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Who do you think was the hottest female character. Any 2

  • Esha

  • Angelina Silva

  • Vandana Rathi

  • Aradhna

  • Nisha

  • Deepika mam

  • Ajmeri bai :laugh:

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  • Pandey ji ki laundiya :D


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bhai hamari raaye jaan-na chahte ho ya apna doubt clear karna chahte ho .. dekho IIIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......esha aapki hamesha se chahat rahi hai .. aur Nisha aapke parallel universe wale dusre version ko mili hai aapko to sirf sapno mein he dikhi .. restuarant mein to ulta beizzati he kari .. BRO :D .. par bhai muzhe to hamesha se he Anjelina Disilva pasand thi .. kyon ki usne hamesha he aapki maar ke rakhi .. literally chaaku ghusa diya tha .. bas shukr manaao ki wo aapke college mein Engineering nahi kar rahi thi warna .. aap college ke Sidar ke baad MTL kabhi na bann paate .. shukr manao ki usne taras kha kar aapka chashma lauta diya tha .. waise is ladki ki tareef mein main pool baand sakta hu .. par isne pehle he aapki khoob tel laga ke phaadi hai .. ha ha .. aur sirf muzhe kya ye to khud Arman ko pasand thi .. too bad ye Ladki dusre sheher se aur peshe se Doctor Thi ...

Deepika Mam ka aapne naam yaha mention kiya .. muzhe tazzub hua .. 1st semester se leke isne Arman ki le kar rakhi aur fir apni gaand maarne ka badla Gautam ke baap se Arman ki gaand tudwa kar liya .. Main wakai sochta tha .. ki isne Arman ko sadak par rok kar kyon fasaya tha .. iski to koi dusmanagi bhi nahi thi .. but fir muzhe bahut baad chal kar iss baat par dhyaan gaya ki .. jo ladki duniya bhar ke laundo ko apne ishaaro par nachati aayi thi .. usko Arman ne chutiya banaya aur fir uski gaand bhi maari .. uske mana karne par .. to badla to lena banta bhi tha .. par usne jo tareeka apnaya wo galat tha .. shayad usne ye nahi socha hoga ki uska parinaam itna galat niklega aur Arman coma mein chala jaayega .. khair badla to Arman ne bhi liya uski video bana kar .. magar us-se hisaab barabar nahi hua .. Deepika ki to sahi se gaand todni jaroori thi ...

Vibha .. ladki to ye bhi haraami thi aur is kutiya ki wajah se he apne MTL bhai ka dil toota tha aur fir us chutiye 7 saal fail Varun ki girlfriend bann kar pata nahi kitne ladko ki zindagi kharab kari .. waise to ye saste mein bach gayi .. isko le kar to muzhe Arman par bhi gussa tha .. na chodi na chudwayi .. na Arun ko iski lene di kabhi ...

pandey ji ki Laundiya .. bhai iske baare mein to baat he mat karo .. iske chakkar mein to Arman ki life ki bhajiya ho gayi .. saari bhasad ke peeche asal mein yahi naas ki jadd hai .. khud to isne kucch nahi kiya magar iske padhaku dimaag ke chalte .. school life se lekar college ke completion tak Arman ki gardan par nangi talwaar latki rahi .. aur Vipender bhai ne iski wajah se ghar se laat maar kar bhaga diya ...

Aaradhana .. 8th semester mein agar muzhe kisi ke liye bura laga to wo iss ladki ke liye .. 'Sirrrrrrrr' .. isne bechaari gaanv ki seedhi-saadhi ladki ne sirf ek galti ki aur wo thi Arman se pyaar karna .. iske liye to Saurabh ya Bhu jaisa koi ya fir Arun bhi chal jaata .. magar iss ladki ki kismat he kharaab thi jo ye Arman par lattu ho gayi .. aur iski sabse badi wajah thi iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......esha ...

Esha ...... muzhe kabhi pasand nahi aayi .. par laundo ko bhi apni gaand wahi maraani hoti hai .. jaha ladki kisi aur se set ho .. wo bhi college ke sabse haraami launde se jiska baap bhi ek avval darze ka gunda ho .. iska to waise bhi circuit fuse he tha .. suicide karne ke pehle se he .. Billi ...

Vandana Rathi .. item to ye mast hai .. but Arman ne apni chutiya panti ke chalte iski choot se bhi haath dho baitha .. well abhi Aatma kaami maine poori nahi padhi hai .. jitna muzhe pehle padhne se yaad hai .. abhi utne ke aadhaar par ye sab likh raha hu ...

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waise to main aapki lekhani ka bhayankar wala Fan hu .. bas naam badal gaya hai .. kehlo ki ye Parallel universe ka dusra version hai .. BRO :D

Regards,
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aaj aapki kahani ko aage padhna shuru karunga .. abhi tak to aapne he latkaya hua tha aur The Immortal bhai aur main he aapko ungli karne mein lage the ki kahani ko aage badhao ...

baaki ke parts ka intezaar rahega ...
 

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Done Reading upto Chapter 12, Gyani bhai, shayad ye meri dusri kahani hai jo mei Scnd time padh raha hun kya kahun aisa lag raha tha jaise mein arman ke sath ek parchai ki tarah hu aur sab kuch samne ghat raha hai, :bow: :bow:

Vaise to mene bhi itne update par apna review diya hoga, lekin dubara padh raha hun to khud ko review dene se nahi ruk paya. Likha hi itna kamal hai ki samajh nahi ata kai baar ki kya kahun.

Kal raat 3 baje tak chapter 12 nipta diya. Jisme ek update do bar post tha :D, mujhe laga ki arman apni hi baat repeat kr rha hai isliye mene dono baar padh liya par end mein jakar pata chala ki aii sala ek do bar copy/paste hai idhar :D Khamkbhkat raat ko 3 baje bhi hans padh raha tha mei padhte hue. Sach mei bhai kabhi kabhi aisa lgta hai jo ap likh rahe ho waich real world hai baki sb to fake reality hai.

Bahut kuch kehna hai lekin abhi kahani baki hai isliye chapter 12 tak padh kar kuch kuch samajh ane laga hai. Sala sab fake kahani suna raha hai apna ARMAAAN no its ARMAN with single A between M & N :D

Yug Purush :bow: :bow: for the soch i can really :bow: in front of you like Sunil Gavaskar did when Sachin scored 200 in ODI's , A big hearted fan :heart:
 
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Kahani jitni complicated rahi thi abhi tak, utna hi mei sochta hun ki kitne dhayan aur soch kar apne likhi hai.
Warna likh to chutiapanti koi bhi sakta hai par Arman ko apke alawa koi aur nahi likh sakta.
Abhi se yahan ka end bata pana kafi mushkil hai, ya phir katai impossible hai.
Par mujhe aisa lagta hai ki aap kahani ko ek realistic end doge, jo apki real life se kahin juda hoga. Bhale hi usme 10% hi kyun na include karo.
Gyani bhai.... Bas maza aa gaya, aage padh kar fir aunga :reading:
 

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Kabse intazar kar raha tha
Main bhi :D
Atamakami ki sari ki sari update wo bhi ak bar me ..omg !!
Maine aapki sari story padhi hai sir ...big fan.. respect from the bottom of my heart...
Thank you from top of my heart :D
bhai hamari raaye jaan-na chahte ho ya apna doubt clear karna chahte ho .. dekho IIIiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......esha aapki hamesha se chahat rahi hai .. aur Nisha aapke parallel universe wale dusre version ko mili hai aapko to sirf sapno mein he dikhi .. restuarant mein to ulta beizzati he kari .. BRO :D .. par bhai muzhe to hamesha se he Anjelina Disilva pasand thi .. kyon ki usne hamesha he aapki maar ke rakhi .. literally chaaku ghusa diya tha .. bas shukr manaao ki wo aapke college mein Engineering nahi kar rahi thi warna .. aap college ke Sidar ke baad MTL kabhi na bann paate .. shukr manao ki usne taras kha kar aapka chashma lauta diya tha .. waise is ladki ki tareef mein main pool baand sakta hu .. par isne pehle he aapki khoob tel laga ke phaadi hai .. ha ha .. aur sirf muzhe kya ye to khud Arman ko pasand thi .. too bad ye Ladki dusre sheher se aur peshe se Doctor Thi ...

Deepika Mam ka aapne naam yaha mention kiya .. muzhe tazzub hua .. 1st semester se leke isne Arman ki le kar rakhi aur fir apni gaand maarne ka badla Gautam ke baap se Arman ki gaand tudwa kar liya .. Main wakai sochta tha .. ki isne Arman ko sadak par rok kar kyon fasaya tha .. iski to koi dusmanagi bhi nahi thi .. but fir muzhe bahut baad chal kar iss baat par dhyaan gaya ki .. jo ladki duniya bhar ke laundo ko apne ishaaro par nachati aayi thi .. usko Arman ne chutiya banaya aur fir uski gaand bhi maari .. uske mana karne par .. to badla to lena banta bhi tha .. par usne jo tareeka apnaya wo galat tha .. shayad usne ye nahi socha hoga ki uska parinaam itna galat niklega aur Arman coma mein chala jaayega .. khair badla to Arman ne bhi liya uski video bana kar .. magar us-se hisaab barabar nahi hua .. Deepika ki to sahi se gaand todni jaroori thi ...

Vibha .. ladki to ye bhi haraami thi aur is kutiya ki wajah se he apne MTL bhai ka dil toota tha aur fir us chutiye 7 saal fail Varun ki girlfriend bann kar pata nahi kitne ladko ki zindagi kharab kari .. waise to ye saste mein bach gayi .. isko le kar to muzhe Arman par bhi gussa tha .. na chodi na chudwayi .. na Arun ko iski lene di kabhi ...

pandey ji ki Laundiya .. bhai iske baare mein to baat he mat karo .. iske chakkar mein to Arman ki life ki bhajiya ho gayi .. saari bhasad ke peeche asal mein yahi naas ki jadd hai .. khud to isne kucch nahi kiya magar iske padhaku dimaag ke chalte .. school life se lekar college ke completion tak Arman ki gardan par nangi talwaar latki rahi .. aur Vipender bhai ne iski wajah se ghar se laat maar kar bhaga diya ...

Aaradhana .. 8th semester mein agar muzhe kisi ke liye bura laga to wo iss ladki ke liye .. 'Sirrrrrrrr' .. isne bechaari gaanv ki seedhi-saadhi ladki ne sirf ek galti ki aur wo thi Arman se pyaar karna .. iske liye to Saurabh ya Bhu jaisa koi ya fir Arun bhi chal jaata .. magar iss ladki ki kismat he kharaab thi jo ye Arman par lattu ho gayi .. aur iski sabse badi wajah thi iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......esha ...

Esha ...... muzhe kabhi pasand nahi aayi .. par laundo ko bhi apni gaand wahi maraani hoti hai .. jaha ladki kisi aur se set ho .. wo bhi college ke sabse haraami launde se jiska baap bhi ek avval darze ka gunda ho .. iska to waise bhi circuit fuse he tha .. suicide karne ke pehle se he .. Billi ...

Vandana Rathi .. item to ye mast hai .. but Arman ne apni chutiya panti ke chalte iski choot se bhi haath dho baitha .. well abhi Aatma kaami maine poori nahi padhi hai .. jitna muzhe pehle padhne se yaad hai .. abhi utne ke aadhaar par ye sab likh raha hu ...

********

waise to main aapki lekhani ka bhayankar wala Fan hu .. bas naam badal gaya hai .. kehlo ki ye Parallel universe ka dusra version hai .. BRO :D

Regards,
Firefox2017

aaj aapki kahani ko aage padhna shuru karunga .. abhi tak to aapne he latkaya hua tha aur The Immortal bhai aur main he aapko ungli karne mein lage the ki kahani ko aage badhao ...

baaki ke parts ka intezaar rahega ...
Arey .... :shocking: itna bada... itna toh mujhe bhi yaad nahi hai bhai in ladkiyo ke baare me especially 8th semester se related fact. Kayi toh abhi mujhe dhyan me aa raha ..... jab comment itna bada hai toh .... review :vhappy:
Thanks bhai :hug:
Done Reading upto Chapter 12, Gyani bhai, shayad ye meri dusri kahani hai jo mei Scnd time padh raha hun kya kahun aisa lag raha tha jaise mein arman ke sath ek parchai ki tarah hu aur sab kuch samne ghat raha hai, :bow: :bow:

Vaise to mene bhi itne update par apna review diya hoga, lekin dubara padh raha hun to khud ko review dene se nahi ruk paya. Likha hi itna kamal hai ki samajh nahi ata kai baar ki kya kahun.

Kal raat 3 baje tak chapter 12 nipta diya. Jisme ek update do bar post tha :D, mujhe laga ki arman apni hi baat repeat kr rha hai isliye mene dono baar padh liya par end mein jakar pata chala ki aii sala ek do bar copy/paste hai idhar :D Khamkbhkat raat ko 3 baje bhi hans padh raha tha mei padhte hue. Sach mei bhai kabhi kabhi aisa lgta hai jo ap likh rahe ho waich real world hai baki sb to fake reality hai.

Bahut kuch kehna hai lekin abhi kahani baki hai isliye chapter 12 tak padh kar kuch kuch samajh ane laga hai. Sala sab fake kahani suna raha hai apna ARMAAAN no its ARMAN with single A between M & N :D

Yug Purush :bow: :bow: for the soch i can really :bow: in front of you like Sunil Gavaskar did when Sachin scored 200 in ODI's , A big hearted fan :heart:
Shuru se padh rahe ho toh flaws pakad loge :nervous: kyunki maine last 20 update padh ke kahani restar ki aur fir khatm kar di... anyway thank you again...
Aur ek baat... shuru se padh rahe ho toh jo dialogues pasand aaye use kahi karke pm kar diyo... Arman ke dialogues ka pdf bana rha hu.. bahut kuch chhut gaya hai...
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Phase 1 completed -

Kahani jitni complicated rahi thi abhi tak, utna hi mei sochta hun ki kitne dhayan aur soch kar apne likhi hai.
Warna likh to chutiapanti koi bhi sakta hai par Arman ko apke alawa koi aur nahi likh sakta.
Abhi se yahan ka end bata pana kafi mushkil hai, ya phir katai impossible hai.
Par mujhe aisa lagta hai ki aap kahani ko ek realistic end doge, jo apki real life se kahin juda hoga. Bhale hi usme 10% hi kyun na include karo.
Gyani bhai.... Bas maza aa gaya, aage padh kar fir aunga :reading:
Desire that cant be fulfilled could be written as story :D
 

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