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Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds
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UPDATE - 14

Ab tak...

Prateek ko kuch pata chala tha unn shields ke baare mein....saath mein wo eagle....wo uske pass aaya tha par abhi tak uska kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha...raat ke waqt Prateek Poonam ke saath apne Dada dadi ke pass jaane ko maan jaata hai...Wahi yaha se bahut dur Slayer Dark world ke andheri gufayon mein baitha meditate kar raha tha....

Ab aage....

Chaliye Dark world mein chalte hai....Haa wahi jaha Slayer rahta hai.....

Yaha ki andheri guffaon mein se kisi ek guffa mein jaha pe Slayer tha...meditate kar raha tha waha pe.....aawajein ho rahi thi....khushphusane ki aawajein.....jaise log baatein kar rahe ho.....bilkul dhire dhire....par ye aawajein marre hue laogoo ki thi....yaani aatmaon ki jo Slayer ke ander the....aur ab unhe bhookh lagi thi.....matlab koi naya aatma chahiye tha unhe....

ye aawajhein bahut hi dhimme dimme badhne lagi.......tez....aur tez....fir ek dum se shant.....sab shant ho gaya...kyunki kisi ke pairon ki aawaj aane lagi thi....kisi ke chalne ki aawaj....ab ye kadmo ki awaj tez hone lagi....aur Slayer wale guffa ke saamne chali gayi....

Ek ek aankh wala insan jaisa dikhne wala hi koi jeev tha ye....sharir ka aakar bahhut bada tha....hathon mein uske ek talwar thi....

Usne apne ek aankh se Slayer ki oor dekha wo abhi tak apni aankhen band kiye hue tha...uss ek aankh waale ne jab ye dekha to uske saans mein saans aayi....aur fir wo ander gaya...apne haath me pade hue talwar kko ek baar dekha....fir apni aankhen band kari aur sayad kisi ko yaad kar raha ho wo....tabhi uske ek aankh se aansu ke bunde bahne lagi....fir usne tralwar ko apne pet mein gussa diya...par koi aawaj nahi ki usne....fir ussi talwar ko apne hi haanthon se ghumaa diya ussi tarah....aur fir uski pakad uske talwar se chutne lagi....aur dekhte hi dekhte wo....nicche jammin pe gir gaya......uska girna tha...ki uske sharir se ek roshani nikli ar wo sidhi Slayer ke ander chali gayi....aur wo body jo uss ek aankh wale jeev ki thi wo waha se gayab ho gayi saath mein wo talwar bhi....Slayer waise hi meditation mein baitha raha....

Chaliye dekhte hai wo lash kaha gayi....

Iss guffa se bahut dur ek basti thi....jaha ussi ek aankh wale jaise log raha karte the....aaj ussi basti walo ki baari thi ki unme se koi ek jaaye aur apni aatma ko saunp de Slayer ko.....

Dark world ke saare log aise hi bastiyan mein rahte the...aur sabhi basti ka ek head hota tha.....pahle ke halat kuch thik the abhi se....par iss Slauyer ke aane se hi tabahi mach gayi thi....naa jaane kitne hii logo ko usne ek hi din mein khatam kar diya tha....Wo to kuch aise log aa gaye the waha jinhone usse ladayi ladi aur lagbhag se usko hara diya tha.....aur wo Slayer waha se gayab ho gaya aur chup gaya kahi pe.....

AB isko kisi jwalamukhi ke fatne se pahle wala...bhukamp kaha jaa sakta hai.....jisse tabahi hui thi par utni nahi.....

Slayer Yaha iss Dark world mein hi kyun aaya tha iske piccche bhi ek wajah thi....wajah thi uski Maa....Sofia ne Slayer se kaafi baar iss jagah ka jikr kiya tha....bataya tha usko yaha ke baare mein yaha ke logo ke baare mein.....sayad yahi wajah thi ki Slayer ne yaha hi aane ka chunna...ek aur bhi wajah thi uski bhookh....

Slayer jo pit ke waha se bhaga tha wo bhagte bhagte ek khandahar mein pahucha....jaha usko kuch log dikhayi diye.....kuch jaane pahchane se log.....jinko usne sayad pahle dekha nahi tha kabhi par unke chahre kuch kuch pahchane hue lag rahe te......jab Slayer ne dhyaan diya to waha ki ek ladki ka chahera....bilkul uski Maa Sofia ki hi tarah dikhta ttha....Slayer ye dekh ke jhatka khaa gaya......

Wo unke paas jaane laga chip chip kar....aur jab unki oor dhyaan se dekhne llaga tab usko pata chala inn sab ki halat bahut kharab hai......Wo unn logo ko dekh hi raha tha ki poicche se kisi ne usko chua....jab Slayer picche mudda to waha wahi logo mein se ek tha jisse maar kha ke wo bhaga tha.....uss aadmi ne ek baar aas pass dekha jab koi nahi dikha to....

Wo aadmi Slayer ko apne saath le gaya....wahi pass mein ek chota sa ghar jaisa banna tha...Slayer ko wahi le gaya wo....

Waha pe ussi ne uski malham pati ki.....ab inn sab se sawal uthna to laazmi hai....

Slayer ne puch hi liya unse unke baare mein.....aur aisa jawab milla jiski ummid bhi nahi thi Slayer ko.....

Jawab aaya waha pe ek buddi se.....buddi dikhne mein bahut hi ajeeb thi.....usne ek pal ko bas ek pal ko hi to Slayer ko dekha aur usko pahchan gayi.....usne Slayer se Sofia ke baare mein puccha par....Slayer ne kuch nahi bataya.....aur jab usne nahi bataya to uss budiya ne apni kahani shurur kar di....

Budiya - Yahi issi jagah paida hui thi wo Sofia.....meri hi bahen thi wo.....apni sagii bahen......hamari Maa ek chudail thi....aur Pita devtaon mein se ek....par shakti nahi thi unme koi......saari shaktiyan jaa chukki thi....kuch bhi nahi tha unke pass....unki shadi....ko yaha ke logo ne manyata nahi di....dete bhi kaise....koi devta ki shadi kabhi kisi dayan se ho ye mumkin hi nahi tha yaha ke logo ke hissab se....Pita ji jo ki yaha apne purvajo mein se akele bacche the unko bandhi bana liya gaya....yaha ke kabilon ke sardaro ki taraf se.....

Maa jo pet se thi unko aise hi issi jungle mein chod diya gaya.....hum dono ko janam dene mein hi Maa ki maut ho gayi....jab sardaron ko ye pata chala to unhone humara dhyaan rakhne ke liye Papa ko bahar nikal diya....par Papa...unko kuch ho gaya tha ab....wo bas kisi tarah se badla llena chahte the iss pure planet se...par shakti thi nahi...tha to bas ladne ka tarika.....unhone humme wo tarika shikhaya...ek din unke techniques ka pata chal gaya yaha ke Vampire kabile walo ko....unhone Papa ko kharid liya...auur tab se hum gulam hai unke.....jo wo kahte hai hum wahi karte hai....jisko maarne bolo usko maar dete hai...humme apne liye 2waqt ka khana mil jaata hai....ye jisne tumhe maara wo bhai hai tumhara,....

Sofia yaha se bhag gayi thi..jab wo badi hui.....par uske dimmag mein bhi bas badle ki hi baatein ghumti rahti thi.....uska kuch bhi pata nahi tha humme...ek din uski kuch khabar milli thi par fir se gayab ho gayi.....

Slayer sab dhyaan se sun raha tha......wo ye jaan chuka tha ki yahi jagah hai jaha uski Maa ka janam hua tha....aur bhi apne Maaa aur uske parivar ke baare mein sab jaan chuka tha wo....unn logo ne Slayer ko rahne ke liye jagah diya....par khane ko kuch naa de sake kya hi dete kuch hota tab naa.....

Slayer ko waha pe ek kitab milli....ye wahi kitab thi The unknown worriors ki koi copy thi.....wo uss Budiya ke pass thi....uss kitab pe bahut kuch likha tha...puchne ppe pata chala wo kitab uss budhiya ki pita ki aakhiri nishani thi....Slayer wo kitab le liya....aur uss kitab mein likhi hui chizzo se....aur banne hue nakse ko dekhene laga samajhne ki koshish karne laga......

jyada waqt nahi laga samajhne mein....pahle se hi uske pass....uss planet ka ek naksha tha bas ussi ko aur uss kitab mein banne nakse ko dekhte hue usko kuch milla...unhi andheri pahadiyon mein....aur wo chal pada unn pahadiyon ki oor......Kuch din beet gaye the usko....aatma naa mille hue.....koi aur rasta nahi dikha to usne unhi logo ko jala dia....har ek ko...aur unhi aatma ko apne ander khinch liya....aur chal diya pahad ki oor.....

Pahad ke pass pahucha to waha pe bahut hi ghana jungle tha....aur Slayer ko jana tha unhi jungle ke biccho bich banne hue ek guffa mein....

Guffa mein uss kitab mein likhi gayi chizon ke anusar kuch aisa chippa hua tha jo bahut hi kimti tha......

Slayer badhta gaya badhta gaya aur thode bahut jangli jaanvaron ko maarte hue wo pahuch gaya waha se uss guffa mein...aur guffa mein jaate hi shuru kiya usne apna kaam.....

Kitab mein likha tha....guiffa ke darwaje ke theek nicche hai wo cheez.....jab Slayer ne ye shuru kiya aur uss chiz tak pahucha...to waha pe bas ek kankaal tha....haa ek kankaal pata nahi kiska....Slayer ne usko chua...aur uske ek haath pe...ek lomdi ka nishan ban gaya.....ab ye nishan kya tha kyun tha pata nahi.....tha Slayer ko.....

Jab wo nishan bana Slayer ke haath pe ro ek pal ke liye to khalbali hi mach gayi thi uske sharir mein....uske ander jjo bhi aatmayen the wo cheekhne lagi thi....aur dekhte hi dekhte....Slayer jammen pe tha...

Jab ye hua to kuch log....waha uss jungle mein jaldi se pahuche.....une se ek ke haath pe ek saanpm ka nishan tha.....usne ek baar Slayer ko dekha.....fir picche hat gaya.....aur jhuk gaya uske saamne.....

Slayer jo jameen pe lete hue tha....chilla raha tha usko ye sab dikh bhi nahi raha tha,.....wo to bas apne hi dard mein tha......

Wo log Slayer ko utha ke le gaye uss jagah se....

Slayer....2 din waha p waise hi behosh raha aur jab uttha to bhookh se pagal hua tha wo.....usne aas pass dekha ek aurat baithi thi....usne uske gardan mein kaat liya...aur wo aaurat wahi pe mar gayi...aur uski aatma Slayer ke ander chali gayi......Jab slayer ne aas pass aur dekhha to usko bas ek khali jhopdi hi dikhayi di....jisme sayad ek wo aurat aur ek slayer hi tha aur koi nahi....Slayer uss jhopdi se bahar nikla aur yaha waha dekha to usko apni ek aadmi milla jo aankhen band kiye hue ek pather pe baitha tha....Jab slayer ne uski sakal dekhi to wo aur chauk gaya....ye wahi tha...bilkul ussi ki tarah dikh raha tha wo jo hamesha aata tha Slayer....part aur Neelam ko maarne ke liye...jab wo school mein the....ye wahi tha jo har baar bach ke nikal jaata tha....

Slayer uske saamne jaa baitha aur usko dekhne laga....

Aadmi - Malik....to aapko hosh aa hi gaya......

Slayer chup raha aur usko dekhta raha....

Admi - Malik aapki Maa ne mujhe ye aadesh diya tha ki aapko aur aapke shathiyon ko main practice karata rahu....bas yahi wajah tha mere aapke pass aane ka....ab aap uss kabil ho gaye hai ki mujhe ab yaha se mukht karenge....ye shakti....ye jo mujhe taufe mein milli thi iskop wapas lele malik aur mujhe marne de....main jaanta hu meri biwiw ko maar diya hai aapne....

Slayer kuch nahi bol raha tha bas sun raha tha.....

uss aadmi ne apnae pith pe lage hue uske talwar ko nikala aur khud ka gala kaat diya....Slayer ne uski body ko chua aur uske dusre haath pe ban gayi..wo saanp ki nishani....saath hi uski aatma bhi ussi ke ander chali gayi....

Ab baari thi jwalamukhi ke fatne ki....Sab log abhi Dark world mein aaram se the....par ab waqt badalne wala tha....Slayer ne wapas se logo ko maaran shuru kar diya...aur iss had tak marra ki sabhi sardaron ko uske pass aana pada aur uske saamne ghutne daalne pade....wo sab usse har maan gaye aur uski gulami ko kabul kiya....

Slayer ki bas ek hi shart thi....usko aur kuch nahi chahiye tha wo bas ussi guffa mein rahne ko taiyaar tha saath hi kisi ko bhi naa marne ki baat bhi kahi usne par....uske liye roj ek aatma uske pass pohuch jana chahiye,,,,Jis din aatma nahi pahuchi wo bahar nikal aayega aur wo din bura hoga.....

itna bol Slayer wapas se guffa mein chala gaya.....aur Slayer ne baaki sab chod diya yaha ke logo pe...

Guffa mein Slayer apne naye powers pe dhyaan lagata unpe kaabu paane ki koshish kiya karta....aur saath hi waise hi aur powers dhundhta...roj koi mnaa koi aata aur khud ka aatma usko de deta....khud ko maar ke....

Chaliye Sofia ka dekh liya ab Viraj ka bhi dekh lete hai....to Viraj ki bhi kuch aisi hi kahani hai wo bhi unhi 10 parivaron mein se ek parivar ka tha....jinko Titan planet se nikala gaya tha....uske purvaj Orion planet pe aa gaye the...Sofia ka ussi ko apne pyaar mein faansna koi sanjog nahi tha ye sab Sofia ka socha samjha plan tha...par...kismat dekho...Viraj waha se bhagne mein kaamiyab ho gaya tha...

Chalo ye sab chodo...ab chalte hai Earth pe wapas...

Haa to Prateek yaani main subah utha aur chal diya taiyaar hoke dhyaan lagane....aaj kuch ajeeb nahi hua....sab normal hi tha...wahi fir 8 baje ke aas pass main utha aur jab utha to Bua wahi pe khadi thi....wo mere jaagne ka hi intezar kar rahi thi bas....

Bua - Chal jaldi kar bus aati hi hogi....

Main - Arre haa main chan....

Bua - wo sab waha ho jaayega....tu chup chap chal...wo mujhe lagbhag khinchte hue le gayi gate ke pass...aur turant hi wo Bus aayi....main aur Bua usme chad gaye....

Bua - Hmm tu room mein jaa fresh hoja main yaha dekhti hu....

Main - Room...par mujh....

Abhi pura bola bhi nahi tha ki koi aaya aur mera haath pakda usne aur Main ek room mein tha....room mein mere liye 1 naya kapde ka set rakha hua tha...main bhi iss baar wait naa karke jaldi se change kiya...aur abhi change kar ke ready hi hua tha ki ek jhatka laga aur fir darwaja khula...

Bua - Kya kitna late karega chal jadi...aaj sab bahut khush honge tujhe dekh ke waha pe....

Unhone mera haath pakda aur agle hi pal hum dono road pe the....bada hi alag jagah tha ye....ass pass bas ped hi dikh rahe the.....aur theek hamare saamne tha ek bada sa ghar....

Bua - Ye hai hamara ghar...

Aaj ke liye itna hi chota update hai....

Kal aur parso 2 din ek- ek update aayenge...raat mein
 

Vickey1211

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UPDATE - 14

Ab tak...

Prateek ko kuch pata chala tha unn shields ke baare mein....saath mein wo eagle....wo uske pass aaya tha par abhi tak uska kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha...raat ke waqt Prateek Poonam ke saath apne Dada dadi ke pass jaane ko maan jaata hai...Wahi yaha se bahut dur Slayer Dark world ke andheri gufayon mein baitha meditate kar raha tha....

Ab aage....

Chaliye Dark world mein chalte hai....Haa wahi jaha Slayer rahta hai.....

Yaha ki andheri guffaon mein se kisi ek guffa mein jaha pe Slayer tha...meditate kar raha tha waha pe.....aawajein ho rahi thi....khushphusane ki aawajein.....jaise log baatein kar rahe ho.....bilkul dhire dhire....par ye aawajein marre hue laogoo ki thi....yaani aatmaon ki jo Slayer ke ander the....aur ab unhe bhookh lagi thi.....matlab koi naya aatma chahiye tha unhe....

ye aawajhein bahut hi dhimme dimme badhne lagi.......tez....aur tez....fir ek dum se shant.....sab shant ho gaya...kyunki kisi ke pairon ki aawaj aane lagi thi....kisi ke chalne ki aawaj....ab ye kadmo ki awaj tez hone lagi....aur Slayer wale guffa ke saamne chali gayi....

Ek ek aankh wala insan jaisa dikhne wala hi koi jeev tha ye....sharir ka aakar bahhut bada tha....hathon mein uske ek talwar thi....

Usne apne ek aankh se Slayer ki oor dekha wo abhi tak apni aankhen band kiye hue tha...uss ek aankh waale ne jab ye dekha to uske saans mein saans aayi....aur fir wo ander gaya...apne haath me pade hue talwar kko ek baar dekha....fir apni aankhen band kari aur sayad kisi ko yaad kar raha ho wo....tabhi uske ek aankh se aansu ke bunde bahne lagi....fir usne tralwar ko apne pet mein gussa diya...par koi aawaj nahi ki usne....fir ussi talwar ko apne hi haanthon se ghumaa diya ussi tarah....aur fir uski pakad uske talwar se chutne lagi....aur dekhte hi dekhte wo....nicche jammin pe gir gaya......uska girna tha...ki uske sharir se ek roshani nikli ar wo sidhi Slayer ke ander chali gayi....aur wo body jo uss ek aankh wale jeev ki thi wo waha se gayab ho gayi saath mein wo talwar bhi....Slayer waise hi meditation mein baitha raha....

Chaliye dekhte hai wo lash kaha gayi....

Iss guffa se bahut dur ek basti thi....jaha ussi ek aankh wale jaise log raha karte the....aaj ussi basti walo ki baari thi ki unme se koi ek jaaye aur apni aatma ko saunp de Slayer ko.....

Dark world ke saare log aise hi bastiyan mein rahte the...aur sabhi basti ka ek head hota tha.....pahle ke halat kuch thik the abhi se....par iss Slauyer ke aane se hi tabahi mach gayi thi....naa jaane kitne hii logo ko usne ek hi din mein khatam kar diya tha....Wo to kuch aise log aa gaye the waha jinhone usse ladayi ladi aur lagbhag se usko hara diya tha.....aur wo Slayer waha se gayab ho gaya aur chup gaya kahi pe.....

AB isko kisi jwalamukhi ke fatne se pahle wala...bhukamp kaha jaa sakta hai.....jisse tabahi hui thi par utni nahi.....

Slayer Yaha iss Dark world mein hi kyun aaya tha iske piccche bhi ek wajah thi....wajah thi uski Maa....Sofia ne Slayer se kaafi baar iss jagah ka jikr kiya tha....bataya tha usko yaha ke baare mein yaha ke logo ke baare mein.....sayad yahi wajah thi ki Slayer ne yaha hi aane ka chunna...ek aur bhi wajah thi uski bhookh....

Slayer jo pit ke waha se bhaga tha wo bhagte bhagte ek khandahar mein pahucha....jaha usko kuch log dikhayi diye.....kuch jaane pahchane se log.....jinko usne sayad pahle dekha nahi tha kabhi par unke chahre kuch kuch pahchane hue lag rahe te......jab Slayer ne dhyaan diya to waha ki ek ladki ka chahera....bilkul uski Maa Sofia ki hi tarah dikhta ttha....Slayer ye dekh ke jhatka khaa gaya......

Wo unke paas jaane laga chip chip kar....aur jab unki oor dhyaan se dekhne llaga tab usko pata chala inn sab ki halat bahut kharab hai......Wo unn logo ko dekh hi raha tha ki poicche se kisi ne usko chua....jab Slayer picche mudda to waha wahi logo mein se ek tha jisse maar kha ke wo bhaga tha.....uss aadmi ne ek baar aas pass dekha jab koi nahi dikha to....

Wo aadmi Slayer ko apne saath le gaya....wahi pass mein ek chota sa ghar jaisa banna tha...Slayer ko wahi le gaya wo....

Waha pe ussi ne uski malham pati ki.....ab inn sab se sawal uthna to laazmi hai....

Slayer ne puch hi liya unse unke baare mein.....aur aisa jawab milla jiski ummid bhi nahi thi Slayer ko.....

Jawab aaya waha pe ek buddi se.....buddi dikhne mein bahut hi ajeeb thi.....usne ek pal ko bas ek pal ko hi to Slayer ko dekha aur usko pahchan gayi.....usne Slayer se Sofia ke baare mein puccha par....Slayer ne kuch nahi bataya.....aur jab usne nahi bataya to uss budiya ne apni kahani shurur kar di....

Budiya - Yahi issi jagah paida hui thi wo Sofia.....meri hi bahen thi wo.....apni sagii bahen......hamari Maa ek chudail thi....aur Pita devtaon mein se ek....par shakti nahi thi unme koi......saari shaktiyan jaa chukki thi....kuch bhi nahi tha unke pass....unki shadi....ko yaha ke logo ne manyata nahi di....dete bhi kaise....koi devta ki shadi kabhi kisi dayan se ho ye mumkin hi nahi tha yaha ke logo ke hissab se....Pita ji jo ki yaha apne purvajo mein se akele bacche the unko bandhi bana liya gaya....yaha ke kabilon ke sardaro ki taraf se.....

Maa jo pet se thi unko aise hi issi jungle mein chod diya gaya.....hum dono ko janam dene mein hi Maa ki maut ho gayi....jab sardaron ko ye pata chala to unhone humara dhyaan rakhne ke liye Papa ko bahar nikal diya....par Papa...unko kuch ho gaya tha ab....wo bas kisi tarah se badla llena chahte the iss pure planet se...par shakti thi nahi...tha to bas ladne ka tarika.....unhone humme wo tarika shikhaya...ek din unke techniques ka pata chal gaya yaha ke Vampire kabile walo ko....unhone Papa ko kharid liya...auur tab se hum gulam hai unke.....jo wo kahte hai hum wahi karte hai....jisko maarne bolo usko maar dete hai...humme apne liye 2waqt ka khana mil jaata hai....ye jisne tumhe maara wo bhai hai tumhara,....

Sofia yaha se bhag gayi thi..jab wo badi hui.....par uske dimmag mein bhi bas badle ki hi baatein ghumti rahti thi.....uska kuch bhi pata nahi tha humme...ek din uski kuch khabar milli thi par fir se gayab ho gayi.....

Slayer sab dhyaan se sun raha tha......wo ye jaan chuka tha ki yahi jagah hai jaha uski Maa ka janam hua tha....aur bhi apne Maaa aur uske parivar ke baare mein sab jaan chuka tha wo....unn logo ne Slayer ko rahne ke liye jagah diya....par khane ko kuch naa de sake kya hi dete kuch hota tab naa.....

Slayer ko waha pe ek kitab milli....ye wahi kitab thi The unknown worriors ki koi copy thi.....wo uss Budiya ke pass thi....uss kitab pe bahut kuch likha tha...puchne ppe pata chala wo kitab uss budhiya ki pita ki aakhiri nishani thi....Slayer wo kitab le liya....aur uss kitab mein likhi hui chizzo se....aur banne hue nakse ko dekhene laga samajhne ki koshish karne laga......

jyada waqt nahi laga samajhne mein....pahle se hi uske pass....uss planet ka ek naksha tha bas ussi ko aur uss kitab mein banne nakse ko dekhte hue usko kuch milla...unhi andheri pahadiyon mein....aur wo chal pada unn pahadiyon ki oor......Kuch din beet gaye the usko....aatma naa mille hue.....koi aur rasta nahi dikha to usne unhi logo ko jala dia....har ek ko...aur unhi aatma ko apne ander khinch liya....aur chal diya pahad ki oor.....

Pahad ke pass pahucha to waha pe bahut hi ghana jungle tha....aur Slayer ko jana tha unhi jungle ke biccho bich banne hue ek guffa mein....

Guffa mein uss kitab mein likhi gayi chizon ke anusar kuch aisa chippa hua tha jo bahut hi kimti tha......

Slayer badhta gaya badhta gaya aur thode bahut jangli jaanvaron ko maarte hue wo pahuch gaya waha se uss guffa mein...aur guffa mein jaate hi shuru kiya usne apna kaam.....

Kitab mein likha tha....guiffa ke darwaje ke theek nicche hai wo cheez.....jab Slayer ne ye shuru kiya aur uss chiz tak pahucha...to waha pe bas ek kankaal tha....haa ek kankaal pata nahi kiska....Slayer ne usko chua...aur uske ek haath pe...ek lomdi ka nishan ban gaya.....ab ye nishan kya tha kyun tha pata nahi.....tha Slayer ko.....

Jab wo nishan bana Slayer ke haath pe ro ek pal ke liye to khalbali hi mach gayi thi uske sharir mein....uske ander jjo bhi aatmayen the wo cheekhne lagi thi....aur dekhte hi dekhte....Slayer jammen pe tha...

Jab ye hua to kuch log....waha uss jungle mein jaldi se pahuche.....une se ek ke haath pe ek saanpm ka nishan tha.....usne ek baar Slayer ko dekha.....fir picche hat gaya.....aur jhuk gaya uske saamne.....

Slayer jo jameen pe lete hue tha....chilla raha tha usko ye sab dikh bhi nahi raha tha,.....wo to bas apne hi dard mein tha......

Wo log Slayer ko utha ke le gaye uss jagah se....

Slayer....2 din waha p waise hi behosh raha aur jab uttha to bhookh se pagal hua tha wo.....usne aas pass dekha ek aurat baithi thi....usne uske gardan mein kaat liya...aur wo aaurat wahi pe mar gayi...aur uski aatma Slayer ke ander chali gayi......Jab slayer ne aas pass aur dekhha to usko bas ek khali jhopdi hi dikhayi di....jisme sayad ek wo aurat aur ek slayer hi tha aur koi nahi....Slayer uss jhopdi se bahar nikla aur yaha waha dekha to usko apni ek aadmi milla jo aankhen band kiye hue ek pather pe baitha tha....Jab slayer ne uski sakal dekhi to wo aur chauk gaya....ye wahi tha...bilkul ussi ki tarah dikh raha tha wo jo hamesha aata tha Slayer....part aur Neelam ko maarne ke liye...jab wo school mein the....ye wahi tha jo har baar bach ke nikal jaata tha....

Slayer uske saamne jaa baitha aur usko dekhne laga....

Aadmi - Malik....to aapko hosh aa hi gaya......

Slayer chup raha aur usko dekhta raha....

Admi - Malik aapki Maa ne mujhe ye aadesh diya tha ki aapko aur aapke shathiyon ko main practice karata rahu....bas yahi wajah tha mere aapke pass aane ka....ab aap uss kabil ho gaye hai ki mujhe ab yaha se mukht karenge....ye shakti....ye jo mujhe taufe mein milli thi iskop wapas lele malik aur mujhe marne de....main jaanta hu meri biwiw ko maar diya hai aapne....

Slayer kuch nahi bol raha tha bas sun raha tha.....

uss aadmi ne apnae pith pe lage hue uske talwar ko nikala aur khud ka gala kaat diya....Slayer ne uski body ko chua aur uske dusre haath pe ban gayi..wo saanp ki nishani....saath hi uski aatma bhi ussi ke ander chali gayi....

Ab baari thi jwalamukhi ke fatne ki....Sab log abhi Dark world mein aaram se the....par ab waqt badalne wala tha....Slayer ne wapas se logo ko maaran shuru kar diya...aur iss had tak marra ki sabhi sardaron ko uske pass aana pada aur uske saamne ghutne daalne pade....wo sab usse har maan gaye aur uski gulami ko kabul kiya....

Slayer ki bas ek hi shart thi....usko aur kuch nahi chahiye tha wo bas ussi guffa mein rahne ko taiyaar tha saath hi kisi ko bhi naa marne ki baat bhi kahi usne par....uske liye roj ek aatma uske pass pohuch jana chahiye,,,,Jis din aatma nahi pahuchi wo bahar nikal aayega aur wo din bura hoga.....

itna bol Slayer wapas se guffa mein chala gaya.....aur Slayer ne baaki sab chod diya yaha ke logo pe...

Guffa mein Slayer apne naye powers pe dhyaan lagata unpe kaabu paane ki koshish kiya karta....aur saath hi waise hi aur powers dhundhta...roj koi mnaa koi aata aur khud ka aatma usko de deta....khud ko maar ke....

Chaliye Sofia ka dekh liya ab Viraj ka bhi dekh lete hai....to Viraj ki bhi kuch aisi hi kahani hai wo bhi unhi 10 parivaron mein se ek parivar ka tha....jinko Titan planet se nikala gaya tha....uske purvaj Orion planet pe aa gaye the...Sofia ka ussi ko apne pyaar mein faansna koi sanjog nahi tha ye sab Sofia ka socha samjha plan tha...par...kismat dekho...Viraj waha se bhagne mein kaamiyab ho gaya tha...

Chalo ye sab chodo...ab chalte hai Earth pe wapas...

Haa to Prateek yaani main subah utha aur chal diya taiyaar hoke dhyaan lagane....aaj kuch ajeeb nahi hua....sab normal hi tha...wahi fir 8 baje ke aas pass main utha aur jab utha to Bua wahi pe khadi thi....wo mere jaagne ka hi intezar kar rahi thi bas....

Bua - Chal jaldi kar bus aati hi hogi....

Main - Arre haa main chan....

Bua - wo sab waha ho jaayega....tu chup chap chal...wo mujhe lagbhag khinchte hue le gayi gate ke pass...aur turant hi wo Bus aayi....main aur Bua usme chad gaye....

Bua - Hmm tu room mein jaa fresh hoja main yaha dekhti hu....

Main - Room...par mujh....

Abhi pura bola bhi nahi tha ki koi aaya aur mera haath pakda usne aur Main ek room mein tha....room mein mere liye 1 naya kapde ka set rakha hua tha...main bhi iss baar wait naa karke jaldi se change kiya...aur abhi change kar ke ready hi hua tha ki ek jhatka laga aur fir darwaja khula...

Bua - Kya kitna late karega chal jadi...aaj sab bahut khush honge tujhe dekh ke waha pe....

Unhone mera haath pakda aur agle hi pal hum dono road pe the....bada hi alag jagah tha ye....ass pass bas ped hi dikh rahe the.....aur theek hamare saamne tha ek bada sa ghar....

Bua - Ye hai hamara ghar...

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Ab tak...

Prateek ko kuch pata chala tha unn shields ke baare mein....saath mein wo eagle....wo uske pass aaya tha par abhi tak uska kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha...raat ke waqt Prateek Poonam ke saath apne Dada dadi ke pass jaane ko maan jaata hai...Wahi yaha se bahut dur Slayer Dark world ke andheri gufayon mein baitha meditate kar raha tha....

Ab aage....

Chaliye Dark world mein chalte hai....Haa wahi jaha Slayer rahta hai.....

Yaha ki andheri guffaon mein se kisi ek guffa mein jaha pe Slayer tha...meditate kar raha tha waha pe.....aawajein ho rahi thi....khushphusane ki aawajein.....jaise log baatein kar rahe ho.....bilkul dhire dhire....par ye aawajein marre hue laogoo ki thi....yaani aatmaon ki jo Slayer ke ander the....aur ab unhe bhookh lagi thi.....matlab koi naya aatma chahiye tha unhe....

ye aawajhein bahut hi dhimme dimme badhne lagi.......tez....aur tez....fir ek dum se shant.....sab shant ho gaya...kyunki kisi ke pairon ki aawaj aane lagi thi....kisi ke chalne ki aawaj....ab ye kadmo ki awaj tez hone lagi....aur Slayer wale guffa ke saamne chali gayi....

Ek ek aankh wala insan jaisa dikhne wala hi koi jeev tha ye....sharir ka aakar bahhut bada tha....hathon mein uske ek talwar thi....

Usne apne ek aankh se Slayer ki oor dekha wo abhi tak apni aankhen band kiye hue tha...uss ek aankh waale ne jab ye dekha to uske saans mein saans aayi....aur fir wo ander gaya...apne haath me pade hue talwar kko ek baar dekha....fir apni aankhen band kari aur sayad kisi ko yaad kar raha ho wo....tabhi uske ek aankh se aansu ke bunde bahne lagi....fir usne tralwar ko apne pet mein gussa diya...par koi aawaj nahi ki usne....fir ussi talwar ko apne hi haanthon se ghumaa diya ussi tarah....aur fir uski pakad uske talwar se chutne lagi....aur dekhte hi dekhte wo....nicche jammin pe gir gaya......uska girna tha...ki uske sharir se ek roshani nikli ar wo sidhi Slayer ke ander chali gayi....aur wo body jo uss ek aankh wale jeev ki thi wo waha se gayab ho gayi saath mein wo talwar bhi....Slayer waise hi meditation mein baitha raha....

Chaliye dekhte hai wo lash kaha gayi....

Iss guffa se bahut dur ek basti thi....jaha ussi ek aankh wale jaise log raha karte the....aaj ussi basti walo ki baari thi ki unme se koi ek jaaye aur apni aatma ko saunp de Slayer ko.....

Dark world ke saare log aise hi bastiyan mein rahte the...aur sabhi basti ka ek head hota tha.....pahle ke halat kuch thik the abhi se....par iss Slauyer ke aane se hi tabahi mach gayi thi....naa jaane kitne hii logo ko usne ek hi din mein khatam kar diya tha....Wo to kuch aise log aa gaye the waha jinhone usse ladayi ladi aur lagbhag se usko hara diya tha.....aur wo Slayer waha se gayab ho gaya aur chup gaya kahi pe.....

AB isko kisi jwalamukhi ke fatne se pahle wala...bhukamp kaha jaa sakta hai.....jisse tabahi hui thi par utni nahi.....

Slayer Yaha iss Dark world mein hi kyun aaya tha iske piccche bhi ek wajah thi....wajah thi uski Maa....Sofia ne Slayer se kaafi baar iss jagah ka jikr kiya tha....bataya tha usko yaha ke baare mein yaha ke logo ke baare mein.....sayad yahi wajah thi ki Slayer ne yaha hi aane ka chunna...ek aur bhi wajah thi uski bhookh....

Slayer jo pit ke waha se bhaga tha wo bhagte bhagte ek khandahar mein pahucha....jaha usko kuch log dikhayi diye.....kuch jaane pahchane se log.....jinko usne sayad pahle dekha nahi tha kabhi par unke chahre kuch kuch pahchane hue lag rahe te......jab Slayer ne dhyaan diya to waha ki ek ladki ka chahera....bilkul uski Maa Sofia ki hi tarah dikhta ttha....Slayer ye dekh ke jhatka khaa gaya......

Wo unke paas jaane laga chip chip kar....aur jab unki oor dhyaan se dekhne llaga tab usko pata chala inn sab ki halat bahut kharab hai......Wo unn logo ko dekh hi raha tha ki poicche se kisi ne usko chua....jab Slayer picche mudda to waha wahi logo mein se ek tha jisse maar kha ke wo bhaga tha.....uss aadmi ne ek baar aas pass dekha jab koi nahi dikha to....

Wo aadmi Slayer ko apne saath le gaya....wahi pass mein ek chota sa ghar jaisa banna tha...Slayer ko wahi le gaya wo....

Waha pe ussi ne uski malham pati ki.....ab inn sab se sawal uthna to laazmi hai....

Slayer ne puch hi liya unse unke baare mein.....aur aisa jawab milla jiski ummid bhi nahi thi Slayer ko.....

Jawab aaya waha pe ek buddi se.....buddi dikhne mein bahut hi ajeeb thi.....usne ek pal ko bas ek pal ko hi to Slayer ko dekha aur usko pahchan gayi.....usne Slayer se Sofia ke baare mein puccha par....Slayer ne kuch nahi bataya.....aur jab usne nahi bataya to uss budiya ne apni kahani shurur kar di....

Budiya - Yahi issi jagah paida hui thi wo Sofia.....meri hi bahen thi wo.....apni sagii bahen......hamari Maa ek chudail thi....aur Pita devtaon mein se ek....par shakti nahi thi unme koi......saari shaktiyan jaa chukki thi....kuch bhi nahi tha unke pass....unki shadi....ko yaha ke logo ne manyata nahi di....dete bhi kaise....koi devta ki shadi kabhi kisi dayan se ho ye mumkin hi nahi tha yaha ke logo ke hissab se....Pita ji jo ki yaha apne purvajo mein se akele bacche the unko bandhi bana liya gaya....yaha ke kabilon ke sardaro ki taraf se.....

Maa jo pet se thi unko aise hi issi jungle mein chod diya gaya.....hum dono ko janam dene mein hi Maa ki maut ho gayi....jab sardaron ko ye pata chala to unhone humara dhyaan rakhne ke liye Papa ko bahar nikal diya....par Papa...unko kuch ho gaya tha ab....wo bas kisi tarah se badla llena chahte the iss pure planet se...par shakti thi nahi...tha to bas ladne ka tarika.....unhone humme wo tarika shikhaya...ek din unke techniques ka pata chal gaya yaha ke Vampire kabile walo ko....unhone Papa ko kharid liya...auur tab se hum gulam hai unke.....jo wo kahte hai hum wahi karte hai....jisko maarne bolo usko maar dete hai...humme apne liye 2waqt ka khana mil jaata hai....ye jisne tumhe maara wo bhai hai tumhara,....

Sofia yaha se bhag gayi thi..jab wo badi hui.....par uske dimmag mein bhi bas badle ki hi baatein ghumti rahti thi.....uska kuch bhi pata nahi tha humme...ek din uski kuch khabar milli thi par fir se gayab ho gayi.....

Slayer sab dhyaan se sun raha tha......wo ye jaan chuka tha ki yahi jagah hai jaha uski Maa ka janam hua tha....aur bhi apne Maaa aur uske parivar ke baare mein sab jaan chuka tha wo....unn logo ne Slayer ko rahne ke liye jagah diya....par khane ko kuch naa de sake kya hi dete kuch hota tab naa.....

Slayer ko waha pe ek kitab milli....ye wahi kitab thi The unknown worriors ki koi copy thi.....wo uss Budiya ke pass thi....uss kitab pe bahut kuch likha tha...puchne ppe pata chala wo kitab uss budhiya ki pita ki aakhiri nishani thi....Slayer wo kitab le liya....aur uss kitab mein likhi hui chizzo se....aur banne hue nakse ko dekhene laga samajhne ki koshish karne laga......

jyada waqt nahi laga samajhne mein....pahle se hi uske pass....uss planet ka ek naksha tha bas ussi ko aur uss kitab mein banne nakse ko dekhte hue usko kuch milla...unhi andheri pahadiyon mein....aur wo chal pada unn pahadiyon ki oor......Kuch din beet gaye the usko....aatma naa mille hue.....koi aur rasta nahi dikha to usne unhi logo ko jala dia....har ek ko...aur unhi aatma ko apne ander khinch liya....aur chal diya pahad ki oor.....

Pahad ke pass pahucha to waha pe bahut hi ghana jungle tha....aur Slayer ko jana tha unhi jungle ke biccho bich banne hue ek guffa mein....

Guffa mein uss kitab mein likhi gayi chizon ke anusar kuch aisa chippa hua tha jo bahut hi kimti tha......

Slayer badhta gaya badhta gaya aur thode bahut jangli jaanvaron ko maarte hue wo pahuch gaya waha se uss guffa mein...aur guffa mein jaate hi shuru kiya usne apna kaam.....

Kitab mein likha tha....guiffa ke darwaje ke theek nicche hai wo cheez.....jab Slayer ne ye shuru kiya aur uss chiz tak pahucha...to waha pe bas ek kankaal tha....haa ek kankaal pata nahi kiska....Slayer ne usko chua...aur uske ek haath pe...ek lomdi ka nishan ban gaya.....ab ye nishan kya tha kyun tha pata nahi.....tha Slayer ko.....

Jab wo nishan bana Slayer ke haath pe ro ek pal ke liye to khalbali hi mach gayi thi uske sharir mein....uske ander jjo bhi aatmayen the wo cheekhne lagi thi....aur dekhte hi dekhte....Slayer jammen pe tha...

Jab ye hua to kuch log....waha uss jungle mein jaldi se pahuche.....une se ek ke haath pe ek saanpm ka nishan tha.....usne ek baar Slayer ko dekha.....fir picche hat gaya.....aur jhuk gaya uske saamne.....

Slayer jo jameen pe lete hue tha....chilla raha tha usko ye sab dikh bhi nahi raha tha,.....wo to bas apne hi dard mein tha......

Wo log Slayer ko utha ke le gaye uss jagah se....

Slayer....2 din waha p waise hi behosh raha aur jab uttha to bhookh se pagal hua tha wo.....usne aas pass dekha ek aurat baithi thi....usne uske gardan mein kaat liya...aur wo aaurat wahi pe mar gayi...aur uski aatma Slayer ke ander chali gayi......Jab slayer ne aas pass aur dekhha to usko bas ek khali jhopdi hi dikhayi di....jisme sayad ek wo aurat aur ek slayer hi tha aur koi nahi....Slayer uss jhopdi se bahar nikla aur yaha waha dekha to usko apni ek aadmi milla jo aankhen band kiye hue ek pather pe baitha tha....Jab slayer ne uski sakal dekhi to wo aur chauk gaya....ye wahi tha...bilkul ussi ki tarah dikh raha tha wo jo hamesha aata tha Slayer....part aur Neelam ko maarne ke liye...jab wo school mein the....ye wahi tha jo har baar bach ke nikal jaata tha....

Slayer uske saamne jaa baitha aur usko dekhne laga....

Aadmi - Malik....to aapko hosh aa hi gaya......

Slayer chup raha aur usko dekhta raha....

Admi - Malik aapki Maa ne mujhe ye aadesh diya tha ki aapko aur aapke shathiyon ko main practice karata rahu....bas yahi wajah tha mere aapke pass aane ka....ab aap uss kabil ho gaye hai ki mujhe ab yaha se mukht karenge....ye shakti....ye jo mujhe taufe mein milli thi iskop wapas lele malik aur mujhe marne de....main jaanta hu meri biwiw ko maar diya hai aapne....

Slayer kuch nahi bol raha tha bas sun raha tha.....

uss aadmi ne apnae pith pe lage hue uske talwar ko nikala aur khud ka gala kaat diya....Slayer ne uski body ko chua aur uske dusre haath pe ban gayi..wo saanp ki nishani....saath hi uski aatma bhi ussi ke ander chali gayi....

Ab baari thi jwalamukhi ke fatne ki....Sab log abhi Dark world mein aaram se the....par ab waqt badalne wala tha....Slayer ne wapas se logo ko maaran shuru kar diya...aur iss had tak marra ki sabhi sardaron ko uske pass aana pada aur uske saamne ghutne daalne pade....wo sab usse har maan gaye aur uski gulami ko kabul kiya....

Slayer ki bas ek hi shart thi....usko aur kuch nahi chahiye tha wo bas ussi guffa mein rahne ko taiyaar tha saath hi kisi ko bhi naa marne ki baat bhi kahi usne par....uske liye roj ek aatma uske pass pohuch jana chahiye,,,,Jis din aatma nahi pahuchi wo bahar nikal aayega aur wo din bura hoga.....

itna bol Slayer wapas se guffa mein chala gaya.....aur Slayer ne baaki sab chod diya yaha ke logo pe...

Guffa mein Slayer apne naye powers pe dhyaan lagata unpe kaabu paane ki koshish kiya karta....aur saath hi waise hi aur powers dhundhta...roj koi mnaa koi aata aur khud ka aatma usko de deta....khud ko maar ke....

Chaliye Sofia ka dekh liya ab Viraj ka bhi dekh lete hai....to Viraj ki bhi kuch aisi hi kahani hai wo bhi unhi 10 parivaron mein se ek parivar ka tha....jinko Titan planet se nikala gaya tha....uske purvaj Orion planet pe aa gaye the...Sofia ka ussi ko apne pyaar mein faansna koi sanjog nahi tha ye sab Sofia ka socha samjha plan tha...par...kismat dekho...Viraj waha se bhagne mein kaamiyab ho gaya tha...

Chalo ye sab chodo...ab chalte hai Earth pe wapas...

Haa to Prateek yaani main subah utha aur chal diya taiyaar hoke dhyaan lagane....aaj kuch ajeeb nahi hua....sab normal hi tha...wahi fir 8 baje ke aas pass main utha aur jab utha to Bua wahi pe khadi thi....wo mere jaagne ka hi intezar kar rahi thi bas....

Bua - Chal jaldi kar bus aati hi hogi....

Main - Arre haa main chan....

Bua - wo sab waha ho jaayega....tu chup chap chal...wo mujhe lagbhag khinchte hue le gayi gate ke pass...aur turant hi wo Bus aayi....main aur Bua usme chad gaye....

Bua - Hmm tu room mein jaa fresh hoja main yaha dekhti hu....

Main - Room...par mujh....

Abhi pura bola bhi nahi tha ki koi aaya aur mera haath pakda usne aur Main ek room mein tha....room mein mere liye 1 naya kapde ka set rakha hua tha...main bhi iss baar wait naa karke jaldi se change kiya...aur abhi change kar ke ready hi hua tha ki ek jhatka laga aur fir darwaja khula...

Bua - Kya kitna late karega chal jadi...aaj sab bahut khush honge tujhe dekh ke waha pe....

Unhone mera haath pakda aur agle hi pal hum dono road pe the....bada hi alag jagah tha ye....ass pass bas ped hi dikh rahe the.....aur theek hamare saamne tha ek bada sa ghar....

Bua - Ye hai hamara ghar...

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Nevil singh

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Ab tak...

Prateek ko kuch pata chala tha unn shields ke baare mein....saath mein wo eagle....wo uske pass aaya tha par abhi tak uska kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha...raat ke waqt Prateek Poonam ke saath apne Dada dadi ke pass jaane ko maan jaata hai...Wahi yaha se bahut dur Slayer Dark world ke andheri gufayon mein baitha meditate kar raha tha....

Ab aage....

Chaliye Dark world mein chalte hai....Haa wahi jaha Slayer rahta hai.....

Yaha ki andheri guffaon mein se kisi ek guffa mein jaha pe Slayer tha...meditate kar raha tha waha pe.....aawajein ho rahi thi....khushphusane ki aawajein.....jaise log baatein kar rahe ho.....bilkul dhire dhire....par ye aawajein marre hue laogoo ki thi....yaani aatmaon ki jo Slayer ke ander the....aur ab unhe bhookh lagi thi.....matlab koi naya aatma chahiye tha unhe....

ye aawajhein bahut hi dhimme dimme badhne lagi.......tez....aur tez....fir ek dum se shant.....sab shant ho gaya...kyunki kisi ke pairon ki aawaj aane lagi thi....kisi ke chalne ki aawaj....ab ye kadmo ki awaj tez hone lagi....aur Slayer wale guffa ke saamne chali gayi....

Ek ek aankh wala insan jaisa dikhne wala hi koi jeev tha ye....sharir ka aakar bahhut bada tha....hathon mein uske ek talwar thi....

Usne apne ek aankh se Slayer ki oor dekha wo abhi tak apni aankhen band kiye hue tha...uss ek aankh waale ne jab ye dekha to uske saans mein saans aayi....aur fir wo ander gaya...apne haath me pade hue talwar kko ek baar dekha....fir apni aankhen band kari aur sayad kisi ko yaad kar raha ho wo....tabhi uske ek aankh se aansu ke bunde bahne lagi....fir usne tralwar ko apne pet mein gussa diya...par koi aawaj nahi ki usne....fir ussi talwar ko apne hi haanthon se ghumaa diya ussi tarah....aur fir uski pakad uske talwar se chutne lagi....aur dekhte hi dekhte wo....nicche jammin pe gir gaya......uska girna tha...ki uske sharir se ek roshani nikli ar wo sidhi Slayer ke ander chali gayi....aur wo body jo uss ek aankh wale jeev ki thi wo waha se gayab ho gayi saath mein wo talwar bhi....Slayer waise hi meditation mein baitha raha....

Chaliye dekhte hai wo lash kaha gayi....

Iss guffa se bahut dur ek basti thi....jaha ussi ek aankh wale jaise log raha karte the....aaj ussi basti walo ki baari thi ki unme se koi ek jaaye aur apni aatma ko saunp de Slayer ko.....

Dark world ke saare log aise hi bastiyan mein rahte the...aur sabhi basti ka ek head hota tha.....pahle ke halat kuch thik the abhi se....par iss Slauyer ke aane se hi tabahi mach gayi thi....naa jaane kitne hii logo ko usne ek hi din mein khatam kar diya tha....Wo to kuch aise log aa gaye the waha jinhone usse ladayi ladi aur lagbhag se usko hara diya tha.....aur wo Slayer waha se gayab ho gaya aur chup gaya kahi pe.....

AB isko kisi jwalamukhi ke fatne se pahle wala...bhukamp kaha jaa sakta hai.....jisse tabahi hui thi par utni nahi.....

Slayer Yaha iss Dark world mein hi kyun aaya tha iske piccche bhi ek wajah thi....wajah thi uski Maa....Sofia ne Slayer se kaafi baar iss jagah ka jikr kiya tha....bataya tha usko yaha ke baare mein yaha ke logo ke baare mein.....sayad yahi wajah thi ki Slayer ne yaha hi aane ka chunna...ek aur bhi wajah thi uski bhookh....

Slayer jo pit ke waha se bhaga tha wo bhagte bhagte ek khandahar mein pahucha....jaha usko kuch log dikhayi diye.....kuch jaane pahchane se log.....jinko usne sayad pahle dekha nahi tha kabhi par unke chahre kuch kuch pahchane hue lag rahe te......jab Slayer ne dhyaan diya to waha ki ek ladki ka chahera....bilkul uski Maa Sofia ki hi tarah dikhta ttha....Slayer ye dekh ke jhatka khaa gaya......

Wo unke paas jaane laga chip chip kar....aur jab unki oor dhyaan se dekhne llaga tab usko pata chala inn sab ki halat bahut kharab hai......Wo unn logo ko dekh hi raha tha ki poicche se kisi ne usko chua....jab Slayer picche mudda to waha wahi logo mein se ek tha jisse maar kha ke wo bhaga tha.....uss aadmi ne ek baar aas pass dekha jab koi nahi dikha to....

Wo aadmi Slayer ko apne saath le gaya....wahi pass mein ek chota sa ghar jaisa banna tha...Slayer ko wahi le gaya wo....

Waha pe ussi ne uski malham pati ki.....ab inn sab se sawal uthna to laazmi hai....

Slayer ne puch hi liya unse unke baare mein.....aur aisa jawab milla jiski ummid bhi nahi thi Slayer ko.....

Jawab aaya waha pe ek buddi se.....buddi dikhne mein bahut hi ajeeb thi.....usne ek pal ko bas ek pal ko hi to Slayer ko dekha aur usko pahchan gayi.....usne Slayer se Sofia ke baare mein puccha par....Slayer ne kuch nahi bataya.....aur jab usne nahi bataya to uss budiya ne apni kahani shurur kar di....

Budiya - Yahi issi jagah paida hui thi wo Sofia.....meri hi bahen thi wo.....apni sagii bahen......hamari Maa ek chudail thi....aur Pita devtaon mein se ek....par shakti nahi thi unme koi......saari shaktiyan jaa chukki thi....kuch bhi nahi tha unke pass....unki shadi....ko yaha ke logo ne manyata nahi di....dete bhi kaise....koi devta ki shadi kabhi kisi dayan se ho ye mumkin hi nahi tha yaha ke logo ke hissab se....Pita ji jo ki yaha apne purvajo mein se akele bacche the unko bandhi bana liya gaya....yaha ke kabilon ke sardaro ki taraf se.....

Maa jo pet se thi unko aise hi issi jungle mein chod diya gaya.....hum dono ko janam dene mein hi Maa ki maut ho gayi....jab sardaron ko ye pata chala to unhone humara dhyaan rakhne ke liye Papa ko bahar nikal diya....par Papa...unko kuch ho gaya tha ab....wo bas kisi tarah se badla llena chahte the iss pure planet se...par shakti thi nahi...tha to bas ladne ka tarika.....unhone humme wo tarika shikhaya...ek din unke techniques ka pata chal gaya yaha ke Vampire kabile walo ko....unhone Papa ko kharid liya...auur tab se hum gulam hai unke.....jo wo kahte hai hum wahi karte hai....jisko maarne bolo usko maar dete hai...humme apne liye 2waqt ka khana mil jaata hai....ye jisne tumhe maara wo bhai hai tumhara,....

Sofia yaha se bhag gayi thi..jab wo badi hui.....par uske dimmag mein bhi bas badle ki hi baatein ghumti rahti thi.....uska kuch bhi pata nahi tha humme...ek din uski kuch khabar milli thi par fir se gayab ho gayi.....

Slayer sab dhyaan se sun raha tha......wo ye jaan chuka tha ki yahi jagah hai jaha uski Maa ka janam hua tha....aur bhi apne Maaa aur uske parivar ke baare mein sab jaan chuka tha wo....unn logo ne Slayer ko rahne ke liye jagah diya....par khane ko kuch naa de sake kya hi dete kuch hota tab naa.....

Slayer ko waha pe ek kitab milli....ye wahi kitab thi The unknown worriors ki koi copy thi.....wo uss Budiya ke pass thi....uss kitab pe bahut kuch likha tha...puchne ppe pata chala wo kitab uss budhiya ki pita ki aakhiri nishani thi....Slayer wo kitab le liya....aur uss kitab mein likhi hui chizzo se....aur banne hue nakse ko dekhene laga samajhne ki koshish karne laga......

jyada waqt nahi laga samajhne mein....pahle se hi uske pass....uss planet ka ek naksha tha bas ussi ko aur uss kitab mein banne nakse ko dekhte hue usko kuch milla...unhi andheri pahadiyon mein....aur wo chal pada unn pahadiyon ki oor......Kuch din beet gaye the usko....aatma naa mille hue.....koi aur rasta nahi dikha to usne unhi logo ko jala dia....har ek ko...aur unhi aatma ko apne ander khinch liya....aur chal diya pahad ki oor.....

Pahad ke pass pahucha to waha pe bahut hi ghana jungle tha....aur Slayer ko jana tha unhi jungle ke biccho bich banne hue ek guffa mein....

Guffa mein uss kitab mein likhi gayi chizon ke anusar kuch aisa chippa hua tha jo bahut hi kimti tha......

Slayer badhta gaya badhta gaya aur thode bahut jangli jaanvaron ko maarte hue wo pahuch gaya waha se uss guffa mein...aur guffa mein jaate hi shuru kiya usne apna kaam.....

Kitab mein likha tha....guiffa ke darwaje ke theek nicche hai wo cheez.....jab Slayer ne ye shuru kiya aur uss chiz tak pahucha...to waha pe bas ek kankaal tha....haa ek kankaal pata nahi kiska....Slayer ne usko chua...aur uske ek haath pe...ek lomdi ka nishan ban gaya.....ab ye nishan kya tha kyun tha pata nahi.....tha Slayer ko.....

Jab wo nishan bana Slayer ke haath pe ro ek pal ke liye to khalbali hi mach gayi thi uske sharir mein....uske ander jjo bhi aatmayen the wo cheekhne lagi thi....aur dekhte hi dekhte....Slayer jammen pe tha...

Jab ye hua to kuch log....waha uss jungle mein jaldi se pahuche.....une se ek ke haath pe ek saanpm ka nishan tha.....usne ek baar Slayer ko dekha.....fir picche hat gaya.....aur jhuk gaya uske saamne.....

Slayer jo jameen pe lete hue tha....chilla raha tha usko ye sab dikh bhi nahi raha tha,.....wo to bas apne hi dard mein tha......

Wo log Slayer ko utha ke le gaye uss jagah se....

Slayer....2 din waha p waise hi behosh raha aur jab uttha to bhookh se pagal hua tha wo.....usne aas pass dekha ek aurat baithi thi....usne uske gardan mein kaat liya...aur wo aaurat wahi pe mar gayi...aur uski aatma Slayer ke ander chali gayi......Jab slayer ne aas pass aur dekhha to usko bas ek khali jhopdi hi dikhayi di....jisme sayad ek wo aurat aur ek slayer hi tha aur koi nahi....Slayer uss jhopdi se bahar nikla aur yaha waha dekha to usko apni ek aadmi milla jo aankhen band kiye hue ek pather pe baitha tha....Jab slayer ne uski sakal dekhi to wo aur chauk gaya....ye wahi tha...bilkul ussi ki tarah dikh raha tha wo jo hamesha aata tha Slayer....part aur Neelam ko maarne ke liye...jab wo school mein the....ye wahi tha jo har baar bach ke nikal jaata tha....

Slayer uske saamne jaa baitha aur usko dekhne laga....

Aadmi - Malik....to aapko hosh aa hi gaya......

Slayer chup raha aur usko dekhta raha....

Admi - Malik aapki Maa ne mujhe ye aadesh diya tha ki aapko aur aapke shathiyon ko main practice karata rahu....bas yahi wajah tha mere aapke pass aane ka....ab aap uss kabil ho gaye hai ki mujhe ab yaha se mukht karenge....ye shakti....ye jo mujhe taufe mein milli thi iskop wapas lele malik aur mujhe marne de....main jaanta hu meri biwiw ko maar diya hai aapne....

Slayer kuch nahi bol raha tha bas sun raha tha.....

uss aadmi ne apnae pith pe lage hue uske talwar ko nikala aur khud ka gala kaat diya....Slayer ne uski body ko chua aur uske dusre haath pe ban gayi..wo saanp ki nishani....saath hi uski aatma bhi ussi ke ander chali gayi....

Ab baari thi jwalamukhi ke fatne ki....Sab log abhi Dark world mein aaram se the....par ab waqt badalne wala tha....Slayer ne wapas se logo ko maaran shuru kar diya...aur iss had tak marra ki sabhi sardaron ko uske pass aana pada aur uske saamne ghutne daalne pade....wo sab usse har maan gaye aur uski gulami ko kabul kiya....

Slayer ki bas ek hi shart thi....usko aur kuch nahi chahiye tha wo bas ussi guffa mein rahne ko taiyaar tha saath hi kisi ko bhi naa marne ki baat bhi kahi usne par....uske liye roj ek aatma uske pass pohuch jana chahiye,,,,Jis din aatma nahi pahuchi wo bahar nikal aayega aur wo din bura hoga.....

itna bol Slayer wapas se guffa mein chala gaya.....aur Slayer ne baaki sab chod diya yaha ke logo pe...

Guffa mein Slayer apne naye powers pe dhyaan lagata unpe kaabu paane ki koshish kiya karta....aur saath hi waise hi aur powers dhundhta...roj koi mnaa koi aata aur khud ka aatma usko de deta....khud ko maar ke....

Chaliye Sofia ka dekh liya ab Viraj ka bhi dekh lete hai....to Viraj ki bhi kuch aisi hi kahani hai wo bhi unhi 10 parivaron mein se ek parivar ka tha....jinko Titan planet se nikala gaya tha....uske purvaj Orion planet pe aa gaye the...Sofia ka ussi ko apne pyaar mein faansna koi sanjog nahi tha ye sab Sofia ka socha samjha plan tha...par...kismat dekho...Viraj waha se bhagne mein kaamiyab ho gaya tha...

Chalo ye sab chodo...ab chalte hai Earth pe wapas...

Haa to Prateek yaani main subah utha aur chal diya taiyaar hoke dhyaan lagane....aaj kuch ajeeb nahi hua....sab normal hi tha...wahi fir 8 baje ke aas pass main utha aur jab utha to Bua wahi pe khadi thi....wo mere jaagne ka hi intezar kar rahi thi bas....

Bua - Chal jaldi kar bus aati hi hogi....

Main - Arre haa main chan....

Bua - wo sab waha ho jaayega....tu chup chap chal...wo mujhe lagbhag khinchte hue le gayi gate ke pass...aur turant hi wo Bus aayi....main aur Bua usme chad gaye....

Bua - Hmm tu room mein jaa fresh hoja main yaha dekhti hu....

Main - Room...par mujh....

Abhi pura bola bhi nahi tha ki koi aaya aur mera haath pakda usne aur Main ek room mein tha....room mein mere liye 1 naya kapde ka set rakha hua tha...main bhi iss baar wait naa karke jaldi se change kiya...aur abhi change kar ke ready hi hua tha ki ek jhatka laga aur fir darwaja khula...

Bua - Kya kitna late karega chal jadi...aaj sab bahut khush honge tujhe dekh ke waha pe....

Unhone mera haath pakda aur agle hi pal hum dono road pe the....bada hi alag jagah tha ye....ass pass bas ped hi dikh rahe the.....aur theek hamare saamne tha ek bada sa ghar....

Bua - Ye hai hamara ghar...

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