naa rules bante hai aur log unse bachne ka tarika dhundh lete hai bas aisa hi yaha tha...saatho ne uss kriya ko aapas mein baat liya tha taaki uss jaau ka inpoe koi asar hi naa hoi...

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Haa to hua ye tha ki SSlayer ke body se bhi uske ander ke saare aatmayein jo ki ab ek aatma ban gayi thi wo bhi itni shaktishali ki usko kaabu karna lagbhag mumkin hi nahi hai...Ab wo aatma bhi bahar aane lagi....aur jaise hi wo bahar aayi...aur Slayer jamin pe girra....uss jagah pe maano manhusiyat chaa gayi thi...waise pahle bhi manhushg jagah hi thi wo par abhi aur jyada manhush ban gayi thi...

Wo saatho jo haato mein mombati liye unn tino ka chakar kaat rahe the aur kuch badbada rahe the...unn sab ki mombati ek ek kar ke bujh gayi...taikhana mein andhera cha gaya....kisi ko kuch bhi nahi dikhne laga ki

aaahhahhhhhahhaaaaa

ek bhayankar cheekh phir....kisi ke hasne ki awaj aayi....

"chihiiihihihi ek chiihihihihhiccii"

ye awaj waha faili....

saare jo waha pe hosh mein the sab ke sab darke maare kaampne lage jab aisi hassi sunni thi...darre bhi kyun naa ek to ye naushikhiye the iss jaadu mein aur iss jaadu ko karne mein agar gadbad hui to apko apni jaan se haath dhona hi padega...ye jaruri hota hai...bas yahi hua....

jassi ki awaj aati rahi aur counting badhti rahi 2 , 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 aur fir acchana se waha roshni hui...jiske baad uss jagah pe 3 log acchanak hosh mein aa gaye...wo tinno the Slayer Parth aur wo Minor ladki...jaise hi tinno ko hosh aaya waise hi waha taikhane mein bhujhe hue masal jalne lage aur waha roshni ho gayi...SLayer ko bada hi ajeeb par accha lag raha tha...ss jagah pe unn tinnmo ke alawa aur koi nahi tha bas wahi tinno the waha pe...Wo ladki usne to ek baar yaha waha dekha usko koi nahi dikha to wo Parth aur Slayer ko usko kholne ko bolne lagi...Oarth aur uss ladki ko bhi ajeeb lag raha tha par ek bandi hui thi iss wajah se aur dusra had se jyada darra hua tha iss wajah se uthna dhyaan nahi diya....Parth jaldi se gaya uss ladki ke pass aur usko aazad kiya...fir tinno jaldi se waha se bhag gaye....sorry do log tisre ko to khinch kew le jaaya gaya tha...

Jab bahar aaye tab bhi nahi rukke wo ttinno sidha class mein gaye jaha wo late ho gaye the...

Prof. - pahle hi din itn.....

Abhi wo aage bolte usse pahle unhone Parth aur uss ladki ka chahra dekha wo samajh gaye ki kuch hua hai to bas tinno ko ander anne ke liye kah diya...tinno baith gaye ek jagah pe...

Hmm class ke baare mein bhi jaan lete hai..to waise to IP madam ne kah diya hai ki sabko saath mein baithna hai per Pure blood wale thahre khud ko mahan samajhne wale haa to unhone class ko do hisso mein abaat diya hai ek hisse mein bas Pure blood hi baithega baaki ke log dusre hisse mein...iss baat pe kuch prof.. bhi unke saath the to IP jyada kuch kar nahi saki kyunki ek baar aisa hua ki kuch minor aur Half blood Pure blood walo ke saath baithe the...par fir unka koi pata hi nahi raha Kahte hai wo School chod ke chale gaye the...par sach kisi ko pata nahi..

Haa to tinno baith gaye...par Slayer ko bada ajeeb lag raha tha...ki tabhi pure blood walo ki taraf se kisi ne ek kagaz feka uski oor...ab Slayer ji kahi aur khoye hue the to usko pata nahi chalta par....ek aawaj usko sunayi di...

"maalik "

ye awaj bas usko hi nahi baaki ke dono ko bhi sunayi di aur dono ne dekha Slayer ki oor wahi Slayer uss Kagaz ki oor...ki kagaz mein aag lag gayi aur wo wapas se pure blood walo ki taraf chala gaya...ussi ke pass jisne fenka tha...ye sab hotye hue Parth ne aur uss Minor ladki ne bhi dekha tha...

Samajh mein nahi aaya unn dono o kuch wahi haal Slayer ka bhi tha usko bhi samajh nahi aaya kyunki usne nahi bheja tha kagaz ko waha wo bhi aag ke saath..

Wo kagaz waha gaya aur ek awaj ke saath fat gaya..jiski wajah se Prof. ki najar usss oor gayi aur jab dekhja to ek student apna muh kalla kiyte hue baitha tha...

Prof. - Ye kya hai...kya kar rahe the tuim...

Wo kya bvolta jab kuch samajh pata tab naa bolta...

Usko Prof. ne bahar milne ko kaha wahi thodi der mein class khatam hui...Prof. ne sabko jaane ko kaha siway 3 logo ke Slayer, Parth aur wo Minor ladki...

Ladki kaa naam hai Neelam

Prof- Hmm batao kya hua tha tinno ke saath...

Tinno mein se koi kuch bolta usse pahle hi awaj sunayi di tinno ko...

"raaz hai ye raaz hi rakho hum kaam aayenge aappke kisi ko mat batao.."

Pata nahi dono ko kya hua Parth aur Neelam ne biol diya ki ground mein kuch seniors pareshan kar rahe the par ek professor ne humme baccha kliya bas issi mein late hue....

Prof. ko unki baat pe yakkin to nahi hua par...phir kuch sochte hue unko jaane ke liye bol diya...

Tinno jab bnahar aaye...

Neelam- WO awaj wo tum dono ko bhi sunayi di thi naa....

Slayer ne kuch nahi kaha wahi Parth ne Haa kaha...

Paarth - Ye sab kahii unn logo ki wajah se to nahi....par wo gaye kaha...

Neelam - tumhe unki padi hui hai wo hum tinno ko maarne wale the...kaas wo tinno hi.,...

"Hum maar hi gaye hai aur ab se Malik ke wafadar hai saath hi aap dono k bnhi..."

Ye awaj aayi aur dono nahi iss baar tinno shocked....Ab Slayer ko bhi kaha pata tha ki aisa bhi kuch hota hai usko to bas kuch baatein bata ke Sofia chali gayi...baaki baatein to isko khud hi sikhni hai to shock aate rahenge...

Thoda der tinno ek dusre ko ghurte rahe...pata nahi Neelam ko kya sujha usne ek kaam bola karne ko....

Neelam- Mere ghhar mein mera puppy hai usko yaha leke aao...

Usne bola aur kuch hi der mein unn tinno ke bich mein ek kute ka baccha aa gaya jisko dekhj Neelam khush bhi thi aur shocked bhi wahi halat Parth ki bhi thi...ab wo bhala kaise picche rahta usne khane ke liye kuchj chijhe mangwayi aur wo aa bhi gayi...

Slayer- Iske baare mein kisi ko pata nahi cchalna chahiye ye hamara secret hai...itna bol wo dono ko dekhne laga...

Parth - Theek hai...

Itna bol wo aur Slayer ab Neelam, ko dekhne lage...

Neelam - Haa thik hai...accha haa mera naam Neelam hai aur main....

Parth- Minor ho ek aisi minor jiske guulam ab Puree blood wale hai...

Itna bol wo hasne laga...uske saath Neelkam bhi hasne lagi..

Thodi der baad ek aur vclass jo ki Castle W mein tha wepoanry wale castle mein waha jaake bhi tinno saath rahe....

Pata nahi ye tinno jo kismat se mille hai inko inki kismat kaha tak le jaati hai...

Aaj ke liye itna hi rakhte hai aage ka update kal milega...

Agle update mein hum bahut aage jaanewale hai matlab ab yahi pe to rah nahi sakte naa Ye Villain hua Hero ko bhi laana hai...to speed badhane ka..Viraj ke baare mein bhi thoda jaanege....Saath hi kuch aur baatein

Banne rahiye....
 

DAIVIK-RAJ

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UPDATE - 4

Ab tak

Dinning haal ke kaand ke baad abhi log apne apne rooms mein chale gaye jaha pe....Slayer aur Parth dono ko pata chjalta hai ki dono hi roommates hai ye jaan Slayter ko kuch fark nahi padta par Parth bada khush ho jaata haiu...

Raat hui thi dono so jaate hai....

Ab aage

Subah ka waqt sab jaldi se uthte hai taiyaar hote hai aur dinning hall mnein wapas ikkatha hote hai waha pe breakfast ke liye....par isme Slayer aur Parth dono late ho jaate hai to jaisa ki yaha ka niyam hai unko khana unke room mein mill jaata hai par ek warning ke saath jo ki pahli aur aakhri warning thi....

Warning ek chitthi mein aayi thi...Parth jo ki jaanta tha ab kya hoga kyunki wo apne basics ke liye yahi padha tha issi school mein to wo yaha ke rules se acchi tarah parichit hai par...Slayer nahi...

To Slayer ko bhi sabhi chijo se parichit karne ka jimma apne sar lete hue...usne Slayer se bola letter kholne ko...Slayer ek ek look di phir wo badh gaya uss letter ki oor...jaise hi usne letter khola ek kaagaz bahar khuud aaya aur ek chahre ki tareah ban gaya...

"aap dono aaj ke breakfast ke liye late ha....iss school ke niyam ke anushar aapko aaj khana diya jaa raha hai kyunki pahli baar tha ye par uske saath warning bhi mil rahi hai....ab agar aage bhi aisa hua to khane ke jagah bas warning hi di jayegi..."

Itna bol wo kagaz khud se chuithde chithde ho gaya wahi Slayer usko dekhta rahga ye pahli baar jo tha....


Parth ne tabhi uske kande pe haath rakha aur bola ab aise hi dekhte rahe to aise bahut se letters aayenge humare pass...ab jaldi se chalo khana khao aur nayi class mein chalo....main naya jaadu seekhne ko bahut hi jyada utsahit hu...

Slayer chup chap jake khana khane laga..

Parth - yaar tum bolte nahi kya kal se sayad hi tum ek baar bhi kuch bole ho....arre bola karo bolna bahut accha hota hai isse hum apne ander ki bhawnao ko bahar nikal sakte hai...

Aise hi bakar bakar karte hue wo khata raha par Slayer usko kuch matlab hi nahi tha inn sabse....

Dono ne khana khaya aur fir dono chal diye Castle M ki oor jaha magic class thi aaj dono ki....

Par raste mein hi unhe kuch logo ne apni oor bulaya...POarth unko dekh dar gaya tha....par Slayer binna kisis bhaw ke aage badhta raha....jo unn logo ko pasand nahi aaya....unme se ek banda dono ke saamne aaya...

Ladka- Sunayi nahi deta kya Half blood humne buloya matlab aane ka...

Ye ek group tha seniors ka jisme bas Pure blood wale yhi the....

Slayer fir bhi kuch nahi bola bas usko dekhta raha wahi Parth usse bola hi nahi gaya kuch...

Usne dono ko apne picche aane ko kaha dono jaane lage...sorry Parth jaane laga Slayer hilla bhi nahi tha par Parth ne usko pakda tab wo bhi jaane laga uske saath....Wo ladka unko apne group ke pass le gaya jaha pe karib 7 log the wo...Saato ke saath unn donmo ke charo oor aise khade ho gaye jisse aas pass kisis ko pata bhi naa chale ki waha pe koi aur bhi hai..aur unn dono ko apne saath chalne ko kaha....

Slayer ka haath pakad ke Parth usko bhi apne saath le gaya...

Wo log unn dono ko Castle M ke taikhane ki taraf le gaye....ye bahut hi khatarnak jagah thi...yaha pe bahut hi ajeeb ajeeb ghatnaye hua karti thi....Iss school ke bhi kuch raaz the jo bahar kisi ko patanahi the....aur unn raaz ki baaton mein iss jagah ka jikr hamesha kiya jaata tha....

Jab ye dono waha gaye to dekha ki ek ladki hai sayad inhi ki class ki hogi....haa kyunki inhi ke umar ki lag rahi thi...usko waha pe bandh rakha tha....

unn saatho mein se ek ne bola...

Ladka- EK Minor do half blood wo bhi dono ke dono hi warewolf hai...isse accha aur kya hoga....ab hum apne kaam mein jarur kamiyab honge....

Parth ko samajh mein nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha hai par uskli fatti padi thi...same halat uss ladki ki bhi par Slayer usko kuch farkl nahi pad raha tha....

Wo baaki ke saato unn logo ne apne haatho mein kuch mombattiyan li aur fir unko jala ke unn timnno ke chakar katne lage....ye saatho Demos world ki ekl bahut hio prachilit jaadu ka upyog kar rahe the....isme hota ye hai ki jinke saath bhi ye kiya jaaye unki aatmayein aapke vash mein ho jaati hai aap unse kuch bhi karwa sakte ho....ab inn saato ko pata nahi kya kaam tha jo ye sab kar rahe the....Jab ye shuru hua to pahle wo ladki uski aankhe ulti ho gayi m,atlab undertaker ki tarah wo karna hai naa jab aankhon ka black hissa chip jaata hai....Haa bilkul waise hi...aur jab ye hua naa to uske sharir se kuch nikla aur wo chiz uss jagah ghumne lagi...wahi uss ladki ka saar bhi ajeeb tarike se ghumne laga waha pe....Todi der baad Paarth ke saath ye hona shuru hua....uske shjarir se bhi kuch waisa hi nikla fir uski bnhi aankhen ulti hui aur fir wahi ajeeb tarike se saar kaa hilna...

Abhi tak sab kuch unn saato ke hisab se chal raha tha par....Slayer ke saath aisa nahi ho raha tha...uske saath kuch bahut hi alag hua....ye alag unn saato ke liye bahut hi khatarnak tha...jaisa ki aap sab jaante haoi Slayer ko banane mein Sofia ne naa jaane kitne hi insano ko maar diya tha...ginti tak nahi pata hai kisi ko upar se wo roshni jo usko jinda karte waqt usme samma rahi thio wo unn logo ke aatma ko takat deke ek aatma banane ke liye the...ek aisi aatma jisko kaabu karna lagbhag naamumkin hi tha...

Ek baat clear karna hoga yaha pe warna confusion ho sakti hai...jaisa ki kaha tha ki school mein aisa jaadu hai jisse waha pe agar koi hanikarak jaadu ka use kiya jaaye to wo jaadu karne walke ko hi waha se teleport kar dete hai...par kahte hai naa rules bante hai aur log unse bachne ka tarika dhundh lete hai bas aisa hi yaha tha...saatho ne uss kriya ko aapas mein baat liya tha taaki uss jaau ka inpoe koi asar hi naa hoi...

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Haa to hua ye tha ki SSlayer ke body se bhi uske ander ke saare aatmayein jo ki ab ek aatma ban gayi thi wo bhi itni shaktishali ki usko kaabu karna lagbhag mumkin hi nahi hai...Ab wo aatma bhi bahar aane lagi....aur jaise hi wo bahar aayi...aur Slayer jamin pe girra....uss jagah pe maano manhusiyat chaa gayi thi...waise pahle bhi manhushg jagah hi thi wo par abhi aur jyada manhush ban gayi thi...

Wo saatho jo haato mein mombati liye unn tino ka chakar kaat rahe the aur kuch badbada rahe the...unn sab ki mombati ek ek kar ke bujh gayi...taikhana mein andhera cha gaya....kisi ko kuch bhi nahi dikhne laga ki

aaahhahhhhhahhaaaaa

ek bhayankar cheekh phir....kisi ke hasne ki awaj aayi....

"chihiiihihihi ek chiihihihihhiccii"

ye awaj waha faili....

saare jo waha pe hosh mein the sab ke sab darke maare kaampne lage jab aisi hassi sunni thi...darre bhi kyun naa ek to ye naushikhiye the iss jaadu mein aur iss jaadu ko karne mein agar gadbad hui to apko apni jaan se haath dhona hi padega...ye jaruri hota hai...bas yahi hua....

jassi ki awaj aati rahi aur counting badhti rahi 2 , 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 aur fir acchana se waha roshni hui...jiske baad uss jagah pe 3 log acchanak hosh mein aa gaye...wo tinno the Slayer Parth aur wo Minor ladki...jaise hi tinno ko hosh aaya waise hi waha taikhane mein bhujhe hue masal jalne lage aur waha roshni ho gayi...SLayer ko bada hi ajeeb par accha lag raha tha...ss jagah pe unn tinnmo ke alawa aur koi nahi tha bas wahi tinno the waha pe...Wo ladki usne to ek baar yaha waha dekha usko koi nahi dikha to wo Parth aur Slayer ko usko kholne ko bolne lagi...Oarth aur uss ladki ko bhi ajeeb lag raha tha par ek bandi hui thi iss wajah se aur dusra had se jyada darra hua tha iss wajah se uthna dhyaan nahi diya....Parth jaldi se gaya uss ladki ke pass aur usko aazad kiya...fir tinno jaldi se waha se bhag gaye....sorry do log tisre ko to khinch kew le jaaya gaya tha...

Jab bahar aaye tab bhi nahi rukke wo ttinno sidha class mein gaye jaha wo late ho gaye the...

Prof. - pahle hi din itn.....

Abhi wo aage bolte usse pahle unhone Parth aur uss ladki ka chahra dekha wo samajh gaye ki kuch hua hai to bas tinno ko ander anne ke liye kah diya...tinno baith gaye ek jagah pe...

Hmm class ke baare mein bhi jaan lete hai..to waise to IP madam ne kah diya hai ki sabko saath mein baithna hai per Pure blood wale thahre khud ko mahan samajhne wale haa to unhone class ko do hisso mein abaat diya hai ek hisse mein bas Pure blood hi baithega baaki ke log dusre hisse mein...iss baat pe kuch prof.. bhi unke saath the to IP jyada kuch kar nahi saki kyunki ek baar aisa hua ki kuch minor aur Half blood Pure blood walo ke saath baithe the...par fir unka koi pata hi nahi raha Kahte hai wo School chod ke chale gaye the...par sach kisi ko pata nahi..

Haa to tinno baith gaye...par Slayer ko bada ajeeb lag raha tha...ki tabhi pure blood walo ki taraf se kisi ne ek kagaz feka uski oor...ab Slayer ji kahi aur khoye hue the to usko pata nahi chalta par....ek aawaj usko sunayi di...

"maalik "

ye awaj bas usko hi nahi baaki ke dono ko bhi sunayi di aur dono ne dekha Slayer ki oor wahi Slayer uss Kagaz ki oor...ki kagaz mein aag lag gayi aur wo wapas se pure blood walo ki taraf chala gaya...ussi ke pass jisne fenka tha...ye sab hotye hue Parth ne aur uss Minor ladki ne bhi dekha tha...

Samajh mein nahi aaya unn dono o kuch wahi haal Slayer ka bhi tha usko bhi samajh nahi aaya kyunki usne nahi bheja tha kagaz ko waha wo bhi aag ke saath..

Wo kagaz waha gaya aur ek awaj ke saath fat gaya..jiski wajah se Prof. ki najar usss oor gayi aur jab dekhja to ek student apna muh kalla kiyte hue baitha tha...

Prof. - Ye kya hai...kya kar rahe the tuim...

Wo kya bvolta jab kuch samajh pata tab naa bolta...

Usko Prof. ne bahar milne ko kaha wahi thodi der mein class khatam hui...Prof. ne sabko jaane ko kaha siway 3 logo ke Slayer, Parth aur wo Minor ladki...

Ladki kaa naam hai Neelam

Prof- Hmm batao kya hua tha tinno ke saath...

Tinno mein se koi kuch bolta usse pahle hi awaj sunayi di tinno ko...

"raaz hai ye raaz hi rakho hum kaam aayenge aappke kisi ko mat batao.."

Pata nahi dono ko kya hua Parth aur Neelam ne biol diya ki ground mein kuch seniors pareshan kar rahe the par ek professor ne humme baccha kliya bas issi mein late hue....

Prof. ko unki baat pe yakkin to nahi hua par...phir kuch sochte hue unko jaane ke liye bol diya...

Tinno jab bnahar aaye...

Neelam- WO awaj wo tum dono ko bhi sunayi di thi naa....

Slayer ne kuch nahi kaha wahi Parth ne Haa kaha...

Paarth - Ye sab kahii unn logo ki wajah se to nahi....par wo gaye kaha...

Neelam - tumhe unki padi hui hai wo hum tinno ko maarne wale the...kaas wo tinno hi.,...

"Hum maar hi gaye hai aur ab se Malik ke wafadar hai saath hi aap dono k bnhi..."

Ye awaj aayi aur dono nahi iss baar tinno shocked....Ab Slayer ko bhi kaha pata tha ki aisa bhi kuch hota hai usko to bas kuch baatein bata ke Sofia chali gayi...baaki baatein to isko khud hi sikhni hai to shock aate rahenge...

Thoda der tinno ek dusre ko ghurte rahe...pata nahi Neelam ko kya sujha usne ek kaam bola karne ko....

Neelam- Mere ghhar mein mera puppy hai usko yaha leke aao...

Usne bola aur kuch hi der mein unn tinno ke bich mein ek kute ka baccha aa gaya jisko dekhj Neelam khush bhi thi aur shocked bhi wahi halat Parth ki bhi thi...ab wo bhala kaise picche rahta usne khane ke liye kuchj chijhe mangwayi aur wo aa bhi gayi...

Slayer- Iske baare mein kisi ko pata nahi cchalna chahiye ye hamara secret hai...itna bol wo dono ko dekhne laga...

Parth - Theek hai...

Itna bol wo aur Slayer ab Neelam, ko dekhne lage...

Neelam - Haa thik hai...accha haa mera naam Neelam hai aur main....

Parth- Minor ho ek aisi minor jiske guulam ab Puree blood wale hai...

Itna bol wo hasne laga...uske saath Neelkam bhi hasne lagi..

Thodi der baad ek aur vclass jo ki Castle W mein tha wepoanry wale castle mein waha jaake bhi tinno saath rahe....

Pata nahi ye tinno jo kismat se mille hai inko inki kismat kaha tak le jaati hai...

Aaj ke liye itna hi rakhte hai aage ka update kal milega...

Agle update mein hum bahut aage jaanewale hai matlab ab yahi pe to rah nahi sakte naa Ye Villain hua Hero ko bhi laana hai...to speed badhane ka..Viraj ke baare mein bhi thoda jaanege....Saath hi kuch aur baatein

Banne rahiye....
Nice update brother
Aap to hero ka naam bhi pata chal gaya Viraj
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

And jab hero janm lega tab villain ki power kya hogi
Kya Uske janm ke bare mein villain ko pata hoga
Yah koi secret Jo bad mein khulega

Otherwise
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DAIVIK-RAJ

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Ab tak

Dinning haal ke kaand ke baad abhi log apne apne rooms mein chale gaye jaha pe....Slayer aur Parth dono ko pata chjalta hai ki dono hi roommates hai ye jaan Slayter ko kuch fark nahi padta par Parth bada khush ho jaata haiu...

Raat hui thi dono so jaate hai....

Ab aage

Subah ka waqt sab jaldi se uthte hai taiyaar hote hai aur dinning hall mnein wapas ikkatha hote hai waha pe breakfast ke liye....par isme Slayer aur Parth dono late ho jaate hai to jaisa ki yaha ka niyam hai unko khana unke room mein mill jaata hai par ek warning ke saath jo ki pahli aur aakhri warning thi....

Warning ek chitthi mein aayi thi...Parth jo ki jaanta tha ab kya hoga kyunki wo apne basics ke liye yahi padha tha issi school mein to wo yaha ke rules se acchi tarah parichit hai par...Slayer nahi...

To Slayer ko bhi sabhi chijo se parichit karne ka jimma apne sar lete hue...usne Slayer se bola letter kholne ko...Slayer ek ek look di phir wo badh gaya uss letter ki oor...jaise hi usne letter khola ek kaagaz bahar khuud aaya aur ek chahre ki tareah ban gaya...

"aap dono aaj ke breakfast ke liye late ha....iss school ke niyam ke anushar aapko aaj khana diya jaa raha hai kyunki pahli baar tha ye par uske saath warning bhi mil rahi hai....ab agar aage bhi aisa hua to khane ke jagah bas warning hi di jayegi..."

Itna bol wo kagaz khud se chuithde chithde ho gaya wahi Slayer usko dekhta rahga ye pahli baar jo tha....


Parth ne tabhi uske kande pe haath rakha aur bola ab aise hi dekhte rahe to aise bahut se letters aayenge humare pass...ab jaldi se chalo khana khao aur nayi class mein chalo....main naya jaadu seekhne ko bahut hi jyada utsahit hu...

Slayer chup chap jake khana khane laga..

Parth - yaar tum bolte nahi kya kal se sayad hi tum ek baar bhi kuch bole ho....arre bola karo bolna bahut accha hota hai isse hum apne ander ki bhawnao ko bahar nikal sakte hai...

Aise hi bakar bakar karte hue wo khata raha par Slayer usko kuch matlab hi nahi tha inn sabse....

Dono ne khana khaya aur fir dono chal diye Castle M ki oor jaha magic class thi aaj dono ki....

Par raste mein hi unhe kuch logo ne apni oor bulaya...POarth unko dekh dar gaya tha....par Slayer binna kisis bhaw ke aage badhta raha....jo unn logo ko pasand nahi aaya....unme se ek banda dono ke saamne aaya...

Ladka- Sunayi nahi deta kya Half blood humne buloya matlab aane ka...

Ye ek group tha seniors ka jisme bas Pure blood wale yhi the....

Slayer fir bhi kuch nahi bola bas usko dekhta raha wahi Parth usse bola hi nahi gaya kuch...

Usne dono ko apne picche aane ko kaha dono jaane lage...sorry Parth jaane laga Slayer hilla bhi nahi tha par Parth ne usko pakda tab wo bhi jaane laga uske saath....Wo ladka unko apne group ke pass le gaya jaha pe karib 7 log the wo...Saato ke saath unn donmo ke charo oor aise khade ho gaye jisse aas pass kisis ko pata bhi naa chale ki waha pe koi aur bhi hai..aur unn dono ko apne saath chalne ko kaha....

Slayer ka haath pakad ke Parth usko bhi apne saath le gaya...

Wo log unn dono ko Castle M ke taikhane ki taraf le gaye....ye bahut hi khatarnak jagah thi...yaha pe bahut hi ajeeb ajeeb ghatnaye hua karti thi....Iss school ke bhi kuch raaz the jo bahar kisi ko patanahi the....aur unn raaz ki baaton mein iss jagah ka jikr hamesha kiya jaata tha....

Jab ye dono waha gaye to dekha ki ek ladki hai sayad inhi ki class ki hogi....haa kyunki inhi ke umar ki lag rahi thi...usko waha pe bandh rakha tha....

unn saatho mein se ek ne bola...

Ladka- EK Minor do half blood wo bhi dono ke dono hi warewolf hai...isse accha aur kya hoga....ab hum apne kaam mein jarur kamiyab honge....

Parth ko samajh mein nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha hai par uskli fatti padi thi...same halat uss ladki ki bhi par Slayer usko kuch farkl nahi pad raha tha....

Wo baaki ke saato unn logo ne apne haatho mein kuch mombattiyan li aur fir unko jala ke unn timnno ke chakar katne lage....ye saatho Demos world ki ekl bahut hio prachilit jaadu ka upyog kar rahe the....isme hota ye hai ki jinke saath bhi ye kiya jaaye unki aatmayein aapke vash mein ho jaati hai aap unse kuch bhi karwa sakte ho....ab inn saato ko pata nahi kya kaam tha jo ye sab kar rahe the....Jab ye shuru hua to pahle wo ladki uski aankhe ulti ho gayi m,atlab undertaker ki tarah wo karna hai naa jab aankhon ka black hissa chip jaata hai....Haa bilkul waise hi...aur jab ye hua naa to uske sharir se kuch nikla aur wo chiz uss jagah ghumne lagi...wahi uss ladki ka saar bhi ajeeb tarike se ghumne laga waha pe....Todi der baad Paarth ke saath ye hona shuru hua....uske shjarir se bhi kuch waisa hi nikla fir uski bnhi aankhen ulti hui aur fir wahi ajeeb tarike se saar kaa hilna...

Abhi tak sab kuch unn saato ke hisab se chal raha tha par....Slayer ke saath aisa nahi ho raha tha...uske saath kuch bahut hi alag hua....ye alag unn saato ke liye bahut hi khatarnak tha...jaisa ki aap sab jaante haoi Slayer ko banane mein Sofia ne naa jaane kitne hi insano ko maar diya tha...ginti tak nahi pata hai kisi ko upar se wo roshni jo usko jinda karte waqt usme samma rahi thio wo unn logo ke aatma ko takat deke ek aatma banane ke liye the...ek aisi aatma jisko kaabu karna lagbhag naamumkin hi tha...

Ek baat clear karna hoga yaha pe warna confusion ho sakti hai...jaisa ki kaha tha ki school mein aisa jaadu hai jisse waha pe agar koi hanikarak jaadu ka use kiya jaaye to wo jaadu karne walke ko hi waha se teleport kar dete hai...par kahte hai naa rules bante hai aur log unse bachne ka tarika dhundh lete hai bas aisa hi yaha tha...saatho ne uss kriya ko aapas mein baat liya tha taaki uss jaau ka inpoe koi asar hi naa hoi...

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Haa to hua ye tha ki SSlayer ke body se bhi uske ander ke saare aatmayein jo ki ab ek aatma ban gayi thi wo bhi itni shaktishali ki usko kaabu karna lagbhag mumkin hi nahi hai...Ab wo aatma bhi bahar aane lagi....aur jaise hi wo bahar aayi...aur Slayer jamin pe girra....uss jagah pe maano manhusiyat chaa gayi thi...waise pahle bhi manhushg jagah hi thi wo par abhi aur jyada manhush ban gayi thi...

Wo saatho jo haato mein mombati liye unn tino ka chakar kaat rahe the aur kuch badbada rahe the...unn sab ki mombati ek ek kar ke bujh gayi...taikhana mein andhera cha gaya....kisi ko kuch bhi nahi dikhne laga ki

aaahhahhhhhahhaaaaa

ek bhayankar cheekh phir....kisi ke hasne ki awaj aayi....

"chihiiihihihi ek chiihihihihhiccii"

ye awaj waha faili....

saare jo waha pe hosh mein the sab ke sab darke maare kaampne lage jab aisi hassi sunni thi...darre bhi kyun naa ek to ye naushikhiye the iss jaadu mein aur iss jaadu ko karne mein agar gadbad hui to apko apni jaan se haath dhona hi padega...ye jaruri hota hai...bas yahi hua....

jassi ki awaj aati rahi aur counting badhti rahi 2 , 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 aur fir acchana se waha roshni hui...jiske baad uss jagah pe 3 log acchanak hosh mein aa gaye...wo tinno the Slayer Parth aur wo Minor ladki...jaise hi tinno ko hosh aaya waise hi waha taikhane mein bhujhe hue masal jalne lage aur waha roshni ho gayi...SLayer ko bada hi ajeeb par accha lag raha tha...ss jagah pe unn tinnmo ke alawa aur koi nahi tha bas wahi tinno the waha pe...Wo ladki usne to ek baar yaha waha dekha usko koi nahi dikha to wo Parth aur Slayer ko usko kholne ko bolne lagi...Oarth aur uss ladki ko bhi ajeeb lag raha tha par ek bandi hui thi iss wajah se aur dusra had se jyada darra hua tha iss wajah se uthna dhyaan nahi diya....Parth jaldi se gaya uss ladki ke pass aur usko aazad kiya...fir tinno jaldi se waha se bhag gaye....sorry do log tisre ko to khinch kew le jaaya gaya tha...

Jab bahar aaye tab bhi nahi rukke wo ttinno sidha class mein gaye jaha wo late ho gaye the...

Prof. - pahle hi din itn.....

Abhi wo aage bolte usse pahle unhone Parth aur uss ladki ka chahra dekha wo samajh gaye ki kuch hua hai to bas tinno ko ander anne ke liye kah diya...tinno baith gaye ek jagah pe...

Hmm class ke baare mein bhi jaan lete hai..to waise to IP madam ne kah diya hai ki sabko saath mein baithna hai per Pure blood wale thahre khud ko mahan samajhne wale haa to unhone class ko do hisso mein abaat diya hai ek hisse mein bas Pure blood hi baithega baaki ke log dusre hisse mein...iss baat pe kuch prof.. bhi unke saath the to IP jyada kuch kar nahi saki kyunki ek baar aisa hua ki kuch minor aur Half blood Pure blood walo ke saath baithe the...par fir unka koi pata hi nahi raha Kahte hai wo School chod ke chale gaye the...par sach kisi ko pata nahi..

Haa to tinno baith gaye...par Slayer ko bada ajeeb lag raha tha...ki tabhi pure blood walo ki taraf se kisi ne ek kagaz feka uski oor...ab Slayer ji kahi aur khoye hue the to usko pata nahi chalta par....ek aawaj usko sunayi di...

"maalik "

ye awaj bas usko hi nahi baaki ke dono ko bhi sunayi di aur dono ne dekha Slayer ki oor wahi Slayer uss Kagaz ki oor...ki kagaz mein aag lag gayi aur wo wapas se pure blood walo ki taraf chala gaya...ussi ke pass jisne fenka tha...ye sab hotye hue Parth ne aur uss Minor ladki ne bhi dekha tha...

Samajh mein nahi aaya unn dono o kuch wahi haal Slayer ka bhi tha usko bhi samajh nahi aaya kyunki usne nahi bheja tha kagaz ko waha wo bhi aag ke saath..

Wo kagaz waha gaya aur ek awaj ke saath fat gaya..jiski wajah se Prof. ki najar usss oor gayi aur jab dekhja to ek student apna muh kalla kiyte hue baitha tha...

Prof. - Ye kya hai...kya kar rahe the tuim...

Wo kya bvolta jab kuch samajh pata tab naa bolta...

Usko Prof. ne bahar milne ko kaha wahi thodi der mein class khatam hui...Prof. ne sabko jaane ko kaha siway 3 logo ke Slayer, Parth aur wo Minor ladki...

Ladki kaa naam hai Neelam

Prof- Hmm batao kya hua tha tinno ke saath...

Tinno mein se koi kuch bolta usse pahle hi awaj sunayi di tinno ko...

"raaz hai ye raaz hi rakho hum kaam aayenge aappke kisi ko mat batao.."

Pata nahi dono ko kya hua Parth aur Neelam ne biol diya ki ground mein kuch seniors pareshan kar rahe the par ek professor ne humme baccha kliya bas issi mein late hue....

Prof. ko unki baat pe yakkin to nahi hua par...phir kuch sochte hue unko jaane ke liye bol diya...

Tinno jab bnahar aaye...

Neelam- WO awaj wo tum dono ko bhi sunayi di thi naa....

Slayer ne kuch nahi kaha wahi Parth ne Haa kaha...

Paarth - Ye sab kahii unn logo ki wajah se to nahi....par wo gaye kaha...

Neelam - tumhe unki padi hui hai wo hum tinno ko maarne wale the...kaas wo tinno hi.,...

"Hum maar hi gaye hai aur ab se Malik ke wafadar hai saath hi aap dono k bnhi..."

Ye awaj aayi aur dono nahi iss baar tinno shocked....Ab Slayer ko bhi kaha pata tha ki aisa bhi kuch hota hai usko to bas kuch baatein bata ke Sofia chali gayi...baaki baatein to isko khud hi sikhni hai to shock aate rahenge...

Thoda der tinno ek dusre ko ghurte rahe...pata nahi Neelam ko kya sujha usne ek kaam bola karne ko....

Neelam- Mere ghhar mein mera puppy hai usko yaha leke aao...

Usne bola aur kuch hi der mein unn tinno ke bich mein ek kute ka baccha aa gaya jisko dekhj Neelam khush bhi thi aur shocked bhi wahi halat Parth ki bhi thi...ab wo bhala kaise picche rahta usne khane ke liye kuchj chijhe mangwayi aur wo aa bhi gayi...

Slayer- Iske baare mein kisi ko pata nahi cchalna chahiye ye hamara secret hai...itna bol wo dono ko dekhne laga...

Parth - Theek hai...

Itna bol wo aur Slayer ab Neelam, ko dekhne lage...

Neelam - Haa thik hai...accha haa mera naam Neelam hai aur main....

Parth- Minor ho ek aisi minor jiske guulam ab Puree blood wale hai...

Itna bol wo hasne laga...uske saath Neelkam bhi hasne lagi..

Thodi der baad ek aur vclass jo ki Castle W mein tha wepoanry wale castle mein waha jaake bhi tinno saath rahe....

Pata nahi ye tinno jo kismat se mille hai inko inki kismat kaha tak le jaati hai...

Aaj ke liye itna hi rakhte hai aage ka update kal milega...

Agle update mein hum bahut aage jaanewale hai matlab ab yahi pe to rah nahi sakte naa Ye Villain hua Hero ko bhi laana hai...to speed badhane ka..Viraj ke baare mein bhi thoda jaanege....Saath hi kuch aur baatein

Banne rahiye....
Brother aap update post karne ka ek time/day Bana lijiye
Like god and demon story ke Tarah
Abhi site per aapki do story chal rahi hai
Aap agar donon story per saptah mein 2 ya 3 update de de to vah bhi better hai

Otherwise
Jaisi aapki Marji jo aapko achcha lage

Magar mere sujhav ko dhyan mein rakhega
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Ab tak

Dinning haal ke kaand ke baad abhi log apne apne rooms mein chale gaye jaha pe....Slayer aur Parth dono ko pata chjalta hai ki dono hi roommates hai ye jaan Slayter ko kuch fark nahi padta par Parth bada khush ho jaata haiu...

Raat hui thi dono so jaate hai....

Ab aage

Subah ka waqt sab jaldi se uthte hai taiyaar hote hai aur dinning hall mnein wapas ikkatha hote hai waha pe breakfast ke liye....par isme Slayer aur Parth dono late ho jaate hai to jaisa ki yaha ka niyam hai unko khana unke room mein mill jaata hai par ek warning ke saath jo ki pahli aur aakhri warning thi....

Warning ek chitthi mein aayi thi...Parth jo ki jaanta tha ab kya hoga kyunki wo apne basics ke liye yahi padha tha issi school mein to wo yaha ke rules se acchi tarah parichit hai par...Slayer nahi...

To Slayer ko bhi sabhi chijo se parichit karne ka jimma apne sar lete hue...usne Slayer se bola letter kholne ko...Slayer ek ek look di phir wo badh gaya uss letter ki oor...jaise hi usne letter khola ek kaagaz bahar khuud aaya aur ek chahre ki tareah ban gaya...

"aap dono aaj ke breakfast ke liye late ha....iss school ke niyam ke anushar aapko aaj khana diya jaa raha hai kyunki pahli baar tha ye par uske saath warning bhi mil rahi hai....ab agar aage bhi aisa hua to khane ke jagah bas warning hi di jayegi..."

Itna bol wo kagaz khud se chuithde chithde ho gaya wahi Slayer usko dekhta rahga ye pahli baar jo tha....


Parth ne tabhi uske kande pe haath rakha aur bola ab aise hi dekhte rahe to aise bahut se letters aayenge humare pass...ab jaldi se chalo khana khao aur nayi class mein chalo....main naya jaadu seekhne ko bahut hi jyada utsahit hu...

Slayer chup chap jake khana khane laga..

Parth - yaar tum bolte nahi kya kal se sayad hi tum ek baar bhi kuch bole ho....arre bola karo bolna bahut accha hota hai isse hum apne ander ki bhawnao ko bahar nikal sakte hai...

Aise hi bakar bakar karte hue wo khata raha par Slayer usko kuch matlab hi nahi tha inn sabse....

Dono ne khana khaya aur fir dono chal diye Castle M ki oor jaha magic class thi aaj dono ki....

Par raste mein hi unhe kuch logo ne apni oor bulaya...POarth unko dekh dar gaya tha....par Slayer binna kisis bhaw ke aage badhta raha....jo unn logo ko pasand nahi aaya....unme se ek banda dono ke saamne aaya...

Ladka- Sunayi nahi deta kya Half blood humne buloya matlab aane ka...

Ye ek group tha seniors ka jisme bas Pure blood wale yhi the....

Slayer fir bhi kuch nahi bola bas usko dekhta raha wahi Parth usse bola hi nahi gaya kuch...

Usne dono ko apne picche aane ko kaha dono jaane lage...sorry Parth jaane laga Slayer hilla bhi nahi tha par Parth ne usko pakda tab wo bhi jaane laga uske saath....Wo ladka unko apne group ke pass le gaya jaha pe karib 7 log the wo...Saato ke saath unn donmo ke charo oor aise khade ho gaye jisse aas pass kisis ko pata bhi naa chale ki waha pe koi aur bhi hai..aur unn dono ko apne saath chalne ko kaha....

Slayer ka haath pakad ke Parth usko bhi apne saath le gaya...

Wo log unn dono ko Castle M ke taikhane ki taraf le gaye....ye bahut hi khatarnak jagah thi...yaha pe bahut hi ajeeb ajeeb ghatnaye hua karti thi....Iss school ke bhi kuch raaz the jo bahar kisi ko patanahi the....aur unn raaz ki baaton mein iss jagah ka jikr hamesha kiya jaata tha....

Jab ye dono waha gaye to dekha ki ek ladki hai sayad inhi ki class ki hogi....haa kyunki inhi ke umar ki lag rahi thi...usko waha pe bandh rakha tha....

unn saatho mein se ek ne bola...

Ladka- EK Minor do half blood wo bhi dono ke dono hi warewolf hai...isse accha aur kya hoga....ab hum apne kaam mein jarur kamiyab honge....

Parth ko samajh mein nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha hai par uskli fatti padi thi...same halat uss ladki ki bhi par Slayer usko kuch farkl nahi pad raha tha....

Wo baaki ke saato unn logo ne apne haatho mein kuch mombattiyan li aur fir unko jala ke unn timnno ke chakar katne lage....ye saatho Demos world ki ekl bahut hio prachilit jaadu ka upyog kar rahe the....isme hota ye hai ki jinke saath bhi ye kiya jaaye unki aatmayein aapke vash mein ho jaati hai aap unse kuch bhi karwa sakte ho....ab inn saato ko pata nahi kya kaam tha jo ye sab kar rahe the....Jab ye shuru hua to pahle wo ladki uski aankhe ulti ho gayi m,atlab undertaker ki tarah wo karna hai naa jab aankhon ka black hissa chip jaata hai....Haa bilkul waise hi...aur jab ye hua naa to uske sharir se kuch nikla aur wo chiz uss jagah ghumne lagi...wahi uss ladki ka saar bhi ajeeb tarike se ghumne laga waha pe....Todi der baad Paarth ke saath ye hona shuru hua....uske shjarir se bhi kuch waisa hi nikla fir uski bnhi aankhen ulti hui aur fir wahi ajeeb tarike se saar kaa hilna...

Abhi tak sab kuch unn saato ke hisab se chal raha tha par....Slayer ke saath aisa nahi ho raha tha...uske saath kuch bahut hi alag hua....ye alag unn saato ke liye bahut hi khatarnak tha...jaisa ki aap sab jaante haoi Slayer ko banane mein Sofia ne naa jaane kitne hi insano ko maar diya tha...ginti tak nahi pata hai kisi ko upar se wo roshni jo usko jinda karte waqt usme samma rahi thio wo unn logo ke aatma ko takat deke ek aatma banane ke liye the...ek aisi aatma jisko kaabu karna lagbhag naamumkin hi tha...

Ek baat clear karna hoga yaha pe warna confusion ho sakti hai...jaisa ki kaha tha ki school mein aisa jaadu hai jisse waha pe agar koi hanikarak jaadu ka use kiya jaaye to wo jaadu karne walke ko hi waha se teleport kar dete hai...par kahte hai naa rules bante hai aur log unse bachne ka tarika dhundh lete hai bas aisa hi yaha tha...saatho ne uss kriya ko aapas mein baat liya tha taaki uss jaau ka inpoe koi asar hi naa hoi...

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Haa to hua ye tha ki SSlayer ke body se bhi uske ander ke saare aatmayein jo ki ab ek aatma ban gayi thi wo bhi itni shaktishali ki usko kaabu karna lagbhag mumkin hi nahi hai...Ab wo aatma bhi bahar aane lagi....aur jaise hi wo bahar aayi...aur Slayer jamin pe girra....uss jagah pe maano manhusiyat chaa gayi thi...waise pahle bhi manhushg jagah hi thi wo par abhi aur jyada manhush ban gayi thi...

Wo saatho jo haato mein mombati liye unn tino ka chakar kaat rahe the aur kuch badbada rahe the...unn sab ki mombati ek ek kar ke bujh gayi...taikhana mein andhera cha gaya....kisi ko kuch bhi nahi dikhne laga ki

aaahhahhhhhahhaaaaa

ek bhayankar cheekh phir....kisi ke hasne ki awaj aayi....

"chihiiihihihi ek chiihihihihhiccii"

ye awaj waha faili....

saare jo waha pe hosh mein the sab ke sab darke maare kaampne lage jab aisi hassi sunni thi...darre bhi kyun naa ek to ye naushikhiye the iss jaadu mein aur iss jaadu ko karne mein agar gadbad hui to apko apni jaan se haath dhona hi padega...ye jaruri hota hai...bas yahi hua....

jassi ki awaj aati rahi aur counting badhti rahi 2 , 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 aur fir acchana se waha roshni hui...jiske baad uss jagah pe 3 log acchanak hosh mein aa gaye...wo tinno the Slayer Parth aur wo Minor ladki...jaise hi tinno ko hosh aaya waise hi waha taikhane mein bhujhe hue masal jalne lage aur waha roshni ho gayi...SLayer ko bada hi ajeeb par accha lag raha tha...ss jagah pe unn tinnmo ke alawa aur koi nahi tha bas wahi tinno the waha pe...Wo ladki usne to ek baar yaha waha dekha usko koi nahi dikha to wo Parth aur Slayer ko usko kholne ko bolne lagi...Oarth aur uss ladki ko bhi ajeeb lag raha tha par ek bandi hui thi iss wajah se aur dusra had se jyada darra hua tha iss wajah se uthna dhyaan nahi diya....Parth jaldi se gaya uss ladki ke pass aur usko aazad kiya...fir tinno jaldi se waha se bhag gaye....sorry do log tisre ko to khinch kew le jaaya gaya tha...

Jab bahar aaye tab bhi nahi rukke wo ttinno sidha class mein gaye jaha wo late ho gaye the...

Prof. - pahle hi din itn.....

Abhi wo aage bolte usse pahle unhone Parth aur uss ladki ka chahra dekha wo samajh gaye ki kuch hua hai to bas tinno ko ander anne ke liye kah diya...tinno baith gaye ek jagah pe...

Hmm class ke baare mein bhi jaan lete hai..to waise to IP madam ne kah diya hai ki sabko saath mein baithna hai per Pure blood wale thahre khud ko mahan samajhne wale haa to unhone class ko do hisso mein abaat diya hai ek hisse mein bas Pure blood hi baithega baaki ke log dusre hisse mein...iss baat pe kuch prof.. bhi unke saath the to IP jyada kuch kar nahi saki kyunki ek baar aisa hua ki kuch minor aur Half blood Pure blood walo ke saath baithe the...par fir unka koi pata hi nahi raha Kahte hai wo School chod ke chale gaye the...par sach kisi ko pata nahi..

Haa to tinno baith gaye...par Slayer ko bada ajeeb lag raha tha...ki tabhi pure blood walo ki taraf se kisi ne ek kagaz feka uski oor...ab Slayer ji kahi aur khoye hue the to usko pata nahi chalta par....ek aawaj usko sunayi di...

"maalik "

ye awaj bas usko hi nahi baaki ke dono ko bhi sunayi di aur dono ne dekha Slayer ki oor wahi Slayer uss Kagaz ki oor...ki kagaz mein aag lag gayi aur wo wapas se pure blood walo ki taraf chala gaya...ussi ke pass jisne fenka tha...ye sab hotye hue Parth ne aur uss Minor ladki ne bhi dekha tha...

Samajh mein nahi aaya unn dono o kuch wahi haal Slayer ka bhi tha usko bhi samajh nahi aaya kyunki usne nahi bheja tha kagaz ko waha wo bhi aag ke saath..

Wo kagaz waha gaya aur ek awaj ke saath fat gaya..jiski wajah se Prof. ki najar usss oor gayi aur jab dekhja to ek student apna muh kalla kiyte hue baitha tha...

Prof. - Ye kya hai...kya kar rahe the tuim...

Wo kya bvolta jab kuch samajh pata tab naa bolta...

Usko Prof. ne bahar milne ko kaha wahi thodi der mein class khatam hui...Prof. ne sabko jaane ko kaha siway 3 logo ke Slayer, Parth aur wo Minor ladki...

Ladki kaa naam hai Neelam

Prof- Hmm batao kya hua tha tinno ke saath...

Tinno mein se koi kuch bolta usse pahle hi awaj sunayi di tinno ko...

"raaz hai ye raaz hi rakho hum kaam aayenge aappke kisi ko mat batao.."

Pata nahi dono ko kya hua Parth aur Neelam ne biol diya ki ground mein kuch seniors pareshan kar rahe the par ek professor ne humme baccha kliya bas issi mein late hue....

Prof. ko unki baat pe yakkin to nahi hua par...phir kuch sochte hue unko jaane ke liye bol diya...

Tinno jab bnahar aaye...

Neelam- WO awaj wo tum dono ko bhi sunayi di thi naa....

Slayer ne kuch nahi kaha wahi Parth ne Haa kaha...

Paarth - Ye sab kahii unn logo ki wajah se to nahi....par wo gaye kaha...

Neelam - tumhe unki padi hui hai wo hum tinno ko maarne wale the...kaas wo tinno hi.,...

"Hum maar hi gaye hai aur ab se Malik ke wafadar hai saath hi aap dono k bnhi..."

Ye awaj aayi aur dono nahi iss baar tinno shocked....Ab Slayer ko bhi kaha pata tha ki aisa bhi kuch hota hai usko to bas kuch baatein bata ke Sofia chali gayi...baaki baatein to isko khud hi sikhni hai to shock aate rahenge...

Thoda der tinno ek dusre ko ghurte rahe...pata nahi Neelam ko kya sujha usne ek kaam bola karne ko....

Neelam- Mere ghhar mein mera puppy hai usko yaha leke aao...

Usne bola aur kuch hi der mein unn tinno ke bich mein ek kute ka baccha aa gaya jisko dekhj Neelam khush bhi thi aur shocked bhi wahi halat Parth ki bhi thi...ab wo bhala kaise picche rahta usne khane ke liye kuchj chijhe mangwayi aur wo aa bhi gayi...

Slayer- Iske baare mein kisi ko pata nahi cchalna chahiye ye hamara secret hai...itna bol wo dono ko dekhne laga...

Parth - Theek hai...

Itna bol wo aur Slayer ab Neelam, ko dekhne lage...

Neelam - Haa thik hai...accha haa mera naam Neelam hai aur main....

Parth- Minor ho ek aisi minor jiske guulam ab Puree blood wale hai...

Itna bol wo hasne laga...uske saath Neelkam bhi hasne lagi..

Thodi der baad ek aur vclass jo ki Castle W mein tha wepoanry wale castle mein waha jaake bhi tinno saath rahe....

Pata nahi ye tinno jo kismat se mille hai inko inki kismat kaha tak le jaati hai...

Aaj ke liye itna hi rakhte hai aage ka update kal milega...

Agle update mein hum bahut aage jaanewale hai matlab ab yahi pe to rah nahi sakte naa Ye Villain hua Hero ko bhi laana hai...to speed badhane ka..Viraj ke baare mein bhi thoda jaanege....Saath hi kuch aur baatein

Banne rahiye....
Superb update.
 

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UPDATE - 4

Ab tak

Dinning haal ke kaand ke baad abhi log apne apne rooms mein chale gaye jaha pe....Slayer aur Parth dono ko pata chjalta hai ki dono hi roommates hai ye jaan Slayter ko kuch fark nahi padta par Parth bada khush ho jaata haiu...

Raat hui thi dono so jaate hai....

Ab aage

Subah ka waqt sab jaldi se uthte hai taiyaar hote hai aur dinning hall mnein wapas ikkatha hote hai waha pe breakfast ke liye....par isme Slayer aur Parth dono late ho jaate hai to jaisa ki yaha ka niyam hai unko khana unke room mein mill jaata hai par ek warning ke saath jo ki pahli aur aakhri warning thi....

Warning ek chitthi mein aayi thi...Parth jo ki jaanta tha ab kya hoga kyunki wo apne basics ke liye yahi padha tha issi school mein to wo yaha ke rules se acchi tarah parichit hai par...Slayer nahi...

To Slayer ko bhi sabhi chijo se parichit karne ka jimma apne sar lete hue...usne Slayer se bola letter kholne ko...Slayer ek ek look di phir wo badh gaya uss letter ki oor...jaise hi usne letter khola ek kaagaz bahar khuud aaya aur ek chahre ki tareah ban gaya...

"aap dono aaj ke breakfast ke liye late ha....iss school ke niyam ke anushar aapko aaj khana diya jaa raha hai kyunki pahli baar tha ye par uske saath warning bhi mil rahi hai....ab agar aage bhi aisa hua to khane ke jagah bas warning hi di jayegi..."

Itna bol wo kagaz khud se chuithde chithde ho gaya wahi Slayer usko dekhta rahga ye pahli baar jo tha....


Parth ne tabhi uske kande pe haath rakha aur bola ab aise hi dekhte rahe to aise bahut se letters aayenge humare pass...ab jaldi se chalo khana khao aur nayi class mein chalo....main naya jaadu seekhne ko bahut hi jyada utsahit hu...

Slayer chup chap jake khana khane laga..

Parth - yaar tum bolte nahi kya kal se sayad hi tum ek baar bhi kuch bole ho....arre bola karo bolna bahut accha hota hai isse hum apne ander ki bhawnao ko bahar nikal sakte hai...

Aise hi bakar bakar karte hue wo khata raha par Slayer usko kuch matlab hi nahi tha inn sabse....

Dono ne khana khaya aur fir dono chal diye Castle M ki oor jaha magic class thi aaj dono ki....

Par raste mein hi unhe kuch logo ne apni oor bulaya...POarth unko dekh dar gaya tha....par Slayer binna kisis bhaw ke aage badhta raha....jo unn logo ko pasand nahi aaya....unme se ek banda dono ke saamne aaya...

Ladka- Sunayi nahi deta kya Half blood humne buloya matlab aane ka...

Ye ek group tha seniors ka jisme bas Pure blood wale yhi the....

Slayer fir bhi kuch nahi bola bas usko dekhta raha wahi Parth usse bola hi nahi gaya kuch...

Usne dono ko apne picche aane ko kaha dono jaane lage...sorry Parth jaane laga Slayer hilla bhi nahi tha par Parth ne usko pakda tab wo bhi jaane laga uske saath....Wo ladka unko apne group ke pass le gaya jaha pe karib 7 log the wo...Saato ke saath unn donmo ke charo oor aise khade ho gaye jisse aas pass kisis ko pata bhi naa chale ki waha pe koi aur bhi hai..aur unn dono ko apne saath chalne ko kaha....

Slayer ka haath pakad ke Parth usko bhi apne saath le gaya...

Wo log unn dono ko Castle M ke taikhane ki taraf le gaye....ye bahut hi khatarnak jagah thi...yaha pe bahut hi ajeeb ajeeb ghatnaye hua karti thi....Iss school ke bhi kuch raaz the jo bahar kisi ko patanahi the....aur unn raaz ki baaton mein iss jagah ka jikr hamesha kiya jaata tha....

Jab ye dono waha gaye to dekha ki ek ladki hai sayad inhi ki class ki hogi....haa kyunki inhi ke umar ki lag rahi thi...usko waha pe bandh rakha tha....

unn saatho mein se ek ne bola...

Ladka- EK Minor do half blood wo bhi dono ke dono hi warewolf hai...isse accha aur kya hoga....ab hum apne kaam mein jarur kamiyab honge....

Parth ko samajh mein nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha hai par uskli fatti padi thi...same halat uss ladki ki bhi par Slayer usko kuch farkl nahi pad raha tha....

Wo baaki ke saato unn logo ne apne haatho mein kuch mombattiyan li aur fir unko jala ke unn timnno ke chakar katne lage....ye saatho Demos world ki ekl bahut hio prachilit jaadu ka upyog kar rahe the....isme hota ye hai ki jinke saath bhi ye kiya jaaye unki aatmayein aapke vash mein ho jaati hai aap unse kuch bhi karwa sakte ho....ab inn saato ko pata nahi kya kaam tha jo ye sab kar rahe the....Jab ye shuru hua to pahle wo ladki uski aankhe ulti ho gayi m,atlab undertaker ki tarah wo karna hai naa jab aankhon ka black hissa chip jaata hai....Haa bilkul waise hi...aur jab ye hua naa to uske sharir se kuch nikla aur wo chiz uss jagah ghumne lagi...wahi uss ladki ka saar bhi ajeeb tarike se ghumne laga waha pe....Todi der baad Paarth ke saath ye hona shuru hua....uske shjarir se bhi kuch waisa hi nikla fir uski bnhi aankhen ulti hui aur fir wahi ajeeb tarike se saar kaa hilna...

Abhi tak sab kuch unn saato ke hisab se chal raha tha par....Slayer ke saath aisa nahi ho raha tha...uske saath kuch bahut hi alag hua....ye alag unn saato ke liye bahut hi khatarnak tha...jaisa ki aap sab jaante haoi Slayer ko banane mein Sofia ne naa jaane kitne hi insano ko maar diya tha...ginti tak nahi pata hai kisi ko upar se wo roshni jo usko jinda karte waqt usme samma rahi thio wo unn logo ke aatma ko takat deke ek aatma banane ke liye the...ek aisi aatma jisko kaabu karna lagbhag naamumkin hi tha...

Ek baat clear karna hoga yaha pe warna confusion ho sakti hai...jaisa ki kaha tha ki school mein aisa jaadu hai jisse waha pe agar koi hanikarak jaadu ka use kiya jaaye to wo jaadu karne walke ko hi waha se teleport kar dete hai...par kahte hai naa rules bante hai aur log unse bachne ka tarika dhundh lete hai bas aisa hi yaha tha...saatho ne uss kriya ko aapas mein baat liya tha taaki uss jaau ka inpoe koi asar hi naa hoi...

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Haa to hua ye tha ki SSlayer ke body se bhi uske ander ke saare aatmayein jo ki ab ek aatma ban gayi thi wo bhi itni shaktishali ki usko kaabu karna lagbhag mumkin hi nahi hai...Ab wo aatma bhi bahar aane lagi....aur jaise hi wo bahar aayi...aur Slayer jamin pe girra....uss jagah pe maano manhusiyat chaa gayi thi...waise pahle bhi manhushg jagah hi thi wo par abhi aur jyada manhush ban gayi thi...

Wo saatho jo haato mein mombati liye unn tino ka chakar kaat rahe the aur kuch badbada rahe the...unn sab ki mombati ek ek kar ke bujh gayi...taikhana mein andhera cha gaya....kisi ko kuch bhi nahi dikhne laga ki

aaahhahhhhhahhaaaaa

ek bhayankar cheekh phir....kisi ke hasne ki awaj aayi....

"chihiiihihihi ek chiihihihihhiccii"

ye awaj waha faili....

saare jo waha pe hosh mein the sab ke sab darke maare kaampne lage jab aisi hassi sunni thi...darre bhi kyun naa ek to ye naushikhiye the iss jaadu mein aur iss jaadu ko karne mein agar gadbad hui to apko apni jaan se haath dhona hi padega...ye jaruri hota hai...bas yahi hua....

jassi ki awaj aati rahi aur counting badhti rahi 2 , 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 aur fir acchana se waha roshni hui...jiske baad uss jagah pe 3 log acchanak hosh mein aa gaye...wo tinno the Slayer Parth aur wo Minor ladki...jaise hi tinno ko hosh aaya waise hi waha taikhane mein bhujhe hue masal jalne lage aur waha roshni ho gayi...SLayer ko bada hi ajeeb par accha lag raha tha...ss jagah pe unn tinnmo ke alawa aur koi nahi tha bas wahi tinno the waha pe...Wo ladki usne to ek baar yaha waha dekha usko koi nahi dikha to wo Parth aur Slayer ko usko kholne ko bolne lagi...Oarth aur uss ladki ko bhi ajeeb lag raha tha par ek bandi hui thi iss wajah se aur dusra had se jyada darra hua tha iss wajah se uthna dhyaan nahi diya....Parth jaldi se gaya uss ladki ke pass aur usko aazad kiya...fir tinno jaldi se waha se bhag gaye....sorry do log tisre ko to khinch kew le jaaya gaya tha...

Jab bahar aaye tab bhi nahi rukke wo ttinno sidha class mein gaye jaha wo late ho gaye the...

Prof. - pahle hi din itn.....

Abhi wo aage bolte usse pahle unhone Parth aur uss ladki ka chahra dekha wo samajh gaye ki kuch hua hai to bas tinno ko ander anne ke liye kah diya...tinno baith gaye ek jagah pe...

Hmm class ke baare mein bhi jaan lete hai..to waise to IP madam ne kah diya hai ki sabko saath mein baithna hai per Pure blood wale thahre khud ko mahan samajhne wale haa to unhone class ko do hisso mein abaat diya hai ek hisse mein bas Pure blood hi baithega baaki ke log dusre hisse mein...iss baat pe kuch prof.. bhi unke saath the to IP jyada kuch kar nahi saki kyunki ek baar aisa hua ki kuch minor aur Half blood Pure blood walo ke saath baithe the...par fir unka koi pata hi nahi raha Kahte hai wo School chod ke chale gaye the...par sach kisi ko pata nahi..

Haa to tinno baith gaye...par Slayer ko bada ajeeb lag raha tha...ki tabhi pure blood walo ki taraf se kisi ne ek kagaz feka uski oor...ab Slayer ji kahi aur khoye hue the to usko pata nahi chalta par....ek aawaj usko sunayi di...

"maalik "

ye awaj bas usko hi nahi baaki ke dono ko bhi sunayi di aur dono ne dekha Slayer ki oor wahi Slayer uss Kagaz ki oor...ki kagaz mein aag lag gayi aur wo wapas se pure blood walo ki taraf chala gaya...ussi ke pass jisne fenka tha...ye sab hotye hue Parth ne aur uss Minor ladki ne bhi dekha tha...

Samajh mein nahi aaya unn dono o kuch wahi haal Slayer ka bhi tha usko bhi samajh nahi aaya kyunki usne nahi bheja tha kagaz ko waha wo bhi aag ke saath..

Wo kagaz waha gaya aur ek awaj ke saath fat gaya..jiski wajah se Prof. ki najar usss oor gayi aur jab dekhja to ek student apna muh kalla kiyte hue baitha tha...

Prof. - Ye kya hai...kya kar rahe the tuim...

Wo kya bvolta jab kuch samajh pata tab naa bolta...

Usko Prof. ne bahar milne ko kaha wahi thodi der mein class khatam hui...Prof. ne sabko jaane ko kaha siway 3 logo ke Slayer, Parth aur wo Minor ladki...

Ladki kaa naam hai Neelam

Prof- Hmm batao kya hua tha tinno ke saath...

Tinno mein se koi kuch bolta usse pahle hi awaj sunayi di tinno ko...

"raaz hai ye raaz hi rakho hum kaam aayenge aappke kisi ko mat batao.."

Pata nahi dono ko kya hua Parth aur Neelam ne biol diya ki ground mein kuch seniors pareshan kar rahe the par ek professor ne humme baccha kliya bas issi mein late hue....

Prof. ko unki baat pe yakkin to nahi hua par...phir kuch sochte hue unko jaane ke liye bol diya...

Tinno jab bnahar aaye...

Neelam- WO awaj wo tum dono ko bhi sunayi di thi naa....

Slayer ne kuch nahi kaha wahi Parth ne Haa kaha...

Paarth - Ye sab kahii unn logo ki wajah se to nahi....par wo gaye kaha...

Neelam - tumhe unki padi hui hai wo hum tinno ko maarne wale the...kaas wo tinno hi.,...

"Hum maar hi gaye hai aur ab se Malik ke wafadar hai saath hi aap dono k bnhi..."

Ye awaj aayi aur dono nahi iss baar tinno shocked....Ab Slayer ko bhi kaha pata tha ki aisa bhi kuch hota hai usko to bas kuch baatein bata ke Sofia chali gayi...baaki baatein to isko khud hi sikhni hai to shock aate rahenge...

Thoda der tinno ek dusre ko ghurte rahe...pata nahi Neelam ko kya sujha usne ek kaam bola karne ko....

Neelam- Mere ghhar mein mera puppy hai usko yaha leke aao...

Usne bola aur kuch hi der mein unn tinno ke bich mein ek kute ka baccha aa gaya jisko dekhj Neelam khush bhi thi aur shocked bhi wahi halat Parth ki bhi thi...ab wo bhala kaise picche rahta usne khane ke liye kuchj chijhe mangwayi aur wo aa bhi gayi...

Slayer- Iske baare mein kisi ko pata nahi cchalna chahiye ye hamara secret hai...itna bol wo dono ko dekhne laga...

Parth - Theek hai...

Itna bol wo aur Slayer ab Neelam, ko dekhne lage...

Neelam - Haa thik hai...accha haa mera naam Neelam hai aur main....

Parth- Minor ho ek aisi minor jiske guulam ab Puree blood wale hai...

Itna bol wo hasne laga...uske saath Neelkam bhi hasne lagi..

Thodi der baad ek aur vclass jo ki Castle W mein tha wepoanry wale castle mein waha jaake bhi tinno saath rahe....

Pata nahi ye tinno jo kismat se mille hai inko inki kismat kaha tak le jaati hai...

Aaj ke liye itna hi rakhte hai aage ka update kal milega...

Agle update mein hum bahut aage jaanewale hai matlab ab yahi pe to rah nahi sakte naa Ye Villain hua Hero ko bhi laana hai...to speed badhane ka..Viraj ke baare mein bhi thoda jaanege....Saath hi kuch aur baatein

Banne rahiye....
nice update bhai maza aa gya
 
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