Thriller ATMAKAMI....Mindfuck Thriller(Completed)

[The Immortal]

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[A.D Rock]

Jab 8th semester running thi aur uske akhri 2 3 update rah gaye the tb maine 8th semester padhna shuru kiya tha....us level ki koi dusri story xossip pe nahi thi... Phir maine is forum pe atmakami dekhi to bahot exited ho gaya....jaise jaise padhta gaya maza ata gaya. Daddu tak to sab thik tha. Phir angelina ki entry ne aur exited kar diya....par uske baad jaise jaise ye story aage badhti gayi dimag fuse hota gaya....sala sab ko pel diya arun ko rp ko gautam ko esha ko ....bhai kam se kam esha ko to chhod deta...khair koi baat nahi. Story kul mila kar bahot achhi thi. 8th semester ka pdf maine WhatsApp par apne dosto ko bheja aur daawe se bola padho aur phir tum log story aur writter k fan ho jaoge. Aur hua bhi aisa hi sab ko story bahot pasand ayi. Phir maine atmakami ka pdf bheja aur abhi sab ke dimag ki ma chudi padi hai..
Mera ye pahla comment hai..ragister bhi ap ki wajah se kiya.
Shukriya apki dono kahani k liye..
Atmakami me swal to bahot se hai....par ek ka de do bhai.....Arman 8th semester ki story varun ko suna raha tha. Jiske zariye hamne bhi suni...par atmakami me pata chalta hai ki varun hai hi nhi...to kya 8th semester hua bhi tha ya nahi ya wo bhi imagination tha.

 

[Yug Purush]

Jab 8th semester running thi aur uske akhri 2 3 update rah gaye the tb maine 8th semester padhna shuru kiya tha....us level ki koi dusri story xossip pe nahi thi... Phir maine is forum pe atmakami dekhi to bahot exited ho gaya....jaise jaise padhta gaya maza ata gaya. Daddu tak to sab thik tha. Phir angelina ki entry ne aur exited kar diya....par uske baad jaise jaise ye story aage badhti gayi dimag fuse hota gaya....sala sab ko pel diya arun ko rp ko gautam ko esha ko ....bhai kam se kam esha ko to chhod deta...khair koi baat nahi. Story kul mila kar bahot achhi thi. 8th semester ka pdf maine WhatsApp par apne dosto ko bheja aur daawe se bola padho aur phir tum log story aur writter k fan ho jaoge. Aur hua bhi aisa hi sab ko story bahot pasand ayi. Phir maine atmakami ka pdf bheja aur abhi sab ke dimag ki ma chudi padi hai..
Mera ye pahla comment hai..ragister bhi ap ki wajah se kiya.
Shukriya apki dono kahani k liye..
Atmakami me swal to bahot se hai....par ek ka de do bhai.....Arman 8th semester ki story varun ko suna raha tha. Jiske zariye hamne bhi suni...par atmakami me pata chalta hai ki varun hai hi nhi...to kya 8th semester hua bhi tha ya nahi ya wo bhi imagination tha.

Thank you bhai... For such a delighting review ...
Aur aapke jitne sawal hai, usko neeche diye gaye link ko open kariye... Question repeated hai... Aapka... jawab already diya jaa chuka hai... Shayad
Confirm nahi kah sakta...
Thanks again

Thriller - ATMAKAMI....Mindfuck Thriller(Completed)

Mere liue to arman hi puri story hai.. Han saurabh ke bare main updates nahi aayi. Ending unexpected . Aur Bhai thanks to bring this concept of multi universe to know us in aasan bhasa. Abhi bas ek bar puri padli hai. Jab jab phir padunga completely phir se story ke upar comment dunga

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[Aagasthya]

Hello SGP bhai...maine apki saari stories as a silent reader read ki app bhoat hi achha likhte ho isme koi shak nahi.... Lekin kabhi apki story pe comment karne ka chance mila nahi ...specially apki story ki wajah se yaha maine account create kiya...Atmakhami ka end jo aap ne likha vo padhne ke baad dimag ki bole to band baje gayi...kuch samjh nahi aya ye kya hua kaise hua..lekin padhne me bhaot maja aya..aur 8 semester ki too baat hi chod doo ... Arman ka character development aap ne kiya vo kya kah ne bole to vo bhi padhne ke baad dil khush ho gya kai dino tak ye story dimag se nikal hi nahi paya ....hope app aise aur stories likhte rahenge...

 

[Yug Purush]

Hello SGP bhai...maine apki saari stories as a silent reader read ki app bhoat hi achha likhte ho isme koi shak nahi.... Lekin kabhi apki story pe comment karne ka chance mila nahi ...specially apki story ki wajah se yaha maine account create kiya...Atmakhami ka end jo aap ne likha vo padhne ke baad dimag ki bole to band baje gayi...kuch samjh nahi aya ye kya hua kaise hua..lekin padhne me bhaot maja aya..aur 8 semester ki too baat hi chod doo ... Arman ka character development aap ne kiya vo kya kah ne bole to vo bhi padhne ke baad dil khush ho gya kai dino tak ye story dimag se nikal hi nahi paya ....hope app aise aur stories likhte rahenge...

thanks

kuch samjh nahi aya ye kya hua kaise hua..lekin padhne me bhaot maja aya.

aur next story main already likh raha hu link is in my siggi

 

[Voldimort]

This is unexpacted mind fuck .... Mein ne hamesha yeh story 500 pages pe chor de kiu k wahe sonam waly bhakchodi or varun waghera se doste tootna ..mujhy bohit dukh or ghussa aya k bc ne larki k liye dhoka diya but aj mein ne agly 300 page bhi parh liye .. yar xforum mein 99% aese stories hein jinke pehly update perhne pe he akhre result kiya aana wala hae pata chal jata hae but apke iss story ko koi judge nae ker sakta ..koi guess nae ker sakta ..thril on its peak .. i wished k esha or arman ka tanka bhir jaata issi liye mein ne yeh story 2 3 saaal pehly perhne shuru ke thy but dimensions ke baatein mere demagh k opoer se jaa rahy thy yoh story ka maza khatam ho gaya tha iss liye chor de .. abhi parhe toh dil demagh sab kuch hil chuka hae .. iss k elawa kuch nae hae kehne ko .. jitne tareef keru iss story or writer ke utne kam hae ..

 

[Yug Purush]

This is unexpacted mind fuck .... Mein ne hamesha yeh story 500 pages pe chor de kiu k wahe sonam waly bhakchodi or varun waghera se doste tootna ..mujhy bohit dukh or ghussa aya k bc ne larki k liye dhoka diya but aj mein ne agly 300 page bhi parh liye .. yar xforum mein 99% aese stories hein jinke pehly update perhne pe he akhre result kiya aana wala hae pata chal jata hae but apke iss story ko koi judge nae ker sakta ..koi guess nae ker sakta ..thril on its peak .. i wished k esha or arman ka tanka bhir jaata issi liye mein ne yeh story 2 3 saaal pehly perhne shuru ke thy but dimensions ke baatein mere demagh k opoer se jaa rahy thy yoh story ka maza khatam ho gaya tha iss liye chor de .. abhi parhe toh dil demagh sab kuch hil chuka hae .. iss k elawa kuch nae hae kehne ko .. jitne tareef keru iss story or writer ke utne kam hae ..

Thanx bhai

abhi parhe toh dil demagh sab kuch hil chuka hae

Welcome to the club

 

[Kingfisher]

Bs ek hi shabd dimag me ghum rha hai ...WTF ... Pure dimag ki maiyya chudd gaii ...dimag ke sare wire jhanjhna gye , 1400 ke dimag Ka temperature 110+ ho gya bole to MINDFUCK par Jo bhi tha unexpected , incredible tha ....sahi kahu to kahani ko bich me hi chhodne Ka Mann Kiya par result ?? Khud ko rok nhi paya bcoz ye possible hi nhi tha ... Kabhi except nhi Kiya tha ki aise platform me etni behtrin kahani bhi mil Sakti hai ... Me shabdo se na to apki tarif Kar Sakta hu or na hi apki stories ki kutra.... Nature has filled you with codes.. Really you must be unique.

When the story got up to 500 pages, I thought I would write a lot... But end tak padne ke bad aisa mehsus ho rha hai ki mere pass shanbd hi nhi hai ki kya likhu par Kuch na Kuch to likhna hi hai ...sayad me pehle reader hu jisme back to back 8 semester or atmakami pdi .... Jha 8 semester ne mindfresh Kiya to vhi atmakami ne MINDFUCK ... Har ek kirdar Apne aap me antique peace tha bhle hi unka jyada role na rha ho par unhone apni chhap chodi ...chahhe vo Sharma ji ko choti loundiya hi kyo na ho ..

Bat Kru story related to half data to usi vakt erase ho gya jab story end hue ... shuruat hui Nisha se to socha tha ki Esha ki Kami Nisha Puri karegi sayad usse Arman ke armaaan pure ho jaye sath hi Varun Arun ki Kami Puri karde but hua kya ?? Sath hi Sonam hahaha eske bare me kya hi kahe sidhe shabdo me kahe to Arman ne na chodkar bhi kaii bar chod Diya lawda etni beijatti . I think agar Sonam real Hoti to sayad Aradhna ki jagah khudd suicide kar leti ...


Armaann ....eski har activity manner ek bhayankar villain se Kam nhi tha agar Shi mayne me dekhe to kahani ke nayak ke sath sath khalnayak bhi Arman hi hai .. eske samne kya ladka kya ladki kya bche kya budhee kya hijde sabki ma chod deta hai ... Apne attitude ke Karan hi sabse dur hua or sab isse ...agar kahani ke sabse majhedar scan the to vo the NH 6 par daketi Karna or sabse terrible heartbroken scan Ganga jamuna vale ...shuru me to socha tha ki Arman Psycho hai esliye vha jata hai but jab reality Ka pta chlaa to bheja hi khisak gya sala but use uski. Bhari kimat bhi chukani pdi ....daddu vale last time socha tha ki sayad Arman ek neck Kam Karne ke liye daddu ke samrajya ko Mitana Chahta tha bur me ye bhul gya tha scchai or Arman Ka 36 Ka ankda hai ...bs ek tiss ye rehegi ki daddu Ka hall goutam ki trah nhi hua jab ki vo jyada deserve karta tha ,,,

Sabse jyada dimag kharab to tab hua jab ye pta chla ki pichli bahut sari ghatnaye to sirf parikalpnaye thi ...es dauran bahut Sare shabd to sar ke uper se gujar gye .... Ending to ekdum fadu thi jisme goutam Ka chirrharan bahut pehle hi ho chuka tha but shock bhi lga ki R. Pandey or Arun bhagvan ko pyare ho gye sath hi ....end me Esha ke bare me jankar Etna Bura lga ki Pura dimag jhanjhna gya jitna gussa Arman par nhi Aaya utna to writer par Aaya ... Jaisa ki 8 semester se atmakami tak ye darsaya gya ki Arman Esha se true love karta hai but vo ek fake love tha Varna vo badle ki Bhavna ke bich bhi Esha ko pehchan Sakta tha ....or sayad bccha bhi Sakta tha kyoki vhi to kehta hai ki Uske pass har musibat Ka solution hai or usne bahut se jagah sabit bhi Kiya but writer ko to Esha ko Kisi bhi trah marvana tha na ... Jab bhi Esha ko goutam ke sath assume karta Bura Lagta but usse Kai guna Bura Esha ke sath Jo daddu ne Kiya vo lga fir bhi Uske brutally mara nhi gya even Arman use hath tak nhi lga paya ...mana ki atankvadi goushit hine ke bad uske sath kya Hoga but thoda Maja to chakhana Chahiye tha ...par goutam Ka scan ek bar fir Dekha Mann ko santusht Kiya kash sabka vhi hasar Hona Chahiye tha ...


Writer ko readers ke emotions ki koi parvah nhi rhi ... Me har badte pages ke sath yhi chahh rha tha ki sab Kuch perfect hokar Esha Arman ke armano ko Pura Kar de last hope engilina ko Dekh Kar jgi ki sayad vo Arman ki humsafar bne par aisa Kuch nhi hua ... I think engilina ko Arman ki life me aa Jati to Dil ko thoda sukun jarur mil jata


Kuch confusion ab bhi reh gye hai

1... Kya Arman ne Arun ke sath kabhi Varun ko 8 semester ki kahani sunai ?? Arun to us vakt hi mar gya tha jab vo 8 semester ke badd Ghar gya tha

2 ... Vandana rathi vala scan bhi parikalpnaye tha ya real ??

3 ... RP ke suicide Karne or Arun Ki railway station par death ke koi reason ya Kisi Ka hath tha ya fir vo sirf incident the ??

4... Sidar aka MTL ki death me natural hui ya fir usme Kisi Ka hath tha ??

5... Noushad or Varun ke sath kya ??

6 ...swal thoda atpata hai par mere liye ye Janna jaruri hai ki Arman jis college me professor hai kya vo vhi collage thi jisme usne engineering complete ki thi ...end me bataya gya hai ki Arman ki shadi ho gai sath me vo father bhi bann gya to kya jis ladki se Arman ki shadi hua uska jikr kabhi hua ( Arman wife )

7 ...hahahaha last swal Arman end tak taklu hi rha ? Usne kabhi Face surgery karvai ??
Last dono swal topic se pre hai but Jann jaruri hai

Note ...mere sawalo ke Javab koi bhi De Sakta hai

Last me bate etni complicated ho gaii thi ki use samajhna bahut muskil ho gya kash unhe or explain Kiya hota to dimag Ka temperature low ho jata .... Agar es kahani Ka ek or part aa jaye to sone pe suhaga ho jaye ... well allover kahani bahut hi jabardast thi jaha tak mujhe Lagta hai atmakami jaisi kahani es forum par nhi likhi gaii sayad age bhi nhi likhi jayegi agar likhi jayegi to likhne vala shaks sirf SGP aka yug purush aka gyani bhau hi likh sakte hai ... gyani bhau apki imagination Ka koi mukabla nhi hai me to ab bhi suspense me hu ki Etna unique perfect scan kaise create Kar sakte ho ...Kuch kahaniyo me Kuch hi scan jivant pratit hote hai but apki Puri story hi jiavnt hai Mani reading ke alawa watching bhi kar rha hu ...es kahani ko padte padte ek alag hi duniya me chla gya Jha Arman ke dvara banai gaii duniya thi ...ek ankhon dekha scan bhula Ka Sakta hai but atmakami and 8 semester ke imaginary scan ko bhulna sayad possible nhi hai ....


Dil se dhanyavad apka ki Apne itni behtrin kahani hamare samne prsatut ki ..full on entertaining mind-blowing mindfucking dimag ki ma behen ek Karne Vali story hai bhau ... Me to pehle se hi apka fan tha but ab us me apka die hearted fan ho gya hu ...app but Dino se forum se gayab hai Jo mere sath sath sabhi ke liye bahut nirashjanak hai . I hope ki apki life me sab Kuch perfect ho and app jald se jald vapsi kre or atharva ke dvara jafar ki ma Ka bhosda karva de sala lundchatt dai-chodd gandmara atharva ki Mal par hath dala usme ....last me ek request hai apse ki atharva ki halat Arman ki trah na kre me ye kabhi nhi Chahta ki three girls me sabhi atharva ki Gand par lat markar Kahi or ye sab kre .... thank you

 

[Yug Purush]

Bs ek hi shabd dimag me ghum rha hai ...WTF ... Pure dimag ki maiyya chudd gaii ...dimag ke sare wire jhanjhna gye , 1400 ke dimag Ka temperature 110+ ho gya bole to MINDFUCK par Jo bhi tha unexpected , incredible tha ....sahi kahu to kahani ko bich me hi chhodne Ka Mann Kiya par result ?? Khud ko rok nhi paya bcoz ye possible hi nhi tha ... Kabhi except nhi Kiya tha ki aise platform me etni behtrin kahani bhi mil Sakti hai ... Me shabdo se na to apki tarif Kar Sakta hu or na hi apki stories ki kutra.... Nature has filled you with codes.. Really you must be unique.

When the story got up to 500 pages, I thought I would write a lot... But end tak padne ke bad aisa mehsus ho rha hai ki mere pass shanbd hi nhi hai ki kya likhu par Kuch na Kuch to likhna hi hai ...sayad me pehle reader hu jisme back to back 8 semester or atmakami pdi .... Jha 8 semester ne mindfresh Kiya to vhi atmakami ne MINDFUCK ... Har ek kirdar Apne aap me antique peace tha bhle hi unka jyada role na rha ho par unhone apni chhap chodi ...chahhe vo Sharma ji ko choti loundiya hi kyo na ho ..

Bat Kru story related to half data to usi vakt erase ho gya jab story end hue ... shuruat hui Nisha se to socha tha ki Esha ki Kami Nisha Puri karegi sayad usse Arman ke armaaan pure ho jaye sath hi Varun Arun ki Kami Puri karde but hua kya ?? Sath hi Sonam hahaha eske bare me kya hi kahe sidhe shabdo me kahe to Arman ne na chodkar bhi kaii bar chod Diya lawda etni beijatti . I think agar Sonam real Hoti to sayad Aradhna ki jagah khudd suicide kar leti ...


Armaann ....eski har activity manner ek bhayankar villain se Kam nhi tha agar Shi mayne me dekhe to kahani ke nayak ke sath sath khalnayak bhi Arman hi hai .. eske samne kya ladka kya ladki kya bche kya budhee kya hijde sabki ma chod deta hai ... Apne attitude ke Karan hi sabse dur hua or sab isse ...agar kahani ke sabse majhedar scan the to vo the NH 6 par daketi Karna or sabse terrible heartbroken scan Ganga jamuna vale ...shuru me to socha tha ki Arman Psycho hai esliye vha jata hai but jab reality Ka pta chlaa to bheja hi khisak gya sala but use uski. Bhari kimat bhi chukani pdi ....daddu vale last time socha tha ki sayad Arman ek neck Kam Karne ke liye daddu ke samrajya ko Mitana Chahta tha bur me ye bhul gya tha scchai or Arman Ka 36 Ka ankda hai ...bs ek tiss ye rehegi ki daddu Ka hall goutam ki trah nhi hua jab ki vo jyada deserve karta tha ,,,

Sabse jyada dimag kharab to tab hua jab ye pta chla ki pichli bahut sari ghatnaye to sirf parikalpnaye thi ...es dauran bahut Sare shabd to sar ke uper se gujar gye .... Ending to ekdum fadu thi jisme goutam Ka chirrharan bahut pehle hi ho chuka tha but shock bhi lga ki R. Pandey or Arun bhagvan ko pyare ho gye sath hi ....end me Esha ke bare me jankar Etna Bura lga ki Pura dimag jhanjhna gya jitna gussa Arman par nhi Aaya utna to writer par Aaya ... Jaisa ki 8 semester se atmakami tak ye darsaya gya ki Arman Esha se true love karta hai but vo ek fake love tha Varna vo badle ki Bhavna ke bich bhi Esha ko pehchan Sakta tha ....or sayad bccha bhi Sakta tha kyoki vhi to kehta hai ki Uske pass har musibat Ka solution hai or usne bahut se jagah sabit bhi Kiya but writer ko to Esha ko Kisi bhi trah marvana tha na ... Jab bhi Esha ko goutam ke sath assume karta Bura Lagta but usse Kai guna Bura Esha ke sath Jo daddu ne Kiya vo lga fir bhi Uske brutally mara nhi gya even Arman use hath tak nhi lga paya ...mana ki atankvadi goushit hine ke bad uske sath kya Hoga but thoda Maja to chakhana Chahiye tha ...par goutam Ka scan ek bar fir Dekha Mann ko santusht Kiya kash sabka vhi hasar Hona Chahiye tha ...


Writer ko readers ke emotions ki koi parvah nhi rhi ... Me har badte pages ke sath yhi chahh rha tha ki sab Kuch perfect hokar Esha Arman ke armano ko Pura Kar de last hope engilina ko Dekh Kar jgi ki sayad vo Arman ki humsafar bne par aisa Kuch nhi hua ... I think engilina ko Arman ki life me aa Jati to Dil ko thoda sukun jarur mil jata


Kuch confusion ab bhi reh gye hai

1... Kya Arman ne Arun ke sath kabhi Varun ko 8 semester ki kahani sunai ?? Arun to us vakt hi mar gya tha jab vo 8 semester ke badd Ghar gya tha

2 ... Vandana rathi vala scan bhi parikalpnaye tha ya real ??

3 ... RP ke suicide Karne or Arun Ki railway station par death ke koi reason ya Kisi Ka hath tha ya fir vo sirf incident the ??

4... Sidar aka MTL ki death me natural hui ya fir usme Kisi Ka hath tha ??

5... Noushad or Varun ke sath kya ??

6 ...swal thoda atpata hai par mere liye ye Janna jaruri hai ki Arman jis college me professor hai kya vo vhi collage thi jisme usne engineering complete ki thi ...end me bataya gya hai ki Arman ki shadi ho gai sath me vo father bhi bann gya to kya jis ladki se Arman ki shadi hua uska jikr kabhi hua ( Arman wife )

7 ...hahahaha last swal Arman end tak taklu hi rha ? Usne kabhi Face surgery karvai ??
Last dono swal topic se pre hai but Jann jaruri hai

Note ...mere sawalo ke Javab koi bhi De Sakta hai

Last me bate etni complicated ho gaii thi ki use samajhna bahut muskil ho gya kash unhe or explain Kiya hota to dimag Ka temperature low ho jata .... Agar es kahani Ka ek or part aa jaye to sone pe suhaga ho jaye ... well allover kahani bahut hi jabardast thi jaha tak mujhe Lagta hai atmakami jaisi kahani es forum par nhi likhi gaii sayad age bhi nhi likhi jayegi agar likhi jayegi to likhne vala shaks sirf SGP aka yug purush aka gyani bhau hi likh sakte hai ... gyani bhau apki imagination Ka koi mukabla nhi hai me to ab bhi suspense me hu ki Etna unique perfect scan kaise create Kar sakte ho ...Kuch kahaniyo me Kuch hi scan jivant pratit hote hai but apki Puri story hi jiavnt hai Mani reading ke alawa watching bhi kar rha hu ...es kahani ko padte padte ek alag hi duniya me chla gya Jha Arman ke dvara banai gaii duniya thi ...ek ankhon dekha scan bhula Ka Sakta hai but atmakami and 8 semester ke imaginary scan ko bhulna sayad possible nhi hai ....


Dil se dhanyavad apka ki Apne itni behtrin kahani hamare samne prsatut ki ..full on entertaining mind-blowing mindfucking dimag ki ma behen ek Karne Vali story hai bhau ... Me to pehle se hi apka fan tha but ab us me apka die hearted fan ho gya hu ...app but Dino se forum se gayab hai Jo mere sath sath sabhi ke liye bahut nirashjanak hai . I hope ki apki life me sab Kuch perfect ho and app jald se jald vapsi kre or atharva ke dvara jafar ki ma Ka bhosda karva de sala lundchatt dai-chodd gandmara atharva ki Mal par hath dala usme ....last me ek request hai apse ki atharva ki halat Arman ki trah na kre me ye kabhi nhi Chahta ki three girls me sabhi atharva ki Gand par lat markar Kahi or ye sab kre .... thank you

Radhe Radhe

Kya rapchik reboo diyela hai bidu... And congrats for surviving this story till the end.

Jo sawal hai wo repeated hai.. Unke jawab already de chuka hu... #2, #3 post pe harshit bhai ke questions aur mere answer ko padho.. Sab kuch mutth ki taraf saaf ho jaayega....

Thanks

 

[Kingfisher]

Kya rapchik reboo diyela hai bidu... And congrats for surviving this story till the end.

Jo sawal hai wo repeated hai.. Unke jawab already de chuka hu... #2, #3 post pe harshit bhai ke questions aur mere answer ko padho.. Sab kuch mutth ki taraf saaf ho jaayega....

Thanks

OMG ...Bhai aaj to din bann gya apke darshan pakar ... Bahut miss Kiya bhau apko ..Jo shaks sabse jyada active member Ka record banata hai or achanak gayab ho jata hai ye ek shock se Kam thodi na hai bhau .. I hope ki apki life me pehle ke mafik sab Kuch perfect chal Raha Hoga or sath hi 22 page ke dailog bhi en holidays me complete Kar diye honge ab jaldi se vapsi kro . Ab apki story ke alava or story padne Ka Mann bhi nhi karta or na hi PADI hai tab se ... And mene Harshit bhai or apke counter reply pad liye hai jisse mere Sare confusion clear ho gye hai ....