Thriller ATMAKAMI....Mindfuck Thriller(Completed)

[Mr. BERLIN]

Comment mat padhna fir idhar ke ...

Phir se dhokha hone wala hai kya hum reader ke saath

 

[Yug Purush]

Phir se dhokha hone wala hai kya hum reader ke saath

Spoiler alert bhai

 

[harshit1890]

Are Harshu bhai ab tak zinda hai
Apan to socha tha xp ke saath sab or hi moh maya me chale gaye

Lockdown mein idhar ka rasta pakad liya apan
Han wahi moh maya se bore hokar wapis ayele idhar

 

[Spıdəɽmaŋ]

""Bc Fuckkkk Yeh Kiya End Thi Nhi Yeh End Nhi Ho skti I Really Confused

Khair Ab Baat kre Story ki Toh Bhai Too Fabulous , Fantastic, Amazing And Marvelous Alfaz Km pad rhy Apki Writing Skill ki Bro Aisa Lg rha jese yeh sb Real Mein Hua Hai aur Ankhon ke samne koi Movie Chal Rhi Thi
Last Mein bs Itna Hi bolunga
Sonam ki Maa Ka BHOSDAAA

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

Gyani bhai
ye kahani chahe incest hai
Takkar deti hai aur aap ise pasand karange

Incest - Pyaar - 100 Baar

Aap sabhi Jan ko Mera hardik naman. Kaafi samay se Mai yaha likhi Hui kahaniyon ko padh Raha hu. Aur sabhi lekhak apne ster pe bahut he atche hai. Aap sabhi se prerna lekar Mai bhi yaha ek kahani ki shuruat Kar Raha hu. Jiska shirshak hai "Pyar 100 baar" . Ye ek lambi kahani hai jisme incest k...

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khaas baat ye ki agar socho nahi to ye feel hi nahi hoga mostly ki ye kahani incest hai lekin aisa thriller hai aap khud writer se update mangoge.

 

[MastMunda]

Yug Purush Bhai 8th semester maine bohut pehle padi thi aur us Waqt mujhe pata bhi nahi tha ke uske writer aap ho.
Aur jab maine wo story padi to ye socha tha ki aisi story shayad hi main phir kabhi pad pao kyunki wo ek aisi story thi jise padte huwe aisa lagta hai ab wo sab apne samne dekh rahe hai.
Phir yaha is site par aney ke baad mujhe pata laga ki wo Yug Purush apki story phir ATMAKAMI ye usi ka second part hai to padne se pehle main ye soncha ki shayad ye part mai THE GREAT ARMAN ki life bhi sahi track par ayegi aur shayad nisha ke sath milkar ARMAN apni life ki ek nayi shuruat karega.
Par jab story pada to ab Kehne ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi.
Aur main ye baat dawe se keh sakta ho jitno ne bhi ye story padi hai unme se koi bhi Isko sahi se describe nahi karpayegi.
GENIUS word chota padta hai iske samne.
Bas itna kahunga bhai thank you for giving us this kind of story.
And jis tarah se iska END huwa hai shayad iska agla part nahi ayega ya phir ayega kyunki THE GREAT ARMAN kuch bhi kar sakta hai.

 

[Yug Purush]

""Bc Fuckkkk Yeh Kiya End Thi Nhi Yeh End Nhi Ho skti I Really Confused

Khair Ab Baat kre Story ki Toh Bhai Too Fabulous , Fantastic, Amazing And Marvelous Alfaz Km pad rhy Apki Writing Skill ki Bro Aisa Lg rha jese yeh sb Real Mein Hua Hai aur Ankhon ke samne koi Movie Chal Rhi Thi
Last Mein bs Itna Hi bolunga
Sonam ki Maa Ka BHOSDAAA

Thank you

Gyani bhai
ye kahani chahe incest hai
Takkar deti hai aur aap ise pasand karange

Incest - Pyaar - 100 Baar

Aap sabhi Jan ko Mera hardik naman. Kaafi samay se Mai yaha likhi Hui kahaniyon ko padh Raha hu. Aur sabhi lekhak apne ster pe bahut he atche hai. Aap sabhi se prerna lekar Mai bhi yaha ek kahani ki shuruat Kar Raha hu. Jiska shirshak hai "Pyar 100 baar" . Ye ek lambi kahani hai jisme incest k...

xforum.live

khaas baat ye ki agar socho nahi to ye feel hi nahi hoga mostly ki ye kahani incest hai lekin aisa thriller hai aap khud writer se update mangoge.

Thanks for suggesting

Yug Purush Bhai 8th semester maine bohut pehle padi thi aur us Waqt mujhe pata bhi nahi tha ke uske writer aap ho.
Aur jab maine wo story padi to ye socha tha ki aisi story shayad hi main phir kabhi pad pao kyunki wo ek aisi story thi jise padte huwe aisa lagta hai ab wo sab apne samne dekh rahe hai.
Phir yaha is site par aney ke baad mujhe pata laga ki wo Yug Purush apki story phir ATMAKAMI ye usi ka second part hai to padne se pehle main ye soncha ki shayad ye part mai THE GREAT ARMAN ki life bhi sahi track par ayegi aur shayad nisha ke sath milkar ARMAN apni life ki ek nayi shuruat karega.
Par jab story pada to ab Kehne ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi.
Aur main ye baat dawe se keh sakta ho jitno ne bhi ye story padi hai unme se koi bhi Isko sahi se describe nahi karpayegi.
GENIUS word chota padta hai iske samne.
Bas itna kahunga bhai thank you for giving us this kind of story.
And jis tarah se iska END huwa hai shayad iska agla part nahi ayega ya phir ayega kyunki THE GREAT ARMAN kuch bhi kar sakta hai.

Thanks MM bhai... aur sab answer story me hai like iske next part aayega ya nahi...
Arun: so this is the end of the great arman
Arman: i guesss
Thanks for the review

 

[Bhusan99]

ATMAKAMI...... ​

Ability or disorder ?​

Chalo dekhte hai Bro

 

[Seducer1-7]

Kaha se shuru karu, chalo shuruwat se shuru karte hai, 8th Semester - ye vo story hai jise mei khud nahi jaanta kitni baar padi hai but jab jab padta hu ek alag si feeling aati hai, college life ki bakchodiyo pe aadarit is ye kahani kahi na kahi ant me adhoori si lagti hai, ho sakta hai esha se armaan ka lagav or esha ka usko dokha dena humesha yahi lagta tha ki agle part me gauti or esha se armaan ki mulakaat damakedaar hi hogi isiliye bahut ummido se iske agle update ka intezaar tha jo ab pura hua, or fir aayi atmakami, pehle mujhe laga ye bhi pehle wale part ki tarah romance or bakchodiyo pe based hogi or saare purane characters fir se dekhne ko milenge but shayad ye kisine nahi socha hoga ye ek khatarnaak dimaag ke taar hila dene wali sci-fi story nikalegi, jo sach tha vo darasal sach nahi tha or sach kya tha ye kisi ko bhi nahi maloom, is kahani ka sabse jyada bada jatka last me esha hi thi jo ki ese haalato me hogi or armaan use pehchaan nahi payega ye koi soch bhi nahi paaya hoga or sach kahu toh dil se bura bhi laga esha ke baare me padh ke kyoki shuru se hi vo jesi bhi thi, use bahut cute picturise kiya tha, story last me ese ghum rahi thi jese me khud ek se dusre parellel world me travel kar raha hu at last Angelina se aakhiri baat jo hui use pad ke esa laga jese armaan ko nahi jaana chahiye tha parellel universe me, version 4 ko chodu bana ke angelina darling ke paas turant pahuch jaana chahiye tha or divya bhi toh thi kul mila ke dimaag ka barosa kar dene wali is sci-fi story ko meri taraf se 9/10, ye ek percentage esha ke liye, apun ko laga last me esha darling hi armaan ke liye aayegi but last ke ek scene me apne clear kar diya tha ki esha gautam ki hi thi or dono me khararnaak wala pyar tha jise armaan kabhi tod nahi paaya (eklota esa kaam raha hoga armaan ki jindagi ka ) bas akhiri me itna hi kahunga ki iska teesra part toh banta hai or der saari bakchodiya bhi par is baar armaan ban ke nhi utkarsh ban ke wonderful, joyful, fullamfull shaandaar story gyaani bhai

 

[Yug Purush]

Kaha se shuru karu, chalo shuruwat se shuru karte hai, 8th Semester - ye vo story hai jise mei khud nahi jaanta kitni baar padi hai but jab jab padta hu ek alag si feeling aati hai, college life ki bakchodiyo pe aadarit is ye kahani kahi na kahi ant me adhoori si lagti hai, ho sakta hai esha se armaan ka lagav or esha ka usko dokha dena humesha yahi lagta tha ki agle part me gauti or esha se armaan ki mulakaat damakedaar hi hogi isiliye bahut ummido se iske agle update ka intezaar tha jo ab pura hua, or fir aayi atmakami, pehle mujhe laga ye bhi pehle wale part ki tarah romance or bakchodiyo pe based hogi or saare purane characters fir se dekhne ko milenge but shayad ye kisine nahi socha hoga ye ek khatarnaak dimaag ke taar hila dene wali sci-fi story nikalegi, jo sach tha vo darasal sach nahi tha or sach kya tha ye kisi ko bhi nahi maloom, is kahani ka sabse jyada bada jatka last me esha hi thi jo ki ese haalato me hogi or armaan use pehchaan nahi payega ye koi soch bhi nahi paaya hoga or sach kahu toh dil se bura bhi laga esha ke baare me padh ke kyoki shuru se hi vo jesi bhi thi, use bahut cute picturise kiya tha, story last me ese ghum rahi thi jese me khud ek se dusre parellel world me travel kar raha hu at last Angelina se aakhiri baat jo hui use pad ke esa laga jese armaan ko nahi jaana chahiye tha parellel universe me, version 4 ko chodu bana ke angelina darling ke paas turant pahuch jaana chahiye tha or divya bhi toh thi kul mila ke dimaag ka barosa kar dene wali is sci-fi story ko meri taraf se 9/10, ye ek percentage esha ke liye, apun ko laga last me esha darling hi armaan ke liye aayegi but last ke ek scene me apne clear kar diya tha ki esha gautam ki hi thi or dono me khararnaak wala pyar tha jise armaan kabhi tod nahi paaya (eklota esa kaam raha hoga armaan ki jindagi ka ) bas akhiri me itna hi kahunga ki iska teesra part toh banta hai or der saari bakchodiya bhi par is baar armaan ban ke nhi utkarsh ban ke wonderful, joyful, fullamfull shaandaar story gyaani bhai

Thanks bhai
Aur Esha ko marna tha Gautam ko maarne ke liye.. Arman couldnt do it, he couldnt kill esha. So daddu was the best option
Thanks:

Chalo dekhte hai Bro

Kaha tak dekha bhai :lol