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Thriller ATMAKAMI....Mindfuck Thriller(Completed)

Who do you think was the hottest female character. Any 2

  • Esha

  • Angelina Silva

  • Vandana Rathi

  • Aradhna

  • Nisha

  • Deepika mam

  • Ajmeri bai :laugh:

  • Madhulika

  • Vìbha

  • Pandey ji ki laundiya :D

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harshit1890

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Reading done ,
But clarification ke liye ek Baar aur padhna padega :D
Reason - story ki ending , BC ye kya tha :shocking: , dimak ke saare taar jhanjhana Gaye Gaye Hain filhal :confuse: ,
Ye ability thi ya disorder :hmm2:
Reason - ending - ki ye Kaise hua , Kaise Kiya , kya Arman ki ability thi , ya ye hua hi nhi aur ending kahin bich Mai hi miss ho Gayi mujhse jispe Mera dhyan hi nhi Gaya ho , aur ending Arman Ka disorder ki wajah se Aisa dikh Raha hai ,
Aisa sirf mere sath ho Raha hai Kisi aur ko bhi Aisa lag Raha hai :D
"Mera janm nhi hua , Mera Avatar hua hai - Arman " agar ending aisi hai jaisi dikh rahi hai toh ye line perfect hai :yo:
Mera dimak is waqt ending ko leke Kuch waisa hi hai jaisa Arman aur Nisha ki pehle mulakat hui thi , kya realty (ending) wahi hai Jo dikh Raha hai , ya fir mere dimak ne ek nayi realty Bana li hai Jo abhi dikh nhi Raha , Jo Soch Raha hai ki iski ending Kuch aur hi hai :D
Ye toh dubara padhne par hi pata chalega ya fir tisri Baar padhne par ya chauthi Baar :D

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2-3 Page ke page padh lo sab kuch wahi hai dubara na padni padegi :D
 
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harshit1890 said:
2-3 Page ke page padh lo sab kuch wahi hai dubara na padni padegi :D
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Harshit Bhai , ye story agar 8-10 Baar nhi padhi toh meri najar Mai ye Gyani bhau Ka apmaan Hoga sath Shri Arman Ka bhi , isliye itna toh banta hai ,
Waise ek baat gaur Karo , ki Atmakami ke readers yahan Baar aake Baki logo ke review padh Rahe hai ye dekhne ke liye ki kya sirf unka hi dimak jhanjhana Raha hai ya bakiyo Ka bhi yahi haal hai :D
 
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Harshit Bhai , ye story agar 8-10 Baar nhi padhi toh meri najar Mai ye Gyani bhau Ka apmaan Hoga sath Shri Arman Ka bhi , isliye itna toh banta hai ,
Waise ek baat gaur Karo , ki Atmakami ke readers yahan Baar aake Baki logo ke review padh Rahe hai ye dekhne ke liye ki kya sirf unka hi dimak jhanjhana Raha hai ya bakiyo Ka bhi yahi haal hai :D
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Sach hai ye mene to dusri baar padh li hai. Tab bhi jhanjhana hi gaya tabhi sarre sawal kar dale, jawab bhi mil gaye. Ab thda tnsn free sa hun :D
 
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The Immortal said:
Harshit Bhai , ye story agar 8-10 Baar nhi padhi toh meri najar Mai ye Gyani bhau Ka apmaan Hoga sath Shri Arman Ka bhi , isliye itna toh banta hai ,
Waise ek baat gaur Karo , ki Atmakami ke readers yahan Baar aake Baki logo ke review padh Rahe hai ye dekhne ke liye ki kya sirf unka hi dimak jhanjhana Raha hai ya bakiyo Ka bhi yahi haal hai :D
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Ek bar explanation padh lena par...
harshit1890 said:
Sach hai ye mene to dusri baar padh li hai. Tab bhi jhanjhana hi gaya tabhi sarre sawal kar dale, jawab bhi mil gaye. Ab thda tnsn free sa hun :D
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The Immortal said:
Reading done ,
But clarification ke liye ek Baar aur padhna padega :D
Reason - story ki ending , BC ye kya tha :shocking: , dimak ke saare taar jhanjhana Gaye Gaye Hain filhal :confuse: ,
Ye ability thi ya disorder :hmm2:
Reason - ending - ki ye Kaise hua , Kaise Kiya , kya Arman ki ability thi , ya ye hua hi nhi aur ending kahin bich Mai hi miss ho Gayi mujhse jispe Mera dhyan hi nhi Gaya ho , aur ending Arman Ka disorder ki wajah se Aisa dikh Raha hai ,
Aisa sirf mere sath ho Raha hai Kisi aur ko bhi Aisa lag Raha hai :D
"Mera janm nhi hua , Mera Avatar hua hai - Arman " agar ending aisi hai jaisi dikh rahi hai toh ye line perfect hai :yo:
Mera dimak is waqt ending ko leke Kuch waisa hi hai jaisa Arman aur Nisha ki pehle mulakat hui thi , kya realty (ending) wahi hai Jo dikh Raha hai , ya fir mere dimak ne ek nayi realty Bana li hai Jo abhi dikh nhi Raha , Jo Soch Raha hai ki iski ending Kuch aur hi hai :D
Ye toh dubara padhne par hi pata chalega ya fir tisri Baar padhne par ya chauthi Baar :D

Again reading :reading1:
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arre Immo bhai kaahe pagla rahe ho .. last mein bola na Professor sahib ke padosi ne ki kal wali party mein to professor sahab ne maje karwa diye, aur waise bhi HOD sir ne jaisa kaha tha ki 'aap kabhi physics ke khilaaf nahi jaa sakte' .. so jab kuch bolte na bane to sharafat se physics ki aad le kar peechu se nikal lo ...

waise yaha gaur karne wali baat hai ki Professor sahab ki kahani mein sab characters ki ending faadu hui aur Armaan ne badla bhi liya .. par Deepika mam aur Divya bacch gaye .. aur wo sala Nushaad bhi to tha .. usko to thoda aur bhi lohe ki balls se khilana chahiye tha .. inko kyon saste mein chhod diya .. kuch baat hazam nahi hui .. par waise apne Professor sahab bhi cuckold fantasy ke shikaar nikle .. aakhir inki gaadi bhi iiiiiiiiiiiiii....... par aa kar atak gayi .. kehne ka matlab unconsciously inhone apne dream mein bhi iiiiiiiiiii....esha ko daddu ke aadmiyo se pilwaya ...

ab to Atmakaami mein to Armaan ne aandhi kaati he .. aur Rajshree ne suicide kyon kiya tha .. usko jaankar to ek baar meri bhi gaand fati thi .. pehle to Arun ka jhatka laga tha .. gautam ne khud he apni marwaali .. magar sabse bada blow back 2.0 ne jab ganga-jamuna wali memory ko excess kiya tha .. aur wo uss faceless ladki ka face jaankar to meri bhi hawa tight ho gayi thi .. uske baad bahut tarah ke mile-jule emotions dil-dimaag mein kaan faad awaaz ke saath ghantiya baja rahe the .. ki BC ye kya Maaadarchhaaad kahani likhi hai Yug Purush bhai ne .. mere to saare armaano par he Arman ki subconscious ki jo unconscious memory thi usko very consciously password ke through unprotected karke jo peeche ka chittha khola tha usse to meri atma ka kaam he tamaam ho gaya ...

par ending padh kar kahi na kahi dil bhi toot gaya ...

Yug Purush bhai kya aage bhi is series mein koi aur story aane ki gunzaaish hai kya .. kyonki wo pados waale uncle ji bhi professor sahab se aage aur gyaan arjit karna chah rahe the .. to kya aage bhi aur class lagne ke chance hai ...
 
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404 said:
explanation tak to koi bechara koi jaa he nahi paa raha .. sab ki Arun/Rajshree aur gautam/Esha wali baat padh kar fatt jaati hai .. aage padhne ke liye dimaag he kaam karna band kar deta hai .. :lol1:
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Jo baate hazam nahi hui... wo ho jayegi , kyunki same question harshit bhai ne uthaya tha. :)
404 said:
arre Immo bhai kaahe pagla rahe ho .. last mein bola na Professor sahib ke padosi ne ki kal wali party mein to professor sahab ne maje karwa diye, aur waise bhi HOD sir ne jaisa kaha tha ki 'aap kabhi physics ke khilaaf nahi jaa sakte' .. so jab kuch bolte na bane to sharafat se physics ki aad le kar peechu se nikal lo ...

waise yaha gaur karne wali baat hai ki Professor sahab ki kahani mein sab characters ki ending faadu hui aur Armaan ne badla bhi liya .. par Deepika mam aur Divya bacch gaye .. aur wo sala Nushaad bhi to tha .. usko to thoda aur bhi lohe ki balls se khilana chahiye tha .. inko kyon saste mein chhod diya .. kuch baat hazam nahi hui .. par waise apne Professor sahab bhi cuckold fantasy ke shikaar nikle .. aakhir inki gaadi bhi iiiiiiiiiiiiii....... par aa kar atak gayi .. kehne ka matlab unconsciously inhone apne dream mein bhi iiiiiiiiiii....esha ko daddu ke aadmiyo se pilwaya ...

ab to Atmakaami mein to Armaan ne aandhi kaati he .. aur Rajshree ne suicide kyon kiya tha .. usko jaankar to ek baar meri bhi gaand fati thi .. pehle to Arun ka jhatka laga tha .. gautam ne khud he apni marwaali .. magar sabse bada blow back 2.0 ne jab ganga-jamuna wali memory ko excess kiya tha .. aur wo uss faceless ladki ka face jaankar to meri bhi hawa tight ho gayi thi .. uske baad bahut tarah ke mile-jule emotions dil-dimaag mein kaan faad awaaz ke saath ghantiya baja rahe the .. ki BC ye kya Maaadarchhaaad kahani likhi hai Yug Purush bhai ne .. mere to saare armaano par he Arman ki subconscious ki jo unconscious memory thi usko very consciously password ke through unprotected karke jo peeche ka chittha khola tha usse to meri atma ka kaam he tamaam ho gaya ...

par ending padh kar kahi na kahi dil bhi toot gaya ...

Yug Purush bhai kya aage bhi is series mein koi aur story aane ki gunzaaish hai kya .. kyonki wo pados waale uncle ji bhi professor sahab se aage aur gyaan arjit karna chah rahe the .. to kya aage bhi aur class lagne ke chance hai ...
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Thank you. Aage ki kahani aage dekhenge... plot click kiya, mood bana toh likh denge... koyi badi baat thodi hai :cool: :D
 
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Main review karna chahta tha lekin sab sawal ko jawaw mil gaye....
Gyani bhai chodke koyi aise masterpiece kahani likh hi nahi sakta...
Yeh story pure masterpiece rahegi hamesha ke liye...
Mere dimag me kuch extraordinary sawal the jisse ho sakta atmakami 2 ka plot revealed hojayega...
 
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Daredevil420 said:
Main review karna chahta tha lekin sab sawal ko jawaw mil gaye....
Gyani bhai chodke koyi aise masterpiece kahani likh hi nahi sakta...
Yeh story pure masterpiece rahegi hamesha ke liye...
Mere dimag me kuch extraordinary sawal the jisse ho sakta atmakami 2 ka plot revealed hojayega...
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Atmakami 2 ka abhi koyi plot hee nahi hai bhai, isliye jo puchna hai puchho... kuch reveal nahi hoga ... thanks for reading :hug:
 
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