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amazing story with loads of potential.. lets wait and see how it unfolds...
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Nice story but its plot slightly seems like harry potter, i don't mean to hurt you or anything. I like your story, but lately the protagonist has been undermined, he hasn't merged with his demon spirit, its been too long since they came to existence, and neither he is succeeding in controlling on the thunder element.
And too much secrets, everyone keeps secret from him, as if he is some danger, he shouldn't know all that, but eventually they spill the truth, then what is the point in hiding for so long.
One more there is hero but we haven't seen his female counterpart yet, will there be any romance, i mean fantasy and all, romance is must in fantasy stories.
Just saying.....
And too much secrets, everyone keeps secret from him, as if he is some danger, he shouldn't know all that, but eventually they spill the truth, then what is the point in hiding for so long.
One more there is hero but we haven't seen his female counterpart yet, will there be any romance, i mean fantasy and all, romance is must in fantasy stories.
Just saying.....
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Ab tak
Rupal didi kuch karne wali thi....par ye wo nahi kar rahi thi...asal mein uss kulhadi ke karan ho raha tha ye sab....Wahi dusri oor Db ke Pita aur cousin yaha Earth pe the...par usko ghanta pata nahi tha....Slayer waha Fumos pe ab aatmayon ke saath saath dead bodies bhi khane laga tha...energy puri nahi ho paa rahi thi...par fir bhi..wo waha pe fans chukka tha...aur Prateek laga hua tha cheezein solve karne mein...pahle to wo Rupal didi ke pass hi jaane wala tha...par Jwala ke kabile mein kuch baat ho gayi to waha jaana pada...jab wapas aaya to usko pata Old Owl ke bande ne Pankaj aur uske Pita ke baare mein bataya...jispe use usko madad lene ko kaha aur dono pe nazar rakhne ko kaha...
Ab aage...
Main class mein baitha tha...2nd period chal raha tha...aaj HOD sahab khud nahi aaye the....aur pata nahi iss baat ko leke main kyun pareshan ho raha tha...main madad karna chah raha tha unki....jabki unhone mujhe niccha dikhane ke liye kya kuch nahi kiya....actually mein unhone nahi....wo sab sayad Pankaj ne kiya tha...unhone to kuch kiya hi nahi bas...class mein kuch questions pucche the...haa out of syllabus the wo sab...par fir bhi aur kuch nahi kiya tha...Main ye sab soch hi raha tha ki
Dhruv - Iss baat ko abhi ke liye side karo...aur ye socho...ki Nikita ko kaise manana hai...usko samjhana hoga...
Main - Haa par kaise....kya karu ki wo samjhe....
Dhruv - Ab ye to tumpe hai......yaha se nikalna hoga....
Main - Kya...
Dhruv - Niklo yaha se....bahar wo dono aaye hue hai...wo Old owl ke log...sayad kuch khabar laaye hai...
Main - par abhi hum class ke bich mein hai....kuch karta hu....
Dhruv - Nahi waqt nahi hai....bas utho...aur nikal jao yaha se...
Main - Par ye....
Main bol hi raha tha ki acchanak se DB ko kuch hua...uske Kaan lal ho gaye...aur chahra bhi ajeeb sa hone laga...kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha....aur dekhte hi dekhte uska Shield uske haath mein aa gaya...puri class ussi ko dekhne lag gayi...
A.prof - Elf Prince...shant ho jao...kya baat hai batao....
Par wo kaha kisi ki sunne wala tha...aiisa lag hi nahi raha tha wo apne bas mein hai...
Dhruv - Iska element ye aisa kyun kar raha hai....Isko bahar leke jao....
Main - Hua kya hai isko...
Dhruv - agar bahar nahi leke gaye isko to ye sabko maar dega,...iska element iske control mein nahi hai....bahar khali jagah leke jao isko jaha ye apni energy bahar nikal sake...jaldi...
Maine usko pakda aur usko bahar leke jaane laga....par ye bahut muskil ho raha tha mere liye....tabhi Nikita bhi mere saath aa gayi aur usko pakad ke leke gayi mere saath....
Nikita - Kya hua isko....ye aise kyun kar raha hai...
Main - Iska Element wo iske control mein nahi hai....humme madad chahiye....
Nikita - Iska to Nature Element hai naa....iske baare mein to bahut kam baatein hi pata hai...
Main - abhi isko kisi khali jagah pe leke jaana hai...agar kuch hua to ye apni energy waha chod sakta hai binna kisi ko nuksan pahuchaye..
Dhruv - Maine pata kiya hai....kuch bahut bura hone wala hai...ye koi aam ghatna nahi hai....koi iska apna hai jo musibat mein hai..ye waha jaan chahta hai...par abhi iski powers uni badhi nahi hai ki ye sidha waha jaa sake...body resist kar rahi hai iski....
Main - Musibat mein...kon...kuch pata hai,...aur kaha ho raha hai ye sab.....batao main dekhta hu..
Dhruv - Nahi wo pata nahi hai wo hi pata lagana hai....
Main usse baat hi kar raha tha ki Old Owl ke log waha pe aa gaye...
Wo - Elf King ko maarne wale hai....wo yahi hai...
Main - Kya...kya bol rahe ho...wo yaha kaise aur kon marne wala hai unko....
Wo - Pankaj...
Main - Kya baat kar rahe ho...Mujhe waha leke chalo...
Wo- Hum aapke liye portal nahi khol sakte utni power nahi hai...
Main - Dhruv tum karo...
Dhruv - Jwala ko bulao...wo jaldi karega help...
Main - Jwala portal kholo......
Mera bolna tha usne naa sirf waha tak ke liye portal khola balki waha pe aa bhi gaya..wahi uske kuch log bhi aaye...aur unn sab ne DB aur Nikita ke charo taraf ek ghera bana diya...taaki kuch bura naa ho..
Portal se bahar nikalte hi main aur Jwala ek ho gaye....par saamne dekha to waha koi ELf nahi tha..aur waise bhi maine Elf King ko kabhi dekha nahi tha ki unko jaan paun.....Elf country gaya jarur tha par waha mil nahi sakka tha unse...
Haa to yaha koi elf nahi tha...par bhagdar macchi hui thi....Insan the yaha pe bahut saare insan....aur sabhi yaha waha bhage jaa rahe the...ajeeb tha ye....waha kuch tha hi nahi jisko dekh ke ye sab bhag rahe ho....
Main - Jwala kuch dikh raha hai kya...mujhe to aisa kuch nahi dikh raha jisse ye sab bhag rahe hai...
Jwala - Nahi kuch bhi nah...sab sahi hai...haa hawa mein sayad kuch hai....
Main - Fir ye bhag kyun rahe hai....Jwala humme alag hona hoga....mujhe inme se kisi se baat karni hogi...
Jwala - AAp aise bhi kar sakte ho..aapko bas uske sar ko chunna hai uski saari batein pata chal jaayegi...
Main - Hmm theek hai..
EK banda aa raha tha meri oor maine usko hi pakda...aur uske sar ko chuwa....mujhe sab dikhne laga.....uske baare mein..uske pariwar ke baare mein....aur bhi naa jaane kya kya....
Main - Jwala aise to waqt lag jayega...
Jwala - Ha to aapko puchna hoga naa jo puchna chahte ho....nahi to ye sab kuch hi batata jaayega...
Main - accha....
Main - Kya hua yaha..kyun bhag rahe ho....
"pata nahi main to bank jaa raha tha...waha se bahar aaya....car mein baitha....aur fir hawa mein kuch phail gaya aur main...main...fir pata nahi kya hua....
Main - Jwala ye bhi Hawa ke baare mein bol raha hai....batao kya hai Hawa mein...
Jwala - kuch dhuwa sa hai..par ye to aam baat hai yaha pe....jab bhi aaya hu...aisa hi rahta hai....haa thoda alag hai usse ye....
Dhruv - Pankaj kaun hai yaad hai naa.....ye sab usne hi kiya hoga....abhi Elf King ko dhundho....
Main - Par kaise...Main nahi jaanta unko....
Dhruv - ye jo bhi gas hai bas insano pe kaam kar raha hai....tumpe nahi kar raha hai...unpe bhi nahi kar raha hoga....upar jao...aur dekho kaun shant hai inn sab ke bich....
Main - Hmm ye sahi lag raha hai....Jwala chalo....
Hum udte hue upar gaye aur yaha waha dekhne lage....ab Jwala cheel tha...uski aankhen tej...nahi bahut tej thi....hume upar se pata chal gaya....kuch log the waha jo shant the....par confused the....
Main - haa mil gaye.....par yaha to ek se jyada log hai......
Main sabhi ko dhyaan se dekhne laga...ek baat yaad aa gayi thi mujhe...jo DB ne batayi thi....bas ab mujhe acche se dekhna tha aur mujhe pata chal jaata inn sab mein wo kaun hai..
DB ne ek baar baaton baaton mein baaya tha ki uske Pita ek baar uske saath khel rahe the ...jab wo chota tha..tab galti se...unki kaan pe koi cheej lag gayi thi...wo aajtak waisa hi hai....Main jaanta tha ki unhone roop badla hua hai...par ye kaan wali baat ke alawa aur koi baat nahi thi....jisse unko pahchana jaaye...Main dekh raha tha ki unme se ek ke kaan mujhe kuch ajeeb lage..jo insano ki tarah to bilkul hi nahi tha....Main jaldi se unke pass gaya aur unko udda ke waha se leke nikal gaya......ye sab itni jaldi hua ki sayad wo samajh nah paaye...par jab unko samajh aaya kki main unko waha se utha ke leke jaa raha hu....to wo mujhe..matlab Jwala aur meri body pe hamla karne lagh gaye....
Main - Shant rahiye....madad karne aaya hu...
Par sayad isnko ye sab samajh hi nahi aa raha tha....ye pankh kiche jaa rahe the...
Jwala - Ab aur nahi....
Unse turant portal khola aur unko fenk diya ander uske....
Main - ye kya kiya.....kaha gaye wo....
Jwala - School mein...aur kaha...ab batao kya karna hai...
Main - Hum inn insano ko aise nahi chod sakte..humme madad karni hogi....
Main wapas se wahi chala gaya jaha wo sab bhage jaa rahe the....
Main - Jwala pata laga sakte ho kya...ki ye dhuwa kaha se aa raha hai....
Jwala - 2 jagah hai...aur dono hi alag alag dhuwa hai.....ek sabko aisa kara raha hai...aur dusra unko aisa karne se rok raha hai....
Main - Rok raha hai.....Matlab koi aur hai yaha madad ke liye....ye dure wala kaha se aa raha hai...
Maine ye puccha aur Jwala chal diya uss oor....waha aaya to ek aadmi tha....chadar odde hue...baitha hua jamin pe....aur uske chadar se hi wo dhuwa bahar aa raha tha....
Main - Jwala ye to baatein samajh jaayega naa hamari...
Jwala - Haa jarur...
Main - aapko iski power aur badhani hogi...tab jaake sab sahi hoga...
Wo - agar power badhaya to balance kharab ho jaayega..aur unko pata chal jayega mere yaha hone ka....tum...tum kon ho...aur yaha kaise...
Main - Main madad karne aaya hu...aap ye sambhalo main usko dekhta hu jisne ye shuru kiya...
Wo - Nahi...tum tum yaha raho....main usko dekhta hu...
Main - Par main ye sab nahi jaanta...aur wo khatarnak ho sakta hai...
Wo - agar tum yaha se gaye to main ye band kar dunga...jiske baad ye insan yaa to khud ko maar denge yaa ek dusre ko maarne lagenge...
Main - ye kya baat hui....tum to acche lagte ho...
Wo - agar tum hille bhi to sab band kar dunga....
Main - Theek hai main yahi hu...bas sab normal kardo...
Pata nahi ye kon tha...aur aisa kyun lag raha tha ki ye usko bacha raha hai jisne ye sab suru kiya tha...Abhi main aur kuch karne wala nahi tha...kyunki main nahi chahta tha ki koi insan marre....to main uski baat maan ke khada raha....kuch der mein waha sab normal hone laga...jo log yaha waha bhag rahe the wo sab dhire dhire normal hone lage...haa unke sar mein dard shuru ho gaya tha...Main unki oor dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar uspe padi jo ye sab kar raha tha....wo waha se gayab ho gaya...aur jab main picche mudda to wo kambal wala bhi gayab tha.....pata nahi kon the ye dono...
Main - Jwala chalo ek baar upar se sab dekh lete hai uske baad wapas chalte hai Elf King ke pass....
Hum dono upar gaye aur waha se ek baar charo oor dekhne lage....ab sab apne sar pakde hue dikh rahe the....bas ek ko chod ke.....aur wo ek gusse mein lag raha tha....Main jaldi se uski taraf badha par....par wo gayab ho gaya.....mujhe laga tha jaise inn sab ke picche iska bhi haath ho sakta hai...par confirm nahi kar paya....
Thodi der yaha waha dekhne ke baad bhi kuch nahi dikha....fir maine Jwala ko bolke portal se wapas School chala gaya....
Yaha pe alag hi kuch chal raha tha....Elf King ko kuch chootein lagi hui thi....par wo yaha apna illaz nahi karana chahte the...unko wapas apne planet pe jaana tha....par wo binna apne senapati matlab apne bhatije ke bhi nahi jaana chahte the....DB wahi pe tha....par wo waha hoke bhi waha nahi ho...aisa lag raha tha...Nikita uske saath thi...uddas lag rha tha wo...Main gaya waha...
Jwala aur Main alag ho chukke the...wo jaa chuka tha....
Main sabhi ke pass gaya pahle...waha pe principal aur baaki ke prof. bhi the....sabhi Elf King se baatein kar rahe the unko samjha rahe the....Mujhe dekh Bua mere paas aayi....
Bua - Yaha kya kar rahe ho...DB ke pass jao...usko jarurat hogi tumhari....
Main - Meri....par kyun...
Bua - Kyun....tumhe pata nahi....tum the kaha ab tak...
Main - Main baad mein batata hu...abhi uske pass jaata hu....
Main gaya DB ke pass....
Main - Kya hua...aise kyun baithe ho...tumhare papa yaha aaye hue hai...
Nikita - Isko wapas leke jaa rahe hai.....aur..
Main - Kya....wapas...par...accha kitne din ke liye...
Nikita - Hamesha ke liye...aur isko waha kaidkhane mein rahna hoga....
Main - Ka bol rahi ho....dimmag ghum gaya hai kya...
DB - wo sach bol rahi hai....Maine apne Raja pe hamla kiya hai....aur iske liye mujhe maut ki sazza milegi....
Main - Hamla...Raja...hua kya ye to batao...
Inko chod dete hai aur hum chalte hai.....Spain....
Spain mein Rupal didi ko naa jaane kya sujhi ki wo bas waha se sabhi criminals ko khatam karne ke baare mein soch rahi thi.....aur wo Pirate aur nakli warewolf dono issi kaam mein lage hue the...wo dono ke dono list bana rahe the...jinme sabhi criminals ke baare mein likha jaa raha tha....aur jab ye kaam ho jaata to ye dono....inn sab ko khatam karne wale the....jisme inki madad ke liye aur bhi log aane wale the.....
Rupal didi abhi apne office mein baithi hui thi.....ki tabhi waha pe Pope aa jaate hai...Didi ne unko ander bulaya aur bithaya....
Didi - Aap yaha....mujhe bula lete...main aa jaati....
Pope - Nahi aise hi aa gaya....mujhe laga mujhe tumse milna chahiye....kuch baatein hai jo batani chahiye....
Rupal didi - Baatein to hoti rahegi...par abhi meri dilchaspi isme hai ki aapko kyun laga aapko mujhse milna chahiye....
Pope - hahaaha....bilkul apne Pita ki tarah baat karti ho...haa to mujhe aisa isliye laga kyunki tumhe meri madad chahiye hogi......
Rupal didi - Madad mujhe....nahi aisi to koi baat nahi hai...
Pope- Mujhe aabhas hua hai ki tumhe madad chahiye hogi...abhi nahi to kuch waqt baad....main apna number chod jaata hu....tum call kar lena waqt padne pe....ek aur baat main tumhari har tarah se madad karunga...tumhare parivar ke kaafi ahsaan hai mujhpe...agar kuch kam kar sakku to bahut accha hoga...
Rupal didi - ji theek hai...
Unhone number diya aur Rupal didi ne wo number save kar liya...aur Pope chale gaye...par Didi sochne lag gayi ki aakhir ye kya madad karenge...
Kulhadi - Ab insan madad karenge hamari...kaise din aa gaye hai...
Ye baat Rupal didi ko badi ajeeb lagi...ye pahli baar tha jab iss kulhadi ne iss tarah i baat ki ho...uske ander se jaise jalan ghrina...aur naa jaane kaun kaun se bhaw jhalak rahe the.....Didi ko ekdum se laga jaise wo koi bahut bura kaam karne jaa rahi hai iss kulhadi ki baat ko maan ke...par sayad ye baat wo kulhadi bhi samajh gayi...aur issiliye sambhal bhi gayi...
Kulhadi- Mujhe lagta hai ek aur sararat karne ka waqt aa gaya hai...chalo tumhari saheliyon se mill ke aate hai...
Ye baat sunke Didi apne soch se bhatak gayi....aur fir se jaise iss kulhadi ke jaal mein fans gayi ho...wo jaane ke liye taiyaar ho gayi....
Inko apni shararat karne dete hai...aur hum chalte hai Demos pe....jaha Elf country ke Senapati yaani...DB ke cousin ko pakad liya gaya tha....aur abhi wo naye naye bane hue Senapati ke saamne khada tha....
(DB ke bhai ke respect mein)
Thodi pahle chalte hai...dekhte hai hua kya jo ye Earth se yaha aa gaya aur ab yaha pe kaidi bana hua hai...
Main bahut gusse mein thaa.....aaj to sab plan ke hisab se hi ho raha tha...par pata nahi fir kya hua...aur sab kharab ho gaya...wo dusri dawayi kon leke aaya tha waha....agar wo nahi hoti to wahi pe Chacha ji maare jaate....aur DB ko to sab nalayak hi samajhte hai...main Raja ban jaata....aur mera raj hota Elf country pe....fir bas aish mauj hi thi...par nahi....
Main ye sab badbadate hue Demos mein aa pahucha...bahut din baad mauka milla tha yaha pe Senapati se milne ka....uss din ke baad se iski koi khabar hi nahi aayi thi...aur wo Suraj pata nahi kaha tha....kitna oata lagaya par kuch pata nahi chala....
Main abhi badh hi raha tha ki ek sainik ne mujhe dekh liya....par isme koi badi baat nahi thi.....yaha pe log jaante the mujhe....Maine bhi usko haath dikha ke apne pass bulaya....aur uisse Senapati se milwane ko bola....par pata nahi isko kya hua...ye pahle to mujhe ghurta hua aa raha tha...aur bas itna hi nahi uske baad aate hi mere upar talwar taan di...aur fir hathkadi laga ke mujhe leke jaane laga.....Waise o main bach jaatapar dekhna chahta tha ki inn sab ke picche hai kon...
Main - umne mujhe pahchana nahi kya....Main tumhare Sena pati ka dost hu....aur tumhare Rajkumar bhi mujhe jaante hai...
Wo - Raj kumar ka naam nah lena.....tum bas senapati ko jaante the....Rajkumar ka naam inn sab se dur rahe wahi sabke liye aaccha hai...samjhe...ek aur baat.....wo nahi rahe...
Main - Kya Rajkumar nahi rahe.....
Wo - Aee kya bolta hai.....Senapati ji nahi rahe...unko sajja milli hai Kulhadi dene ke karan...
Main - Kya....to usne wo diya tha....phir ye Suraj aaya kyun nahi.....
Main ye sochne lag gaya.....
Main - Kisne maara usko...
Wo - Hamare naye Senapati ne.....jo unhi ke bete hai....
Main - Kya....apne Pita ko maar diya...
Wo - Haa wo bhi sabke saamne....tabhi to Maharaj khush hai unse...
Main - Ye accha nahi hua....
Thodi hi der mein hum dono pahuch gaye naye Senapati ji ke pass....wo abhi kisi se baat kar rahe the...
Senapati - kon hai ye....
Sipahi- Senapati ji ye khud ko aape Pita ka dost batata hai.....
Main - Haa Main unka dost tha....aur jo bhi hua sunn ke burra laga....
Senapati - Hmm Bura hua unke saath....aur mere saath bhi...aur mera parivar...unke saath bhi....pata hai ab waha bas mera ek chota bhai rah gaya hai Aadmi ke naam pe......aur sabhi auratein hi hai....jab maine wo sab unko bachane ke liye kiya....tabhi unhone mujhe ghar se nikal diya....Ab batao galti kiski hai...
Main - Hmm waqt ki galti ha....aaahhh ye kya kar rahe ho....
Main bol hi raha tha ki pata nahi kaha se uske pass ek talwar aa gayi....jiska metal ekdum se laal hua padaa tha...matlab garam tha....aur usne usko mere hath se touch kara diya...
Senapati - Ye bhi waqt ki galti hai....ye waqt bada kamina hota hai....kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar deta hai....accha aur kiski galti hai....
Main - Lucife.....
Baat Puri hoti usse pahle hi wahi talwar mere pairon pe satta di....
Senapati - Raja kabhi galat nahi hota....Raja hamesa hi sahi hota hai....aur pujniya hota hai....uspe sawal karna matlab maut ko bulana...to ab batao galti kiski thi...
Main - Uski jisne wo kulhadi li thi....tumhare Pita se....
Senapati - haa ye kuch kuch sahi hai...Khol do isko....
Uss sipahi ne mera bandhan khola...
Senapati - To usko sazza kaisi mulni chahiye....
Main - Maut...maut hi milni chahiye....
Wo - Main bhi wahi chahta hu...par ye hsh mein aa jaaye fir isko tadpa tadpa ke marunga.....aur kuch pata bhi to karna hai....
Main - kya...
Wo - kulhadi kaha hai ye baat.....tumhe to pata nahi hai naa....
Main - Nahi main nahi jaanta....
Wo - hmm....sipahi....pata karo ye sach bol raha hai yaa nahi.....aur agar sach ho to isko wapas bhej dena...sunno ye aakhiri baar hai jab tum yaha yun hi muh utttha ke aa gaye ho....mere Pita ke dost the.....issliye jaane de raha hu...agli baar se binna bulaye agar yaha dikhe to dikhoge nahi....
Main samajh nahi paya ye piddi sa ladka...mujhe dhamki de raha tha....aur mujhe dar bhi lag raha tha...iss chuzze se.....sach mein isme kuch alag baat thi....wo Sipahi mujhe kahi leke gaya aur mujhe kuch pinne ke liye de diya...usko pitte hi mujhe neend jaisi aane lagi....aur jab aankh khuli to main kahi aur hi tha....wo sipahi mere saath tha.....Mere uthte hi usne mujhe waha se jaane ko kaha....main bhi waha se nikal gaya.....mujhe pata tha yaha pe ab rahna matlab bekar ka lafda
Main waha se Elf world jaane ko hi tha...ki yaad aaya ki Chacha ji to waha Earth pe hai...pahle waha jaan hoga...aur bahana alag banana hoga ki kaha tha abhi tak...
Maine Earth ke liye Portal khola aur waha chala gaya....
Yaha aane ke baad mujhe dundhna tha ki ye gaye kaha....maine try kiya....par pata hi nahi chal raha tha....abhi main aur try karta usse pahle kuch logh aaye aur mujhe apne saath chalne ko kaha....
Main - Kon ho tum sab...
Unme se ek ne bataya wo yaha ke school se hai aur wo mujhe dundh rahe hai bahut der se...chacha ji wahi hai...
Main bhi chal diya unke saath...ab iss jagah pe thodi naa koi hoga jo mujhe kidnap kare...
Jan School mein pahucha to whaa pe alag hi scene chal raha tha.....Elf world se kuch sainik aaye hue the....aur unn sab ne DB ko pakad rakha tha.....pata nahi kya hua yaha...par ye dekh ke ander hi ander bahut khusi ho rahi thi mujhe....
Main - Ye kya hai....DB ko kyun pakad rakha hai....
Sainik- Isne Raja pe hamla kiya hai....
Main - Kya...(sach mein ajeeb tha....aisa kaise ho gaya....naa jaane maine kitni hi koshish ki hai iske maan mein iske baap ke kilaf baatein daalne ki par kuch kaam nahi aata tha....aur aaj isne apne hi baap pe hamla kar diya.... waah..) kya baat kar rahe ho...jarur koi galti hui hai..
Sainik ne kuch nahi bola ...naa hiDB kuch bol raha tha...
Main - Isko kholo baat karni hai mujhe isse....
Elf KIng - Senapati....kaha the tum....
Main -(Kabhi to naam se bhi bulla liya karo...) Elf King main gum ho gaya tha.....ye Planet bas dekhne mein hi simple lagta hai par hai bahut thedda...par ye kya sun raha hu main.....
ELf KIng - Tum aa gaye ho.....to chalo....ab humme chalna chahiye...Sainikon kaidi ko acche se leke aana...
Main baat karna chah raha tha DB se....arre aur kuch nahi to thoda aur bahka deta....kya pata yaha bhi Beta khud apne Baap ko maar de....aur mera rasta clear ho jaata...tab to mazza hi aa jaata...par inko to jaldi jaana tha....
Hum waha se nikal gaye.....aur Sainik DB ko bhi leke aa gaye....
Aaj ke liye itna hi next update mein dekhte hai.....Rupal didi kya karne wali hai....aur DB ko kya hua jo jail jaane ki naubat aa gayi....aur Nikita ko samjhana to rah hi gaya...par aise mein usko samjhana muskil tha...aur waqt bhi kam hai ab to
Thoda sa wait kar lena...papers hai...waqt milne pe update aate rahenge
Ab tak
Rupal didi kuch karne wali thi....par ye wo nahi kar rahi thi...asal mein uss kulhadi ke karan ho raha tha ye sab....Wahi dusri oor Db ke Pita aur cousin yaha Earth pe the...par usko ghanta pata nahi tha....Slayer waha Fumos pe ab aatmayon ke saath saath dead bodies bhi khane laga tha...energy puri nahi ho paa rahi thi...par fir bhi..wo waha pe fans chukka tha...aur Prateek laga hua tha cheezein solve karne mein...pahle to wo Rupal didi ke pass hi jaane wala tha...par Jwala ke kabile mein kuch baat ho gayi to waha jaana pada...jab wapas aaya to usko pata Old Owl ke bande ne Pankaj aur uske Pita ke baare mein bataya...jispe use usko madad lene ko kaha aur dono pe nazar rakhne ko kaha...
Ab aage...
Main class mein baitha tha...2nd period chal raha tha...aaj HOD sahab khud nahi aaye the....aur pata nahi iss baat ko leke main kyun pareshan ho raha tha...main madad karna chah raha tha unki....jabki unhone mujhe niccha dikhane ke liye kya kuch nahi kiya....actually mein unhone nahi....wo sab sayad Pankaj ne kiya tha...unhone to kuch kiya hi nahi bas...class mein kuch questions pucche the...haa out of syllabus the wo sab...par fir bhi aur kuch nahi kiya tha...Main ye sab soch hi raha tha ki
Dhruv - Iss baat ko abhi ke liye side karo...aur ye socho...ki Nikita ko kaise manana hai...usko samjhana hoga...
Main - Haa par kaise....kya karu ki wo samjhe....
Dhruv - Ab ye to tumpe hai......yaha se nikalna hoga....
Main - Kya...
Dhruv - Niklo yaha se....bahar wo dono aaye hue hai...wo Old owl ke log...sayad kuch khabar laaye hai...
Main - par abhi hum class ke bich mein hai....kuch karta hu....
Dhruv - Nahi waqt nahi hai....bas utho...aur nikal jao yaha se...
Main - Par ye....
Main bol hi raha tha ki acchanak se DB ko kuch hua...uske Kaan lal ho gaye...aur chahra bhi ajeeb sa hone laga...kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha....aur dekhte hi dekhte uska Shield uske haath mein aa gaya...puri class ussi ko dekhne lag gayi...
A.prof - Elf Prince...shant ho jao...kya baat hai batao....
Par wo kaha kisi ki sunne wala tha...aiisa lag hi nahi raha tha wo apne bas mein hai...
Dhruv - Iska element ye aisa kyun kar raha hai....Isko bahar leke jao....
Main - Hua kya hai isko...
Dhruv - agar bahar nahi leke gaye isko to ye sabko maar dega,...iska element iske control mein nahi hai....bahar khali jagah leke jao isko jaha ye apni energy bahar nikal sake...jaldi...
Maine usko pakda aur usko bahar leke jaane laga....par ye bahut muskil ho raha tha mere liye....tabhi Nikita bhi mere saath aa gayi aur usko pakad ke leke gayi mere saath....
Nikita - Kya hua isko....ye aise kyun kar raha hai...
Main - Iska Element wo iske control mein nahi hai....humme madad chahiye....
Nikita - Iska to Nature Element hai naa....iske baare mein to bahut kam baatein hi pata hai...
Main - abhi isko kisi khali jagah pe leke jaana hai...agar kuch hua to ye apni energy waha chod sakta hai binna kisi ko nuksan pahuchaye..
Dhruv - Maine pata kiya hai....kuch bahut bura hone wala hai...ye koi aam ghatna nahi hai....koi iska apna hai jo musibat mein hai..ye waha jaan chahta hai...par abhi iski powers uni badhi nahi hai ki ye sidha waha jaa sake...body resist kar rahi hai iski....
Main - Musibat mein...kon...kuch pata hai,...aur kaha ho raha hai ye sab.....batao main dekhta hu..
Dhruv - Nahi wo pata nahi hai wo hi pata lagana hai....
Main usse baat hi kar raha tha ki Old Owl ke log waha pe aa gaye...
Wo - Elf King ko maarne wale hai....wo yahi hai...
Main - Kya...kya bol rahe ho...wo yaha kaise aur kon marne wala hai unko....
Wo - Pankaj...
Main - Kya baat kar rahe ho...Mujhe waha leke chalo...
Wo- Hum aapke liye portal nahi khol sakte utni power nahi hai...
Main - Dhruv tum karo...
Dhruv - Jwala ko bulao...wo jaldi karega help...
Main - Jwala portal kholo......
Mera bolna tha usne naa sirf waha tak ke liye portal khola balki waha pe aa bhi gaya..wahi uske kuch log bhi aaye...aur unn sab ne DB aur Nikita ke charo taraf ek ghera bana diya...taaki kuch bura naa ho..
Portal se bahar nikalte hi main aur Jwala ek ho gaye....par saamne dekha to waha koi ELf nahi tha..aur waise bhi maine Elf King ko kabhi dekha nahi tha ki unko jaan paun.....Elf country gaya jarur tha par waha mil nahi sakka tha unse...
Haa to yaha koi elf nahi tha...par bhagdar macchi hui thi....Insan the yaha pe bahut saare insan....aur sabhi yaha waha bhage jaa rahe the...ajeeb tha ye....waha kuch tha hi nahi jisko dekh ke ye sab bhag rahe ho....
Main - Jwala kuch dikh raha hai kya...mujhe to aisa kuch nahi dikh raha jisse ye sab bhag rahe hai...
Jwala - Nahi kuch bhi nah...sab sahi hai...haa hawa mein sayad kuch hai....
Main - Fir ye bhag kyun rahe hai....Jwala humme alag hona hoga....mujhe inme se kisi se baat karni hogi...
Jwala - AAp aise bhi kar sakte ho..aapko bas uske sar ko chunna hai uski saari batein pata chal jaayegi...
Main - Hmm theek hai..
EK banda aa raha tha meri oor maine usko hi pakda...aur uske sar ko chuwa....mujhe sab dikhne laga.....uske baare mein..uske pariwar ke baare mein....aur bhi naa jaane kya kya....
Main - Jwala aise to waqt lag jayega...
Jwala - Ha to aapko puchna hoga naa jo puchna chahte ho....nahi to ye sab kuch hi batata jaayega...
Main - accha....
Main - Kya hua yaha..kyun bhag rahe ho....
"pata nahi main to bank jaa raha tha...waha se bahar aaya....car mein baitha....aur fir hawa mein kuch phail gaya aur main...main...fir pata nahi kya hua....
Main - Jwala ye bhi Hawa ke baare mein bol raha hai....batao kya hai Hawa mein...
Jwala - kuch dhuwa sa hai..par ye to aam baat hai yaha pe....jab bhi aaya hu...aisa hi rahta hai....haa thoda alag hai usse ye....
Dhruv - Pankaj kaun hai yaad hai naa.....ye sab usne hi kiya hoga....abhi Elf King ko dhundho....
Main - Par kaise...Main nahi jaanta unko....
Dhruv - ye jo bhi gas hai bas insano pe kaam kar raha hai....tumpe nahi kar raha hai...unpe bhi nahi kar raha hoga....upar jao...aur dekho kaun shant hai inn sab ke bich....
Main - Hmm ye sahi lag raha hai....Jwala chalo....
Hum udte hue upar gaye aur yaha waha dekhne lage....ab Jwala cheel tha...uski aankhen tej...nahi bahut tej thi....hume upar se pata chal gaya....kuch log the waha jo shant the....par confused the....
Main - haa mil gaye.....par yaha to ek se jyada log hai......
Main sabhi ko dhyaan se dekhne laga...ek baat yaad aa gayi thi mujhe...jo DB ne batayi thi....bas ab mujhe acche se dekhna tha aur mujhe pata chal jaata inn sab mein wo kaun hai..
DB ne ek baar baaton baaton mein baaya tha ki uske Pita ek baar uske saath khel rahe the ...jab wo chota tha..tab galti se...unki kaan pe koi cheej lag gayi thi...wo aajtak waisa hi hai....Main jaanta tha ki unhone roop badla hua hai...par ye kaan wali baat ke alawa aur koi baat nahi thi....jisse unko pahchana jaaye...Main dekh raha tha ki unme se ek ke kaan mujhe kuch ajeeb lage..jo insano ki tarah to bilkul hi nahi tha....Main jaldi se unke pass gaya aur unko udda ke waha se leke nikal gaya......ye sab itni jaldi hua ki sayad wo samajh nah paaye...par jab unko samajh aaya kki main unko waha se utha ke leke jaa raha hu....to wo mujhe..matlab Jwala aur meri body pe hamla karne lagh gaye....
Main - Shant rahiye....madad karne aaya hu...
Par sayad isnko ye sab samajh hi nahi aa raha tha....ye pankh kiche jaa rahe the...
Jwala - Ab aur nahi....
Unse turant portal khola aur unko fenk diya ander uske....
Main - ye kya kiya.....kaha gaye wo....
Jwala - School mein...aur kaha...ab batao kya karna hai...
Main - Hum inn insano ko aise nahi chod sakte..humme madad karni hogi....
Main wapas se wahi chala gaya jaha wo sab bhage jaa rahe the....
Main - Jwala pata laga sakte ho kya...ki ye dhuwa kaha se aa raha hai....
Jwala - 2 jagah hai...aur dono hi alag alag dhuwa hai.....ek sabko aisa kara raha hai...aur dusra unko aisa karne se rok raha hai....
Main - Rok raha hai.....Matlab koi aur hai yaha madad ke liye....ye dure wala kaha se aa raha hai...
Maine ye puccha aur Jwala chal diya uss oor....waha aaya to ek aadmi tha....chadar odde hue...baitha hua jamin pe....aur uske chadar se hi wo dhuwa bahar aa raha tha....
Main - Jwala ye to baatein samajh jaayega naa hamari...
Jwala - Haa jarur...
Main - aapko iski power aur badhani hogi...tab jaake sab sahi hoga...
Wo - agar power badhaya to balance kharab ho jaayega..aur unko pata chal jayega mere yaha hone ka....tum...tum kon ho...aur yaha kaise...
Main - Main madad karne aaya hu...aap ye sambhalo main usko dekhta hu jisne ye shuru kiya...
Wo - Nahi...tum tum yaha raho....main usko dekhta hu...
Main - Par main ye sab nahi jaanta...aur wo khatarnak ho sakta hai...
Wo - agar tum yaha se gaye to main ye band kar dunga...jiske baad ye insan yaa to khud ko maar denge yaa ek dusre ko maarne lagenge...
Main - ye kya baat hui....tum to acche lagte ho...
Wo - agar tum hille bhi to sab band kar dunga....
Main - Theek hai main yahi hu...bas sab normal kardo...
Pata nahi ye kon tha...aur aisa kyun lag raha tha ki ye usko bacha raha hai jisne ye sab suru kiya tha...Abhi main aur kuch karne wala nahi tha...kyunki main nahi chahta tha ki koi insan marre....to main uski baat maan ke khada raha....kuch der mein waha sab normal hone laga...jo log yaha waha bhag rahe the wo sab dhire dhire normal hone lage...haa unke sar mein dard shuru ho gaya tha...Main unki oor dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar uspe padi jo ye sab kar raha tha....wo waha se gayab ho gaya...aur jab main picche mudda to wo kambal wala bhi gayab tha.....pata nahi kon the ye dono...
Main - Jwala chalo ek baar upar se sab dekh lete hai uske baad wapas chalte hai Elf King ke pass....
Hum dono upar gaye aur waha se ek baar charo oor dekhne lage....ab sab apne sar pakde hue dikh rahe the....bas ek ko chod ke.....aur wo ek gusse mein lag raha tha....Main jaldi se uski taraf badha par....par wo gayab ho gaya.....mujhe laga tha jaise inn sab ke picche iska bhi haath ho sakta hai...par confirm nahi kar paya....
Thodi der yaha waha dekhne ke baad bhi kuch nahi dikha....fir maine Jwala ko bolke portal se wapas School chala gaya....
Yaha pe alag hi kuch chal raha tha....Elf King ko kuch chootein lagi hui thi....par wo yaha apna illaz nahi karana chahte the...unko wapas apne planet pe jaana tha....par wo binna apne senapati matlab apne bhatije ke bhi nahi jaana chahte the....DB wahi pe tha....par wo waha hoke bhi waha nahi ho...aisa lag raha tha...Nikita uske saath thi...uddas lag rha tha wo...Main gaya waha...
Jwala aur Main alag ho chukke the...wo jaa chuka tha....
Main sabhi ke pass gaya pahle...waha pe principal aur baaki ke prof. bhi the....sabhi Elf King se baatein kar rahe the unko samjha rahe the....Mujhe dekh Bua mere paas aayi....
Bua - Yaha kya kar rahe ho...DB ke pass jao...usko jarurat hogi tumhari....
Main - Meri....par kyun...
Bua - Kyun....tumhe pata nahi....tum the kaha ab tak...
Main - Main baad mein batata hu...abhi uske pass jaata hu....
Main gaya DB ke pass....
Main - Kya hua...aise kyun baithe ho...tumhare papa yaha aaye hue hai...
Nikita - Isko wapas leke jaa rahe hai.....aur..
Main - Kya....wapas...par...accha kitne din ke liye...
Nikita - Hamesha ke liye...aur isko waha kaidkhane mein rahna hoga....
Main - Ka bol rahi ho....dimmag ghum gaya hai kya...
DB - wo sach bol rahi hai....Maine apne Raja pe hamla kiya hai....aur iske liye mujhe maut ki sazza milegi....
Main - Hamla...Raja...hua kya ye to batao...
Inko chod dete hai aur hum chalte hai.....Spain....
Spain mein Rupal didi ko naa jaane kya sujhi ki wo bas waha se sabhi criminals ko khatam karne ke baare mein soch rahi thi.....aur wo Pirate aur nakli warewolf dono issi kaam mein lage hue the...wo dono ke dono list bana rahe the...jinme sabhi criminals ke baare mein likha jaa raha tha....aur jab ye kaam ho jaata to ye dono....inn sab ko khatam karne wale the....jisme inki madad ke liye aur bhi log aane wale the.....
Rupal didi abhi apne office mein baithi hui thi.....ki tabhi waha pe Pope aa jaate hai...Didi ne unko ander bulaya aur bithaya....
Didi - Aap yaha....mujhe bula lete...main aa jaati....
Pope - Nahi aise hi aa gaya....mujhe laga mujhe tumse milna chahiye....kuch baatein hai jo batani chahiye....
Rupal didi - Baatein to hoti rahegi...par abhi meri dilchaspi isme hai ki aapko kyun laga aapko mujhse milna chahiye....
Pope - hahaaha....bilkul apne Pita ki tarah baat karti ho...haa to mujhe aisa isliye laga kyunki tumhe meri madad chahiye hogi......
Rupal didi - Madad mujhe....nahi aisi to koi baat nahi hai...
Pope- Mujhe aabhas hua hai ki tumhe madad chahiye hogi...abhi nahi to kuch waqt baad....main apna number chod jaata hu....tum call kar lena waqt padne pe....ek aur baat main tumhari har tarah se madad karunga...tumhare parivar ke kaafi ahsaan hai mujhpe...agar kuch kam kar sakku to bahut accha hoga...
Rupal didi - ji theek hai...
Unhone number diya aur Rupal didi ne wo number save kar liya...aur Pope chale gaye...par Didi sochne lag gayi ki aakhir ye kya madad karenge...
Kulhadi - Ab insan madad karenge hamari...kaise din aa gaye hai...
Ye baat Rupal didi ko badi ajeeb lagi...ye pahli baar tha jab iss kulhadi ne iss tarah i baat ki ho...uske ander se jaise jalan ghrina...aur naa jaane kaun kaun se bhaw jhalak rahe the.....Didi ko ekdum se laga jaise wo koi bahut bura kaam karne jaa rahi hai iss kulhadi ki baat ko maan ke...par sayad ye baat wo kulhadi bhi samajh gayi...aur issiliye sambhal bhi gayi...
Kulhadi- Mujhe lagta hai ek aur sararat karne ka waqt aa gaya hai...chalo tumhari saheliyon se mill ke aate hai...
Ye baat sunke Didi apne soch se bhatak gayi....aur fir se jaise iss kulhadi ke jaal mein fans gayi ho...wo jaane ke liye taiyaar ho gayi....
Inko apni shararat karne dete hai...aur hum chalte hai Demos pe....jaha Elf country ke Senapati yaani...DB ke cousin ko pakad liya gaya tha....aur abhi wo naye naye bane hue Senapati ke saamne khada tha....
(DB ke bhai ke respect mein)
Thodi pahle chalte hai...dekhte hai hua kya jo ye Earth se yaha aa gaya aur ab yaha pe kaidi bana hua hai...
Main bahut gusse mein thaa.....aaj to sab plan ke hisab se hi ho raha tha...par pata nahi fir kya hua...aur sab kharab ho gaya...wo dusri dawayi kon leke aaya tha waha....agar wo nahi hoti to wahi pe Chacha ji maare jaate....aur DB ko to sab nalayak hi samajhte hai...main Raja ban jaata....aur mera raj hota Elf country pe....fir bas aish mauj hi thi...par nahi....
Main ye sab badbadate hue Demos mein aa pahucha...bahut din baad mauka milla tha yaha pe Senapati se milne ka....uss din ke baad se iski koi khabar hi nahi aayi thi...aur wo Suraj pata nahi kaha tha....kitna oata lagaya par kuch pata nahi chala....
Main abhi badh hi raha tha ki ek sainik ne mujhe dekh liya....par isme koi badi baat nahi thi.....yaha pe log jaante the mujhe....Maine bhi usko haath dikha ke apne pass bulaya....aur uisse Senapati se milwane ko bola....par pata nahi isko kya hua...ye pahle to mujhe ghurta hua aa raha tha...aur bas itna hi nahi uske baad aate hi mere upar talwar taan di...aur fir hathkadi laga ke mujhe leke jaane laga.....Waise o main bach jaatapar dekhna chahta tha ki inn sab ke picche hai kon...
Main - umne mujhe pahchana nahi kya....Main tumhare Sena pati ka dost hu....aur tumhare Rajkumar bhi mujhe jaante hai...
Wo - Raj kumar ka naam nah lena.....tum bas senapati ko jaante the....Rajkumar ka naam inn sab se dur rahe wahi sabke liye aaccha hai...samjhe...ek aur baat.....wo nahi rahe...
Main - Kya Rajkumar nahi rahe.....
Wo - Aee kya bolta hai.....Senapati ji nahi rahe...unko sajja milli hai Kulhadi dene ke karan...
Main - Kya....to usne wo diya tha....phir ye Suraj aaya kyun nahi.....
Main ye sochne lag gaya.....
Main - Kisne maara usko...
Wo - Hamare naye Senapati ne.....jo unhi ke bete hai....
Main - Kya....apne Pita ko maar diya...
Wo - Haa wo bhi sabke saamne....tabhi to Maharaj khush hai unse...
Main - Ye accha nahi hua....
Thodi hi der mein hum dono pahuch gaye naye Senapati ji ke pass....wo abhi kisi se baat kar rahe the...
Senapati - kon hai ye....
Sipahi- Senapati ji ye khud ko aape Pita ka dost batata hai.....
Main - Haa Main unka dost tha....aur jo bhi hua sunn ke burra laga....
Senapati - Hmm Bura hua unke saath....aur mere saath bhi...aur mera parivar...unke saath bhi....pata hai ab waha bas mera ek chota bhai rah gaya hai Aadmi ke naam pe......aur sabhi auratein hi hai....jab maine wo sab unko bachane ke liye kiya....tabhi unhone mujhe ghar se nikal diya....Ab batao galti kiski hai...
Main - Hmm waqt ki galti ha....aaahhh ye kya kar rahe ho....
Main bol hi raha tha ki pata nahi kaha se uske pass ek talwar aa gayi....jiska metal ekdum se laal hua padaa tha...matlab garam tha....aur usne usko mere hath se touch kara diya...
Senapati - Ye bhi waqt ki galti hai....ye waqt bada kamina hota hai....kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar deta hai....accha aur kiski galti hai....
Main - Lucife.....
Baat Puri hoti usse pahle hi wahi talwar mere pairon pe satta di....
Senapati - Raja kabhi galat nahi hota....Raja hamesa hi sahi hota hai....aur pujniya hota hai....uspe sawal karna matlab maut ko bulana...to ab batao galti kiski thi...
Main - Uski jisne wo kulhadi li thi....tumhare Pita se....
Senapati - haa ye kuch kuch sahi hai...Khol do isko....
Uss sipahi ne mera bandhan khola...
Senapati - To usko sazza kaisi mulni chahiye....
Main - Maut...maut hi milni chahiye....
Wo - Main bhi wahi chahta hu...par ye hsh mein aa jaaye fir isko tadpa tadpa ke marunga.....aur kuch pata bhi to karna hai....
Main - kya...
Wo - kulhadi kaha hai ye baat.....tumhe to pata nahi hai naa....
Main - Nahi main nahi jaanta....
Wo - hmm....sipahi....pata karo ye sach bol raha hai yaa nahi.....aur agar sach ho to isko wapas bhej dena...sunno ye aakhiri baar hai jab tum yaha yun hi muh utttha ke aa gaye ho....mere Pita ke dost the.....issliye jaane de raha hu...agli baar se binna bulaye agar yaha dikhe to dikhoge nahi....
Main samajh nahi paya ye piddi sa ladka...mujhe dhamki de raha tha....aur mujhe dar bhi lag raha tha...iss chuzze se.....sach mein isme kuch alag baat thi....wo Sipahi mujhe kahi leke gaya aur mujhe kuch pinne ke liye de diya...usko pitte hi mujhe neend jaisi aane lagi....aur jab aankh khuli to main kahi aur hi tha....wo sipahi mere saath tha.....Mere uthte hi usne mujhe waha se jaane ko kaha....main bhi waha se nikal gaya.....mujhe pata tha yaha pe ab rahna matlab bekar ka lafda
Main waha se Elf world jaane ko hi tha...ki yaad aaya ki Chacha ji to waha Earth pe hai...pahle waha jaan hoga...aur bahana alag banana hoga ki kaha tha abhi tak...
Maine Earth ke liye Portal khola aur waha chala gaya....
Yaha aane ke baad mujhe dundhna tha ki ye gaye kaha....maine try kiya....par pata hi nahi chal raha tha....abhi main aur try karta usse pahle kuch logh aaye aur mujhe apne saath chalne ko kaha....
Main - Kon ho tum sab...
Unme se ek ne bataya wo yaha ke school se hai aur wo mujhe dundh rahe hai bahut der se...chacha ji wahi hai...
Main bhi chal diya unke saath...ab iss jagah pe thodi naa koi hoga jo mujhe kidnap kare...
Jan School mein pahucha to whaa pe alag hi scene chal raha tha.....Elf world se kuch sainik aaye hue the....aur unn sab ne DB ko pakad rakha tha.....pata nahi kya hua yaha...par ye dekh ke ander hi ander bahut khusi ho rahi thi mujhe....
Main - Ye kya hai....DB ko kyun pakad rakha hai....
Sainik- Isne Raja pe hamla kiya hai....
Main - Kya...(sach mein ajeeb tha....aisa kaise ho gaya....naa jaane maine kitni hi koshish ki hai iske maan mein iske baap ke kilaf baatein daalne ki par kuch kaam nahi aata tha....aur aaj isne apne hi baap pe hamla kar diya.... waah..) kya baat kar rahe ho...jarur koi galti hui hai..
Sainik ne kuch nahi bola ...naa hiDB kuch bol raha tha...
Main - Isko kholo baat karni hai mujhe isse....
Elf KIng - Senapati....kaha the tum....
Main -(Kabhi to naam se bhi bulla liya karo...) Elf King main gum ho gaya tha.....ye Planet bas dekhne mein hi simple lagta hai par hai bahut thedda...par ye kya sun raha hu main.....
ELf KIng - Tum aa gaye ho.....to chalo....ab humme chalna chahiye...Sainikon kaidi ko acche se leke aana...
Main baat karna chah raha tha DB se....arre aur kuch nahi to thoda aur bahka deta....kya pata yaha bhi Beta khud apne Baap ko maar de....aur mera rasta clear ho jaata...tab to mazza hi aa jaata...par inko to jaldi jaana tha....
Hum waha se nikal gaye.....aur Sainik DB ko bhi leke aa gaye....
Aaj ke liye itna hi next update mein dekhte hai.....Rupal didi kya karne wali hai....aur DB ko kya hua jo jail jaane ki naubat aa gayi....aur Nikita ko samjhana to rah hi gaya...par aise mein usko samjhana muskil tha...aur waqt bhi kam hai ab to
Thoda sa wait kar lena...papers hai...waqt milne pe update aate rahenge