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Note- Update 177 hi 178 hain
 
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Brother waiting bolne se Kuch Nahi hoga
jai Bhai ne pahle hi update Ka routine de Diya hai

Otherwise next update aaj 8 to 10:30 pm ke bich aayega

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Bhai ji ye hame bhi pata hai but ye hamara payar hai bhai ji ki ham unka intejar kar rahe hai ye batane ka ki ham kitna payar karte hai unse agar aapko ya kisi ko hamara payar jatana galt laga ho to unse hamara vinaramta purwak maafi chahuga
 

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Bhai ji ye hame bhi pata hai but ye hamara payar hai bhai ji ki ham unka intejar kar rahe hai ye batane ka ki ham kitna payar karte hai unse agar aapko ya kisi ko hamara payar jatana galt laga ho to unse hamara vinaramta purwak maafi chahuga
Apne is post ke bad Maine ek aur post kiya tha shayad aapane dhyan Se Dekha Nahin
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Waiting to ek bahana hai readers ko jay bhai Tak apni baat pahunchana hai

Otherwise
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Hame Pata hai ki update kitne baje aata hai lekin
Dil hai ki manta nahi)
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My sorry
 
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Apne is post ke bad Maine ek aur post kiya tha shayad aapane dhyan Se Dekha Nahin
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Waiting to ek bahana hai readers ko jay bhai Tak apni baat pahunchana hai

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Hame Pata hai ki update kitne baje aata hai lekin
Dil hai ki manta nahi)
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UPDATE 53

Abhi Rati apni soch mein hi thi ke usse kuch realise hota hai aur vo zor se chikhti hai.

Rati-Kabir abhi ke abhi ghum jao.

Rati ko bohot hi jyada sharam aa rahi thi. Jiske wajah se usne apne ek pair ko zamin par patka.

Kabir-Kya hua ab mein ne toh kuch bhi nahi kiya tumhe.

Yeh keh kar kabir aur bhi smile karne lag gaya tha. Usse pata tha ke Rati usse kyo ghumne ke liye keh rahi hai.

Rati-Kabir tum aise kaise ho sakte ho mein.......

Yeh kehte waqt vo apne storage ring mein se ek dress nikalti hai aur usse apne aap ko cover up karti hai. Uska dil kaafi zoro se dhadak raha tha. Uske life mein aaj tak usse kisi bhi ladke ne aise nahi dekha tha.

Kabir phir ghumne lagta hai aur ghumte hue kehta hai.

Kabir-Tumhe mein ne aise pehli baar nahi dekha hai.

Puri tarah ghumne ke baad kabir Rati se kehta hai.

Kabir-Thik hai thik hai pehen lo apna dress. Mein kuch nahi dekhunga.

Apne dress ko change karne lag jaati hai Rati jaise hi kabir palat jata hai aur usse aise hi dress change karte hue kehti hai.

Rati-Tum abhi apne sir ko bhi nahi ghumaoge nahi toh........nahi toh mein tumse kabhi baat nahi karungi.

Rati kitna bhi chahe vo kabir ko kuch keh hi nahi paati thi. Issi liye usne abhi yeh kaha.

Kabir waise hi khada raha. Usne zara bhi apne sir ko nahi ghumaya tha. Usse Rati ko irritate nahi karna tha. Lekin aaj ki mulakat vo hamesha yaad rakhega. Tabhi usse Rati ki aawaz aati hai.

Rati-Thik hai ab tum ghum sakte ho.

Rati ki baat sunkar kabir palat jata hai. Jab vo palat kar dekhta hai tab usse Rati aur bhi khubsurat dikhne lag jaati hai. Rati ne abhi ek white dress pehna hua tha. Wahi uske vo wet hairs uske us white dress ke look ke saath usse aur bhi khubsurat bana rahe the. Uski vo badi chamakdaar aankhe, unhe dekh kar aisa lag raha tha ke vo kuch kehna chahti ho. Uske dono gaalo par aane wale dimples aur uske gaal jo sharam se laa ho gaye the uski khubsurti ko aur bhi upar utha rahe the. Kabir toh bas usse dekhta hi reh gaya.

Rati-Kabir aaj ki yeh harkat mein yaad rakhungi aur iske liye mein tumhe zaroor punishment bhi dilvaungi.

Rati ne yeh baat kabir se halke gusse mein kahi thi. Lekin uske gusse mein bhi Kabir ko khubsurti hi dikh rahi thi. Vo toh bas Rati ko dekhta hi jaa raha tha. Kabir ko apne taraf aise dekhte dekh kar Rati ke dil mein bhi ek halchal si hui. Uske liye yeh feeling kaafi ajeeb thi.

Tabhi kabir kehta hai.

Kabir-Waise tum bhul rahi ho ke mein tume ek favour owe karta hu. Ab jab mein ne tumhe dekh hi liya hai toh ham ab even hue.

Kabir yeh baat smile karte hue keh ta hai.

Rati-Nahi. Yeh dono hi matters different hai. Mein tumhe abhi bhi ek favour owe karti hu. Par yeh matter itne easily settle nahi hoga.

Rati ne yeh baat dissatisfaction mein kahi thi. Usse lag raha tha ke usne sab kho diya hai jab Kabir ne usse aise dekha.

Yeh sunkar kabir Rati ko aur satana chahta tha islie vo kehta hai.

Kabir-Agar aisi baat hai toh mein bhi tumhe apni body dekhne deta hu.
Yeh keh kar kabir apne upar ke robe ko nikalne lagta hai.

Rati-Tumhe dekhna koun chahta hai aise?

Yeh keh kar Rati ne apne face ko apne haathon se cover kar liya. Vo toh ek dam speechless ho gayi thi. Rati bas yahi soche jaa rahi thi ke koi aise kaise ho sakta hai. Par pata nahi kyo ek ajeeb si feeling ne uske dil mein apna ghar bana liya tha jab se vo kabir se baat karne lagi thi. As the daughter of the City Lord, uska normally koi bhi friend nahi tha. Upar se phir aise satane wale friend ki toh baat hi nahi thi jo kisi baat ko soche bina usse satata ho. Par kabir ke uske life mein aane se uske us berang si life mein rang aa gaye the.

Abhi kabir kuch kehne hi wala tha ke vo kisi ko unki taraf aate hue sense karta hai. Jaldi hi kisi ke chalne ki aawaz unki taraf aane lagti hai.

Jab Rati yeh aawaz sunti hai toh uske face se sabhi rang hi I'd jaate hai. Usse pata tha yeh zaroor uske father hi honge jo usse is waqt hamesha milne aate the.
Kabir abhi bhi wahi tha. Rati ko lag raha tha ke usse ab koi bacha nahi paayega uske father se.

Kabir aane wale person ko achhe se sense kar leta hai usse yeh pata chal jata hai ke yeh Rati ke father yaani City Lord aa rahe hai. Kabir janta tha ke Rati ke father kaafi strict person the.

Kabir ke past life mein uska aur Rati ke father ka koi bhi contact nahi hua tha. Par usse pata tha ke Rati ke father kaafi strick aur strange person the, jiske wajah se unhe handle karna kaafi mushkil hota tha. Kabir ne apne past life mein suna tha ek baar Rati se ke uske father ka behaviour kaisa hai. Jab se vo teenage mein aayi thi uska aur uske father ka relationship kuch khas achha nahi tha.

Yeh jaan kar bhi ke Rati ke father jo City Lord bhi the vo Rati ke courtyard ki taraf aa rahe hai kabir tabhi bhi kaafi calm tha. Usne apne robe ko ho half nikala hua tha usse pehen liya.

Yaha Rati ki halat kharab ho gayi thi usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ke vo apne father ko kaise explain karegi jab vo usse aur Kabir ko saath mein dekhenge. Kabir ke satane ke wajah se uske dimag se yeh baat nikal gayi thi.
Kabir ne kuch socha aur apne Shadow Devil Demon Spirit ke void form ko activate kar liya.

Uske aisa karte hi phir se usse pure body mein pain start ho gaya aur yeh pehle wale se bhi jyada ho gaya tha. Kabir ko yeh pain apne body ke har muscle mein aur uske blood ke har cell mein yeh pain feel ho raha tha.

Kabir apne us pain ko sehte hue waha se nikal raha tha. Par tab tak Rati ke father ne Rati ke courtyard mein enter kar liya tha. Kabir unhe aate hue dekh leta hai.

Rati ke father ki personality kaafi majestic thi. Unhone ek grey robe pehna hua tha aur apne hairs ko piche ki taraf tie kar diya tha. Uske face par kisi bhi tarah ke koi bhi expressions nahi the. Unke body se nikalne wala aura kaafi cold aur bitter tha par at the same time is aura ki waha se use unke aaspas kisi prestigious ke hone ki feeling rehti thi.

Rati apne father ke aane ki baat puri tarah se bhul hi gayi thi. Vo toh bhi dekhna bhul gayi je uske aaspas Kabir kahi bhi nahi tha. Jaldi hi Rati ke Father aa kar uske samne khade ho jaate hai.

C.L-Rati tumhare face ka rang kyo uda hua hai. Kya tum bimar ho?

Rati ke father ne usse dekh kar yeh baat kahi thi.

Unke is sawal par Rati darte hue kehte hai.

Rati-Na.....nahi toh.

Yeh keh kar vo apne sir ko naa mein hilane lag gayi. Uska dil kaafi zoro se dhadak raha tha usne apne aaspas dekha tab usse kabir kahi bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha lekin uske powers ko halke halke se sense kar paa rahi thi.

Wahi yaha jab se Kabir apne void form mein tha tab se uska pain hal pal badhta hi jaa raha tha. Usse yeh samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ke usse yeh pain hone ke reason kya hai. Kabir ne pain hone ki wajah se apni aankhe tak band kar li thi.
Jab usne apni aankhe band ki tab uske samne Buddhist Emperor's Emperiyan aa gayi aur uska 1st chapter khul gaya. Buddhist Emperor's Emperiyan ke aane ke wajah se kabir ke band aankho ke samne ek chamak fail gayi jisse vo usse dekhne lag gaya. Vo us pain mein bhi us book ke paas chala aaya. Jab usne book mei dekha tab us chapter ke last mein kuch phrases ban rahe the lekin vo kaafi light the. Unhe kabir read hi nahi kar paa raha tha.

Suddenly uska pain had se zyada bad gaya aur vo zor se chillane lag gaya.

Kabir ke aise chillane ke wajah se uske energy kaafi zyada release hone lag gayi jisse Rati ke father ne feel kar liya.

Jaldi hi kabir ka void form disappear ho gaya aur vo aise hi chillate hue Rati aur uske father ke samne aa gaya.

Kabir ko aise Rati ke courtyard mein dekh kar unhe gussa aa gaya. Unhone apne soul force se kabir ko piche ki taraf uda diya. Par kabir ko toh kuch samjh hi nahi raha tha uska pain har pal badh jo raha tha. Vo toh yeh bhi bhul gaya ke vo void form se bahar aa gaya hai.

Kabir udte hue jaa kar piche ke ek wall se jaa kar lag gaya. Apne senses mein naa hone ki wajah se vo injured ho gaya. Uske muh se halka sa blood bhi nikal raha tha.

Kabir ko aise injurd dekh kar Rati uski taraf bhagte hue jaane lag gayi. Vo jaldi se jaa kar kabir ke pass baith gayi. Kabir abhi bhi apne sir ko pakade hue tha. Rati kabir se puchti hai.

Rati-Kabir, kya tum thik ho?

Rati ke liye kabir kaafi special person ban gaya tha. Ek wahi tha jisne usse har bar kisi na kisi tarah se help ki thi. Apne father ki wajah se usse aise injured dekh kar usse apne father par gussa sa aane lag gaya tha. Wahi kabir abhi bhi kaafi pain mein tha.

Kabir ko itna pain mein dekh kar Rati apne father se puchti hai.

Rati-Father aap kaise kisi bhi reason ke bina mere friend ko hurt kar sakte hai?
Par Rati ke father koi bhi baat sunne ke mood mein nahi the unhe lag raha tha ke kabir jaanbhuj kar yaha aaya hai. Unhone phir se kabir ko apne soul force se waha se utha kar dusri taraf phek diya. Ek baar phir kabir dusri wall se jaa lag gaya aur phir se uske muu se blood nikalne lag gaya.

Kabir ko aise dekh kar Rati ke aankho mein aasu aa gaye the. Vo kabir ko aone father se bachane ke liye unke aur kabir ke bich mein aa gayi aur apne soul force ko release kar diya. Rati ke aise karne se uske upar Snow Queen banne lag gayi. Snow Wind pure aasman mein failne lag gayi thi aur uske wajah se ek halka sa Strom bhi form hone lag gaya tha. Rati ne apne aur uske father ke bich ek Snow Wall bana di thi.

Par Rati ke Father bhi Black-Gold Rank expert the unke liye yeh snow wall kuch bhi nahi thi. Unke soul force ke wajah se vo snow wall wahi destroy ho gayi.

C.L-Tum Snow Queen ke saath merge ho gayi ho aur apne hi father ke against usse use kar rahi ho. Lagta hai tumhe lesson sikhana padega.

Unhone apne soul force ko thoda sa release kar diya. Par Rati ke liye yeh bhi bohot tha jiske wajah se vo bhi piche ki taraf ud gayi aur jaa kar ek jagah gir gayi. Par usse bhi vo halki se injured ho gayi thi. Yeh sab kabir us hone wale pain mein bhi dekh liya tha.

Apne samne Rati ko aise dekh kar kabir ko kaafi gussa aa gaya tha. Uska gussa is kadar badh gaya ke vo usse hone wale pain tak ko bhul gaya aur suddenly kabir ne apni aankhe jo halki si khuli hui thi vo puri tarah se khol di.

Kabir ke apne aankhe kholne ke wajah se uski aankhe puri tarah se Red Energy se chamak rahi thi aur saath hi pure Osian City par ek baar phir se pressure ban gaya tha. Yeh pressure pichle wale se bhi bohot hi zyada tha. Is kadar tha ke us pressure ne naa sirf koi living things balki non living things par bhi apna effect dikha diya tha. City mein rehne wala har ek person uske under aa gaya tha. Jitne bhi buildings thi unpar cracks aane lag gaye the.

Rati ke father ko toh kuch samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ke yeh hai kya. Lekin jaldi hi unhe aisa jab pehle hue tha vo pal yaad aa jata hai. Unke pairo ke niche se zamin hi jaise khisak kayi thi. Wahi kabir ab slowly Rati ke father ki taraf badh eag gaya tha. Uske unki taraf badne se hi Rati ke father ke pair dis balance hone lag gaye the. Jab tak kabir untak pohochna vo uske samne ghutno par aa gaye the. Rati ke father apne pure soul force ko use kar rahe the ke vo is pressure se free ho paaye par vo aisa kar ho nahi paa rahe the. Pressure kaafi jyada tha. Abhi kabir apna right pair unpar rakhne hi wala tha ke uske kaano mein ek aawaz jaati hai.

Yeh aawaz Rati ki thi aur vo apne father ko aise dekh kar kaafi dar gayo thi. Jab uski nazar Kabir ki aankho par gayi tab usse tournament wala pal yaad aa gaya jab unse ek chote se pal ke liye kabir ki aankhe aise hi chamakte huye dekhi thi.
Usne kabir ko dekhte hue naa mein sir hilaya. Tabhi kabir apne hosh mei aata hai aur vo pressure pure Osian City par bana hua tha vo kahi gayab ho jaata hai.

Wahi yaha kabir zor se chillata hai aur niche gir jata hai. Kabir abhi behosh ho gaya tha. Kabir ko girte dekh kar Rati jaldi se uth jaati hai aur uski taraf aati hai par tab tak kabir puri tarah se behosh ho gaya tha. Wahi Rati ke father bhi apne aap ko sambhalte hai aur un dono ki tarah aate hai. Unhe abhi bhi yakin nahi ho raha tha ke unhe ek teenage ladke ne apne ghutno par laa diya.
 

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UPDATE 53

Abhi Rati apni soch mein hi thi ke usse kuch realise hota hai aur vo zor se chikhti hai.

Rati-Kabir abhi ke abhi ghum jao.

Rati ko bohot hi jyada sharam aa rahi thi. Jiske wajah se usne apne ek pair ko zamin par patka.

Kabir-Kya hua ab mein ne toh kuch bhi nahi kiya tumhe.

Yeh keh kar kabir aur bhi smile karne lag gaya tha. Usse pata tha ke Rati usse kyo ghumne ke liye keh rahi hai.

Rati-Kabir tum aise kaise ho sakte ho mein.......

Yeh kehte waqt vo apne storage ring mein se ek dress nikalti hai aur usse apne aap ko cover up karti hai. Uska dil kaafi zoro se dhadak raha tha. Uske life mein aaj tak usse kisi bhi ladke ne aise nahi dekha tha.

Kabir phir ghumne lagta hai aur ghumte hue kehta hai.

Kabir-Tumhe mein ne aise pehli baar nahi dekha hai.

Puri tarah ghumne ke baad kabir Rati se kehta hai.

Kabir-Thik hai thik hai pehen lo apna dress. Mein kuch nahi dekhunga.

Apne dress ko change karne lag jaati hai Rati jaise hi kabir palat jata hai aur usse aise hi dress change karte hue kehti hai.

Rati-Tum abhi apne sir ko bhi nahi ghumaoge nahi toh........nahi toh mein tumse kabhi baat nahi karungi.

Rati kitna bhi chahe vo kabir ko kuch keh hi nahi paati thi. Issi liye usne abhi yeh kaha.

Kabir waise hi khada raha. Usne zara bhi apne sir ko nahi ghumaya tha. Usse Rati ko irritate nahi karna tha. Lekin aaj ki mulakat vo hamesha yaad rakhega. Tabhi usse Rati ki aawaz aati hai.

Rati-Thik hai ab tum ghum sakte ho.

Rati ki baat sunkar kabir palat jata hai. Jab vo palat kar dekhta hai tab usse Rati aur bhi khubsurat dikhne lag jaati hai. Rati ne abhi ek white dress pehna hua tha. Wahi uske vo wet hairs uske us white dress ke look ke saath usse aur bhi khubsurat bana rahe the. Uski vo badi chamakdaar aankhe, unhe dekh kar aisa lag raha tha ke vo kuch kehna chahti ho. Uske dono gaalo par aane wale dimples aur uske gaal jo sharam se laa ho gaye the uski khubsurti ko aur bhi upar utha rahe the. Kabir toh bas usse dekhta hi reh gaya.

Rati-Kabir aaj ki yeh harkat mein yaad rakhungi aur iske liye mein tumhe zaroor punishment bhi dilvaungi.

Rati ne yeh baat kabir se halke gusse mein kahi thi. Lekin uske gusse mein bhi Kabir ko khubsurti hi dikh rahi thi. Vo toh bas Rati ko dekhta hi jaa raha tha. Kabir ko apne taraf aise dekhte dekh kar Rati ke dil mein bhi ek halchal si hui. Uske liye yeh feeling kaafi ajeeb thi.

Tabhi kabir kehta hai.

Kabir-Waise tum bhul rahi ho ke mein tume ek favour owe karta hu. Ab jab mein ne tumhe dekh hi liya hai toh ham ab even hue.

Kabir yeh baat smile karte hue keh ta hai.

Rati-Nahi. Yeh dono hi matters different hai. Mein tumhe abhi bhi ek favour owe karti hu. Par yeh matter itne easily settle nahi hoga.

Rati ne yeh baat dissatisfaction mein kahi thi. Usse lag raha tha ke usne sab kho diya hai jab Kabir ne usse aise dekha.

Yeh sunkar kabir Rati ko aur satana chahta tha islie vo kehta hai.

Kabir-Agar aisi baat hai toh mein bhi tumhe apni body dekhne deta hu.
Yeh keh kar kabir apne upar ke robe ko nikalne lagta hai.

Rati-Tumhe dekhna koun chahta hai aise?

Yeh keh kar Rati ne apne face ko apne haathon se cover kar liya. Vo toh ek dam speechless ho gayi thi. Rati bas yahi soche jaa rahi thi ke koi aise kaise ho sakta hai. Par pata nahi kyo ek ajeeb si feeling ne uske dil mein apna ghar bana liya tha jab se vo kabir se baat karne lagi thi. As the daughter of the City Lord, uska normally koi bhi friend nahi tha. Upar se phir aise satane wale friend ki toh baat hi nahi thi jo kisi baat ko soche bina usse satata ho. Par kabir ke uske life mein aane se uske us berang si life mein rang aa gaye the.

Abhi kabir kuch kehne hi wala tha ke vo kisi ko unki taraf aate hue sense karta hai. Jaldi hi kisi ke chalne ki aawaz unki taraf aane lagti hai.

Jab Rati yeh aawaz sunti hai toh uske face se sabhi rang hi I'd jaate hai. Usse pata tha yeh zaroor uske father hi honge jo usse is waqt hamesha milne aate the.
Kabir abhi bhi wahi tha. Rati ko lag raha tha ke usse ab koi bacha nahi paayega uske father se.

Kabir aane wale person ko achhe se sense kar leta hai usse yeh pata chal jata hai ke yeh Rati ke father yaani City Lord aa rahe hai. Kabir janta tha ke Rati ke father kaafi strict person the.

Kabir ke past life mein uska aur Rati ke father ka koi bhi contact nahi hua tha. Par usse pata tha ke Rati ke father kaafi strick aur strange person the, jiske wajah se unhe handle karna kaafi mushkil hota tha. Kabir ne apne past life mein suna tha ek baar Rati se ke uske father ka behaviour kaisa hai. Jab se vo teenage mein aayi thi uska aur uske father ka relationship kuch khas achha nahi tha.

Yeh jaan kar bhi ke Rati ke father jo City Lord bhi the vo Rati ke courtyard ki taraf aa rahe hai kabir tabhi bhi kaafi calm tha. Usne apne robe ko ho half nikala hua tha usse pehen liya.

Yaha Rati ki halat kharab ho gayi thi usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ke vo apne father ko kaise explain karegi jab vo usse aur Kabir ko saath mein dekhenge. Kabir ke satane ke wajah se uske dimag se yeh baat nikal gayi thi.
Kabir ne kuch socha aur apne Shadow Devil Demon Spirit ke void form ko activate kar liya.

Uske aisa karte hi phir se usse pure body mein pain start ho gaya aur yeh pehle wale se bhi jyada ho gaya tha. Kabir ko yeh pain apne body ke har muscle mein aur uske blood ke har cell mein yeh pain feel ho raha tha.

Kabir apne us pain ko sehte hue waha se nikal raha tha. Par tab tak Rati ke father ne Rati ke courtyard mein enter kar liya tha. Kabir unhe aate hue dekh leta hai.

Rati ke father ki personality kaafi majestic thi. Unhone ek grey robe pehna hua tha aur apne hairs ko piche ki taraf tie kar diya tha. Uske face par kisi bhi tarah ke koi bhi expressions nahi the. Unke body se nikalne wala aura kaafi cold aur bitter tha par at the same time is aura ki waha se use unke aaspas kisi prestigious ke hone ki feeling rehti thi.

Rati apne father ke aane ki baat puri tarah se bhul hi gayi thi. Vo toh bhi dekhna bhul gayi je uske aaspas Kabir kahi bhi nahi tha. Jaldi hi Rati ke Father aa kar uske samne khade ho jaate hai.

C.L-Rati tumhare face ka rang kyo uda hua hai. Kya tum bimar ho?

Rati ke father ne usse dekh kar yeh baat kahi thi.

Unke is sawal par Rati darte hue kehte hai.

Rati-Na.....nahi toh.

Yeh keh kar vo apne sir ko naa mein hilane lag gayi. Uska dil kaafi zoro se dhadak raha tha usne apne aaspas dekha tab usse kabir kahi bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha lekin uske powers ko halke halke se sense kar paa rahi thi.

Wahi yaha jab se Kabir apne void form mein tha tab se uska pain hal pal badhta hi jaa raha tha. Usse yeh samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ke usse yeh pain hone ke reason kya hai. Kabir ne pain hone ki wajah se apni aankhe tak band kar li thi.
Jab usne apni aankhe band ki tab uske samne Buddhist Emperor's Emperiyan aa gayi aur uska 1st chapter khul gaya. Buddhist Emperor's Emperiyan ke aane ke wajah se kabir ke band aankho ke samne ek chamak fail gayi jisse vo usse dekhne lag gaya. Vo us pain mein bhi us book ke paas chala aaya. Jab usne book mei dekha tab us chapter ke last mein kuch phrases ban rahe the lekin vo kaafi light the. Unhe kabir read hi nahi kar paa raha tha.

Suddenly uska pain had se zyada bad gaya aur vo zor se chillane lag gaya.

Kabir ke aise chillane ke wajah se uske energy kaafi zyada release hone lag gayi jisse Rati ke father ne feel kar liya.

Jaldi hi kabir ka void form disappear ho gaya aur vo aise hi chillate hue Rati aur uske father ke samne aa gaya.

Kabir ko aise Rati ke courtyard mein dekh kar unhe gussa aa gaya. Unhone apne soul force se kabir ko piche ki taraf uda diya. Par kabir ko toh kuch samjh hi nahi raha tha uska pain har pal badh jo raha tha. Vo toh yeh bhi bhul gaya ke vo void form se bahar aa gaya hai.

Kabir udte hue jaa kar piche ke ek wall se jaa kar lag gaya. Apne senses mein naa hone ki wajah se vo injured ho gaya. Uske muh se halka sa blood bhi nikal raha tha.

Kabir ko aise injurd dekh kar Rati uski taraf bhagte hue jaane lag gayi. Vo jaldi se jaa kar kabir ke pass baith gayi. Kabir abhi bhi apne sir ko pakade hue tha. Rati kabir se puchti hai.

Rati-Kabir, kya tum thik ho?

Rati ke liye kabir kaafi special person ban gaya tha. Ek wahi tha jisne usse har bar kisi na kisi tarah se help ki thi. Apne father ki wajah se usse aise injured dekh kar usse apne father par gussa sa aane lag gaya tha. Wahi kabir abhi bhi kaafi pain mein tha.

Kabir ko itna pain mein dekh kar Rati apne father se puchti hai.

Rati-Father aap kaise kisi bhi reason ke bina mere friend ko hurt kar sakte hai?
Par Rati ke father koi bhi baat sunne ke mood mein nahi the unhe lag raha tha ke kabir jaanbhuj kar yaha aaya hai. Unhone phir se kabir ko apne soul force se waha se utha kar dusri taraf phek diya. Ek baar phir kabir dusri wall se jaa lag gaya aur phir se uske muu se blood nikalne lag gaya.

Kabir ko aise dekh kar Rati ke aankho mein aasu aa gaye the. Vo kabir ko aone father se bachane ke liye unke aur kabir ke bich mein aa gayi aur apne soul force ko release kar diya. Rati ke aise karne se uske upar Snow Queen banne lag gayi. Snow Wind pure aasman mein failne lag gayi thi aur uske wajah se ek halka sa Strom bhi form hone lag gaya tha. Rati ne apne aur uske father ke bich ek Snow Wall bana di thi.

Par Rati ke Father bhi Black-Gold Rank expert the unke liye yeh snow wall kuch bhi nahi thi. Unke soul force ke wajah se vo snow wall wahi destroy ho gayi.

C.L-Tum Snow Queen ke saath merge ho gayi ho aur apne hi father ke against usse use kar rahi ho. Lagta hai tumhe lesson sikhana padega.

Unhone apne soul force ko thoda sa release kar diya. Par Rati ke liye yeh bhi bohot tha jiske wajah se vo bhi piche ki taraf ud gayi aur jaa kar ek jagah gir gayi. Par usse bhi vo halki se injured ho gayi thi. Yeh sab kabir us hone wale pain mein bhi dekh liya tha.

Apne samne Rati ko aise dekh kar kabir ko kaafi gussa aa gaya tha. Uska gussa is kadar badh gaya ke vo usse hone wale pain tak ko bhul gaya aur suddenly kabir ne apni aankhe jo halki si khuli hui thi vo puri tarah se khol di.

Kabir ke apne aankhe kholne ke wajah se uski aankhe puri tarah se Red Energy se chamak rahi thi aur saath hi pure Osian City par ek baar phir se pressure ban gaya tha. Yeh pressure pichle wale se bhi bohot hi zyada tha. Is kadar tha ke us pressure ne naa sirf koi living things balki non living things par bhi apna effect dikha diya tha. City mein rehne wala har ek person uske under aa gaya tha. Jitne bhi buildings thi unpar cracks aane lag gaye the.

Rati ke father ko toh kuch samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ke yeh hai kya. Lekin jaldi hi unhe aisa jab pehle hue tha vo pal yaad aa jata hai. Unke pairo ke niche se zamin hi jaise khisak kayi thi. Wahi kabir ab slowly Rati ke father ki taraf badh eag gaya tha. Uske unki taraf badne se hi Rati ke father ke pair dis balance hone lag gaye the. Jab tak kabir untak pohochna vo uske samne ghutno par aa gaye the. Rati ke father apne pure soul force ko use kar rahe the ke vo is pressure se free ho paaye par vo aisa kar ho nahi paa rahe the. Pressure kaafi jyada tha. Abhi kabir apna right pair unpar rakhne hi wala tha ke uske kaano mein ek aawaz jaati hai.

Yeh aawaz Rati ki thi aur vo apne father ko aise dekh kar kaafi dar gayo thi. Jab uski nazar Kabir ki aankho par gayi tab usse tournament wala pal yaad aa gaya jab unse ek chote se pal ke liye kabir ki aankhe aise hi chamakte huye dekhi thi.
Usne kabir ko dekhte hue naa mein sir hilaya. Tabhi kabir apne hosh mei aata hai aur vo pressure pure Osian City par bana hua tha vo kahi gayab ho jaata hai.


Wahi yaha kabir zor se chillata hai aur niche gir jata hai. Kabir abhi behosh ho gaya tha. Kabir ko girte dekh kar Rati jaldi se uth jaati hai aur uski taraf aati hai par tab tak kabir puri tarah se behosh ho gaya tha. Wahi Rati ke father bhi apne aap ko sambhalte hai aur un dono ki tarah aate hai. Unhe abhi bhi yakin nahi ho raha tha ke unhe ek teenage ladke ne apne ghutno par laa diya.
Amazing but small update hai brother aaj
 
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