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Ok bhai waitingUpdate 10-10:30 tak aayega.
Peace.
Update 10-10:30 tak aayega.
Peace.
Waiting bhaiUpdate 10-10:30 tak aayega.
Peace.
Superb update bhai....
Wonderfull update
Awesome fabulous update
Nice update bhai
Awesome update
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Super bro
Bahut hi gjb ki fight rhi aaj ....agr kabir beech fight me breakthrough nhi krta to uska yan ning aur square commandery prince ke sath poisonous bee se bchna bahut hi jyada mushkil ho jata...par breakthrough ke sath usne yan ning ke shocked moment ka fayda uthaya aur usko maar bhi diya.. Uske baad zina ko bhi usne almost bcha hi liya h...aur ab jb zina ko pta chl hi gya h ki kabir uski sachai jaankr bhi use bachana chahta h..to maybe she will be change..aur aisa bhi ho skta h ki kabir ko pyaar bhi krne lg jaaye...wo sab to aage pta chl hi jaayega. Ab iske baad last day bcha h is test ka uske baad second round hoga jo bhi select honge unka..
Wahi unconscious way me kabir saint sumi se bhi mulaqat kr chuka h wo bhi us jagha jaha khud supreme god rhte h....pr us waqt wo aage nhi bdh paya bss usko wo jhalak dikhai di. Aur saint sumi ke mutabik waqt aane pr kabir ko waha pr aana h..to dekhte h wo waqt kb aayega tb tk ke liye intzaar h next update ka.
behatrin update bro
to 1st chellange ki fight lagbhag khtm ho gyi h
wese kafi terrible fight thi
kabir or zina ke mrne ke chances kafi jyad the
luckily or kabir , zina ke talent ki wjh se hi bach paye ye log
shayad ab zina bhi apna irada bdl de
or wo kabir ke group m samil ho jaye
dekhte h aage kya hota h
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai![]()
Jabardast update bhai
Kaafi Shandar Update raha
Maza aa gya .
Ab aisa he aik or Update Monday ko mil jay to maza Aa jay
Apna Boht Sara hyal rkhna bro
Take Care Gud Night ✌
Jabardast maha mega update bhai kya top class update tha padke to dil khuss ho gaya ab age dekhte hai kya kya dhamaal hota hai.
Fabulous Fabulous Fabulous update....
Awesome update bro
Awesome ,fabulous and marvelous update bhai waiting for next update eagerly.....
Nice update ☺
Zabardast killer update![]()
Super fantastic awesome update bro
Mast Update
Awesome update bhai...
Superb fantastic mind blowing
Update brother great going
Thanks for lovely and wonderful update
Fabulous update Bhai superb
Nice update
Wow bhai kabir sachi main kafi sakht londa nikala
Waiting for new update
Behtareen update,
Ab Kabeer kafi weak lag raha hai,
Tiny world to kafi jyada peechhe hai fighting techniques me.
super fantastic update bhai
Mast update h bhai
Maza aaa gya
Shaandaar update mitr
Mind blowing update bro
Excellent moves
Wonderful fight
Superb dialogues
Super duper update mitr
Super update hai Bhai
Maza aa geya bahi update ka.
Story abhi tak padhke kaisi lagi :--
Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye hai... ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...
Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
romance, magic, mystery, heavy action scenes ke sath sath thrill ki bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ... kuch pehlu abhi bhi shayad adhuri hai joh dhire dhire samne aayenge ... aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aaye.. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mil rahi hai... joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe hai kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....
yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro ke bina multiple ya pramukh kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye![]()
Oh haan...
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills Jay Sutar sahab![]()
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pith piche waar karne wala kabhi warrior nahi kehlata.. Square Commandery Prince ne jo kiya wo sachme sharamnak hai aur kayarata ka akhiri lakshan bhi..
ghamand aur ahankar.. ike chalte Square Commandery Prince aur Yan Ning ko ye baat katayi hajam nahi ho rahi hai ki unke waar se kaise bach sakta hai kabir..
wohi lalchi commandery prince ko kabir ke us powerful treasure, us Armour chahiye.. dusro ke shaktiyon ko chin ke khud ko shaktishali banana, yeh bhi kayarata ki hi lakshan hai..
woow to Zina ne 7 warriors ko maar hi diya finally..
akhiri waqt tak yan ning ko vishvas nah hua ki kabir kaise uspar kiye gaye itni shaktisali waaro se na keval bach gaya balki survive bhi kar gaya.. even patat waar bhi kiya wo itne shaktisali skills ke sath..
Khair.. yan ning ne yudh kiya ahankar ke sath aur kabir ne aatmvishvas aur sujh bujh aur sathik mauke pe sahi fighting skills ke sath.. isliye jeet kabir ki huyi aur yan ning.. wo mara gaya apni hi ghamand ke chalte..
Bahot se pehlu hai is kahani mein.. un mein kayi aham pehlu bhi.. jaise ki yeh jagah.. jaha kabir abhi hai.. aur jahan kabir aisa nahi kar sakta hai .wo us jagah par tabhi pohoch sakta hai jab uska waqt wahan phir se jane ka hoga. Tabhi woh river ushe aage jaane ke liye permission degi...
Haan.. chaahe lakh dusmani sahi.. lekin dusman ladki jo tahri ab kaise bura soche uske liye
ab is mamle wo tehra dildaar type ka
upor se Zina yeh sab us poison ki wajah se kar rahi hai. to uski help karna jayaz samjha kabir ne..
ek to khud pith piche waar karta hai aur upor kahta hai ki kabir luckily bach gaya.. jis din usse samne se yudh hoga tab pata chal jayega indono ko ki koun luckily bhag nikalta hai
ek pal ke liye dar hi gayi thi kahi zina mar to nahi jayegi
lekin kabir ki kripa se ushe kuch nahi hua aur rahi sahi us poison ko khatam kiya us detoxification ki pill ne...
chalo koi na ant bhala to sab bhala kam se kam ek tarah se dosti ki to suruwat huyi
waise kaafi advanced technologies aur science ke sath sath alag hi tarah ke fighting skills aur pauranik mysterious samar kalao ka gajab ka taalmel dekhne ko mili hai har ek update mein..
Writer sahab ne Har pehlu, har ek mod aur har ek point kaafi ache se explanation deke ek vistar roop mein hum readers ke samaks pesh kiye hai kahani ko... jiske chalte kahani aur bhi dilchasp aur manoranjanmay hoti jaa rahi ha..
Khair... let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Jay Sutar ji..![]()
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Nice update bhai waiting for next update
Awesome update bhai keep posting
Wow super duper update
Bahut hi Sundar aur bada update tha
zina ab kabir ka sath degi agar aisa hua to yeh kafi accha hoga kabir ki next journey ke liye
Awesome update bhai jabarjast superb amazing
Is update me kafi new knowledge mili hai dekhte hai Kabir VIP card lene wapas jata hai Ya nhi...
Waiting for next update
AMAZING update bro
Extraordinary update
Super DUPER update
EXCELLENT update
Very nice update
Nice update
Thanks GuysSuper Duper Hit & Marvelous & Fantastic & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro
Wah y fight sach kamaal ki thi bot ache dikhaya h yaha sach powerful fighter h jo kabir ko itne ache se takkr de rha tha
Abi ek bacha h us prince ko b khatam kr dena tha usse bot kuch milta kabir ko
Zina ko bacha hi liya killer k emotion bahr aa rhe h jo hr killer chhupa kr rakhta h jese usme ho hi nhi
Waiting