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Yug Purush

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Three Girls of My Life...( Running):yes2:
(A Story of Life)


समुन्दर का शिकारी : सम्राट मार्टिन की सल्तनत
((LINK IS IN 2ND POST :yo: ))


~A LONER ~~ PDF Uploaded
(USC 2021 WiNNER :cool:)


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The story was changing according to the need, due to which the story was becoming more interesting.
There were quite exciting twists in the story.
The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful.

In truth, the story was becoming even more interesting with increasing updates.
Realistic feeling which is a very difficult subject - whether in writing or acting in film - but you are the master at it.. keeping every aspect in mind, you were taking the story forward.
The story had a unique combination of vengeance and mystery as well as adventure.
Many new characters were also seen. They were also playing their role well with every aspect of the story. And the real appearance of some characters also came to light.
Keep writing like this and keep us entertained.
" Main bas aapko ye batane aaya tha ki... Maine bahut koshish ki... Puri koshish
ki... Lekin pratishodh ki agni ke saamne main haar gaya Father... Main chahta
tha ki Mangal bhi wo dard mahsoos kare... Jo maine kiya... Par aap ye nahi
samjhenge aur na hee main chahta hoon ki aap ye samjhe... Main bas aapse
aakhiri baar milne aaya tha... Goodbye Father, See you in another life...""
Btw kehte hai badle ki bhavna rakhna buri baat hai..aankh ke badle mein aankh, aise to puri duniya andhi ho jaani hai... . Badle ki bhavna se bas nafrat hi badhti hai... Lekin kabhi kabhi jab baat had zyada badh jaye, diye huye jakham jab nasoor ban jaaye..jab baat bardast se bahar ho... tab aise hi shayad pratisodh liye jaate hai.. :dazed:

Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills Yug Purush :yourock: :yourock:
(sorry for late review)
 
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Yug Purush

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The story was changing according to the need, due to which the story was becoming more interesting.
There were quite exciting twists in the story.
The qualities and passion of a writer is that through the character of story , make story's name meaningful. In which you were completely successful.

In truth, the story was becoming even more interesting with increasing updates.
Realistic feeling which is a very difficult subject - whether in writing or acting in film - but you are the master at it.. keeping every aspect in mind, you were taking the story forward.
The story had a unique combination of vengeance and mystery as well as adventure.
Many new characters were also seen. They were also playing their role well with every aspect of the story. And the real appearance of some characters also came to light.
Keep writing like this and keep us entertained.

Btw kehte hai badle ki bhavna rakhna buri baat hai..aankh ke badle mein aankh, aise to puri duniya andhi ho jaani hai... . Badle ki bhavna se bas nafrat hi badhti hai... Lekin kabhi kabhi jab baat had zyada badh jaye, diye huye jakham jab nasoor ban jaaye..jab baat bardast se bahar ho... tab aise hi shayad pratisodh liye jaate hai.. :dazed:

Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills Yug Purush :yourock: :yourock:
(sorry for late review)
Ye actually ek bade plan ka chhota sa hissa tha... Jisme koyi hero daal ke is story ko combine karta ek novel me.... Jo Meghnath se badla leta... Father Adler ka bhi role rahta kafi... Par kya kare... Roji roti ke chakkar me kayi story shuru hee nahi ho pati... :( aisi revenge story novel ke roop me rahti to maza aata... Aur Meghnath Villain hai. Hero nahi...
 

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Ye actually ek bade plan ka chhota sa hissa tha... Jisme koyi hero daal ke is story ko combine karta ek novel me.... Jo Meghnath se badla leta... Father Adler ka bhi role rahta kafi... Par kya kare... Roji roti ke chakkar me kayi story shuru hee nahi ho pati... :( aisi revenge story novel ke roop me rahti to maza aata... Aur Meghnath Villain hai. Hero nahi...
Actually meghnath ko atharva ka dost hona chahiye.. hai kiski mazal jo ushe ya uski premika pe buri nazar dale :dwarf:
Btw tab nahi kar sake,
ab long story ke roop mein likh dijiye ss pe :D readers ko bhi ek awesome story line milegi padhne ke liye :approve:
 

Naina

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Waise mere favorite characters ki list ek aur kirdaar add ho Chuka hai aur wo koi aur nahi balki kirdaar meghnath hai :D
Ek Brilliant awesome kahani Yug Purush ke story character Legendary Meghnath:D aur harshit1890 ki story characters Meera chorni aur tharki Malini ko leke honi chahiye :protest:
 

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Yar koi words nae hein atmakami k liye .. aj he complete ke 1 poore din laga ker parhe .. yarrr finally journey of arman is over .. best story i ever read in my entire life .. Thx for such great stories like 8th semester and atmakami .. i really liked how u connected atarva and ved with him .. i hope and wish atharva ko main girl mile gey three giels of mh life . Shivam or arman ke poore story sad banaye apne atharva ke life mein sahe love dall do yar ta k perhne waly bhi diaturb na ho kiu k syory perhne waly character k ander itna doob jaate hein k wih arman or shivan apne apko he samjhne lagte hein or woh sab dhoke or dard jo dono ko mile woh jab khud ko mehsoos hota hae toh bohot dard hota hae .i really wished k arman ko esha mil jaye kiu k usse ke wajah se kaye logo ne yeh story parhe k woh milein gay k nae .. love ur stories bcz they dont have south indian level of exaggeration about how guy handsome, girls star, gold heart and machoman is too like one punch man which is i am pretty sure inspired by south indian movies except saitama worked hard😂
 
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Bana lo bhai webseries... 8th sem par.. koyi copyright nahi thokunga bas naam mention kar dena :D :dost:

Nisha ka gufa jo hua , fir bhi pahchanne se inkaar kar di.. uska answer to aapne khud de diya shayad... par mere muh se sunna chahte ho :p:

Ek baar arman ne angelina darling se kaha tha ki "rvc me park me uske saamne nisha hai... ek me wo use ignore karta hai, ek me use line maarta hai... wo jee wo life rha hai.. jaha usne nisha ko ignore kiya tha.. lekin memory wo hai, jo jisme usne nisha se park me baat ki thi"
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Rahi baat arun aur varun ko story sunani wali to wo starting nahi thi is series ki... iski koyi starting hee nahi ... na kahi koyi ending.. ye to antheen sambhavnao me behti hui arman ki memories thi.. jiska ant utkarsh ke roop me hua aur angelina use saamne dikhi...

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Thanks for reading... aur webseries yadi banao to launda smart lena .. aatu jhatu nahi :p: jo goggle lagakar cigarette piye to lage ki ... Arman hai. :p:

Thanks
Lol kabir singh or arman ka attitude kaffe match kerta hae apke copy toh nae je unho ne😂
 
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