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Jay Sutar

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THIS STORY IS WORK OF FICTIOUS ANY PLACES CHARACTER HAVE NO RELATIONS WITH
REAL WORLD AND PEOPLES OR MAYBE IF SAME SO THAT WOULD BE CO-INCIDENTAL...
MERCILESS - A MAN WITH NO SOUL
FRIENDS KAAFI DINO BAAD STORY PESH KAR RAHA HOO KAHANI SHURU KARNE SE PEHLE
MAIN YE HIDAAYAT DE DOO KI YE STORY BHI PICHLI POST KI TARAH KOI COPY STORY
NAHIN HAI YE MERE KHUD KI IMAGINARY STORY HAI AUR ISMEIN KOI SHAK NAHIN AB
STORY KI TARAF BADHAA JAAYE
Khadhakti dhoop aur charo taraf garmi ka mahoul tha garmi se taap ki leher aaram se dur
se hi dikh sakti thi charo taraf bas raitili mitti aur dhool ke siwaa kuch nahin thaa naa koi
insaan naa hi koi jaanwar kutto ki haddi paas mein hi road ke duriyo pe parri thi jisse ye
saaf tha ki bhook aur pyaas se inki jaan gayi thi woh shaks dheere dheere kadmo se
saamne ki or jaa raha tha woh raaste mein paidal thaa aur chilchialti dhoop mein tap rahe
oos shaks ke aankho mein kuch aur bhi dikh raha tha woh shaks sidhe raaste ki or hi chale
jaa raha tha ooski nazar paas hi ke cottage par parri jo ki shayad kisi rest room ka tha aur
bikul dhool se woh cottage puraa kaala paddh chukaa thaa shaks tez nazro se paas jaane
lagaa ooske zehan mein koi khauf nahin tha chehre par gusse aur badle ka naqaab odh
rakhaa tha woh baar baar apne daanto ko bheejta aur paas jaane lagaa
tez dhoop mein loo chal rahin thi aur oosne darwaje pe dastak dene ki bajaaye ek zor daar
laat maari dhadddhhhh
aye kaun hai tu?.....andar se ek aadmi ne zor se khadhe hote huye kaha
isse pehle woh samajh paata oos shaks ne apne daayne jaangh ke upar lage myaan se woh
talwaar nikaali aur sidhe hawaa mein maarta huyaa ooske jism ko chuuu ke nikal gaya woh
aadmi wohin chillakar gir gaya aur oos khare shaks ke saamne ab ooski laash padhi thi
ooske gale ke nas ko kaattey huye talwaar aarpaar ho chuki thi shaks ke aankhen ab aur
laal thi aur charo taraf farsh par khoon thaa woh dheere dheere sidiyo ki taraf aakar
chadhne lagaa tabhi piche se ek botal laa rahe oos shaks par ooski nazar parrii oosne
talwaar nikaali aur ek hi haath se botal ko pakadte huye ooske pait mein talwaar ghusedd dalli khacchhhh...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh
THIS STORY IS WORK OF FICTIOUS ANY PLACES CHARACTER HAVE NO RELATIONS WITH
REAL WORLD AND PEOPLES OR MAYBE IF SAME SO THAT WOULD BE CO-INCIDENTAL...
MERCILESS - A MAN WITH NO SOUL
FRIENDS KAAFI DINO BAAD STORY PESH KAR RAHA HOO KAHANI SHURU KARNE SE PEHLE
MAIN YE HIDAAYAT DE DOO KI YE STORY BHI PICHLI POST KI TARAH KOI COPY STORY
NAHIN HAI YE MERE KHUD KI IMAGINARY STORY HAI AUR ISMEIN KOI SHAK NAHIN AB
STORY KI TARAF BADHAA JAAYE
Khadhakti dhoop aur charo taraf garmi ka mahoul tha garmi se taap ki leher aaram se dur
se hi dikh sakti thi charo taraf bas raitili mitti aur dhool ke siwaa kuch nahin thaa naa koi
insaan naa hi koi jaanwar kutto ki haddi paas mein hi road ke duriyo pe parri thi jisse ye
saaf tha ki bhook aur pyaas se inki jaan gayi thi woh shaks dheere dheere kadmo se
saamne ki or jaa raha tha woh raaste mein paidal thaa aur chilchialti dhoop mein tap rahe
oos shaks ke aankho mein kuch aur bhi dikh raha tha woh shaks sidhe raaste ki or hi chale
jaa raha tha ooski nazar paas hi ke cottage par parri jo ki shayad kisi rest room ka tha aur
bikul dhool se woh cottage puraa kaala paddh chukaa thaa shaks tez nazro se paas jaane
lagaa ooske zehan mein koi khauf nahin tha chehre par gusse aur badle ka naqaab odh
rakhaa tha woh baar baar apne daanto ko bheejta aur paas jaane lagaa
tez dhoop mein loo chal rahin thi aur oosne darwaje pe dastak dene ki bajaaye ek zor daar
laat maari dhadddhhhh
aye kaun hai tu?.....andar se ek aadmi ne zor se khadhe hote huye kaha
isse pehle woh samajh paata oos shaks ne apne daayne jaangh ke upar lage myaan se woh
talwaar nikaali aur sidhe hawaa mein maarta huyaa ooske jism ko chuuu ke nikal gaya woh
aadmi wohin chillakar gir gaya aur oos khare shaks ke saamne ab ooski laash padhi thi
ooske gale ke nas ko kaattey huye talwaar aarpaar ho chuki thi shaks ke aankhen ab aur
laal thi aur charo taraf farsh par khoon thaa woh dheere dheere sidiyo ki taraf aakar
chadhne lagaa tabhi piche se ek botal laa rahe oos shaks par ooski nazar parrii oosne
talwaar nikaali aur ek hi haath se botal ko pakadte huye ooske pait mein talwaar ghusedd dalli khacchhhh...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh
Are bhai yeh kya tha. Well jo bhi tha quit fascinating tha.????.
 

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Agar galti se kabir ko gussa aa gaya to CL ke l lag jane hain pichhali bar kya hua tha yeh bhul gaya aisa lagta hain mujhe waiting for new update bhai...
Bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update dost
Keep writing keep posting
Thanks for lovely update
Behtreen update hai mitr.
किन लफ्जों में लिखूँ मैं अपने इन्तजार को तुम्हें,
बेजुबां है इश्क़ मेरा ढूँढता है खामोशी से तुझे।
THANKS GUYS ?.
WAISE SHAYERI KAAFI ACHHI THI Aj1980
 

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Update kuch hi der mein.
 

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UPDATE 63

Kabir Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ka layout de kar uske baremein sabhi ko samjh deta hai. Kabir ke instructions milne ke baad Main Affairs Elder baki bache sabhi materials ko collect karne lag jaate hai. In dino ab City Lord Mansion kaafi busy ho gaya tha. Kuch jagaho ko toda gaya aur kuch jagah gaddhe banaye gaye. Wahi kuch jagaho par inscription patterns banaye jaane lag gaye.

City Lord, Main Affairs Elder aur kuch logo ko chod kar kisi ko bhi nahi pata tha ke City Lord Mansion mein yeh ho kya raha hai.

Jaldi hi evening ho gayi. Suraj ab jaa chuka tha aur chand ki roshni sab jagah fail gayi thi.

Kabir ek jagah khada tha garden mein aur kuch dur dekh raha tha. Kuch duri par vo achhe se dekh sakta tha ke ek white dress pehni hui ladki is chand ki roshni mein kisi pari ki tarah dikh rahi thi. Vo ek jagah kaafi shant khadi thi aur uske aaspas white mist ka aura bana hua tha. Us white mist mein ek humonoid demon spirit form bana hua tha uske sir ke upar. Us demon spirit ne bbi white dress hi pehna hua tha. Uske wajah se vo kaafi elegant lag rahi thi. Saath hi usne apne sir par ek crown bhi pehna hua tha. Like a QUEEN.

Yeh thi Rati ki Snow Queen Demon Spirit.

Is demon spirit ne kaafi dusre demon spirit ko apne mein absorb kiya hua tha aur God level ke growth rate par aa gayi thi. Snow Queen ki strength kaafi strong thi. Rati ke aura se nikal rahe white mist ne us garden ke atmosphere ko kaafi thanda kar diya tha.

Abhi yeu thand kaafi halki thi aur gentle bhi par agar Rati ne attack kar diya toh yahi thand ke ice blades ban sakte the jo kisi ki bhi jaan lene mein kaafi the.

Yeh dekh kar Kabir lightly smile karne lag gaya. Rati aur Snow Queen dono hi ek dusre k saath achhe se merge ho gaye the. Us thand mein faile aura ko sense kar ke hi kabir bata sakta tha ke Rati ne Snow Queen ke 2 combait abilities ko master kar liya hai saath hi uska cultivation bhi kaafi stable ho gaya tha. Even 3-Star Gold Rank Demon Spiritualist bhi uske opponents nahi ho sakte the.

Kabir ab us white mist mein se chalte hue Rati ki taraf jaane lag jata hai.

Wahi garden ke dusre corner mein koi aur bhi khada tha. Yeh koi aur nahi Rati ke father the.

City Lord abhi ek tree ke piche khade the aur Rati aur Kabir par nazar rakh rahe the.

Pehli baat toh yeh thi ke City Lord ne Rati ke cultivation mein kaafi progress dekhi thi. Wahi unhe abhi tak yeh pata nahi tha ke Rati ko Yeh Snow Queen kaha se mili hai. Unhe yeh kabhi nahi laga tha ke Rati ka cultivation kabhi itna badhega. Rati ke paas kabhi bhi City Lord ki tarah koi cultivation talent nahi tha. Jiske wajah se City Lord kaafi depressed se the. Rati ka paas kaafi saare resources the par phir bhi vo kabhi 1-Star Bronze Rank par bhi nahi pohoch paa rahi thi. Although vo baki ke section mein apne age ke sabhi bachho se aage hi rehti thi. Par City Lord ki daughter hone ke naate vo phir bhi talent mein kaafi piche thi.

Par ab Rati ki Cultivation kuch zyada hi speed thi. Uske soul force se hi City Lord bata sakte the ke vo ab 5-Star Silver Rank par hai. Wahi jis Snow Queen se vo merge hui hai vo baki ke ordinary Snow Queen se kaafi strong hai. City Lord ke mutabik agar koi 1-Star Gold Rank expert bhi ab Rati ke saath battle karta hai toh vo bhi usse nahi hara sakta hai.

City Lord kaafi confused the. Although vo kabhi kabhi months apne beti se nahi milte the. Apne hi kaamo mein busy rehte the par unhe Rati ki kaafi fikar rehti thi. Unhe Rati ke cultivation speed ki information ke baremein uske aunty ke wajah hamesha pata rehta tha. Kuch waqt pehle vo 1-Star Bronze Rank tak nahi jaa paa rahi thi. Toh ab aisa kya ho gaya ke uski cultivation 5-Star Silver Rank par aa gayi?

Yeh toh unke thinking ko challenge karne wali baat ho gayi thi.

Aisa talent toh khud unke paas bhi nahi tha. Unhe khud 1-Star Bronze Rank se 5-Star Silver Rank par aane ke liye several years lag gaye the.

Ek aur baat unhe yeh sata rahi thi vo yeh ke sabhi demon spirits mein Snow Queen demon spirit sabse rare thi aur extremely powerful bhi. Pure Osian City mein bhi vo sirf haat ke fingers par count karne jitne hongi. Wahi Rati ki Snow Queen toh special bhi thi toh vo kitni rare hai yeh baat karna hi bekar hai. Aisi powerful demon spirit milne ka chance millions mein ek hota hai.

Ab jaise jaise waqt jaa raha tha City Lord ke dil se ab Rati ki fikar kam hoti jaa rahi thi. Unke siva koi aur abhi jo Osian City ki halat hai vo samjh nahi sakta tha. Har ek second ke liye Osian City ke liye kisi na kisi tarah ka khatra tha. Continuously Osian City ke situation ke baremein sochne ke wajah se unki raato ki neend bhi ud si gayi thi. Osian City ke log aur apni family safe feel karti rahe iske liye vo apne limit se bahar jaa kae kaam kar rahe the. City Lord ko daughter hone ke wajah se usse protect karne ke liye bohot log the par vo tabhi puri tarah se apne aap ko protect kar paayegi jab uske cultivation utna strong ho.

Kabhi kabhi City Lord jab bhi Rati ko dekhte toh unhe Rati ke maa ki yaad aati thi. Jiske wajah se unke aankho mein aasu bhi aaye the.

Jo us din kabir aur City Lord ke bich hua tha uske wajah se dono baap-beti ke bich abhi bhi ek awkwardness thi. Uske baad toh in dono ne abhi tak baat bhi nahi ki thi. Iske wajah se City Lord ab yahi socha ke vo khud hi jaa kar pehel karenge Rati se baat karne ke liye. Vo khud bhi ab apne beti ke dil ki baat janna chahte the. Lekin jab vo yaha aane hi wale the ke unhe koi dikh jata hai. Yeh jo bhi koi tha vo ab Rati ki taraf badh raha tha. Yeh koi aur nahi Kabir tha. City Lord ne jaldi se apne aap ko ek tree ke piche chipa liya.

Kabir unhe apne beti ke yard mein akela dikha tha. Agar uske paas aisi otherworldly powers na hoti toh vo usse wahi maar bhi dete par ek baat aur thi ke unhe lag raha tha ke kabir ke piche jo master hai vo kaafi powerful hai yeh bhi ek wajah thi ke vo usse haat bhi nahi laga sakte the. Aur abhi kuch din pehle kabir ne Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ko lekar unke almost blackmail hi kar liya tha.

Osian City ke benefit ke liye City Lord ko apna ek kadam piche lena hi pad raha tha. Par vo Rati ke saath kuch aisa-waisa na kar de yeh bata bhi unhe dekhni thi. Yahi soch kar City Lord bhi Rati ke building ke paas ke building mein shift ho gaye the. Agar unhe Kabir kisi bhi tarah se Rati ke saath kuch aisi waise harkar karte hue milta hai toh vo usse yaha se nikalne wale the. Par phir bhi aisa nahi kar sakte the, ek kabir hi tha pure Osian City mein jo Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ko laga sakta tha.

CL-Ab mein bhi dekhna chahta hu ke tum kya plan kar rahe ho. Agar tumne zara bhi kuch aisi waisi harkat ki toh mein Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ke baremein zara bhi nahi sochunga aur tumhe yaha se nikal dunga.

Kabir ko Rati ke paas jaate dekh kar City Lord ne yeh baat sochi thi.

Rati ko abhi tak City Lord ke presence ke baremein pata nahi chal paya tha. Waise chal bhi nahi pata City Lord khud Black-Gold Rank expert the. Apne presence ko chupana unhe achhe se aata tha. Jab tak koi unke upar ya unke hi level ka person na ho unhe sense bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Par kabir ke liye unhe sense karna koi badi baat nahi thi.

Kisi ko apne paas sense karte hi Rati ki band aankho mein ek halchal hui. Iske wajah se usne apne aankhe open ki.

Rati-Tum ho.

Kabir ko aise dekh kar pata nahi kyo vo halki panic si ho gayi. Uske gaal laal hone lag gaye the. Uska yeh shy look chand ki roshni mein aur bhi charming lag raha tha.

Kabir-Good Evening.

Kabir ne Rati ko dekhte hue kaha.

Rati-Tum yaha kyo aaye ho ab?

Rati ne apne sir ko niche karte hue yeh baat usse pichi. Usse kabir ki nazar ko avoid karna tha. Kabir ka presence usse nervous kar raha tha. Usne unconsciously ek step piche chali gayi. After all yeh ek raat ka waqt tha aur ek ladka aur ladki akele hi yard mein the. Rati apne building mein bilkul bhi nahi rukne wali thi agar kabir raat ko wahi rukne ke baremein soch raha hoga toh. Wahi aise yard ke open area mein usse abhi utna bhi nervous feel nahi ho raha tha. Wahi vo yaha practice bhi kar sakti thi.

Kabir Rati se kuch dur aa kar ruk jata hai. Uske powerful sense se City Lord ka presence chup pana kaafi mushkil tha. Jab usne City Lord ke presence ko sense kiya toh uske face par ek smile aa gayi. City Lord Rati se apne aura ke presence ko chupa sakte hai par Kabir se nahi.

Kabir-Mein ne abhi apna dinner khatam kiya hai aur aise hi walk ke liye nikal gaya tha. Tumhe yaha practice karte dekha toh chala aaya.

Kabir ne smile karte hue yeh baat kahi.

Rati ne ek baar apna sir utha kar kabir ke smile wale face ko dekha jispar chand ko roshni pad rahi thi. Rati halka halka apne aap ko Kabir ke face mein khota paa rahi thi. Yeh baat jan kar usne jhat se apne sir ko phir se niche kar liya. Kabir sharp nazar se yeh baat chut nahi saki aur uske face par jo smile thi vo aur bhi gehri ho gayi.

Rati-Kabir mujhe nahi pata tumne mere uncle ko kaise mana liye mere paas wale building mein rukne ke liye. Par ab mujhe lagta hai ke hame ek dusre se milna rok dena chahiye.

Kabir-Kya......kya tum mujhse ab milna nahi chahti.

Kabir apne face par aise expressions laa raha tha jaise yeh baat sunkar uska dil hi toot gaya ho.

Kabir-Waise yeu baat bhi sahi hai after all tum kaafi badi family se belong karti ho tum sabhi ham jaise commoners se kyo friendship rakhna chahoge.

Rati-Nahi aisi baat nahi hai.

Kabir ke aise expressions dekh kar Rati ne jhat se upar dekha aur apne haato ko wave kar te hue usse explain karne lag gayi. Waise bhi Rati kaafi kind hearted thi, naturally vo kabir ka kisi bhi tarah se dil nahi todna chahti thi.

Rati-Kabir, although tum thode weird ho aur kuch zyada hi straightforward ho par mujhe itna pata hai ke tum ek kind person ho. Phir vo tum apne friends ke liye ho ya bhi mere liye. Otherwise tum mujhe aise help nahi karte. Although tum mujhe kabhi kabhi aise satane aa jate ho par mujhe is baat ka zara bhi bura nahi lagta hai. Utla mein uske opposition feel karti hu. Mein hamesha yahi wish karti hu ke tum mujhe aise hi aa kar satate raho. Kyo ki is bade se City Lord Mansion ke andar mein kabhi kabhi apne aap ko kaafi akela paati hu. Sirf meri aunty hi mujhse baat karti hai. Ek waqt tha ke meri bhi ek best friend thi aur vo koi aur nahi balki Maithili thi. Par hamare family differences ke wajah se vo bhi mujhse dur ho gayi. Uske baad sirf tum hi mere friend bache ho.

Par tum yeh baat samjh sakte ho ke mere father tumhe mere saath nahi rehne de sakte hai.

Rati ne aakhri baat kaafi sad tone mein kahi.

Kabir ne ek baar garden ke corner mein dekha aur kaha.

Kabir-Well yeh kehna bura nahi hoga phir ke City Lord tumhare father hone ke liye kisi bhi tarah se qualified hai. Unhone tumhe aise akele hi yard mein rehne ke liye chod diya aur tumhe friends bhi banane nahi de rahe hai.

Kabir ki baato ko sunkar City Lord ko zara bhi gussa nahi aaya bulki unki aankho mein sadness aur pain dekha jaa sakta tha.

Rati-Kabir tum mere father ke baremein aisi baate nahi kar sakte ho. Unke paas koi choice hi nahi hai. City Lord hone ke wajah se unka har ek decision Osian City ke safety ko lekar hi hota hai. Wahi saath hi vo daily matters mein bhi bohot busy hote hai. Yahi wajah hai ke vo meri puri tarah se care nahi kar paa rahe hai. Mujhe hi apne taraf se apni training badhani hogi aur strong demon spiritualist ban kar unki help karni hogi. Past mein mein kitna bhi try kar lu mera cultivation kisi bhi tarah se nahi badh raha tha. Par ab aisa nahi hai aur iski wajah tum ho.

Rati kaafi gratefully ho kar Kabir ko dekh rahi thi. Kabir ko pata tha ke vo uske kiye gaye help ko kisi bhi tarah se usse louta degi.

Jab Kabir ko laga ke Rati kuch kehna chahti hai par keh nahi paa rahi hai yeh dekh kar kabir be apne haat ko wave karte hue kaha.

Kabir-Thik hai chalo chodo is baat ko. Waise bhi City Lord tumhare father hai, toh naturally tum unhi ki baat manogi. Waise bhi unhone mujhe kuch waqt pehle injured kiya tha. Is baat ke liye abhi bhi hamare bich settlement honi baaki hai.

City Lord abhi kaafi emotional the jo Rati ne kaha tha usse sunkar par jab unhe kabir ki baat sunayi di toh jhat se unhe gussa aa gaya. Vo yahi soch rahe the ke koun kis baat ko lekar settlement karne wala hai.

Kabir ne smile karte hue aage kaha.

Kabir-Mein ab yaha kuch din ke liye ruk raha hu. Tumhe apne father ke baremein sochne ki zyada zaroorat nahi hai. Unhe abhi bhi Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ko lagane ke liye meri help ki zaroorat hai. Toh tab tak to tumhare father mujhe kuch nahi karenge.

Rati-Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array. Yeh kya hai?

Kabir-Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ten thousand Black-Gold Rank demon spirits aur bohot se inscription patterns se banta hai. Jab yeh puri tarah ready hi jaya hai aur usse activate kiya jata hai tab yeh Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array dozens of Legend Rank Demon Spiritualists ko bhi maar sakta hai.

Rati-Toh yeh baat hai. Tabhi mere father is baat ke liye ready ho gaye.

Kabir ko City Lord ke saath aur masti karne ka khayal aata hai aur vo aage kehta hai.

Kabir-Ha dekha tumne abhi. Tumhare father Osian City ke liye kuch bhi sacrifice kar sakte hai. Ek tarah se unhone tumhe mujhe bech hi diya hai.

Kabir ko pata tha City Lord garden ke corner mein tree ke piche chupe hue hai aur undono ki baato ko sun rahe hai.

Kabir ki baato ko sunkar ab City Lord aur bhi gussa ho gaye the. Vo naturally apne beti ko Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ke liye bech toh nahi sakte the. Unhe lag raha tha ke vo waha se nikal kar Rati ke paas jaaye aur usse sabhi situation ko samjhaye par jab unhone Rati ke face par jo expressions the unhe dekha aur wahi ruk gaye. Rati ne apne sir ko utha kar kabir se serious tone mein kaha.

Rati-Kabir agar tum sach mein Osian City ke safety ke liye Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ko laga sakte ho toh tumhara City ke safety ke liye kiya jane wala contribution kaafi bada hoga. Even mere father........Mujhe bhi kisi baat ka aitraaz nahi hai. Phir chahe tum mere yard mein hi kyo na raho. Even mujhe.......Mujhe tumhari koi Girlfriend bhi samjh le isse bhi koi aitraaz nahi hai.

Yeh kehte hue Rati ke gaal sharam se laal ho gaye the.

Kabir Rati ko dekhe jaa raha tha. Rati ki baat sunne ke baad uske face par ek smile aa gayi. Like Father Like Daughter. Osian City ke safety ke liye dono bhi sab kuch sacrifice kar sakte the. Kabir ne smile karte hue kaha.

Kabir-Agar aisi baat hai toh apni baat kabhi bhul mat jana.

Kabir ki last ki line sunkar City Lord ko kuch bhi samjh nahi aa raha tha ke vo kya kare. Unke piche unke baremein bura kehna koi badi baat nahi thi lekin vo abhi wahi the phir bhi kabir unke baremein aisi baate kar sakta tha.
Wahi Rati ke face par abhi bhi sad expressions the. Usne Kabir se kaha.

Rati-Kabir mere father ko misunderstand mat karna. Mere father actually kaafi good person hai. Mujhe pata hai vo mere saath bhi waqt bitana chahte hai, par vo bhi kya kar sakte hai aakhir vo is City ke City Lord hai. Unke kandhe par is City ke logo ki zindagi ki responsibility hai. Vo kisi bhi tarah se piche nahi hatna chahte hai. Although vo mere saath zyada time spend nahi karte hai phir bhe vo mere life ke one of the respected persons mein se ek hai. Mein sirf is baat ke liye khud par gussa hu ke mein kaafi weak hu aur unki kisi bhi tarah se help nahi kar paa rahi hu.

Rati ki baato ko sunkar City Lord jo abhi garden ke corner mein chupe hue the vo kaafi shant se ho gaye. Vo hamesha se apne beti ke samne ek strick father ki tarah rahe the. Par jab unhone aaj Rati ki baat suni toh unka dil kisi bhi tarah se shant nahi ho paa raha tha. Unhe aaj pata chal gaya tha ke Rati unke baremein kya sochti hai hai.

Rati-Kabir mein ne pehle socha tha ke mera jo talent tha........mujhe dar tha ke mein kabhi bhi iske saath apne father ke heights par nahi pohoch paungi. Par jab tne mujhe cultivation technique di aur yeh Snow Queen di toh meri strength mein drastic change aa gaya. Iske wajah se aaj mein aone dreams ko paa sakti hu. Although mere father ham dono ko ek saath rehne ke liye maan nahi sakte hai. Lekin mein tumhare 3 wishes complete kar sakti hu. Jab tak vo mere had tak hai. Mein phir usse mana nahi karungi.

Rati ne kuch der sochne ke baad yeh baat kahi thi. Yeh kehne ke baad uske gaal aur bhi laal ho gaye the. Par unki aankho mein determination dikh raha tha.

Rati ke ab tak ke life mein usse uske father ne yahi sikhaya tha ke kisi ke achhayi ko kabhi bhi apne paas mat rakho balki usse aur badha kar baat do. Saath hi vo jo bhi khud kar rahe hai uspar trust hona chahiye.

Rati ki baat sunkar City Lord kaafi shock ho gaye. Unhe ab pata chala ke Rati ke itne fastly cultivation ke badhne ke piche kya reason hai. Yeh kabir ke guidence ke wajah se hua tha. Is baat ke baremein soch kar City Lord ka Kabir ko dekhne ka nazariya halka change sa ho gaya.

Kabir-Sach? Toh mein jo chahu vo request kar sakta hu aur tum usse zara bhi mana nahi karogi.

Kabir Rati ke aur paas aate hue yeh keh raha tha.

Kabir ko aise apne aur paas aate dekh kar Rati aur bhi panic si ho gayi. Aise mein vo ek step aur piche chali gayi. Uske gaal aur bhi laal ho gaye. Kabir ab uske saath kya karne wala tha? Uske dimag mein bohot kuch aa raha tha. Par suddenly usse kuch realise hua aur vo confidently apni jagah khadi ho gayi. Ab jab usne promis kar hi diya hai ke vo kabir ke 3 wishes ko pura karegi toh vo ab piche nahi hat sakti thi. Otherwise sabhi usse weak hi samjhenge.

Kabir Rati ke kaafi paas aa kar khada ho gaya aur halka niche jhuk kar Rati ki aankho mein dekhne lag gaya. Rati is waqt charmingly shy dikh rahi thi. Uske vo lips, uski vo nose, uske vo crystal clear aankhe. Sabhi kabir ke dil ki dhadkan ko jaise rok hi rahe the.

Rati ne ek white dress pehna hua tha jo beh rahi hawa ke saath kabhi kabhi udta rehta aur saath hi us hawa mein failta uska fragrance.

Rati ek extremely charming ladki thi.

Apne samne aise Rati ko dekh kar kabir ko uske past life ke pal yaad aane lag gaye. Uska dil kar raha tha ke vo abhi Rati ko apni baaho mein bhar le.

Kabir ko apne itne paas paa kar Rati kaafi flustered ho gayi. Uske dil ki dhadkan aur bhi badh gayi thi. Uske sharam ki laali uske us white neck tak aa gayi thi.

Un dono ke aaspas ek charming atmosphere fail gaya tha.

Aaj ki raat kaafi khubsurat lag rahi thi.
Wahi tree ke piche chupe hue City Lord bhi kabir ko aise Rati ke paas dekh kar aur gussa ho gaye the. Kuch der pehle unka jo nazariya Kabir ko dekhne ka change hua tha vo phir se pehle jaisa ho gaya. Unhe toh bas yahi lag raha tha ke agar kabir ne Rati ko galat tarah se touch bhi kar liya toh vo usse zaroor sabak sikhayenge.

Kabir ne Rati ke body se nikal rahi khushbu ko ek gehri saans lekar apne andar liya. Uski aankho mein lonliness aur sadness dekh jaa sakti thi. Kabhi kabhi usse yahi lagta ke yeh sab uska ek sapna hi hai. Har raat ko vo ek khatarnak sapne ke wajah se uth jata tha. Rati ki death ki yaad aate hi vo akele mein kitni baat rota aaya tha yeh toh gina tak nahi jaa sakta tha.

Rati abhi kabir ke pyar ko nahi samjh sakti thi ke vo usse kitni gehrayi tak pyar karta hai. Uske death ke saath countless encounters vo thousands of years ka akelapan. Sirf ek Rati ki yaad hi thi jisme zariye vo past life mein ek tarah se zinda tha. Vo sabho Rati ki yaade uske soul tak mein sama gayi thi.

Phir se return aane par vo apne aap ko kaafi khush kismat samjh raha tha. Par usse kahi yeh dar bhi tha ke pehle ki tarah yeh sab usse chin na jaaye issi liye vo apne aap ko strong banana chahta tha aur apne logo ko bhi.

Is baar vo pehle ki tarah kuch bhi nahi hone dena chahta tha.

Rati ke paas khade ho kar kabir uske hone ke ehsaas ko feel kar raha tha. Kabir ka bohot dil kar raha tha ke vo usse apne nahi mein le le, usse apne dil ki sabhi baate bata de. Par vo abhi aisa kar nahi sakta tha. Agar usne apne Rati ko apne baho mein bhar liya toh vo usse dara dega.

Kabir aise Rati ke paas aate aate uske kaano ke paas aaya aur dheere se uske kano mein usne kaha.

Kabir-Meri first wish hai ke tum......

Jab Kabir ne 'tum' kaha vo jaanbhuj kar wahi ruk gaya.

Kabir ki baat sunkar Rati ki body kaap si gayi. Uske dono haat bhi bohot kaap rahe the. Usse yeh bilkul bhi nahi laga tha ke kabir apni first wish kuch aisi rakhega.

Par pata nahi kyo agar kabir abhi kuch waisi wish bhi karta toh bhi vo uske liye ready so thi. Vo chahe kuch bhi ho usse dil se mana hi nahi kar pati thi.

Wahi yaha City Lord ka gussa ab kaafi badh gaya tha. Unke Black-Gold Rank expert hone ke aura unke body se nikalne lag gaya tha. Vo toh bas issi baat ka wait kar rahe the ke Kabir kuch ulti-sidhi harkat kar de aur vo jaa kar usse sabak sikha sake.

Wahi Rati apne khubsurat haato ko apne sine se laga kar khadi thi. Uska dil kaafi zoro se dhadak raha tha.

Jab Kabir ko City Lord ka violent aura feel hua tab usse laga ke ab bas kar dena chahiye.

Kabir-Meri first wish yeh hai ke tum mere saath baate karti raho.

Rati-Tumhare saath baate karti rahu?

Rati yeh sunkar shock si ho gayi. Vo toh waise hi shock ho kar kabir ko dekh rahi thi.

Kabir-Toh tumhe kya laga mein kuch aur kehne wala hu.

Kabir ki nazar Rati ke sharm ke wajah se hue laa gaalo par gayi. Usne aise behave kiya jaise usse kisi baat ko soch kar shock laga ho aue usne Rati se kaha.

Kabir-Kahi tumne kuch utli-sidhi baat toh nahi soch li? Kya main tumhe aisa ladka lagta hu?

Rati kabir ki baato ko sunne ke baad apne aap ko sharam ke maare zamin mein gaad dena chahti thi. Usse laga tha ke kabir kuch aisi wish karega jo abhi ke liye kaafi inappropriate hogi. Jab se usne Snow Wind Family mein janam liya hai usne aisa bohot kuch hota hua dekha hai jo families ke bich hota hai. 18 years old Osian City mein marriageable age thi. Toh usse in sabhi baato ka knowledge bhi tha.

Agar yaha kabir decent person hai toh vo khud decent nahi hai? Kabir usse jaanbhuj kar sata raha hai.

Rati-Kabir, I hate you.

Jab Rati ko kabir ke satane wali baat samjh aayi tab usne waise hi apna ek par kabir ke ek par rakh diya aur use baad ghum kar waha se nikal gayi. Usse pata chal gaya tha ke kabir kaafi irritating hai aur usse bas sata raha hai.
Jab usne phir se un sabhi thoughts ke baremein socha jinhe kabir ne usse sochne par majboor kiya tha unhe phir se yaad karne ke baad uske gaal phir se sharam se laal ho gaye.

Kabir-Owwwww!

Although usse zara sa bui pain nahi hua phir bhi vo apne pair ko pakad ka chillane lag gaya. Usne Rati ke jaate hue figure ko dekh kar zor se kaha.

Kabir-Hey par tumne hi kaha tha na ke tum meri 3 y ko pura karogi. Toh ab kyo jaa rahi ho mujhse baat kiye bina?

Rati-Apne aap se hi baate karo ab.

Rati ne bina palte hi yeh baat kahi thi. Par yeh kehte hue uske face par ek smile bhi tha. Pata nahi kyo aaj uska dil bohot hi khush tha.

Jaldi hi Rati apne building mein chali gayi. Wahi Rati ke jaane ke baad kabir bhi aise hi siti bajate hue apne building ki taraf chal diya.

Yaha City Lord jo kabhi bhi bahar aane wale the vo abhi jo hua usse dekh kar ruk gaye aur jab Rati waha se chali gayi toh vo bhi waha se nikalne lag gaye. Agar kabir sach mein kuch aisi waise harkat karta Rati ke saath toh vo zaroor waha jaate par ab vo kuch nahi kar sakte the. Tabhi unhe pata chala ke kabir ne sirf Rati ko hi nahi balki unhe bhi fool bana diya tha. Kabir ko aise situ bajate hue jaate dekh kar vo apne aap ko kaafi powerless feel kar rahe the.

Kabir ko kisi bhi tarah common sense mein measure hi nahi kiya jaa sakta tha.

Kis tarah ka person tha kabir? Yeh toh vo khud bhi pata nahi kar paaye the.

Ek baat kisi ko bhi samajh leni chahiye ke uska appearance ek 18 years old ladke ka tha. Toh aise bachhe ke true nature ko dhundna itna mushkil kyo ho raha tha sabhi ko.

Socha jaaye toh kabir apne age ke baki sabhi ladko se out of the line tha. Par kisi bhi tarah se uska character bad nahi tha.

But still City Lord Rati ko lekar chinta mein the. Rati kaafi pure hearted person thi. Apne age ke ladkiyon se kaafi spirited aur smarter person thi. Par jab bhi kabir usse satata tha toh vo bhi helpless ho jaati thi. City Lord ko phir bhi kabir ko kuch waqt aur observe karna tha ke kahi uske dil mein koi buri soch toh nahi hai Rati ko lekar.

City Lord ki figure bhi slowly gayab ho gayi.

City Lord ke presence ko gayab hota dekh kabir bhi smile karne lag gaya. Vo bas City Lord ko halka sata raha tha. Uske yeh jo Father-In-Law the vo apne face par ek hi strick expression le kar rehte the jo kabir ko kaafi booring lagta tha. Ab jab vo City Lord Mansion mein tha apni training par focus kar raha tha toh occasionally Rati aur City Lord ko satana uske liye interesting ban sa gaya tha.

City Lord ke jaane ke baad kabir bhi apne building mein jaa kar apne room mein aa gay aur apne space locket mein chala gaya. Waha par usne apni training start kar di thi. Ab jab vo Black Realm ke initial stage par tha toh ab uske cultivation ki speed kam ho gayi thi. Yeh baat sabhi ko pata thi ke jaise jaise cultivation apne next level par aata hai waise waise cultivation ki speed kam ho jaati hai. Koi koi toh ek hi realm mein kitne saal nikal dete hai. Kisi ko bhi agar apne next realm mein break through karna ho toh sirf talent ka hona ha kaafi nahi tha. Uske saath resources aur sahi technique ka hona bhi zaruri tha. Kabir ke paas na talent ki kami thi na resources ki. Wahi technique ko baat na hi kare toh hi achha hai.

Jab Kabir phir se apne cultivation ke liye baith gaya tab uske andar uski Abyss Ancient Sword uske soul mein halki vibrate karne lag gayi thi. Kabir ka cultivation jaise jaise badh raha tha waise waise uske sword par halke halke kuch inscriptions banne lag gaye the. Kabir un inscriptions ko feel kar kar paa raha tha par unhe thik se dekh nahi paa raha tha. Kabir ko ab apne Black Realm ke agle stage mein jaldi break through nahi karna tha. Ab vo apne cultivation ko strong foundation dena chahta tha isliye vo sirf ab practice hi karne lag gaya tha. Uske aisa karne se uske is realm ke Ultimate Realm mein pohochne ke chances badh jane wale the.

Abhi kabir ke body se jo aura nikal raha tha vo uske us space ko bhi hila raha tha. Agar yeh City Lord sense kar paate toh pata bhi nahi vo kabir ke baremein kya sochte.

Aise hi kabir apne space mein apni training karta raha.
 

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Kabir Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ka layout de kar uske baremein sabhi ko samjh deta hai. Kabir ke instructions milne ke baad Main Affairs Elder baki bache sabhi materials ko collect karne lag jaate hai. In dino ab City Lord Mansion kaafi busy ho gaya tha. Kuch jagaho ko toda gaya aur kuch jagah gaddhe banaye gaye. Wahi kuch jagaho par inscription patterns banaye jaane lag gaye.

City Lord, Main Affairs Elder aur kuch logo ko chod kar kisi ko bhi nahi pata tha ke City Lord Mansion mein yeh ho kya raha hai.

Jaldi hi evening ho gayi. Suraj ab jaa chuka tha aur chand ki roshni sab jagah fail gayi thi.

Kabir ek jagah khada tha garden mein aur kuch dur dekh raha tha. Kuch duri par vo achhe se dekh sakta tha ke ek white dress pehni hui ladki is chand ki roshni mein kisi pari ki tarah dikh rahi thi. Vo ek jagah kaafi shant khadi thi aur uske aaspas white mist ka aura bana hua tha. Us white mist mein ek humonoid demon spirit form bana hua tha uske sir ke upar. Us demon spirit ne bbi white dress hi pehna hua tha. Uske wajah se vo kaafi elegant lag rahi thi. Saath hi usne apne sir par ek crown bhi pehna hua tha. Like a QUEEN.

Yeh thi Rati ki Snow Queen Demon Spirit.

Is demon spirit ne kaafi dusre demon spirit ko apne mein absorb kiya hua tha aur God level ke growth rate par aa gayi thi. Snow Queen ki strength kaafi strong thi. Rati ke aura se nikal rahe white mist ne us garden ke atmosphere ko kaafi thanda kar diya tha.

Abhi yeu thand kaafi halki thi aur gentle bhi par agar Rati ne attack kar diya toh yahi thand ke ice blades ban sakte the jo kisi ki bhi jaan lene mein kaafi the.

Yeh dekh kar Kabir lightly smile karne lag gaya. Rati aur Snow Queen dono hi ek dusre k saath achhe se merge ho gaye the. Us thand mein faile aura ko sense kar ke hi kabir bata sakta tha ke Rati ne Snow Queen ke 2 combait abilities ko master kar liya hai saath hi uska cultivation bhi kaafi stable ho gaya tha. Even 3-Star Gold Rank Demon Spiritualist bhi uske opponents nahi ho sakte the.

Kabir ab us white mist mein se chalte hue Rati ki taraf jaane lag jata hai.

Wahi garden ke dusre corner mein koi aur bhi khada tha. Yeh koi aur nahi Rati ke father the.

City Lord abhi ek tree ke piche khade the aur Rati aur Kabir par nazar rakh rahe the.

Pehli baat toh yeh thi ke City Lord ne Rati ke cultivation mein kaafi progress dekhi thi. Wahi unhe abhi tak yeh pata nahi tha ke Rati ko Yeh Snow Queen kaha se mili hai. Unhe yeh kabhi nahi laga tha ke Rati ka cultivation kabhi itna badhega. Rati ke paas kabhi bhi City Lord ki tarah koi cultivation talent nahi tha. Jiske wajah se City Lord kaafi depressed se the. Rati ka paas kaafi saare resources the par phir bhi vo kabhi 1-Star Bronze Rank par bhi nahi pohoch paa rahi thi. Although vo baki ke section mein apne age ke sabhi bachho se aage hi rehti thi. Par City Lord ki daughter hone ke naate vo phir bhi talent mein kaafi piche thi.

Par ab Rati ki Cultivation kuch zyada hi speed thi. Uske soul force se hi City Lord bata sakte the ke vo ab 5-Star Silver Rank par hai. Wahi jis Snow Queen se vo merge hui hai vo baki ke ordinary Snow Queen se kaafi strong hai. City Lord ke mutabik agar koi 1-Star Gold Rank expert bhi ab Rati ke saath battle karta hai toh vo bhi usse nahi hara sakta hai.

City Lord kaafi confused the. Although vo kabhi kabhi months apne beti se nahi milte the. Apne hi kaamo mein busy rehte the par unhe Rati ki kaafi fikar rehti thi. Unhe Rati ke cultivation speed ki information ke baremein uske aunty ke wajah hamesha pata rehta tha. Kuch waqt pehle vo 1-Star Bronze Rank tak nahi jaa paa rahi thi. Toh ab aisa kya ho gaya ke uski cultivation 5-Star Silver Rank par aa gayi?

Yeh toh unke thinking ko challenge karne wali baat ho gayi thi.

Aisa talent toh khud unke paas bhi nahi tha. Unhe khud 1-Star Bronze Rank se 5-Star Silver Rank par aane ke liye several years lag gaye the.

Ek aur baat unhe yeh sata rahi thi vo yeh ke sabhi demon spirits mein Snow Queen demon spirit sabse rare thi aur extremely powerful bhi. Pure Osian City mein bhi vo sirf haat ke fingers par count karne jitne hongi. Wahi Rati ki Snow Queen toh special bhi thi toh vo kitni rare hai yeh baat karna hi bekar hai. Aisi powerful demon spirit milne ka chance millions mein ek hota hai.

Ab jaise jaise waqt jaa raha tha City Lord ke dil se ab Rati ki fikar kam hoti jaa rahi thi. Unke siva koi aur abhi jo Osian City ki halat hai vo samjh nahi sakta tha. Har ek second ke liye Osian City ke liye kisi na kisi tarah ka khatra tha. Continuously Osian City ke situation ke baremein sochne ke wajah se unki raato ki neend bhi ud si gayi thi. Osian City ke log aur apni family safe feel karti rahe iske liye vo apne limit se bahar jaa kae kaam kar rahe the. City Lord ko daughter hone ke wajah se usse protect karne ke liye bohot log the par vo tabhi puri tarah se apne aap ko protect kar paayegi jab uske cultivation utna strong ho.

Kabhi kabhi City Lord jab bhi Rati ko dekhte toh unhe Rati ke maa ki yaad aati thi. Jiske wajah se unke aankho mein aasu bhi aaye the.

Jo us din kabir aur City Lord ke bich hua tha uske wajah se dono baap-beti ke bich abhi bhi ek awkwardness thi. Uske baad toh in dono ne abhi tak baat bhi nahi ki thi. Iske wajah se City Lord ab yahi socha ke vo khud hi jaa kar pehel karenge Rati se baat karne ke liye. Vo khud bhi ab apne beti ke dil ki baat janna chahte the. Lekin jab vo yaha aane hi wale the ke unhe koi dikh jata hai. Yeh jo bhi koi tha vo ab Rati ki taraf badh raha tha. Yeh koi aur nahi Kabir tha. City Lord ne jaldi se apne aap ko ek tree ke piche chipa liya.

Kabir unhe apne beti ke yard mein akela dikha tha. Agar uske paas aisi otherworldly powers na hoti toh vo usse wahi maar bhi dete par ek baat aur thi ke unhe lag raha tha ke kabir ke piche jo master hai vo kaafi powerful hai yeh bhi ek wajah thi ke vo usse haat bhi nahi laga sakte the. Aur abhi kuch din pehle kabir ne Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ko lekar unke almost blackmail hi kar liya tha.

Osian City ke benefit ke liye City Lord ko apna ek kadam piche lena hi pad raha tha. Par vo Rati ke saath kuch aisa-waisa na kar de yeh bata bhi unhe dekhni thi. Yahi soch kar City Lord bhi Rati ke building ke paas ke building mein shift ho gaye the. Agar unhe Kabir kisi bhi tarah se Rati ke saath kuch aisi waise harkar karte hue milta hai toh vo usse yaha se nikalne wale the. Par phir bhi aisa nahi kar sakte the, ek kabir hi tha pure Osian City mein jo Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ko laga sakta tha.

CL-Ab mein bhi dekhna chahta hu ke tum kya plan kar rahe ho. Agar tumne zara bhi kuch aisi waisi harkat ki toh mein Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ke baremein zara bhi nahi sochunga aur tumhe yaha se nikal dunga.

Kabir ko Rati ke paas jaate dekh kar City Lord ne yeh baat sochi thi.

Rati ko abhi tak City Lord ke presence ke baremein pata nahi chal paya tha. Waise chal bhi nahi pata City Lord khud Black-Gold Rank expert the. Apne presence ko chupana unhe achhe se aata tha. Jab tak koi unke upar ya unke hi level ka person na ho unhe sense bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Par kabir ke liye unhe sense karna koi badi baat nahi thi.

Kisi ko apne paas sense karte hi Rati ki band aankho mein ek halchal hui. Iske wajah se usne apne aankhe open ki.

Rati-Tum ho.

Kabir ko aise dekh kar pata nahi kyo vo halki panic si ho gayi. Uske gaal laal hone lag gaye the. Uska yeh shy look chand ki roshni mein aur bhi charming lag raha tha.

Kabir-Good Evening.

Kabir ne Rati ko dekhte hue kaha.

Rati-Tum yaha kyo aaye ho ab?

Rati ne apne sir ko niche karte hue yeh baat usse pichi. Usse kabir ki nazar ko avoid karna tha. Kabir ka presence usse nervous kar raha tha. Usne unconsciously ek step piche chali gayi. After all yeh ek raat ka waqt tha aur ek ladka aur ladki akele hi yard mein the. Rati apne building mein bilkul bhi nahi rukne wali thi agar kabir raat ko wahi rukne ke baremein soch raha hoga toh. Wahi aise yard ke open area mein usse abhi utna bhi nervous feel nahi ho raha tha. Wahi vo yaha practice bhi kar sakti thi.

Kabir Rati se kuch dur aa kar ruk jata hai. Uske powerful sense se City Lord ka presence chup pana kaafi mushkil tha. Jab usne City Lord ke presence ko sense kiya toh uske face par ek smile aa gayi. City Lord Rati se apne aura ke presence ko chupa sakte hai par Kabir se nahi.

Kabir-Mein ne abhi apna dinner khatam kiya hai aur aise hi walk ke liye nikal gaya tha. Tumhe yaha practice karte dekha toh chala aaya.

Kabir ne smile karte hue yeh baat kahi.

Rati ne ek baar apna sir utha kar kabir ke smile wale face ko dekha jispar chand ko roshni pad rahi thi. Rati halka halka apne aap ko Kabir ke face mein khota paa rahi thi. Yeh baat jan kar usne jhat se apne sir ko phir se niche kar liya. Kabir sharp nazar se yeh baat chut nahi saki aur uske face par jo smile thi vo aur bhi gehri ho gayi.

Rati-Kabir mujhe nahi pata tumne mere uncle ko kaise mana liye mere paas wale building mein rukne ke liye. Par ab mujhe lagta hai ke hame ek dusre se milna rok dena chahiye.

Kabir-Kya......kya tum mujhse ab milna nahi chahti.

Kabir apne face par aise expressions laa raha tha jaise yeh baat sunkar uska dil hi toot gaya ho.

Kabir-Waise yeu baat bhi sahi hai after all tum kaafi badi family se belong karti ho tum sabhi ham jaise commoners se kyo friendship rakhna chahoge.

Rati-Nahi aisi baat nahi hai.

Kabir ke aise expressions dekh kar Rati ne jhat se upar dekha aur apne haato ko wave kar te hue usse explain karne lag gayi. Waise bhi Rati kaafi kind hearted thi, naturally vo kabir ka kisi bhi tarah se dil nahi todna chahti thi.

Rati-Kabir, although tum thode weird ho aur kuch zyada hi straightforward ho par mujhe itna pata hai ke tum ek kind person ho. Phir vo tum apne friends ke liye ho ya bhi mere liye. Otherwise tum mujhe aise help nahi karte. Although tum mujhe kabhi kabhi aise satane aa jate ho par mujhe is baat ka zara bhi bura nahi lagta hai. Utla mein uske opposition feel karti hu. Mein hamesha yahi wish karti hu ke tum mujhe aise hi aa kar satate raho. Kyo ki is bade se City Lord Mansion ke andar mein kabhi kabhi apne aap ko kaafi akela paati hu. Sirf meri aunty hi mujhse baat karti hai. Ek waqt tha ke meri bhi ek best friend thi aur vo koi aur nahi balki Maithili thi. Par hamare family differences ke wajah se vo bhi mujhse dur ho gayi. Uske baad sirf tum hi mere friend bache ho.

Par tum yeh baat samjh sakte ho ke mere father tumhe mere saath nahi rehne de sakte hai.

Rati ne aakhri baat kaafi sad tone mein kahi.

Kabir ne ek baar garden ke corner mein dekha aur kaha.

Kabir-Well yeh kehna bura nahi hoga phir ke City Lord tumhare father hone ke liye kisi bhi tarah se qualified hai. Unhone tumhe aise akele hi yard mein rehne ke liye chod diya aur tumhe friends bhi banane nahi de rahe hai.

Kabir ki baato ko sunkar City Lord ko zara bhi gussa nahi aaya bulki unki aankho mein sadness aur pain dekha jaa sakta tha.

Rati-Kabir tum mere father ke baremein aisi baate nahi kar sakte ho. Unke paas koi choice hi nahi hai. City Lord hone ke wajah se unka har ek decision Osian City ke safety ko lekar hi hota hai. Wahi saath hi vo daily matters mein bhi bohot busy hote hai. Yahi wajah hai ke vo meri puri tarah se care nahi kar paa rahe hai. Mujhe hi apne taraf se apni training badhani hogi aur strong demon spiritualist ban kar unki help karni hogi. Past mein mein kitna bhi try kar lu mera cultivation kisi bhi tarah se nahi badh raha tha. Par ab aisa nahi hai aur iski wajah tum ho.

Rati kaafi gratefully ho kar Kabir ko dekh rahi thi. Kabir ko pata tha ke vo uske kiye gaye help ko kisi bhi tarah se usse louta degi.

Jab Kabir ko laga ke Rati kuch kehna chahti hai par keh nahi paa rahi hai yeh dekh kar kabir be apne haat ko wave karte hue kaha.

Kabir-Thik hai chalo chodo is baat ko. Waise bhi City Lord tumhare father hai, toh naturally tum unhi ki baat manogi. Waise bhi unhone mujhe kuch waqt pehle injured kiya tha. Is baat ke liye abhi bhi hamare bich settlement honi baaki hai.

City Lord abhi kaafi emotional the jo Rati ne kaha tha usse sunkar par jab unhe kabir ki baat sunayi di toh jhat se unhe gussa aa gaya. Vo yahi soch rahe the ke koun kis baat ko lekar settlement karne wala hai.

Kabir ne smile karte hue aage kaha.

Kabir-Mein ab yaha kuch din ke liye ruk raha hu. Tumhe apne father ke baremein sochne ki zyada zaroorat nahi hai. Unhe abhi bhi Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ko lagane ke liye meri help ki zaroorat hai. Toh tab tak to tumhare father mujhe kuch nahi karenge.

Rati-Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array. Yeh kya hai?

Kabir-Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ten thousand Black-Gold Rank demon spirits aur bohot se inscription patterns se banta hai. Jab yeh puri tarah ready hi jaya hai aur usse activate kiya jata hai tab yeh Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array dozens of Legend Rank Demon Spiritualists ko bhi maar sakta hai.

Rati-Toh yeh baat hai. Tabhi mere father is baat ke liye ready ho gaye.

Kabir ko City Lord ke saath aur masti karne ka khayal aata hai aur vo aage kehta hai.

Kabir-Ha dekha tumne abhi. Tumhare father Osian City ke liye kuch bhi sacrifice kar sakte hai. Ek tarah se unhone tumhe mujhe bech hi diya hai.

Kabir ko pata tha City Lord garden ke corner mein tree ke piche chupe hue hai aur undono ki baato ko sun rahe hai.

Kabir ki baato ko sunkar ab City Lord aur bhi gussa ho gaye the. Vo naturally apne beti ko Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ke liye bech toh nahi sakte the. Unhe lag raha tha ke vo waha se nikal kar Rati ke paas jaaye aur usse sabhi situation ko samjhaye par jab unhone Rati ke face par jo expressions the unhe dekha aur wahi ruk gaye. Rati ne apne sir ko utha kar kabir se serious tone mein kaha.

Rati-Kabir agar tum sach mein Osian City ke safety ke liye Ten Thousands Demonic Beast Array ko laga sakte ho toh tumhara City ke safety ke liye kiya jane wala contribution kaafi bada hoga. Even mere father........Mujhe bhi kisi baat ka aitraaz nahi hai. Phir chahe tum mere yard mein hi kyo na raho. Even mujhe.......Mujhe tumhari koi Girlfriend bhi samjh le isse bhi koi aitraaz nahi hai.

Yeh kehte hue Rati ke gaal sharam se laal ho gaye the.

Kabir Rati ko dekhe jaa raha tha. Rati ki baat sunne ke baad uske face par ek smile aa gayi. Like Father Like Daughter. Osian City ke safety ke liye dono bhi sab kuch sacrifice kar sakte the. Kabir ne smile karte hue kaha.

Kabir-Agar aisi baat hai toh apni baat kabhi bhul mat jana.

Kabir ki last ki line sunkar City Lord ko kuch bhi samjh nahi aa raha tha ke vo kya kare. Unke piche unke baremein bura kehna koi badi baat nahi thi lekin vo abhi wahi the phir bhi kabir unke baremein aisi baate kar sakta tha.
Wahi Rati ke face par abhi bhi sad expressions the. Usne Kabir se kaha.

Rati-Kabir mere father ko misunderstand mat karna. Mere father actually kaafi good person hai. Mujhe pata hai vo mere saath bhi waqt bitana chahte hai, par vo bhi kya kar sakte hai aakhir vo is City ke City Lord hai. Unke kandhe par is City ke logo ki zindagi ki responsibility hai. Vo kisi bhi tarah se piche nahi hatna chahte hai. Although vo mere saath zyada time spend nahi karte hai phir bhe vo mere life ke one of the respected persons mein se ek hai. Mein sirf is baat ke liye khud par gussa hu ke mein kaafi weak hu aur unki kisi bhi tarah se help nahi kar paa rahi hu.

Rati ki baato ko sunkar City Lord jo abhi garden ke corner mein chupe hue the vo kaafi shant se ho gaye. Vo hamesha se apne beti ke samne ek strick father ki tarah rahe the. Par jab unhone aaj Rati ki baat suni toh unka dil kisi bhi tarah se shant nahi ho paa raha tha. Unhe aaj pata chal gaya tha ke Rati unke baremein kya sochti hai hai.

Rati-Kabir mein ne pehle socha tha ke mera jo talent tha........mujhe dar tha ke mein kabhi bhi iske saath apne father ke heights par nahi pohoch paungi. Par jab tne mujhe cultivation technique di aur yeh Snow Queen di toh meri strength mein drastic change aa gaya. Iske wajah se aaj mein aone dreams ko paa sakti hu. Although mere father ham dono ko ek saath rehne ke liye maan nahi sakte hai. Lekin mein tumhare 3 wishes complete kar sakti hu. Jab tak vo mere had tak hai. Mein phir usse mana nahi karungi.

Rati ne kuch der sochne ke baad yeh baat kahi thi. Yeh kehne ke baad uske gaal aur bhi laal ho gaye the. Par unki aankho mein determination dikh raha tha.

Rati ke ab tak ke life mein usse uske father ne yahi sikhaya tha ke kisi ke achhayi ko kabhi bhi apne paas mat rakho balki usse aur badha kar baat do. Saath hi vo jo bhi khud kar rahe hai uspar trust hona chahiye.

Rati ki baat sunkar City Lord kaafi shock ho gaye. Unhe ab pata chala ke Rati ke itne fastly cultivation ke badhne ke piche kya reason hai. Yeh kabir ke guidence ke wajah se hua tha. Is baat ke baremein soch kar City Lord ka Kabir ko dekhne ka nazariya halka change sa ho gaya.

Kabir-Sach? Toh mein jo chahu vo request kar sakta hu aur tum usse zara bhi mana nahi karogi.

Kabir Rati ke aur paas aate hue yeh keh raha tha.

Kabir ko aise apne aur paas aate dekh kar Rati aur bhi panic si ho gayi. Aise mein vo ek step aur piche chali gayi. Uske gaal aur bhi laal ho gaye. Kabir ab uske saath kya karne wala tha? Uske dimag mein bohot kuch aa raha tha. Par suddenly usse kuch realise hua aur vo confidently apni jagah khadi ho gayi. Ab jab usne promis kar hi diya hai ke vo kabir ke 3 wishes ko pura karegi toh vo ab piche nahi hat sakti thi. Otherwise sabhi usse weak hi samjhenge.

Kabir Rati ke kaafi paas aa kar khada ho gaya aur halka niche jhuk kar Rati ki aankho mein dekhne lag gaya. Rati is waqt charmingly shy dikh rahi thi. Uske vo lips, uski vo nose, uske vo crystal clear aankhe. Sabhi kabir ke dil ki dhadkan ko jaise rok hi rahe the.

Rati ne ek white dress pehna hua tha jo beh rahi hawa ke saath kabhi kabhi udta rehta aur saath hi us hawa mein failta uska fragrance.

Rati ek extremely charming ladki thi.

Apne samne aise Rati ko dekh kar kabir ko uske past life ke pal yaad aane lag gaye. Uska dil kar raha tha ke vo abhi Rati ko apni baaho mein bhar le.

Kabir ko apne itne paas paa kar Rati kaafi flustered ho gayi. Uske dil ki dhadkan aur bhi badh gayi thi. Uske sharam ki laali uske us white neck tak aa gayi thi.

Un dono ke aaspas ek charming atmosphere fail gaya tha.

Aaj ki raat kaafi khubsurat lag rahi thi.
Wahi tree ke piche chupe hue City Lord bhi kabir ko aise Rati ke paas dekh kar aur gussa ho gaye the. Kuch der pehle unka jo nazariya Kabir ko dekhne ka change hua tha vo phir se pehle jaisa ho gaya. Unhe toh bas yahi lag raha tha ke agar kabir ne Rati ko galat tarah se touch bhi kar liya toh vo usse zaroor sabak sikhayenge.

Kabir ne Rati ke body se nikal rahi khushbu ko ek gehri saans lekar apne andar liya. Uski aankho mein lonliness aur sadness dekh jaa sakti thi. Kabhi kabhi usse yahi lagta ke yeh sab uska ek sapna hi hai. Har raat ko vo ek khatarnak sapne ke wajah se uth jata tha. Rati ki death ki yaad aate hi vo akele mein kitni baat rota aaya tha yeh toh gina tak nahi jaa sakta tha.

Rati abhi kabir ke pyar ko nahi samjh sakti thi ke vo usse kitni gehrayi tak pyar karta hai. Uske death ke saath countless encounters vo thousands of years ka akelapan. Sirf ek Rati ki yaad hi thi jisme zariye vo past life mein ek tarah se zinda tha. Vo sabho Rati ki yaade uske soul tak mein sama gayi thi.

Phir se return aane par vo apne aap ko kaafi khush kismat samjh raha tha. Par usse kahi yeh dar bhi tha ke pehle ki tarah yeh sab usse chin na jaaye issi liye vo apne aap ko strong banana chahta tha aur apne logo ko bhi.

Is baar vo pehle ki tarah kuch bhi nahi hone dena chahta tha.

Rati ke paas khade ho kar kabir uske hone ke ehsaas ko feel kar raha tha. Kabir ka bohot dil kar raha tha ke vo usse apne nahi mein le le, usse apne dil ki sabhi baate bata de. Par vo abhi aisa kar nahi sakta tha. Agar usne apne Rati ko apne baho mein bhar liya toh vo usse dara dega.

Kabir aise Rati ke paas aate aate uske kaano ke paas aaya aur dheere se uske kano mein usne kaha.

Kabir-Meri first wish hai ke tum......

Jab Kabir ne 'tum' kaha vo jaanbhuj kar wahi ruk gaya.

Kabir ki baat sunkar Rati ki body kaap si gayi. Uske dono haat bhi bohot kaap rahe the. Usse yeh bilkul bhi nahi laga tha ke kabir apni first wish kuch aisi rakhega.

Par pata nahi kyo agar kabir abhi kuch waisi wish bhi karta toh bhi vo uske liye ready so thi. Vo chahe kuch bhi ho usse dil se mana hi nahi kar pati thi.

Wahi yaha City Lord ka gussa ab kaafi badh gaya tha. Unke Black-Gold Rank expert hone ke aura unke body se nikalne lag gaya tha. Vo toh bas issi baat ka wait kar rahe the ke Kabir kuch ulti-sidhi harkat kar de aur vo jaa kar usse sabak sikha sake.

Wahi Rati apne khubsurat haato ko apne sine se laga kar khadi thi. Uska dil kaafi zoro se dhadak raha tha.

Jab Kabir ko City Lord ka violent aura feel hua tab usse laga ke ab bas kar dena chahiye.

Kabir-Meri first wish yeh hai ke tum mere saath baate karti raho.

Rati-Tumhare saath baate karti rahu?

Rati yeh sunkar shock si ho gayi. Vo toh waise hi shock ho kar kabir ko dekh rahi thi.

Kabir-Toh tumhe kya laga mein kuch aur kehne wala hu.

Kabir ki nazar Rati ke sharm ke wajah se hue laa gaalo par gayi. Usne aise behave kiya jaise usse kisi baat ko soch kar shock laga ho aue usne Rati se kaha.

Kabir-Kahi tumne kuch utli-sidhi baat toh nahi soch li? Kya main tumhe aisa ladka lagta hu?

Rati kabir ki baato ko sunne ke baad apne aap ko sharam ke maare zamin mein gaad dena chahti thi. Usse laga tha ke kabir kuch aisi wish karega jo abhi ke liye kaafi inappropriate hogi. Jab se usne Snow Wind Family mein janam liya hai usne aisa bohot kuch hota hua dekha hai jo families ke bich hota hai. 18 years old Osian City mein marriageable age thi. Toh usse in sabhi baato ka knowledge bhi tha.

Agar yaha kabir decent person hai toh vo khud decent nahi hai? Kabir usse jaanbhuj kar sata raha hai.

Rati-Kabir, I hate you.

Jab Rati ko kabir ke satane wali baat samjh aayi tab usne waise hi apna ek par kabir ke ek par rakh diya aur use baad ghum kar waha se nikal gayi. Usse pata chal gaya tha ke kabir kaafi irritating hai aur usse bas sata raha hai.
Jab usne phir se un sabhi thoughts ke baremein socha jinhe kabir ne usse sochne par majboor kiya tha unhe phir se yaad karne ke baad uske gaal phir se sharam se laal ho gaye.

Kabir-Owwwww!

Although usse zara sa bui pain nahi hua phir bhi vo apne pair ko pakad ka chillane lag gaya. Usne Rati ke jaate hue figure ko dekh kar zor se kaha.

Kabir-Hey par tumne hi kaha tha na ke tum meri 3 y ko pura karogi. Toh ab kyo jaa rahi ho mujhse baat kiye bina?

Rati-Apne aap se hi baate karo ab.

Rati ne bina palte hi yeh baat kahi thi. Par yeh kehte hue uske face par ek smile bhi tha. Pata nahi kyo aaj uska dil bohot hi khush tha.

Jaldi hi Rati apne building mein chali gayi. Wahi Rati ke jaane ke baad kabir bhi aise hi siti bajate hue apne building ki taraf chal diya.

Yaha City Lord jo kabhi bhi bahar aane wale the vo abhi jo hua usse dekh kar ruk gaye aur jab Rati waha se chali gayi toh vo bhi waha se nikalne lag gaye. Agar kabir sach mein kuch aisi waise harkat karta Rati ke saath toh vo zaroor waha jaate par ab vo kuch nahi kar sakte the. Tabhi unhe pata chala ke kabir ne sirf Rati ko hi nahi balki unhe bhi fool bana diya tha. Kabir ko aise situ bajate hue jaate dekh kar vo apne aap ko kaafi powerless feel kar rahe the.

Kabir ko kisi bhi tarah common sense mein measure hi nahi kiya jaa sakta tha.

Kis tarah ka person tha kabir? Yeh toh vo khud bhi pata nahi kar paaye the.

Ek baat kisi ko bhi samajh leni chahiye ke uska appearance ek 18 years old ladke ka tha. Toh aise bachhe ke true nature ko dhundna itna mushkil kyo ho raha tha sabhi ko.

Socha jaaye toh kabir apne age ke baki sabhi ladko se out of the line tha. Par kisi bhi tarah se uska character bad nahi tha.

But still City Lord Rati ko lekar chinta mein the. Rati kaafi pure hearted person thi. Apne age ke ladkiyon se kaafi spirited aur smarter person thi. Par jab bhi kabir usse satata tha toh vo bhi helpless ho jaati thi. City Lord ko phir bhi kabir ko kuch waqt aur observe karna tha ke kahi uske dil mein koi buri soch toh nahi hai Rati ko lekar.

City Lord ki figure bhi slowly gayab ho gayi.

City Lord ke presence ko gayab hota dekh kabir bhi smile karne lag gaya. Vo bas City Lord ko halka sata raha tha. Uske yeh jo Father-In-Law the vo apne face par ek hi strick expression le kar rehte the jo kabir ko kaafi booring lagta tha. Ab jab vo City Lord Mansion mein tha apni training par focus kar raha tha toh occasionally Rati aur City Lord ko satana uske liye interesting ban sa gaya tha.

City Lord ke jaane ke baad kabir bhi apne building mein jaa kar apne room mein aa gay aur apne space locket mein chala gaya. Waha par usne apni training start kar di thi. Ab jab vo Black Realm ke initial stage par tha toh ab uske cultivation ki speed kam ho gayi thi. Yeh baat sabhi ko pata thi ke jaise jaise cultivation apne next level par aata hai waise waise cultivation ki speed kam ho jaati hai. Koi koi toh ek hi realm mein kitne saal nikal dete hai. Kisi ko bhi agar apne next realm mein break through karna ho toh sirf talent ka hona ha kaafi nahi tha. Uske saath resources aur sahi technique ka hona bhi zaruri tha. Kabir ke paas na talent ki kami thi na resources ki. Wahi technique ko baat na hi kare toh hi achha hai.

Jab Kabir phir se apne cultivation ke liye baith gaya tab uske andar uski Abyss Ancient Sword uske soul mein halki vibrate karne lag gayi thi. Kabir ka cultivation jaise jaise badh raha tha waise waise uske sword par halke halke kuch inscriptions banne lag gaye the. Kabir un inscriptions ko feel kar kar paa raha tha par unhe thik se dekh nahi paa raha tha. Kabir ko ab apne Black Realm ke agle stage mein jaldi break through nahi karna tha. Ab vo apne cultivation ko strong foundation dena chahta tha isliye vo sirf ab practice hi karne lag gaya tha. Uske aisa karne se uske is realm ke Ultimate Realm mein pohochne ke chances badh jane wale the.

Abhi kabir ke body se jo aura nikal raha tha vo uske us space ko bhi hila raha tha. Agar yeh City Lord sense kar paate toh pata bhi nahi vo kabir ke baremein kya sochte.


Aise hi kabir apne space mein apni training karta raha.
Fabulous update bhai
 
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