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Prateek ek haath se apne gaal ko pakde hua tha aur uske dusre haath ko uski Bua ne pakda hua tha aur usko ghar ke ander leke jaa rahi thi.....

Gharwale pahle se hi thode pareshan the......unn sab ko achanak se bulla liya gaya tha Poonam Bua ke dwara......aur puchne pe kuch bataya bhi nahi unhone.....bas ye kaha ki Prateek ko to aane do....jab wo aayega to sabko ek saath batayegi.....

Abhi jab wo aaya to uske saath ghar mein ek energy ball bhi aake ghum ke gaya....wo log iss wajah se aur bhi chauk gaye.....wo energy ball ghar ke suraksha kawach ke ander aa gaya tha....wo bhi aaram se....

Wo sab ussi ko to dekhne ke liye bahar ki oor jaa rahe the aur unko Prateek dikh gaya.....Poonam Bua uska haath pakad ke usko unki taraf hi leke aa rahi thi......

Aur wo energy balls abhi bhi Prateek ke charo taraf ghoom rahi thi...

Nikita - Rupal didi ye.....ye kaisi chizz hai....aur ye uske charo taraf aise ghoom kyun rahi hai.....

Rupal - Pata nahi Nikita.....Maine bhi isko aaj hi dekha hai....aur mujhe yaad nahi aa raha iss jaisi chizz ke baare mein kabhi padha ho Maine......Tunne wo dekha kya.....

Nikita - Kya....

Rupal - Usko dekh uska haath kaha hai.....lagta hai aaj phir se :lol: kutta gaya ye.....

Nikita - :lol: arre haa inn golo ke dekhne ke wajah se meri nazar uske gaalon pe gayi hi nahi....

Chachi - Maa ye kya hai....ye ghere ke ander aa gaya aur humme usko binna dekhe pata bhi nahi chala...

Dadi - Main wahi soch rahi hu bahu......iss chizz ke baare mein sayad kisi se suna tha maine.....par mujhe yaad nahi aa raha...

Ye sab yaha apni pani baatein kar rahe the wahi Prateek ko leke pahuch gayi thi Poonam Bua ghar darwaje pe.....ab sab wahi pe khade the to unhone kuch kaha nahi bas unko dekhti rahi.....lekin wo sab to apne mein hi lage hue the darwaja gher ke.....

Poonam Bua- Aap log humme ander aane denge bhi yaa nahi.....darwaje pe kyun khade ho saare.....

Gussa hone ki wajah to kaafi thi unki jaise ki wo puri baat jaan nahi paayi Prateek se.....kyun ki ye sab ke sab darwaje pe aa gaye the.....dusri ye ki wo dono energy balls.....unko Prateek ke aise chakkar kaatte hue dekh unko aur gussa aa raha tha kyunki wo bhi ek wajah the baat puri naa hone ka.....par gussa nikala unhone baaki sab pe jo darwaje pe khade hue the.....

Bua ne jor se apni baat kahi.....aur unki baatein sunne ke baad saare log ekdum se unke gusse se laal chahre ko dekhne lag gaye.....kisi ne bhi jyada kuch puchne ka socha hi nahi kyunki lagbhag saare hi unke gusse ko jaante the.....bas phir kya.....

Saare ke saare ander jaane lag gaye par Bua ke picche pahle unko aur Prateek ko ander jaane ki jagah di unhone.....uske baad hi baaki ke saare ander jaane lage the....

Abhi bhi wo saare unn do energy balls ko hi dekh rahe the...aur janne ki koshish kar rahe the aakhir wo hai kya.....

DB aur Leader dono ander aaye to the par bas jaake Pujari ji ke pass khade ho gaye the.....ek unme se apni beti ko dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha ki ab wo usko sab bata sakta hai......dusra pujari ji se baatein kar raha tha....

Jaise hi hum ander gaye aur darwaja band hua.....ander aur jyada roshani phail gayi......aur uske baad jo hua usko dekh ke sab hairaan the.....kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya bole kaise bole.....bas aankhen faadein dekhe jaa rahe the.....

Kisi ko bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.....yaa yun kaho ki yakkin hi nahi ho raha tha ki abhi jo wo dekh rahe hai wo sab sach hai yaa koi sapna......

Kisi ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki kuch kare......ek darr tha unke ander agar ye sapna hua aur maine kuch kiya to kahi ye tut naa jaaye.....

Ye haal gharwalo ka tha.....baaki jo alag se the jaise Nikita, Madhu, Pujari ji, Leader aur DB ye bas dekh rahe the.....kabhi unn dono ko to kabhi baakiyon ko jo ekdum se murat ki tarah ban gaye the.....

K.bua baakiyon ki tarah nahi thi....wo baharwali hoke bhi gharwalo ke jaise hi thi.....

Madhu se tab raha nahi gaya jab usne dekha Daksh ke aankhen ekdum se aashuon se lablabba gayi hai.....tab usne inn sab ke bich bolna shuru kiya.....

Madhu - Ye dono kaun hai.....aur aap sab....

Ab wo bol rahi thi to Nikita ne bhi uski baat ko dohraya......par uske baad bhi koi khass asar nahi pada tha....

"Bhaiya...kaise ho aap"

Ye sabd jaise hi Daksh Mama ke kaano mein pade.....jo aanshu abhi tak aankhon mein fansse hue the.....unko jaise rasta mil gaya.....honth chal nahi paa rahe the.....kaanp se rahe the.....kisi tarah khud ko sambhalte hue.....

Daksh - Neelam ye sach......sach mein tu hi hai.....

"Haa Bhaiya......Main hi hu.....aap kya bhul gaye mujhe....haa...."

P.Bua - Paarth.....

"Poonam....."

P.Bua - Maa.....aapne sunna.....Papa.....dekha aapne.....Bhaiya dekho....ye....ye Parth hai....hamara Parth...

Dadi - Haa....Poonam....haa ye...ye Parth hi hai.....

Khud ko bahut sambhalne ke baad kaha tha ye Dadi ne......aur itna kahne ke baad aage badhi ki ek baar apne bete ko chu sakke......par wo mumkin nahi tha.....

Ye bhi kisi sazza se kam nahi lagta.....aap kisi se bahut arson baad mile wo bhi tab jab aapko koi ummid hi nahi thi ki mil sakenge....aur jab mille to bas ek dusre ko dekh bhar hi sakte hai aur kuch nahi.....bas dekhna aur baatein karna....

Dada ji bhi ro rahe the par uss tarah nahi theek wahi haal Chacha ji ka tha......Par bua, Chachi aur Dadi ka haal alag sa tha....

Aisa hota hai aksar dekha jaata hai ye.....Bhai Bhai ke bich ka lagav Baap Bete ke bich ka lagav dikhai nahi deta agar hum Bhai bahen ke bich ka yaa Maa bete ke bich ka lagav dekhe.....par wo hota hai....aisa nahi ki ye hota hi nahi hai....

Neelam aur Daksh mama ka bhi kuch aisa hi chal raha tha.....Neelam ki jo aakriti banni hui thi usme saaf saaf dikhai de raha tha ki uske aankhon se aanshu nikal rahe hai.....par Daksh unko ponch nahi paa raha tha....

K.Bua ke bhi aashu aa rahe the par wo waha se kuch dur chali gayi thi.....aur saath mein Madhu aur Nikita ko bhi leke chali gayi thi.....khud se nahi unko sawal karne the iss wajah se wo dono gaye the.....

Jab unhone dekha Prateek bas aise hi khada hai.....to unko laga sayad isko pata nahi ki ye kaun hai.....jab ki unhone khud hi dekha tha baaki sab Paarth aur Neelam ka naam le rahe hai..

K.Bua - Prateek.....ye tumhare Maa Papa hai.....jaao millo unse.....

K.bua ki baaton ne jaise baakiyon ko jagga diya......unn logo ne to phir bhi waqt bitaya tha unn dono ke sath par Prateek ne.....usne kaha waqt bitaya tha......chota sa tha.....sayad yaad bhi naa ho usko ki wo dono kaun hai.....

Poonam Bua uth ke gayi Prateek ke pass aur usko Paarth ke saamne leke aayi....

Aisa bilkul nahi tha ki Prateek ko inn sab se koi matlab hi nahi tha....matlab tha bahut matlab tha....tabhi to uske aankhon mein aanshu the.....wo baakiyon ko khush dekh ke khush ho raha tha.....

P.Bua - Prateek ye.....ye tumhare Papa hai.....Parth ye....ye Prateek hai tumhara aur Neelam ka beta.....

Parth - Hmm humme pata hai.....yahi to humme yaha leke aaya hai....

Prateek ne nahi socha tha ki Parth kuch aisa kah dega.....ab usko sab kuch batana hoga sabhi ko....

Jab sabne ye sunna to sab ke sab Prateek ko hi dekhne lag gaye....jaise intezaar mein ho ki wo kab kuch kahega......

Maa samajh jaati hai apne baccho ki pareshani.....Ye sacch hi hai....

Jab wo kuch nahi bol paa raha tha to Neelam uske pass aa gayi....

Neelam - inn sab ke baare mein kabhi aur baatein kar lena.....abhi hum aaye hai to hume tumko dekhne do.....

Neelam ne apna haath badhaya par aadhe mein hi rukk gayi...usko laga jaise baaki log usko nahi chu paa rahe hai waise hi wo bhi apne bete ko nahi chu payegi....aur isse sayad prateek ko dukh ho....to usne bich mein hi haath mod liya apna.....ye kisi se bhi chuppa nahi magar....

Haa par isse ye hua ki Prateek ke upar se dhyaan hat gaya tha sabhi ka......

Madhu - Kitna bura hai ye.....

Nikita - haa samne hoke bhi.....chu nahi paana.....

Nikita jab ye bol rahi thi to uske ander bahut kuch chal raha tha.......ek to wo jal rahi thi abhi Prateek se......par usko ye dekh ke bura bhi lag raha tha Prateek aur uski Maa ke liye......wo ye bhi soch rahi thi ki kya kabhi uske saath bhi aisa kuch hoga......kya uske Maa Baap bhi kisi din.....

Itni saari baatein chal rahi thi uske dimmag mein ki ab chahera ekdum se sapat ho gaya tha.....koi expression hi nahi baccha tha.....ya ye kahe itne emotions ummad rahe the ki samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki kaise expressions dikhaye jaaye.....

Chachi ne jab ye dekha ki Neelam Prateek ko chu bhi nahi sakti to uska dhyaan batane ke liye unhone Rupal didi ko aage kar diya.....

Chachi - Neelam Paarth isko jaante ho kya tum dono.....

Sab samajh rahe the ki kya chal raha ha....kisi ne kuch aisa nahi socha ki wo Chachi Neelam ko apne bete ko dekhne bhi nahi de rahi hai....accche se milne bhi nahi de rahi hai....

Neelam - ye Rupal hai kya......itni badi ho gayi ye.....Paarth pichli baar to kitni choti thi naa ye.....

Paarth - Haa.....dekho ab kitni badi ho gayi hai.....

Abhi unhone aisa kaha hi tha ki unn dono ki aakritiyan thodi aur dhundhli si ho gayi......

Ye dhundhlapan pahle bhi aa raha tha.....aur sabko dikhai bhi de raha tha par sab unse milne mein itne khoye hue the ki dhyaan hi nahi diya kisi ne......par iss baar aisa nahi hua.....

Ye dhundhlapan ye bata raha tha ki unke pass waqt kam hai.....aatmaon ko baandh ke nahi rakha jaa sakta agar rakha jaaye to unki yaadein dhundhli hone lag jaayegi jaisi ki unki aakriti hoti jaa rahi hai.....aur kuch waqt baad unko khud ke baare mein pata nahi hoga aur naa kisi aur ke baare mein......wo bas khud ko uss jagah pe fansa hua paayenge aur kuch bhi karenge uss jagah se nikalne ke liye.....

Wo logo pe hamla karenge unko pareshan karenge taaki unko waha se jaane diya jaaye....iss dauran wo apno ko bhi nuksan pahucha dete hai......

Sabne unn dono ki aakriti ko dhundhla hote dekha aur uss baare mein puccha......

Parth - Hamara waqt khatam ho raha hai....

Dadi - Kya matlab waqt khatam ho raha hai......

Neelam - Humme jaana hoga....hum yaha par aakhiri baar sabse milne aaye the.....

Dadi - nahi Neelam abhi nahi.....abhi to hum mille bhi nahi....aur....aur maine....maine mafi bhi nahi maangi.....

Neelam - Apne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya jiski wajah se aapko maafi maangni pade....Prateek ka dhyaan rakhiyega....

Parth - Beta sabki baatein sunna aur......agar koi kabhi kabhi daant bhi de to naraz nahi ho jaana....

Neelam - aap sab apna khayal rakhna.....Bhaiya, Pankaj bacche Prateek ka dhyaan rakhna.....

Prateek jaanta tha.....wo unn dono ko yaha pe rok sakta hai par isse bas dard milne wala tha.....agar wo abhi rukk gaye to aage kabhi bhi.....kabhi bhi yaha se nahi jaa paayenge anant kaal ke liye issi jagah pe fanse rahenge wo....aur unki yaadein dhundhali ho jaayegi...

Sayad agar ye pahle wala Prateek hota to wo ye karne ke baare mein sochta.....par ab wo badal raha tha....aur usne uss panne ko chod aage badhne ke baare mein socha....haa par usko ek baat ka bura lag raha tha wo chahta tha thoda aur waqt mille sabko....par isme wo kuch nahi kar sakta tha...

Pujari ji - (dheere se) Madhu dekho ye ab jaane wale hai kya tum inhe rokna chahti ho....

Madhu sabhi ko aise dekh ke emotional ho chukki thi sochne ki kashamta usme thi par jyada nahi....

Usne bas haa mein sar hilla diya.....

Pujari ji - Jaao unn dono ko jaake chu aao...

Madhu ne nki baat sunni ek baar unki taraf dekha.....aur bas binna kuch bole aage badh gayi.....aur badhne ke baad Madhu ne Parth aur Neelam ko chu liya.....

Yaha Prateek bhi unko chu sakta tha....par wo iss wajah se darr raha tha agar usne aisa kuch kiya to uski dark energy unke ander naa chali jaaye.....

Wo dono energy ke form mein the.....yun samajh lo paani ab agar kala rang daal de unme chahe ek hi boond kyun naa wo unpe effect karenge.....

Dark power hai bhi distructive.....

Madhu ke saath aisa nahi hai....uski power creative hai.....chizzon ko bana sakti hai.....jab usne unn dono ko touch kiya.....wo jo dhundhlapan tha unme......wo khatam ho gaya aur saath hi saath dono ekdum se chamakne lag gaye.....

Ye kya hua waha pe bas do log samajh paa rahe the prateek aur Pujari ji......DB tak ko iss baare mein utna pata nahi tha......usko to ye bhi pata nahi tha ki Slayer ke sarir se ye aatmayein nikalne wali hai....

Prateek iss baat ko jaanta tha par wo ye karana nahi chahta tha.....usko nahi pata tha Madhu iske baare mein jaan ke aage kaise react karegi......

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Prateek ek haath se apne gaal ko pakde hua tha aur uske dusre haath ko uski Bua ne pakda hua tha aur usko ghar ke ander leke jaa rahi thi.....

Gharwale pahle se hi thode pareshan the......unn sab ko achanak se bulla liya gaya tha Poonam Bua ke dwara......aur puchne pe kuch bataya bhi nahi unhone.....bas ye kaha ki Prateek ko to aane do....jab wo aayega to sabko ek saath batayegi.....

Abhi jab wo aaya to uske saath ghar mein ek energy ball bhi aake ghum ke gaya....wo log iss wajah se aur bhi chauk gaye.....wo energy ball ghar ke suraksha kawach ke ander aa gaya tha....wo bhi aaram se....

Wo sab ussi ko to dekhne ke liye bahar ki oor jaa rahe the aur unko Prateek dikh gaya.....Poonam Bua uska haath pakad ke usko unki taraf hi leke aa rahi thi......

Aur wo energy balls abhi bhi Prateek ke charo taraf ghoom rahi thi...

Nikita - Rupal didi ye.....ye kaisi chizz hai....aur ye uske charo taraf aise ghoom kyun rahi hai.....

Rupal - Pata nahi Nikita.....Maine bhi isko aaj hi dekha hai....aur mujhe yaad nahi aa raha iss jaisi chizz ke baare mein kabhi padha ho Maine......Tunne wo dekha kya.....

Nikita - Kya....

Rupal - Usko dekh uska haath kaha hai.....lagta hai aaj phir se :lol: kutta gaya ye.....

Nikita - :lol: arre haa inn golo ke dekhne ke wajah se meri nazar uske gaalon pe gayi hi nahi....

Chachi - Maa ye kya hai....ye ghere ke ander aa gaya aur humme usko binna dekhe pata bhi nahi chala...

Dadi - Main wahi soch rahi hu bahu......iss chizz ke baare mein sayad kisi se suna tha maine.....par mujhe yaad nahi aa raha...

Ye sab yaha apni pani baatein kar rahe the wahi Prateek ko leke pahuch gayi thi Poonam Bua ghar darwaje pe.....ab sab wahi pe khade the to unhone kuch kaha nahi bas unko dekhti rahi.....lekin wo sab to apne mein hi lage hue the darwaja gher ke.....

Poonam Bua- Aap log humme ander aane denge bhi yaa nahi.....darwaje pe kyun khade ho saare.....

Gussa hone ki wajah to kaafi thi unki jaise ki wo puri baat jaan nahi paayi Prateek se.....kyun ki ye sab ke sab darwaje pe aa gaye the.....dusri ye ki wo dono energy balls.....unko Prateek ke aise chakkar kaatte hue dekh unko aur gussa aa raha tha kyunki wo bhi ek wajah the baat puri naa hone ka.....par gussa nikala unhone baaki sab pe jo darwaje pe khade hue the.....

Bua ne jor se apni baat kahi.....aur unki baatein sunne ke baad saare log ekdum se unke gusse se laal chahre ko dekhne lag gaye.....kisi ne bhi jyada kuch puchne ka socha hi nahi kyunki lagbhag saare hi unke gusse ko jaante the.....bas phir kya.....

Saare ke saare ander jaane lag gaye par Bua ke picche pahle unko aur Prateek ko ander jaane ki jagah di unhone.....uske baad hi baaki ke saare ander jaane lage the....

Abhi bhi wo saare unn do energy balls ko hi dekh rahe the...aur janne ki koshish kar rahe the aakhir wo hai kya.....

DB aur Leader dono ander aaye to the par bas jaake Pujari ji ke pass khade ho gaye the.....ek unme se apni beti ko dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha ki ab wo usko sab bata sakta hai......dusra pujari ji se baatein kar raha tha....

Jaise hi hum ander gaye aur darwaja band hua.....ander aur jyada roshani phail gayi......aur uske baad jo hua usko dekh ke sab hairaan the.....kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya bole kaise bole.....bas aankhen faadein dekhe jaa rahe the.....

Kisi ko bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.....yaa yun kaho ki yakkin hi nahi ho raha tha ki abhi jo wo dekh rahe hai wo sab sach hai yaa koi sapna......

Kisi ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki kuch kare......ek darr tha unke ander agar ye sapna hua aur maine kuch kiya to kahi ye tut naa jaaye.....

Ye haal gharwalo ka tha.....baaki jo alag se the jaise Nikita, Madhu, Pujari ji, Leader aur DB ye bas dekh rahe the.....kabhi unn dono ko to kabhi baakiyon ko jo ekdum se murat ki tarah ban gaye the.....

K.bua baakiyon ki tarah nahi thi....wo baharwali hoke bhi gharwalo ke jaise hi thi.....

Madhu se tab raha nahi gaya jab usne dekha Daksh ke aankhen ekdum se aashuon se lablabba gayi hai.....tab usne inn sab ke bich bolna shuru kiya.....

Madhu - Ye dono kaun hai.....aur aap sab....

Ab wo bol rahi thi to Nikita ne bhi uski baat ko dohraya......par uske baad bhi koi khass asar nahi pada tha....

"Bhaiya...kaise ho aap"

Ye sabd jaise hi Daksh Mama ke kaano mein pade.....jo aanshu abhi tak aankhon mein fansse hue the.....unko jaise rasta mil gaya.....honth chal nahi paa rahe the.....kaanp se rahe the.....kisi tarah khud ko sambhalte hue.....

Daksh - Neelam ye sach......sach mein tu hi hai.....

"Haa Bhaiya......Main hi hu.....aap kya bhul gaye mujhe....haa...."

P.Bua - Paarth.....

"Poonam....."

P.Bua - Maa.....aapne sunna.....Papa.....dekha aapne.....Bhaiya dekho....ye....ye Parth hai....hamara Parth...

Dadi - Haa....Poonam....haa ye...ye Parth hi hai.....

Khud ko bahut sambhalne ke baad kaha tha ye Dadi ne......aur itna kahne ke baad aage badhi ki ek baar apne bete ko chu sakke......par wo mumkin nahi tha.....

Ye bhi kisi sazza se kam nahi lagta.....aap kisi se bahut arson baad mile wo bhi tab jab aapko koi ummid hi nahi thi ki mil sakenge....aur jab mille to bas ek dusre ko dekh bhar hi sakte hai aur kuch nahi.....bas dekhna aur baatein karna....

Dada ji bhi ro rahe the par uss tarah nahi theek wahi haal Chacha ji ka tha......Par bua, Chachi aur Dadi ka haal alag sa tha....

Aisa hota hai aksar dekha jaata hai ye.....Bhai Bhai ke bich ka lagav Baap Bete ke bich ka lagav dikhai nahi deta agar hum Bhai bahen ke bich ka yaa Maa bete ke bich ka lagav dekhe.....par wo hota hai....aisa nahi ki ye hota hi nahi hai....

Neelam aur Daksh mama ka bhi kuch aisa hi chal raha tha.....Neelam ki jo aakriti banni hui thi usme saaf saaf dikhai de raha tha ki uske aankhon se aanshu nikal rahe hai.....par Daksh unko ponch nahi paa raha tha....

K.Bua ke bhi aashu aa rahe the par wo waha se kuch dur chali gayi thi.....aur saath mein Madhu aur Nikita ko bhi leke chali gayi thi.....khud se nahi unko sawal karne the iss wajah se wo dono gaye the.....

Jab unhone dekha Prateek bas aise hi khada hai.....to unko laga sayad isko pata nahi ki ye kaun hai.....jab ki unhone khud hi dekha tha baaki sab Paarth aur Neelam ka naam le rahe hai..

K.Bua - Prateek.....ye tumhare Maa Papa hai.....jaao millo unse.....

K.bua ki baaton ne jaise baakiyon ko jagga diya......unn logo ne to phir bhi waqt bitaya tha unn dono ke sath par Prateek ne.....usne kaha waqt bitaya tha......chota sa tha.....sayad yaad bhi naa ho usko ki wo dono kaun hai.....

Poonam Bua uth ke gayi Prateek ke pass aur usko Paarth ke saamne leke aayi....

Aisa bilkul nahi tha ki Prateek ko inn sab se koi matlab hi nahi tha....matlab tha bahut matlab tha....tabhi to uske aankhon mein aanshu the.....wo baakiyon ko khush dekh ke khush ho raha tha.....

P.Bua - Prateek ye.....ye tumhare Papa hai.....Parth ye....ye Prateek hai tumhara aur Neelam ka beta.....

Parth - Hmm humme pata hai.....yahi to humme yaha leke aaya hai....

Prateek ne nahi socha tha ki Parth kuch aisa kah dega.....ab usko sab kuch batana hoga sabhi ko....

Jab sabne ye sunna to sab ke sab Prateek ko hi dekhne lag gaye....jaise intezaar mein ho ki wo kab kuch kahega......

Maa samajh jaati hai apne baccho ki pareshani.....Ye sacch hi hai....

Jab wo kuch nahi bol paa raha tha to Neelam uske pass aa gayi....

Neelam - inn sab ke baare mein kabhi aur baatein kar lena.....abhi hum aaye hai to hume tumko dekhne do.....

Neelam ne apna haath badhaya par aadhe mein hi rukk gayi...usko laga jaise baaki log usko nahi chu paa rahe hai waise hi wo bhi apne bete ko nahi chu payegi....aur isse sayad prateek ko dukh ho....to usne bich mein hi haath mod liya apna.....ye kisi se bhi chuppa nahi magar....

Haa par isse ye hua ki Prateek ke upar se dhyaan hat gaya tha sabhi ka......

Madhu - Kitna bura hai ye.....

Nikita - haa samne hoke bhi.....chu nahi paana.....

Nikita jab ye bol rahi thi to uske ander bahut kuch chal raha tha.......ek to wo jal rahi thi abhi Prateek se......par usko ye dekh ke bura bhi lag raha tha Prateek aur uski Maa ke liye......wo ye bhi soch rahi thi ki kya kabhi uske saath bhi aisa kuch hoga......kya uske Maa Baap bhi kisi din.....

Itni saari baatein chal rahi thi uske dimmag mein ki ab chahera ekdum se sapat ho gaya tha.....koi expression hi nahi baccha tha.....ya ye kahe itne emotions ummad rahe the ki samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki kaise expressions dikhaye jaaye.....

Chachi ne jab ye dekha ki Neelam Prateek ko chu bhi nahi sakti to uska dhyaan batane ke liye unhone Rupal didi ko aage kar diya.....

Chachi - Neelam Paarth isko jaante ho kya tum dono.....

Sab samajh rahe the ki kya chal raha ha....kisi ne kuch aisa nahi socha ki wo Chachi Neelam ko apne bete ko dekhne bhi nahi de rahi hai....accche se milne bhi nahi de rahi hai....

Neelam - ye Rupal hai kya......itni badi ho gayi ye.....Paarth pichli baar to kitni choti thi naa ye.....

Paarth - Haa.....dekho ab kitni badi ho gayi hai.....

Abhi unhone aisa kaha hi tha ki unn dono ki aakritiyan thodi aur dhundhli si ho gayi......

Ye dhundhlapan pahle bhi aa raha tha.....aur sabko dikhai bhi de raha tha par sab unse milne mein itne khoye hue the ki dhyaan hi nahi diya kisi ne......par iss baar aisa nahi hua.....

Ye dhundhlapan ye bata raha tha ki unke pass waqt kam hai.....aatmaon ko baandh ke nahi rakha jaa sakta agar rakha jaaye to unki yaadein dhundhli hone lag jaayegi jaisi ki unki aakriti hoti jaa rahi hai.....aur kuch waqt baad unko khud ke baare mein pata nahi hoga aur naa kisi aur ke baare mein......wo bas khud ko uss jagah pe fansa hua paayenge aur kuch bhi karenge uss jagah se nikalne ke liye.....

Wo logo pe hamla karenge unko pareshan karenge taaki unko waha se jaane diya jaaye....iss dauran wo apno ko bhi nuksan pahucha dete hai......

Sabne unn dono ki aakriti ko dhundhla hote dekha aur uss baare mein puccha......

Parth - Hamara waqt khatam ho raha hai....

Dadi - Kya matlab waqt khatam ho raha hai......

Neelam - Humme jaana hoga....hum yaha par aakhiri baar sabse milne aaye the.....

Dadi - nahi Neelam abhi nahi.....abhi to hum mille bhi nahi....aur....aur maine....maine mafi bhi nahi maangi.....

Neelam - Apne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya jiski wajah se aapko maafi maangni pade....Prateek ka dhyaan rakhiyega....

Parth - Beta sabki baatein sunna aur......agar koi kabhi kabhi daant bhi de to naraz nahi ho jaana....

Neelam - aap sab apna khayal rakhna.....Bhaiya, Pankaj bacche Prateek ka dhyaan rakhna.....

Prateek jaanta tha.....wo unn dono ko yaha pe rok sakta hai par isse bas dard milne wala tha.....agar wo abhi rukk gaye to aage kabhi bhi.....kabhi bhi yaha se nahi jaa paayenge anant kaal ke liye issi jagah pe fanse rahenge wo....aur unki yaadein dhundhali ho jaayegi...

Sayad agar ye pahle wala Prateek hota to wo ye karne ke baare mein sochta.....par ab wo badal raha tha....aur usne uss panne ko chod aage badhne ke baare mein socha....haa par usko ek baat ka bura lag raha tha wo chahta tha thoda aur waqt mille sabko....par isme wo kuch nahi kar sakta tha...

Pujari ji - (dheere se) Madhu dekho ye ab jaane wale hai kya tum inhe rokna chahti ho....

Madhu sabhi ko aise dekh ke emotional ho chukki thi sochne ki kashamta usme thi par jyada nahi....

Usne bas haa mein sar hilla diya.....

Pujari ji - Jaao unn dono ko jaake chu aao...

Madhu ne nki baat sunni ek baar unki taraf dekha.....aur bas binna kuch bole aage badh gayi.....aur badhne ke baad Madhu ne Parth aur Neelam ko chu liya.....

Yaha Prateek bhi unko chu sakta tha....par wo iss wajah se darr raha tha agar usne aisa kuch kiya to uski dark energy unke ander naa chali jaaye.....

Wo dono energy ke form mein the.....yun samajh lo paani ab agar kala rang daal de unme chahe ek hi boond kyun naa wo unpe effect karenge.....

Dark power hai bhi distructive.....

Madhu ke saath aisa nahi hai....uski power creative hai.....chizzon ko bana sakti hai.....jab usne unn dono ko touch kiya.....wo jo dhundhlapan tha unme......wo khatam ho gaya aur saath hi saath dono ekdum se chamakne lag gaye.....

Ye kya hua waha pe bas do log samajh paa rahe the prateek aur Pujari ji......DB tak ko iss baare mein utna pata nahi tha......usko to ye bhi pata nahi tha ki Slayer ke sarir se ye aatmayein nikalne wali hai....

Prateek iss baat ko jaanta tha par wo ye karana nahi chahta tha.....usko nahi pata tha Madhu iske baare mein jaan ke aage kaise react karegi......

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Prateek ek haath se apne gaal ko pakde hua tha aur uske dusre haath ko uski Bua ne pakda hua tha aur usko ghar ke ander leke jaa rahi thi.....

Gharwale pahle se hi thode pareshan the......unn sab ko achanak se bulla liya gaya tha Poonam Bua ke dwara......aur puchne pe kuch bataya bhi nahi unhone.....bas ye kaha ki Prateek ko to aane do....jab wo aayega to sabko ek saath batayegi.....

Abhi jab wo aaya to uske saath ghar mein ek energy ball bhi aake ghum ke gaya....wo log iss wajah se aur bhi chauk gaye.....wo energy ball ghar ke suraksha kawach ke ander aa gaya tha....wo bhi aaram se....

Wo sab ussi ko to dekhne ke liye bahar ki oor jaa rahe the aur unko Prateek dikh gaya.....Poonam Bua uska haath pakad ke usko unki taraf hi leke aa rahi thi......

Aur wo energy balls abhi bhi Prateek ke charo taraf ghoom rahi thi...

Nikita - Rupal didi ye.....ye kaisi chizz hai....aur ye uske charo taraf aise ghoom kyun rahi hai.....

Rupal - Pata nahi Nikita.....Maine bhi isko aaj hi dekha hai....aur mujhe yaad nahi aa raha iss jaisi chizz ke baare mein kabhi padha ho Maine......Tunne wo dekha kya.....

Nikita - Kya....

Rupal - Usko dekh uska haath kaha hai.....lagta hai aaj phir se :lol: kutta gaya ye.....

Nikita - :lol: arre haa inn golo ke dekhne ke wajah se meri nazar uske gaalon pe gayi hi nahi....

Chachi - Maa ye kya hai....ye ghere ke ander aa gaya aur humme usko binna dekhe pata bhi nahi chala...

Dadi - Main wahi soch rahi hu bahu......iss chizz ke baare mein sayad kisi se suna tha maine.....par mujhe yaad nahi aa raha...

Ye sab yaha apni pani baatein kar rahe the wahi Prateek ko leke pahuch gayi thi Poonam Bua ghar darwaje pe.....ab sab wahi pe khade the to unhone kuch kaha nahi bas unko dekhti rahi.....lekin wo sab to apne mein hi lage hue the darwaja gher ke.....

Poonam Bua- Aap log humme ander aane denge bhi yaa nahi.....darwaje pe kyun khade ho saare.....

Gussa hone ki wajah to kaafi thi unki jaise ki wo puri baat jaan nahi paayi Prateek se.....kyun ki ye sab ke sab darwaje pe aa gaye the.....dusri ye ki wo dono energy balls.....unko Prateek ke aise chakkar kaatte hue dekh unko aur gussa aa raha tha kyunki wo bhi ek wajah the baat puri naa hone ka.....par gussa nikala unhone baaki sab pe jo darwaje pe khade hue the.....

Bua ne jor se apni baat kahi.....aur unki baatein sunne ke baad saare log ekdum se unke gusse se laal chahre ko dekhne lag gaye.....kisi ne bhi jyada kuch puchne ka socha hi nahi kyunki lagbhag saare hi unke gusse ko jaante the.....bas phir kya.....

Saare ke saare ander jaane lag gaye par Bua ke picche pahle unko aur Prateek ko ander jaane ki jagah di unhone.....uske baad hi baaki ke saare ander jaane lage the....

Abhi bhi wo saare unn do energy balls ko hi dekh rahe the...aur janne ki koshish kar rahe the aakhir wo hai kya.....

DB aur Leader dono ander aaye to the par bas jaake Pujari ji ke pass khade ho gaye the.....ek unme se apni beti ko dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha ki ab wo usko sab bata sakta hai......dusra pujari ji se baatein kar raha tha....

Jaise hi hum ander gaye aur darwaja band hua.....ander aur jyada roshani phail gayi......aur uske baad jo hua usko dekh ke sab hairaan the.....kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya bole kaise bole.....bas aankhen faadein dekhe jaa rahe the.....

Kisi ko bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.....yaa yun kaho ki yakkin hi nahi ho raha tha ki abhi jo wo dekh rahe hai wo sab sach hai yaa koi sapna......

Kisi ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki kuch kare......ek darr tha unke ander agar ye sapna hua aur maine kuch kiya to kahi ye tut naa jaaye.....

Ye haal gharwalo ka tha.....baaki jo alag se the jaise Nikita, Madhu, Pujari ji, Leader aur DB ye bas dekh rahe the.....kabhi unn dono ko to kabhi baakiyon ko jo ekdum se murat ki tarah ban gaye the.....

K.bua baakiyon ki tarah nahi thi....wo baharwali hoke bhi gharwalo ke jaise hi thi.....

Madhu se tab raha nahi gaya jab usne dekha Daksh ke aankhen ekdum se aashuon se lablabba gayi hai.....tab usne inn sab ke bich bolna shuru kiya.....

Madhu - Ye dono kaun hai.....aur aap sab....

Ab wo bol rahi thi to Nikita ne bhi uski baat ko dohraya......par uske baad bhi koi khass asar nahi pada tha....

"Bhaiya...kaise ho aap"

Ye sabd jaise hi Daksh Mama ke kaano mein pade.....jo aanshu abhi tak aankhon mein fansse hue the.....unko jaise rasta mil gaya.....honth chal nahi paa rahe the.....kaanp se rahe the.....kisi tarah khud ko sambhalte hue.....

Daksh - Neelam ye sach......sach mein tu hi hai.....

"Haa Bhaiya......Main hi hu.....aap kya bhul gaye mujhe....haa...."

P.Bua - Paarth.....

"Poonam....."

P.Bua - Maa.....aapne sunna.....Papa.....dekha aapne.....Bhaiya dekho....ye....ye Parth hai....hamara Parth...

Dadi - Haa....Poonam....haa ye...ye Parth hi hai.....

Khud ko bahut sambhalne ke baad kaha tha ye Dadi ne......aur itna kahne ke baad aage badhi ki ek baar apne bete ko chu sakke......par wo mumkin nahi tha.....

Ye bhi kisi sazza se kam nahi lagta.....aap kisi se bahut arson baad mile wo bhi tab jab aapko koi ummid hi nahi thi ki mil sakenge....aur jab mille to bas ek dusre ko dekh bhar hi sakte hai aur kuch nahi.....bas dekhna aur baatein karna....

Dada ji bhi ro rahe the par uss tarah nahi theek wahi haal Chacha ji ka tha......Par bua, Chachi aur Dadi ka haal alag sa tha....

Aisa hota hai aksar dekha jaata hai ye.....Bhai Bhai ke bich ka lagav Baap Bete ke bich ka lagav dikhai nahi deta agar hum Bhai bahen ke bich ka yaa Maa bete ke bich ka lagav dekhe.....par wo hota hai....aisa nahi ki ye hota hi nahi hai....

Neelam aur Daksh mama ka bhi kuch aisa hi chal raha tha.....Neelam ki jo aakriti banni hui thi usme saaf saaf dikhai de raha tha ki uske aankhon se aanshu nikal rahe hai.....par Daksh unko ponch nahi paa raha tha....

K.Bua ke bhi aashu aa rahe the par wo waha se kuch dur chali gayi thi.....aur saath mein Madhu aur Nikita ko bhi leke chali gayi thi.....khud se nahi unko sawal karne the iss wajah se wo dono gaye the.....

Jab unhone dekha Prateek bas aise hi khada hai.....to unko laga sayad isko pata nahi ki ye kaun hai.....jab ki unhone khud hi dekha tha baaki sab Paarth aur Neelam ka naam le rahe hai..

K.Bua - Prateek.....ye tumhare Maa Papa hai.....jaao millo unse.....

K.bua ki baaton ne jaise baakiyon ko jagga diya......unn logo ne to phir bhi waqt bitaya tha unn dono ke sath par Prateek ne.....usne kaha waqt bitaya tha......chota sa tha.....sayad yaad bhi naa ho usko ki wo dono kaun hai.....

Poonam Bua uth ke gayi Prateek ke pass aur usko Paarth ke saamne leke aayi....

Aisa bilkul nahi tha ki Prateek ko inn sab se koi matlab hi nahi tha....matlab tha bahut matlab tha....tabhi to uske aankhon mein aanshu the.....wo baakiyon ko khush dekh ke khush ho raha tha.....

P.Bua - Prateek ye.....ye tumhare Papa hai.....Parth ye....ye Prateek hai tumhara aur Neelam ka beta.....

Parth - Hmm humme pata hai.....yahi to humme yaha leke aaya hai....

Prateek ne nahi socha tha ki Parth kuch aisa kah dega.....ab usko sab kuch batana hoga sabhi ko....

Jab sabne ye sunna to sab ke sab Prateek ko hi dekhne lag gaye....jaise intezaar mein ho ki wo kab kuch kahega......

Maa samajh jaati hai apne baccho ki pareshani.....Ye sacch hi hai....

Jab wo kuch nahi bol paa raha tha to Neelam uske pass aa gayi....

Neelam - inn sab ke baare mein kabhi aur baatein kar lena.....abhi hum aaye hai to hume tumko dekhne do.....

Neelam ne apna haath badhaya par aadhe mein hi rukk gayi...usko laga jaise baaki log usko nahi chu paa rahe hai waise hi wo bhi apne bete ko nahi chu payegi....aur isse sayad prateek ko dukh ho....to usne bich mein hi haath mod liya apna.....ye kisi se bhi chuppa nahi magar....

Haa par isse ye hua ki Prateek ke upar se dhyaan hat gaya tha sabhi ka......

Madhu - Kitna bura hai ye.....

Nikita - haa samne hoke bhi.....chu nahi paana.....

Nikita jab ye bol rahi thi to uske ander bahut kuch chal raha tha.......ek to wo jal rahi thi abhi Prateek se......par usko ye dekh ke bura bhi lag raha tha Prateek aur uski Maa ke liye......wo ye bhi soch rahi thi ki kya kabhi uske saath bhi aisa kuch hoga......kya uske Maa Baap bhi kisi din.....

Itni saari baatein chal rahi thi uske dimmag mein ki ab chahera ekdum se sapat ho gaya tha.....koi expression hi nahi baccha tha.....ya ye kahe itne emotions ummad rahe the ki samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki kaise expressions dikhaye jaaye.....

Chachi ne jab ye dekha ki Neelam Prateek ko chu bhi nahi sakti to uska dhyaan batane ke liye unhone Rupal didi ko aage kar diya.....

Chachi - Neelam Paarth isko jaante ho kya tum dono.....

Sab samajh rahe the ki kya chal raha ha....kisi ne kuch aisa nahi socha ki wo Chachi Neelam ko apne bete ko dekhne bhi nahi de rahi hai....accche se milne bhi nahi de rahi hai....

Neelam - ye Rupal hai kya......itni badi ho gayi ye.....Paarth pichli baar to kitni choti thi naa ye.....

Paarth - Haa.....dekho ab kitni badi ho gayi hai.....

Abhi unhone aisa kaha hi tha ki unn dono ki aakritiyan thodi aur dhundhli si ho gayi......

Ye dhundhlapan pahle bhi aa raha tha.....aur sabko dikhai bhi de raha tha par sab unse milne mein itne khoye hue the ki dhyaan hi nahi diya kisi ne......par iss baar aisa nahi hua.....

Ye dhundhlapan ye bata raha tha ki unke pass waqt kam hai.....aatmaon ko baandh ke nahi rakha jaa sakta agar rakha jaaye to unki yaadein dhundhli hone lag jaayegi jaisi ki unki aakriti hoti jaa rahi hai.....aur kuch waqt baad unko khud ke baare mein pata nahi hoga aur naa kisi aur ke baare mein......wo bas khud ko uss jagah pe fansa hua paayenge aur kuch bhi karenge uss jagah se nikalne ke liye.....

Wo logo pe hamla karenge unko pareshan karenge taaki unko waha se jaane diya jaaye....iss dauran wo apno ko bhi nuksan pahucha dete hai......

Sabne unn dono ki aakriti ko dhundhla hote dekha aur uss baare mein puccha......

Parth - Hamara waqt khatam ho raha hai....

Dadi - Kya matlab waqt khatam ho raha hai......

Neelam - Humme jaana hoga....hum yaha par aakhiri baar sabse milne aaye the.....

Dadi - nahi Neelam abhi nahi.....abhi to hum mille bhi nahi....aur....aur maine....maine mafi bhi nahi maangi.....

Neelam - Apne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya jiski wajah se aapko maafi maangni pade....Prateek ka dhyaan rakhiyega....

Parth - Beta sabki baatein sunna aur......agar koi kabhi kabhi daant bhi de to naraz nahi ho jaana....

Neelam - aap sab apna khayal rakhna.....Bhaiya, Pankaj bacche Prateek ka dhyaan rakhna.....

Prateek jaanta tha.....wo unn dono ko yaha pe rok sakta hai par isse bas dard milne wala tha.....agar wo abhi rukk gaye to aage kabhi bhi.....kabhi bhi yaha se nahi jaa paayenge anant kaal ke liye issi jagah pe fanse rahenge wo....aur unki yaadein dhundhali ho jaayegi...

Sayad agar ye pahle wala Prateek hota to wo ye karne ke baare mein sochta.....par ab wo badal raha tha....aur usne uss panne ko chod aage badhne ke baare mein socha....haa par usko ek baat ka bura lag raha tha wo chahta tha thoda aur waqt mille sabko....par isme wo kuch nahi kar sakta tha...

Pujari ji - (dheere se) Madhu dekho ye ab jaane wale hai kya tum inhe rokna chahti ho....

Madhu sabhi ko aise dekh ke emotional ho chukki thi sochne ki kashamta usme thi par jyada nahi....

Usne bas haa mein sar hilla diya.....

Pujari ji - Jaao unn dono ko jaake chu aao...

Madhu ne nki baat sunni ek baar unki taraf dekha.....aur bas binna kuch bole aage badh gayi.....aur badhne ke baad Madhu ne Parth aur Neelam ko chu liya.....

Yaha Prateek bhi unko chu sakta tha....par wo iss wajah se darr raha tha agar usne aisa kuch kiya to uski dark energy unke ander naa chali jaaye.....

Wo dono energy ke form mein the.....yun samajh lo paani ab agar kala rang daal de unme chahe ek hi boond kyun naa wo unpe effect karenge.....

Dark power hai bhi distructive.....

Madhu ke saath aisa nahi hai....uski power creative hai.....chizzon ko bana sakti hai.....jab usne unn dono ko touch kiya.....wo jo dhundhlapan tha unme......wo khatam ho gaya aur saath hi saath dono ekdum se chamakne lag gaye.....

Ye kya hua waha pe bas do log samajh paa rahe the prateek aur Pujari ji......DB tak ko iss baare mein utna pata nahi tha......usko to ye bhi pata nahi tha ki Slayer ke sarir se ye aatmayein nikalne wali hai....

Prateek iss baat ko jaanta tha par wo ye karana nahi chahta tha.....usko nahi pata tha Madhu iske baare mein jaan ke aage kaise react karegi......

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Pujari ji ki baat sunne ke baad waha pe baaki tinno hi unko ghurne lag gayi.......

K.Bua aur P.Bua yaha ka gussa waha nikalne ke chakkar mein aur Madhu.....uska bhi kuch aisa hi tha....

Madhu ne abhi tak jitna bhi sunna tha Prateek ke baare mein yaa khud se dekha tha uss hisab se wo apne pariwar ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta tha......ye ek baat thi jiski wajah se Madhu ko kabhi bhi Prateek accha nahi lag raha tha.....

Haa kabhi kabhi uske dimmag mein kuch acchi baatein aati thi uske baare mein par uske turant baad kuch aisi baatein aa jaati jiske baad wo usse aur jyada chiddh jaati thi.....

Madhu yaha pe apne pariwar ke liye aayi hui thi......wahi dusri taraf ye Prateek tha jiska pariwar uske paas tha par wo unko koi ahmiyat nahi deta tha......ye sab Madhu ka sochna tha.....

Abhi bhi wo issi wajah se gusse mein thi......akhir wo aisa kaise kar sakta hai......waise usko ye pata nahi tha ki Prateek karne kya wala hai wo bas gussa thi.....

K.Bua aur P.Bua iss wajah se gussa thi ki Pujari ji ne kitne aaram se kah diya ke wo accha hi hoga....aur to aur unhone unko Fumos jaane ka koi tarika batane ki jagah sabhi logo ko ikatha karne ko kaha.......

Ye dono iss waqt Prateek se.....Madhu se.....aur uss Old Owl se gussa the.....par shuru mein chukki Pujari ji ne kaha to gussa unpe nikala jaana hi banta tha....

P.Bua - ye kya kah rahe hai aap.....wo waha pe pata nahi kya kar raha hoga theek bhi hoga yaa nahi aur aap.....aap humme yaha pe baith jaane ko kah rahe hai.....

K.Bua - Apko to iss waqt humme waha jaane ka koi rasta batana chahiye tha......Poonam mujhe lagta hai humme IP madam ke pass jaana chahiye.....unse baat karni chahiye....wo sayad humme.....

Madhu ko ab ye samajh nahi aa raha tha wo kaha aur kispe nikale apna gussa......wo Pujari ji ke baat se sahmat nahi thi.....par abhi jo K.Bua aur P.Bua ne kaha usse to wo aur bhi jyada sahmat nahi thi......

Pujari ji - Arre aap dono galat samajh rahe ho.....(Madhu ki oor dekhte hue) Mujhe pata hai wo jarur theek hoga.....aur rahi baat Fumos pe jaane ki to abhi koi bhi madad nahi karne wala aap logo ki.....behtar yahi hai ki aap dono wahi kare jo usne karne ko kaha hai.....

Madhu - Main to abhi bhi kahti hu uss ullu ko chodna hi nahi chahiye tha......

Yaha abhi bhi tu-tu Main main chal rahi thi.....

Wahi dusri taraf.......

Demos pe ab Demos ke wo sipahi pahuch gaye the jo Fumos se bachke bhage the.....pata nahi inki kismat kiss chizz se likhi gayi thi.....

Yaha pe Lucifer jo ekdum se pagal hi ho chukka tha gusse ki wajah se......wo apne haathon mein apni talwaar liye khada tha talwaar mein se aag ki laptein nikal rahi thi.....

Dusri taraf se jo thakki haari sena wapas aa rahi thi unko wo dikha to jarur par der ho chukki thi......Lucifer ne aaw dekha naa taaw bas apni talwaar ko ghumane lag gaya......yaha waha......

Kuch bhi kaho....uske talwar chalane ki speed ko dekh ke koi bhi kah sakta tha ki usne kitni practice kari hogi....uske sath saath uski wo techniques itne gusse mein hone ke baad bhi talwar se cut maarne ka angle ek degree bhi yaha waha nahi ho raha tha.....

Gusse mein bas apna talwar chalate aur apne hi logo ko kaatta ja raha tha wo....

Isme wo ek jasoos bhi tha.....jo dark world wali khabar leke aaya tha yaha pe.......uski kismat acchi thi sayad......yaa buri.....pata nahi....

Lucifer jab apne hi kisi sainik ko maar raha tha to wo uske theek picche tha....aur wo banda nicche gir gaya aur jasoos uske sarir ke nicche dab gaya...wo uth sakta tha.....par yaha pe uth ke bas maut milni thi.....to wo waise hi raha......ekdum waise hi hilla bhi nahi.....

Lucifer ne unn sab bacche hue logo ko maarne ke baad apni talwaar unhi laashon ke dher mein kisi ek laash ke upar jor se maara aur wo talwaar uske ander chali gayi.....aur waise hi khadi rahi......

Lucifer uske baad apne ghutno ke bal baith gaya...aur apna sar upar karke jor jor se dahadne lag gaya.....

Lucifer ke inn harkaton ko koi tha jo upar se dekh raha tha.....aur wo kuch soch raha tha

Fumos pe......

Leader aur DB iss waqt unn maniyon ke pass pahuch chukke the.....Leader ki halat kharab ho gayi thi.......hoga wo bahadur par ye uske liye ekdum se naya tha aur darawana bhi tha.....

DB - hmm wo rahe saare......waise apko pata hai ye yaha pe itne jyada kyun hai.....

Leader - Nahi.....Main nahi jaanta.......aur kya ab hum chal ke wapas jaa sakte hai......

DB - chal ke.....isme bahut waqt lag jaayega......

Leader - Mujhe chalega wo......

DB - theek hai.....jaisa aap kahe....waise maine puccha kya aapko pata hai ye yaha pe itne saare kyun hai.....'

Leader - Maine bataya naa Mujhe nahi pata......iss jagah pe Main bas tab aaya tha jab meri training chal rahi thi......uske baad iss jagah pe nahi aaya Main kabhi....

DB - jaha tak mujhe pata hai ye manni Fumos ke sarir ke khoon se banne hue hai......

Leader - Khoon se......par....

DB - Hmm aapko iss baare mein pata nahi hoga......kabhi fursat mein bataunga......chaliye hum inme se ek tukda le lete hai aur yaha se nikalte hai....

Leader - ek hi kyun ye to bahut hai yaha pe.....hum jitna chahe utna le sakte hai.....

DB - Le ke koi fayda nahi hone wala......mujhe bas ek tukde ka kaam hai.....iss chizz ko yahi pe rahne dena sahi hai.....yaha se bahar jaake ye bas tabahi machane ke kaam mein aa sakti hai aur kuch nahi......aap bas yahi khade rahiye.....main apna kaam karta hu.....

Leader ne iss baare mein kuch socha....par wo saajh nahi paa raha tha usko aisa karna chahiye yaa nahi.....

Wahi dusri taraf Old Owl wapas aa gaya tha waha pe.....

Main - Itna waqt kaise lag gaya Old Owl.....Tumhe to kaafi der pahle hi yaha pe aa jaana chahiye tha......

Old owl - Main fans gaya tha.....issi wajah se mujhe der ho gayi.....

Maine usko dhyaan se dekha....jaha tak mujhe pata tha Riyan ne uske saath jo kuch kiya uske baad wo sayad hi kahi fans sakta tha.....yaha to bilkul bhi nahi......

Main - Tumhe jo bola tha wo kaam ho gaya naa......

Old owl - haa wo kaam ho gaya.....bas thodi si pareshani ho gayi hai......

Main - kaisi pareshani.....kya ussi ke wajah se der hui hai tumko....

Old owl - wo darasal mujhe pakad liya tha.....aur mujhe batana pada tum yaha pe ho.....aur ab waha sabhi ko ye pata hai.....

Maine ye sunna aur mera sar ghum gaya......isne bata diya main Fumos pe tha......agar Main khud se batata to uss waqt baat alag hoti lekin abhi main waha pe pahucha bhi nahi hu aur waha pata chal chukka tha sabhi ko matlab wo sab pareshan honge gussa honge.....

Main - Dhruv lagta hai humme jaldi se nikalna hoga yaha se....

Dhruv - Main soch raha tha ki kyun na apka ek kaam main pura kar du....uske baad yaha pe wapas aa jaaunga.....

Main - Kaun sa kaam.....kiss baare mein baat kar rahe ho tum.....

Dhruv - Apko yaad nahi Dark world wale log aaye the Earth pe.....Main iss waqt Slayer ke sarir mein hu.....isse waha pe sabhi darte hai.....agar main unn sab ko darra deta hu jinhone waha pe logo ko pareshan kar rakha hai to......

Main - Par waha pe aise nahi jaa sakte......Maine unki puri kahani sunni thi.....wo ghera uska kya.....kya tum iss sarir ke saath usko parr kar paaoge.....

Old owl - Isme Main madad kar sakta hu.....main isko waha teleport kar sakta hu.....

Main - Agar aisa hai to Main bhi waha chalunga.....akhir unn sab se kaha tha Main waha aaunga......

Old Owl - par waha jaake bas waqt ki barbaadi hogi.....

Main - Abhi Earth pe bua ko sabhi ko sath laane mein thoda waqt to lagega hi....par ek dikkat hai......Main Maa Papa ka kya karu.....ye waha nahi ja sakte agar waha gaye to inka gharwalo se milna baaki hi rah jaayega....aur yaha pe chod nahi sakta Main inko......

Dhruv - Kya main......Main inko wapas se apne ander le sakta hu kuch waqt ke liye jab waha se hum wapas aayenge to unko bahar nikal dunga.....

Main - Ye mumkin hai kya.....

Dhruv - Ha agar main iss sarir pe apna prabhav thoda kam kar dun to.....aur Main aisa kar sakta hu.....

Maine socha Dhruv hi to hai....ispe bharosha karne mein koi nuksan nahi hai....aur maine haa bol diya....

DB aur Leader bhi wapas nahi aa rahe the.....aur Dhruv ko wapas se yaha lekar aana hi tha....to old Owl se jaldi dark world ke liye portal kholne ko kaha aur hum waha chale gaye.......

Iss jagah pe humne jo dekha wo bahut hi khass tha......Slayer ne sayad apna sabse jyada waqt iss jagah pe hi bitaya tha....aur uske wajah se sabse jyada aatmayein issi planet ki thi uske ander......jo aatmayein takatwar th....wo sab Ma Papa ke tarah hi energy ball mein badal ke aakhiri baar apno se mulakat karne nikal padi thi.....

Wo sab humme issi jagah pe mil rahe the.....

Jaha kahi bhi hum nazar daalte waha pe energy ball hoti aur wo apni kahani sunna rahi hoti apne logo ko....apne pariwar walo ko....

Hum ye dekh hi rahe the ki kisi ne Slayer ke sarir pe hamla kar diya......

Jab humne picche mud ke dekha....to wo waha ke kuch log the.....

Main - Rukk jaao.....ye kya kar rahe ho.....

"Iski wajah se hamare log.....hamare bacche humse alag ho gaye...."

"Isko nahi chodenge hum...."

Ye sab baaki ke log bol rahe the....ki tabhi meri nazar unme se ek pe padi.....wo unn logo mein se tha jo Earth pe aaya tha.....usne bhi mujhe pahchan liya.....

Uske aankhon se pahle se hi aanshu nikal rahe the....pata nahi kya baat thi......

Usne sabhi ko rukne ke liye kaha...aur sabhi rukk gaye.....aisa nahi ki wo waha ka koi raja wagera tha.....bas sab rukk gaye the....

Wo - tum yaha aa gaye.....tumne apna wada purra kiya....

Main - Nahi abhi nahi abhi aapki pareshani ko khatam karna hai humme.....

Wo - Tumne hamare liye ye sab socha......accha laga par....ab to ye bh yaha aa chukka hai....ab sab wapas se.....

Main - arre aap samajh nahi rahe isko Main leke aaya hu.....ye aapki madad karne wala hai.....aap mujhe bas unn sab ke baare mein bataiye jo sabhi ko pareshan karte hai.....

Pahle to kisi ko yakkin nahi hua......kuch ne to manna bhi kiya......par kuch logo ne humme unn sab ke baare mein bataya bhi......

Kuch goblins the.....aur kuch dark world ke Elfs aur kuch vampires.....jo yaha pe apni chalane mein lage hue the....

Humme unn sab ke baare mein pata chalne ke baad Slayer ke sarir ke saath Dhruv sabse pahle waha se nikal gaya......

Usne pata nahi kyun ye socha ki inn sab ko sazza theek ussi tarah se milegi jaise Slayer baaki sab ke saath apni bhukh mitane ke liye kiya karta tha......wo unki aatmaon ko apne ander lene ke baare mein mann bana chukka tha.....

Mujhe iss baat ke baare mein pata nahi tha.....

Wo har uss bande ke pass gaya jinka naam liya gaya tha.....aur chukki wo sarir Slayer ka tha....to jiske saamne wo jaata uski hawa tight ho jaati thi......wo ekdum se kaampne lag jaata......

Dhruv ko jyada mehnat nahi karni padti thi.....bas jaata waha pe aur unke ander se unki aatmaon ko chuss ke bahar nikal leta....aur phir apne ander daal leta.....

Maine usse bas yahi kaha tha unn sab ko sabak sikhao......aur wo pata nahi kya kya kar aaya......

Khair kuch hi der mein wo mere pass wapas aa gaya tha.....

Main - Itni jaldi.....

Dhruv - unn sab ko sazza dena tha....aur iss nek kaam mein deri sahi nahi lagi mujhe to maine jaldi se kaam nipta liya....waise bhi aapko ghar bhi jaana hai......

Maine Dark world ke logo ke liye ek aur message choda......

"Agar aaj ke baad wapas se mujhe pata chala yaha pe koi aur hai jo baakiyon ko nicch samajh ke unko khuchalne ka kaam kar raha hai....to Main usko aisi sazza dunga ki wo soch bhi nahi sakta......." aisa kahne ke baad Maine Old Owl ki taraf dekha.....aur usne bhi turant hi portal khol diya.

Portal khulte hi hum wapas chale aaye.....

Maine dekha Dhruv thoda alag sa lag raha tha.....par mujhe abhi jaldi thi ghar jaane ki to Maine kuch jyada nahi socha......bas usko Maa Papa ko wapas laane ke liye bola......iss baat pe uskne mujhe ajeeb tarah se dekha....jaise maine usse kya hi maang liya ho.....

Khair usne baad mein muskurate hue unko wapas kiya.....tab tak Maine dekha DB aur Leader bhi pass aa chukke the......

Main - Jaldi karo humme jaldi jaana hoga.....

Leader - haa.....rukko bas aa rahe hai.....

Ye bahut durr se paidal aa rahe the.....

Maine wapas se Old owl ki taraf dekha usne bhi portal khol diya aur hum tinno aur sath mein Maa papa waha se nikal ke Earth pe aa gaye......

Iss Old Owl ne ghar ke pass hi humme teleport karaya tha.....isse jyada yaha waha jaane ki jarurat nahi padi humko......par ek baat ye bhi thi.....kuch sochne ka mauka bhi nahi milla mujhe.....jisse Main bach paata....

Khair hum darwaje ke taraf badhe hi the ki ander se hi kisi ne darwaja khola.....aur tezzi se hamare taraf aa rahi thi.....

P.Bua thi wo......

Aate ke saath sabse pahle to mere saamne rukki aur mujhe dekhne lag gayi......puri acchi tarah se jaise scan kar rahi ho......aur main....main waise hi khada tha......

Ye jo mere saath aaye the.....wo pahle hi aage badh gaye ghar ki oor.....rukke hi nahi mere liye.....

Bua ne jab dekh liya sab theek hai ki nahi to unhone khinch ke ek thappad maara mere gaal mein.....

Abhi wo energy ball jo mere kapdo ke ander the.....wo bahar aa gaye.....aur Bua ke charo taraf ghumne lag gaye.....

Bua - Ye kya hai.....inko rokko abhi......warna tumhe....

Main - ye....wo.....

Bua -Maine kaha rokko samajh nahi aata.....

Waise to Main jaanta tha unko kaise rokka jaaye yaa phir unse koi kaam karana ho to kaise karaya jaaye....par isse unko bahut taklif hoti....aur Main ab innko takleef nahi dena chahta tha.....

Bua ko gusse mein dekh ke unn do energy balls mein se ek sidha ghar ki taraf chala gaya....aur ander jaake sabhi ko apni taraf aakarshit kara...aur phir bahar le aaya.....

Sayad bua ne kisi aur ko ye nahi bataya tha Main kaha pe tha.....agar batati to ekdum se unka chahra badal nahi jaata.....

Sabko bahar aate dekh unhone bas mera haath pakda aur mujhe ander leke jaane lag gayi....wo energy balls bhi hamare sath jaa rahi thi.....

Main jab ander gaya to waha pe pujari ji bhi the.....aur saath mein Madhu bhi.....Pankaj aur Daksh Mama bhi the waha pe......

Wahi dusri taraf......

Yaha hum Fumos se bahar nikle hi the ki waha pe koi aur chala gaya tha.....wahi immortal jo uss jagah ko tabah karne aaya tha......par ab usko alag hi kuch ho gaya tha......wo experiments ke baare mein soch raha tha....wo bhi pata nahi kaise kaise......

Hua yun ki usne apne itne saal....itne hazaron saal ke experience ke madad se ye natiza nikala tha ki agar aas pass ke planets aur waha ke jeevon ko bachana hai......to usko Fumos ko puri tarah se khatam hi karna hoga.....par yaha aane ke baad usne kuch alag aur naya dekh liya.......

Kuch aisa jisne uske hazaron saal ki expernience se nikle natize ko bhi jhoothla diya tha.....aur ek naya hi natiza uske saamne tha.....jisme Fumos ko khatam karne ki jarurat hi nahi padi aur baaki sab bhi theek thaak tha.....

Prateek ke baare mein dekha tha humne usne kaise kuch ginne chunne jeevon ki jindagi mein dakhal daala aur unko puri tarah badal diya tha......Khooni ghudsawaron ki raani Rupal didi ko yaa aur bhi log the unko......Waise hi Riyan ka bhi kuch aisa hi tha.....wo ajeeb se jeev banata aur unko yaha waha chod deta aur dekhta wo kaha tak jaa sakte hai.....kya kya kar sakte hai....

Ye aadat lagbhag har ek Immortal mein thi.....

Niyam banne hue the unn sab ke liye ki koi bhi kisi dusre jeev ke jivan ke saath koi ched-chad nahi karega....par iss baat ko har immortal kabhi naa kabhi bhul hi jaata tha......

Waisa hi kuch ab hone wala tha.....yaha pe

Inn Immortal ko experiment karne ki chull mach gayi......aur inhone aas pass ke chizzon ke saath aisa karna shuru bhi kar diya.......

Slayer ke body pe usko experiment karna tha....usko dekhna tha ki ek sarir mein do takatwar aatmayein kab tak saath mein rah sakti hai.....usne uske sarir mein dekha....Justin ke alawa aur koi nahi milla usko jo Dhruv ko takkar de sakke.....to usne Justin ko aur takatwar bana diya.....

Par iss immortal ne ek aur kaam kiya.....usne waha pe lage pedon ko bhi aur shaktiyan de di....saath mein planet pe ek gheera bana diya....usse log ander aa sakte the....bahar bhi jaa sakte the.....bas Slayer ka sarir bahar nahi jaa sakta tha waha se......wo wahi pe badh gaya tha....

Ek aur khass baat th uss ghere ki......jab koi uss ghere ke ander yaani ke iss Planet pe aata to uske ander beshumaar takatein aa jaati thi.....aur jaise hi wo ghere se bahar jaata wo saari takatein aise gayab ho jaati jaise ki wo thi hi nahi.....

Itna sab karne ke baad wo Immortal waha se chala gaya apne jagah pe.....aur Fumos pe saath saath Slayer ke sarir pe nazar rakhne ka kaam shuru kar diya.....
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Prateek ek haath se apne gaal ko pakde hua tha aur uske dusre haath ko uski Bua ne pakda hua tha aur usko ghar ke ander leke jaa rahi thi.....

Gharwale pahle se hi thode pareshan the......unn sab ko achanak se bulla liya gaya tha Poonam Bua ke dwara......aur puchne pe kuch bataya bhi nahi unhone.....bas ye kaha ki Prateek ko to aane do....jab wo aayega to sabko ek saath batayegi.....

Abhi jab wo aaya to uske saath ghar mein ek energy ball bhi aake ghum ke gaya....wo log iss wajah se aur bhi chauk gaye.....wo energy ball ghar ke suraksha kawach ke ander aa gaya tha....wo bhi aaram se....

Wo sab ussi ko to dekhne ke liye bahar ki oor jaa rahe the aur unko Prateek dikh gaya.....Poonam Bua uska haath pakad ke usko unki taraf hi leke aa rahi thi......

Aur wo energy balls abhi bhi Prateek ke charo taraf ghoom rahi thi...

Nikita - Rupal didi ye.....ye kaisi chizz hai....aur ye uske charo taraf aise ghoom kyun rahi hai.....

Rupal - Pata nahi Nikita.....Maine bhi isko aaj hi dekha hai....aur mujhe yaad nahi aa raha iss jaisi chizz ke baare mein kabhi padha ho Maine......Tunne wo dekha kya.....

Nikita - Kya....

Rupal - Usko dekh uska haath kaha hai.....lagta hai aaj phir se :lol: kutta gaya ye.....

Nikita - :lol: arre haa inn golo ke dekhne ke wajah se meri nazar uske gaalon pe gayi hi nahi....

Chachi - Maa ye kya hai....ye ghere ke ander aa gaya aur humme usko binna dekhe pata bhi nahi chala...

Dadi - Main wahi soch rahi hu bahu......iss chizz ke baare mein sayad kisi se suna tha maine.....par mujhe yaad nahi aa raha...

Ye sab yaha apni pani baatein kar rahe the wahi Prateek ko leke pahuch gayi thi Poonam Bua ghar darwaje pe.....ab sab wahi pe khade the to unhone kuch kaha nahi bas unko dekhti rahi.....lekin wo sab to apne mein hi lage hue the darwaja gher ke.....

Poonam Bua- Aap log humme ander aane denge bhi yaa nahi.....darwaje pe kyun khade ho saare.....

Gussa hone ki wajah to kaafi thi unki jaise ki wo puri baat jaan nahi paayi Prateek se.....kyun ki ye sab ke sab darwaje pe aa gaye the.....dusri ye ki wo dono energy balls.....unko Prateek ke aise chakkar kaatte hue dekh unko aur gussa aa raha tha kyunki wo bhi ek wajah the baat puri naa hone ka.....par gussa nikala unhone baaki sab pe jo darwaje pe khade hue the.....

Bua ne jor se apni baat kahi.....aur unki baatein sunne ke baad saare log ekdum se unke gusse se laal chahre ko dekhne lag gaye.....kisi ne bhi jyada kuch puchne ka socha hi nahi kyunki lagbhag saare hi unke gusse ko jaante the.....bas phir kya.....

Saare ke saare ander jaane lag gaye par Bua ke picche pahle unko aur Prateek ko ander jaane ki jagah di unhone.....uske baad hi baaki ke saare ander jaane lage the....

Abhi bhi wo saare unn do energy balls ko hi dekh rahe the...aur janne ki koshish kar rahe the aakhir wo hai kya.....

DB aur Leader dono ander aaye to the par bas jaake Pujari ji ke pass khade ho gaye the.....ek unme se apni beti ko dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha ki ab wo usko sab bata sakta hai......dusra pujari ji se baatein kar raha tha....

Jaise hi hum ander gaye aur darwaja band hua.....ander aur jyada roshani phail gayi......aur uske baad jo hua usko dekh ke sab hairaan the.....kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya bole kaise bole.....bas aankhen faadein dekhe jaa rahe the.....

Kisi ko bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.....yaa yun kaho ki yakkin hi nahi ho raha tha ki abhi jo wo dekh rahe hai wo sab sach hai yaa koi sapna......

Kisi ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki kuch kare......ek darr tha unke ander agar ye sapna hua aur maine kuch kiya to kahi ye tut naa jaaye.....

Ye haal gharwalo ka tha.....baaki jo alag se the jaise Nikita, Madhu, Pujari ji, Leader aur DB ye bas dekh rahe the.....kabhi unn dono ko to kabhi baakiyon ko jo ekdum se murat ki tarah ban gaye the.....

K.bua baakiyon ki tarah nahi thi....wo baharwali hoke bhi gharwalo ke jaise hi thi.....

Madhu se tab raha nahi gaya jab usne dekha Daksh ke aankhen ekdum se aashuon se lablabba gayi hai.....tab usne inn sab ke bich bolna shuru kiya.....

Madhu - Ye dono kaun hai.....aur aap sab....

Ab wo bol rahi thi to Nikita ne bhi uski baat ko dohraya......par uske baad bhi koi khass asar nahi pada tha....

"Bhaiya...kaise ho aap"

Ye sabd jaise hi Daksh Mama ke kaano mein pade.....jo aanshu abhi tak aankhon mein fansse hue the.....unko jaise rasta mil gaya.....honth chal nahi paa rahe the.....kaanp se rahe the.....kisi tarah khud ko sambhalte hue.....

Daksh - Neelam ye sach......sach mein tu hi hai.....

"Haa Bhaiya......Main hi hu.....aap kya bhul gaye mujhe....haa...."

P.Bua - Paarth.....

"Poonam....."

P.Bua - Maa.....aapne sunna.....Papa.....dekha aapne.....Bhaiya dekho....ye....ye Parth hai....hamara Parth...

Dadi - Haa....Poonam....haa ye...ye Parth hi hai.....

Khud ko bahut sambhalne ke baad kaha tha ye Dadi ne......aur itna kahne ke baad aage badhi ki ek baar apne bete ko chu sakke......par wo mumkin nahi tha.....

Ye bhi kisi sazza se kam nahi lagta.....aap kisi se bahut arson baad mile wo bhi tab jab aapko koi ummid hi nahi thi ki mil sakenge....aur jab mille to bas ek dusre ko dekh bhar hi sakte hai aur kuch nahi.....bas dekhna aur baatein karna....

Dada ji bhi ro rahe the par uss tarah nahi theek wahi haal Chacha ji ka tha......Par bua, Chachi aur Dadi ka haal alag sa tha....

Aisa hota hai aksar dekha jaata hai ye.....Bhai Bhai ke bich ka lagav Baap Bete ke bich ka lagav dikhai nahi deta agar hum Bhai bahen ke bich ka yaa Maa bete ke bich ka lagav dekhe.....par wo hota hai....aisa nahi ki ye hota hi nahi hai....

Neelam aur Daksh mama ka bhi kuch aisa hi chal raha tha.....Neelam ki jo aakriti banni hui thi usme saaf saaf dikhai de raha tha ki uske aankhon se aanshu nikal rahe hai.....par Daksh unko ponch nahi paa raha tha....

K.Bua ke bhi aashu aa rahe the par wo waha se kuch dur chali gayi thi.....aur saath mein Madhu aur Nikita ko bhi leke chali gayi thi.....khud se nahi unko sawal karne the iss wajah se wo dono gaye the.....

Jab unhone dekha Prateek bas aise hi khada hai.....to unko laga sayad isko pata nahi ki ye kaun hai.....jab ki unhone khud hi dekha tha baaki sab Paarth aur Neelam ka naam le rahe hai..

K.Bua - Prateek.....ye tumhare Maa Papa hai.....jaao millo unse.....

K.bua ki baaton ne jaise baakiyon ko jagga diya......unn logo ne to phir bhi waqt bitaya tha unn dono ke sath par Prateek ne.....usne kaha waqt bitaya tha......chota sa tha.....sayad yaad bhi naa ho usko ki wo dono kaun hai.....

Poonam Bua uth ke gayi Prateek ke pass aur usko Paarth ke saamne leke aayi....

Aisa bilkul nahi tha ki Prateek ko inn sab se koi matlab hi nahi tha....matlab tha bahut matlab tha....tabhi to uske aankhon mein aanshu the.....wo baakiyon ko khush dekh ke khush ho raha tha.....

P.Bua - Prateek ye.....ye tumhare Papa hai.....Parth ye....ye Prateek hai tumhara aur Neelam ka beta.....

Parth - Hmm humme pata hai.....yahi to humme yaha leke aaya hai....

Prateek ne nahi socha tha ki Parth kuch aisa kah dega.....ab usko sab kuch batana hoga sabhi ko....

Jab sabne ye sunna to sab ke sab Prateek ko hi dekhne lag gaye....jaise intezaar mein ho ki wo kab kuch kahega......

Maa samajh jaati hai apne baccho ki pareshani.....Ye sacch hi hai....

Jab wo kuch nahi bol paa raha tha to Neelam uske pass aa gayi....

Neelam - inn sab ke baare mein kabhi aur baatein kar lena.....abhi hum aaye hai to hume tumko dekhne do.....

Neelam ne apna haath badhaya par aadhe mein hi rukk gayi...usko laga jaise baaki log usko nahi chu paa rahe hai waise hi wo bhi apne bete ko nahi chu payegi....aur isse sayad prateek ko dukh ho....to usne bich mein hi haath mod liya apna.....ye kisi se bhi chuppa nahi magar....

Haa par isse ye hua ki Prateek ke upar se dhyaan hat gaya tha sabhi ka......

Madhu - Kitna bura hai ye.....

Nikita - haa samne hoke bhi.....chu nahi paana.....

Nikita jab ye bol rahi thi to uske ander bahut kuch chal raha tha.......ek to wo jal rahi thi abhi Prateek se......par usko ye dekh ke bura bhi lag raha tha Prateek aur uski Maa ke liye......wo ye bhi soch rahi thi ki kya kabhi uske saath bhi aisa kuch hoga......kya uske Maa Baap bhi kisi din.....

Itni saari baatein chal rahi thi uske dimmag mein ki ab chahera ekdum se sapat ho gaya tha.....koi expression hi nahi baccha tha.....ya ye kahe itne emotions ummad rahe the ki samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki kaise expressions dikhaye jaaye.....

Chachi ne jab ye dekha ki Neelam Prateek ko chu bhi nahi sakti to uska dhyaan batane ke liye unhone Rupal didi ko aage kar diya.....

Chachi - Neelam Paarth isko jaante ho kya tum dono.....

Sab samajh rahe the ki kya chal raha ha....kisi ne kuch aisa nahi socha ki wo Chachi Neelam ko apne bete ko dekhne bhi nahi de rahi hai....accche se milne bhi nahi de rahi hai....

Neelam - ye Rupal hai kya......itni badi ho gayi ye.....Paarth pichli baar to kitni choti thi naa ye.....

Paarth - Haa.....dekho ab kitni badi ho gayi hai.....

Abhi unhone aisa kaha hi tha ki unn dono ki aakritiyan thodi aur dhundhli si ho gayi......

Ye dhundhlapan pahle bhi aa raha tha.....aur sabko dikhai bhi de raha tha par sab unse milne mein itne khoye hue the ki dhyaan hi nahi diya kisi ne......par iss baar aisa nahi hua.....

Ye dhundhlapan ye bata raha tha ki unke pass waqt kam hai.....aatmaon ko baandh ke nahi rakha jaa sakta agar rakha jaaye to unki yaadein dhundhli hone lag jaayegi jaisi ki unki aakriti hoti jaa rahi hai.....aur kuch waqt baad unko khud ke baare mein pata nahi hoga aur naa kisi aur ke baare mein......wo bas khud ko uss jagah pe fansa hua paayenge aur kuch bhi karenge uss jagah se nikalne ke liye.....

Wo logo pe hamla karenge unko pareshan karenge taaki unko waha se jaane diya jaaye....iss dauran wo apno ko bhi nuksan pahucha dete hai......

Sabne unn dono ki aakriti ko dhundhla hote dekha aur uss baare mein puccha......

Parth - Hamara waqt khatam ho raha hai....

Dadi - Kya matlab waqt khatam ho raha hai......

Neelam - Humme jaana hoga....hum yaha par aakhiri baar sabse milne aaye the.....

Dadi - nahi Neelam abhi nahi.....abhi to hum mille bhi nahi....aur....aur maine....maine mafi bhi nahi maangi.....

Neelam - Apne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya jiski wajah se aapko maafi maangni pade....Prateek ka dhyaan rakhiyega....

Parth - Beta sabki baatein sunna aur......agar koi kabhi kabhi daant bhi de to naraz nahi ho jaana....

Neelam - aap sab apna khayal rakhna.....Bhaiya, Pankaj bacche Prateek ka dhyaan rakhna.....

Prateek jaanta tha.....wo unn dono ko yaha pe rok sakta hai par isse bas dard milne wala tha.....agar wo abhi rukk gaye to aage kabhi bhi.....kabhi bhi yaha se nahi jaa paayenge anant kaal ke liye issi jagah pe fanse rahenge wo....aur unki yaadein dhundhali ho jaayegi...

Sayad agar ye pahle wala Prateek hota to wo ye karne ke baare mein sochta.....par ab wo badal raha tha....aur usne uss panne ko chod aage badhne ke baare mein socha....haa par usko ek baat ka bura lag raha tha wo chahta tha thoda aur waqt mille sabko....par isme wo kuch nahi kar sakta tha...

Pujari ji - (dheere se) Madhu dekho ye ab jaane wale hai kya tum inhe rokna chahti ho....

Madhu sabhi ko aise dekh ke emotional ho chukki thi sochne ki kashamta usme thi par jyada nahi....

Usne bas haa mein sar hilla diya.....

Pujari ji - Jaao unn dono ko jaake chu aao...

Madhu ne nki baat sunni ek baar unki taraf dekha.....aur bas binna kuch bole aage badh gayi.....aur badhne ke baad Madhu ne Parth aur Neelam ko chu liya.....

Yaha Prateek bhi unko chu sakta tha....par wo iss wajah se darr raha tha agar usne aisa kuch kiya to uski dark energy unke ander naa chali jaaye.....

Wo dono energy ke form mein the.....yun samajh lo paani ab agar kala rang daal de unme chahe ek hi boond kyun naa wo unpe effect karenge.....

Dark power hai bhi distructive.....

Madhu ke saath aisa nahi hai....uski power creative hai.....chizzon ko bana sakti hai.....jab usne unn dono ko touch kiya.....wo jo dhundhlapan tha unme......wo khatam ho gaya aur saath hi saath dono ekdum se chamakne lag gaye.....

Ye kya hua waha pe bas do log samajh paa rahe the prateek aur Pujari ji......DB tak ko iss baare mein utna pata nahi tha......usko to ye bhi pata nahi tha ki Slayer ke sarir se ye aatmayein nikalne wali hai....

Prateek iss baat ko jaanta tha par wo ye karana nahi chahta tha.....usko nahi pata tha Madhu iske baare mein jaan ke aage kaise react karegi......

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Prateek ek haath se apne gaal ko pakde hua tha aur uske dusre haath ko uski Bua ne pakda hua tha aur usko ghar ke ander leke jaa rahi thi.....

Gharwale pahle se hi thode pareshan the......unn sab ko achanak se bulla liya gaya tha Poonam Bua ke dwara......aur puchne pe kuch bataya bhi nahi unhone.....bas ye kaha ki Prateek ko to aane do....jab wo aayega to sabko ek saath batayegi.....

Abhi jab wo aaya to uske saath ghar mein ek energy ball bhi aake ghum ke gaya....wo log iss wajah se aur bhi chauk gaye.....wo energy ball ghar ke suraksha kawach ke ander aa gaya tha....wo bhi aaram se....

Wo sab ussi ko to dekhne ke liye bahar ki oor jaa rahe the aur unko Prateek dikh gaya.....Poonam Bua uska haath pakad ke usko unki taraf hi leke aa rahi thi......

Aur wo energy balls abhi bhi Prateek ke charo taraf ghoom rahi thi...

Nikita - Rupal didi ye.....ye kaisi chizz hai....aur ye uske charo taraf aise ghoom kyun rahi hai.....

Rupal - Pata nahi Nikita.....Maine bhi isko aaj hi dekha hai....aur mujhe yaad nahi aa raha iss jaisi chizz ke baare mein kabhi padha ho Maine......Tunne wo dekha kya.....

Nikita - Kya....

Rupal - Usko dekh uska haath kaha hai.....lagta hai aaj phir se :lol: kutta gaya ye.....

Nikita - :lol: arre haa inn golo ke dekhne ke wajah se meri nazar uske gaalon pe gayi hi nahi....

Chachi - Maa ye kya hai....ye ghere ke ander aa gaya aur humme usko binna dekhe pata bhi nahi chala...

Dadi - Main wahi soch rahi hu bahu......iss chizz ke baare mein sayad kisi se suna tha maine.....par mujhe yaad nahi aa raha...

Ye sab yaha apni pani baatein kar rahe the wahi Prateek ko leke pahuch gayi thi Poonam Bua ghar darwaje pe.....ab sab wahi pe khade the to unhone kuch kaha nahi bas unko dekhti rahi.....lekin wo sab to apne mein hi lage hue the darwaja gher ke.....

Poonam Bua- Aap log humme ander aane denge bhi yaa nahi.....darwaje pe kyun khade ho saare.....

Gussa hone ki wajah to kaafi thi unki jaise ki wo puri baat jaan nahi paayi Prateek se.....kyun ki ye sab ke sab darwaje pe aa gaye the.....dusri ye ki wo dono energy balls.....unko Prateek ke aise chakkar kaatte hue dekh unko aur gussa aa raha tha kyunki wo bhi ek wajah the baat puri naa hone ka.....par gussa nikala unhone baaki sab pe jo darwaje pe khade hue the.....

Bua ne jor se apni baat kahi.....aur unki baatein sunne ke baad saare log ekdum se unke gusse se laal chahre ko dekhne lag gaye.....kisi ne bhi jyada kuch puchne ka socha hi nahi kyunki lagbhag saare hi unke gusse ko jaante the.....bas phir kya.....

Saare ke saare ander jaane lag gaye par Bua ke picche pahle unko aur Prateek ko ander jaane ki jagah di unhone.....uske baad hi baaki ke saare ander jaane lage the....

Abhi bhi wo saare unn do energy balls ko hi dekh rahe the...aur janne ki koshish kar rahe the aakhir wo hai kya.....

DB aur Leader dono ander aaye to the par bas jaake Pujari ji ke pass khade ho gaye the.....ek unme se apni beti ko dekh raha tha aur soch raha tha ki ab wo usko sab bata sakta hai......dusra pujari ji se baatein kar raha tha....

Jaise hi hum ander gaye aur darwaja band hua.....ander aur jyada roshani phail gayi......aur uske baad jo hua usko dekh ke sab hairaan the.....kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya bole kaise bole.....bas aankhen faadein dekhe jaa rahe the.....

Kisi ko bhi kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.....yaa yun kaho ki yakkin hi nahi ho raha tha ki abhi jo wo dekh rahe hai wo sab sach hai yaa koi sapna......

Kisi ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki kuch kare......ek darr tha unke ander agar ye sapna hua aur maine kuch kiya to kahi ye tut naa jaaye.....

Ye haal gharwalo ka tha.....baaki jo alag se the jaise Nikita, Madhu, Pujari ji, Leader aur DB ye bas dekh rahe the.....kabhi unn dono ko to kabhi baakiyon ko jo ekdum se murat ki tarah ban gaye the.....

K.bua baakiyon ki tarah nahi thi....wo baharwali hoke bhi gharwalo ke jaise hi thi.....

Madhu se tab raha nahi gaya jab usne dekha Daksh ke aankhen ekdum se aashuon se lablabba gayi hai.....tab usne inn sab ke bich bolna shuru kiya.....

Madhu - Ye dono kaun hai.....aur aap sab....

Ab wo bol rahi thi to Nikita ne bhi uski baat ko dohraya......par uske baad bhi koi khass asar nahi pada tha....

"Bhaiya...kaise ho aap"

Ye sabd jaise hi Daksh Mama ke kaano mein pade.....jo aanshu abhi tak aankhon mein fansse hue the.....unko jaise rasta mil gaya.....honth chal nahi paa rahe the.....kaanp se rahe the.....kisi tarah khud ko sambhalte hue.....

Daksh - Neelam ye sach......sach mein tu hi hai.....

"Haa Bhaiya......Main hi hu.....aap kya bhul gaye mujhe....haa...."

P.Bua - Paarth.....

"Poonam....."

P.Bua - Maa.....aapne sunna.....Papa.....dekha aapne.....Bhaiya dekho....ye....ye Parth hai....hamara Parth...

Dadi - Haa....Poonam....haa ye...ye Parth hi hai.....

Khud ko bahut sambhalne ke baad kaha tha ye Dadi ne......aur itna kahne ke baad aage badhi ki ek baar apne bete ko chu sakke......par wo mumkin nahi tha.....

Ye bhi kisi sazza se kam nahi lagta.....aap kisi se bahut arson baad mile wo bhi tab jab aapko koi ummid hi nahi thi ki mil sakenge....aur jab mille to bas ek dusre ko dekh bhar hi sakte hai aur kuch nahi.....bas dekhna aur baatein karna....

Dada ji bhi ro rahe the par uss tarah nahi theek wahi haal Chacha ji ka tha......Par bua, Chachi aur Dadi ka haal alag sa tha....

Aisa hota hai aksar dekha jaata hai ye.....Bhai Bhai ke bich ka lagav Baap Bete ke bich ka lagav dikhai nahi deta agar hum Bhai bahen ke bich ka yaa Maa bete ke bich ka lagav dekhe.....par wo hota hai....aisa nahi ki ye hota hi nahi hai....

Neelam aur Daksh mama ka bhi kuch aisa hi chal raha tha.....Neelam ki jo aakriti banni hui thi usme saaf saaf dikhai de raha tha ki uske aankhon se aanshu nikal rahe hai.....par Daksh unko ponch nahi paa raha tha....

K.Bua ke bhi aashu aa rahe the par wo waha se kuch dur chali gayi thi.....aur saath mein Madhu aur Nikita ko bhi leke chali gayi thi.....khud se nahi unko sawal karne the iss wajah se wo dono gaye the.....

Jab unhone dekha Prateek bas aise hi khada hai.....to unko laga sayad isko pata nahi ki ye kaun hai.....jab ki unhone khud hi dekha tha baaki sab Paarth aur Neelam ka naam le rahe hai..

K.Bua - Prateek.....ye tumhare Maa Papa hai.....jaao millo unse.....

K.bua ki baaton ne jaise baakiyon ko jagga diya......unn logo ne to phir bhi waqt bitaya tha unn dono ke sath par Prateek ne.....usne kaha waqt bitaya tha......chota sa tha.....sayad yaad bhi naa ho usko ki wo dono kaun hai.....

Poonam Bua uth ke gayi Prateek ke pass aur usko Paarth ke saamne leke aayi....

Aisa bilkul nahi tha ki Prateek ko inn sab se koi matlab hi nahi tha....matlab tha bahut matlab tha....tabhi to uske aankhon mein aanshu the.....wo baakiyon ko khush dekh ke khush ho raha tha.....

P.Bua - Prateek ye.....ye tumhare Papa hai.....Parth ye....ye Prateek hai tumhara aur Neelam ka beta.....

Parth - Hmm humme pata hai.....yahi to humme yaha leke aaya hai....

Prateek ne nahi socha tha ki Parth kuch aisa kah dega.....ab usko sab kuch batana hoga sabhi ko....

Jab sabne ye sunna to sab ke sab Prateek ko hi dekhne lag gaye....jaise intezaar mein ho ki wo kab kuch kahega......

Maa samajh jaati hai apne baccho ki pareshani.....Ye sacch hi hai....

Jab wo kuch nahi bol paa raha tha to Neelam uske pass aa gayi....

Neelam - inn sab ke baare mein kabhi aur baatein kar lena.....abhi hum aaye hai to hume tumko dekhne do.....

Neelam ne apna haath badhaya par aadhe mein hi rukk gayi...usko laga jaise baaki log usko nahi chu paa rahe hai waise hi wo bhi apne bete ko nahi chu payegi....aur isse sayad prateek ko dukh ho....to usne bich mein hi haath mod liya apna.....ye kisi se bhi chuppa nahi magar....

Haa par isse ye hua ki Prateek ke upar se dhyaan hat gaya tha sabhi ka......

Madhu - Kitna bura hai ye.....

Nikita - haa samne hoke bhi.....chu nahi paana.....

Nikita jab ye bol rahi thi to uske ander bahut kuch chal raha tha.......ek to wo jal rahi thi abhi Prateek se......par usko ye dekh ke bura bhi lag raha tha Prateek aur uski Maa ke liye......wo ye bhi soch rahi thi ki kya kabhi uske saath bhi aisa kuch hoga......kya uske Maa Baap bhi kisi din.....

Itni saari baatein chal rahi thi uske dimmag mein ki ab chahera ekdum se sapat ho gaya tha.....koi expression hi nahi baccha tha.....ya ye kahe itne emotions ummad rahe the ki samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki kaise expressions dikhaye jaaye.....

Chachi ne jab ye dekha ki Neelam Prateek ko chu bhi nahi sakti to uska dhyaan batane ke liye unhone Rupal didi ko aage kar diya.....

Chachi - Neelam Paarth isko jaante ho kya tum dono.....

Sab samajh rahe the ki kya chal raha ha....kisi ne kuch aisa nahi socha ki wo Chachi Neelam ko apne bete ko dekhne bhi nahi de rahi hai....accche se milne bhi nahi de rahi hai....

Neelam - ye Rupal hai kya......itni badi ho gayi ye.....Paarth pichli baar to kitni choti thi naa ye.....

Paarth - Haa.....dekho ab kitni badi ho gayi hai.....

Abhi unhone aisa kaha hi tha ki unn dono ki aakritiyan thodi aur dhundhli si ho gayi......

Ye dhundhlapan pahle bhi aa raha tha.....aur sabko dikhai bhi de raha tha par sab unse milne mein itne khoye hue the ki dhyaan hi nahi diya kisi ne......par iss baar aisa nahi hua.....

Ye dhundhlapan ye bata raha tha ki unke pass waqt kam hai.....aatmaon ko baandh ke nahi rakha jaa sakta agar rakha jaaye to unki yaadein dhundhli hone lag jaayegi jaisi ki unki aakriti hoti jaa rahi hai.....aur kuch waqt baad unko khud ke baare mein pata nahi hoga aur naa kisi aur ke baare mein......wo bas khud ko uss jagah pe fansa hua paayenge aur kuch bhi karenge uss jagah se nikalne ke liye.....

Wo logo pe hamla karenge unko pareshan karenge taaki unko waha se jaane diya jaaye....iss dauran wo apno ko bhi nuksan pahucha dete hai......

Sabne unn dono ki aakriti ko dhundhla hote dekha aur uss baare mein puccha......

Parth - Hamara waqt khatam ho raha hai....

Dadi - Kya matlab waqt khatam ho raha hai......

Neelam - Humme jaana hoga....hum yaha par aakhiri baar sabse milne aaye the.....

Dadi - nahi Neelam abhi nahi.....abhi to hum mille bhi nahi....aur....aur maine....maine mafi bhi nahi maangi.....

Neelam - Apne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya jiski wajah se aapko maafi maangni pade....Prateek ka dhyaan rakhiyega....

Parth - Beta sabki baatein sunna aur......agar koi kabhi kabhi daant bhi de to naraz nahi ho jaana....

Neelam - aap sab apna khayal rakhna.....Bhaiya, Pankaj bacche Prateek ka dhyaan rakhna.....

Prateek jaanta tha.....wo unn dono ko yaha pe rok sakta hai par isse bas dard milne wala tha.....agar wo abhi rukk gaye to aage kabhi bhi.....kabhi bhi yaha se nahi jaa paayenge anant kaal ke liye issi jagah pe fanse rahenge wo....aur unki yaadein dhundhali ho jaayegi...

Sayad agar ye pahle wala Prateek hota to wo ye karne ke baare mein sochta.....par ab wo badal raha tha....aur usne uss panne ko chod aage badhne ke baare mein socha....haa par usko ek baat ka bura lag raha tha wo chahta tha thoda aur waqt mille sabko....par isme wo kuch nahi kar sakta tha...

Pujari ji - (dheere se) Madhu dekho ye ab jaane wale hai kya tum inhe rokna chahti ho....

Madhu sabhi ko aise dekh ke emotional ho chukki thi sochne ki kashamta usme thi par jyada nahi....

Usne bas haa mein sar hilla diya.....

Pujari ji - Jaao unn dono ko jaake chu aao...

Madhu ne nki baat sunni ek baar unki taraf dekha.....aur bas binna kuch bole aage badh gayi.....aur badhne ke baad Madhu ne Parth aur Neelam ko chu liya.....

Yaha Prateek bhi unko chu sakta tha....par wo iss wajah se darr raha tha agar usne aisa kuch kiya to uski dark energy unke ander naa chali jaaye.....

Wo dono energy ke form mein the.....yun samajh lo paani ab agar kala rang daal de unme chahe ek hi boond kyun naa wo unpe effect karenge.....

Dark power hai bhi distructive.....

Madhu ke saath aisa nahi hai....uski power creative hai.....chizzon ko bana sakti hai.....jab usne unn dono ko touch kiya.....wo jo dhundhlapan tha unme......wo khatam ho gaya aur saath hi saath dono ekdum se chamakne lag gaye.....

Ye kya hua waha pe bas do log samajh paa rahe the prateek aur Pujari ji......DB tak ko iss baare mein utna pata nahi tha......usko to ye bhi pata nahi tha ki Slayer ke sarir se ye aatmayein nikalne wali hai....

Prateek iss baat ko jaanta tha par wo ye karana nahi chahta tha.....usko nahi pata tha Madhu iske baare mein jaan ke aage kaise react karegi......

Next update mein thoda aur family drama





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