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Nikita aur Pankaj ne bahar jaake sabhi ko Pujari ji ki baat batayi ki wo chahte the ki sab waha se nikal jaaye aur Earth pe jaane ke liye taiyaar ho jaaye.......

Kuch ne unki baat manni aur kuch nahi nahi......yaha pe maamla vishwas ka tha.......ab kaun aisa hoga jo apne uss devta ko chod ke chala jaayega jiski puja wo kya uske bade bujurg bhi kar rahe ho......

Jo kuch log unki bat ko maan gaye wo sab apne apne ghar chale gaye aur apna apna samman ikkatha karne lag gaye......

Yaha pe mahaul kharab hone wala tha.......

Nikita aur Pankaj wapas se ander aa gaye......

Pujari ji - tumne unse kah diya......

Pankaj - hmm....

Pujari ji - ab hume taiyaari karni hogi.....

Madhu - ek baat batao main yaha aayi kaise......ye baat mujhe yaad kyun nahi aa rahi.....au.....

Pankaj - tum jyada socho mat Madhu dekho tumhare logo ko jarurat hai tumhari......

Madhu ko pata tha wo log kuch nahi sunne wale waise bhi wo kaha koi unki Rajkumari thi ye to bas kahne ki baat thi......to wo thodi der chup rahi.......

Pujari ji -Tum sab mere picche aaoge......iss mandir mein bahut se aise cheezin hai jo humko leke jaani hai.......wo aamant hai kuch logo ki......unko milni hi chahiye........Madhu tum unn darwajo ko khol dena jinki taraf main ishara karu.....

Pankaj - Darwaje acche se kholne aate hai isko......

Madhu - kya matlab......

Pujari ji - chalo mere picche aao.....waqt kam hai hamare pass.......

kuch kamro ke taraf Pujari ji ne ishara kiya aur wo saare kamre Madhu ne khol diye......aur unke ander Pujari ji akele gaye aur unko jo karna tha kar ke bahar aa gaye aur sab band kar diya......par unn kamro mein se ek kamra khali milla unko......

Wo kamra bhi important tha......jab unhone dhyaan se dekha to kamre mein pahle hi koi aaya tha aisa nishan milla unko........unhone apna sar peet liya......par abhi rukna sahi nahi tha......wo waha se bahar nikale......jin jin darwajo ko band karna tha wo saare band kar diye gaye......aur wo chal diye waha Mandir ke mukha dwar ke pass.......

Bahut saare log nahi aaye hue the waha pe........thoda rukne ke baare mein socha unn sab ne.......

Tabhi Old Owl aur Jwala waha pe aa gaye......Prateek ka pata unko chal gaya tha aur unko usne aadesh bhi de diya tha ki wo ab waha apne logo ka dhyaan rakhe jab tak Prateek khud unko naa bulata.......

Ye dono yaha pe bas ye batane ko aaye the ki wo mil gaya hai aur kaha par hai wo.......

Prateek ki khabar di inn dono ne ki wo Earth pe hi hai par thoda ajjeb laga usko dekh ke iss baar.......Ispe Pujari ji ne kaha.....

Pujari ji - ye ab aisa hi rahega.......kuch chizzen badal gayi hai......ab tum sabko bhi thoda badalna hoga.....Madhu tum kya uss darwaje ko band kar aaogi.....

Madhu ne ek baar to ajeeb sa muh banate hue unko dekha......abhi aisa lag raha tha jaise kitni important baat kar rahe the......aur ab :sigh: Wo waha se chali gayi darwaja band karne ko.....

Pujari ji - tum sab se bas ek hi baat kahunga......inn dono ki iss kahani mein inke bich deewar mat ban jaana......

Kisi ko ye baat saaf saaf samajh mein hi nahi aayi......sabhi ke aankhen bade ho gaye the.......Pujari ji ne aisa bomb hi phoda tha.....unhone sidha kah diya ki Prateek aur Madhu ki kahani mein wo bich mein naa jaaye.....kahne ko bahut se matlab ho sakte hai iske......par waha sabhi ke dimmag mein bas ek hi matlab aaya.....aur wo sare ke saare chauk gaye the.....

Nikita - par wo to Pankaj ke saa......

Pankaj jo bas aankhen badi karke dekh raha tha Pujari ji ko ki kaise unhone kah diya Madhu aur Prateek ki kahani......aur jab Nikita ke muh se apna naam sunna to aur uska matlab samjha to aankhen aur badi ho gayi.....thodi aur badi kar leta to aankhen nicche aa jaati.......

Pankaj - aee pagal ho kya.......Madhu aur main bas dost hai aur kuch nahi......dimmag hai yaa nahi tumme vampire.....

Nikita ko bhi bolte waqt laga tha wo jyada bol rahi hai par uske ander kuch aur hi chal raha tha wo bas confirm hona chahti thi.......par usne ye nahi socha hoga ye itna bhadak jaayega......

Nikita - Main to bas wo......ye vampire kya hai........naam hai mera......Nikita......wapas se aisa bola to....to....

Bua - chup raho dono.......Pujari ji.....aap kya wahi kah rahe hai jo main soch rahi hu.......

Pujari ji - hmm.....ye sab bahut purani baatein hai bas kuch logo ko hi iska pata hai.......Main sab bataunga tumko.....par naa ye jagah sahi hai aur naa hi waqt.....bas itna dhyaan rakhna unn dono ke bicch mein mat aa jaana....agar aaye to kya hoga ye main bhi nahi bata sakta......

Bua isko leke soch mein pad gayi aakhir aisa kya hai......

Thodi der mein jinko bhi jaana tha Earth pe wo sab Mandir ke pass aa gaye aur jo nahi jaana chahte the wo wahi pe rah gaye.......

Pujari ji ne unhi gufaon ka use kiya......waha se Earth pe jaane ke liye.......wahi Old Owl aur Jwala bhi madad kar rahe the uski.....

Unko pata nahi tha wo jaa kaha raahe hai......bas Guffa mein Pujari ji ke picche picche jaa rahe the wo sab......aur aisa karte karte wo seedha Leemi ke pass pahuch gaye......

Leemi ko uske guruji ne ek jagah pe rukne ko kaha tha.........bas rukne ko hi kaha tha wo bhi jaake uss jagah pe bas khadui thi.....saamne ek talab tha ussi ko dekh rahi thi ki aachanak se taalab ka thoda paani upar jaane laga......

Leemi ne jab ye dekha wo picche ho gayi......aur uske baad jo hua wo to aur bhi chaukane wala tha uske liye........upar aasmaan mein ek guffa ka darwaja khul gaya aur waha se kuch log nicche aane lage.......

Leemi bas wahi dekhe jaa rahi thi....samajh nahi aa raha tha kaise ye log yaha aa gaye....aur wo aa kaha se rahe hai......

Pujari ji aur baaki sab ke baad Bua , Nikita aur Pankaj aaye Old Owl aur Jwala apne jagah pe chale gaye the........

Leemi ne jab dekha ki waha pe Bua aur Nikita hai to unke pass chali gayi......wo unse baat karne hi wali thi ki Pujari ji ne usko dekha aur kaha......

Pujari ji - Humme apne aashram pe le chalo.....

Leemi - aapko kaise pata aashram hai hamara......

Pujari ji - Mujhe bas uske baare mein hi nahi balki tumhare baare mein bhi bahut kuch pata hai.......

Wo kuch bolta usse pahle waha oe khud Guru ji aa gaye aur uske saath hi K.Bua aur DB bhi aa gaye waha pe.......

K.Bua ne jab Bua aur Nikita ko dekha to wo thoda chauk gayi wo yaha kya kar rahi thi fir Madhu aur Pankaj bhi the waha......upar se ye to saare Nix the.....wo bhi saaman ke saath.......

K.Bua kuch bolti usse pahle Guruji bole.....

Guruji - dost.....tum yaha aaye ye dekh ke bahut khussi hui......

Pujari ji - waqt aa gaya tha uss jagah se palayan karne ka.....par dukh iss baat ka haiu sabhi ko nahi baccha paaya main......kuch log wahi rah gaye.....

DB - wo unki kismat hai......aur jo yaha aa gaye hai unki kismat alag hai......

Pujari ji ne jab DB ki baat sunni to usko gaur se dekhne lag gaye......

Guruji - ye Elf rajkumar hai.........

DB - Main tha......par mujhe mere Pita ji ne waha se nikal diya......

K.Bua - DB tum har baar aise kyun bolte ho.....Rajkumar tum hi ho.....aur aage jaake tumko hi waha sab dekhna hai to ye sab sochna band kar do.....

Pujari ji - hmm to ye hai wo Rajkumar......milke accha laga aapse......Dost maine kaha tha mere logo ke rahne ke liye ek jagah......

Guruji - ek jagah hai.....waha pe ek chota sa talab bhi hai jisse tum sab ko koi pareshani nahi hogi......par...

Pujari ji - Par kya.....waha pe koi dikkat hai kya......

Madhu - (Pankaj se) ye Rajkumar hai......lagta to nahi.....

Guruji - Wo jagah hamare hi aashram mein hai......aur yaha pe sirf jaaduyi jeev hi nahi balki insan bhi hote hai.....tumhare log kya ye......

Pujari ji - iski chinta mat karo.....hum sab dekh lenge....aur manage bhi kar lenge.....chalo ab dikhao kaha hai wo jagah.....

DB - Guru ji main chalta hu Mujhe kuch aur kaam hai....aap karo ye sab.....

Guruji ek baar usko akele mein Pujari ji se milwana chahte the.....taaki wo confirm kar sakke aakhir maajra kya hai...par ye jaa raha tha......Pahle Guru ji ne socha rok le par phir laga abhi to ye sab aye hai abhi ye sab karana sahi nahi hoga to unhone bhi jaane ko kah diya......

Pujari ji ne bhi baaki sab ko waha se jaane ko kah diya......Madhu rukna chahti thi par usko bhi jaane ko kah diya.....iss dauran K.Bua k ek ped ke pass ek parchayi dikhi thi.....K.Bua uski oor dekh rahi thi......aisa lag raha tha wo waha pe chipne aaya tha.....

K.Bua ne Bua ko bhi bataya aur Bua ne bhi usko dekha....par kuch soch ke K.Bua ko shant rahne ko kaha......

Madhu aur baaki sab jab school jaa rahe the uss waqt bhi bus pe wo tha.....piccha kar raha tha sabhi ka......K.Bua ne jab ye dekha to unse raha nahi gaya.....

K.Bua - Prateek ye chup chup ke kya dekh rahe ho......yaha nahi aa sakte kya.....

Prateek Bus pe tha....wo bas Madhu ko dekh raha tha....baaki kisi se koi khass matlab tha nahi usko.....haa wo ye jaan gaya tha ki ye sab uske dost hai relatives hai par abhi unse koi kaam nahi hai usko.....

K.Bua ke uska naam bulane se wo waha se unke pass chala gaya.....aakhir isse wo Madhu ko aur paas se jo dekh sakta tha......

K.Bua - Ye kya choro ki tarah piccha kar rahe ho.....kuch bolna hai......

Bua - Kavita.....chup raho......Prateek tum yaha kaise.....

Madhu ne bhi usko dekha.....par wo Pujari ji ke dwara waha se bhej diye jaane se thodi chiddi hui thi pahle se hi aur jab usne dekha ki Prateek bas usko hi dekh raha hai to gusse mein badbadate hue wo dusri taraf dekhne lag gayi...

(Hero ke respect mein)

Sab yaad aa gaya tha mujhko.....Main to waha se school mein jaana chahta tha dekhne ko ki aakhir iss duniya mein kya kya padhate hai....kya yaha bhi wahi sab padhaya jaata hai jo main apne shishyon ko padhaya karta tha yaa kuch aur.....par tabhi mujhe laga ki Madhu mere pass aa gayi hai.....isko kya kahu....Madhu aur mera jo connection tha bada hi ajeeb tha.......Jab bhi hum dono ek dusre se dur hote humme pata hota tha aur jab bhi kisi tarah pass aaa jaate to humko pata chal jaata tha......iss baar bhi wahi tha sayad wo iss jagah pe aa gayi thi.....Maine apni aakhen band kari aur uss jagah ko dekhne laga jaha pe wo thi abhi.....aur wo mujh mil gayi kuch logo ki bheed ke pass.......

Main wahi se chup ke usko dekhne laga......mann kar raha tha uske pass jaaun par......kaise jaata.....to bas dekhta raha usko......uske baad wo sab waha se nikle....aaj bhi jab uddas hoti hai ye to iske gaal ekdum gol jaise ho jate hai.....kaun kahega ye Golden power wali hai.....

Uss waqt Dhruv se ek sawal kiya maine......

Main - mujhe sab yaad aa gaya hai kya isko bhi sab yaad hai.....agar aisa hua tab to.......

Dhruv - Nahi......mujhe to aisa nahi lagta agar aisa hota to kya wo waha pe hoti abhi......wo aapko dhundh rahi hoti aapko maarne ke liye....

Dhruv ju baat sahi thi......agar usko pata hota to abhi main iss sharir mein to nahi hota.....par main phir bhi confirm karna chahta tha issi wajah se jab wo sab bus mein gaye to main bhi chala gaya.......saath hi usko bas dekhte rahna chahta tha......

Main to wahi kar bhi raha tha par pata nahi ye.......haa.....ye to K.Bua thi.....inhone mujhe dekha aur mujhe bula liya apne pass.......ab waha jaa raha tha main aur thodi ghabrahat bhi ho rahi thi kahi usko sab yaad hua to wo kaise react karegi.....par jab main usko dekhte hue aage jaa raha tha to usne apni aankhen chotti karke mujhe dekha aur aise dekha jaise abhi ke abhi khaa jaayegi.....par uske baad aage dekhne lagi....matlab ye saaf hai usko kuch yaad nahi hai.....par phir bhi main uske ekdum se pass nahi jaa sakta......Main usse utna dur tha jitna mujhe hona chahiye tha aur wahi se K.Bua ko dekha.....aur kaha....

Main - Wo main bhi jaa raha tha yaha se to aap sab mil gaye......

Bua - Kavita usko wahi rahne do.....tum ye batao DB ka kya hua....

K.Bua - kya hua......ye saare namune hai......usne pata nahi Guruji se kya bol diya hai wo pareshan ho gaye hai.....Main soch rahi thi usk apne dost ke yaha se nikal ke kahi aur kara du.....

Bua - par hua kya.....

K.Bua - pahle khana nahi khaa raha tha baatein nahi kar raha tha.....ab pata nahi kya hua hai usko......wo din bhar badbad karte rahtaa hai waha pe.....

Mere kaano mein unko aawajein to aa rahi thi par koi khaas asar nahi ho raha tha uska.....main to bas Madhu ko dekh raha tha.....tabhi bus rukkki......aur bus mein ek ajeeb sa banda aa gaya.....isko bhi dekha tha maine pahle.....ye to wahi tha jo Pankaj ke saath rahta tha.....

Wo Bus pe Pankaj ko hi dhundhte hue aaya tha....aur yaha waha dekh raha tha......tabhi uski nazar Pankaj pe padi.....aur wo uske taraf jaane laga.....

Par wo mera dhyaan khinch raha tha apni tarf......wo baakiyon ki tarah aam sa to nahi lag raha tha......

Leader - Pankaj tum yaha ghum rahe ho.....main tumhare ghar pe gaya tha waha talla laga hua tha tumhari padosi ne bataya tum theek ho gaye hi......

Madhu jo Pankaj ke bagal mein baithi hui thi....wo usko dekhne lagi.....Nikita Pankaj ke picche wali seat pe thi.....

Pankaj - arre aap......aap wapas aa gaye....aapse mujhe baat karni thi.....

Leader ne aas pass dekha....wo thoda sa chauk gaya ki pichle baar banda ek dum se akela tha aur iss baar toli mein wapas aa gaya.....

Wo Madhu ki taraf bhi dekh raha tha.....thoda gaur se.....jaise pahchanne ki koshish kar raha ho......

Pankaj - Ye ye meri dost hai Nix rajkumari Madhu......aur ye hai leader......fum......

Pankaj bas bol hi deta agar uss waqt Leader ne baat naa badli hoti.....

Leader - Nix......to aap Nix rajkumari hai.....

Itna bolne ke baad Pankaj ko dekhne lage wo.....jisse Pankaj ko apni galti samajh aa gayi.....

Abhi bus jaa hi rahi thi ke kuch aawajein mere kaano mein aayi.....ye koi aam aawaj nahi thi.......ye ek khass kisam ka kidda hai.....jo hamare yaha hi milta tha bas.....inn insano ke duniya mein ye kida.....ye kaise mumkin hai....yaha pe to isne tabahi macha rakhi hogi......

Main uss kidde ke baare mein sochne laga......wo bahut khatarnaak tha iss jagah ke liye....yaha ye sab aapas mein jaan pahchan bana rahe the......

Raat ke waqt.....

Hum sab school mein the.....Leader ko Pankaj se baat karni thi par Pankaj ne kaha ki wo kal hi ho paayegi Leader ne bhi aas pass ke logo ko dekha aur issi mein bhalayi samjhi aur wo chala gaya.....par kal aayega ye bhi kah gaya......

Raat mein ghar ke pass aaj bhi wahi saaya mandra raha tha.....wo bats.......aaj bhi DIdi ke room ke pass chal rahe the wo......Chachi aur Dadi inse pareshan the......unhone iss baare mein Chacha aur Dada ji ko bhi bataya par unki samajh mein bhi kuch nahi aaya.....upar se jab tak suraksha kawach thi tab tak to wo aa nahi sakte the ander....to unhone isko abhi bas aise hi rahne dene ko kaha......

Lekin aaj raat sab waisa hi nahi rahne wala tha......

Bahut waqt pahle ki baat hai......ek lootera hua karta tha.....uski bas ek beti hi thi.......usne usko apne saare paitre sikhaye the taaki uske baad wo sab sambhal sake......

uss Lootere ko kisi ne bahut berahmi se maar diya tha......aur uske baad uski beti ko bhi chod diya tha......ye wo tha jisse uski beti ek waqt pyar kiya karti thi.....bahut jyada pyaar....itna ki puccho mat.....par milla kya dhokha.......par yaha pe bahut si aur bhi cheezein hui thi....iss kahani ko vistar se janna hoga ......

Kahani Khooni ghudsawaron ki raani ki.......

ye kahani iss jagah ki nahi th....yaha se bahut dur ek planet hua karta tha wo pramukh planets mein to nahi aaya karta tha par uska bahut asar tha inn pramukh planets pe......ussi planet pe ek ladki thi......kuch din pahle hi uske Pita ko maar diya gaya tha jo ki ek lootera tha......

Ladki ko ab pata lagana tha ki kisne uske pita ko maara hai aur usse badla bhi lena tha....aur uske liye wo apne pyaar ki madad leti hai........par usko kaha pata tha jisse wo pyaar karti hai wahi tha wo kamina jisne uske pita ko maara tha.....

Aur wo ye bhi nahi jaanti thi ki wo usko bhi maar dega........

Wo banda jaanta tha agar aise hi usne uss ladki ko maar diya to pura samuh bikhar jaayega.....aur phir kabhi ek nahi ho paayega.....upar se usko maar denge wo alag......par agar usne usse shadi kar li aur phir usko maar ke isko kisi durghatna ka naam de diya to sab uske saath ho jaayenge......

Usne wahi kiya........1 saal ka intezr kiya aur usse shadi kar li.....shadi karne ke bad jab khooni ghudsawaron ki raani pregnent ho gayi.....to usne apne bache ke liye loot paat ka kaam thoda kam kar diya....usne apni kulhadi ko kahi rakh diya tha.....ye sab dekh ke uske pati ne uskoo maar diya....aur bahut berahmi se maara.....aur usko ek khayi mein fhen diya......

Par unn dino uss planet pe Orion ka ek jaadugar bhi maujood tha......wo ladki ussi ke pass aake girri thi......thodi hi to jaan bacchi hui thi usme.....

Ladki ne bas ek madad maangi usse.....ki usko badla lena hai......

Jadugar ne ladki ko dekha...aur uski madad karne ka wadda kiya par saath mein kuch maang bhi liya.....usne uska garbh maang liya.....jisme uska baccha pal raha tha.......

Ladki ne kaa kar diya....aur Jaadugar ne uske khooni ko badi berahmi se maar diya....par wapas aake uska garbh bhi usse nikal liya.....aur jaate jaate kah gaya........ye apni Maa ko khud dhundh hi lenge......

ek bahut purana tarika hai......kisi cheez ko sadda do aur usme kidde ugao.....haa kidde ugao.....jab wo cheez sadd jaayega to usse kidde nikalne lag jaayenge.....aur wo kidde bade ho jaayenge....

Uss Jadugar ne wahi tarika apnaya tha.....usne uss garbh ko ek bartan mein rakha aur sadne ke liye chod diya.....ussi se bahut se kidde nikle aur wo kidde bade hoke bats ban gaye.......uss jadugar ne khud ki sari shaktiyan unn bats mein se ek ko de di thi.....pata nahi kaun tha ye jaadugar aur kya chahta tha par issi se wo bats ki raani ka janam hua tha....aur phir wo unn sab ko uss jungle mein leke gayi thi jaha pe Jwala rahta tha......

Wo bat to mar gayi......par usne wo powers Rupal ko de diye the.....Rupal jo ki uski Maa thi.....

Aaj raaat ko jab Rupal didi so rahi thi to unko acchanak se pyaas lagne lagi....wo apne room se bahar gayi kyunki room mein paani nahi tha......aur wo kitchen ke pass gayi.....kitchen mein ek khidki thi jaha se unko baahar ka nazara dikha......ek saaya tha....wo ussi khidki ke bahar tha......Didi ko iss baare mein kuch nahi bataya gaya tha....wo usko dekh ke bahar ki oor chali gayi.....darwaja khola aur bahar.....aur to aur uss suraksha kawach se bhi bahar chali gayi....jab ye hua to wo saare bats......wo sab ke sab Didi ko gher liye.........Yaha Jwala jo abhi apne jagah pe tha usko pata chal gaya ki wo musibat mein hai.....usne turant Mujhe bataya aur saath hi wo bhi nikal gaya waha se jaane ko.......

Main jaana nahi chahta tha par iss waqt wo meri Didi thi aur mujhe dekhna to hoga hi.....to maine aankhen band kari aur seedha pahuch gaya ussi jagah pe.....

Saamne ka nazara bahut ajeeb tha.......ek ladki....uske charo taraf bats......wo sab ke sab apne muh khol ke chilla rahe the.......Isse pahle Main kuch karta.....wo bats......wo dhool ban gaye....aur Didi ke sareer pe jake lag gaye.....

Main - kya ye wahi hai jo main soch raha hu......yaha pe bhi ye sab hota hai......

Ye 2 shaktiyon ke milne ka sabse aasan tarika tha.....ek khud ko itna kamzor banna leta hai ki dusra usko apne ander lele.....aur phir wo dono ek ho jaate hai aur dono ki powers bahut badh jaati hai......

Main ye dekh hi raha tha ki wo waha se gaayab ho gayi......

Main yaha waha dekhne laga ki wo kaha gayi hai........par thodi hi der mein wo wahi par thi.....apne haathon mein 2 purane se kulhadi liye hue......

Ye aam kulhadi nahi the.......

Dhruv - ye khooni ghudsawaron ki raani hai.......aapne hi inko ye kulhadi bheji thi....

Main yahi soch raha tha,,,,,,,,hum immortals ko ye sab karne ki anumati nahi thi......par main inn niyamon ko nahi manta tha......mujhe jo accha lagta main wahi karta......uss waqt maine bahut se hatiyaar bahut se logo ko bheje the......kuch Orion pe.....kuch Titan pe.....aur kuch aise hrah jaha pe mujhe nazar rakhne mein mazzza aata tha.......ye unhi mein se ek tha......

wo Mere saamne wo kulhadi liye khadi thi.....

Main - Hmm maine hi diya tha isko......par uske baad se iskke saath sab galat hi hua tha.......tumhe yaad hai iske Pita ke saath.......niyam sahi the....hum immortals ko kabhi bhi tum jaise logo ki jindgi mein nahi aana chahiye tha......Maine niyam tode main to gaya hi tum sab bhi dekho khud ko......tumhare pass sharir nahi hai.....isne apna sab kuch kho diya tha......

Dhruv kuch nahi bola wo bas shant raha.....

Main unn purane dinno ke baare mein soch raha tha......

Rupal didi haathon mein kulhadi liye bas unko dekh rahi thi.......

Main - isko abhi tak shiddhi nahi milli hai Dhruv.......Mainn iski madad kar deta hu.....isse ye apni powers ko ache se samajh paayegi.....

Maine apna haath upar kiya.....aur uske sar pe rakhne hi waala tha ki waha pe darwaja khula aur ander se sab bahar aa gaye......inn sab mein aawaj hone lag gaya tha aur uske wajah se sab jaag gaye the aur jaise hi unhone dekha hum bahar hai wo bahar aa gaye......iss waqt unhone wo nahi dekha tha jo maine dekha tha......wo saaya Didi ke ander chala gaya tha usko nahi dekha unhone......

Next update......ek shaitan aur maara jaayega....par Nix kabile ke wo log jo abhhi bhi Strange world mein the......wo villains banke aane wale hai....... :sigh: ek aur baat wo Slayer ko villain mat samjho :sad: sab uske picche padenge

Next update kal sham tak post karta hu agar ye baarish ruk jaate to :redface:
Wah bhai yaha bhi ek jadugar hain bohot confusion hain bhai solution ka pata hi nahi.


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UPDATE - 91

"Rupal Prateek theek ho naa tum dono......."

"Maa wo saya......wo nahi hai yaha abhi.........Dono jaldi se aao.......ander"

Main unki oor dekhne laga wahi Didi to abhi bhi khud ko dekhe jaa rahi thi.......Chachi ne hum dono ko khincha ander aur turant ghar mein leke gaye.....aur darwaja band kar diya alag se......

Chachi - Maa inn dono ko kahi kuch.......

Dadi - chinta mat karo.......main dekhti hu..........tum jaao thoda paani leke aao.......Satya ek pin leke aao mere samman se......

Chachi aur Chacha ko jaisa kaha dadi ne wo waisa hi karne lag gaye......Didi abhi bhi bas khud ke haathon ko dekh rahi thi......aur wo kulhadi.....

Dadi - Rupal beta isko nicche rakh do.....tumhare hi hai ye rak do abhi......

Chachi itne mein paani leke aa gayi aur Chacha wo pin.....laal ragh ki thi pin ye......uske upar mein ek hare rang ka chota sa moti laga hua tha.......

Chachi ne bhi dekha Didi abhi bhi wo Kulhadi leke baithi hui hai......Chachi ne apna haath aage kiya ki wo unko leke unse dur karde......par bich mein hi Dadi ne unko rok diya......

Main - Agar Main hota to isko aise to naa chutta........bahut khatarnaak ho jaata ye phir......

Maine ye bola wo sab mujhe dekhne lag gaye siwaye Didi ke.....

Dadi ne Chachi se wo pin liya.......aur meri oor aayi.....

Dadi - Prateek apna haath aage karo.....aur iss glass ke upar rakhna......

Maine jab ye dekha mujhe hassi aa gayi.....Matlab ye hamare yaha bacche khelte the inn sab se......ye khoon ko paani mein milana phir wo mantra padhna agar aapko shrap diya gaya hai to wo blue ho jaayega agar aapke upar koi saya hai to wo kala ho jaayega.....aur bhi bahut se colour combinations......par ye bahut kamzoor tha mere liye bhi aur Didi ke liye bhi.......

Main - Dhruv ye kaise jagah pe aa gaye hai hum.......

Dhruv - Ab aap ye mujhse to naa puchiye......Madhu ji ne iss jagah ko chunna tha.....Main iss baare mein kuch bolne ke baare mein soch bhi nahi sakta.......kahi bhawishya mein unko mere iss kaam ka pata chala to abhi shareer nahi hai.....aage main nahi rahunga.....mujhe isme mat ghasitiye aap

Main - Tum darte bahut ho......

Dadi - Prateek Haath aage karo......Dekhne do Dadi ko koi pareshani to nahi hai......

Main (mushkurate hue) - Ye lo Dadi par Pin ko sidha hi chubhana hai......

Dadi ne meri baat sunni aur badi badi aankhen karke mujhe dekhne lagi......Phir unhone mera haath bina chuwe hue hi uspe pin chubhayi aur mera khoon ussi glass mein gira jisme Chachi paani leke aayi thi.....

Dadi - Ek aur glass leke aao......Rupal beta nicche rakh do isko......

Main - ye aise nahi rakhegi......rukiye......

Main apne jagah se utha aur unke pass gaya......unke kaan ke pass jaake maine unko bas itna kaha.......

Main - Khooni ghoodsawaron ki Rani

Wo jo abhi tak apni kulhadi ko dekh rahi thi.......unki gardan upar ki oor uthi.....unhone mujhe dekha......phir apni Kulhadi dekhi.....phir apne pet ko dekha......aur itne mein unke haath se wo kulhadi nicche gir gayi.....aur wo apne haath ko apne pet pe rakh ke rone lag gayi.......

Ye aashu bahut pahle ke the.......ab tak bahe nahi the......Utne mein Chachi waha aa gayi......Unhone Rupal didi ko aise rote hue dekha unko samajh nahi aaya kya hua hai.......wo paani nicche rakh ke unke pass jaane lagi to Dadi ne wapas se unko rokka......par Maine Dadi ko ishare se rukne ko kaha.....aur Chachi ko jaane dene ko kaha......unhone Chachi ko chod diya......

Chachi Didi ke pass gayi unko gale se laga liya.....Didi bhi jaise iss waqt thodi si emotional support ke liye hi rukki thi.....aur aise mein Maa sabse acchi hoti hai......Unhone bhi unko gale se laga liya aur rone lagi......Chacha ko bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha aakhir hua kya hai.....wo Mujhe dekh rahe the Dada ji aur Dadi ki tarah kyun ki maine hi unko kuch kaha jo wo waise rone lag gayi......

Chacha - Nidhi Rupal ko leke ander jaao......Mujhe isse baat karni hai kuch yaha.......

Chachi ne ek baar Chacha ki oor dekha aur phir mere......unko samajh nahi aaya ab ye kya shuru ho gaya hai......Chachi mujhe dekh rahi thi Maine bhi ishare se unko jaane ko kaha.....aur wo Rupal didi ko shahara dete hue unko room mein leke gayi.....

Chacha - Tumne kya kiya uske saath wo acchanak se rone kyun lagi.....

Main - Jo picche ka kuch baaki rah gaya tha usko bahar nikalna jaruri tha.....bas wahi kiya hai....aap chinta mat karo wo ekdum theek hai....

Dadi - Satya thoda rukko pahle Main ye dekh lu ye theek hai naa......iski baatein mujhe ajeeb lag rahi hai....

Unhone wo glass liya aur wo mantra padhne lagi......Main jaake sofe pe baith gaya.....mujhe pata tha kuch nahi nikalne wala.....

Aur kuch nahi hua......

Dadi phir mere pass aayi.....

Dadi - tumko kaise pata inn sab ke baare mein.......

Main - Kitabein.....main abhi jo kitab padh raha hu usme issi ke baare mein bataya hai......

Chacha - Tumne Rupal ko kya bola wo rone kyun lag gayi......

Main - Chachu wo darasal jab mein bahar aaya tha naa tabhi koi saya tha jo unko ghere hue tha.....sayad ussi se dar ke shock mein chali gayi hogi aur ab......

Meri baat sunke Dadi turant khadi hui aur glass aur pin leke room mein jaane lagi....

Main - Unko kuch nahi hua hai Dadi main jaanta hu aap chinta mat karo.....thodi der mein wo theek ho jaayegi......Chalo Main chalta hu yaha se......

Maine Portal khola wo bhi ghar ke ander aur waha se seedha apne room mein......

Sabhi ne jab ye dekha unka muh khula ka khula rah gaya tha.......Dadi ne aur Chachi ne bahut shaktishali kawach banaya tha ye mumkin hi nahi tha ki koi portal ghar ke ander se banne yaa khulle....

Wo kuch karte iss baare mein usse pahle ander se Chachi ne aawaj di.......

Chachi - Arre dekho naa ye kya bol rahi hai.....aur chup hi nahi ho rahi ye.......

Sab ander gaye to Chachi ne sabse pahle Dada aur Chacha ko bahar jaane ko kaha.....aur darwaja band kar diya......

Dadi - kya hua.....kya bol rahi hai.....

Chachi - Maa mujhe kuch sahi nahi lag raha hai ye bol rahi hai.......

Dadi - haa kya bol rahi hail.....

Chachi - Bol rahi hai iska baccha maar gaya......

Dadi - Kya.....

Chachi - Maa kahi uss saaye ki wajah se to......ye theek ho jaayegi naa.....

Dadi - isko pahle to bed pe letao......

Chachi ne waisa hi kiya......Dadi tab tak waha nicche ek paper pe apne khoon se kuch bana rahi thi......uss pin ki madad se......

Main apne room mein aa to gaya tha par pata tha waha pe sab sahi nahi hoga......Didi ko bahut waqt chahiye inn sab se nikalne mein aur aise mein sab unko galat hi samjhenge.....unko kuch to chahiye ki wo dhyaan bhatka sakke apna.....Maine wapas se ek chota sa portal khola....aur wo bhi uss room mein jaha pe abhi unko rakha gaya tha......Dadi ke kahne pe Chachi Didi ke kapde nikal rahi thi.....

Main - Ye pata nahi kya kya kar rahe hai iske saath.......

Maine apna haath aage kiya......ek kone mein ek painting lagi hui thi usko pahle gira diya.....jiske baad unn dono ka hi dhyaan uss oor chala gaya.....a.ur phir Portal ko sidha Didi ke sar ke pass khola.....apna haath unke sar pr rakha.....aur mujhe jo karna tha maine kar diya.....ek gahri neend jisme unko wo sab yaad aane wala tha....jo bhi unke saath hua tha.....uske baad phir iss life mein bhi ab tak jo hua tha wo bhi....aur aaj jo hua wo....aur uske baad dheere dheere wo picche ki yaad dhundhli ho jaati bas luch baatein yaad rahne wali thi jaise mein wo bats se unka kuch to relation hai wo aur wo kulhadi ko control karna......

Ye sab jyada waqt nahi laga mujhe karte hue.....yaha unki aakhen band hui maine portal band kar diya aur aaram se baith gaya apne room mein.....par ye aaram kaha rahne wala tha.....

Meri Madhu paas mein hai....aur main baitha hua tha yaha...

Dekhne to jaa hi sakta tha naa usko......

Maine apni aakhen band kari aur usko dhundhne laga.....par wo milti usse pahle kuch aur mil gaya mujhe.......ek taikhana.......aur waha pe kuch to tha jo ajeeb tha.......

Main - Dhruv ye taikhana kaha hai iss school mein......

Dhruv - talab ke pass tha sayad.....acche se yaad nahi mujhe......haa par waha pe jaane se manna karte the sabko......aap kyun puch rahe ho......

Main - Uss jagah pe kuch hai Dhruv......Mujhe uss jagah jaana hoga.......

Maine uss jagah ka pata lagaya aur waha ke liye portal khola aur waha pahuch gaya.......wo koi aam jagah nahi tha......dreams ke through baatein kari jaa sakti thi uss jagah se.......par ye cheez yaha honi hi nahi chahiye thi......

Maine usko chuwa......aur tabhi mujhe sab pata chala uske baare mein.......iske through kuch logo ko training di jaa rahi thi.......jab acche se dekha to unn logo mein mere iss waqt ke Maa Papa bhi the......

Immortals ki duniya mein aisa nahi tha.....waha hamare Mata Pita nahi hote the.....humko banaya jaata tha.......yaa hum ban jaate the......sirf ek hi thi uss waqt.......jiske Maa Papa the......

Madhu....Madhu hi bas aisi immortal thi jo paida hui thi.......aur golden power uske pass hai iski wajah issi ko manna jaata tha......

Maine waha pe jo jo cheez thi sabhi ko acche se dekha......waha pe jamin se karib 200 feet nicche chuppaya hua tha wo cheez jo inn sab ke picche tha......upar mein bas ek yantra laga tha jo uss chizz ke effect ko banaye rakhti thi.......

Main pahle to apne asal ke size matlab immortals ke size mein aaya aur apna haath sidha jammin ke ander de marra......aur bas niche jaata raha......par mera haath waha tak thodi naa pahuch sakta tha......

Main bhi kitna buddhu ho gaya tha iss insani sareer mein aake......wo cheez khud mere pass aa sakti thi aur main uske liye mehnat kar raha tha.......

Mujhe uss cheez ke baare mein pata tha.....aur ye bhi wo kaha par hai......maine inn sab ko apne dimmag mein rakha aur aankhen band karke usko apne pass aane ka wait karne laga.....

Ye ab bhi kaam karti hai.......bas humko sab pata hona chahiye ki wo kaha hai aur kaisa hai.....

Mere haath mein ek pather tha hare rang ka.........uske upar kuch aakritiyan banni hui thi......

Maine usko acche se dekha......uske upar dark world likha hua tha.........aur ye bhasa Orion ki thi.....jadugaron ki bhasa......

Main - Dhruv iska source Dark world mein hai......uss jagah ke baare mein bhi jaante ho kya kuch.......

Dhruv - wo jagah yaha se thodi hi duri pe hai......aap waha jaa sakte hai.....

Maine Pather ko apne jeb mein rakha aur kuch sochte hue waha naa jaane ka mann bana liya.....aur apne room mein wapas chala gaya......

Next morning

Main aaram se utha.......karib 5 baje hue the......

Dhruv - aapko dhyaan lagana band nahi karna chahiye....aapka sarir kamzor......

Main - Tum to mujhe mat hi batao....shareer bhi nahi hai tumhara......waise shareer se yaad aaya......Maine tumse wadda kiya hai naa sayad ek shareer dunga tumko.....

Dhruv - Haa par iski koi jarurat nahi hai......aap....

Main - Main tumhara master hu......maine wada kiya hai to dunga bhi......abhi chalo kuch logo se mil aate hai......Tumko pata hai ye Madhu kaha pe hogi.....subah usko dekh ke shuru karunga to din accha jaayega......

Dhruv - Wo kaha hai ye mujhe nahi pata hai.....

Main - Kisi kaam ke nahi ho tum......

Maine apni aakhen band kari.....aur aas pass ke energies ko observe karne laga......the kuch jo bahut bright the,,,,,,par adhiktar bekkar se hi the.....yahi koi accha jaadu gar ban jaaye to bahut hai.......phir mujhe meri wali ki energy dikhi.....aur saath mein ek jhatka bhi laga.......

Golden power sala mera dusman banna baitha hua tha.....agar ye Madhu mein nahi hoti to aaj koi pareshani hi nahi thi......

Par ye bhi sach hai ye nahi hoti to main pata nahi kaha hota......

Khair ye picche jaana sahi nahi hai......Main apne room se nikla aur uss jagah chala gaya jaha se main usko dekh sakta tha.....

Ped ke picche chupp ke main usko deekh raha tha ye bhi pata nahi tha chuppa kis liye hu main......aur main bas dekhta hi raha usko......wo to sayad thodi der baad waha pe wo....Nikita aa gayi aur mujhe picche se chua tab mera dhyaan uspe se hatta......

Nikita - tum aaj aaye nah waha.......dhyaan lagane ko......

Main - Wo.....arre jaaw naa main aa jaaunga thodi der mein.....

Ab pata nahi kaise par sayad uske dhyaan se uthne ka waqt ho gaya tha to usne mujhe dekh liya.......par abhi sayad dhyaan se utthi thi iss wajah se koi gussa nahi dikha uske chahre pe......wo bas uthi......aur waha pe baithe Pankaj ko.....jo sayad so gaya tha......usko jagaya......aur uska haath......haath pakad ke leke gayi wo..........iske haath kaat dunga main.......

Itna gussa uss waqt aaya tha jab wo sab hua tha.........aur aaj bhi kuch kuch waisa hi hai.....koi wapas se hamare bich mein aa raha tha........uss waqt maine isko serious nahi liya tha.....iss baar nahi......iss Pankaj ko.....isko samjhana hoga......

Nikita mujhe dekh rahi thi......

Nikita - Tum theek ho naa.....ye chahra aisa kyun hua jaa raha hai tumhara.......

Main - Main theek hu........par ye nahi bacchega......isko,,,,,chodunga nahi main......

(Nikita ke respect mein)

Ye Prateek pata nahi kaha chala gaya.....aur mujhe isko dhundhne ko bhej diya :sigh:

Yaha waha dekhne pe ye mujhe ek ped ke pass milla jaha se ye wo Madhu ko dekh raha tha.......mujhe Pujari ji ki baat yaad aa gayi.....

Matlab inn dono ka sach mein kuch to hai......

Maine socha isko thoda pareshan karu.....par phir wahi Pujari ji ki baat inke bicch nahi jaana hai.....aur subah to kharab karni nahi thi mujhe......

Main iske picche gayi.....aur usko bola aaye kyun nahi.....

par itne mein Madhu uthh gayi waha pe.....waha pe waise wo pankaj bhi tha......main bhi soch rahi thi ab yahi pe aake dhyaan lagaya karu.....accha hoga ye......aur sayad uske baad ye namuna Prateek ko bhi mauka mil jaaye......Matlab main to madad kar dungi inki.....

Par ye......ye ek number ka gaddha hai.....

Ye Pankaj ke baare mein pata nahi kya sochne lag gaya hai......usko maarne ki baat kar raha hai......

Haa manna maine bhi socha tha......par Pankaj waisa thodi hai.......wo to accha hai......mujhe isko rokna hi hoga.....

Main - Prateek wo bas dost hai......

Prateek - Pahle wo bhi dost hi tha......aur phir......

Main - kiski baat kar rahe ho tum......

Prateek - kisi ki nahi.....iss baar aisa nahi hone dunga main.......

Main - arre pucch to lo Madhu se......wo dost hai kya hai.......

Apni baat manwane ke liye ek aur card khel diya maine.......

Main - uss waqt bhi puccha tha kya tumne.......

Prateek mere iss baat pe pahle to bahut gussa ho gaya par phir sochne laga.......Mujhe samajh aa gaya main ek dum sahi line pe hu........

Main - Agar uss waqt tumne pucha hota to sayad.....wo sab nahi hua hota.....

Prateek - hmm tum sahi kah rahi ho......aeee tum ye sab kaise jaanti ho.......mere saath bluff kar rahi ho tum......

Main - Arre nahi main to bas uss masoom ko tumse baccha rahi hu.....tum usko kuch kar doge aur baat bigad gayi to.......

Prateek thodi der sayad kuch sochne laga.......aur uske baad usne jo kaha......Main khush ho gayi........

Prateek - Tum ek kaam karo....pahle to uss ladke se puccho ki uske mann mein kya hai Madhu ko leke.......aur mujhe batao......uske baad agar kuch galat laga mujhe tab main Madhu se baat karunga......

Mujhe laga tha ye Madhu se baat kar lega aur Pankaj ko kuch nahi hoga....par yaha to bonus tha......

Main - haa Main ye jarur karungi......aaj khane ke baad ispe kaam shuru karungi.....

Isko yahi tak rakhte hai......next update mein Pankaj aur Leader pe hamla hoga......aur usme Madhu unko bachane aayegi......

 
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