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Yug Purush

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Three Girls of My Life...( Running):yes2:
(A Story of Life)


समुन्दर का शिकारी : सम्राट मार्टिन की सल्तनत
((LINK IS IN 2ND POST :yo: ))


~A LONER ~~ PDF Uploaded
(USC 2021 WiNNER :cool:)


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I am a big fan of u and ur story 8th semester ...
Main ispe ek web series banane ka soch raha tha ... youtube per ...lekin phir socha ki kahi writer copyright leke na aa jaye ..aur mujhe jail ho jaye ...😁

Matlab itni mast story h yaar ...kya kahu alfaaj nhi h ....maine vo kai baar padhi h ....aur mujhe usme kuch guilt feel nhi hua...kyuki last me esha ka character reveal hua ki vo ghajini k mafik thi ...

Lekin saala atmkami me Quantum physics k ghuste hi main b pagla gaya ...kya kya bhasad h ... matlab jo hua vo hua nhi ....aur jo ho rha h uspe beleive nhi tha ki ye sach h ...banda kidhar se kidhar jaa rha h ye bhi nahi samajh aaya ....last me jaake clear hua ki kya tha ...

Bas ek scene meri samajh nahi aaya ...manne ko to main ye manta hu ki nisha ki shadi devid se fix thi ...jo alag universe me thi ... nisha ka character jab 8th semester wali me bhi h to jhooth kaise ho skta h aakhir uska itna chauda gufa jo kiya h arman ne ....

Baad me pehchanne se mana kr rhi h ....varun ka actually kya hua ...vo to uska dost tha 11 tak ...phir Nishad kaise ban gaya vo ....jabki saari story arun aur varun ko milke sunai thi arman ne ...

Bas yaha confused hu ....kyuki mera dimaag aapse tej nhi h ....🙏
 
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I am a big fan of u and ur story 8th semester ...
Main ispe ek web series banane ka soch raha tha ... youtube per ...lekin phir socha ki kahi writer copyright leke na aa jaye ..aur mujhe jail ho jaye ...😁

Matlab itni mast story h yaar ...kya kahu alfaaj nhi h ....maine vo kai baar padhi h ....aur mujhe usme kuch guilt feel nhi hua...kyuki last me esha ka character reveal hua ki vo ghajini k mafik thi ...

Lekin saala atmkami me Quantum physics k ghuste hi main b pagla gaya ...kya kya bhasad h ... matlab jo hua vo hua nhi ....aur jo ho rha h uspe beleive nhi tha ki ye sach h ...banda kidhar se kidhar jaa rha h ye bhi nahi samajh aaya ....last me jaake clear hua ki kya tha ...

Bas ek scene meri samajh nahi aaya ...manne ko to main ye manta hu ki nisha ki shadi devid se fix thi ...jo alag universe me thi ... nisha ka character jab 8th semester wali me bhi h to jhooth kaise ho skta h aakhir uska itna chauda gufa jo kiya h arman ne ....

Baad me pehchanne se mana kr rhi h ....varun ka actually kya hua ...vo to uska dost tha 11 tak ...phir Nishad kaise ban gaya vo ....jabki saari story arun aur varun ko milke sunai thi arman ne ...

Bas yaha confused hu ....kyuki mera dimaag aapse tej nhi h ....🙏
Bana lo bhai webseries... 8th sem par.. koyi copyright nahi thokunga bas naam mention kar dena :D :dost:

Nisha ka gufa jo hua , fir bhi pahchanne se inkaar kar di.. uska answer to aapne khud de diya shayad... par mere muh se sunna chahte ho :p:

Ek baar arman ne angelina darling se kaha tha ki "rvc me park me uske saamne nisha hai... ek me wo use ignore karta hai, ek me use line maarta hai... wo jee wo life rha hai.. jaha usne nisha ko ignore kiya tha.. lekin memory wo hai, jo jisme usne nisha se park me baat ki thi"
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Rahi baat arun aur varun ko story sunani wali to wo starting nahi thi is series ki... iski koyi starting hee nahi ... na kahi koyi ending.. ye to antheen sambhavnao me behti hui arman ki memories thi.. jiska ant utkarsh ke roop me hua aur angelina use saamne dikhi...

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Thanks for reading... aur webseries yadi banao to launda smart lena .. aatu jhatu nahi :p: jo goggle lagakar cigarette piye to lage ki ... Arman hai. :p:

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Bana lo bhai webseries... 8th sem par.. koyi copyright nahi thokunga bas naam mention kar dena :D :dost:

Nisha ka gufa jo hua , fir bhi pahchanne se inkaar kar di.. uska answer to aapne khud de diya shayad... par mere muh se sunna chahte ho :p:

Ek baar arman ne angelina darling se kaha tha ki "rvc me park me uske saamne nisha hai... ek me wo use ignore karta hai, ek me use line maarta hai... wo jee wo life rha hai.. jaha usne nisha ko ignore kiya tha.. lekin memory wo hai, jo jisme usne nisha se park me baat ki thi"
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Rahi baat arun aur varun ko story sunani wali to wo starting nahi thi is series ki... iski koyi starting hee nahi ... na kahi koyi ending.. ye to antheen sambhavnao me behti hui arman ki memories thi.. jiska ant utkarsh ke roop me hua aur angelina use saamne dikhi...

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Thanks for reading... aur webseries yadi banao to launda smart lena .. aatu jhatu nahi :p: jo goggle lagakar cigarette piye to lage ki ... Arman hai. :p:

Thanks
Aapne bilkul sahi socha ....mai is kahani ko naye laundo k liye launch krna chahta hu ....
Vaise mujhe bhi sabse pehle 2 character arman aur arun ...dono psycho .....same dhoondhne h aur dono ki sakal me antar itna ki same dikhe aur dialogue jis tarah maine imagine kiye h usi tarah ho ....vaise main khud us tarah ka hu 😁.....lekin meri sakal thodi masoom jaisi h .....sakal hi harami lage aisa character dhoondhna h kyuki gaalu suit krne wala hona chahiye ....
Dialogue delivery best ho tabhi director khus hota h ....
Atmkami me mujhe thoda effect quantum physics ka dikhai diya ...yadi vo 8 semester ki tarah simple hoti ....yani logo ki soch me aane k layak to mujhe lagta hai kahani 8 sem se bhi achi hoti ...lekin confusion itna h ki dobara padhni padi ....taki suspense aur confusion door ho sake ....
Banda jo ho rha h usko hi ye samajh nhi aata ki ye hua h ya nahi...

Vaise Meri kosis to poori h banane ki ... bande bhi h aur jagaha bhi ....poora college khali pada h 😁
Problem ye h ki mere pass cemera aur editor nhi h ....
Pehle ab inka jugaad krna h ....maine ek aisi life ab tak jee h ... Kyuki maine is hero k jaisi 60% life jee hai ..kisi ko gaali di aur kuch bhi kaha aur koi mera bigaad nahi ska kuch ....
Gangster b darake rakhe h maine ...jhooth bolke ...

Main bina vajah ek bade gangster k pass chala gaya aur baith k vapis aa gaya selfie leke taaki dikha saku ki mera us gangster k sath uthna baithna h ..😁😁

To 8 sem meri favorite story isliye bani kyuki maine khud ko imagine kiya is jagah ...ye gaaliyan aur bakchodi main krta rehta hu ...thanks to agree ...

Aur yadi maine banai to aapka naam main jarur isme daalunga ...lekin real naam nahi pata ...aur haan aap mere ass pass k rehne wale h to main chahta hu ki aap mera sath de.

Mujhe isme lagta h duniya isko pasand jarur karegi ...ek best Director vo hota h jo scene me jaan daal de ...aur main is kaam ko bakhoobi kr skta hu ...
Imagination power bahut kuch krwa skti h ....

Vaise music banane aur dalne wala bhi b mere pass ....lekin ladkiyo ka milna thoda muskil h kyuki jo mera area h isme city girl kuch kr skti h ..jo hariyana ya delhi me mil skti h ....
U.p. me nahi ....
Bas yaha fasa hua main ...vfx ka b jugaad h


Thanks mere dost ....😍😁
 

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Aapne bilkul sahi socha ....mai is kahani ko naye laundo k liye launch krna chahta hu ....
Vaise mujhe bhi sabse pehle 2 character arman aur arun ...dono psycho .....same dhoondhne h aur dono ki sakal me antar itna ki same dikhe aur dialogue jis tarah maine imagine kiye h usi tarah ho ....vaise main khud us tarah ka hu 😁.....lekin meri sakal thodi masoom jaisi h .....sakal hi harami lage aisa character dhoondhna h kyuki gaalu suit krne wala hona chahiye ....
Dialogue delivery best ho tabhi director khus hota h ....
Atmkami me mujhe thoda effect quantum physics ka dikhai diya ...yadi vo 8 semester ki tarah simple hoti ....yani logo ki soch me aane k layak to mujhe lagta hai kahani 8 sem se bhi achi hoti ...lekin confusion itna h ki dobara padhni padi ....taki suspense aur confusion door ho sake ....
Banda jo ho rha h usko hi ye samajh nhi aata ki ye hua h ya nahi...

Vaise Meri kosis to poori h banane ki ... bande bhi h aur jagaha bhi ....poora college khali pada h 😁
Problem ye h ki mere pass cemera aur editor nhi h ....
Pehle ab inka jugaad krna h ....maine ek aisi life ab tak jee h ... Kyuki maine is hero k jaisi 60% life jee hai ..kisi ko gaali di aur kuch bhi kaha aur koi mera bigaad nahi ska kuch ....
Gangster b darake rakhe h maine ...jhooth bolke ...

Main bina vajah ek bade gangster k pass chala gaya aur baith k vapis aa gaya selfie leke taaki dikha saku ki mera us gangster k sath uthna baithna h ..😁😁

To 8 sem meri favorite story isliye bani kyuki maine khud ko imagine kiya is jagah ...ye gaaliyan aur bakchodi main krta rehta hu ...thanks to agree ...

Aur yadi maine banai to aapka naam main jarur isme daalunga ...lekin real naam nahi pata ...aur haan aap mere ass pass k rehne wale h to main chahta hu ki aap mera sath de.

Mujhe isme lagta h duniya isko pasand jarur karegi ...ek best Director vo hota h jo scene me jaan daal de ...aur main is kaam ko bakhoobi kr skta hu ...
Imagination power bahut kuch krwa skti h ....

Vaise music banane aur dalne wala bhi b mere pass ....lekin ladkiyo ka milna thoda muskil h kyuki jo mera area h isme city girl kuch kr skti h ..jo hariyana ya delhi me mil skti h ....
U.p. me nahi ....
Bas yaha fasa hua main ...vfx ka b jugaad h


Thanks mere dost ....😍😁
Bhai daru peene ke kaaran pura padha par pura samjha nahi :shy:
Bas itna itna samjha ki aap pelam pel talented ho.. Required resources hai aapke paas. Bas bana do. Origibal writer to mai hee hu yadi koyi aur copywright claim naa kare to :p:
Aur aap atmakami ka mat socho.. First part me concentrate karo aap... Aur mere real name ka (
Kya karna hai yadi credit dena hoga to atmakami@gmail.com ko de dena ya fir xforum. Live ko.... Apne bhau ka forum hai ye. :p: baaki meri stories se samajh gaye hoge ki thoda thoda ki
. shri gyan ko lund fark nahi oadta in sab chijo se :smarty: :p: bas sabka gujara chalta rahe... Yehich apun ki first and last khwaish hai
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Bhai daru peene ke kaaran pura padha par pura samjha nahi :shy:
Bas itna itna samjha ki aap pelam pel talented ho.. Required resources hai aapke paas. Bas bana do. Origibal writer to mai hee hu yadi koyi aur copywright claim naa kare to :p:
Aur aap atmakami ka mat socho.. First part me concentrate karo aap... Aur mere real name ka (
Kya karna hai yadi credit dena hoga to atmakami@gmail.com ko de dena ya fir xforum. Live ko.... Apne bhau ka forum hai ye. :p: baaki meri stories se samajh gaye hoge ki thoda thoda ki
. shri gyan ko lund fark nahi oadta in sab chijo se :smarty: :p: bas sabka gujara chalta rahe... Yehich apun ki first and last khwaish hai
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