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UPDATE - 15

Sofia ke past ke baare mein bataya gaya....sath mein Slayer ka kya haal hai Dark world mein wo bhi bataya gaya...uske baad humne dekha ki Prateek apni bua ...Poonam ke saath chal pada...apne dada dadi se milne ko....aur jaake unke ghar ke saamne khada tha...

Ab aage

Theek saamne hamare tha ek bada sa ghar....aas paas ped lage hue the...Maine aas pass dekha...to bilkul waise hi ghar thodi duri duri pe bane hue the....matlab....ek ghar...uskeas pass kuch bade bade ped...fir thodi duri pe dusra ghar......main yahi sab dekhne mein laga hua tha ki Bua ne mere ballon mein apna haath rakha...

Bua - chalo ander chalte hai....dekhte hai kya hota hai.....

Main - Kya matlab...

Bua - Matlab...hmm wo ander chal ke dekhte hai...bas jo bhi bolna acche se bona....mere Papa bade hi strict hai aur Maa ka to puccho hi mat....bakki bacche Bade bhaiya....unse bach ke hi rahna...aur bhabhi bhi kam nahi hai koi...Haa ek bahen bhi hai tumhari....tumse badi hai...aur gharmein sabse jyada ussi ki chalti hai too usko agar khush rakha to sab sahi hai...

Main - Ye sab pahle batana tha naa main kuch gifts le aata...pahli baar mil raha hu....

Abhi baat bhi puri nahi hui thi ki ghar ka darwaja khula aur ek body builder type aadmi...baal safed the uske...wo bahar aaya...

Bua - Papa aa gaye....ambhal kar....

Bua ke inn baaton se main dar gaya tha koi bhi dar jaata.....jaise jaise Dada ji pass aa rahe the waise waise mera dar badhta jaa raha tha....

Dada ji - Poonam....kaun hai ye...(jor se)

Bua - Wo papa ye...ye naa wo...mera student hai....

Main bua ko dekhe jaa raha tha wo itna dar dar ke bol rahi thi abhi unhi koto dekh raha tha ki ek aur aadmi ghar se nikla...ye bhi body builder type hi tha...par iski aankhen ekdum se nilli thi....

Maine Bua ki oor dekha to wo pahle se hi lagi hui thi Dada ji ke saath...unko haklate hue kuch kah rahi thi....

Wo aadmi mere saamne khada ho gaya...aurmujhe ghoorte hue puccha...

Aadmi - Kon ho tum aur yaha kyun aaye ho...

Main kya hi bolu....lag raha tha yaha Bua mujhe marwane ke liye laayi hai ek Dada ji hai jinse Bua tak ko dar lag raha hai main ktya hi kahu...aur ab ye janab pata nahi kon hai inse bhi mujhe dar lag raha tha....ki tabhi...ek aurat ki aawaj aayi unn dono ke picche se....dikhne mein badi hi sunder lag rahi thi wo...haa umar jyada thi par thi badi hi sunder....main unko hi dekhne laga...aur bas dekhta hi raha....

Dada ji - Dadi hai teri...aisda kya ghooor raha hai....

Main - Kya...

Bua - Kya Papa abhi bolna jaruri tha...aur Maa aap..aapkyun aayi abhi bahar..sab plan ke hisab se to chal raha tha....

Main - Plan...kaisa plan...

Dadi - Tu chup kar...tere sath rahta hai ye...hamne to bas ek jhalak hi dekhi thi iski...aur fir....tab se humne to ummid hi chod dithi...aur jab ye aaj aaya hai to tum log aise kar rahe ho iske saath...khabardar agar kisi ne isko pareshan kiya to.....

Main samajhne ki koshish hi to kar raha tha ki chal kya raha hai yaha pe...wahi Dadi ne apni baat khatam ki mera haath pakda aur khinchte hue mujhe ander le gayi....

Ander 2 aur ladis thi....dono hi dekhne mein bahut acchi lag rahi thi....jo badi wali thi usko dekh ke lagha ki ye koi Vampire hai...aur main sahi tha wo Vampire hi thi wahi choti wali ka kuch samajh mein nahi aaya mujhe....

Choti wali ladki ne mujhe dekha aur muh banate hue boli... Ye kisko utha laaye ho yaha....

Dadi - OO Rupal ki bacchi teri uss Poonam bua ka plan khatam ab acche se millo isse...samjhi warna bahar kar dungi pata hai naa...

Rupal - Arre Dadi....mujhe laga wo sab abhi karna hai...main to bas issiliye....accha ab nahi karungi...

Wo fir mere pass aayi aur ek smile di mujhe aur galle lag gayi mere....main bas khada raha aur kya karta batao...ye aise hi kuch bhi chal raha tha yaha mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai aur....

Rupal - Aur chotte main Rupal hu teri badi bahen samjha....ye mera ghar hai ytaha bas meri chalti hai koi bh shaitaani nahi karna....agar....aaaahhh mummy chodo yaar aap bhi....main to bas....aaaahhh

Badi lady jo thi unhone Rupal ke kaan pakad litye aur jor se madod diya...

Badi Lady - Tera raaj chalta hai yaha....badi aayi....tang karne ki sochna bhi mat samjhi naa...warna tujhe ghar se....

Rupal - arre main to bas aise hi...main kyuun bhala itne pyaare bhai ko pareshan karungi....hai naa bhai...

Ab tak bahar se bhi sabhii ander aagaye the....

Bua - Hmm to mil luiye sabhi se....(haste hue) wo maine socha tera welcome kuch alag tarike se kiya jaaye....to maine aur Rupal ne plan banaya ye....

Maione Bua ki oor ek baar dekha....aur khud ba khud hi mere aankhon se aashu nikal hgaye....sayad ek parivaar ke hone ki khusi ke wajah se....inn logo ne mere liye ye sab kiya...haa jo bhi tha par mere liye...ye jyada important hai....

mere aankhon mein aashu dekh...sabse najdik meri wo chachi thi Vapmire Chachi....wo mere pass aayi niche baithi aur mere aashu pochne lagi ...

Chachi - Arre beta ye sab yto bas ek majak tha...maine manna bhi kiya tha inn logo se par....Dekha ye ronnne laga... Rupal tujhe main nahi chodungi aaj....

Main kuch bol hi rahatha ki tabhi Dadi bhi aa gayio aur...nicche baith gayimere pass.....

Dadi - Beta rote nahi hai....ye bas ek majak tha inn logo ka...aur ab hamari baari hogi mazak ki....tu main aur teri ye Chachi ab dekh bas tu.....(sabko) Aaj se kitchen band kisi ko koi khana nahi milega...

Ye sunte hi waha khade sabhi ki aankhen badi ho gayi....aur wo sab meri oor dekhne lage.....

Main - Nahi aisa mat kariye....ye aanshu to bas kisi apne ke pass hone ke wajah se aa gaye...isme uss majak ka koi haath nahi hai...main aaj tak bas apne master ke saath raha hu....waha sab kuch time to time hota tha...no mazk no masti...aur yaha sabko saath dekh...aap logo ke pass aake sach men bahut accha lag raha hai mujhe.....

Meri baatein sun ke waha bhi sabke aankhon mein aashu aa gaye...

Dadi - Tu bhi hamare saath hi rahta beta agar wo sab naa hua hota to....kaas...

Abhi Dadi bol hi rahi thi ke Dada jine unke kandhe pe haath rakha aur wo bas roone lagi....sab rooye jaarahe the....wo to bhala ho RupalDidi ka jinhone ek baar wapas khane ke baare mein baat chedi aur sabka dhyaan roone se hataya...

Rupal - Wo Dadi ab to ye chotu bhi bol raha hai ki majak se nahi roya ye to ab kichen khol do....dekho to waqt kitna ho raha hai....iske saath nasta karenge bolbolke abhi tak naasta nahi diya....mera chotu bhi bhukha hoga...kuch to rahem karo....

Chachi - Ruk tujhe batati hu nautanki..aur chachi uske picche jaane ko hui....sabke chahron pe wapas se muskan aa gayi...

Fir kya MUjhe waha se Dinning table pe bitha diya gaya aur...baaki sab bhi baith gaye aur...Chachi aur Dadi kichen se khana laane chali gayi....

Rupal - OOye chotu yaar tera naam kya hai wo...Bua ne bataya hi nahi hame....

Uski baat sunke maine ek baar bua ki oor dekha jo paani pi rajhio thi aur mujhe apne oor aise dekhte hue.... paya to paani unke ghale mein wind pipe mein chali gayi thodi si....wo thodi der khasi aur fir khud ko sambhalte hue boli...

Bua - Arre wo main batane hi wali thi par wo plan ka chakar....Waise iska naam Prateek hai...

Rupal -= Hmm Prateek...accha naam hai par main isko chotu hi bulaungi...akhir chota bhai hai mera....

Main - Haa thik hai.....wais emain bhi aapme se kisi ka naam nahi jaanta...Bua ne bataya hi nahi mujhe.....

Dada ji - Naam waam sab jaan jaaoge....abhi nasta karo...fir hum apne family tree ke pass chalte hai waha tumhe apna naam aur nishani deni hai...wahi se dekh lena hum on hai...theek hai...

Main - Haa theek hai dadaji...

Chacha - To tum bhi special batch mein ho....

Main - JI...

Chacha - Rupal bhi thi ussi mein....abhi pichle saal hi school se pass out hui hai ab yaha insano ke bich kuch din waqt bitayegi fir...hamare family bsiness mein lag jaayegi.....

Main - Family business..????

Bua - Haa family business.....ooffo Bhaiya abhi ye sab bolna jaruri tha kya....

Chacha - Haa kyunki isko bhi pata hona chahiye....

Dada - Haa hona chahiye..par abhi kuch waqt aaram karne dete hai fr bata denge......ye nasta kyun nahi aa raha hai....Rupal beta jara dekho to.....

Abhi Rupal didi uthti usse pahle hi Chachi haathomein plate liye hue aa rahi thi....saath mein Dadi bhi....aur khana aa gaya table pe....

Rupal - wow....itna kuch bana diya aaj...

Chachi - Aur nahi to kya aaj Prateek jo aaya hai..welcome special hona hi tha...beta chalo shuru karo...

Main samajh nahi paa raha tha kah ase shuru karu...kyya kuch nahi tha waha pe....sabjiya...meat...sabkuch....juices....Fir sabhi ne shuru kiya to maine bhi khana shuru kiya...kya khanatha ye...badahi aziz khana tha...kya hi bolu iske baare mein.....

Khana khate waqt sab ke sab bilkul chup the aur klhana khaa rahe the...thode der mein sabka khana khatam h gya...

Chachi - kaisa tha khana...

Main - Bahut accha tha....

Bua - Hmm wo to hoga hi.....accha wo chodo....ab jaothodi der aaram karlo...fir hum sab bahar chalenge apne family tree ke pass...aaj waha pe ek naya naam jodna hai...

Dada ji - Haa bilkulsahi kaha....chao beta tum aaram karo.....main aata hu waha taiyaari karke....

Chacha - Mian bhi chalta hu papa.....Rupal jab call karu to le aana sabko samjhi...chalo ab apne bhai ko kamra dikhao uska....

Rupal - Haa....chal chotu tere ko tera kamra dikhatti hu....waha kuch baatein bhi ho jaayegi.....(last mein bolte waqt unke chahre pe ek darawani muskan aa gayi thi....)

Chachi - Prateek gar kuch bhi ulta sheedha kare ye to sidha mujhe batana.....iski acche se khabar lunhgi...bahut...udhne lagi hai aaj kal ye....

Rupal - Arre main kaha kuch karungi...main to bas room dikhane ke liye....

Wo mujhe khinchte hue uthayi aur mujhe sidhiyon se upar le gayi shidhi chadte hi 4 rooms the waha jo sabse last ka room tha wahi pe mujhe le gayi aur darwaja khola...abhi wokuch bolti ki unka pphone baja aur unhone chabhi mujhe di aur wwaha se nicche chali gayi...

Main bhi chabi se darwaja khola aur jo dekha....bas muh se itna hi nikla....

Main - Yaha bhi...

Aaj ke liye itna hi rakhte hai next update mein Family tree ke baare mein aur familky ka intro hoga....aur kuch scenes...

Acchanak se mujhe...bahar jaana pada to laptiop hai nahi...update sayad chote honge abhi...par aayenge...kuch dn ki baat hai....

Banne rahiyega....
very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
 

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Ab tak

Main apni family se milla....sab bahut hi acche the...haa pahle mazak meinn ye log mujhe pareshan karne wale the par ye sab mujhe accha lag raha tha...humne saath mein khana khaya aur fir kuch der baatein bhi ki.....baad mein Dda ji ne sham ko mujhe Family tree ke pass le jaane ko kaha....Rupal didi nemujhe mera room dikhaya aur aaram karne ko kaha....

AB aage..

Room ka darwaja khul to main shocked tha....ye room bhi bilkul mere wale room ki hi tarah tha...sab kuch waisa hi.....aakhir hai kya inn sab mein....main jaha bhi jaata hu waha thik aisa hi room milta hai mujhe....bachpan se hi aisa hi room....ghar bhi badla tha master ne waha bhi same room phir school waha bhi same room....uske baad yaha aaya to yaha bhi....

Main room ke ander gaya....pahle ek baar sabkuch sdekha...sab waisa hi tha....fir chup chap jaake bed pe let gaya....aur chat ki oor dekhne laga....sochne laga room ke baare mein par....neend aa gayi mujhe....

Pata nahi kitne der baad Chachi ne aawaj di tab jaake main utha.....aur fir bathroom mein jaake hath muh doye....kapde change kiye...jo Bua ne hi sayad yaha rakhe ho...aur fir room se nikal gaya....nicche chala gaya....

Nicche gaya to Chachi, Didi aur Bua hi the waha...

Bua - Ready ho gaya chal ab....

Main - Haa chalo...

Maine itna bola hi tha...ki Rupal didi ko Bua ne ishara kiya kuch aur unhone mere upar ek kambal daal diya....

Main - Ye kyun hai...iska kya karna hai....

Bua - Ye tumhe aur tumhari smell ko chupayegi.....jaha hum jaa rahe hai waha sayad log tumhare aane se khush naa ho....par chinta mat karna hum honge waha....agar kuch hua to hum dekh lenge.......tum shant rahna bas....

Main - Par maine kya kiya hai jo ye sab.....

Bua - Tumne nahi kiya hai par Paarth aur Neelam unn dono ne kiya hai....ab [pata nahi tab unn ke dimmag mein kya tha jo uske saath milke ye sab....

Chachi - Poonam baad mein iske baare mein baat karte hai...Prateek beta chalo aap....

Sawal the mere mann mein par jawab ek bhi nahi.....Mera Mom Dad ne bhala aisa kya kiya ki unhe....unko to kisi ne Maar diya tha....aur Master mujhe iss kaabil bana rahi thi ki main uska saamna kar sakku....

Main - Mom dad ne kya kiya tha aisa....ki log unhe....

Chachi - Beta kaha naa baad mein baat karenge ispe....abhi ke liye chalo....sunno hum Truingle ki tarah jaayenge....ye beech mein rahega samjhe....

Sab ne haa kaha....par tabhi Rupal didi ko kuch yaad aaya wo jaldi se room mein gayi....sheediyan chad ke aur waha sekoi perfume le aayi....ye ek lady perfume tha...aur mere upar se pahle kambal ko khincha aur lagbhag mujhe perfume se naha diya usne....Main chikke jaa raha tha....

Rupal - ab sahi hai...ab agar kisi ne iske sharir ki khusbu kisi tak nahi pahuch paayegi.....

Main - aaaaachhhiii.....ye kya ....aaaccchhhiii...kiya....

Bua - Haa bilkul sahi kiya ....

Abhi humme se koi aur kuch bolyta ki Didi ka phone baja...

Didi - Haa papa

Chachu........

Didi - Ji bilkul hum taiyaarhai.....

Chacha....................

Main - Nahi uski koi chinta naa kare....wo maine sambhal liya hai...

Chacha....................

Didi - Thik hai hum bas aa rahe hai...

Call cut kiya didi ne aur....tinno ek taingle ki tarah khadi ho gayi.....

Chachi - Chalo...sab ready....niklo ab....

Aur hum saare nikal gaye waha se....lagbhag....30 minute chalne ke baad.....ek bahut bada maidaan aaya....jaha pe kuch duri duri pe bahut hi bade bade ped banne hue the....kaafi bheed thi waha petarah tarah ke jeev the waha pe.....Main unhi sab ko dekhne laga.....

Rupal - Oyye chal naa bhai......kya yaha waha dekhe jaa raha hai...sab baaadmein dikha dungi bata dungi abhi ke liye chal aur naam likh apna hamare tree pe....

Hamara family tree uss jagah pe ek konne mein tha...wahi pe Dada, Dadi, aur Chacha khade the.....Main gaya waha pechupte hue....unn sab mne pahle mere charo oor ghera bana liya...aur fiur....

Dada ji - Prateek ye hai hamara family tree....dekh rahe ho naa isko...ab dekho......sabse nicche ...naam hai...wo hai hamare pahle purwajo ka.....pahle hum bhi yaha pure blood mein aate the...warewolf warewolf saath mein.....fir mere Dada ko pasanmd aayi ek Elf....to wo ban gayi meri Dadi maaa....aur hamari family ban gayi Half blood....wo dekh rahe ho naa waha trunk ke pass se jo ek tahni hai wo mere dada ji ko dikha raha hai....wahi wo tahni jaake...ek dusre ped ke tahni se milli hui hai...to wo hai meri Dadi maa...samjhe...aur jab hum half blood banne fir sabko apni pasand ki hi ladki yaa ladka chahiye tha....to issi dauran....mere ek chacha....Jaiveer ne ek insan se shadi kar li....ye dekh rahe ho...ye wali tahni....ye unko dikharahahai....aur yahi tahni fir jameen pe lagi hui hai....ek ghass se....unke koi bacche nahi hue....parinsano ke saath rah ke wo bahut hi jyada badal gaye....unhone unn nsano ke bich hi apna ek business khola....Hotels ka business....Veer group of hotels...jaante hi honge tum....insano ki duniya mein uska ek alag hi rutba hai....to wahi hotel...mujhe mil gayi aur ab usko tmhare chacha chala rahe hai....aur unke baad....tumhe aur Rupal ko hi dekhna hai usko....ye thi hamare business ke baare mein baat....ab naam pe bhi aate hai warna gadbad ho jaayegi.....Wo dekh rahe ho mere chacha jaiveer ke branch ke upar ek aur taheni hai....haa wahi wo mere pita ji ka hai....aur unki shadi ek warewolf se hi hui....unki pasand thi.....aur main jab paida hua to main bana....warewolf....par...with extra powers....Ab ye dekho.....meri tahni kya naam hai....Hemant Veer....ye naam isliye kyunki insano ki duniya mein aise hi naam chalte hjai....ab isko dekjho....meri jo tahni hai wo jkaake milli hai ek aur ped ke ek chote se tahni se....jo tumhari Dadi ka hai....Madhuri....Ye ek fairy hai....fir aate hai hum...apne apne tahniyon pe...yaani mere bacch pe...to pahli tahni tumhare bade chacha....Satya veer naam hai inka....aur inki tahni dekho...wo jaake milli hai dusre ped ki tahni se...yaani tumhari chachi se....naam hai unka.....Nidhi Veer....ab dekhio inn dono ki tahniyan milne ke baad ek tahni waha se nikli hai...wo hai Rupal....chalo ab wapas se mere tahni ko dekho....waha ek hai...tumhari bua...Poonam aur dusri hai tumhae Dad yaani mere bete Paarth ki.....Poonam ki shadi nahi hui hai to iski tahni aise hi hai....tumhare dad ki tahni ko dekho wo aage jaa rahi hai...aur jameen pe ek chotte se jhaadi se nikli hui tahni si mil rahi hai.....Ye jhadiyan....unki hai jinhone..insano se shadi ki hai....jaise mere chacha...jai veer ka bhi dekh lo...tahni ni jameen pe gayi hai...par unka koi baccha nahi hua to ye aiusa hi rah gaya...wahi tumhari Mom ek minority thui to wo ss jhadi se dikhayi jaa rahi hai....aur tum...in dono ke bacche....Prateek....Ye tahni tumhari hai...samjhe....ab chalo isko chuo...aur apna naam lo....

Maine Dada ji ko pura sunna aur unki har ek baat samjhi...aur ab maine unke kahe anusar apne naam ki tahni ko pakda aur apna naam man mein liya.....aisa karne se.......mera family tree saath mein usse jo kuch bhi connect tha wo ek pal ko chamakne laga...uski chamak sabhi ke aankhon mein gayi aur wo sab hamare oor aaye....Dada, Dadi aur baakiyon ka dhyaan unpe nahi gaya kyun ki wo iss chamak ko samajhne ki koshish kar rahe the....

Aadmi - Hmm to tum saare yaha aaye ho....ab kya karnama karnaa hai yaha pe....kahi fir se koi tumhare ghar ka kaali shaktiyan to nahi seekhne laga....

Dadaji - juban sambhal ke baat karo...

A4 - Lo bhai sunna....humme juban sambhalne kokah raha hai....agar waqt rahte apne uss bete ko rok leta uss dayan se shadi karne se to tera parivr bhi sahi rahta aur hamara bhi....

Uss aadmi ne meri Maa ko Daayan kaha....

Bua - JUban sambhal ke baat karo....sayad bhul gaye ho main kon hu aur ye meri famiily hai....

A2 - Haa haa ab bas yahi rah gaya hai...arre bhaiyon mujhe to lagta hai isne bhi apne bhai ke saath kaali vidhyayen sikhi hogi....tabhi to Special batch ki teacher banni hui hai...warna pahle kabhi sunna tha koi Half blood wala itna takatwar ho....

Ye lohg bhi insano ki hi tarah hai....har chizmein dharam,jaat inhi muddoon pe aa jaate hai....koi talent ki kadar nahi karta....

A2 ka ye bolna tha Bua ko gussa aa gaya wo kuch karti usse pahle Dadi ne unhe rok diya....par logo ke muh band nahi hue....wo bas lage rahe mere gharwalo ki beiijaati karne mein...aur isse mera gussa badhta jaa raha tha....uss kambal ke andertha mein....gusse se apni muthiyanbheinch lli maine aur aankhen band ki.....ankhen band ki to saamne wahi cheel dikhayi diya...wo aag ke pankhon wala.....wo mujhe dekh raha tha....main uske pass gaya aur usko chua...usko chune se mujhe dard hone laga aur main jor se chilaya....

Aur fir aankhen kholi....jab aankhen kholi...to aasmaan mein ek bahut hi bada...chillon ka samuh tha...wo uss jagah ke charo taraf udd rahe the....abhi maine unhe dekha fir ek aadmi ko dekha jo mere Chachi ke baare mein bol raha tha....mera usko dekhna tha ki aasmaan se wo cheel udti hui aayi...aur wo uss jeev ko utha le gayi....jeev uss cheekl se bada tha bhari tha....sayad hi heel usko utta pata par weo utha le gaya.....Jab logo ne ye dekha to unki faat gayi....par kuch so called bahadur bhi the/....jinhone talwaren nikal li...unka kahna tha hum sab kala jaadu jaante hai to hum sab ko hi khatam kar de....wo aage badh rahe the ki tabhi...waha ussi maindan mein ek bahut hi bada....cheel aaya jiske pankh mein aag lagi hui hi wo bilkul unke saamne aake khada ho gaya...aur jor se chillaya...uski cheekh sun ke hi sabhi ki fat gayi....par ek bacvcha tha waha pe jisne apni Maa ko kaha...

Bacxcha - Maa Maa ye to wo kitab wala pankchi hai. jo unknown worriors wale kitab mein tha....

Sabne uss cheel ko dekha aur sabki aankhen fattii ki fatti rah gayi....Wo Cheel hamare familyt tree ke pass aaya aur uspe apni choch touch karayti...uske baad...fir se hamari family tree chamakne lagi....wo puri hari bhari ho gayi....saath hi uspe ek cheel ka nishan ban gaya.....baat saaf thi meri puri family uss cheel ki shuraksha meijn aa gayi thi...aur jab ye hua to sab ke sab bas humme dekhte hue nikal liye waha se....kisi mein himmat hi nahi tha usscheel se ladne ki....himmat ho bhi to jyada faayda nahi uska size dekh ke aisa lag raha tha wo ek baar mein ki 2 -3 ko nipta leta hoga......jab sab chale gaye...to wo cheel bhi waha se udd ke nikal gaya...aur chod gaya hum sab ko suspence mein....

Wo to hum saare sonch se bahar tab nichle jab ek cheel ne ussi aadmi ko theek hamare saaame kuch uchayi se giiraya...wo chillate hue girra ayur fir utha kar hum sab ke pair pakadne laga maaf kar do maaf kar do....humme samajh nahi aa raha tha....Wo to Rupal didi ne kaha maaf kiya tab jaake wo furr se choo mantar ho gaya.,...aur hum sab bhi ghar ki oor nikal pade...

Ghar mein pahuch ke...

Sab sofe pe baith gaye...sabke dimmag min bas wahi sab chal raha tha....

Dada ji - Wo sab kya tha aur hamare family ko....

Bua - Pata nahi Papa par wo sach mein wahi tha...uss kahaniyon ke kitab mein jo cheel hai wahi aur wo yaha hamare liye aaya....

Dadaji - Haa par kyun...aur ye koi aam panchi to hai nahi ki hamare liye aaye....hamari animal spirit uske saamne kuch.....animal spririt kahi wo animal spirit to nahi thi kisi ki....

Bua - Kya papa aisa hona...naamumkin hai....

Dadi - nahi mujhe nahi lagta...aisa pahle bhi dekha gaya hai...kuch animal spirits hote hai aise...

Bua - Nahi maa aisa nahi hai..aur ye Animal spirit ho hi nahi sakta ye kuch aur hai...app cjhinta mat kariye main pata laga lungi....

Hum sab baatein kar rahe the ki Rubal didi boli....

Rubal didi - hamare family ka ab wo rakshak hai,....wo hamari family ka rakshak hai yaani mera bhi....(hilla kar) waaaahhh ab aayega mazza.....Maa main jaarahi hu..aati hu thodi der mein....
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Chachi - Kaha jaa rahi hai aise hi......wo bjhi is waqt...tu kahi nahi jaayegi samjhi....

Rubal e meri oor dekha aur ek smile di....

Rubal - Wo maa maine naa apne chotu ko kuch gifts dene hai to yahi pass wale dukkan tak jaaungi main...waha se kuch jaaduyi chizzen bas....Chaloge naa chotu tum....

Main - Main....

Rubal - Arre chal na issi bahane yaha ke baare mein aur jaan bhi jaayega...aur ab to darne ki baat hi nahi...

Bua - Haa le jao isko par iusko apna dost batana babhi bahar bhai nahi samjhi....

Rubal - hmmm thik hai Bu....main samajh gayi aap kya kah rhi ho....chalo Ok hum chalte hai....

Mujhse buina Haa naa sunne hi mera haath pakda aur khinchte hue bahar.....

Hum bahar aaye aur ghar se thodi dur aaye.....main chal raha tha Didi ruk gauyyi...maine unk dekha picche mud ke...wo rukki hui thi aur ek or dekhe jaa rahi thi....

Main - Kya baat hai didi kya haiw waha.....

Didi - Wo mere Nanaji ka ghar tha....wo wahi raha karte the....Mom Nana nani....tinno......jab Mom ki shadi hui naa Dad se...to..Mom batati hai uske baad iss ghar mein koi jawa nahi bacha tha....aur mauka dekh ker.....wo samne wala ghar hai naa waha ke maalik ne Nana nani ka ghar hadap liya....Nana nani ki age jyada thi...to kuch kar naa paaaye....Mom Dad ne koshish ki yto unhe bhi jhotha kjaha.....aaj Nana - Nani ko band karke rakha hai uss ghar mein....gulam ki tarah rakhte hai waha unhe....main unhe hi chudane aayi hu....aaj iss aadmi se pura hisab chukta karungio....

Abhi main kuch bolta usse pahle hi Didi ne road pe se ek pather uthaya aur usko uss aadmi ke ghar ki oor fenkj diya....

AAj ka yahi tak....kal ek ladayi.....fir Prateek ka wapas school jaan hoga....aur Slayer ki wapas se ek jhalak....

Banne rahiye...
 

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Main apni family se milla....sab bahut hi acche the...haa pahle mazak meinn ye log mujhe pareshan karne wale the par ye sab mujhe accha lag raha tha...humne saath mein khana khaya aur fir kuch der baatein bhi ki.....baad mein Dda ji ne sham ko mujhe Family tree ke pass le jaane ko kaha....Rupal didi nemujhe mera room dikhaya aur aaram karne ko kaha....

AB aage..

Room ka darwaja khul to main shocked tha....ye room bhi bilkul mere wale room ki hi tarah tha...sab kuch waisa hi.....aakhir hai kya inn sab mein....main jaha bhi jaata hu waha thik aisa hi room milta hai mujhe....bachpan se hi aisa hi room....ghar bhi badla tha master ne waha bhi same room phir school waha bhi same room....uske baad yaha aaya to yaha bhi....

Main room ke ander gaya....pahle ek baar sabkuch sdekha...sab waisa hi tha....fir chup chap jaake bed pe let gaya....aur chat ki oor dekhne laga....sochne laga room ke baare mein par....neend aa gayi mujhe....

Pata nahi kitne der baad Chachi ne aawaj di tab jaake main utha.....aur fir bathroom mein jaake hath muh doye....kapde change kiye...jo Bua ne hi sayad yaha rakhe ho...aur fir room se nikal gaya....nicche chala gaya....

Nicche gaya to Chachi, Didi aur Bua hi the waha...

Bua - Ready ho gaya chal ab....

Main - Haa chalo...

Maine itna bola hi tha...ki Rupal didi ko Bua ne ishara kiya kuch aur unhone mere upar ek kambal daal diya....

Main - Ye kyun hai...iska kya karna hai....

Bua - Ye tumhe aur tumhari smell ko chupayegi.....jaha hum jaa rahe hai waha sayad log tumhare aane se khush naa ho....par chinta mat karna hum honge waha....agar kuch hua to hum dekh lenge.......tum shant rahna bas....

Main - Par maine kya kiya hai jo ye sab.....

Bua - Tumne nahi kiya hai par Paarth aur Neelam unn dono ne kiya hai....ab [pata nahi tab unn ke dimmag mein kya tha jo uske saath milke ye sab....

Chachi - Poonam baad mein iske baare mein baat karte hai...Prateek beta chalo aap....

Sawal the mere mann mein par jawab ek bhi nahi.....Mera Mom Dad ne bhala aisa kya kiya ki unhe....unko to kisi ne Maar diya tha....aur Master mujhe iss kaabil bana rahi thi ki main uska saamna kar sakku....

Main - Mom dad ne kya kiya tha aisa....ki log unhe....

Chachi - Beta kaha naa baad mein baat karenge ispe....abhi ke liye chalo....sunno hum Truingle ki tarah jaayenge....ye beech mein rahega samjhe....

Sab ne haa kaha....par tabhi Rupal didi ko kuch yaad aaya wo jaldi se room mein gayi....sheediyan chad ke aur waha sekoi perfume le aayi....ye ek lady perfume tha...aur mere upar se pahle kambal ko khincha aur lagbhag mujhe perfume se naha diya usne....Main chikke jaa raha tha....

Rupal - ab sahi hai...ab agar kisi ne iske sharir ki khusbu kisi tak nahi pahuch paayegi.....

Main - aaaaachhhiii.....ye kya ....aaaccchhhiii...kiya....

Bua - Haa bilkul sahi kiya ....

Abhi humme se koi aur kuch bolyta ki Didi ka phone baja...

Didi - Haa papa

Chachu........

Didi - Ji bilkul hum taiyaarhai.....

Chacha....................

Main - Nahi uski koi chinta naa kare....wo maine sambhal liya hai...

Chacha....................

Didi - Thik hai hum bas aa rahe hai...

Call cut kiya didi ne aur....tinno ek taingle ki tarah khadi ho gayi.....

Chachi - Chalo...sab ready....niklo ab....

Aur hum saare nikal gaye waha se....lagbhag....30 minute chalne ke baad.....ek bahut bada maidaan aaya....jaha pe kuch duri duri pe bahut hi bade bade ped banne hue the....kaafi bheed thi waha petarah tarah ke jeev the waha pe.....Main unhi sab ko dekhne laga.....

Rupal - Oyye chal naa bhai......kya yaha waha dekhe jaa raha hai...sab baaadmein dikha dungi bata dungi abhi ke liye chal aur naam likh apna hamare tree pe....

Hamara family tree uss jagah pe ek konne mein tha...wahi pe Dada, Dadi, aur Chacha khade the.....Main gaya waha pechupte hue....unn sab mne pahle mere charo oor ghera bana liya...aur fiur....

Dada ji - Prateek ye hai hamara family tree....dekh rahe ho naa isko...ab dekho......sabse nicche ...naam hai...wo hai hamare pahle purwajo ka.....pahle hum bhi yaha pure blood mein aate the...warewolf warewolf saath mein.....fir mere Dada ko pasanmd aayi ek Elf....to wo ban gayi meri Dadi maaa....aur hamari family ban gayi Half blood....wo dekh rahe ho naa waha trunk ke pass se jo ek tahni hai wo mere dada ji ko dikha raha hai....wahi wo tahni jaake...ek dusre ped ke tahni se milli hui hai...to wo hai meri Dadi maa...samjhe...aur jab hum half blood banne fir sabko apni pasand ki hi ladki yaa ladka chahiye tha....to issi dauran....mere ek chacha....Jaiveer ne ek insan se shadi kar li....ye dekh rahe ho...ye wali tahni....ye unko dikharahahai....aur yahi tahni fir jameen pe lagi hui hai....ek ghass se....unke koi bacche nahi hue....parinsano ke saath rah ke wo bahut hi jyada badal gaye....unhone unn nsano ke bich hi apna ek business khola....Hotels ka business....Veer group of hotels...jaante hi honge tum....insano ki duniya mein uska ek alag hi rutba hai....to wahi hotel...mujhe mil gayi aur ab usko tmhare chacha chala rahe hai....aur unke baad....tumhe aur Rupal ko hi dekhna hai usko....ye thi hamare business ke baare mein baat....ab naam pe bhi aate hai warna gadbad ho jaayegi.....Wo dekh rahe ho mere chacha jaiveer ke branch ke upar ek aur taheni hai....haa wahi wo mere pita ji ka hai....aur unki shadi ek warewolf se hi hui....unki pasand thi.....aur main jab paida hua to main bana....warewolf....par...with extra powers....Ab ye dekho.....meri tahni kya naam hai....Hemant Veer....ye naam isliye kyunki insano ki duniya mein aise hi naam chalte hjai....ab isko dekjho....meri jo tahni hai wo jkaake milli hai ek aur ped ke ek chote se tahni se....jo tumhari Dadi ka hai....Madhuri....Ye ek fairy hai....fir aate hai hum...apne apne tahniyon pe...yaani mere bacch pe...to pahli tahni tumhare bade chacha....Satya veer naam hai inka....aur inki tahni dekho...wo jaake milli hai dusre ped ki tahni se...yaani tumhari chachi se....naam hai unka.....Nidhi Veer....ab dekhio inn dono ki tahniyan milne ke baad ek tahni waha se nikli hai...wo hai Rupal....chalo ab wapas se mere tahni ko dekho....waha ek hai...tumhari bua...Poonam aur dusri hai tumhae Dad yaani mere bete Paarth ki.....Poonam ki shadi nahi hui hai to iski tahni aise hi hai....tumhare dad ki tahni ko dekho wo aage jaa rahi hai...aur jameen pe ek chotte se jhaadi se nikli hui tahni si mil rahi hai.....Ye jhadiyan....unki hai jinhone..insano se shadi ki hai....jaise mere chacha...jai veer ka bhi dekh lo...tahni ni jameen pe gayi hai...par unka koi baccha nahi hua to ye aiusa hi rah gaya...wahi tumhari Mom ek minority thui to wo ss jhadi se dikhayi jaa rahi hai....aur tum...in dono ke bacche....Prateek....Ye tahni tumhari hai...samjhe....ab chalo isko chuo...aur apna naam lo....

Maine Dada ji ko pura sunna aur unki har ek baat samjhi...aur ab maine unke kahe anusar apne naam ki tahni ko pakda aur apna naam man mein liya.....aisa karne se.......mera family tree saath mein usse jo kuch bhi connect tha wo ek pal ko chamakne laga...uski chamak sabhi ke aankhon mein gayi aur wo sab hamare oor aaye....Dada, Dadi aur baakiyon ka dhyaan unpe nahi gaya kyun ki wo iss chamak ko samajhne ki koshish kar rahe the....

Aadmi - Hmm to tum saare yaha aaye ho....ab kya karnama karnaa hai yaha pe....kahi fir se koi tumhare ghar ka kaali shaktiyan to nahi seekhne laga....

Dadaji - juban sambhal ke baat karo...

A4 - Lo bhai sunna....humme juban sambhalne kokah raha hai....agar waqt rahte apne uss bete ko rok leta uss dayan se shadi karne se to tera parivr bhi sahi rahta aur hamara bhi....

Uss aadmi ne meri Maa ko Daayan kaha....

Bua - JUban sambhal ke baat karo....sayad bhul gaye ho main kon hu aur ye meri famiily hai....

A2 - Haa haa ab bas yahi rah gaya hai...arre bhaiyon mujhe to lagta hai isne bhi apne bhai ke saath kaali vidhyayen sikhi hogi....tabhi to Special batch ki teacher banni hui hai...warna pahle kabhi sunna tha koi Half blood wala itna takatwar ho....

Ye lohg bhi insano ki hi tarah hai....har chizmein dharam,jaat inhi muddoon pe aa jaate hai....koi talent ki kadar nahi karta....

A2 ka ye bolna tha Bua ko gussa aa gaya wo kuch karti usse pahle Dadi ne unhe rok diya....par logo ke muh band nahi hue....wo bas lage rahe mere gharwalo ki beiijaati karne mein...aur isse mera gussa badhta jaa raha tha....uss kambal ke andertha mein....gusse se apni muthiyanbheinch lli maine aur aankhen band ki.....ankhen band ki to saamne wahi cheel dikhayi diya...wo aag ke pankhon wala.....wo mujhe dekh raha tha....main uske pass gaya aur usko chua...usko chune se mujhe dard hone laga aur main jor se chilaya....

Aur fir aankhen kholi....jab aankhen kholi...to aasmaan mein ek bahut hi bada...chillon ka samuh tha...wo uss jagah ke charo taraf udd rahe the....abhi maine unhe dekha fir ek aadmi ko dekha jo mere Chachi ke baare mein bol raha tha....mera usko dekhna tha ki aasmaan se wo cheel udti hui aayi...aur wo uss jeev ko utha le gayi....jeev uss cheekl se bada tha bhari tha....sayad hi heel usko utta pata par weo utha le gaya.....Jab logo ne ye dekha to unki faat gayi....par kuch so called bahadur bhi the/....jinhone talwaren nikal li...unka kahna tha hum sab kala jaadu jaante hai to hum sab ko hi khatam kar de....wo aage badh rahe the ki tabhi...waha ussi maindan mein ek bahut hi bada....cheel aaya jiske pankh mein aag lagi hui hi wo bilkul unke saamne aake khada ho gaya...aur jor se chillaya...uski cheekh sun ke hi sabhi ki fat gayi....par ek bacvcha tha waha pe jisne apni Maa ko kaha...

Bacxcha - Maa Maa ye to wo kitab wala pankchi hai. jo unknown worriors wale kitab mein tha....

Sabne uss cheel ko dekha aur sabki aankhen fattii ki fatti rah gayi....Wo Cheel hamare familyt tree ke pass aaya aur uspe apni choch touch karayti...uske baad...fir se hamari family tree chamakne lagi....wo puri hari bhari ho gayi....saath hi uspe ek cheel ka nishan ban gaya.....baat saaf thi meri puri family uss cheel ki shuraksha meijn aa gayi thi...aur jab ye hua to sab ke sab bas humme dekhte hue nikal liye waha se....kisi mein himmat hi nahi tha usscheel se ladne ki....himmat ho bhi to jyada faayda nahi uska size dekh ke aisa lag raha tha wo ek baar mein ki 2 -3 ko nipta leta hoga......jab sab chale gaye...to wo cheel bhi waha se udd ke nikal gaya...aur chod gaya hum sab ko suspence mein....

Wo to hum saare sonch se bahar tab nichle jab ek cheel ne ussi aadmi ko theek hamare saaame kuch uchayi se giiraya...wo chillate hue girra ayur fir utha kar hum sab ke pair pakadne laga maaf kar do maaf kar do....humme samajh nahi aa raha tha....Wo to Rupal didi ne kaha maaf kiya tab jaake wo furr se choo mantar ho gaya.,...aur hum sab bhi ghar ki oor nikal pade...

Ghar mein pahuch ke...

Sab sofe pe baith gaye...sabke dimmag min bas wahi sab chal raha tha....

Dada ji - Wo sab kya tha aur hamare family ko....

Bua - Pata nahi Papa par wo sach mein wahi tha...uss kahaniyon ke kitab mein jo cheel hai wahi aur wo yaha hamare liye aaya....

Dadaji - Haa par kyun...aur ye koi aam panchi to hai nahi ki hamare liye aaye....hamari animal spirit uske saamne kuch.....animal spririt kahi wo animal spirit to nahi thi kisi ki....

Bua - Kya papa aisa hona...naamumkin hai....

Dadi - nahi mujhe nahi lagta...aisa pahle bhi dekha gaya hai...kuch animal spirits hote hai aise...

Bua - Nahi maa aisa nahi hai..aur ye Animal spirit ho hi nahi sakta ye kuch aur hai...app cjhinta mat kariye main pata laga lungi....

Hum sab baatein kar rahe the ki Rubal didi boli....

Rubal didi - hamare family ka ab wo rakshak hai,....wo hamari family ka rakshak hai yaani mera bhi....(hilla kar) waaaahhh ab aayega mazza.....Maa main jaarahi hu..aati hu thodi der mein....
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Chachi - Kaha jaa rahi hai aise hi......wo bjhi is waqt...tu kahi nahi jaayegi samjhi....

Rubal e meri oor dekha aur ek smile di....

Rubal - Wo maa maine naa apne chotu ko kuch gifts dene hai to yahi pass wale dukkan tak jaaungi main...waha se kuch jaaduyi chizzen bas....Chaloge naa chotu tum....

Main - Main....

Rubal - Arre chal na issi bahane yaha ke baare mein aur jaan bhi jaayega...aur ab to darne ki baat hi nahi...

Bua - Haa le jao isko par iusko apna dost batana babhi bahar bhai nahi samjhi....

Rubal - hmmm thik hai Bu....main samajh gayi aap kya kah rhi ho....chalo Ok hum chalte hai....

Mujhse buina Haa naa sunne hi mera haath pakda aur khinchte hue bahar.....

Hum bahar aaye aur ghar se thodi dur aaye.....main chal raha tha Didi ruk gauyyi...maine unk dekha picche mud ke...wo rukki hui thi aur ek or dekhe jaa rahi thi....

Main - Kya baat hai didi kya haiw waha.....

Didi - Wo mere Nanaji ka ghar tha....wo wahi raha karte the....Mom Nana nani....tinno......jab Mom ki shadi hui naa Dad se...to..Mom batati hai uske baad iss ghar mein koi jawa nahi bacha tha....aur mauka dekh ker.....wo samne wala ghar hai naa waha ke maalik ne Nana nani ka ghar hadap liya....Nana nani ki age jyada thi...to kuch kar naa paaaye....Mom Dad ne koshish ki yto unhe bhi jhotha kjaha.....aaj Nana - Nani ko band karke rakha hai uss ghar mein....gulam ki tarah rakhte hai waha unhe....main unhe hi chudane aayi hu....aaj iss aadmi se pura hisab chukta karungio....

Abhi main kuch bolta usse pahle hi Didi ne road pe se ek pather uthaya aur usko uss aadmi ke ghar ki oor fenkj diya....

AAj ka yahi tak....kal ek ladayi.....fir Prateek ka wapas school jaan hoga....aur Slayer ki wapas se ek jhalak....

Banne rahiye...
fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
 
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