Thriller ATMAKAMI....Mindfuck Thriller(Completed)

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Who do you think was the hottest female character. Any 2

  • Esha

  • Angelina Silva

  • Vandana Rathi

  • Aradhna

  • Nisha

  • Deepika mam

  • Ajmeri bai :laugh:

  • Madhulika

  • Vìbha

  • Pandey ji ki laundiya :D


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Yug Purush

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:cigg: ATMAKAMI...... :cigg:
Ability or disorder ?:evilgrin:
2nd part of 8th Semester, download 8th semester from my signature or pm to get the link :)
About ATMAKAMI: Truth isn't the truth and lie isn't the lie. then what's the truth and what's the lie...? confused..? get more confused by reading the story :evilgrin:

"Behold,all those who were connected to Shri Arman shall be ashamed and disgraced; They shall be as nothing, as a nonexistent thing.... they shall all die unfortunate deaths. Why the hell God created him"
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Complete story --------------->>ATMAKAMI....
(4 dots means Arman 1.0, 2.0, 3.0, 4.0)
Dont forget to give your valuble feedback here... voting line bhi khuli hai, so vote bhi kare... ;)
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------> The Rogue Philosopher.pdf <------((download Arman's best quotes and dialogues))
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To download all the stories written by me ....Click here

Done reading ? And confused ? Ofcourse you're.....
Just follow This Page and onwards... your all doubts will be crystal clear :D
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Thanks a lot friends. Read and Review. Love you guys.




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~~~Reviews~~~
((Don't read reviews if you're planning to read the story... KAPD ho jayega... bole toh Spoiler alert.. and please dont dare to read it if you havent read 8th semester... dimag chud jayega... jo ki already chudega hee... par 8th semester padhe rahoge toh kam chudega :cool: !!!))


1. Review by harshit1890
2. Review by Arham9573
3. Review by 404 aka firefox420
4. Review by The Immortal
5. Review by Ammienida
6. Review by Wicked_One
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best story series ever .. written ...

kaash iske upar to ek online series banni chahiye ...
Specially is story pe comment krne ke liye register kiya hu sgp..
Review Aj kal me dunga
Bhai class 10th me tha jab 8th semester padhi thi, wohi meri pehli story thi jisko padhkar esa nasha laga aajtak XF par story padh raha hun
Finally I get it after a loooooooong time . Thanks for this Gyani Bhau, Xforum join karna aaj jake safal hua... Bhagwan aapka bada kare......
bhai hamari raaye jaan-na chahte ho ya apna doubt clear karna chahte ho .. dekho IIIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......esha aapki hamesha se chahat rahi hai .. aur Nisha aapke parallel universe wale dusre version ko mili hai aapko to sirf sapno mein he dikhi .. restuarant mein to ulta beizzati he kari .. BRO :D .. par bhai muzhe to hamesha se he Anjelina Disilva pasand thi .. kyon ki usne hamesha he aapki maar ke rakhi .. literally chaaku ghusa diya tha .. bas shukr manaao ki wo aapke college mein Engineering nahi kar rahi thi warna .. aap college ke Sidar ke baad MTL kabhi na bann paate .. shukr manao ki usne taras kha kar aapka chashma lauta diya tha .. waise is ladki ki tareef mein main pool baand sakta hu .. par isne pehle he aapki khoob tel laga ke phaadi hai .. ha ha .. aur sirf muzhe kya ye to khud Arman ko pasand thi .. too bad ye Ladki dusre sheher se aur peshe se Doctor Thi ...

Deepika Mam ka aapne naam yaha mention kiya .. muzhe tazzub hua .. 1st semester se leke isne Arman ki le kar rakhi aur fir apni gaand maarne ka badla Gautam ke baap se Arman ki gaand tudwa kar liya .. Main wakai sochta tha .. ki isne Arman ko sadak par rok kar kyon fasaya tha .. iski to koi dusmanagi bhi nahi thi .. but fir muzhe bahut baad chal kar iss baat par dhyaan gaya ki .. jo ladki duniya bhar ke laundo ko apne ishaaro par nachati aayi thi .. usko Arman ne chutiya banaya aur fir uski gaand bhi maari .. uske mana karne par .. to badla to lena banta bhi tha .. par usne jo tareeka apnaya wo galat tha .. shayad usne ye nahi socha hoga ki uska parinaam itna galat niklega aur Arman coma mein chala jaayega .. khair badla to Arman ne bhi liya uski video bana kar .. magar us-se hisaab barabar nahi hua .. Deepika ki to sahi se gaand todni jaroori thi ...

Vibha .. ladki to ye bhi haraami thi aur is kutiya ki wajah se he apne MTL bhai ka dil toota tha aur fir us chutiye 7 saal fail Varun ki girlfriend bann kar pata nahi kitne ladko ki zindagi kharab kari .. waise to ye saste mein bach gayi .. isko le kar to muzhe Arman par bhi gussa tha .. na chodi na chudwayi .. na Arun ko iski lene di kabhi ...

pandey ji ki Laundiya .. bhai iske baare mein to baat he mat karo .. iske chakkar mein to Arman ki life ki bhajiya ho gayi .. saari bhasad ke peeche asal mein yahi naas ki jadd hai .. khud to isne kucch nahi kiya magar iske padhaku dimaag ke chalte .. school life se lekar college ke completion tak Arman ki gardan par nangi talwaar latki rahi .. aur Vipender bhai ne iski wajah se ghar se laat maar kar bhaga diya ...

Aaradhana .. 8th semester mein agar muzhe kisi ke liye bura laga to wo iss ladki ke liye .. 'Sirrrrrrrr' .. isne bechaari gaanv ki seedhi-saadhi ladki ne sirf ek galti ki aur wo thi Arman se pyaar karna .. iske liye to Saurabh ya Bhu jaisa koi ya fir Arun bhi chal jaata .. magar iss ladki ki kismat he kharaab thi jo ye Arman par lattu ho gayi .. aur iski sabse badi wajah thi iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......esha ...

Esha ...... muzhe kabhi pasand nahi aayi .. par laundo ko bhi apni gaand wahi maraani hoti hai .. jaha ladki kisi aur se set ho .. wo bhi college ke sabse haraami launde se jiska baap bhi ek avval darze ka gunda ho .. iska to waise bhi circuit fuse he tha .. suicide karne ke pehle se he .. Billi ...

Vandana Rathi .. item to ye mast hai .. but Arman ne apni chutiya panti ke chalte iski choot se bhi haath dho baitha .. well abhi Aatma kaami maine poori nahi padhi hai .. jitna muzhe pehle padhne se yaad hai .. abhi utne ke aadhaar par ye sab likh raha hu ...

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waise to main aapki lekhani ka bhayankar wala Fan hu .. bas naam badal gaya hai .. kehlo ki ye Parallel universe ka dusra version hai .. BRO :D

Regards,
Firefox2017

aaj aapki kahani ko aage padhna shuru karunga .. abhi tak to aapne he latkaya hua tha aur The Immortal bhai aur main he aapko ungli karne mein lage the ki kahani ko aage badhao ...

baaki ke parts ka intezaar rahega ...

Finally I get it after a loooooooong time . Thanks for this Gyani Bhau, Xforum join karna aaj jake safal hua... Bhagwan aapka bada kare......
Done Reading upto Chapter 12, Gyani bhai, shayad ye meri dusri kahani hai jo mei Scnd time padh raha hun kya kahun aisa lag raha tha jaise mein arman ke sath ek parchai ki tarah hu aur sab kuch samne ghat raha hai, :bow: :bow:

Vaise to mene bhi itne update par apna review diya hoga, lekin dubara padh raha hun to khud ko review dene se nahi ruk paya. Likha hi itna kamal hai ki samajh nahi ata kai baar ki kya kahun.

Kal raat 3 baje tak chapter 12 nipta diya. Jisme ek up
Phase 1 completed -

Kahani jitni complicated rahi thi abhi tak, utna hi mei sochta hun ki kitne dhayan aur soch kar apne likhi hai.
Warna likh to chutiapanti koi bhi sakta hai par Arman ko apke alawa koi aur nahi likh sakta.
Abhi se yahan ka end bata pana kafi mushkil hai, ya phir katai impossible hai.
Par mujhe aisa lagta hai ki aap kahani ko ek realistic end doge, jo apki real life se kahin juda hoga. Bhale hi usme 10% hi kyun na include karo.
Gyani bhai.... Bas maza aa gaya, aage padh kar fir aunga :reading:

date do bar post tha :D, mujhe laga ki arman apni hi baat repeat kr rha hai isliye mene dono baar padh liya par end mein jakar pata chala ki aii sala ek do bar copy/paste hai idhar :D Khamkbhkat raat ko 3 baje bhi hans padh raha tha mei padhte hue. Sach mei bhai kabhi kabhi aisa lgta hai jo ap likh rahe ho waich real world hai baki sb to fake reality hai.

Bahut kuch kehna hai lekin abhi kahani baki hai isliye chapter 12 tak padh kar kuch kuch samajh ane laga hai. Sala sab fake kahani suna raha hai apna ARMAAAN no its ARMAN with single A between M & N :D

Yug Purush :bow: :bow: for the soch i can really :bow: in front of you like Sunil Gavaskar did when Sachin scored 200 in ODI's , A big hearted fan :heart:

CHapter 25 tak done :bow: Gyani bhai, wese to kahani padi hai kuch kuch yaad hai par uppar uppar se scene yaad the Lekin dubara padh kar sab kuch yaad memory flashback mein jakar vapis le aa rahi hai. I am thinking like Armaaan sorry its ARMAN for past 2 days, itna gehra asar hai :doh:

EK baat kehna chahunga, like 8th semester ye kahani us tarah nahi rahi hai ki bahut se character involve ho. This time its only arman as of now baki sab usi ke banaye hue kirdar lag rahe hai. I still feels ki koi ek kahani jhooth hai, ya ye wali ya 8th sem wali kuch to hai jo bahut bada kaand hai. Mujhe 8th sem ka akhri update abhi tak dil ko chubta hai. Arman jaisa bhi ho, but that whole scene made me love 8th semester waise to apki writing se lag raha tha ki apne real kahani likhi hai par vo scene aaj bhi hai dil mein.

FIlal Atmakami par kuch bhi kehna bekar hai kyun ki vo apne hi alag level hai vo yani Arman aur aap gyani bhai :bow: Waise mujhe to vo wali stry bhi yaad aa jati hai jo apne Atmakami ko pehle kisi aur plot ke sath likhi thi fir plot change kiya tha, vo bhi mere hissab se gazab hoti khair ab aage padunga aur aaj raat tak jitna padh paya utna hi padhunga varna kal se do-chaar update muje bhi dene padenge warna lawde lag jayenge :redface:

:bow: :bow: to you always gyani bhai :hug:
Spun to fan hogya re
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one of the best story ever written on xb :adore: Yug Purush :dost:

Dimaag ghuma diya ghyàni bhau... story ne..
Matlb.. tuhaare re-edited likhne ke chakkar me
Parso suru ki thi aur kal poora din... poori raat... padhta hi raha story ko..
Sala... dimaag ... aankh ... gand ... total sab kuch dukh gyaa ... (baithe-baithe ... laite-laite) ... lekin aaj subah poori padh kar hi chordha...
Ye sale arman ke character ne ... aisa chipkaya ki khatam karke hi chain aaya...
Sale ne sara kand khud kiya aur bhool bhi gya.... sahi dimagi ability hai sale ki...

8th semester yo pahle se padha hua tha par ye aaj se padhna shuru kiya aur 100 + padh dale ek bar . Gajab ki backhodi pele ho . 8 th semester me College aur Nisha ki hi kahani thi par yaha to Arman ke 3 alag alag version le aaye hai kab kaha chala jaye koi thik hai . Dekhte hai kya hota es physco ki life me .
“tumhe kaise bhool sakta hoon main…tu hee hai na wo jo kal raat me 500 rs. ka sirf popcorn kha gayi thi…sach bata ghar me khana-vana nahi milta kya …ya ye teri aadat hee hai ki dusaro ke paiso pe aish karna…apne boyfriend ko to gatak gayi hogi tu ab tak…mera kahne ka matlab hai ki kuch to sharam lihaj kiya kar…ab apni saheli ko hee dekh le kab se line mare ja rahi hai mujhe…mana ki bahut smart ,handsome…intelligent hoon main lekin iska matlab ye to nahi ki jis thali me khaya usi ko chura loge…chottiyo…ruk abhi Nisha ko call karke batata hoon ki tum dono ne mujhe propose mara hai….arey bhag kaha rahi hai ruk…..”
Ye paragraph sabse jabardst laga . :superb:

Chapter 20 tak padh li hai 300 ya 305 pages huye hoge aur ye kahani un kuch gini chuni kahaniyo main se ek hai jaise jitna padho utna alag alag tarike se samajhoge dusri baar padhne par bhi wahi fresh feeling hai jaise pehli baar padh rahe hai kuch kuch scenes yaad the par abhi to puri kahani hi jehan main dobara utar rahi hai and ARMAN is perfect example of how a man ruins his life jaise ki aapne pehle phase main bataya hai matlab insaan ki life uske hath main hoti hai jise ko jaisa chahe bana sakta hai par maximum time aadmi ka hath apne lund pe hota hai to kya life lund hai ya life jhund hai... khair wo alag mudda hai aur arman main bare main bolne ke liye main is waqt nishabd hu kyuki filhaal dimag main arman chaya hua hai.
Baat bas itni hi hai ke jab jab arman ko padha usko uski kahani ko apne paas mehsoos kiya hai aur ye sirf aapki writing ka kamaal hai writer saab matlab arman ko padhne ke baad dimag main kuch samay tak arman ka asar bana rehta hai...khair abhi aur kya likhu mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai isiliye aage padhne par focus karta hu ki aage arman apna aur kuch naya roop dikha de afterall he is 4D man.......

Bhai soch rha hu agar koi Web Series ATMAKAMI naam se kabhi bn paye to kitna mind blowing hoga..h na..🤗.
Hope kisi aise sakhs tk ye behtareen kahani pahuch jaye jo jyada modifications bhi na kre aur bahut se logo ki mulakat Shri Arman ji se karwa bhi paye......aur India ki abhi tk ki best series ka khitab bhi Shri Arman ji ke hi khate me hi aayega..😀😀
Kyunki mujhe lagta h Thriller, Suspense, Romance, Action, Fantasy....matlab ki har kisi ke liye kuchh na kuchh zaroor milega.😋
 
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ATMAKAMI...... :evilgrin:
Completed... will post soon.
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:congrats: for new story thread Gyani bhau

Eska first part 8 SEMESTER padha tha ab ye restate ho rahi hai to padhunga .
 

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Yahi story padne ke chakar mein XF par itni story likh dali yahan ki kabhi ayegi aur mera wait karna safal hua... :weep:
 
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