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UPDATE 22

Sabhi aise hi chalte hue jaa rahe the. Ab tak subah bhi ho gayi thi. Har koi pichali raat mein jo bhi hua uske baremein baat kar rahe the.

Wahi kabir….

Kabir- 1….2….3 silver rank practitioners. Yeh team hame follow kar rahi hai suddenly par shayad abhi tak kisi ne bhi unhe notice nahi kiya hai.

Magar Aarav thoda distracted lag raha hai.
Tabhi usse yaad aata hai ke yaha aane se pehle usne apne guard se kuch kaha tha.

Kabir-Ohh yeh zaroor Sacred Family ke log honge aur inhe Aarav ne hi bulaya hoga taki mujhe city ke bahar hi khatam kar de.

Kabir apna sir hilata hai aur aage chalne lag jata hai. Rati aur vo abhi bhi saath mein hi chal rahe the. Vo dono chalte chalte jest ke paas aate hai.

Jeet-Kabir kal raat tumhari wajah se ham aane wale khatre ko pehle hi samajh paaye varna vo Bear Fox ke attack se shayad hi koi bach pata.

Rati yeh sunkar shock hoti hai aur sochti hai.

Rati-Kya…….?Kal raat ham sabhi kabir ki wajah se bach paaye hai.

Yaha Jeet aage apni baat kehte jaata hai.

Jeet-Mein tumhara yeh favour kabhi nahi bhulunga. Kabir tumhara knowledge kafi profound hai. Vo bhi kafi young age mein.

Kabir-Younge master Jeet hame koi follow kar raha hai.

Yeh sunkar Jeet abhi piche dekhne hi wala tha ke Kabir usse rok deta hai.

Kabir-Piche mat dekhna. Yeh 3 silver rank practitioners hai.

Uske is baat par Jeet hasne ka dikhawa karta hai aur kehta hai.

Jeet-Kya tumhe pata hai yeh kaha se hai aur inke motives kya hai ?

Kabir-Shayad yeh sabhi Dark guild se hai.

Jeet-Dark guild….

Dark guild ek secret organization hai jo criminals ke group se bani hui hai. Yeh sabhi secretly logo ko marte hai. Sabhi galat kaam karte hai aur Osian City ke sabse bade dushman hai. Par shayad yaha kisi ko bhi yeh pata nahi hoga ke Dark guild ek chota sa hissa hai ek sabse bade organization ka.

Jeet chate hue Kabir ke kandhe par haath rakhta hai aur kehta hai.

Jeet-Tum uske baremein mat socho mein inhe sambhal leta hu.

Thodi dur aur chalne ke baad sabhi ek jagah ruk kar aaram karne lag jaate hai wahi Jeet kahi apne logo ke saath chala jata hai.

Yaha abhi kabir ek jagah leta hua tha wahi Rati uske paas baithi hui thi.

Rati-Kabir mujhe abhi bhi kuch aur janna hai inscriptions aur techniques ke baremein kya tum mujhe kuch bata sakte ho.

Kabir uth kar baith jata hai aur kehta hai.

Kabir-Okay.

Yaha dono baate kar rahe the wahi inhe sabhi dekh bhi rahe the aur kuch toh Kabir ko Rati ke saath dekh kar jal bhi rahe the.

Kabir-Rati…

Abhi vo aage kuch kehne hi jaanewala tha ke vo jhat se khada ho jata hai aur Rati ke aage khade reh kar apne haath ko gol ghuma deta hai. Rati ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ke kabir kya kar raha hai par jaise hi kabir apne haathon ko gol ghumata hai tabhi ek shield waha ban jaati hai aur us shield se ek energy wave aa kar takrati hai.
Rati-Yeh toh soul force ki energy wave hai. Lagta hai kahi koi fight kar raha hai.

Yaha kabir ke face ke expressions kafi change ho gaye the. Abhi vo kafi alag hi lag raha tha.

Kabir-Yahi ruko kahi jana mat mein dekh kar aata hu.

Abhi Rati usse kuch kehne hi wali thi ke uske samne se Kabir kafi speed se nikal jata hai.

Yaha jungle ke andar ek jagah ek jala hua nishan sa ban gaya tha zamin par. Wahi Jeet aur uske logo ne 3 logo ko gher liya tya unhi mein se ek ne yeh fire ka attack kiya tha.

Jeet-Holy fire Inscription ?

Batao koun ho tum aur tumhara hamare piche aane ka motive kya hai?.

Wahi jisne abhi ye fire attack kiya tya vo sochta hai.

Attacker-Agar in sabhi ne hamari identity jaan ki toh Family Head ke liye kafi musibat ho sakti hai hame yaha se nikal jana chahiye.

Yeh soch kar uske haath mein jo scroll hota hai vo ek baar phir se hawa mein ghumata hai jisse usmein jo fire Inscription hota hai vo activate hi jata hai aur usmein se bohot se fire balls Jeet ki taraf badh jaate hai.

Attacker-Retreat.

Tabhi ek guard jo jeet ke saath tha vo zor se bolta hai.

Guard-Young master ko protect karo.

Wahi Jeet jaha tha wahi khada raha.

Jeet-Lagta hai tum sabhi sach mein Dark Guild se ho.

Vo fire balls almost Jeet tak aa gaye the par tabhi ek Guard un fire balls aur Jeet ke bich mein aa jata hai aur apne haato se hi un sabhi balls ko phir se palat deta hai.

Yaha yeh 3 no bhaag rahe the ke unke chide hue fire ball mein se ek fire ball unke saathi ko lag jata haj aur vo wahi jal jata hai. Uski puri body tak kaali ho gayi thi.

Jeet unhe bhagta hua dekhta hai.

Jeet-Maar do sabhi ko.

Wahi Kabir aur uske piche kuch aur bhi ladke Jeet ke paas aate hai.

'Yaha kya hua hai. Kahi yaha bhi koi demon beast ne attack toh nahi kar diya ?’

Jeet-Nahi demon beast nahi. Hame 3 silver rank practitioners follow kar rahe the.

Unmein se is ek ko maar diya hai wahi jo 2 hai vo unke hi attack se injured ho gaye hai.

Yeh baat sunkar aaye hue logo mein se jo Aarav ke sathi the vo thode shock ho gaye the vo waha se nikal kar Jhat se Aarav ke paas jaane lag gaye yeh baat ki report karne ke liye.

Jeet-I think kabhi kabhi ham humans jyada scary hote hai demon beast se.

Wahi ek follower sab kuch Aarav ko bata deta hai jisse usse bhi shock lag jata hai.

‘Tumhe kya lagta hai koun ho sakte hai vo 3 silver rank practitioners?’

‘Mein ne young master ke muu se suna ke vo shayad Dark Guild se the.’

Aisi aur bhi baate ho rahi thi sabhi ke bich mein. Wahi Aarav bhi kuch soch raha tha.

Aarav-Toh in sabhi ne unko Dark Guild ka samjh liya. Silver rank practitioners ko kho dena yeh baat explain karna kafi mushkil hoga mere liye.

Lagta hai ab mujhe hi in sab ko niptana padega. Par pata nahi kyo vo Jeet Kabir ke baremein itna highly sochta hai. Wahi team ke sabhi members bhi kabir ke paas aana chahte hai.

Sabhi ek saath chal rahe the wahi kabir bhi sab ke saath has kar baate kar raha tha.

Tabhi Kabir ke samne aa kar koi khada ho jata hai. Yeh ek ladki thi jo usse age mein thode badi thi.

Ladki-Hi. Mera naam hai Hina. Mein Young master Jeet ki friend hu.

Kabir-Hi mein hu kabir.

Kabir apne man main.

Kabir-Hina ha. Yeh apne family ki substitute House Master ban gayi thi aur vo bhi kafi powerful.

Wahi Hina haste hue baat aage badhati hai.

Hina-Mein tumse age mein badi hu toh tum mujhe Sis keh kar bula sakte ho.

Wahi Yaha Kabir ko kuch bhi samjh nahi aa raha thabkw suddenly yeh uske piche kyo pad gayi hai.

Sabhi phir se aage chalne lag jaate hai ab Hina bhi kabir ke saath chal rahi thi wahi in sabhi ke bich ek ladka tha jo kab se in 3 ko dekh raha tha.

Yeh tha Chiman. Yeh bhi ek wealthy family se belong karta tha aur khud ek 3-Star Bronze rank fighter tha.

Yaha Hina bohot der se Kabir ko notice kar rahi thi.

Vo sochne lagti hai.

Hina-Kafi interesting person hai yeh. Mujhe dekh ne ke baad bhi kafi calm hai. Iske aankhe bhi kafi clear hai. Bakiyon se alag jab vo mujhe dekhte hai tab.

Chiman-Hina aur Snow Wind Family ki Rati. Is ladke ka background kya hai jo in do beauties se ghira hua hai.

Chiman chalte hue un 3 ke pass jata hai.

Chiman-Toh kya baate ho rahi hai yaha. Kya mein bhi join kar sakta hu.

Hina-Yeh Chiman phir se aa gaya hai mere piche.

Hina-Ham sabhi Inscriptions ke baremein baat kar rahe the.

Wahi kabir apne man mein.

Kabir-Yeh koun hai.

Chiman- Inscriptions toh meri speciality hai. Hina agar tumhe kuch bhi problem ho toh tum mujhe puch sakti ho.

Meri research inscriptions ke mamle mein kafi deep hai compare to is ladke se.

Hina apna sir hilate hue sochti hai.

Hina-Yeh pagal hai. Kabir ne ek look mein scarlet sunburst Inscription ke origin ke baremein bata diya tha yeh baat puri school janti hai.

Mujhe nahi lagta ke in sabmein age ka kuch role hai agar kisi ko understanding achhi ho toh vo age ki limitations bhi break kar sakta hai.

Wahi Chiman Kabir ko dekh kar has raha tha jisse Hina ko bura feel hota hai.

Hina-Yeh kaisa attitude hai tumhara Chiman.

Chiman-Mein is liye has raha hu ke mujhe nahi pata ke is ladke ne tumhe aisa kya bata diya ke tum isse genius tak keh sati ho.


Meinne suna hai iske pass Red soul sea realm hai. Iske jaisa future mein kya achivements paa sakta hai.
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UPDATE 23

Hina aur Chiman mein behes ab thodi badh rahi thi.

Tabhi Hina kuch aisa bol deti hai jisse Chiman ke pride ko thes pohoch jaati hai.

Hina-Waise ek baat toh hai. Tumahara talent itna bhi khas nahi hai. Tum ab 20 years ke ho aur abhi bhi 3-star bronze rank par hi ho. Phri bhi tum dusro par has rahe ho.

Chiman-Toh kya hua mere pass yellow soul sea realm hai. Agar mein thoda aur practice karu toh silver rank tak pohoch sakta hu.
Wahi yeh jiski tum baat kar rahi ho kitna bhi practice karle apne life mein kabhi kabhi bronze rank me aage nahi jaa sakta hai. Yeh apni puri life kisi ka guard banne mein hi bita dega.

Yaha Kabir kab se uski baate sunta jaa raha tha par usne abhi tak kuch kaha nahi tha.
Isse dekh kar Chiman sochne lagta hai.

Chiman-Yeh banda kab se Shan khada hai lagta hai mujhse dar gaya hai.

Tabhi waha Kabir ki aawaz aati hai.

Kabir-Agar aisi baat hai toh mein tumhe ek round ke liye challenge karta hu. Jo bhi haar jaayega vo Dog bankar 3 round lagayega. Kya kehte ho tum.

Yeh baat kabir ne Chiman ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kahi thi. Lekin Jan kabir ne uske kandhe par haat rakha tha tab usse kuch ajeeb sa feel hua. Usse aisa lag raha tha ke uske kandhe par haath nahi balki koi mountain rakh diya ho.

Yaha Rati Kabir ko thoda side mein le jaati hai aur kehti hai.

Rati-Kabir tumhe itna inplusiy hone ki zaroorat nahi hai.

Kabir apna haath uske kandhe par se hata deta hai toh Chiman bhi palat kar kehta hai.

Chiman-yeh mein kya sun raha hu. Ek bachha jo abhi tak 1-star bronze rank tak bhin nahi pohocha hai vo mujhe challenge kar raha hai.

Mein apne soul force ko bhi nahi use karunga na phir bhi apne physical strength se hi tumhe hara dunga.

Mein khud tumhe ek chance deta hu apne aap Dog ban jaao aur 3 round laga do.

Kabir-Ho gaya tumhara. Agar har baar koi naya aata raha aur aise hi mera time waste karta raha toh mujhe kafi problem ho sakti hai toh mein aaj ek hi baar mein isse khatam kar dena chahta hu.

Waise bhi tumhe lagta hai tum kisi ko bhi offend kar sakte ho toh aaj mein tumhe ek lesson sikhaunga jisse tumhe pata chal jayega ke kabhi kabhi kisi ko offend nahi karna chahiye.

Kabir ke is baat se Chiman thoda gussa ho jata hai.

Wahi unke yeh challenge wali baat Jeet tak pohoch jaati hai.

Jeet-Challenge? Lagta hai kabir ke paas koi aisa tarika hoga ke vo Chiman ko bhi hara sakta hai. Par kabir ko dekh kar nahi lagta ke vo Rash person hai. Sabhi side hat jaao.
Jeet ke aawaz se sabhi side hat jaate hai ab waha ek ring sa ban gaya tha.

Waha khade sabhi log apne mein hi discussion karne lag gaye the.

Rati-Kabir par….

Kabir Rati ki baat ko bich mein hi rok deta hai.

Kabir-Don't worry Rati. Agar mein in jaiso ko handle nahi kar paya toh mein future mein tumhe kaise protect karunga.

Uski iss baat se Rati blush karne lag jaati hai. Wahi yaha Aarav sochne lag jaata hai.

Aarav-Mein ne Chiman se pehle bhi baat ki hai. Agar usse chance diya jaaye toh vo Kabir ko kafi achhe se sabak sikha sakta hai.

Yaha kabir ab apne aankhe band kar ke khada tha. Vo apne soul force ko halka sa release karta hai.

Dekha jaaye toh yeh kafi halka hi tha par ismein kafi strength thi. Wahi Chiman ne apne left haath ko piche rakh diya aur apne right haat se kabir ko ishara karne laga.

Chiman-Mein tumhe 3 chances deta hu mujhe hit karne ke. Agar mein ne aisa nahi kiya toh sabhi mujhe BULLY kahenge.

Yaha par Kabir ne bhi apni aankhe khol di thi.uski aankhe halki halki chamak rahi thi par vo chamak bohot hi kam thi. Agar pure focus se dekhe tabhi pata chal sakta tha ke vo aankeh chamak rahi hai.

Chiman ki baat sunkar Kabir halka sa smile karta hai aur apne jagah se gayab ho jata hai aur sidha Chiman ke samne aa jata hai.
Yeh itna jaldi hua ke Chiman toh kya kisi ko bhi yeh nahi samjh aaya ke Kabir apne jagah se move kab hua aur Chiman ke samne kab aaya.

Yah Kabir ko apne paas dekh kar Chiman thoda shock ho gaya wahi kabir ne apne right elbow se Chiman par attack kiya jise dekh kar has gaya.

Chiman-Yeh toh bachho wala punch hai.
Yeh kehte hue vo side mein ho gaya.

Wahi ab sabhi Kabir ko dekh rahe the ke vo aage kya karta hai.

Yaha Chiman side hua wahi kabir ne apne haat ko khol diya aur ek ulta punch sida uske pet mein maar diya.

Yeh right on point laga tha jiske chalte iska force kafi strong tha. Yaha tak ke Chiman ke paacho internal organs tak hil gaye the.
Chiman ki toh aankhe tak bahar si aa gayi thi.

Kabir-Tumhare basics kafi weak hai.

Yaha Chiman ab zamin par baith gaya tha aur omit kar raha tha. Wahi yeh dekh kar ab sabhi kafi shock mein the.

Jeet-Interesting, kabir ne bas ek hi attack mein Chiman jaise ko zamin par la diya.Chiman toh 3-Star bronze rank hai. Uski sirf physique hi 1-star bronze rank jitni Powerful hai.

Wahi yaha Chiman abhi tak kabir ke samne apne ghutno par jhuk kar omit kar raha tha. Uska luck kafi achha tha kyo ki agar Kabir Dragon and Elephant pranja palm ka ek bhi moment use karta toh yaha Chiman ki jaan bhi jaa sakti thi. Waha khada koi nahi janta tha ke kabir kitna powerful hai.

Chiman ko apne samne aise omit karte dekh Kabir sochta hai.

Kabir-Yeh kafi weak hai. Phir toh yeh obviously elixir lete hue bada hua hai. Jiske chalte iski foundation hi bekar hai.

Wahi yaha baki sabhi bhi kuch na kuch baate kar rahe the.

Yaha apne ghutno par baithe hue Chiman sochne lagta hai

Chiman-Yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Isne mujhe hara diya vo bhi tab jab mere paas bohot se plans ready the.

Yahi sochte hue vo thoda khade hone hone ki koshish kar raha tha jisse kabir dekh leta hai aur usse kehta hai.

Kabir-Oye. Tumne kaha tha ke tum mujhe 3 baar strike karne doge yeh pehla wala tha toh aur 2 strike bache hai.

Uski yeh baat sunkar hi Chiman ki halat kharab ho jaati hai.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar waha kadhe sabhi apne muu par haath rakh kar has rahe the. Chiman apne upar sabhi ko haste hue dekh leta hai jisse uska gussa badh jata hai aur vo kabir par sidha attack karta hai. Par kabir iske liye ready tha.

Chiman Kabir ke paas aa kar apne right leg ko uske sir ke taraf ghumata hai. Par kabir jaha tha wahi khada raha. Usne bas apne sir ki halka sa piche ki taraf kar diya tha.

Uske aisa karne se Chiman ka leg uske samne se gaya par usse kuch kar nahi paya.

Kabir apne man mein.

Kabir-No doubt yeh ek badi family se hai tabhi isne kafi young age mein hi martial arts sikh liya hai. Par phir bhi……

Jaise hi yaha Chiman ka leg uske samne se nikal jata hai waise hi kabir bhi ghum kar usse apne right leg se ek kick mar deta hai jo sidha uske face ko lag jaati hai.

Kabir ki Kick lagte hi Chiman piche ki taraf us jata hai.

Sabhi ko yeh ek aur shock tha ke kabir ne Chiman ko bas 3 strike mein hi hara diya.
Chiman piche ki taraf ud kar kuch dur gir gaya tha usee dekhte hue Kabir usse kehta hai.

Kabir-Toh Chiman tum apni kahi hui baat se piche nahi hatoge. Right.

Jeet bhi yeh sab dekh raha tha aur vo apne gurad jisne usse bachaya tha usse kehta hai.

Jeet-Shayad mein bhi kabir ko handle nahi kar sakta hu. Dekho toh yeh bas 18 years ka hai.

Uske silver rank pohochne tak aur vo jab kisi demon beast spirit se integrate karega tab dekhna vo pehle se bhi jyada stronger ho jayega shayad tumse bhi stronger.

Guard-Par Chiman ne kaha tha ke uske paas sirf Red soul sea hai. Kya vo silver rank tak pohoch bhi payega.

Jeet-Mujhe yeh hamesha lag raha hai ke Kabir ko samjhna kafi mushkil hai.

Yaha sabhi ke bich Hina bhi kafi shock thi vo sochti hai.

Hina-Lagta hai mein ne tumhe underestimate kiya hai.

Wahi Rati soch rahi thi.

Rati-The Nine Revolving Ice Phoenix Technique kabir ne mujhe aise hi de di thi.jo pehle se hi kafi strong hai. Matlab vo isse bhi kafi strong technique ki practice kar raha hoga.

Yaha Chiman khada ho jata hai uska gussa ab kafi had tak badh gaya tha vo sochta hai.

Chiman-Mein 3-star bronze rank hu. Mein aise kaise is bachhe se haar sakta hu. Yeh kafi insulting hai.

Ha iski soul power abhi tak 1-star bronze rank tak nahi pohochi hai. Mein apni soul power ka use kar ke uske soul realm ko destroy kar sakta hu.

Chiman aise hi sochte hue apne soul force ko release kar deta hai vo bhi kafi strong.
Yeh dekh kar Hina kuch samjh jaati hai aur vo zor se kehti hai.

Hina-Ruko Chiman tum aisa nahi kar sakte.

Par tab tak Chiman ne aone pure soul force ko release kar diya tha aur usne kabir ke soul sea ko target bhi kar liya tha.

Kabir yeh sab dekh leta hai par vo apne jagah se hilta bhi nahi.

Yaha Chiman ne apne soul force ko uske soul realm mein transfer kar diya tha. Ab vo Kabir ke consciousness mein tha. Par yaha ke baat usse ajeeb lagi ke yaha red soul sea thavhi nahi balki har jaga ek white energy yh jo kafi strong thi. Par yeh dekh kar bhi Chiman ne uspar attack kar diya tha.

Abhi usne attack kiya hi tha ke uske soul realm ko ek jhatka lag jata hai. Vo jitni bhi soul force ko use kar taha tha vo sab kuch vo white energy absorb kar rahi thi.

Yeh dekh kar China shock ho jata hai. Vo aone soul force ko phir se aone paas bulana chahta tha par ab vo aisa nahi kar paa raha tha.

Chiman-Yeh hai kya aakhir. Aise soul realm ke baremein mein ne kabhi nahi suna hai. Saath hi yeh meri energy ko absorb kar raha hai agar aisa hi raha toh meri puri energy yeh absorb kar lega. Mujhe jaldi se aone soul force ko wapas lana padega.

Par ab bohot der ho gayi thi. Kabir ke us energy ne uski almost saari soul force ko absorb kar liya tha aur ab vo apne aap ko close kar rahi thi.

Abhi vo close ho ho rahi thi bke Chiman ko kuch bohot hi powerful sensation feel hota hai. Usse us white energy mein ek humma shape dikh raha tha par vo kafi halka tha.
Lekin uski aankhe usse kafi bright dikh rahi thi. Tabhi un aankho mein se ek shock wave nikal jaati hai aur vo shock wave Chiman ke soul force ko piche uda deta hai.
Apne hi soul force se hit hone ke baad Chiman ko kafi pain feel ho raha tha yaha tak ke usne muu se blood bhi nikal raha tha.

Vo sochta hai.

Chiman-Yeh kaise possible hai aur vo kounsi energy thi jisne mujhe piche uda diya tha. Wahi us energy ne apne soul realm tak ko close kar diya hai. Yeh sirf jab koi silver rank par pohochta hai tabhi kar sakta hai.

Yeh abhi tak demon spiritist bhi nahi hua hai aur yeh apne soul realm ko close kar sakta hai.

Chiman ke muu se kafi blood nikal raha tha uske internal organs tak injured ho gaye the.

Wahi yaha kabir ne jo apni aankhe band ki hui thi unhe khol deta hai. Jaise hi vo apne aankhe khol kar Chiman ko dekhta hai uske aankho mein se ek invisible energy nikal kar sidha Chiman ke soul force ko hit kar deti hai jisse Chiman ne jo energy ko dekha tha vo uske baremein bhul jata hai.

Yah sabhi ab itne shock ho gaye the ke apni jagah se hil bhi nahi rahe the.

'Chiman haar gaya.’

‘Mein ne kaha tha na kabir ke paas koi na koi tarika hoga Chiman se nipatne ka.’

Sabhi aisi hi baate karne lag gaye the. Wahi Aarav sochne laga tha.

Aarav-Toh yeh hai kabir ki strength. Waise bhi usse uske level ke hi nahi balki uske higher level ke log bhi nahi hara paa rahe hai.

Tabhi Aarav ki nazar Rati oar jaati hai jo usse thodi duri par khadi thi.


Rati-Kabir Jeet gaya. Yeh sach mein kafi powerful bhi hai.
Tow chiman ki band baj gayi air panga lo yahi sabhi ka jo kabir se panga lega
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Fantastic update bhai
Congratulations bhai for completing 100 page
Congratulations for 100 pages
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Nice update bro and Congratulations for 100 Page's:congrats:
Congrats for complete 100 pages
Awesome update
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double 100 k liye bahut bahut badhayi
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maine bhi yaha par apne comment me ? likes Cross kar liye hain
Nice update
Congratulations for 100 pages and 100k views

Waiting for next update
Badhai ho 100 page pure hone ki
Bahot shaandaar update dost
Tow chiman ki band baj gayi air panga lo yahi sabhi ka jo kabir se panga lega
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Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Behtareen update,
Agar chiman aur aarav jaise chutiyon se nahi nipat paya to fir us experience ka koi matlab nahi hota.
Aakhir kabeer ka actual level kya hai?
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UPDATE 24

Jab Kabir ne Chiman se soul force absorb kiya tha uske wajah se ek aura uske aaspas ban gaya tha. Kabir us aura ko apne andar lene lag jata hai. Uske aisa karne se uska soul force phir se badh jata hai aur kuch der baad stable ho jata hai.

Kabir apne man main.

Kabir-Aisa lag raha hai ke mein 1-star bronz tank par pohoch gaya hu.

Mein ne jis tarah Chiman ki soul force khichi hai usse mein 2-star bronze rank par bhi jaa sakta hu agar mujhe usse achhe se regulate karne ka waqt mil jaaye.

Sabhi kabir ko dekh rahe the.

Jeet-Kabir ne Chiman ke soul power ko samne se liya aur usse injured bhi kar diya. Kya iske paas sach mein red soul sea realm hai.

Yaha Chiman ko vo invisible ray kagne ke baad uska sir thoda bhari ho gaya tha par vo sirf Kabir ke soul mein usse jo kuch dikha tha vo hi bhul gaya tha.

Chiman slowly apne pairo par khada hota hai.

Chiman-Kabir aaj jo hua hai vo aise hi nahi khatam hoga.

Yeh keh kar vo palat jata hai aur waha se nikal ne lag jata hai. Tabhi piche se Kabir usse kehta hai

Kabir-Thik hai mein tumse kabhi bhi fight kar sakta hu. Waise mujhe ek baat yaad aayi hai. Kya tum vo dog bankar round nahi lagane wale.

Yeh baat sunkar Chiman zor se kehta hai.

Chiman-Itna uchalne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Us baat ke liy koi nahi mana tha.

Yeh keh kar vo waha se nikal jata hai wahi kabir sochta hai.

Kabir-Iski soul power damaged ho gayi hai, yeh agle kuch waqt tak toh mere piche nahi aayega.

Sabhi phir se aage badhne lag jaate hai. Kuch der aise hi chalne ke baad Kabir ko koi piche se aawaz deta hai.

Yeh Hina thi.

Hina-Kabir tumne mujhe kafi surprise kar diya. Mein ne dekha ke tum camp bhi sabhi se alag ek kone mein lagate ho. Kyo na aaj tum mere saath camp lagao. Ham saath mein sabhi topics par discussion karenge.

Yeh kehte hue Hina kabir ke kafi paas aa gayi thi jisse Rati ne dekh liya.

Rati apne man mein.

Rati-Yeh Hina kabir ke paas aana chahti hai vo bhi aise. Agar aisa hi raha thi Kabir bhi uske jaal mein phas jayega.

Hump, par yeh sab mein kyo soch rahi hu. Yeh meri problem nahi hai.

Yeh sochte hue Rati thodi aage chale jaati hai. Kabir ke paas Hina ko aise dekh kar uske dil mein ek halchal si ho gayi thi.

Wahi yaha kabir Hina ko samjhata hai.

Kabir-Miss Hina aap ke intention ko mein appreciate karta hu par aap already silver rank q par hai toh shayad hi ham kisi topic par disscuss kar payenge.

Yaha Rati halka sa piche dekhti hai ke Kabir aur Hina kya kar rahe hai.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Hina ka mood thoda off ho jata hai vo soch rahi thi.

Hina-Yeh ladka start se hi mujhe ignore kar raha hai.

Aisa sochte hi vo apne power ko release karti hai. Uski aankhe ab thodi change ho gayi thi.

Hina phir se Kabir ko aawaz deti hai.

Hina-Kabir…..

Uske yeh kehte hi ek halki si sweet smell Kabir ko aane lag jaati hai. Yeh Hina ki demon spirit thi jisse vo integrated hui thi.
Wahi yaha kabir jaise hi us smell ko sunghta hai waise hi vo ruk jata hai. Kabir ko ruka hua dekh kar Hina sochti hai.

Hina-yeh ladka ab mere charm se nahi bach sakta hai. Ab yeh meri har baat manega. Bohot decent behave kar raha tha ab tak Rati ke samne.

Tabhi Kabir kehta hai.

Kabir-Snow Sakura Demon Spirit. Mujhe nahi pata tha ke miss Hina ke paas itna rare demon spirit hoga.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Hina shock ho gayi thi. Usne apni aankhe band kar di kyo ki uski yeh technique uske aankho se hoti thi. Vo sochne lag jaati hai.

Hina-Yeh kya yeh is par kaam nahi kar raha hai. Aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai.

Wahi isne mere demon spirit ko ek look mein pehchan liya. The Snow Sakura Demon Spirit ek Botanic (Tree type) demon spirit hai jo St. Ancestral mountains ke bich paaya jata hai. Iske baas kafi strong charming abilities hoti hai. Normal log iske baremein jante tak nahi hai. Uske saath integrate ho kar same level ke demon spiritist ko charm kiya jaa sakta hai phir toh kabir abhi tak bronze rank tak bhi nahi pohocha hai.

Kahi iska dil itna pure toh nahi hai ke iske dil mein aise koi khayal hi naa ho. Iski willpower toh kisi silver rank de bhi powerful hai.

Wahi yaha kabir phir se Rati ke paas aa jata hai.

Rati-Kabir tumne Hina ko reject kyo kiya ?

Kya vo khubsurat nahi hai.

Is baat par kabir ek smile kar deta hai.

Kabir-Khubsurat toh vo hai par tumse nahi hai.

Kabir ki yeh baat sunkar Rati sharma jaati hai aur dusri taraf dekhne lag jaati hai.

Rati-Shayad nahi vo mujhse jyada khubsurat hai. Mera uske saath koi comparison nahi ho sakta. Uske kafi chahne wale bhi hai.

Par kabir phir bhi smile kiye jaa raha tha. Usse aise dekh kar Rati shochti hai.

Rati-Kabir kabhi bhi serious nahi hota hai.
Yaha kabir ko Rativke saath aise dekh kar Hina sochti hai.

Hina-Mujhe toh believe hi nahi ho raha hai. Mere charm ka kabir par koi asar hi nahi ho raha hai.

Tabhi vo sabhi ke samne zor se kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir ek din tum mere liye khud chal kar aaoge. Mein ne decided kar liya hai. Kabir ko mein apna bana kar hi rahungi. Jo bhi uske paas aana chahega usse mera samna karna padega.

Yeh baat sunkar toh ab kabir tak shock ho gaya tha. Wahi kabir ko aise situation mein dekh kar Rati ko hasi aa rahi thi.

Sabhi aage chal rahe the wahi in sab mein abhi jo hua uske baremein baate bhi ho rahi thi.

Wahi Hina kabir ko kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir yeh almond ka cake hai tumhare liye.

Kya tum thak gaye ho? Mein tumhare liye kuch laau.

Hina ke haath mein ek soft cushion tha. Jo vo Kabir ko dena chah rahi thi.

Kabir-Miss Hina please aap mujhe tang mat kijiye.

Uski yeh baat sunkar Hina waha se chali jaati hai.

Kabir-Finally chali gayi.

Yeh keh kar vo ek gehri saans chodta hai.
Aise hi sabhi chal rahe the. Kuch dur jaane ke baad Hina phir se kabir ke paas aati hai.

Hina-Kabir kya tumhe pyass lagi hai mein tumhe paani du.

Kabir-Miss Hina aapki problem kya hai ?
Uske is baat par Hina smile karte hue kehti hai.

Hina-Kabir shayad mein tumhe like karne lagi hu. Haan janti hu ke tum mujhe nahi like karte ho par vo thik hai. Waise bhi koun nahi chahega ke mujh jaisi ladki kisi ko like kare.

Mujhe lagta hai tum abhi meri khubsurti ko dekh nahi paa rahe ho par koi baat nahi future mein tumhe zaroor pata chal jayega ke mein kitni khubsurat hu tab tum khud chal kar mere paas aaoge.

Kabir uski baat sunkar ek smile karta hai aur aage chalne lagta hai.

Sabhi chal rahe the par ab is team mein jitni bhi ladkiya thi vo sabhi kabir aur Hina ke baremein baate kar rahe the jisse kabir thoda irritate ho gaya tha.

Jab vo Rati ke saath phir se chalne laga tab Rati ne usse pucha.

Rati-Kya hua Kabir tum aur Hina saath mein kyo nahi ho.

Kabir-Rati tum toh janti ho ke Hina aur mere bich kuch bhi nahi hai. Mein toh usse abhi abhi mila hu.

Rati-Toh usse mere kya lena-dena hai.

Kabir ruk jata hai aur Rati ko aage jaate hue dekhta hai.

Kabir apne man main.

Kabir-Rati abhi tak apne mind mein hi practice kar rahi hai. Waise ab phir se uske saath hu matlab hame abhi bhi ek lamba safar tay karna hai.

Sirf Rati ke liye nahi balki puri Osian City ke liye. Ab mujhe jitne y chances milenge mein sabhi use karunga. Jo meri power badhayega par ab jo mere soul force hai vo change ho gaya hai aur itna powerful hai ke HEAVENLY GOD TACTICS bhi uske samne kafi weak ho rahi hai aisa lag raha hai.

Aise hi kuch sochte hue vo phir se chalne lagta hai. Bich bich me Hina aa kar usse pareshan kar rahi thi par usse Kabir ignore kar raha tha. Ek aur din ka safar tay kar ke sabhi Orichid city ke bahar pohoch jaate hai.Abhi just subah ho rahi thi.

Har taraf se mountains aur jungle se ghiri yeh city kafi ancient aur khubsurat dikh rahi thi. Sabhi kafi excited ho gaye the Orichid city ko dekh kar.

Kuch der baad sabhi Orichid city ke gate ke bahar khade the. Sabhi ko uske andar ka nazara dikh raha tha. City andar se puri tarah destroy ho gayi thi. Sabhi walls toot gayi thi. Unpar veins ugg gaye the.

Jeet apne man main.

Jeet-Toh yeh city DARK AGES ke pehle ki hai.

Wahi kabir apne man mein.

Kabir-Same aisi hi halat baad mein Osian city ki hui thi.

Tabhi waha Jeet ki aawaz aati hai.

Jeet-Toh ham ab Orichid city aa gaye hai.

Yeh keh kar usne aone storage ring se is city ka map nikala aur nicha baith kar usse pura khol diya.

Jeet-Yeh hai Orichid city ka map ab hame yeh decide karna hai ke ham iske andar safely kaise enter kar sakte hai. Yeh city kafi ancient hai toh ab yaha par kisi strong demon beast ka hona na ke barabar hai. Ham isse explore kar sakte hai.

Tabhi ek ladka niche baithta hai aur map ko dekh kar kehta hai.

‘Yeh dekho ham main city mein paas ke West gate se enter kar sakte hai. Ham sabhi ko kuch na kuch main city mein hi mil sakta hai. Hame pehle sabhi commoner areas ko explore karna chahiye.’

Us ladke ki baat par sabhi raazi ho gaye the. Unhe bhi yeh sahi lag raha tha. Yaha kabir bhi baith kar uss map ko dekh raha tha.

Jeet-Tum kya kehte ho kabir ?

Kabir-Nahi yeh sahi nahi hai. Chalo maan bhi liya ke hame commoner area explore kar ke kuch mila bhi par yaha ki sab wealth sabhi badi families mein hogi.

Uske is baat par ab sabhi isse notice karne lag gaye.

Tabhi bich mein Aarav kehta hai.

Aarav-Yeh City kafi badi hai jismei bohot se commoner areas hai. Toh hame kaise pata chale ga ke wealthy family kaha rehti thi.
Jeet ek baar Aarav ko dekhta hai aur Kabir ko aage kehne ke liye kehta hai.

Jeet-Tum aage batate raho.

Kabir-Agar hame is cityvke wealthy families ko dhundna hai toh yeh sabse aasan hai map par jaha bhi tumhe building jyada round shape mein nazar aaye wahi wealthy family ka spot hai. Saath hi unka courtyard kafi bada hota hai.

Tabhi Hina aa kar us map ko dekhte hue kehti hai.

Hina-Yeh dekho yaha….

Jeet-Correct yeh yahi hona chahiye. Is building ka area kafi bada hai. Par yeh area….

Kabir-Ek team ne pehle hi is area ko ache se search kar liya hai. Unhe waise kuch khas nahi mila tha bar usse jyada unhe phir kuch nahi mil paya. Unhe koi basement ya secret room tak nahi mila hai.

Aarav-Mein ne toh pehle hi kaha tha ke yeh city kafi badi hai wahi Orichid city ke badi families ne pehle hi yaha par search kar ke dekh liya hai.

Kabir Aarav ko ek look deta hai.

Kabir-Kya tum chup nahi reh sakte jab mein kuch baat kar raha hota hu. Agr itana hi kuch kehna hai toh yaha aao aur yeh sab sambhalo.

Aarav-Tum..

Jeet-Shut up.

Jeet ki baat sunkar Aarav dursri taraf dekhne kag jata hai.

Kabir-Well yeh normal baat hai ke yeh place pehle hi search kiya jaa chuka hai kyo ki yeh city ke sabse middle area hai wahi city ki strongest defence hai.

Wahi yeh place dekh kar lag raha hai ke yeh city lord ka palace hai.

Kabir ki baat sunkar Jeet sochne lag jata hai.

Jeet-Kabir ka deduction ab tak kafi sahi raha hai.yeh city lord ka palace hi hai. Par yaha jo team pehle aayi thi unhone city lord ke palace ko search kiya tha aur saath hi unhone basement ko bhi search kiya tha jismein unhe kuch bhi nahi mila.

Kabir-Of course yeh place pehle hi search ki ja chuki hogi par yaha dekho. Yaha City Lord Mansion ke paas 3 jagah hai jo khali hai. Kya young master Jeet ko iske baremein kuch pata hai.

Jeet-Yeh area city lord ke military training ka ground hai. Wahi uske side mein hai ek stone fortress jo kisi black marble se bana hai. Hamare koi bhi weapon usse damage tak nahi kar paa rahe hai. Uske side mein yeh jo open area bana hai uske baremein mujhe bhi nahi pata hai ke yeh aisa kyo banaya gaya hai.
 
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